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    "If I had a world of my
    own, everything would be
    nonsense. Nothing would be
    what it is, because everything
    would be what it isn't. And
    contrariwise, what it is it
    wouldn't be . And what it
    wouldn't be it would. You
    see?"
     

    Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi


    It was a nice breezy day in the Village Hidden in the Leaves. People were doing their usual stuff and-
    "Hey!! It's time to go on a mission!!" laughed Jiraiya.
    Jiraiya and his students were standing by the wood stakes in the Training Field.
    "Jiraiya Sensei," said Sumago Utakan who had short dark brown, and tan skin. "Why yell? It's so early in the morning."
    "Oh come on Sumago! Ha-ha!" laughed Jiraiya even more,” We are going to head out!!"
    Minato whispered to Goiichii Matatsu, the kid who had somewhat short yet long black hair. "Goiichii, I'm sure it's just a way for him to do research!"
    "Hey!! I heard you Minato!!"
    "It's the truth Jiraiya Sensei!"
    "Enough you two," said Goiichii whose intimidating voice silent them. "Stop being so immature."
    "Anyway," laughed Jiraiya scratching his head. "We are going to go on an important mission...to the Land of Jungles!!"
    Minato was surprised by this. "Land of Jungles? That's very far away."
    "I know it is," said Jiraiya, "but we must...this might even become an A-Rank Mission..."
    Sumago gulped at this, and started to sweat.
    "Do not worry Sumago," laughed Jiraiya, "No matter what happens I will protect you three with my life!"
    "Why us?" asked Minato.
    "Because we are one of the strongest teams here in the Leaf, and many are out on missions...this is a secret mission, and because of all of your strong abilities, and mine, we can do this mission, and we might be able to accomplish it..."
    "First to get ready for our Mission, we must train and get prepared for this five journey...also get ready for bugs, and more obstacles...high humidity, overgrowth of the plants, dense areas, deep swamps, quicksand, and even more. Also, if we are lucky we can end up in unknown areas, but this might be bad as well...and also...the Land of Jungles has Shinobi and a Village that’s hidden, of course deep in these jungles, which means we can get attack by their Shinobi if they think we are enemies, but because of our alliance with that nation, we can be lucky, but the tribes there can be--"
    "Don't worry Jiraiya Sensei!" laughed Minato. "We can do it! Right you guys!"
    Sumago said," R-Right..."
    Goiichii said," Humph..."
    "That's the spirit all of you!! Let's get ready! Ha-ha!" laughed Jiraiya with a spark in his eyes.
    They all laughed, and even Goiichii laughed a bit.


    (Sorry this page is so short, next will be longer if anyone cares!)
     
         
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    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    nice man
     
         

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    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    Nice!
    But what's it from?
     
         

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    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    Quote Originally Posted by Y3llovv fla5h View Post
    Nice!
    But what's it from?
    He is telling a story about Jiraiya and Minato and the two unknown students of Jiraiya, the story was never told, so he is writing a fanfic about it.

    And by the way, great job man, you could maybe make it a little longer and maybe some more spacing. :D
     
         

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    "If I had a world of my
    own, everything would be
    nonsense. Nothing would be
    what it is, because everything
    would be what it isn't. And
    contrariwise, what it is it
    wouldn't be . And what it
    wouldn't be it would. You
    see?"
     

    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    Quote Originally Posted by OWanime View Post
    nice man
    Haha thank you, and I hope you read more!
     
         

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    "If I had a world of my
    own, everything would be
    nonsense. Nothing would be
    what it is, because everything
    would be what it isn't. And
    contrariwise, what it is it
    wouldn't be . And what it
    wouldn't be it would. You
    see?"
     

    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    Quote Originally Posted by Y3llovv fla5h View Post
    Nice!
    But what's it from?
    Haha thank you!
     
         

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    "If I had a world of my
    own, everything would be
    nonsense. Nothing would be
    what it is, because everything
    would be what it isn't. And
    contrariwise, what it is it
    wouldn't be . And what it
    wouldn't be it would. You
    see?"
     

    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    Quote Originally Posted by JiraiyaEroSennin View Post
    He is telling a story about Jiraiya and Minato and the two unknown students of Jiraiya, the story was never told, so he is writing a fanfic about it.

    And by the way, great job man, you could maybe make it a little longer and maybe some more spacing. :D
    Haha, thanks! And I know haha, the next page will be longer, haha.
    I had to hurry up to get to bed, or I wouldv'e got in trouble!
    I see what you are talking about, and that's a good idea, spacing it would help, haha
     
         

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    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    i like it keep up the good work
     
         

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    Re: Namikaze Minato: Life Of The Shinobi

    Cool
     
         

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