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    1st Bio

    Name: Dan Kennon
    Nickname: Jun
    Gender: Male
    Age: 10
    Looks:

    Personality: Dan is an extremely hard working – genius boy. Always ready to help and hates to see people suffering. He does not possess any arrogance and he enjoys engaging in duals to evaluate his prowess.
    He always uses to strike a pose before starting the fight. He also likes to read “icha icha “books written by toad hermit (Jiraiya).

    Village info.
    Village of birth: kumogakure
    Village of alliance: kumogakure

    Ranks/chakra info.
    Ninja rank: Genin
    Specialty:
    Elements: Lightning (needs training)
    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

    Background info.
    History: Dan was born to Ryuu and Mito Kennon. Ryuu was a jounin level shinobi who was known for his close combats and brute force. He died during the re-seal of eight tails from Killer b’s cousin to Killer b. Dan’s mother Mito was also a jounin level shinobi known for her beauty and intelligence , she was skilled exceptionally in ninjutsu and nintaijutsu.
    Dan always wanted to be like his father, a great shinobi who chose the well being of everyone over himself. Dan is a very gifted child, possessing the strength and powerful chakra of his father as well as the beauty and the wisdom of his mother.
    Dan joined the ninja academy at an early age and graduated with very high remarks. Knowing that his son has exceptional abilities, his mother entrusted Ryuu’s sword to him. A year passed, Dan became a very capable genin under her mother’s guidance. So, team Mito, which consists of two more members’ shizuko and Satoshi, was given a B-rank mission to infiltrate the kirigakure, which is a possible hideout of akatsuki. During the mission, the team was attacked by Yagura’s guards who sensed the presence of team Mito. Being a jounin level ninja, Mito and his team fought vigorously defeating all the guards of Yagura but Mito was fatally injured during this fight. She was taken care by shizuko who was a skilled medical-nin. The team completed their mission by finding out two of the Akatsuki lairs but the intervention of zetsu cost the life of Mito Kennon who passed all information to Dan asked him to take it to kumogakure as soon as possible.
    This information helped kumogakure to tackle the constant attacks of kirigakure.
    Dan and his team members Shizuko and Satoshi were highly praised. People of kumogakure mourned the death of Mito Kennon. Blaming akatsuki for his mother (also sensei)’s death, he vowed to eliminate the akatsuki organization and bring peace in this world.

    Other:
    Theme Song and Background Music: /
    Pictures: See looks

    Battles:
    Won: 1
    Lost:0

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 11-13-2011 at 07:32 PM.

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    Re: 1st Bio

    Remove what you have under ninjutsu and put these there
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Try add pictures aswell and maybe a video.
     
         

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    Re: 1st Bio

    10 years old and reading J mans book

    don't you need to be 18 for that?
     
         

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    Re: 1st Bio

    nice for first attempt do what rock lee said about the ninjustu and get some cool pics (if you can) or maybe draw a pic and scan it or take a photo of it also get a themetune for your char or something that would be cool GL youve already had a battle ???
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by white flash View Post
    nice for first attempt do what rock lee said about the ninjustu and get some cool pics (if you can) or maybe draw a pic and scan it or take a photo of it also get a themetune for your char or something that would be cool GL youve already had a battle ???
    thanx dude ....i read ur bio ...it was cool tooo..btw i tried to add some pics but its showing som error ..can u help ??

    Quote Originally Posted by Better View Post
    10 years old and reading J mans book

    don't you need to be 18 for that?
    i don't think so!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by RockLeeGreenBeast View Post
    Remove what you have under ninjutsu and put these there
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Try add pictures aswell and maybe a video.
    how to add a picture ....i tried but showing som kind of error.....also the jutsus i upload were E and D ranks so why i have to upload these which u stated in the spoiler ??
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 11-13-2011 at 07:26 PM.

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    Re: 1st Bio

    Nice bio
     
         

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    Re: 1st Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by Better View Post
    10 years old and reading J mans book

    don't you need to be 18 for that?
    hehe
    :rofl:
    he would be 18 if he read even one chapter from one of j mans book..
     
         

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    Re: 1st Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by Yanto View Post
    hehe
    :rofl:
    he would be 18 if he read even one chapter from one of j mans book..
    very true !!
     
         

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    Re: 1st Bio

    Neat, clear, straight to the point?
    10/10! D
     
         

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    Re: 1st Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by xlilyx View Post
    Neat, clear, straight to the point?
    10/10! D
    thanl you :ice:
     
         

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