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    New Generation Page 3.

    Previous Chapter: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=169104

    New Generation



    The Test begins


    As Yashi was sitting next to Akira and Ginjiro in front of their sensei, Mante, who was about to explain their first mission to them, Yashi threw a small rock over his head and hit Ginjiro on the shoulder.

    Yashi whispered to Ginjiro, "Haha... I got you...."

    Ginjiro took himself to his shoulder and said, "You will pay for this....."

    Before Yashi and Ginjiro could continue, their sensei interrupted.

    Mante: Alright... Our first order of bussiness, we are going to have a little test..."

    Yashi: "A test... I though we were going on a mission..."

    Mante looked at him with irritation.

    Mante: "You three are going to fight against me, and try to take these bells from me...."

    As Mante explained the test to them, he pulled out two bells from his pouch and held them out in front of his students.

    Akira: "Wait... there is only two bells.... that doesn't make sense..."

    Mante: "This is not only a test... it is also a descision for me to see if your capable of continuing as Genin... the one who doesn't get a bell is sent back to the academy..."

    Yashi: "What the HELL! That's not fair... umh... I mean.. It's not fair for Ginjiro, he will never get a bell...."

    Yashi looked at Ginjiro with a evil smile on his face.

    Mante: "Alright... The test will begin now.. and it will end at noon... the one who doesn't have a bell by then, will be sent back to the academy.."

    As Mante finishes his explanation, Akira and Yashi quickly leaves the field to hide, while Ginjiro just stares at Mante with a look of desperation and a feeling of loss of power compared to this Jounin.

    Mante: "Why are you not hidi...."

    Before Mante finished his sentence, Ginjiro went in for the kill, throwing several shuriken, jumping into the air as he sends his leg smashing down towards Mante's head.

    Mante easily catches the shuriken and blocks Ginjiro's axekick with a single hand, he grabs his leg and kicks him straight in the guts, sending him smashing into the ground and falling into the water.

    As Ginjiro jumps out of the water and lands on one knee, he throws two kunai at Mante.

    Mante: "You don't get it.. do you...."

    Mante dodges both kunai easily, but when he dodged the kunai by making a backflip, he noticed the smile on Ginjiro's face, as one of the kunai exploded in a flash and the other poofed into smoke.

    Ginjiro was now moving in from the side, sending a kick straight to Mante's chest, as Akira appears on the other side, throwing a fist straight at Mante's chin.

    Mante: "I'm impressed.... but not good enough....."

    As Ginjiro is about to kick Mante, he simply grabs his leg and throws him in a circular motion straight into Akira sending them both into the ground. though Yashi appears from a tree, and catches Akira before she hits the ground.

    Yashi: Akira... uhh.... are you alright....."

    Akira: "I'm okay.... Get you stinking hands off me!"

    She smacked Yashi in the face, as he falls to the ground, and she just runs into the forest, leaving Yashi behind with Mante. Ginjiro jumped into the water and let it carry him away.

    Mante: "Yashi..... run off.. we will meet later in the challenge... I got to check on something..."

    Yashi noded and ran off into the forest, as Mante looked down the river to Ginjiro, and though to himself; "we have some... unfinished business..."

    Ginjiro was sitting at the side of the river, looking into the sky, thinking up a plan of how he could get a bell from his sensei, but it seemed impossible to him. Though after a while, he finally came up with a plan, when Mante arrived.

    Mante: "Hello... are you ready to finish what you started... I will teach you some taijutsu..."

    Ginjiro just looked at him, when Akira and Yashi arrived at his side.

    Yashi: "I though about our mission, and it seemed impossible... but.... umh... I think we have to stick together guys....."

    Ginjiro looked at Yashi and inwillingly agreed to what Yashi just said, even though he really couldn't stand being with Yashi.

    As the real fight was about to begin for the students, both Yashi's father and Kakashi was moving towards the sand village, on a secret mission, but what they didn't know, was that someone was following them in the shadows, a mysterious man with a black cloak with white clouds and lightning stripes down the back of the cloak.

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    Guys I hope you liked it, and please comment...... :D I didn't have much time to make this... and next chapter will be better :D

    but please leave a comment
     
         
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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Nice, are you going to make a chapter about the mission or are you going to give us some hints at the end of every chapter.
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Quote Originally Posted by kelevra View Post
    Nice, are you going to make a chapter about the mission or are you going to give us some hints at the end of every chapter.
    I might make a chapter of the mission..... (maybe) and i'm sorry i don't feel like it is as good as the others.... but i hope it is good :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    I might make a chapter of the mission..... (maybe) and i'm sorry i don't feel like it is as good as the others.... but i hope it is good
    I Think I Is Excelent.
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    I like it it was good.
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Quote Originally Posted by mangekyo byakugan View Post
    I like it it was good.
    Thanks... i hope more people will read and comment
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Great like always! I'm really enjoying the storyline. Also, new akatsuki? :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Quote Originally Posted by Miyuki Yukime View Post
    Great like always! I'm really enjoying the storyline. Also, new akatsuki? :D
    Haha thanks.. and i can't reveal anything... you will just have to read and maybe find some hints.....
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Quote Originally Posted by JiraiyaEroSennin View Post
    Thanks... i hope more people will read and comment
    No prob maybe you should post it in groups that you are in to make it more popular.
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Thats really good :D but why is Akira a ***** to Yashi?
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Man that was awesome
    and I have to say it was short
    But no problem since you said 2 days = 1 chapter :izuna:
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Quote Originally Posted by phantomlord22 View Post
    Man that was awesome
    and I have to say it was short
    But no problem since you said 2 days = 1 chapter :izuna:
    Next one might be out tomorrow or wednesday
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    gr8 !
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    I...I...I...I...I...I LOVE IT. KEEP THEM COMING JiraiyaEroSennin. +REP.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by billprof View Post
    I...I...I...I...I...I LOVE IT. KEEP THEM COMING JiraiyaEroSennin. +REP.
    Haha... A new admire... well i hope you stay until the end of my book...... :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    thanks everyone.. ill probably make the next chapter on wednesday....
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    keep up the good work 10/10 again
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    keep up the good work 10/10 again
    Thanks next one is tomorrow
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    nice chapter
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 3.

    i wonder what is mante thinking of doing with ginjuro? well won't know unless i read the next chapter. :D
     
         

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