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    Guess Script For 431

    I havent done one of these in a while so heres something for you to read while you wait for manga to come out enjoy

    *scene shows naruto facing pein with his clutching his fists as he gets ready to attack*

    Tsunade:....NARUTO LET ME FIGHT HIM! ITS TO DANGERO--

    Naruto: THATS ENOUGH! *turns his head to tsunade*
    I am not gona let a muderer like him beat me!

    Tsunade: *she screams in fear* NARUTO WATCH OUT!!!!

    *before naruto could turn his head pein stabs naruto right in the heart with his black sword*

    Pein (long hair): *smirks*....feel the pain....*stabs the sword in deeper*

    Naruto: *turns his head to pein in fear and in pain*........*makes mad face*....die!

    Pein (long hair): what are you talking abo-- *the naruto that got stabbed poofs away*

    *narutos hands come out of the ground as he grabs peins feet and his face also comes out of the ground a little and another naruto appears infront of pein spitting out what seems to be oil*

    Naruto (infront of pein): NOW!

    *naruto under pein holding his feat screams in fury*
    *SAGE ARTS KATON WILDFIRE TECHINIQUE*

    Pein (long hair): NO HOW!? *is covered in flames and gets dragged under the ground only his head visible as his body burns underground*

    Pein (god realm): impressive....*stares in amasement*

    Pein (long hair): AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *screaming in pain while is body is being burned under with only his head coming out of the ground*

    Naruto:....this is for pervy sage! *makes mad face*
    *jumps up and puts together his hands in the air that makes one big fist and smashesh his two fists on Peins head*

    Tsunade: *shocked at narutos new abilitys*...naruto....youve...become strong...real strong...*thinks in her head*

    *scene changes to madara and zetsu talking*

    Zetsu (white): will pein lose the battle?

    Zetsu (dark): of course not you fool!

    Madara: either way...ive got a plan...

    Zetsu: (white): what is it?

    Madara: If pein were to win than there would be no need for me to do this but if he does look like he is loosing i will have sasuke have a renuion with his old friend!

    Zetsu (dark): You mean your gona ask sasuke to finish the job if pein were to lose?

    Madara: extactly....

    *sasuke comes in dragging two cloud ninjas bodys in*

    Sasuke: kisame is taking of the last one....he seems to be stronger than the other two here.... Now what were you saying about me visiting naruto?

    Madara: If pein were to look like he was losing i was saying you and I will go to konoha and save him while you finish off the Jinchuuriki.

    Sasuke: *takes out his katana and stabs it on the table* yes that sounds like a good idea....*looks up to the ceiling*...and i will avenge my brother!

    *Scene changes back to Pein and narutos battle*

    Pein (god realm): Jinchuriki now its my turn....

    Chouji: *from a distance yells and says* watch out for his gravatational power naruto!

    *naruto slowely gets up with his head down and blood dripping on the ground after he had smashed his fists into Pein (long hairs) head*

    Naruto: *lifts his head slowely*...bring it...*lifts his head fully with kyubi eyes dark red and his teeth extremely sharp coming out of his mouth*

    *scene ends with a close up on narutos fist with blood dripping down*

    Tell me what you think?
     
         
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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    pretty cool of course some parts are different from what I think but a great guess
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    nice
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    NICE, but i really hate is when people misleading naruto's personality.
    naruto isn't a show offer like sasuke and says "that's enough!"..
    he will say " let me do it for my sensei" or something cute..
    u got my vision
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by alt216 View Post
    NICE, but i really hate is when people misleading naruto's personality.
    naruto isn't a show offer like sasuke and says "that's enough!"..
    he will say " let me do it for my sensei" or something cute..
    u got my vision
    just noticed that too...im getting a little rusty...anyway i forget how naruto acts....its been a while since ive seen manga or an episode >_<
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by TC9tails View Post
    just noticed that too...im getting a little rusty...anyway i forget how naruto acts....its been a while since ive seen manga or an episode >_<
    then how did you know what was going on for 431? lol :D
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    nice its sounds good , you should make one of this for every manga chapter worshippy

    P.S. i liked the molotov cocktail part
    is covered in flames and gets dragged under the ground only his head visible as his body burns underground*
    :D
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by squiremarcus View Post
    then how did you know what was going on for 431? lol :D
    lol no i meant its been two since theyve released manga! and shippuden episode!
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by GrimGod View Post
    nice its sounds good , you should make one of this for every manga chapter worshippy

    P.S. i liked the molotov cocktail part :D
    lol thanks ill try
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    nice guess man, it would be nice if that happened!
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    awesome i think this is the best one u did so far :D
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    i think its more like this

    Naruto: Rasenshuriken!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    pein1: *dead*

    Pein2: *dead*

    Pein3: *dead*

    Pein4: *dead*

    Pein5: *dead*

    Pein6: *dying* How could you a lowly mortal have beaten me.. a God?

    Naruto: STFU *****AAA!

    super sage curb stomp :D

    Pein6: *dead*
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by Narutoftw View Post
    i think its more like this

    Naruto: Rasenshuriken!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    pein1: *dead*

    Pein2: *dead*

    Pein3: *dead*

    Pein4: *dead*

    Pein5: *dead*

    Pein6: *dying* How could you a lowly mortal have beaten me.. a God?

    Naruto: STFU *****AAA!

    super sage curb stomp :D

    Pein6: *dead*
    LMAO i like that one !
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Also, I don't think the Pein bodies scream when they die. Nice though.
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by shodaime View Post
    my guess script is semi right in the sense that sasuke appears in this chapter :D!
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Awesome ending, I doubt he will go to his Kyuubi powers that quickly though.
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by TC9tails View Post
    I havent done one of these in a while so heres something for you to read while you wait for manga to come out enjoy

    *scene shows naruto facing pein with his clutching his fists as he gets ready to attack*

    Tsunade:....NARUTO LET ME FIGHT HIM! ITS TO DANGERO--

    Naruto: THATS ENOUGH! *turns his head to tsunade*
    I am not gona let a muderer like him beat me!

    Tsunade: *she screams in fear* NARUTO WATCH OUT!!!!

    *before naruto could turn his head pein stabs naruto right in the heart with his black sword*

    Pein (long hair): *smirks*....feel the pain....*stabs the sword in deeper*

    Naruto: *turns his head to pein in fear and in pain*........*makes mad face*....die!

    Pein (long hair): what are you talking abo-- *the naruto that got stabbed poofs away*

    *narutos hands come out of the ground as he grabs peins feet and his face also comes out of the ground a little and another naruto appears infront of pein spitting out what seems to be oil*

    Naruto (infront of pein): NOW!

    *naruto under pein holding his feat screams in fury*
    *SAGE ARTS KATON WILDFIRE TECHINIQUE*

    Pein (long hair): NO HOW!? *is covered in flames and gets dragged under the ground only his head visible as his body burns underground*

    Pein (god realm): impressive....*stares in amasement*

    Pein (long hair): AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *screaming in pain while is body is being burned under with only his head coming out of the ground*

    Naruto:....this is for pervy sage! *makes mad face*
    *jumps up and puts together his hands in the air that makes one big fist and smashesh his two fists on Peins head*

    Tsunade: *shocked at narutos new abilitys*...naruto....youve...become strong...real strong...*thinks in her head*

    *scene changes to madara and zetsu talking*

    Zetsu (white): will pein lose the battle?

    Zetsu (dark): of course not you fool!

    Madara: either way...ive got a plan...

    Zetsu: (white): what is it?

    Madara: If pein were to win than there would be no need for me to do this but if he does look like he is loosing i will have sasuke have a renuion with his old friend!

    Zetsu (dark): You mean your gona ask sasuke to finish the job if pein were to lose?

    Madara: extactly....

    *sasuke comes in dragging two cloud ninjas bodys in*

    Sasuke: kisame is taking of the last one....he seems to be stronger than the other two here.... Now what were you saying about me visiting naruto?

    Madara: If pein were to look like he was losing i was saying you and I will go to konoha and save him while you finish off the Jinchuuriki.

    Sasuke: *takes out his katana and stabs it on the table* yes that sounds like a good idea....*looks up to the ceiling*...and i will avenge my brother!

    *Scene changes back to Pein and narutos battle*

    Pein (god realm): Jinchuriki now its my turn....

    Chouji: *from a distance yells and says* watch out for his gravatational power naruto!

    *naruto slowely gets up with his head down and blood dripping on the ground after he had smashed his fists into Pein (long hairs) head*

    Naruto: *lifts his head slowely*...bring it...*lifts his head fully with kyubi eyes dark red and his teeth extremely sharp coming out of his mouth*

    *scene ends with a close up on narutos fist with blood dripping down*

    Tell me what you think?
    not bad man
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by SCaRFaCeD View Post
    Awesome ending, I doubt he will go to his Kyuubi powers that quickly though.
    thanks :D me neither but i ussually add parts to make it exciting even though i kno it might not happen
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Pain : Yo Naruto !

    Naruto : Yo !! Pain . Whats up dude ?

    Pain : Nothing much , just killing some Konoha ninjas... What about you bro ?

    Naruto : Ahh...dont ask ... just got back from my training in Mario world
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Nice there pics to you know
     
         

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    Re: Guess Script For 431

    Quote Originally Posted by Raizen View Post
    Nice there pics to you know
    huh?
     
         

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