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    New Generation Page 5.

    Previous Chapter: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...20#post5993820

    New Generation



    The fight begins


    Kakashi was standing before the mysterious man, in the dark as Yashi's dad ran off to the country of Lightning. The rain was falling down upon Kakashi and his opponent as the wind was blowing through the trees and thunder was shooting down upon the ground.

    Kakashi looked straight into the eyes of his opponent, as the lightning struck a tree right behind him and the ground was shaking, Kakashi dissappeared in a flash and suddenly stood right in front of him looking into his eyes.

    Kakashi: "Prepare yourself....."

    Kakashi rapidly send several blows towards the mysterious man, while he watched him closely with his sharingan, as the mysterious man somehow easily dodged every single blow, by simply moving from side to side, and suddenly he made a quick backflip sending a kick right into Kakashi's chin, sending him flying backwards, as he hits a small bush and falls to the ground.

    Kakashi: "Impossible.... he is that fast..."

    ???: "I heard a lot about you... apparently it wasn't true...."

    The mysterious man suddenly performed a few handseals and a massive white fireball errupted right in front of him, coming straight at Kakashi with immense speed. Even the rain didn't stop the fire. The fire itself seemed to be alive and have it's own life force as it grew in size as time passed.

    Kakashi: "What is this..... Doton: Earth Wall!!"

    A massive wall appeared before Kakashi blocking the fire, but the Fire easily crushed the earth without a problem and Kakashi barely got out of the way as he quickly jumped several times to the side and saw a glimse of his enemy taking of his cloak white cloak, revealing his body.

    Kakashi: "Alright.. so thats how he wants it to be...."

    Kakashi performed a few handseals before landing on the ground and as soon as he touched the ground several dogs appeared before him, they were quite old all the dogs and the wisest and strongest of the dogs was Paku, an old companion of Kakashi.

    Kakashi: "Alright you know what to do Paku..."

    The dogs suddenly vanished underground without a sound, as Kakashi stood up and walk over in front of the mysterious man as he performs a few handseals, and the mysterious man's quick response, he began to slowly walk towards Kakashi.

    Kakashi: "Alright... It's been a while since I used this....."

    ???: "Nothing you do... can defeat me...."

    As soon as the mysterious man said this, he noticed a massive amount of chakra being gathered in Kakashi's right hand, as it begins to turn into lightning inside his hand revealing lightning shooting out around Kakashi and the surroundings, the lightning split several small pieces of wood and crushed a few rocks beside him.

    Kakashi: "This will take care of you...."

    ???: "You know... that will never get near me...."

    Kakashi dashed towards the mysterious man as the dogs suddenly appeares from beneath restraining his movement and holding, as they bite his arms, legs and shoulders leaving him no escape, as Kakashi slams his hand right into his chest.

    Kakashi: "Lightning Blade!!!"

    The mysterious man's chest began to open and blood came out everywhere and bones began to break and his eyes were wide open. He fell to the ground unconcious, as Kakashi turns and begins to walk away and the dogs dissperches, he suddenly feels a hand on his back and before he knows it, he is smashed straight into the ground with a single punch, breaking his spine and the mysterious man stood right behind him, completely unharmed.

    ???: "You though it was that easy....."

    Kakashi noticed the mysterious man's clone dissperch as he slowly falls to the ground, planting his face right in the mud. Kakashi: "Your too careless..."

    Suddenly Kakashi's lightning clone dissperches and leaves the mysterious man shocked by the lightning, for just a moment as the real Kakashi comes out from the woods behind him, holding his favorite book, "Ichi Ichi".

    ???: "Impressive.... I guess I have to go all out...."

    Kakashi: "I will take you down!"

    As he says this he gets into a ready stance and puts away his book, as his right hand is pointing towards the ground and lightning springs out everywhere around him and shoots straight into the ground, as the ground begins to shake and a crater is beginning to form and the earth around him is beginning to crumble.

    *Scene skip*

    As Kakashi is facing the mysterious man, Yashi's father has just reached the village hidden in the clouds and is met by two guards who follows him to a secret meeting with the Raikage, carrying a special letter from the Hokage, as it is an urgent matter.
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    Alright guys once again i hope you like it and please comment :D
     
         
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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Really good
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    i once wrote soemthing like this any way you should advertise your ff more you'll get more people
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Quote Originally Posted by -Haku Yuki- View Post
    i once wrote soemthing like this any way you should advertise your ff more you'll get more people
    Wow I'm surprised to see you here... Well Thanks i guess :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Great :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    i used to write ffs all the time till i started rping i stopped after i finished my minato and bardock what ifs my alst real one was the new konoha 11 and teh ninje war (5th one)
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Well sounds interesting... Hehe :D I really hope this fanfiction story gets popular :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Amazing as always
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    dude du styre :D **** du vild til det der :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    nice cant wait for next chapter
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    awesome chapter
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Thanks everyone... I really enjoy making this for you guys :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Thanks Sage I like It
    waiting for next one

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    wow that's really good . i love the twist you pit in there i tough kakashi really died with the unknown man broke his clone's spine ( i thought that was the real kakashi ) and yashi hatake so close to my rp bio name yasha hatake
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    It was brilliant man !!
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Hehe thanks guys and i actually use other peoples bio's for inspiration :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    awesome work
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Nice i like it well done keep up the good work
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Thanks hehe it's getting more popular!!!! :overjoy:
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    splendid!
    & love the speed at which they are comin :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Quote Originally Posted by bhawk View Post
    splendid!
    & love the speed at which they are comin :D
    Well thanks.. I had a little trouble with this chapter.. but im working hard on the next one to be even better :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    Nice work keep it up
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 5.

    this is one great battle and the description and detail is astounding. i like this very much
     
         

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