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    New Generation Page 8.

    Previous chapter: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...98#post6093098

    New Generation



    The Mysterious man



    While the fight was raging on, the sun was beginning to go down, as the sky turned red, the trees began to cast long shadows around them and the wind slowly died away, the mysterious man’s armor was shining in the last glimpse of the sunlight, before the darkness consumed the forest.

    The mysterious man performed a few hand seals just as the sky turned dark and the sun disappeared from the sky. A sudden burst of massive flames erupted around the mysterious man and formed a huge circle of fire around them, leaving no escape for the team of young genin with their sensei.

    Mante: “What do you want!!!”

    The mysterious man just glared at Mante for a moment, before he looked at the students as he pulled out a special kunai with three blades as the handle is heavier than a normal kunai, while he is holding this kunai he is looking into the sky as he remembers something from his past.

    ???: “I want to see how well… Konoha has done... since I left…”

    As soon as he said this, he pushed forward on his right foot, sending him towards Mante at high speed with the kunai aimed right at his chest, while a sudden burst of chakra appeared in the mysterious man’s hand, as Mante is completely surprised and barely dodges the kunai, and as his hand makes contact with Mante, he is send backwards with immense power, crashing him straight into a tree.

    ???: “Seems as if… Konoha has fallen in skill..”

    Akira stared as her sensei was smashed into the tree and blood began coming out of his mouth and he gasped in pain, while he fell to the ground, she turned to find the mysterious man standing beside Ginjiro, holding the kunai straight to his neck, while staring at Akira.

    Akira: “Who the hell are you!!!”

    ???: “I’m just a simple old man… trying to go home…”

    As he says this, he pulls up Ginjiro and throws him towards Yashi, who grabs him in the air and lands on one knee, as Ginjiro breaks his hand in the process, while Akira begins to cry, believing they will all die in this very moment.

    Akira: “I CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!”

    The mysterious man was just standing in the middle of the area engulfed in flames, showing his armor in completely bloody red colors, while the wind was slowly blowing through his cloak, and he was looking at the three students and their teacher, lying on the ground, all wounded and scared of him. At this very moment, he glared into the sky as his hood slowly came off revealing his face.

    *Scene skip*

    On another road, not far from the battle, a man going under the name of Katsu a wanderer was traveling on a dark and mysterious road. Going along the dark places of the world, seeking new power and knowledge.

    Alongside this man another traveler walked a man called Harion, a quite young man with little knowledge of who he was traveling with and where they were going. Hairon always thought he felt something nasty over this traveler like a beast trying to rip him to shreds from the inside, to reach out and try to kill everything in its path to achieve its goal.

    He had heard of people with so powerful chakra with such unbelievable skills once before and so terrible chakra that they could rip people apart by sheer force of will.

    Katsu: “So Hairon what brings you here alongside this dark and lonely road?”

    Hairon glared at the mysterious man, as he noticed his small tattoo on both arms almost resembling snakes, and his strange looking outfit which revealed his long black hair.

    Hairon: “Well I thought I'd go traveling since I've spent all my wake years as a ramen shop owner in konoha”

    Katsu: “Konoha you say… how's it going there? any strong leaders?

    Katsu's face was horrible to look upon he looked so old and worn out, almost like a dead body which should have been buried many years ago so that no one would ever have to see such horror.

    Katsu: (with a low and giggling voice): “*kukukuku* I'll get my hands on you soon Sasuke..”

    Hairon: “Who's Sasuke?”

    Katsu: “Uhm… no one! * Kukukuku*”

    Katsu began to chough terribly coughing up blood and vomit, his face looked even more terrible, as the blood was everywhere and it almost looked like he was going to cough up his own organs and kill himself, he was in so much pain it was unbearable.

    Hairon: “Are you okay there?...”

    Katsu: “Looks like I’m not going to make it in time... * sigh* looks like he'll suffice”

    The same second he finished his sentence he fell to the ground like a plastic doll, completely motionless, like a dead body with no soul and no purpose in life. Not knowing what to do Hairon began to beg the gods to have mercy on his old and poor soul.

    Katsu: “No need for that here!”

    Within the glimpse of an eye Hairon turned around and saw a great white snake, with venomous teeth and vicious looking eyes, Harion was trembling in fear, as the great white snake consumed him in the darkness of the cold night.

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    Hope you enjoyed the 8th chapter :D created by Uffe & Me :D

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    yep whatever he said :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    Awesome job as always :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    steady readers love it :D thanks for the response next will be coming out in aprox 3-4 days :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    so orochimaru/kabuto is still around eh?

    good chapter btw :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    thanks i hope more people will come and read it :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    why do you pull the tobi thing on us....
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    Quote Originally Posted by izinagi54 View Post
    why do you pull the tobi thing on us....
    I don't you will see who it is next chapter.... hehe.....

    But you may guess.. and you probably figured out who the other guys it
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    great as always mate
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    thanks I hope people will read and give me feedback.. i need to improve!!
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    thx for all the possitive feedback guys :D but please do tell us what we can do better :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    not bad
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    well thanks Mangekyo... hehe... next one will be out in 3-4 days :D just as Uffe said.
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    very well done as always keep up the good work plus rep
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    good job you two
    It is getting Interesting and serious!!!

    +REP
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    unfair your getting all the +rep bro.... :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    hehe thanks everyone.....

    Oh and Uffe sorry mate.. but there is nothing i can do about that..
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    haha i'll survive :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    orochimaru is katsu! he's going to get sasuke for trying to kill im and hairon has just became his new body!!
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    but who is the mysterious man.....
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    nice theory but who's the first mysterious man eh? ;-) shouldn't be hard to realise if thought over :D
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    Is one of the guys sasuke????? But +rep nice fanfic..looking forward too more of it...need something to do in my spare time.lol
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    well good for you... hehe
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    Good for who? -_-
     
         

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    Re: New Generation Page 8.

    well you William but also me since it means that i will have more people reading it :D
     
         

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