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    Hurricane Chronicles

    Chapter 2: Attack


    Kabuto: You’re strangely calm right now.

    Sasuke: Are you kidding? I’ve had Curse Mark before, I’ve grown accustomed to pain that far exceeds the pain your Curse gives.

    Kabuto: Hmm. Well what do you say, Sasuke? Are you joining me, or are you going on your own way?

    Sasuke: Hmmph. Don’t get it wrong, I’m not “joining” you, I’m using you as a base. If your plans do go as expected, I can secretly get closer to my goals.

    Kabuto: Then there's something i want to test.

    Sasuke: Test?

    Kabuto: Yes. I want to see if it was worth it, if you are still as adapt as before with Curse Mark.

    Sasuke narrowed his eyes and activated his three tomoe Sharingan.

    Kyo: Are you sure we can trust this guy? He looks kinda shady.

    Sasuke: Don’t worry. This guy won’t try anything, not with superiors around.

    Kabuto: You sure seem full of yourself, Sasuke. Ever since you defeated Oro, you allowed your power to make your decisions, you became reckless, sure you can beat everyone and everything, but I assure you, I’m on a level Oro could never dream of.

    Sasuke: We’ll see.

    Kabuto made a single seal and a giant rock came out of the ground. A giant seal appeared on the rock and when it vanished, the rock crumbled away, revealing a doorway.

    Kabuto: Follow me..

    Kabuto walked into the hole and Sasuke followed suit. Sasuke turned back and looked at Kyo.

    Sasuke: You coming?

    Kyo nodded relunctantly and followed Sasuke into the hole. After they were all inside, the rock went back into the ground.

    *Scene switches to Naruto, Shikamaru, Sai and Sakura leaping through the trees*

    Shikamaru: We’re almost at the border.

    They jumped out of the forest and landed in a shallow ravine with a small stream.

    Shikamaru: Further up this ravine is a giant gap with a small town. According to them, a small band of ninja were using strange weapons to terrorize the surrounding area.

    Suddenly, a black rod-like rocket landed in the middle of them all.

    Naruto: !! That’s-!!

    The rod exploded, leaving behind a smoking crater where the four ninja stood. Then, three men appeared on the side of the ravine. One wore a cloak that had no sleeves and was draped around his shoulders and was short. The other wore a similar cloak but hooded and was taller. He wore gauntlets on each of his hands. The other was in between the two in height and wore a shirt similar to Suigetsu’s but black and white pants. The shorter snickered.

    Short: Don’t tell me that was all, I just used a simple bomb.

    Tall: Don’t worry Ban. These guys are Leaf ninja, they wont go down so easily.

    Ban: Yeah, I guess, Karu.

    Suddenly, the three ninja gasped.

    Ban: I can’t move! What the hell?!

    Medium: I cant move either!

    They turned and saw Shikamaru standing behind them. He had his shadow stretched and split in three, trapping them in his jutsu.

    Shikamaru: You’re now trapped. Who are you?

    Medium: Ha! You think this is over?

    Karu: Kemuri, calm down. Don’t get excited.

    At that moment, Naruto, Sakura and Sai appeared above them from behind.
    They came down towards the trapped ninja with punches.

    Naruto: We got ‘em!

    Sakura: Hell yeah!

    The Leaf ninja pummeled into the ninja, except Sakura, who was covered in a thick cloud of dust as she drove Ban into the ground.

    Naruto(glancing over to Sakura): She put a lot into that one punch…

    As the smoke cleared, it revealed Sakura’s hand in the ground, beside Ban’s hip.

    Sakura: I missed!

    Ban: You nearly got me!

    At that moment, Kemuri made a single seal and released a thick, black cloud of smoke from his mouth that encircled Naruto, Sakura and Sai. Ban leapt from the cloud and, with great speed, scurried over to Karu. Kemuri did the same and they turned to Shikamaru.

    Shikamaru: Shit! (My shadow’s been disrupted.)

    At that moment, Karu lifted one of his hands and a small barrel-like device opened on his palm.

    Karu: Feel the power of technology!

    Shikamaru: (Technology?!)

    Karu snickered then gasped again. He looked down and realized he was caught in Shikamaru’s jutsu again.

    Shikamaru: Be weary.

    Karu smirked and a thick blast of fire launched from the barrel. Shikamaru gasped and started running down the side of the ravine, but Karu and the other two followed.

    Karu: Looks this shadow of yours forces us to do whatever you do. Not very good in this situation!

    Shikamaru gasped. Since the ninja were running in perfect sync with him, the fire kept coming as if they were standing as normal.

    Shikamaru quickly took out three chakra blades from his pouch and threw them at their feet. He then released his shadow and jumped upwards, avoiding the fire. The chakra blades landed squarely in each of their shadows.

    Karu: Heh. The brat missed.

    Shikamaru landed on the side of the ravine.

    Shikamaru: No I didn’t. Try moving.

    Karu: Damn! He got us again!

    At that moment, the cloud surrounding Naruto and the others was nullified from a wind gust by Naruto that came out of his mouth.

    Sai: (Naruto sure has gotten better with Wind Jutsu..)

    Karu: Ban, you know what you need to do.

    Ban smirked as his wrist fell off his arm, revealing it was connected by a thick black cable.

    Naruto: That’s just like-!

    Sakura: Pein!

    Ban: You’re catchin’ on!

    His newly freed hand knocked Shikamaru’s chakra blade out of his shadow and then, several bombs like before formed. The bombs detached and went racing towards Naruto and the others.

    Next: The Power of Technology!
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    kool
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by Reji View Post
    kool
    thanks
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Nice
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

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    Nice
    thank you
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Intriguing..
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

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    Intriguing..
    thanks
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Np. So when is the next one coming?
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by Tokun View Post
    Np. So when is the next one coming?
    tomorrow
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    U quote a lot
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by Reji View Post
    U quote a lot
    i know

    and unfortunately, i cant post the next one today, maybe tomorrow
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Awsome think you could make a fanfiction where naruto,hinata and sakura go out to relax , but get captured by the akatsuki, and they must weaken the seal to remove the kyuubi? and when the villages learn about this its a hunt and stuff hehe! I would be sooo happy! ive been looking for something like it forever!, im not good at writing , it would be soo cool, have all the mixtures of romance,action,drama,(maybe comedy)suspense! a big story about it would be amazing!,ive checked alllll over and couldnt find any like it, prettty pleasee!!!
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by JirayiaRIPforever View Post
    Awsome think you could make a fanfiction where naruto,hinata and sakura go out to relax , but get captured by the akatsuki, and they must weaken the seal to remove the kyuubi? and when the villages learn about this its a hunt and stuff hehe! I would be sooo happy! ive been looking for something like it forever!, im not good at writing , it would be soo cool, have all the mixtures of romance,action,drama,(maybe comedy)suspense! a big story about it would be amazing!,ive checked alllll over and couldnt find any like it, prettty pleasee!!!
    like the manga, i write my story in arcs, the next arc will be they get kidnapped and they must escape from their captors, though i dont think it will be akatsuki
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    i mean in a new one like afterwards
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by JirayiaRIPforever View Post
    i mean in a new one like afterwards
    okay, ill start it soon, gotta focus on this and another one right now
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Whoa Whoa Whoa...Awesome!
     
         

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    Re: Hurricane Chronicles

    Hey, you added tech in this fanfic.O.O
    Are you going to show us Apple Laptops (sorry, not sure what they're called) next?:D
    AWESOME!
     
         
    Last edited by Cooldragon; 12-14-2011 at 06:03 AM.

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