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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name:Denjikiton

    Custom element English name:Electromagnetism

    The element is based on:Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Electromagnetism is one of the four fundamental forces in nature. It is responsible for nearly all of the phenomena that we encounter everyday, with the exception of gravity. It is the force that causes interaction between electrically charged particles. With the exception of the introduction of chakra, the Naruto world follows the same structure and scientific laws as our world, and thus electromagnetism must exist in the Naruto world as well.

    Ordinary matter takes its form as a result of intermolecular forces between individual molecules in matter. Electromagnetism is also the force which holds electrons to an atomic nucleus to form atoms, which are the building blocks of molecules. This governs the processes involved in chemistry, which arise from interactions between the electrons of neighboring atoms. Electromagnetism manifests as both electric fields and magnetic fields. Both fields are simply different aspects of electromagnetism, and hence are intrinsically related. Thus, a changing electric field generates a magnetic field; conversely a changing magnetic field generates an electric field.

    Knowing this information, with extremely precise chakra control it should be possible for one to manipulate electromagnetism. It has already been proved possible numerous times in the manga, that it is possible to generate electric fields of energy when people use Lightning Release jutsu. The manga has also proved it possible to manipulate magnetism, as seen by The Third and Fourth Kazekage's Jiton. Since magnetic fields and electric fields are intrinsically related, it should be possible for one to manipulate both the electric and magnetic fields together in the form of Electromagnetic release.

    How it works:
    In order to manipulate the Electromagnetic Interaction, one would first start by manipulating the electric and magnetic fields within the molecules around yourself. You would then become capable of manipulating Electromagnetism in the form of energy in various states of existence, excluding matter.

    Microwaves are electromagnetic waves with wavelengths ranging from as long as one meter to as short as one millimeter, or equivalently, with frequencies between 300 MHz (0.3 GHz) and 300 GHz. Seeing as Microwaves are simply Electromagnetic waves, with varying wavelengths, by manipulating the Electromagnetic Radiation, it also becomes possible to manipulate Microwave emission. Using Microwave Emission, one would be able to deal heavy external heat damage to a person, as well as severe internal damage by super heating the liquid inside a persons body.

    This element also makes it possible to create powerful beams of energy from ones own body. By first manipulating some of the photons in the earth's atmosphere (Existing as units of light e.g. from the Sun.) and then altering the wavelength, to emit powerful Beams of energy from ones body (Hands, Fingers) Such Beams of energy cause damage by concussive force, and heat that they generate. Concussive beams would be focused more on brute strength, and don't cause physical "cuts" to the body, but instead deal internal damage such as broken bones, damaged organs, etc. Lasers that focus more on heat, and piercing power, will be used instead to slice clean through certain obstacles. With the power of the Heat based laser, it becomes possible to deliver incisions and deep cut wounds to a person.

    Facts that prove it possible to manipulate Photons, or certain aspects of light can be seen in this jutsu..

    [Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation]


    Usage Examples:
    (Denjikiton: Desu Bimu)-Electromagnetism: Death Beam
    Type:Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will start out by focusing chakra to their fingertip, and manipulating photons, the user will release a high intensity laser beam from their fingertip. The Laser has extensive cutting abilities. Upon contact with the enemy, it will pierce straight through the point of contact.

    (Denjikiton:Gekiryu Hanabira)-Electromagnetism:Flower Petal Release
    Type:Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers chakra, and releases it into the surrounding area. The user will then cause electric fields to manifest lightning in the form of hundreds of small energy shards (which greatly resemble flower petals). The user proceeds to send the "flower petals" flying towards the enemy, causing multiple cuts over the body.

    (Denjikiton: Desu Kyanon)-Electromagnetism: Death Cannon
    Rank:B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description:The user focuses their electromagnetic chakra to their outstretched open palms. The energy begins to become visible and takes the form of two dense balls of chakra in the users palms. The balls of chakra are continuously packed with more and more chakra, until they become to dense to retain their form. At that moment, they burst open, delivering an outwards burst of electromagnetic energy in the form of two powerful beams of energy. The beams of energy deliver large amounts of concussive energy, allowing them to do serious damage to a persons body.

    (Denjikiton:Sanzu Forru Shotto)-Electromagnetism: Sanzu Fall Shot
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description:The user holds their open outstretched palms facing the intended target. The user then focuses a large amount of their electromagnetic chakra to their palms, and quickly releases two powerful spheres of chakra aimed in the direction of the intended target. However, the spheres are not aimed directly at the target, but above it (about 15 plus meters above to be exact). Right as they are about to pass harmlessly over the target, the two spheres of chakra collide in mid air, causing a massive explosion. The resulting appearence of the combined shots is reminscient of a cascading waterfall, in that the explosion falls down on the enemy delivering powerful explosive damage to anyone or anything caught up in the blast. This explosion has a wide range once initiated, and can't be easily avoided once the shots has collided with one another. A large, deep crater is left in the ground where the explosion took place.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ~Must the turn this jutsu is used, only two jutsu can be performed (This jutsu included in that tally)

    (Denjikiton:Aranami Hanabira)-Electromagnetism:Raging Flower Petal Release
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Attack
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:A more advanced form of Flower Petal Release, the user will release chakra into the surrounding area, and manifest several thousands of "flower petals." The flower petals swirl around the user (Approx. 75 centimeters away from the users body, to avoid self harm), until directed else where. The swirling flower petals can be used as defensive barrier while they circle the user, or used offensively and sent at the enemy all at one time, delivering thousands of severe cuts to the body.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle

    (Denjikiton: Pearentsu Sebunn Reizu)-Electromagnetism: Parents' Seven Rays
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description:The user releases their electromagnetic chakra into the air around them, which takes on the form of five condensed spheres of visible chakra. The spheres float behind the user in a symmetrical pattern. Each of the spheres then erupts into five powerful beams of energy which quickly make their way towards the enemy. Immediately after releasing the five beams of energy from the spheres, the user releases an additional two beams of energy from their palms, which race towards the enemy, totaling seven beams all together. The beams of energy shoot up a few feet into the air, before dipping back down and shooting towards the intended target.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~Cannot be used two turns consecutively


    Conditions to be able to use it:Complete Mastery over Lightning, as well as extremely precise chakra control.

    Is weak to:
    • Earth:Because of the lack of potential energy involved in earth based jutsu, it makes it tough for the electromagnetic based attacks to overcome.


    • Wood: The same reason as with Earth.


    • Steel:Because of the lack of potential energy released, associated with these techniques, it makes it hard for the electromagnetic jutsu to overcome (Even more so than Earth. This also applies to any Metl based CEs).


    Is strong against:Wind:Because the it is no longer lightning, but energy, Wind would be barely effective against this element.

    Fire: Fire being a bunch of photons being released from the source of burning, meaning that the Electromagnetic jutsu are capable of overcoming it.

    Lightning:As an advanced form of energy manipulation, the electromagnetic jutsu would easily be able to overpower incoming lightning techniques.

    Co-creator:

    Students I passed this custom element on too:
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    Resubmitting once more, fixing the stuff you said, granted, I still need to edit some stuff :x
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    The weakness has to be 2 cannon basic elements, and remove any laser referenceb


    Custom element Japanese name:Denjikiton

    Custom element English name:Electromagnetism

    The element is based on:Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Electromagnetism is one of the four fundamental forces in nature. It is responsible for nearly all of the phenomena that we encounter everyday, with the exception of gravity. It is the force that causes interaction between electrically charged particles. With the exception of the introduction of chakra, the Naruto world follows the same structure and scientific laws as our world, and thus electromagnetism must exist in the Naruto world as well.

    Ordinary matter takes its form as a result of intermolecular forces between individual molecules in matter. Electromagnetism is also the force which holds electrons to an atomic nucleus to form atoms, which are the building blocks of molecules. This governs the processes involved in chemistry, which arise from interactions between the electrons of neighboring atoms. Electromagnetism manifests as both electric fields and magnetic fields. Both fields are simply different aspects of electromagnetism, and hence are intrinsically related. Thus, a changing electric field generates a magnetic field; conversely a changing magnetic field generates an electric field.

    Knowing this information, with extremely precise chakra control it should be possible for one to manipulate electromagnetism. It has already been proved possible numerous times in the manga, that it is possible to generate electric fields of energy when people use Lightning Release jutsu. The manga has also proved it possible to manipulate magnetism, as seen by The Third and Fourth Kazekage's Jiton. Since magnetic fields and electric fields are intrinsically related, it should be possible for one to manipulate both the electric and magnetic fields together in the form of Electromagnetic release.

    How it works:
    In order to manipulate the Electromagnetic Interaction, one would first start by manipulating the electric and magnetic fields within the molecules around oneself. You would then become capable of manipulating Electromagnetism in the form of energy in various states of existence, excluding matter.

    Usage Examples:

    (Denjikiton:Gekiryu Hanabira)-Electromagnetism:Flower Petal Release
    Type:Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers chakra, and releases it into the surrounding area. The user will then cause electric fields to manifest energy in the form of hundreds of small energy shards (which greatly resemble flower petals). The user proceeds to send the "flower petals" flying towards the enemy, causing multiple cuts over the body.

    (Denjikiton: Desu Kyanon)-Electromagnetism: Death Cannon
    Rank:B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description:The user focuses their electromagnetic chakra to their outstretched open palms. The energy begins to become visible and takes the form of two dense balls of chakra in the users palms. The balls of chakra are continuously packed with more and more chakra, until they become to dense to retain their form. At that moment, they burst open, delivering an outwards burst of electromagnetic energy in the form of two powerful beams of energy. The beams of energy deliver large amounts of concussive energy, allowing them to do serious damage to a persons body.

    (Denjikiton:Sanzu Forru Shotto)-Electromagnetism: Sanzu Fall Shot
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description:The user holds their open outstretched palms facing the intended target. The user then focuses a large amount of their electromagnetic chakra to their palms, and quickly releases two powerful spheres of chakra aimed in the direction of the intended target. However, the spheres are not aimed directly at the target, but above it (about 15 plus meters above to be exact). Right as they are about to pass harmlessly over the target, the two spheres of chakra collide in midair, causing a massive explosion. The resulting appearance of the combined shots is reminiscent of a cascading waterfall, in that the explosion falls down on the enemy delivering powerful explosive damage to anyone or anything caught up in the blast. This explosion has a wide range once initiated, and can't be easily avoided once the shots has collided with one another. A large, deep crater is left in the ground where the explosion took place.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle

    (Denjikiton:Aranami Hanabira)-Electromagnetism:Raging Flower Petal Release
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Attack
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:A more advanced form of Flower Petal Release, the user will release chakra into the surrounding area, and manifest several thousands of "flower petals." The flower petals swirl around the user (Approx. 75 centimeters away from the users body, to avoid self harm), until directed else where. The swirling flower petals can be used as defensive barrier while they circle the user, or used offensively and sent at the enemy all at one time, delivering thousands of severe cuts to the body.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle

    (Denjikiton: Pearentsu Sebunn Reizu)-Electromagnetism: Parents' Seven Rays
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description:The user releases their electromagnetic chakra into the air around them, which takes on the form of five condensed spheres of visible chakra. The spheres float behind the user in a symmetrical pattern. Each of the spheres then erupts into five powerful beams of energy which quickly make their way towards the enemy. Immediately after releasing the five beams of energy from the spheres, the user releases an additional two beams of energy from their palms, which race towards the enemy, totaling seven beams all together. The beams of energy shoot up a few feet into the air, before dipping back down and shooting towards the intended target.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~Cannot be used two turns consecutively


    Conditions to be able to use it:Complete Mastery over Lightning, as well as extremely precise chakra control.

    Is weak to:
    Earth, Water

    Is strong against:
    Wind, Fire, Lightning

    Co-creator:Jokey

    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    I believe the weaknesses are fixed since we talked about it for a little bit over MSN, and I took out anything in reference to Lasers.

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: In all honesty physics isn't my forte, however as far as I understand the electromagnetic force isn't something that has "substance". It manifests itself in a lot of different ways in the world, however that's something different than the force on itself. Gravity isn't visible and doesn't do anything on its own, same applies to magnetism. Gravity only applies a force on you and it would only damage you if there would be something in the way, that's how it manifests itself. Magnetism doesn't do anything to you, to hurt you it manipulates metals or something and that's how it manifests itself. These are forces that need something to actually do something nor gravity nor magnetism can do any harm all by itself and the same applies to electromagnetism. It's not a force that you can touch or see. So those jutsu's of yours make no sense as you never explained what it does, now did you? Does it burn you? Does it freeze you? Does it cut you? And how did you prove that? You talk about electromagnetic chakra in your jutsu's, but how could that have such a physical form? In the end what you ended up with in your jutsu's is normal chakra, there is no difference. Also your strengths and weaknesses are extremely shallow. You just took the 5 basic elements and sorted them in or weak or strong without any kind of logical reasoning behind it as why.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Sarufaton
    Custom element English name: Sulfur
    The element is based on: Earth, Fire, Wind, and Water elements and chakra control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Sulfur is a chemical element. It is the tenth most abundant element in the universe. Sulfur is a bright yellow crystalline solid when at room temperature. Sulfur is present in many organic compounds and it is essential for life. Sulfur is basically a cystalline element, somewhat similar to the Crystal release, and seeing that Sulfur must absolutely be present in living organisms, the Sulfur element is completely possible to be extracted from the earth where it is abundant and then be manipulated. The Sulfur element will be utilized in three major forms: the solid, the gas, and the liquid.

    The user will create the Sulfur element by simply extracting Sulfur from the earth using earth chakra and bring the Sulfur atoms to the surface. The user will then bring the atoms together and compres the atoms together to form the cystalline structure. From the basic cystalline structure the user can then easily access any of the other forms of Sulfur.

    The solid form is the most basic form in which Sulfur can be manipulated. In this form, Sulfur is simply a cystalline solid. Similar to the Crystal element, Sulfur can be used exactly like solid earth. In this form, Sulfur is always coated with the user's chakra making the techniques require more chakra so that it does not come in direct contact with external elements and undergo chemical reactions. In this form, Sulfur is incredibly dense and is stronger than normal earth but isn't as strong as other minerals which are know for their denseness.

    The gaseous form is a little more complex than the simple solid form. In the gas form, the user no longer needs the chakra coating because he will cause a chemical reaction himself. The reaction is a simple oxidation. The user will expose the Sulfer to their fire chakra which causes the Sulfer to undergo a chemical reaction with oxygen and form Sulfur Dioxide. In this form the user manipulates the Sulfer Dioxide as if the element were wind based and will use their wind chakra to move the element. In this form, the user can use the Sulfur Dioxide to smoother fires.

    The liquid form is similar to the gas form in that the user will again introduce a chemical reaction to the Sulfur, but it will not be the same. The user will first begin by combining the Sulfur with fire chakra but this time the user will look to created Sulfur Trioxide. This is the first step in the process. Then the use will add their water chakra to the Sulfur Trioxide and cause the chemical reaction to form Sulphuric Acid. The user will then use their water chakra to move the element. Since this form requires more steps than the other two forms, it requires more chakra. In this form, the user can use the Sulfuric Acid to attack earth based elements.

    How it works: The solid form works the same way as the Crystal element, the gaseous form works the same way as any other wind element, and the liquid form works the same way as any other water based element. The only and huge difference is that Sulfur will have completely different properties. Even though the element requires different chakra costs for each form, the creation time of the element no matter what form is neglible and is the same as if were any other advanced element. The user never uses pure Sulfur as a gas and does not need to worry about being in a completely Sulfur atmosphere. The user will only use Sulfur Dioxide and will control with wind chakra so it does not affect him as well.
    Usage Examples:

    (Sarufaton: Hitoya) Sulfur Relase: Prison
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user causes crystallized sulfur to rise from beneath the opponent, and then encloses the opponent in a sphere of cystal that crushes the opponent to death.

    (Sarufaton: Kemuri Doragon) Sulfur Relase: Smoke Dragon
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user releases a massive blast of sulfur dioxide similar to the size of Severing Pressure toward the opponent that is shaped like a dragon's head. The blast slams into them and decimate their body. The blast can be created from existing sulfur dioxide.

    (Sarufaton: Surudoi Ite) Sulfur Relase: Sharp Shooter
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user spits out a high-pressure high-speed stream of concentrated sulfuric acid capable of cutting through anything.




    Conditions to be able to use it: Master earth, water, wind, and fire elements.
    Is weak to:
    Solid
    -Wind elements: can cut through it.
    -Lightning elements: can break through it
    -Advanced metallic earth elements: can break through it.
    Gaseous
    -Earth based elements: are not directly affected and provide defense, but if the force of the blast is stronger than the earth than it can break through. It cannot break through advanced earth elements.
    Liquid
    -Water elements: can diffuse the concentration of acid.
    Is strong against:
    Solid
    -Water elements: pure cystal sulfur is unaffected by water and can easily block it.
    -Fire elements: if reacted it turns into sulfur dioxide which the user can control.
    -Normal earth element: is stronger than normal earth.
    Gaseous
    -Lightning elements: being infused with wind, it prevents lightning from passing.
    -Fire elements: will replace all the oxygen and deprive the fire of its fuel causing it to die.
    -Wind elements: sulfur dioxide is heavier than regular oxygen or carbon dioxide and its mass will allow it to plow through the lighter gases.
    Liquid
    -Metallic earth based elements: will corrode.
    -Lightning elements: will increase the potency of the acid.
    Co-creator: Crutch Kaguya
    Students I passed this custom element on too:
    _____________
    -Declined-
    You need to have 2 elemental weaknesses for each state it has, and I think you should scale it down just a bit altogether, and now use almost all elements in combination.
    Custom element Japanese name: Sarufaton
    Custom element English name: Sulfur
    The element is based on: Earth, Fire, Wind, and Water elements and chakra control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Sulfur is a chemical element. It is the tenth most abundant element in the universe. Sulfur is a bright yellow crystalline solid when at room temperature. Sulfur is present in many organic compounds and it is essential for life. Sulfur is basically a cystalline element, somewhat similar to the Crystal release, and seeing that Sulfur must absolutely be present in living organisms, the Sulfur element is completely possible to be extracted from the earth where it is abundant and then be manipulated. The Sulfur element will be utilized in three major forms: the solid, the gas, and the liquid.

    The user will create the Sulfur element by simply extracting Sulfur from the earth using earth chakra and bring the Sulfur atoms to the surface. The user will then bring the atoms together and compres the atoms together to form the cystalline structure. From the basic cystalline structure the user can then easily access any of the other forms of Sulfur.

    The solid form is the most basic form in which Sulfur can be manipulated. In this form, Sulfur is simply a cystalline solid. Similar to the Crystal element, Sulfur can be used exactly like solid earth. In this form, Sulfur is always coated with the user's chakra making the techniques require more chakra so that it does not come in direct contact with external elements and undergo chemical reactions. In this form, Sulfur is incredibly dense and is stronger than normal earth but isn't as strong as other minerals which are know for their denseness.

    The gaseous form is a little more complex than the simple solid form. In the gas form, the user no longer needs the chakra coating because he will cause a chemical reaction himself. The reaction is a simple oxidation. The user will expose the Sulfer to their fire chakra which causes the Sulfer to undergo a chemical reaction with oxygen and form Sulfur Dioxide. In this form the user manipulates the Sulfer Dioxide as if the element were wind based and will use their wind chakra to move the element. In this form, the user can use the Sulfur Dioxide to smoother fires.

    The liquid form is similar to the gas form in that the user will again introduce a chemical reaction to the Sulfur, but it will not be the same. The user will first begin by combining the Sulfur with fire chakra but this time the user will look to created Sulfur Trioxide. This is the first step in the process. Then the use will add their water chakra to the Sulfur Trioxide and cause the chemical reaction to form Sulphuric Acid. The user will then use their water chakra to move the element. Since this form requires more steps than the other two forms, it requires more chakra. In this form, the user can use the Sulfuric Acid to attack earth based elements.

    How it works: The solid form works the same way as the Crystal element, the gaseous form works the same way as any other wind element, and the liquid form works the same way as any other water based element. The only and huge difference is that Sulfur will have completely different properties. Even though the element requires different chakra costs for each form, the creation time of the element no matter what form is neglible and is the same as if were any other advanced element. The user never uses pure Sulfur as a gas and does not need to worry about being in a completely Sulfur atmosphere. The user will only use Sulfur Dioxide and will control with wind chakra so it does not affect him as well.
    Usage Examples:

    (Sarufaton: Hitoya) Sulfur Relase: Prison
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user causes crystallized sulfur to rise from beneath the opponent, and then encloses the opponent in a sphere of cystal that crushes the opponent to death.

    (Sarufaton: Kemuri Doragon) Sulfur Relase: Smoke Dragon
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user releases a massive blast of sulfur dioxide similar to the size of Severing Pressure toward the opponent that is shaped like a dragon's head. The blast slams into them and decimate their body. The blast can be created from existing sulfur dioxide.

    (Sarufaton: Surudoi Ite) Sulfur Relase: Sharp Shooter
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user spits out a high-pressure high-speed stream of concentrated sulfuric acid capable of cutting through anything.




    Conditions to be able to use it: Master earth, water, wind, and fire elements.
    Is weak to:
    Solid
    -Wind elements: can cut through it.
    -Lightning elements: can break through it.
    -Advanced metallic earth elements: can break through it but normal earth cannot break through it.
    Gaseous
    -Earth based elements: are strong enough that they can block the impact of the blast.
    -Water based elements: would absorb the gas into itself and result in a form of polluted water making it more dangerous.
    Liquid
    -Water elements: can diffuse the concentration of acid.
    -Wind based elements: the pressurized nature of wind can push back the liquid preventing from ever makign contact.
    Is strong against:

    Solid
    -Water elements: pure cystal sulfur is unaffected by water and can easily block it.
    -Fire elements: if reacted it turns into sulfur dioxide which the user can control.
    Gaseous
    -Lightning elements: being infused with wind, it prevents lightning from passing.
    -Fire elements: will replace all the oxygen and deprive the fire of its fuel causing it to die.
    -Wind elements: sulfur dioxide is heavier than regular oxygen or carbon dioxide and its mass will allow it to plow through the lighter gases.
    Liquid
    -Metallic earth based elements: will corrode.
    -Lightning elements: will increase the potency of the acid.
    Co-creator: Crutch Kaguya
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

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    I added 2 weaknesses on every state and edited a bit.

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    ✗ Declined: Once again make a choice: no and solid and liquid and gas variations.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Resubmitting:


    Custom element Japanese name:Francumiton

    Custom element English name:Francium Release


    The element is based on:Earth+Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Francium is a chemical element which is the second rarest element occurring in nature (after astatine).In nature it is a highly radioactive metal which decays into radium,astatine and radon (the radioactivity does not have any effect in battle).It is an alkali metal which means it is highly reactive when water touches it,thus it leads to a large explosion (depending on the amount of Francium used).It was discovered in 1939 in France from where it got it's name.It has the lowest electronegativity of all known elements (0.7 on the Pauling scale).It can be used in solid,liquid or powdery form.

    I intend to use it as an offensive and supplementary element since it wouldn't be very effective as a defense (someone uses a water tech and boom goes the dynamite).It can be used to create pillars,weapons,shields,walls everything you can do with Earth,also if Francium was used in powdery form the user could use wind techniques to scatter the powder,making the opponent inhale and slowly suffer of poisoning and internal damage.It could also be used with Water Release to create explosions (size and power would depend on the amount of Francium used).Even thought it is radioactive in nature,the radioactivity is isolated in the RP due to chakra control thus the radioactivity does not have any effect if used in battle.

    As seen in both the manga and anime,there are several metals used for all kinds of purposes.Weapons,buildings,devices,every day things that are used.We have seen the use of kunai with explosive tags,so I thought how about I create a metal that doesn't require any kind of tags but simply explodes when it comes in contact with water.Also we've witnessed a lot of Earth variations such as Lava,Mud,Crystal etc.Francium would be no exception to those types of elements that are based on Earth.It could be used by a ninja to concentrate Earth chakra into the ground and find and gather the particles of Francium.Chakra control would be used to form them into a solid mass.It may also be used like Gaaras sand to manipulate the Francium.

    In summary it can take the following forms in the RP:
    1.Solid form-Can be maintained using chakra even with the low melting temperature.
    2.Liquid form-It happens if the Francium melts.Can be used to cover the field with it or coat certain objects (kunai's,shuriken etc.)
    3.Powder form-Can be made using chakra.Can be used with wind techniques to send it at the opponent making them inhale the powder,thus giving them damage of poisoning.


    How it works:It works in several ways.In powdery form for example it can be controlled just like Gaara's sand by simple hand movements.The user can use chakra to tighten the molecules and particles of the powder to turn it into solid form.By sending chakra into it the user keeps it solid.Using that the user can create pillars,weapons and other things similair to Earth Release techniques.By stopping the chakra flow in the Francium the user can make it liquify making it sticky and heavy.The user can move the liquid Francium around with chakra but it cannot move very fast.If any type or form of Francium touches water it will explode.The size of the explosion depends on the rank of the technique used.The user can also,by sending chakra into the Francium make the reactivity of the Francium be active or not (in other words,control whether it will explode or not when it comes in contact with water).

    Ranks and ranges of the explosions only,not the techniques.

    D-rank-Small
    C-rank-Small/Mid
    B-rank-Mid
    A-rank-Mid
    S-rank-Mid/Long
    Forbidden rank-Long


    Usage Examples:


    Name: (Francumiton:Saishuu)Francium Release:Gathering
    Rank: D
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:10
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user spreads chakra into a wide area around himself.He uses the chakra to find and gather particles and molecules of Francium.This allows the user to preform Francium techniques but the gathering itself lasts several turns.
    1st turn:The user is able to preform D and C rank techniques.
    2nd turn:The user is able to preform B and A rank techniques.
    3rd turn:The user is able to preform S and Forbidden rank techniques.

    Name: (Francumiton no Jutsu)Francium Release Technique
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming 2 hand seals the user uses the Francium to create several pillars,weapons,shields,walls,domes,spikes and tools of Francium.The constructions do not make a lot damage but can make an explosion if used with Water.

    Name: (Francumiton:Kaishin)Francium Release:Conversion
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After gathering enough Francium the user preforms 4 handseals and channels chakra into the Francium to change it's density and form.It can either be in solid,liquid or powdery form.
    Note:The user can change the form of the Francium once every 2 turns.

    Name: (Francumiton:Kayaku Kumo)Francium Release: Powder Cloud
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:If the user has already gathered Francium and changed it into powdery form the user sends the powder at his opponent which covers the opponent in a deadly cloud.The opponent will have no other choice but to inhale thus getting the Francium powder into their system.Due to the poisonous effects of the Francium the opponent will suffer of nausea and exhaustion thus reducing the opponents strength,speed and concentration.The cloud can also be used to sense their opponents movement by keeping a constant flow of chakra going into the cloud.The user will be able to feel any kind of disturbances within the cloud made by their target.
    Note:Must have gathered Francium and converted it into powdery form.
    Note:The effects of sickness and nausea will kick in after two turns after this has been activated.
    Note: Due to the effects of the Francium the opponent's strength will be reduced limiting them to preforming less exhausting actions (they will only be able to preform 2 techniques in a turn instead of 3).
    Note:After three turns have passed after the activation of this technique the cloud will start to dissolve unless the user recreates the cloud.
    Note:May be used 3 times per battle.
    Note:The effects of nausea and sickness will leave after two turns when this technique has passed.





    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over Earth Release (it is required so the user can collect the particles of Francium) + Chakra control (to reform the metal in case it melts and to maintain it's form)

    Is weak to:
    Water and water based elements-Water is both it's greatest weakness and strength when used correctly.The water reacts with the Francium thus leading to an explosion.The slightest drop can make the metal explode.

    Lightning-Metal conducts electricity so if the user is in touch with it it can electrocute him.

    Fire and fire based elements-It melts the Francium,making it liquid,and since Francium has a low melting temperature (300 K,27 °C,80 °F) but it can be made solid again if the user uses chakra.
    Is strong against:
    Earth-Doesn't affect Francium either but it can be destroyed if the user uses Francium together with Water.

    Water and water based elements-As I mentioned before water is both Francium's greatest strength and weakness.If used correctly the user can make a devastating explosion to kill the enemy.

    Lightning-Similar to Water,Lightning is both a strength and a weakness of the Francium element.If the Francium is used correctly the user can channel the electricity into the opponent.

    Co-creator:Coyote
    ____________
    -Declined-
    Why doesn't the radioactivity affect anyone in battle?





    Custom element Japanese name:Francumiton

    Custom element English name:Francium Release

    The element is based on:Earth+Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Francium is a chemical element which is the second rarest element occurring in nature (after astatine).In nature it is a highly radioactive metal which decays into radium,astatine and radon (the radioactivity does not have any effect in battle).It is an alkali metal which means it is highly reactive when water touches it,thus it leads to an explosion (depending on the amount of Francium used).It was discovered in 1939 in France from where it got it's name.It has the lowest electronegativity of all known elements (0.7 on the Pauling scale).It can be used in solid,liquid or powdery form.Cesium (another alkali metal,weaker than Francium) can create a big enough explosion to blow up a bath tub so Francium it twice as powerful and if used in large amount it can create damage in a large radius.

    I intend to use it as an offensive and supplementary element since it wouldn't be very effective as a defense (someone uses a water tech and boom goes the dynamite).It can be used to create pillars,weapons,shields,walls (everything you can do with Earth basically),also if Francium was used in powdery form the user could use wind techniques to scatter the powder or use their hands to control it like sand,making the opponent inhale and slowly suffer of poisoning and internal damage.It could also be used with Water Release to create explosions (size and power would depend on the amount of Francium used).Even though it is radioactive in nature,the radioactivity is isolated in the RP due to chakra control thus the radioactivity does not have any effect if used in battle.

    As seen in both the manga and anime,there are several metals used for all kinds of purposes.Weapons,buildings,devices,every day things that are used.We have seen the use of kunai with explosive tags,so I thought how about I create a metal that doesn't require any kind of tags but simply explodes when it comes in contact with water.Also we've witnessed a lot of Earth variations such as Lava,Mud,Crystal etc.Francium would be no exception to those types of elements that are based on Earth.It could be used by a ninja to concentrate Earth chakra into the ground and find and gather the particles of Francium.Chakra control would be used to form them into a solid mass.It may also be used like Gaaras sand to manipulate the Francium.

    In summary it can take the following forms in the RP:

    1.Solid form-In solid form,Francium can be used to create walls,tools,pillars,spikes,etc.It can also be used to coat certain objects or the field.Even though it has a low melting temperature it's form can be maintained by sending chakra into it.

    2.Liquid form-Liquid form is created when the Francium is melted (either by fire or by the user's chakra).In this form it is very hot,oozy and sticky so it can be used to slow down the opponent and burn him in the process.

    3.Powdery form-The user can make Francium in powdery form by using his chakra to dissolve the Francium into tiny particles.The user can manipulate it with hand movements to attack,defend or move around.

    The user can change the form of the Francium at his own will with their chakra.

    How it works:It works in several ways.In powdery form for example it can be controlled just like Gaara's sand by simple hand movements.The user can use chakra to tighten the molecules and particles of the powder to turn it into solid form.By sending chakra into it the user keeps it solid.Using that the user can create pillars,weapons and other things similair to Earth Release techniques.By stopping the chakra flow in the Francium the user can make it liquify making it sticky and heavy.The user can move the liquid Francium around with chakra but it cannot move very fast.If any type or form of Francium touches water it will explode.The size of the explosion depends on the rank of the techniques.The user can also,by sending chakra into the Francium make the reactivity of the Francium be active or not (in other words,control whether it will explode or not when it comes in contact with water).

    Ranks and ranges of the explosions only,not the techniques.

    D-rank-Small
    C-rank-Small/Mid
    B-rank-Mid
    A-rank-Mid
    S-rank-Mid/Long
    Forbidden rank-Long





    Usage Examples:


    Name: (Francumiton:Saishuu)Francium Release:Gathering
    Rank: D
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:10
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user spreads chakra into a wide area around himself.He uses the chakra to find and gather particles and molecules of Francium.This allows the user to preform Francium techniques but the gathering itself lasts several turns.
    1st turn:The user is able to preform D and C rank techniques.
    2nd turn:The user is able to preform B and A rank techniques.
    3rd turn:The user is able to preform S and Forbidden rank techniques.

    Name: (Francumiton no Jutsu)Francium Release Technique
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming 2 hand seals the user uses the Francium to create several pillars,weapons,shields,walls,domes,spikes and tools of Francium.The constructions do not make a lot damage but can make an explosion if used with Water.

    Name: (Francumiton:Kaishin)Francium Release:Conversion
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After gathering enough Francium the user preforms 4 handseals and channels chakra into the Francium to change it's density and form.It can either be in solid,liquid or powdery form.
    Note:The user can change the form of the Francium once every 2 turns.

    Name: (Francumiton:Kayaku Kumo)Francium Release: Powder Cloud
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:If the user has already gathered Francium and changed it into powdery form the user sends the powder at his opponent which covers the opponent in a deadly cloud.The opponent will have no other choice but to inhale thus getting the Francium powder into their system.Due to the poisonous effects of the Francium the opponent will suffer of nausea and exhaustion thus reducing the opponents strength,speed and concentration.The cloud can also be used to sense their opponents movement by keeping a constant flow of chakra going into the cloud.The user will be able to feel any kind of disturbances within the cloud made by their target.
    Note:Must have gathered Francium and converted it into powdery form.
    Note:The effects of sickness and nausea will kick in after two turns after this has been activated.
    Note: Due to the effects of the Francium the opponent's strength will be reduced limiting them to preforming less exhausting actions (they will only be able to preform 2 techniques in a turn instead of 3).
    Note:After three turns have passed after the activation of this technique the cloud will start to dissolve unless the user recreates the cloud.
    Note:May be used 3 times per battle.
    Note:The effects of nausea and sickness will leave after two turns when this technique has passed.





    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery over Earth Release (it is required so the user can collect the particles of Francium) + Chakra control (to change the form of the Francium and to keep it in the desired form)

    Is weak to:
    Water and Water based elements-Water is both it's greatest weakness and strength when used correctly.The water reacts with the Francium thus leading to an explosion.The slightest drop can make the metal explode.

    Lightning-Metal conducts electricity so if the user is in touch with it it can electrocute him.

    Fire and Fire based elements-It melts the Francium,making it liquid,and since Francium has a low melting temperature (300 K,27 °C,80 °F) but it can be made solid again if the user uses chakra.
    Is strong against:
    Earth-Doesn't affect Francium either but it can be destroyed if the user uses Francium together with Water.

    Water and Water based elements-As I mentioned before water is both Francium's greatest strength and weakness.If used correctly the user can make a devastating explosion to kill the enemy.

    Lightning-Similar to Water,Lightning is both a strength and a weakness of the Francium element.If the Francium is used correctly the user can channel the electricity into the opponent.

    Wind and Wind based elements-If timed correctly,the user can use the explosive effects of the Francium to make the wind dispell.

    Co-creator:Coyote

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    ✗ Declined: Once again make a choice: no and solid and liquid and gas/powder variations.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Shockwave


    Custom element Japanese name: Shougekihaoton

    Custom element English name: Shock wave Release

    The element is based on: Chakra control + Wind + Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    It has been very well shown in the manga that this could be possible in two places. First let us take the case of Nagato, he was shown to repel all the incoming projectiles around him in a direction of 360 deg in the form of a wave. This can be considered as a kind of a shockwave that moves all around the user to repel the objects. Although in this case Nagato used Gravity to get things away from him, we will be doing things a little differently and would not be able to repel everything.
    Secondly it was shown by the outer path statue when it released a huge blast of chakra that created a shockwave that sent chouji and his father flying in their enlarged forms. The nine tails Fox has also been shown doing it.
    Although the above examples definitely require a huge pool of chakra to create shockwaves out of pure chakra, we will be doing it a little differently than what the above examples have been doing.

    How it works: A shockwave is a kind of a propagating disturbance. It carries energy and like any ordinary wave travels through a medium. The basic theory for this element would be to use chakra to create a wave that moves through earth or any other substantial medium disturbing the molecular binding among the elemental atoms and causing it to implode in a particular direction or in some cases expanding a heavily compressed chakra rapidly in all directions.
    Nature transformation could be used to increase its powers (wind nature transformation/ Lightning nature transformation). The user will be concentrating and condensing some amount of chakra and then will release it instantaneously in any particular direction creating a spiked wave in any particular medium like the air causing the air to implode in a particular direction and in case of an opponent send him flying.
    Because of the chakra requirement and the loss of the chakra amplitude as it travels over a distance shockwaves are not meant to reach the Long distance or rather it is the most damaging when the target exists in the short or the mid range. Also in case it does reach the long distance such a technique will drain enormous amount of the users chakra such that it would result in a Forbidden Jutsu. These waves create an exploding force wave that pushes things backwards or in case of insubstantial things destroyes them completely.
    Using the Lightning elemental transformation one can create a powerful shockwave of lightning that would destroy any electromagnetic field or forces in the surrounding area also it would create a magnetic disturbance and could be used to stop incoming projectiles made out of metal.


    Usage Examples:

    (Shougekihaoton : Kaimetsu-tekina panchi)-Crippling Punch
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This attack is similar to a taijutsu punch to the opponent with only a little difference in how it gets executed. The user when is about to punch the opponents body with hist fist will release a powerful shockwave at the very instance that the punch makes contact with the opponents body. This causes an unbearable amount of damage inside opponents body through which the shockwave travels. Depending upon the position hit it can cause a rupture of blood vessels which may result in internal bleeding.
    -This punch can break through C rank and below earth jutsu as well.


    (Shougekihaoton/Futon: Tenrai sazanami)-Divine Ripple
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user Concentrates his chakra into the Palm of his hands and then slamming them together releases a shockwave in the air. The user also uses Wind transformation to some extent on this shockwave increasing its power. This wave will disperse any concentrated water attack coming towards the user causing the water to disperse into the air and mix up with the atmosphere in the form of non harmful glistening water droplets. This shockwave will be directed specifically towards the incoming water projectiles.
    -Can be used 3 times in a battle.
    -Requires the Mastery of Wind nature transformation.
    -Can be used to destroy B rank and below water attacks.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Due to the unique nature of this element, a user needs to satisfy the following conditions in order to be able to use it.

    • Needs to be of Kage Rank.
    • Needs to have mastered Wind and Lightning releases.
    • Needs to be extraordinarily good in Chakra Control.


    Is weak to:
    Since it Requires a medium to propagate, Intangible elements like Fire could be of destructive nature against this.
    Elements like Lightning also will be very powerful against this, thanks to its speed which will make a shockwave useless. As there will be no catching up to Raiton.

    In short it is weak to,
    • Fire
    • Lightning


    Is strong against:
    Any substance that has a mass to it. Meaning a substantial medium will be weak to this release. As it will provide the shockwave a medium through which it could travel causing the medium to disintegrate.

    Examples,
    Water
    Earth

    Co-creator: None.

    Students I passed this custom element on too: None.

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    ✗ Declined: Similar CE exist.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    The Iron Blood Release
    Custom element Japanese name: 血液型, Chisioton |

    Custom element English name: Iron Blood Release | Similar to Calcium Release made by Mugiwara
    The element is based on: Water + Earth + Fire

    Water chakra, is used to gather the iron in the blood into a certain spot of the human body, than the earthen chakra comes in to control the iron to give it form by manipulating it, but it still needs something the fire chakra to use the heat and solidify it making it harder than rocks as it is iron, but making it different from regular Iron Release, as it contains different proteins.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Fact #1; (The Demon Sword which was broken in the fight against the current raikage, A) Well, we have seen the sword of zabuza the demon of the mist use his broken sword to absorb the hemoglobin also known as blood iron from his victims after he slices them up and doing so to make his sword whole again due to the absorbed iron, well that proves that it is possible to manipulate iron, that is running through the human blood. Fact #2; Now, coming to the kaguyas they use their calcium and chakra to manipulate their bones giving it form, causing it to pop out of the ninja body, so this is perfored on an similar manner, instead of the calcium the user uses his chakra to control the Blood Iron, but too much of iron in the blood could kill one so avoiding that the user has the gater it on different places, not allowing the iron to spread through the users body, and controlling it using their water, fire & earth chakra. Scientific Facts #3; Hemoglobin is a protein in the blood which contains Iron and is used to transport oxygen around the body. Hemoglobin are found in the red blood cells. Because hemoglobin are red, red blood cells are red. Hemoglobin are very small, and several million can fit in each red blood cell. There are millions of hemoglobins in each red blood cell and millions of red blood cells in the human body. So there is scientific proof that there is iron in the human body, Red blood cells are very large in number; in women, there are 4.8 million red blood cells per microliter of blood. In men, there are 5.4 million red blood cells per microliter of blood, so it would be more fit for an male to have this type of KG as a male possess more of red blood cells meaning more iron to control with the chakra. Red blood cells are red because they have hemoglobin in them another word for Blood Iron. Wikipedia - Red Blood Cells

    How it works: It has been shown in the Naruto anime and manga that Kimimaro Kaguya can control the calcium in his body freely through his Kekkei Genkai. So it is shown that it is possible to control it inside the body, but never outside. It has also been shown that people can control Earth to great extents, even controlling Diamonds, Mud and Sand. Blood Iron is no different from any of the earth types and jutsus, because its a mineral, like any other minerals, and it can be found in the earth, and controlled like any other earth techniques. By extracting it from the earth, or from the users own body, he can control it in shape, and change the chemical compound. The different Iron compounds have different usage, both in real life, and in narutoverse. This release is similar to the Kaguya KG the Shikotsumyaku , but instead of bones the user uses the iron in their blood to control it, by using water chakra, to gather the iron in the blood into a certain spot of the human body (this could be the elbow, knee, knuckles, rib cage, on the back of the arm etc. On a similar way of the kaguyas bone techniques The shikotsumyaku, then the earthen chakra comes in to control the iron to give it form by manipulating it, making sharp like object with it, making knifes pop out of your knuckles. But it would be incomplete so it needs something that something is the fire chakra the fire chakra is used to heat the iron and solidify it making it harder than rocks as it is iron, withstanding even blades being on par with them, but the fire chakra is only used if there is enough iron gathered into the wished spot. The user cannot control the element to such extent where he can control the calcium in another persons body.

    Usage Examples:

    (Chisioton: Hōrin Maru-Ken) – Iron Blood Release: Striking Circle Blade
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user focuses his Iron Blood chakra through his under arms, and forms the serpent handseal, and then the user will make round movement with his/her body releasing a round shaped blade out of both underarms torwards the user in a horizontal pattern, while it's spinning it gets bigger and slices the opponent(s) in half and returns back to the users body.

    ♦ Note: Can only e taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: Can only be used trice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user can't use any Iron Blood Jutsu for the next two turns.
    (Chisioton: Aka Odori) – Iron Blood Release: Bloody Dance
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will focus his Iron Blood chakra into his/her fingers tipd and shoot out a range of ten needles of Blood Iron out of them finges torwards the target, and as it reaches short range it will explode into many smaller needles and strike the opponent(s) on different places from different angles, striking vital organs.

    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: Canonly be used four times per battle.
    Chisioton: Shikio Gai) – Iron Blood Release: Death Scythe
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will focus a fare amount of Iron Blood chakra into both of the elbows and form the bird handseal, allowing two scythes to pop out each one meter long, and sharp that it can cut through A-Ranked stones, or used to slice up the enemy.
    Conditions to be able to use it: It requires full mastery over Water, Earth & the Fire element, and to be at least at kage rank as it uses three different elements, also to be specialized in at least on of these elements.

    Is weak to:

    Lightning; As Iron conducts electricity so it would shock the user.
    Fire; It is able to melt the Iron releasing toxins inside the users body so it's definitely weak against fire.
    Lava; It's able to melt the Iron rendering it useless, andy fire based attacks are strong against Iron Blood Release.
    Dark; Dark release is an kg build of two elements lightning and fire so dark release is definitely strong against iron blood release.

    Is strong against:

    Ice; It can shatter ice as ice is an combination of water and wind.
    Wind; It can't slice through Iron being the hard material that it is so Iron wins.
    Earth; Iron is a harder material than earth so Iron would be able to slice through earth attacks with ease.
    Water; Iron is strong against water because water can't damage iron, however if it's a lightning water attack the combination will destroy the iron.

    Co-creator: N/A

    Students I passed this custom element on too: None.

    Note: There are many variations of earth and crystal KG's like almunium, titanium, diamond, jade etc. So i don't see a reason why my element isn't aprovable.


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    ✗ Declined: For the simple fact that there's already a Blood Release CE. You're trying to move heaven and earth to prove that it's not the same is Iron Release, but for some reason you completely ignored the most important fact of all: there's already a blood element and there's no way you can deny that it's not similar as you're using blood. Yes the maker of that CE uses blood a bit differently, but it's still the same blood. Also you contradict yourself as you say it's different from iron, but then you use as proof Zabuza's sword which uses the iron from blood to regenerate and thus you actually say that the iron from blood is the same as normal iron, so you just voided your own argumentation.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Dou
    Custom element English name: Copper
    The element is based on: Fire - Earth - Chakra
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    By the user focusing fire, earth and normal chakra it will create Copper. We all have seen a lot of different/new Kekkei Genkai such as Steel; The Kekkei Genkai Steel is able too make Copper by focusing fire chakra and normal chakra into the steel and the steel will turn into copper even thought you're also, able to make it without steel, you could simply make it with earth, fire and chakra like i said many times before. Copper is found everywhere around the whole wide world mostly on Roman in fact you are also, able to find Copper on mountains even with snow and we have seen a lot of mountains on Narutoverse. On Narutoverse you can also, find copper; copper can be rings, also, old stuff when objects get's old it turn's into copper such as; sponges and stuff alike even thought sponges don't look like copper inside of the sponge you will see little coppers thought they extremely little, in humans fact you could only see the coppers inside of the sponge by using a microscope.

    In fact we have seen Copper being use on Narutoverse but instead of being use too fight is mainly use too cook. We have seen copper pot, copper rings, copper necklace which is use by a lot of females on narutoverse.

    Being use of Copper in Narutoverse is in this episode which is used for cooking, is a copper pot.

    Copper - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

    Copper metal and alloys have been used for thousands of years. In the Roman era, copper was principally mined on Cyprus, hence the origin of the name of the metal as Cyprium, "metal of Cyprus", later shortened to Cuprum.
    There may be insufficient reserves to sustain current high rates of copper consumption. Some countries, such as Chile and the United States, still have sizable reserves of the metal which are extracted through large open pit mines.

    Copper compounds are often encountered as salts of Cu2+, which often impart blue or green colors to minerals such as turquoise and have been used historically widely as pigments. Copper metal architectural structures and statuary eventually corrode to acquire a characteristic green patina. Copper as both metal and pigmented salt, has a significant presence in decorative art.

    Copper ions are soluble in water, where they function at low concentration as bacteriostatic substances, fungicides, and wood preservatives. In sufficient amounts, copper salts can be poisonous to higher organisms as well. However, despite universal toxicity at high concentrations, the Cu2+ ion at lower concentrations is an essential trace nutrient to all higher plant and animal life. In animals, including humans, it is found widely in tissues, with concentration in liver, muscle, and bone. It functions as a co-factor in various enzymes and in copper-based pigments.

    How it works: Copper works by adding fire chakra into earth and melting the earth up to the point the user wants once done the user adds a bit of chakra and it would turn into a piece of hard copper. It could also, work by making steel and putting fire chakra into it and melting the steel making it copper but this way is really not necessary. Also, Copper works for both, Solid and Liquid state and so the user is able too release both. To make a liquid copper the user has to have contact towards any kind of object and it will turn into liquid state due to the high chakra concentration and of course mastery of fire and earth. Also, copper will always be hot due to the fire either on liquid or solid state. The solid state can also, be made into anything hard and sharp.

    Usage Examples:
    ( Dou: Dou kabe ) Copper: Copper Wall
    Rank: B
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will first focus copper chakra once done the user will slam his/her hands on the ground and a hard copper wall will appear in front of the user or behind the user whatever place the user wish.

    - Must know Copper
    - Usable twice

    ( Dou: Enban ) Copper: Disk
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will first put his/her left hand up once done the user will focus copper chakra which wouldn't take really long and when the user is done with that the user will make a sharp copper disk which travel at high speed without no problem and if the user want to control it the user could.

    - Only usable twice
    - If the user control the disk the disk is only usable once
    - Must know Copper


    Conditions to be able to use it:

    Earth: The user need's mastery of earth since is really important without it you can't make Copper

    Fire: The user need's mastery of fire when earth is already ready the user add some fire to it and it will start to make a bit of copper

    Chakra: After, all that the user add a little bit of chakra to finish the copper and make it a bit more stronger.

    Is weak to:

    Strong Lightning: Is able to break through the copper, if the lightning is strong enough. (Depend on what rank the Copper jutsu is)

    High rank Fire techniques: Even though fire is needle to make copper, high rank fire techniques could easily stop a copper technique and melt it at will. (This depends on how strong the fire is and what rank the copper is)

    Strong Wind cutter techniques: A extremely strong wind technique that is able to cut, it could cut a copper technique but not all.

    Lava: Since copper has fire itself copper is able to hold lava thought not strong lava techniques because the lava would start to melt the copper.

    Dark Fire: Is able to make an amazing damage to the copper

    Hellfire: Due to the degrees this fire has the fire is able to melt copper.

    Diamond: Is able to break Copper thought it would make a challenge because Copper could break it too.

    High rank Kaguya techniques: High rank Kaguya techniques might break a copper technique.

    Their is more weaknesses, i just didn't research them all.

    Is strong against:

    Wind: It doesn't do no damage to a Copper technique unless it cuts stuff and is really high ranked

    Water: Is able to splash the water away without a problem

    Glass: Is able to break glass easily because Copper is really strong

    Bubblegum & Bubble: Is able to pop the bubblegum

    Honey: Is able to pass through Honey without a problem

    Earth: Is able to break earth

    Ice: Is able to break weak ice techniques like about b-ranks.

    Co-creator: Piccolosan

    Students I passed this custom element on too: -


    What has been edit: Two more weaknesses that is base on basic five element those are Wind and Fire so overall their is three basic elemental weakness in overall they are Wind, Fire and Lighting.

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    ✗ Declined: No more metal CE unless it would have a special quality, which is clearly not the case here. Also I barely understand your argumentation as it makes no sense. Transforming steel into copper? What? That makes no sense, old stuff transforms into copper? Does that mean I need to worry about my grandma suddenly becoming a copper statue?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name:Taiseiyōsuiton
    Custom element English name: Atlantic Water Release
    The element is based on: Water & Pure Chakra & Earth & Lightning
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    In the manga, we see a special crystal once worn by the Shodai Hokage - Hashirama Senju, This crystal had a special reaction towards the nine tail's chakra, sealing it's power well before Naruto grew out of control. A power unique to Hashirama was the ability to control jinchūriki and the tailed beasts. This ability was enhanced by the necklace, which responded to his chakra, allowing him to control the chakra of the tailed beasts. It is said that Hashirama's Hokage-Style Sixty-Year-Old Technique — Kakuan Entering Society with Bliss-Bringing Hands responds to this necklace to suppress the Nine-Tails' chakra when it influences Naruto. Yamato at some point in time added a seal to the necklace that would activate when Naruto called upon too much of the Nine-Tails' chakra, attempting to restrain him, and alerting Yamato to what was happening.

    This same type of crystal however was once also worn by his brother Tobirama Senju. Tobirama Senju's chakra resonates within this gem and with the user and allows them to apply a pure form of chakra to the water element and earth element combined in homeostasis by the use of the lightning element. The Water chakra adverserly manipulated by the earth chakra, gives the user control over the three forms of water [solid, liquid, gas] and due to the lightning chakra energizing the elemental combination the user is then able to utilize the element to manipulate the Earth forge golems with the power to release this element


    [start at :50 - 1:00 for the crystal and affects on the eyes see 2:20-4:46 for affects on body and 5:05 to get a visual of possible techniques]


    How it works: Atlantic Water, is an element firstly that works in tune with a Crystal Gem that resonates with powerful chakras. The user will combine the three elements into the crystal gem, which causes the gem to glow vibrant blue and often it begins to float as if it were actually in water. What going on in the gem is something astonishing in itself. Naturally, the Water and Earth chakra fued and can't cooperate with one another as they oppose each other on the elemental chart. By using the Lightning Element, the crystal and the resonating chakra calm the fueding elements and allow them to exist in peace. These now peaceful chakra provide a vast amount of energy to the holder of the gem, and as such will cause the gem, the user's eyes, or body depending on the scale of the technique. Now with these elements in a peaceful state, the water chakra is now manipulated as if it were Earth As because of the combination of the elements the water stays almost as if it were rock maintaining an always cool-to-the-touch temperature, while you than control all the forms of the water elements ability to be made into a solid liquid or gas as well as it's H2O structure. This water, now containing vast amount of energy allows it to power golems created by siphoning the water into the ground and have the ability to release the water.

    Usage Examples:

    Taiseiyōsuiton| Harisou - [Atlantic Water Release| Crystal Activation]
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Desciption: The user pushes their chakra into the crystal and purifies it. Then the user creates handseals that can manipulate the Atlantic Water to create small waves of it that can easily be frozen into a solid or changed into a gas.

    Taiseiyōsuiton| Joukitou - [Atlantic Water Release| Steam Freeze]
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their Atlantic Water chakra into a source such as the earth or water, creating geysers of Atlantic Water Steam that then become manipulated into crystal form to freeze the opponent or object of choice.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of the Water, Earth, and Lightning Elements.
    Is weak to: This element retains many of it's base elements actual weaknesses. Atlantic Water itself is still water, and it's techniques can easily be blocked by Earth Release techniques. The Earth itself, of course retains it's weakness to the Lightning Element.

    Is strong against: Any fire, ice, or water based technique or techniques that change any attribute of the water such as composition from water to Liquid Hydrogen.
    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: Serpent & Darui..

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    ✗ Declined: Don't make things up =/ the Nidaime didn't had such a necklace, that's just complete BS. On top of that the Shodaime's necklace worked for him only and it worked as an amplifier of an ability he already had. However you're using a necklace, one you completely made up yourself, as argumentation to say that the element is possible. That's just gibberish as you made a ridiculous CE with the only proof a made-up necklace which is very different from the Shodaime's as it in fact creates the element and it works for multiple users. Also water and earth can co operate with each other ~_~ I find this personally an extremely cheap and shallow attempt to just get multiple elements at once =/
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Ekisansoton
    Custom element English name: Liquid Oxygen Release
    The element is based on: Lightning + Water + Ice + Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Liquid oxygen has a pale blue color and is strongly paramagnetic and can be suspended between the poles of a powerful horseshoe magnet.
    Liquid oxygen has a density of 1.141 g/cm3 (1.141 kg/L) and is cryogenic with a freezing point of 50.5 K (-368.77 °F; -222.65 °C) and a boiling point of 90.19 K (-297.33 °F, -182.96 °C) at 101.325 kPa (760 mmHg).
    Because of its cryogenic nature, liquid oxygen can cause the materials it touches to become extremely brittle. Liquid oxygen is also a very powerful oxidizing agent: organic materials will burn rapidly and energetically in liquid oxygen.
    Further, if soaked in liquid oxygen, some materials such as coal briquettes, carbon black, etc., can detonate unpredictably from sources of ignition such as flames, sparks or impact from light blows. Petrochemicals often exhibit this behavior, including asphalt.

    How Liquid Oxygen is formed, is by cooling the Water really far after shattering the bounds of the Oxygen and Hydrogen present in the water by the usage of lightning release and using massive amounts of chakra to group the Oxygen particles and compress them together, also being another variation of Liquids, which follows the same principal as other approved custom elements like Liquid Nitrogen and Liquid Hydrogen, Liquid Oxygen isn't an exception however it's not easily accessible, as the user have to use a very cold form of Wind that's only present in the Ice release chakra and it's very cold temperatures which is the main part of the creation of the element as the user has to have an Ice bio due to the extremely cold temperatures in which the water should be cold at in order to achieve Liquid Oxygen.

    How it works: In the Narutoverse a ninja would be able to form liquid Oxygen by shattering the water's particles with lightning, sending an electrostatic charge to the water to break and seperate the Oxygen and Hydrogen bounds from each other, afterwards using large amounts of chakra to compress the Oxygen particles together as to proceed to the last step which would be cooling the Particles with a very cold form of Wind that's only accessible through the usage of Ice release chakra.
    Frozen State: This form is achieved through cooling the Liquid Oxygen even more with the Wind that's released from the Ice release till the point of 50.5 K as stated before, turning the liquid Oxygen into a solid Ice substance.
    Usage Examples:
    (Ekisansoton: Gyouko Touza) - Liquid Oxygen Release: Freezing Current
    Type: Offense - Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After forming 3 handseals "Horse ? Ram ? Ox" the user summons a large volume of Liquid Oxygen from the sky, crashing it down into the opponent to crush him with the weight, the temperature of the water is cold that it causes chills to the opponent's body when coming in contact with it, and will freeze him if the opponent stays in contact with the liquid for too long
    Note: The target will be frozen if he comes in contact with the liquid for 2 turns.

    (Ekisansoton: Mizu kirikae) - Liquid Oxygen Release: Water Conversion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A [+15 to Water techniques]
    Description: After forming the "Ox" handseal the user releases Liquid Oxygen chakra into any water sources present on the field, causing the water to take on the proprieties of Liquid Oxygen, causing the water to be extremely cold and providing water techniques that are formed with the manipulation of the water present in the water source with additional damage points.
    Note: Lasts 4 turns.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.

    (Ekisansoton: Eki Soujuu) - Liquid Oxygen Release: Liquid Manipulation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After forming the "Horse" handseal, the user releases Liquid Oxygen chakra into any pre-exisiting Liquid Oxygen release technique turning the Liquid substance of Liquid Oxygen into a solid Frozen state and vise-versa, When turning the liquid form into a frozen form the user is able to re-arrange the shape of the Liquid as it solidifies, depending on the situation at hand.



    Conditions to be able to use it: Lightning/Water/ Mastery, Large chakra reserves, and the possession of an Ice release biography.

    Is weak to:

    Highly compressed Wind: Can blow away Liquid Oxygen and cut through it.

    Highly ranked Fire: Will be enough to evaporate the Liquid Oxygen and melt the Frozen state turning it into Liquid.

    Is strong against:

    Earth release/Metal based CEs: due to the Liquid Oxygen being an Oxidizing agent will be more powerful than Earth based elements.

    Water Release/Water based CEs: Due to the Liquid Oxygen being one of the coldest known forms of Liquid, it's more powerful than standard water techniques and water based custom elements.

    Lightning Release: Due to the Liquid Oxygen being a non lightning conductor and being paramagnetic, it will be more powerful than lightning based technqiues.
    Co-creator: ~Crow~
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

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    ✗ Declined: As it's too similar to Liquid Nitrogen. Yes they are two different substances, however they are way too similar to be considered two individual CE as they're very closely related to each other. The Liquid Nitrogen CE even more or less already implies to usage of Liquid Oxygen.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Emerarudodasuto
    Custom element English name: Emerald Dust
    The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Wind + Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Te first reason on how this could be possible is how the kazekages use Gold and Iron Dust. The kazekages were able to manipulate the dust and take control on how they use this. For Emerald Dust to the user will be able to use emeralds and use their chakra to crust the emerald into dust and use their chakra to take control of it. The user could also have a gourd like Gaara and bring Emerald Dust with him to use in battle. The user can also create more dust if emeralds are near by and crush them to make more dust.
    How it works: The user will use their Earth, Fire, Wind chakra to use the dust and create a green color dust. The user will than use their chakra to take control of dust and use it for offensive and defensive jutsus. The user could also channel their dust into the ground and crush emeralds near by to create more dust like how Gaara creates more sand. The dust will be used to either hold down the opponent and attack them or be used for defensive purposes. The user can create shields around them and their allies to help protect people.
    Usage Examples:
    (Emerarudo· dasutorirīsu: Tanjō no te) Emerald Dust Release: Hands of Birth
    Type: Offense - Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will use near by Emerald Dust and create 4 arms with hands made out of Emerald Dust that are the size of Gaara's sand hands. The user can use these to hold/bind the enemy or crush them.
    Note: Must know emerald dust
    Note: Only 4 Arms can be made at once
    Note: Usable 4 times a battle

    (Emerarudo· dasutorirīsu:Gurīndoragon no kuchi) Emerald Dust Release: Mouth of the Green Dragon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will first user their emerald dust to knock the opponent into the air by making a emerald dust spike. When opponent is in the air they will create a large emerald dust dragon that comes out of the ground that comes up and shallows the enemy.
    Note: Must know Emerald Dust
    Note: Usable 2x
    Note: No Emerald Dust moves A rank and higher next turn

    Conditions to be able to use it: Must have Earth, Fire, and Wind mastered and ave good chakra control.
    Is weak to:
    Lightning - Due to the Earth component of Emeralds, it shares the weakness of it as well.
    Fire + Water (Advanced) - Weak due to the rapid change in the temperature.
    Wind- Strong wind can just blow away the dust.
    Is strong against:
    Water - Due to the Earth component of Emeralds, it has an innate strength to water.
    Fire - Due to Emeralds being tempered by heat, it has a high resistance to fire.
    Earth - Due to the the toughness and density of Emeralds, it has the ability to withstand powerful Earth-based attacks.
    Co-creator: ~Jellal.F~
    Students I passed this custom element on too: (Spot Reserved for)-Kamishiro-
    & ?

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    ✗ Declined: this CE was submitted before and clearly declined to not be resubmitted again and you know that you lil' weasel. The only thing you just changed was making it into dust, however that makes no difference in the end as you pretty much copy pasted almost all its strengths and weaknesses of the pervious submitter (which is fairly obvious as they're quite messed up). Also overall seen it's very poorly made and explained.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Orimpiamu Kazeton

    Custom element English name: Olympian wind release

    The element is based on: [Wind+Earth+Lightning+Water] + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): We've seen in hyoton using wind to cool a substance, water, into it's solid state. Also, we've seen in many CE that they use wind to supercool stuff. And Izuna's MS was also an inspiration.

    How it works: In this concept, the user will partially cool down all the components in wind and also add water chakra into it while at the very same time applying chakra pressure into the technique. In that way, the user will reduce the kinectic energy of the particles, producing less movement and therefore making the liquid form of the desired elements without having to risk any of the components becoming solid nor gas. Then the user will insert very small granules of earth into the liquids within the wind, which are pressurized and flowing. Therefore, creating a rapidly running current of abrasive liquid. Also, the user will utilize the water within the wind to conduct lightning into it which runs within the abrasive currents created. Although the wind is a natural insulator of electricity, we've already seen CEs that combine them both. Adding the water + the earth granules + the liquefied components of wind would give the lightning enough ions to flow within this newly created wind. The lightning will not only sharpen the wind further, but also it will not destroy the earth since lightning just breaks ground doesn't vaporize it. A final coat of chakra finishes this up, compressing it and augmenting its stability. The result is the sharpest possible element, a combination of wind, lightning and abrasive water, which is able to penetrate any and all solids like a hot knife through butter while at the same time, due to it's extremely cool temperature, be able to douse the hottest of the elements easily. In terms of speed, it outclasses normal wind and lightning. If focused on a tool, it'll form a cloak around it and augments its speed and penetrative force.

    Usage Examples:

    (Orimpiamu Kazeton: ) - Olympian Wind Release: Chaos to Cosmos
    Rank: Fordibben
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (+30 damage to the user)
    Description: The user will release his olympian wind chakra into the air sourrounding the opponent and in a single burst, will turn all of it into Olympian wind and make it crush on the opponent slicing him to shreds while freezing and frostbiting his body. The coolness of the wind already strikes the opponent when it is initially coming, making his reactions slower than usual and the dexterity of his moves decrease the close the wind is.
    Notes: It may only be used once per battle.
    Notes: The user willl strain his chakra too much, preventing him from using more than two jutsu the next two turns and wind, lightning, water and earth elements above A-rank for the next two turns. No olympian wind for the next three turns.

    (Orimpiamu Kazeton: ) - Olympian Wind Release: Quetzalcoatl burst
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will concentrate his olympian wind chakra and release from either of his hands. creating a burst of olympian wind, and then freely control a single current of that wind capable of reaching long-range. It can be controlled as freely as the user want, almost like if it was a snake or dragon. It's width is variable, from a hairs length to the width of kyodaija.

    (Orimpiamu Kazeton: ) - Olympian Wind Release: Era's Slaps
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Just like in a variant of Futon: Serial Waves, the user will spit multiple crescent shaped blades in various angles and sizes that cleanly cut through anything.
    Notes: No olympian wind may be used the same and next turn.

    (Orimpiamu Kazeton: ) - Olympian Wind Release: Hephaestus' sparks
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will spit multiple small bullets of pressurized olympian wind at the opponent which travel at outstanding speeds.
    Notes: The user will spit up to 7 of the said bullets.
    Notes: No olympian wind the same turn.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of the elements needed.

    Is weak to: Normal wind will be able to stop it if it is a higher rank (F-rank vs F-rank will weaken the olympian wind) and great volumes of water will suddenly change in density and complicate the penetration to the wind, preventing that same stream from continuing within it.

    Is strong against: All solid elements no matter the material , Lightning (it'll just augment the charge of the technique thanks to the running water and the wind element characteristics, the lightning is beaten and assimilated. Also it's higher forms like blitz impact and raging thunder) , Fire (it'll cut through it, unable to fuel it and sucking up a key component, heat from the fire. Therefore dousing it while cutting through it.)

    Co-creator: Konoha's Yellow Flash

    Students I passed this custom element on too:
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    I'd rethink that strength against lightning, and also the name
    Custom element Japanese name:[/B] Ouritsu Kazeton

    Custom element English name: Regal Wind release

    The element is based on: [Wind+Earth+Lightning+Water] + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): We've seen in hyoton using wind to cool a substance, water, into it's solid state. Also, we've seen in many CE that they use wind to supercool stuff. And Izuna's MS was also an inspiration.

    How it works: In this concept, the user will partially cool down all the components in wind and also add water chakra into it while at the very same time applying chakra pressure into the technique. In that way, the user will reduce the kinectic energy of the particles, producing less movement and therefore making the liquid form of the desired elements without having to risk any of the components becoming solid nor gas. Then the user will insert very small granules of earth into the liquids within the wind, which are pressurized and flowing. Therefore, creating a rapidly running current of abrasive liquid. Also, the user will utilize the water within the wind to conduct lightning into it which runs within the abrasive currents created. Although the wind is a natural insulator of electricity, we've already seen CEs that combine them both. Adding the water + the earth granules + the liquefied components of wind would give the lightning enough ions to flow within this newly created wind. The lightning will not only sharpen the wind further, but also it will not destroy the earth since lightning just breaks ground doesn't vaporize it. A final coat of chakra finishes this up, compressing it and augmenting its stability.

    All in all, there are 5 coats within this Custom element:
    -Outermost chakra layer
    -Outer lightning cloak
    -Highly conductive, flowing abrasive water coat
    -Inner Chakra coat
    -Innermost liquid wind center


    The result is the sharpest possible element, a combination of wind, lightning and abrasive water, which is able to penetrate any and all solids like a hot knife through butter while at the same time, due to it's extremely cool temperature, be able to douse the hottest of the elements easily. In terms of speed, it outclasses normal wind and lightning. If focused on a tool, it'll form a cloak around it and augments its speed and penetrative force.

    Usage Examples:

    (ouritsu futon: ) - Regal Wind Release: Chaos to Cosmos
    Rank: Fordibben
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (+30 damage to the user)
    Description: The user will release his olympian wind chakra into the air sourrounding the opponent and in a single burst, will turn all of it into Olympian wind and make it crush on the opponent slicing him to shreds while freezing and frostbiting his body. The coolness of the wind already strikes the opponent when it is initially coming, making his reactions slower than usual and the dexterity of his moves decrease the close the wind is.
    Notes: It may only be used once per battle.
    Notes: The user willl strain his chakra too much, preventing him from using more than two jutsu the next two turns and wind, lightning, water and earth elements above A-rank for the next two turns. No olympian wind for the next three turns.

    (ouritsu Kazeton: ) - Regal Wind Release: Quetzalcoatl burst
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will concentrate his olympian wind chakra and release from either of his hands. creating a burst of olympian wind, and then freely control a single current of that wind capable of reaching long-range. It can be controlled as freely as the user want, almost like if it was a snake or dragon. It's width is variable, from a hairs length to the width of kyodaija.

    (Ouritsu Kazeton: ) - Regal Wind Release: Era's Slaps
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Just like in a variant of Futon: Serial Waves, the user will spit multiple crescent shaped blades in various angles and sizes that cleanly cut through anything.
    Notes: No olympian wind may be used the same and next turn.

    (: ) - Regal Wind Release: Hephaestus' sparks
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will spit multiple small bullets of pressurized olympian wind at the opponent which travel at outstanding speeds.
    Notes: The user will spit up to 7 of the said bullets.
    Notes: No olympian wind the same turn.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of the elements needed.

    Is weak to: Normal wind will be able to stop it if it is a higher rank (F-rank vs F-rank will weaken the olympian wind) and great volumes of water/liquids will suddenly change in density and complicate the penetration to the wind, preventing that same stream from continuing within it.

    Is strong against: All solid elements no matter the material , Lightning (Th water and earth coat along with the outer lightning coat in combination will overpower lightning not assimilate it. Also it's higher forms like blitz impact and raging thunder) , Fire (it'll cut through it, unable to fuel it and sucking up a key component, heat from the fire. Therefore dousing it while cutting through it.)

    Co-creator: Konoha's Yellow Flash

    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    ~I hope the lightning weakness is now treated accordingly, if not I'll swap. Weak to lightning and strong to wind.~

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    ✗ Declined: This is one messed up element...correction this is not even an element but just an elemental combination of jutsu's. You just smashed 4 different elements together like you are throwing different spices in a soup. What you did is no different then creating first a wind jutsu, then a water jutsu, then an earth jutsu and then a lightning jutsu, but that's not making a CE, that's just an elemental combo. On top of that your reasoning is literally messed up, illogical and contradictory. You also never gave a single proof that it would be possible, the only thing you mentioned was something about ice but that's barely important when you combine 4 elements. Then you actually made up its qualities, you just made one of the fastest, sharpest, most resistant elements in existence according to you, but you never gave a single evidence for that. You just decided yourself what it would do and to finish it you barely have any weaknesses, in fact you have none. Every element that has a higher rank than your jutsu can beat it, in the case it would be an element that's weak against it and it would be one rank higher they would cancel each other out. That's RP basics. Your "weaknesses" are more strengths than weaknesses O_o
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name:shuukiton
    Custom element English name: stink release
    The element is based on: wind and chakra control to make the wind stink
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): As smell is one of the five senses all humans can smell and stink is any foul smell such as a fart or rotten eggs and kiba and other members of the izuzuka clan have shown the abilty to even be able to track people by smell and kiba couldn't stand teh smell of narutos fart thus stink can exist in the naruto world being able to make it into an element is the only question.

    How it works: The user will focus his wind chakra into his gut and gather any stinky smells an ex farts or bad breathe and then release it in any way like a fart a breathe or make the smell just appear in the air like hidden mist no jutsu the stink will come out in a green gas substance and will make the enemys eyes tear up their nose burn or just in general block their vision.

    Usage Examples:

    shuukiton tamanegi nioi ( stink release onion smell )
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: mid/long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will make two hand seals and focus wind chakra into his gut and focus the chakra towards his butt he will then make one hand seal and turn around he will then fart a large ball of stink at his enemy which will stink so much their eyes will tear up and make it hard to see.

    shuukiton shuuki nioi ( stink release stinky smell)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: mid/long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user will make 3 hand seals and focus all his wind chakra into his butt and mix teh wind with his fart smell he will then bring the chakra into his mouth and mix it around with his bad breathe he will then exhale a very stinky green current at the enemy which can act as a smoke screen and stinks so bad that the enemy's nose will burn badly making it hard to smell and just makes their nose hurt in general.



    Conditions to be able to use it: must never brush teeth must never take showers must have mastery over wind and have good chakra control.
    Is weak to: wind, water, lighting earth
    Is strong against: fire ( only makes it stink more) inazuka noses ( as they have much better smelling ability then every one else )
    Co-creator:
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    if nothing else i hope this made you laugh but still was trying to make a real element >.>

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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Mijin

    Custom element English name: Atom

    The element is based on: Chakra, states of matter (like solid, liquid and gas), (and also protons, neutrons and electrons)

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): We have seen in narutoverse that everthing is made up of some matter, and every matter has a state like solid, liquid or gas or maybe something else, and they are made up of infite no. of atoms.
    For example- Weapons like kunai and shuriken are made up of metal, and the metal is made up of a large no. of atoms. And similarly any object or anything is made up of atoms. It is basic unit of matter.
    Like we have seen the earth turning into mud, water turning into vapour, also water turning into ice or hardening of earth and many more, these all are done by changing the confugration of atoms deeply.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atom

    How it works: By concentrating on his chakra, the user can change the state of any matter by changing its configuration deeply. Like we have seen that earth turning into mud, lava, water turning into vapour, also water turning into ice or hardening of earth. That is because when atoms or molecules which are packed in a body, are made to loose or tightened, then it changes its state. Like in case of solid, atoms are tightly packed, and if they are made to loosly packed then that solid will become liquid or if very loosly packed than will turn to gas. Same happens with liquids and gases, when the atoms which are loosly packed in liquid, or very loosly packed in gas, if they are made to packed tightly, then liquid becomes solid and gas becomes liquid or solid.
    While changing the configuration of any atom, some heat or coldness may be produced, which can be used to turn earth into lava/ hot steam, or cold mud. And similarly can be done with other elements.
    As atom is made up of protons, neutrons and electrons. So many more variations can be done within a atom by changing the configuration of protons, neutrons and/or electrons.

    Usage Examples:

    (Mijin: Hensen za Soriddo) - Atom: Transform the Solid
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: All
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25/30/40
    Damage Points: 40/60/80
    Description: After performing 5 necessary handseals, user changes the confugration of any solid on the battlefield, making it more harder than diamond, or to change it into mud, liquid, hot steam, cold air, gas, etc.
    Note: ~Cannot be used on living creatures.
    ~Can only be used once every 2 turns.

    (Mijin: Hensen za Ekitai) - Atom: Transform the Liquid
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: All
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25/30/40
    Damage Points: 40/60/80
    Description: After performing 5 necessary handseals, user changes the confugration of any liquid to change it into ice, cold gas/air, steam, solid, gas etc.
    Note: ~Cannot be used on living creatures.
    ~Can only be used once every 2 turns.

    (Mijin: Hensen za Kitai) - Atom: Transform the Gas
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: All
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25/30/40
    Damage Points: 40/60/80
    Description: After performing 5 necessary handseals, user changes the confugration of any wind/gas to change it into solid, liquid, steam, cold air, air etc.
    Note: ~Cannot be used on living creatures.
    ~Can only be used once every 2 turns.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Basic Ninjutsu, Earth, Water and Wind.

    Is weak to: Fire and lightning and Elements based on them.

    Is strong against: Earth, Water and Wind, any solid, semi-solid, liquid, semi-liquid and gas or anything which has a paricular state.

    Co-creator: gitanshu

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? and ?
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    Even if you weren't in detention I still wouldn't approve it


    Custom element Japanese name: Mijin

    Custom element English name: Atom

    The element is based on: Chakra, states of matter (like solid, liquid and gas), (and also protons, neutrons and electrons)

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): We have seen in narutoverse that everthing is made up of some matter, and every matter has a state like solid, liquid or gas or maybe something else, and they are made up of infite no. of atoms.
    For example- Weapons like kunai and shuriken are made up of metal, and the metal is made up of a large no. of atoms. And similarly any object or anything is made up of atoms. It is basic unit of matter.
    Like we have seen the earth turning into mud, water turning into vapour, also water turning into ice or hardening of earth and many more, these all are done by changing the confugration of atoms deeply.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atom

    How it works: By concentrating on his chakra, the user can change the state of any matter by changing its configuration deeply. Like we have seen that earth turning into mud, lava, water turning into vapour, also water turning into ice or hardening of earth. That is because when atoms or molecules which are packed in a body, are made to loose or tightened, then it changes its state. Like in case of solid, atoms are tightly packed, and if they are made to loosly packed then that solid will become liquid or if very loosly packed than will turn to gas. Same happens with liquids and gases, when the atoms which are loosly packed in liquid, or very loosly packed in gas, if they are made to packed tightly, then liquid becomes solid and gas becomes liquid or solid.

    When changing the configuration, if fire or lightning is very close/is on the object of which user is changing the configuration, then it it'll be impossible to change the configuration since fire and lightning won't allow it and will cancel the user's atom's chakra.

    While changing the configuration of any atom, some heat or coldness may be produced, which can be used to turn earth into lava/ hot steam, or cold mud. And similarly can be done with other elements.
    Configuraion of a living being can't be changed. Since living things themself provide with some heat which overpowers the atom's chakra.

    As atom is made up of protons, neutrons and electrons. So many more variations can be done within a atom by changing the configuration of protons, neutrons and/or electrons.

    Usage Examples:

    (Mijin: Hensen za Soriddo) - Atom: Transform the Solid
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: All
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20/30/40
    Damage Points: 40/60/80
    Description: After performing 5 necessary handseals, user changes the confugration of any solid or semi-solid on the battlefield, making it harder like diamond, or to change it into mud, liquid, hot/cold gas, etc.
    Note: ~Cannot be used on living creatures.
    ~Can only be used once every 2 turns.

    (Mijin: Hensen za Ekitai) - Atom: Transform the Liquid
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: All
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20/30/40
    Damage Points: 40/60/80
    Description: After performing 5 necessary handseals, user changes the confugration of any liquid, or semi-liquid to change it into cold gas/air, steam, solid etc.
    Note: ~Cannot be used on living creatures.
    ~Can only be used once every 2 turns.

    (Mijin: Hensen za Kitai) - Atom: Transform the Gas
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: All
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20/30/40
    Damage Points: 40/60/80
    Description: After performing 5 necessary handseals, user changes the confugration of any wind/gas to change it into solid, liquid etc.
    Note: ~Cannot be used on living creatures.
    ~Can only be used once every 2 turns.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Basic Ninjutsu, Earth, Water and Wind.

    Is weak to: Anything which have life of its own or don't have a particular state, like
    -Fire and its CEs.
    -Lightning and its CEs.
    -Wood (the ones which have life, like trees, and seeds), since it has its own life.
    -Aburame bugs, since they are living creatures.
    -Nara shadows, since shadows don't have a particular state.
    -Yamanaka's mind-body techniques, it also don't have any state.
    -Sound.
    -Gravity and Vaccuum.
    -Genjutsu and Taijutsu and etc etc.


    Is strong against: Anything which have any particular state like solid, semi-solid, liquid, semi-liquid and gas etc.
    -Earth and its CEs.
    -Water and its CEs.
    -Wind and its CEs.
    -Ice, lava, sand and steel, and etc etc.

    Co-creator: gitanshu

    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? and ?

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    ✗ Declined: Nexus was pretty clear about the fact that this isn't approvable in any kind of way, so why did you resubmit it? Don't resubmit it again.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Shinrei
    Custom element English name: Deep Cold
    The element is based on: (Water + Wind) + Chakra Pressure + Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Deep cold is based off of the temperatures found in both deep space and far underneath the surface of the ocean. The absence of heat is so great that it bends the laws of physics, and is extremely dangerous, being able to freeze nearly everything. We know that the Naruto world is on a similar planet as ours, and arguably on the same Earth, just a different dimension or time. So therefore, we can infer that the coldness that happens in our universe also happens there, though they do not have the technology to measure it. It can be viewed as Ameratsu is “Heaven’s Fire”, Deep cold is “Heaven’s Cold”.

    How it works:
    Deep cold, or Shinrei is a variation on the known Ice release, however Deep cold is an advanced form of it. The user moulds their wind and water chakra together, both elements complimenting each other and creating an intense cold. This causes the area to drop drastically in temperature, forming ice. The ice we know is impure. There are very small air particles between its molecules, making it sort of weak. To prevent the air particles from being between the molecules we use chakra pressure to push the molecules tightly together so there is not enough space in between them for air particles. This makes the ice 10 times stronger than steel and far darker than common ice. To make the ice even stronger we take away the molecules their ability to absorb energy of for example fire. Due to this absorbing of energy the molecules would normally start to vibrate, making the ice melt. To stop the molecules from vibrating we use our own chakra, therefore we need chakra control and chakra pressure. Using our chakra we give the molecules the maximum amount of energy they can absorb, and at the same time hold them into place. This causes the molecules to stay on their place, even when in contact with much energy, as in fire, and thus does not melt easy, resulting in ice that is 12 to 15 times stronger than iron and has a deep almost black colour.

    Usage Examples:

    (Shinrei: Mizu Hana) – Deep Ice: Cold Wall
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Using chakra, the creates intense cold on the ground in front of him, causing a large wall of deep ice to form, shielding the user from an incoming attack.

    (Shinrei: Kōri no tatchi)- Deep Ice: Touch of ice
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses their chakra into their hands and spreads them out in front of them. Releasing their chakra from their hands causes the air in front of them to become so intense cold that every water jutsu of equal rank or lower becomes frozen into place without harming the user. The deep ice created of the water can be used as defence once frozen, however one cannot look through it because of the darkness of the ice.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Wind and Water.

    Is weak to:
    - Lightning (The high energy can shatter the structure of anything formed by the temperature.)
    - Earth (It will freeze the earth, but have no other affects really.)
    - Dark (Can suck the chakra forming the technique easily.)
    - Lava (When applied to something as hot as lava, a chemical explosion will happen due to the quick heating of the particles, and causing a threat to both the user and his opponent/s.)

    Is strong against:
    - Fire (Will remove all heat from the area, literally freezing fire.),
    - Water and Water based elements (Low temperatures will instantly freeze water.)

    Co-creator: Omnom
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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    ✗ Declined: We already have enough cold temperature based elements, in fact there's a temperature CE, so why do you make yet another? On top of that you in fact make two elements: one for temperature control and then one for ice, but for some reason you start explaining why the temperature is possible, which is in fact completely unnecessary as it's barely relevant (Haku can make ice pretty much anywhere, he can't control the temperature, only ice, the temperature of the environment would just drop a bit but due to the presence of ice, but not so much that it matters), but you didn't provide any proof for the ice element itself =/
    So throwing away the irrelevant temperature stuff, you just a have more condensed form of ice for which you didn't provide any proof, but you do claim it's 12 to 15 times stronger than iron and then 10 times stronger than steel...without any kind of basis to back it up. That explanation also doesn't make much sense either as you say ice is impure, but what kind of proof do you have that the ice element is impure? As Haku's ice is chakra infused, can be used in any kind of environment, Haku can already temper with its density and it has been shown to be quite resilient against fire. It's not weak and if you're removing the air molecules, is it even ice then anymore as it was made by combining wind and water? The way you explain your jutsu's you manipulate the temperature that then creates the ice, which is wrong as the temperature is not controlled, it just lowers a bit when ice is created.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Aurora Release
    Custom element English name:Ōroraton
    The element is based on: Wind | Lightning
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    Cresent Moon Rasengan

    This element is possible within the context of the manga for many reasons, so first I will explain how I first came to this conclusion. In the Naruto movie, Guardians of the Crescent Moon, Naruto combines the Rasengan with the rays of a crescent moon to engulf it in a blinding white light. This forms a white crescent moon with a star in the Rasengan, making the attack larger and more powerful. So in the terms of the RP, this energy based element can be made possible with the user manipulating their wind and lightning chakras to create Aurora energy attacks.

    An aurora is a natural light display in the sky particularly in the high latitude regions, caused by the collision of energetic charged particles with atoms in the high altitude atmosphere. The magnetosphere and solar wind consist of plasma (ionized gas), which conducts electricity.

    Auroras are associated with a flow of ions continuously flowing outward from the Sun. The Earth's magnetic field traps these particles, many of which travel toward the poles where they are accelerated toward Earth. Collisions between these ions and atmospheric atoms and molecules cause energy releases in the form of auroras appearing in large circles around the poles. Auroras are more frequent and brighter during the intense phase of the solar cycle when coronal mass ejections increase the intensity of the solar wind.

    The discrete aurora are sharply defined features within the diffuse aurora which vary in brightness from just barely visible to the naked eye to bright enough to read a newspaper at night. Discrete aurorae are usually observed only in the night sky because they are not as bright as the sunlit sky. Aurorae occur occasionally poleward of the auroral zone as diffuse patches or arcs which are generally invisible to the naked eye.


    How it works:

    In simple terms, primarily the user should be able to combine his chakras with the constant flow of ions that flow from the sun outwards into the earth and use that energy to produce Aurora like energy techniques. Even though we as humans dont come into contact with 100% of the ions that reach the earth, that small portion still should be able to be used to create jutsus just as Naruto was able to.

    If not using the energy around him as a basis to perform techniques the user should be able to channel their lightning chakra sending it out into the air, acting as the conductor to ionize the particles within the air to create Aurora energy particles.

    As from above, during the day it is almost invisible to the naked eye, but during the night it can be seen and even bright enough for someone to read a newspaper in the dark. So mainly dojutsu users will be able to see the chakra and energy in the air during the daytime and non dojutsu users wont typically notice it. It has some form due to it being combined with the wind.

    Usage Examples:
    Ōroraton: Ōroraton no Jutsu| Aurora Release: Aurora Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will create solid shields, small blasts, platforms and ninja tools using Aurora energy.

    Note: Can only be used 4x per battle.
    Note: Can only be seen with a Doujutsu in the daytime.


    Ōroraton: Yūdaina ōra | Aurora Release: Majestic Aura
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will first make the tiger handseal, causing a small aurora borealis to occur that radiates blinding level rays of aurora light that can be used to distract the opponents attention or cause temporary blindness.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: Lasts one turn.


    Ōroraton: Kita No Kōhai | Aurora Release: Northern Devastation
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After performing the handseals Ox → Rat → Boar → Tiger the user then summons multiple spiraling waves of Aurora energy to come crackling down from the sky destroying anything it comes into contact with also creating blinding light effects when making contact.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: Need to wait one turn before using again
    Note: Cannot be seen in daylight, but can be heard due to the crackling.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Wind | Lightning [Mastered]
    Is weak to: Fire just phases right through it. Explosion Release | Large enough water techniques can overpower it if clashing.

    Is strong against: All elements that have a solid earth composition. Lighting and wind just assimilate into the technique. It can conduct regular amounts of water to the point of evaporation and still progress on.

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too:
    -Yard-

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    ✗ Declined: I really like the idea and it's by far the best CE I've checked so far, but the problem is that someone already made a Solar Wind CE that in the description clearly states that the Aurora is a Solar Wind phenomena. On top of that he describes his element as being green, the primary color of the Aurora. Solar Wind is one of the fundaments of your element, so if he doesn't mind it, with some small editions, I can approve this, but if not then it will depend on how you're planning to use it.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Note: Dropping Marshmallow Release if approved: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...&postcount=211


    Custom element japanese name: Raifusutorīmu-ton

    Custom element english name: Lifestream Release

    The element is based on: Water + Natural Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga we've seen that natural chakra can be combined with other elements to increase their power. Naruto was shown doing this with his Rasenshuriken which allowed it to be thrown. Natural chakra itself is the life essence of nature in the Narutoverse. It exists everywhere in the world including the atmosphere and terrain.

    Its been recently revealed that there are various methods to understanding, obtaining and harnessing natural chakra. Naruto and Jiraiya learn it from the toads, Kabuto learns it from the Snakes and Jugo's clan has the ability to absorb it. This shows that there isn't one secret way of harnessing nature's power, but rather various methods. It also shows that anyone can potentially use natural chakra as Naruto and Jiraiya don't possess any special ability in terms of recognizing natural chakra. When Naruto was trained to use natural energy Fukasaku explained that you need to remain perfectly still and learn to feel natural energy before you could actually use it. However, since they were in a rush they ended up using the toad oil to quicken this process.

    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/8
    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/9
    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/10

    This proves that natural energy is something everyone has the potential to use, and that it isn't restricted to toads or snakes or the Jugo clan. The training needed to feel it involves becoming motionless and requires one to stop disrupting the natural energy around them, essentially deep meditation. This shows that had time not been a factor, Naruto could have done the training without the use of toad oil, and it would have been much safer. This also shows that it was possible to feel natural energy without the assistance of toads, as long as one had knowledge of natural energy.

    How it works: For this element the user combines water with natural chakra to create an element called "Lifestream". Once the water is mixed with the natural chakra it takes on a bright greenish-white hue. During this process the user doesn't mix natural chakra with their body. As they're not trained to do this and aren't capable of entering a sage mode, this would turn their body to stone. Instead, their are three ways Lifestream can be created. They can mix natural chakra into a pre-existing water source, mix it into a water source they are creating, or mix it with water that's created in their body. This way the natural chakra is never absorbed into their body, but directly into the water instead.

    Once the water is mixed with the natural chakra it gains some affects. The power of natural chakra amplifies the effects of water, allowing it to extinguish even hotter flames or fire element variations. When a person becomes exposed to Lifestream, they can be turned to stone if exposed too long as natural chakra will seep into their bodies, though this takes some time to happen. The final affect of natural chakra is that when moving over earth it causes small vegetation (grass, shrubs, etc. nothing higher than your feet) to immediately grow. The user would have no control over this vegetation or its growth, as its just a side effect of the lifestream which would work as a potent fertilizer.

    A user of this element would be unable to use natural energy in any other way. The water is what allows them to harness natural energy's power as it works as a medium and container for the energy. Using natural energy on its own would be too difficult to control as the user hasn't undergone any sort of senjutsu training. Because water is a relatively stable matter and it can act as a sink for energy (heat, radiation, etc.) its able to take on the natural energy without becoming unstable. This is what allows the user to use natural energy despite its difficult nature.

    Usage Examples:

    (Raifusutorīmu-ton: ) - Lifestream Release: Fertile Soil
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user forms together three hand seals while creating lifestream in their stomach. Upon completion of the third hand seal the user sprays the lifestream onto earth or sand and causes a rapid growth of small plants such as grasses and flowers which create roots in the soil. This prevents the usage of that earth or sand by both the user and opponent.
    -Can be used three times per battle.
    -Prevents A-rank and below earth techniques.
    -Prevents S-rank and below sand techniques.



    (Raifusutorīmu-ton: ) - Lifestream Release: Gaea's Aneurysm
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user chains together a series of five hand seals while building up a large amount of lifestream under an opponent. This causes the ground to begin swelling until the pressure causes the earth to burst, releasing a huge burst of lifestream along with chunks of debris.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -No S-rank or above lifestream techniques the next turn.


    Idea behind its creation: The idea for this element comes from the Lifestream seen in Final Fantasy VII and its sequels/prequels. In Final Fantasy its less of a watery substance and more etheral, but it acts as the blood of the planet flowing in streams under the earth's surface. I thought this could be adapted to Naruto through the use of natural chakra, which is the life force of nature and the planet.

    Conditions to be able to use it: The user must be of at least Kage level, have mastered water and have strong chakra control. Anyone taught this element must undergo a period of training with either Typhon or ~Onizuka~. This training would involve deep meditation in order to gain the ability to feel natural energy, something needed in order to use it.

    Is weak to:

    Earth, Advanced Earth and Metallic CEs: Strong enough to defend against the element.

    Water: If Lifestream is mixed with enough water it will become diluted and lose its effect.

    Steel: Strong enough to defend against the element.

    Is strong against:

    Earth: Moving earth techniques attached to the ground can be halted due to the roots created as Lifestream passes over the earth.

    Sand: Lifestream can cause sand to become fertile and root growth will make it impossible to control.

    Fire, Advanced Fire, Fire CEs: As a more powerful water element, Lifestream is strong against fire and fire based elements.

    Co-creators (if any): ~Onizuka~

    Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: You can't drop CE, once approved you're stuck with them for life. It's like a marriage and they do say marriage is a vicious pit trap. Which is the reason as why I never really understood why a lot of people submit CE so nonchalantly just to have a CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Kūraiton

    Custom element English name: Dark Lightning

    The element is based on: Lightning + Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Dark lightning is a more powerful form of lightning, taking on a grey color from massive chakra compression along with the Lightning release usage, the fact that prove this element is possible in the Naruto verse is Sasuke's usage of Chidori when he was under the influence of the Cursed Seal Of Heaven level 2 and was fighting Naruto in his initial Kyuubi form with the Fox's clock around him, Sasuke's body had massive amounts of chakra running through his chakra circularity system which he used when forming the Chidori and it changed the Lightning's color into grey and made it stronger, which is Dark Lightning.

    How Dark Lightning looks like:



    How it works: As stated before Dark Lightning Release is a more powerful form of the original Lightning Release mixed with massive amounts of Chakra making it much more powerful than the standard Lightning Release, i gotten this idea when i saw Dark Fire and Hellfire, which are basically a more powerful form of fire by pumping out more fire chakra causing it to turn black and increase it's heat intensely, Dark Lightning has surpassed the original Lightning in terms of heat, Dark Lightning releases extreme heat that can even turn Sand into Glass when hit by it.

    Usage Examples:

    (Kūraiton: Bakufū No Akuma) - Dark Lightning Release: Blast Of The Devil
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user pumps a large amount of Dark Lightning chakra into both of his hands as he closes in his hands together facing each other while leaving a distance between both of his palms, the user concentrates his Dark Lightning chakra into the shape of a Dark grey sphere in the user's palm that's more condensed than the Rasengan and but the same size of the Rasengan, afterwards the user brings his hands forward releasing the Dark Lightning out of the sphere resulting in the burst of a Dark Lightning blast out of the user's palms in the direction which his palms are pointed at, the beam covers a Large size expanding in size the more it travels towards the target.

    (Kūraiton: Yomi Higyou) - Dark Lightning Release: Underworld Judgment
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After forming a string of 2 handseals "Horse/Ram" causing 4 Pillars each 10 meters high to burst out of the ground in an "X" shape around the targets direction, the pillars transmit visible non focused currents of Dark Lightning on the outskirts of the Pillars and a Roof of Dark lightning from above the opponent connected to all the pillars, acting as a Prison that binds the opponent within it.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of the Lightning Release + Massive Chakra Reserves.

    Is weak to:

    Water Release: Large quantities of water is able to diffuse the Dark lightning the colder the Water is the more effective it is against the Dark Lightning, however the Lightning will still be channeled through the water as the water is a perfect lightning conductor.

    Fire Release: Strong fire techniques which are able to emit extreme heat are able to overpower the Dark Lightning, preferably tangible Fire techniques like the Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique

    Is strong against:

    Lightning Release: Since it's a more powerful form of Lightning Release it's stronger than standard Lightning Release Techniques.

    Wind Release: Being able to emit massive heat when hit with the Wind techniques the Dark Lightning would overcome the Wind Release Techniques.

    Cannon Earth Release and CEs: Due to Dark Lightning being able to emit extreme heat and is more powerful than the standard Lightning Release, it is much more powerful to Earth Release Techniques and Earth based CEs.

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A


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    ✗ Declined: 3rd raikage...Darui...Black Panther...Black lightning...yallow?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Quote Originally Posted by Drizzeh.. View Post



    Custom element Japanese name: Magunisuton|マグネシウム|
    Custom element English name: Magnesium Release
    The element is based on: Fire + Earth + Advanced Chakra Control


    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    In the manga it has been seen that there are metallic weapons such as kunai and shurikens that are used on a day to day basis which must mean that the ores and the makeup of the rocks present within the crust of the Narutoverse are similar to that of our planet Earth. Furthermore, it has been seen on a few occasions that certain people have a KG that allows them to produce steel from their body, and manipulate steel using their chakra, not only that, but explosions have been seen extremely often in the Narutoverse, from the humble explosive tags, to the elusive Explosion release shown in the most recent chapters. We have also seen highly combustive materials such as Oil which is often spewed by Myobakuzan toads and when set aflame would most likely react violently with water. All of these observations can back up the hypothesis of a metal which is fairly light yet strong and malleble and is also highly combustive and when alight and in contact with water can produce a violent explosion, Magnesium, possible. Also Magnesium is a extremely common element, being the Eighth most common in the Earths crust, Nineth most common in the universe as a whole, third most abundant in Sea water, and Fourth in the Earth as a whole, making up 13% of the earth, it is thought that the Planet on which Naruto is set, is extremely similar to that of ours.

    How it works:
    The user generates both their Fire and Earth chakra, using their chakra control to bond and mould the two elements together allowing their earth chakra to take slight dominance over their fire chakra forming solid Magnesium in a similar way to how steel release is formed. The user however can also do the process in a slightly different way, allowing their Fire chakra to take slight dominance over their Earth chakra, resulting in Molten Magnesium being directly formed in a similar way as lava.

    The user can however use their chakra to manipulate the Magnesium abundant in the earth or seawater, using their Fire and Earth chakra to gather the Magnesium particles present in the earth and forming Magnesium to erupt from the ground in whatever shape or form the user wishes.

    After creating solid magnesium, the user can manipulate their fire chakra within the magnesium, causing it to thourougly ignite, the Magnesium producing a bright white almost flare like sparks and flames when ignited, the ignition process furthers Magnesium's offensive capabilities and of course seperates it from most other metals, the temprature of the flame being able to reach up to 3100'c however staying relatively close to the metal itself (300mm). After being ignited for some time the Magnesium will eventually melt into molten magnesium, however if the ignited or molten magnesium comes into contact with water, it causes the water to reduce to Hydrogen which it then reacts with, intensifying the flames. If the user performs the tiger, snake then dog handseal at this time, the magnesium can absorb the hydrogen if the magnesium is heated, the result, an explosion.

    Usage Examples:

    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Chiri |Magnesium Release: Magnesium Dust ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels his/her earth and katon chakra to their mouth. With advanced chakra control and manipulation, they combine both chakra, with great concentration. He/she will then release a field of magnesium dust.
    This dust can then be further manipulated by the use of Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation ‡‡
    Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user creates large compressed objects of magnesium, that can be used for both offensive or defensive purposes. The user can Ignite the magnesium by clicking their teeth or snapping fingers. This is done by creating magnesium from the earth below, or releasing magnesium and forming it's shape from the user's palm. In some cases, if the user has released magnesium dust into the air, it can be shaped using this technique.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Rensei Magunesiumu Tama|Magnesium Release: Drilling Magnesium Bullet ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user spews large drilling rotating spheres of magnesium or molten magnesium from their mouth, coating their throat with chakra in the process to refrain from selfharm the spheres travelling at fair speeds


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Genwaku Tomoshibi|Magnesium Release: Blinding Light ‡‡
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user stomps the earth, releasing both his earth and katon chakra. Mid between the user and the opponent, three 10 meter long pillars, each of a 1 meter radius will quickly rise, each pillar 1 meter diagonally apart from each other. By heating the magnesium with katon chakra, the magnesium will give off an intense light. This light is seen as a white-blue glowing source, if the opponent looks directly at it, it may cause eye injury, resulting in temporarily sight loss of 2 turns.
    ‡‡ Usable only twice per battle


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    ‡‡ Must be Kage Rank or higher to have the chakra control required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Earth Required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Fire Required.

    Is weak to:


    Solid Form
    ‡‡ Wind: Sharp, high ranked wind techniques Pierce it, non-sharp techniques smash it.
    ‡‡ Water: Magnesium is highly soluble and will eventually disolve in water.
    ‡‡ Fire: High rank and extremely hot flames will melt and burn the Magnesium making it unable to be used.

    Ignited Form
    ‡‡ Fire: Hot enough fire will overpower Magnesium flames and will burn the magnesium solid core leaving it unsuitable for applicable use.
    ‡‡ Wind: Wind will be able to overpower it's flames.

    Molten Form
    ‡‡ Earth: Molten Magnesium doesn't have a piercing capability to tear through high rank dense earth, it also cant pass through it easily due to being fairly thick.
    ‡‡ Sand: The sand smotheres the Magnesium cutting off its supply of the gasses it needs to burn.



    Is strong against:


    Solid Form
    ‡‡ Lightning: Lightning is conducted into it, causing it to vibrate and become sharp and adding a shocking/stunning property to it.
    ‡‡ Earth: Magnesium being stronger than most forms of earth and of course being able to have a more precise edge can pierce through it.
    ‡‡ Fire: It will Ignite the magnesium if strong enough, effectively making the Magnesium more dangerous.

    Ignited Form
    ‡‡ Lightning: Lightning will conduct into its solid core empowering it and giving it a stun/shock capability.
    ‡‡ Water: The ignited Magnesium will react violently with the water resulting in the water explosion.
    ‡‡ Earth: It can tear through earth better since it will be both melting and slicing the earth at the same time.

    Molten Form
    ‡‡ Wind: Increasing the intensity of the heat of the Molten Magnesium the wind fueling it.
    ‡‡ Water: The magnesium reduces the water to hydrogen, the water empowering the Magnesium, or reacting violently with it producing a extreme explosion.


    Co-creator: -Scaze-
    Students I passed this custom element on to: Erzo [When I own a sensei status]

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    ✗ Declined: I'm not planning to ever approve another metal CE unless the metal truly would have a quality that makes it stand out from other metal elements. Magnesium could have that potential, however you will have to make a choice and my verdict will depend on that choice as I'm not going to allow a CE that can be used in three different forms that cover all the freaking elements as being strong against =/ Be real ~_~ Also the same comment as I gave on the Coal Release: magnesium has some combustible properties, however making it explode is not inherent to the element. For that an external source is needed and thus it is not included in a specific jutsu nor in the element itself.




    Custom element Japanese name: Magunisuton|マグネシウム|
    Custom element English name: Magnesium Release
    The element is based on: Fire + Earth + Advanced Chakra Control


    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    In the manga it has been seen that there are metallic weapons such as kunai and shurikens that are used on a day to day basis which must mean that the ores and the makeup of the rocks present within the crust of the Narutoverse are similar to that of our planet Earth. Furthermore, it has been seen on a few occasions that certain people have a KG that allows them to produce steel from their body, and manipulate steel using their chakra, not only that, but explosions have been seen extremely often in the Narutoverse, from the humble explosive tags, to the elusive Explosion release shown in the most recent chapters. We have also seen highly combustive materials such as Oil which is often spewed by Myobakuzan toads and when set aflame would most likely react violently with water. All of these observations can back up the hypothesis of a metal which is fairly light yet strong and malleble and is also highly combustive and when alight and in contact with water can produce a violent explosion, Magnesium, possible. Also Magnesium is a extremely common element, being the Eighth most common in the Earths crust, Nineth most common in the universe as a whole, third most abundant in Sea water, and Fourth in the Earth as a whole, making up 13% of the earth, it is thought that the Planet on which Naruto is set, is extremely similar to that of ours.

    How it works:
    The user generates both their Fire and Earth chakra, using their chakra control to bond and mould the two elements together allowing their earth chakra to take slight dominance over their fire chakra forming solid Magnesium in a similar way to how steel release is formed. The user however can also do the process in a slightly different way, allowing their Fire chakra to take slight dominance over their Earth chakra, resulting in Molten Magnesium being directly formed in a similar way as lava.

    The user can however use their chakra to manipulate the Magnesium abundant in the earth or seawater, using their Fire and Earth chakra to gather the Magnesium particles present in the earth and forming Magnesium to erupt from the ground in whatever shape or form the user wishes.

    After creating solid magnesium, the user can through the use of a fire or lightning technique ignite the magnesium, the magnesium is so highly combustible, that it can be ignited through the slightest spark or flame. The Magnesium producing a bright white almost flare like sparks and flames when ignited, the ignition process furthers Magnesium's offensive capabilities and of course seperates it from most other metals, the temprature of the flame being able to reach up to 3100'c however staying relatively close to the metal itself (300mm). After being ignited for some time the Magnesium will eventually melt into molten magnesium, however if the ignited or molten magnesium comes into contact with water, it causes the water to reduce to Hydrogen which it then reacts with. The result is an explosion. Magnesium is unique to other metals because it can be ignited, and it's flames are white.

    Usage Examples:

    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Chiri |Magnesium Release: Magnesium Dust ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels his/her earth and katon chakra to their mouth. With advanced chakra control and manipulation, they combine both chakra, with great concentration. He/she will then release a field of magnesium dust.
    This dust can then be further manipulated by the use of Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation ‡‡
    Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user creates large compressed objects of magnesium, that can be used for both offensive or defensive purposes. The user can Ignite the magnesium by clicking their teeth or snapping fingers. This is done by creating magnesium from the earth below, or releasing magnesium and forming it's shape from the user's palm. In some cases, if the user has released magnesium dust into the air, it can be shaped using this technique.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Rensei Magunesiumu Tama|Magnesium Release: Drilling Magnesium Bullet ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user spews large drilling rotating spheres of magnesium or molten magnesium from their mouth, coating their throat with chakra in the process to refrain from selfharm the spheres travelling at fair speeds


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Genwaku Tomoshibi|Magnesium Release: Blinding Light ‡‡
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user stomps the earth, releasing both his earth and katon chakra. Mid between the user and the opponent, three 10 meter long pillars, each of a 1 meter radius will quickly rise, each pillar 1 meter diagonally apart from each other. By heating the magnesium with katon chakra, the magnesium will give off an intense light. This light is seen as a white-blue glowing source, if the opponent looks directly at it, it may cause eye injury, resulting in temporarily sight loss of 2 turns.
    ‡‡ Usable only twice per battle


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    ‡‡ Must be Kage Rank or higher to have the chakra control required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Earth Required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Fire Required.

    Is weak to:

    Solid Form
    Wind: Sharp, high ranked wind techniques Pierce it, non-sharp techniques smash it.
    Water: Magnesium is highly soluble and will eventually disolve in water.
    Fire: Hot flames will melt and burn the Magnesium making it unable to be used.

    Molten Form
    Earth: Molten Magnesium doesn't have a piercing capability to tear through high rank dense earth, it also cant pass through it easily due to being fairly thick.
    ‡‡ Sand: The sand smotheres the Magnesium cutting off its supply of the gasses it needs to burn.
    Wind: The wind cools the magnesium, eliminating the heat. leaving the remains of dust.

    Ignited Form
    Fire: If the fire is hot enoug, it will overcome the Magnesium's flames and melt its core turning it to ash.
    Wind: The wind will disperse magnesiums small flames and wreck havoc on its mostly solid core.


    Is strong against:

    [border]Solid Form
    Lightning: Lightning is conducted into it, causing it to vibrate.
    Earth: Magnesium being stronger than most forms of earth and of course being able to have a more precise edge can pierce through it.
    Fire: It will Ignite/heat the magnesium if strong enough, effectively making the Magnesium more dangerous.

    Molten Form
    Water: The water is reduced to hydrogen when it makes contact, which then creates an explosion of the remaining magnesium.
    Earth:The heat of Molten Magnesium can succefully melt through most forms of earth, and earthen metals.

    Ignited Form
    Water: The water is reduced to hydrogen when it makes contact, which then creates an explosion of the remaining magnesium.
    Earth: Ignited Magnesium can succefully pierce through most forms of earth, the flames only heightening its cutting power in a similar way to a hot knife through butter.
    Lightning: The eletricity conducts into its molten core empowering it and giving its a stunning ability, heightened speed, and cutting ability due to it vibrating.



    Co-creator: Kirabi
    Students I passed this custom element on to:


    -----------------------------
    Added a few more weaknesses and some minor edits, The ignited form was removed.

    It is unique to other metal elements because:
    -Light waves from burning magnesium is capable of blinding
    -Once lit, it can only end by burning itself out
    -It explodes the easiest when contacts water


    ✗ Declined: You say removed the ignited form, but it's still there, on top of having both a solid and liquid form. I said make a choice. For instance the solid form of water is ice, a different element. When you make a CE, you combine chakra natures to make a new type of chakra, you're not going to start changing the earth/fire ratio when it suits you, then you're making a different element. The difference between a solid and liquid is very important.
    It's needed to explain the aspects of an element, however water for instance conducts electricity, however you are not going to start explaining the strengths and weaknesses of that. When magnesium is ignited, it becomes an elemental combo.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Hiuchiton (.__.)
    Custom element English name: Flint
    The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): We've already seen proof that Earth can be combined with Fire to make explosives in the form of Deidara's clay. We've also seen that Earth and Fire combined substances can be manipulated by chakra as seen with Deidara's several art forms.
    How it works:The user combines their Earth-ba
    sed chakra and Fire-based chakra. The Fire-based chakra thins out the Earth-based chakra, creating a frail, thin rock substance. The Fire-based chakra ignites the rock, creating an explosive. Using chakra control, the user gives the rocks support and keeps them from exploding or crumbling right away. The chakra control allows the user to manipulate the size and shape of the rocks, from walls to shuriken. The user can launch the rocks at the opponent and when it comes in contact with the opponent, can explode or release a blinding light.
    Usage Examples:
    • Create Explosions using the sparks created
    • Create Flames
    • Can create walls of earth, which then explode


    ( Hiuchiton: Hiuchi no Hiuchi)- Flint Release: Great Flint Gourd
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user places there hands on the ground and preforms the summoning technique to summon a large white gourd wrapped in black cloth. The gourd is made out of rubber, but is inside it is are a large quantity of flint rock. The rocks while inside the gourd have a protective layer of chakra around them, preventing them from exploding. The user can manipulate the flint inside the gourd and creates three dimensional shapes composed of flint that can be sent towards the opponent. The flint can explode on contact with something and engulf anything inside in flames. Creating a three dimensional shape composed of flint is an equivalent to a S-rank flint technqiue.
    Note: can only be summoned twice
    Note; last a maximum of four turns

    (Hiuchiton: Hiuchi bunshin)- Flint Release: Flint Clone
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers flint rock into one point and using shape manipulation to form the flint into a perfect replica of the user. The flint clone can use all flint techniques up to A-rank.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Must have started Earth and Fire
    Is weak to:
    • Lightning: Flint is still a rock and is therefore a conductor and lightning can pass through it easily
    • Water: water can stop explosions from happening and can break apart flint

    Is strong against:
    • Fire: fire would make the explosions bigger
    • Earth: the sparks could ignite the earth
    • Wind: wind would make the fire created bigger

    Co-creator: Gaara
    Students I passed this custom element on too: Nobody


    ✗ Declined: It has a certain potential, I like the idea however it's still needs quite a lot of work and you need to do more investigation after flint stones as that what it's mainly based upon. Especially because flint stones are not things that explode, they can easily cause sparks and as a result they were often used in conjunction with something explosive, however on itself it isn't something that's going to explode easily. The human race wouldn't have used it as a primary tool if it could blow up in their faces on any moment. You say it creates flames, but that's not really part of the element, it's not because something exploded it will cause flames (like the Landmine Punch jutsu), at most it would be a result of the element, but it's not the element itself. You need to be more clearer, especially because to get this approved you will need to convince me this is different from Blast Release and just chakra infused earth that explodes would fall under Blast. Also fire is not a weakness, the causality could easily be the exact opposite: your explosion could make the fire bigger, so fire would definitely be a neutral element to take the most logical assumption.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese Name: Sekieiton
    Custom element English name: Quartz Release
    The element is based on: [Earth + Wind + Lightning] + Chakra [+ Katon + Chakra]
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Crystal release in the anime creates quantities of an unknown material from scratch. Using the same principles and the right elements, quartz is a possible variant.
    How it works: The user will gather his Earth, wind and lightning chakra in order to obtain each of the components of silicon dioxide (i.e.: One atom of silicon and and two oxygens per molecule of quartz. You would be using lightning to upset and create the bonds needed). The user will gather it in it's purest form where it's number in the mohs scale is 7, below corundum and diamond, although the user may choose to create impure variants of quartz. Also within the quartz release one can discern the following releases:

    -Pure release: Highest in mohs scale, transparent and can refract light.

    -Impure release: With a more visual impact and also serving for sight-induced genjutsu. It is weaker than pure quartz.

    -Liquid release: Utilizing enormous amounts of fire chakra the user can heat up quartz to some whopping 1713 °C, the user is able to summon it the same way as normal quartz be it spitting it, around his body or even around the opponent. However, the chakra strain removes -5 health to the user.

    In all of these forms, the quartz used is piezoelectric. The is a capacity almost unique to quartz which allows it, when on pressured and on contact with a surface of any kind, release electricity. Via the use of chakra, this is exploited to the maximum making significant amounts (equivalent to a lightning jutsu of the rank of the quartz technique used) on contact. This is not a set volume of lightning, that quantity is released constantly from the contact point(s).

    In all of it's forms it is diamagnetic, generating a repulsion equivalent to the magentic field it is exposed to.

    Usage Examples:
    (Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Expansion
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After releasing a quartz jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the quartz jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the quartz jutsu boosting any fire jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the fire gains more power as it absorbs more earth increasing its power.
    Note:
    -Can be only used on quartz
    -Can be used 3x
    -Can be taught by Dr. House

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over earth, wind and lightning natures.

    Is weak to:
    -When Pure release: Lightning, Fire thus only jutsus with really high heat would crack it, meaning as fire which only explodes on impact would not work Sound, Higher Mohs scale elements
    -When Impure release: Lightning, Fire thus only jutsus with really high heat would crack it meaning as fire which only explodes on impact would not work, Sound, Higher Mohs scale elements
    -When Liquid release: Earth, Water because it would solidify it.

    Is strong against:
    -When Pure release: Wind, Water, Earth based elements, which are weak to lightning and with mohs scale lower than it, fire which doesn't have high heat capacity (which explodes on impact)
    When Impure release: Wind, Water, Earth based elements, which are weak to lightning and with mohs scale lower than it, fire which doesn't have high heat capacity (which explodes on impact)
    -When Liquid release: Wind, Fire, Lightning

    Co-creator: Gin-San
    Students I passed this custom element on too: None

    For the checker, I fixed the weakness as it was asked:
    Is weak to:
    -When Pure release: Lightning, Fire thus only jutsus with really high heat would crack it, meaning as fire which only explodes on impact would not work Sound, Higher Mohs scale elements
    -When Impure release: Lightning, Fire thus only jutsus with really high heat would crack it meaning as fire which only explodes on impact would not work, Sound, Higher Mohs scale elements
    -When Liquid release: Earth, Water because it would solidify it.

    Is strong against:
    -When Pure release: Wind, Water, Earth based elements, which are weak to lightning and with mohs scale lower than it, fire which doesn't have high heat capacity (which explodes on impact)
    When Impure release: Wind, Water, Earth based elements, which are weak to lightning and with mohs scale lower than it, fire which doesn't have high heat capacity (which explodes on impact)
    -When Liquid release: Wind, Fire, Lightning

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    ✗ Declined: You're already pushing it because this is again a crystal, so don't think even for a minute you're going to get away with 3 variations of it =/ Make a choice, this way it isn't even a CE anymore as you say when I mix that and that element together I can get that variation, but if I add that one I can get another type -_- choose one.
    Custom element Japanese Name: Sekieiton
    Custom element English name: Quartz Release
    The element is based on: [Earth + Wind + Lightning] + Chakra [+ Katon + Chakra]
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Crystal release in the anime creates quantities of an unknown material from scratch. Using the same principles and the right elements, quartz is a possible variant.
    How it works: The user will gather his Earth, wind and lightning chakra in order to obtain each of the components of silicon dioxide (i.e.: One atom of silicon and and two oxygens per molecule of quartz. You would be using lightning to upset and create the bonds needed). The user will gather it in it's purest form where it's number in the mohs scale is 7, below corundum and diamond, although the user may choose to create impure variant of quartz. Also within the quartz release one can discern the following release:

    -Pure release: Highest in mohs scale, transparent and can refract light.

    Usage Examples:
    (Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Expansion
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After releasing a quartz jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the quartz jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the quartz jutsu boosting any fire jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the fire gains more power as it absorbs more earth increasing its power.
    Note:
    -Can be only used on quartz
    -Can be used 3x
    -Can be taught by Dr. House

    (Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Handy Dandy
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will be able to create tools from quartz like small shields, tools to use.
    -Can be taught by Dr. House

    (Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Floor
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will create a floor made of quartz on the ground, having the field covered in quartz.
    Note:
    -Can be used 3x
    -Can be taught by Dr. House

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over earth, wind and lightning natures.

    Is weak to:
    Lightning, Fire thus only jutsus with really high heat would crack it, meaning as fire which only explodes on impact would not work Sound, Higher Mohs scale elements

    Is strong against:
    Wind, Water, Earth based elements, which are weak to lightning and with mohs scale lower than it, fire which doesn't have high heat capacity (which explodes on impact)
    Co-creator: The Seven-Scaled boy
    Students I passed this custom element on too: None

    For the checker:
    ~I choose the solid variant. I deleted the other 2 variant.
    ~I've added two more examples.


    ✗ Declined: At this point there isn't much difference between this and other crystal-based CE and thus I'm not going to approve it. The reason as why I still deemed it had some potential was due to that piezoelectric quality, but you removed that, in fact you pretty much didn't even list any qualities anymore, only one sentence and there you say it's the highest on the Mohs scale even though that's diamond and before that you said it was number 7?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Seiton
    Custom element English name: Rust Release
    The element is based on: Earth + Wind + Water
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga, the signature technique of the second and third Tsuchikage's is Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, which allows them to create a "casing" with an energy sphere in the middle, which then allows them to disintegrate anything within to dust with a massive explosion. Rust release works in a similar way, allowing the user to, instead of encasing an area and exploding it, flow their chakra like water throughout substances to slowly decay them.
    How it works: This nature wouldn't be solely based on rust itself, but rather on decay. Similar to Storm Release, which isn't really a storm, but an energy of sorts, Rust Release would be something akin to decay, decomposition, and rotting. By using their earth chakra, the user can create an "entry point" where they can then enfuse the errosive powers of wind and water directly into the object previous afflicted with earth chakra to decompose it from the inside out.
    Usage Examples:
    (Seiton: Gensui) Rust Release: Decay
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user's hand becomes coated in a brown material that causes all that it touches to decay into dust. The chakra flows from the users hand into an object, slowly destroying the object. Chakra based techniques are unaffected by Decay however.
    Note: ~The object will take one turn to decay
    ~Does not work on organic objects

    (Seiton: Otoshiana) Rust Release: Pitfall
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user releases their Seiton chakra into the ground around them in a 360 degree circle, with the exception of a small area around the user (a foot in diameter). The ground affected will slowly decay, turning to dust. However, the dust remains stacked on itself, appearing like normal earth until pressure it put onto any point, which causes the dust to fall away into a pit.
    Note: ~Dojutsu users and sensor's can see the chakra in the earth, though only Byakugan users can see that the earth has turned to Dust (thus knowing the purpose of the chakra)

    Conditions to be able to use it: Must have mastered earth, wind, and water
    Is weak to: Water, Lightning
    Is strong against: Earth, Earth-based/Solid CE's
    Co-creator: ~Onizuka~
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    ✗ Declined: Rust has once been submitted before and declined. That yours is slightly different doesn't matter much, especially because your proof is weak and the way how you explained it is just shallow.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Mueton

    Custom element English name: Anthracite Coal Release

    The element is based on: (Earth + Fire) + Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    The user is capable of either forming coal by pulling it out of the surrounding earth or from their body. Earth, already a significant element in the Narutoverse, Anthracite coal is simply a harder version of earth that is combustible. On missions, if there were no Fire element user, the usage of small lumps of coal as long as you have at least a pair, would enable the personnel to create a source of fire. A downfall to the usage of coal itself is that if another person were to get ahold of it before it was ignited, they could use it just as effectively as the user. Not able to manipulate/create it the way the original user could, but if they are able to successfully block the technique before it is ignited, pick it up as it were but a rock. Anthracite Coal differs from regular coal as it is harder and less fragile.

    How it works:
    Anthracite Coal is an easily ignitable/combustible (by fire, lightning, and even friction with non metallic dust, earth or another piece of coal) substance formed from metamorphic rock (rock subjected to extreme pressure and heat that changes its form and properties) of the earth and dead plant matter inside of it. Being formed by erosion of Wind, Water, and Ice (Glaciers) make it its natural weakness. Coal when struck together with another piece of coal or earth such that it causes friction will ignite the coal. After ignited, coal will turn into a gray dust-like rock that is incapable of being reignited.

    Usage Examples:

    Just Pointing out that in these jutsus, i didnt put the "Anthracite Coal Release" i just put Coal Release, to save myself some time. if its a problem i will fix it.

    Mueton: Rōringu Gyokuseki (Coal Release: Rolling Boulder)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User will create a small lump of coal in their hands and charge it with a lot of chakra before throwing it like a bowling ball along the ground where it will pick up speed and grow larger as it travels towards an enemy. As it travels across the ground, the friction caused from rolling on the ground ignites the bowling ball as it grows into a boulder.

    (Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Spike Explosion
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40 (+5 if caught in the explosion)
    Description: The user will pull coal from the ground, creating two spikes of coal which then cross and then connect and cause a spark between them, which then ignites the two coal spikes and destroys the spikes which cause more damage if the opponent is caught in the blast.

    (Mueton: Atemiwa)- Coal Release: Blowing Rock
    Type: Supp/Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will create a small chunk of coal in their hand, then release fire chakra into the coal, the user will then throw the rock at the opponent, and make a single handseal which cuases the coal chunk to explode.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth. Mastery of Fire.

    Is weak to:

    Before Ignited by Fire, Lightning or Friction. –Wind (Cutting only), Water [Rain & Ice] (dilutes the capability of being caught on fire and causes erosion to coal itself).

    After ignited by Fire, Lightning, or Friction – Wind and Water Combination

    Is strong against:

    Before Ignited by Fire, Lightning, or Friction – Earth, Fire, Lightning, Dust

    After ignited by Fire, Lightning, or Friction – Wind/Fire Combinations, Lava, Fire and Lightning combinations.

    Co-creator: Oraan Nguyen (Loki)
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    ✗ Declined: Anthracite Coal isn't that easy to light on fire as you claim it to be. Just making two pieces of it rub each other isn't going to make it burn. So causing simple friction is not going to do the trick, not even close, so in the end you just have a form of earth a bit harder than normal. Yes using a fire jutsu should be enough, however that has nothing to do with the CE on its own, that's something additional, so making Coal jutsu's where you then say you use fire chaka to make it burn would be combo elemental jutsu's similar like you would use a fire/wind jutsu and I'm not going to allow those with CE (you are however free to use a fire jutsu independently to set it on fire). This also means that all you strengths/weaknesses are completely messed up as you talk about before and after being ignited, but that has no relevance here as you are not going to say either with the fire element before/after being used with a wind jutsu.
    This has been changed from Anthracite Coal Release to Coal Release, taking in the fact that this coal is not as hard as Anthracite coal, hence the reason why Wind(Cutting) and Lightning are its weaknesses now. I know that below I state that Static discharge is a way to ignite coal, however lightning is so powerful that it would actually cut through the piece of coal more than igniting it, unless it 2 ranks or lower than the coal it is trying to cut, as stated below in the Dust Explosions Section, which is a link to the explanation. Both Dust Explosions are different links.

    Custom element Japanese name: Mueton

    Custom element English name: Coal Release

    The element is based on: (Earth + Fire) + Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    The user is capable of either forming coal by pulling it out of the surrounding earth or from their body. Earth, already a significant element in the Narutoverse, coal is simply a highly combustible piece of earth. On missions, if there were no Fire element user, the usage of small lumps of coal as long as you have at least a pair, would enable the personnel to create a source of fire. A downfall to the usage of coal itself is that if another person were to get ahold of it before it was ignited, they could use it just as effectively as the user. Not able to manipulate/create it the way the original user could, but if they are able to successfully block the technique before it is ignited, pick it up as it were but a rock.

    How it works:
    Coal is an easily ignitable/combustible (by fire) substance formed from metamorphic rock (rock subjected to extreme pressure and heat that changes its form and properties) of the earth and dead plant matter inside of it. Being formed by erosion of Wind make it its natural weakness. Strong Lightning cuts and travels too fast through the coal to ignite it as fire would, and cuts cleanly through it; however much weaker lightning is capable of igniting the Coal. After ignited, coal will turn into a gray dust-like rock that is incapable of being reignited. (Turns gray in 1 turn)

    Dust Explosion - (Please see Source of Ignition) Dust Explosion
    Is what is noted as the result of when Coal is ignited via friction with
    *Another piece of Coal
    *Static Discharge/Lightning - Though Lightning is a weakness, Lightning of 2 or more Ranks Lower than the Coal jutsu used is capable of igniting the coal.
    *Hot Surfaces
    *Fire.

    Usage Examples:


    Mueton: Rōringu Gyokuseki (Coal Release: Rolling Boulder)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User will create a small lump of coal in their hands and charge it with a lot of chakra before throwing it like a bowling ball along the ground where it will pick up speed and grow larger as it travels towards an enemy. As it travels across the ground, the friction caused from rolling on the ground ignites the bowling ball as it grows into a boulder.

    (Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Spike Explosion
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40 (+5 if caught in the explosion)
    Description: The user will pull coal from the ground, creating two spikes of coal which then cross and then connect and cause a spark between them, which then ignites the two coal spikes and destroys the spikes which cause more damage if the opponent is caught in the blast.

    (Mueton: Atemiwa)- Coal Release: Blowing Rock
    Type: Supp/Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will create a small chunk of coal in their hand, then release fire chakra into the coal, the user will then throw the rock at the opponent, and make a single handseal which causes the coal chunk to explode.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth. Mastery of Fire.

    Is weak to:

    Before Ignited by Fire – Wind (Cutting only), Lightning (Cuts through it) [And any CE or variant of the two], Metals

    Ignited by Fire/Friction/Static Lightning/Hot Surfaces– Water & Lightning Combinations (Causes disintegration while taking out the fire)

    Is strong against:

    Before Ignited by Fire - Earth, Water, Fire (And all CE or Variants of the three)

    After ignited by Fire/Friction/Static Lightning/Hot Surfaces – Lava (Earth/Fire Combinations), Water/Wind Combinations, Wind/Fire Combinations, Fire/Lightning Combinations.

    Co-creator: Oraan Nguyen
    Students I passed this custom element on too:


    ✗ Declined: I told you before I do not want things as "before and after ignition" listed there. Stating elemental combo's as strengths/weaknesses is not something you do. When you combine water/lightning with each other logically it's going to be way stronger, but that's something else then listing water/lightning separately. Also you're making a mistake with your dust explosion. If you read the link you yourself posted, you see that it's not the coal itself that explodes, but the combination of very small pieces of coal dust, enough oxygen in a confined space where both components are dispersed evenly. It's not something you can't do in your average situation and it's not your coal that's exploding, but small particles of it that are in the air.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Non-Newtonian Ryuutai
    Custom element English name: Non-Newtonian Fluid

    The element is based on: A non-Newtonian fluid is a fluid whose flow properties differ in any way from those of Newtonian fluids. Most commonly the viscosity of non-Newtonian fluids is not independent of shear rate or shear rate history. However, there are some non-Newtonian fluids with shear-independent viscosity, that nonetheless exhibit normal stress-differences or other non-Newtonian behaviour. Many salt solutions and molten polymers are non-Newtonian fluids, as are many commonly found substances such as ketchup, custard, toothpaste, starch suspensions, paint, blood, and shampoo. In a Newtonian fluid, the relation between the shear stress and the shear rate is linear, passing through the origin, the constant of proportionality being the coefficient of viscosity. In a non-Newtonian fluid, the relation between the shear stress and the shear rate is different, and can even be time-dependent. Therefore a constant coefficient of viscosity cannot be defined.

    Therefore, although the concept of viscosity is commonly used in fluid mechanics to characterize the shear properties of a fluid, it can be inadequate to describe non-Newtonian fluids. They are best studied through several other rheological properties which relate stress and strain rate tensors under many different flow conditions, such as oscillatory shear, or extensional flow which are measured using different devices or rheometers. The properties are better studied using tensor-valued constitutive equations, which are common in the field of continuum mechanics. A Newtonian Fluid would easily sink a person while a Non-Newtonian Fluid as long as the person keeps ample stress on the fluid it acts as a solid.

    Where I got the Idea honestly




    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    Manga/Anime: This element is based on the mixture of Water and Earth, this combination has been shown to create wood in the Manga/Anime but in a different proportion it could easily create a Mud-Like mixture that would react differently to stress depending on the amount of force and stress placed on it. Instead of being fluid like water while under stress it would be hard like Earth due to the force this can be accomplished by coating the fluid in chakra or an outside force such as Wind or Water. While there is no stress on the substance it would fluid like water and have no hard properties to it easily flowing across the battlefield. The Swamp of the Underworld has a similar Mud-Like material.

    Dilatant: A shear thickening fluid, also called a dilatant, is a Non-Newtonian fluid where the shear viscosity increases with applied shear stress. This behavior is only one type of deviation from Newton’s Law, and it is controlled by such factors as particle size, shape, and distribution. The properties of these suspensions depend on Hamaker theory and Van der Waals forces and can be stabilized electrostatically or sterically. Shear thickening behavior occurs when a colloidal suspension transitions from a stable state to a state of flocculation. Such behavior is currently being researched for use in body armor applications by companies like Dow Corning with their Active Protection System. A large portion of the properties of these systems are due to the surface chemistry of particles in dispersion, known as colloids.

    This can readily be seen with a mixture of cornstarch and water (sometimes called oobleck), which acts in counterintuitive ways when struck or thrown against a surface. Sand that is completely soaked with water also behaves as a dilatant material. This is the reason why when walking on wet sand, a dry area appears underneath your foot.

    Shear Thinning Fluid: Shear thinning is an effect where a fluid's viscosity—the measure of a fluid's resistance to flow—decreases with an increasing rate of shear stress. Materials that exhibit shear-thinning can be classified as either Pseudoplastic or thixotropic. This property is found in certain complex solutions, such as lava, ketchup, whipped cream, blood, paint, and nail polish. It is also a common property of polymer solutions and molten polymers. Pseudoplasticity can be demonstrated by the manner in which squeezing a bottle of ketchup, a Bingham plastic, causes the contents to undergo a change in viscosity. The force causes it to go from being thick like honey to flowing like water.

    Bingham plastic: A Bingham plastic is a viscoplastic material that behaves as a rigid body at low stresses but flows as a viscous fluid at high stress. It is named after Eugene C. Bingham who proposed its mathematical form. It is used as a common mathematical model of mud flow in offshore engineering, and in the handling of slurries. A common example is toothpaste, which will not be extruded until a certain pressure is applied to the tube. It then is pushed out as a solid plug.

    Thixotropy: Thixotropy is the property of certain gels or fluids that are thick (viscous) under normal conditions, but flow (become thin, less viscous) over time when shaken, agitated, or otherwise stressed. In more technical language: some non-Newtonian pseudoplastic fluids show a time-dependent change in viscosity; the longer the fluid undergoes shear stress, the lower its viscosity. A thixotropic fluid is a fluid which takes a finite time to attain equilibrium viscosity when introduced to a step change in shear rate. However, this is not a universal definition; the term is sometimes applied to pseudoplastic fluids without a viscosity/time component. Many gels and colloids are thixotropic materials, exhibiting a stable form at rest but becoming fluid when agitated.
    The distinction between a thixotropic fluid and a shear thinning fluid:
    • A thixotropic fluid displays a decrease in viscosity over time at a constant shear rate.
    • A shear thinning fluid displays decreasing viscosity with increasing shear rate.


    Some fluids are anti-thixotropic: constant shear stress for a time causes an increase in viscosity or even solidification. Constant shear stress can be applied by shaking or mixing. Fluids which exhibit this property are usually called rheopectic. They are much less common.


    How it works:

    Non-Newtonian Fluids come in a few forms and are as follows;

    Oobleck: Oobleck on a subwoofer. Applying force to oobleck, by sound waves in this case, makes the non-Newtonian fluid thicken.
    An inexpensive, non-toxic example of a non-Newtonian fluid is a suspension of starch (e.g. cornstarch) in water, sometimes called "oobleck" or "ooze" (1 part of water to 1.5–2 parts of corn starch). Uncooked imitation custard, being a suspension of primarily cornflour, has the same properties. The name "oobleck" is derived from the children's book Bartholomew and the Oobleck

    Flubber: Flubber is a non-Newtonian fluid, easily made from polyvinyl alcohol based glues and borax, that flows under low stresses, but breaks under higher stresses and pressures. This combination of fluid-like and solid-like properties makes it a Maxwell solid. Its behaviour can also be described as being viscoplastic or gelatinous.

    Silly Putty: Silly Putty is a silicone polymer based suspension which will flow, bounce, or break depending on strain rate.


    Usage Examples:

    (Non-Newtonian Ryuutai: Baindo) Non-Newtonian Fluid Release: Bind
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user mixes a decent amount of Water Chakra with a ratio of more Earth chakra he than release it out of his mouth while performing the Tiger Hand seal. A decent amont of Non-Newtonian fluid will erupt from the user's mouth and make it's way to the opponent once covered the opponent will feel heavy and as he tries to make fast moves ments the Non-Newtoian fluid will become hard and restrict movement. The opponent would have to stay completely still for the goop to simply run off of their body this would take at least 30 seconds.
    (Non-Newtonian Ryuutai: Oobleck kabe ) Non-Newtonian Fluid Release: Oobleck Wall
    Type: Defend
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user mixes Earth and Water chakra inside of their gut and performs three hand seal (Hare-Ram-Snake) than expels a gooey wall much like Water Encampment Wall it forms in front of the user. It will block most projectile like jutsu as well as absorb the impact. The Wall can then be released and used as a source for other jutsu.
    (Non-Newtonian Ryuutai: Sumakku atakku) Non-Newtonian Fluid Release: Smack Attack
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user pulls on a source of Non-Newtonian Fluid and forms 5 masses that resemble hands. He then sends them flying toward the opponent. When they make contact they will hit much like Earth but once stress is released they turn to liquid and cover the opponent in a goo that makes it hard to move. This opens him up for further attacks as he must get the Non-Newtonain fluid off of his body or it will restrict movement.
    *No Non-Newtonian Fluid Release Jutsu can be used the Following turn*


    Conditions to be able to use it: Earth, Water and Chakra Manipulation mostly Earth but a high Volume of Water as well

    Is weak to: Fire, Lightning, Heating Elements as they would boil off the water and leave just a mixture of earth

    Is strong against: Earth, Water, Wind, Sound Release any element that forces pressure onto the substance.

    Co-creator:

    Students I passed this custom element on too:


    Further Evidence:


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    ✗ Declined: For the simple fact that there does not exist something like a non-newtonian fluid. Yes there are a lot of fluids that are n-n fluids, however an n-n fluid on itself does simply not exist. What you're making here would be the same as saying you would make a metal CE. There is no such thing as a metal, metal is a term which refers to a group of substances which have similar characteristics, but are still different from each other like steel, iron, titanium etc. and it's the same for these fluids. You give me here an entire scientifical explanation about different kind of fluids and then with your jutsu's you talk about an n-n fluid...which one? You pretty much voided everything you said yourself. Choose a specific fluid as what I see here is that flubber, caramel ice cream topping, silly putty, ketchup...are all n-n fluids. Pick one, but not all. You keep dancing around the bloody bush. You give me a lengthy explanation, most of which is not even needed as I don't need to know which person's theory it is or in how many forms it exists, and then in the end you finish with something you in fact haven't discussed at all. Which fluid do you use to make that wall? You never stated that. What you need to do is cut down on all the scientifical stuff severely and focus more on its application on the Narutoverse, something nexus also said last time.

    ...and get another name for crying out loud, try to say Non-Newtonian Fluid Release in quick succession ._.


    Custom element Japanese name: Ekitai
    Custom element English name: Oobleck

    The element is based on: Water + Earth + Chakra manipulation/chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): This element is based on the mixture of Water and Earth, this combination has been shown to create wood in the Manga/Anime but in a different proportion (1 part water to 1.5 to 2 parts Earth based chakra) it could easily create a Mud-Like mixture that would react differently to stress depending on the amount of force and stress placed on it. Instead of being fluid like water while under stress it would be hard like Earth due to the change in viscosity. This can be accomplished by coating the fluid in chakra or an outside force such as Wind or Water from an opponent's jutsu which would place the liquid under enough stress to maintain a solid. While there is no stress on the substance it would act as a fluid like water and have no hard properties to it easily flowing across the battlefield. This can be used to do many things such as create projectiles, as well as large scale jutsu that can leave the opponent coated in a fluid that would highly restrict movement. This would be dependent on how and if the opponent struggles. Oobleck is a lot like quicksand in that when you fight it or you struggle it simply works against you making movement even harder.

    How it works: Oobleck is a non-newtonian fluid. It acts like a fluid when poured or when flowing but when an outside stress or excess force is applied it acts as a solid. Oobleck is created when 1 part water is added to 1.5-2 parts Starch of some sort. The more starch added the more solid the Oobleck will be if more water is added it will be more like a liquid when stress is applied. Oobleck is a Dialant which basically acts like a solid under stress and a liquid when no stress or outside force is added.

    Dilatant: A shear thickening fluid, also called a dilatant, is a Non-Newtonian fluid where the shear viscosity increases with applied shear stress. This behavior is only one type of deviation from Newton’s Law, and it is controlled by such factors as particle size, shape, and distribution. Shear thickening behavior occurs when a colloidal suspension transitions from a stable state to a state of flocculation. Oobleck is an example of a dilatant it acts differently under stress than that of a normal Newtonian fluid.



    Usage Examples:

    (Ekitai: Baindo) Oobleck Release: Bind
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user molds a mixture of 1 part Water Chakra to a 1.5-2 part ratio of Earth Chakra inside of his gut. This forms a mass of Oobleck in the persons gut. He then performs 1 hand seal (Boar) and moves the mixture from his gut to his mouth. He can then expel the Oobleck from his mouth forming it into projectiles, nets, or small tools/weapons. As he expels the mixture he coats it in chakra giving it shape and making it retain a form until impact with a target where the Oobleck loses it's solid properties covering the opponent in a thick gooey liquid that can impede movement making the opponent slowed due to the excess weight of the Oobleck as well as it's sticky properties.
    (Ekitai: Kabe) Oobleck Release: Wall
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user mixes Earth and Water chakra inside of their gut (A 1 part Water chakra 1.5 part Earth chakra mixture) and performs three hand seals (Hare-Ram-Snake). The user than expels a gooey wall much like Water Encampment Wall it forms in front of the user he maintains the Snake hand seal using a coating of chakra which holds the wall up. It will block most projectile type jutsu as well as Ninja tools. The Oobleck can then be released and used as a source for other jutsu that require a small-medium source.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle


    Conditions to be able to use it: Master both Doton and Suiton.
    Is weak to: Lightning, Fire, Heating elements such as Temperature release that will boil off the water
    Is strong against: Wind, water, Earth, Sound, any element that forces an outside pressure/stress/force onto the substance.
    Co-creator: -Yard-
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    ✗ Declined: You're almost there, it only needs a few small edits before I will approve it. For starters replace the starch with just earth based chakra like you explained at the start, be consequent. Secondly do not start switching with the ratio of your chakras as you say the more starch you add, the more solid and the more water you add the more liquid. No, this is a liquid, you're not going to start switching the ratio whenever it suits you. Thirdly your weaknesses are fine, though I would say temperature overall, not just heating as if it starts to cool down the water would freeze I would say. But in your strengths earth has to go as you're assuming just because it's not a weakness, it instantly becomes a strength. No there is still a level between. It's true that if someone would use an earth jutsu, your Oobleck would absorb the impact, however the opposite is true to as how is your Oobleck going to beat an earth jutsu? With other words this is a neutral element. Work on those points and it should be ready next time.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Kokketsu

    Custom element English name: Black Blood

    The element is based on: Blood + Water + Weapon (Ragnarok) [+ Experiments]

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Black blood is variation of normal blood, but completey different from it. The black blood was discovered in a laboratory after performing a few experiments. Like we've seen orochimaru doing dozens of experiments resulting in different discoveries each time, for eg: Living Corpse Reincarnation, Casualty Puppet, etc. After the research the black blood was implanted within Ragnarok making him the original user of black blood. Although Ragnarok is a living sword but we've also seen other living swords, eg: like samehada, which is obviously powerful than Ragnarok. Like samehada used to merge with kisame and helped him with his water affinity/techniques, similarly Ragnarok can help the user by manipulating Black blood mainly.
    We have also seen many liquid elements in narutoverse which have their own properties, like lava, oil (based on senjustu chakra), water etc. Black blood is also a liquid which has a unique property to solidify itself on user's or ragnarok's will. Solidifying property is similar to changing of state of few elements, like earth changing into mud, earth becoming equivalent strong to diamond (Earth Spear[also known as "Iron skin"]), solidifying of water into ice, and many more.

    How it works: User using Ragnarok makes his normal blood black in color and then it can be used in many ways. The Black Blood is a type of artificially made black blood cell. The Black Blood, as its name suggests, takes on the shape of normal blood cells of user only, and only pitch black in colour. The Black Blood, when infecting a person, fills the infected person with madness and imbues him with great power. The main purpose of the madness is to erase all fear in the users, which prevents hesitation or weakness of will during battle.The person controlling the Black Blood has full control of the abilities the unique substance offers. One of the Black Blood's properties is that it can hyper-densify to the user's will. When the user is cut and the Black Blood bleeds out of the wound, the user can use the Black Blood to harden and take on the shape of sharp objects, such as blades or needles. This is used as a counter-attack. It can also take on the form of a protective armour for the body. However, without the user's will, the Black Blood does not harden, meaning that this property is not an automatic function of the Black Blood, and thus the ability to spike out, and pierce objects is controlled completely by Ragnarok or user.
    Under Ragnarok's control, the Black Blood itself both protects user from physical harm and provides a degree of healing, and it can be hardened to provide massive reductions in damage when hit or by clotting an open wound or simply increasing his stamina. This is due to Ragnarok and the Black Blood being statically linked. The Black Blood can harden the entire body, making it impervious to slashing or crushing attacks. If the user is wounded, the Black Blood can harden and staunch the wound, preventing it from bleeding and healing the wound incredibly quickly. A great amount of strength is needed to break through the user's Black Blood, but it is possible to do so. The user's speed and strength is also enhanced by a great deal when using the Black Blood. This makes the user a formidable opponent in battle.
    Like water, Black Blood also requires a source most of the time. So most of the time user uses his own blood for attacking or defending. But a few times he can use black blood by shooting from mouth or by other means just like water techniques.

    Usage Examples:
    (Kokketsu: Aka Hari) - Black Blood: Bloody Needle
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The move takes any of user's black blood which has been previously spilled and hardens the droplets, turning them into needles which extend towards the enemy intending to pierce them. Due to how quickly and easily user's black blood can be spread during an intense battle, this technique is adept at surrounding an opponent, exploiting any available opening.


    (Kokketsu: Aka Mori) - Black Blood: Bloody Lance
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: By creating a considerable quantity of the black blood, user fabricates a substantial and hollow cone that tapers into a single sharpened point, which is subsequently launched towards an adversary with tremendous velocity. Despite its center being entirely devoid of a single drop of blood, due to the hardening capabilities of the dark substance that it is constructed from, this "lance" still poses a significant threat to its intended target.


    (Kokketsu: Aka Uwabari) - Black Blood: Bloody Coat
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Utilizing a considerable quantity of the black blood, user uses black blood to form a rather thin physical barrier between him and an adversary's attack. Despite the relative fragility displayed by the appearance of this barricade, due to the hardening capabilities of the dark material that it is constructed from, it is in fact able to block even powerful blows that connect with it.
    Note: Requires source.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    -Mastery over Basic Ninjutsu and Water.
    -Must possess Ragnarok as Custom Weapon.

    Is weak to:
    • Strong Fire
    • Lightning

    Is strong against:
    • Earth and all Solid Elements (Double Weakness)
    • Water
    • Wind

    Co-creator: N/A

    Students I passed this custom element on too: Will never be one (2 people can't possess Ragnarok)

    Note: -I know blood already exists, but black blood is completely different from it. Also if many same type of elements can exist then why can't it. Like Shining fire, Sun fire, White fire, Hell fire, Greek Fire, Dark Fire etc. Same no of elements goes for water. But my element is completely different from Blood.
    -Ragnarok is a weapon, which I will be making in future if this CE gets approved. Also I already have a living sword (as my CW), so I'll just be updating it a bit.
    -If you think this element is somewhat unbeleivable then plz refer to this
    SITE for info, coz I just copy/pasted from it and edited a bit acc to narutoverse.

    ✗ Declined: Be freaking real -.- are you doing this on purpose or what? You provided squad evidence that this would be possible and I mean nothing, absolutely nothing. Do you think that linking to Soul Eater wikia or talking about Oro's experiments is even going to have any value at all? You just made up a CE without any proof nor basis and then just loaded it with self-made abilities. The difference between this and all the elements you listed is that most of those actually had a basis to fall back to, while yours is build upon backed air. But above all you are just making a mockery out of it by linking this with a freaking sword which does not exist but which you are going to make when it gets approved =/ This is your last chance, if you next time come with such crap, I'm going to ban you from submitting CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Kūton

    Custom element English name: Sky Release

    The element is based on: Wind + Lightning + Water + Fire

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): The sky is the upper part of the atmosphere, where meteorological events take place, such as storms, winds and lightning.This element however doesn't necessarily control the sky, but create weather conditions in the sky, such as hurricanes and tornadoes and thunder storms. The fact that it rain's and storms have token place in the manga proves that this element can be possible. This is not storm release as storm release revolves around combining Lightning Release and Water Release to create energy beams that can be guided towards the enemy (According to this -->Storm Release). This revolves around using lightning wind and water in the sky to create moisture in the air and cause it to rain, create massive typhoons or for lightning to rain down from above every few few turns.

    How it works: The user sends lightning, wind and water chakra into the air to create and control the weather, as well as fire release to increase the temperature. Common weather phenomena include wind, cloud, rain, snow, fog and dust storms. Less common events include natural disasters such as tornadoes, hurricanes, typhoons and ice storms. Almost all familiar weather phenomena occur in the troposphere (the lower part of the atmosphere). The user can create something as low as rain...to something as big as hurricane.Though...lightning and typhoons can not always be controlled Here are some examples of weather conditions
    • Rain: regular rain (not chakra enhanced like rain release)
    • Thunderstorm
    • WaterSpout
    • Hurricane
    • Extratropical cyclone
    • Snow
    • Hail


    Weather occurs primarily due to density (temperature and moisture) differences between one place to another. These differences can occur due to the sun angle at any particular spot, which varies by latitude from the tropics. Weather occurs primarily due to density (temperature and moisture) differences between one place to another. These differences can occur due to the sun angle at any particular spot, which varies by latitude from the tropics. In other words, the farther from the tropics you lie, the lower the sun angle is, which causes those locations to be cooler due to the indirect sunlight.

    Usage Examples:

    (kuton: Ame no kyuuten)- Sky release: Rain of the heavens
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user sends his sky chakra into the sky and causes it to rain down very small hail stones. They rain down at the rate of thrown projectiles. The rain lasts for a maximum of one turn and the hailstones are the size of a golf ball.


    (kuton: Koishii Dorogon)- Sky release: beloved dragon
    Rank: S-rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After doing the proper hand signs the user will create a powerful twister made of clouds and rush it towards the enemy. The tornado is huge and can be controlled by the user, the tornado travels at 10mph and can leave an are devastated
    Note: can only be used once
    Note: only last 2 turns
    Note: can only be taught by piccolosan




    Conditions to be able to use it: mastery over lightning + water + wind
    Is weak to:
    • Wind: wind can blow away clouds and pass through lightning easily
    • Earth: Because of the wind in this element...lightning is weakened and cannot pass though earth as easily
    • Fire: fire is fueled by air and strong winds will make the fire bigger


    Is strong against:
    • Water: the water would be overcome by the powerful winds and would be pushed back
    • Lightning: powerful winds would pass though this technqiue easily
    • Fire: depending on how much rain, the rain can put out the fire


    Co-creator: Gaara
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    ✗ Declined: You don't really expected this to ever be approved? This isn't an element, but a term that contains countless of different phenomenons and all of them are already canon or custom elements.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 06-15-2012 at 08:32 PM.

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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Mēpurushiropputon
    Custom element English name: Maple Syrup Release
    The element is based on: Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Maple Syrup Release is an advanced element nature that allows someone to make their chakra into an extremely viscous fluid. During the kakuzu and Hidan arc a technique was used that was very similar to syrup release Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field which created an extremely sticky liquid. Syrup is nothing more than a sticky liquid that has taste and color
    How it works: The user makes their chakra as thick and vicious as possible, while at the same time making their chakra fluid(but not by alot), creating the sticky substance known as syrup. The user uses their chakra to give out a sent, taste and color to it as well. Because of the high viscosity, it is harder to get off once on the target.
    Usage Examples:

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Shiroppuburasuto) Maple Syrup Release: Syrup Blast
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will gather their Maple Syrup chakra in their mouth and exhale to blobs of maple syrup at their opponent that knock them back. The syrup will be sticky enough to restrain an opponent's movements.

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Nabara Nami) Maple Syrup: Syrup Wave
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long Range
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers a large amount of their maple syrup chakra towards their mouth and then spits out a great volume of syrup from their mouth, swallowing up and drowning the enemy with the advancing surge. This technique can cover the whole battlefield. This technique can be used as a syrup source for syrup techniques that require a syrup source

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Shiroppu ni mizu) Maple Syrup Release: Water to Syrup
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will send their Syrup chakra through out a water source nearby turning the water into syrup. The syrup will allow the user to do syrup jutsus that do not exhale out of their mouth. The syrup source can also slow down an enemy if they are standing on it but the user can move easily on it.
    Conditions to be able to use it: Master of Water and Good Chakra Control




    Conditions to be able to use it: Good Chakra control and Water Mastered
    Is weak to:
    • Earth: Earth structures can dissipate the force of syrup rendering the technique less effective.
    • Lightning: Lighting can conduct to syrup and shock the user.

    Is strong against:
    • Fire: Syrup has water properties so it can put out fires.
    • Water: Water can help spread and expand the syrup

    Co-creator: Gaara
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?
    Note: Im actually serious about this CE


    ✗ Declined: I simply do not find your reasoning sufficient. You just said that you changed your chakra into a sticky liquid. How? It's the point that you explain that in a CE. Also you need to make it so that it's actually different from already existing syrop-like things. I mean what's the difference between your syrup and that water syrup jutsu?
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 06-27-2012 at 02:43 PM.

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