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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name:Naiyachiri
    Custom element English name:Diamond Dust
    The element is based on:Diamond Dust
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Well as we all know Ice release already exists in the manga in the KG and hiden form, So does hidden mist and fog techniques, This CE is quite heavily based on them.
    How it works:Diamond dust is similar to fog in that it is a cloud based at the surface; however, it differs from fog in two main ways. Generally fog refers to a cloud composed of liquid water (the term ice fog usually refers to a fog that formed as liquid water and then froze, and frequently seems to occur in valleys with airborne pollution such as Fairbanks, Alaska, while diamond dust forms directly as ice). Also, fog is a dense enough cloud to significantly reduce visibility, while diamond dust is usually very thin and may not have any effect on visibility (there are far fewer crystals in a volume of air than there are droplets in the same volume with fog). However, diamond dust can often reduce the visibility, in some cases to under 600 m (2,000 ft).

    The depth of the diamond dust layer can vary substantially from as little as 20 to 30 m (66 to 98 ft) to 300 metres (980 ft). Because diamond dust does not always reduce visibility it is often first noticed by the brief flashes caused when the tiny crystals, tumbling through the air, reflect sunlight to your eye. This glittering effect gives the phenomenon its name since it looks like many tiny diamonds are flashing in the air.
    Diamond dust is a ground-level cloud composed of tiny ice crystals. This meteorological phenomenon is also referred to simply as ice crystals and is reported in the METAR code as IC. Diamond dust generally forms under otherwise clear or nearly clear skies, so it is sometimes referred to as clear-sky precipitation. It is most commonly observed in Antarctica and the Arctic, but it can occur anywhere with a temperature well below freezing. In Polar regions diamond dust may continue for several days without interruption.
    Usage Examples:
    (Naiyachiri no jutsu)-Diamond Dust Technique
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:D-A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user releases large quantitys of wind and water chakra in to the enviroment, With a higher focus on water chakra causing the temperature to drop dramatically and forming a thick fog of diamond dust covering a large radius, This is the base release of diamond dust and a prerequisite to further techniques.

    (Naiyachiri Kihou)-Diamond Dust Pressure
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user after releasing the diamond dust around his opponent raises one arm and balls it in to a fist, As he does so the diamond dust gathers around his opponents body constricting them with a large quantity of the dust causing painful bruising and if prolonged broken bones.
    -Note- Can only be used twice.

    (Naiyachiri Mirā)-Diamond Dust Mirror
    Type:Defensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user after releasing the diamond dust around his location raises both arms and crosses them in to an X shape, As he does so the diamond dust gathers in front of him forming a large mirror of diamond dust capable of defending him from techniques, An interesting quirk of the technique is that the user can focus his chakra in to the mirror and use it as a medium to cast his foe in to a genjutsu upon eye contact.
    -Note- Can cast opponent in any Genjutsu up to A rank and below.

    Conditions to be able to use it:Must have excellent chakra control, Must have mastered water and wind, Must be kage or above.
    Is weak to:Fire, The heat from the flames causes the diamond dust to melt reverting itself in to a watery form which in turn would douse the fire, Making it have some neutrality, Earth, The force of earth is able to cause blunt force dispersal of the diamond dust, Lightning, The sheer destructive charges of raiton are able to shatter the diamond dust crystals.
    Is strong against:Water, Due to its composition water only serves to increase the power and number of diamond dust shards in the air, Wind, Again due to its composition wind serves only to increase the coldness of the diamond dust making even standing inside of it cause a small numbing effect for an opponent.
    Co-creator: Rasnall
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: You just made ice. A lot of people use known KG elements as stepping stones towards their own CE without knowing the KG, that's not forbidden as even the manga showed that that is possible. But that's not what you did, you just made ice. In theory what you wrote as a CE is not against the rules, however it would be necessary to state that you need to have an ice bio to use it. Secondly this is just snow and we already have a snow CE (for some reason it got approved) and snow can already be used in the RP. Everything you explained now can be done with snow, the snow CE even clearly states it are ice crystals and I really see no difference with that and what you wrote here.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Osore Dokuso

    Custom element English name: Fear Toxin

    The element is based on: Wind, Water, Earth, Fire and Genjutsu

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    We know that nicotine is present in the manga by virtue of characters like Asuma who smoke regularly. In addition, the Drunken Fist style most notably used by Rock Lee is enhanced by the use of alcohol (in the series, unlike the style that it’s based on, the style seems almost entirely dependent on some level of intoxication). And to go further, there’s really isn’t any reason to believe that any chemical found in the real world is not present in the Ninja World.

    In addition, the Yakuza clan uses drugs as stimulants in order to help them reach the pique of physical fitness.

    Meanwhile, elements like Carbon show that medjutsu is not required to manipulate chemicals found in substances through the use of high-end manipulation of substances found in nature. The toxins capable of inducing psychosis would be either found in the earth (grass for example), in bodies of toxic water, or in areas of air with noxious gas. However such substances themselves don’t have to be present; they can be created through chemistry. Methamphetamine, commonly used in the form of what is known as crystal meth, for example, has a molecular formula of C10H15N. Essentially, in order to produce the drugs that would be included under fear toxin, which I will relate to the real life drug heroin in order to prevent including such a broad umbrella term in this CE, the user would have to gather the necessary elements through high-end manipulation of earth, water, and wind. Afterwards, the user will use their fire chakra in order to mimic the process of polymerization in which these monomers (carbon, nitrogen, etc.) are combined into polymers. This would not be considered carbon or nitrogen release, however, because the user would not actually have any way to manipulate the element itself and use it for various purposes. They would only use their fire chakra in order to join the chemicals together as either a gas, in which they would once again call upon their wind chakra as a medium, or a liquid, in which their water chakra would be the medium.

    How it works:

    In real life, there are various drugs in existence that result in intoxication of people who use them and as a result often intensify emotions, be it happiness, depression, fear; whatever the user of the drug feels is intensified greatly. The various mental states that can be brought about or altered by the use of drugs are referred to using the term psychosis, which includes four different effects. Hallucinations, delusions (paranoia), catatonia (inability or unwillingness to interact with one’s environment), and thought disorder (mainly characterized by incomprehensible speech or illegible handwriting).

    Now Fear Toxin, both capable of being created in a gaseous and liquid state, can be thought of in a sense as Genjutsu given a form. In truth, the user of such a toxin needs to training in Genjutsu; the reason why this is a basis of the element is simply because this still incites illusions and hallucinations. However by a user of the Fear Toxin, Genjutsu can be used in order to further control what exactly they see when the toxin is released. The process of creating the fear toxin is described above, and its effects are inducing various instances of psychosis. As suggested in the name, the most potent effect of this toxin is the ability to induce fear, and amplify its effects. Fear is a broad term, though, and is only a state of mind. Fear gas incites hallucinations that instill intense fear into the minds of the affected individuals. Such hallucinations can include paranoia, depression, the death of loved ones, feelings of failure, and the intense sensation of looming death. The effect on their bodies includes much slower physical reactions as an effect of the drugs, and simply overall dulled senses.

    The difficult part, of course, is getting the toxin into the subject. As stated earlier, there are two states of the fear toxin: a gaseous state and a liquid state. The gaseous state can be released in any area, immediately taking hold of anyone who breathes in the toxin. The liquid version of the toxin, meanwhile, can be injected into the subject via syringes or anything that can cut into the opponent and get the toxin into their system. Alternatively the subject can take the toxin in through their mouth, which is fair more effective but obviously more difficult to pull off. In addition, unlike Genjutsu this goes further than simply altering the opponent’s chakra flow; it directly attacks their mind with no strings attached. As a result, the moment that this toxin gets into someone’s system, they are rendered helpless nine times out of ten, even with an ally. The exceptions would be certain very specific customs and if the subject exposed to the toxin is treated by a medical ninja, or if somehow by extremely high med-ninja techniques self-treatment can be done. But again, it is not as simple as restoring their chakra flow, because their chakra flow was never disrupted in the first place. Undoing the effects of fear toxin after they have taken their toll would require abilities that literally restore, relax, or null the mind long enough for the toxin to wear off.

    Meanwhile, the user himself must take precautions in order to prevent the gas from backfiring. Most often when using the fear toxin whether in liquid or gas form the user will wear some sort of gas mask. This mask not only protects them from accidentally inhaling the gas but also, in certain specific techniques relating to the toxin, the user will use his gas mask to further intensify the fear felt by his opponent.

    Fear Toxin is odorless, but has a yellow hue to it, easily distinguishing it from normal air.

    Usage Examples:

    (Osore Dokuso: Osen) Fear Toxin: Pollute
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is the most basic technique in the fear toxin arsenal. In this technique, the user will make a single hand seal and a burst of fear toxin, in its gaseous form, will move outward in a radius of 5 meters around the user. After this, the toxin will move further outward slowly, continuously moving until completely removed. One turn after using this, the toxin will have managed to get to mid-range, and two turns after, the toxin will reach long-range, slowly makings its way across the entire terrain. If the toxin is inhaled, the user will begin to experience immense and irrational fear. Spiders may begin to cover them, their loved ones may die right before their eyes, or they may suddenly feel as though they are facing overwhelming odds and feel helpless. Either way, the moment that the opponent inhales this toxin they will be rendered helpless to the user’s attacks. Within two turns of exposure, the subject’s mind will snap.


    (Osore Dokuso: Ken of Osore) Fear Toxin: Blade of Fear
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will make a small amount of fear toxin in its liquid form. The toxin will only be just enough to make a “fear-tipped blade,” so to speak. This can be a sword, syringe, spear; anything capable of cutting and stabbing. The moment that an opponent is cut with this blade, the toxin will be in their system. Any single cut, stab, or scrape by the enhanced blade will get the toxin into their system. One turn after the toxin is injected, hallucinations will begin. As with all fear toxin, this can vary between many different things; loved ones dying, seeing your own death in front of your very eyes, or other irrational fears.


    More details and restrictions would be added to both of the above of course, but this is the general idea to each.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Anyone attempting to use Fear Gas must have mastered Wind, Water, Earth, Fire and Genjutsu. They also must have an extensive understanding of the human mind and the effects of psychosis.

    Is weak to: In its gaseous state Fear Gas would be considered weak to wind (can be blown away) as well as fire and any heat-producing element (intense heat can essentially “break apart” the chemicals that make the gas potent).

    Is strong against: In its liquid state it would be powerful to fire in almost every sense. Liquid fear toxin will naturally overpower weak fire since it’s still using water as a medium to move through, and even if fire is powerful enough to evaporate the toxin, it then enters the gaseous state, in which it would still be present and capable of moving. As a result, counter with fire would require an extremely powerful technique to not only evaporate the liquid but also heat up the air enough to break apart the chemicals in it (a C-rank fear gas toxin in its liquid state would be completely removed without any remnants by just around A-rank fire). In its gaseous state it is strong against lightning and earth; there are almost no lightning techniques that can disrupt this element since it would simply shoot through the abundance of gas and have little effect on the gas as a whole. As for its advantage over earth, blocking these vapors with an earth technique would require the use of a 360 degree technique with absolutely no opening in it. If something like an earth wall is made, the gas will simply move along the wall and keep moving forward until an opening is found.

    Co-creator: N/A

    Students I passed this custom element on too: KeotsuEclipse

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    ✗ Declined: Sorry, but this is far beyond the scope of an element, it's way too complex. What you're doing is that you're using chakra to start making chemical compounds and that can't possibly be a CE. Making a single drug into a CE is already a hard task, let alone making a universal drug CE. On top of that drugs pretty much are into the direction of medical ninjutsu. I also don't approve CE that are in different states and don't use other people's clans, elements or abilities as proof for your own.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Senton
    Custom element English name: Lead Release / Lead Style
    The element is based on: Earth, Fire, chakra and the ability of the user to use them to make lead

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Lead has been commonly used for thousands of years because it is widespread, easy to extract and easy to work with. It is highly malleable and ductile as well as easy to smelt. From ancient period, utensils made of lead were commonly used. Lead is also used in plumbing at houses and industries.

    Lead is a bright and silvery (with a very slight shade of blue) metal in a dry atmosphere; upon contact with air, it begins to tarnish by forming a complex mixture of compounds depending on the conditions.

    It has a few characteristic properties: high density, softness, ductility and malleability, poor electrical conductivity (compared to other metals), high resistance to corrosion, and ability to react with organic chemicals. Lead is also toxic if ingested or implanted in body.

    At 327.5 °C (621.5 °F), lead melts and boils at 1749 °C (3180 °F)
    For info on Lead: >>Link<<
    Toxicology: >>Link<<

    How it works:
    The lead element is created by combining earth & fire nature chakras along with the ability of the user to create lead by combining these two.
    Properties of lead & how it can be used:
    - High density
    - Softness - Can make the opponent slip and make him/her fall
    - Ductility/Malleability - Capable of stretching, bending, moulding to various shapes and sizes easily
    - Poor electrical conductivity (compared to other metals)
    - High resistance to corrosion - Lead forms protective layer on contact with acid & avoids further destruction
    - Ability to react with organic chemicals - Can easily react with organic chemicals thus forming lead salt rendering organic chemicals useless.
    - Toxic effect - Acute and chronic poisoning is known to occur. Not useful in combats.
    Isotopes
    Lead occurs naturally on Earth exclusively in the form of four isotopes: lead-204, −206, −207, and −208. All four can be radioactive. This effect is, however, so weak that natural lead makes no radiation hazard

    Usage Examples:
    (Senton: Sentou tama) Lead Release: Lead bullet
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates spherical beads (about 1 cm) of lead from earth using his chakra using shape manipulation and makes them arise and shoots them at the opponents at high speed.

    (Senton: Sentou yuka) Lead Release: Lead floor
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user coats the earth with a layer of lead. Can make the enemy slip and fall due to its smoothness when formed below their legs while running/sprinting.

    (Senton: Sentou hei) Lead Release: Lead wall
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog → Ram and then creates a solid wall of Lead as a form of defense. The Lead instantly rises up from earth and takes form. The wall itself is made of lead, making its strength greater than that of a normal mud wall. Because of the Lead's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, wind, water, radiation.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    - One must master Earth element
    - One must have completed Fire element at least up to "A rank"
    - Must be taught by me or require permission from me

    Is weak to:
    Cannon Elements:
    - Fire [ C rank and above]
    - Lightning
    Narutobase custom elements:
    - Lava [Will melt Lead]
    - Temperature [Will melt Lead]
    - Shining Fire [Will melt Lead]
    - Sun Fire [Will melt Lead]
    - White Fire [Will melt Lead]
    - Hellfire [Will melt Lead]
    - Greek Fire [Will melt Lead]
    - Dark Fire [Will melt Lead]
    - Diamond [Stronger than Lead. Can pierce it]
    - Adamantine [Stronger than Lead. Can pierce it]
    - Iron [Stronger than Lead. Can pierce it]

    Is strong against:
    Cannon Elements:
    - Earth [Stronger than regular Earth Element]
    - Wind [Has no effect against Lead]
    - Water [Since Lead is advanced earth release, elemental weakness]
    Narutobase custom elements:
    - Radioactivity [Lead will absorb radiation]
    - Acid [Corrosion resistant]
    - Light [Cannot penetrate]
    - Oil [Cannot penetrate / inert on contact]
    - Fluorine [Cold lead does not react]

    Co-creator: Solf J. Kimblee

    Students I passed this custom element on to:
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    ✗ Declined: This has been declined before for the same reason: what makes this different from any other already approved metal element?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Koke

    Custom element English name: Moss Release

    The element is based on: Water + Earth + Wind Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Mosses are small, soft plants that are typically 1–10 cm in tall, though some species are much larger. They commonly grow close together in clumps or mats in damp or shady locations in Narutoverse we can see Yamato’s Wood (Mokuton) release but unlike mokuton, Moss differ from 'higher' plants by not having internal water-bearing vessels or veins.

    Like Yusuke Root release, Moss do not have flowers or seeds, and their simple leaves cover the thin wiry stems. At certain times mosses produce spore capsules which may appear as beak-like capsules borne aloft on thin stalks.

    We have seen also plant release from several member which develop it into a CE’s so Moss also a custom element which has a unique advantage since They are small (a few centimeters tall) and herbaceous (nonwoody) and absorb water and nutrients through their leaves.

    Mosses have stems which may be simple or branched and upright or lax, simple leaves that often have midribs, and also roots like yusuke’s CE’s anchor them to their substrate, and spore-bearing capsules on long stems.

    How it works: Like any other organic release similar with wood, root or plants, Moss also use the same principle to manipulate water and earth chakra then add wind element to make it more humid and shape it typically look like a thin green felt, and may grow on damp soil, tree bark, rocks, concrete, or almost any other reasonably stable surface. This is a transitory stage in the life of a moss, but from the protonema grows the gametophore ("gamete-bearer") that is structurally differentiated into stems and leaves. A single mat of protonemata may develop several gametophore shoots, resulting in a clump of moss.

    Usage Examples:


    (Koke: Tsurutsuru) - Moss Release: Slippery
    Rank: C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user grow mosses surround the opponent ground beneath which change their ground become more slippery which will causing the opponent off balance and fall down when they start to make a move


    Conditions to be able to use it: Have to mastered water and earth release plus Wind to create a humid environment condition to create mosses.

    Is weak to: Lightning, Earth release will stop mosses grows, Gasses release

    Is strong against: Fire as moss based on water, Water which moss will absorb it, Wind to hold up it breezes, any kind of Solid CE’s as Moss will cover it down and make it rusty unable to use.

    Co-creator:

    Students I passed this custom element on too:

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    ✗ Declined: For starters Passion already has a plant element and based on his description that does not exclude mosses. Secondly I find that you're hyping this way too much. I mean you claim that earth is weak, but then list all kinds of solids as strength. That's illogical, do you think that it's going to rust instantly? Even if that would be the case there's a difference in just rusting a bit and completely disintegrating. So that's not a reason. Wind doesn't make sense either, mosses aren't powerful, so how could they even stand up against slicing, heavy winds? And fire, mosses grow in humid places, when someone uses a fire jutsu, it isn't going to be humid anymore and I'm pretty sure moss burns. I find the reason that moss consists of water quite simplistic as humans also consist mainly out of water and we still can burn. There's a difference between actually being water and absorbing it. Moss isn't water, it's a plant.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Īkāzuton
    Custom element English name: Thunder Release
    The element is based on: Lightning + Wind + High Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Thunder is the sound caused by lightning, depending on the nature of the lightning and distance of the listener, Thunder can range from a sharp loud crack to a long low rumble, there is the lightning Release, which basically covers the whole aspect of forming Thunder, and another aspect is Kirin, which is the power of natural lightning power, the fact that there's natural lightning caused by the atmosphere of the narutoverse proves that Thunder is possible to exist in the narutoverse.

    How it works: As mentioned before Thunder is caused by Lightning, the sudden increase in pressure and temperature from lightning produces rapid expansions of the air surrounding and within a bolt of lightning, in turn the expansion of air creates a sonic shock wave similar to a sonic boom, which produces the sound of thunder, so with the usage of lightning Release and incredible chakra manipulation along with the Wind Release, in order to cause a sudden pressure and temperature increase in the air, creating shock waves which have massive built up pressure in them and extremely loud noises, which travel extremely fast, ranging up to the speed of sound in most extreme cases.

    Usage Examples:
    (Ikāzuton: Dōzen Kōken) - Thunder Release: Natural Guardian
    Type: Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After forming a single handseal, the user charges the air around him with Thunder Release chakra, generating a spherical dome of rapidly spinning shock waves that spirals around the user guarding him from nearly all directions, similar to the "Lightning Release: Plasma Ball" technique however with the usage of Thunder, If the opponent is in short range of the user, he receives a tremendous damage to his ears making them bleed and losing control of his hearing for a turn.
    Note: Deafening effect lasts 1 turn.

    (Ikāzuton: Ifūkadō) - Thunder Release: Violent Vortex
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms 3 handseals as he concentrates a large amount of Thunder into the air around him, forming 3 large orbs of compressed shock waves, in which are forming a triangular shape, surrounding the 3 large orbs multiple smaller orbs, each of the large orbs of energy in which are forming the triangular shape are roughly each 2 meters squared in size and the orbs surrounding them are half the size, the user sends the orbs towards the opponent in a spiraling pattern, as the orbs spin rapidly around each other forming a shape of a vortex of shock waves heading at the opponent, the immense rapid speed of the shock waves produce massive pressure in which sucks anything within short range of the vortex including the user himself, working somewhat like the "Wind Release: Pressure Damage" technique with amplified amount of pressure, combined with the rapid spinning motion of the vortex, it produces a massive amount of sound which affects the opponent's ears making him unable to identify normal sounds and voices around him for a single turn, this sound could render some sound release techniques useless, like for example the "Sound Release: Inner Sonar Skill" technique, and affect the user of that sound technique due to him amplifying his sound hearing capabilities.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Works on B-rank and below Sound Release Techniques.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Lightning And Incredible chakra control.

    Is weak to:

    Water Release: High pressurized Water Release techniques can decrease the temperature in the air and in turn reduce the shock wave's lethality.

    Fire Release: High ranked fire techniques can counter the shock waves of Thunder and overpower them.

    Is strong against:

    Lightning Release: Thunder is composed of Shock waves which are more intense than regular Wind Release techniques which would overpower lightning techniques.

    Earth Release: With the massive built up pressure in the shock waves and extreme heat, Thunder can cut through most solid forms of rocks.

    Wind Release: With the high pressure of the shock waves produced by thunder and large heat it can overpower the Wind techniques easily.

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: -

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    ✗ Declined: Thunder is just sound and that's already considered an element. Secondly apparently you don't even use lightning. You explain it's needed, but then in your jutsu's there is nowhere lightning, so in the end you're just saying you're creating shockwaves, which is already a CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Gasuton
    Custom element English name: Gas Release
    The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Wind
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Gases are used in the Naruto world often. The usage of gases varies from poison gases and special ninjutsu to ninja tools and steam.

    Poison Gas, Corrosive Gas, Steam Armor, Sleeping Gas, Smoke Clone, Smoke Dragon, Smoke Prison and Flammable Gas

    How it works: With this element the user can create, manipulate and remove gases from atmosphere and surroundings. Removing gases only works close range from user in order to prevent him/her suffocating his/her opponent. By utilizing earth element, user can create deep vents into the ground that release natural gases, create oxides and dioxides with fire release, control/create gases in air with wind release or combine all three elements to create gases from periodic table out of scratch.

    This can be done to create every type of gas as long as it doesn't step into borders of already existing custom elements.

    Usage Examples:

    ( Gasuton: Umare no Genso ) - Gas release: Birth of Elements
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User makes Ox → Horse → Rat hand seals and takes a deep breath while gathering Fire, Wind and Earth based chakra into his/her lungs. He/she then imbues the oxygen with all of these three chakras to turn it into a different gas/chemical element or increase the amount of oxygen atoms and spews it out.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Wind, Earth and Fire

    Is weak to: Depends on gases. Wind can easily blow back dangerous gases and sleeping gases and easily flammable gases can be ignited with fire, causing blow back.

    Is strong against: Depends on gases. Varies from fire elements to wind, steam and void.

    Co-Creator:Passion

    Students I pass this on to: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Someone already submitted this last time, why would approve it this time while I declined it before? Making a gas element is the same as saying that you make a solid or liquid element. It's nothing more than a name to describe the state of a matter. I'm never going to approve an element that says it can create any kind of gas, not to mention all the canon gasses that already exist.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Kagamiton
    Custom element English name: Mirror Release
    The element is based on: Chakra Control (required to create the Mirrors) + Basic 5 (required in order to transport the various elemental chakra's)
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): First of all I'd like to give a little explanation about mirrors in the real world. A mirror is an object that reflects light or sound in a way that preserves much of its original quality prior to its contact with the mirror. The most familiar type of mirror is the plane mirror, which has a flat surface. Curved mirrors are also used, to produce magnified or diminished images or focus light or simply distort the reflected image. Mirrors are also used in scientific apparatus such as telescopes and lasers, cameras, and industrial machinery. Most mirrors are designed for visible light; however, mirrors designed for other types of waves or other wavelengths of electromagnetic radiation are also used, especially in non-optical instruments.

    Now proof that Mirror Release is possible in the Narutoverse. The best example are Haku Yuki's Ice Mirrors. He uses the mirrors to transport himself to different locations at a very high speed. Of course Kagamiton will be used differently than Haku's mirrors.

    Another proof that this is possible in the Narutoverse is Yagura's Water Release: Water Mirror Technique. This technique creates a reflection of the opponent which attacks the opponent (only works if the opponent uses tai/ken/ninjutsu techniques).

    How it works: Mirror Release will not be executed like the Ice Release version. Instead of creating solid objects the user will use his chakra to create chakra mirrors (Chakra Kagami). These chakra mirrors have the ability to reflect/transport any object that contains chakra in it be it techniques, tools, or even a living being. These chakra mirrors would be created by "drawing" them or focusing chakra on a location. With hand motions and concentration the user would be able to create mirrors of any shape or size (within reason of course).

    I intend to use it in various ways among them:

    1. Transport of objects/people/techniques (only if they have chakra within them).
    2. The ability to communicate/spy through the mirrors.


    Now to explain the usage of the transportation. In order for someone/something to move through mirrors the user needs to create an entry point and an exit point (two mirrors minimum). When entering the mirror the user/object is turned into chakra as he enters the mirror. He travels from point to point as an ethereal form (chakra). When he gets to the exit point, as he leaves the mirror he is formed back into his original corporeal form. The entry and exit points for transformation are visible so the opponent would know where the user would be coming out. The speed of the transportation is however limited. The transportation is not instantaneous but there are certain limitations:

    Transportation from Short to Short range- 1-2 seconds
    Transportation from Short to Mid range- 5-6 seconds
    Transportation from Short to Long range- 9-10 seconds

    This applies to objects/techniques and persons. The conversion of chakra to solid and opposite takes approximately 3 seconds. Technique that are usable in Short-Mid range for example cannot be sent from Short to Long range through the mirrors.

    There are three releases:
    1. The Main Release- The Main Release consists of creating chakra mirrors with which the user is able to transport objects/techniques/persons which have chakra within them. The Mirrors in this case have a blue hue just like regular chakra. These mirrors are usually rectangular in shape and normal sized though the user can create them however he wants to. These are known as plain mirrors. They reflect things the way they are. These require an entry point and an exit point.

    2. The Specific Release- The Specific Release consists of creating chakra mirrors that do not serve for transportation but for communication and spying purposes. These mirrors resemble normal mirrors which we know and use. No transportation whatsoever is possible using these. These are known as Tsuushin Kagami. These are barely noticable by the naked eye unless the user wants them to be seen. The purpose of these can be distraction too.

    3. The Advanced Release- The Advanced Release consists of creating chakra mirrors which change the size of chakra filled objects or techniques. Another variation of transportation but not created for people. This requires bending of the mirrors. The techniques and objects (mainly tools) are either seemingly increased or decreased since the mirror bent them. These mirrors are known as curved mirrors. These have a purple hue to them and are more wave like.

    Restrictions will be made in the techniques for all these forms.
    Here is an example of how it would work though much slower compared to this.




    Usage Examples:

    Mirror Release: Drawing | Kagamiton: Chuusen
    Type: Supplementary/ Offensive/ Defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user stretches out his arm with his index finger pointing. Then with simple hand motions the user is able to create normal sized chakra mirrors in order to transport techniques/objects or even themselves. The user creates the mirrors in short range but is able to send the exit point(s) anywhere in mid range.

    Mirror Release: Transportation Technique | Kagamiton: Koutsuu No Jutsu
    Type: Supplementary/ Offensive/ Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: A technique which is part of the Main Release, Koutsuu No Jutsu is one of the basic techniques of Mirror Release. The user creates two or more mirrors of normal to large size. These mirrors are able to transport techniques (mainly projectile type techniques), tools and objects which contain chakra within them or even persons. As these things enter the mirrors they are turned into chakra itself and travel from one point to another.
    Note: Usable every two turns.
    Note: Four Mirrors can be created per usage of technique.
    Note: Must be taught by Darijan.

    Mirror Release: Chakra Bending Skill | Kagamiton: Chakra Kussetsu Gijutsu
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A technique typical to the Advanced Release. After sending a technique through a chakra mirror the user seemingly increases the size of the technique increasing it's overall range and lethality. This does not increase the power of the technique though and the chakra used to create the technique remains the same.
    Note: Must be taught by Darijan.
    Note: Usable thrice per battle.
    Note: After one usage of the technique, cannot be used for three turns.

    These are not the final techniques.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over the Basic 5 and Advanced Chakra Control
    Is weak to:
    Earth Release and Earth based elements- The solid constructions and object created dispel the chakra mirrors
    Wind Release and Wind based elements- High compressed techniques dispel the mirrors and disrupt the chakra
    Is strong against:
    Fire Release and Fire based elements
    Lightning and Lightning based elements
    Basically all energy based elements
    Co-creator:-Cobalt-
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

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    ✗ Declined: This is Space/Time ninjutsu and thus never going to be approved. I'm pretty certain Scorps, or another RP mod, told you that.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Kaku fyu-jon
    Custom element English name: Nuclear fusion release / Fusion release
    The element is based on: Earth, Water, Wind, Fire, Lightning & Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    All things in our earth or in ninja world are made of molecules or atoms which contain nuclei.
    Molecules or atoms are present everywhere in earth, water or air, so utilizing them is possible since we have seen many ninjas manipulating these elements which is indirectly simply a manipulation of a mass of millions and millions of molecules or atoms.

    How it works:
    Nuclear fusion is the process by which two or more atomic nuclei join together, or "fuse", to form a single heavier nucleus. During this process, matter is not conserved because some of the mass of the fusing nuclei is converted to energy which is released.

    Nuclear fusion release works by combining any two or more molecules with nucleus [which contains protons, electrons & neutrons] to form a single nuclei with the release of huge amount of energy, which is utilized for combat.

    Since various molecules with nucleus are present in earth, water, air, the user can combine these molecules using his chakra and expertise to produce a controlled fusion reaction with the help of fire chakra and lightning chakra to initiate, sustain or terminate the reaction thus utilizing the energy released during fusion reaction.

    So basically the user needs Earth, Wind & Water chakra to utilize the molecules in them and Fire and Lightning nature chakra to create & contain the fusion reaction.
    For more info: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nuclear_fusion

    Usage Examples:

    Nuclear fusion release - Energy ball (Kaku fyu-jon: Seishou tama)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user forms a single compressed spherical ball out of energy created from atomic/molecular fusion between his hands & shoots it forcibly towards the opponent, which will blast on contact with any surface.

    Nuclear fusion release - Fusion furnace (Kaku fyu-jon: Fyu-jon kama)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After concentrating the earth, fire, lightning chakra, the user slams on the ground with his hands to create a fusion reaction underground which will blast from beneath the opponent.
    Note:
    - Can only be used once in 10 turns.
    - The user cannot perform any S rank jutsus for next 3 turns
    - Can be used only on ground/earth

    Nuclear fusion release - Fusion shield (Kaku fyu-jon: Fyu-jon toku)
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: After performing Ram hand seal the user forms a thin shield out of molecules or atoms by spreading his hands which can block metal weapons & utilize their atoms/molecules for fusion reaction.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    1. Mastery over fire & Lightning.
    2. Water - At least A rank, Wind - At least A rank, Earth - At least A rank
    since they are only required for utilizing the molecules in them.
    3. Must be taught by me or require permission from me.

    Is weak to:
    - Wind & advanced Wind elements [including CE] - strong wind can disrupt the proximity of molecules.
    - Lightning & advanced Wind elements [including CE] - disrupts the molecules, since they are charged particles.
    - Water [B rank & above anything less will be dragged into the reaction since water molecules are closely packed than air] & Advanced water elements [including CE] - May cool down the reaction zone thus reducing the reaction & hence reduce the energy released.

    Is strong against:
    - Earth & Advanced earth elements - since the atoms/molecules are closer, easier to utilize them to create the fusion reaction.
    - Fire - actually accelerates the reaction by providing high temperature.
    - Ice
    - Crystals
    - CE with tightly packed atoms or molecules - since the atoms/molecules are closer, easier to utilize them to create the fusion reaction. (Few Examples: CE of metals, crystals)
    Co-creator: None
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: Outside the fact that it's almost inhuman to actually be able to do something like that, it would instantly explode uncontrollably, pretty much killing the user too. You also clearly do not understand very well yet as how you need to make a CE as you didn't even provide any proof this is possible nor did you even understand what you yourself made when you write things like "the user forms a thin shield of molecules". In fact you didn't even make an element, only thing you did was saying that you use whatever elemental nature you want and then somehow start nuclear fission. That's not a CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Simenteu

    Custom element English name: Cement Release

    The element is based on: Water + Earth + Fire to dry it up + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): cement is a fine, soft, powdery-type substance. It is made from a mixture of elements that are found in natural materials such as limestone, clay, sand and/or shale. When cement is mixed with water, it can bind sand and gravel into a hard, solid mass called concrete. Cement also a binder, a substance that sets and hardens independently, and can bind other materials together. The word "cement" traces to the Romans, who used the term opus caementicium to describe masonry resembling modern concrete that was made from crushed rock with burnt lime as binder. The volcanic ash and pulverized brick additives that were added to the burnt lime to obtain a hydraulic binder.

    We have seen several jutsu which also manipulate the environment like the dust release which is created through simultaneous use of the earth, wind, and fire natures. The techniques of this nature initially form as a small three-dimensional object (e.g. a cube, a cone, etc.) composed of chakra.
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dust_Release

    And then for the another cannon, we also have seen the Gold dust Release http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Gold_Dust

    Also in Gaara’s Sand which the Users can control the finely divided rock and mineral particles of earth and control, shape and otherwise manipulate it to their advantage. They can manipulate the density of sand to make it very dense and solid or diffuse and liquid or almost mist-like. User can dehydrate the moisture out of anything containing moisture such as plants, dirt or animals, causing them to crumble into sand/dust.
    https://profile.live.com/cid-eba0b814a3a6c67a/

    Deidara Clay, the power to manipulate clay into many uses or into different shapes or forms. This power is a variation of Earth Manipulation and Clay Mimicry. this power can shape any amounts of clay to give it form to the users liking to greatly help with strageties or tactics. This power along with Life-Force Generation can bring various works of clay to life to serve them (variation of Geokinetic Creature Creation). The user can put other items or materials inside their clay works such as information, devices, or even bombs.
    http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Clay_Manipulation

    The last is Kurotsuchi Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique
    http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lava_Re...ling_Technique

    So Cement would also work in Narutoverse as cement is a fine, soft, powdery-type substance. It is made from a mixture of elements that are found in natural materials such as limestone, clay, sand and/or shale which also could easily find in Real Life and Narutoverse.

    How it works: Cement form by chemical reactions that occur independently of the mixture's water content; they can harden even underwater or when constantly exposed to wet weather. The chemical reaction that results when the anhydrous cement powder is mixed with water produces hydrates that are not water-soluble. Non-hydraulic cements (e.g. gypsum plaster) must be kept dry in order to retain their strength.

    And in Narutoverse the user extract natural earth element within their environment which is heating limestone and clay then mixed it with water to create a fine, soft, powdery-type substance then to gravel into a hard, solid mass hen mixed with sand, stones, or other aggregates.

    Usage Examples:
    Simenteu : Yunibāsaru ketsugō | Cement Release : Universal Binding

    Type:Attack
    Rank: B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: by enclosing The user hand will focus his earth and water chakra into the ground below the enemy and will mix the earth and water together with natural limestone clay sand etc. until he has made wet cement the user will then push the cement upwards from the ground grabbing onto the enemy’s both feet, the user will then focus fire chakra into the cement drying it and binding the cement to the enemies both leg making them unable to move until the cement is broken off.


    Simenteu : Bodi o chūzō | Cement Release Casting Body

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will make 3 hand seals and focus his water and earth chakra into the ground below the enemy and mix it around with natural limestone and clay until it forms wet cement the user will then push it up from the ground and around the enemy fitting its self around his body upon making another hand seal to harden the cement.


    Simenteu : Ketsugō umi| Cement Release : The Binding Ocean

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will make 5 hand seals and focus his earth and water chakra into every bit of the ground mixing it around with natural limestone clay etc. until it makes a wet cement the user will then expand the wet cement all across underground then have the cement expand above and underground to the point that it creates an ocean of wet cement. By doing this the User has gained a wet cement source for his cement jutsu but has also made the enemy sink into the cement the user will then release his fire chakra across this ocean hardening it trapping the enemy in a sea of cement.
    Note :
    - Can only be use Twice
    - Stays on the field for 2 turns then crumble and become a cement source
    - No S-Rank Cement for the following turn



    Conditions to be able to use it: Have to Mastered Earth element to extract limestone, Clay and sand, water to create a fine, soft, powdery-type substance and Fire to heating the lime stone and clay to create the gray mixture or white cement

    Is weak to: Lightning and Wind

    Is strong against: Water, Earth itself and Fire

    Co-creator: –Haku Yuki-

    Students I passed this custom element on too:? & ?

    _______________


    ✗ Declined: For starters Teno submitted Mortar Release, which is pretty much the same as what you're submitting here. It was declined but as long as he still has the intention to resubmit it, whether I decline it or not, I'm not going to approve it for other people. Secondly you didn't really made an element, you made a pseudo-element. What you do is something very differently than Deidara or the 4th kazekage. Against the time you are finished with making your cement, you died ten times over. Not to mention you don't find clay or lime just anywhere, then you need to start using earth, fire and water chakra one by one as you can't use them at the same time the way you're explaining it. Then you'r saying it's a powdery substance, then again it's a solid? What you made was some complex set of steps you need to undertake to create cement, but not a CE. Also this has been submitted even before Teno and declined by Nexus.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Waruton
    Custom element English name: Evil Release
    The element is based on: Large Chakra Reserves + Negative Emotions
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Throughout the manga, we have seen many examples of evil or corrupting chakra. One of the first times in the series where this is seen is in the Curse Seal Orochimaru placed on Sasuke. The Curse Seal corrupted both his body and mind, giving him a darker personality, and even corrupting his Chidori in his fight against Naruto, showing that chakra has an evil side. Later, during the 5 Kages meeting, while Sasuke was engaged in battle Karin noted that his chakra was darker and colder, which further shows that the nature of one's chakra can be altered through strong emotions alone. In the second Naruto Shippuden Movie: Bonds, the creature known as "Reibi" (Zero-Tails) is revealed and was appearantly created from negative emotions and chakra, the very basis of this element. Naruto, while in his Kurama Chakra mode, can sense the negative emotions of people (and whatever Zetsu is), further showing how emotions (specifically negative ones) can be linked to chakra. In all of these examples (with the exception of Naruto's Kurama Chakra mode), no Yin-Yang manipulation is present, to the readers knowledge, and thus this element (in the site's context) should be able to be used without Yin-Yang training.
    How it works: The user focuses on their negative emotions (anger, hatred, rage, vengeance, etc.) while moulding chakra. While moulding chakra with their most negative emotions at the front of their mind, the users chakra becomes "dark and cold" (to quote Karin), and becomes stronger than normal. The chakra itself also changes appearance from the normal color of the user to a dark purple/black color. The newly-created "Dark Chakra" is then manipulated in its raw form.
    Usage Examples:
    (Waruton: Yobidashi-Moto no Yami) Evil Release: Darkness Calling
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary, Defence
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user makes a handseal and then focuses Evil chakra around a part of their body (a limb or torso). While the chakra covers that part of the body, it gains enhanced defensive abilities and strength.
    Note: ~Can defend against B-rank and below attacks
    ~Can shatter B-rank and below defences
    ~Taijutsu up to B-rank used by a limb affected by this jutsu gains two ranks, and free-form taijutsu is considered C-rank
    ~Lasts for four turns
    ~Can be used three times per battle

    (Waruton: Bokyaku no O) Evil Release: King of Oblivion
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary, Defence
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A more powerful version of Darkness Calling, the user makes five handseals and then focuses Evil chakra around their entire body. While the chakra covers that part of the body, it gains enhanced defensive abilities and strength.
    Note: ~Can defend against A-rank and below attacks
    ~Can shatter A-rank and below defences
    ~Taijutsu up to A-rank gains two ranks, and free-form taijutsu is considered B-rank
    ~Lasts for three turns
    ~Can be used one time per battle

    (Waruton: O no Kohai) Evil Release: Devastation of the King
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offense
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (+20 if the target is caught in mid-range) (-20 to the user)
    Description: The user, while using King of Oblivion, can focus all of their hatred and other negative emotions to one point and let it explode outwards, creating a ring of chakra (which appears like a thick fog or smoke) extending up to mid-range in radius, which will push anything caught in it to the boundary of the ring. The user, who's cloak of chakra is now thinner and translucent, will then run with little to no time gap between the ring being formed with enhanced speed to the outside of the ring, and proceed to collect the Evil chakra forming the ring into one of their hands, dragging the target with them if the target was within mid-range. Then the user will slam the chakra into the target, pushing them into either a wall or the ground, creating a devastating explosion.
    Note: ~King of Oblivion will end after this jutsu is used
    ~Due to the emotion needed to perform this jutsu, the user is unable to use Evil Release for two turns after
    ~Due to strain the user will fall to the ground, unable to get up for a turn after the jutsu
    ~After the user has the strength to get up, they cannot move from their position at all for another turn

    Conditions to be able to use it: User must have great chakra reserves and powerful negative emotions (anger, hatred, etc.)
    Is weak to: Earth, Water, Variations of Earth/Water, (Cannon) Dark
    Is strong against: Pure Chakra (ie. Rasengan), Fire, Lightning, Variations of Fire and/or Lightning
    Co-creator: Cookie M
    Students I passed this custom element on too:

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    ✗ Declined: You didn't create any new element. At its best you right now have chakra with a darker color, which is purely cosmetic, all its properties are the same as normal chakra. You just added that it's stronger, but that's BS.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Shukuton
    Custom element English name: Implosion release
    The element is based on: Lightning + Wind + Chakra control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Unlike an explosion, in which energy radiates away from the source, in an implosion, the object collapses on it self as a result of being crushed by an outside force. Implosion is the process in which objects are destroyed by being squeezed in . This is the exact opposite of an explosion as it concentrates matter and energy.

    True implosion usually involves a difference between internal and external pressure, so whatever is collapsing on itself must be bigger than what it is trying to destroy.

    In naruto, there are multiple types of implosion. One is the mountain smash. The two humongous slabs squeeze together and crush whatever is caught in between it. Also, Gaara's sand coffin/sand burial implodes with tremendous force, being able to break bones to create a giant bowl shaped crater that reduces matter to nothingness. Another example is pains universal pull. An implosion is also a burst inward, air or in this case gravity is just another medium.

    How it works: The usage of lightning's energy and wind's pressure would act as around the target to bring it down by concentrating both matter and energy, causing the target to collapse on it self. The user is able devour(not literally) and crush matter.*

    The basic example form type techniques of this nature initially form as a Human-sized ,(if not bigger) Jet black three-dimensional object composed of chakra that phase through the opponent and completely surrounds them. On the users command it instantly compresses itself or implode with tremendous force by using both lightning energy and winds pressure to make the object into the equivalent size of a golf ball and everything trapped inside completely annihilated.

    Even though Implosion Release techniques don't require hand-seals since it mainly chakra control , they do require at least 1-2 seconds to form the object, making it possible to prematurely halt the technique before it is completed, but once it's finished, the technique can be fired with astonishing speed(Can still be tracked by non-Dojutsu user but just barely) . These are very chakra-taxing techniques.

    The technique isn't limited to just affecting physical matter; it can also affect chakra-based defences, and implosion chakra can be absorbed, but absorbing a whole technique could result in the implosion of the persons body.


    Usage Examples:

    (Shukoton: Zetsubo no kyubu)- Implosion Release: Cube of despair
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - LongRange
    Type: Supplementary, Offense, Defence
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user holds out their palm and creates a small jet black cube. The user then thrusts their heads towards the direction of the target and sends the cube flying *high speeds(easily trackable w/ naked eye) towards the target. The instant the cube is thrown, it expands to the users liking, however it is limited to thrice the size of the user. Once it reaches the target it phazes through it and traps it within itself. Once it has completely trapped the target it implodes with tremendous force, reducing itself to the size of a golf ball, pulverizing anything trapped inside.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over wind and lightning

    Is weak to:

    Fire- Can't crush fire
    Wind- Cant crush wind

    Is strong against:
    Earth- Earth can be pulverized
    Water- This element can contain and restrict water and lightning

    Co-creator: Shigure-sama
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: For starters Gobi submitted a CE that included implosion in my previous check, I declined it and I'm not saying I would potentially approve it, though I find it too soon to say he abandoned his idea for a CE and thus still has the right to resubmit it unless he clearly said he doesn't want it anymore. Secondly I find this element simply created very bad. The proof you stated hasn't really much to do with implosion as a CE. That you see implosion in Gaara's jutsu I can still understand a bit, but in the Mountain Smash? What you tried to make was in fact an implosion CE, but simply 'crush' and that can never be made into a CE, that's the same like saying you want to make a 'burn' CE. That becomes extremely clear when you say how you make it, you just made everything up, you have no basis whatsoever for everything you explained there. What you described there can be done similarly with a hell of a lot elements, you just made something out of the blue.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name:
    Puroton

    Custom element English name:
    Propane

    The element is based on:
    Wind, Water and Chakra.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Propane is a colourless and odourless gas, however, using certain methods an odour can be added to the propane that lets off a distinct smell. It has been witnesses in the Narutoverse that there are gases all throughout it that can produce different effects and are brought on through different ways. In all retrospect, it has been seen that people like Sasori have utilized poison gas, a form of gas to incapacitate his opponents. Henceforth, why is it not possible for one to utilize Propane, also a gas, for battle? Propane is the byproduct of Natural Gas and that too has been seen in the Narutoverse.

    How it works:
    The usage of Propane works through utilising one’s own Wind (Futon) and Water (Suiton) chakra. When the two elements are used together the user will then take control of the form that the chakra will become and in Propane’s case it would be a gas and in a special case, liquid. Wind forms the basis of Propane, being gas, whilst water gives it a cold sort of property. For its liquid form water obvoiousoy makes up mot of the element. The end product would then be Propane, and can be manipulated by the user for different means, them being primarily offensive and supplementary. Propane is a clear, odorless gas in it's gaseous state and is highly flammable.

    Also, Propane is capable of causing frostbite upon contact, making it highly dangerous. Upon releasing it and exposure to the atmosphere, Propane rapidly cools and expands, below temperatures of 0 degree celsius, causing frostbite from exposure to Propane, both when inhaled, causing damage to your insides, and upon contact with the skin. Furthermore, Propane is denser than air, and upon inhalation, poses a mild asphyxiation risk, which deprives the opponent of oxygen. The user is immune to the effects of Propane, having developed an immunity against it through constant training and usage of it.

    Another form of Propane usage is via the air or water source. Mixing the air with water molecules and using appropriate methods to create propane gas allows it to be formed in the air for attacks. The same principal occurs with water sources. By infusing a water source with more wind and once again, following the correct methods, propane can be formed from bodies of water.

    Liquid propane can't simply be produced, it has to come from an already existant water source. By sending Puroton into a water source, you can make the water become liquid propane for other techniques. Liquid propane is very much the same as its gaseous state in terms of what it does. It still retains all the same abilities, but is in a liquid form.

    Usage Examples:

    Puroton: Puropansutorīmu | Propane Release: Propane Stream
    Type: Offense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user gathers propane within their mouth and exhales it in the form of a dense stream.

    Puroton: Āmā o Borutekkusu | Propane Release: Vortex Armour
    Type: Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user releases a thick layer of propane that they control to make rapidly spin around them. It forms an armour that fits the body perfectly and spins fast enough to deflect attacks. The user becomes incredibly vulnerable to fire and lightning attacks.

    Conditions to be able to use it:
    To use Puroton, Wind and Water must be mastered.

    Is weak to:

    Earth – The solid sediments and formations of Earth would constrict the propane, not allowing it to pass through its structure. Furthermore, the Earth is capable of blocking the explosions and thereby shielding the opponent effectively from harm, being sturdy and strong. Against the liquid propane variation earth is still stronger than it.

    Wind – A moderately strong wind technique is more than capable of blowing Propane away, redirecting it away from the opponent. By disposing of the Propane by blowing it away, it is hereby rendered useless.

    Metal CE’s & Earth Variants

    Wind Variants

    Is Neutral to:

    Water – To be able to cause frostbite, the temperature of Propane needs to be below 0 degrees Celsius. Hence, as water’s freezing point is 0 degrees celsius, Propane, upon contact, would freeze up the liquid molecules, turning it into what we call ‘ice’. It would stem the flow of water, and stop it from reaching the user, effectively stopping it.

    Water Custom Element Variants – Following the same logic, water would freeze below 0 degrees Celsius, and hence, most water variants would also freeze.

    Wind – In Propanes liquid form it is neutral. Liquid, being much sturdier than gas, causes an impact against the wind and they cancel each other out if the techniques are of equal rank. The liquid still possesses it's propane abilities.

    Is strong against:

    Lightning – Propane, being based a lot on wind, would insulate most of the electricity. However, due to lightning’s extreme heat, it would cause a chemical reaction in the propane causing an explosion/ignite, releasing carbon dioxide, water and heat. The explosion, the produced elements and remaining propane would then continue forwards.

    Fire – Propane, being combustible, would explode/ignite on contact with any strong fire jutsu or immense heat source. The explosion would result in the same result as when propane comes into contact with a lightning jutsu.

    Lightning & Fire Custom Element Variants – If it induces enough heat for Propane to explode/ignite.

    Co-creator:
    Baldy..

    Students I passed this custom element on too:

    Note:
    I know how multiple forms of an element isn't usually allowed, so I thought it might be allowed with limitations of how accessible it is.


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    ✗ Declined: The only limitation that slightly would be possible is a liquid element that would be used in jutsu or two like a gas like water can be used as a supplementary mist jutsu. Opposite a gas into a liquid? No. Secondly gasses aren't really suited for CE. Why? Because their use is severely limited, mainly just releasing a cloud of it. Spinning a gas around as an armour? That's the same as saying you're spinning mist around you. Though that still maybe could work if it was a heavy, dense gas, but than it would be more logical to use it as a very loose liquid that's on the border of becoming a gas instead of a gas. On top of that you really are planning to let a highly flammable gas spin with high velocity around you? Forget fire or lightning, a single spark is enough to blast you into oblivion. That's the biggest danger with any kind of gas. That's simply suicide. I'm also not going to accept anymore people saying they're immune to their CE like that. Also you're over exaggerating a lot. Only in specific circumstances it causes very mild frostbite, which isn't really so dangerous as you claim, and thus not a permanent effect like that fire would burn.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Magunisuton|マグネシウム|
    Custom element English name: Magnesium Release
    The element is based on: Fire + Earth + Advanced Chakra Control


    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    In the manga it has been seen that there are metallic weapons such as kunai and shurikens that are used on a day to day basis which must mean that the ores and the makeup of the rocks present within the crust of the Narutoverse are similar to that of our planet Earth. Furthermore, it has been seen on a few occasions that certain people have a KG that allows them to produce steel from their body, and manipulate steel using their chakra, not only that, but explosions have been seen extremely often in the Narutoverse, from the humble explosive tags, to the elusive Explosion release shown in the most recent chapters. We have also seen highly combustive materials such as Oil which is often spewed by Myobakuzan toads and when set aflame would most likely react violently with water. All of these observations can back up the hypothesis of a metal which is fairly light yet strong and malleble and is also highly combustive and when alight and in contact with water can produce a violent explosion, Magnesium, possible. Also Magnesium is a extremely common element, being the Eighth most common in the Earths crust, Nineth most common in the universe as a whole, third most abundant in Sea water, and Fourth in the Earth as a whole, making up 13% of the earth, it is thought that the Planet on which Naruto is set, is extremely similar to that of ours.

    How it works:

    The user generates both their Fire and Earth chakra, using their chakra control to bond and mould the two elements together allowing their earth chakra to take slight dominance over their fire chakra forming solid Magnesium in a similar way to how steel release is formed.

    The user can however use their chakra to manipulate the Magnesium abundant in the earth or seawater, using their Fire and Earth chakra to gather the Magnesium particles present in the earth and forming Magnesium to erupt from the ground in whatever shape or form the user wishes.

    Usage Examples:

    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Chiri |Magnesium Release: Magnesium Dust ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels his/her earth and katon chakra to their mouth. With advanced chakra control and manipulation, they combine both chakra, with great concentration. He/she will then release a field of magnesium dust.
    This dust can then be further manipulated by the use of Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation ‡‡
    Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user creates large compressed objects of magnesium, that can be used for both offensive or defensive purposes. The user can Ignite the magnesium by clicking their teeth or snapping fingers. This is done by creating magnesium from the earth below, or releasing magnesium and forming it's shape from the user's palm. In some cases, if the user has released magnesium dust into the air, it can be shaped using this technique.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Rensei Magunesiumu Tama|Magnesium Release: Drilling Magnesium Bullet ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user spews large drilling rotating spheres of magnesium or molten magnesium from their mouth, coating their throat with chakra in the process to refrain from selfharm the spheres travelling at fair speeds


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Genwaku Tomoshibi|Magnesium Release: Blinding Light ‡‡
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user stomps the earth, releasing both his earth and katon chakra. Mid between the user and the opponent, three 10 meter long pillars, each of a 1 meter radius will quickly rise, each pillar 1 meter diagonally apart from each other. By heating the magnesium with katon chakra, the magnesium will give off an intense light. This light is seen as a white-blue glowing source, if the opponent looks directly at it, it may cause eye injury, resulting in temporarily sight loss of 2 turns.
    ‡‡ Usable only twice per battle


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    ‡‡ Must be Kage Rank or higher to have the chakra control required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Earth Required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Fire Required.

    Is weak to:

    Solid Form
    Wind: Sharp, high ranked wind techniques Pierce it, non-sharp techniques smash it.
    Water: Magnesium is highly soluble and will eventually disolve in water.
    Fire: Hot flames will melt and burn the Magnesium making it unable to be used.

    Molten Form
    Earth: Molten Magnesium doesn't have a piercing capability to tear through high rank dense earth, it also cant pass through it easily due to being fairly thick.
    ‡‡ Sand: The sand smotheres the Magnesium cutting off its supply of the gasses it needs to burn.
    Wind: The wind cools the magnesium, eliminating the heat. leaving the remains of dust.

    Ignited Form
    Fire: If the fire is hot enoug, it will overcome the Magnesium's flames and melt its core turning it to ash.
    Wind: The wind will disperse magnesiums small flames and wreck havoc on its mostly solid core.


    Is strong against:


    Solid Form
    Lightning: Lightning is conducted into it, causing it to vibrate.
    Earth: Magnesium being stronger than most forms of earth and of course being able to have a more precise edge can pierce through it.
    Fire: It will Ignite/heat the magnesium if strong enough, effectively making the Magnesium more dangerous.

    Molten Form
    Water: The water is reduced to hydrogen when it makes contact, which then creates an explosion of the remaining magnesium.
    Earth:The heat of Molten Magnesium can succefully melt through most forms of earth, and earthen metals.

    Ignited Form
    Water: The water is reduced to hydrogen when it makes contact, which then creates an explosion of the remaining magnesium.
    Earth: Ignited Magnesium can succefully pierce through most forms of earth, the flames only heightening its cutting power in a similar way to a hot knife through butter.
    Lightning: The eletricity conducts into its molten core empowering it and giving its a stunning ability, heightened speed, and cutting ability due to it vibrating.



    Co-creator: Kirabi
    Students I passed this custom element on to:



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    Added a few more weaknesses and some minor edits, The ignited form was removed.

    It is unique to other metal elements because:
    -Light waves from burning magnesium is capable of blinding
    -Once lit, it can only end by burning itself out
    -It explodes the easiest when contacts water


    ✗ Declined: You say removed the ignited form, but it's still there, on top of having both a solid and liquid form. I said make a choice. For instance the solid form of water is ice, a different element. When you make a CE, you combine chakra natures to make a new type of chakra, you're not going to start changing the earth/fire ratio when it suits you, then you're making a different element. The difference between a solid and liquid is very important.
    It's needed to explain the aspects of an element, however water for instance conducts electricity, however you are not going to start explaining the strengths and weaknesses of that. When magnesium is ignited, it becomes an elemental combo.





    Custom element Japanese name: Magunisuton|マグネシウム|
    Custom element English name: Magnesium Release
    The element is based on: Fire + Earth + Advanced Chakra Control


    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    In the manga it has been seen that there are metallic weapons such as kunai and shurikens that are used on a day to day basis which must mean that the ores and the makeup of the rocks present within the crust of the Narutoverse are similar to that of our planet Earth. Furthermore, it has been seen on a few occasions that certain people have a KG that allows them to produce steel from their body, and manipulate steel using their chakra, not only that, but explosions have been seen extremely often in the Narutoverse, from the humble explosive tags, to the elusive Explosion release shown in the most recent chapters. We have also seen highly combustive materials such as Oil which is often spewed by Myobakuzan toads and when set aflame would most likely react violently with water. All of these observations can back up the hypothesis of a metal which is fairly light yet strong and malleble and is also highly combustive and when alight and in contact with water can produce a violent explosion, Magnesium, possible. Also Magnesium is a extremely common element, being the Eighth most common in the Earths crust, Nineth most common in the universe as a whole, third most abundant in Sea water, and Fourth in the Earth as a whole, making up 13% of the earth, it is thought that the Planet on which Naruto is set, is extremely similar to that of ours.

    How it works:
    The user generates both their Fire and Earth chakra, using their chakra control to bond and mould the two elements together allowing their earth chakra to take slight dominance over their fire chakra forming solid Magnesium in a similar way to how steel release is formed. The user however can also do the process in a slightly different way, allowing their Fire chakra to take slight dominance over their Earth chakra, resulting in Molten Magnesium being directly formed in a similar way as lava.

    The user can however use their chakra to manipulate the Magnesium abundant in the earth or seawater, using their Fire and Earth chakra to gather the Magnesium particles present in the earth and forming Magnesium to erupt from the ground in whatever shape or form the user wishes.

    After creating solid magnesium, the user can through the use of a fire or lightning technique ignite the magnesium, the magnesium is so highly combustible, that it can be ignited through the slightest spark or flame. The Magnesium producing a bright white almost flare like sparks and flames when ignited, the ignition process furthers Magnesium's offensive capabilities and of course seperates it from most other metals, the temprature of the flame being able to reach up to 3100'c however staying relatively close to the metal itself (300mm). After being ignited for some time the Magnesium will eventually melt into molten magnesium, however if the ignited or molten magnesium comes into contact with water, it causes the water to reduce to Hydrogen which it then reacts with. The result is an explosion. Magnesium is unique to other metals because it can be ignited, and it's flames are white.

    Usage Examples:

    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Chiri |Magnesium Release: Magnesium Dust ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels his/her earth and katon chakra to their mouth. With advanced chakra control and manipulation, they combine both chakra, with great concentration. He/she will then release a field of magnesium dust.
    This dust can then be further manipulated by the use of Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Magunesiumu Kaibyaku|Magnesium Creation ‡‡
    Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user creates large compressed objects of magnesium, that can be used for both offensive or defensive purposes. The user can Ignite the magnesium by clicking their teeth or snapping fingers. This is done by creating magnesium from the earth below, or releasing magnesium and forming it's shape from the user's palm. In some cases, if the user has released magnesium dust into the air, it can be shaped using this technique.


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Rensei Magunesiumu Tama|Magnesium Release: Drilling Magnesium Bullet ‡‡
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user spews large drilling rotating spheres of magnesium or molten magnesium from their mouth, coating their throat with chakra in the process to refrain from selfharm the spheres travelling at fair speeds


    ‡‡ Magunisuton: Genwaku Tomoshibi|Magnesium Release: Blinding Light ‡‡
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user stomps the earth, releasing both his earth and katon chakra. Mid between the user and the opponent, three 10 meter long pillars, each of a 1 meter radius will quickly rise, each pillar 1 meter diagonally apart from each other. By heating the magnesium with katon chakra, the magnesium will give off an intense light. This light is seen as a white-blue glowing source, if the opponent looks directly at it, it may cause eye injury, resulting in temporarily sight loss of 2 turns.
    ‡‡ Usable only twice per battle


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    ‡‡ Must be Kage Rank or higher to have the chakra control required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Earth Required.
    ‡‡ Mastery over Fire Required.

    Is weak to:

    Solid Form
    Wind: Sharp, high ranked wind techniques Pierce it, non-sharp techniques smash it.
    Water: Magnesium is highly soluble and will eventually disolve in water.
    Fire: Hot flames will melt and burn the Magnesium making it unable to be used.

    Is strong against:

    Solid Form
    Lightning: Lightning is conducted into it, causing it to vibrate.
    Earth: Magnesium being stronger than most forms of earth and of course being able to have a more precise edge can pierce through it.
    Fire: It will Ignite/heat the magnesium if strong enough, effectively making the Magnesium more dangerous.


    Co-creator: Kirabi
    Students I passed this custom element on to:Darui..


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    It is unique to other metal elements because:
    -Light waves from burning magnesium is capable of blinding
    -Once lit, it can only end by burning itself out
    -It explodes the easiest when contacts water


    I removed both the molten and ignited form.

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    ✗ Declined: Magnesium has a certain potential. Magnesium dust/sand was used in the past for taking pictures (strangely enough you didn't use that as proof, even though camera's exist in the Narutoverse) because it could combust so easily, resulting in a blinding flash. That aspect makes it very interesting as the fire can't be put down with water as that causes the same reaction, so why then are you making the solid form, which doesn't really have access to that ability? People are not going to make cars out of a metal that blows up when in contact with water or fire. Solid magnesium isn't so explosive, that's mainly the liquid and dust form. So at this point this is a metal as any other and thus isn't going to be approved. So IMO it would be better for you to simply make a magnesium dust CE that you use the same way as Gaara uses his sand, that way you could also have a gourd with you with magnesium sand/dust in it. Also remove students, you're not a sensei and remove several of those jutsu's. One is about liquid magnesium, the other about dust then another is in fact an elemental combo disguised as a CE jutsu.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Mera-Kiseiton

    Custom element English name:Parasitic Fire

    The element is based on:Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): It has been explained in the manga that chakra is the result of the balance between spiritual and physical energy. These two energies are perfectly balanced and create a perfectly stable chakra, which the user can utilize to perform countless jutsu's. However it also has been said that by focusing more on one of the two energies new abilities and techniques can be used. For instance by using more spiritual energy, genjutsu can be used. The 2nd mizukage himself said he was a Yin element user or in other words a genjutsu user. Things like the Nara clan shadows and the Akimichi clan's multi-size jutsu's were also a result of this. However no matter which ability it was, the chakra still remained in balance.

    The idea behind this Custom Element is that the user focuses more on spiritual energy more than the physical. As a result parasitic fire chakra is created which takes on the appearance of a ghastly purple flame with a black hue; Though it shares a distinctly similar appearance to fire, it is not fire and does not produce heat. It has already been seen possible to disrupt the balance in chakra, as seen when Tayuya, one of the sound four, had summoned forth her Doki creatures which could release worm-like creatures from their mouth which mainly consisted of spiritual energy. Because the creatures expelled from the Doki's mouths consisted mainly of spiritual energy, they could not physically touch a person, but instead were attracted to physical energy and could eat away chakra on contact weakening any opponent. When Shikamaru got bitten, instead of a physical wound his chakra was ripped out of him.

    The parasitic fire chakra is based off of the same principle, focusing mainly on spiritual energy more than anything else. The chakra will then seek out "stability" while under the control of the user, and attack sources of physical energy to sustain itself and achieve a variety of effects.

    How it works:

    Note that due to the fact that the Parasitic Fire must eat away at foreign sources of chakra to sustain itself, the user of this element would be immune to the effects of the element.

    • Main Release: The main release of Phantom Flame release involves producing parasitic ‘flames’ that will seek out sources physical energy, absorbing the energy on contact to continuously feed off of it. It is similar to the way Zetsu’s spores attach themselves to a host, and feed off of their chakra to fester and grow over the hosts’ body. This release does not cause any physical pain or physically notable damage to a target, instead eating away chakra to hinder ones actions as a battle drags on.


    • Secondary Release: More for supplementary use, in the secondary version of the main release will take on the form of a semi-aggressive chakra that attacks and eats away the chakra present in techniques used by an opponent. One possible scenario in which this release could be used would be to eat away through an enemy’s’ barrier ninjutsu to execute a successful escape.


    • Advanced Release (Eating Away at Living Tissue): The advanced release of this element takes a turn towards the aggressive side. One would mold a highly aggressive form of the chakra that becomes capable of eating away at living tissue while also sustaining itself on the hosts’ chakra. The extent of this ability would depend on the rank and description of the jutsu itself. This is similar in principle to the way the Nine Tails chakra was so volatile that it ate away at Naruto’s skin upon growing a forth tail.


    Usage Examples:

    (Mera-Kiseiton: Teisei no Bazu Konchuu)- Parasitic Fire Release: Whisper of the Buzzing Gnats
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points:30
    Description: The user will manifest advanced release parasitic fire onto thrown ninja tools. Once the weapons make contact with another person the flame will spread from the tools onto the person’s body, allowing it to proceed to eat away at the skin. Because of the rank the damage is only moderate, slowly eating away at the epidermis. Due to the fact that the ninja tools themselves are not comprised of living tissue or organic matter, they will be capable of sustaining the flames for some amount of time.

    (Mera-Kiseiton: Ganbare Gan)- Parasitic Fire Release: Tenacity Gun
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will begin by simply pointing their dominant hand forward, holding it in the shape of a gun like children often do in play. To some this may appear as some form of apparent deception, initially taking this as a mere joke. At will, the user will fire a small but quick bullet of parasitic flame chakra aimed for a precise part of the body (e.g. hands to prevent the further use of handseals, or the face in order to temporarily obscure the vision and cause searing pain, etc). On contact the parasitic bullets will eat away at the skin tissue and deep into the dermis surrounding the immediate point of contact. Because of the nature of this technique, it does not cause a vast amount of damage and only focusing on a single remote area on the human body.

    (Mera-Kiseiton: Shibu Katteni Zaigou)- Parasitic Fire Release: Branch of Sin
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: One will begin by performing by performing 3 handseals in order to manifest a maximum of four arrows of main release parasitic flame. Once formed these arrows will quickly advance on an intended target, however where as ordinary arrows concentrate on piercing damage, these will begin to spread and envelop the body and swiftly eat away at ones chakra-leaving them open to further attack.

    (Mera-Kiseiton: Hebi Torappu)- Parasitic Fire Release: The Serpents Ensnarement
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user a large sphere of main release parasitic flame chakra that will rapidly advance on an intended target. On contact with another person, the flame will begin to swiftly eat away at an enemy’s chakra, hindering their fighting ability. The flame will continue to eat away at an enemy’s chakra until it has consumed up to 20% of the enemy’s chakra reserves (or until extinguished by the afflicted), and will afterwards will dissipate. The user can perform the tiger handseal to selectively release the effects of this technique to avoid un-intentionally harming an ally in the case that they get caught in the fire.

    (Mera-Kiseiton: Jinkei) - Parasitic Fire Release: Mercy
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user releases a wave of advanced release parasitic flame proportionate to the size of an incoming technique that is to be eaten away. Once it comes into contact with an incoming chakra based technique, the flames will eat away at it completely over time, eventually disabling the technique. It would generally be used to defend against techniques that would otherwise be unavoidable.
    *Can only be used three times per battle
    *Because of the mental strain involved with using this technique, only one other jutsu can be used in the same turn.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Genjutsu, and precise chakra control.

    Is weak to:
    • Water or other liquid elements: Similar to the way vast amounts of water can plow through steam, and real fire, large amounts of water would be able to easily overcome the parasitic flames.


    • Earth and other Solid elements. Being that earth itself is not composed of biological compounds, and is dense; this element would prove incapable of eating away at these techniques even if they are composed of chakra. Since the parasitic flames are themselves intangible, they would also prove incapable of putting a halt to earth release techniques.


    Is strong against:
    • Lightning elements and other lightning variants. Being that this element involves feeding off chakra to sustain itself, whether it be from incoming techniques or from the enemy themselves, this element would prove capable of eating through the lightning chakra and continuing almost un-hindered.


    • Fire and other fire based variants. Because fire itself is the release of photons from the source of burning, this element would prove capable of eating away and eliminating fire techniques all together.


    • Wind elements: Though air itself has a very loose structure, futon techniques still consist of razor sharp chakra blades. Parasitic Fire would eat away at the chakra present in the wind release techniques and render them harmless.


    Co-creator:Passion

    Students I passed this custom element on too:-

    PS: Just stating here for good measure, or for anyone else who may be reading: This is not a fire release variation, it only takes on the physical appearance of fire, but by definition it is not.


    ✗ Declined: Same comment as on Kirabi's Spirit Fire, you didn't even understand yourself what you just wrote here. What you describe is Yin-Yang manipulation, so a minimum requirement would be Y-Y manipulation, which you didn't list. On top of that you do not have any kind of fundament. You just copied Tayuya completely, only you changed it with some kind of special fire for which you have no proof it would be possible.

    Custom element Japanese name:Mera-Kiseiton

    Custom element English name:Parasitic Fire

    The element is based on:Fire and Lightning

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): The lightning element manifests itself and a powerful and destructive power through high frequency vibrations, while the fire element manifests itself as an equally powerful element in its own right as well as having great transformational ability. Mera-Kiseiton is basically a combination of the two – the high frequency vibrations that make up lightning and the transitional abilities of fire. As an element that combines two other chakra natures – like Yōton or Ranton for example – it should be possible within the Narutoverse.

    How it works:
    This element is produced by channeling chakra to, for example, the hands or feet, like any shinobi is capable of doing. Though unlike other forms of Ninjutsu, the user will combine the fire and lightning elements and mould chakra consisting of innumerable and excessively rapid vibrations (On a level far surpassing ordinary lightning release), prior to condensing it in order to maintain its form. On contact with something solid, like Earth Release, the vibrations would instantly eat away at and destroy it. The element itself does not forcefully break through or ‘shatter’ a solid defense, rather, the minute vibrations would completely eat away at the earth and leave nothing behind – No rubble; No traces of debris. Whereas lightning breaks through and destroys solid earth in a blunt, aggressive manner, the vibrations of Parasitic Fire grind things to nothing in a civil manner. This however is not the limit of what the vibrations are capable of.

    Although powerful, the Fire and Lightning elements are indeed unstable. They are both energy based elements, transient - existing only as long as they are fueled; This brings up another one of its prominent abilities – Feeding off of and attacking sources of foreign chakra. In its instability, Parasitic Fire seeks stability under the control of the user, and in order to obtain stability, Parasitic Fire feeds on an opponents chakra to fuel itself. Like the enzymes in saliva that break down the food that we eat, on contact with a foreign source of chakra (Especially elements that involve the manipulation of energy), the Parasitic Fire will devour it, using the vibrations to break down the technique into a more suitable form of raw chakra for consumption – On this point, a comparison can be made between Parasitic Fire and the Water Release: Great Shark Bullet technique. Like Kisame’s Suiton jutsu, Parasitic Fire is also capable of devouring chakra as well as using that chakra to grow larger and more powerful.

    Parasitic Fire can be manifest in several ways, sent over long distances, etc. In its raw form, Parasitic Fire takes on the physical appearance of a smoky, black-purplish flame like energy. This raw release acts and manifests itself in a way that is similar to flames, and doesn’t produce any form of concussive or kinetic impact; When it comes into contact with chakra, it will immediately begin to devour the technique, using the consumed energy to augment its own strength. This also the case for sentient beings like people and animals, and even something like Samehada, for example. When dealing with organisms however, prolonged contact is not required for the effects of the element to take hold – If even a small amount of parasitic fire is to come into direct contact with an opponent, the fire would immediately eat away at them (Devouring everything, including bones) beginning from the point of contact and spreading across the entire body as it feeds on their chakra. This is because of the fact that chakra is channeled through the chakra circulatory system, which is to chakra as the regular circulatory system is to blood.

    Though even the smallest amount of fire is capable of feeding off of chakra and spreading, this is not the case when confronted with other techniques. To emphasize what I mean, if a softball sized ball of Parasitic Flames are confronted with a technique like, say, Katon Zukkoku, the parasitic flames would lose, even though the element itself is strong against fire, it would be overwhelmed. Essentially if a weakness of the element happens to be considerably larger, it would be capable of properly combatting and overwhelming the flames.

    Besides boasting great offensive power, parasitic fire can also offer suitable defense. Besides its raw form, the element can also manifest as specific constructs and shapes that would eat away at anything that comes into contact with them, or in some cases, anything inside of them. When taking on these forms, the element acts more like lightning, as a semi-tangible black-purplish chakra. This specific or secondary release is generally more multifaceted because of its tangible nature and is in some cases capable of producing concussive force or impact along with maintaining the same basic abilities of its main release (Basically allowing for offensive and defensive measures to be taken).

    Usage Examples:
    (Mera-Kiseiton: Teisei no Bazu Konchuu) Parasitic Fire Release: Whisper of the Buzzing Gnats
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user releases a wave of raw Mera-Kiseiton chakra that propagates towards the user’s 10:00 – 2:00 o clock. This technique is not relatively strong, and could even be broken through with the use of a more powerful earth release technique, however, what it lacks in power it makes up for in speed. The wave moves fast enough that it’s capable of catching even a sage level fighter momentarily off guard.

    (Mera-Kiseiton: Abarekuru no Kigane Madomoazeru) Parasitic Fire: Rage of the Fearsome Mademoiselle
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Upon use, this technique initially manifests as a sphere composed of Mera-Kiseiton chakra in the palm of the hand. The shape of the sphere is than transformed to take on a makeshift shield like form, capable of protecting the entire upper portion of the body, and most of the lower body. The shield is capable of defending against a large number of incoming attacks, with the exception of most water and wind techniques. Any ordinary weapons or items are destroyed on contact because of the vibrations. Any technique of the opponents, with the exception of most wind and water style techniques, will be consumed by the shield – Though after being sucked in, the shield will ‘regurgitate’ the consumed chakra in the form of a ball of chakra with Mera-Kiseiton qualities, that moves at high speeds in the immediate direction of the opponent. The ball of chakra expelled would be proportionate to the size and power of the technique that was eaten.
    ~Can only be used five times per battle

    (Mera-Kiseiton: Shin'en Senman Garagarahebi) Parasitic Fire: Abysmal Myriad of Rattlesnakes
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: One begins by cupping their hands and gathering an ample amount of main release Mera-Kiseiton chakra between the palms. With an outward swing of the arms, the chakra will propagate from the hands, swiftly advancing towards the target. Because of the vibrations, the chakra will explode outwards making it seem as if the technique has little purpose – However, with the proper control, the user will condense the sub-sequent aura of chakra to take on the form of numerous serpents that swiftly slither towards the enemy along the ground, carving it as they go along. Like the Many hidden Shadow Snakes technique, the serpents work together in a cooperative attack. If confronted with the enemy’s ninjutsu, the serpents will immediately devour the chakra in order to split into more serpents, while maintaining the techniques original attack power, successfully forming a myriad of snakes that attack the opponent.
    ~Usable thrice per battle
    ~One is restricted from using any Parasitic Fire in the same or following turns.


    Conditions to be able to use it:Mastery of the Fire and Lightning elements; Precise chakra control.

    Is weak to:
    • Wind, as it’s intangible and has a loose structure, and is therefore difficult to attack using this elements high vibratory rate. Wind based custom elements.
    • Sound is also a weakness for basically the same reasoning behind wind; It is without a doubt completely intangible in the form of propagating sound waves.
    • Water, Liquid and Semi-Liquid elements; Incapable of large scale destruction, Large amounts of water are capable of overwhelming and disabling the element. .
    • Void, as its nothingness - the absence of energy, and therefore cannot be devoured by the parasitic flames.


    Is strong against:
    • Fire; Although fire is intangible, it is transient, and is therefore susceptible to Parasitic Fire.
    • Lightning and other lightning based elements; Lightning is an energy-based element – transient - and is therefore susceptible to Parasitic Fire.
    • Earth and other Solid Elements; Metallic elements, Wood, Kaguya Bones, Diamond, etc – Because earth is stagnant and solid, it is more resilient against the parasitic abilities of the element. However, the excessive vibrations present in the chakra would be more than enough to overwhelm solid elements.


    Co-creator:-

    Students I passed this custom element on too:? &?

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    ✗ Declined: The only thing you just used as proof is that elements can be combined. That's extremely shallow considering what you wrote after that. Secondly everything your wrote about vibrations is already a made into CE like Vibration Release and Quake Release, so I'm never going to allow that as it's just a straight copy. Thirdly do you now really assume you would get such a chakra absorption ability for an entire element without any kind of reason nor proof that it would be possible for it? Kisame had that with one jutsu, you just added it for an entire CE without any reason. On top of that it doesn't make sense, then it's something flame like, then it's supposed to vibrate?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Oni-Kitai
    Custom element English name: Astatine Release
    The element is based on: Earth, Wind, Water and Extreme Chakra Control. Using wind and water chakra one can control the temperature of the air, extracting certain molecules of gas at that specific temperature. Adding Earth chakra to it and using chakra control one can determine the state of those element (solid, liquid, or gas) thus creating Astatine Release in three different states.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In manga, the manga writers have displayed countless example of using gases as various ways of combat. Many were simply derived from basic air, and others variations of those. Basic wind element was one of them, where once can manipulate or create the wind. Using the same idea of gasses, Hanzou's Poisonous gasses were implanted in the body and were used in gaseous form to kill their opponents with the poison. In the same way, Sasuke was seen using fire and water to create steam, water's gaseous state and use it in the combat. Mist ninjas used extensive chakra control over water and wind to create the mist, and that is how Astatine release was born. Having extensive control over the basic element allowing one to extract a specific gas, Astatine, and use it at will.

    How it works: Astatine (/ˈæstətiːn/ as-tə-teen or /ˈæstətɪn/ as-tə-tin) – from the Greek astatos ("unstable") – is a chemical element as the result of the decay of certain heavier elements. Astatine is one of the Halogen gas that exists as a black solid naturally but can be extracted from air. Astatine can be used in combat by first using extensive chakra controls over two natural areas; land and air. Using Wind Chakra, one firsts separates the like gasses in the air, and then by adding Water Chakra he/she regulates the temperature of those gasses to extract Astatine from it. Earth element is then used to determine the state of Astatine, the more the earth chakra is added to it, the heavier it becomes, formally becoming a solid. Moderate amount of earth chakra will keep astatine in its liquid form while very less earth chakra will create the gaseous astatine's form. In the same way, earth chakra is used to extract solid Astatine from the earth and then adding water and wind determines the state it can exist to be used by a ninja.
    • Physical Properties:
      Astatine is a heavy, dull black element. It has a high melting and boiling point thus requires extensive chakra control to make it shift states.
    • Chemical Properties:
      Astatine is seen to react with numerous kind of things that exist around us to make changes to the environments. They have a wide range of bonding speciality which can be utilized by further level of chakra control over the element. Astatine reacts with poisonous gasses to form non-harmful bonds that can exists safely in the air. It has tendency to react with gasses such as fluorine, Carbon-monoxide, to form bonds which makes the poisonous element of the gasses useless. Moreover it can react with solids such as calcium, carbon, and crystalline elements to cause decay turning them into basic from of atoms or molecules and breaking the already existing bonds apart.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Astatine
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Halogen

    Usage Examples:
    [Oni-Kitai: Tekika] - Astatine Release: Drop
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After making a "Ram" hand-seal user releases astatine in the area around opponent, making it dark and harder to see. Heavy astatine than restricts opponent motion by binding them through pressure. It also makes it harder for them to breath.

    [Oni-Kitai: Hensei] - Astatine Release: Denature
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User stomps on ground releasing a sudden wave of earth and wind astatine which spreads further from the user spreading in the entire battlefield. The astatine in the air neutralizes any harmful impurities, turning them in basic element by making chemical bonds with them.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.

    [Oni-Kitai: Tengai Heru] - Astatine Release: Dome of Hell
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: User slams his hand together releasing astatine around him, which grows in a shape of dome covering long range, everything inside dome turns pitch black, but astatine is flourished with chakra providing the user with each and every detail. The technique causes immense pressure in the entire dome except the user's part making the earth to slowly sink, causing the rocks to break and fall into a pit, moreover making it extremely hard to breath.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Lack of air will result in suffocation in two turns.
    Note: The area around the user is kept unaffected.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Earth, Water, and Wind must be mastered to use Astatine Release.
    Is weak to:
    • Gaseous State:
    Water Release - Can be used to change temperature and dissolve astatine.
    Fire - Denatures the state of Astatine.
    • Solid or Liquid State:
    Lightning Release - Ionises Astatine
    Fire - Denatures the state of Astatine.

    Is strong against:
    • Gaseous State:
    Lightning Release - Astatine is an insulator, thus it cannot be effected by lightning.
    Earth Release - Strengthens Astatine due to it being able to extract more of it from the earth.
    Poisonous Elements - All poisons are neutralized by using astatine's property.
    Gasses - easily forms bonds with astatine.
    Crystal Elements - Causes them to decay.
    Calcium Release (Kaguya) - Astatine causes calcium to decay.

    • Solid or Liquid State:
    Water & Wind Release - are not able to break through Astatine in solid or liquid state, instead adds to the effect.
    Crystal Elements - Causes them to decay.
    Calcium Release (Kaguya) - Astatine causes calcium to decay.

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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    ✗ Declined: I've said this by now multiple times when checking CE, so I really don't understand why you still tried to post it, but I will never allow CE that can be used in solid, liquid and gas states =/ Pick one state and only one. Secondly where is your proof? You start explaining that there are gasses. Why? That doesn't even need any mentioning, you need to proof that Astatine can exist. Also I don't accept an explanation like that you just change the amount of chakra when you're making your CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau


    Custom element Japanese name: Akaruteishoku

    Custom element English name: Neon Release

    The element is based on: Lightning + Fire + Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): It has been shown shinobi are able to use their chakra as well as elemental chakra such as lightning, to give certain techniques illuminant looks, it has also been shown that shinobi can manipulate/create light themselves as seen in the fight between taka and the raikage, where the raikage's subordinate creates a pillar of light to blind sasuke, so it should be possible to create another type of illuminant property.

    How it works: The user uses Neon by directly releasing Neon chakra from their body, and once released it will move at an incredible speed. Neon tecniques can reach long ranges and have solid properties, as well as a big variation of colors depending on the technique being used.

    Usage Examples:
    (Akaruteishoku: Niji Tomoshibi) Neon Release: Rainbow Light
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The users releases their neon chakra around their body to reflect off of them and temporarily blinds their opponents from the many colorful and bright lights.
    -Can only be used 4 times per battle
    -Can only be used by neon users

    (Akaruteishoku: Naieon bimu) - Neon Release: Neon Beam
    Type: Attack/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user releases a beam of green glowing neon at a high speed capable of piercing with ease through human flesh aswell as lower ranked earth techniques.
    - Can only be used four times per battle.
    - Only useable by Neon users.

    (Akaruteishoku: Naieon Bakusen) - Neon Release: Explosive Beam
    Type: Attack/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user releases a compressed beam of yellow glowing neon at a high speed capable of piercing with ease through human flesh aswell as lower ranked earth techniques that when reaches contact with any solid surface it will release the compressed neon chakra and create a big explosion.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - Only useable by Neon users.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    The user must have Mastery over Lightning, Fire, and they must have extremely good Chakra control. Since Neon release needs Lighting, Fire and chakra, The user must master those elements in order to even make Neon release

    Is weak to: Strong Fire temperatures, Hardened earth techniques within reason, and strong wind forces, as well as mineral CE's such as diamond, and pearl release

    Is strong against: Earth techniques within reason, weaker Wind forces aswell as weaker fire forces, it is neutral to lightning release, and is strong against certain CE's up to some point like Blood release, Chocolate release, and Caramel Release.

    Co-creator: Kurotsuchi..

    Students I passed this custom element on too:

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    ✗ Declined: You barely explained and proved anything. Your proof is only that 'glow' exists in the Narutoverse, which is extremely shallow, and then suddenly you have apparently an element that is solid, can reach long range and travels at extreme speeds...what? You have not explained any element nor have even proven that it's possible. There's already a Light CE, so there you're stuck too. Glow on itself is useless as an element, at most you can blind people or cause epileptic seizures, not worthy of being a CE nor has it any 'substance'. Your strengths and weaknesses are also poorly explained.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Quote Originally Posted by Typhon View Post
    Note: Dropping Marshmallow Release if approved: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...&postcount=211


    Custom element japanese name: Raifusutorīmu-ton

    Custom element english name: Lifestream Release

    The element is based on: Water + Natural Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga we've seen that natural chakra can be combined with other elements to increase their power. Naruto was shown doing this with his Rasenshuriken which allowed it to be thrown. Natural chakra itself is the life essence of nature in the Narutoverse. It exists everywhere in the world including the atmosphere and terrain.

    Its been recently revealed that there are various methods to understanding, obtaining and harnessing natural chakra. Naruto and Jiraiya learn it from the toads, Kabuto learns it from the Snakes and Jugo's clan has the ability to absorb it. This shows that there isn't one secret way of harnessing nature's power, but rather various methods. It also shows that anyone can potentially use natural chakra as Naruto and Jiraiya don't possess any special ability in terms of recognizing natural chakra. When Naruto was trained to use natural energy Fukasaku explained that you need to remain perfectly still and learn to feel natural energy before you could actually use it. However, since they were in a rush they ended up using the toad oil to quicken this process.

    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/8
    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/9
    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/10

    This proves that natural energy is something everyone has the potential to use, and that it isn't restricted to toads or snakes or the Jugo clan. The training needed to feel it involves becoming motionless and requires one to stop disrupting the natural energy around them, essentially deep meditation. This shows that had time not been a factor, Naruto could have done the training without the use of toad oil, and it would have been much safer. This also shows that it was possible to feel natural energy without the assistance of toads, as long as one had knowledge of natural energy.

    How it works: For this element the user combines water with natural chakra to create an element called "Lifestream". Once the water is mixed with the natural chakra it takes on a bright greenish-white hue. During this process the user doesn't mix natural chakra with their body. As they're not trained to do this and aren't capable of entering a sage mode, this would turn their body to stone. Instead, their are three ways Lifestream can be created. They can mix natural chakra into a pre-existing water source, mix it into a water source they are creating, or mix it with water that's created in their body. This way the natural chakra is never absorbed into their body, but directly into the water instead.

    Once the water is mixed with the natural chakra it gains some affects. The power of natural chakra amplifies the effects of water, allowing it to extinguish even hotter flames or fire element variations. When a person becomes exposed to Lifestream, they can be turned to stone if exposed too long as natural chakra will seep into their bodies, though this takes some time to happen. The final affect of natural chakra is that when moving over earth it causes small vegetation (grass, shrubs, etc. nothing higher than your feet) to immediately grow. The user would have no control over this vegetation or its growth, as its just a side effect of the lifestream which would work as a potent fertilizer.

    A user of this element would be unable to use natural energy in any other way. The water is what allows them to harness natural energy's power as it works as a medium and container for the energy. Using natural energy on its own would be too difficult to control as the user hasn't undergone any sort of senjutsu training. Because water is a relatively stable matter and it can act as a sink for energy (heat, radiation, etc.) its able to take on the natural energy without becoming unstable. This is what allows the user to use natural energy despite its difficult nature.

    Usage Examples:

    (Raifusutorīmu-ton: ) - Lifestream Release: Fertile Soil
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user forms together three hand seals while creating lifestream in their stomach. Upon completion of the third hand seal the user sprays the lifestream onto earth or sand and causes a rapid growth of small plants such as grasses and flowers which create roots in the soil. This prevents the usage of that earth or sand by both the user and opponent.
    -Can be used three times per battle.
    -Prevents A-rank and below earth techniques.
    -Prevents S-rank and below sand techniques.



    (Raifusutorīmu-ton: ) - Lifestream Release: Gaea's Aneurysm
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user chains together a series of five hand seals while building up a large amount of lifestream under an opponent. This causes the ground to begin swelling until the pressure causes the earth to burst, releasing a huge burst of lifestream along with chunks of debris.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -No S-rank or above lifestream techniques the next turn.


    Idea behind its creation: The idea for this element comes from the Lifestream seen in Final Fantasy VII and its sequels/prequels. In Final Fantasy its less of a watery substance and more etheral, but it acts as the blood of the planet flowing in streams under the earth's surface. I thought this could be adapted to Naruto through the use of natural chakra, which is the life force of nature and the planet.

    Conditions to be able to use it: The user must be of at least Kage level, have mastered water and have strong chakra control. Anyone taught this element must undergo a period of training with either Typhon or ~Onizuka~. This training would involve deep meditation in order to gain the ability to feel natural energy, something needed in order to use it.

    Is weak to:

    Earth, Advanced Earth and Metallic CEs: Strong enough to defend against the element.

    Water: If Lifestream is mixed with enough water it will become diluted and lose its effect.

    Steel: Strong enough to defend against the element.

    Is strong against:

    Earth: Moving earth techniques attached to the ground can be halted due to the roots created as Lifestream passes over the earth.

    Sand: Lifestream can cause sand to become fertile and root growth will make it impossible to control.

    Fire, Advanced Fire, Fire CEs: As a more powerful water element, Lifestream is strong against fire and fire based elements.

    Co-creators (if any): ~Onizuka~

    Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: You can't drop CE, once approved you're stuck with them for life. It's like a marriage and they do say marriage is a vicious pit trap. Which is the reason as why I never really understood why a lot of people submit CE so nonchalantly just to have a CE.



    Resubmitting with me as Creator and Typhon as Co- creator this being as I was Co- Creator


    Custom element japanese name: Raifusutorīmu-ton

    Custom element english name: Lifestream Release

    The element is based on: Water + Natural Chakra

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga we've seen that natural chakra can be combined with other elements to increase their power. Naruto was shown doing this with his Rasenshuriken which allowed it to be thrown. Natural chakra itself is the life essence of nature in the Narutoverse. It exists everywhere in the world including the atmosphere and terrain.

    Its been recently revealed that there are various methods to understanding, obtaining and harnessing natural chakra. Naruto and Jiraiya learn it from the toads, Kabuto learns it from the Snakes and Jugo's clan has the ability to absorb it. This shows that there isn't one secret way of harnessing nature's power, but rather various methods. It also shows that anyone can potentially use natural chakra as Naruto and Jiraiya don't possess any special ability in terms of recognizing natural chakra. When Naruto was trained to use natural energy Fukasaku explained that you need to remain perfectly still and learn to feel natural energy before you could actually use it. However, since they were in a rush they ended up using the toad oil to quicken this process.

    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/8
    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/9
    http://www.narutobase.net/manga/Naruto/410/10

    This proves that natural energy is something everyone has the potential to use, and that it isn't restricted to toads or snakes or the Jugo clan. The training needed to feel it involves becoming motionless and requires one to stop disrupting the natural energy around them, essentially deep meditation. This shows that had time not been a factor, Naruto could have done the training without the use of toad oil, and it would have been much safer. This also shows that it was possible to feel natural energy without the assistance of toads, as long as one had knowledge of natural energy.

    How it works: For this element the user combines water with natural chakra to create an element called "Lifestream". Once the water is mixed with the natural chakra it takes on a bright greenish-white hue. During this process the user doesn't mix natural chakra with their body. As they're not trained to do this and aren't capable of entering a sage mode, this would turn their body to stone. Instead, their are three ways Lifestream can be created. They can mix natural chakra into a pre-existing water source, mix it into a water source they are creating, or mix it with water that's created in their body. This way the natural chakra is never absorbed into their body, but directly into the water instead.

    Once the water is mixed with the natural chakra it gains some affects. The power of natural chakra amplifies the effects of water, allowing it to extinguish even hotter flames or fire element variations. When a person becomes exposed to Lifestream, they can be turned to stone if exposed too long as natural chakra will seep into their bodies, though this takes some time to happen. The final affect of natural chakra is that when moving over earth it causes small vegetation (grass, shrubs, etc. nothing higher than your feet) to immediately grow. The user would have no control over this vegetation or its growth, as its just a side effect of the lifestream which would work as a potent fertilizer.

    A user of this element would be unable to use natural energy in any other way. The water is what allows them to harness natural energy's power as it works as a medium and container for the energy. Using natural energy on its own would be too difficult to control as the user hasn't undergone any sort of senjutsu training. Because water is a relatively stable matter and it can act as a sink for energy (heat, radiation, etc.) its able to take on the natural energy without becoming unstable. This is what allows the user to use natural energy despite its difficult nature.

    Usage Examples:

    (Raifusutorīmu-ton: ) - Lifestream Release: Fertile Soil
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user forms together three hand seals while creating lifestream in their stomach. Upon completion of the third hand seal the user sprays the lifestream onto earth or sand and causes a rapid growth of small plants such as grasses and flowers which create roots in the soil. This prevents the usage of that earth or sand by both the user and opponent.
    -Can be used three times per battle.
    -Prevents A-rank and below earth techniques.
    -Prevents S-rank and below sand techniques.



    (Raifusutorīmu-ton: ) - Lifestream Release: Gaea's Aneurysm
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user chains together a series of five hand seals while building up a large amount of lifestream under an opponent. This causes the ground to begin swelling until the pressure causes the earth to burst, releasing a huge burst of lifestream along with chunks of debris.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -No S-rank or above lifestream techniques the next turn.


    Idea behind its creation: The idea for this element comes from the Lifestream seen in Final Fantasy VII and its sequels/prequels. In Final Fantasy its less of a watery substance and more etheral, but it acts as the blood of the planet flowing in streams under the earth's surface. I thought this could be adapted to Naruto through the use of natural chakra, which is the life force of nature and the planet.

    Conditions to be able to use it: The user must be of at least Kage level, have mastered water and have strong chakra control. Anyone taught this element must undergo a period of training with either Typhon or Amaterasu... This training would involve deep meditation in order to gain the ability to feel natural energy, something needed in order to use it.

    Is weak to:

    Earth, Advanced Earth and Metallic CEs: Strong enough to defend against the element.

    Water: If Lifestream is mixed with enough water it will become diluted and lose its effect.

    Steel: Strong enough to defend against the element.

    Is strong against:

    Earth: Moving earth techniques attached to the ground can be halted due to the roots created as Lifestream passes over the earth.

    Sand: Lifestream can cause sand to become fertile and root growth will make it impossible to control.

    Fire, Advanced Fire, Fire CEs: As a more powerful water element, Lifestream is strong against fire and fire based elements.

    Co-creators (if any): Typhon

    Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Sorry, but I'm not going to accept CE based on natural energy. You can try it for a custom clan maybe, but not for a CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Seimeiton
    Custom element English name: Life Release
    The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Throughout the Naruto Manga the manipulation of life itself has been observed countless times. Some might restrict the manipulation of life to Medical Ninjutsu, but such a generalization does not only fail to separate Medical Ninjutsu from Life Manipulation, it fails to separate chakra-induced healing from the reversal of the aging process.

    Several techniques, such as One’s Own Life Reincarnation and the Outer Path: Samsara of Heavenly Life Technique proves the existence of life force in the Narutoverse as a vital part of every living being. It has been depicted as being separate from chakra, yet the two different energies seem to share many properties. It is worth noticing that both techniques, while involving matters of ‘healing’, are classified as Reincarnation Ninjutsu, which isn’t related to Medical Ninjutsu as the art of healing has little to do with life force.

    Where the two aforementioned techniques prove the existence of life force itself, the technique known as ‘Sage Art: Inorganic Reincarnation’ proves that life force can be infused into matter that is inorganic, as well as organic as shown in the aforementioned techniques. The technique also implies that life force can be infused into all inorganic matter, regardless of the donator’s chakra affinity.

    Just as Decay Release makes matter and energy transform by speeding up their natural age processes, Life Release transforms both matter and energy by doing the exact opposite. As Decay Release argues that everything has an end, Life Release argues that everything has a beginning, which can be reached again through life force and controlled use of chakra. It is not an abstract concept; merely a backwards walk on the linear path that is life, which results in recreation and rejuvenation.

    Now that we have established the existence and uses of life force, some critics might remark upon the fact that all examples listed requires either mastery of Senjutsu, the Rinnegan, Kinjutsu, Reincarnation Ninjutsu or a mixture of the listed arts. Thus, a critic could argue that one would need a special kind of chakra, or at least the ability to manipulate one’s Yin & Yang ratio, to utilize Life Manipulation. That notion, however, should be disproved shortly.

    The ultimate examples of sentience and life granted by normal chakra are found in the sword known as Samehada and the Kikaichū beetles used by the Aburame clan of Konohagakure no Sato.
    The Kikaichū beetles live their entire life feeding on chakra alone, which establishes chakra as a nutrient able to support life by itself, containing everything the beetles need to live healthily. Not only that, but it supports the notion that while many things react to the life-giving properties of pure Yang chakra, the normal ‘blend’ of Yin and Yang chakra is able to produce similar results.
    Where the Kikaichū are solid evidence, Samehada is the ultimate proof of Life Manipulation. The sword is not only sentient, being able to move, communicate and think freely, it also proves that chakra alone serves as a foundation for regeneration and growth, and that different life forms can be fused. It is the ultimate show of the life-giving properties of regular chakra.

    How it works:
    Life Release, in its fundamental form, is the complete opposite of Decay Release. Where Decay Release infects its target and increases the speed of the natural process of decay, Life Release envelops its target and recreates it by merging and binding it back together.
    Life Release mainly functions through excessive chakra control, but the elements of Water and Earth each play their part. Water represents the rejuvenating powers of life and the flowing, versatile strength of the mind. Earth represents the shifting and diverse powers of the inanimate and the ever-changing yet sturdy openness of the physical body.

    Though the manipulation of Life itself is extremely complicated, two pillars form the foundation of the art. While some exotic techniques might connect or cross these sturdy foundations, all have roots in one of the two.

    Restoration
    The first of the two pillars is the Restoration pillar, which covers the rejuvenating powers of life and chakra. Restoration works by increasing the amount of Water chakra in the mix of Water and Earth and focusing on drawing on the life-giving properties of Water with one’s own life force.
    Restoration is, contrary to popular beliefs, not a form of healing, but a restorative force of life itself. The Restoration pillar can restore the arm of a damaged Earth Golem, just as it can restore the power of a fireball by transforming its bi-products in a process of rejuvenation. Everything becomes a matter of transformation, in the sense that nothing is gained nor lost. This concept can be circumvented with the use of life force, which can be used as a source of energy to transform and use in almost all cases.
    The same concept applies to the body, where dead skin and matter related to the injury can be transformed, though life force can be used in conjunction with matter to cover what might’ve been lost forever.

    Alteration
    The last of the two pillars is the Alteration pillar, which covers the evolutionary powers of life and the process of transformation that relates to it. Alteration works by increasing the amount of both Water and Earth and focusing less on drawing life from the elements and more on molding and transforming life within the elements.
    Alteration is the art of altering and evolving life. Where the Restoration pillar is a cross between both the inanimate and the animate, Alteration is the art of granting the inanimate some properties of life and merging it with the living. The Alteration pillar can change the structure of most life-infused matter, even as it is rejuvenated, and merge it with other matter through an evolution-like transformation.

    Life Release appears as a bright, flame-like energy, but has been known to achieve a solid state.
    All chemical processes are, naturally, subjected to the laws and limits of the Narutoverse.

    Usage Examples:
    (Semeiton: Keikan) – Life Release: Crown of Thorns
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user forms a single handseal and exhales a thick stream of life chakra. The stream will restore whatever it touches, resulting in ruined terrain being rebuild. The stream, however, will also remove what has been created on top of the destruction, resulting in the removal of, for example, the residue of a fire.
    -Can only be used three (3) times per battle.


    (Semeiton: Fukkō) – Life Release: Reconstruction
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user claps his hands together and extends his life chakra outwards into a recently used technique. The infusion of life chakra will restore the technique to its full power and give the user some semblance of control over it. This can be used to restore a fireball, a surge of electricity, etcetera.
    -Can only be used four (4) times per battle.


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    Mastery of Earth and Water
    Great Chakra reserves
    Great Chakra control

    Is weak to:
    ~Water and most Custom Element variations of it
    ~Earth and most Custom Element variations of it
    ~Crystal Release
    ~Non-Radioactive Metals
    ~Void Release

    Is strong against:
    ~Fire Release and most Custom Element variations of it
    ~Lightning Release and most Custom Element variations of it
    ~Raw Chakra-based technique
    ~Energy-based Custom Elements
    ~Wood Release
    ~Most organic material and Custom Element variations of such - Caramel, Chocolate, Marshmallow, Mushrooms, Plant, Germ, etc (including the Shikotsumyaku Bones)
    ~Radioactive materials
    ~Dust Release
    ~Cannon Dark Release
    ~Scorch Release
    ~Storm Release

    Co-creator: Scorps
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: This is not an element and this is never going to be approved. You just gave a report of things that are already very well known and all of those are connected with each other as they originate from the same source. Your explanation itself just invalidated your CE, not to mention what your CE is and the entire explanation you gave above it are different things, making this element based on nothing. The only way this could work is when there would be an independent, universal power that could start regenerating things, but for that you didn't provide anything as that entire explanation you give invalidates your CE as that already exists. Otherwise it's the same as saying you create the fire element because people used it in the manga. Also Scorps didn't like it that he was listed there as CC without any notification about it.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau




    Custom element Japanese name: Suisoton
    Custom element English name: Hydrogen
    The element is based on: Water + Wind + Advanced Chakra Control

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Hydrogen is the most abundant chemical element in the Universe, constituting over 70% of the Universe's mass. The Narutoverse is almost identical to the real world in terms of its characteristics, and hence, that fact that Hydrogen is the most abundant chemical element should still remain true for the Narutoverse, proving that Hydrogen does exist in the Narutoverse, and in great abundance too. Hydrogen exists on Earth in water molecules. In the Narutoverse, ninja's have used water, and manipulated it as a tool for battle. Water consists of water molecules which contain hydrogen. Since ninja's have been able to manipulate water, it is therefore possible that ninja's can also manipulate the compounds inside the water molecule, such as hydrogen, for battle, having done so with water, which contains hydrogen as well.

    How it works: The formation of Hydrogen is simple, and can be done through many ways. The simplest, is of course, extracting hydrogen from the surroundings. With extreme precision and advanced chakra control, the user can manipulate lightning chakra, channelling it into substances which contain hydrogen molecules like water, and at a molecular level, extract the hydrogen molecules to form a source of hydrogen for use in battle.

    The second way of using Hydrogen is through producing it and releasing it from one's body. As hydrogen exists in water molecules, through molding Water chakra, which should contain hydrogen, one can use Raiton chakra to extract the Hydrogen molecules from the water chakra itself, with extreme chakra control. The hydrogen molecules extracted exist in chakra form, having been extracted from Water chakra, creating a substance dubbed "Hydrogen chakra". Hydrogen chakra can thereupon be released from one's body, and form Hydrogen to be used in battle.

    Usage Examples:

    (Raiton: Suiso Tekishutsu ) - Lightning Style: Hydrogen Extraction
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40 (For small source) / 60 (For large source)
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The technique is based off of the user utilizing their lighting chakra, and inserting it into substance that contains Hydrogen molecules. As the chakra is successfully inserted into the substance, by utilizing their advance chakra control, the user can extract the Hydrogen molecules from the substance, creating a source of Hydrogen used for Hydrogen techniques.

    -Can be used only five times per battle
    -The Hydrogen molecules are completely harmless
    -The source size varies, a large source would allow the user to perform up to three Hydrogen techniques, where as a small source will allow to perform up to one.
    -Can be used to perform Hydrogen Techniques up to Forbidden Rank
    -Can only be used by Toshiro


    (Suisoton: Suiso Bakuhatsu ) - Hydrogen Style: Hydrogen Explosion
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: D - S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 10 - 40
    Damage: 10 - 80
    Description: The technique is based off of the user utilizing their chakra, and inserting it into substance that contains Hydrogen molecules. As the chakra is successfully inserted into the substance, by utilizing their advance chakra control, the user beaks down the Hydrogen atoms, before re-infusing it with one, and another. As they are re-infused back together, it causes the neutrons to shoot off, detonating the Hydrogen, causing it to explode

    -Explosion size varies on the size of the technique, or substance that contains Hydrogen.
    -Can only be used by Toshiro


    (Suisoton: Suiso utsuwa ) - Hydrogen Style: Hydrogen Container
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: n/a
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Thr user summons a gourd made of titanium, which contains a large amount of harmless Hydrogen molecules. The gourd is strapped onto the users back, allowing them to carry it around. By focusing chakra into the gourds lid, the user can open the lid, releasing Hydrogen from it, allowing the user to perform Hydrogen techniques during the duration of the battle.

    - Can only be summoned once per battle
    - The gourd is lightwieght, not affecting the users movements
    - The Hydrogen inside the gourd, allows the user to perform up to five Hydrogen techniques
    - Can only be used by Toshiro


    (Suisoton: Suiso kiri ) - Hydrogen Style: Hydrogen Mist
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40 (+10 for every turn)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The technique is based off of the user utilizing their chakra within their body, forming Hydrogen molecules. The user then opens their mouth, releasing the Hydrogen molecules, forming a mist which covers the entire field. The mist has special properties, which removes Hydrogen molecules from any water it comes into contact with, making water techniques lose half of their power.

    - Can only be used one per battle
    - Last for five turns
    - All water techniques are reduced half their rank
    - Can only be used by Toshiro


    (Suisoton: Suiso kaatsu suru ) - Hydrogen Style: Hydrogen Pressurize
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user manipulates the chakra inside the Hydrogen molecules currently present on the battlefield, compressing the molecules, making it more concentrated. This creates "Pressurized Hydrogen", which is more combustible and flammable in comparison with normal Hydrogen. Pressurized Hydrogen reacts violently with the slightest spark or flame, generating spontaneous explosions in the air. This makes Pressurized Hydrogen highly risky, as the user is susceptible to the explosions if it is set off close to him.

    - Once the Hydrogen is Pressurized, it stays pressurized for that turn only
    - Only usable four times per battle
    - Can only be used by Toshiro


    Conditions to be able to use it:
    • Mastery over Water Release
    • Mastery over Wind Release
    • Must be Kage Rank
    • Advance Chakra Control


    Is weak to:
    • Fire - A small flame can make it combust, and lose control (Pressurized Hydrogen only, otherwise neutral)
    • Lightning - A spark can make it combust, and lose control (Pressurized Hydrogen only, otherwise neutral)
    • Wind - A strong gust of wind can blow the Hydrogen gas away


    Is strong against:
    • Water - It can be used as a source for Hydrogen
    • Metals - The blast would destroy the metal, while making it radioactive


    Co-creator: Toshiro
    Students I passed this custom element on to: None


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    ✗ Declined: For starters you are already getting close to the already existing CE of Liquid Hydrogen on some parts. Secondly I find a useless element. It's not strong against metals, you based that on its ability to explode when in contact with a fire or something, however that's not something you take into account as that's not part of the element itself. Water isn't a strength either as Hydrogen isn't going to automatically take hydrogen molecules from water as far as I know. As it's a gas water would go right through it, possibly even absorbing the hydrogen. So in the end this is nothing more than an explosive gas and for that there's already a canon jutsu.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Taruririsu
    Custom element English name: Asphalt Release
    The element is based on: In the series One Piece, there is a character called Magellan who can create a poison in the form of a slime that can be shaped into near-sentient beings. I thought it was cool and wanted to have something like it in the RP as a CE but couldn't find the right way to integrate it in. Then, I saw Aikanu, another character in One Piece. He has the power to create magma. I thought this was cool nd began to focus on the "liquid" aspect of elements. Then, I remembered Blackbeard of One Piece, who can pull things, which brought up tar in my mind since it can "pull" objects, which, in reality, is just it being very sticky, where a trapped object can't escape. After brainstorming with Kamui, the idea of Asphalt Release came to mind.
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Asphalt occurs naturally all over the planet Earth, often referred to as "tar pits", despite being considerably different from tar.
    How it works: The user will focus Earth chakra and regular chakra together. The user will have his regular chakra materialize into a solid, sticky substance. The user will then use his Earth chakra to "house" the substance and give it a physical, material form, giving birth to asphalt. Asphalt can be combined with fire chakra. The Fire chakra will "ignite" or heat up the chakra greatly, but not to the point where it becomes hard. The asphalt then has a faint glow and.can cause severe burns. The heat combined with the asphalt's extreme stickiness can be a deadly combination.

    The user, using the Earth housing effect, can create asphalt on and within Earth-based surfaces and transform some Earth-based substances into Asphalt.

    Naturally, it can be used to simply hold the opponent in place. The user can create creatures, such as snakes or monsters, out of the asphalt and use them to cling to the opponent.

    Asphalt can also "swallow". It can be applied to the ground where it can act like quicksand or a sink hole. Due to it's thickness, an object can be buried deep in it, effectively turning them to "nothingness".
    Usage Examples:

    (Taruririsu: Asufaruto no sakusei) Asphalt Release: Asphalt Creation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will focus chakra into the Earth or through their body and transform it into Asphalt. The Asphalt can then be used to perform Asphalt techniques that require a source. The user can freely manipulate the Asphalt based on his imagination, thus rendering any Asphalt the user creates ineffective in himself.


    (Taruririsu: Asufaruto no wana) Asphalt Release: Asphalt Trap
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra points: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will create a patch of Asphalt under the opponents. The Asphalt stretches underground, creating a pocket under the opponents. The Asphalt will then drag all objects caught in the Asphalt into the pocket,.trapping them. Living objects will die from suffocation.




    Conditions to be able to use it: Great chakra control and mastery of Earth and Fire up to A-rank.
    Is weak to:
    Fire: Extreme heat(A-rank and above) can harden asphalt and make it hard, which defeats it's purpose.

    Lightning: Lightning can render asphalt into a liquid form that is too runny and render it incapable of being used.
    Is strong against:
    Water: Asphalt is water-proof and can repel water.

    Wind: Wind would just spread it.

    Earth: It can smother and consume Earth.
    Co-creator: Kamui
    Students I passed this custom element on too: None

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    ✗ Declined: Someone is already trying to submit Tar Release and Asphalt also falls under the Petroleum CE.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Nobaton
    Custom element English name: Supernova Release
    The element is based on: Fire | Lightning | Wind | Chakra
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Introduction..

    This element is possible within the context of the manga for many reasons, so first I will explain how I first came to discovering this element. I was watching several techniques which were: Dust Release, Explosion Release, and Scorch Release. Explosion release would utilize the users explosive chakra allowing them to blow up things they came into contact with or by the use of clay. Scorch release creates chakra that is capable of heating up an enemy to the point where all the liquid inside their body evaporates, killing the victim and leaving them a desiccated corpse. Meanwhile Dust Release maniulates simultaneous uses of Earth, Wind, and Fire to create an advanced nature Kekkei Tota that appears to be a 3 dimensional cube and allows the user to manipulate molecules, giving them the ability to disintegrate anything on a molecular level within the boundaries of the three-dimensional form.

    Supernovas are a stellar explosion that is more energetic than a nova. Supernovae are extremely luminous and cause a burst of radiation that often briefly outshines an entire galaxy, before fading from view over several weeks or months. During this short interval a supernova can radiate as much energy as the Sun is expected to emit over its entire life span. The explosion expels much or all of a stars material, driving a shock wave into the surrounding areas. This shock wave sweeps up an expanding shell of gas and dust called a supernova remnant.

    Nova is what appears to be a very bright new star shining in the celestial sphere; the prefix "super-" distinguishes supernovae from ordinary novae, which also involve a star increasing in brightness, though to a lesser extent and through a different mechanism. Several types of supernovae exist. Types I and II can be triggered in one of two ways, either turning off or suddenly turning on the production of energy through nuclear fusion. After the core of an aging massive star ceases generating energy from nuclear fusion, it may undergo sudden gravitational collapse into a neutron star or black hole, releasing gravitational potential energy that heats and expels the star's outer layers. Alternatively a white dwarf star may accumulate sufficient material from a stellar companion (either through accretion or via a merger) to raise its core temperature enough to ignite carbon fusion, at which point it undergoes runaway nuclear fusion, completely disrupting it. Stellar cores whose furnaces have permanently gone out collapse when their masses exceed the Chandrasekhar limit, while accreting white dwarfs ignite as they approach this limit (roughly 1.38 times the solar mass). White dwarfs are also subject to a different, much smaller type of thermonuclear explosion fueled by hydrogen on their surfaces called a nova. Solitary stars (such as the Sun) with a mass below approximately 9 solar masses, evolve into white dwarfs without ever becoming supernovae.

    Furthermore, the expanding shock waves from supernova explosions can trigger the formation of new stars.

    Overall Point..


    Stars exist in the Narutoverse, so the collapse of a star and black holes exist too. Furthermore, Rokus Dark release exists from manipulating those forces in space and creating energy from it as well as void, & solar wind. So mine should be possible as well.

    Not only that but in the Naruto movie, Guardians of the Crescent Moon, Naruto combines the Rasengan with the rays of a crescent moon to engulf it in a blinding white light. This forms a white crescent moon with a star in the Rasengan, making the attack larger and more powerful.

    Crescent Moon Rasengan

    How it works:

    Supernova release works in various fashions. One is the manner in which Dust Release is formed; The user will form a of blinding light and energy in his palm(s) which is the combination of the chakra natures and forcibly expel the contained energy particles in a blast resulting in energy baems with shockwaves and implosive reactions to the surroundings. It generates alot of heat and energy similar to Scorch Release and can come in various colors of the light spectrum as stars can be any color. The other manner would be channeling chakras in the surroundings to form various techniques like how must elements are used now.

    Usage Examples:

    Nobaton: Noba No Jutsu | Supernova Release: Supernova Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will create pulsating blasts, shields and weapons made out of nova energy.

    Note: Can only be used 4x per battle

    Nobaton: Noba Sōsa | Supernove Release: Nova Manipulation
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user can focus, channeling nova energy within his body forming blue nova energy to emanate around limbs and into weapons. This allows increased cutting and destruction power through the use of punches, kicks etc. Releasing small bursts of burning nova particles with every attack.

    Note: Can be used up to 4x per battle


    Nobaton: Shin Gasu | Supernova Release: Nova Gas
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: Channeling nova energy the user can summon supernova gas to erupt from the ground similar to how steam rises from a geyser and cover an affected area causing opponents to feel disorientated from inhalation and the skin will start to burn severely.

    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
    Note: Gas can be released from users mouth
    Note: No Supernova release for one turn.

    Nobaton: Noba No Nami | Supernova Release: Wave of Nova
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user claps his hands together, summoning a purplish wave of nova particle energy from the sky to come crashing down to the ground creating shockwaves in the air before impact leaving behind burning nova particles and a massive fissure in the battlefield.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: The wave comes down like a wide waterfall that spans several meters
    Note: No Supernova release for one turn


    Nobaton: Ryūkō No Hakai | Supernova Release: Destruction Of The Prevalent Star
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After making a hanseal the user will create a compressed spherical object of supernova energy and release it towards the opponent resulting in a beam of pulsating energy that also sends shockwaves outwards leveling its surroundings and disorienting opponent(s). It leaves behind remnants of nova particles behind that can burn the opponent(s) within range.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastered Fire | Lightning | Wind
    Is weak to: Strong Water and strong lightning
    Is strong against: Any other interstellar elements techniques | All Earth based & Fire based elements | Dust Release | Heat Based Techniques
    Co-creator: Toku
    Students I passed this custom element on too:? & ?

    Note:
    I dont want this element to be too OP, so I left out the radioactivity from the submission and replaced it with "burns" and other things that may not get it approved for being too strong and avoidance of abuse. I just want a good & unique energy based element without unnecessary benefits.


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    ✗ Declined: That you have proven that stars exist? Yes, that's extremely easy. That you have proven you can actually make such a CE, not in the least, you have given zero proof that you are actually able to create such a thing. What you are saying is that you can actually create an entire star as an element, which is the same like saying you create the planet earth element, which in fact consists of earth, water and whatnot. Novastars consist of several things and then you just assume you can make it without even explaining how. Also absolutely never use other people's elements as proof for your own CE.


    Custom element Japanese name: Nobaton
    Custom element English name: Supernova Release
    The element is based on: Fire | Lightning | Wind | Chakra
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
    Introduction..

    This element is possible within the context of the manga for many reasons, so first I will explain how I first came to discovering this element. I was watching several techniques which were: Dust Release, Explosion Release, and Scorch Release. Explosion release would utilize the users explosive chakra allowing them to blow up things they came into contact with or by the use of clay. Scorch release creates chakra that is capable of heating up an enemy to the point where all the liquid inside their body evaporates, killing the victim and leaving them a desiccated corpse. Meanwhile Dust Release maniulates simultaneous uses of Earth, Wind, and Fire to create an advanced nature Kekkei Tota that appears to be a 3 dimensional cube and allows the user to manipulate molecules, giving them the ability to disintegrate anything on a molecular level within the boundaries of the three-dimensional form.

    Supernovas are a stellar explosion that is more energetic than a nova. Supernovae are extremely luminous and cause a burst of radiation that often briefly outshines an entire galaxy, before fading from view over several weeks or months. During this short interval a supernova can radiate as much energy as the Sun is expected to emit over its entire life span. The explosion expels much or all of a stars material, driving a shock wave into the surrounding areas. This shock wave sweeps up an expanding shell of gas and dust called a supernova remnant. Supernova are also candles or are starters of pulsar wind nebulas.

    Nova is what appears to be a very bright new star shining in the celestial sphere; the prefix "super-" distinguishes supernovae from ordinary novae, which also involve a star increasing in brightness, though to a lesser extent and through a different mechanism. Several types of supernovae exist. Types I and II can be triggered in one of two ways, either turning off or suddenly turning on the production of energy through nuclear fusion. After the core of an aging massive star ceases generating energy from nuclear fusion, it may undergo sudden gravitational collapse into a neutron star or black hole, releasing gravitational potential energy that heats and expels the star's outer layers. Alternatively a white dwarf star may accumulate sufficient material from a stellar companion (either through accretion or via a merger) to raise its core temperature enough to ignite carbon fusion, at which point it undergoes runaway nuclear fusion, completely disrupting it. Stellar cores whose furnaces have permanently gone out collapse when their masses exceed the Chandrasekhar limit, while accreting white dwarfs ignite as they approach this limit (roughly 1.38 times the solar mass). White dwarfs are also subject to a different, much smaller type of thermonuclear explosion fueled by hydrogen on their surfaces called a nova. Solitary stars (such as the Sun) with a mass below approximately 9 solar masses, evolve into white dwarfs without ever becoming supernovae.

    Furthermore, the expanding shock waves from supernova explosions can trigger the formation of new stars.

    Overall Point..


    Stars exist in the Narutoverse, so the collapse of a star and black holes exist too. Supernovas are developed from the collapse of an aging star. The white dwarf star is a proper example of a star that collapses and turns into a supernova, but this is also what helps the user better understand how to create such a complex element. A star that's comparable to a white dwarfs mass is the Sun. Its luminosity comes from the emissions of its contained thermal energy.

    What is it entirely made up of, and how does one obtain these things you may ask? Well for one, the universe's baryonic mass consist of 75% Hydrogen, as well as most of the stars in the universe and a remaining bit of a star such as the sun is lastly 25% made up of helium, oxygen, carbon, neon and iron, and others. These elements can be found in the atmosphere of earth as well as in the air. By combining these elements through the use of channeling wind element obtaining the elements oxygen, helium and Hydrogen are necessary and are a given. Performing Supernova techniques aren't on a large scale as a real supernova explosion so the amount needed are proportioned well so that the user doesnt need to gather that much in the atmosphere around him. Once those are obtained, they are then heated up and compressed using fire chakra creating a stored thermal energy which gives its a luminous aura(these temperatures are extremely high). Now in order to induce and speed up the collapse of the created compressed energy, lightning chakra is then added to the mix which substitutes as an alternative for the explanation of the nuclear fusion reaction needed to create a proton proton reaction which is basically when all the gathered hydrogen converts into more helium. This is done by high temperatures and high volumes of kinetic energy given off by not only the fire but adding in the lightning chakra.

    This reaction collapses the contained energy and becomes a supernova element and thus makes it explode as one.


    Not only that but in the Naruto movie, Guardians of the Crescent Moon, Naruto combines the Rasengan with the rays of a crescent moon to engulf it in a blinding white light. This forms a white crescent moon with a star in the Rasengan, making the attack larger and more powerful.

    Crescent Moon Rasengan

    How it works:

    Supernova release works in various fashions. One is the manner in which Dust Release is formed; The user will form a of blinding light and energy in his palm(s) which is the combination of the chakra natures and forcibly expel the contained energy particles in a blast resulting in energy beams with shockwaves and implosive reactions to the surroundings. It generates alot of heat and energy similar to Scorch Release and can come in various colors of the light spectrum as stars can be any color. The other manner would be channeling chakras in the surroundings to form various techniques like how must elements are used now. When it comes into contact with water alone it can evaporate almost instantly unless there are high volumes of it, but that alone is not enough to get rid of the remaining heat conducted into the air and atmosphere by supernova. When it comes into contact with earth based techniques theyre broken down and incinerated from its pulsed shockwaves of energy.

    Usage Examples:

    Nobaton: Kaze Seiun | Supernova Release: Wind Nebula
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses his supernova chakra in the air to amplify the air to form a wind pulsar, being able to control the wind created to attack the opponent along with it's high temperature levels of heat that cause skin to burn on contact causing and can cause the oxygen short range from the opponent to burn up rapidly if not escaped soon

    Note: Can only be used once a match

    Nobaton: Noba No Jutsu | Supernova Release: Supernova Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will create pulsating blasts, shields and weapons made out of nova energy.

    Note: Can only be used 4x per battle

    Nobaton: Ruminasu Ignition| Supernova Release: Luminous Ignition
    Rank B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user snaps his fingers creating a luminous light of supernova energy. Its temperatures are controlled by the amount of chakra the user put inside of it, creating a luminous light or a dull one. This can be used as a source for supernova techniques.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle


    Nobaton: Noba Sōsa | Supernove Release: Nova Manipulation
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user can focus, channeling nova energy within his body forming blue nova energy to emanate around limbs and into weapons. This allows increased cutting and destruction power through the use of punches, kicks etc. Releasing small bursts of burning nova particles with every attack.

    Note: Can be used up to 4x per battle


    Nobaton: Shin Gasu | Supernova Release: Nova Gas
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: Channeling nova energy the user can summon supernova gas to erupt from the ground similar to how steam rises from a geyser and cover an affected area causing opponents to feel disorientated from inhalation and the skin will start to burn severely.

    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
    Note: Gas can be released from users mouth
    Note: No Supernova release for one turn.

    Nobaton: Noba No Nami | Supernova Release: Wave of Nova
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user claps his hands together, summoning a purplish wave of nova particle energy from the sky to come crashing down to the ground creating shockwaves in the air before impact leaving behind burning nova particles and a massive fissure in the battlefield.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: The wave comes down like a wide waterfall that spans several meters
    Note: No Supernova release for one turn


    Nobaton: Ryūkō No Hakai | Supernova Release: Destruction Of The Prevalent Star
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After making a hanseal the user will create a compressed spherical object of supernova energy and release it towards the opponent resulting in a beam of pulsating energy that also sends shockwaves outwards leveling its surroundings and disorienting opponent(s). It leaves behind remnants of nova particles behind that can burn the opponent(s) within range.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastered Fire | Lightning | Wind
    Is weak to: Strong Water & Wind Combos cancel out the heat carried by the nova and its destructive path. Strong vacuum Pressure.

    Neutral: Atmospheric Pressure

    Is strong against:Solar Wind (Creates Solar Winds of its own)| Carbon | Incinerates Earth based elements | Dust Release | Amplified by other heat based attacks. Decay Release (A Supernova would have to undergo a massive radioactive/particle decay in order to stop its velocity and massive levels of heat).

    Co-creator: ?
    Students I passed this custom element on too:? & ?


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    I removed giving other peoples credit to making my own, and I bolded all the portions explaining how my element and its complexity is created.

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    ✗ Declined: Please understand I'm not going to approve this.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Oni-Kitai
    Custom element English name: Astatine Release
    The element is based on: Earth, Wind, Water and Extreme Chakra Control. Using wind and water chakra one can control the temperature of the air, extracting certain molecules of gas at that specific temperature. Adding Earth chakra to it and using chakra control one can determine the state of those element (solid, liquid, or gas) thus creating Astatine Release in three different states.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In manga, the manga writers have displayed countless example of using gases as various ways of combat. Many were simply derived from basic air, and others variations of those. Basic wind element was one of them, where once can manipulate or create the wind. Using the same idea of gasses, Hanzou's Poisonous gasses were implanted in the body and were used in gaseous form to kill their opponents with the poison. In the same way, Sasuke was seen using fire and water to create steam, water's gaseous state and use it in the combat. Mist ninjas used extensive chakra control over water and wind to create the mist, and that is how Astatine release was born. Having extensive control over the basic element allowing one to extract a specific gas, Astatine, and use it at will.

    How it works: Astatine (/ˈæstətiːn/ as-tə-teen or /ˈæstətɪn/ as-tə-tin) – from the Greek astatos ("unstable") – is a chemical element as the result of the decay of certain heavier elements. Astatine is one of the Halogen gas that exists as a black solid naturally but can be extracted from air. Astatine can be used in combat by first using extensive chakra controls over two natural areas; land and air. Using Wind Chakra, one firsts separates the like gasses in the air, and then by adding Water Chakra he/she regulates the temperature of those gasses to extract Astatine from it. Earth element is then used to determine the state of Astatine, the more the earth chakra is added to it, the heavier it becomes, formally becoming a solid. Moderate amount of earth chakra will keep astatine in its liquid form while very less earth chakra will create the gaseous astatine's form. In the same way, earth chakra is used to extract solid Astatine from the earth and then adding water and wind determines the state it can exist to be used by a ninja.
    • Physical Properties:
      Astatine is a heavy, dull black element. It has a high melting and boiling point thus requires extensive chakra control to make it shift states.
    • Chemical Properties:
      Astatine is seen to react with numerous kind of things that exist around us to make changes to the environments. They have a wide range of bonding speciality which can be utilized by further level of chakra control over the element. Astatine reacts with poisonous gasses to form non-harmful bonds that can exists safely in the air. It has tendency to react with gasses such as fluorine, Carbon-monoxide, to form bonds which makes the poisonous element of the gasses useless. Moreover it can react with solids such as calcium, carbon, and crystalline elements to cause decay turning them into basic from of atoms or molecules and breaking the already existing bonds apart.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Astatine
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Halogen

    Usage Examples:
    [Oni-Kitai: Tekika] - Astatine Release: Drop
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After making a "Ram" hand-seal user releases astatine in the area around opponent, making it dark and harder to see. Heavy astatine than restricts opponent motion by binding them through pressure. It also makes it harder for them to breath.

    [Oni-Kitai: Hensei] - Astatine Release: Denature
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User stomps on ground releasing a sudden wave of earth and wind astatine which spreads further from the user spreading in the entire battlefield. The astatine in the air neutralizes any harmful impurities, turning them in basic element by making chemical bonds with them.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.

    [Oni-Kitai: Tengai Heru] - Astatine Release: Dome of Hell
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: User slams his hand together releasing astatine around him, which grows in a shape of dome covering long range, everything inside dome turns pitch black, but astatine is flourished with chakra providing the user with each and every detail. The technique causes immense pressure in the entire dome except the user's part making the earth to slowly sink, causing the rocks to break and fall into a pit, moreover making it extremely hard to breath.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Lack of air will result in suffocation in two turns.
    Note: The area around the user is kept unaffected.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Earth, Water, and Wind must be mastered to use Astatine Release.
    Is weak to:
    • Gaseous State:
    Water Release - Can be used to change temperature and dissolve astatine.
    Fire - Denatures the state of Astatine.
    • Solid or Liquid State:
    Lightning Release - Ionises Astatine
    Fire - Denatures the state of Astatine.

    Is strong against:
    • Gaseous State:
    Lightning Release - Astatine is an insulator, thus it cannot be effected by lightning.
    Earth Release - Strengthens Astatine due to it being able to extract more of it from the earth.
    Poisonous Elements - All poisons are neutralized by using astatine's property.
    Gasses - easily forms bonds with astatine.
    Crystal Elements - Causes them to decay.
    Calcium Release (Kaguya) - Astatine causes calcium to decay.

    • Solid or Liquid State:
    Water & Wind Release - are not able to break through Astatine in solid or liquid state, instead adds to the effect.
    Crystal Elements - Causes them to decay.
    Calcium Release (Kaguya) - Astatine causes calcium to decay.

    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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    ✗ Declined: I've said this by now multiple times when checking CE, so I really don't understand why you still tried to post it, but I will never allow CE that can be used in solid, liquid and gas states =/ Pick one state and only one. Secondly where is your proof? You start explaining that there are gasses. Why? That doesn't even need any mentioning, you need to proof that Astatine can exist. Also I don't accept an explanation like that you just change the amount of chakra when you're making your CE.
    Custom element Japanese name: Oni-Kitai
    Custom element English name: Astatine Release
    The element is based on: Earth, Wind, Water and Extreme Chakra Control. Using wind and water chakra one can control the temperature of the air, extracting certain molecules of gas at that specific temperature. Adding Earth chakra to it and using chakra control one can determine the density and pressure of the gaseous molecules. Astatine release only exists in gaseous form.

    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Astatine along with other halogen gasses are found in air, and earth's crest. It is the element that is only found on planet earth. The story of Naruto even with the fiction touch sets on the basic principles of the world we live in. Colored gasses were seen being extracted and used in Orochimaru's labs, Hanzou's poisonous stomach bag, and in many other various incidents. These gasses were never named in use they were just shown in the manga and anime as a mean of experiments. Astatine existing in the air and earth is just a proof enough to say that the element is possible in not only Naruto manga but others too. Not only that, Astatine is formed by the decay of natural elements that exists abundantly around humans, and in the case of manga, ninjas. These natural elements include but are not limited to Nitrogen, which constitutes the highest percentage of air that we breath in. Proof of Astatine existence can also be put into words by the mention of other similar gasses normally used but not pronounced as an element; Smoke, steam, poisonous gasses etc. One can easily and abundantly extract or create astatine using the elements of earth, wind and water. In manga context; Earth can be used to extract the specific astatine molecules in earth caused by matter decay, in air by using wind to cause the decay of naturally present molecules and making the gas, and adding water to those extractions to make the element exist in its gaseous form as water chakra can be used to regulate temperatures.

    How it works: Astatine (/ˈæstətiːn/ as-tə-teen or /ˈæstətɪn/ as-tə-tin) – from the Greek astatos ("unstable") – is a chemical element as the result of the decay of certain heavier elements. Astatine is one of the Halogen gas that exists as a black solid naturally but can be extracted from air. Astatine can be used in combat by first using extensive chakra controls over two natural areas; land and air. Using Wind Chakra, one firsts separates the like gasses in the air, and then by adding Water Chakra he/she regulates the temperature of those gasses to extract Astatine from it. Earth element determines the density of astatine in the given pressure. It also helps to extract astatine molecules from the earth and combining it with the one present in air to increase its abundance. It can ONLY be manipulated and used in gaseous form.

    • Physical Properties:
      Astatine is a heavy, dull black element. It has a high melting and boiling point thus requires extensive water chakra control to keep it in gaseous state for the element to be actually used.
    • Chemical Properties:
      Astatine is seen to react with numerous kind of things that exist around us to make changes to the environments. They have a wide range of bonding speciality which can be utilized by further level of chakra control over the element. Astatine reacts with poisonous gasses to form non-harmful bonds that can exists safely in the air. It has tendency to react with gasses such as fluorine, Carbon-monoxide, to form bonds which makes the poisonous element of the gasses useless. Moreover it can react with solids such as calcium, carbon, and crystalline elements to cause decay turning them into basic from of atoms or molecules and breaking the already existing bonds apart.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Astatine
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Halogen

    Usage Examples:
    [Oni-Kitai: Tekika] - Astatine Release: Drop
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After making a "Ram" hand-seal user releases astatine in the area around opponent, making it dark and harder to see. Heavy astatine than restricts opponent motion by binding them through pressure. It also makes it harder for them to breath.

    [Oni-Kitai: Hensei] - Astatine Release: Denature
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User stomps on ground releasing a sudden wave of astatine which spreads further from the user spreading in the entire battlefield. The astatine in the air neutralizes any harmful impurities, turning them in basic element by making chemical bonds with them.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.

    [Oni-Kitai: Tengai Heru] - Astatine Release: Dome of Hell
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: User slams his hand together releasing astatine around him, which grows in a shape of dome covering long range, everything inside dome turns pitch black, but astatine is flourished with chakra providing the user with each and every detail. The technique causes immense pressure in the entire dome except the user's part making the earth to slowly sink, causing the rocks to break and fall into a pit, moreover making it extremely hard to breath.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Lack of air will result in suffocation in two turns.
    Note: The area around the user is kept unaffected.


    Conditions to be able to use it: Earth, Water, and Wind must be mastered to use Astatine Release.
    Is weak to:
    Water Release - Can be used to dissolve astatine.
    Fire - Denatures the state of Astatine.

    Is strong against:
    Lightning Release - Astatine is an insulator, thus it cannot be effected by lightning.
    Earth & Dust Release - Strengthens Astatine due to it being able to extract more of it.
    Poisonous Elements - All poisons are neutralized by using astatine's property.
    Gasses - easily forms bonds with astatine.
    Crystal Elements & Wood Release - Causes them to decay.
    Calcium Release (Kaguya) or Clay - Astatine causes them to decay.


    Co-creator: N/A
    Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A



    > Removed multiple states, changed that only to gaseous form.
    > Edited the use of earth chakra to just control the pressure and help in extraction.
    > Fixed how it is possible in manga context.

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    ✗ Declined: The problem with submitting chemicals straight from the elemental table is that most of the time the submitters themselves don't really fully understand the thing they submitted as most chemicals are extremely complex things. The amount of astatine that can be found on Earth is not even enough to fill a small bottle. The amount is so low that it might as well be disregarded, so I find the argument of "it's in our earth, so also in Naruto" very redundant, let alone saying that it can strengthen itself with Earth by extracting it, not even mentioning Dust of which we don't know what kind of substance it now exactly is. I have also my sincere doubts about it just decaying wood or crystal or whatnot, at least not in the way I think you think it is. I mean Astatine itself is a decaying element and decay refers to radioactive decay, which is different than just seeing something disappearing and radioactive decay pretty much falls under the radioactive element. Not to mention because it's highly radioactive it could be very dangerous to the user too.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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    Custom element Japanese name: Mēpurushiropputon
    Custom element English name: Maple Syrup Release
    The element is based on: Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Maple Syrup Release is an advanced element nature that allows someone to make their chakra into an extremely viscous fluid. During the kakuzu and Hidan arc a technique was used that was very similar to syrup release Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field which created an extremely sticky liquid. Syrup is nothing more than a sticky liquid that has taste and color
    How it works: The user makes their chakra as thick and vicious as possible, while at the same time making their chakra fluid(but not by alot), creating the sticky substance known as syrup. The user uses their chakra to give out a sent, taste and color to it as well. Because of the high viscosity, it is harder to get off once on the target.
    Usage Examples:

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Shiroppuburasuto) Maple Syrup Release: Syrup Blast
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will gather their Maple Syrup chakra in their mouth and exhale to blobs of maple syrup at their opponent that knock them back. The syrup will be sticky enough to restrain an opponent's movements.

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Nabara Nami) Maple Syrup: Syrup Wave
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long Range
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers a large amount of their maple syrup chakra towards their mouth and then spits out a great volume of syrup from their mouth, swallowing up and drowning the enemy with the advancing surge. This technique can cover the whole battlefield. This technique can be used as a syrup source for syrup techniques that require a syrup source

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Shiroppu ni mizu) Maple Syrup Release: Water to Syrup
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will send their Syrup chakra through out a water source nearby turning the water into syrup. The syrup will allow the user to do syrup jutsus that do not exhale out of their mouth. The syrup source can also slow down an enemy if they are standing on it but the user can move easily on it.
    Conditions to be able to use it: Master of Water and Good Chakra Control




    Conditions to be able to use it: Good Chakra control and Water Mastered
    Is weak to:
    • Earth: Earth structures can dissipate the force of syrup rendering the technique less effective.
    • Lightning: Lighting can conduct to syrup and shock the user.

    Is strong against:
    • Fire: Syrup has water properties so it can put out fires.
    • Water: Water can help spread and expand the syrup

    Co-creator: Gaara
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?
    Note: Im actually serious about this CE


    ✗ Declined: I simply do not find your reasoning sufficient. You just said that you changed your chakra into a sticky liquid. How? It's the point that you explain that in a CE. Also you need to make it so that it's actually different from already existing syrop-like things. I mean what's the difference between your syrup and that water syrup jutsu?
    Custom element Japanese name: Mēpurushiropputon
    Custom element English name: Maple Syrup Release
    The element is based on: Chakra Control
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Maple Syrup Release is an advanced element nature that allows someone to make their chakra into an extremely viscous fluid. During the kakuzu and Hidan arc a technique was used that was very similar to syrup release Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field which created an extremely sticky liquid. Syrup is nothing more than a sticky liquid that has taste and color
    How it works: The user makes their chakra as thick and vicious as possible, while at the same time making their chakra fluid(but not by alot), and evaporating water molecules creating concentrated syrup molecules in the water turning the water into the sticky substance known as syrup. The user uses their chakra to give out a sent, taste and color to it as well. It is harder to get off once on the target. Syrup is also is a thick, viscous liquid consisting primarily of a solution of sugar in water, containing a large amount of dissolved sugars but showing little tendency to deposit crystals. The main difference between syrup like water release jutsus and syrup release, besidse taste, color, and scent, is that syrup consist more solution of water.
    Usage Examples:

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Shiroppuburasuto) Maple Syrup Release: Syrup Blast
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will gather their Maple Syrup chakra in their mouth and exhale to blobs of maple syrup at their opponent that knock them back. The syrup will be sticky enough to restrain an opponent's movements.

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Nabara Nami) Maple Syrup: Syrup Wave
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long Range
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers a large amount of their maple syrup chakra towards their mouth and then spits out a great volume of syrup from their mouth, swallowing up and drowning the enemy with the advancing surge. This technique can cover the whole battlefield. This technique can be used as a syrup source for syrup techniques that require a syrup source

    (Mēpurushiropputon: Shiroppu ni mizu) Maple Syrup Release: Water to Syrup
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will send their Syrup chakra through out a water source nearby turning the water into syrup. The syrup will allow the user to do syrup jutsus that do not exhale out of their mouth. The syrup source can also slow down an enemy if they are standing on it but the user can move easily on it.
    Conditions to be able to use it: Master of Water and Good Chakra Control




    Conditions to be able to use it: Good Chakra control and Water Mastered
    Is weak to:
    • Earth: Earth structures can dissipate the force of syrup rendering the technique less effective.
    • Lightning: Lighting can conduct to syrup and shock the user.

    Is strong against:
    • Fire: Syrup has water properties so it can put out fires.
    • Water: Water can help spread and expand the syrup

    • Neutral to:
    • Wind: Enough wind can just hardern the syrup while at the same time if there is not enough wind it will just push the syrup.

    Co-creator: Gaara
    Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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    ✗ Declined: Sorry, but I still see not difference between that jutsu and what you are talking about it. You just say that you change your chakra into syrup, which is what was done with that jutsu too.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau



    Custom element Japanese name: Shinrei
    Custom element English name: Spirtualism - (Psychodynamics)
    The element is based on: Spiritual Energy | Spirit Transformation Technique | Genjutsu | Chakra Control | Jashin Ritual
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

    In the anime we've seen many uses of the ninjas mind and spiritual energy. Such as the power of genjutsu, entering the opponents chakra system and altering their senses to perceive whatever the user desires. One of the main facts behind the creation of this element is the power of Hidan's spiritualism, being able to achieve immortality by experimenting with the Jashins religions techniques. Though that is not the only fact backing up this element. The Yamanaka clan, they specialize in mind-centred techniques which makes them experts at intelligence gathering and espionage. They have also displayed sensory abilities and their techniques include transferring consciousness, reading minds and communicating telepathically. The remaining theory backing up my element is Dan katos Spirit transformation technique. This ability allowed him to become a living spirit to attack his opponents. He can also use it to take control of a target's body.


    I plan on using this element to enhance the spiritual and mental capabilities that lay dormant in each and every one of us, but only those with great mental and spiritual capabilities have earned.

    Spiritual energy is often closely associated with the metaphor of life as breath - the words 'qi', 'prana', and 'spirit', for instance, are all related in their respective languages to the verb 'to breathe'. Sometimes it is equated with the movement of breath in the body, sometimes described as visible "auras", "rays", or "fields" or as audible or tactile "vibrations". These are often held to be perceptible to anyone, though this may be held to require training or sensitization through various practices.

    Psychodynamics is the concept of psychological forces that underlie human behavior, especially the dynamic relations between conscious motivation and unconscious motivation. Its created to describe the processes of the mind as flows of psychological energy in an organically complex brain. Psychodynamics, also known as dynamic psychology, is the study of the interrelationship of various parts of the mind, personality, or psyche as they relate to mental, emotional, or motivational forces especially at the unconscious level. The mental forces involved in psychodynamics are often divided into two parts: (a) interaction of emotional forces: the interaction of the emotional and motivational forces that affect behavior and mental states, especially on a subconscious level; (b) inner forces affecting behavior: the study of the emotional and motivational forces that affect behavior and states of mind. Its proposed that psychological energy was constant. In mate selection psychology, psychodynamics is defined as the study of the forces, motives, and energy generated by the deepest of human needs.

    Things I found that led to support this element:

    • Spirit Enteties/Demons or DokiTayuya can use her flute song to force open their mouths to release a many-mouthed, worm-like creature that consist almost entirely of spiritual energy, making them impossible to hit. These "spirit worms" are attracted to physical energy, and absorb it on contact, allowing them to weaken an opponent.
    • Yamanaka Clan The members of this clan specialise in mind-centred techniques which makes them experts at intelligence gathering and espionage. They have also displayed sensory abilities and their techniques include transferring consciousness, reading minds and communicating telepathically.
    • Spirit
      Clairvoyance. To be able to make contact with an opponent spiritually and have a clear perception of senses as to where they are, what are they thinking and their knowledge. This was shown to be used by the Human Path's Soul Removal technique
    • Out Of Body Experience as well as the Astral projection technique, used by the akatsuki to sit down and send out "thought waves", converted into chakra. These thought waves are then picked up by Pain, acting as a kind of control tower. This technique amplifies the thought waves and broadcasts them to a specific location through illusionary bodies. The illusionary bodies differ from being mere reflections. While Pain is relaying the members' thoughts, they can have conversation and use varying techniques.
    • Spirit Transformation Technique.This technique allows Dan's spirit to materialize and leave his body, which is then able to take possession of a target, enabling him to freely manipulate the victim's body at will. Dan has also stated that this technique had been used to kill a great number of shinobi during his lifetime. The only known way to counteract the technique is to trap the user within a barrier, such as the Four Violet Flames Battle Encampment, before they can activate it.
    • Jishan Ritual This technique is Hidan's primary method of killing his opponents in the way of the Jashin religion. Once his sacrificial ritual takes place, the victim is linked with Hidan until he either steps or is forced out of the circle. Any kind of injury that Hidan inflicts upon himself (or the injury they inflicted on him) is reciprocated on his target, be it a mere scratch to a pierce in the heart.

    How it works:

    So spiritualism and psychodynamic energy, go hand in hand so that one could project or summon spirit like weapons, shields, & entities created from the subconscious state of mind into an out of body experience attack or defense. These entities have physical form but are none the less created from the mental state of the user, generated from the psychological energy of emotion, and motivational forces as well. I also plan on creating spiritual orientated genjutus that affect the state of mind of the opponent as well.

    Over extended usage of spiritualism techniques can cause severe damage to the users chakra levels and spiritual state of being which can cause death.

    Usage Examples:

    Shinrei: Seishin Hōraku | Spirit Release: Spirit Envelopment
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user controls his breathing, unlocking his subconsious state of mind. This allows him to have access to spiritual techniques, but puts a strain on his spirtual energy and mental capacity over time.

    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: No Genjutsu for 1 turn
    Note: Stays active for the remainder of the match.

    Shinrei: Rei No Jutsu | Spirit Release: Spirit Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will create solid spirit pillars, weapons and shields that can protect the user.

    Note: Takes an additional 1/3 moves per turn to allow the spirit object to phase through physical matter.
    Note: No genjutsu for 1 turn

    Shinrei: Senrigan | Spirit Release: Clairvoyance
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40 (-20 per body)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: By sitting still for a brief moment the user will focus his spiritual energy into the target(s) mind giving him a clear perception of their sight, location and knowledge, such as what theyre about to do and information about themselves. Though this leaves the user vulnerable as long as he is looking through the perception of enemy targets.

    Note: Can only be used twice per match
    Note: No Spirit techniques for two turns.
    Note: No Genjutsu for 3 turns.

    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastered Genjutsu | High Chakra Reserves & High Level of Focus
    Is weak to: Lightning affects the users nervous system and brain. Fire disrupts the spiritual energy of attacks.

    Is strong against: In some cases solid/physical attacks of the opponent cannot disrupt the spiritual attacks but merely phase through such as water & earth based techniques, and taijutsu, but it does not work vice versa.

    Co-creator: ?
    Students I passed this custom element on too:? & ?


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    ✗ Declined: You just made the Yin Element.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 01-05-2013 at 03:50 PM.

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    Re: Custom Elements Bureau

    Custom element Japanese name: Dōton
    Custom element English name: Pulse Release
    The element is based on: Lightning + Wind
    Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): A pulse is a transient disturbance which propagates away from an origin point and propagates through a medium. Lightning's vibration would be compressed by wind's pressure, and then using the users chakra control they would cause it to radiate, generating a pulse.

    In Naruto we have seen multiple variants of a Pulse in a sense. With Pain's Shinra Tensei, the Hyuuga Clan's Byakugan, and Kurama's roar while in the fight with Hashirama and Madara.

    How it works:

    There are two variations of the pulse element. The first of which is like a sonic pulse which is made through the use of extremely good chakra control and the wind element. The user will focus their chakra into the air in a certain location causing it to send a wave of vibrations in the wind to create a pulse that vibrates molecules as it travels. As it does it breaks down the energy that it comes into contact with and breaks bonds. For this reason, it breaks down the energy in fire and lightning jutsu nulifying them with ease (which is why it is strong to all energy based elements like these). As well as this, when the pulse comes into contact with earth and solid objects it breaks the bonds of the molecules causing the structures to shatter destroying solides (Earth based elements and simlar. Though pulse is weak to water as the vibrations are absorbed through it nulifying it and the pulse waves are weak to wind as it just blows away the pulse waves.

    The second variation of the pulse release is when wind and lightning are combined through precise chakra controll to create and Electro magnetic pulse (EMP). This EMP has lightning based properties compressed with a casing of wind chakra, upon there release they explode forcefully. The resulting rapidly-changing electric fields and magnetic fields may couple with electrical/electronic systems to produce damaging current and voltage surges, Making the EMP variant overpower lightning based techniques causing them to become erratic and harm the user.


    Usage Examples:
    Pulse Release
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user manipulates there wind chakra, Forming a dense pulse projectile around there fist, Releasing it forwards in a punching motion, Causing the target to take heavy blunt force damage being sent spiralling away from the impact zone.

    Emp Control
    Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplemental
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user takes control of a pulse projectile, Forcing lightning chakra in to the condensed pulse blast, Causing it to violently explode on impact causing high voltage electric current to erupt in a 3 meter radius around the point of impact.



    Conditions to be able to use it: Mastered Fuuton and Raiton, with excellent chakra manipulation.
    Is weak to:
    Water: Pulse release is stopped nearly instantaneously when it meets with water.
    Wind: Strong Wind techniques can easily disburse the vibrations of the Pulse.
    Is strong against:
    Lightning:: Easily disrupts Lightning
    Fire: The shockwave/vibrating burst puts the flames out.
    Earth: The vibrations of the Pulse can easily shatter earth techniques
    Ice: Due to Ice taking a solid shape, the vibrations of Pulse release shatters ice with relative ease.
    Co-creator: The Pervy Sage
    Students I passed this custom element on too: Zanji & ??

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    ✗ Declined: Similar elements exist + it doesn't even make sense that the same element would be wind based and then again wind/lightning based.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 11-27-2012 at 06:47 PM.

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