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    [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Greetings, Kryptiic

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

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    ~ All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    ~ Custom Jutsu's and Elements are not allowed
    ~ Terrain: clearing in the middle of a forest, long range around, no water source
    ~ You may use Uzumaki Nagato's abilities up to your current rank Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know
    ~ We start mid range from each other
    ~ If you have any questions please ask them via vm.


    I will be using a pair of Sage Ranked Uchiha Itachi (with MS) and Uzumaki Naruto (Sage Mode and Biju modes) biographies for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that your testing and I will make the first move


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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Nagato – Knowing about Itachi's ocular prowess, Nagato does't look at his eyes. He stays focused on his mouth and below.

    Thanks for conducting the test Scorps, hopefully it will be fun. ^^
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Itachi and Naruto, left and right, focus on his opponent. Itachi already has his 3T sharingan activated while Naruto carries with him several scrolls, one of which allows him to reverse summon a clone that he has standing by on Myo, gathering natural energy. Without a moment to waste, Itachi and Naruto do the necessary handseals and unleash a powerful combo attack of Fire and Wind, ravaging through the battle field towards Nagato. The wind sphere, done a micro second before by Naruto is quickly engulfed from behind a micro second later by Itachi's fire technique, comboing themselves into a double S-Rank Fire/Wind combo. The combo, even if pertaining to 2 techniques, is launched as a single one. Quickly following the attack, Naruto claps his hands on the ground. Focusing his earth chakra, he creates a large wall to rise behind nagato, 20 meters high, 20 meters wide, preventing his escape behind as the fire ravages him from the front and hitting him against the wall

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames.

    (Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.



     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Itachi and Naruto, left and right, focus on his opponent. Itachi already has his 3T sharingan activated while Naruto carries with him several scrolls, one of which allows him to reverse summon a clone that he has standing by on Myo, gathering natural energy. Without a moment to waste, Itachi and Naruto do the necessary handseals and unleash a powerful combo attack of Fire and Wind, ravaging through the battle field towards Nagato. The wind sphere, done a micro second before by Naruto is quickly engulfed from behind a micro second later by Itachi's fire technique, comboing themselves into a double S-Rank Fire/Wind combo. The combo, even if pertaining to 2 techniques, is launched as a single one. Quickly following the attack, Naruto claps his hands on the ground. Focusing his earth chakra, he creates a large wall to rise behind nagato, 20 meters high, 20 meters wide, preventing his escape behind as the fire ravages him from the front and hitting him against the wall

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames.

    (Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.
    Nagato notices Naruto performing a sequence of hand seals and eventually exhaling the sphere, which forms a large combination attack with Itachi's fire. As soon as Nagato sees the techniques coming, he activates Chikushōdō – Animal Path – granting him the ability to use his summoning animals.

    (Chikushōdō) - Animal Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato will activate the Animal path which grants him the ability to summon various creatures to help aide in battle. Each creature served a different purpose in battle. Each animal summon also has the Rinnengan and as such Nagato is able to see through their eyes as well. Each animal had various body piercings as well, suggesting that they too were under his control.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continuouslty activated.


    Activating the path takes no time at all and as soon as it's done he summons his giant bird.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
    Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.


    Pain's Giant Bird
    Pain has the ability to summon many creatures. One such creature is this giant bird, which has the ability to fly through the air and ram its target.


    He summons it directly under him, so that he's on its neck when it appears. It appears in a cloud of smoke and as soon as it comes to the field, it shoots out out the smoke to my right – your left – with great speed. Due to its speed it escapes the oncoming attack, though very narrowly. It's also rotated diagonally, with the left side of its stomach facing Naruto and Itachi, providing further protection for Nagato. They stay low in the air so that they can gain maximum speed.

    As they fly, Nagato continues to form two hand seals. He completes them just as he exits the range of the large attack and quickly jumps onto the ground. As soon as he touches the ground a swamp appears just under Itachi and Naruto, stretching out to short range all around them.

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.


    Whilst Nagato was forming the swamp, his large bird headed up high into the air and then started to descend on an angle aiming at Naruto. It has its large beak out front, tucks its wings in and starts to rapidly rotate like a drill.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Kryptiic View Post
    Nagato notices Naruto performing a sequence of hand seals and eventually exhaling the sphere, which forms a large combination attack with Itachi's fire. As soon as Nagato sees the techniques coming, he activates Chikushōdō – Animal Path – granting him the ability to use his summoning animals.

    (Chikushōdō) - Animal Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato will activate the Animal path which grants him the ability to summon various creatures to help aide in battle. Each creature served a different purpose in battle. Each animal summon also has the Rinnengan and as such Nagato is able to see through their eyes as well. Each animal had various body piercings as well, suggesting that they too were under his control.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continuouslty activated.


    Activating the path takes no time at all and as soon as it's done he summons his giant bird.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
    Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.


    Pain's Giant Bird
    Pain has the ability to summon many creatures. One such creature is this giant bird, which has the ability to fly through the air and ram its target.


    He summons it directly under him, so that he's on its neck when it appears. It appears in a cloud of smoke and as soon as it comes to the field, it shoots out out the smoke to my right – your left – with great speed. Due to its speed it escapes the oncoming attack, though very narrowly. It's also rotated diagonally, with the left side of its stomach facing Naruto and Itachi, providing further protection for Nagato. They stay low in the air so that they can gain maximum speed.

    As they fly, Nagato continues to form two hand seals. He completes them just as he exits the range of the large attack and quickly jumps onto the ground. As soon as he touches the ground a swamp appears just under Itachi and Naruto, stretching out to short range all around them.

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.


    Whilst Nagato was forming the swamp, his large bird headed up high into the air and then started to descend on an angle aiming at Naruto. It has its large beak out front, tucks its wings in and starts to rapidly rotate like a drill.
    As the combo is released and Naruto is preparing his earth technique he notices you flying on your bird to the side of the blast, to his left. Seeing as its flying so low, Naruto continues with his intentions but now with a different targeted area. As he focuses his earth chakra, a large 20 meter wide, 20 meter tall wall of earth rises in front of you, in such a precise manner that you can't avoid to collapses with it in your flight path. The proximity and speed of the technique is made to rise only 1 meter away from your location. 1 meter in such a high speed trajectory (like you said so yourself) while on such a large bird doesn't let you much room to maneveur and avoid a collision. Your only option is to destroy the technique all together. Itachi however, has been observing the fight and has been analyzing the best option. With an uncanny speed and using the moment you are about to collide with the wall, triggering it down to the last possible moment, Itachi unleashes a genjutsu on you, blinding you and your bird completely from the outside world. Trapped in a world of darkness, you barely have time to even understand what just happened when you collide with the solid wall of earth. The collision would be painfull enough to dispel the genjutsu but as its dispelled you are already completely trapped in a sticky mud . You see, naruto doesn't stop on performing the wall. He does a blazing fast sequence of handseals and makes the whole wall turn into sticky mud. At this moment you'd be colliding with the wall thus the solid impact halfs your momentum using the rest to push you inside the sticky mud mayhem. The swamp is used to transform the wall but also the ground beneath, making the whole (now made of sticky mud) structure collapse onto itself, draggin you and the bird to the ground and making sure you are both trapped and drowning in the sticky mud.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

    ( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.


    PS- Because i simply continue with my move using the earth core, it preceeds your use of Swamp of Underworld and makes you have to defend from the collision before actually performing it.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    As the combo is released and Naruto is preparing his earth technique he notices you flying on your bird to the side of the blast, to his left. Seeing as its flying so low, Naruto continues with his intentions but now with a different targeted area. As he focuses his earth chakra, a large 20 meter wide, 20 meter tall wall of earth rises in front of you, in such a precise manner that you can't avoid to collapses with it in your flight path. The proximity and speed of the technique is made to rise only 1 meter away from your location. 1 meter in such a high speed trajectory (like you said so yourself) while on such a large bird doesn't let you much room to maneveur and avoid a collision. Your only option is to destroy the technique all together. Itachi however, has been observing the fight and has been analyzing the best option. With an uncanny speed and using the moment you are about to collide with the wall, triggering it down to the last possible moment, Itachi unleashes a genjutsu on you, blinding you and your bird completely from the outside world. Trapped in a world of darkness, you barely have time to even understand what just happened when you collide with the solid wall of earth. The collision would be painfull enough to dispel the genjutsu but as its dispelled you are already completely trapped in a sticky mud . You see, naruto doesn't stop on performing the wall. He does a blazing fast sequence of handseals and makes the whole wall turn into sticky mud. At this moment you'd be colliding with the wall thus the solid impact halfs your momentum using the rest to push you inside the sticky mud mayhem. The swamp is used to transform the wall but also the ground beneath, making the whole (now made of sticky mud) structure collapse onto itself, draggin you and the bird to the ground and making sure you are both trapped and drowning in the sticky mud.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

    ( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.


    PS- Because i simply continue with my move using the earth core, it preceeds your use of Swamp of Underworld and makes you have to defend from the collision before actually performing it.
    Really nice move Scorps! ^^
    Oh, and just to clarify talking doesn't affect the timeframe.
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    As Nagato gets past the large fire/wind attack on his bird, he hears a loud trembling. Since he has his sights on Naruto and Itachi, he relies on the shared vision gained with the rinnegan to see what's happening in the direction he's headed via his bird. Seeing that it's a wall rising, and he's headed straight for it, he immediately activates Tendō – Deva Path – granting him the ability to manipulate forces.

    (Tendō) - Deva Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato activates the Deva Path which grants him the ability to manipulate attractive and repulsive forces allowing it to repel or attract objects or people. The path allows him access to the various gravitational abilities such as Shinra Tensei, Bansho Tennin and Chibaku Tensei.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated


    Since activations are, in a sense, "instant" he would still have enough time to react to his situation. Nagato knows exactly what he's going to do, he's just waiting for the right time to execute it. Just as the time is right, Nagato causes the bird to poof in a cloud of smoke that completely covers him. At this moment he's also placed in a genjutsu, but he pays no attention to it and as soon as the bird poofs away he releases a repulsive blast from his body. This blast releases the genjutsu without Nagato even realising he was in one and completely obliterates the wall that was risen. This means that there's nothing to turn into a swamp and the remainder of the repulsive blast is sent towards Naruto and Itachi, along with any remaining debris.

    Nagato: Shrina Tensei!!!

    (Shinra Tensei) - Divine Punishment | Mid Scale
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (+20 for mid size, +40 for large scale)
    Damage: 80 (+20 for mid size, +40 for large scale)
    Description: Manipulate gravity to repulse matter away from the user, with such force that it can easily shatter stone. By using this technique as a defensive measure, most if not all attacks directed to the user will be deflected, no matter the size or mass. The greatest example of its defensive might was from its ability to effortlessly deflect the Wind Release: Rasenshuriken, a jutsu with power considered beyond S-rank. The ability can be used on individuals, by directing the arm toward another person, or around the user in the form of a perfect wave that repels all incoming attacks.
    Note: If the user uses it on a regular scale they may not use it the following turn, if used for the mid scale they may not use it for 2 turns, if the user uses it on the large scale they may not use it again for 5 turns and they lose 40% of their life
    Note: Useable up to 4 times per battle.


    Without a break, Nagato immediately follows up by creating a pool of water under Naruto that throws him into the air. However, Nagato uses the technique to throw Naruto towards the oncoming blast, giving him less time to react. Not just that, but the pool of water eventually forms a large dragon that comes at Naruto from behind.

    (Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.


    Nagato: Naruto...can you stop me?
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Kryptiic View Post
    Really nice move Scorps! ^^
    Oh, and just to clarify talking doesn't affect the timeframe.
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    As Nagato gets past the large fire/wind attack on his bird, he hears a loud trembling. Since he has his sights on Naruto and Itachi, he relies on the shared vision gained with the rinnegan to see what's happening in the direction he's headed via his bird. Seeing that it's a wall rising, and he's headed straight for it, he immediately activates Tendō – Deva Path – granting him the ability to manipulate forces.

    (Tendō) - Deva Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato activates the Deva Path which grants him the ability to manipulate attractive and repulsive forces allowing it to repel or attract objects or people. The path allows him access to the various gravitational abilities such as Shinra Tensei, Bansho Tennin and Chibaku Tensei.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated


    Since activations are, in a sense, "instant" he would still have enough time to react to his situation. Nagato knows exactly what he's going to do, he's just waiting for the right time to execute it. Just as the time is right, Nagato causes the bird to poof in a cloud of smoke that completely covers him. At this moment he's also placed in a genjutsu, but he pays no attention to it and as soon as the bird poofs away he releases a repulsive blast from his body. This blast releases the genjutsu without Nagato even realising he was in one and completely obliterates the wall that was risen. This means that there's nothing to turn into a swamp and the remainder of the repulsive blast is sent towards Naruto and Itachi, along with any remaining debris.

    Nagato: Shrina Tensei!!!

    (Shinra Tensei) - Divine Punishment | Mid Scale
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (+20 for mid size, +40 for large scale)
    Damage: 80 (+20 for mid size, +40 for large scale)
    Description: Manipulate gravity to repulse matter away from the user, with such force that it can easily shatter stone. By using this technique as a defensive measure, most if not all attacks directed to the user will be deflected, no matter the size or mass. The greatest example of its defensive might was from its ability to effortlessly deflect the Wind Release: Rasenshuriken, a jutsu with power considered beyond S-rank. The ability can be used on individuals, by directing the arm toward another person, or around the user in the form of a perfect wave that repels all incoming attacks.
    Note: If the user uses it on a regular scale they may not use it the following turn, if used for the mid scale they may not use it for 2 turns, if the user uses it on the large scale they may not use it again for 5 turns and they lose 40% of their life
    Note: Useable up to 4 times per battle.


    Without a break, Nagato immediately follows up by creating a pool of water under Naruto that throws him into the air. However, Nagato uses the technique to throw Naruto towards the oncoming blast, giving him less time to react. Not just that, but the pool of water eventually forms a large dragon that comes at Naruto from behind.

    (Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.


    Nagato: Naruto...can you stop me?
    Just one minor corection. When you use shinra tensei, while the repulsion is happening you can't do anything else as you need to "fuel" it all the way to its full effect. Its like a fire stream and not like a fire ball, if that makes sense to you.

    _____________________

    In a reflexive action, Itachi steps forth in front of naruto with his MS active. Using it he engulfs himself in a gigantic warrior wielding the sword of totsuka and the yata mirror. Using the mirrors abilities, your attack collides with it and is completely nulified. Before you have time to react, the sword is extended towards your heart, sealing you away. This is done off course before you can do the water technique. Protected by Itachis Susano, Naruto does a quick sequence of handseals and places his hand on the ground. Around you 4 gigantic pillars of earth rise and release enormous amounts of lightning, shocking you severely as you are being sealed inside the sword. (Sword and Raiton tech happen more or less at the same time, before your water dragon). Naruto then reverse summons a clone from myobokuzan behind him. The clone stands by, in his meditive position, gathering natural energy.

    (Doujutsu: Susanoo) - Eye Technique: God Of The Storm
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40(-15 per turn)
    Damage Points: 80(-20 to user per turn)
    Description: This doujutsu creates a spirit that is equipped with the Sword Of Totsuka which seals anything it cuts in a dream -like genjutsu for eternity. Its also is equipped with Yata`s Mirror another supernatural item that can repel all attacks. The real power of Susanoo is to suck anything into another dimension but sucking it into its gourd. If hit but the sword your opponent is unable to move for three turns.
    Note: This Version can only be used by Itachi Uchiha and must have MS.

    (Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

    (Gyaku Kuchiyose no Jutsu) – Reverse Summoning Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique is the counterpart of the summoning technique, in which it allows an animal to summon the human that they have a contract with. This technique can also be used to summon shadow clones like fukasaku did with naruto’s clones.

     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Just one minor corection. When you use shinra tensei, while the repulsion is happening you can't do anything else as you need to "fuel" it all the way to its full effect. Its like a fire stream and not like a fire ball, if that makes sense to you.

    _____________________

    In a reflexive action, Itachi steps forth in front of naruto with his MS active. Using it he engulfs himself in a gigantic warrior wielding the sword of totsuka and the yata mirror. Using the mirrors abilities, your attack collides with it and is completely nulified. Before you have time to react, the sword is extended towards your heart, sealing you away. This is done off course before you can do the water technique. Protected by Itachis Susano, Naruto does a quick sequence of handseals and places his hand on the ground. Around you 4 gigantic pillars of earth rise and release enormous amounts of lightning, shocking you severely as you are being sealed inside the sword. (Sword and Raiton tech happen more or less at the same time, before your water dragon). Naruto then reverse summons a clone from myobokuzan behind him. The clone stands by, in his meditive position, gathering natural energy.

    (Doujutsu: Susanoo) - Eye Technique: God Of The Storm
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40(-15 per turn)
    Damage Points: 80(-20 to user per turn)
    Description: This doujutsu creates a spirit that is equipped with the Sword Of Totsuka which seals anything it cuts in a dream -like genjutsu for eternity. Its also is equipped with Yata`s Mirror another supernatural item that can repel all attacks. The real power of Susanoo is to suck anything into another dimension but sucking it into its gourd. If hit but the sword your opponent is unable to move for three turns.
    Note: This Version can only be used by Itachi Uchiha and must have MS.

    (Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

    (Gyaku Kuchiyose no Jutsu) – Reverse Summoning Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique is the counterpart of the summoning technique, in which it allows an animal to summon the human that they have a contract with. This technique can also be used to summon shadow clones like fukasaku did with naruto’s clones.

    Ok, thanks for the feedback. I did think it was like a fire ball in terms of its usage. Also, I think that a note should be added to the jutsu so that there's no confusion when others take the test, especially if someone was to fail doing so even though they had no idea that was the case. ^^
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    When Nagato sees Susanoo appear, stopping Shrina Tensei, he quickly activates Shuradō - Asura Path -.

    (Shuradō) - Asura Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato will activate the Asura Path which grants him the ability to summon mechanised armor, augmenting their body with extra limbs and various robotic weaponry. It allows Nagato to create up to 4 extra arms which can be used in a variety of ways. Such as grabbing their opponent and using a hidden chakra cannon in on the arms to attack his opponent. He can use this activation to access all of the Asura path abilities except the chakra explosion technique from his head but instead is used through the cannon in his arm.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated.


    Nagato realises large chunks of what appear to be earth rising from the ground in a square formation around him. Whilst they rise he also notices Susanoo trying to stab him with his sword, so he reacts by shooting himself off to the left via chakra in his feet.

    (Chakura Suishin Būtsu no Jutsu) - Chakra Propulsion Boots Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The Asura Path utilizes chakra that shoots out of his boots to propel himself in a linear direction, greatly increasing his speed.
    Note: Can only be used through Asura Path


    Nagato times it so that Susanoo wont be able to re-direct his swing in an attempt to hit him, but also just before the pillars fully arise/releasing the mass amounts of electricity. With the usage of the technique, Nagato gets out from with the pillars and avoids Susanoo.

    To finalise his move he activates Gakidō - Preta Path -. He continues to run to his left in a parabolic arc, continuously remaining mid range from Naruto and Itachi, watching them very closely.

    (Gakidō) - Preta Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato activates the Preta Path which grants Nagato the ability to absorb any chakra based attack using the Blocking Technique Absorption Seal, the user could absorb an infinite amount of chakra in any form. And the technique can be used in direct physical contact and absorb their chakra from their body or to create a barrier around them to absorb incoming Ninjutsu techniques.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Kryptiic View Post
    Ok, thanks for the feedback. I did think it was like a fire ball in terms of its usage. Also, I think that a note should be added to the jutsu so that there's no confusion when others take the test, especially if someone was to fail doing so even though they had no idea that was the case. ^^
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    When Nagato sees Susanoo appear, stopping Shrina Tensei, he quickly activates Shuradō - Asura Path -.

    (Shuradō) - Asura Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato will activate the Asura Path which grants him the ability to summon mechanised armor, augmenting their body with extra limbs and various robotic weaponry. It allows Nagato to create up to 4 extra arms which can be used in a variety of ways. Such as grabbing their opponent and using a hidden chakra cannon in on the arms to attack his opponent. He can use this activation to access all of the Asura path abilities except the chakra explosion technique from his head but instead is used through the cannon in his arm.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated.


    Nagato realises large chunks of what appear to be earth rising from the ground in a square formation around him. Whilst they rise he also notices Susanoo trying to stab him with his sword, so he reacts by shooting himself off to the left via chakra in his feet.

    (Chakura Suishin Būtsu no Jutsu) - Chakra Propulsion Boots Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The Asura Path utilizes chakra that shoots out of his boots to propel himself in a linear direction, greatly increasing his speed.
    Note: Can only be used through Asura Path


    Nagato times it so that Susanoo wont be able to re-direct his swing in an attempt to hit him, but also just before the pillars fully arise/releasing the mass amounts of electricity. With the usage of the technique, Nagato gets out from with the pillars and avoids Susanoo.

    To finalise his move he activates Gakidō - Preta Path -. He continues to run to his left in a parabolic arc, continuously remaining mid range from Naruto and Itachi, watching them very closely.

    (Gakidō) - Preta Path
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Nagato activates the Preta Path which grants Nagato the ability to absorb any chakra based attack using the Blocking Technique Absorption Seal, the user could absorb an infinite amount of chakra in any form. And the technique can be used in direct physical contact and absorb their chakra from their body or to create a barrier around them to absorb incoming Ninjutsu techniques.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated.

    Herro, I was asked to pick up your test and I will be completing it from where Scorps left off.

    __________________________________________________ ______________________


    Naruto: Im gonna avenge Pervy Sage....mark my word..

    Itachi: ... @_< Nows your chance Naruto..



    As Nagato began to boost himself out of the center of the lightning pillars, Itachi kept his eyes focused on your movements as so does Naruto. Since Itachi's Mangekyo Sharingan has been activated without the need of eye contact he disrupts your senses inducing you into a powerful genjutsu to which you see a black hole open up in the direction youre flying towards sucking everything around and including you in, which makes you fall leaving you unconscious.



    Rank: B
    Type: offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Descrition: The user activates their Mankegyo Sharingan binding his opponent in an illusion. The victim is then sucked in a black hole that devours everything in its path, leaving the victim unconscious.
    Note: Target stays unconcious for 1 turn.




    At the same time, Naruto who had been watching your movement the whole time makes a handseal due to his wind affinity and creates a tornado below you that drags your genjutsu afflicted body into its swirling mass causing you to be sucked in uncontrollably while you're unconscious causing you severe damage.



    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will swing their Giant Folding fan or Giant War fan at their target to create a small but powerful hurricane that drags the target with it several meters. Normal users can perform this technique by use of 3 hand seals before creating the Hurricane.




    After finishing his technique, Naruto has his mind focused and disperses the clone that had been gathering Natural energy on Mount Myoboku, and then gathered more natural energy when he was reverse summoned, which grants him the ability to enter Sage Mode.



    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A (+ 10 to Taijutsu)
    Description: The user stands still in a motionless state to gather natural chakra to then enter Sage Mode. The user can eliminate the weakness of remaining still by using a shadow clone to stand still and absorb natural chakra whilst the main body remains in combat and by dispersing the clone the user will gain the natural chakra thus entering Hermit mode. This mode causes the user to take on characteristics of a frog. Red pigments surround the eyes and their pupils take on a rectangular shape. The user also gains the ability to sense chakra and the mode increase the power of the Taijutsu by +10.
    Note: Sage Mode lasts for a total of 5 turns.
    Note: if user uses Frog Katas length of Sage mode is cut by two turns.



     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Nagato.. View Post
    Herro, I was asked to pick up your test and I will be completing it from where Scorps left off.

    __________________________________________________ ______________________


    Naruto: Im gonna avenge Pervy Sage....mark my word..

    Itachi: ... @_< Nows your chance Naruto..



    As Nagato began to boost himself out of the center of the lightning pillars, Itachi kept his eyes focused on your movements as so does Naruto. Since Itachi's Mangekyo Sharingan has been activated without the need of eye contact he disrupts your senses inducing you into a powerful genjutsu to which you see a black hole open up in the direction youre flying towards sucking everything around and including you in, which makes you fall leaving you unconscious.



    Rank: B
    Type: offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Descrition: The user activates their Mankegyo Sharingan binding his opponent in an illusion. The victim is then sucked in a black hole that devours everything in its path, leaving the victim unconscious.
    Note: Target stays unconcious for 1 turn.




    At the same time, Naruto who had been watching your movement the whole time makes a handseal due to his wind affinity and creates a tornado below you that drags your genjutsu afflicted body into its swirling mass causing you to be sucked in uncontrollably while you're unconscious causing you severe damage.



    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will swing their Giant Folding fan or Giant War fan at their target to create a small but powerful hurricane that drags the target with it several meters. Normal users can perform this technique by use of 3 hand seals before creating the Hurricane.




    After finishing his technique, Naruto has his mind focused and disperses the clone that had been gathering Natural energy on Mount Myoboku, and then gathered more natural energy when he was reverse summoned, which grants him the ability to enter Sage Mode.



    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A (+ 10 to Taijutsu)
    Description: The user stands still in a motionless state to gather natural chakra to then enter Sage Mode. The user can eliminate the weakness of remaining still by using a shadow clone to stand still and absorb natural chakra whilst the main body remains in combat and by dispersing the clone the user will gain the natural chakra thus entering Hermit mode. This mode causes the user to take on characteristics of a frog. Red pigments surround the eyes and their pupils take on a rectangular shape. The user also gains the ability to sense chakra and the mode increase the power of the Taijutsu by +10.
    Note: Sage Mode lasts for a total of 5 turns.
    Note: if user uses Frog Katas length of Sage mode is cut by two turns.



    As Nagato escapes using the chakra boots, he notices that an odd event has occurred in the direction he's headed. A giant black hole has appeared and he's being sucked towards it. Nagato carefully assess the situation, and comes to the conclusion that the black hole is a genjutsu. He worked it out by considering that it isn't possible for a black hole to open on earth, unless someone has somehow managed to find a 4th dimension, which is highly unlikely. Not just that, he knows Itachi is incredibly skilled with genjutsu. So, as he flies towards it a rod drops from his sleeve at an angle that pierces his left leg. It avoids major veins but causes enough pain to snap him from the genjutsu. The moment he stabs himself a thick suit of earth covers him. This would protect him from Naruto's following attack.

    (Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
    Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.


    It then fades after taking the brunt of the wind. From there, Nagato summons another of his creatures. This time, it's his large crustacean. It's summoned roughly a meter in front and to Nagato's right.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
    Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.


    Pain's Giant Crustacean
    Pain has the ability to summon many creatures. One such creature is this giant crustacean, which has the ability to expel a large amount of water


    The moment it's summoned, it begins to expel a large amount of water from it's mouth. It's very high pressured and is aimed at the ground, just in front and to the side of susano (The side i'm facing). The water causes the ground to wear away, turning to a muddy substance and as seen, it is capable of flooding areas. So, it would become a large amount of gushing water that would cause Naruto to be swept away, and possibly Itachi.

    At the same time the crab does that, Nagato uses his gravity manipulation to pull Naruto, now in SM, towards the water.

    (Bensho Ten’in) - Universal Pull
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Manipulates gravity at the users will, however instead of pushing objects away, it draws them close.
    Note: Useable up to 4 times per battle


    The water is initially a very dense stream (as seen in anime/manga) so it would cause immense damage to him. If he does hit it, it would also drive him into the ground/Itachi's Susano.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Kryptiic View Post
    As Nagato escapes using the chakra boots, he notices that an odd event has occurred in the direction he's headed. A giant black hole has appeared and he's being sucked towards it. Nagato carefully assess the situation, and comes to the conclusion that the black hole is a genjutsu. He worked it out by considering that it isn't possible for a black hole to open on earth, unless someone has somehow managed to find a 4th dimension, which is highly unlikely. Not just that, he knows Itachi is incredibly skilled with genjutsu. So, as he flies towards it a rod drops from his sleeve at an angle that pierces his left leg. It avoids major veins but causes enough pain to snap him from the genjutsu. The moment he stabs himself a thick suit of earth covers him. This would protect him from Naruto's following attack.

    (Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
    Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.


    It then fades after taking the brunt of the wind. From there, Nagato summons another of his creatures. This time, it's his large crustacean. It's summoned roughly a meter in front and to Nagato's right.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
    Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.


    Pain's Giant Crustacean
    Pain has the ability to summon many creatures. One such creature is this giant crustacean, which has the ability to expel a large amount of water


    The moment it's summoned, it begins to expel a large amount of water from it's mouth. It's very high pressured and is aimed at the ground, just in front and to the side of susano (The side i'm facing). The water causes the ground to wear away, turning to a muddy substance and as seen, it is capable of flooding areas. So, it would become a large amount of gushing water that would cause Naruto to be swept away, and possibly Itachi.

    At the same time the crab does that, Nagato uses his gravity manipulation to pull Naruto, now in SM, towards the water.

    (Bensho Ten’in) - Universal Pull
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Manipulates gravity at the users will, however instead of pushing objects away, it draws them close.
    Note: Useable up to 4 times per battle


    The water is initially a very dense stream (as seen in anime/manga) so it would cause immense damage to him. If he does hit it, it would also drive him into the ground/Itachi's Susano.

    Note: You performed 4 techniques all together. Nagato's summoning has a technique on the jutsulist for that foam attack. It is also not some form of corrosive water as you claimed. It is merely foam thats used to wash away oil and fire such as when he used it to wash off the oil covering Konan. She was left unharmed when exiting the foam. Nor did it create any steam as you also noted. The reason it flooded the area in the anime was because they were in a small closed off area, leaving the watery foam with no way of exiting. This is the technique below, for future references:

    (Suiton: Homatsu Rappa) – Water Release: Violent Bubble wave
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense , Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: Peins giant crustation summoning expels a huge wave of Bubbles from their mouth that is capable of washing away most attacks, such as oil and fire. It is also effective as a smokescreen.
    Note: Can only be used by Pein/Nagato.
    __________________________________



    Itachi: Naruto... it looks like some sort of foam!! Watch it..!


    Naruto: I don't care about some stinky, smelly foam!!! If one things for certain... Youre going down Nagato!! SAGE ART: RASENSHURIKEN!!!



    After the water expels from the crabs mouth hindering our vision, Naruto stays calm and his will of fire and determination to defeat you keeps him calm. Narutos high level of intelligence with shadow clone manipulation and scheming gave him his next idea. He throws a Rasenshuriken towards you cutting through the foaming water, and then throws a second one behind it, being masked by the presence of the already visible first rasenshuriken, and the foamy water....so that if the first one misses or gets absorbed, the second will hit you dead on..



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will create Sage art: Sprialling shuriken and then throw it at the enemy target. they will also create a secone sprialling shurikent technique to then hide it in the shadow of the first so that the opponent wont notice and if the first technique fails second will strike.
    Note: After use of technique Sage mode will end.




    As Naruto does this, Itachi takes the Sword of Totsuka, and performs an inward, horizontal slash causing the sword to come side swiping you from your left side while the rasenshuriken hit from from the front. Itachi intensifies the slash by covering his sword with unholy black flames making it harder for you to dodge the sword without getting burned to a crisp.. Using his sharingan the move is used accurately so that Naruto wont be harmed given the distance between Itachi and Naurto and the distance between Itachi and Nagato with the sword being an extension of his body and the point of attempted impact with you as its target is farther away.



    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After summoning Susanoo itachi uses the Sword of Totsuka to smash the target and causes a huge wave of chakra to appear.
    Note: This technique does not seal the target within the blade.





    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80(-3 each turn its still on opponent)
    Descripton: Were ever the eye focuses on there will be a convergence of unholy black flames.This fire is so powerful that is will burn for three days.Burns user for 3 turns and is unblockable.





    Naruto: Dammit, Im out of Sage Mode....
    :ghehe:
    (Inside).. Kurama, I think Im gonna need some of your chakra, to finish this guy off..



    EDIT: You can continue with the 4th move not ever happening..
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Nagato.. View Post
    Note: You performed 4 techniques all together. Nagato's summoning has a technique on the jutsulist for that foam attack. It is also not some form of corrosive water as you claimed. It is merely foam thats used to wash away oil and fire such as when he used it to wash off the oil covering Konan. She was left unharmed when exiting the foam. Nor did it create any steam as you also noted. The reason it flooded the area in the anime was because they were in a small closed off area, leaving the watery foam with no way of exiting. This is the technique below, for future references:



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    Itachi: Naruto... it looks like some sort of foam!! Watch it..!


    Naruto: I don't care about some stinky, smelly foam!!! If one things for certain... Youre going down Nagato!! SAGE ART: RASENSHURIKEN!!!



    After the water expels from the crabs mouth hindering our vision, Naruto stays calm and his will of fire and determination to defeat you keeps him calm. Narutos high level of intelligence with shadow clone manipulation and scheming gave him his next idea. He throws a Rasenshuriken towards you cutting through the foaming water, and then throws a second one behind it, being masked by the presence of the already visible first rasenshuriken, and the foamy water....so that if the first one misses or gets absorbed, the second will hit you dead on..



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will create Sage art: Sprialling shuriken and then throw it at the enemy target. they will also create a secone sprialling shurikent technique to then hide it in the shadow of the first so that the opponent wont notice and if the first technique fails second will strike.
    Note: After use of technique Sage mode will end.




    As Naruto does this, Itachi takes the Sword of Totsuka, and performs an inward, horizontal slash causing the sword to come side swiping you from your left side while the rasenshuriken hit from from the front. Itachi intensifies the slash by covering his sword with unholy black flames making it harder for you to dodge the sword without getting burned to a crisp.. Using his sharingan the move is used accurately so that Naruto wont be harmed given the distance between Itachi and Naurto and the distance between Itachi and Nagato with the sword being an extension of his body and the point of attempted impact with you as its target is farther away.



    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After summoning Susanoo itachi uses the Sword of Totsuka to smash the target and causes a huge wave of chakra to appear.
    Note: This technique does not seal the target within the blade.





    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80(-3 each turn its still on opponent)
    Descripton: Were ever the eye focuses on there will be a convergence of unholy black flames.This fire is so powerful that is will burn for three days.Burns user for 3 turns and is unblockable.





    Naruto: Dammit, Im out of Sage Mode....
    :ghehe:
    (Inside).. Kurama, I think Im gonna need some of your chakra, to finish this guy off..



    EDIT: You can continue with the 4th move not ever happening..
    Yes yes, unfortunately. Though you may be able to understand the confusion seeing that the summoning description states "water" yet the jutsu description states that it's bubbles. See the misunderstanding? -_- Also, I never said it was corrosive. xD

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    Nagato hears a very loud buzzing sort of noise coming from behind the foam and knowing that a technique is approaching, begins to rise into the air.

    (Shinra no Seigyo) - Heavenly Subjugation of Control
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This Technique is the ability to control and manipulate gravitational forces afflicting the user. It allows the user to manipulate it to the degree that they can float into the air but manage to retain a level of control that doesnt cause them to fall to the floor from the pull of the gravity or being sent into the sky from the removal of the gravity pull. This technique however only allows the user to move in a single direction and doesn't travel at fast speeds.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continuouslty activated


    It isn't very fast, however thanks to noticing something approaching early on, he had more time to react. He rises up high enough for both Rasenshuriken to miss and the sword to go under him. He uses the technique at a time where the second rasenshurikens throw can't be re-directed and same for the sword.

    As soon as the techniques has past be begins to decent. As he descends, large chunks of rocks break from the ground and are sent forwards. The debris is aimed at Naruto and Itachi as well as just before. He spares one chunk and has it rise beneath him and head off further to his left.

    (Tengoku Seigyo no Metsuboshi) - Heavenly Control of Orions Belt
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Using their manipulation of the gravitational forces the user is able to generate several boulders of earth to rise from the ground and begin floating around in mid air above the user creating a belt of debris. The user can then use this debris of earth spheres to be shot at the target/s for devastating damage that can cause small craters (0-5 meters impact width) in the ground.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato, Pein biographies.


    Nagato: Naruto, pain is something you carry with you forever. However, you will never understand its true meaning!!!

    After travelling on the rock for a short time, he jumps off it and sends it towards the two of you as well. Behind it he unleashes a torrent of missiles. They are hidden thanks to the rock, right up until the point the rock would be targeted or got within close proximity to Naruto and Itachi. At this point they would scatter from behind the rock as a surprise attack.

    (Kaiwan Misairu no Jutsu) - Flaming Arrow Missiles Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The Asura Path pulls out its hand, which is revealed to be connected to the arm by a thick cord with missiles attached to it. The missiles then can be launched, causing massive explosions. These missiles can also come out of the Asura Path's body, and launched at the opponents directly with a homing effect. Nagato can use this ability throught the activation of the Asura path and using in the same fashion as the Asura Path body used by the 6 paths of pein.
    Note: Can only be used through Asura Path or by Nagato through activating the Asura Path.


    Nagato: By the way, Itachi, your parents never loved you!! -trollface-
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

    Quote Originally Posted by Kryptiic View Post
    Yes yes, unfortunately. Though you may be able to understand the confusion seeing that the summoning description states "water" yet the jutsu description states that it's bubbles. See the misunderstanding? -_- Also, I never said it was corrosive. xD

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    Nagato hears a very loud buzzing sort of noise coming from behind the foam and knowing that a technique is approaching, begins to rise into the air.

    (Shinra no Seigyo) - Heavenly Subjugation of Control
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This Technique is the ability to control and manipulate gravitational forces afflicting the user. It allows the user to manipulate it to the degree that they can float into the air but manage to retain a level of control that doesnt cause them to fall to the floor from the pull of the gravity or being sent into the sky from the removal of the gravity pull. This technique however only allows the user to move in a single direction and doesn't travel at fast speeds.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continuouslty activated


    It isn't very fast, however thanks to noticing something approaching early on, he had more time to react. He rises up high enough for both Rasenshuriken to miss and the sword to go under him. He uses the technique at a time where the second rasenshurikens throw can't be re-directed and same for the sword.

    As soon as the techniques has past be begins to decent. As he descends, large chunks of rocks break from the ground and are sent forwards. The debris is aimed at Naruto and Itachi as well as just before. He spares one chunk and has it rise beneath him and head off further to his left.

    (Tengoku Seigyo no Metsuboshi) - Heavenly Control of Orions Belt
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Using their manipulation of the gravitational forces the user is able to generate several boulders of earth to rise from the ground and begin floating around in mid air above the user creating a belt of debris. The user can then use this debris of earth spheres to be shot at the target/s for devastating damage that can cause small craters (0-5 meters impact width) in the ground.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato, Pein biographies.


    Nagato: Naruto, pain is something you carry with you forever. However, you will never understand its true meaning!!!

    After travelling on the rock for a short time, he jumps off it and sends it towards the two of you as well. Behind it he unleashes a torrent of missiles. They are hidden thanks to the rock, right up until the point the rock would be targeted or got within close proximity to Naruto and Itachi. At this point they would scatter from behind the rock as a surprise attack.

    (Kaiwan Misairu no Jutsu) - Flaming Arrow Missiles Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The Asura Path pulls out its hand, which is revealed to be connected to the arm by a thick cord with missiles attached to it. The missiles then can be launched, causing massive explosions. These missiles can also come out of the Asura Path's body, and launched at the opponents directly with a homing effect. Nagato can use this ability throught the activation of the Asura path and using in the same fashion as the Asura Path body used by the 6 paths of pein.
    Note: Can only be used through Asura Path or by Nagato through activating the Asura Path.


    Nagato: By the way, Itachi, your parents never loved you!! -trollface-
    The water causes the ground to wear away, turning to a muddy substance
    To me, thats indirectly saying "corrosive." Thats why I used the word.
    __

    (Inside)

    Kurama: Remember Naruto, you cannot use my power too long or you will die..

    Naruto: I'll beat this guy before I run out of power, believe it!! *grins and gives the thumbs up*

    ________
    Naruto: Not so fast Nagato!!


    As Naruto sees you floating above his attacks, he looks to Kurama for more power so that he can try to gain an upper hand on you and stop you from running away... Once he enters the Nine Tails mode, he gallops towards you at immense speeds and jumps towards you as he sees you descending attempting to smash him with your gravitational powers and the rocks so with the power of the Nine tails mode, he gathers chakra in his mouth letting out a massive sonic roar that barrels towards you with immense force which shatters the rocks and sends some flinging back in your direction..



    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+15 to Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Techniques)
    Description: Naruto accesses the Kyubi chakra that is sealed away in his body after the seperation of the chakra from the kyubi and its will. He can access its chakra directly whenever he needs it without interacting with the beast at all. In doing so, he gains a chakra shroud that resembles the Sage of the Six Paths' silhouette. The colour of his eyes changes from blue to orange, instead of red. Also, while the demon fox shroud is red and releases chakra as burning, acidic bubbles, this form's shroud is yellow and releases chakra as flickers of flame, instead. With the Nine-Tails' power under his control, Naruto's strength is significantly increased adding +15 to his Ninjutsu and Taijutsu techniques. His speed is greatly increased to the point in which he surpasses A while in his Lightning Release Armor. Naruto Whilst in this state can create from the shroud chakra arms which can aide in the manipulation of various techniques. The chakra arms give Naruto greater range of attacks as well as greater dexterity and manoeuvrability with his fighting style without the use of shadow clones. However, using the Nine-Tails Chakra Mode is a huge risk. Naruto has to temporarily "shelve" his own chakra in order to use the Nine-Tails' chakra, which allows the Nine-Tails to automatically drain his original chakra Thus Naruto can only maintain this state for 5 turns before its deactivation.
    Note: Technique can only be used once and last 5 turns when activated.





    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: whilst in his incomplete form naruto will use the nine tails massive reserves of chakra to turn a simple roar into a powerful force of pressure and destruction.
    Note: Can only be used in naruto's incomplete form.




    After the roar, Naruto extends two massive sized chakra arms to extend form his back to come around from your left and right to clap you like a fly..



    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Whilst in their incomplete transformation form the user can extend from any part their body a chakra arm that can grab hold of an object or enemy and crush or hold them from great distances.
    Note: Can only be used by all jinchuuriki in incomplete form.




    Itachi: *Facepalms* Thats why I killed them silly..

    Itachi: (Thinking): "You can do this Naruto..." ^/ _ \^

    Time to find an opening..

    As Naruto enters his mode, Itachi is following running at his own pace towards his right encircling you getting closer at his own speed while Naruto does his thing..
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test - Uzumaki Nagato] Kryptiic

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    Ok, some good moves, yes, but some mistakes, ones minor, others not so much. And, overall, you ran a lot instead of pressuring your tester. The test was conducted by two testers, both with different styles and while you didn't fair badly, you didn't do enough to win nor does it showed that you were at least trying to wind. So sorry but its a fail. Next time you go for it, try being more agressive. Try not defending that much and pressuring your opponent more. Its not so much about using the high rank, big scale techniques but actually attacking...which in general you failed to do.
     
         

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