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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name:

    Nisankatansoton

    Custom element English name:

    Carbon Dioxide Release

    The element is based on:

    Wind + Fire + Earth + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    If we assume that the Naruto universe is set in an Earth-like planet with humans physiologically similar to us, it can be concluded that their atmosphere is composed very similarly to Earth’s as well, with Nitrogen, Oxygen, Carbon Dioxide, and other minor gases in appropriate proportions.

    Expanding on this first assumption, we’ve seen characters engage in physical, aerobic activity, and their exhalations are likely carbon dioxide, due to the resulting fatigue and tiredness expressed by them. Plants live in the Naruto world, and if they are indeed Earth-like plants, they engage in photosynthesis in order to grow and sustain themselves. Carbon dioxide is a key component in such a process.

    Nisankatansoton is, in its essence, the ability to manipulate existing carbon dioxide or create it in order to be used for combat purposes.

    How it works:

    In our world, Carbon dioxide is usually released through the combustion of fossil fuels, detritus, or other materials. It can also be a product of of respiration. To replicate this in a shinobi context, the user will combine Earth and Fire chakras to simulate the combustion of earthy materials (wood and coal, for example). This would produce carbon dioxide gas at warm to high temperatures, and as a final step, wind chakra is added as a medium for which the gas can quickly travel as intended. The result is a near colorless, odorless gas that can be disseminated in many forms. Users can even manipulate existing carbon dioxide in the air by infusing it with their own carbon dioxide chakra.

    Chakra control dictates the forms in which carbon dioxide chakra/gas can be released or used, limited only by the physical properties of a gas and the user’s imagination within those constraints. For example, the user can stream the carbon dioxide as a powerful jet from their mouths, or release it as a controlled mist from their body/chakra points. More advanced, creative applications can include forcing carbon dioxide chakra through the ground and releasing it upward from an opponent’s feet, similar to a gas vent/geyser.

    What are the effects of carbon dioxide? They can cause suffocation in aerobic organisms (humans, animals) since carbon dioxide is toxic to them in large amounts. The speed of suffocation is dependent on how much carbon dioxide is dispersed/used (rank of the jutsu would affect this, ex. S-ranks cause suffocation in 2-3 turns if not countered). Symptoms of suffocation (fatigue, heavy sensations, etc) are factored into the effects on the target. Fire and Water would react to carbon dioxide, altering their properties, or in the case of fire, be extinguished (fire requires oxygen to burn and carbon dioxide is a retardant). Ice would simply freeze the carbon dioxide, but would eventually turn back to gas via sublimation, so ice is ineffective. Earth can be a medium for the gas or absorb it, resulting in a relatively neutral reaction. There are other effects which can be detailed in jutsus made specifically for this CE.

    One of the most infamous effects of carbon dioxide is to cause a greenhouse effect (global warming!), and when coupled with suffocation and various physiological effects, this can create an oppressive, restrictive atmosphere in the battlefield.

    With such far-reaching effects, a user of carbon dioxide release will always keep a “fresh-air reserve” composed of wind chakra as a “pocket” in their mouths, in order to protect themselves from experiencing the effects.

    Jutsu Usage Examples:


    (Nisankatansoton: Ōkina sōsa | Carbon Dioxide Release: Greater Manipulation)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will mold carbon dioxide chakra and release it into the air, whether as a streaming jet or an area of effect “mist” style. Variations can be channeled through the ground or physical objects, within reason. Should an opponent be within its radius, they will be unable to use fire techniques up to S-rank, and will suffocate within three turns if not countered or dispersed. The user has the same restriction, albeit without the suffocating effects.
    - Can only be used thrice per battle
    - Carbon dioxide stays in the air for three turns unless countered
    - Can only be taught by Souji

    (Nisankatansoton: Tameshite mite, kokyū shimasu! | Carbon Dioxide Release: Try and Breathe!)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The most devious form of Nisankantansoton, the user will channel carbon dioxide chakra through their arm and aim it at their target’s mouth, shooting it out as a powerful jet that surrounds their victim’s mouth as a “bubble” of sorts. This speed of this technique makes it hard to react, and furthermore, it prevents the opponent from breathing out until countered. Meanwhile, the carbon dioxide “bubble” will force carbon dioxide into the target’s system, accelerating the process of suffocation, manifesting severe symptoms within a single turn, and bringing about a timely death within the second.
    - Can only be used twice per battle
    - No carbon dioxide techniques for the next turn after this is used
    - Can only be taught by Souji


    Conditions to be able to use it:


    Must have some training in Earth, Wind, and Fire (completion not necessary for basics; appropriate training required to learn up to appropriate ranks of this CE)

    Is weak to:

    Wind/variants: Strong enough winds can blow away carbon dioxide, and purer winds can mix with the carbon dioxide, reducing its concentration, and therefore, effectiveness. Wind-oriented CEs might be able to achieve the same effect.

    Lightning/variants: Lightning has high enough energy to break up carbon dioxide molecules, rendering them into individual atoms which can do little on their own. Lightning CEs may also apply.

    Is strong against:


    Fire/variants: Carbon dioxide is Fire’s worst enemy, acting as a powerful flame retardant. CEs centered around fire and heat are susceptible to this weakness as well.

    Water/variants: Carbon dioxide reacts with water to form carbonic acid mixed with water, a phenomenon known as ocean acidification in our world. In the context of the Naruto world, this reaction would reduce water’s pH and make it more acidic, and the insertion of a carbon dioxide user’s chakra into an opponent’s chakra-fueled water technique would overpower it, making it more difficult for the water user to manipulate their now -impure- water (a form of disruption, making it heavier). Water-based CEs can be vulnerable to this as well.

    Earth/variants: While the burning of certain earthy materials can produce carbon dioxide, rocks and other types of sediment are known to absorb carbon dioxide as well. Regardless, carbon dioxide chakra can travel through Earth-based mediums without too much trouble and can be created from its combustion, meaning Earth does not hinder it in any noticeable way.

    Co-creator: N/A

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

    PSA: Climate change is real, so please do your part to reduce your carbon footprint! *This CE is only intended for fictional purposes*

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    ✗ Declined: This already falls under the Dry Ice CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Ēteru

    Custom element English name: Aether

    The element is based on: Aether is based on the idea of having a metal that would not be a solid or liquid, but would instead be in a gaseous state. In this case Aether is Zirconium that has been heated past its boiling point and turned into a vapor - Zirconium because of its relatively high abundance, somewhat high boiling point and the fact that no one has a Zirconium CE.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Solids, liquids, gases and plasmas have all made an appearance within the world of Naruto, proving that Naruto states of matter are very much similar to that of our worlds, in fact the physical world displayed by Naruto is very much the same as that of our worlds. Furthermore technology has been shown to exist within Naruto, such as bulbs, computers and even laptops. Vaporised mercury is present within all fluorescent lamps, and both laptops and computers employ fluorescent lamps for their LCD backlighting. Furthermore many street lamps employ the use of vaporized sodium, and street lamps have also been shown to exist within the world of Naruto. Not only that but metal-halide lamps have become increasingly popular due to their efficiency, and since lamps and lightbulbs have been shown to exist in Naruto it is not at all unthinkable for them to have also employed metal-halide ones because of their efficiency.
    As such the existence of vaporised/gaseous metals can be seen to be credible, especially considering that within Naruto several characters have displayed the ability to replicate the production of metals (Such as Steel) through use of chakra that would combine the Earth and Fire natures. In this case a user of Gaseous Metal would, similar to Koton (Or other metal KG/CE user for that matter) utilise Earth and Fire chakra natures to form a metal, however the ratio of fire chakra would be far greater than usual, effectively creating a metal that has been super heated beyond boiling point. Wind chakra would also been employed so as to completely suppress oxidization so that a pure metallic vapor can be formed.

    How it works:

    With Earth used as a base for minerals, Fire to separate and superheat the ore past boiling point, and wind to prevent oxidization, isolate the metal so that it can properly evaporate and make the metallic vapor stable, gaseous metal can be formed.(Metals can only evaporate properly in a vacuum/if surrounded by inert gases, which is where wind comes into play by isolating the forming Aether from chemically reacting with the air until it’s properly formed.) Thus through the combination of Earth, Fire and Wind chakra natures Aether chakra can be formed. Through use of Aether chakra the user can release Aether from either their body or the ground. Since Aether is essentially Zirconium that has been superheated until it has evaporated, it is characterised by being exceedingly hot (Well over 4,400 degrees celsius as it is above the boiling point of Zirconium). In small amounts Aether would be highly translucent, however in abundance it would adopt a strong orange hue. Similarly small amounts of Aether would quickly cool and cover any substance that it condenses on in a layer of Zirconium. However when utilised in abundance Aether will indiscriminately burn through most substances on account of its extremely high temperature.
    Through Aether release the user can release raw blasts of Aether from either the body or the ground, and can take things a step further by applying shape manipulation.

    Jutsu Usage Examples:

    Ēteru: | Aether Release: Pillars of Balzahaar
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Description: The user will stomp on the ground, bursting a large amount of Aether from the earth that will arise in the form of multiple large pillars that will tower to the sky, burning and blasting through anything caught in their path.

    Ēteru: | Aether Release: Ifrit's Breath
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Description: The user will spew forth an abundance of Aether in the form of a large blasting cloud that will advance towards the opponent. The cloud of Aether will threaten to burn the enemy and anything caught in their path from existence, while also leaving behind a metallic coating in its wake.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Fire, Wind and Earth

    Is weak to:
    Lightning: Lightning is capable of disrupting the balance of Aether techniques, and will either result in the oxidization of the metallic gas or will ionize it. In either case the user will lose control and the Aether technique will simply burst apart (Violently in the case of large amounts of Aether being disrupted)

    Wind is similarly capable of disrupting the equilibrium of Aether techniques, however unlike with Lightning the dissipation of Aether techniques will not be violent, the Aether will simply disperse to leave behind superheated, or perhaps even flaming wind.


    Storm: Will undermine Aether in a similar way to Lightning, however due to it’s water component any violent reactions will be stifled.



    Is strong against:
    Earth: On account of it’s incredible heat and the commendable force that Aether techniques are capable of generating as a denser than average gas, Aether is capable of completely overpowering Earth by melting it. The same goes for any metals with a boiling point below the temperature of Aether.

    Water: Due to it’s immense heat when Aether comes into contact with Water it boil it instantly, either turning it into harmless vapor or, due to the water’s rapid expansion as a result of being superheated all at once will result in something akin to a steam explosion.

    Fire: Aether is hotter than most Fire Jutsu and as a result is capable of overpowering it. However Aether can also provide a supplementary relationship to the user's own fire techniques, empowering them by drastically increasing their heat.

    Lava: Aether, strong to both Earth and Fire, will similarly be strong against Lava which it is hotter than and can therefore overpower by turning it to ash.

    Ice: Similar to fire Aether is capable of quickly melting Ice. However where Fire fails Aether does not, as Aether, being strong against water will similarly superheat any liquid left behind by the melted Ice

    Mokuton/Plants/Mushrooms: Vegetation will be incapable of surviving the immense temperatures posed by Aether, and even if they were able to do so the Zirconium coating left behind by Aether would inhibit all forms of growth.

    Co-creator: Erzo (Even though he’s a snake. Fam)

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: For some reason you seem to be referencing to everything except zirconium. You have no substantial proof for its existence. Zirconium is made from zircon and that's not something you find just about anywhere and nothing you said supports its existence. Most importantly though you seem to just randomly have taken a metal because you wanted a hot gas as nothing you described has any particular characteristics related to zirconium. So essentially you would need to create a flame that reaches over 4300° celsius to melt zirconium to create a gas of the same temperature that has nothing in common with the element it came from. This makes no sense. If you can make a flame that hot, you don't need to melt anything to get a gas as you already have it. It seems to me you merely took zirconium as a front and also normal katon really can't reach such high temperatures.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Asechiren | アセチレン

    Custom element English name: Acetylene Release

    The element is based on: Wind + Earth + Lightning + Pure Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Acetylene is a moderately common chemical in the universe, often associated with the atmospheres of gas giants, and has the compound with the formula C2H2. It is a hydrocarbon and the simplest alkyne. This colorless gas is widely used as a fuel and a chemical building block. It is unstable in pure form and thus is usually handled as a solution. Pure acetylene is odorless, but commercial grades usually have a marked odor due to impurities.

    As an alkyne, acetylene is unsaturated because its two carbon atoms are bonded together in a triple bond. The carbon-carbon triple bond places all four atoms in the same straight line, Since acetylene is a linear symmetrical molecule. Acetylene is not especially toxic but when generated from calcium carbide it can contain toxic impurities such as traces of phosphine and arsine.

    As we have seen in manga/anime, the Naruto-verse is similar to our own, with plenty of mountains, rocks, water, trees, swamps, desert, etc and several metals (eg: Iron and Steel) and non-metals that are obtainable from the ground or water or air as much as like in real world. Since iron exist in Naruto-verse, as they are able to make shuriken, kunai, swords and so on, it would be possible for acetylene too.

    Also we saw computers, buildings, Electricity pole which conclude us that there are posibility exist for industrial activity in Narutoverse, or maybe a small workshop that might the usage of chemical or gases to aid their job. So based on that posibility, I think Acetylene might applied in Narutoverse.

    As we have seen Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique, where the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or spark, the gas ignites into a large fireball.
    Also Wisdom Wolf Decay, a technique was performed by saiken, the 6 tails, Saiken opening its mouth, then releases a dense corrosive gas. And its technique is a gaseous nature. Based on that, I think it would be possible to create a new element – Acetylene.

    How it works: There are 3 steps for the creation of Acetylene. First, the user have to release pure cahkra, the based of acetylene chakra. This pure chakra is unstable chakra, if the user have no mastery on control of his chakra, it will easily exploded in the process. Step 2, In order to make it stable, the user mus t bond it with earth chakra, it will binding the moleculs which prevent it to explode beyond the user will. Step 3, After it stable, wind and lightning chakra play it’s role where the wind chakra will be able to shape it into form of gases and the lightning chakra would make it combustible or easy to explode within the user’s will. Within the lightning and wind chakra also Acetylene formed colorless, combustible gas with a distinctive odor. When acetylene is compressed, heated, or mixed with air surround, it becomes highly explosive. The user will be able to use it ability by controlling his lightning chakra to control the flash point.

    The user would combine his pure chakra, Wind, Earth and lightning chakra to create new elemental chakra – Acetylene. The new chakra can be commonly released through mouth or every single of the user’s pores and then by using nature manipulation, focus it on an item or area or living being it self. The user can directly send it toward the target, causing a various health hazards, and be able to turn it become combustible and flammable, by controlling the flash point using his lightning chakra. Based on that the acetylene will burst into flames, . explosion or blasting.
    The acetylene can be used for offensive, defensive and supplementary technique’s it is very versatile. Due to the fact that Acetylene is colorless and odorless it can be used in many different ways.

    Usage Examples:

    (Asechiren : Mushoku no tatchi ) - Acetylene Release: Colorless touch
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing 2 hand seals and focusing his acetylene chakra in his mouth, then he spew out the acetylene toward the enemy thus releasing a decent amount of colorless and odorless acetylene gas whill then travel in an average speed targeting the opponent’s respiratory path way. Once inhaled by the enemy, he will feel burns on his lungs, making the enemy unconciuos due to rapidly contact with expanding acetylene gas.
    Note: Can only be used on 3 items max with every use


    (Asechiren: Hakai-tekina jirai) - Acetylene Release: Active land mine
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user will perform 4 hand seals and slam his hands onto the ground in which he release his acetylene chakra across the battlefield ground from every of his pores, making it become a hostile landmine. The user then step away from the ground that contained of Acetylene gas. When something or someone steps on the ground, it will instantly explode due to the user decreasing the flash point of his acetylene chakra around the opponent. Causing 3 degree severe burn lead to death.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note: Can trap everal enemies on it’s range.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Wind, Earth, Lighting and Extreme chakra control to manipulate and control the acetylene chakra.

    Weak against:
    Water : Acetylene in gas form will never be able to pass through water and will cancel out it movements.
    Wind : Will blow the acetylene gas away and cast it off.
    Earth : Blocking it’s movement, unable to pass through solid object.

    Strong against:
    Lightning and Fire and also their CE variant: Due to Acetylene colorless, odorless, Combustible and flammable where the opponent unable to see it shape, so when the acetylene have been release, toward the opponent the lightning and and fire would blow back toward the opponent with double effect of blasting or explosion.
    Organic CE such as Plants, Arid, Root, Wood etc.: Constantly contact and rapidly exposed by Acetylene could cause frostbite.

    Co-creator: N/A


    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Still weak proof. It comes down it might be used, the fact that in the past decades its use has apparently significantly decreased, means it might no be used likewise and that there have been people been using gasses, just means they can exist, but then it's their skill. Using that argumentation you could even say they are already using your CE, meaning you can't make it. Your explanation doesn't make any sense at all either. What is pure chakra? Why would it be unstable and why would it even explode? And infusing it with earth chakra? By default elemental chakra was regular chakra infused by a nature, in this case earth.


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    Custom element Japanese name: Asechiren | アセチレン

    Custom element English name: Acetylene Release

    The element is based on: Fire + Earth + Water Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Acetylene is a moderately common chemical in the universe, often associated with the atmospheres of gas giants, and has the compound with the formula C2H2. It is a hydrocarbon and the simplest alkyne. This colorless gas is widely used as a fuel and a chemical building block. It is unstable in pure form and thus is usually handled as a solution. Pure acetylene is odorless, but commercial grades usually have a marked odor due to impurities.

    Acetylene is unsaturated because its two carbon atoms are bonded together in a triple bond. The carbon-carbon triple bond places all four atoms in the same straight line, since acetylene is a linear symmetrical molecule. The reaction of calcium carbide with water, producing acetylene. And Calcium Carbide is a product that used in firework. Since we’ve seen that fireworks have been used in Naruto, for example previous to the Chuunin exams, we know that Calcium Carbide should be present, thus would it be possible to create Acetylene. One particle of Calcium Carbide reacts with water atoms to create one part of Acetylene and one part of Calcium Hydroxide (Ca (OH)2).
    As we have seen in manga/anime, the Naruto-verse is similar to our own, with plenty of mountains, rocks, water, trees, swamps, desert, etc and several metals (eg: Iron and Steel) and non-metals that are obtainable from the ground or water or air as much as like in real world. Since iron exist in Naruto-verse, as they are able to make shuriken, kunai, swords and so on. Also we saw computers, buildings, Electricity pole which conclude us that there are possibility exist for industrial activity in Narutoverse, or maybe a small workshop that might the usage of chemical or gases to aid their job. So based on that fact, I believe Acetylene can be created by combining those kind of material or gases.
    As we have seen Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique , where the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or spark, the gas ignites into a large fireball.
    Also Wisdom Wolf Decay , a technique was performed by saiken, the 6 tails, Saiken opening its mouth, then releases a dense corrosive gas. And its technique is a gaseous nature. Based on that, I think it would be possible to create a new element – Acetylene.

    How it works: As we all know that calcium carbide produced from lime which is mineral that we can have it from earth chakra and coke which is fuel that we can have it from fire chakra, therefore by combining fire and earth chakra as the base of acetylene to become flammable and combustible, the user then do finalize process to bond them together and create acetylene chakra in form of gasses by mix them together with water chakra. Acetylene formed colorless, combustible gas with a distinctive odor. When acetylene is compressed, heated, or mixed with air surround, it becomes highly explosive. The user will be able to use it ability by controlling his fire chakra to control the flash point and will be able to ignite it at his will. The new chakra can be commonly released through mouth or every single of the user’s pores and then by using nature manipulation, focus it on an item or area or living being itself. The user can directly send it toward the target, causing a various health hazards, and be able to turn it become combustible and flammable, by controlling the flash point using his fire chakra. Based on that the acetylene will burst into flames, explosion or blasting.
    The acetylene can be used for offensive, defensive and supplementary technique’s it is very versatile. Due to the fact that Acetylene is colorless and odorless it can be used in many different ways.

    Usage Examples:

    (Asechiren : Mushoku no tatchi ) - Acetylene Release: Colorless touch
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing 2 hand seals and focusing his acetylene chakra in his mouth, then he spew out the acetylene toward the enemy thus releasing a decent amount of colorless and odorless acetylene gas will then travel in an average speed targeting the opponent’s respiratory path way. Once inhaled by the enemy, he will feel burns on his lungs, making the enemy unconscious due to rapidly contact with expanding acetylene gas.
    Note: Can only be used on 3 items max with every use


    (Asechiren: Hakai-tekina jirai) - Acetylene Release: Active land mine
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will perform 4 hand seals and slam his hands onto the ground in which he release his acetylene chakra across the battlefield ground from every of his pores, making it become a hostile landmine. The user then step away from the ground that contained of Acetylene gas, when something or someone steps on the ground which contain acetylene chakra, the user will ignite the acetylene chakra create huge explosion, Causing 3rd degree severe burn lead to death.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note: Can trap several enemies on its range.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Fire, Earth and water chakra control to manipulate and control the acetylene chakra.

    Weak against:
    Water: Acetylene in gas form will never be able to pass through water and it will dissolve it.
    Earth: Blocking its movement, unable to pass through solid object.

    Strong against:
    Wind: Acetylene gas is heavier and denser than the average wind, it will easily overthrow the wind), a blast of wind can be overthrown by a blast of Acetylene.

    Lightning and Fire and also their CE variant: Due to Acetylene colorless, odorless, Combustible and flammable where the opponent unable to see it shape, any type of combustive or reactive materials Acetylene is naturally strong to these elements.

    Organic CE such as Plants, Arid, Root, Wood etc.: Constantly contact and rapidly exposed by Acetylene could cause frostbite.

    Co-creator: Shady Doctor

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ?&?

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    ✗ Declined: It's never a good sign when you are listing chemical formula's and difficult names. I then immediately start questioning whether you yourself just understood what you wrote as if you did, you should be able to explain it in a clearer way. You seem to be jumping from one thing to another inconsistently. This becomes especially obvious in your explanation on how you create this. You go from one thing to another and somehow earth is no flammable and combustable and adding water makes it a gas. That really makes no sense, it lacks cohesion. And even assuming you are able to create it, no you can not use your fire chakra to control it an no you can not make it ignite at will and because it will immediately mix with air that surrounds you, it would be explosive all the time. Meaning you're pretty much a suicide bomber. It's also a very big problem for something to be colorless.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom Element Japanese Name
    Daussiton | 乾燥遁

    Custom Element English Name
    Desiccation Release


    The Element is Based On
    Fire + Earth + Wind
    Chakra Control




    Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)

    Magnesium is the ninth most abundant element known to man, even being one of the most abundant elements within our bodies. In the manga, it has been seen that on several occasions camera's were used in the manga, similar to ones used in the 19th & 20th century, which release a blinding flash because of Magnesium dust that is combusted. One such occasion is when Naruto had to get his picture taken for his Ninja Identification Photo. This indicates that there is Magnesium in the Narutoverse and a knowledge of it and its potential uses. Carbon is also one of the most abundant elements, being the sixth most abundant element. Proof of Carbon is obvious in the manga, as the ninja themselves are humans, A.K.A. Carbon-Based life forms, and of course plants (which draw in Carbon from the air to live) have been shown numerous times.

    “Upsalite” itself is an anhydrous form of Magnesium Carbonate. Despite being an advanced synthetic element created in labs, manga proof shows us that we can indeed create it via the combination of the basic elements. Using our chakra, users can manipulate the Earth, which has a large source of Magnesium. This is a simple task as it has been shown that even complex minerals can be extracted from the ground, showcased by Guren and her use of Crystal Release. We then completely dry the Earth using Fire chakra to make it “anhydrous”, containing no water whatsoever, which is also exhibited in the manga by the creation of Steel Release, which has Earth purified by Fire to become the pure metal. And finally, Wind chakra is used to cool down the structure and continue to turn it into dust, making it extremely porous. The end result is an anhydrous white dust that is extremely porous, otherwise known as pure Upsalite. We are even able to create it from our bodies due to both Magnesium and Carbon being abundant within us.

    Creating a specific substance as this, while seemingly difficult compared to a natural element, is completely within the scope of abilities ninja possess in the Narutoverse. It has been seen that there is advanced manipulation of Carbon to the point of creating specific substances. For instance, the Dead Bone Pulse ability (where Kimmimaro was also able to manipulate Carbon within the body, although being more difficult because it was within the actual bone that was manipulated) showcased by Kimimaro was able to manipulate the speed of his bones' growth as well as create weapons of bones that could be released from any part of his body, or be pulled out and used like handheld weapons. Additionally, he was also able to create a forest of bones out of the ground. Being that bones consist of several specific substances, such as Calcium Phosphate and Calcium Carbonate, to manipulate them the user would have to have some level of manipulation over the specific compounds used to create them or manipulate them. This is further shown by being able to grow bones out of each other. This shows that it isn't just a matter of releasing the bones, but there is actual control and manipulation over them by the user. Aside from that, combining our spiritual and physical energies in general to create chakra has been seen to be able to do almost anything, from being able to heal injuries, to controlling mixtures like Ink, to splitting a living entity into several, or creating advanced elements like dust release which destroys things at a molecular level. Thus, the use of chakra to be able to combine the basic five elements, which contain abundant elements to create a specific substance such as Upsalite is far from being unrealistic.

    How it Works:

    Upsalite’s core ability is that of desiccation, removing any and all moisture from any nonliving and living thing. This allows Upsalite to be extremely deadly towards living things, as all living things contain water and need it to survive. However, Upsalite is not limited to the absorption of liquids/moisture from living things. It is capable of absorbing the moisture out of anything with various effects. Desiccation release works in a manner similar to how the Kazekage’s use their sand/dust variants. Although, this white dust retains its own specific properties, being far lighter and less dense than sand and its variants as well as being a natural insulator.

    Desiccation Release is manifested in three different forms.

    Main Release — The user can control preexisting Upsalite (carried in a gourd) or created on the spot in a manner similar to the Kazekage’s control of their sand/dust variants, appearing as a wave of white dust in which its movement is controlled through hand gestures. Once the dust makes contact with something, it will proceed to immediately dessicate the target whether the target is a liquid a solid. In the case of the latter, the target is reduced to a dust, due to the extreme absorption properties of Upsalite. As it can absorb a surface area of 800 m² per gram, more dust quickens and enhances the process, causing living organisms, like humans, animals, and plants, to wither through dehydration. This will also cause all other matter, like rocks and land, to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are spared from this dehydration effect. The liquids absorbed by the dust can not be manipulated by the user. However, they can be released back at the opponent in two ways. The first is by releasing them through all the pores in the form of a omnidirectional wave or through a select area of pores releasing the liquid in the form of a pressurized stream.

    Specific Release — The user compresses the dust and it makes more compact, as he manipulates the shape to create various tools and constructs. These constructs still keep their desiccation properties of the Main Release of course. The Specific Release allows the user to further manipulate the dust to the point where it can become sharp or blunt as well as making it more compact and dense as a whole. This allows the user to not only harm the target by desiccating them, but adds a piercing or blunt property gained from compacting the dust and shaping it.

    Advanced Release — The user is able to manipulate the catalysts in his body allowing him to create upsalite from his body and layer it over their skin. In doing so, the area in which Upsalite is covering takes on a powdery white color. The appearance of this is very reminiscent of Torune covering himself with poisonous nano-sized insects, but the process is more similar to Kidomaru's ability to relate sticky gold from his skin and covers his skin. Whereas Torune's skin takes on a purple pigment whenever his nano-sized poisonous insects would layer over his skin, the skin of users of Desiccation's Advanced Release take on a diluted white pigment. The effect of the Advanced Release happens when contact is made. To anyone besides the user, touching the affected area is extremely dangerous, as the moisture immediately gets absorbed so long as contact with the Upsalite remains. This can directly be used by the user to desiccate anything he touches by layering his hands. For example, holding a flower would cause it to wither away to dust or the user can lead footprints on a grassy field that dries up the effected area each step. The Advanced release can only be attained after mastery is gained of both the Main and Specific Releases as well as basic Ninjutsu.



    Example Techniques:
    (Kyosei Daussi no Jutsu) — Greater Desiccation Release
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will manipulate Upsalite Dust from either his gourd or call it forth from the ground, or even release it from the body. Using hand gestures to control it as he shapes it and uses it to his needs. He can use it to restrain enemies, defend from incoming techniques, produce simple constructs of Upsalite Dust (which lose their shape if control is released), waves, etc. The technique is only limited by the imagination of the user.



    (Daussiton: Dassui Hokori) — Desiccation Release: Desiccating Dust Technique
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user of this technique is capable of layering certain parts or the entirety of their body with white powdery Upsalite Dust. The user can subsequently affect the opponent with this dust to remove the moisture from the affected area, causing an excruciatingly painful and almost certain fatal injury, unless the afflicted area is swiftly removed. The dust can only be transferred onto the victim's body by direct physical contact but only a mere touch from the user's skin is required, as the dust immediately absorbs the moisture, leaving the affected area in a dried up state.

    Note: Can only be performed twice.




    Conditions to be Able to Use it
    Fire — Earth — Wind
    Ninjutsu Mastery for Advanced Release




    Is Weak Against
    Lightning & Lightning Variants Wind & Wind Variants
    Metals & Metallic Releases. Crystals & Crystalline Releases


    Is Strong Against
    Water & Liquid-Based Elements Earth & Earth Variants Fire & Heat-Based Elements
    Sound Organic Material Odors



    Co-Creator
    Jakai

    Students
    None Available & None Available

    Permission for Carbon as a Basis [X]
    Permission for Magnesium as a Basis [X]
    Permission to submit CE similar to Pantothenic Dust [X]

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    ✗ Declined: This already deserves to be declined just because you think you can copy Gaara and bypass making handseals by using hand gestures. Gaara's sand is in fact a form of ninjutsu, not an element. Also why are you talking about the Dead Bone Pulse? It's completely irrelevant as that's a non-elemental KG, the Kaguya clan has innate genetic ability to use it, to them it's no different than any other chemical and physical process in their bodies. You are not making a KG here, but a CE, which is something different. On top of that your "advanced release" has no business here, that's a CJ. It seems to me you have been taking canon abilities of different characters and then stuck them all here, but this is a CE, not a KG or special ninjutsu or whatever. Most importantly however the whole desiccation thing is pulled severely out of proportion. It absorbs moisture, which is something very differently than absorbing large amounts of liquids and absorbing is also different than sucking it out of stuff. As far as I can tell this is not even remotely capable of what you are describing, it can't turn things to dust, it can't absorb large masses of water. Considering you like referring to Gaara, what exactly happened when Gaara fought the 2nd mizukage? Right the sand started to glue together. Why? Because it got hydrated again. So it's not capable of sucking out water out of substances, only moisture (meaning small quantities) and if it does tries to absorb a large amount of water, it will fall apart. So this really has no use.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Ekitaifuton

    Custom element English name: Liquid Wind Release

    The element is based on: Wind + Water + Extreme Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    First off, we have seen the ability of wind and water to be combined through the Typhoon Water Vortex Technique. However unpolished, the technique displays the ability for water and wind to harmonize into a single attack. There are also numerous more examples where wind is used to enhance the power of water. Water will serve as the “carrier or container” for this release, while the wind gives the water more power and substance, making it much more deadly than the normal element.

    We have also seen microscopic cutting abilities of wind demonstrated through the use of Wind Style: Rasengan, and Wind Style: Rasenshuriken. While the latter produces massive microscopic cutting abilities, the first does the same, but on a smaller scale. However, the damage is no less severe, as shown when Kakashi’s hand was burned and injured. Then, the ability of water to “harden” or increase in density is shown in the Water Style: Water Prison Technique. When Kakashi was trapped within the sphere, he was not able to move due to the density. This shows water can take on a more solid form, but still be normal water.

    How it works:

    The user will utilize basic water, and then increase the density of the water far more than normal. Only the density differs, affecting the water’s viscosity. This makes it behave more similar to syrup than normal water. The wind element is then added utilizing the microscopic cutting abilities of wind. This produces a somewhat solid, yet still fluid water element that will cause a burning or singing affect upon impact. For example, a body part submerged within liquid wind will have its chakra networks shredded on a microscopic level, disallowing them from channeling chakra through that part. Differing from normal water release which mainly does impact damage, this element can stop the flow of chakra by shredding the internal chakra system. The effect was shown by Rasenshuriken, and this release utilizes the same procedure to achieve the effect.

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    Similar to Rasenshuriken, the wind enhancement of the release doesn’t actually take effect until the water has been successfully released. Naruto is able to hold it in his hand without damage, until he releases the technique fully against Kakuzu. This allows a user of this release to safely emit the water from his mouth, or hands. However, once released, the water will retain its properties and cannot be reversed unless evaporated or dispersed completely. The user is also able to raise water from the ground, or to summon it directly onto any location. Basically, the complete versatility of the normal water release techniques applies to this release as well.

    Even with the great power of the cutting wind, the water is able to maintain its shape. The microscopic wind blades within do not cause enough actual movement within the “hardened” water to cause it to disperse or lose its form. Instead, the hardened water gives it more durability against physical elements that are up against it. The large amount of wind chakra present within this release also colors the water a vibrant, luminescent silver.

    Usage Examples:

    (Ekitaifūton: Maddo Gekai no Mesu)– Liquid Wind Release: The Mad Surgeon's Scalpels
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will focus his chakra into the sky, quickly forming rain clouds. These rain clouds release a constant shower of liquid wind, which fall to the ground at deadly speeds. Liquid wind will fall at a maximum, mid-range distance from the center of the original target. The raindrops cause singing damage upon impact while they shred the chakra network. This will also form a thin layer of liquid wind on the ground. This will soak through the clothing of an enemy ninja, and begin to severely damage his feet. This makes normal travel on the ground nearly impossible unless aided by outside means.
    Note: Usable three times per battle
    Note: Rain lasts 3 turns

    (Ekitaifūton: Sakuran Nāsu no Hi Teijō Sekkai)– Liquid Wind Release: The Deranged Nurse's Unsteady Incisions
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will focus his chakra into the ground, and then erupt liquid wind from it. The liquid wind takes the form of a rising, slicing jet that extends up into the air at a maximum of three meters. The main jet rises directly upwards into the air, while secondary jets raise themselves at forty-five degree angles branching off the main jets sides’. While direct contact with one of the jets can lead to serious injury, even the spray from the numerous jets can cause major damage.
    Note: Usable four times per battle

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Wind + Water

    Is weak to:

    Wind- Can cut through and disperse the hardened water
    Fire- The present wind within the water allows fire to overcome the release

    Is strong against:

    Lightning/CE- The present wind within the water absorbs any lightning, and conducts it into the water, making it stronger
    Earth- The water due to his increased hardness, can withstand impact of earth; The microscopic cutting abilities also allow it to break down earth particles and shred through it
    Water- The water due to its increased hardness, can push through water; the added wind only serves to increase the effect

    Co-creator: ?

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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    ✗ Declined: Doesn't make sense. That microscopic cutting ability you are talking about is not inherent to wind, it's something specifically unique to the Rasenshuriken as a result of the combo of the Rasengan, the highest form of shape manipulation, and wind chakra. Only under those conditions you have access to that ability, which does not apply to your CE and thus you do not have it. On top of that whatever is left of the normal cutting ability of wind is severely reduced by the water due to the resistance. Wind that spins together with water will go a lot slower than without water as it has less resistance. Yes wind and water provides a strong combo, however that doesn't mean it maintains all its original abilities.
    Resubmitting with massive aesthetic and conceptual changes.. although I believe this previous check is relevant...


    Custom element Japanese name: Banakemuriton

    Custom element English name: Rose Smoke Release

    The element is based on: Water + Fire + Wind + Extreme Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    First off, we have seen the ability of wind and water to be combined through the Typhoon Water Vortex Technique. However unpolished, the technique displays the ability for water and wind to harmonize into a single attack. Additionally, Naruto infuses wind chakra into the basic Rasengan in order to give the normal chakra qualities it does not naturally possess, mainly the shredding and cutting abilities. This shows that wind’s qualities can be infused with another chakra to produce deadly results. There are also numerous more examples where wind is used to enhance the power of water.

    Furthermore, we know steam exists because of Mei and Han’s use of it. While Mei’s is corrosive, Han’s use of it entails boiling water into a vapor and then using that for attacks. This release follows a similar path, although the heat aspect is not a factor. The water vapor aspect is for utility and versatility, while infusing wind into the element makes it more deadly.

    How it works:

    This element uses water as its base with wind incorporated into it in order to create new and unique qualities. This is done by taking water chakra and then heating it to a point where the water chakra boils and produces water vapor. This is the state of matter wherein this element resides. With the water vapor now created, the user infuses the water vapor molecules with a dense “buzz-saw” shape of wind. The water molecule would be in the center with the buzz-saw shape surrounding it. This process is repeated countless times until the element is fully made; a slicing and shredding, dense water vapor. The water vapor is compacted and condensed to a high degree in order to give rose smoke some "weight." The wind infusion also gives weight to the vapor, making it heavier and more dense than standard water vapor. Rose smoke is in a gaseous state that upon contact with other objects, shreds and slices them infinite times. Both objects touching/within rose smoke would suffer these effects. For example, if the user releases this element onto a tree, as the element moves over the tree, it would seem to “disintegrate” due to the sheer number of cuts suffered by the wood. Additionally, there are two variations of releases used within this elemental nature.

    • Main Release: The main releases involves wide-spread and un-concentrated techniques and forms on a large scale. For example, this variation would be used if the user wanted to fill an area or room with rose smoke. It is the generalized, free-floating gaseous form that shreds and slices objects touching or within the element.
    • Alternative Release: The alternative release involves concentrated and focused techniques and forms. For example, this variation would be used if the user wanted to create a bullet or whip of rose smoke. Objects/forms of this variation would have the ability to slice clean through an earthen wall or any other liquid/solid object (according to rank) while continuing forward. This allows objects formed from this release to basically puncture through solid/liquid objects in one clean pass.

    To a normal ninja, this element simply looks like a dense smoke or gas. The silver wind chakra mixes with the blue water chakra to give this element a shining, silvery-blue color. This is further laced with red. The red color is said to come from the blood of thousands of ninja who have walked through this element. Their blood has infused a red streaking pattern into the smoke. This element has the same functionality of normal wind release, meaning it can be released from the user’s body, formed in the air, or released from the ground.



    Usage Examples:

    (Banakemuriton: Maddo Gekai no Mesu)– Rose Smoke Release: Sunflower Bomb
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user emits rose smoke from their mouth, forming it into a dense bullet with incredible cutting and puncturing power. This bullet can puncture through most solids (according to rank) and can cause serious damage to an enemy's body.

    (Banakemuriton: Sakuran Nāsu no Hi Teijō Sekkai)– Rose Smoke Release: Planting Lillies
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will stomp upon the ground in order to release several jets of rose smoke from the ground. These jets emit rose smoke across the battlefield which makes movement incredibly difficult to execute without injury. Any objects on the ground/shallow in the air would be caught and shredded to pieces by this technique.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Water + Fire + Wind + Extreme Chakra Control

    Is weak to:

    Wind- Wind can push through and disperse rose smoke.
    Water- Although capable of cutting through it, water will smother rose smoke

    Is strong against:

    Lightning- The wind within rose smoke can absorb lightning adding onto the fact that the purified water within this element is a poor conductor.
    Earth- The intangibility of rose smoke combined with its advanced cutting capabilities allow it to travel around and slice through earth.
    Fire- The inherent water-base allows rose smoke to douse fire

    Co-creator: ZandaT

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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    ✗ Declined: You can't infuse anything with buzz-saw shaped wind, the moment you use shape manipulation, it's a jutsu and not a CE anymore. There also no sensible reasoning how this would be possible. If this was acceptable, anyone could infused any molecule with anything. As I see it this is plain wind with a roze color they seriously can't douze out fire, in fact most of the STR and WEAK don't make sense. It cuts earth, wind can't actually cut earth but wind than can cut yours?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Name: Seraphic Water | Seraphic Water Release
    Japanese Name: Serafumizuton (???)
    Element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra control
    Proof of existence:
    The proposed element is actually more pragmatic than whimsical, despite its chosen name. Brine, a highly concentrated solution formed between the mixture of water and a salt, is natural occurrence in some parts of the world. Brine is defined as when the concentration of salt to water passes five percent per cubic foot of water.

    Fresh Water: <0.05% | Brackish Water: 0.05-3% | Saline Water: 3-5% | Brine: >5%

    Whenever the salt to water concentration passes that of living conditions the water becomes dense, and salty to the point where it can damage internal organs if ingested. Such examples of extra salty water can be seen in the real world Dead Sea. In terms of the Naruto Verse there is a confirmed sea stretching along the south and south eastern areas of the continent, hugging the ''Uzushiogakure'' islands and various other smalls archipelagos. Sea water is a very minor form of brine, consisting mostly of the basic salt (Sodium Chloride, NaCL). However, there exist different forms of brine as by technical terms the word refers to water heavily impregnated with a salt compound. Seraphic Water employs a completely different salt all together, Magnesium Sulphate.

    Magnesium Sulphate is an inorganic salt containing sulphur, oxygen, and magnesium (MgSO4), called Epsom salt. It gets such name from a place known as Epsom Spring where these salts are deposited from the rich soil. This is not that much of an extraordinary occurrence either as natural phenomenon such as springs have been seen in the Naruto Verse (even an Hidden Village which takes pride in them). Each components of MgSO4 are to be present in the Naruto Verse considering these are very essentially elements, namely oxygen. Because of this proof that the salt can be found in nature, as is, without having to be formed in a lab or under ultra specific conditions, it should be accessible to the user by employing his Doton chakra.

    With the use of the Doton chakra to evoke the mineral salt the user will then combine it with his Suiton chakra to form a concentrate of Epsom salt and water: a brine solution. This in itself should be a rapid process as MgSO4 is highly soluble in water.

    How it Works:
    Seraphic Water, as the name suggests, is a water based element, consisting of a highly concentrated Epsom salt solution formed when the user combines his Doton and Suiton chakra. Doton for the Magnesium Sulphate salts and Suiton for the water component. The proposed CE will have an unbearable concentration of Epsom salt of over 50% per cubic foot of solution. This means, Seraphic Water is not only extremely dense--with the crushing force of hard rock--but very dangerous. Despite this, the proposed CE is very much capable of moving and shaping like Suiton. Normally, a magnesium sulphate solution is clear with no noticeable impediments to be seen in the mixture, but only for the sake of aesthetics will Seraphic Water adopt a shiny yellow look, appearing like liquid gold.

    Seraphic Water, being an Epsom salt brine is just as effective on the outside as it is in the inside. Magnesium sulphate in itself packs a variety of effects on living and non-living things. If ingested in copious amounts, Epsom salt can induce nausea, vomiting and diarrhea with near instant effects and if caught in the eyes Seraphic Water can dehydrate moist areas of the body with its MgSO4 salt compound. It can also be used to sooth sore muscles as well as hyperactive ones, like a seizure, by decreasing certain nerve impulses to muscles. In the same way, an acceptable concentration of Epsom salt solution (usually about 0.5%) is used to draw out toxins in the body, including the presence of heavy metals like lead. This concentration level is also suitable for; regulating blood pressure, managing the metabolic rate, keeping the heart's rhythm constant, and even being a reliable stress relief. However, Seraphic Water, with a much higher concentration than the acceptable amount, can reverse these positive effects for devastating damage in all of the aforementioned fields with the most drastic outcomes leading to comatose.

    In addition to this, as a brine solution foremost, Seraphic Water is also incapable of being frozen completely. Most brine solutions, including magnesium sulphate ones, have a nigh non-existent freezing point. In fact, the late Daniel G Fahrenheit achieved his zero point in the Fahrenheit temperature scale of 0 degrees (-17.78 C) by attempting to freeze brine. The lowest freezing point obtainable for NaCl brine was -21.1 degrees Celcius, for MgSO4 brine this number is more or less the same, meaning, Seraphic Water takes a titanic effort to freeze. The solution is also used as a de-icing agent on roads to prevent ice from forming.

    Magnesium Sulphate solutions are also used in flotation therapy, where high concentrations raise the bath water's specific gravity, effectively making the body more buoyant. This can make travelling through Seraphic Water difficult as its too dense to waddle about in, for humans or aquatic creatures. For the user this is no big deal as he can simply will the concentration of his own element to increase or decrease; promoting or preventing movement within it. Seraphic Water can also be made from existing water by having the user inject his chakra into said source.

    Example Techniques:
    (??)Seraphic Water Release: Sea of Voices

    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: By extending an arm (or arms) the user will release a wave of golden water in any direction he so chooses. This wave is heavy enough to stay on the ground or any surface he stands on and will plow through most obstacles. As it travels the salt can almost be heard churning over and over within it, sounding like whispers, this makes the wave very noticeable (like sea water rolling in on a shore, if the gold didn't catch your eye) and as such can be acknowledged from a distance. However, these voices can also drown out smaller sounds that may be occurring in the vicinity. Once it reaches its destination it simple settles as a small lake of Seraphic Water.


    (??)Seraphic Water Release: Ominous Requiem

    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: With a single hand seal the user will cause to burst from the ground, or any existing water sources, and wrap around him like huge bands of golden ribbon. These waves of brine will swim around him in a circular formation, encompassing his entire 5 meter position and affecting any of its 'strong to' elements found within this radius. Even as the user moves about the brine will stay with him for a maximum of three turns. During this time it can be used as source for other Holy Water techniques or just defense and offense.


    (??)Seraphic Water Release: Purgatorial Mist

    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Similar to Suiton release, brine may also adopt a misty form with a beautifully golden hue. This travels along the terrain like any other mist would. However, should an opponent inhale any of this mist he will suffer near immediate destruction with some of Seraphic Water's characteristics mentioned above. Prolonged exposure to the mist will leave them extremely relaxed, (a weird but confirmed side effect of Epsom salt baths) making escape seem too tedious and they die a painful and slow death. The mist also obscures view and chakra perception as it is composed entirely of the user's chakra.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Master over Doton and Water, as well as Kage level chakra control

    Is weak to:
    Lightning and based elements: Even though it doesn't conduct electricity, lightning and similar elements have the ability to electrolise brine, splitting the hydrogen from oxygen molecules and reverting them to gaseous form. This leaves Magnesium residue behind as a harmless dust of particles looking like sand. Needless to say the element is useless after this. However, the electrolysis process is a slow one and the element takes longer to fall to lightning, even though it is naturally weak to it.

    Earth: Unlike other forms of brine solutions, Seraphic Water aka MgSO4 brine, lacks the corrosive effect to grind earth to dust. As such Doton is able to stand up to it.

    Is strong to:
    Fire and high temp based elements: Brine is still a water based compound, and a much more heavier contender than regular Suiton. In addition to this brine's boiling point is significantly higher due to its impurities with a staggering melting point of 1,124 degrees Celsius (magnesium sulphate salt compounds) and as such can not only tackle flames, but completely oust them with crushing force. It is also a very good refrigerating fluid, able to transport thermal energy from place to place.

    Ice and low temp based elements: Brine is also used in the real world to coat roads in certain northern countries, where snow can make driving near impossible. The brine is an antifreeze which prevents ice from forming on said roads, and the higher the concentration, the harder the element is to be frozen.

    Organic elements: Brine dehydrates living things--from both the inside and the outside--with its dehydrating factor highlighted in the 'How it works' tab. This includes, but isn't limited to, vines, trees, plants, animals, people, insects, etc.

    Poison & toxins: Epsom salt baths are notorious for their detoxifying effects, drawing certain harmful toxins away from the body and depositing it in the surrounding solution.

    Sound: Quite surprisingly, magnesium sulphate solutions have been the confirmed primary components that cause the absorption of sound in sea water (acoustic energy is converted to thermal energy). Absorption is strongly dependent on frequency: lower frequencies are less absorbed by the solution, making sound travel much farther in the ocean.

    Co-creator: N/A

    Students I pass this on to: ?? & ??

    Permission from NK to have Sulphur as a mere component of Magnesium Sulphate.

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    ✗ Declined: Pretty decent element, only issues now are that I'm not going to accept that this is a golden liquid just for aesthetic purposes. If there's no valid reason for this to be gold, it's not going to be gold as otherwise everyone can change the looks of his CE randomly. More importantly all the medic, poison and toxin related stuff. Unless that happens instantly, which I doubt, it's really not something you can pull off during a battle unless you would be a med ninja as otherwise you really don't have the subtle and precise skills to start going through another person's body to clean him from a potential poison or something. In any other case only very rudimentary and basic stuff can be preformed.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Quote Originally Posted by Flásh View Post

    Completely Revamped

    Custom element Japanese name: Ekitai hikari

    Custom element English name: Liquid Light

    The element is based on: Water + Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Storm Release is a combined nature transformation made up of techniques that mix lightning and water-based chakra. This shows that water and lightning are compatible elements. They can combine with each other to give better/different results. It has been explained in the manga, that concentrating yin/yang energies in different proportions can help you achieve different results. For example, to create a tailed beast bomb, Naruto had to concentrate his yin: yang ratio to 8:2, which released a black tailed beast ball. But Sora released a white tailed beast ball, while the Juubi released a red ball, both of which obviously had different proportions. Similarly, by changing the proportions of lightning and water chakra in the combo, instead of creating storm chakra, we intent to create pure lightning in its semi-fluid form. To better visualize it, take hot magma, and replace the "fire" in it, with "lightning". Take the red out, insert yellow. More explanation would be provided in the next section.

    How it works:
    One theory that is common among various scientists of the five allied nations is that, during monsoon, when the natural lightning hits the water surface of small water sources under certain conditions, they exhibit a strange behavior. Usually when a lightning bolt hits any water source, due to its high temperature, most of the water gets evaporated. Since the temperature of the lightning bolt can reach up to 50,000F, while the boiling point of water is 212F. But sometimes, due the the water source being larger, not all the water gets evaporated. Certain water molecules that were affected by the strike, but did not evaporate, get ionized. They acquire an electric charge, and turn from fluid, to semi-fluid. The temperature of these molecules increases thousand fold (up to 5000k) as they descent to the bottom of the water source/container. Since this is a natural process, and since these molecules aren't readily available throughout the nature, it is difficult to use it from other sources. The user has to create the substance from his own body, by mixing lightning and water chakra in the ratio 7:3. But once Liquid Light is expelled from the body, he can use various techniques from it by using that as a source. Liquid Light is high-voltage lightning that will melt the earth instead of breaking it into two. When it comes in contact with water, it will not channel its lightning through it unlike lightning chakra. Which is why, Water possess the advantage against Liquid Light as it can cool down Liquid Light to a certain extent and stop its movements. However, Liquid Light can electrocute and burn any other organic materials and/or metals that comes in contact with it. In real life, this is proven by "fuse-wires", which melt on supplying with high voltage current. Although Liquid Light is such a dangerous element, it will never harm the user himself, as it is his own chakra. This is similar to any element (like fire) that allows the user to coat their body with that particular element. The element, is yellow in color and has a thick gluey property that is similar to magma.

    Usage Examples:



    (Ekitai hikari: Saigo no bansan) – Liquid Light Release: The Last Supper
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user coats his body with Liquid Light chakra, and punches his opponent, to deal him damage.



    (Ekitai hikari: Kuraku ero) – Liquid Light Release: Darkly Erotic
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user creates various objects made of Liquid Light in front of him. It can be used to defend, like shields, or even for offensive purposes like swords. Anything that the user imagines.

    (Ekitai hikari: Arugonkuron) – Liquid Light Release: Dragon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms a handseal and creates a dragon made of Liquid Light, to rise from the ground.


    Is Weak to
    Wind & Variations
    Wind is, and has always been the natural enemy of Lightning. It will not conduct electricity, and neither will it let it pass through. And since Liquid Light is majorly lightning, wind proves to be stronger against Liquid Light as well.

    Void
    Nothingness will destroy Liquid Light, as it has an entity.

    Dark Release (Custom)
    Cosmic energies have the ability to overcome the defenses of Liquid Light.

    Water & Variations
    Water can negate the hotness property of Liquid Light, and thereby producing steam on clashing with it.

    Ice Release
    Ice is colder that water, and hence it can cool down liquid light to a considerable extent.

    Is Strong to
    Physically strong materials, Organic Substances, Elements with Solid Matter
    Earth, Sand, Metals, Wood, Mushroom, Kaguya Bones, Sulphur, Rubber etc.
    Greek Light has the property to melt these objects and/or electrocute them, This property allows it to destroy the above listed elements.

    Fire & Variations
    Liquid Light gets more heated and more powerful when it combines with fire.

    Lightning
    Liquid Light being the advanced version of Lightning, and having higher voltage and power, will destroy lightning easily.

    Glass, Crystal
    Liquid Light has the ability to destroy these materials, similar to how lightning breaks through glass.

    Other Materials
    Plasma, Foam, Gaseous elements
    These elements do not have the substance to tackle Liquid Light

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: "One theory that is common among various scientists of the five allied nations is"..what? Did you just made this up? Where did you get all this stuff from? A small body of water simply evaporates because it's small, in a large body of water the lightning simply spreads out over the surface and water gaining an electric charge is not something special. This pretty much feels like you're trying to gain plasma via a roundabout way. Also any element that says "it will never harm the user" deserves to be instantly declined.

    Revamped the "How It Works" section

    Custom element Japanese name: Ekitai hikari

    Custom element English name: Liquid Light

    The element is based on: Water + Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Storm Release is a combined nature transformation made up of techniques that mix lightning and water-based chakra. This shows that water and lightning are compatible elements. They can combine with each other to give better/different results. It has been explained in the manga, that concentrating yin/yang energies in different proportions can help you achieve different results. For example, to create a tailed beast bomb, Naruto had to concentrate his yin: yang ratio to 8:2, which released a black tailed beast ball. But Sora released a white tailed beast ball, while the Juubi released a red ball, both of which obviously had different proportions. Similarly, by changing the proportions of lightning and water chakra in the combo, instead of creating storm chakra, we intent to create pure lightning in its semi-fluid form. To better visualize it, take hot magma, and replace the "fire" in it, with "lightning". Take the red out, insert yellow. More explanation would be provided in the next section.

    How it works:
    When Lightning interacts with earth, under normal circumstances, it breaks the either into pieces. However, there are certain cases like "Lightning Pillar Bind" technique, where lightning has been shown to collaborate with the earth technique to produce something better. Also, when water is mixed with earth chakra, more often than not, it creates mud. Using the same concepts, the user channels his water chakra and earth chakra to create a semi-solid substance, and then adds lightning chakra into it in high quantity such that it does not break the mixture, but takes on its property, while conducting lightning. The lightning, water and earth chakra used here is in the ratio of 6:2:2. This means that the final product majorly possesses the qualities of lightning, as compared to the other two elements. The lightning used here, is of very high voltage. As its voltage increases, its temperature also increases when it comes in contact with any solid substances starts melting it. In real life, this is proven by "fuse-wires", which melts on supplying with high voltage current. The overall product is a yellow, gluey, semi-solid substance, that conducts electricity and something that contains enough heat power to melt solid substances.
    The user can create Liguid Light from his own body, or from any earth source, by channeling his water and lightning chakra into it and mixing it in right proportions. Although the entire process of mixing elements in particular proportions seems a long procedure, with time, the user can perform the techniques with the same speed as any other normal jutsu.

    Usage Examples:



    (Ekitai hikari: Saigo no bansan) – Liquid Light Release: The Last Supper
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user coats his body with Liquid Light chakra, and punches his opponent, to deal him damage.

    (Ekitai hikari: Kuraku ero) – Liquid Light Release: Darkly Erotic
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user creates various objects made of Liquid Light in front of him. It can be used to defend, like shields, or even for offensive purposes like swords. Anything that the user imagines.

    (Ekitai hikari: Arugonkuron) – Liquid Light Release: Dragon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms a handseal and creates a dragon made of Liquid Light, to rise from the ground.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over Lightning, Earth and Water.
    Good chakra control.

    Is Weak to
    Wind & Variations
    Wind is, and has always been the natural enemy of Lightning. It will not conduct electricity, and neither will it let it pass through. And since Liquid Light is majorly lightning, wind proves to be stronger against Liquid Light as well.

    Void
    Nothingness will destroy Liquid Light, as it has an entity.

    Dark Release (Custom)
    Cosmic energies have the ability to overcome the defenses of Liquid Light.

    Water & Variations
    Water can negate the hotness property of Liquid Light, and thereby producing steam on clashing with it.

    Ice Release
    Ice is colder that water, and hence it can cool down liquid light to a considerable extent.

    Is Strong to
    Physically strong materials, Organic Substances, Elements with Solid Matter
    Earth, Sand, Metals, Wood, Mushroom, Kaguya Bones, Sulphur, Rubber etc.
    Liquid Light has the property to melt these objects and/or electrocute them, This property allows it to destroy the above listed elements.

    Fire & Variations
    Liquid Light gets more heated and more powerful when it combines with fire.

    Lightning
    Liquid Light being the advanced version of Lightning, and having higher voltage and power, will destroy lightning easily.

    Glass, Crystal
    Liquid Light has the ability to destroy these materials, similar to how lightning breaks through glass.

    Other Materials
    Plasma, Foam, Gaseous elements
    These elements do not have the substance to tackle Liquid Light

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Yin and Yang are pure forms of energy and are very different from elements who have inherent characteristics. You have no substantial proof nor is your explanation even remotely sufficient. Water and earth makes mud because water turns earth into mud. However lightning does not become suddenly more solid because you add earth, that's not how it works. Ratios are a rather mute point in CE and you just took abstract characteristics of three elements and stuck them together despite there is no sensible reasoning behind that it would result in such an element. The fact that you are saying you can create it from earthen sources is absurd.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom Element Japanese Name
    Shiryōton

    Custom Element English Name
    Forage Release

    The Element is Based On
    Earth + Fire
    Advanced Chakra Control



    Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context):
    Farm lands in Naruto-series have been shown in the anime and manga so many times with even horses proving there's agriculture. For where agriculture exists so will straw production. Straw and hay tend to hit hard at it, they appear the same, but they’re very different products with very different purposes!

    Hay is a crop that is grown specifically for the purpose of creating hay, while straw is a byproduct of different kinds of crops. Hay is geared toward being a nutrient-rich food for livestock, while straw is more often used for bedding instead of food. Straw also has a wide variety of uses, for everything from a compost pile to an energy source.

    Like the old joke suggests, hay is for horses. When farmers plant a hay field, the field is harvested before the grains go to seed. This keeps valuable nutrients in the stalks and makes for a much more well-rounded diet for horses and other forms of livestock. Straw, on the other hand, is a byproduct of other types of grain crops. When crops like wheat, barley, and oats are harvested for their seed, the stalks are left behind. These stalks—which have been drained of most of their nutrients during the process of seed production—are harvested and baled to create straw.

    How it Works:
    Understanding

    Straw is a by-product of seed (or grain) production. For example, a farmer who grows wheat will harvest the grain; the dry plant that remains after harvest is straw. The same applies to grass seed farmers, which is a major source of turf seed used on lawns and sports fields around the world.

    Hay is grown specifically, and it’s cut before the plant goes to seed. Because the plant pumps nutrients into the seed or grain, hay will have more nutrients than straw. Although dairy farmers and cattle ranches typically buy on the basis of protein, everyone recognizes the value of fiber, of which hay and straw provide a lot.

    Creation

    The mixing of both Doton chakra in a chakra fashion that's much like mud and Katon chakra to create Forage chakra. The doton chakra harness the fine needs of soil to formulate wheat, barley, oats, and etc, type of similar properties. When conjured after with Katon chakra it drains most of the nutrients mimicking the during the process of harvested seeds and bales to create straw. While this is happening, the chakra polishes up the raw heated chakra cooling it, while the shape is maintained with Chakra Control to keep it stabilized as fluid and dry.



    Example Techniques:
    (Shiryōton: Gurētā shiryō No Jutsu) — Forage Release: Greater Forage Technique
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A-S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30-40
    Damage Points: 60-80
    Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, making the handseal Ram-Dragon using it to create Forage substances from either their limbs structures (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce Straw-balls, streams of hays, defensive/ offensive styles of straw & hay weapons, or simply aid in taijutsu. Its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.



    (Shiryōton: Kobu sai kakuritsu) — Forage Release: Cob Reestablishment
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: E - Forbidden (Doton Jutsu used with this Jutsu 1 letter Rank Increased)
    Range: N/a
    Chakra Cost: 5 - 50
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: Whenever the user uses Doton jutsu, they can perform 2 extra handseals in unison with this jutsu and while the Doton is forming they will release Shiryōton chakra into the ground and straw/hay materials will embed themselves within the earth strengthening the Doton jutsu. This will act like Cob, a natural building material made from stuff much like subsoil, water, some kind of fibrous organic material (typically straw), and sometimes hay. Cob is fireproof, resistant to seismic activity, and long lasting. It can be used to create artistic works, sculptural forms for all purpose of the natural building and sustainability movements.

    Note: If the user uses the Forbidden Rank version, the user cannot perform any Fire, Earth, or Forage Release techniques the following next turn.



    (Shiryōton: Chikyū no shi seikyū) — Forage Release: Earth's Death Claim
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user performs 4 handseals focuses Shiryōton chakra into his hands and slams them on the ground. Releasing it into the ground, the grass/ tree's leafs dry and fall changing shape into thin needles of straw, while the grass drys and becomes thin sharp straws that shrewd the opponent from all their angles or also she/he can mold Shiryōton chakra in their stomach, spewing out countless straw needles from their mouth as a combo.




    Conditions to be Able to Use it
    Earth— Fire
    Kage Ranked Chakra Control




    Is Weak Against
    Lightning Based Elements
    Lightening is very powerful against dry substances due to it's intense blazing temperature. Forage Release's encounter with it will most likely make it burn on contact.

    Fire Based Elements
    Forage Release's encounter with fire is prominent in destroying itself as dry plants and paper, Forage is quite similar to paper. Forage Release's encounter with it will most likely make inches of a fight through the flames if matched before turning to ash after.



    Is Strong Against
    Water Based Elements
    Water clashing with Forage is refurbishment than damaging it. Forage Release's encounter with it, will most likely stand solid if, braced against the stream and while also socking the water.

    Wind Based Elements
    Wind simply passes through Forage Release's encounter with it, while some of it is deflected. Forage Release's encounter, will most likely allow some of the air to flow through while most of it is countered, leaving the user with a cool breeze.




    Co-Creator
    Rucken

    Students
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    ✗ Declined: This is really not a CE and pretty much already falls under several plant based elements.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Peridotto

    Custom element English name: Peridot

    The element is based on: Peridot (/ˈpɛrᵻdɒt/ or /ˈpɛrᵻdoʊ/) is gem-quality olivine. Olivine is a silicate mineral with the formula of (Mg, Fe)2SiO4. As peridot is the magnesium-rich variety (forsterite) the formula approaches Mg2SiO4. Peridot is one of the few gemstones that occur in only one color, an olive-green. The intensity and tint of the green, however, depends on how much iron is contained in the crystal structure, so the color of individual peridot gems can vary from yellow to olive to brownish-green. The most valued color is a dark olive-green.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Olivine, of which peridot is a type, is a common mineral in mafic and ultramafic rocks, and it is often found in lavas and in peridotite xenoliths of the mantle, which lavas carry to the surface; but gem quality peridot only occurs in a fraction of these settings. Peridots can be also found in meteorites.

    Olivine in general is a very abundant mineral, but gem quality peridot is rather rare. This is due to the mineral's chemical instability on the Earth's surface. Olivine is usually found as small grains, and tends to exist in a heavily weathered state, unsuitable for decorative use. Large crystals of forsterite, the variety most often used to cut peridot gems, are rare; as a result olivine is considered to be precious. In terms of the naruto verse we have seen that lava as an element exists, as do various gemstones referenced by jewellery worn by characters throughout the series. Olivine is a natural magnesium iron silicate, meaning all the elements needed to create Olivine also exist in the narutoverse as we have seen flashbombs used which are likely magnesium filled bombs. We've seen iron many times and silicate also. So it's most likely all minerals exist in abundance exactly how they do in reality making this an easily accessible element.

    How it works:

    Essentially to create this element the user would need a combination of both fire and earth chakra. Earth is used originally to separate the minerals to allow the user to draw the required minerals to the surface, whilst fire is used to heat the minerals to replicate the effect of the lava flows heat that is used to create peridot in nature. Once this is completed the user is able to form Peridot in it's gem like form for either attack or defense purposes. The peridot is normally formed from the ground but advanced usages can see it created from the users body. Peridot only exists in a solid state however the state itself can be varied, the user can either create whole sheets of Peridot, or smaller chunks to create a larger whole. The colors of Peridot can vary somewhat from yellow, to yellow-green, olive-green, to brownish, sometimes a lime-green, to emerald-ish hue. Though one consistent fact is the vitreous almost glassy nature of Peridot, though clouded it doesn't fully inhibit line of sight in comparison to say an earth technique. However it would inhibit line of sight more than some water techniques.

    Jutsu Usage Examples:

    Peridottoton: | Peridot Release: Grand Gem Sundering
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Description: The user will stomp on the ground, causing a large pillar of Peridot to erupt from the earth at a desired location, the pillar can be used for movement, or to impale opponents.

    Peridottoton: | Peridot Release: Gemstone Forge
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplemental
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Description: The user will create various tools of Peridot from their own body such as kunai, spears, pillars, cubes, etc. These tools can be fired up to mid range.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Fire and Earth

    Is weak to:
    Fire: Fire is capable of damaging the Peridot's structure due to a relatively low melting point. Causing the Peridot to enter a somewhat liquid like state in a similar way to how powerful fire can turn earth in to lava.

    Lightning in a similar way to fire is capable of damaging the Peridot's structure due to the powerful vibrations of lightning release jutsu it can cause the Peridot to shatter in to pieces fairly easily.

    Most combinations of fire and lightning can harm Peridot also. Unless they're combined with one of the elements it's strong against, then they will become neutral.

    Is strong against:
    Earth: Due to it's superior composition and density Peridot is capable of destroying and smashing earth techniques apart with relative ease.

    Water: Again due to the superior composition and density of Peridot it's capable of halting most water jutsu in their path pushing them aside with relative ease and overpowering them. Also due to the somewhat porous nature of peridot it can "suck up" water jutsu a little bit like a sponge.

    Wind: The solid structures of Peridot are incredibly resistant to the cutting abilities of wind, and it's density prevents most wind techniques from damaging or moving it to any degree.

    Most combinations of earth water and wind will be weak to Peridot also, unless they're combined with one of the elements it's strong against, in that case they become neutral.

    Co-creator: Shinta

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Because there is absolutely nothing that sets this apart from other CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom Element Japanese Name
    Yakuton

    Custom Element English Name
    Singe Release

    The Element is Based On
    Lightning + Fire
    Advanced Chakra Control



    Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)
    St. Elmo's Fire, also known as St. Elmo's Light, is a weather phenomenon in which a luminous form of plasma is created by a corona discharge from a sharp or pointed object in a strong electric field in the atmosphere (such as those generated by thunderstorms or created by a volcanic eruption). In Naruto, it has been proven multiple times that natural forms of lightning can appear and be manipulated, shown clearly with Kirin. Given that lightning can be made naturally, it's safe to say that weather phenomena of all types, including St. Elmo's Fire, exist.

    Other elements, such as Wood and Storm, have proven that the combination of two elements do not need to focus on the literal mixing of physical traits/forms, but the mixing of more abstract properties. For example, in a normal situation, adding lightning to water would simply make electrocuted water, though when combined together as Storm Release, the element takes on the "shape" properties of water (liquid state and fluid movement) and the "destructive" properties of lightning. Storm Release is actually described as Lightning that flows like Water. Singe Release acts in a similar manner, taking on more abstract properties of each element.

    This way, Singe Release takes on the "shape" properties of fire (focused flame like state) and the "destructive" properties of lightning. Due to it's St. Elmo's Fire's unique composition, it gives off a luminous bluish-white flame color.

    How it Works:
    Understanding

    St. Elmo's Fire is a type of continuous electric flow known as an "electric discharge", a plasma formed by the passage of electric current through a low-pressure gas. St. Elmo's Fire and normal sparks both can appear when high electrical voltage affects a gas. St. Elmo's fire is seen during thunderstorms when the ground below the storm is electrically charged, and there is high voltage in the air between the cloud and the ground. The voltage tears apart the air molecules and the gas begins to glow. It takes about 30,000 volts per centimeter of space to start a St. Elmo's fire (although sharp points can trigger it at somewhat lower voltage levels.)

    St. Elmo's Fire is plasma. A normal gas is composed of molecules. The molecules are composed of atoms, which in turn are composed of electrons and clusters of proton particles. If the electric force applied to each bit of gas is greater than a certain level of voltage, it causes the electrons and protons of the gas molecules to be pulled away from each other. High voltage transforms the gas into a glowing mixture of separate proton clusters and electrons. We call this mixture of particles by the name "plasma," and it is conductive. It also fluoresces with light. Due to our atmosphere being composed predominantly with nitrogen and oxygen, this mixture glows blue/violet when exposed to high voltage fields.

    Creation

    Yakuton, the only lightning element that mimics fire and surpasses it's capability. This element combines some properties of both fire and lightning into a new element that is unique from both. Using Fire Release as the "shape" of the element and Lightning Release as the "nature" of the element, Singe Release is made. Using Fire Release, the user will create a low-pressure heated gas. Lightning Release is then added, causing an electric current to flow through it. While this is happening, the lightning heats up the flames to intense degrees, while the shape is maintained with Chakra Control to keep it stabilized as flames. This results in a bluish-white focused flame which is mainly electricity running through the heated gas.



    Example Techniques:
    (Yakuton: Kyousei Yaku No Jutsu) — Singe Release: Greater Singe Technique
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create Singe flames from either their limbs structures (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce fire balls, streams, defensives, or simply aid in taijutsu. Its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.



    (Yakuton: Den'atsu Furea) — Singe Release: Voltage Flare
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A - Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 - 50
    Damage Points: 60 - 100
    Description: This technique allows the user to focus his Yakuton chakra throughout his body in a single surge which he can then expel as an omnidirectional wave of bluish-white flames. The surge first appears on the user as if he was on fire, or like an aura of sorts. Whenever he chooses, the user can expel the flames outward, burning and shocking anything it passes through to a crisp. The amount of power the user expels and how far it goes is dependent on the chakra output.
    A-Rank
    For A-Rank power, the user need only focus his chakra and release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Short-Range.

    S-Rank
    For S-Rank power, the user must perform a single handseal while focusing his chakra and release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Mid-Range.

    Forbidden-Rank
    For Forbidden-Rank power, the user must perform a set of three handseals while focusing his chakra for a full turn and then release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Long-Range.

    Note: If the user uses the Forbidden Rank version, the user cannot perform any Fire, Lightning, or Singe Release techniques the following turn.



    (Yakuton: Chikyū Nenshō-Ki) — Singe Release: Earth Burner
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses Yakuton chakra into his hands and slams them on the ground. The user will then release the Yakuton flames into the ground. At anytime, the user can make flames rise up in an instant and attack. The user can either have the flames rise up as a flames wide like wall or thin like a pillar. So long as the user keeps his hands on the ground, he can focus and sustain the pillars. The user can also split the amount of flames that rise up, splitting its power in each. The intensity of the flames are fatal should someone directly pass through them, with major burns occurring from getting near them.



    Conditions to be Able to Use it
    Lightning — Fire
    Kage Ranked Chakra Control




    Is Weak Against
    Wind Based Elements
    As this element is lightning at it's core, it leaves itself weak to being knocked out by the wind since it loses it's conductivity.

    Lightning Based Elements
    Despite Yakuton's base being lightning, it's inherit fire "form" makes it linger behind pure lightning, making it weak to it.



    Is Strong Against
    Fire Based Elements
    Fire Release and other forms of heat would only strengthen the overall intensity of Singe Release.

    Earth and Metal Based Elements
    The very base of this element is Lightning, the weakness of Earth Release. It can also easily conduct through Metal and melt it due to it's intense voltage it gives off.

    Water Based Elements
    Water, being a conductor of electricity, allows for Singe Release to release naturally conduct through it, and given the intense heat coming from the voltage, Singe Release is easily capable of extinguishing water and other forms of it.




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    Jakai

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    ✗ Declined: The plasma CE already exists and every CE that's based on using abstract qualities of other elmenets deserves to be declined. Storm and wood are not so abstract as you think they are. They didn't randomly pick up something "abstract" from another element, there is very well a logic behind it, a logic that is completely missing here.


    Custom Element Japanese Name
    Yakuton

    Custom Element English Name
    Singe Release
    The Element is Based On
    Lightning + Fire
    Advanced Chakra Control



    Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context)
    St. Elmo's Fire, also known as St. Elmo's Light, is a weather phenomenon in which a luminous form of plasma is created by a corona discharge from a sharp or pointed object in a strong electric field in the atmosphere (such as those generated by thunderstorms or created by a volcanic eruption). In Naruto, it has been proven multiple times that natural forms of lightning can appear and be manipulated, shown clearly with Kirin. Given that lightning can be made naturally, it's safe to say that weather phenomena of all types, including St. Elmo's Fire, exist.

    Other elements, such as Wood and Storm, have proven that the combination of two elements do not need to focus on the literal mixing of physical traits/forms, but the mixing of more abstract properties. For example, in a normal situation, adding lightning to water would simply make electrocuted water, though when combined together as Storm Release, the element takes on the "shape" properties of water (liquid state and fluid movement) and the "destructive" properties of lightning. Storm Release is actually described as Lightning that flows like Water. Singe Release acts in a similar manner, taking on more abstract properties of each element.

    This way, Singe Release takes on the "shape" properties of fire (focused flame like state) and the "destructive" properties of lightning. Due to it's St. Elmo's Fire's unique composition, it gives off a luminous bluish-white flame color.

    How it Works:
    Understanding

    Singe Release is a type of continuous electric flow known as an "electric discharge", a fire formed by the passage of electric current through a low-pressured gas. Based on St. Elmo's Fire, a normal sparks that can both appear when high electrical voltage affects a gas. St. Elmo's fire is seen during thunderstorms when the ground below the storm is electrically charged, and there is high voltage in the air between the cloud and the ground. The voltage tears apart the air molecules and the gas begins to glow. It takes about 30,000 volts per centimeter of space to start a St. Elmo's fire (although sharp points can trigger it at somewhat lower voltage levels).

    Singe Release compounds consist of the three elements which make a fire's needs to ignite: heat, fuel, and an oxidizing agent (usually oxygen). In chemistry, oxidizing agent has two meanings. In one sense, an oxidizing agent is a chemical species that removes an electron from another species. It is one component in an oxidation-reduction (redox) reaction. In the second sense, an oxidizing agent or an oxidizer is a chemical species that transfers electronegative atoms, usually oxygen, to a substrate. Combustion, many explosives, and organic redox reactions involve atom-transfer reactions. Now let's return to lightening, "Electricity" is nitrogen/oxygen energy created by an electric field. By this definition, whenever a spark jumps, we can say that "electricity" jumped too. By this definition, lightning, auroras, and St. Elmo's fire are examples of "electricity." This kind of "Electricity" is a bit like fire.

    The Flame is colored blue-like reddish-white in by extension. Meanwhile by this definition, "electricity" is very visible. Turn on a big Tesla Coil, and "electricity" shoots out. Sparks of electricity. So onto context, fire needing heat; fuel and an oxidizing agent are meant by lightening's properties. This is where Singe Release is rather unique, isn't about it's temperature only but, it's combustive capacities. Unlike other flames, this flame won't need oxygen for as it's self-sufficient properties that allow it to defy this instance i.e, A fire can be prevented or extinguished by removing any one of the elements in the fire triangle. For example, covering a fire with a fire bin removes the oxygen part of the triangle and can extinguish a fire. This flame will keep running on ration chakra rather than the consistences as its is able to separate hydrogen atoms from the oxygen atoms in water(within also the air) molecules, isolating them into a highly combustible fuel and into a powerful volatile oxidizers, respectively, so covering it with a fire bin (will remove oxygen as this flame doesn't utilize it), but let's say you don't remove oxygen, you will not only still feel the heat but when you do happen to remove the fire bin, the source of ignition will be such as like a cigarette lighter or a match, which will produce extremely powerful, localized explosions causing Singe Release to stay prominent as before.


    Creation

    Yakuton, the only lightning element that mimics fire and surpasses it's capability. This element combines some properties of both fire and lightning into a new element that is unique from both. Using Fire Release as the "shape" of the element and Lightning Release as the "nature" of the element, Singe Release is made. Using Fire Release, the user will create a low-pressure heated gas. Lightning Release is then added, causing an electric current to flow through it. While this is happening, the lightning heats up the flames to intense degrees, while the shape is maintained with Chakra Control to keep it stabilized as flames. This results in a bluish-white focused flame which is mainly electricity running through the heated gas.



    Example Techniques:
    (Yakuton: Kyousei Yaku No Jutsu) — Singe Release: Greater Singe Technique
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create Singe flames from either their limbs structures (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce fire balls, streams, defensives, or simply aid in taijutsu. Its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique.


    (Yakuton: Den'atsu Furea) — Singe Release: Voltage Flare
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A - Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 - 50
    Damage Points: 60 - 100
    Description: This technique allows the user to focus his Yakuton chakra throughout his body in a single surge which he can then expel as an omnidirectional wave of bluish-white flames. The surge first appears on the user as if he was on fire, or like an aura of sorts. Whenever he chooses, the user can expel the flames outward, burning and shocking anything it passes through to a crisp. The amount of power the user expels and how far it goes is dependent on the chakra output.
    A-Rank
    For A-Rank power, the user need only focus his chakra and release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Short-Range.

    S-Rank
    For S-Rank power, the user must perform a single handseal while focusing his chakra and release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Mid-Range.

    Forbidden-Rank
    For Forbidden-Rank power, the user must perform a set of three handseals while focusing his chakra for a full turn and then release it. In this case, the surge of Yakuton Flames can go up to Long-Range.

    Note: If the user uses the Forbidden Rank version, the user cannot perform any Fire, Lightning, or Singe Release techniques the following turn.


    (Yakuton: Chikyū Nenshō-Ki) — Singe Release: Earth Burner
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses Yakuton chakra into his hands and slams them on the ground. The user will then release the Yakuton flames into the ground. At anytime, the user can make flames rise up in an instant and attack. The user can either have the flames rise up as a flames wide like wall or thin like a pillar. So long as the user keeps his hands on the ground, he can focus and sustain the pillars. The user can also split the amount of flames that rise up, splitting its power in each. The intensity of the flames are fatal should someone directly pass through them, with major burns occurring from getting near them.



    Conditions to be Able to Use it

    Lightning — Fire
    Kage Ranked Chakra Control


    Is Weak Against

    Wind Based Elements
    As this element is lightning at it's core, it leaves itself weak to being knocked out by the wind since it loses it's conductivity.

    Lightning Based Elements
    Despite Yakuton's base being lightning, it's inherit fire "form" makes it linger behind pure lightning, making it weak to it.

    Is Strong Against

    Fire Based Elements
    Fire Release and other forms of heat would only strengthen the overall intensity of Singe Release.

    Earth and Metal Based Elements
    The very base of this element is Lightning, the weakness of Earth Release. It can also easily conduct through Metal and melt it due to it's intense voltage it gives off.

    Water Based Elements
    Water, being a conductor of electricity, allows for Singe Release to release naturally conduct through it, and given the intense heat coming from the voltage, Singe Release is easily capable of extinguishing water and other forms of it.



    Co-Creator
    Jakai

    Students
    None Available & None Available


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    ✗ Declined: I just said that they are not so abstract as you think and then you just keep mentioning it? Your proof is still non-existing, especially because regardless of the situation how can you take the "shape" of something "shapeless" like fire? Also cut down on all the unnecessary scientific stuff as I already noticed in your other CE that for some reason you add stuff that's irrelevant and drown all the important parts in them. As a result most of your explanation becomes non-sensical and difficult to understand. And as said as your proof is incorrect, your way of creating is also incorrect. Frankly you gave all that scientific stuff, of which I wonder how much you actually truly understood, and then came up with a rather cheap way in creating it that is not acceptable at all. Not to mention you forgot one of the most important parts here despite that you mentioned it, which is what makes me think you don't really get what you are saying and largely started copy pasting stuff from wikipedia, and that is that it always occurs around sharp objects. That's why it appeared sometimes on the masts of ships as those are high and sharp. You do not have such an object and a CE can't be reliant on something like that either.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom Element Japanese Name
    Parusuton

    Custom Element English Name
    Pulse Release

    The Element is Based On
    Fire + Lightning
    Advanced Chakra Control



    Facts that Prove the Element to be Possible (In the Manga Context):
    While this can always happen in the Naruto-universe, who'd be yelling at a cup of coffee to warm it up? Does that even work? Believe it or not it absolutely does, it just takes a while.

    Everything that happens, including warming up a cup of coffee or screaming at the top of your lungs, takes energy. What matters is how much energy there is and what form it all takes. When you yell, you convert the stored up (in physics speak its “potential”) chemical energy in your body into active energy.

    The most important thing to remember that the amount of energy is always the same; it can never be spontaneously created or destroyed and thus has to come from somewhere. That way, if you trace it back, the chemical energy in your body came from the potential chemical energy stored in the nutritious bagel you ate for breakfast (essentially a calorie is the stored energy in food). That potential chemical energy in turn came from the wheat plant converting the radiant energy from sunlight into stored chemical energy. The sun shines because of nuclear reactions going on twenty four hours a day (and yes even at night) at its core. All this is rather common-sense proves in the Naruto-universe, that easily are quite very evident.

    How it Works:
    Understanding

    So what does all this have to do with me hollering at my morning cup of Joe? It shows that once sound leaves your body it’s not the end of the story. Its energy still needs somewhere to go, so why not into the coffee? On a very tiny scale (as tiny as 1/100,000,000th of a centimeter) everything is made of tiny vibrating particles called molecules. An object’s temperature is the measurement of how fast these molecules are moving around. The faster they’re moving the higher the temperature. Speeding up these molecules takes energy of course, and that’s where the shouting comes in.

    Sound is just another form of energy, and one that isn’t too different from heat. Sound waves are the momentary compression and expansion of air molecules as they travel away from their source. What separates sound from heat is essentially how organized these vibrations are. Sound starts out as structured waves at its source that over time dissipates into the general disorder (“entropy”) of the other molecules in the atmosphere. The energy is still there, it’s just being bounced around molecules over a huge area that’s completely disorganized.

    This dissipated sound energy bouncing around air molecules now takes the same form as heat. Both are exciting molecules, making them vibrate around faster and faster. So what happens when you add heat to something, it raises its temperature. “Temperature” is the measurement of how fast the molecules in a substance are moving, while “heat” is the net amount of thermal energy throughout the entire object.

    Sound carries a incredibly and relatively low amount of energy while warming up a cup of coffee an appreciable amount takes very much more. The average human yells at about 80 decibels, which carries along with it about .001 watts of energy, about a 100,000 times less than the energy needed to light a standard 100 watt bulb. If you were to focus this energy at the average 8 oz cup of coffee (we’ll round up to .25 liters to make calculations easier) the average yell lasting a single second would warm the cup of coffee .00000095 degrees Celsius.

    There are a lot of implied assumptions when we do this “back of the envelope” calculation. (Personally I prefer using napkins.) We’re assuming things like a perfect transfer of energy from your yell to the coffee, a perfectly insulated cup that will never let any heat escape, and an unending even stream of energy. Obviously creating such a perfect system is extremely difficult in real life, but as we’ll know, with the ability of chakra. It’s only possible within realms of Naruto-universe rationale.

    Creation

    The mixing of both Lightning chakra and Fire chakra, in a chakra fashion that's much similar like-sound chakra with more control to create Pulse chakra. The Mixed Lightning and Fire chakra harness the fine kinetic energy like waves, and types of similar properties but waves become unable to bounce off objects. When conjured after with Katon chakra it enhances most of the wave's energy making them into powerful heated waves, which would be able explode/melt material upon contact depending on subject of elemental interaction. These waves would so to say, appear as invisible wave-like fires, when launched before fading out as a melting/exploding echo. While the user is molding Pulse chakra, their raw chakra will polish up the heated new chakra and with shape maintained with Chakra Control to keep it stabilized.



    Example Techniques:
    (Parusuton: ???) — Pulse Release: ???
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user gathers Parusuton chakra into their mouth and infuses their vocal chords as they release a burst of sound-heat wave towards the opponent. Whatever caught within the waves will either melt/explode into flames

    Note: Travels at 200 speed



    (Parusuton: ???) — Pulse Release: ???
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: E - Forbidden
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 5 - 50
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user charges Parusuton chakra into the palms of there hands, and then smash them together. The force creates Parusuton chakra infused sound-heat waves which can be used to melt and disperse oncoming jutsu(only works on equal to Rank or below rank jutsu).

    Note: User can only use the F-rank once per battle.
    Note: Travels at 250 speed



    (Parusuton: ???) — Pulse Release: ???
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers Parusuton chakra either around their fist, arm, or leg and then charge towards their opponent. With that area of their body having that chakra infused with it upon utilizing an attack with either of those areas it causes an intensive sounding scotch upon their flesh that acts as a secondary blow. That makes the opponent unable to use what ever body part is hit for 1 turn. Even if the opponent manages to evade, chances are they still will be hit by the sound-heat release. If that's the case this jutsus damage is halved.

    Note:Travels at 150 speed.




    Conditions to be Able to Use it
    Lightning — Fire
    Kage Ranked Chakra Control




    Is Weak Against
    Wind Based Elements
    When faced with this element, Pulse release will lose due to density variations associated with wind's ability to control the direction of the effect. Meaning, they'd be not only able to counter the effect but, also reverse the attack altogether.

    Water Based Elements
    When faced with this element, Pulse Release will lose due to the wavelengths absorbed by the waters molecules and the energy distributed makes this rather a point-less much up.



    Is Strong Against
    Earth Based Elements
    Much like Water Release, when this element is faced with Pulse Release; the wavelengths absorbed by the Earth's molecules will not distribute the energy which would make the materials to rapidly heat up and explode/ melt.

    Fire Based Elements
    Rather the worst much up when faced with this element, Pulse release extraordinary formidable toward fire release-based elements as it's able to not only dispatch the element altogether but also very absorbent of the heat given by the element which in turn enhances its abilities.




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    ✗ Declined: This is what I consider an explanation that's largely meant to function as fog. This is in the end plainly heat and all of this already falls under the Temperature CE among others.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Ozuzon

    Custom element English name: Ozone Release

    The element is based on: Lightning and Wind Release

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Ozone is an allotrope of oxygen and is found naturally in the atmosphere. Ozone is formed in atmosphere from the action of ultraviolet light and also atmospheric electrical discharges on di-oxygen,and is present in low concentrations throughout the Earth's atmosphere.This could be the same case in Naruto world. Ozone is something found naturally and as such it is something which is applicable. Every time there is a lightning storm, Ozone is said to be formed due to the massive electrical discharges.As we already know,lightning storms are there in the ninja world,so its safe to assume that ozone will be formed this way. Jutus's like Kirin is formed thanks to the lightning storm that one creates by heating the atmosphere,this proves that lightning storms can be created artificially so its possible for ozone to exist and to be created artificially.As ozone can be formed in two ways,the only possible way for a ninja is to make use of both his Lightning nature and Wind nature.

    How it works:The ozone release works by combining the Lightning nature,with the Wind nature, using exceptional chakra control to do this. The lightning chakra causes the oxygen in the wind to react, forming Ozone. Ozone is a flammable pale blue gas, slightly soluble in water and its odor is sharp, reminiscent of chlorine, and detectable by people with heightened sense of smell(like that of inuzuka's) at concentrations of as little as 10 parts per billion in air. Exposure to low concentration of ozone causes headaches,burning eyes and irritation to the respiratory passages. Even low concentrations of ozone are very destructive to organic materials such as latex, plastics,animal lung tissue and stunts overall growth of plants as such it is very effective against wood release. A higher concentration of ozone has also the potency to harm lung function and irritate the respiratory system and cause cardiopulmonary problems which may lead to heart failure if not dealt with. Even very low concentrations of ozone can be harmful to the upper respiratory tract and the lungs. The severity of injury depends on both by the concentration of ozone and the duration of exposure. Severe and permanent lung injury or death could result from even a very short-term exposure to relatively low concentrations. Due to extreme mastery over ozone,the users of ozone release are not effected by inhaling ozone. Heavy concentrations of ozone are however deadly to the user of the release as well. Ozone has a great oxidizing power, second to fluorine. Much like wind, Ozone is very flammable as it oxygen within it fuels the heat and flames of fire-based elements, making it weak to Fire Release.

    A startlingly unique property possessed by Ozone is its naturally capability to absorb various forms of electromagnetic radiation. Naturally occurring Ozone, strongly absorbs solar UV radiation, causing atmospheric temperature to climb to about 30°F (0°C) at the top of the layer, and preventing much of this radiation from reaching earth's surface, where it would injure many living things. However, once manipulated through chakra, this ability to absorb radiation is heightened to a new level. The user's ozone is capable of absorbing all types of radiation in the electromagnetic spectrum, allowing it to shield radio waves, infrared energy, visible light, microwaves and even gamma radiation. Enhancing substances with chakra has shown to make them much more potent as displayed through Konan's abilities. Her Paper Ninjutsu was able to go head to head with Jiriaya’s fire jutsu, whilst normal paper would been futile against the Katon element. A logical explanation being that infusing chakra into elements/objects makes them more powerful. Following this same principle, Ozuzon's radiation absorption capabilities far dwarf those of natural ozone.

    The resulting effect of this means:
    ♦Ozone can be used to act as a very powerful radiation shield
    ♦Ozone can be used to block sunlight
    ♦That it can be used to make conditions in a certain area more habitual by creating an expansive dome of Ozone, decreasing the overall temperature of the confined space by letting in less harmful UV Light.
    ♦Despite being weak to Fire-based elements, elements which solely utilize heat but have no inherent substance are weak to Ozuzon, as its absorption abilities encompass infrared radiation (heat energy).

    Usage Examples:

    (Ozuzon: Ozon sougou)|Ozone Release: Ozone Synthesis
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user does a single seal manifesting a great amount of ozone gas in a desired area of the user's choice.The inhaling of this ozone gas can cause respiratory and cardio disorders.As the gas starts to materialize around the opponent,it causes burning eyes and irritation to the respiratory passages. After a turn of exposure,the opponent would start to breathe heavily and blood flow to the heart would be reduced. After 2 turns of exposure,the opponent will begin to feel feint and their vision will become clouded. After the third turn of exposure, the opponent will die due to heart failure. This ozone gas created this way can also be used for further ozone related jutsu's. A significant drawback of the jutsu is that the opponent can smell the ozone forming around due to its odor,even if he doesn't have heightened sense of smell. Furthermore, the due to Ozone's visible nature, the opponent sees the mist forming around them, allowing them to react accordingly.

    ♦Lasts 3 turns
    ♦If made Short Range of the user,he too would have the same symptoms and would die at the end of the 3 turns
    ♦Usable once per battle

    (Ozuzon: Ozon sougou)|Ozone Release: Twilight Greenhouse
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will channel their Ozuzon chakra into their around them to cause a massive dome to surface around themselves and their opponent. The dome itself is a very dark blue and composed entirely of dense ozone. This dome serves the purpose of blocking out all sunlight and harmful rays trying to penetrate the structure, making the inside of the dome pitch-black. Anyone inside of the dome will be robbed of their sense of sight, causing them to rely upon their other senses.



    Is weak to:
    ♦Fire and Lava Release (and all of their KG/CE variants) - Similar to Wind, Ozuzon is extremely flammable and will only seek to fuel the flames of these types of elements.
    ♦Earth Release and Sand Release- Earth shields the gas, making it incapable of passing through.
    ♦All Crystal Elements - Same as Earth
    ♦All Metal Elements - Same as Earth


    Is strong against:

    ♦Lightning Release (and all of its KG/CE variants)- The element is a natural insulator much like wind and its high electrical resistivity contributes to this.
    ♦Radiation,Radio Frequency and Light Release (Double Strength) - Ozuzon has a double strength to these types of elements as its extremely efficient in absorbing the various types of EM Radiation.
    ♦Sound Release - Similar to Wind Release, Ozuzon is capable of repelling sound waves as it acts as the medium in which it moves through.
    ♦Wood Release and plant-based elements - Ozone is capable of severly hindering growth by interfering with photosynthesis and various other biological process. This strength includes: Mushroom, Root and Plant Release.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery of Wind| Mastery of Lightning | Great Chakra Control


    Co-creator: Negative Knight

    Students I passed this custom element on too:? & ?

    -Completely remodeled the element.Removed the multiple states of the element and the description about the combo with Fire.

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    ✗ Declined: I do not accept comments like "are not affected by inhaling ozone". If you spit out a fireball, you might get used to the temperature of it, however if you are going to try swallowing the fireball back in, you're going to have a very bad time. Secondly your argumentation of chakra increasing abilities is only half true. Wood infused with chakra is stronger than normal wood, however is water infused chakra going to be more wet? Is lightning infused chakra stronger than normal lightning? If that would be the case, what's the point of Kirin? It's not because it's chakra infused that it suddenly becomes better than it natural counterpart. Even when that's the case, that doesn't mean everything is boosted. Ozon doesn't block all UV radiation, so that argument would be enough to say that chakra infused ozon would block all UV radiation. However it is not strong enough to say that it suddenly can block all forms of radiation. There is more than one factor involved in blocking radiation and just adding chakra to ozon is no guarantee that it would block those too just because it can block UV. Lastly double strength? What kind of BS is that?
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    Removed all radiation bit
    Removed immunity to ozone



    Custom element Japanese name: Ozuzon

    Custom element English name: Ozone Release

    The element is based on: Lightning and Wind Release

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Ozone is an allotrope of oxygen and is found naturally in the atmosphere. Ozone is formed in atmosphere from the action of ultraviolet light and also atmospheric electrical discharges on di-oxygen, and is present in low concentrations throughout the Earth's atmosphere. This could be the same case in Naruto world. Ozone is something found naturally and as such it is something which is applicable. Every time there is a lightning storm, Ozone is said to be formed due to the massive electrical discharges. As we already know, lightning storms are there in the ninja world, so its safe to assume that ozone will be formed this way. Jutus's like Kirin is formed thanks to the lightning storm that one creates by heating the atmosphere, this proves that lightning storms can be created artificially so its possible for ozone to exist and to be created artificially. As ozone can be formed in two ways, the only possible way for a ninja is to make use of both his Lightning nature and Wind nature.

    How it works: The ozone release works by combining the Lightning nature, with the Wind nature, using exceptional chakra control to do this. The lightning chakra causes the oxygen in the wind to react, forming Ozone. Ozone is a flammable pale blue gas, slightly soluble in water and its odor is sharp, reminiscent of chlorine, and detectable by people with heightened sense of smell(like that of inuzuka's) at concentrations of as little as 10 parts per billion in air. Exposure to low concentration of ozone causes headaches, burning eyes and irritation to the respiratory passages. Even low concentrations of ozone are very destructive to organic materials such as latex, plastics, animal lung tissue and stunts overall growth of plants as such it is very effective against wood release. A higher concentration of ozone has also the potency to harm lung function and irritate the respiratory system and cause cardiopulmonary problems which may lead to heart failure if not dealt with. Even very low concentrations of ozone can be harmful to the upper respiratory tract and the lungs. The severity of injury depends on both by the concentration of ozone and the duration of exposure. Severe and permanent lung injury or death could result from even a very short-term exposure to relatively low concentrations. Although the user can create and manipulate ozone, the user not immune to its effects, and cannot inhale it without repercussions. Ozone has a great oxidizing power, second to fluorine. These effects will be greater than that of its natural state as the user will be producing/manipulating a far more concentrated version of ozone that would probably never be seen in the natural world. Much like wind, Ozone is very flammable as has oxygen within it, which fuels the heat and flames of fire-based elements, making it weak to Fire Release.

    A startlingly unique property possessed by Ozone is its naturally capability to absorb various forms of electromagnetic radiation. Although ozone in the ozone layer is the component that absorbs/filters the dangerous radiation, it does not make up the entire ozone layer. Even though that is true, the ozone layer still absorbs 97-99% of UV medium wavelengths. The longer wavelengths are the ones that sometimes manage to get through the ozone layer, and these wavelengths are not immediately harmful unless there is abnormal exposure to the suns rays. (sometimes they are even beneficial to the Vitamin D production in humans.) Since the previous is true, it is feasible to expect greater absorption since it is only pure ozone being manipulated. (Imagine an ozone layer entirely comprised of ozone.)The ozone in Ozuzon will be extremely concentrated compared to its natural counterpart by sheer numbers alone, thus its effects will be stronger/more potent. (Even without accounting for chakra manipulation). Ozone absorbs solar UV radiation, and heat, causing atmospheric temperature to climb to about 30°F (0°C) at the top of the layer, and preventing much of this radiation from reaching earth's surface, where it would injure many living things.

    To further prove Ozuzon's strength to radiation, it is worthy to note that Gamma, X ray radiation from space does not reach the ground, and it would take a gamma burst to destroy the ozone layer. (A gamma burst has more energy in 10 seconds than our sun's 10 billion year lifetime, and our fairly rare.)

    Releases: As a gas it is handled much like fuuton. Jutsu of Ozuzon will maintain the effects, and the pale blue color.

    The resulting effect of this means:
    ♦Ozone can be used to act as a very powerful radiation shield
    ♦Ozone can be used to block light, including light from the sun
    ♦That it can be used to make conditions in a certain area more habitual by creating an expansive dome of Ozone, decreasing the overall temperature of the confined space by letting in less harmful UV Light.
    ♦Despite being weak to Fire-based elements, elements which solely utilize heat but have no inherent substance are weak to Ozuzon, as its absorption abilities encompass infrared radiation (heat energy).

    Usage Examples:

    (Ozuzon: Ozon sougou)|Ozone Release: Ozone Synthesis
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user does a single seal manifesting a great amount of ozone gas in a desired area of the user's choice.The inhaling of this ozone gas can cause respiratory and cardio disorders.As the gas starts to materialize around the opponent,it causes burning eyes and irritation to the respiratory passages. After a turn of exposure,the opponent would start to breathe heavily and blood flow to the heart would be reduced. After 2 turns of exposure,the opponent will begin to feel feint and their vision will become clouded. After the third turn of exposure, the opponent will die due to heart failure. This ozone gas created this way can also be used for further ozone related jutsu's. A significant drawback of the jutsu is that the opponent can smell the ozone forming around due to its odor,even if he doesn't have heightened sense of smell. Furthermore, the due to Ozone's visible nature, the opponent sees the mist forming around them, allowing them to react accordingly.

    ♦Lasts 3 turns
    ♦If made Short Range of the user, he too would have the same symptoms and would die at the end of the 3 turns
    ♦Usable once per battle

    (Ozuzon: Ozon sougou)|Ozone Release: Twilight Greenhouse
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will channel their Ozuzon chakra into their around them to cause a massive dome to surface around themselves and their opponent. The dome itself is a very dark blue and composed entirely of dense ozone. This dome serves the purpose of blocking out all sunlight and harmful rays trying to penetrate the structure, making the inside of the dome pitch-black. Anyone inside of the dome will be robbed of their sense of sight, causing them to rely upon their other senses.



    Is weak to:
    ♦Fire and Lava Release (and all of their KG/CE variants) - Similar to Wind, Ozuzon is extremely flammable and will only seek to fuel the flames of these types of elements.
    ♦Earth Release and Sand Release- Earth shields the gas, making it impossible of passing through.
    ♦All Crystal Elements - Same as Earth


    Is strong against:


    ♦Lightning Release (and all of its KG/CE variants)- The element is a natural insulator much like wind and its high electrical resistivity contributes to this.
    ♦Radiation-Ozuzon aborbs/filters most UV radiation waves
    Light Release - Ozuzon can absorb the heating properties of light release
    Heat based elements: Elements or jutsu that only manipulate the heat of an object, without a form of its own (lava, fire etc.) will hardly effect Ozone due to its heat absorbent properties.
    ♦Sound Release - Similar to Wind Release, Ozuzon is capable of repelling sound waves as it acts as the medium in which it moves through.
    ♦Wood Release, plant-based/organic elements - Ozone is capable of severely hindering growth by interfering with photosynthesis and various other biological process. This strength includes: Mushroom, Root and Plant Release.
    ♦ Metals-can become extremely weak due to the oxidizing/corrosive effects of Ozuzon. (excludes Gold)


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery of Wind| Mastery of Lightning | Great Chakra Control


    Co-creator: Igneel

    Students I passed this custom element on too:? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: You're contradicting yourself. You say twice that it's strong against heat and use fire and lava as examples and then you list fire and lava as weaknesses. This is quite important as I find the STR and WEAK quite unbalanced. Also ozone makes metals oxidize, however that's a two-way street. The metals and the ozone both undergo a transformation. And what do you mean with that Ozon will maintain the effects? It's not because it's wind based it suddenly can have the properties of wind if that's what you mean.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Changed most if not all of the reasoning
    Added more proof
    Changed strengths and weaknesses

    Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
    Custom element Japanese name: Suna no dorīmu

    Custom element English name: Dream Sand ( it's actually Dimethyltryptamine, also known as DMT, Dream Sand just sounds better)

    The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Water + Lightning + Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Dream Sand (DMT) is a hallucinogenic chemical found in soil, fungi, trees, and well over 50 varieties of common plants and fauna, it's even abundant in common grass. Research has also found and proved that Dream Sand is found and released in the pineal gland of mammals when they dream, and other areas when they are not (this includes humans).

    To link this to the naruto verse, it's obvious that the Naruto Earth contains many different kinds of plants, of course it contains soil, and as seen, it contains grass. There has not been a single shred of evidence that would lead anyone to believe that the earth in naruto doesn't have most if not all of the common plant life that our world does. Furthermore, there is also nothing that would lead anyone to believe that the natural makeup of any of the aforementioned life is any different than that of our world. It is also clear that the world of Naruto contains humans and mammals who obviously dream, meaning (taking into account that nothing has proven that the organs of the people in naruto are any different than the organs found in humans here) that their pineal glands are releasing Dream Sand, and thus, Dream Sand is also found in other places in their body.
    How it works:
    A few factors are needed in order for the creation and production of Dream Sand. The soil, fungi, grass, trees and plants that are within and grow from the soil that naturally makes and creates Dream Sand, the destruction of the impurities within and around the Dream Sand, and finally heating the entire form so that it takes a hardened crystalline form.

    In order to perfectly mimic and recreate these factors, the user will combine 4 elements at once. Earth to represent the base and the Dream Sand found within the soil. Water, which combined with the earth represents the growth and flourishing of the plants, grass, and fungi which continuously produce Dream Sand. Precisely placed Fire and Lighting which run simultaneously alongside the earth and water to completely destroy any and all impurities within the soil and organic life that would otherwise ruin the Dream Sand. And, as the fire helps to destroy the impurities, it will naturally heat the Dream Sand, hardening it and giving it it's white crystalline form.


    The user will combine these elements all at once in order to create pure Dream Sand from any point on their body. If the user wishes to use Dream Sands hallucinogenic effects for themselves, they may even produce the substance within their body.

    Alternatively, the user may produce Dream Sand from the ground by using a combination of the real and raw substances needed to create it and their own chakra to substitute for any part of the creation process that they need but isn't already done or even there.

    Dream Sand takes form as many fine, small, white, sand like crystals that the user controls like sand.





    What makes Dream Sand so special is what would happen if one were to absorb the substance, whether it be orally, through the skin, directly into the bloodstream, or even by smelling the fumes that it gives off when burned. Dream Sand is highly susceptible to absorption and has been proven to enter the human body in all of these ways. It has also been proven that no matter what form Dream Sand takes, it's hallucinogenic effects do not lessen or fade. Dream Sand is capable of giving off a wide variety of psychoactive affects, some of which are listed below

    • Intense visual hallucinations
    • Altered concept of time
    • Stomach discomfort
    • Overwhelming fear
    • Lung irritation
    • Increased heart rate
    • Increased body temperatures.
    • Unconsciousness
    • Death
    • Distortion of color, sound and vision



    Usage Examples:

    ???? | Dream Sand: The Knowing
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 6p
    Description: Using his chakra the user will create Dream Sand from his body in order to make any weapon he wishes

    ???? | Dream Sand: Kissland
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a (+20 to tai)
    Description:
    Using his Chakra, the user creates a single crystal of Dream Sand in their mouth. The crystal will immediately be absorbed into the users body, putting him under the affects of the Hallucinogens nearly instantly. The user's heart would start to beat at rapid rates as he begins feeling a white spirit wrap its limbs around the user's limbs as if to control them. On the other hand he starts to hallucinate that the opponent is some feeble shell of themselves, thus giving the user the thought of being way stronger than the scrawny opponent. The simple state of "mind over matter" kicks in and due to the user believing he's much stronger than the opponent physically, he actually pushes his body past its limits to reach this gap in physical strength. In turn this gives the user a slight boost in his physical movements (1.5×) and stronger damage from his physical attacks (+20).

    ☆ Usable 3 times
    ☆ Lasts 3 turns with a turn cool down between uses

    ???? | Dream Sand: Love In The Sky
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: Using Dream Sand from the body, the user spits out senbon sized needles at the opponent aimed to pierce them in order to put them under its hallucinogenic effects.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Earth, Fire, Lightning, and Water Mastery + Great Chakra control

    Is weak to:

    Lightning/Lightning Based CE : Lightning's great destructive power is able to completely obliterate Dream Sand.

    Fire/Fire Based Ce Like lightning, Fire also has a high destructive capacity which can incinerate Dream. Sand. Also, when burned, Dream Sand takes on a gaseous state which is then out of the users control.

    Is strong against:

    Water/Water Based Ce: Due to the Dream Sand being made up of many compressed crystals, it is far to dense and compact for water to carry away.

    Wind/Wind Based CE: Suffering a similar fate to water, Dream Sand is far too dense and compressed for wind to cut through it or blow it away. Even if it did cut through it , being sand like, it would only take away a small portion.

    Co-creator: Shady Doctor

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: When the first you get are pictures of complicated chemicals and long chemical names, then you can be pretty sure it's not very suite for a CE as it lacks the substance for it. This is something that gets produced in very low quantities by a series of complex chemical and biological reactions and you don't just replicate that. This stuff gets mainly fabricated in labs and at best gets transformed into tiny crystals. You actually don't seem to have any idea how this gets created, this is something far too complex compared to what you wrote.


    Custom element Japanese name: Suna no dorīmu

    Custom element English name: Dream Sand ( it's actually Dimethyltryptamine, also known as DMT, Dream Sand just sounds better)

    The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Water + Lightning +Great Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): First, there must be proof that Dream Sand (DMT) exists in the Naruto universe. : Dream Sand is a hallucinogenic substance found in soil, fungi, trees, and well over 50 varieties of common plants and fauna, it's even abundant in common grass. Research has also found and proved that Dream Sand is found and released in the pineal gland of mammals when they dream, and other areas when they are not (this includes humans). It has been used, extracted, and consumed for many years, even before labs were made to synthesize it, notably by the Amazonian Indian cultures for different healing and religious purposes.

    As far as Naruto goes, there isn't really anything to lead anyone to believe that the makeup of Naruto's earth, especially the plant and organic life there, is any different from our earth. Not only that, but there is also no reason to believe that, without chakra intervention, the organs and chemicals within a normal human beings or animals body in Naruto is any different than ours. If the plant life and the human and animal life in Naruto are all the same (and there is not much as far as reasoning that it wouldn't be) then it stands to reason that Dream Sand exists in Naruto.

    One might say that Dream Sand can only be easily made within science labs using complex chemicals, but this is untrue. In addition to it's historic use by the Amazonian Indians, sources such as this, this, this, this, and this among many other sources which even include how to books, show that DMT can be easily extracted within a time frame ranging from a few hours to a few weeks from the comfort of your own home. Each of these methods are done with common house hold items, and are done by the everyday common man, not scientists.

    Another complaint as to how viable this element is lies in the amount of Dream Sand that can even be extracted. Would it be enough to actually combat other opponents? Consider another organic element, Wood Style. In real life, it takes many years, if not decades, for full grown trees and forests to grow. Yet Hashirama and Yamato have been shown to accomplish completing this feat in mere seconds or less. Another example would be Crystal Release. In order for the amount of crystals that can be created from the ground with this element to naturally occur, decades if not centuries would have to pass. Yet Guren can create a massive amount of crystals from the ground in an instant. The point here is that with chakra being the engine behind the growth of natural substances, the growth rate exponentially expands. If you consider that in mere hours, you could have a few crystals of Dream Sand made from within your own home, and combine that with the growth rate that is created in Wood Style from a forest being created in an instant, you will see that the production of Dream Sand can be gargantuan. After all, it takes a few hours to create Dream Sand, it takes years for even the first appearances of a trees growth. Especially when you combine this with the fact that the total amount of Dream Sand you are able to create is completely dependent on the amount of base material you have to work with. This particular point will be expanded on in the "How it works" section as it is very important to the CE.

    How it works: This is one of the many methods to extract Dream Sand for use. Reading over the instructions, you will see there are a few steps needed to complete this process via this method.

    1) The source material (grass, bark, fungi, soil etc) must be in a sort of aqueous solution that consists of water and the base material (step 1-2 in the link).

    2) The Ph balance of the solution must be regulated during the creation of the substance (step 3 & 7)

    3)The solution must be filtered thoroughly so that any impurities that are caused from the prior steps are gone. This is most of the process and the most important (step 4-6 and 8-9)

    4) The solution must be heated in a way so that the final product are a few moist white crystals of Dream Sand (step 10)

    This seems like a daunting task to do in the heat of battle, but is actually very easily done. With earth release it is seen that you may alter the balance in earth chakra and water chakra to create mud based jutsu. In wood release it is seen that you may alter the very makeup of an element. This is seen in "Advent of a world of flowering trees" in which instead of making the usual tree or lumber, a large flower was created. Beyond this, it should be common sense when talking about chakra nature, that one can alter the ratio of their chakra to make an element more of one type than the other. Killer Bee even spoke to naruto about changing the ratio of chakra within his rasengan to create a new one. Thus, water and earth are combined to represent the soil, bark, grass, or otherwise organic material that the Dream Sand lies in. Special attention is given to these two, as the water chakra is changed in its ratio to be more abundant that the earth chakra, to truly represent the aqueous solution.

    At the very same time, Lightning and Fire are introduced as well. The lightning chakra works by representing the charging and discharging of certain ions within the creation as it is being produced. This effectively controls and regulates the pH balance in the entire thing as needed. But that's not all. Because the Lightning and Fire chakra also combine their innate destructive natures to symbolize the destruction of any impurities that would lie in this mix of chakra natures. This is why Chakra control mastery is extremely necessary. The fire and lightning chakra placement would need to be precise in order to achieve this goal, lest it destroys any of the needed final product. The fire chakra would also come to symbolize the heat the Dream Sand to it's needed temperature, as it was doing it's work to destroy the impurities.

    Thus this element can be made just as fast as any other, due to the fact that the changing and the filtering and regulating is being done concurrent to the actual base material being produced. The best part of this is all of it can be done via chakra. Wherever the user can focus his chakra, is wherever Dream Sand can be made. The problem of only a few crystals being made is eliminated due to there being as much pure Dream Sand being made as the user pours chakra into. And as shown before with chakra accelerating the growth of Wood and Crystal, it working as the engine behind this element should create enough growth that the amount of Dream Sand that can be produced is truly gargantuan. If the user so chooses, he can replace the earth or water chakra elements of Dream Sand with the real thing, creating Dream Sand on both of these mediums. It's a simple matter of using the actual substance, rather than the user's own chakra.






    What makes Dream Sand so special is what would happen if one were to absorb the substance, whether it be orally, through the skin, directly into the bloodstream, or even by smelling the fumes that it gives off when burned. Dream Sand is highly susceptible to absorption and has been proven to enter the human body in all of these ways. It has also been proven that no matter what form Dream Sand takes, it's hallucinogenic effects do not lessen or fade. Being the creator of the substance (it being his own chakra), the user can choose to either fall prey to the effects of Dream Sand or not. Likewise, being his own creation, he can choose what type of effects the Dream Sand he creates can have on anyone that falls victim to it's effects. Speaking of which, Dream Sand is capable of giving off a wide variety of psychoactive affects, some of which are listed below.

    Dream sand takes the form of many compressed white crystals that are controlled en mass similar to sand.


    • Intense visual hallucinations
    • Altered concept of time
    • Stomach discomfort
    • Overwhelming fear
    • Lung irritation
    • Increased heart rate
    • Increased body temperatures.
    • Unconsciousness
    • Death
    • Distortion of color, sound and vision



    Usage Examples:

    ???? | Dream Sand: The Knowing
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 6p
    Description: Using his chakra the user will create Dream Sand from his body in order to make any weapon he wishes

    ???? | Dream Sand: Kissland
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a (+20 to tai)
    Description:
    Using his Chakra, the user creates a single crystal of Dream Sand in their mouth. The crystal will immediately be absorbed into the users body, putting him under the affects of the Hallucinogens nearly instantly. The user's heart would start to beat at rapid rates as he begins feeling a white spirit wrap its limbs around the user's limbs as if to control them. On the other hand he starts to hallucinate that the opponent is some feeble shell of themselves, thus giving the user the thought of being way stronger than the scrawny opponent. The simple state of "mind over matter" kicks in and due to the user believing he's much stronger than the opponent physically, he actually pushes his body past its limits to reach this gap in physical strength. In turn this gives the user a slight boost in his physical movements (1.5×) and stronger damage from his physical attacks (+20).

    ☆ Usable 3 times
    ☆ Lasts 3 turns with a turn cool down between uses

    ???? | Dream Sand: Love In The Sky
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: Using Dream Sand from the body, the user spits out senbon sized needles at the opponent aimed to pierce them in order to put them under its hallucinogenic effects.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Earth, Fire, Lightning, and Water Mastery + Great Chakra control

    Is weak to:

    Earth/Earth Based CE : Earthen walls serve as a way to stop Dream Sand's advances and can protect it's user from absorbing it into their system. Earth is also able to grind up the crystals into mere dust with its impressive power and weight.

    Fire/Fire Based Ce Fire can incinerate Dream Sand. Also, when burned, Dream Sand takes on a gaseous state which is then out of the users control as far as manipulation of it goes.

    Is strong against:

    Water/Water Based Ce: Due to the Dream Sand being made up of many compressed crystals, it is far to dense and compact for water to carry away.

    Wind/Wind Based CE: Suffering a similar fate to water, Dream Sand is far too dense and compressed for wind to cut through it or blow it away. Even if it did cut through it , being sand like, it would only take away a small portion.

    Co-creator: Shady Doctor

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

    _______________


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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Permission to submit a Carbon-based CE


    Custom element Japanese name: Tansoiumon

    Custom element English name:
    Carbodium Release
    The element is based on: Wind | Earth | Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    As the name may suggest, Carbodium is formed of two main components, Carbon and Rubidium.;

    Rubidium is an alkali metal that is present in the earth. The existence of metals has been established by numerous people on the base as well as fact it constitutes to the earth itself.

    Carbon has also been established to exist in the manga. Not only is it an approved CE but it is also the fourth most abundant element in the universe. It exists in many forms and shapes as in Diamond and Coal, also two of the existent elements.

    While the element doesn't have anything with the production of the respective elements, the existence of the said elements takes part in the formation of Carbodium.

    How it works:
    The process of creating Carbodium is basically the insertion an alkali metal, which in this case is Rubidium into into buckyballs, a pure carbon structure which has a spherical shape. Such insertion applies pressure to the compound when it's in the conductor/insulator phase turns it into the weird state of matter, and also makes it superconductive at (relatively) high temperatures. This weird state is said not to be solid, but not liquid as well, however, that is properties wise. Shape wise, it looks like a normal metal as the picture above shows. What makes this metal different than others in the nature?

    The insertion of the Rubidium atoms between the carbon molecules increases the pressure which changes the material from being an insulator into a superconductor. In doing so the material that was created had the properties of an insulator, superconductor, metal and a magnet, all in one. And that is Carbodium. However, due to the carbon atoms wanting to get back to their normal form, this metal obtains an intermediate state which is an insulator that turns into a superconductor with applied pressure. The said pressure could be obtained by elements or just increasing the amount of metal. Not much is known about it's strength or melting temperature, but it was assumed it was the same as a standpoint of regular metals.

    In RP application, since both Carbon and Rubidium exist in earth, by using the user's earth chakra, he is able to do the insertion of the Rubidium molecules into the Carbon, creating Carbodium. By adding wind chakra, the user is able to acquire the needed pressure to obtain the mature form of the metal. In normal state, it acts as insulator, however, with added pressure using wind chakra, the metal turns into a superconductor, which conducts electricity with zero energy loss.


    Jutsu Usage Examples:

    (Tansoiumon: Tansou No Sōken) - Carbodium Release: Carbodium of all Creations

    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user utilizes his Carbodium chakra to create different constructs out of his body or earth in the form of Carbodium.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over Earth and Wind.

    Is weak to:
    Since it could exit in two states, it's weakness is different in each state:
    • Normal state:
      • Fire (melts the metal)
      • Lightning (insulator)
    • Superconducting state:
    • Fire (melts it)
    • Wind (pushes it back)


    Is strong against:

    • Normal state:
      • Earth
      • Organic Materials
      • Ice (Also turns it into superconducting state)
      • Magnetism (Since it has magnetic properties, it acts as a stronger magnetic and thus allows the user to manipulate magnetism techniques of the opponent's or just nulls it useless)
      • Water and Water related CEs
    • Superconducting state:
    • Water and water related CEs
    • Organic materials
    • Earth
    • Lightning (super-conduction)


    Co-creator:


    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


    I will be getting Pervy's permission to make a CE based on carbon when he comes online.

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: You never make references to what other people have written in their CE explanations as that comes down to "what he said". Also this element does not seem to exist at all, I can't find anything about it at all. The only thing I could find was that it's possible you can cage certain elements in buckyballs, but there is no mentioning whatsoever of rubidium, let alone that you get all of these properties. It also makes no sense as you think you can freely change form insulator to conductor, which you can't. You can't just say this time around I add more wind pressure, that's not how it works and this pressure would be such a vague concept in your case it would be under pressure each time it's hit by anything.

    Edit: following your links I need to reevaluate some things, but the end result is still the same. Even your articles, and others, clearly state that this is in the experimental phase and that a lot of things are uncertain. The final goal is to be able to turn isolators into superconductors easily, however this element is neither of them, it's a intermediary state. It has characteristics of both, but it's still not exactly the same. Unless the limits of those characteristics would be properly defined, which is not possible considering no one knows them, I can't approve this as what you say comes down to that you can change whenever you see fit the element from a regular metal/isolator to a magnet/superconductor and I can't allow that. This would be the same as saying you have intermediary state between water and ice and then say you can use them both. The fact that you listed STR & WEAK for each of those states separately backs this up as that should not be the case for a CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Kisenonton

    Custom element English name: Xenon Release

    The element is based on: Wind | Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Xenon is an actual element, it is colorless, heavy, odorless, and is a noble gas. Xenon has been used for many things, from being used for flash lamps to being used for anesthesia, and even in some lasers. It exists naturally within the earth's atmosphere, and even found in some natural springs around the world. While in most cases, being inside camera bulbs which produces the flash. In these cases we seen plenty cases of all these examples above. Naruto of course has an atmosphere, which would apply a sort of real word physics into play. We have seen natural springs (Where pervy sage used to spy on woman, and multiple cases where we seen shinobis relaxing). The use of drugs (Medicine) In naruto has also been seen, including lasers, not only for medical reasons but the asura path himself, which produces lasers. All these are reasons to believe that just like the real word, xenon is also present in NV aswell. All around us, mainly in the atmosphere

    How it works:
    This element is achieved by combining both the wind element, and the lightning element and mold both of them together creating xenon release; Wind release because it is a Gas formed in the air around us and the lightning chakra adds a discharge, creating Xenon and then the user will be capable of manipulating and expanding from the Xenon chakra that they have created from the air. Xenon is very advance and special, not only due to it being heavier then normal wind, dealing more blunt damage, but its ability to take a lightning property and incorporate it into wind, which is a bright/flash effect that can be used to blind enemies in a fighting context. Xenon can be created two ways naturally: By combining the lighting and wind chakra nature in their body, giving creation to xenon which can be used, expelled from the users body such as from the mouth, hands, etc. Or The user can expel both their wind and lightning chakra into the air creating xenon from the atmosphere which can be used for jutsu purposes, or even for dark places as a flash.

    Xenon Release when used in Ninjutsu can be used to create beams or waves similar to gusts of winds except with that added brightness - the beams still only cause blunt damage but are generally faster to shoot from the user's hand than to create a gust of Xenon that completely blinds a whole battlefield. Because of it's strength it can create a propellant force (as it is also used in the real world as a propellant for Space shuttle engines) the users could be capable of creating beams from their hands for example to propel them upwards in quick timeslots. Though it seems to only cause blunt damage to the target, Xenon is used for anaesthesia and so can be used so that if the target breathes it in by being in the vicinity of it or is hit by the blunt attack it won't just cause damage but some techniques can cause drowsiness through relaxation.

    Usage Examples:

    Kisenonton: Gurandochariotto No Idaina Furasshu | Xenon Release: Great Flash of the Grand Chariot

    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user will create several handseals while gathering xenon chakra into their lunges. The user will then expel the xenon from their mouth expelling a large stream of xenon from his mouth towards said opponent. This technique can't be looked at for periods of time or it will temporarily blind the opponent


    Kisenonton: Ionsurasuta wa, akutibu ni! | Xenon Release: Ion Thrusters Activate!

    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    The user will create beams of Xenon from their hands that will quickly propel them in the opposite direction they pointed said beams in, if they were aimed at point blank range of a target it would cause tremendous blunt damage to them but is mainly used for evasion.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    -Mastery over Wind
    -Mastery over Lightning


    Is weak to:
    Earth+ Earth Base CE/Steel (Elements Harder then earth, such ruby, iron, etc): Earth is a strong defense and can protect one from Xenon.
    Water+Water Base CE (has more of a form than Xenon, so will be weaker than it when coming into brute force contact with it).

    Is strong against:
    Lightning/Storm (Lightning based elements): Xenon is made stronger by electricity, giving it a brighter effect and so lightning will only make it brighter if it comes into contact with it and be pretty useless.
    Wind+ Wind Base CE: Due to xenon being heavier then normal wind, it completely overpowers normal wind, being stronger in force

    Co-creator: LonelyAssassin

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Currently the biggest issue now is what makes it different from Argon? As the two are very similar and Flash has been submitting it longer than you. Also xenon is not going to make you move faster. Oil is also used as a fuel, but oil on itself is not going to make you move faster and what kind of argument is that lightning/storm are weak against this because they're bright? How is that even relevant?



    Update:
    -Took Out the useless stuff
    - Added some difference between the element, Rp wise & Rl wise
    - Added A strength and a weakness

    Custom element Japanese name: Kisenonton

    Custom element English name: Xenon Release

    The element is based on: Wind | Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Xenon is an actual element, it is colorless, heavy, odorless, and is a noble gas. Xenon has been used for many things, from being used for flash lamps to being used for anesthesia, and even in some lasers. It exists naturally within the earth's atmosphere, and even found in some natural springs around the world. While in most cases, being inside camera bulbs which produces the flash. One thing that makes this element unique is that it is the 2nd heaviest gas rivaling radon, being stronger then its counterparts (neon, argon, helium etc) while the most noticeable difference between the Argon element is that xenon does not having a cold effect upon impact like argon and frost bite. While also not having any negative side effects upon inhalation like Argon In these cases we seen plenty cases of all these examples above. Naruto of course has an atmosphere, which would apply a sort of real word physics into play. We have seen natural springs (Where pervy sage used to spy on woman, and multiple cases where we seen shinobis relaxing). The use of drugs (Medicine) In naruto has also been seen, including lasers, not only for medical reasons but the asura path himself, which produces lasers. All these are reasons to believe that just like the real word, xenon is also present in NV aswell. All around us, mainly in the atmosphere

    How it works:
    This element is achieved by combining both the wind element, and the lightning element and mold both of them together creating xenon release; Wind release because it is a Gas formed in the air around us and the lightning chakra adds a discharge, creating Xenon and then the user will be capable of manipulating and expanding from the Xenon chakra that they have created from the air. Xenon is very advance and special, not only due to it being heavier then normal wind, dealing more blunt damage, what makes this element different from the argon element is its ability to take a lightning property and incorporate it into wind, which is a bright/flash effect that can be used to blind enemies in a fighting context giving xenon an electro-flash effect. Xenon can be created two ways naturally: By combining the lighting and wind chakra nature in their body, giving creation to xenon which can be used, expelled from the users body such as from the mouth, hands, etc. Or The user can expel both their wind and lightning chakra into the air creating xenon from the atmosphere which can be used for jutsu purposes, or even for dark places as a flash.

    Xenon Release when used in Ninjutsu can be used to create beams or waves similar to gusts of winds except with that added brightness - the beams still only cause blunt damage but are generally faster to shoot from the user's hand than to create a gust of Xenon that completely blinds a whole battlefield. Because of it's strength it can create a propellant force (as it is also used in the real world as a propellant for Space shuttle engines) the users could be capable of creating beams from their hands for example to propel them upwards in quick timeslots. Though it seems to only cause blunt damage to the target, Xenon is used for anaesthesia and so can be used so that if the target breathes it in by being in the vicinity of it or is hit by the blunt attack it won't just cause damage but some techniques can cause drowsiness through relaxation.

    Usage Examples:

    Kisenonton: Gurandochariotto No Idaina Furasshu | Xenon Release: Great Flash of the Grand Chariot

    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user will create several handseals while gathering xenon chakra into their lunges. The user will then expel the xenon from their mouth expelling a large stream of xenon from his mouth towards said opponent. This technique can't be looked at for periods of time or it will temporarily blind the opponent


    Kisenonton: Ionsurasuta wa, akutibu ni! | Xenon Release: Ion Thrusters Activate!

    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    The user will create beams of Xenon from their hands that will quickly propel them in the opposite direction they pointed said beams in, if they were aimed at point blank range of a target it would cause tremendous blunt damage to them but is mainly used for evasion.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    -Mastery over Wind
    -Mastery over Lightning


    Is weak to:
    Earth+ Earth Base CE/Steel (Elements Harder then earth, such ruby, iron, etc): Earth is a strong defense and can protect one from Xenon.

    Water+Water Base CE (has more of a form than Xenon, so will be weaker than it when coming into brute force contact with it). while it also dissolves in water

    Wood: Similar to earth

    Is strong against:
    Lightning & Lightning based CE (Lightning based elements): Xenon still being wind, and conduct lightning very well

    Wind+ Wind Base CE: Due to xenon being heavier then normal wind, it completely overpowers normal wind, being stronger in force


    Cork, Marshmallow& Any other featherweight like Element: Xenon easily overpowers these elements due to the force of the element

    Co-creator: LonelyAssassin

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Your explanation of how you make it is way too shallow; giving wind a discharge, what's that even supposed to mean? Why would that make it turn into Xenon? Also it's a colorless gas, but somehow it gives off light? Apparently giving it an electrical charge makes it shine bright. However that's only within a small, closed space and that also means you can't jus say that you can make your Xenon spontaneously shine bright. You would need the have an external source for that as that would be the same as oil setting itself on fire. So in reality you didn't provide a way to create Xenon and saying that you use an electrical discharge would mean that your Xenon is permanently bright and that would be as much blinding for you as your opponent. And the bolded part is way too much of a vague argument to be acceptable as it doesn't cover clearly the load.
     
         
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