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    Asura, Iwa's White Wrath







    "No matter where you run, no matter where you hide, you cannot escape my wrath."
    "No one else in Iwa has better rock hard abs than me, just ask anyone."
    "Your perceptions of this reality and what is just or immoral does not matter to me."






    Name: Asura
    Nickname: Iwa's White Wrath
    Gender: Male
    Age: 26
    Clan: N/A

    Looks



    Ever since he was a boy Asura has had remarkable features that has deemed him a stunning young man,earning him a fair amount of admirers through out the years.. His hair is as white as the moon itself and sways gracefully to and fro in the wind. Blending well with this bright hair is his slightly tan skin. The overall frame of his body is slightly wide with broad shoulders and chiseled abs that even the gods envy. He takes care of himself very well in a sense of hygiene, leaving his nails to always be neatly clipped, his teeth sparkling, and his body giving off the sweet aroma of spring. Over the years he has kept his hair mildly long, but as he aged it has grown to be a little more messier, being harder to style and laying about in a somewhat shaggy way. His bangs just barely fall over his eyes and cover his ears. Out of all of these notable features there is still however one that stands out the most. As a child Asura bared silver eyes that radiated with an innocent and lovely expression, but now his eyes lay a deep crimson red mixed with a hint of yellow and orange hues. These supernova appearing eyes have a gaze so deep they seem to peer into one's soul itself. Regardless of the cause for the color change Asura's eyes now lack less of an innocent essence but still reflect strong and burning emotions. Often his eyes can be scene burning with lust, sorrow or even hatred. Regardless, no matter how many smiles he puts on, his eyes tell the truth and admit to whoever gazes into them that he is rarely ever truly happy. Asura's usually attire consists of a black, white and silver color scheme. He has two favorite outfit styles, one of a white robe with an undershirt and metal armor torso plate. The other is a white jacket with sky blue decorations near the sleeves and a black jacket underneath it. The jacket has a large collar and red outlining along it's edges and with it Asura wears black pants and either boots or standard shinobi shoes. Other accessories include gauntlets, a white headband and a sash. Regardless of his chosen attire however, all fit perfectly along his muscular toned body and leave room for great flexibility in battle.



    Personality : As a child Asura had lost his mother, leaving him alone with his father and twin sister Haruka. However, when he was merely 8 years old his father died as well while out on a mission, leaving him alone to take care of Haruka who was born with a weak body. Thanks to this he matured mentally very quickly and found himself understanding many things a child should never have had to. Somehow though he managed to get through all of this pain and suffering thanks to his sister, allowing his desire to take care of her to be his rock and reason to carry on. However, when he was 10 years old a few civilians of Konohagakure had found out of the vast wealth him and Haruka had inherited from their parents death, a secret they had tried to keep by being moderate with the things that they bought. With the secret let out a few greedy individuals kidnapped Asura's twin sister in the middle of the night and demanded ransom money for her return. When meeting up with the crooks Asura begged and plead for her release, telling them how they needed the money for her hospital bills and to make sure they could have food and a place to live before Asura was old enough to get a good paying job. But their sins tainted their thoughts and in their rage they took Haruka's life. After that Asura fled to Iwagakure and his emotional state and outlook on the world changed. Having lost his will to survive the only thing that kept Asura going was a promise he made to his younger sister when they were little. Today Asura's true personality is a mystery, he continues to put on fake personas for the people surrounding him. He usually appears to be playful and loves to tease others. However even though he surrounds himself with people he often prefers solitude and can be found deep in thought in a quiet place.

    Village Info


    Village of Birth : Konohagakure



    Village of Alliance : Iwagakure



    Rank//Chakra Info


    Ninja Rank : Jounin
    Specialty : None
    Elements : Wind - needs training

    Your ninjutsu :

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Background Information


    History : As told by Asura himself.



    "Asu... What happened?"
    "You fainted again so I brought you back to your room. I made you some of your favorite tea."
    "Onii-chan is always taking care of Haru."
    "I do it because I want to Haruka. Nothing in the world is more important than family."

    To whomever it may concern, or whatever data record this is going on, I am Asura and I was born with a twin sister named Haruka. The doctors said that when we were both in the womb I always took more nutrients then what I was supposed to and as a result my twin was born with a weak body. Like most twins I had a very strong bond with my sister, but when I found out that I was the reason why she was always so sick, I started doing every thing I could to make it up to her. I could barely walk and I already owed my life to someone and the fact that our mother died after giving birth to us never lessened anything. But it was a burden I put on myself and was happy to carry on it my shoulders. One day Haruka had been running a small fever and she fainted in the living room. After taking her back to her room I took the time to make her some tea. It was a specialty I created myself with the help of a herbalist who said the ingredients would help with her health. I'm just glad she loved the taste of it; I would of felt horrible if I had to tell her she had to take it to feel better, but instead I managed to make it seem like a treat. I was returning to the living room to get her black stuffed rabbit when I heard the sound of a kunai catch into the doorway, Konoha's special mail delivery system aside from the birds. It was on that day, August 29th, around 2:00 pm when I found out that our father had passed away while out on a mission. The letter spoke of his bravery and amazing feats, but no matter how much they tried to glorify it, I knew it was just them saying his name would be added to the memorial stone.

    "Mr.Bun-bun! You found him!"
    "Mhm, he was in the living room. Here."
    "Onii-chan, do you know when papa will be back."
    "Oh, uhh. He said that he was going on a really important mission somewhere. He doesn't know when he'll be back but he said it might be awhile."
    "Awhile? Well at least I have Aru here. Onii-chan, are you going to grow up and be a shinobi like papa? A real strong one! That way we can get a big house and live for a long long time. We need to make up for all the time mama isn't going to get to enjoy.
    "Yeah Haru, I'll become super strong. That way I can make sure you never get sick again and all of that. I promise..."

    After our dad died I figured out that we had a inherited quite a lot of money. It seems that our parents had saved it all up to ensure we had an easy and great future. As the older sibling I was put in charge of it and had to make sure it was spread out evenly between me and Haruka. At first I was tempted to spend a lot of it so me and Haruka could live in a better house and have nicer things. But then I realized that it was better to save it up and use it to pay for the bills and food, along with all the medicine Haruka needed. But eventually after two years when me and Haruka turned 10, a few of the civilians that lived near us started getting suspicious. Rumors were spreading around as to how we could pay for all of our necessities without me having an income coming in. One night in the middle of a thunder storm while I was sleeping a group of 5 men sneaked into our house and kidnapped my sister. I was woken up by the crashes but by then it was too late. They left a note demanding money for her return. I met them in the forest bordering our village. No matter how much I begged and plead they wouldn't let her go. I even told them about how sick she was and we needed it for her medicine, but they just didn't care. All that mattered to them was their own selfish greed. In the end they forced the money out of me, but for "wasting" their time for so long they killed Haruka anyways.



    "Haru, listen to me. We'll be alright, I can get a job and go to the ninja academy. I'll become a strong shinobi like you wanted me too. I'll ask the herbalist that lives next to us to look after you while I'm out working and training. I'll come back every night and make you your favorite tea and one day when I become Jounin we'll get a nice big house, just don't close your eyes. Haru... Haru can you hear me. HARUKA!!!"

    I had always been one that dreaded the thought of revenge and seeking violence in a result for the harm someone cause you. But that night... Revenge was the only thing on my mind. I found out where the 5 men lived and made sure that they, their wives, and their children would not wake up the next morning. Every penny they took was taken back. After hiding the riches with me I took Haruka to the edge of the forest past Konoha's borders and buried her. At the age of 10, and I had to bury my own twin sister. I knew I couldn't just return to the leaf village, so I spoke a few last words to Haruka's grave before fleeing. It was a long journey, but I ended up in a village known as Iwagakure. It was a place far different from Konoha, but for the rest of my life it would be my home. As promised I began my training as a shinobi of Iwagakure. I've still made a few mistakes in the past few years in my sorrow of missing my family, but no matter what I will keep my promise. I will grow strong and live the life that my cherish family had been denied, the life, that was stolen from them.


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    Theme Song and Background Music : Asura's Wrath

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    Won : 0
    Lost : 0

    ~Approved~ if you really want to use picture titles that's your problem, however if I see that they do not follow the template title I remove them.
     
         
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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Whoa, nice bio
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Kage Phoenix View Post
    Whoa, nice bio
    Quote Originally Posted by Sasuke.. View Post
    Dayum nice bio ;o
    Thanks. I worked pretty hard on it.
     
         

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    nice bio
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by The 4th Raikage View Post
    nice bio
    Quote Originally Posted by Ciberr View Post
    Nice :D
    Thanks, glad you like it.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Nicely done. I like the borders as well as the pictures used. Now to read the bio.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    Nicely done. I like the borders as well as the pictures used. Now to read the bio.
    Thank you, hope you enjoy the read. I tried to make the background story somewhat unique.
     
         

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    Very cool and special bio.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Wow really great bio, definately one of the best one I have seen
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Thoth View Post
    Very cool and special bio.
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    Wow really great bio, definately one of the best one I have seen
    , thanks. Glad you like it.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    You may have changed the name but the majority of the pictures are still of Sakata Gintoki, which is owned by Gin-San so you'll have to ask him for permission or change those pics.

    Looks nice though ^_^
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    I was told by a mod that the person that was using Sataka Gintoki as their rpc appearance was inactive so I went ahead and used him. If he himself posts here saying that he is active and doesn't want me using it then I will change it.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    As to be expected of my pupil.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Wesobi View Post
    As to be expected of my pupil.
    Now to just wait for it to be approved and get some training done. Then it'll be time for some fun.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Yukio Akizuki View Post
    I was told by a mod that the person that was using Sataka Gintoki as their rpc appearance was inactive so I went ahead and used him. If he himself posts here saying that he is active and doesn't want me using it then I will change it.
    Still kind of disrespectful to do such kind of thing >_>
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    The reason I asked a mod if anyone was currently using him first was to avoid disrespect. I only made it because I was informed that no one was using him. If you do not want me to use Sataka Gintoki as the appearance then I will change it upon your request, this I have no problem with and will do immediately. Please understand that there are a lot of members of NB, many who have claimed the appearance of certain characters. When I was told by a mod that no one was using Sataka right now I didn't expect there to be a problem with it and went ahead and made the bio.
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Yukio Akizuki View Post
    The reason I asked a mod if anyone was currently using him first was to avoid disrespect. I only made it because I was informed that no one was using him. If you do not want me to use Sataka Gintoki as the appearance then I will change it upon your request, this I have no problem with and will do immediately. Please understand that there are a lot of members of NB, many who have claimed the appearance of certain characters. When I was told by a mod that no one was using Sataka right now I didn't expect there to be a problem with it and went ahead and made the bio.
    You first said someone was using it but was inactive, then you said no one was using it @_@

    lol, man I'm just giving you a hard time : P

    I don't care about the permission thingy, the only reason I want to know is so I know how the bio looks, and yours is superb ^^

    Yeah sure, you have permission, as a RPer and as a Gintama fan
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    damn this bio looks epic
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    D:< You gave me a hard attack you mofo. I already had zerochan.net open and looking for a new appearance! Anyways, I meant no one was "currently" using it, therefore inactive. But thanks, I will make sure to not to dishonor the almighty face of Sataka. @__@
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Whoa....sexy guy :3 Okay now to rate it...from the Ikikou levels of 1 through 5 you get a 3000!!!!!! :D I like it amazingly and I feel like I just went to wikipedia.....
    Score: 5 out of 5 :D
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by ikikouchiha9668 View Post
    Whoa....sexy guy :3 Okay now to rate it...from the Ikikou levels of 1 through 5 you get a 3000!!!!!! :D I like it amazingly and I feel like I just went to wikipedia.....
    Score: 5 out of 5 :D
    Why thank you. :3
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Yukio Akizuki View Post
    Why thank you. :3
    My pleasure :D Thank you for making such an awesome bio D
     
         

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    Re: Asura, Iwa's White Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by ikikouchiha9668 View Post
    My pleasure :D Thank you for making such an awesome bio D
    You're welcome, but I still believe it has a lot of room for improvement. I'll make it a lot better when I update it in the future.
     
         

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