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    Return of the dead Uchiha

    Chapter 1:The battle




    The discovery of Uchiha Madara's hideout led to the battle between Madara and the Hidden Leaf.Team 7 was on their way to the hideout along with Tsunade.It was a cool morning and quite foggy too.


    :When will we reach their Kakashi sensei?
    : Pretty soon Naruto*sigh*
    :So what's the battle plan,Tsunade sama?.
    : First,we will try to negotiate.Raising a war would end many lives as Madara has control of the seven tail beasts.We'll try to save time while the other jounins evacuate the villagers to a safer place.It is also reported that Kabuto has joined Madara.Be ready for anything.

    Naruto turned to face a tensed Sakura.

    : Don't worry Sakura chan,we'll get Sasuke back no matter what.
    : Thanks Naruto,I know we will.
    : Alright team,we are gonna win this.Believe it!

    Meanwhile in the hideout.
    :So it seems that the Hidden leaf decided to come my way.I think we should give them a good surprise,Shouldn't we,Kabuto?
    : That's a wonderful idea,Madara sama.Why don't I welcome them with our old pals?.
    :Yes you are right.It would be a shame to disappoint our visitors.When they are done I'll have my chance to place my hands on the Nine tails.

    :"Team take cover and scan your surrounding".
    Team 7:Yes,Tsunade sama!.

    Team seven hid themselves around the cave waiting for the lion to jump from its den.

    :Hey look!Its Kabuto.
    :Naruto!Keep it down.He is gonna find us.

    Kabuto who just came out of the cave just grinned and looked around his vicinity.

    :"I thought it would be rude to let you wait outside so I decided to introduce you to my two slaves".

    With that Kabuto formed hand seals and on finishing their appeared two coffins.

    :He knows that we are here.What's the point of hiding?.
    :Wait Naruto!Let's see what's in the coffin.We analyse and then we attack.

    As team seven curiously looked at the coffins,they opened.One opened to reveal Pein and the other opened to reveal Itachi Uchiha.

    :Noway!This can't be happening.We are gonna fight them!!?.
    : Probably the strongest team but don't lose hope,Naruto.

    Anger boiled in Naruto.

    :What Pein and Itachi wanted was peace and how dare Kabuto use them as slaves!I won't fight them.I'll make those two understand.:mad:
    :Naruto!they are not who you think they are.Don't be reckless.We have to think of a plan.
    :Sorry Kakasni sensei but Pein and Itachi trusted me and I won't let them down.Its now or never.Kabuto you asked for it.

    Naruto came out from his hideout and stood bravely infront of Itachi

    :Sorry Itachi,I know this will hurt but I have to kick some sense into you.Rasengan!!!.
    : So you are finally out.Do you really think that he would listen to you?.
    :We have to help Naruto.

    And so the battle began.

    Meanwhile

    :What was that sound?
    :Its nothing,Sasuke.I want you to train with Jugo and Suigetsu.Its a good opportunity for you to try your Eternal Magekyo sharingan.
    Hn..

    And with that Sasuke walked towards the cave's exit.


    Link to your Fan fiction chapter 2:Chapter 2:The will of Uzumaki
    Link to your Fan fiction chapter 3:Chapter 3:Union of heart
     
         
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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    nice, original with the indicators for whose speaking
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Your imagination..
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Quote Originally Posted by rikerslade View Post
    nice, original with the indicators for whose speaking
    Thank u very much slade-san :D
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Very cool with those icons, +rep. I have never liked FF but this one attract me so much
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Quote Originally Posted by sunnex View Post
    Your imagination..
    I am happy u read sunnex san.Thank u :o
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

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    Very cool with those icons, +rep. I have never liked FF but this one attract me so much
    Thank u very much nara-kun
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    wow epic
    i love the icons as-well +rep
    10/10
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    well it was rather cool
    he 8/10
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Quote Originally Posted by yahiko24 View Post
    wow epic
    i love the icons as-well +rep
    10/10
    Thank u very much yahi kun
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Quote Originally Posted by susan0 View Post
    well it was rather cool
    he 8/10
    Thank u susan O kun
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Nice. 9/10, call me ah-boy-kun if you want to thank me... >.<
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonathan Cheong View Post
    Nice. 9/10, call me ah-boy-kun if you want to thank me... >.<
    *blinks*
    ah-boy-kun...
    What does that mean?:o
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha

    im sick
     
         

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    im sick
    What do u mean?:confused:
     
         

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