response to anyone who wants it rappin on the base

[Invincible]

I am invincible
take you to school, i am the principal,
teach you divisional, multi-syllabical fictionals,
its pitiful,
the miserable flows of you imbeciles,
reciprocal rhymes wit one syllable, this rap is criminal
to visuals,
despicable dumb individuals,
Son i hit pinnacles just getting started, in the garden of eden,
mokuton jutsu guarding the heathens, Nasty like semen, no homo,
i matyr you weaklings,
un sheathing katanas bobbing and weaving,
pearl harbor you weak links, leave you starving and leaking,
my armor is gleaming,
my mind fathers diseases in the farthest of deep ends,
When this beat ends, MY eyes will deceive men,
genjutsu with demons, deep in R- E- M,
rapid eye movements, induce Lucid illusions,
mind**** contusions, Render your nuisance useless,
the confusion genjutsu master of students.
seventy days of capture in two mins,
moves you backwards in ruins
your girl was full of laughter nd prudence
but she dropped her panties,
when i rocked her fanny
wit my chocolate candy,
thoughts i blocked out like marcus camby,
flood through my mind like super sandy,
ubber handy with the mic, i get angry
the modus operandi is focus hits,
get crafty with lotus kicks, eight gates open up like moses splits
the ocean and some yoga steps,
bogus reps hinder me down into hopelessness
so please hook me up if you notice this!!
i spit the dopest ish,
spoken omens from a chosen bred
your hype is frozen like a Broken lens
i provide the potions for these potent meds
the secret slogan open the golden bridge
to lay seige on odin wit some shogun heads
i have no respect for you flecks
forum wrecks get stepped on
lyrical content, objective of reflecti-ONS
wept moan from deception
of the mass effeXX
i'm adept in the presence of you fat meat heads
I express my deep-est regret for you street feds
check the reflex, kaleidoscope eye
strapped with steep techs
Heat seeking fleets deep with V jets
scare you to hiding like mafia defects
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[godzillard]

you cant stop me do u copy write me off sides with the army
you armed me feeling harmed im waking up watching charmed.
aww this sux

[Invincible]

you cant stop me do u copy write me off sides with the army
you armed me feeling harmed im waking up watching charmed.
aww this sux

i liked it why'd you stop !!! my rap is a work in progress!! i came to hone in on my skills !! writing rocks cause you can go back and redo your mistakes unlike a freestyle... so just keep going :drive:

[halfmoonuzumaki]

This was actually pretty damn good, you should check out this thread we have up for NvG's rap tourny, we need members of the base as votes once we're done, and im looking for some critique and opinions, mind giving it a peep? Id like to hear some insight.
http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...1#post10203071

[Invincible]

This was actually pretty damn good, you should check out this thread we have up for NvG's rap tourny, we need members of the base as votes once we're done, and im looking for some critique and opinions, mind giving it a peep? Id like to hear some insight.
http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...1#post10203071

will do