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    Tales of Hikusa Chapter 19 (WARNING: THIS STORY IS BECOMING EXPLICIT!)

    (Here’s Chapter 19 of Part III, a very explicit and dark part! This chapter is told in all knowing and Hi’s perspective too! First Hi! Enjoy! Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8N2H...eature=related)

    Yes, I have become daimyo and Kusakage. I feel…powerful! Important! I’m happy that Ama can live securely, but at what cost? My hands are stained with blood! I have murdered the daimyo! Revenge, its fires are boiling my blood. I am glad to be with my mother, but again, through killing? I feel uneasy, unsure. When Ama and mother found out about my murder, they became irate. I didn’t want to do it, but I had to! In fact, I used the talisman to force my mother to stop talking about it. Ama and my mother forgave me, especially after I proposed to Ama. At only the age of seventeen we became married at a royal wedding. It was lovely enough, but the guilt of killing scorched my insides as I danced with my new wife. I became paranoid. I killed the guard under the genjutsu, the last person who knew of the incident and now bodyguards protect me at all times. They must be replaced every week to ensure my safety. Everyone is checked before meeting with me, even my mother and Ama. Yes, I am anxious over my possible assassination. I still dream of demons ghouls, and death. I was diagnosed with insomnia. The doctor prescribed medication that has helped, but still I feel guilty. What am I to do? {End and now all knowing narrator}
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    One morning, Hi woke up from his royal bedroom. His wife still lay asleep on the other side of the bed. He quietly rose as to not wake her. A snake slithered, grabbed his leg, and pulled him towards the window. Kabuto sat on the ledge. “So, your highness, you did take my advice! See? Don’t you feel empowered?”

    “I feel guilty”

    “Why? She did wrong things”

    “Still, I killed her!”

    “To bring back your mother who is a much more wonderful person than she was”

    “I guess, but what do you want?”

    “I need to ask something of you”

    “Haven’t you asked enough?”

    “I just wanted to inform you of something, but I guess…”

    “What?”

    “Konoha…has been attacked and reduced to rubble by a man named Pain. He was from the Akatsuki. The Hokage is in a coma as a result. The temporary Hokage is none other than…Shimura Danzo” {http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fmncMn7pXPg&feature=related}

    “Danzo?”

    “He stole the spot from Kakashi”

    “That’s just like him”

    “And just like YOU”

    “What?”

    “You did the same…didn’t you? Didn’t you, Uchi-” Hi strangled him. “Stop, or else you won’t get the important information!”

    “What information?”

    “Let…me…tell…you” Hi stopped. “You and Uchiha Sasuke have been named international criminals!”

    “What?”

    “Doesn’t that make you angry? If I were you, I’d attack Konoha for what they’ve done to you”

    “Why not just negotiate a plan? Violence leads to more violence, then war”

    “Do you really think Danzo, your arch nemesis, would listen to a seventeen year old, naive kage?”

    “I would make him!”

    “Fool! He would never! No matter how hard you tried! Konoha is weak. It would show the strength of the Grass and would make it one of the Great Nations! Don’t you see? Doing that will-” Ama had awakened and used her air palm to launch Kabuto many miles away.

    She said, “Shut up!” as she did it. “I hope you wouldn’t listen to that loser, right?”

    “Wouldn’t dream of it!”

    Far off where Kabuto landed, he said, “*****! I’ll get her back! I was going to end my meddling with a war, but I’ll take her life for this! I WILL PLEASE MADARA!” {End}
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    A couple of days later, Hi had been thinking a lot. His paranoia grew more. That night, he asked Ama, “Ama, I wish to tell you something! I was thinking, when I die, who will inherit the throne?”

    “Why me then our children of course!”

    “Exactly…Which children, Ama? Which children of ours?”

    “The ones we’ll have together later, silly!”

    “What if I’m assassinated though? How are we supposed to have kids?”

    “You’re thinking too hard, now let’s sleep”

    “No. Now is the time to have children”

    “We’re too young! I barely agreed to marry you at such a young age, not have kids this early either!”

    “We, no I, NEED an heir”

    “Please stop, Hi”

    “Have sex with me now! Your beauty shouldn’t be wasted”

    “Hi, stop!” Hi took his clothes off, and pleaded, “Please, for the future!”

    “No…not yet. What’s gotten into you?” He started unbuttoning her dress. She slapped his hand. “Stop it now, Hi! Put your clothes on now!” {Now, Hi}
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    I can’t believe it. When she fell asleep I had sex with her. I had to, but it felt so wrong to do! I can’t believe it! I…I…I raped her! What is happening to me? We both awoke naked, and she scolded me for it. She didn’t speak to me for days. It seems like what feels good, or will seem to give me something materialistic is the attraction for me. That shouldn’t be so! My mother told me to stop talking with Kabuto. In fact, my mother ordered all the royal guards to kill him on sight. For the next nine months, he was absent, and Ama never spoke to me. I am losing my wife! I should be happy since my child will be born any day now, but I’m anxious and depressed. She even threatened divorce. Why, why me? {Back to omniscient}
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    { http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7EwmduB_gI}
    The baby boy was born, and they named him Hyuuga Kibou. The joy it brought to both of them saved their marriage. Hikusa apologized and she forgave him. Shinda was also very excited to be a grandmother. The joy of the birth was halted by the news of the nations being at war for a fourth time. When Hi heard of Danzo’s death, he said, “Good riddance”

    Hi’s transition into a, let’s just say “new person”, continues. Tragedy strikes the mansion with conspiracy theory. Kabuto speaks to Hi one last time before heading off to war. One person dies, too! Next time, Chapter 20, the Death of Hi’s Conscious! There are only two chapters left in the book! Tune in until the very end!


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    Re: Tales of Hikusa Chapter 19 (WARNING: THIS STORY IS BECOMING EXPLICIT!)

    this seems to have ties to hanzo the salamander.....
    anyway, the story progressed to fast in some parts but overall your narration is quite good.
    a compelling storyline and interesting plot twists.
    quite good!
     
         

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    Re: Tales of Hikusa Chapter 19 (WARNING: THIS STORY IS BECOMING EXPLICIT!)

    Quote Originally Posted by DarkPhoenix View Post
    this seems to have ties to hanzo the salamander.....
    anyway, the story progressed to fast in some parts but overall your narration is quite good.
    a compelling storyline and interesting plot twists.
    quite good!
    I can see the similarities!!! The fast-paced storyline is for effect actually. Thanks for the comment!
     
         

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    Re: Tales of Hikusa Chapter 19 (WARNING: THIS STORY IS BECOMING EXPLICIT!)

    Excellent writing skills as always, love the plots and twists
    Can't wait 2 see what Hi does next and what Kabuto has in store 4 him and his family
     
         

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