Shinna Naraa Bio.

[Bright Shadow]

Basic Information

Name: Shinna Nara
Nickname: Bright Shadow
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Clan: Nara

Appearencce: (Looks) Shinna is a short, and lightweight teen, with grey eyes and white hair. He seems to be a sweet, compasionate young man with a soft face and weak build. He tends to wear a white sweater, with a tie at the collar. He also wears Khaki capris, with small shoes. Often reffered to as a "pretty boy", He has a nice, gentle face, a subtle, with ears covered by his short hair.

Personality:He's a bit shy, but an upstanding young man when he needs to be. When it comes down to his friends or one he loves, he's willing to sacrifice just about anything for them.

Village Information
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of alliance: The hidden leaf

Rank and Chakra information
Shinobi Rank: jounin
Specialty:N/A
Elements: Earth - needs training
Ninjutsu: (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Backgroun Info.

Shinna is a young man born of the Nara clan. His mom, and dad where both born of the naara clan as well, inside an average hospital, on a very hot summer. Growing up, Due to his shyness, Shinna wasin't special at all, and diddin't stand out. This was up until he reached the age of 13, where his parents happened to be in the town of uchiha, visiting an old friend. They were both found, togheter, the father, with his kneck slit, as his mother, completly guillotined from the chest up. After 1 year, He got over his parents death, as he lived alone in their house. Passing the gennin exams years ago, then with pure luck and good friends, he passed the chunnin exams.

Other N/A


Picture[s]:


Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A

~Approved~

[Lokí]

Remove "TaiJutsu; Hidden Shadow Jutsu; Kenjutsu; Muay Thai" You have to be trained in all those fields to be able to use them. Also remove all those Ninjutsu Techniques, you only get the basic 7 E rank, and your rank is S-jounin, that's about it i think, nice bio. ^_^

[Cursed Prince]

He's a guy?? Okay....
But other than that nice bio I guess. But it's kinda short. Plus you need background and theme music

[Bright Shadow]

Remove "TaiJutsu; Hidden Shadow Jutsu; Kenjutsu; Muay Thai" You have to be trained in all those fields to be able to use them. Also remove all those Ninjutsu Techniques, you only get the basic 7 E rank, and your rank is S-jounin, that's about it i think, nice bio. ^_^

Thanks for the pointers bro. I'm highly appreciative of it.

[drxdroopy]

its not a bad bio

[Lokí]

Shinobi rank: change it to S-jounin
Add this techniques to your jutsu's section

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Also, your missing a part of the bio, it goes right after history:

[b][u][size=4]Other[/size][/u][/b]

[b][u]Picture[s][/u]:[/b]

[b][u]Theme Song and Background Music[/u]:[/b]

[size=4][B][U]Battles[/U][/B][/size]

[B][U]Won[/U]:
[U]Lost[/U]:[/B] 

[Bright Shadow]

Shinobi rank: change it to S-jounin
Add this techniques to your jutsu's section

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Also, your missing a part of the bio, it goes right after history:

[b][u][size=4]Other[/size][/u][/b]

[b][u]Picture[s][/u]:[/b]

[b][u]Theme Song and Background Music[/u]:[/b]

[size=4][B][U]Battles[/U][/B][/size]

[B][U]Won[/U]:
[U]Lost[/U]:[/B] 

Thanks alot, again, for your help bro, idk how to repay you anymore. ill rep you once i spread again.