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    New Generation Page 4.

    New Generation


    The Sensei's conclusion


    As The three students are standing before their sensei, Mante, prepared to fight to get the bells. Yashi pulls out a single kunai, while both Akira and Ginjiro pulls out several shuriken.

    Yashi: "ready guys.... we will get them!..."

    As Yashi looks at Akira and Ginjiro, who both seem ready to fight, Yashi dashes towards Mante, while Akira and Ginjiro both throw several shuriken to distract Mante momentarily and leave him open for a fraction of a second.

    Mante: "you have to do better than that..."

    As Mante easily dodges a few of the shuriken, while grabbing two of them with one finger, Yashi jumps in with the kunai pointing straight at Mante's head. Suddenly Yashi is kick in the stomach by Mante, followed by Yashi quickly realizing, he needed to do something, and so he quickly spun around while delivering a kick straight at Mante's head.

    Mante: "Too easy...."

    Mante quickly grabbed his leg, but before he could throw him, Yashi had made a front flip sending a leg right into his shoulder, as Ginjiro swiped Mantes feet away under him, while Akira jumped in from the side, elbowing him in the stomach.

    Mante: "Impressive.... but not good enough...."

    As he says this, his clone dissperches and the students fall into the mud, face down. They all quickly get up, seeing their sensei coming down from a tree, ready to punch Akira right in the face.

    Yashi quickly jumps in front of her, recieving Mante's punch, while Ginjiro jumps over Yashi delivering a massive chakra infused kick right into Mante's face, sending him straight into the ground, as the students take the bells from him.

    Mante: "Ugghh... I'm quite impressed... let's go to get some lunch everyone...."


    the students glared at him, while he looked so happy and weird, they didn't understand him. He just fought them head on and now he wanted to treat them for lunch.

    The students followed him to Ichiraku Ramen, still watching him closely, while they suspect him for attacking them suddenly. When they finally arrive at the ramen shop, he orders ramen for everyone, while they sit there.

    Mante: "Well... I'm impressed with how you did today... and I have something to say to you..."

    The students looked at him with wide open eyes, as he begins to eat his ramen.

    Ginjiro: "well.....?"

    Mante looked up as he swallowed some ramen.

    Mante: "Well... first of all you all pass, and from now on.. you will be my subjects and will recieve harsh training and go on missions with me..."

    Both Akira and Ginjiro celebrated, as Yashi didn't understand a thing, since he was the only one remembering the rules of the test.

    Yashi: "What about the rules... I mean... the test...."

    Mante: "The rules were simply made.. so that you would fight well and try to split the team apart... it was never ment to define if your good enough to be a shinobi...."

    As Mante, Yashi, Ginjiro and Akira was celebrating, eating ramen and having a good laugh with their new sensei. Kakashi and Yashi's father were almost at the borders of the country of the lightning where they were supposed to meet up with lightning shinobi.

    Kakashi: "We are almost there....."

    ???: "Yes Kakashi-san...."

    Suddenly Kakashi hit a branch as he grabbed it and landed on the ground, followed by Yashi's father, looking back into the woods.

    ???: "what is it... Kakashi...."

    Kakashi: "Reveal yourself...."

    As Kakashi said this a dark shadow appeared in the woods, a dark haired person with a blue mask and a black cloak with white clouds on was slowly walking into the small opening.

    ???: "Hello Hatake Kakashi.... I see you noticed me...."

    The mysterious man was starring straight into Kakashi's eyes as Yashi's father pulled out a kunai and prepared for battle.

    Kakashi: "Son.... I will fight him.. you go ahead.. we need to get to the country of the lightning..."

    Yashi's father left without a complaint, as he left, Kakashi activated his sharingan, noticing the chakra flow of the surroundings and his opponent as well as revealing a secret about the chakra of the mysterious man who had just appeared.

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    Hope you guys enjoyed it.. it's not that long... please comment and rate :D

    If you really liked it a lot please give REP....

    Next chapter will be out saturday possible.... hope you will read it... sorry if it's a little short.. im tired...
     
         
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    Im not a sensei, just a guy
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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    nice. cant wait for next chapter. + rep
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    Quote Originally Posted by Roger23 View Post
    nice. cant wait for next chapter. + rep
    Thanks man... remember your going to appear next chapter.. which will be longer and more descriptive... though it will take maybe a few more days before its out since it takes a while and im having brain "damage" Im having trouble figuring out what to write... right now
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    I really like it
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    sweet. me vs kakashi maybe?

    the longer and more descriptive, the better it will be but take your time. fighting is harder than just telling a story.
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    The more I read the more Im sucked into the story T_T good job :D cant wait till next one
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    Nice keep up the good work Plus rep i cant wait til the next chapter :overjoy:
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    cool deal bro ++rep
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    thanks everyone :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    I like It... Hope kakashi kick some asses Next Chapter

    +REP
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    thanks man hehe you will see :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    i like it
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    very nice
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    Really good. Loved it.
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 4.

    kakashi is going to fight with another ninja. my dreams are coming true!!
     
         

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