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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Suraimuton
    Custom element English name:Slime Release
    The element is based on: Water | Earth | Lightning
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    In Naruto, we've seen multiple techniques that create a rather unique substance. Let's take Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field for example, the user creates a high viscosity liquid that gains adhesive properties, keeping the opponent immobilized. Of course we have the Lava Element created from the use of Earth and Fire. Techniques of that caliber would create an molten earth that was many degrees hotter then normal fire. Earth techniques themselves have a wide range o techniques that are used to stop opponents movements. Mainly the Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld technique that creates a chakra infused mud that would make even the largest summon become a sitting duck.With our Lightning Release, it wide-known belief that the use of the element can manipulate the atoms of of technique at the subatomic level. If one were to manipulate the mixture of the earth and water chakras, one could essential create a new substance in doing so. We've also seen techniques that could disintegrate the opponent this exclusively being the dust release that with the Earth, Fire, and Wind elements can destroy someone into subatomic particles within a three dimensional space. The Earth Element itself was aslo able to turn Zetsu's body into stone, showing how changing the body atomic structure works with this element. Its within these contexts that Slime Release exist.

    How it works:

    By combining earth, water, and lightning chakras in equal amounts the user begins to manipulate the substance insdie of himself or even the terrain into a source for further techniques. The newly created gelatinous mass can be used for a number of things. First the techniques are highly reactive to the Fire Elements as it ignites the combination of the Earth and Lightning, and could essentially be made to explode if prolonged to too much fire. If one were to scatter the slime in a area, the slime would slowly group together potentially creating a large source that the user can manipulate and attack the opponent with. Since the chakras coexist with one another the substance itself is also very elastic and getting trapped would mean being immobilized with almost no hope of getting away. Most Slime techniques will continue to try and regroup into a centralized location thanks to the lightning chakra attracting themselves to one another. Due to the slime unique chakra mixture the techniques also can serve to "eat" opponent's whole, as the substance's highly reactive mix eats away at the opponents skin, however this is a very slow process and within 2 turns of capture a opponent can become dissolved into slime. There is also the possibility of the technique encounter with Lightning, should this happen though, the slime will lose its corrosiveness only for a gas to be released and if one were to breath this in they would turn to stone as the particles released from the technique bond with the opponent much like Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Added Weight Rock Technique.

    Slime Releases main uses come to flooding the field with it's mass, and pressuring the opponent enough to catch them off guard in an effort to bind the opponent, giving the user almost a free shot at victory if skilled enough. However, because the technique of this style are able to even harm the user the opponent could even use the own element to his advantage.

    Usage Examples:

    Suraimuton| Suraimu no Jutsu - [Slime Release| Slime Monster Technique]
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short - Mid (Long Range if two A-rank Slime Technqiues Combine)
    Chakra: 30 (+ 5 per turn to maintain)
    Damage: 60
    Description: The signature technique of Slime Release, the user generate a large amount of his slime chakra before releasing five large wads of slime that will then combine into one slime monster about the size of Part II Gamakichi, with two arms and a large mouth with no other features that are distinguishable. This mass will eventually grow as more slime is created not stopping it is destroyed. Although this monster moves slowly but its fluid like body enables it to stretch and expand limited to the size of the technique eventually stretching to long range if a technique of equal rank is combined into it. This technique can also be the source for other Slime Jutsu however to create more of itself it will need to eat earth in order to grow and becoming immobile although his body cans till be used for other techniques. However the user is only able to maintain the monster for up to 3 turns and then must wait to preform the technique a second time, being limited to twice per battle.
    (Can Only be used twice per battle)
    (Last three turns)
    (User must wait three turns before reactivating this technique.)

    Suraimuton| Odeibomu no Jutsu - [Slime Release| Sludge Bomb Technique]
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will weave three handseals Monkey - Rat - Dragon and then using a pre-exisiting source or creating a large bubble of slime from his stomach the user launches the technique in a arc above the opponent, before the lastly creating the tiger seal the bubble splits into 5 basketball size fireballs and will proceed to explode in the area around the opponent lasting up until the end of the user next a full turn before during so, as the bubbles bounces towards the opponent.
    (Usable 2 times per battle)
    (There can only be 5 sludge bombs present at one time)

    Conditions to be able to use it: This element is very dangerous and could even cause damage to the user if not used correctly. This being said, it takes a person who as considerable knowledge in elemental ninjutsu and must have mastered the Water, Earth, and Lightning elements.

    Is weak to: Water - The slime element, despite being made of water could eventually diffuse the possible reaction between the three elements causing the techniques to be able to get washed away usually canceling each other out as the slime and water dissolve.

    Fire - The techniques of this element are highly reactive to the fire element and could be made to explode prematurely if prolonged to fire for over 1 turn which could damage the both the user and opponent if too close.

    Is strong against:

    Wind - The element's combination give it maximum durability and elasticity thus common wind jutsu that aim to penetrate or cut the element don't realize the element will continue forward as it recollects itself. This makes itself to circumvent most wind techniques, although substantial force can push it backwards, the element will still recollect itself within one turn until properly destroyed.

    Earth - The substances corrosivness often time will quickly destroy most earth techniques that would serve to impede it's movement, although a large amount of earth would take longer to corrode then a row of earth spikes. By then turning the earth into a source of "food" the element is able to generate more of itself as the earth get converted into more material.

    Lightning- The lightning element is useless against the element as the lightning could cause a unique reaction in which case the corrosive properties of the element turn into a gas that will petrify an opponent body, and could possibly turn them into stone, however the user must also be wary of this as well otherwise they may become turned to stone as well.

    Co-creator: Icemyster
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: This an element only in name with no contents. That slime of yours can't fall back on anything that corresponds with it, most its abilities you just added yourself without any basis. The explanation you gave to how you make it isn't good either as then you could pretty much make anything.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name:Arashi Boruton
    Custom element English name:Storm Volt Release
    The element is based on:The toaster in the bath?
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    This element would consist of two canon elements, suiton and raiton.
    How it works:
    The user uses suiton chakra to gather moisture in the air and compress and absorb raiton chakra before it is released as it's elemental form. After the chakra has been absorbed, they then are able to release it a liquid state(only). Due to the raiton chakra that has been absorbed to create this element, the water has a slight purple-blue tint and glow to it.

    This element has the consistency of water and other liquids but it is extremely hot and highly electrifying. It can cause extreme paralysis and/or burns. Because this element is basically liquid lightning, it is much more versatile, flexible and easier to control than lightning is though it has all the basic effects that lightning has.

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    Usage Examples:

    Arashi Boruton: Kurieeshon | Storm Volt Release: Creation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will gather both his suiton and raiton chakra up together and mix them to create a special release known as Storm Volt Release; this technique allows the user to create a large source of Storm Volt Release chakra. This creates an easy to go source of chakra.
    Notes:
    Must be used before using any Storm Volt Release techniques.

    Arashi Boruton: Shindenzu Misuto | Storm Volt Release: Electro Mist
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user inhales and expels a dense mist that can block the opponents sight and also electrifies them, causing a slight paralysis and drastically slowing down their movements.

    Arashi Boruton: Parusu Kanon | Storm Volt Release: Pulse Cannon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user creates a ball of storm volt chakra before them and then thrusts their palm forward towards the chakra. A glowing beam of electrified, glowing water is then propelled towards the opponent at an immense speed.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastered Suiton
    Mastered Raiton
    Is weak to:
    Katon (Burns up the already heated water)
    Ice (Freezes the water)
    Is strong against:
    Raiton
    Suiton
    Co-creator: Nathan.
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Apparently it's just hot water and it appears quite contradictory for water to be electrifying from itself.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Gariumu
    Custom element English name:Gallium
    The element is based on: Earth+ Fire+Extreme Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): It has been shown to not only manipulate the earth but the minerals in the earth through things like steel, sand, crystal, various other ce's, etc release. The user would simply use his earth chakra to sift through the earth surface to find and shape the gallium as well as using fire chakra to greatly heat it and burn out any impurities in the Gallium. The heat of the fire chakra as well as the natural heat found within the earth's surface will melt the gallium and cause it to come out hot and liquid. Estimated to be in a quantity of over 1 million metric tons in the earth's surface, this would be an easy feat to accomplish.

    How it works: Through using earth chakra to find and pull out the metal from the earth as well as fire to melt it, combined with the heat of the earth's crust liquid gallium comes out. And by mixing earth and fire chakras the user can expell liquid gallium from himself or create it in the air around him. Gallium has one of the lowest melting points of any metal at 85 degrees F, since the earth gets progressively hotter as you go further down in addition to its low melting point, gallium comes out as a very dense liquid. Gallium has the highest range between melting point and boiling point of any element with its boiling point being at 4000 degrees F which is over two times the temperature of liquid lava, making Gallium dangerous to touch for the opponent.


    Though gallium is indeed a liquid it shares the special trait that only a few substances (only 5-6) have which is being more dense in its liquid state than it is in its solid state. Therefore gallium can be densely concentrated into a construct that it is able to even stop solid objects and function almost as a solid when concentrated enough while still maintaining the viscosity of liquid and regain its shape. Also gallium is very special in the fact that it has been seen to actually eat through metal such as aluminum cans or computer shells and make them very very brittle, almost falling apart to the touch when gallium reacts with it. What is great about this is that it doesn't have any radioactivity or acidic properties to human skin, making it safe to use for commercial use. However upon touching metal/metal based ce's/ steel/etc it will eat through it near instantly and make it crumble extremely easily.


    Taken from Wikipedia
    Gallium attacks most other metals by diffusing into their metal lattice. Gallium, for example, diffuses into the grain boundaries of Al/Zn alloys or steel, making them very brittle. Gallium easily alloys with many metals, and is used in small quantities as a plutonium-gallium alloy in the plutonium cores of nuclear bombs, to help stabilize the plutonium crystal structure.
    Gallium causing structural failure to a coke can

    Gallium also wets skin like water (like how when you get out of a pool water is still stuck to you), giving the user even more chances to attack should the Gallium hit the opponent.

    Usage Examples:

    Metal Sea
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will insert his chakra in the earth and bring a large amount of pressurized gallium out of it. This forms a large wave of molten hot liquid metal that is able to crush the opponent due to its density, burn the opponent due to its heat, or even drown him due to the opponent not being able to stand ontop of it due to having no gallium training.


    Galliant Gallium Constructs
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid (creation) Short -Long (movement)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will concentrate liquid gallium in from short-mid range into a form that is nearly solid due to its concentration, using the earth's magnetic fields he is able make them hover in the air when creating it and he can control them to make it move into long range with a handseal.

    Explosive Metal
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user controls all the molecules in a premade source of Gallium and causes them to all collapse in on each other and cause the source to explode doing damage up to mid range all around




    Conditions to be able to use it: Earth mastery, Fire mastery,Extreme chakra control

    Is weak to:

    Earth/Earth Based Ce's: Due to Gallium already being in liquid state and getting its power mainly from impact damage, Earth is able to absorb the liquid Gallium (like what it does to water release) as well as absorb take the impact of it.

    Lightning/Based Ce's: Gallium is a semi conductor therefore a current can run through it, destroying the gallium.

    Is strong against:Fire/Fire based Ce's- Since gallium is a dense liquid it will be able to easily put out the fire. Also with the highest range between melting and boiling of ANY element, it is highly resistant to heat

    Metal and metal based Ce's/Kg's- Gallium has been shown to eat through all kinds of metal and make it very very brittle to the point where touching it will make it crumble.

    Water/Water based Ce's- Gallium is more dense than water and will be able to overtake it, also since it is an advanced earth element it naturally has an advantage over water

    Ice/Ice based Ce's- Gallium is one of the few elements to actually expand when it freezes thus it cant be stored in glass containers because when it freezes it will simply break the glass. Therefore ice hitting Gallium will only make it expand and break the Ice.



    Co-creator: Better
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: If you actually need to start digging with earth and then add fire to melt something, well then this isn't a real CE. Also any CE that actually refers to other CE as proof, by default deserves to be declined, for so far any proof was given. Not to mention Gallium on itself does not even exist in nature. And that fire based CE would be STR, that would be questionable. Normal fire maybe, but with fire CE with extreme high temperatures that's something very differently.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Shiranto
    Custom element English name: Sealant Release
    The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): With the facts of Earth style users converting their Earth chakra into mud state which is using Earth and Water user. Now if they were to add more earth chakra they would come up with Sealant. Considering that the Lava users of Iwa uses Quicklime which when added with water chakra they make something like concrete. Taking these two facts and my usage of Water style and wanting something with more strength I came up with the idea of Sealant Release.

    Sealant

    How it works: The user uses Earth and Water chakra and using chakra control mixing them together making Sealant. Earth chakra and Water chakra balance out which is how Sealant is made. Sealant is controlled in its semi liquid state which is its only state. By using Sealant chakra the user can make semi liquid weapons, terrain and even a type of armor that are like a solid but still is a liquid hints the name semi liquid.

    Usage Examples:

    Sealant Release: Don't Go (Shiranto: )
    Rank: B
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:
    Damage Points:
    Description: The user expels sealant from part of their body. The sealant acts as a defense type of semiliquid against taijutsu and weaponry.

    Sealant Release: Hold On (Shiranto: )
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:
    Damage Points:
    Description: The user forms enough sealant on the ground to hold someone or something in place. This can be formed under the opponent's feet or under some idea.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Must have learned Earth and Water
    Is weak to: Earth(holds it in place), Lightning(pierce through), Wind(cuts up Sealant), Advance Fire(melt/burn it), Metal/Bones(pierce through)
    Is strong against: Water(stops the water and the water can't pierce through), Sound(absorbs the sound), Rain(same as water), Wind(absorbs the pushing effect of wind), Oil(much thicker then oil), Earth(holds it in place), Fire(heat-resistant), Metal/Bone(hold in place)
    Co-creator: Mugen Ryukyu
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

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    ✗ Declined: Very badly explained. Apparently it's supposed to be some mud-like element, but that's all I got. You didn't even explain what sealant is nor its unique properties. Just posting a wiki link is logically not going to cut it. Also strengths and weaknesses make no sense. Apparently earth is both weak and strong for the exact same reason, wind is strong against it because it cuts and then it's weak because it is absorbed? And it goes on like that. Does that even make any sense to you? I suggest you first understand and learn how to submit a CE before trying to resubmit it.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Routon

    Custom element English name: Wax Release/Style

    The element is based on:Chakra Control and Fire and Earth

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Well manipulating elements that are present in the narutoverse is quite common, Gaara and his sand manipulation, manipulating water and Deidera's clay and things like that. Generating these things isn't as common but still its there, Mei and her usage of Lava, Wood with Yamato Danzo and Hashirama, and fire. So Generating and Manipulating wax isn't something that wouldn't exist in the narutoverse. Now for the Wax itself, Wax is a mixture of Earth and Fire, The usage of Lava is similar to it in liquid form. So Lava is Earth with Fire, and KG level chakra control. So is Clay, if clay is apart of the narutoverse, i don't see how it can't be that Wax is also the same.

    How it works: Wax Style is one of the more versatile chakra elements in the whole narutoverse, it allows the user to manipulate and generate wax. Wax can change shape, form, and shift between two phases of matter; Liquid and Solid. The wax is released very hot if the user wishes it to be, in any form. Its a versitle element, in solid form it can make almost any object just like the earth element, but its as hard as steel. Also in a liquid state, at any point the user can wish to have it harden in a split second.

    Usage Examples:
    (Routon: Hei)- Wax Release: Wax Wall
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user focus his fire and earth chakra and molds them together, then slams his hands on the ground to generate a wall made up of Wax in front of him. This wall is immediately harden to steel like qualities.

    (Routon: Routon Hari)- Wax Release: Wax Needles
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user focus his fire and earth chakra and molds them together, the a part of liquid wax begins to dangle from the users hand, he then swings his hand and by using shape manipulation turns that part of liquid wax into a bunch of hard wax needles that head towards the enemy.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Earth and Fire, with great Chakra Control

    Is weak to: In Solid Form: Wax can be pierced by lightning and In Liquid State: Earth, for the same reasons as water.

    Is strong against:Water (solid State) for the same reasons as Earth is strong to it, Fire Wind (in Liquid state)

    Co-creator: N/A

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    ✗ Declined: For several reasons. I can't read PM's, so I already don't know what that PM is supposed to be about, though I have a hunch. Either way very poor proof, in the end you say because there are characters that can use sand or clay, it should be possible to use wax. That's very weak as then you can start saying from a lot of things it could be an element. Not to mention the Sand was the result of the Shukaku and the clay is not even a valid example. On top of that I don't allow elements in multiple forms. There might be sometimes special exceptions, however under no circumstances should there be something like 'in that state it's weak/strong against that and in that state weak/strong against that. Then you can forget it. Also was as strong as steel? Be real, you just copied that from OP, but I'm not going to believe that in Naruto.
    Custom element Japanese name: Routon

    Custom element English name: Wax Release/Style

    The element is based on:Chakra Control and Fire and Earth

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Many types of wax are found in nature . These types include Epicuticular Wax which is made in plants and Beeswax which is, of course, made by bees. Shown by the Kamizuru clan in the anime that there are indeed bees in naruto, of course these bees create beeswax since it is a naturally produced by product. And speaking of which this cannon jutsu

    (Hachi Bunshin no Jutsu) - Honey Clone Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage point: N/A
    Description: The user makes a clone made of bee wax and when injured enough it dissolves back in wax. The user can also create a honey clone out of the target or someone else as a means to confuse the target.
    Note: Can only be used by a member of the Kamizuru Clan
    Shows not only that beeswax exists, but also that it can be controlled.




    How it works: Wax Style is one of the more versatile chakra elements in the whole narutoverse, it allows the user to manipulate and generate wax. Wax highly is plastic and malleable at normal temperatures and thus can be a solid defense while still being able to stretch and attack at the user's will. Wax is shown to be both extremely sticky such as beeswax and extremely hard, even harder than earth, shown in waxes like Montan Wax and the Carnauba Wax. The stickyness allows the wax to attach onto the opponent, providing a good supplementary use, while the hardness will serve as a great defense. The user can materialize wax wherever he wishes by mixing his fire and earth chakra and use it for whatever he desires or expell it from his body.

    Usage Examples:

    (Routon: Hei)- Wax Release: Wax Wall
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user focus his fire and earth chakra and molds them together, then slams his hands on the ground to generate a wall made up of Wax in front of him.

    (Routon: Routon Hari)- Wax Release: Wax Needles
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user focus his fire and earth chakra and molds them together, he then swings his hand and by using shape manipulation makes a bunch of hard wax needles that head towards the enemy.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Earth and Fire, with great Chakra Control

    Is weak to:
    Fire/Fire based Ce's/Kg's- Wax can easily be melted by fire
    Wind/Wind based Ce's/Kg's- Wax can be sliced by the cutting power of wind

    Is strong against:
    Water/Water based Ce's/Kg's- Wax is insoluble in water
    Earth/Earth based Ce's/Kg's (non metal)- Waxes are even harder than earth and can easily break it apart
    Lightning/Lightning based Ce's/Kg's- Wax is an insulator, therefore a current cant run through it.

    Co-creator: -Broly-

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

    pm again although I can't see it anymore and I never deleted it. Maybe you could, but i'm sure you know about already.

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    ✗ Declined: Barely any explanation on how it is made. Just saying earth + fire is far from sufficient. Also you are just jumbling the aspects of different types of wax, made from very different sources, together just so you could get all their beneficial aspects. I have a lot of difficulty to believe that a brittle candle would be harder than earth. How is something supposed to be and extremely sticky and very solid?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Pemission from Rozzy to re-submit salt release once again: Here. Thus giving me full authority over this element once again, though he has now become the co-creator.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lucifer View Post
    Re-submitting

    Custom element Japanese name: 塩, Shiōton

    Custom element English name: Salt Release

    The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Scientific Proof, Salt, also known as or rock salt, is a crystalline mineral that is composed primarily of sodium chloride, a chemical compound belonging to the larger class of ionic salts. It is essential for animal life in small quantities, but is harmful to animals and plants in excess. Salt it is a crystalline solid, white, pale pink or light gray in color, normally obtained from sea water or rock deposits. Edible rock salts may be slightly grayish in color because of mineral content. Chloride and sodium ions, the two major components of salt, are needed by all known living creatures in small quantities. Salt is involved in regulating the water content, the fluid balance of the body. The sodium ion itself is used for electrical signaling in the nervous system. Because of its importance to survival, salt has often been considered a valuable commodity during human history.

    Manga context, In Narutoverse, living things seem to be composed of more or less the same things as in our own reality, which means that we cans safely deduce that Halite exists. Because salt is actually a very comon mineral-element in the manga, mostly known as the edible salt in the manga, which can be used as a spice to flavor foods, hence edible. Such as ramen, rice balls, fish etc. So that actually proves that salt exist in the narutoverse, It also means that salt crystals exist. Though, that is still one of its manny forms, because salt exists in its regular form in the manga, thus it can be found in other places such as the; Ground, Mountains, Seas etc. Almost everywhere. So salt can be extracted using the same methods as the Yondaime Kazegake used during his life time, Sakin - Gold Dust. The Kazekage manipulates the small gold particles in a similar manner that gaara manipulates his sand, I am mentioning this because; The kazekage extracted the gold from deep within the ground, And gaara softens the earth. So actually having proven that salt can be found different and most common places, almost everywhere. It is also similar to Guren's crystal type element, though it has other properties and other weaknesses not to mention a blue-greenish color, So that actually proves that Salt can also be manipulated if one can extracts the needed mirals from the soil, to bring forth halite using the Kekkei Genkai; Earth + Water. (see how it works below)

    Salt, There is enough salt in the oceans of the naruto world. In addition, evaporation of ancient oceans has left vast deposits of solid rock salt over huge areas of the world (also the RW). These deposits can be in the form of bedded sedimentary layers or deep salt domes. Salt is all around us, including in the soil/earth, mountains, in the seas, and in the nearby sea airs, due to evaporation. If it's strong dense odor inhaled in a short range inside your lungs, your alveoliers will be blocked temporarily, making it more difficult to fuse chakra & elements like wind, and fire jutsus. This jutsu is much like earth, but in a really cristalized matter, which can absorb water, and mud based earth attacks, and Salt walls could defend against fire jutsus. Salt is the most common and readily available nonmetallic mineral in the world. Dispite the regular form of salt, I've chosen to go for the crystalic form also known as halite. Halite it very powerful and hard to break, because it is more crystalized than earth, It could easly pierce through rock hard walls.

    How it works: Salt release is an advanced chakra nature. It's a Kekkei Genkai created by shinobi born with two chakra natures, water and earth which he could combine to create Salt release. It involves the use of salt and other sodium compounds to sting and irritate the opponent this would be the posibility if it wasn't in its halite state, or to Blind the opponent in vast quanities of salt, this can be done by breaking the salt crystals into a minuscule structure. Through this nature release, one can also extract pure sodium and chlorine from things such as seawater and the human body. This element works by combining the earth natured and water natured chakra together, though that isn't the only thing needed to create this element. It also needs the precise minerals that can be found in salt, chloride and sodium ions, the two major components of salt (which can be found almost everywhere). Though in its crystal form, being also its most powerful form and useful, to create this form the user needs to add a large amount of chakra. And must have precise chakra control, to bring it to its perfect form; Halite.

    The Crystalic form, is a rare and specialised field of elemental ninjutsu that can create crystal as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures. It is very similar to guren's Shōton, she uses the same elements that Shiōton uses to create her crystals. The Crystal Release, though powerful, has two known weaknesses, the first being that it cannot crystallise either raw energy or chakra as they have no physical mass to crystallise, allowing a person with either energy-based techniques, such lightning, fire, wind, or good chakra control to properly counter it. The second weakness of its Crystalic Release is that it is susceptible to a specific sound wave frequency; because crystal requires a very precise build-up of molecules, the proper sound waves can break down the build-up before the crystal can properly form. As it was seen in the Anime when Rinji, took advantage of this weakness, and used his bats to counter Guren's Crystal Release.

    Usage Examples:

    (Shiōton: Shiō no Soushi) - Salt Release: Salt Creation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user utilizes his salt chakra and releases it into the soil, and extracts all the necessary minerals needed it to create a dense crystalic matter, which is green-bluish in its appearance while using the shape manipulation to form the salty crystals into different shapes, protective walls of Solid and rock hard salt crystals and pillars of salt basically to any form the user wants just as versatile as the wood element, this is like the earth release technique but on a larger scale.
    (Shiōton: Sasu Yōna Gōmon) - Salt Release: Stinging Torture
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user takes in a deep breath and converts his salt chakra into halite while also breaking it down to it nano-structure. Afterwards the user exhales creating a cloud of salt that seeps directly into the opponents eyes causing a painful, stinging sensation. Not only does this technique cause immense pain, it can also temporarly blind the opponent. This can easily give the user the advantage in a battle and handicap the opponent. This makes the technique good for interrogation and information gathering. The technique can be rather easily dodged if one has a dojutsu as the cloud of salt travels on the wind and can easily be swayed in the other direction, but the cloud travels rather fast. Though, it is very hard to see because it's in its miniscule structure, though Dojutsu users can track it easly.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot perform any salt technique the following turn.
    (Shiōton: Sairei no Hebi) - Salt Release: The Snake of Festival
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will focus his salt chakra through the ground and form a range of three handseals. Thus causing a gigantic rainbow colored snake to rise up made out of the soil. The gigantic snake is created around the user, the user can use it to defend himself from regular weapons or send it at the target. It annihilates whatever it comes into contact with, due to the crystal spikes covering its body not to mention the deadly fangs. It can tear the flesh open of the enemies and crush them, If it gets close enough. The crystalic snake is equal in size to Manda. This technique remains active till the point that the snake is destroyed, or released by the user.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot perform any salt jutsu, for the following 2 turns.
    Conditions to be able to use it:

    -Mastery over Earth and the Water element
    -Must be added as a specialty
    -Great Chakra control

    Is weak to:

    -Water, It dissipates the salt crystals when they come in contact with each other. (though this is a slow process)
    -Lightning, The lightning can shatter the crystals due to its piercing ability, combined with the vibrations. (as seen in the anime)
    -Storm, is a combination between the two elemental weaknesses, Thus it can turn the Salt crystals to dust.
    -Lava, is to much to handle for salt release, because of the shear hot temprature, which doesn't leave a trace of salt crystals behind, when used against it. (regular fire is not)

    Is strong against:

    -Earth, is overpowered by salt release because, The crystal form is more crystallized and much denser. (thus making it more powerful)
    -Fire, is weak against halite, because it isn't just enough to melt the crystals themselves as they absorb heat. (they have quite a cool temperature)
    -Wind, It cannot cut through the compact and dense crystals, It disperses most of the incoming wind attacks. (such as wind net attack)
    -Ice, is weak against salt because of the sodium chloride, thus it melts through Ice with ease, So Ice isn't effective at all against salt release. (It doesn't even weaken salt due to the huge advantage)

    Co-creator: None.

    Students I passed this custom element on too: None.

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    ✗ Declined: I was almost gonna approve it, however then I read that part about the crystalic form, which made me very suspicious. I was under the impression that you would use this mainly in a similar way like earth, simply said that if you create a wall of salt it would be the same as a wall of earth only in a bluish color. But then you start for some reason comparing it with the crystal element for whatever reason I don't know, but it does make me suspicious as then you're implying you somehow can turn people into salt pillars, something I definitely not going to approve. There is a difference between having a crystal structure and a crystal. The crystal element has nothing much to do with your element, so I really don't know what that is doing there as you explained the weaknesses of that element. Also remove that you can somehow influence people's chakra system with your salt. If you push a teddybear down your throat, you're going to have trouble molding your chakra too, but I'm not going to qualify that as part of your element.
    Resubmitting: I've removed everything related to the crystalic form (and useless stuff), and since that was the only issue, hopefully it's good to go now.


    Custom element Japanese name: 塩, Shiōton

    Custom element English name: Salt Release

    The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Scientific Proof, Salt, also known as or rock salt, is a crystalline mineral that is composed primarily of sodium chloride, a chemical compound belonging to the larger class of ionic salts. It is essential for animal life in small quantities, but is harmful to animals and plants in excess. Salt it is a crystalline solid, white, pale pink or light gray in color, normally obtained from sea water or rock deposits. Edible rock salts may be slightly grayish in color because of mineral content. Chloride and sodium ions, the two major components of salt, are needed by all known living creatures in small quantities. Salt is involved in regulating the water content, the fluid balance of the body. The sodium ion itself is used for electrical signaling in the nervous system. Because of its importance to survival, salt has often been considered a valuable commodity during human history.

    Manga context, In Narutoverse, living things seem to be composed of more or less the same things as in our own reality, which means that we cans safely deduce that Halite exists. Because salt is actually a very comon mineral-element in the manga, mostly known as the edible salt in the manga, which can be used as a spice to flavor foods, hence edible. Such as ramen, rice balls, fish etc. So that actually proves that salt exist in the narutoverse. Slat exists almost everywhere like; Ground, Mountains, Seas etc. Almost everywhere. So salt can be extracted using the same methods as the Yondaime Kazegake used during his life time, Sakin - Gold Dust. The Kazekage manipulated the small gold particles in a similar manner that gaara manipulates his sand, I am mentioning this because; The kazekage extracted the gold from deep within the ground, And gaara softens the earth. So actually having proven that salt can be found different and most common places, almost everywhere. So that actually proves that Salt can also be manipulated if one can extracts the needed mirals from the soil, to bring forth The Salt releases, composed of the following elements; Earth + Water. (see how it works below)

    Salt, There is enough salt in the oceans of the naruto world. In addition, evaporation of ancient oceans has left vast deposits of solid rock salt over huge areas of the world (also the RW). These deposits can be in the form of bedded sedimentary layers or deep salt domes. Salt is all around us, including in the soil/earth, mountains, in the seas, and in the nearby sea airs, due to evaporation. If it's strong dense odor inhaled in a short range inside your lungs, your alveoliers will be blocked temporarily, making it more difficult to fuse chakra & elements like wind, and fire jutsus (techniques which require you to exhale/inhale). Slat is very much like earth though much denser and more powerful, which can absorb water, and mud based earth attacks, and Salt walls could defend against fire jutsus. Salt is the most common and readily available nonmetallic mineral in the world.

    How it works: Salt release is an advanced chakra nature. It's a Kekkei Genkai created by shinobi born with two chakra natures, water and earth which he could combine to create Salt release. It involves the use of salt and other sodium compounds to sting and irritate the opponent this would be the posibility if it wasn't in its halite state, or to Blind the opponent in vast quanities of salt, this can be done by breaking the salt crystals into a minuscule structure. Through this nature release, one can also extract pure sodium and chlorine from things such as seawater and the human body. This element works by combining the earth natured and water natured chakra together, though that isn't the only thing needed to create this element. It also needs the precise minerals that can be found in salt, chloride and sodium ions, the two major components of salt (which can be found almost everywhere). The Salt release isn't hard to understand as it's smilit to its mother element, which is earth, thus it possess many similarities to the earth release.

    Usage Examples:

    (Shiōton: Shiō no Soushi) - Salt Release: Salt Creation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user utilizes his salt chakra and releases it into the soil, and extracts all the necessary minerals needed it to create salt, which is green-bluish in its appearance while using the shape manipulation to form the salt into different shapes, protective walls, pillars of salt basically to any form the user wants just as versatile as the wood element, this is like the earth release technique but on a larger scale.
    (Shiōton: Sasu Yōna Gōmon) - Salt Release: Stinging Torture
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user takes in a deep breath and converts his salt chakra into halite while also breaking it down to it nano-structure. Afterwards the user exhales creating a cloud of salt that seeps directly into the opponents eyes causing a painful, stinging sensation. Not only does this technique cause immense pain, it can also temporarly blind the opponent. This can easily give the user the advantage in a battle and handicap the opponent. This makes the technique good for interrogation and information gathering. The technique can be rather easily dodged if one has a dojutsu as the cloud of salt travels on the wind and can easily be swayed in the other direction, but the cloud travels rather fast. Though, it is very hard to see because it's in its miniscule structure, though Dojutsu users can track it easly.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot perform any salt technique the following turn.
    (Shiōton: Sairei no Hebi) - Salt Release: The Snake of Festival
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will focus his salt chakra through the ground and form a range of three handseals. So causing an gigantic rainbow colored snake to rise up created from the soil, by using the salt release. This gigantic snake is created around the user, the user can use it to defend himself from regular weapons or send it at the target. It annihilates whatever it comes into contact with, due to the salt spikes covering its body not to mention its deadly fangs. The snake is able to release small salt needles torwards the target, from its tail. Once the needles make impact it will iriitate the target and cause enormous pain. It has overwelming capabilities, it's similar to the earth dragon technique. The snake is equal in size to Manda, not the upgraded one. This technique remains active until the snake is destroyed, or released by the user.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot perform any salt jutsu, for the following 2 turns.
    Conditions to be able to use it:

    -Mastery over Earth and the Water element
    -Great Chakra control

    Is weak to:

    -Water, It dissipates the salt when they come in contact with each other. (though this is a very slow process,s it has to be a powerful water technique)
    -Lightning, The lightning can shatter salt due to its piercing ability, combined with the vibrations. (as seen in the anime)
    -Storm, is a combination between the two elemental weaknesses, Thus it can turn the Salt crystals to dust.
    -Lava, is to much to handle for salt release, because of the shear hot temprature, which doesn't leave a trace of salt crystals behind, when used against it. (regular fire is not)

    Is strong against:

    -Earth, is overpowered by salt release because, The salt release is much compact and dense so it's easily able to overpower the eartle release. (thus making it more powerful)
    -Fire, is very weak against the salt release, because it isn't just enough to melt salt as salt is capable of absorbing heat. (they have quite a cool temperature)
    -Wind, It cannot cut through the compact and dense crystals, It disperses most of the incoming wind attacks. (such as wind net attack)
    -Ice, is very weak against salt because of the sodium chloride, thus it melts through Ice with ease, So Ice isn't effective at all against salt release. (It doesn't even weaken salt due to the huge advantage)
    -Wood, it is also capable of overpowering the wood release, as salt is more compact, thus being able to pierce through wood.
    -Ice based ce's

    Co-creator: Rozzy

    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A & N/A

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    ✗ Declined: You said you removed all the useless parts, still the bolded is left while I clearly mentioned it. Remove that If I forced earth, fire or any other kind of element down your throat, you are going to have some serious issues, something like that does not belong in the description of a CE. Water is a weakness, still you say at some point it absorbs mud and water, which neither makes sense, so remove that. Also don't try to weasel benefits in your STR & WEA, when water comes into contact with salt it will not happen slowly and it will not require a powerful water tech, but a normal one and no ice will have an effect on salt and it definitely will weaken. There is absolutely no reason why your CE would be so special that the fundamental rules that apply to all jutsus and elements are thrown overboard. Remove both. Finally you say you will use the salt like wood, ok fine and that you can extract salt of the ground and such ok that's fine too as the ground is also used for earth jutsus, however that's still something different than how Gaara and the 3rd kazekage use sand and gold as Gaara can't create sand as far as is known, he always needs a supply of it, and the 3rd kazekage uses magentism release. You said you will use it as wood, not in the way Gaara and his dad use their skills.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    ]Custom Element Japanese Name : Niobuton ニオブ

    Custom Element English Name : Nb Release (Niobium Release)

    The Element is based on :
    Fire / Earth /chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    In the manga steel is used for weapons, structures and mechanisms. Niobium can be used in some of these steels to strengthen them, plus it is a transition metal of the periodic table and most elements seen on the periodic table have been shown in the manga and so why not niobium?
    It is also the 33rd most common element in the earth's crust so it can be found in the NW from the ground which has probably been found before.

    How it works:
    Niobium is a easily traceable soft metal which is the 33rd most common element in the crust of the earth that being said the user will use his fire and earth chakra to search out through the ground manipulating niobium up from the ground because of the high melting point the niobium needs fire chakra to detect which metal you are after in the ground. Using earth element you can decipher the softness of the niobium as it is a softer type of metal making it easier to manipulate and lighther. As soon as the metal oxidizes it becomes as hard as steel and can no longer be reformed into other shapes and or weapons. Thus having enough time to fully shape or utilize the niobium until it hardens which then becomes as hard as steel

    So the user will channel there fire and earth chakra into the ground and draw up any niobium in the area from the ground. Using your fire chakra once again you can shape the niobium to whatever possible outcome manipulation your mind can think of. Now the reason why you can shape it is because you are channeling your fire chakra through the metal and also because the metal has not oxidized yet making it easier to mould using the fire chakra to mould it similar to how most plastics and other things are moulded with heat.



    (Blue and Grey Niobium)

    Usage Examples :

    (Niobuton : Borutekkusu o okonau ) - Nb Release : Conducting Vortex
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    The user rises a cylindrical pillar of blue Niobium under them so they stand on the 6 metre tall pillar, also as this rises other niobium segments about 1 metre tall manipulated to whatever the user wants them to look like appear mid range around the pillar. The pillar the user stands on splits off a platform from the main pillar that floats above it as the pillar spins rapidly and so do the segments around it, and finally they come flying towards the pillar at high speed and crush anything in their passage to the pillar.
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    (Niobuton : Hachetto no hebi) - Nb Release : Hatchett's Snakes
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:
    The user makes the Ox Hand seal and two bodies of Niobium rise from the ground either side of the user in the shape shown by the image below and travels where ever the user manipulates them to travel, once they have fully arisen from the ground they both are about 5 meters long and quite thick (about the width of the user) which float in midair and travel like snakes wiggling in the direction commanded, their rigid edges of Niobium crystal can cut through the flesh of the opponent, wrap around them and crush them or protect the user if the snakes orbit him.

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    (Niobuton : Burūkyūbusuu~ōmu ) - Nb Release : Blue Cube Swarm
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The user slams their hands onto the ground and blue cubes of Niobium rise from the ground and float in a swarm mid range around the user, the cubes are about 5cm3 and float without needing additional chakra to keep them floating because of their properties. because of the huge amounts of them if the opponent touches them the user can easily sense where they are, the user may also use the cubes to climb up like stairs without weighing them down to the ground. Using two cubes under the user's feet can propel them upwards but not forwards or backwards, only up and down the cubes are aloud float unless forcefully pushed.
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    (Niobuton : Aoi Sa-Fa ) - Nb Release : blue surfer
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    The user while in mid air forms a blue surf board from niobium using his fire and earth chakra to mould and draw up the niobium. which the user can freely ride on manipulating it to be used in mid air for airial attacks from the sky while maintaining chakra flow into the board. The user must have used niobium the turn before to use this item. While in mid air the user cannot use niobium from mid air as most niobium is formed on the ground. That being said only elemental attacks can be utilized while on the surf board.

    Restrictions: while riding the board only elemental attacks can be used in mid air.
    Note- the board will remain active until the user cancels the technique or the board is destroyed.
    -utilizes chakra every turn the board is kept active



    Conditions to be able to use it :
    Mastery of both Fire and Earth is needed to be able to use this Element.

    Weak Against :
    water: cause it can be used to stop the superconductivity of the niobium by cooling it down and then render most techniques useless.
    Ice: will also be able to cool it down a lot quicker than water so will be weak against that too.
    Magnetism for obvious reason's almost all metals react to magnetism.
    Strong Against :
    Fire: can withstand all normal fire heat and will not affect how it is used. If anything it will make the metal burn upon contact.
    Earth: once oxidation occurs the metal becomes as hard as steel.
    Lava: although the melting point is high when lava melts niobium it can still be manipulated in liquid form because it holds still holds all it's properties. But will no longer be able to hold a solid form.

    Co-Creator :
    Roju
    Students I passed this element onto :
    None.

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    ✗ Declined: Just a metal again. Also this is not a real element when you actually need a 'metal detector' to start finding your element and when you need to keep katon individually under control like a switch just so that it suits you isn't something that should be the case for an element.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Ekitaifuton

    Custom element English name: Liquid Wind Release

    The element is based on: Wind + Water + Extreme Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    First off, we have seen the ability of wind and water to be combined through the Typhoon Water Vortex Technique. However unpolished, the technique displays the ability for water and wind to harmonize into a single attack. There are also numerous more examples where wind is used to enhance the power of water. Water will serve as the “carrier or container” for this release, while the wind gives the water more power and substance, making it much more deadly than the normal element.

    We have also seen microscopic cutting abilities of wind demonstrated through the use of Wind Style: Rasengan, and Wind Style: Rasenshuriken. While the latter produces massive microscopic cutting abilities, the first does the same, but on a smaller scale. However, the damage is no less severe, as shown when Kakashi’s hand was burned and injured. Then, the ability of water to “harden” or increase in density is shown in the Water Style: Water Prison Technique. When Kakashi was trapped within the sphere, he was not able to move due to the density. This shows water can take on a more solid form, but still be normal water.

    How it works:

    The user will utilize basic water, and then increase the density of the water far more than normal. Only the density differs, affecting the water’s viscosity. This makes it behave more similar to syrup than normal water. The wind element is then added utilizing the microscopic cutting abilities of wind. This produces a somewhat solid, yet still fluid water element that will cause a burning or singing affect upon impact. For example, a body part submerged within liquid wind will have its chakra networks shredded on a microscopic level, disallowing them from channeling chakra through that part. Differing from normal water release which mainly does impact damage, this element can stop the flow of chakra by shredding the internal chakra system. The effect was shown by Rasenshuriken, and this release utilizes the same procedure to achieve the effect.


    Similar to Rasenshuriken, the wind enhancement of the release doesn’t actually take effect until the water has been successfully released. Naruto is able to hold it in his hand without damage, until he releases the technique fully against Kakuzu. This allows a user of this release to safely emit the water from his mouth, or hands. However, once released, the water will retain its properties and cannot be reversed unless evaporated or dispersed completely. The user is also able to raise water from the ground, or to summon it directly onto any location. Basically, the complete versatility of the normal water release techniques applies to this release as well.

    Even with the great power of the cutting wind, the water is able to maintain its shape. The microscopic wind blades within do not cause enough actual movement within the “hardened” water to cause it to disperse or lose its form. Instead, the hardened water gives it more durability against physical elements that are up against it. The large amount of wind chakra present within this release also colors the water a vibrant, luminescent silver.

    Usage Examples:

    (Ekitaifūton: Maddo Gekai no Mesu)– Liquid Wind Release: The Mad Surgeon's Scalpels
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will focus his chakra into the sky, quickly forming rain clouds. These rain clouds release a constant shower of liquid wind, which fall to the ground at deadly speeds. Liquid wind will fall at a maximum, mid-range distance from the center of the original target. The raindrops cause singing damage upon impact while they shred the chakra network. This will also form a thin layer of liquid wind on the ground. This will soak through the clothing of an enemy ninja, and begin to severely damage his feet. This makes normal travel on the ground nearly impossible unless aided by outside means.
    Note: Usable three times per battle
    Note: Rain lasts 3 turns

    (Ekitaifūton: Sakuran Nāsu no Hi Teijō Sekkai)– Liquid Wind Release: The Deranged Nurse's Unsteady Incisions
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will focus his chakra into the ground, and then erupt liquid wind from it. The liquid wind takes the form of a rising, slicing jet that extends up into the air at a maximum of three meters. The main jet rises directly upwards into the air, while secondary jets raise themselves at forty-five degree angles branching off the main jets sides’. While direct contact with one of the jets can lead to serious injury, even the spray from the numerous jets can cause major damage.
    Note: Usable four times per battle

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Wind + Water

    Is weak to:

    Wind- Can cut through and disperse the hardened water
    Fire- The present wind within the water allows fire to overcome the release

    Is strong against:

    Lightning/CE- The present wind within the water absorbs any lightning, and conducts it into the water, making it stronger
    Earth- The water due to his increased hardness, can withstand impact of earth; The microscopic cutting abilities also allow it to break down earth particles and shred through it
    Water- The water due to its increased hardness, can push through water; the added wind only serves to increase the effect

    Co-creator: ?

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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    ✗ Declined: Doesn't make sense. That microscopic cutting ability you are talking about is not inherent to wind, it's something specifically unique to the Rasenshuriken as a result of the combo of the Rasengan, the highest form of shape manipulation, and wind chakra. Only under those conditions you have access to that ability, which does not apply to your CE and thus you do not have it. On top of that whatever is left of the normal cutting ability of wind is severely reduced by the water due to the resistance. Wind that spins together with water will go a lot slower than without water as it has less resistance. Yes wind and water provides a strong combo, however that doesn't mean it maintains all its original abilities.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Quote Originally Posted by Vayne View Post
    Custom element Japanese name: Keburaririsu
    Custom element English name: Kevlar Release
    The element is based on: Earth+Lightning+ Water+ Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Well let me start of with the least shinobi-ish proof, it is clothes, there are clothes in the Narutoverse and they are most likely produced by threads(or unless they are made of plastic ) so that proves that threads or fibers exist in Narutoverse. Now a more Shinobi-ish proof is Kakuza of Akatsuki, he uses threads to use his masks, and he has some techniques that are related to direct use of his black threads. So these two prove that Kevlar Release is possible as it is a special type of fiber/thread.
    How it works: It's base is earth release, the user will use the earth release base and 'expose' it to lightning release, thus making the earth or rather breaking it into the individual products that are needed, then the final phase is adding water release chakra thus giving the 'earth' a form, which is usually in the form of dark grey fibers. Now once the fibers(Kevlar) are(is) created the user will manipulate the Kevlar into the wanted form or object. Now besides the great defensive capabilities of Kevlar, the user can use choose to use the 'restricting' capabilities of Kevlar as an offensive weapon, the user can cause the Kevlar to crush opponents bones, or bind them, also most offensive attacks are equipped with spikes that are more tough than steal/metal.(Spikes must be stated in description of technique)
    In the usage area of Kevlar release it is similar to wood release, as it can be manifested from the ground, or from ones body. But it cannot be manifested in the air.
    Usage Examples:
    Kevlar Release: Kevlar Wall
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Defensive and slightly offensive.
    Range: Short-Mid range.
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A(60 when spikes are used)
    Description: The user will perform two hand seals, and slam his hands on the ground and create a wall made up of Kevlar that emerges in a fast pace from the ground(First Gate speed) the wall will emerge and provide protection for the user, it can reach 10 meters in Height and 10 meters in width. The user choose to create spikes from any side of the wall, the spikes can pierce through flesh and bones with ease. The spikes can reach short range in length but they will still be in contact with the wall.

    Kevlar Release: Short Range Master You say
    Rank: B rank
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary.
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This technique is mostly used on short range specialists, the user will release Kevlar from his body in the form of threads that can hold on to on opponents limb and crush it by ferociously 'closing in' on the limb from all directions.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Earth—Lightning—Water + Good Chakra Control(Ninjutsu Mastery)
    Is weak to: Wind as it has the 'cutting' abilities of Knives. Lightning release as it is mostly 'sharp'
    Is strong against: Water as it simply gets it wet. Fire as it doesn't have enough heat to burn the threads. Dead bone Pulse. Metal/Steel and CE variants of them.
    Other:Earth can't be put as a permanent strength nor weakness as it is all subject to the nature of the jutsu(sharp, blunt, etc) and regarding other elements, it depends on wether the technique used is 'sharp' or has a 'cutting' ability. Or in other words if it is like a bullet it will be strong to it, and if it is like a knife it is weak to it, and if it is in-between then it is neutral to it.
    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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    ✗ Declined: Badly explained. Yes there are fibers in the Narutoverse, but that doesn't mean Kevlar instantly too. And to me it seems you made the rest up along the way just so that it would suit you.
    Custom element Japanese name: Keburaririsu
    Custom element English name: Kevlar Release
    The element is based on: Earth+Fire+ Water+ Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Kevlar is synthesized in solution from the monomers 1,4-phenylene-diamine (para-phenylenediamine) and terephthaloyl chloride in a condensation reaction yielding hydrochloric acid as a byproduct. The result has liquid-crystalline behavior, and mechanical drawing orients the polymer chains in the fiber's direction. Hexamethylphosphoramide (HMPA) was the solvent initially used for the polymerization, but for safety reasons, the company that created it replaced it by a solution of N-methyl-pyrrolidone and calcium chloride, now it is well known that alcohol exists in the narutoverse, which means likely high content versions of such exist for the process of cleaning and surgical operations and so on, which makes it a likely element to be created, simply because the correct chlorines and acids are highly likely to exist in the narutoverse, not to mention the other materials, such as fibers and fabrics seem readily available in clothing so the process of the creating of kevlar exists in the narutoverse.
    Final proof of the potential existance of Kevlar comes from the village's flak jackets, named as such and used widely because they encompass defensive properties, in a similar way to how a stab vest would be used in real life, which are usually made from kevlar fibers.


    How it works: Kevlar chakra is produced by combining the fire, earth, and water chakra natures.*
    The varieties of Kevlar on display are the AP, KM2, and K119 versions, they are otherwise known as Main Release, in the main release of Kevlar release, structures of Kevlar are created, the structured can be thick or thin, short or long, dense or not. In the main release the user can choose to produce Kevlar from the ground, or they can produce it from the body, or even they can choose to materialize it on the field as they will.
    The other varieties on display are K100 and the K49, they are otherwise know as Sub-Release, the K100 only affects the color of Kevlar release, so when of is 'infused' it allows the user to change the color of Kevlar as he wishes, this helps the user in various ways, mainly in deceiving the opponent to think that the user has used something different than Kevlar which normally has a Grey color to it. K49 gives Kevlar it's flexibility allowing ropes of Kevlar to be produced for example. Also in the sub release Kevlar is used on the user, it can have various uses that differ based on the technique, but a example can be to infuse Kevlar chakra into one's cell giving them a defensive capability.


    Further information on Kevlar [Here]
    Usage Examples:
    Kevlar Release: Kevlar Wall
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Defensive and slightly offensive.
    Range: Short-Mid range.
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A(60 when spikes are used)
    Description: The user will perform two hand seals, and slam his hands on the ground and create a wall made up of Kevlar that emerges in a fast pace from the ground(First Gate speed) the wall will emerge and provide protection for the user, it can reach 15 meters in Height and 15 meters in width. The user choose to create spikes from any side of the wall, the spikes can pierce through flesh and bones with ease. The spikes can reach short range in length but they will still be in contact with the wall.
    -Usable four times.

    Kevlar Release: Short Range Master You say
    Rank: B rank
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary.
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This technique is mostly used on short range specialists, the user will release Kevlar from his body in the form of threads that can hold on to on opponents limb and crush it by ferociously 'closing in' on the limb from all directions.

    Kevlar Release technique
    Rank: C*
    Type: All
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user creates structures made up of Kevlar.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Earth—Fire—Water + Good Chakra Control(Ninjutsu Mastery)
    Is weak to: Wind & Lightning as it has 'cutting' properties and Kevlar as all fibers it conducts electricity.*

    Is strong against: Fire, Water, Sound, and double strong against ice. Kevlar proved to be more efficient in low temperatures, hence the double ice weakness, it is also known that it has a high fire resistance since at 160 °C (320 °F) about 10% reduction in strength occurs after 500 hours, and fire techniques won't last that long. As for water it is due to Kevlar being somewhat similar to earth, as it 'sucks' the water. It is also strong against sound despite being weak to Lightning and Wind, this is due to Sound being absorbed by the Kevlar thus muffling the sound damage.

    Is Neutral with: Earth since earth has many forms, so it is difficult to determine if it is a strength or weakness, for example some earth techniques have cutting abilities, but some don't, so all in all it is neutral to it.
    Other:
    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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    ✗ Declined: Let me rephrase this: horribly badly explained. You just gave a highly scientifical explanation, probably copy pasted from wikipedia, which you presumably don't even understand yourself very well and jumbled it all together into something incoherent and mangawise non-sensical. The only thing in all of this that is slightly worth something is the reference to the jackets, but everything else can be discarded. I suggest you read the CE post in the Hitchhiker's Guide so that you understand how to submit a CE as this is now your 2nd submission and it's not even being close to being accepted as a real CE submission. If I get next time something like this, it will be a DNR.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Changing the name to Nylon release as its the first synthetic fibre and still its the reason behind its creation.
    Also removed some of its property(where it can be extracted from smoke) to make it less OP and changes are in bold letters.
    Also added is how the element is made in both main and specific releases and another useage example.
    added another useage example

    Quote Originally Posted by Magic.. View Post
    Resubmiting with the same idea but a whole new concept. And i chose a subject under fibre. It all reworded so i don't think bolding would be neccesary.




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    Custom element Japanese name: Gouseiseniton
    Custom element English name: Synthetic Fibre Release
    The element is based on: Earth, Water, Fire
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context)
    In the manga, threads, wires are seen used with weapons. Nylon, synthetic bags, special fibre clothings proves this to be true. Synthetic fibers are the result of extensive research by scientists to improve on naturally occurring animal and plant fibers thus bring us to the existence of plant and animal in Narutoworld also scientific researches are also seen done in Naruto.
    Synthetic fibers are made from synthesized polymers or small molecules. The compounds that are used to make these fibers come from raw materials such as petroleum based chemicals which can be extracted from earth or petrochemicals also knowns as carbon compounds that are readily available also in the earth crust. These materials are polymerized into a long, linear chemical that bond two adjacent carbon atoms. Differing chemical compounds will be used to produce different types of fibers in this case I choose Nylon as a core subject. Although there are several different synthetic fibers, they generally have the same common properties.

    How it works:
    Unlike some elements in Naruto world, Synthetic Fibre has just two way mode of release and are all based on the idea of its several structural properties.
    1. Main Release
    2. Specific Release
    based on the following structural properties:
    Heat-sensitivity
    Resistivity to most chemicals
    Resistivity to insects, fungi and rot but when damp and warm may attract them
    Low moisture absorbency
    Electrostatic
    Flame resistant
    Density or specific gravity variation(very light but not easily broken apart)
    Pilling
    Low melting temperature
    Extremely hazardous to the environment.
    Can shrink wrap and suffocate the target.(disallows air because of its extreme structural lattice bond albeit being flexible)
    Can make you overheat as a result of the above.

    Main Releases:
    The user send his synthetic fibre chakra into the earth and extracts petrochemical minerals contained in it while converting them to synthetic fibres then he can mould them into anything he likes. synthetic fibres having extreme flexibility and elasticity with great tensile strenght can be easily mould into any shape without breaking. Percentages of petrochemicals (carbon compounds) are also contained in the surrounding air and aerosols, therefore synthetic fibres can also be made in lesser quantity compared to the ones extracted from beneath the earth. following the process as forming ice from thin air combining wind chakra with water/moisture contained in air, Materialising synthetic fibres from above the earth crust is not far fetched.

    Specific Releases:
    This follows differently from the Main release.
    Smoke is as a result of petrochemcal waste therefore this can be taken advantage of. A Synthetic Fibre user may use surrounding petrochemical materials to create fibres. Examples of materials that can be harnessed are:
    Smoke, Clothing, ozone(contain green-house gases which solely comprises of petrochemicals), Carbon compound chemicals, weapons made of synthetic materials.
    As seen as of several cannon elements, Synthetic fibres can also be summoned through portals and likewise can be spewed from the mouth in a similar fashion to "Water Syrup Starch".


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    -Must be a Kage rank to use
    -Must have mastered water, Earth and fire
    -Must have good chakra control

    Usage Examples

    Gouseiseniton: Betabeta Maku - Synthetic Fibre Release: Sticky Membrane
    Rank: C
    Type: Suplimentary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user spits a ball of guey Synthetic Fibre which wraps around the opponent once it makes contact with him(like a strong thin sheet of elastic nylon. This restricts the opponent's movement and suffocates them after 2 turns
    -Victim passes out after two turns

    Is weak to:
    Fire: Due to its fuel nature, it comburst fire easily.
    Wind: Gusts of wind can easily blow it away due to its light nature and can cut through it

    Is strong against:
    Earth: It is biodegradable therefore makes earth looses its bond.
    Water: absorbs it to make it stronger.
    Lightning: Its a natural insulator. Instead of piecing through it accumulates on the surface and can be of advantage to the user himself
    Decay: they are naturally not prone to rot
    Insect: they are resistant to insect and pest
    Fungus: when they are dry, Synthetic fibre walls becomes unbreedable for fungi thus are impenetrable.

    Co-creator: Priest

    Students I passed this custom element on to:

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    ✗ Declined: Still not an element and OP. Your strengths don't even make sense.
    Custom element Japanese name: Nairon-ton
    Custom element English name: Nylon Release
    The element is based on: Earth, Water, Fire
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context)
    In the manga, threads, wires are seen used with weapons. Nylon, synthetic bags, special fibre clothings proves this to be true. Synthetic fibers are the result of extensive research by scientists to improve on naturally occurring animal and plant fibers thus bring us to the existence of plant and animal in Narutoworld also scientific researches are also seen done in Naruto.
    Synthetic Fibres are made from synthesized polymers or small molecules. The compounds that are used to make these fibers come from raw materials such as petroleum based chemicals which can be extracted from earth or petrochemicals also knowns as carbon compounds that are readily available also in the earth crust. These materials are polymerized into a long, linear chemical that bond two adjacent carbon atoms. Differing chemical compounds will be used to produce different types of fibers in this case I choose Nylon as a core subject. Although there are several different synthetic fibers, they generally have the same common properties.

    How it works:
    Unlike some elements in Naruto world, Nylon has just two way mode of release and are all based on the idea of its several structural properties.
    1. Main Release
    2. Specific Release
    based on the following structural properties:
    Heat-sensitivity
    Resistivity to most chemicals
    Resistivity to insects, fungi and rot but when damp and warm may attract them
    Low moisture absorbency
    Electrostatic
    Flame resistant
    Density or specific gravity variation(very light but not easily broken apart)
    Pilling
    Low melting temperature
    Extremely hazardous to the environment.
    Can shrink wrap and suffocate the target.(disallows air because of its extreme structural lattice bond albeit being flexible)
    Can make you overheat as a result of the above.

    Main Releases:
    The user send his chakra into the earth and mixes it with earth extracting petrochemical minerals contained in it while converting them to molten Nylon which dries up as soon as it touches air(though it can only be used in its solid form, only the extraction brings it up the molten element) then he can mould them into anything he likes. Nylon having extreme flexibility and elasticity with great tensile strenght can be easily mould into any shape without breaking. Percentages of petrochemicals (carbon compounds) are also contained in the surrounding air and aerosols, therefore Nylon can also be made in lesser quantity compared to the ones extracted from beneath the earth. following the process as forming ice from thin air combining wind chakra with water/moisture contained in air, Materialising Nylon from above the earth crust is not far fetched.

    Specific Releases:
    A Nylon release user may use surrounding petrochemical materials to create fibres simply by mixing his chakra, then using chakra manipulation he is able to control synthetic material and even form Nylon just like how existing earth can be manipulated and how existing earth can be turn to mud through using earth chakra manipulation. Examples of materials that can be harnessed are:
    Nylon clothing, Carbon compound chemicals, weapons made of synthetic materials.
    Also as seen of several cannon elements, Nylon can also be summoned through portals and likewise can be spewed from the mouth in a similar fashion to "Water Syrup Starch" or Mud globules, thus Nylon could be molded in the mouth through kneading chakra wherewith.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    -Must be a Kage rank to use
    -Must have mastered water, Earth and fire
    -Must have good chakra control

    Usage Examples

    Nairon-ton: Nairon shuugou - Nylon Release: Nylon Gathering
    Rank: B
    Type: Suplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sends his chakra into the earth then he mixes it with it while using chakra manipulation to convert petrochemical minerals into molten Nylon element, then he makes them readily available closer to the surface of the earth crust for Nylon techniques.
    ++Takes 1 full turn to gather.

    Nairon-ton: Betabeta Maku - Nylon Release: Sticky Membrane
    Rank: C
    Type: Suplimentary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user spits a ball of guey Synthetic Fibre which wraps around the opponent once it makes contact with him(like a strong thin sheet of elastic nylon. This restricts the opponent's movement and suffocates them after 2 turns
    -Victim passes out after two turns


    Is weak to:
    Fire:
    Due to its fuel nature, it comburst fire easily.
    And also melts before burning making it a very poor defense against fire
    Wind:
    Gusts of wind can easily blow it away due to its light nature and can cut through it

    Is strong against:
    Lightning:
    Nylon is a natural insulator to electricity. In some cases, electricity(current) accumulates on its surface instead of passing through which shows they are good absorber of electricity.
    Decay:
    They are naturally not prone to rot
    that even when buried they would not decay. They have strong bond and closely packed lattices which are unbreakable easily making it have a longer lifespan.
    Insect:
    Like the explanation above, Its tensile strenght and elasticity makes it tough for insect to penetrate
    Fungus:
    Nylon becomes unbreedable for fungi when it is dry thus are impenetrable, however, they would be infested easily and destroyed by fungus if they are wet and damp


    Co-creator: Priest

    Students I passed this custom element on to:

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    ✗ Declined: Fact is there's already a plastic element and technically speaking this falls under that.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Ka Ryuu Faiba.
    Custom element English name: Vulcanized Fibre
    The element is based on: Earth, Water, Fire and High chakra control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    Vulcanized Fibre is made created through a process which essentially entails soaking paper in a solution of Zinc Chloride, compressing the soaked paper together and pulling out the Zinc Chloride. This process causes intimate contact of the cellulose fibers, thus promoting bonding between the cellulose chains and results in a product composed of 99% cellulose. The existence of Zinc Chloride in Naruto can be concluded as a result of the existence of Zinc and Chlorine. Zinc’s existence is confirmed since it is a necessary mineral for the human body whereas Chlorine’s existence is confirmed by the use of table salt (Sodium Chloride) in many forms of cooking. Since Zinc Chloride can exist, Vulcanized Fibre can be made.

    In the manga and anime, we have seen the manipulation of objects through the infusion on numerous occasions (i.e. Gaara’s Sand ninjutsu, Konan’s Paper ninjutsu, etc.). Similarly, chakra can be infused in Vulcanized Fibre during the process in which it is made. Therefore, Vulcanized Fibre can be manipulated in its final form.

    How it works:

    The element works by the manipulation of Vulcanized Fibre to take advantage of some of its properties. Some of its physical properties are: being lighter than Aluminum, being stronger than leather, having high burst strength, being an amazing insulator, being abrasion resistant (exemplified through its use for sanding disks), and being flame resistant.

    During the process by which Vulcanized Fibre is made, water chakra is channeled into the solution of Zinc Chloride and infused into the paper soaking in the solution. At the end of the process, the chakra still remains. Once in its final from the user is able manipulate the Vulcanized Fibre’s density and shape with earth and fire chakra.

    To be used in battle, the user must carry in premade Vulcanized Fibre (similar to how Gaara and Deidera carry sand and exploding clay respectively). As a result of the user’s ability to mold Vulcanized Fibre, he can easily line his clothing and ninja tools with Vulcanized Fibre in addition to bringing a container of it. New Vulcanized Fibre cannot be made in the middle of battle.


    Usage Examples:

    (Vulcanized Faiba: Oujou Hako) Vulcanized Fiber: Deathly Box
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user builds up a large chakra amount through their whole body and sends Vulcanized Fibre towards their opponent, causing a large box, which is five feet wide, five feet tall, to form, covering their opponent completely, made from Vulcanized Fiber. Once the opponent is enclosed within the box, the user performs the Boar → Dog handseals and shapes the Vulcanized Fiber on the inside of the box into thousands of sharp spikes which impales the immobilized opponent from every angle. The box is two feet thick and is hard to break unless one of Vulcanized Fibre’s weaknesses is used.

    Note: Can only be used by Jokey
    Note: The user won't be able to use any Vulcanized Fiber technique's in the same turn
    Note: The user will only be able to use Vulcanized Fiber technique's which are below B-Rank the next turn
    Note: Dōjutsu and people with sensing abilities can see the chakra surge once it's getting send


    Conditions to be able to use it: Water mastery, Fire mastery, Earth mastery.

    Is weak to:

    High ranked Fire - Which can burn it.

    Ice – Which can Freeze it leaving it useless , even sharp Vulcanized Fiber technique's can't cut trough it.

    High ranked Blast - Has fire properties which the Vulcanized Fibre is weak against.

    Storm/Black Lightning - Stronger then Lightning, strong enough to shatter it.

    Lava - Can melt it immediately

    High ranked Boil - Can melt it, let's say you put a leather of bag into a hot tub which is 100 degrees or above you would see it becoming weak and extremely slippery.

    High ranked Scorch - Can melt it leaving it useless since it has sun properties, and sun properties has Fire/Lava properties.

    Steel - Every sharp steel technique can cut through it.

    Kaguya - Can cut through it.

    Crystal - Every sharp crystal technique can cut through it

    High ranked Sand - Every sharp high ranked sand technique can cut through it.

    Sharp earth and wind techniques, depending on their ranks, can cut through it.


    Is strong against:

    Lightning - Vulcanized Fiber is a good insulator.

    Weak Fire – Vulcanized Fiber is flame resistant

    Water - Water is completely useless, especially when using the element supplementary.

    Earth - Except for sharp earth technique's, useless against Vulcanized Fiber.

    Sound - If covering the user completely with a supplementary technique, the sound would get bounced back because of leather and plastic properties.

    Wood - Except for sharp wood technique's, useless against Vulcanized Fiber.

    Rain - Vulcanized Fiber has leather properties which is strong against it, rain is completely useless unless used high ranked sharp rain technique's against it.

    Crystal - Except for sharp crystal technique's, useless against Vulcanized Fiber.

    Paper - Vulcanized fiber has leather properties, paper would be useless against it

    Dark - Vulcanized fiber would travel straight through it, it's useless against it.

    Bubble - Vulcanized Fiber has leather properties which is strong against it, bubble is completely useless since it has rain/water properties.

    Scorch - Scorch has sun and fire properties causing low rank techniques to be completely useless, but if the Scorch Release technique is of a high enough level, it will burn through the Vulcanized Fibre.

    You can actually compare these elements above like you use it against leather, but much stronger.


    Co-creator: Bedlington
    Students I passed this custom element on to: PresidentBush

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    ✗ Declined: From the moment you said it was necessary that you actually needed papers sinking in a solution, this wasn't an element anymore. Also highly OP.
    Custom element Japanese name: Ka Ryuu Faiba.
    Custom element English name: Vulcanized Fibre
    The element is based on: Earth, Water, Fire and High chakra control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    Paper, is produced by pressing together moist fibers, typically cellulose pulp derived from wood, or grasses, and drying them into flexible sheets. We shinobi's, are walking upon earth, walk trough forests which all are filled with grasses and wood. Grass, which grows out our very own earth in the shinobi world which we are living on is more then enough to show that there is proof, that we are capable of combining the earth element with water, fire and mastery over your own chakra control to produce Vulcanized Fibre.

    Zinc’s existence, which is in fact the most important part of Vulcanized Fibre is confirmed since it is a necessary mineral for the human body whereas Chlorine’s existence is confirmed by the use of table salt (Sodium Chloride) in many forms of cooking. Since Zinc Chloride can exist, Vulcanized Fibre can be made.


    In the manga and anime, we have seen the manipulation of objects through the infusion on numerous occasions (i.e. Gaara’s Sand ninjutsu, Konan’s Paper ninjutsu, etc.). Similarly, chakra can be infused in Vulcanized Fibre during the process in which it is made. Therefore, Vulcanized Fibre can be manipulated in its final form.

    How it works:

    The element works by the manipulation of Vulcanized Fibre to take advantage of some of its properties. Some of its physical properties are: being lighter than Aluminum, being stronger than leather, having high burst strength, being an amazing insulator, being abrasion resistant (exemplified through its use for sanding disks), and being flame resistant.

    During the process by which Vulcanized Fibre is made, water chakra is channeled into the solution of Zinc Chloride. At the end of the process, the chakra still remains. Once in its final from the user is able manipulate the Vulcanized Fibre’s density and shape with earth, water and fire chakra.

    To be used in battle, the user must carry in premade Vulcanized Fibre (similar to how Gaara and Deidera carry sand and exploding clay respectively). As a result of the user’s ability to mold Vulcanized Fibre, he can easily line his clothing and ninja tools with Vulcanized Fibre in addition to bringing a container of it. New Vulcanized Fibre cannot be made in the middle of battle.

    Usage Examples:

    (Vulcanized Faiba: Oujou Hako) Vulcanized Fiber: Deathly Box
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user builds up a large chakra amount through their whole body and sends Vulcanized Fibre towards their opponent, causing a large box, which is five feet wide, five feet tall, to form, covering their opponent completely, made from Vulcanized Fiber. Once the opponent is enclosed within the box, the user performs the Boar → Dog handseals and shapes the Vulcanized Fiber on the inside of the box into thousands of sharp spikes which impales the immobilized opponent from every angle. The box is two feet thick and is hard to break unless one of Vulcanized Fibre’s weaknesses is used.

    Note: Can only be used by the people who are capable of using Vulcanized Fibre.
    Note: The user won't be able to use any Vulcanized Fiber technique's in the same turn
    Note: The user will only be able to use Vulcanized Fiber technique's which are below B-Rank the next turn
    Note: Dōjutsu and people with sensing abilities can see the chakra surge once it's getting send


    Conditions to be able to use it: Water mastery, Fire mastery, Earth mastery.

    Is weak to:

    High ranked Fire.
    High ranked Wind.
    Sharp Earth technique's would cut straight trough it.


    Is strong against:

    Water - Vulcanized Fibre has the properties of Earth, hence being useless against it.
    Lightning - Insulator


    Co-creator: PresidentBush
    Students I passed this custom element on to:


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    ✗ Declined: Apparently first you need to distill chlorine from table salt and extract zinc from your body in your lab to create a piece of firbre, which you then can manipulate in battle? This isn't an element anymore.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Gave a full explanation how the element is made.
    also added a new example tech.
    Changes are bolded
    removed fire and water strenght.

    Quote Originally Posted by Magic.. View Post
    Custom element Japanese name:
    EkiBurichiton
    Custom element English name:
    Liquid Bleach Release
    The element is based on:
    Water+fire
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Bleach does exist in narutoverse due to the fact that fabrics and cloths existed, hence
    gets stained along the line,which brings about the need of bleaching agents, due its
    chemical can also be used to sterilized water, killing any type of germs thus its also a
    disinfectant. The earliest form of bleaching involves spreading fabrics and cloths out in
    a bleach field (this is practically a terrain) to be whitened by the action of the sun and
    water so with the manipulation and mixing of fire and water chakra,one could easily obtain
    bleach chakra.

    How it works:
    The user creates bleach chakra, this is done by changing the nature of the user's normal
    chakra using Fire/water hybrid. Bleach chakra has no unique color than the normal chakra
    however the differ in constituents.
    The user creates Liquid bleach using his bleach chakra just like manipulating water
    but less denser than water and it is not flammable. This pulverizes any sort of thin organic
    Layer, coatings and films such leaving it naked. Some vivid examples are fabric, textile
    which are white but are coated with thin layers of colors, a bleach will remove the dyes
    leaving it white as it was. This can also be used to break bubbles as they are also thin
    film around air itself.

    Main Releases:
    Liquid bleach has a basic and main purpose, for decoloration and peeling of thin layers and
    films. they are less denser and lighter than water thus allows for easy diffusion into
    human skin through the sweat-pores via osmosis. this in turn cause severe skin irritation
    and eventually peels of the skin. it also is able to sieve through surfaces easily.
    Also main releases of liquid bleach would cause decoloration of the skin and organic and
    inorganic surfaces turning them white when it comes in contact with it. The reason for this
    being that colors in most dye and pigments are produced by molecules which contain
    chromophores, such as beta carotene which makes liquid bleach acting as a reducing agent
    works by converting double bonds in the chromophore into single bonds. This eliminates the
    ability of the chromophore to absorb visible light rendering the resulting substance
    colorless.
    Liquid bleach having made by the user's chakra is totally harmless to the user.

    Alternative Releases:
    Liquid bleaches having strong bactericidal properties, can be used for disinfecting and
    sterilizing as in the real word today in which they are used in swimming pool sanitation to
    control bacteria, viruses and algae and in any institution where sterile conditions are
    needed. Following the same explanation, liquid bleach in its alternative release negates
    effects of parasitic bacterias, virus and fungus by neutralizing their venom and sterilizing
    them. the idea behind its alternate release is owed to the nature of its chemical
    reactivity with microbes. Rather than acting in an inhibitory or toxic fashion in the
    manner of antibiotics, bleach quickly reacts with microbial cells to irreversibly denature
    and destroy many pathogens.
    The user will modify liquid bleach chakra in a way that he forms specific liquid bleach
    that destroys, bacteria, fungi, and other parasitic microbes that comes in contact with it.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over fire+water release

    (EkiBurichiton: Burichingu ) - Liquid Bleach Release: Bleaching
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: close
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points:20
    Description: This is a basic bleach justu,that enables the user to focus bleach chakra into
    their palms forming a small stream of bleach that can be directed towards a target
    decolorizing surfaces it comes in contact with also causes minimal burns to skin.

    Is weak to:
    Earth: has strong lattices against liquid bleach intrusion.
    Lightning: Cuts through it
    Wind: can blow it away being less heavier than water

    Is strong against:
    Fire: Douses it quicker than water
    Water: Reacts with it to form bleach
    Paint: Displaces paints turning it white
    Color: De-colorizes
    Germs: Dis-infects it
    Fungal and parasitic based elements: Reacts, Negate and Destroys them.

    Co-creators (if any):
    Priest

    Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: You never have proven whether it's now actually possible to create it as an element. You just said that you changed your chakra into bleach chakra, then it would be easy to make a CE if such a global explanation would work. I also don't get the explanation behind some things. It's supposed to be less denser and lighter than water, so would it douse fire quicker? Why would water react with it to form bleach?
    Custom element Japanese name:
    EkiBurichiton
    Custom element English name:
    Liquid Bleach Release
    The element is based on:
    Water+fire
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Bleach does exist in narutoverse due to the fact that fabrics and cloths existed, hence
    gets stained along the line,which brings about the need of bleaching agents, due its
    chemical can also be used to sterilized water, killing any type of germs thus its also a
    disinfectant. The earliest form of bleaching involves spreading fabrics and cloths out in
    a bleach field (this is practically a terrain) to be whitened by the action of the sun and
    water.

    How it works:
    The user while using chakra manipulation and combining his water and fire chakra, creates Liquid bleach. He either imbues this in his stomach wherewith he would spew it from his mouth or imbues his chakra into an existing water source and converts it into liquid bleach(Water conversion must be done at first and would be submitted as a separate technique). The user can also bring up liquid bleach from below the earth by sending his chakra into the earth and mixing it with water contained while converting them to liquid bleach before bringing them up just like manipulating water from below earth like the likes of Dragon bitting explosion technique and water convergence technique.

    However, Liquid Bleach is less denser than water and it is not flammable. They pulverizes any sort of thin organic
    Layer, coatings and films such leaving it naked. Some vivid examples are fabric, textile
    which are white but are coated with thin layers of colors, a bleach will remove the dyes
    leaving it white as it was. This can also be used to break bubbles as they are also thin
    film around air itself.

    Main Releases:
    Liquid bleach has a basic and main purpose, for decoloration and peeling of thin layers and
    films. they are less denser and lighter than water thus allows for easy diffusion into
    human skin through the sweat-pores via osmosis. this in turn cause severe skin irritation and eventually peels of the skin. it also is able to sieve through surfaces easily.
    Also main releases of liquid bleach would cause decoloration of the skin and organic and
    inorganic surfaces turning them white when it comes in contact with it. The reason for this
    being that colors in most dye and pigments are produced by molecules which contain
    chromophores, such as beta carotene which makes liquid bleach acting as a reducing agent works by converting double bonds in the chromophore into single bonds. This eliminates the ability of the chromophore to absorb visible light rendering the resulting substance
    colorless.
    Liquid bleach having made by the user's chakra is totally harmless to the user.

    Alternative Releases:
    Liquid bleaches having strong bactericidal properties, can be used for disinfecting and
    sterilizing as in the real word today in which they are used in swimming pool sanitation to
    control bacteria, viruses and algae and in any institution where sterile conditions are
    needed. Following the same explanation, liquid bleach in its alternative release negates
    effects of parasitic bacterias, virus and fungus by neutralizing their venom and sterilizing
    them. the idea behind its alternate release is owed to the nature of its chemical
    reactivity with microbes. Rather than acting in an inhibitory or toxic fashion in the
    manner of antibiotics, bleach quickly reacts with microbial cells to irreversibly denature
    and destroy many pathogens.
    The user will modify liquid bleach chakra in a way that he forms specific liquid bleach
    that destroys, bacteria, fungi, and other parasitic microbes that comes in contact with it.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over fire+water release

    (EkiBurichiton: Burichingu ) - Liquid Bleach Release: Bleaching
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: close
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points:20
    Description: This is a basic bleach justu,that enables the user to focus bleach chakra into
    their palms forming a small stream of bleach that can be directed towards a target
    decolorizing surfaces it comes in contact with also causes minimal burns to skin.

    (EkiBurichiton: Mizu Kaishin ) - Liquid Bleach Release: Water Conversion
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user send his chakra into an existing water source preferrably a large one, and converts them into liquid bleach which can now be used for liquid bleach techniques
    +conversion takes a full turn

    Is weak to:
    Earth: has strong lattices against liquid bleach intrusion.
    Lightning: Cuts through it
    Wind: can blow it away being less heavier than water
    Is strong against:
    Paint: Displaces paints turning it white
    Color: De-colorizes
    Germs: Dis-infects it
    Fungal and parasitic based elements: Reacts, Negate and Destroys them.

    Co-creators (if any):
    Priest

    Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: Still the same problem as last time, your explanation of how you make it is not going to cut it. Just proving that something might exist in Naruto is not enough, you also need to give a proper explanation and proof it can be made into an element, just saying you mix water and fire together is not enough as it's too shallow and doesn't have much reason behind it, especially when you clearly say it can do that, that and that. And no "is harmless to the user" stuff.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Hoguton
    Custom element English name: Beryllium Release
    The element is based on: Earth + Advance Chakra control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Beryllium is a relatively rare element in both the universe and in the crust of the Earth; the manga takes place on planet earth, thus being possible for Beryllium to exist within it's crust, as many other known metals do. As a free element it is a steel-gray, strong, lightweight and brittle alkaline earth metal. Beryllium increases hardness and resistance to corrosion when alloyed to aluminium, cobalt, copper (notably beryllium copper), iron and nickel.

    As seen in both the manga and anime alike; there are many metals that are used for all kinds of purposes. Weapons, buildings, devices, and other things shinobi aswell as civillians use. We have seen the use of kunai with explosive tags. We've witnessed a lot of Earth variations such as Lava, Mud, Crystal etc. Beryllium would be no exception to those types of elements that are based on Earth.

    Beryllium is a steel gray and hard metal that is brittle at room temperature and has a close-packed hexagonal crystal structure It has exceptional flexural rigidity and a reasonably high melting point. Other significant properties are high specific heat (1925 J·kg−1·K−1) and thermal conductivity (216 W·m−1·K−1), which make beryllium the metal with the best heat dissipation characteristics per unit weight.

    Summary of Properties:

    Burning Point: 1000 °C
    Phase at Room Temperature: Brittle
    Close-packed hexagonal crystal structure
    Is very hard

    How it works: It could be used by a ninja to concentrate Earth chakra into the ground and find and gather the particles of Beryllium. Chakra control would be used to form them into a solid mass; being able to create pillars, weapons, shields, walls (everything that can be done with Earth basically.) but not restricted to only that. It may also be used like Gaara's sand to manipulate the Beryllium. For useage Beryllium revolves around the advance chakra control and earth mastery of the user. Approximately 35 micrograms of beryllium is found in the human body, but this amount is not considered harmful. However, as such; this means the user can also use advance chakra control to use the Beryllium within his body as a weapon/defence. Such as coating himself in Beryllium, or creating Beryllium kunais, swords. It's main aspect is Solid form- In solid form, it can be used to create walls, tools, pillars, spikes, etc. It can also be used to coat certain objects or the field.

    The commercial use of beryllium metal presents technical challenges due to the toxicity (especially by inhalation) of beryllium-containing dusts. Beryllium is corrosive to tissue, and can cause a chronic life-threatening allergic disease called berylliosis in people up to some degree. Therefor gaining a unique aspect that is now shown to have any other known metal. Berylliosis, or chronic beryllium disease (CBD), is a chronic lung response and chronic lung disease caused by exposure to beryllium and its compounds. Symptoms:

    With single or prolonged exposure by inhalation, the lungs become hypersensitive to beryllium causing the development of small inflammatory nodules, called granulomas.

    Ultimately, this process leads to restrictive lung disease, a decreased diffusion capacity.

    Target's experience cough and shortness of breath. Other symptoms include chest pain, joint aches, and fever.

    The onset of symptoms can range from a few seconds up to several turns (RP battle-wise speaking) from the initial exposure.

    Beryllium is non-magnetic. Therefore, tools fabricated out of beryllium are found in maintenance and construction materials near magnetic resonance imaging (MRI) machines because of the high magnetic fields generated by them. Therefor, magnetism carries no magetic power against Beryllium, making it even more unique. Beryllium is more chemically similar to aluminium than its close neighbors in the periodic table due to having a similar charge-to-radius ratio. An oxide layer forms around beryllium that prevents further reactions with air unless heated above 1000 °C. Once ignited, beryllium burns brilliantly forming a mixture of beryllium oxide and beryllium nitride. Beryllium dissolves readily in non-oxidizing acids, such as HCl and diluted H2SO4, but not in nitric acid or water as this forms the oxide. This behavior is similar to that of aluminium metal. Beryllium also dissolves in alkali solutions.

    Usage Examples:
    [Hoguton: Ganjou no Jutsu] - Beryllium Release: Strongest Beryllium Technique
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user creates large pillars, weapons, shields, and other entities of Berylllium from the ground. By controlling the Beryllium properties found within the earth.

    [Hoguton: Ubrizen Suwari] - Beryllium Release: Untold Lies
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user waves a single handseal and stomps his foot strongly against the ground. Sending chakr ainto it, and manipulation the beryllium particles within the ground around and below the opponent to surface. Surrounding the air around the target(s). As such, do to inhaling the particles of beryllium, the target(s) will suffer the following acts: The acts described below stack up, meaning that within the 3rd turn, if not counter, feel the symptoms of 1 and 2, aswell as 3 starting.
    1 turn = small inflammatory nodules.
    2 turns = restrictive lung disease, a decreased diffusion capacity.
    3 and more turns = cough and shortness of breath. Aswell as chest pain, joint aches and fever.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Must have mastery over earth release.
    Must have advance chakra control, therefor atleast Kage rank.

    Is weak to:
    Lightning - Metal conducts electricity so if the user is in touch with it it can electrocute him.
    Diamond (It’s the hardest compound on Earth)

    Strong Fire and Extremely hot elements: Beryllium is ignited and begins to burn brilliantly forming a certain mixture when hit by a strong fire of alteast S rank. (battle - wise)

    Is strong against:
    Water - Not only can Beryllium constrict water, or effortlessly pass through up (within reason) but water is the element that forms the oxide wich is a layer that forms around beryllium that prevents reactions with air unless heated above a certain degree.

    Earth: Being denser and harder than earth, beryllium can easily break through it.

    Is neutral to:
    Regular fire - Due to having a reasonable high melting point.
    Aluminium, cobalt, copper, iron and nickel; due to it's increase of hardness and resistance to corrosion when alloyed to the former.

    Co-creator:

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: Apparently just a metal again that is not especially different from others. Not to mention if it's brittle at room temperature, I wouldn't say this is very suited for a CE as, unless you are fighting in very drastic environments, it's not like the temperature outside your house will be drastically different.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Seidenkiton
    Custom element English name:static electricity
    The element is based on: chakra/lightning/friction sources rubbing together

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    -Tsunade has shown a lightning like paralyses jutsu used on kabuto where she sent an electric charge into his nervous system. Now it was not necessarily a static charge as it stated it was electric but a charge none the less meaning that the manga is capable of showing naturally produced charges. This reminded me about how when kids run around shocking each other by creating friction between two points to either make there hair stand up or even shock someone through touch.
    Now it has not been shown like this in the manga but yet scientifically it is easy to peform by creating friction between two sources.

    How it works:
    -the user must rub their hands together creating a source for friction and static buildup. Then by building up your lightning chakra while rubbing the hands against each other you create the friction and energy required to emit a static charge. Then you can use your chakra to exert the charge out from you or even just from touch you can expell the charge. Thus creating an easy spruce of natural energy to release in battle. It is known that cotton rubbed together will create a static build up.

    -Now the reason why you have to use lightning chakra is to have the proper build up of electrons and protons to create the static charge. Making it so you can increase the number of protons and electrons used to enhance and made the static charge more powerful or even minimal. Also another reason for the lightning chakra is that it cuts back on how much friction needs to be used to build up the proper amounts of protons and electrons.

    - other note compressing the static will make it less traceable but will still retain all of its power. The only thing which changes by compressing the static is that it makes it sharper,faster,less visible to the naked eye. Doujutsu and sensory are the only ways to actually track compressed static charges.
    notes from wiki
    Static discharge
    Discharge of static electricity can create severe hazards in those industries dealing with flammable substances, where a small electrical spark may ignite explosive mixtures.

    Removal and prevention of static electricity
    Removing or preventing a buildup of static charge can be as simple as opening a window or using a humidifier to increase the moisture content of the air, making the atmosphere more conductive. Air ionizers can perform the same task.

    Contact-induced charge separation
    Electrons can be exchanged between materials on contact; materials with weakly bound electrons tend to lose them, while materials with sparsely filled outer shells tend to gain them. This is known as the triboelectric effect and results in one material becoming positively charged and the other negatively charged. The polarity and strength of the charge on a material once they are separated depends on their relative positions in the triboelectric series. The triboelectric effect is the main cause of static electricity as observed in everyday life, and in common high-school science demonstrations involving rubbing different materials together (e.g., fur against an acrylic rod). Contact-induced charge separation causes your hair to stand up and causes "static cling" (for example, a balloon rubbed against the hair becomes negatively charged; when near a wall, the charged balloon is attracted to positively charged particles in the wall, and can "cling" to it, appearing to be suspended against gravity).
    Causes of static electricity
    Materials are made of atoms that are normally electrically neutral because they contain equal numbers of positive charges (protons in their nuclei) and negative charges (electrons in "shells" surrounding the nucleus). The phenomenon of static electricity requires a separation of positive and negative charges. When two materials are in contact, electrons may move from one material to the other, which leaves an excess of positive charge on one material, and an equal negative charge on the other. When the materials are separated they retain this charge imbalance.
    A static electric charge is created whenever two surfaces come into contact and separate, and at least one of the surfaces has a high resistance to electrical current (and is therefore an electrical insulator). The effects of static electricity are familiar to most people because people can feel, hear, and even see the spark as the excess charge is neutralized when brought close to a large electrical conductor (for example, a path to ground), or a region with an excess charge of the opposite polarity (positive or negative). The familiar phenomenon of a static shock–more specifically, an electrostatic discharge–is caused by the neutralization of charge


    Usage Examples:

    seiteki chouzu (static storage. )
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: NA
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    Restriction: the user of static electricity must first store up a storage container of static during a battle before the user can use static electricity to full capacity. The user can still use static electricity but will have to build it up manually instead of relying on the storage reserves. Now the storage reserve is a rollout mattress the user carries on his back you could consider this a traveling bed or roll out mattress. Now the user must build up the storage unit by utilizing the friction of his or hers glove rubbing together and building up lightning chakra in the hands at the same time using your chakra you manipulate the static into the storage unit and there it sits ready to be used.
    Restriction -you cannot use a wet storage unit to store static so if it is wet or raining then it is useless.
    Note can only be taught by Roju
    Note user must first build up a jar of static to utilize static at full power.
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    seiteki tenka (static ignition. )
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: B rank
    Range: short range-mid range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage:
    Description: The user builds up a small portion of static electricity by rubbing there hands together and moulding lightning chakra to create the charge. With the snap of your middle finger against you thumb you create a static ignition capable of igniting combustible substances ie Katon techs,oil,anything flammable.

    Restrictions- can only be used to ignite flammable liquids or gases.
    Note-can only be taught by Roju and necron
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    (Seiteki Chacha /static disruption)
    Type:*supplementary
    Rank: S rank
    Range: short range
    Chakra: 50
    Damage:Na
    Description:the user begins by building up a surge of static chakra and proceeds to channel it into your own nerves thus breaking the connection between genjutsu. The user must be very precise on how much chakra is being forced into your own body. Forcing to much static chakra into you body will cause your nervous system to take damage. Once this technique has been established a bright light will pass your eyes and you will see normally and your sense's will be back to normal.
    Restrictions- can only be used once in battle
    -must have mastery of static to use.
    -can only be used by Roju and necron
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    seiteki shougeki nami (static shock wave . )
    Type: attack
    Rank: A rank
    Range: short range-mid range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user builds up a large portion of static electricity by rubbing there hands together and moulding lightning chakra to create the charge and enhancing the protons and electrons to give it more power. With the snap of your middle finger against you thumb you create a static shockwave which covers a radius up to mid range and has similar effects to a concussion grenade will leave the enemy disorientated and knock them down with a paralyzingly shock as well.

    Restrictions- can only be used once in battle
    Note-can only be taught by Roju and necron

    Conditions to be able to use it:mastery of lightning/precise chakra control/ rubbing hands to create friction for static.

    Is weak to:
    Lightning : images the static electrons lose there static state
    Fire: as fire accelerates the molecule vibration's, ionization the static creates
    Water: moisture negates the buildup or storage of static electricity
    Rubber: will not travel through rubber being that static cannot discharge against it because of grounding

    Is strong against:
    earth: easily demolishes in ways like blast release.
    Wind: as static phenomenons are also produced by frictions in atmospheric wind
    Taijutsu: for obvious shocking effects this element will be strong for hand to hand combat
    Genjutsu: you can use a minimal shock to release a ally from genjutsu.
    Combustible elements/Oil: will ignite oil instantly because of the properties of ignition.
    Paper ninjutsu: static electricity magnetizes paper
    Co-creator: necron
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Do not resubmit. Not only is this not a real CE, as if you need to rub your hands it possibly can't be one, but this falls simply under the raiton element.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Santon

    Custom element English name: Acidic Water Release

    The element is based on: Fire + Lightning + Water + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    Acid is a substance which reacts with a base. Commonly, acids can be identified as tasting sour, reacting with metals such as calcium, and bases like sodium carbonate. Aqueous acids have a pH of less than 7, where an acid of lower pH is typically stronger, and turn blue litmus paper red.

    Now, Acidic water, is water with a potential hydrogen (pH) of less than 7. pH refers to the amount of hydrogen mixed in with the water. So if we decrease the pH of the water, we get acidic water.

    Acids in Nature: Even though most of us don’t realize, acids are very important to people for one way or another. One acid that we have in our body is the Gastric Acid, a digestive fluid, formed in the stomach. The acid plays a key role in digestion of proteins.
    Also, Hydrochloric acid is found naturally in gastric acid, but also was produced from vitriol (sulfuric acid) and common salt.
    And of course, the Tartaric acid is a white crystalline diprotic organic acid. It occurs naturally in many plants, particularly grapes, bananas, and tamarinds, and is one of the main acids found in wine. It is added to other foods to give a sour taste, and is used as an antioxidant.

    With all those statements above we prove that there are acids in the real world and in the narutoverse.

    How it works: The element is purely based on decreasing the pH of the normal water in order to create water with corrosive properties. We have seen something very similar when we were introduced with Mei Terumi’s Boil Release: Skilled Mist Technique, where she would change the pH of the vaporized water (mist) to give it corrosive qualities. The process here is exactly the same, only we won’t be decreasing the pH of the steam/mist, but on the water. The user will use his fire and lightning chakra, not to heat the water but to adjust its’ pH level and make it acidic, thus giving it corrosive qualities.

    http://www.lifeionizers.com/water-fa...ic-water.html#
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Acid
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Boil_Re...Mist_Technique


    Usage Examples:


    (Santon: Bakuhuka) Acidic Water Release: Blast
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will perform the Snake hand seal and will release a huge wave of Acidic Water that spreads all the way up to long range in a matter of seconds, corroding anything in contact.

    (Santon: Funka) Acidic Water Release: Eruption
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will stomp on the ground releasing his Santon chakra and moving it underneath his opponent. Once there, the user will perform a single hand seal and will make Acidic Water erupt in an instant, corroding anything in contact.

    (Santon: Mizu no Kangoku) Acidic Water Release: Water Prison
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will use the moisture around the user and by adding Santon chakra will make Acidic water materialize out of nowhere, forming a prison of acidic water around the opponent, trapping him and killing him in an instant.




    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Lightning Fire and Water is required.

    Is weak to:
    -Strong Earth (natural weakness of water, but in small amounts will be destroyed by the corrosive properties)
    -High ranked and big amounts of Water (Normal water, having pH = 7, when in contact with acidic water will dilute it and it won’t have corrosive characteristics. The amount must either be the same or larger in order to fully dilute it, otherwise it would just weaken it.)

    Is strong against:
    -Fire (natural strength of water)
    -Wind (acidic water, being more dense and has some of the characteristics of fire will overcome wind)
    -Low ranked metal elements (the acidic water, having corrosive properties can render metal elements useless but only if they are of lower rank the water as the acidic water is not strong enough to fully destroy all metals ; Techniques of the same rank will simply weaken it.)

    Co-creator: N/A

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: There is already an acid element.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Resubmiting the following CE from the old thread and since I can't quote it, I will post the link. Changed some parts, hope it's better now. http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post3585286




    Custom element Japanese name: Fantomu Katon

    Custom element English name: Phantom Fire

    The element is based on: Fire, Lightning, Wind, and chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    Fire is simply the rapid oxidation of a material in a chemical process called combustion, releasing heat, light, and other reaction products. The flame is the visible portion of the fire and consists of glowing hot gases. In the Naruto universe, fire is visible as an orange-red flame. Depending on the substance alight, and any impurities outside, the color of the flame and fire's intensity will be different. To start a fire, one needs fuel which is a flammable or combustible matter, in combination with a large amount of an oxidizer, and to be exposed to a source of heat or ambient temperature above the flash point for the fuel/oxidizer mix.

    The element is possible as this is basically a very advanced form of Fire. It requires pure Oxygen, hydrogen gas and carbon gas which can all be found in the air (everything is described bellow), thus proving this element to be possible in the narutoverse.

    How it works: To create Phantom Fire in the Naruto universe, the user will need the basic requirements for starting any fire. The fuel will be acetylene, a mixture of hydrogen gas and carbon gas. The user will use wind chakra to extract hydrogen and carbon from the air, which shouldn't be hard as they are everywhere, and combine them to create acetylene. An acetylene flame burns at much higher temperatures than normal fire. The user will also use wind chakra collect large amounts of pure oxygen (removing all impurities) for the requirement of an oxidizer. With plentiful oxygen the user can create an oxidizing flame. After the oxygen and fuel is prepared, the user will add fire chakra as the heat source to create the flames. The user will combine the fire with radiation and shocking particles of pure lightning to then produce a denser more powerful fire. The blue lightning reacts with the flame and changes the wavelengths of the radiation emitted resulting in a flame that is perceived as light ghostly blue. Anything caught in it will burn pale blue, this property is where Phantom Fire's name originates from. The reason that fire can exist normally without high levels of nuclear fusion is because of the corona and oxygen to sustain such heat and keep it going.

    Oxy-fuel welding and cutting
    Oxidizing and reducing flames

    Usage Examples:


    (Fantomu Katon: Bakuhuka) Phantom Fire: Blast
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will take a deep breath while performing the Tiger hand seal and concentrating his Phantom Fire chakra. The user will then release a flame produced with an excessive amount of oxygen, destroying anything on its’ way.

    (Fantomu Katon: Funk) Phantom Fire: Eruption
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will release his Phantom Fire through the ground and move in underneath his opponent. Then with a single hand seal he will make Phantom Fire erupt from underneath the opponent, completely destroying him.




    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Fire, Lightning and Wind elements.

    Is weak to:
    - Advanced water based elements: would put out the flames.
    - Lightning based elements: has high levels of intense and potent energy that can blast through it.
    - Earth based elements with extremely high boiling points: withstand the heat.
    - Lava: would only heat it up further.
    - Dry Ice: would cool down the flames.

    Is strong against:
    - Normal water element: would evaporate it on contact.
    - Normal fire element: would overpower it. It is neutral to advanced fire elements.
    - Advanced wind based elements: would only strengthen it.
    - Earth based elements with lower boiling points: would be evaporated.

    Co-creator: Crutch Kaguya

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: It got declined once, what makes you think it would be approved now? It's just again fire variation again.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau



    Custom element Japanese name:
    Dojou

    Custom element English name:
    Soil Release

    The element is based on:
    Earth + Chakra Manipulation

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Soil is a natural body consisting of layers (soil horizons) that are primarily composed of minerals, mixed with at least some organic matter, which differ from their parent materials in their texture, structure, consistency, color, chemical, biological and other characteristics. It is the unconsolidated or loose covering of fine rock particles that covers the surface of the earth. Soil is referred to as regolith, or loose rock material that lies above the 'solid geology' Soil is composed of particles of broken rock (parent materials) which have been altered by physical, chemical and biological processes that include weathering with associated erosion. Soil is created from the alteration of parent material by the interactions between the lithosphere, hydrosphere, atmosphere, and biosphere It can also be considered a mixture of mineral and organic materials in the form of solids, gases and liquids. Soil forms a structure filled with pore spaces and can be thought of as a mixture of solids, water, and gases.

    Soil is different than the regular earth in naruto in many ways... Starting with the obvious.. Soil is not that much physical, and can be shaped. As Earth Can Not. Earth Has a solid structure preventing Water from passing. Soil Absorbs the water, making the soil heavier. Earth is not moist, (In most cases) As to Soil is indeed moist..In naruto they use earth jutsus, as they do live on an "Earth (Planet), the fact that we have seen varius types of earth being used.. (Quick Sand , Mud , and Swamp )...... Earth is a form of soil, solidified to be exact. Containing several layers of the ground as Earth is right above soil, in the bedrock chain...It is more dense than Sand, but Less dense than Mud.. And to top it off that Soil does indeed exist in that world and differs a great amount from Hard Earth and Soil (Soft Earth) Is that Ino family run a garden shop, and we have seen several times Ino, and her family using soil to plant , plants. Letting us know that soil indeed does exist in the naruto world and that soil is underneath the earth surface.

    How it works:
    It is very simple, and easy to control soil, As the same with earth jutsus, the user must have contact with the ground for (Most.. Depending on the jutsu) to achieve any Soil jutsus.. The user will simply manipulate their chakra and control the soil beneath the ground.. Or the user will simply manipulate and shape the earth that the user is standing on and change the nature of that earth from a Solidified Earth, to a Soft Type Earth (Soil) which is easy manipulable. The user can also channel their Soil Chakra through their body and release it from the body as well (Depending on the jutsu), Allowing free control over soil

    Usage Examples:

    (Dojou: Dojou nami) Soil Release: Soil Wave
    Type:AttacK
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user does 3 handseals and slam their hands on the ground, As their hands touch the ground, the user channels chakra into the ground, having soil erupt from the ground (Behind or Infront.. where the user choices) As the soil erupts from the ground, it takes on the form of a Tsunami Wave, The Soil Wave will then come crashing down from above towards the target


    (Dojou:Tatazumai shifuto) Soil Release: Shape Shifter
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short (Can Travel up to Long)
    Chakra:40 (+10 for each active turn)
    Damage:80
    Description: The user will do 3 handseals, ending with a unique handseal. The user will then cause the soil on the field to shape into the last handseal the user has down. Ex. If the user does the Bore Handseal last, the soil will form into a bore, The user can change the shape of the animal by doing the handseal of the animal he wishes to create. These animals can not exceed the height and width of 7 feet.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    -Must Have mastered Earth
    -Must Have Earth as a mastery on atleast one of your bios
    -Have Earth Mastered for atleast 4 Months

    Is weak to:
    Earth- Soil Is a loose Earth, Allowing physical earth to be able to pierce the soil
    Fire- Fire can easily burn soil
    Ice (Cold Tempatures)- Ice freezes the soil, not allowing me to manipulate it

    Is strong against:
    Water- Soil Absorbs the water
    Lightning-Soil Is already broken down, thus leaving lightning no room to do damage to soil. Thus being somewhat of a conductor to lightning
    Decay- Soil Is already a mixture of decay things, causing decay to have no affect on soil
    Roots: Soil gives nutrients to roots, thus allowing the soil to drain the water out the roots causing them to whither,

    Co-creator: -Venom-
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Being banned from submitting CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Jiseiton
    Custom element English name: Ferrofluid
    The element is based on: Water +Wind + Lightning + Earth

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Ferrofluid is a liquid that reacts to magnetic fields, its usually made up of oil, and thousands of tiny iron particles.
    In the manga, Toroi from Kumogakure would magnetise special shuriken. When the thrown shuriken comes into contact with any other object, it causes the struck target to become magnetised. One hit to the body will cause a magnetic field within the said body, making it an easy target for any further magnetised weapons to be drawn to it. However, each time the magnetism is transferred, it weakens. The third kazekage could manipulate iron powder using magnetism. This prooves that they are magnetic fields that can be created and manipulated. The toads of mount myobakuzan could create and control oil, as well as jiraiya. Mizukage could create oil like water. They were created using simply chakra. Iron is the fourth most common element in earths core, meaning it can be found in everyday earth jutsu. Third kazekage was also seen controlling iron powder which prooves iron can be found, controlled and manipulated, just the use of advamce chakra control. Ferrofluid itself can be found in speakers (x) and motors.

    How it works:
    The user creates ferrofluid by combining their water and earth chakra, creating a oil using water with iron particles, creating a dark liquid substance. The iron makes it magnetic.
    Lightning Release , due to the existence of electromagnetism, one of the four major forces in the universe, which causes the interaction between charged particles. The user uses wind release because as a good electrical insulator, it could be involved somehow in maintaining the magnetic field created by the electrical current or shaping it once it's created. With this, the iron particles inside the oil, those particles line up where the magnetic fields are strong in an attempt to fully allign with the fields themselves, the surface tension from the oil puts a limit on how far it can go.

    Usage Examples:

    (Jeiseiton: Messatsu Suishō)- Ferrofluidton release: Flight of the Obliteration
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user preforms 4 hand-seals and creates hardened ferrofluid in the air and surronding enviroment within a short-range radius around the target. He shapes them into a large amount of needles that simultaneously attack from all directions, Using the repellent force of magnetism, the speed of the bullets is rapidly increased after they are shot, making it extremley hard to avoid.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    - Completed Ninjutsu training
    - Completed Earth/Water/Wind/Lightning
    - Good chakra control

    Is weak to:
    • Water: Feroofluid clumps together when it comes into contact with water just like regular oil would.
    • Earth: Earth can contain/absorb the fluid, breaking down the water aand rendering it useless.
    • Magnetism: Anything that is magnetised would instantly attract ferrofluid to it, breaking the users control over it.
    • Reactive metals: Since ferrofluid is mostly oil, if it comes into contact with any reactive metal such as francium, it would of course combust and explode.


    Is strong against:
    • Lightning: Lightning has either a positive or negative charge, it can either repel lightning away from the ferrofluid, or attract it and cause the lightning to surge throughout the ferrofluid, turning against the user
    • Metals: It can magnetize metals on contact making it diffucult to break


    Co-creator: Negative Knight
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: There exists an iron CE and in the manga Iron Sand. There exists an oil CE and canon oil jutsus, but above all there exists a canon magnetism element. So you are already trespassing on more than one already existing field. You have no control over the magnetic fields, that's not inherent to the element. The only thing you have is apparently an oil with some iron in it, which I'm not going to accept as a new CE. The only way you could use that magnetic field is if you have a magnetism bio, which would be horribly inconvenient for a CE, and might not even be allowed. You will have no inherent control over the magnetic fields simply because that is already an existing KG.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Sutāe enerugī, スターエネルギー

    Custom element English name: Star Energy.

    The element is based on: Fire + Lightning Chakra Nature's.

    Fire give's it it's heat, and humidity. While the lightning Chakra gives it it's power, sharpness, and the edge over most ninjutsu. The two chakra natures combined create a powerful, bright, and colorful energy that most depict as power from the star's. Hence the name, star energy.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): There hae been several case's in which element's similar to this came up . for example, Scortch Release. That chakra nature is capable of heating up an enemy to the point where all the liquid inside their body evaporates, killing the victim and leaving them a desiccated corpse. Star energy is not too different i nature term's. But Star Energy also has a physical form, that can cause damage to anything due to it's heat and sharpness. Though we do not know much about scortch release, and what chakra nature's it uses, this proves that any ninja can come up with their own element by combining differen't natures.

    How it works: Every worthy shinobi know's that you'r element work's in different way's, and can be used in many different form's.

    Main Element Form: As Stated Before, Star Energy is a very bright and hot element. Just like a star, the element's power can blind you for a momen't by looking right at it, it is also very sharp, hot, and powerful. To be killed by this form of the elemen't would be a terrible way to go. Of course it's main form is fairly powerful.
    What the elemen't would look like:


    Secondary Elemen't Form: This is the alternate form of the elemen't that is more than attainable. This form can only cause harm to the eye's of a shinobi. By reducing the element's heat minimally, and leaving portion's of Raiton chakra in the element, it create's a very blinding light. Looking straight at this form of energy at a close range can definitely cause some serious damage to one's pupil's. But due to lack of stronger, or effective chakra it cannot cause physical harm to a body when touching it.

    The Specific Form: This is the most pure of th element's form's. It is also the strongest form. The elemen't is released without being substained by the user. This create's a very unstable elemen't, that is very hot, and is capable of imploding on itself at the user's command. This form is rarely used, as it is capable of harming the user with it's heat from even a distance.

    Now that the main form's of the elemen't have been described, itis time to learn of the effect's the elemen't is capabable of laying down on the opponent. Or in fact the uer themselve's.

    Main Release Effect's: If the victim is ever to be trapped, or caught in a Star Energy jutsu, and is exposed to the elemen't itself, some rash thing's will happen. The immediate burning of flesh, or anything the victim is wearing in an instant. If the technique is usd at an unbearable heat, this can happen very quickly. The evaporation of inner fluid's, and finally the complete oblideration of bone manner. Even one cannot withstand the power and heat of the element's main form.

    Secondary Release Effect's: This form is usually used to blind an opponent in an ongoing move. The brightness of this form is brighter than the other form's, due to intangibility, it does not need to maintain such power. If used widely, the elemen't can be controlled in a quick manner, to perform it quickly in an escape or counter attempt.

    Specific Release Effect's: As mentioned before, this is the most powerful form. It can be used in many differen't way's. To completely over power a differen't ninjutsu. There are two form's to this main form. Heat energy, which radiates from the actual element, and the original hot element form.

    Usage Examples:
    Main Elemen't Form:

    (Sutae Enerugi: Ikashita denryoku) Star Release: Harnessed Power.
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid.
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: Allows the user to materialize star energy out of thin air. The user can control this power at his/her will.

    -

    Secondary Elemen't Form:

    (Sutae Enerugi: Mabayui bakari ) Star Release: Blinding Light.
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long.
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user channel's Star Energy chakra throughout the body. And by using the bird handseal the secondary form of star energy is released for an instant in the opponent's line of sight, temporarily blinding them and causing strain on their eye's for one turn.

    Specific Element form:

    (Sutae Enerugi: Kyūkyoku no hakai) Star Release: Ultimate Destruction.
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long.
    Chakra Cost: 40.
    Damage Points: 80.
    Description: The user releases a huge amount of Star Energy toward the opponent. This energy is created mid-range from the user, or it could harm the user badly. The energy is unstable, but the user can direct it toward one direction. This jutsu will obliderate and burn/scortch anything in it's path. It will also kill any being too close due to the humidity surrounding the jutsu. The jutsu's form depict's an unstable wave of water.
    - Can ony be used once per batte.
    - Only A ranked and below Star Energy Techniques can be used for the rest of the battle.
    - If this jutsu is not within mid range of the user, it will kill them also.


    Idea behind it's creation: Let's be honest, all of the dull, and basic thought' fo element's have aready been taken. So I wanted to come up with something special for my taste. It may be a little far fetch'd, but in my opinion I was very creative.Which is key in a custom element.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Must be at least Kage rank, period. Must have mastered both fire nd lightning element's.

    Is weak to:

    Doton: A strong enough doton technique can stop a star tehnique without impact in it's path. Though Star Enrgy is Lightning Affiliated it is not pure, which mean's it is in a completely differen't form then lightning.

    Fuuton: A strong enough wind technique can redirct he star energy elemen't, or if it's that much more powerful a fuuton techniqu can rid of a star energy elemental technique.

    Is strong against:

    Suiton: Star energy is much to hot to be put up against a water technique. And because of it's blazing heat fro the combination of two hot element's, it will only evaporate ny water technique.

    Katon: Again, Star energy is much hotter then fire itself. So in a match between the two element's, Star Energy over-comes fire.

    Raiton: Star Energy is much more powerful then lightning alone. Due to it's heat and intangibility it also overcomes the lightning element.

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A


    ✗ Declined: I have no idea what your element now exactly is as you simply did not explain that. Apparently it's something bright and hot, but that's it, fire and lightning are also bright and hot and it can pretty much be applied to several other elements. It lacks something substantial. You never gave any real proof either that what you now say is possible, you just took two elements and added their qualities together and use the argument that elements can be joined together, but that's way too global. On top of that then you increase the power of those abilities, why would it be hotter than fire? And even if that was the case, that doesn't mean fire is weak against it. Also I do not like the way how you described its workings. That way it looks like you are describing different elements with all that main, secondary and specific stuff. The basis of your element is always the same, you are supposed to explain its qualities, but what you are doing is in fact explaining the working of potential jutsu's. Also don't refer to a CE as a KG.
    Custom element Japanese name: Sutāe enerugī, スターエネルギー

    Custom element English name: Star Energy.

    The element is based on: Fire + Lightning Chakra Nature's | Extreme chakra and elemental manipulation.

    Fire give's it it's heat, and humidity. While the lightning Chakra gives it it's power, sharpness, and the edge over most ninjutsu. The two chakra natures combined create a powerful, bright, and colorful energy that most depict as power from the star's. Hence the name, star energy.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): There has been several case's in which element's similar to this came up . for example, Scortch Release. That chakra nature is capable of heating up an enemy to the point where all the liquid inside their body evaporates, killing the victim and leaving them a desiccated corpse. Star energy is not too different in natures term's. But Star Energy also has a physical form, that can cause damage to anything due to it's heat and sharpness. It is a fairly simple element created by combining both fire and lightning chakra natures. And those two elements are very real in the world of Naruto.

    How it works: Every acceptable shinobi know's that your element work's in different way's, and can be used in many different forms.

    Main Element Form: As Stated Before, Star Energy is an element based on the intensity of fires heat combined with the extra edge that lightning is mainly used for. The main form of the element is an extremely bright and colorful substance which is why it's depicted as star energy. Though the brightness of the element is almost unbearable to the naked eye which is why it is separated from fire or lightning. The two elements combined create an almost unnecessary reaction in which the element is nearly impossible to look at for long periods of time, though one who harnesses the power of star energy usually has eyes specifically trained in order for the element to be un-harmful to their pupils. Long story short it would be like trying to look at the sun.

    In a physical state the element is not only hot, but has a piercing edge to it added by the lightning combination. This means that it can be strong against both wind and earth, plus when combined it is much to hot to be put up against water techniques. Much like scorch release water will be incinerated if it gets too close. On a side note, what causes it to burn hotter than fire is it's lightning properties, as you know Lightning is hotter than the sun. I think that is enough said.
    What the element would look like:


    Secondary Elemen't Form: This is the alternte form of the elemen't that is usable. This form can only cause harm to the eye's of a shinobi. By reducing the element's heat minimally, and leaving portion's of Raiton chakra in the element, it create's a very blinding light. Looking straight at this form of energy at a close range can definitely cause some serious damage to one's pupil's. But due to lack of stronger, or effective hakra it cannot cause physical harm to a body when touching it.

    The Specific Form: This is the most pure of the element's form's. It is also the strongest form. The element is released without being substained by the user. This creates a very unstable and dangerous form of the element, that is very dangerous, and is capable of imploding on itself at the user's command. This form is rarely used, as it is capable of harming the user with it's heat from even a distance.

    Main effects the element will have if it comes in contact with someone or something else:

    Main Release Effect's: If the victim is ever to be trapped, or caught in a Star Energy jutsu, and is exposed to the element itself, some rash thing's will happen. The immediate burning of flesh, or anything the victim is wearing in an instant. Unlike fire as to where it will take time to burn, this will completely incinerate everything from existence. If the technique is at an unbearable heat, this can happen very quickly. The evaporation of inner fluid's, and finally the complete obliteration of bone manner. No one can withstand the power and heat of the element's main form.

    Secondary Release Effect's: This form is usually used to blind an opponent in an ongoing move. The brightness of this form is brighter than the other form's, due to intangibility, it does not need to maintain such power. If used widely, the element can be controlled in a quick manner, to perform it quickly in an escape or counter attempt.

    Specific Release Effect's: As mentioned before, this is the most powerful form. It can be used in many different ways to completely over power a different ninjutsu. There are two form's to this main form. Heat and energy which radiates from the actual element and usually results in an explosion. And extreme heat and intangibility which will burn/incinerate everything in its path.

    Usage Examples:
    Main Elemen't Form:

    (Sutae Enerugi: Ikashita denryoku) Star Release: Harnessed Power.
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid.
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: Allows the user to materialize star energy out of thin air. The user can control this power at his/her will.

    -

    Secondary Elemen't Form:

    (Sutae Enerugi: Mabayui bakari ) Star Release: Blinding Light.
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long.
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user channel's Star Energy chakra throughout the body. And by using the bird handseal the secondary form of star energy is released for an instant in the opponent's line of sight, temporarily blinding them and causing strain on their eye's for one turn.

    Specific Element form:

    (Sutae Enerugi: Kyūkyoku no hakai) Star Release: Ultimate Destruction.
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long.
    Chakra Cost: 40.
    Damage Points: 80.
    Description: The user releases a huge amount of Star Energy toward the opponent. This energy is created mid-range from the user, or it could harm the user badly. The energy is unstable, but the user can direct it toward one direction. This jutsu will obliderate and burn/scortch anything in it's path. It will also kill any being too close due to the humidity surrounding the jutsu. The jutsu's form depict's an unstable wave of water.
    - Can ony be used once per batte.
    - Only A ranked and below Star Energy Techniques can be used for the rest of the battle.
    - If this jutsu is not within mid range of the user, it will kill them also.


    (Sutae Enerugi: Hoshi no bakuhatsu) Star Release: Star explosion.
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long.
    Chakra Cost: 40.
    Damage Points: 80.
    Description: The user performs 5 handseals and releases large amounts of star energy within mid-range of him/her and fairly close to the opponent. On the indication of a last and single handseal the highly explosive and dangerous element will explode in a wide area (mid-range radius) slightly damaging the user and injuring the victim severely.
    Note: Usable once per-battle
    Note: -15 damage to the user.


    Idea behind it's creation: Let's be honest, all of the dull, and basic thoughts for element's have already been taken. So I wanted to come up with something special for my taste. It may be a little far fetched, but in my opinion I was very creative.Which is key in a custom element.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Must be at least Kage rank, period. Must have mastered both fire and lightning element's.

    Is weak to:

    Fire: Fire is still capable of smothering Star Release and eating away at it's energy due to taking in large amounts of Oxygen at a time.

    Lightning: Though Star release contains lightning properties, in the long run lightning is still allot sharper and is capable of cutting through the main forms of Star Release.

    Sand: Star release cannot burn through Sand, instead sand will smother it resulting in the element dying out.

    Is strong against:

    Earth: In most of it's forms Star energy still possesses the piercing ability of lightning, thus being high

    Wind: Again, Star energy is much hotter then fire itself. So in a very similar fashion it will eat up Oxygen extremely quickly, actually faster than fire itself in order to stay alive. Therefore Fuuton is no match for Star Energy.

    Water: Incinerates it.

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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    ✗ Declined: The same comments as last time still apply. You just say that you mix fire and lightning together, however you do not provide any kind of proof that if you combine those two together, you obtain these results. You simply made that up and consequently any abilities it has you just took from the elements it consisted of. As long as you can't provide proof that by mixing these two elements together you get this result, it will never be approved.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Resubmitting, made it gaseous only, changed minor things:

    Quote Originally Posted by -Cobalt- View Post

    Custom element Japanese name: Lachrimuton

    Custom element English name: Lachrymator Release

    The element is based on: Water Release + Earth Release + Fire Release + Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Lachrymators (more commonly known as eye irritants) are (not necessarily) gaseous substances which stimulate nerves causing pain and various harmful side effects (chemical rashes, damage to the ocular nerves etc.). In the series we’ve seen things which create the same or similar effects to people. A perfect example of that is the chili bomb shown in the filler arc where Jiraya and Naruto fight the conch king. The chili bomb causes pain on minimal levels breaking the villagers out of Genjutsu. This is the in relation to the chili bombs only at a much higher destructive level.

    We've seen other types of projectiles/bombs which release gasses that deal damage to the target. Smoke bombs can cause suffocation and temporary blindness, the 5 Senses Confusion Disorder which messes with the targets senses disorienting them.

    Even though I've mentioned only gasses here, my element will be liquid thus why it requires Water Release for it's creation. We've seen all kinds of liquids in the anime starting from water, alcohol etc. Since we've seen these we can assume that something like lachrymators exist in the Narutoverse.

    How it works:
    Tear gas works by irritating mucous membranes in the eyes, nose, mouth and lungs, and causes crying, sneezing, coughing, difficulty breathing, pain in the eyes, temporary blindness, etc. Lachrymators are thought to act by attacking sulfhydryl functional groups in enzymes. One of the most probable protein targets is the TRPA1 ion channel that is expressed in sensory nerves (trigeminal nerve) of the eyes, nose and mouth.


    Lachrymators are eye irritants. The main purpose of this element is to create harm to the opponent by damaging their eyes and respiratory system meaning it’s mainly an offensive element. Using the nature chakra types Water, Earth and Fire the user is able to create these dangerous substances. The water part of the element would manifest the form of the element. This element will be created in a liquid state. Utilizing water chakra the user creates the liquid which upon touch can lead to these uncomfortable effects. The user will even have the ability to turn existing water into a lachrymator (only if no foreign chakra is present inside the water) and then further develop the liquid.

    The second element required for the creation of Lachrymators is Earth Release. After creating the liquid, the user uses Earth release to bring forth the substances required to create the harmful effects, so Earth is the element that gives the lachrymators damage.

    The last element in order is Fire Release. Utilizing fire chakra after the water and earth part, the user uses the fire chakra to evaporate the harmful substances of the liquid sending them into the air, creating a sorts of pyro distillation leaving behind only regular water, while the harmful substances are released into the air as an aerosol (aerosol- suspension of liquid droplets, resembling them as if they were released from a spray can.).

    In summary, water creates the body for the liquid, earth draws in and creates the required minerals and fire brings it all together evaporating the liquid, releasing the substance into the air.

    If you’ve ever faced tear gas or something similar to it you should know how fast the effects kick in. When the target indirectly inhales the substance (so no direct contact is made between the skin and liquid) the effects are less lethal but still dangerous. Through indirect contact by inhalation the target would feel an extremely uncomfortable, painful “itch” in his mouth, nose and throat stimulating defensive reflexes such as coughing and sneezing, and also the eyes which causes tearing. After longer indirect exposure the target will get a headache along with dizziness and nausea, resulting in loss consciousness after longer exposure to the substance.

    The effects of direct exposure to the liquid are much worse than the indirect exposure. When the liquid is directly released at the opponent it causes the same effects only at a much higher rate. The respiratory system will be attacked, causing different kind of aches in the chestal area (lungs) making it difficult to breathe while also attacking the remaining respiratory system (mouth, nose) along with nausea and overall weakness. If the targets eyes are directly exposed to the liquid the damage to the ocular nerves can be so big the target can turn blind and lose it’s eyesight, though that is only with direct contact. The target will also feel a burning sensation in his eyes making it difficult to see, only water being able to rid of these effects in time.

    Regarding the looks of the element, it would be a translucent, odourless liquid just like water. This element can be considered a counterpart of Perfume Release. While Perfume has the task to attract opponents and lure them in through mild and attractive smells, lachrymators have the task to repel and damage the opponent in the most brutal ways. The users of this style do feel the effects of this element but only in small, unsignificant levels which do not cause great harm.

    The liquid has a wide variety of properties such as inducing genjutsu, dealing basic damage, small amounts of toxicity and similar. Here is a full list of effects lachrymators can cause:

    -stinging and burning of the eyes, nose, mouth, and skin
    -excessive tearing
    -blurred vision
    -runny nose
    -salivation (drooling)
    -exposed tissue may develop a rash and a chemical burn
    -coughing and difficulty breathing, including a feeling of choking
    -disorientation and confusion, which may lead to panic
    -intense anger

    The element will be created either through the users own chakra by expelling it from his mouth and/or body, by turning existing water into the liquid through the usage of chakra, or by using the users own chakra to manifest the liquid on the field. It is equally versatile as water so the user will be able to do the same things with this element. Due to being able to expel the liquid through their body the user is mostly immune to the effects of the lachrymators, feeling only slight effects which don't harm the user at a noticable scale.

    Like all elements in the Narutoverse, Lachrymator Release will have three forms.

    Main Release:

    Techniques of the main release are basic manipulation of Lachrymators allowing the user to create waves, blasts, vortexes, orbs and other constructions of the liquid. The liquid created with the main release will have all of the above mentioned effects (temporary blindness, stinging and burning of eyes, skin, nose, mouth etc.). The user will have great versatility with the techniques of the main release.

    Alternative Release:

    Techniques of the alternative release have different effects than the basic techniques. Unlike the main release, the alternative release will not aim to create harm to the opponent but rather induce other effects. Using the alternative release, the user will create low-level concentration of the harmful liquid, making it less painful but with the aerosol released into the air having the users chakra, the user will be able to induce genjutsu using the alternative release in a almost undetectable way. These techniques will not cause any actual harm to the opponent though they will notice minor effects of the aerosol such as a slight stinging feeling in their nose and mouth.

    Advanced Release:

    The advanced release utilizes fine chakra manipulation and creation of liquid from the users body. Using this the user will be able to break out of genjutsu by tingling his nerves with the substances thus causing a reaction which would be an equivalent to pain. The user can also use the advanced release to cleanse his body from any other harmful substances that may have entered his body such as poison and similar.

    Usage Examples:


    Lachrymator Release: Sweat it off | Lachrimuton: Ase Sorre Ofu
    Type: Offensive/ Defensive
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15 (-5 to keep active each turn)
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user focuses his chakra throughout his body turning his sweat into a lachrymator. This technique is mainly used in melee range in order to harm the opponent and gain the upper hand in close combat. This is a passive technique, which once activated remains active for the remainder of the battle unless the user cancels it.
    Note: Once activated lasts for the remainder of the battle unless cancelled.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.

    Lachrymator Release: Spray | Lachrimuton: Funsha
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs two hand seals and channels his chakra to his mouth, expelling a lachrymator from his mouth in the form of a quick stream which spreads further as it travels further thus covering an expansive area. The user can use a fire technique to ignite the lachrymator liquid intensifying the effects of it.
    Note: Usable 4 times per battle.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.

    Lachrymator Release: Water Conversion Technique | Lachrimuton: Sui Kaishin No Jutsu
    Type: Supplementary/ Offensive
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user focuses his chakra into any present water on the field and turns it into a lachrymator which he can then manipulate to induce the effects of the liquid. Any water can be transformed unless it has no foreign chakra present in it.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.



    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Water Release, Fire Release and Earth Release along with accurate chakra control.

    Is weak to:

    Water Release and Water based elements: Too much water and water based elements (which are utilized as liquids) can overpower the substances in the liquid neutralizing them and leaving regular water behind. An equal amount of water proportional to the liquid is required to neutralize the harmful substances.

    Lightning Release and Lightning based elements: The liquid conducts electricity just like regular water, but due to its properties the lightning diffuses the substances in the liquid leaving normal water behind. Lightning can also be used to distillate the liquid, releasing the harmful substances into the air.

    Earth Release and Earth based elements: Lachrymators in any state can be contained by Earth or Earth based Elements. Yet it can work as a double edged sword. If the Earth isn't thick enough, it will be infused with the lachrymator stopping the liquid though not preventing the harmful substances evaporated in the air.

    Is strong against:

    Fire Release and Fire based elements: Fire only strengthens the substances in the liquid, intensifying the effects. The liquid is also highly flammable making it similar to oil in these matters.

    Wind Release and Wind based elements: Wind spreads the substances through the air increasing its overall range but lowering its concentration. The substances will be blown away for the duration of the wind technique.

    Organic elements: Wood, Mushrooms and anything similar to that, lachrymators poison the plants when absorbed by them.

    Water Release and Water based elements: Working as a double edged sword, a unsufficient amount of water will only further spread the liquid increasing it's overall amount.

    Co-creator: Gutsy Jiraya

    Students I’ve passed this onto:


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    ✗ Declined: Overall I find your explanation just going around the bush and on the crucial parts you go over it too easy. All your examples are gasses and then you just 'jump' to a liquid state, which is quite different as it's not because as a gas it has those qualities, it has them as a liquid. Also just transforming it into such a complex chemical substance as, what is in fact tear gas, you do it way too easy.



    Custom element Japanese name: Lachrimuton

    Custom element English name: Lachrymator Release

    The element is based on: Wind Release + Earth Release + Fire Release + Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Lachrymators (more commonly known as eye irritants) are (not necessarily) gaseous substances which stimulate nerves causing pain and various harmful side effects (chemical rashes, damage to the ocular nerves etc.). In the series we’ve seen things which create the same or similar effects to people. A perfect example of that is the chili bomb shown in the filler arc where Jiraya and Naruto fight the conch king. The chili bomb causes pain on minimal levels breaking the villagers out of Genjutsu. This is the in relation to the chili bombs only at a much higher destructive level.

    We've seen other types of projectiles/bombs which release gasses that deal damage to the target. Smoke bombs can cause suffocation and temporary blindness, the 5 Senses Confusion Disorder which messes with the targets senses disorienting them.


    How it works:
    Tear gas works by irritating mucous membranes in the eyes, nose, mouth and lungs, and causes crying, sneezing, coughing, difficulty breathing, pain in the eyes, temporary blindness, etc. Lachrymators are thought to act by attacking sulfhydryl functional groups in enzymes. One of the most probable protein targets is the TRPA1 ion channel that is expressed in sensory nerves (trigeminal nerve) of the eyes, nose and mouth.


    Lachrymators are eye irritants. The main purpose of this element is to create harm to the opponent by damaging their eyes and respiratory system meaning it’s mainly an offensive element. Using the nature chakra types Wind, Earth and Fire the user is able to create these dangerous substances. The wind part of the element would manifest the form of the element. This element will be created in a gaseous state. Utilizing wind chakra the user creates the gas which upon contact can lead to these uncomfortable effects.

    The second element required for the creation of Lachrymators is Earth Release. After preparing the form for the tear gas, Earth release is what brings in the mineral substances required for the creation of tear gas. These mineral substances are give damage to the gas, Earth Release is the engine of lachrymators as it offers all the required substances for the creation of tear gas.

    The last element in order is Fire Release. Utilizing fire chakra after the wind and earth part, the user uses the fire chakra to enhance the effects of the mineral substances infused into the wind to create the gas.

    In summary, wind creates the body for the gas, earth draws in and creates the required minerals and fire enhances the effects.

    If you’ve ever faced tear gas or something similar to it you should know how fast the effects kick in. When the target indirectly inhales the substance (so no direct contact is made between the skin and gas) the effects are less lethal but still dangerous. Through indirect contact by inhalation the target would feel an extremely uncomfortable, painful “itch” in his mouth, nose and throat stimulating defensive reflexes such as coughing and sneezing, and also the eyes which causes tearing. After longer indirect exposure the target will get a headache along with dizziness and nausea, resulting in loss consciousness after longer exposure to the substance.

    The effects of direct exposure to the gas are much worse than the indirect exposure. When the gas is directly released at the opponent it causes the same effects only at a much higher rate. The respiratory system will be attacked, causing different kind of aches in the chestal area (lungs) making it difficult to breathe while also attacking the remaining respiratory system (mouth, nose) along with nausea and overall weakness. If the targets eyes are directly exposed to the gas the damage to the ocular nerves can be so big the target can turn blind and lose it’s eyesight, though that is only with direct contact. The target will also feel a burning sensation in his eyes making it difficult to see, only water being able to rid of these effects in time.

    Regarding the looks of the element, it would be a very hard to spot gas but if one looks hard enough they could notice the gas. This element can be considered a counterpart of Perfume Release. While Perfume has the task to attract opponents and lure them in through mild and attractive smells, lachrymators have the task to repel and damage the opponent in the most brutal ways. The users of this style do feel the effects of this element but only in small, unsignificant levels which do not cause great harm.

    The liquid has a wide variety of properties such as inducing genjutsu, dealing basic damage, small amounts of toxicity and similar. Here is a full list of effects lachrymators can cause:

    -stinging and burning of the eyes, nose, mouth, and skin
    -excessive tearing
    -blurred vision
    -runny nose
    -salivation (drooling)
    -exposed tissue may develop a rash and a chemical burn
    -coughing and difficulty breathing, including a feeling of choking
    -disorientation and confusion, which may lead to panic
    -intense anger

    The element will be created either through the users own chakra by expelling it from his mouth and/or body or creating it on the field (proper restrictions will be made). It is equally versatile as wind so the user will be able to do the same things with this element (releasing blasts, waves, bullets, shots of tear gas or simply manifesting the gas). Due to being able to expel the gas through their body the user is mostly immune to the effects of the lachrymators, feeling only slight effects which don't harm the user at a noticable scale.

    Like all elements in the Narutoverse, Lachrymator Release will have three forms.

    Main Release:

    Techniques of the main release are basic manipulation of Lachrymators allowing the user to create blades, blasts, vortexes, orbs and other constructions of the gas (basically anything that can be done with wind). The gas created with the main release will have all of the above mentioned effects (temporary blindness, stinging and burning of eyes, skin, nose, mouth etc.). The user will have great versatility with the techniques of the main release.

    Alternative Release:

    Techniques of the alternative release have different effects than the basic techniques. Unlike the main release, the alternative release will not aim to create harm to the opponent but rather induce other effects. Using the alternative release, the user will create low-level concentration of the harmful gas, making it less painful but with the aerosol released into the air having the users chakra, the user will be able to induce genjutsu using the alternative release in a almost undetectable way. These techniques will not cause any actual harm to the opponent though they will notice minor effects of the aerosol such as a slight stinging feeling in their nose and mouth.

    Advanced Release:

    The advanced release utilizes fine chakra manipulation and creation of the gas from the users body. Using this the user will be able to break out of genjutsu by tingling his nerves with the substances thus causing a reaction which would be an equivalent to pain. The user can also use the advanced release to cleanse his body from any other harmful substances that may have entered his body such as poison and similar.

    Usage Examples:


    Lachrymator Release: Sweat it off | Lachrimuton: Ase Sorre Ofu
    Type: Offensive/ Defensive
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15 (-5 to keep active each turn)
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user focuses his chakra throughout his body turning his sweat into a lachrymator. This technique is mainly used in melee range in order to harm the opponent and gain the upper hand in close combat. This is a passive technique, which once activated remains active for the remainder of the battle unless the user cancels it.
    Note: Once activated lasts for the remainder of the battle unless cancelled.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.

    Lachrymator Release: Spray | Lachrimuton: Funsha
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs two hand seals and channels his chakra to his mouth, expelling a lachrymator from his mouth in the form of thick mist which spreads further as it travels further thus covering an expansive area. The user can use a fire technique to ignite the lachrymator gas intensifying the effects of it.
    Note: Usable 4 times per battle.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.

    Lachrymator Release: Water Conversion Technique | Lachrimuton: Sui Kaishin No Jutsu
    Type: Supplementary/ Offensive
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user focuses his chakra into any present water on the field and turns it into a lachrymator which he can then manipulate to induce the effects of the liquid. Any water can be transformed unless it has no foreign chakra present in it.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.



    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Wind Release, Fire Release and Earth Release along with accurate chakra control.

    Is weak to:

    Lightning Release and Lightning based elements: Due to its properties the lightning diffuses the substances in the gas leaving nothing behind and removing the harmful substances.

    Earth Release and Earth based elements: Lachrymators in any state can be contained by Earth or Earth based elements, yet it can work as a double edged sword. If the Earth isn't thick enough, it will be infused with the lachrymator stopping the gas though not preventing the harmful substances evaporated in the air.

    Is strong against:

    Fire Release and Fire based elements: Fire only strengthens the substances in the gas, intensifying the effects. The gas is also highly flammable making it similar to propane in these matters.

    Water Release and Water based elements: The gas, when in touch with water is infused into the water creating large amounts of lachrymator liquids. Water basically cannot do anything to the lachrymators.

    Organic elements: Wood, Mushrooms and anything similar to that, lachrymators poison the plants when absorbed by them.

    Is neutral to:
    Wind Release and Wind based elements- An equal ranked Wind technique can counter Lachrymators, neutralizing the substances.

    Co-creator: Gutsy Jiraya

    Students I’ve passed this onto:


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    ✗ Declined: People by now should have learned that I only allow one form of an element, not two, still you are explaining in great lengths gasses and liquids. I do not accept either comments that say you become immune to your CE and no there is no such thing as all elements in the Narutoverse having 3 forms, that's something annoying NB members made up for their CE. The explanation of "using earth for the minerals" doesn't make much sense either, what does that even mean?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Totally revamped the description of the technique.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kirabi View Post

    Custom element Japanese name: Suraimuton
    Custom element English name: Slime Release
    The element is based on: Water | Earth | Lightning
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    In Naruto, we've seen multiple techniques that create a rather unique substance. Let's take Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field for example, the user creates a high viscosity liquid that gains adhesive properties, keeping the opponent immobilized. Of course we have the Lava Element created from the use of Earth and Fire. Techniques of that caliber would create an molten earth that was many degrees hotter then normal fire. Earth techniques themselves have a wide range o techniques that are used to stop opponents movements. Mainly the Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld technique that creates a chakra infused mud that would make even the largest summon become a sitting duck.With our Lightning Release, it wide-known belief that the use of the element can manipulate the atoms of of technique at the subatomic level. If one were to manipulate the mixture of the earth and water chakras, one could essential create a new substance in doing so. We've also seen techniques that could disintegrate the opponent this exclusively being the dust release that with the Earth, Fire, and Wind elements can destroy someone into subatomic particles within a three dimensional space. The Earth Element itself was aslo able to turn Zetsu's body into stone, showing how changing the body atomic structure works with this element. Its within these contexts that Slime Release exist.

    How it works:

    By combining earth, water, and lightning chakras in equal amounts the user begins to manipulate the substance insdie of himself or even the terrain into a source for further techniques. The newly created gelatinous mass can be used for a number of things. First the techniques are highly reactive to the Fire Elements as it ignites the combination of the Earth and Lightning, and could essentially be made to explode if prolonged to too much fire. If one were to scatter the slime in a area, the slime would slowly group together potentially creating a large source that the user can manipulate and attack the opponent with. Since the chakras coexist with one another the substance itself is also very elastic and getting trapped would mean being immobilized with almost no hope of getting away. Most Slime techniques will continue to try and regroup into a centralized location thanks to the lightning chakra attracting themselves to one another. Due to the slime unique chakra mixture the techniques also can serve to "eat" opponent's whole, as the substance's highly reactive mix eats away at the opponents skin, however this is a very slow process and within 2 turns of capture a opponent can become dissolved into slime. There is also the possibility of the technique encounter with Lightning, should this happen though, the slime will lose its corrosiveness only for a gas to be released and if one were to breath this in they would turn to stone as the particles released from the technique bond with the opponent much like Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Added Weight Rock Technique.

    Slime Releases main uses come to flooding the field with it's mass, and pressuring the opponent enough to catch them off guard in an effort to bind the opponent, giving the user almost a free shot at victory if skilled enough. However, because the technique of this style are able to even harm the user the opponent could even use the own element to his advantage.

    Usage Examples:

    Suraimuton| Suraimu no Jutsu - [Slime Release| Slime Monster Technique]
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short - Mid (Long Range if two A-rank Slime Technqiues Combine)
    Chakra: 30 (+ 5 per turn to maintain)
    Damage: 60
    Description: The signature technique of Slime Release, the user generate a large amount of his slime chakra before releasing five large wads of slime that will then combine into one slime monster about the size of Part II Gamakichi, with two arms and a large mouth with no other features that are distinguishable. This mass will eventually grow as more slime is created not stopping it is destroyed. Although this monster moves slowly but its fluid like body enables it to stretch and expand limited to the size of the technique eventually stretching to long range if a technique of equal rank is combined into it. This technique can also be the source for other Slime Jutsu however to create more of itself it will need to eat earth in order to grow and becoming immobile although his body cans till be used for other techniques. However the user is only able to maintain the monster for up to 3 turns and then must wait to preform the technique a second time, being limited to twice per battle.
    (Can Only be used twice per battle)
    (Last three turns)
    (User must wait three turns before reactivating this technique.)

    Suraimuton| Odeibomu no Jutsu - [Slime Release| Sludge Bomb Technique]
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will weave three handseals Monkey - Rat - Dragon and then using a pre-exisiting source or creating a large bubble of slime from his stomach the user launches the technique in a arc above the opponent, before the lastly creating the tiger seal the bubble splits into 5 basketball size fireballs and will proceed to explode in the area around the opponent lasting up until the end of the user next a full turn before during so, as the bubbles bounces towards the opponent.
    (Usable 2 times per battle)
    (There can only be 5 sludge bombs present at one time)

    Conditions to be able to use it: This element is very dangerous and could even cause damage to the user if not used correctly. This being said, it takes a person who as considerable knowledge in elemental ninjutsu and must have mastered the Water, Earth, and Lightning elements.

    Is weak to: Water - The slime element, despite being made of water could eventually diffuse the possible reaction between the three elements causing the techniques to be able to get washed away usually canceling each other out as the slime and water dissolve.

    Fire - The techniques of this element are highly reactive to the fire element and could be made to explode prematurely if prolonged to fire for over 1 turn which could damage the both the user and opponent if too close.

    Is strong against:

    Wind - The element's combination give it maximum durability and elasticity thus common wind jutsu that aim to penetrate or cut the element don't realize the element will continue forward as it recollects itself. This makes itself to circumvent most wind techniques, although substantial force can push it backwards, the element will still recollect itself within one turn until properly destroyed.

    Earth - The substances corrosivness often time will quickly destroy most earth techniques that would serve to impede it's movement, although a large amount of earth would take longer to corrode then a row of earth spikes. By then turning the earth into a source of "food" the element is able to generate more of itself as the earth get converted into more material.

    Lightning- The lightning element is useless against the element as the lightning could cause a unique reaction in which case the corrosive properties of the element turn into a gas that will petrify an opponent body, and could possibly turn them into stone, however the user must also be wary of this as well otherwise they may become turned to stone as well.

    Co-creator: Icemyster
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: This an element only in name with no contents. That slime of yours can't fall back on anything that corresponds with it, most its abilities you just added yourself without any basis. The explanation you gave to how you make it isn't good either as then you could pretty much make anything.
    Custom element Japanese name: Suraimuton
    Custom element English name: Slime Release
    The element is based on: Earth + Water + Lightning
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    Within the context of the manga, we've seen the earth nature compose many powerful new elemental forms. Advanced elements with Earth as the basis of the element show that Slime Release as indeed possible as most of it's techniques and abilities are derived from certain aspects of them. We've seen everything from Magnet Release, Dust Release and even the previously approved Gel and Mud Release. Slime release is possible through understanding of all of these combinations stated and combining them into one. Mud Release is a element that combines the Water and Earth elements together into one to create a chakra-enhanced mud that can be hard to escape once caught Swamp of the Underworld is a prime example of such a technique outside of Mud Release that further provided proof in the manga how such a element is possible. With our next elemental combination of Earth and Lightning you create Magnet Release, producing magnetic waves user of the style use their chakra able to cause things to be attracted to one another. This nature of attraction outlines another of the prime abilities of Slime Release and how it functions on the battlefield. Dust Release is another original combination that breaks down the objects within its space to a subatomic level and shows it is possible to do so with other elements as well. Lava Release has even been shown to be able to create Rubber and elastic material that stretches and bends. Lastly Gel release already has proven it is possible within the Narutoverse to create a jelly-like element that is unique in it's very own way and Slime Releases creation is nearly identical to it. These prove the elements creation and abilites are indeed possible with the Naruto World.

    How it works:

    Slime Release is an elastic jelly-like element that is created by combining Earth, Lightning, and Water chakras all in equal amounts and thus allowing them to coexist and create the new element with a variety of uses. The Earth and Water chakras form the basis of the element which would normally turn the elements into Mud, however during the process as the lightning is introduced the now meshed chakra the user increases the vibrations at which the chakrs combine resulting in the creation of slime that's able to stretch, bend, and expand at the user will. As the gelatinous mass is introduced to the field its structure allows it to bounce around towards the opponent in a attempt to bind and subdue him. Another unique property of the element stems from the lightning within the mixture which causes the slime to slowly gather over time; the larger sources acting as a beacon within the element and thus eventually the grouping the slime together to become a single mass and/or source or for further jutsu. However, this is a slow moving process and can take up to a full turn for slime in the area to reach a centralized location if coming from mid-range and up to two if coming from long-range. Much like any advanced technique there are drawbacks as reactions to certain techniques can harm anyone after it's creation as this unique combination is an unstable mixture is made up of elements that normally counteract one another. Whenever it touches the skin of an opponent it will slowly burn away the skin dissolving it before there very eyes as thee dense chakra burns away the skin. Further more, the jutsu of this style are highly reactive to the fire element and any prolonged exposure to the element can causes a reaction to "sparked" by the lightning chakra and causing a violent explosion. Further more, should a foreign electrical current be introduced to the already reactive element, the substance itself ends up reacting in a way it turns into a petrifying gas that if inhaled has similar effects to Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique essentially able to turn the user and opponent into stone. This element however is neutralized when introduced to more water and in doing so the earth chakra will no longer be able to sustain itself and the mixture will dissolve harmlessly. The globules are described as having a mind of their own. When touched, the phlegm surrounds and engulfs the person, trapping them and have been shown to take on many shapes, such a forming a hand to pick up and throw around enemies.

    Usage Examples:

    Katon x Suraimuton| Odeibomu no Jutsu - [Fire x Slime Release| Sludge Bomb Technique]
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will weave three handseals Monkey - Rat - Dragon and gathering the chakrainto the base of his stomach and until letting loose a large bubble of slime from that arcs towards an opponent. As it arcs above a single Horse handseal can be made splitting the bubble into five separate bubbles above the opponent. Or he may choose to activate the dormant fire chakra laced within the technique with a single tiger seal that will proceed to explode in the area around the opponent. However the fire chakra will only last up until the end of the user next turn before the slime will detonate at the user whim or not due to the unstable element.
    (Usable 2 times per battle)
    (There can only be 5 sludge bombs present at one time)

    Suraimuton| Suraimu no Jutsu - [Slime Release| Slime Monster Technique]
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short - Mid (Long Range if two A-rank Slime Techniques Combine)
    Chakra: 30 (+ 5 per turn to maintain)
    Damage: 60
    Description: The signature technique of Slime Release, the user generates a large amount of his slime chakra in his stomach and will then release a large wad that jam-packed with chakra causing it to rapidly expand into a monster about the size of Part II Gamakichi. With two arms and a large mouth with no other features that are distinguishable, it will eventually grow as more slime is created not stopping until it is destroyed. Although this monster moves slowly, its elastic body enables it to stretch and expand limited to the size of the technique eventually stretching to long range if a technique of equal rank is combined into it. This technique can also be the source for other Slime Jutsu however it will grow smaller and it's range will be limited. As it require constant chakra to control, the user is only able to maintain the monster for up to 3 turns and then must wait to preform the technique a second time, being limited to doing so twice per battle.
    (Can Only be used twice per battle)
    (Last three turns)
    (User must wait three turns before reactivating this technique.)

    Conditions to be able to use it:

    This element is very dangerous and could even cause damage to the user if not used correctly. This being said, it takes a person who as considerable knowledge in elemental ninjutsu and must have mastered the Water, Earth, and Lightning elements.

    Is weak to:

    Lightning Release - As the foreign current interferes with the slime, the mixture of earth and water end up "evaporating" into a thick gas and, should one inhale this gas, the affects on the body can be deadly as the opponent/user become petrified as the particles latch onto the inside of the body petrifying the user and or opponent, however the user/enemy can still prevent this by shocking themselves and destroying the particles beforehand.

    Water Release - Adding more water to the technique is the most efficient way to get rid of the user's Slime Jutsu. The element eventually becomes unable to maintain it's jelly-like state as more water is added to it, until finally it becomes a full liquid and dissolves as if it was never there.

    Fire Release - Prolonged exposure to the fire release jutsu, causes the water and earth chakra inside the technique to mix into a more oil like state as it melts down due to the intense heat. this leaves the lightning chakra to act as a catalyst and it "sparks" a reaction to where the oil violently explodes much like the power of Blast Release techniques .

    Is strong against:

    Wind - The element's combination give it maximum durability and elasticity thus common wind jutsu that aim to penetrate or cut the element don't realize the element will continue forward as it recollects itself. This makes able to circumvent most wind techniques, although substantial force can push it backwards, the element will still recollect itself until properly destroyed.

    Earth - The substances corrosivness often time will quickly destroy most earth techniques that would serve to impede it's movement, although a large amount of earth would take longer to corrode then a row of earth spikes. By then turning the earth into a source of "food" the element is able to generate more of itself as the earth get converted into more material.

    Co-creator: Icemyster
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Don't submit this again as I'm getting quite sick of it. In the end you just threw some stuff together which apparently is supposed to make some kind of super slime, which I already find quite unreasonable and far from logical. On top of that you just ditch abilities on it that seems convenient.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Renjiton

    Custom element English name: Dielectric Heating (Microwave) Release

    The element is based on: Raiton, Futon, Good chakra control.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Powerful Katon jutsu, and Lava jutsu can melt down substances.

    How it works: Microwave release is revolving around the same concept as the microwave oven. It is consisted of a technical oven like environment with a closed wind chamber (made with the help of wind chakra) which is then bombarded by non-ionizing electromagnetic radiation in the microwave spectrum (created by raiton chakra particles). This causes the polarized molecules of anything that comes into contact with the chakra to rotate and build up thermal energy, in a process known as dielectric heating. The chakra itself is transparent, but can be seen by the vibrations it causes to the environment. It produces an high frequency sound.

    Usage Examples:

    Renjiton: Renjiken [Microwave Release: Microwave Sword]
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will open his palm to produce microwave chakra around it. He will then close his fist, forcing the microwave chakra into a small cylender (resembling a handle), and then release the chakra from between the index and the closed thumb, as a straight line, that can reach till mid range, melting anything it comes in contact with. The technique can stay active till the end of the turn.
    -Can only use Raiton and Futon chakra while the blade is active
    -After it goes off, the user must wait 2 turns to re activate it

    Renjiton: Baku Kunai [Microwave Release: Explosive Kunai]
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will infuse a metallic object (kunai/shuriken/sword) attached with multiple explosive tags, with dormant renjiton chakra. Then he can throw it towards the opponent. When at a long enough distance, the user will perform the tiger hand seal, which will activate the chakra in the object, and cause the explosive tags to explode. This will cause a huge plasma explosion (due to the plasma produced by the metal's contact with the chakra) that will destroy everything till mid range from the metalic object.

    Conditions to be able to use it: To use, one must have mastery over one or both Lighting and Wind release. One must be of Sage rank (unofficial) to be able to have the chakra control level to use it.

    Is weak to: Raiton [you cannot melt lighting, and will make it's structure destabilise, by attracting the raiton chakra out of the special environment created by the futon chakra]. Katon [you cannot melt fire, and it will produce plasma when a flame is in a microwave environment].

    Is strong against: Suiton [Microwave ovens heat foods quickly and efficiently because excitation is fairly uniform in the outer 25–38 mm of a dense (high water content) food item. By that, we can see that water accelerates the process of microwave heating. Doton [will melt down]. Futon [will heat up, and as hot air is lighter than cold, it will raice above in the atmosphere]. Steel (and other metals) [will make them cause a plasma explosion on contact with the chakra]. Ice [will melt down]. Solids [will melt them]. Liquids [will vaporize them].

    Co-creator: N/A

    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A & N/A

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    ✗ Declined: Your proof for both its existence as its making is practically non-existent and on its abilities are barely speculated on + STR and WEA are not very well organized. I remember declining this once already.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau



    Custom element Japanese name: Sekimenton

    Custom element English name: Asbestos release

    The element is based on: Earth, fire, Wind

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    In Naruto series we have seen people building houses with bricks, cement, wood, etc. We have also seen people wearing various kinds of clothes which means there exists textile industry.
    Asbestos was commonly used in building structures as a component in concrete, pipes, bricks, roofing, tiles, textiles. Hence it's possible that asbestos may exist in Narutoverse and may be a component of these things.
    For info on Asbestos:
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asbestos
    http://ibasecretariat.org/lka_prop.php
    http://www.propertiesofmatter.si.edu/asbestos.html
    http://www.seattleasbestostest.com/a...sic-info1.html
    http://environmentalchemistry.com/yo...rties2004.html

    How it works:
    Asbestos - Properties:
    Asbestos is a collection of innumerable number of individual fibrous asbestos crystals. Individual asbestos crystal are invisible to the unaided human eye because their size is only about 3–20 µm wide.
    Asbestos possess excellent qualities like good flexibility, sound absorption, good tensile strength, extreme resistance to fire, heat, electrical and chemical damage (acid and alkali).

    Asbestos is created by the user by mixing up their fire chakra, earth chakra and wind chakra simultaneously. This element can be created & utilized by the user in two ways. By focusing the earth, fire, wind chakra in their body & creating asbestos or by channeling their chakra into the ground creating asbestos out of an existing ground (earth).

    Although when creating out of their body, the user can create only small objects and weapons like sword, stick, kunai, shuriken, rope, shield which can be held in the hand.

    Using shape manipulation and altering the structure and density between the asbestos fibers, the user can shape them into various forms.
    Forms of asbestos that can be created by the user:
    • In basic release the user is able to create asbestos in the form of solid structures of various shapes and rock like masses similar to earth jutsus.
    • In advanced release using their chakra the user is able to alter the structure and density of the asbestos crystals and can shape them into sheets/cloth like material, ropes and threads and as a light greyish-white powder.

    Because of its good flexibility and tensile strength, the user can manipulate them very freely.

    Usage Examples:

    Asbestos release technique (Sekimenton no jutsu)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user creates small objects, pillars, spikes, tools, weapons, ropes, sheets of asbestos.

    Asbestos release: Wild ropes entangle (Sekmenton: Mikon kouki matsuri)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ox -> Tiger -> Snake hand seal and creates several long ropes (maximum of 10 cm diameter) of asbestos to erupt from the earth binding and entangling the opponent. Because of its good tensile strength it can effectively hold down a medium size summon.

    Asbestos release: Cloth protection (Sekimenton: Kiji engo)
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user quickly fabricates a sheet of asbestos from the earth in front of him which protects him and the nearby persons from an incoming attack. The transparency and thickness of the sheet depends on the user.

    Asbestos release: Asbestos dragon (Sekimenton: Sekimen doragon)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long (Created short range of the user)
    Chakra: 40 (-5 per active turn)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user after performing the Ram -> Tiger -> Snake hand seal creates a large asbestos dragon out of earth. The dragon is similar in size to Earth release: Earth dragon but it has all the properties of asbestos. The user can maintain and reform the dragon by performing snake hand seal up to 3 turns each time while controlling the dragon the user can use jutsus which don't require hand seals. The asbestos dragon is capable of spitting several sharp spikes made of asbestos which equals C rank and counts towards the user's move. The dragon is also capable of creating several ropes from its mouth and body which can bind and entangle the opponent(s) and using it counts towards the user's move.
    Note(s):
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    • Stays in the battle for 3 times.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    • Must be kage ranked
    • Earth - Mastered
    • Fire - Mastered
    • Wind - Mastered


    Is weak to:
    • Lightning and its custom CE (Will destroy asbestos with the exception of non focused lightning)
    • Wind and its custom CE (Wind blades will shatter asbestos)
    • Strong metals and minerals eg: Iron, Titanium, Diamond, etc. (Will pierce through asbestos)


    Is strong against:
    • Fire (Asbestos is 2 times strong than fire as in real life it can stand temperatures up to 2750 °C)
    • Water (Asbestos is neither reactive nor soluble in water)
    • Acid and its related CE (Asbestos is inert & insoluble)
    • Alkali and its related CE (Asbestos is inert & insoluble)
    • Asbestos is inert & non reactive to chemical based CE


    Is neutral against: Earth and its related CE (Asbestos can be created from earth itself)

    Co-creator: Gutsy Jiraiya

    Students I passed this custom element on too:


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    ✗ Declined: Proof is too weak. Because asbestos can potentially be deadly, its usage dwindled severely the last decades, so it's not absolute certainty that because there are buildings, there is asbestos. Your explanation on how it works is also too shallow and too vague. Apparently earth, wind and fire will create it. Why exactly? Also there shouldn't be comments like "2 times stronger than fire" or "the exception of non focused lightning" (what does that even mean?) in your STR & WEA. Also saying stuff like "Alkali" and "chemical based CE" I'm not even going to consider legit wordings as those are too vague to be interpreted correctly and do not fir the Narutoverse wording.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    -Removed the alternate release
    -Changed the foggy stuff
    -Edited the weakness
    -Changes are in bold
    Quote Originally Posted by Priest View Post
    Custom element Japanese name: Karakazeton
    Custom element english name:
    Harmattan Release
    The element is based on:
    Wind+fire
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    The fact that there is dry weather, wind and dust in Narutoverse proves this to be true.
    en.m.wikisource.org/wiki/1911_Encyclopædia_Britannica/Harmattan
    www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/harmattan
    http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/...5457/harmattan

    Harmattan is a hot dry wind, coupled with the dust it carries posses an amount of threat to life as a whole.
    Its a West African trade wind that blows south from the Sahara into the Gulf of Guinea between the end of November and the middle of March(winter).
    Harmattan(dry wind) carries a heavy amount of dust in the air that can severely limit visibility and block the sun for several days as the dense amount of dusty aerosol it poses remain suspended for longer time.
    The dense blinding dust of the harmattan is comparable to a heavy fog.
    Albeit having more cutting and sharp properties than a normal wind, the harmattan is well known for its unique properties dominant in some regions in Africa. This is dryness. The dry air is so extreme it can even break the trunk of the pine trees growing in that area, even as pine trees are known to store some water in their barks. Also some amount of Natural hazards are seen caused by Harmattans. The dust and sand stirred by these winds is known as the Harmattan haze, which costs airlines millions of dollars in cancelled and diverted flights. Also it risks public health by increasing cases of Meningitis, a rare disease caused by extreme dry wind or rather the dry wind serve as a medium for the breeding of the bacteria that causes the disease. Humidity drops to as low as 15 percent and can result in spontaneous
    nosebleeds for some. The wind also can cause severe crop damage.

    How it works:
    The user combines wind and fire chakra to form a new elemental (Harmattan) chakra then using natue manipulation, the user forms Harmattan which he can spew from within himself or form from the normal surrounding air. The user mixes his/her wind+fire chakra with the surrounding air and form dry wind which he can use to extremely change the visibility of the terrain or creatively use to his own taste. This is totally harmless to the user himself.
    The user also can inbue harmattan chakra into his lungs and spew it out as harmattan.

    Offensive: It can be used offensively to scotch/peel off the skin when severely exposed to it as the Malphigian(upper) layer of the skin becomes extremely dry when expose to harmattan having its moisture content consumed, the sweatpore closes and begins to constrict and later its bond looses and the skin begins to shed itself giving away to the dehydration. Also its cutting properties are greatly increased.

    Alternative Releases
    Modifying harmattan chakra, an opponent can be equally exposed to deadly diseases such as "Menigitis" when exposed to severe harmattan which causes severe inflammation of the protective membranes covering the brain and spinal cords. This is caused by infection with viruses, bacteria, or other microorganisms lingering in the surrounding air and the body that are now enhanced and activated by hamattan also serving as its carrier medium. Its symptoms are headache, neck stiffness associated with fever, confusion or altered consciousness, vomiting, and an inability to tolerate light (photophobia) or loud noises (phonophobia). This can lead to serious long-term consequences such as deafness, epilepsy, hydrocephalus and cognitive deficits, especially if not treated quickly.
    The user is totally immune to the Alternative harmattan releases itself except for special cases.

    Supplementary: Harmattan has a foggy form that blinds opponents as it attacks, a good tactic to mask its direction of propagation/invasion. While the user can entirely see and navigate through it, it totaly blinds the opponent except for byakugan doujutsu.
    Its is an extreme dry wind therefore dries/licks up water faster than normal wind.
    It combust fire at a faster rate due to it containing no moisture content at all.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over wind and fire release

    Karakazeton: Karakaze Kumo - Harmattan Release: Hamattan Cloud
    Rank: B
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: The user release large amount of Hamattan from his mouth into the surrounding that forms a big cloud. This can be utilised for hammatan jutsus and also serves as a blind cover.

    Is weak to:
    Fire, Ice, Dust release, Wind that act as a strong vacuum (A-rank and above Tornadoe)

    Is strong against:
    Water, Lightning, Storm, Boil, Wood(weakens its lattices as it becomes dry), Steam, Plant


    Co-creators (if any):
    Magic..

    Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: Remove everything about that alternative release. Your element does not create such viruses or bacteria and normal wind can likewise carry it. It's not like that using a jutsu of it for a few seconds that suddenly there is a mass outbreak of viruses and you would have zero resistance against them considering you did not make them. Also I have no idea where that 'foggy' stuff came from, however you can be sure you will be able to see through it. Dust isn't a natural part of this element either + there are already canon wind jutsu's who carry wind, so there is nothing special about it so I don't get why I would lessen the visibility, except for you. I don't see either why it would be sharper than wind + being weak against A-rank and above wind jutsu's is not a weakness.
    Custom element Japanese name: Karakazeton
    Custom element english name:
    Harmattan Release
    The element is based on:
    Wind+fire
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    The fact that there is dry weather, wind and dust in Narutoverse proves this to be true.http://<br /> en.m.wikisource.org/w...armattan<br />www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/harmattan
    http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/...5457/harmattan

    Harmattan is a hot dry wind, coupled with the dust it carries posses an amount of threat to life as a whole.
    Its a West African trade wind that blows south from the Sahara into the Gulf of Guinea between the end of November and the middle of March(winter).
    Harmattan(dry wind) carries a heavy amount of dust in the air that can severely limit visibility and block the sun for several days as the dense amount of dusty aerosol it poses remain suspended for longer time.
    The dense blinding dust of the harmattan is comparable to a heavy fog.
    Albeit having same cutting and sharp properties as a normal wind, the harmattan is well known for its unique properties dominant in some regions in Africa. This is dryness. The dry air is so extreme it can even break the trunk of the pine trees growing in that area, even as pine trees are known to store some water in their barks. Also some amount of Natural hazards are seen caused by Harmattans. The dust and sand stirred by these winds is known as the Harmattan haze, which costs airlines millions of dollars in cancelled and diverted flights. Also it risks public health by increasing cases of Meningitis, a rare disease caused by extreme dry wind or rather the dry wind serve as a medium for the breeding of the bacteria that causes the disease. Humidity drops to as low as 15 percent and can result in spontaneous
    nosebleeds for some. The wind also can cause severe crop damage.

    How it works:
    The user combines wind and fire chakra to form a new elemental (Harmattan) chakra then using nature manipulation, the user forms Harmattan which he can spew from within himself or form from the normal surrounding air. The user mixes his/her wind+fire chakra with the surrounding air and form dry wind which he can creatively use to his own taste. This is totally harmless to the user himself.
    The user also can inbue harmattan chakra into his lungs and spew it out as harmattan.

    Offensive: It can be used offensively to scotch/peel off the skin when severely exposed to it as the Malphigian(upper) layer of the skin becomes extremely dry when expose to harmattan having its moisture content consumed, the sweatpore closes and begins to constrict and later its bond looses and the skin begins to shed itself giving away to the dehydration.

    Supplementary: Harmattan has a semi-foggy form that however does not blind opponents but good in masking the direction of propagation/invasion of later harmmatan constructs(an harmmatan cloud that does this would be submitted as a sepearate jutsu and should be used before hand before it can be used to mask attacks, however byakugan and other doujutsus would be able to see through it).
    Its is an extreme dry wind therefore dries/licks up water faster than normal wind.
    It combust fire at a faster rate due to it containing no moisture content at all.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over wind and fire release


    Karakazeton: Karakaze Kumo - Harmattan Release: Hamattan Cloud
    Rank: B
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: The user release large amount of Hamattan from his mouth into the surrounding that forms a big cloud. This can be utilised for masking later hammatan jutsus but does not serve as a blind cover.
    ++Last for 3 turns


    Is weak to:
    Fire
    Earth: Makes earth even stronger as it dries its moisture content making it more rigid

    Is strong against:
    Water: Dries it faster
    Lightning
    Wood and plant CE variant: weakens its lattices as it becomes dry

    Co-creators (if any):
    Magic..

    Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: Ok we have not much wind based CE and dry wind could definitely be a real CE for a change. The way you make it, your proof and such is all fine, so is your STR & WEA, though if you say earth as weakness, it should be extended with metal based elements too. My problems is still all the semi-foggy & dust stuff. Remove it as it doesn't make any sense. You make a dry wind, sand or dust is not inherent to that. There have already been canon wind jutsus who used dust. That you say that it can pick up easily dust in areas like a desert, ok, but any further explanation would be for specific jutsus as not all areas have access or easy access to sand or dust, so comments about the Byakugan are already unnecessary. That dust is not inherent to the creation of the CE itself, so it doesn't have a semi-foggy style. Normal wind can do that trick too, still it doesn't have a semi-foggy style. Also remove the stuff "it's harmless to the user", I don't accept such comments on CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Pinattsu Bata Houmen

    Custom element English name: Peanut Butter Release

    The element is based on: Combination of Earth and Water Release + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    In the manga we have seen a wide variety of plant life. Most of the plant life is modeled after real life plants. So it wouldn't be weird to find a peanut plant in the naruto verse. We have seen ramen in the naruto verse and ramen is noodles. Noddles are made from flour which is ground up wheat. Now knowing they grind stuff it is prossible they could grind up peanunts into a paste. Also most of the foods in the naruto verse mirrioe our world.

    How it works:
    Peanut Butter release is a jutsu that is solely based on taking advantage of it's sticky and pliable consistency. The Peanut Butter can be formed into a semi-solid structure such as a wall or it can be molded into a wave that can swamp the opponent. If Peanut Butter touches an opponent, it can spread on them and slow them down and bind them, unless they state that they removed it and how. Since peanut butter release is made of both earth and water it can be made using both as a medium, as well as be made from the body. (i.e armor)

    Usage Examples:

    Peanut butter reales: Sticky tools

    Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user will channel there peanut butter chakra to any desired location. Then molding the chakra they will create any object that they want too. Weather it be simple things like weapons or more complex objects like cages.

    -usable four times a battle


    Peanut butter release: Sticky situation

    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    The user will perform three hand seals and then channel their peanut butter chakra under their opponent. The user will mold there chakra and peanut butter will burst from below the opponent. The peanut butter will tower over there opponent and cave inwards trapping the opponent in a sticky tomb of peanut butter.

    -Usable once per battle
    -No A rank and up peanut butter next turn


    Peanut butter release: Super sticky rope

    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    The user will first perform two hand seals and channel their peanut butter chakra into their dominate hand. Then they will form a very durable rope made of peanut butter. The rope can then be shot from the hand at the opponent, the rope can either stick to a body part letting the user to remove functionality from said body part. The user can also have it wrap around the opponent.

    -No S rank earth and water next turn.
    -Usable twice.



    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Earth Mastery
    Water Mastery

    Is weak to:
    1) Lightning – Lightning is strong against Earth and can be used against water to hurt the user so it is plausible that a Earth and Water element will be susceptible to Lightning Release. The user of Peanut Butter cannot be electrocuted by Lightning though as the Lightning current will not travel through it.

    2 ) Fire – Fire release is normally canceled out by Earth and weak to fire but when combining and taking into effect the scientific basis of Peanut Butter, it will make the Peanut Butter brittle. When Peanut Butter is brittle it takes away from the flexibility and consistency of which the element is based. However, if the user coats themselves in Peanut Butter, like an armor, or makes a weapon that is then hardened by the fire, it can be used as an advantage.

    3 ) Ice – Ice Release works the same way against Peanut Butter that fire does. The Ice will freeze the Peanut Butter, making it a solid and taking away its consistency.

    Is strong against:
    1) Wind – Peanut Butter is very thick and dense, so Wind will not be able to move it or cut through it.

    2 ) Water – Water is a key component of the Peanut Butter. Using it to counter a Peanut Butter technique would simply make it stronger and add to it's size. This is similar to countering a Fire jutsu with a Wind jutsu. This also accounts for Rain Release as well.

    3 ) Sound Release – Sound works the same way against Peanut Butter that Wind does. Although it can travel at high speeds it is not enough to slice the Peanut Butter.

    Co-creator:Sayian Goku

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: No proof this is possible to be an element nor explained very well how is made. Also in the end I can't even consider this a serious CE.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 08-09-2013 at 01:54 PM.

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