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    Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Basic Information
    Name: Tiashe Ametsuchi
    Nickname: Sora
    Gender: Male
    Age: 12
    Clan: /

    Looks: Sora is a rather cute boy with about a meter and 20 centimeter height. He is slim and has got dark brown hair and jade eyes. His hair is thick and smooth and his skin a a few degrees lighter than tan. He keeps his hair style short enough to stand above his ears but he has decided to let it grow long after he becomes 15 years old. Sora likes to wear blue because it's the color his grandmother used to wear. He prefers to wear his forehead protector around his forehead to protect it as it's supposed to.

    Personality: Sora is calm and introverted. He has inherited his calmness from his grandmother but the reason he likes solitary is that he thinks others won't understand him. Although he is still a child he has seen the cruel side of life at some levels so doesn't trust easily and thinks too much for every single thing therefore he seems to be old for his age which is another reason why he can't get along well with other kids.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Kenkon, where is a regular village with no relationship with shinobi villages. It's located in fire country, between the see and the mountains.
    Village of Alliance: Konoha

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Genin.
    Specialty: /
    Elements: Earth - needs training
    Your ninjutsu:

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)



    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.



    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.



    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.




    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.




    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).




    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)





    Background Info.
    History:Once there was a little village between mountains and sea inside the boarders of fire country which was called Kenkon. On top a hill in Kenkon village, there was a little beautiful shrine, made out of white marble. Inhabitants used to call that place The Marble Shrine. For them it was a place for their marriage and funeral ceremonies and when one was troubled the priests of shrine was ready to help. But with in several wars that fire country encountered the small Kenkon was ruined and was abandoned so there was no need for marble shrine, therefore those who leaved inside it had to leave their holly home and find new shrines to join but nobody accepts to take in other sects in their worship place and this fact made our priests to hide their identity and live a regular life in different towns and cities. But their former leader was too well known to hide. She, the old Kurena, traveled as far as she could with his little grandson, Tiashe to find a place that could support them. Her last resort after a long journey was a small cottage near Konoha. She found peace in getting close to Konoha because their identities wasn't important for Hokage. All Konoha should care about was their royalty to the country which had no flaw. After a while Kurena noticed she and Tiashe were getting more attention then she expected from people inside the village. She could see that some shinobis behaviors toward Tiashe was obviously spacial. She suspected that they wanted to attract her grandson toward themselves and make a shinobi out of him which she was completely against it but she was too old and tired to move to another village and left the world soon, leaving little Tiashe for Konoha to take care of.
    Tiashe loved his grandmother. She was the leader and her daughter who was Tiashe's mother supposed to be her successor but she didn't want to. The young girl had married to an artist and wanted to leave the shrine but her duty as the next leader didn't let her so she left her first child for her mother as her successor and migrated to a faraway town with his husband. Tiashe had no feelings for his parents. They had left him easily and he knew that they had got birth to other children after him and he envied them. That's why his grandmother was all he had got despite of not being an orphan. Then after Kurenai's death he felt so lonely and depressed.
    6 years after Kurena's death, Sora was a fine shinobi of Konoha despite of his grandmother's wish and he was getting ready to take part in chunin exams...

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    Theme Song and Background Music: Jun

    Battles

    Won: 0
    Lost:
    0

    ~Approved~ removed clan, no custom clans and removed specialty, you have none, especially not genjutsu so also removed that you're more resilient against it.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 04-24-2012 at 10:53 AM. Reason: spell check

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Take away your jutsus, and add these instead:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
    _____
    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
    _____
    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
    _____

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
    _____

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
     
         
    Last edited by CleverMonkey; 04-20-2012 at 09:46 PM.

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Nice Bio
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Quote Originally Posted by CleverMonkey View Post
    Take away your jutsus, and add these instead:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
    _____
    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
    _____
    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
    _____

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
    _____

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
    ^ Yeah

    You have to get trained if you want techniques. You start out with those basics above and then you put down for elements what you're interested in getting trained first

    For speciality, you have nothing until you master your first element or area of ninjutsu (like nin, tai and gen).

    After you get the bio approved you can start your training, as you're only a genin, you can only learn 1 element right now and only up to D-ranked

    Once you get more posts and gain more ranke (chuunin, s-jounin, jounin, etc) you go up in the number of elements you can learn, and to what ranke (from D, to C, B, A, S, F).

    What you need to do is just get rid of those jutsu that you posted, put the basic E-ranks you have for now and then once a mod approves this (could take weeks could take a few hours) then you go out looking for a sensei/senpai (sensei are people with the orange names) and ask them for training. Ask around for senpais and make sure you read the profiles of sensei and people who are senpai before requesting just to make sure they're open, people don't like being bugged about that kind of stuff although as you're only a genin and can only learn one element and rank it wouldn't make much sense for them lol.

    Other then that everything in your bio looks sound ^^
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    ^ Yeah

    You have to get trained if you want techniques. You start out with those basics above and then you put down for elements what you're interested in getting trained first

    For speciality, you have nothing until you master your first element or area of ninjutsu (like nin, tai and gen).

    After you get the bio approved you can start your training, as you're only a genin, you can only learn 1 element right now and only up to D-ranked

    Once you get more posts and gain more ranke (chuunin, s-jounin, jounin, etc) you go up in the number of elements you can learn, and to what ranke (from D, to C, B, A, S, F).

    What you need to do is just get rid of those jutsu that you posted, put the basic E-ranks you have for now and then once a mod approves this (could take weeks could take a few hours) then you go out looking for a sensei/senpai (sensei are people with the orange names) and ask them for training. Ask around for senpais and make sure you read the profiles of sensei and people who are senpai before requesting just to make sure they're open, people don't like being bugged about that kind of stuff although as you're only a genin and can only learn one element and rank it wouldn't make much sense for them lol.

    Other then that everything in your bio looks sound ^^
    BTW, do you know where i can find the list where it says how many elements you can learn etc. depending on your lvl?
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Thank you everyone! I'll fix it now.
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Nice bio.
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Thanks again!
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Idk if you can have anything in your specialty at the given moment. Since you haven't really trained in stuff. But good bio.
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    tnx~
    How do I know when it's approved?
    clever monkey and reborn say I can have E ranks. (?)
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Quote Originally Posted by Furtuna View Post
    tnx~
    How do I know when it's approved?
    clever monkey and reborn say I can have E ranks. (?)
    The jutsus I sent you are the jutsus that you don't need to train to learn, they are just basics ^^

    And it will say ~Approved~ or something on the bottom of the bioo when it is approved :D
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Needs more pictures.
    Otherwise, plain bio. ^^
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Finally approved! I'm so happy~
     
         

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    Re: Biography of Ametsuchi Tiashe

    Quote Originally Posted by Furtuna View Post
    Finally approved! I'm so happy~
    Now goooooooooooo and train :D
     
         

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