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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    (Rubiton- Rubi Kangoku) Ruby release- Ruby Prison
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: n/a
    Description: the user will gather his ruby chakra into the ground around the opponent and raise a dozen ruby pillars to imprison them.
    *Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
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    **Im updating this jutsu and re-submitting...

    (Rubiton- Ōkina Rubī Tekunikku) Ruby release- Greater Ruby Technique
    Type: Attack/ Defense/ Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user will gather his ruby chakra into the ground and use it to raise multiple ruby pillars, structures , or mold it to cover areas w/ ruby in order to attack or defend. The areas intended to be covered by ruby cannot be any larger than short range radius.
    *Note: can only be used 3x per battle.

    ~Declined~ This isn't an update but a new technique that resembles "Doton no jutsu" sort of speak.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 06-29-2012 at 05:26 PM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    ( Meromeroton: Kiukoudai no Kin Tenbin ) Perfume Release: Magnanimous Golden Libra

    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This techniques manifests itself as a nearly instantaneous burst of vaporous golden perfume, stretching radially 10 meters around the user. It is performed without handseals. The premise for this technique is that the chakra system and the physical body are directly linked. This perfume does not affect opponent's whose chakra system or blood system is in the same pace than the user's. If higher than normal, the perfume will emit a genjutsu that will make the opponent feel as if the gravity suddenly increased, pinning them to the ground. The effects are proportional to the chakra system's alteration, thus, when the user moves at a faster pace than normally allowed to the body through the use of chakra (Such as Swift, Gates, Sage Mode or Raikage's Lightning Coat, for example), the pressure of the gravity will bring the person's speed down, invariably making the target as fast as he/she normally is. Due to affecting the body directly, it is able to surpass chakra peaks, like burst of chakra or pain, but is easily released by localized chakra releases (Such as someone infusing chakra into their bodies), otherwise simply calming oneself/releasing the modes will render the genjutsu inactive.
    *The perfume stays in the target's body for 5 turns (As long as Raikage's Coat). Without the perfume, the genjutsu can be released as normal*
    *The user can only use this technique twice per battle, and it requires 2 turns waiting period after the previous perfume disappeared*
    *The user can't preform Forbidden jutsus, nor Perfume higher than A rank, for 2 turns*
    ~Declined~ Reword the nearly instantaneous part and include hand signs.
    Mathias initial edit
    Quote Originally Posted by Lili-Chwan View Post
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    10 meters is a long distance to cover instantaneously so change that, and at least 1 hand seal would be nice.
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    ( Meromeroton: Kiukoudai no Kin Tenbin ) Perfume Release: Magnanimous Golden Libra

    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This techniques manifests itself as a quick burst of vaporous golden perfume, stretching radially 10 meters around the user in under a couple of seconds. The premise for this technique is that the chakra system and the physical body are directly linked. This perfume does not affect opponent's whose chakra system or blood system is in the same pace than the user's. If higher than normal, the perfume will emit a genjutsu that will make the opponent feel as if the gravity suddenly increased, pinning them to the ground. The effects are proportional to the chakra system's alteration, thus, when the user moves at a faster pace than normally allowed to the body through the use of chakra (Such as Swift, Gates, Sage Mode or Raikage's Lightning Coat, for example), the pressure of the gravity will bring the person's speed down, invariably making the target as fast as he/she normally is. Due to affecting the body directly, it is able to surpass chakra peaks, like burst of chakra or pain, but is easily released by localized chakra releases (Such as someone infusing chakra into their bodies), otherwise simply calming oneself/releasing the modes will render the genjutsu inactive.
    *The perfume stays in the target's body for 5 turns (As long as Raikage's Coat). Without the perfume, the genjutsu can be released as normal*
    *The user can only use this technique twice per battle, and it requires 2 turns waiting period after the previous perfume disappeared*
    *The user can't preform Forbidden jutsus, nor Perfume higher than A rank, for 2 turns after the perfume is activated*

    Note: If it's not approvable as it is, considering it doesn't have handseals (I'll explain my reasoning, please consider the following restriction:

    *The user must preform 1 handseal prior, having the technique laying dormant to be activated whenever the need arises, without handseals*
    ~Declined~ There is no need for an explanation, I understand perfectly fine why you would rather not have hand seals when activating the technique on the spot. But that's what makes this technique that deadly. So I will ask you kindly, once again for the last time to include hand seals.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 06-29-2012 at 05:33 PM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    Purton| Kesshououja - [Plasma Release | Plasma Monarch]
    Rank: A - Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid [(Long) S-Forbidden Rank]
    Chakra: 30/40/50 (+5-15 chakra depending on rank per turn)
    Damage: 60/80/100
    Description: Kesshououja is a advanced plasma jutsu activated by utilizing up to nine seals (Dog - Tiger - Horse -Dragon- Monkey - Dragon - Horse -Tiger - Dog). When activated the users body becoming can become a intangible plasma body that can extend it's limbs and send waves of plasma at the opponent(s) at this boint the users eyes burn a fiery white. Since the user body is now made of plasma they are able to control all of the plasma at will and because of this the opponent can't get close to the user or else face being burned alive by the sheer magnitude of heat. When the user adds the Boar Seal to the jutsu his body begins to expand allowing more plasma to flow and increasing the range of the jutsu he is able to also shoot fiery white blast of pure heat at the opponent 3 up to three times his body then burns with the fiery white chakra. If the opponent adds both the Boar and the Tiger Seal his skin will turn blue and his eyes white out as a fiery white aura of fire emanates around him, At this point the user as become one with the plasma element and can only use it as well as the fire and plasma elements. At this point the user has access to jutsu exclusive to this form as well as all the abilities of the other two forms only to a greater extent and can stay in the air for a short period of time. Next his ability to use the elements associated with plasma grow exponentially allowing him to use it's techniques with only one seal and the gain +15 damage and move much faster.

    Restrictions

    A-Rank
    -Last 4 turns
    -user loses the ability to use plasma chakra for two turns afterwards
    -Fire and Lightning chakra can only be used up to A-rank for next three turns

    S-Rank
    -Last three turns
    -User loses the abiliy to use plasma chakra for 4 turns afterwards
    -Fire and Lightning Chakra can only be used up to B-rank for next four turns

    Forbidden Rank
    -Last two turns
    -User loses the ability to use plasma chakra for the rest of battle
    -Fire and Lightning Chakra can only be used up to C-rank for rest of battle.
    -User becomes exhausted and moves with the speed of a standard Jonin class ninja.

    ~Declined~ Either A, S, or F your choice.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 06-29-2012 at 05:33 PM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    [QUOTE=Oasis Nara;6369855]

    Re-Submitting
    Note : Mig gave me his permission to resubmit this via MSN


    Shinju: Shiro No Bin (Pearl Release: The White Jar)

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A legendaryJar size of Gaara´s gourd, white with green markings made of solid pearl material which has been buried hundreds of years beneath the ocean and contains tens of unique shells with strong pearl chakra and they are able to keep producing little pearls where they live and bread inside the Jar, the Jar itself has been wielded by the Elders of Shells who have strong pearl chakra. Shells from the Jar are able to produce huge amount of pearls to keep unlimited amount of little pearls so the user of the Gourd is able to manipulate pearls as his/her wish, the Elder of Shells always carried this Jar to the battle fields and merged his pearl chakra to the Gourd so that he will be able to manipulate the pearls inside for many usage (attack, defense and supplementary), but the effect is the Jar drain the user chakra every time the user use it that’s why only a strong chakra possession and balance control ability able to use this Jar, meaning only Kage Rank. He passed down some of these Jars to those who have been loyal to the Shells kingdom and trained by the Elder himself how to use this Jar. The Elder made several of these Jars so that each user can have one Jar.



    Notes:
    - To use this Jar, person has to learn how to use it from ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ & Oasis Nara
    - This Jar can be destroyed by a strong lightning jutsu
    - This Jar is considered as Weapon so the user cannot use his/her CW in the same battle he uses this Jar
    - Every time the user use pearl jutsu using this Jar, it will drain -10 chakra and after 7 turn use the user will be exhausted and lower their speed
    - After 3 turn use the Jar, the user can't use the Jar for 1 turn to give the pearl time to reload the pearls chakra production, that's applied to the following turns.
    - Can only be use for 10 turns max no more than that or the Jar will be destroyed afterwards.

    ~Declined~ Okay, first of all you still left the word 'Gourd' a few times in the description. Second of all at the part I highlighted; That is a very useless description you are trying to pass off as a restriction. You know why? To use the element you already need to be Kage rank so I would suggest you remove that unnecessary text in the submission. The requirement to use this Jar is also another obvious requirement when teaching the element to one of the two students. As for the last few highlights I have a question. Are you confusing turns with how many times per battle the jar can be used? And if not the you really need to re-write that because as it stands it is a mess to read and understand clearly.
    Picture of the Jar


    Shinju: Ame No Shinju (Pearl Release: Rain of Pearls)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damge Points: 40
    Description: The user releases from his Jar (or from one of the shell summons) a giant pearl, then the user sends the giant pearl into the sky, scattered it into pearl powder upon the sky and transform the powder into tiny winy thousands of pearls then pour them down from the sky aiming the opponent to buried him/her alive.

    Notes:
    Must be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ & Oasis Nara
    ~Declined~ Okay I want you to reword the transforming into powder thing because that's not what your approved CE submission is about. You can manipulate solid pearl not powdered form. As for the thousands of pearls I need a more defined amount. Lastly, clarify the actual size of the "giant pearl". How big is this "giant pearl?
    Shinju: Kyojin Maruishi (Pearl Release: Giant Boulder)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Gourd (or Shell Summon), then merges them into giant boulder made of pearls half size of Gamabunta with sharp spikes all around the boulder and the user sends this boulder to the opponent with fast speed and the boulder will roll over the opponent brutally.

    Notes:
    Can only be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ & Oasis Nara
    Can only be used 4 times per battle
    ~Declined~ You do realize how long it would actually take to release such a ridiculous amount of little pearls to form a boulder made of pearl half the size of Gama, right? You need to drastically lower the size of the boulder, and you have yet to define the speed, you simply changed it from "high" to "fast".



    Re-Subbmitting

    Shinju: Shiro daburufangu (Pearl Release: Double Fang)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Gourd (or Shell Summon), then form a white sharp fang in the user right and left hands, this fang are very sharp and able to pierces through solid, Steel or metal object.

    Notes:
    Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    Can only be used 5 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle

    ~Declined~ Reduce the turns before they vanished if you want this allowed to be used twice per battle. And you really need to define the shape and size of these fangs. How many blades? How long are the sharp edges? etc, etc
    Shinju: P1 Bunshin "Petron" (Pearl Release: P1 Clone "Petron")
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: P1 clone is a copy of the user but in shape of a white pale person. The clone itself can only use pearl release according of the user gain and knowledge of the pearl release, it can also utilize any pearl release even without having the white gourd or the shell summoning up until S-Rank pearl release.

    Notes:
    Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    Can only be used 5 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle from the Jar / Shell Summoning

    ~Declined~ Still didn't fix what I asked for.
    Quote Originally Posted by Oasis Nara View Post
    Shinju: P2 Bunshin "Prime" (Pearl Release: P2 Clone "Prime")

    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will summon his giant shell which it will throw out a giant pearl into the air then the user perform 5 serial hand seal then push and placed his right hand into the giant pearl when it about to land while his left hand hold his right wrist and yell “PRIME” to manipulate the giant pearl and shape it into a giant bird double size of Gamakichi, Prime is the 2nd form of pearl bunshin manipulation called the “P2”, prime able to fly into the sky high with high speed while the user ride it, Prime shape pale white and have the ability to shoot out rapidly pearl ball size of a basket ball from the sky into the opponent and the pearl ball will crush everything within the impact, prime also able to defend from similar rank jutsu using it wing.

    Note: can only be use 3 times
    Note: Must have Shell summoning contract
    Note: Can only last 2 turn in field then auto disappear
    Note: No other pearl tech while the user ride Prime
    Note: Count as two turn as the user have to summon his giant shell
    Note: Can only be use by Oasis Nara
    ~Declined~ I don't see how pearl is light enough to fly, let alone at high speeds as you mentioned. Lastly, the pearl clone hasn't been approved so how is this the second form of it?

    (Pāru no tsuin ken) - Twin sword of Pearl
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: As the user granted to manipulate pearl so he is able to extract two rare special twin blade made of pearl from deep down the sea which only certain people have the ability to do that. this twin sword one came out from a white pearl and the other came from the black pearl, this sword will infuse with the user pearl manipulation ability then able to release pearl jutsu (white and black Pearl release) up to S-Rank Pearl jutsu without any shell summoning but each use of this twin sword they shall drain the user chakra and lower their speed ability, this twin sword doesn’t have to be summoned but the user always wield it in their back.


    Note: Must have Shell pearl manipulation ability
    Note: Shall drain -10 chakra each use
    Note: The user can use them until their chakra run out meaning only KG rank can use it and only 8 time use
    Note: Can only be use by Oasis Nara
    ~Declined~ How are these swords generating enough pearl to create the techniques? What's "-5 speed" mean? 5 levels from our speed chart? Do not refer to the speed chart in future submissions. And also, if this is your custom weapon you need to include it in the "Type" section.
    Quote Originally Posted by Oasis Nara View Post

    Re Subbmitting
    Shinju: P2 Bunshin "Prime" (Pearl Release: P2 Clone "Prime")
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will summon his giant shell which it will throw out a giant pearl then the user perform 5 serial hand seal then push and placed his right hand into the giant pearl while his left hand hold his right wrist and yell “PRIME” to manipulate the giant pearl and shape it into a giant bird double size of Gamakichi, Prime is the 2nd form of pearl bunshin manipulation called the “P2”, prime able to fly into the sky high with high speed while the user ride it, Prime shape pale white and have the ability to shoot out rapidly pearl ball size of a basket ball from the sky into the opponent and the pearl ball will crush everything within the impact, prime also able to defend from similar rank jutsu using it wing.

    Note: can only be use 3 times
    Note: Must have Shell summoning contract / White Jar
    Note: Can only last 2 turn in field then auto disappear
    Note: No other pearl tech while the user ride Prime
    Note: Count as two turn as the user have to summon his giant shell or one turn if he using the white Jar
    Note: Can only be use by Oasis Nara
    ~Declined~ I still don't see how pearl is light enough to fly, let alone at high speeds as you mentioned. And you do know that a clone is a near perfect copy of the users appearance, correct? What you are describing in this technique is a pearl bird not a clone.

    "I'm erased the flying pearl part"


    Re-Submitting



    Shinju: Shiro No Bin (Pearl Release: The White Jar)

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A legendary Jar size of Gaara´s Jar, white with green markings made of solid pearl material which has been buried hundreds of years beneath the ocean and contains tens of unique shells with strong pearl chakra and they are able to keep producing little pearls where they live and bread inside the Jar, the Jar itself has been wielded by the Elders of Shells who have strong pearl chakra. Shells from the Jar are able to produce huge amount of pearls to keep unlimited amount of little pearls so the user of the Jar is able to manipulate pearls as his/her wish, the Elder of Shells always carried this Jar to the battle fields and merged his pearl chakra to the Jar so that he will be able to manipulate the pearls inside for many usage (attack, defense and supplementary), but the effect is the Jar drain the user chakra every time the user use it that’s why He passed down some of these Jars to those who have been loyal to the Shells kingdom and trained by the Elder himself how to use this Jar. The Elder made several of these Jars so that each user can have one Jar.



    Notes:
    -This Jar can be destroyed by a strong lightning jutsu
    -This Jar is considered as Weapon so the user cannot use his/her CW in the same battle he uses this Jar
    -Every time the user use pearl jutsu using this Jar, it will drain -10 chakra per turn
    - Can only be use for 10 turns max no more than that or the Jar will be destroyed afterwards.
    ~Approved~


    Shinju: Ame No Shinju (Pearl Release: Rain of Pearls)

    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damge Points: 40
    Description: The user releases from his Jar (or from one of the shell summons) a giant pearl 50 feet long diameter, then the user sends the giant pearl into the sky, scattered it and transform the giant pearl into tiny winy one thousand of pearls then pour them down from the sky aiming the opponent to be buried alive.

    Notes:
    Can only be use 4 times
    Can be use onto multiple opponents that are very close to each other
    ~Approved~ Never ever include that the opponent dies in the description of the technique. I edited the highlighted to help its approval. If you are not satisfied feel free to drop me a VM/PM and I will change my verdict.

    Shinju: Kyojin Maruishi (Pearl Release: Giant Boulder)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Jar (or Shell Summon), then merges them into giant boulder made of pearls size 25 Feet long with sharp spikes all around the boulder and the user sends this boulder to the opponent with 150km/hour speed and the boulder will roll over the opponent brutally.

    Notes:
    Can only be used 4 times per battle
    ~Declined~ 25 feet long in what? diameter? and please compare to narutoverse speeds. I don't think you realize actually how fast 150km/hour is.
    Shinju: Shiro daburufangu (Pearl Release: Double Fang)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Jar (or Shell Summon), then form a white sharp fang in the user right and left hands just looks like Guren Crystal fang the different is this a pale white color fang and the fang itself 30cm size, the sharp edges 15 cm long in human normal hands with a single blade in each hands, this fang are very sharp and able to pierces through solid, Steel or metal object.

    Notes:
    Can only be used 3 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle

    ~Approved~

    Shinju: P1 Bunshin "Petron" (Pearl Release: P1 Clone "Petron")
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: P1 clone is a copy of the user but in shape of a white pale person. The clone itself can only use pearl release according of the user gain and knowledge of the pearl release, it can also utilize any pearl release even without having the white gourd or the shell summoning up until S-Rank pearl release.

    Notes:
    As P1 using his body to release the pearl jutsu so it can only be used 3 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle from the Jar / Shell Summoning

    ~Declined~ You need to restrict the amount of times it can use jade techniques because reducing the turns before it vanishes won't solve anything. What if the prime clone uses six big scaled jade techniques during that time? He doesn't have enough body mass to accomplish such things.

    Shinju: P2 Katachidzukuru "Prime" (Pearl Release: P2 Shape "Prime")
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will summon his giant shell which it will throw out a giant pearl with size 25 feet long into the ground then the user perform 5 serial hand seal then push and placed his right hand into the giant pearl while his left hand hold his right wrist and yell “PRIME” to manipulate the giant pearl and shape it into a giant bird about 25 feet tall, Prime is the 2nd form of pearl level manipulation called the “P2”, prime able to fly into the sky high with his white wing in high speed 200 km/hour while the user ride it, Prime shape pale white and have the ability to shoot out rapidly pearl ball size of a basket ball from the sky into the opponent and the pearl ball will crush everything within the impact, prime also able to defend from similar rank jutsu using it wing.

    Note: can only be use 3 times
    Note: Must have Shells summoning contract
    Note: Can only last 2 turn in field then auto disappear
    Note: No other pearl tech while the user ride Prime
    Note: Count as two turn as the user has to summon his giant shell
    Note: Can only be use by Oasis Nara
    ~Declined~ 25 feet long in what? Diameter? This is one is very close to approval I just need you to compare the speeds in which it can travel to narutoverse because 200 km/hour is simply ridiculous.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 06-29-2012 at 05:45 PM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    ±Ibiton: Sono Mashin Reiki | Decay Release: The Mephistophelian Aura±
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20 (-5 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user does 2 hand seals (Boar+Ram) and releases his Decay Chakra into the field all around him up to mid range, unleashing a gold glow momentarily upon activation. Using the advanced release of Ibiton, the user is able to specifically decay only paper, writing ink and small amounts of metal (normal metal from kunais and shurikens and other normal weapons) that when entering mid-range from the user, crumble away into dust. Any Tag, Scroll, Shuriken, Kunai, etc present on the field crumbles into nothing as long as the technique is active, rendering the use of techniques that require such medium impossible.
    Note: Pertains to Scrolls and Paper Tags such as those used for various Fuuinjutsu (like explosive Tags or even FTG tags on Kunais, sealing scrolls, weapon scrolls, etc) and Ninjutsu. Because the rank of such techniques is determined not by the scroll/paper/tag used but by the technique that comes from it, all uses of such scroll and paper bound techniques are negated regardless of rank of the technique that will come from them.
    Note: The technique also affects any Kunai, Shuriken, Sword, etc made of the normal metal we find in most common weapons in Narutoverse (excluding, off course, Custom Weapons and the 7SM Swords). Once exposed on the field to the Decay Chakra all around, they crumble away into dust through the normal oxidation process most metals go through, rendering them useless.
    Note: Only works on Konan's Paper Ninjutsu up to B-Rank.
    Note: Once activated, remains active for 4 turns.
    Note: Has no effect on metal CE's or anything other than Paper, Ink and the aforementioned normal Weapons.
    Note: Doesn't blind or affect Dojutsu or Sensory Ninjas.
    ____________
    -Approved-
    I changed the duration to 4 turns.

    ±Ibiton: Sono Kougu no Odahviing | Decay Release: The Tools of Odahviing±
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn if kept active)
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user will take use of the specific release of Ibiton and manifest any construct his mind is able to imagine and visualize of that specific part of the release (Cubes, Spheres, Kunais, Swords, Walls, etc). These constructs, translucid and golden with a slight black hue in them, can be used to defend or attack. They can be created only Short-Mid range around the user but they can be thrown further. The user can control the movement of the constructs with or without the need for hand gestures, depending on the distance he is from them (Short range, no handgestures, Mid range requires hand gestures). Although hazardous to the enemies and anything present in the battlefield, the user can touch and interact with these constructs freely, taking advantage of their inherent properties to his own advantage. These constructs, if kept in short range, last until either dispelled or countered, making it a good choice to create weapons or defensive shields.
    Note: Usable 5 times per battle.
    Note: Creates only 1 item per use.
    ____________
    -Approved-
    Added a 2nd note.

    ±Ibiton: Megumi no Ulphir | Decay Release: The Blessing of Ulphir±
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-15 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    By using the advanced release of Ibiton, the user focuses Decay Chakra into his body to target specific substances and harmfull effects that might be affecting him. The user must only be aware that he's being affected by something harmfull to activate the technique. Doing the Rat handseal the user "wills" his decay chakra to search for harmfull toxins, poisons, isotopes, venoms, etc that might be affecting him in a negative manner and decays them into harmless biproducts, even to a molecular level if needed. While usefull when fightning Poison users such as medical ninjas, its also very very useful when fightning against users of radioactive elements (since the isotopes that are the core component of radiation are easily decayed, this technique can easily tear them apart, basically, decaying the "fuel" of radiation and thus, stopping it) or when, in general, fighting for long periods of time or in long skirmishes, were stamina and endurance is important. By focusing the Decay Chakra into his body, the user may also target toxins produced by his own body such as lactic acid produced from muscle activity. This enables the user to fight against the effects produced by such substances and creates a great resistant to pathogens. This technique may also be used to target harmfull organisms such as bacteria or fungus as well as virus, that may be inducing a pathogenic state on the user. The user can also, even if in a smaller scale and effect, use this technique on others through direct physical contact. When doing so, the effects are momentary, unlike when used on ones self. This means that if the ally has the "aggressive agent" cleaned from his system but has contact with it again, the technique needs to be used once more.

    Note: Usable 3 times, with 1 turn cooldown.
    Note: Its effects last for 4 turns each time, during which the user can't use Decay Release above A-Rank unless he dispels the technique.
    Note: When used on others, it counts as a single momentary use.
    Note: Has an effect on anything that falls under the description of "aggressive external agent" as long as it respects the elements unique strengths and weaknesses.
    ____________
    -Approved-


    ±Ibiton: Sono Doki no Azazel | Decay Release: The Wrath of Azazel±
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
    Damage: 60 (+20 to Taijutsu moves, +20 to Fire techniques S-Rank and below)
    Description:
    One of the basic techniques of Ibiton in which the user takes full advantage of the main release and the advanced release to power his hand to hand fighting. The user releases huge amounts of Decay Chakra through out his body, covering himself in an energy that resembles the "flames" of the main release of Ibiton. By doing this, not only does the user become extremely dangerous in hand to hand fighting as he gains a good defense against many energy based techniques as well as taijutsu as the decay chakra surrounding him is dense enough to also act as a defensive mechanism. As the user moves his body, he can release decay chakra as semi crescent waves, projectiles or localized jets/streams, by increasing the output of chakra in the correct timing, combining it with his taijutsu. Doing this enables the user to, for example, punch forward, releasing a burst of decay chakra or side sweeping his leg to create a semi crescent wave of decay chakra, all with the properties mentioned above, below and in Ibiton's definition (strength of A-Rank Ibiton). Not only that but since the user is shrouded in Decay Chakra that resembles flames, when using a Katon breath-related technique, it passively mixes with the Decay Chakra and creates an Ibiton/Katon combo with increased power. However due to the accelerated burn produced by the decay chakra, the fire techniques lose on rank in range, meaning that a long range technique becomes mid ranged, mid ranged becomes short ranged. This shroud of decay makes the user seem as if he's caught fire (in the colors that he can manifest the release), seeming as if flames are being fueled by his own essence. These "flames" have the normal properties of the main release with one additional property, given by the advanced release: when these "flames" touch animal flesh, they focus on decaying proteins, quickly liquifying enemy flesh. This effect, in essence, is more like the effects of a very hot flame/temperature, even if the manifestation of decay release doesn't have any kind of heat output.

    Note: Once activated, lasts for 4 turns
    Note: Can be used 3 times but requires a one turn cold down
    Note: The ranged bursts and projectiles passively made by combination with Taijutsu are A-Ranked and count as a move from the 3 per turn count.
    Note: While the technique is active, the user can't mold Water Techniques as doing so ends it
    Note: Because of the inherent properties of Decay Release (being based on Fire and Lightning), all Fire Breath Techniques S-Rank and below gain +20 in damage if the technique is active, by mixing passively with the decay chakra being released all around the user, creating a Ibiton/Katon combo. However range is reduced by the accelerated burn, losing one rank in range. This means that a long range technique will only reach mid range, mid range only short range. Short ranged techniques are unaffected by this.
    ____________
    -Approved-
     
         
    Last edited by Nexus; 07-12-2012 at 06:52 PM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    ⊰ Moerudōton: Akunochimata Sajiki ⊱ Blazing Earth: Chamber of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After slamming his hands together the user causes a Chamber of Blazing Earthen walls/roof with spikes erupting out of them to rise five x five meters around the opponent(s), causing suffocation from the extreme heats within the end of that turn.
    ____________
    -Approved-

    ⊰ Moerudōton: Seisei Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Creations of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: By manipulating his/her Blazing Earth chakra, the user will manipulate and rise all kinds of structures, ranging from small/medium sized pillars to walls, spikes, domes, cubical prisons, combinations of the listed above, etc. Following Ōnoki's principle of spewing out solid earthen golems from his mouth, the user can also spew out things like, small/medium sized chuncks of Blazing Earth used as projectile attacks, or even projectiles like kunais or even solid weapons like staffs that are shape manipulated after being spewed out just like the regular sized earthen golem used by Ōnoki.

    ♦ Can be used five times per battle
    ____________
    -Approved-

    ⊰ Moerudōton: Rensa Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Chains of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing the Tiger → Boar hand seals, the user will cause chains of blazing earth to erupt out of the ground beneath the target(s) and wrap around his/her/their legs, slowly melting the skin and bones due to the extreme heat. If used against a large summon like Gamabunta the user will perform the added hand seal of the "Dragon" to utilize a greater blazing Earth source beforehand.

    ♦ Can be used four times per battle
    ____________
    -Declined-
    Bones don't melt.
    ⊰ Moerudōton: Hogosha Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Guardian of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the Tiger → Dragon hand seals, the user will slam his hands together. This causes a gigantic blazing Earth Golem the size of Uchiha Madara's final susano to rise from the ground. The Golem is able to utilize blazing Earth, Earth, and Fire release techniques up to the user's rank.

    ♦ Can be used twice per battle
    ♦ No other Blazing Earth techniques the same turn
    ♦ No Blazing Earth, Wind, Fire & Earth techniques above S-Rank next turn
    ____________
    -Pending-
    Bit big for not being an actual summon.
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    Last edited by Nexus; 06-30-2012 at 12:30 AM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    ( Meromeroton: Kiukoudai no Kin Tenbin ) Perfume Release: Magnanimous Golden Libra

    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This techniques manifests itself as a quick burst of vaporous golden perfume, stretching radially 10 meters around the user in under a couple of seconds. The premise for this technique is that the chakra system and the physical body are directly linked. This perfume does not affect opponent's whose chakra system or blood system is in the same pace than the user's. If higher than normal, the perfume will emit a genjutsu that will make the opponent feel as if the gravity suddenly increased, pinning them to the ground. The effects are proportional to the chakra system's alteration, thus, when the user moves at a faster pace than normally allowed to the body through the use of chakra (Such as Swift, Gates, Sage Mode or Raikage's Lightning Coat, for example), the pressure of the gravity will bring the person's speed down, invariably making the target as fast as he/she normally is. Due to affecting the body directly, it is able to surpass chakra peaks, like burst of chakra or pain, but is easily released by localized chakra releases (Such as someone infusing chakra into their bodies), otherwise simply calming oneself/releasing the modes will render the genjutsu inactive.
    *The perfume stays in the target's body for 5 turns (As long as Raikage's Coat). Without the perfume, the genjutsu can be released as normal*
    *The user can only use this technique twice per battle, and it requires 2 turns waiting period after the previous perfume disappeared*
    *The user can't preform Forbidden jutsus, nor Perfume higher than A rank, for 2 turns after the perfume is activated*

    Note: If it's not approvable as it is, considering it doesn't have handseals (I'll explain my reasoning, please consider the following restriction:

    *The user must preform 1 handseal prior, having the technique laying dormant to be activated whenever the need arises, without handseals*
    ~Declined~ There is no need for an explanation, I understand perfectly fine why you would rather not have hand seals when activating the technique on the spot. But that's what makes this technique that deadly. So I will ask you kindly, once again for the last time to include hand seals.
    ( Meromeroton: Kiukoudai no Kin Tenbin ) Perfume Release: Magnanimous Golden Libra

    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Requires 1 handseal. This techniques manifests itself as a quick burst of vaporous golden perfume, stretching radially 10 meters around the user in under a couple of seconds. The premise for this technique is that the chakra system and the physical body are directly linked. This perfume does not affect opponent's whose chakra system or blood system is in the same pace than the user's. If higher than normal, the perfume will emit a genjutsu that will make the opponent feel as if the gravity suddenly increased, pinning them to the ground. The effects are proportional to the chakra system's alteration, thus, when the user moves at a faster pace than normally allowed to the body through the use of chakra (Such as Swift, Gates, Sage Mode or Raikage's Lightning Coat, for example), the pressure of the gravity will bring the person's speed down, invariably making the target as fast as he/she normally is. Due to affecting the body directly, it is able to surpass chakra peaks, like burst of chakra or pain, but is easily released by localized chakra releases (Such as someone infusing chakra into their bodies), otherwise simply calming oneself/releasing the modes will render the genjutsu inactive.
    *The perfume stays in the target's body for 5 turns (As long as Raikage's Coat). Without the perfume, the genjutsu can be released as normal*
    *The user can only use this technique twice per battle, and it requires 2 turns waiting period after the previous perfume disappeared*
    *The user can't preform Forbidden jutsus, nor Perfume higher than A rank, for 2 turns after the perfume is activated*
    ~Approved~

    Note: Done. Though nothing about this technique is deadly. It doesn't immobilize the opponent, it makes him/her as fast as a normal ninja.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    Resubmitting as I'm the co-creator of both of these elements and the original submitter has become inactive and I have permission to resubmit.

    Divine Wind Style: Serial Winds Thunderclap (Kamikazeton: Shinku Renpa Jinrai)
    Rank: B-S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40-90
    Damage Points: 40-90
    Description: The user charges large amounts of Divine Wind to his hands. He then makes a few hand seals and spreads his arms out wide. He then brings them together clapping, making several waves of Divine Wind for each time he claps his hands. From the power of the clap, wind is thrown at the enemy with enough force to knock down a house with only three clap. The wind is blown extremely fast and hits very quickly. The user can clap up to 4 times in a row, with each clap gaining in strength. If the user choices to make 3 claps or more, it requires a long string of handseals that take around 3 seconds to perform. Each clap strength increases on a scale like this one:
    1st clap: (B-Rank) strong enough to knock back a man
    2nd clap: (A-Rank) strong enough to knock back a car
    3rd clap: (A-Rank) strong enough to knock over a house
    4th clap: (S-Rank) strong enough to knock over a building (large)
    *after using 1-2 claps, the user cannot use any Divine Wind jutsu the next turn*
    *after using 3-4 claps, the user cannot use any Divine Wind jutsu for two turns*
    *Only useable once a fight*
    *after this jutsu is used(in any form) The user cannot use forbbinden ranks for the rest of the battle, S ranks for 2 turns, and A ranks in the following turn. In other words he can only use B rank and below in the following turn, A rank and below in the next, S rank below 2 turns following.
    ____________
    -Declined- I forgot to say that this has to be 3(4) different jutsu for each rank, I don't allow X-Y rank because it's cheating the jutsu limit rule
    1.)Divine Wind Style: Serial Winds Thunderclap (Kamikazeton: Shinku Renpa Jinrai)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 90
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user charges large amounts of Divine Wind to his hands. He then makes a few hand seals and spreads his arms out wide. He then brings them together clapping, making several waves of Divine Wind for each time he claps his hands. From the power of the clap, wind is thrown at the enemy with enough force to knock down a house with only three clap. The wind is blown extremely fast and hits very quickly. The user can clap up to 4 times in a row, with each clap gaining in strength. If the user choices to make 3 claps or more, it requires a long string of handseals that take around 3 seconds to perform. Each clap strength increases on a scale like this one:
    1st clap: strong enough to knock back a man
    2nd clap: strong enough to knock back a car
    3rd clap: strong enough to knock over a house
    4th clap: strong enough to knock over a building (large)
    *after using 1-2 claps, the user cannot use any Divine Wind jutsu the next turn*
    *after using 3-4 claps, the user cannot use any Divine Wind jutsu for two turns*
    *Only useable once a fight*
    *after this jutsu is used(in any form) The user cannot use forbbinden ranks for the rest of the battle, S ranks for 2 turns, and A ranks in the following turn. In other words he can only use B rank and below in the following turn, A rank and below in the next, S rank below 2 turns following.
    *The friction and force from the claps causes damage to the user's hands and after using 1-2 claps, he cannot use any taijutsu for 1 turn. After making 3 or 4 claps, the pain is so great that he cannot use any arm-based tai for 3 turns.
    ~Declined~ Almost there, I just need you to clarify on exactly how many hand seals you need to perform and to convert the size references to narutoverse.(ex. Large building = Hokage building, etc) Also you need to fix the chakra and damage points.
    I removed all references of more than one rank usage and added an additional restrictions.

    (Akunochimata Soushi) - Underworldly Creation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user makes a few handseals and channels chakra into the earth within Short to Long range from him in a circular radius. This causes the earth beneath them to turn into corundum (not the force, however. It still takes on the look of regular earth). This is done to prepare for further Corundum jutsus and to get a sense of tracking if the enemy touches any part of it.
    ~the opponent can't use earth jutsu while this is in affect, as they can't manipulate Cory Dom, however the user can utilize any earth technique(I'm the form of corundum) from it as he can manipulate corundum.
    ~the user can sense the opponent by his vibrations, so an opponent without chakra can be sensed as well(I.e. Zetsu usin mayfly)
    ~all earth jutsu would be +10
    ____________
    -Declined- Use a proper name if it's a corundum custom
    2.) (Kougyokuton: Akunochimata Soushi) - Corundum Style: Underworldly Creation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user makes a few handseals and channels chakra into the earth within Short to Long range from him in a circular radius. This causes the earth beneath them to turn into corundum (not the force, however. It still takes on the look of regular earth). This is done to prepare for further Corundum jutsus and to get a sense of tracking if the enemy touches any part of it.
    ~the opponent can't use earth jutsu while this is in affect, as they can't manipulate Cory Dom, however the user can utilize any earth technique(I'm the form of corundum) from it as he can manipulate corundum.
    ~the user can sense the opponent by his vibrations, so an opponent without chakra can be sensed as well(I.e. Zetsu usin mayfly)
    ~all earth jutsu would be +10
    ~Declined~ Change it up to medium range and clarify the amount of hand seals you need to perform. I will also like you to re-write the opponent's earth usage restrictions. As it stands, its restricting the opponent from using earth all together but there are other ways to use earth style without a ground source. And just to be clear, I will not allow this field to turn all regular earth style techniques into corundum.
    Edited the name to include Corundum/Kougyokuton in it.

    Divine Wind Release: Vortex (Kamikazeton: Kadou)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (+20 to the user)
    Description: The user focuses divine wind chakra in the air around the him and the opponent. He then makes a series of hand signs and manipulate the divine wind chakra that was around them to create a huge vortex of divine wind. The wind acts as a tornado of sorts, causing anything other than the user and enemy on the inside of it to be swirled and tossed around. Once caught in the middle of it, the high levels of wind and pressure will make it hard to form handseals due to the speed and power of the wind. While trapped within, the power of the wind becomes stronger and thinner each turn, producing a slicing effect on anything within (meaning both the enemy and the user start to get cut from the wind, negating the effectiveness of any genjutsu due to continuous pain). By the second turn (if the user continues the jutsu that long), the wind and lightning both strike inwards, with lightning paralyzing every object and the wind slicing them to shreds.
    Note: If used in short range, it is almost guaranteed death of both the user and enemy due to the power of the wind and lightning together. If used within mid-long range, the wind and lightning are enough to severely damage both the enemy and user if still within it once the wind cuts inwards.
    Note:
    ~If used for two turns, on the second turn the user can only use two jutsus that turn.
    ~Once per battle
    ~No Divine Wind jutsus for remainder of fight
    ~No Wind or Lightning jutsus for two turns afterwards.
    ~Takes several seconds for the inwardly slice to happen
    ____________
    -Declined- I'm fine with it just define what it takes to make you stop keeping the jutsu up

    3.)Divine Wind Release: Vortex (Kamikazeton: Kadou)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (+20 to the user)
    Description: The user focuses divine wind chakra in the air around the him and the opponent. He then makes a series of hand signs and manipulate the divine wind chakra that was around them to create a huge vortex of divine wind. The wind acts as a tornado of sorts, causing anything other than the user and enemy on the inside of it to be swirled and tossed around. Once caught in the middle of it, the high levels of wind and pressure will make it hard to form handseals due to the speed and power of the wind. While trapped within, the power of the wind becomes stronger and thinner each turn, producing a slicing effect on anything within (meaning both the enemy and the user start to get cut from the wind, negating the effectiveness of any genjutsu due to continuous pain). By the second turn (if the user continues the jutsu that long), the wind and lightning both strike inwards, with lightning paralyzing every object and the wind slicing them to shreds. The user needs a high level of concentration when using the jutsu and he cannot use any jutsu higher than A rank while this one is in effect so he can keep control over it.
    Note: If used in short range, it is almost guaranteed death of both the user and enemy due to the power of the wind and lightning together. If used within mid-long range, the wind and lightning are enough to severely damage both the enemy and user if still within it once the wind cuts inwards.
    Note:
    ~If used for two turns, on the second turn the user can only use two jutsus that turn.
    ~Once per battle
    ~No Divine Wind jutsus for remainder of fight
    ~No Wind or Lightning jutsus for two turns afterwards.
    ~Takes several seconds for the inwardly slice to happen
    ~If the user is caught in a high ranking Genjutsu (A-rank and above before the second turn, the jutsu's effect will be negated and the vortex will end.
    ~Declined~ I'd like you to re-word this entirely and describe it more clearly. As it stands, its not approvalable and thus will give you a chance before DNR'ing it.

    Added a note and added something to the description regarding ending of jutsu.

    Corundum release: Grenade (Kougyokuton: tekidan)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses his corundum chakra into his hand and creates a small ball like object, made entirely out of corundum. Inside the user focuses an immense amount of fire chakra, he then throws the ball at the opponent and making one hand seal can cause the ball to explode releasing an explosion mixed with corundum shrapnel, due to the shrapnel being corundum(so it's density is extremely high) the technique is very hard to block.
    ~3 times per battle

    ~Declined~ How big is the explosion radius? And this would count as 2/3 jutsu as its a Corundum/Fire combination.
    4.)Corundum release: Grenade (Kougyokuton: tekidan)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses his corundum chakra into his hand and creates a small ball like object, made entirely out of corundum. Inside the user focuses an immense amount of fire chakra, he then throws the ball at the opponent and making one hand seal can cause the ball to explode, releasing an explosion mixed with corundum shrapnel, striking everything located within the short range (3-5 meters) distance of the ball. Due to the shrapnel being corundum(so it's density is extremely high) the technique is very hard to block.
    ~3 times per battle
    ~Counts as 2/3 of the jutsus used per turn
    ~Approved~ Removed the last sentence, if you are not satisfied with my edit, please feel free to drop me a VM/PM so I can change my verdict.

    Editted description and added note.

    Summoning/Corundum release: Warriors of the dead (Kuchiyose/Kougyokuton: musha-sono-nai)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The user bites him thumb, does a series of hand signs and slams his hands on the ground, instantly 10 warriors, made entirely out of corundum appear standing next to the user, 5 to his left and five to his right. Each warrior fashions armor, a spear, and a long sword all made up of corundum and have the users blood mixed in with them. The warriors can't use any jutsu, however they can focus chakra, allowing them to chakra enhance their weapons to be sharper, and such, furthermore, they have the ability to regenerate their weapons in the event they are destroyed. The warriors are extremely strong, due to their body's being made of corundum one of their punches would be equivalent, if not more destructive than one of tsunade's chakra infused punches. Due to the fact that the warriors have the users blood mixed within them, the user can make one hand sign and summon a warrior from anywhere on the battle field right in front of him, defending him from an incoming attack.
    ~Once per battle
    ~The warriors can only regenerate their weapons 2 times each
    ~Summoning to defend from an attack counts as a turn
    ~The speed of the warrior depends on the speed of the user, if the user is a considerably fast ninja than the warriors are faster, if the user is slower than the warriors are slower, and so on.

    ~Declined~ Keep in mind that nothing in our RP is "instant" aside from space/time ninjutsu. Also if you want this to have a chance at approval you're going to have to tone down the strength of your warriors. Equal strength to one of tsunade's punches? That's too much. As for the speed in which they can move make sure they can't exceed Lee without weights speed.
    5.)Summoning/Corundum release: Warriors of the dead (Kuchiyose/Kougyokuton: musha-sono-nai)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The user bites him thumb, does a series of hand signs and slams his hands on the ground, instantly 10 warriors, made entirely out of corundum appear standing next to the user, 5 to his left and five to his right. Each warrior fashions armor, a spear, and a long sword all made up of corundum and have the users blood mixed in with them. The warriors can't use any jutsu, however they can focus chakra, allowing them to chakra enhance their weapons to be sharper, and such, furthermore, they have the ability to regenerate their weapons in the event they are destroyed. The warriors are extremely strong, due to their body's being made of corundum one of their punches would be equivalent, if not more destructive than one of the average punches from Lee, with speed rivaling him without his weight in Part II. Due to the fact that the warriors have the users blood mixed within them, the user can make one hand sign and summon a warrior from anywhere on the battle field right in front of him, defending him from an incoming attack.
    ~Once per battle
    ~The warriors can only regenerate their weapons 2 times each
    ~Summoning to defend from an attack counts as a turn
    ~The warriors resurrected appearance's often mark those of whomever the user's wishes, meaning he can 're-create' a person from his enemy's past in order to make the fight take a greater toll on the enemy's psyche.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This was the very first technique I checked when I got my job, and it seems like I missed a few things that I have now gained through experience. I should have DNR'd it the first time around.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 07-14-2012 at 06:56 AM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    [QUOTE=Oasis Nara;7129409]
    Quote Originally Posted by Oasis Nara View Post

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    Note : Mig gave me his permission to resubmit this via MSN


    Shinju: Shiro No Bin (Pearl Release: The White Jar)

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A legendaryJar size of Gaara´s gourd, white with green markings made of solid pearl material which has been buried hundreds of years beneath the ocean and contains tens of unique shells with strong pearl chakra and they are able to keep producing little pearls where they live and bread inside the Jar, the Jar itself has been wielded by the Elders of Shells who have strong pearl chakra. Shells from the Jar are able to produce huge amount of pearls to keep unlimited amount of little pearls so the user of the Gourd is able to manipulate pearls as his/her wish, the Elder of Shells always carried this Jar to the battle fields and merged his pearl chakra to the Gourd so that he will be able to manipulate the pearls inside for many usage (attack, defense and supplementary), but the effect is the Jar drain the user chakra every time the user use it that’s why only a strong chakra possession and balance control ability able to use this Jar, meaning only Kage Rank. He passed down some of these Jars to those who have been loyal to the Shells kingdom and trained by the Elder himself how to use this Jar. The Elder made several of these Jars so that each user can have one Jar.



    Notes:
    - To use this Jar, person has to learn how to use it from ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ & Oasis Nara
    - This Jar can be destroyed by a strong lightning jutsu
    - This Jar is considered as Weapon so the user cannot use his/her CW in the same battle he uses this Jar
    - Every time the user use pearl jutsu using this Jar, it will drain -10 chakra and after 7 turn use the user will be exhausted and lower their speed
    - After 3 turn use the Jar, the user can't use the Jar for 1 turn to give the pearl time to reload the pearls chakra production, that's applied to the following turns.
    - Can only be use for 10 turns max no more than that or the Jar will be destroyed afterwards.

    ~Declined~ Okay, first of all you still left the word 'Gourd' a few times in the description. Second of all at the part I highlighted; That is a very useless description you are trying to pass off as a restriction. You know why? To use the element you already need to be Kage rank so I would suggest you remove that unnecessary text in the submission. The requirement to use this Jar is also another obvious requirement when teaching the element to one of the two students. As for the last few highlights I have a question. Are you confusing turns with how many times per battle the jar can be used? And if not the you really need to re-write that because as it stands it is a mess to read and understand clearly.
    Picture of the Jar


    Shinju: Ame No Shinju (Pearl Release: Rain of Pearls)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damge Points: 40
    Description: The user releases from his Jar (or from one of the shell summons) a giant pearl, then the user sends the giant pearl into the sky, scattered it into pearl powder upon the sky and transform the powder into tiny winy thousands of pearls then pour them down from the sky aiming the opponent to buried him/her alive.

    Notes:
    Must be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ & Oasis Nara
    ~Declined~ Okay I want you to reword the transforming into powder thing because that's not what your approved CE submission is about. You can manipulate solid pearl not powdered form. As for the thousands of pearls I need a more defined amount. Lastly, clarify the actual size of the "giant pearl". How big is this "giant pearl?
    Shinju: Kyojin Maruishi (Pearl Release: Giant Boulder)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Gourd (or Shell Summon), then merges them into giant boulder made of pearls half size of Gamabunta with sharp spikes all around the boulder and the user sends this boulder to the opponent with fast speed and the boulder will roll over the opponent brutally.

    Notes:
    Can only be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ & Oasis Nara
    Can only be used 4 times per battle
    ~Declined~ You do realize how long it would actually take to release such a ridiculous amount of little pearls to form a boulder made of pearl half the size of Gama, right? You need to drastically lower the size of the boulder, and you have yet to define the speed, you simply changed it from "high" to "fast".



    Re-Subbmitting

    Shinju: Shiro daburufangu (Pearl Release: Double Fang)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Gourd (or Shell Summon), then form a white sharp fang in the user right and left hands, this fang are very sharp and able to pierces through solid, Steel or metal object.

    Notes:
    Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    Can only be used 5 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle

    ~Declined~ Reduce the turns before they vanished if you want this allowed to be used twice per battle. And you really need to define the shape and size of these fangs. How many blades? How long are the sharp edges? etc, etc
    Shinju: P1 Bunshin "Petron" (Pearl Release: P1 Clone "Petron")
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: P1 clone is a copy of the user but in shape of a white pale person. The clone itself can only use pearl release according of the user gain and knowledge of the pearl release, it can also utilize any pearl release even without having the white gourd or the shell summoning up until S-Rank pearl release.

    Notes:
    Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    Can only be used 5 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle from the Jar / Shell Summoning

    ~Declined~ Still didn't fix what I asked for.



    Re-Submitting



    Shinju: Shiro No Bin (Pearl Release: The White Jar)

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A legendary Jar size of Gaara´s Jar, white with green markings made of solid pearl material which has been buried hundreds of years beneath the ocean and contains tens of unique shells with strong pearl chakra and they are able to keep producing little pearls where they live and bread inside the Jar, the Jar itself has been wielded by the Elders of Shells who have strong pearl chakra. Shells from the Jar are able to produce huge amount of pearls to keep unlimited amount of little pearls so the user of the Jar is able to manipulate pearls as his/her wish, the Elder of Shells always carried this Jar to the battle fields and merged his pearl chakra to the Jar so that he will be able to manipulate the pearls inside for many usage (attack, defense and supplementary), but the effect is the Jar drain the user chakra every time the user use it that’s why He passed down some of these Jars to those who have been loyal to the Shells kingdom and trained by the Elder himself how to use this Jar. The Elder made several of these Jars so that each user can have one Jar.



    Notes:
    -This Jar can be destroyed by a strong lightning jutsu
    -This Jar is considered as Weapon so the user cannot use his/her CW in the same battle he uses this Jar
    -Every time the user use pearl jutsu using this Jar, it will drain -10 chakra per turn
    - Can only be use for 10 turns max no more than that or the Jar will be destroyed afterwards.
    ~Approved~


    Shinju: Ame No Shinju (Pearl Release: Rain of Pearls)

    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damge Points: 40
    Description: The user releases from his Jar (or from one of the shell summons) a giant pearl 50 feet long diameter, then the user sends the giant pearl into the sky, scattered it and transform the giant pearl into tiny winy one thousand of pearls then pour them down from the sky aiming the opponent to be buried alive.

    Notes:
    Can only be use 4 times
    Can be use onto multiple opponents that are very close to each other
    ~Approved~ Never ever include that the opponent dies in the description of the technique. I edited the highlighted to help its approval. If you are not satisfied feel free to drop me a VM/PM and I will change my verdict.

    Shinju: Kyojin Maruishi (Pearl Release: Giant Boulder)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Jar (or Shell Summon), then merges them into giant boulder made of pearls size 25 Feet long with sharp spikes all around the boulder and the user sends this boulder to the opponent with 150km/hour speed and the boulder will roll over the opponent brutally.

    Notes:
    Can only be used 4 times per battle
    ~Declined~ 25 feet long in what? diameter? and please compare to narutoverse speeds. I don't think you realize actually how fast 150km/hour is.
    Shinju: Shiro daburufangu (Pearl Release: Double Fang)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Jar (or Shell Summon), then form a white sharp fang in the user right and left hands just looks like Guren Crystal fang the different is this a pale white color fang and the fang itself 30cm size, the sharp edges 15 cm long in human normal hands with a single blade in each hands, this fang are very sharp and able to pierces through solid, Steel or metal object.

    Notes:
    Can only be used 3 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle

    ~Approved~

    Shinju: P1 Bunshin "Petron" (Pearl Release: P1 Clone "Petron")
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: P1 clone is a copy of the user but in shape of a white pale person. The clone itself can only use pearl release according of the user gain and knowledge of the pearl release, it can also utilize any pearl release even without having the white gourd or the shell summoning up until S-Rank pearl release.

    Notes:
    As P1 using his body to release the pearl jutsu so it can only be used 3 turns and vanished
    Can only be use 2 times per battle from the Jar / Shell Summoning

    ~Declined~ You need to restrict the amount of times it can use jade techniques because reducing the turns before it vanishes won't solve anything. What if the prime clone uses six big scaled jade techniques during that time? He doesn't have enough body mass to accomplish such things.

    Shinju: P2 Katachidzukuru "Prime" (Pearl Release: P2 Shape "Prime")
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will summon his giant shell which it will throw out a giant pearl with size 25 feet long into the ground then the user perform 5 serial hand seal then push and placed his right hand into the giant pearl while his left hand hold his right wrist and yell “PRIME” to manipulate the giant pearl and shape it into a giant bird about 25 feet tall, Prime is the 2nd form of pearl level manipulation called the “P2”, prime able to fly into the sky high with his white wing in high speed 200 km/hour while the user ride it, Prime shape pale white and have the ability to shoot out rapidly pearl ball size of a basket ball from the sky into the opponent and the pearl ball will crush everything within the impact, prime also able to defend from similar rank jutsu using it wing.

    Note: can only be use 3 times
    Note: Must have Shells summoning contract
    Note: Can only last 2 turn in field then auto disappear
    Note: No other pearl tech while the user ride Prime
    Note: Count as two turn as the user has to summon his giant shell
    Note: Can only be use by Oasis Nara
    ~Declined~ 25 feet long in what? Diameter? This is one is very close to approval I just need you to compare the speeds in which it can travel to narutoverse because 200 km/hour is simply ridiculous.


    RE-SUBMITTING

    Shinju: Kyojin Maruishi (Pearl Release: Giant Boulder)

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases massive amount of little pearls from inside the Jar (or Shell Summon), then merges them into giant boulder made of pearls size 25 Feet long in diameter with sharp spikes all around the boulder and the user sends this boulder to the opponent with speed like chouji’s boulder speed and the boulder will roll over the opponent brutally.

    Notes:

    Can only be used 4 times per battle
    ~Approved~

    Shinju: P1 Bunshin "Petron" (Pearl Release: P1 Clone "Petron")

    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: P1 clone is a copy of the user but in shape of a white pale person. The clone itself can only use pearl release according of the user gain and knowledge of the pearl release, it can also utilize any pearl release even without having the white Jar or the shell summoning up until S-Rank pearl release.

    Notes:
    - P1 using his body to release the pearl jutsu so it can only be used 2 pearl jutsu per turn
    -Only last for 3 turns and then vanished
    - Can only be use 2 times per battle from the Jar / Shell Summoning
    ~Declined~ Seems like you completely ignored the body mass thing.
    Shinju: P2 Katachidzukuru "Prime" (Pearl Release: P2 Shape "Prime")
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will summon his giant shell which it will throw out a giant pearl with size 25 feet long into the ground then the user perform 5 serial hand seal then push and placed his right hand into the giant pearl while his left hand hold his right wrist and yell “PRIME” to manipulate the giant pearl and shape it into a giant bird about 25 feet tall, Prime is the 2nd form of pearl level manipulation called the “P2”, prime able to fly into the sky high with his white wing in high speed similar speed with Deidara C2 Exploding Flying Dragon while the user ride it, Prime shape pale white and have the ability to shoot out rapidly pearl ball size of a basket ball from the sky into the opponent and the pearl ball will crush everything within the impact, prime also able to defend from similar rank jutsu using it wing.

    Note: can only be use 3 times
    Note: Must have Shells summoning contract
    Note: Can only last 2 turn in field then auto disappear
    Note: No other pearl tech while the user ride Prime
    Note: Count as two turn as the user has to summon his giant shell
    ~Declined~ Once again, 25 feet long in what? Diameter?
    New Submission

    (Shinju: Tenmetsu sakkaku) - Pearl Release: Blink Illusion

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: A Genjutsu utilized by using Pearl beauties, as we all know everyone will stunt by the beauty of any kind of pearl, man women would love to see a pearl and will be stunt with it beauty so with that principle the pearl user start to sprout out 20 pieces of pearl with medium size with diameter 10x10 cm per square from his jar then the user make the pearls floating around the user , 10 pearls in right and the other 10 pearls in his left side and when the opponent saw the pearl, they will start to stunt and transfixed because of the Pearl beauty and luxurious shape, the opponent intense would only desired to possess the pearls, then the pearl start to rotating which radiance the pearls beauty and luxurious while the pearl keep move forward towards the opponent arms, 10 pearls each moving toward the opponent arms then when the pearls reach the opponent arms they start to embrace and encircling the opponent arm while the opponent can’t be resist because of the opponent intense to possess the pearl but then the user manipulate the pearls to begin tighten the opponents arm and stretch the opponents arm from left to right so the opponent unable to move their hands and the user freely to do whatever they wish to do.

    Note :
    - May only be use trice per battle
    - No S-Rank/above Pearl release for another 2 turn
    ~Declined~ Please re-write it and make it more understandable.
    (Shinju : Shinju no hifu) – Pearl Release : Skin of Pearl
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (to activate) 20 (per turn onwards)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Similar and even greater with Gaara’s “Armour of Sand" technique, the user will pour down 200 pearl medium size 20x20 diameter from his Jar then covering himself with the pearls and the pearls will melt and coating around the user body become merge and infuse with the user so his skin have change into a white pale color all around, the unique of this technique is the user will gain more defense power and would resist till A-Rank Earth, water and fire jutsu, but this technique shall drain the user chakra and slower their speed until 1 rank below their current rank.

    Note :
    - Can only be use twice
    - A-Rank lightning attack could easily pierce the pearl skin
    ~Declined~ Do not resubmit.

    Note to submitter: Please take an extra minute of your precious day to remove all the approved and unnecessary quoted techniques in the spoilers. This simply makes my job that much harder when I have to edit your posts and also read my comments carefully because it seems you've missed a few quite frequently, Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    (Amatsu Fūton: Sakyū no Kyūei) Empyrean Wind Release: The Song of the Sand Dunes
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user sends a great blanket of Empyrean Wind through the pores of the earth or through the earth itself and spreads it through the terrain. By using the incredible suction power of Empyrean Wind and its ability to differentiate between particles, the blanket separates the many minerals in the earth from each other, pulling all nutritious substances and minerals far into the earth itself and leaving only a barren dune of sand and silicon in its wake. The blanket of Empyrean Wind severs all connection with the earth itself, preventing it from being used as a basis for Earth Techniques. Furthermore, the completely dead terrain makes the creation of life in the ground almost impossible, preventing the use of Wood Release, or any life-giving element, through the ground.
    -The user can, with one (1) handseal, push the soil and earth upwards again.
    -As a result of the Chakra strain, the user will be unable to use other Empyrean Wind Techniques during the same turn. Furthermore, the user will only be able to use two (2) techniques during the following turn.
    -Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
    ~Declined~ I'd like you to include hand seals and reduce the range to medium. Also, the extra hand seal to push the soil and earth back needs to count as one of your jutsu per turn. I'd also like you clarify exactly how deep into the earth you push the soil and the earth.

    (Amatsu Fūton: Yabō Haō Zangyaku no Kokyū) Empyrean Wind Release: The Breath of Paarthurnax
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user claps his hands together and creates a circular shape of uniquely rotating Empyrean Wind several hundred meters in the air. By using the air itself alongside the incredible suction power of Empyrean Wind, the shape quickly begins to attract and gather odorous molecules in its core. Through its rotation, the shape uses the air itself to gather all odorant molecules alongside moisture and most vapors. This in itself makes it impossible for any odors to be spread around the field, as they are immediately pulled directly upwards into the atmosphere. Clouds, too, will be absorbed by the shape, which only adds to the dry environment created by this technique. Finally, the shape draws insects and big concentrations of harmful germs/particles to it, killing and destroying them in the process with the ripping nature of Empyrean Wind.
    -The user can, with one (1) handseal, disperse the entire shape, causing the gathered humidity to fall onto the ground as a source of water.
    -The user cannot use S or higher ranked Empyrean Wind techniques while this is active. Furthermore, the user cannot use any Empyrean Wind Techniques during the following turn.
    -The shape lasts for four (4) turns.
    -Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
    ~Declined~ Very well written technique you have there. However I'd like you to reduce it to once per battle, include some hand seals (aside from the clap) and specify exactly how many techniques it can suck in. Because you stated bugs so this could mean, bug related techniques. You also stated clouds which falls under rain release and cloud release. You really need to restrict it in that area because as it stands, you can pretty much suck in a lot of different techniques for four turns and I will not allow that.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    (Kiastsu: Sankaku no Sendo) Atmospheric Pressure: Triangle of Death
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: All ranges
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-10 to the user)
    Description: The user will form a row of 3 hand seals and will rise three walls made of atmospheric pressure that form a prism surrounding the opponent. The walls are 12 metres tall and can vary in lenght up to 20metres each. Once they have risen, the user will form 1 hand seal and huge amount of Atmospheric Pressure will be shot from the walls, destroying everything in the prism.*
    ~Can only be used twice per battle, and no atmospheric pressure the next two turns.
    ~The user will take 10 damage due to the huge amount of chakra used and won’t be able to use S rank or above wind in the next two turns.
    ~Declined~ Is it April fools day already?
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    Francium Release: Gathering | Francumiton: Saishuu
    Rank: D
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:10
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user spreads chakra into a wide area around himself. He uses the chakra to find and gather particles and molecules of Francium. This allows the user to preform Francium techniques but the gathering itself lasts several turns.
    1st turn: The user is able to preform D and C rank techniques.
    2nd turn: The user is able to preform B and A rank techniques.
    3rd turn: The user is able to preform S and Forbidden rank techniques.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence activated this technique will be in use for the following 3 turns leaving the user only 2 more techniques per move.
    ~Approved~ A very nice, simple and clean technique, well done.

    Francium Release Technique | Francumiton no Jutsu
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming 2 hand seals the user uses the Francium to create medium sized pillars,weapons,shields,walls,domes,spikes and tools of Francium. The constructions do not make a lot damage but can lead to an explosion if used with water.
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-
    Note:Can only be used once per turn
    ~Declined~ It may not cause a lot of damage but you still need to include damage to the technique itself. Also I'd like you to clarify on the walls, domes, etc etc part. Exactly how many can you make?
    Francium Release: Francium Coating | Francumiton: Francium Tosou
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description: The user channels Francium chakra into his hands thus allowing him to coat smaller objects with a thin layer of Francium with just the slightest touch. This is mostly used to coat weapons and tools, but it may also be used in taijutsu to place a thin but lethal layer of Francium on the opponents skin.
    Notence activated it lasts 3 turns unless canceled by the user.
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ~Approved~
    Francium Release: Field of Francium | Francumiton: Francium Hara
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After having gathered enough Francium the user covers an extensive area with a couple of inches thick layer of Francium. If the Francium gets in touch with water, it will lead to a mediocre explosion destroying anything it has covered. Depending on how big the terrain covered is, the covering may take some time. The user can also create a thin layer beneath the grounds surface thus allowing him to perform a surprise attack. In order to perform this technique the user needs to be in touch with the ground or object he is covering.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: If used in a long range radius, the Francium requires 2 turns to cover the field. If used in any other range it forms in a couple of seconds.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ~Declined~ Reword the "destroying everything in its path" part. Also, will this prevent yourself and the opponent from utilizing earth style? Depending on the rank of course.
    Francium Release: Kill Switch | Francumiton: Uchitoru Irege
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is a very complex technique which can only be performed by those with great chakra control. By using this technique, the user gains the ability to remove or activate the Francium's reactivity with water. When removing the reactivity from the Francium, the user removes it's ability to explode when in touch with water thus making it completely harmless. The user can reactivate the explosion ability by using this technique again.
    Note: Once used, it cannot be used again for the following 2 turns.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ~Approved~ Thank you sir for allowing me to read nice and simple techniques for a change.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    (Masshuru-Muton: Reisuiyoku no Sasayaki ) Mushroom Style: Whisper of a Barbegazi

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Allows the user to create a large amount of cold-adapted fungus, which are able to withstand up to A rank Ice Jutsus and other Cold based Custom Elements. The user can choose to make them grow with other fungus in play, to enhanced them, or create them as walls from the ground or shields from her own body.
    *Can only be used again after two turns*

    Approved here

    (Masshuru-Muton: Reisuiyoku no Sasayaki ) Mushroom Style: Whisper of a Barbegazi

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Allows the user to create a large amount of cold-adapted fungus, which are able to withstand up to S rank Ice Jutsus and other Cold based Custom Elements.They protect it's bearer from cold temperatures, turning the cold into warmth. The user can choose to make them grow with other fungus in play, to enhance them, or create them as walls from the ground or shields from her own body.
    *Can only be used again after three turns*
    ____________
    -Approved-
    It's okay just add to the description that for in order to protect you from coldness your body needs to be covered in them, it's logic but some may not gather that unless it's written there nicely.

    Dropping:

    (Masshuru-muton: Chibi no Baundo ) Mushroom Style: Bouncy Leprechauns
    Rank: C
    Rank: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Allows the user to grow up to 5 large wide-topped mushrooms from the ground, that can bounce the user and/or the opponent high in the air, or withstand the impact from high falls.

    Approved here
    Alright

    Updating:

    (Masshuru-Muton: Shuju no Dokusei ) Mushroom Style: Toxic Dwarf

    Rank: A
    Rank: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Creates one large mushroom anywhere within range, with either a bright red top with white large dots or a black top.

    If red, the mushroom will release a blinding mist of spores that will secrete a liquid that causes irritation to the eyes, nose and throat of anyone who inhales them.
    If black, the mushroom will release an odorless, colorless mist with hallucinogenic properties, making them see a party of dwarfs all around them, which will forcefully distract them from the fight.

    The mushroom will release it's toxins over the course of 3 turns, at the end of which it will decay. The mists will take 1 full turn to spread through the max reach (about 20 meters all around the mushroom)
    *Only one mushroom at a time*
    *Must wait 2 turns after the mushroom decays in order to use the jutsu again*
    *The user and her summons aren't affected by neither mist. Allies can be given antidotes beforehand, which will only last 5 turns in the organism*

    Approved [http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?p=3574710&highlight=toxic+dwarf#pos t3574710]here[/url]
    (Masshuru-Muton: Shuju no Dokusei ) Mushroom Style: Toxic Dwarf

    Rank: A
    Rank: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Creates one large mushroom anywhere within range, with either a bright red top with orange particles, black with purple waves or white with yellow stripes.

    If red, the mushroom will release a blinding mist of spores that will secrete a liquid that causes irritation to the eyes, nose and throat of anyone who inhales them.
    If black, the mushroom will release an odorless, colorless mist with hallucinogenic properties, making them see a party of dwarfs all around them, which will forcefully distract them from the fight.
    If white, the mushroom will emit a poofy mist of spores which will allow the cap and surrounding surfaces to withstand large impacts, absorbing it's momentum and send it back, bouncing the impact. (5 meters max) Poofy spores aren't breathable.

    The mushroom will release it's toxins over the course of 3 turns, at the end of which it will decay. The mists will take 1 full turn to spread through the max reach (about 20 meters all around the mushroom)
    *Only one mushroom at a time*
    *Must wait 2 turns after the mushroom decays in order to use the jutsu again*
    *The user and her summons aren't affected by neither mist. Allies can be given antidotes beforehand, which will only last 5 turns in the organism*
    ____________
    -Approved-


    New:

    (Masshuru-muton/Suiton: Mahou Momsuta-mokuren ) Mushroom/Water Release: Monstrous Murk-Dweller Mandrake

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: 6 marks materialize a monstrous and massive mountainous mindless moorish and malodorous militant mandrake-like mesh of mold, mirroring the measures of monarchical monsters. It is mighty against it's mundane maladies for it's magnified moisture, masterfully marred in it's midst. It's muddy materials are malign, menacing, malevolent and not merciful, melancholy melting mischievous miscreants, the miserable menaces to it's maternal master. It's moaning moldy mouth of mire is master of Mushrooms, up to it's mark. The mesh of mold may materialize a myriad no more than 6 miniature monsters from it's might, mischievous militant mini murk-dwellers. The murderous musky mandrake mockingly manages a myriad of no more than 4 move-sets before it's muted. Moribund it is made milky and messy, melting mile-wide and measly.
    *Mushrooms managed by the Monstrous Murk-Dweller Mandrake are 1 mark more mighty than mundane Mushrooms*
    *1 monotonous use*


    Note in current english: Creates a madrake-like structure of fungus of the size of a boss summoning, heavily infused with water, which counters the element's natural weakness to fire. It's body has the same yet enhanced effects of normal main-release Mushroom. It can use mushroom techniques up to its ranked, whose effects get enhanced 1 rank. Is able to spit out mini copies of itself, up to 6. Lasts 4 turns if unblocked, can only be used once and requires 6 handseals. When the jutsu ends, the fungus just falls on the ground like it lost the force that was keeping it together.
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    -Pending-
    lol... you must have a lot of free time on your hands. I'd be happier if you just used a proper english description.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yusuke- View Post
    (Shindou : Totsunyuumoui) - Vibration Release : Rushing Fury
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the air surrounding the enemy and four barely visible furiously spinning sphere-like balls, much like Sonic Hedgehog if you seen him. Each ball is short-range in front, on the left, on the right and to the target's back. With the user's pre-set directions, they will speed towards where they were set. Despite being a sphere-like shape, it should not be taken lightly due to it's sharp property from spinning extremely fast, capable of shredding human flesh and bones. The user is also capable of setting these balls of pure extreme vibrations on fire by increasing the speed rate they go at, giving them the burning property to go though it would be more visible to people now. This does not give it a boost in strength though, just the capability to burn now. The fire is not chakra-formed but made by the extreme friction in air just like Morning Peacock.

    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Cooldown period of a turn before second usage
    Note : The user can reduce the number of spheres that appear
    Note : No Vibration techniques higher than S-rank may be used in the same turn
    Note : With hand gestures, the user can manipulate a change in direction if needed, counts as a technique use
    ~Declined~ So where are all the real restrictions? All I see is a very powerful S-Ranked technique that is created in short range of your target. I'd like you to specify exactly how far away meter wise, the spheres can be created. The reason I'm asking this is because short range can vary from around 2-5 meters. Keep in mind that if you do keep it in that short of a distance I will ask you that you decrease the range of the technique itself from long to medium.
    (Shindou : Zokunenjuju) - Vibration Release : Unholy Gathering
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the ears of the opponent that brings in natural vibrations from the surroundings and enhances those vibration to be louder than normal. Even the enemy will hear his own heart beat slightly, which just shows how powerful this technique can be although, this technique isn't capable of killing an enemy and doesn't enhance the target's ability to hear like Inner Sonar Skill as the sounds the targe will hear, will be overpowering. The target will be forced to place his hands onto his ears and fall onto his knees due to the sheer pain he faces. Though, this technique doesn't last long and only for a minute usually. After the technique ends, target suffers from a minor headache and the incapability to hear properly, making earth techniques that cause sounds much more effective.

    Note : Lasts for a minute
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Technique is incapable of killing target used on
    Note : Targets with techniques that are similar to Inner Sonar Skill activated will fall unconscious against this technique
    __________________________

    ~Declined~ You can't predict what the opponent will do when going through that pain. For example, if the opponent has a mode currently activated that allows him to ignore pain, he wouldn't fall on the ground. You understand? If I approve this, you will be allowed to forcefully tell the person you are fighting that he falls on his knees, etc etc. Include a note that states you can't perform any other techniques while this is active. The reason being is that you are currently focusing on vibrating your chakra for that entire minute. As for the highlighted note, that is a contradiction.
    (Shindou : Totsunyuumoui) - Vibration Release : Rushing Fury
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the air surrounding the enemy and four barely visible furiously spinning sphere-like balls, much like Sonic Hedgehog if you seen him. Each ball is five meters away in front, on the left, on the right and to the target's back. With the user's pre-set directions, they will speed towards where they were set. Despite being a sphere-like shape, it should not be taken lightly due to it's sharp property from spinning extremely fast, capable of shredding human flesh and bones. The user is also capable of setting these balls of pure extreme vibrations on fire by increasing the speed rate they go at, giving them the burning property to go though it would be more visible to people now. This does not give it a boost in strength though, just the capability to burn now. The fire is not chakra-formed but made by the extreme friction in air just like Morning Peacock.


    Note : No changing of directions after usage
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Number of spheres can be reduced if wanted
    Note : While forming, no usage of wind/earth/water chakra is allowed
    Note : No Vibration Release techniques higher than S-rank in the same turn
    ~Declined~ On re-submission please bold the changes and/or include a note on things you have removed.
    (Shindou : Zokunenjuju) - Vibration Release : Unholy Gathering
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the ears of the opponent that brings in natural vibrations from the surroundings and enhances those vibration to be louder than normal. Even the enemy will hear his own heart beat slightly, which just shows how powerful this technique can be although, this technique isn't capable of killing an enemy and doesn't enhance the target's ability to hear like Inner Sonar Skill as the sounds the target will hear, will be overpowering. Different affects ranging from nothing to death may occur varies among the target used upon. Though, this technique doesn't last long and only for a minute. After the technique ends, target suffers from a minor headache and the incapability to hear properly, making earth techniques that cause sounds (incapability to hear properly) and vibrations (headache) much more effective.

    Note : Lasts for a single minute
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : No performance of any other techniques while this is active
    Note : This technique is incapable of killing naturally, it depends on the target
    Note : Targets with techniques that enhance hearing, such as Inner Sonar Skill, will fall unconscious against this technique
    ~Declined~ "Include a note that states you can't perform any other techniques while this is active. " Also you need to tone the inner sonar one that I just noticed. As it stands its pretty much a one shot deal against sound users. You need to give them a chance in some way or I will not be approving this technique.
    Updating and the last one is a resubmission :

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yusuke- View Post
    (Tsukene : Tsukene no jutsu) - Root Release : Root Style Technique
    Rank : C
    Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 15
    Damage points : 30
    Description : This technique is the most basic of all Root Release techniques and hence is easy to perform. With this technique, the user is able to create medium sized roots out of his palms or ground by concentrating his Root Release chakra through it. This enables the user to create tools and shields or just attack the enemy straight on with the root. This is just as versatile and powerful as any other basic elemental creation technique.

    Note : Must know Root Release
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used five times per battle
    ____________
    -Approved-


    (Tsukene : Koudotsukene no jutsu) - Root Release : Advanced Root Style Technique
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : With this technique the user is able to create large-sized roots to shoot out of the ground or out of both the user's palms after having the user's arm connected side by side. This enables the user to create weapons, shields and shapes such as boxes and needles out of roots to attack the enemy or defend the user. This is just as versatile and powerful as any other elemental creation technique.

    Note : Must know Root Release
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used thrice per battle
    ____________
    -Approved-
    Quote Originally Posted by -Yusuke- View Post
    (Shindou : Fusenmei) - Vibration Release : Blur
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : C
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 15
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : One of the most basic of Vibration release techniques. The user first concentrates his Vibration Release chakra into a moving projectile or object and causes it to vibrate. Once done, the object will look blur and seems as though its on the left and right at the same time. Small objects such as kunais will look as though they have doubles or triples. This technique's main purpose is to cause confusion to the enemy and is one of the fastest techniques that can be activated among most Vibration Release techniques.

    Note : Must know Vibration Release
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    ___________
    -Approved-


    (Shindou : Joutatsu Yuresacchi) - Vibration Release : Advanced Vibration Sensing
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : B
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 25
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : The user will emit his Vibration Release chakra throughout the battlefield, into the ground and air. When this is done, whatever vibrations that come into contact with the chakra such as breathing, muscle movement or any of the sort that basically produces vibrations, will be sensed. This information will be sent back to the user through the Vibration Release chakra and instantly, the user will know each and everything that is on the field once it has made the slightest bit of vibration.

    Note : Lasts for the entire battle
    Note : Must know Vibration Release
    Note : Can only be used once per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only sense things that make the slightest bit of vibration
    ___________
    -Declined-
    This is Vibration Release, not Vibration Gathering
    I changed the usage limit and the first two useless restrictions >_<

    (Tsukene : Tsukene no jutsu) - Root Release : Root Style Technique
    Rank : C
    Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 15
    Damage points : 30
    Description : This technique is the most basic of all Root Release techniques and hence is easy to perform. With this technique, the user is able to create medium sized roots out of his palms or ground by concentrating his Root Release chakra through it. This enables the user to create tools and shields or just attack the enemy straight on with the root. This is just as versatile and powerful as any other basic elemental creation technique.
    ~Approved~

    (Tsukene : Koudotsukene no jutsu) - Root Release : Advanced Root Style Technique
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : With this technique the user is able to create large-sized roots to shoot out of the ground or out of both the user's palms after having the user's arm connected side by side. This enables the user to create weapons, shields and shapes such as boxes and needles out of roots to attack the enemy or defend the user. This is just as versatile and powerful as any other elemental creation technique.

    Note : Can only be used five per battle
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    (Shimoton: Shimoyake) - Frost Release: Frostbite
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack(Affliction)
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 20 per turn (3 turns)
    Description: This technique requires the opponent to be wet. The user places his hand on the opponent, infusing wind chakra and quickly turning the water into frost. As the water freezes the enemies' extremeties(hands-fingers, feet-toes) begin to hurt and tend to become motionless due to the cold. Eventually, if they aren't heated properly the opponent shall be afflicted by frostbite, rendering their hands, feet and maybe even arms and legs useless.

    Restrictions:
    • This technique may only be used once per battle.
    • Using "Fire Chakra" to heat one's body will not be enough to get rid of the Frost, the opponent must find a heat source.
    • This works in conjunction with the Hidden Mist Technique, as the water vapours slightly soak the opponent, however the damage to the user is imminent also.
    • The user himself may suffer of frostbite if he is soaked when performing this technique.
    • If the opponent does not find a heat source in three rounds after the Frostbite technique has been performed on him, he will suffer from literal frostbite, which will render his finger and/or feet useless

    ~Approved~
    (Shimoton: Soudai no Hanabira Matsuri-Odori) - Frost Release: Grand Petal Festival Dance
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80(+10 after two turns if the opponent is afflicted by frostbite)
    Description: This technique requires the Hidden Mist Jutsu(or any other jutsu that spreads water vapours into the air) to be activated. The user focuses wind chakra in the air around him , slowly frosting the water vapours and shaping them into small shards, similar in shape and size to petals, totalling over 60 shards, sharp enough to go through a thick tree. He then performs the Tiger handseal and and all the shards charge at high speeds towards the opponent. If the shards manage to hit the opponent, due to the water vapours in the air and the cold temperature the shards of frost present, the opponent may be afflicted by frostbite, if he does not have a heat source.

    Restrictions
    • This technique may be used twice per battle.
    • This technique requires a colder weather to perform, or an Ice Release user.
    • The frostbite is not as afflicting as the technique itself, however it does cause discomfort.
    • This technique cannot be performed without water vapours.

    ~Declined~ Define "high speeds"
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    Taiyofuuton: Rorien no Nisshoku [Solar Wind: Lorien Eclipse]
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-50 to user)
    Description: An Advanced form of Lorien Hands, the user first release a surge of Solar Wind chakra from their body AND THEN begins performing 8 handseals in the air. The user will then project their hands in front of their body while channeling Solar Wind chakra through their hands (in a quick burst) into the air covering the entire battlefield to form a dome like prison. While being formed, the dome uses the sun to give off a green light that will blind the opponent causing the reflex motion to shield their eyes. This as well as casting extreme heat provided by the Solar Wind and amplified by the rays of the sun while inside the dome, burns the opponent beyond recognition with a green heat wave. The extreme heat is enough to ignite anything flammable as well as make the ground turn to lava, which will be cooled after 1 turn.

    -Note: Must be Sage/Unofficial Sage Rank in order to perform.
    -Note: When done without sunlight, blinding doesnt happen.
    -Note: Heat is strong enough to evaporate up to B ranked water techniques.
    -Note: No Solar Wind Techniques Above B rank for 2 turns.
    -Note: No Solar Wind Techniques for 1 turn

    -Note: This technique can only be used once per battle.
    -Note: This cannot be done with a large body of water in the terrain(Ocean, sea, lake, Raining, etc)
    -Note: The forceful push/release of so much chakra at once causes extreme pain to the arms of the user, no handseals for 2 turns.
    -Note: The handseals must be performed in the air or while raising into the air and not before. The exuding of the chakra can be performed on the ground, and then the user jump into the air and begin performing the handseals. The exuding of the chakra is done so that the user can push their chakra throughout the battlefield, making it easier to perform the dome.
    ~Declined~ What prevents the user from being blinded? As for the first bolded note, please don't include useless restrictions. And regarding the other two bolded notes, they are contracting themselves. No SW above B rank for two turns but one of those two turns SW techniques can't even be used?



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    Taiyofuuton: Rorien no Te [Solar Wind: Lorien Hands]
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user channels concentrated Solar Wind Chakra into their hands that issues forth a short 5 foot green light source of immense heat that is capable of igniting or burning anything flammable. This is often used as an taijutsu component, capable of blinding and burning the flesh of the opponent.
    Note: This does not hurt the user as they are immune to Solar Wind.


    This is what the projection from the hands looks like in Lorein GreenHouse Effect. It is done in a quick burst instead of constant light protruding from the hands
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsus

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    ( Kanton: Bakuhada ) - Iron release: Blast skin
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Blast skin is a technique named after it's ability to survive a blast that a normal ninja wouldn't, as if the user was wearing a blast suit. The technique is utilized by performing snake hand seal and spreading earth and fire chakra around their body or a single body part, giving tissue the properties of iron. By using this technique, user's mass and density increase, user can survive in higher temperatures that would be normally dangerous. With this user can also guide electricity but is unable of using lightning based techniques during the time being. The technique is useful when combined with taijutsu as the mass is increased and tissue hardens, causing a taijutsu damage increase.
    • User becomes weaker to lightning techniques and is unable of using any during the time this is active and any lightning techniques that hit the user will deal double the normal damage.
    • Can be used three times per battle with at least one turn interval between each usage.

    ~Declined~ How long can it stay active for?
    ( Shokubutsuton: Setsunai Kafun ) - Plant release: Suffocating Pollen
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A (- 5 per turn after it takes effect)
    Description: Suffocating Pollen is a simple technique that utilizes pollen to contaminate large areas. The technique begins by user forming Rat - Ox - Dragon hand seals and inhaling. During the inhaling, user concentrates a large amount of Water and Earth chakra within their lungs and mixes that with the oxygen that they inhaled. After the user has repeated this step, he/she will spew out a cloud of pollen (size depends on the amount of oxygen user breathed in and user's lung capacity). The pollen isn't exactly offensive but breathing it in can be quite dangerous. Once the pollen gets in your system, it will attach itself to unfortunate individual's respiratory organs. This limits the volume of lungs, amount of oxygen in your blood and causes immediate coughing along with temporary loss of eyesight. The effectiveness of this technique is showed in combat when the need of oxygen is at it's highest and your lungs cannot process any air, causing a slow and gruesome death through suffocation.
    • Can be used two times in a single battle.
    • Doujutsu uses can easily recognize this technique from the cloud of chakra it forms. Naked eye is able of seeing the pollen too, but it can be mistaken as dust or fine sand that's being carried around by wind in some situations.

    ~Declined~ How many turns until the target dies from suffocation?
    ( Kanton: Bakuhada ) - Iron release: Blast skin
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Blast skin is a technique named after it's ability to survive a blast that a normal ninja wouldn't, as if the user was wearing a blast suit. The technique is utilized by performing snake hand seal and spreading earth and fire chakra around their body or a single body part, giving tissue the properties of iron. By using this technique, user's mass and density increase, user can survive in higher temperatures that would be normally dangerous. With this user can also guide electricity but is unable of using lightning based techniques during the time being. The technique is useful when combined with taijutsu as the mass is increased and tissue hardens, causing a taijutsu damage increase.
    • User becomes weaker to lightning techniques and is unable of using any during the time this is active and any lightning techniques that hit the user will deal double the normal damage.
    • Can be used three times per battle with at least one turn interval between each usage and it can stay active for max of three turns at a time.

    ~Declined~ Either reduce the turns it lasts or the times you can use it in battle.
    ( Shokubutsuton: Setsunai Kafun ) - Plant release: Suffocating Pollen
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A (- 5 per turn after it takes effect)
    Description: Suffocating Pollen is a simple technique that utilizes pollen to contaminate large areas. The technique begins by user forming Rat - Ox - Dragon hand seals and inhaling. During the inhaling, user concentrates a large amount of Water and Earth chakra within their lungs and mixes that with the oxygen that they inhaled. After the user has repeated this step, he/she will spew out a cloud of pollen (size depends on the amount of oxygen user breathed in and user's lung capacity). The pollen isn't exactly offensive but breathing it in can be quite dangerous. Once the pollen gets in your system, it will attach itself to unfortunate individual's respiratory organs. This limits the volume of lungs, amount of oxygen in your blood and causes immediate coughing along with temporary loss of eyesight. The effectiveness of this technique is showed in combat when the need of oxygen is at it's highest and your lungs cannot process any air, causing a slow and gruesome death through suffocation. Dying of suffocation takes 15 turns in battle and using taijutsu/fast movement/dodging/undergoing physical strain in a post decreases the amount of turns by one additional turn.
    • Can be used two times in a single battle.
    • Doujutsu uses can easily recognize this technique from the cloud of chakra it forms. Naked eye is able of seeing the pollen too, but it can be mistaken as dust or fine sand that's being carried around by wind in some situations.

    ~Approved~ Although there are a lot of things per turn one can do to reduce those 15 turns dramatically, you did a good job including that note.
     
         
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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    ⊰ Moerudōton: Rensa Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Chains of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing the Tiger → Boar hand seals, the user will cause chains of blazing earth to erupt out of the ground beneath the target(s) and wrap around his/her/their legs, slowly melting the skin and bones due to the extreme heat. If used against a large summon like Gamabunta the user will perform the added hand seal of the "Dragon" to utilize a greater blazing Earth source beforehand.

    ♦ Can be used four times per battle
    ____________
    -Declined-
    Bones don't melt.
    ⊰ Moerudōton: Hogosha Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Guardian of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the Tiger → Dragon hand seals, the user will slam his hands together. This causes a gigantic blazing Earth Golem the size of Uchiha Madara's final susano to rise from the ground. The Golem is able to utilize blazing Earth, Earth, and Fire release techniques up to the user's rank.

    ♦ Can be used twice per battle
    ♦ No other Blazing Earth techniques the same turn
    ♦ No Blazing Earth, Wind, Fire & Earth techniques above S-Rank next turn
    ____________
    -Pending-
    Bit big for not being an actual summon.
    http://imageftw.com/uploads/20120419/VEGolem.jpg
    Resubmitting:

    ⊰ Moerudōton: Rensa Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Chains of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will release a surge of Moerudōton chakra from his entire body and cause chains of blazing earth to erupt out of the ground beneath the target(s) and wrap around their legs, slowly melting the skin and turning the bones to ashes due to the extreme heat. If used against a large summon like Gamabunta, the user will perform the "Dragon" hand seal to utilize a greater blazing Earth source beforehand.

    ♦ Can be used four times per battle
    ____________
    -Approved-



    ⊰ Moerudōton: Hogosha Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Guardian of the Underworld
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the Tiger → Dragon hand seals, the user will release a surge of Moerudōton chakra from his entire body and slam his hands together. This causes a gigantic Blazing Earth Guardian the size of Ōnoki's greater golem technique to rise from the ground within range having the appearance of a primate. The Guardian wields a Blazing Earth spear and is able to utilize Blazing Earth, Earth, and Fire release techniques up to the user's rank.

    ♦ Can be used twice per battle
    ♦ No other Blazing Earth techniques the same turn
    ♦ No Blazing Earth, Wind, Fire & Earth techniques above S-Rank next turn
    ____________
    -Approved-



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    ⊰ Moerudōton: Akunochimata Kirikae ⊱ Blazing Earth: Underworld Conversion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After utilizing an earth style technique, the user will focus his fire chakra throughout the technique and super heat it to that of a BE technique, while simultaneously mimicking the layers of extreme pressure with the chakra to make the conversion successful. Should the mud variant of earth release be converted, it will not turn into lava, however it will turn boiling hot to anyone that touches it.
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    -Declined-

    ⊰ Moerudōton: Akuma Akunochimata ⊱ Blazing Earth: Demonic Underworld
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After carefully studying the properties of '(Doton: Uitenpen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune' the user found a way to utilize that same method without requiring the topographical map. The user will start out by slamming both of his hands together whilst focusing on his mind and ideas of creation, spending two complete seconds in total meditation. While meditating, the user will release his Moerudōton outwards in a surge and use it to change any earth-based feature on the battlefield. After creation the Moerudōton structure/feature will take three turns to naturally cool down back to regular earth.

    ♦ Can be used three times per battle
    ♦ Can not be used with earth-based features that possess foreign chakra
    ____________
    -Approved-

    ⊰ Fūinjutsu/Moerudōton: Akunochimata Hades ⊱ Sealing/Blazing Earth: Underworld of Hades
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the Tiger → Boar → Dragon hand seals, the user will focus and release his Moerudōton chakra outwards in a surge throughout the entire battlefield, stretching out to his desires. This causes the entire battlefield to be turned into one large source of Blazing Earth. The extreme heat causes anyone standing on it to suffer from extreme burns as the body part that is currently in physical contact starts melting away the skin and cremating the bones and any water source present to be evaporated. Should the user wish upon creation, he can release an overwhelming code of knajis that will spread throughout the Moerudōton battle field to seal certain elemental affinities. All shinobi present in the battlefield will be limited to the usage of only Regular Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Earth, Fire chakra and any other element made up of Fire, or Earth mixtures (Like Lava or Blazing Earth Release) until the kanjis are deactivated. Due to the battle field being turned into Moerudōton any other individual that does not possess the knowledge of utilizing Blazing Earth will be unable to utilize the earthen source for earth style techniques.

    ♦ Can only be used once per battle
    ♦ No Blazing Earth or Fūinjutsu release techniques in the previous turn.
    ♦ No Earth, Fire, Blazing Earth or Fūinjutsu techniques above S-Rank for the next turn.
    ♦ Cannot perform any summonings for the same and the following two turns.
    ♦ The user cannot perform any genjutsu in the same turn.
    ♦ The Blazing Earth battle field will cool down into regular earth in five turns
    ♦ The Sealing method is active until deactivated
    ♦ After the battle field has cooled down the user can't use BE techniques for that turn
    ____________
    -Approved-



    ⊰ Moerudōton: Akunochimata Pasu Ninoku ⊱ Blazing Earth: Underworld Path To Enlightenment
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will channel Moerudōton chakra throughout their dominant leg and then proceed to stomp on the surface they are standing on. The surface will shake violently with a tremor, knocking all individuals off balance excluding the user. Upon impact with the ground, the surface in front and beyond the user will start cracking as it starts converting into Blazing Earth, heading towards its desired target in the form of a path. Should the path come into contact with any physical structure like a golem, house, etc etc. The Blazing Earth path will start overcoming the physical structure and melt/crumble it away as if it were a domino effect, spreading outwards throughout the structure and continuing forward towards its previous target. The cracks themself are lined with fire combined with the extreme heat of Moerudōton will cause any flammable substance it comes into contact with to explode or ignite. The Moerudōton path will naturally cool down within three turns unless dealt with the proper temperature drop.

    ♦ Can only be used three times per battle
    ♦ No other Blazing Earth techniques in the same turn used
    ♦ No Blazing Earth techniques above S rank the previous turn
    ♦ No Fire or Earth techniques above S rank the same turn used
    ____________
    -Approved-

     
         
    Last edited by Nexus; 07-17-2012 at 10:51 PM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    Quote Originally Posted by Solf J. Kimblee View Post
    Silicone Release: Extract (Shirikon: Ekisu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user slams his hand on the ground extracting silicone powder from the ground. This makes a layer of silicone sand all over the ground of the battlefield. This jutsu renders any earth jutsus that require the ground to be unuseble. Also the user can manipulate the silicone sand for jutsus.
    -Only used twice per battle
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    -Approved-
    Updating just a little bit

    Silicone Release: Extract (Shirikon: Ekisu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user stomps their foot on the ground releasing their chakra throughout the ground. This extracts silicone powder from the ground. This makes a layer of silicone sand all over or wherever the user decides, the ground of the battlefield. This jutsu renders any earth jutsus that require the ground where the silicone sand is to be unuseble. Also the user can manipulate the silicone sand for jutsus.
    -Only used twice per battle
    ~Declined~ Keep it the way it is.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 07-14-2012 at 08:04 AM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    Francium Release: Gathering | Francumiton: Saishuu
    Rank: D
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:10
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user spreads chakra into a wide area around himself. He uses the chakra to find and gather particles and molecules of Francium. This allows the user to preform Francium techniques but the gathering itself lasts several turns.
    1st turn: The user is able to preform D and C rank techniques.
    2nd turn: The user is able to preform B and A rank techniques.
    3rd turn: The user is able to preform S and Forbidden rank techniques.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Notence activated this technique will be in use for the following 3 turns leaving the user only 2 more techniques per move.
    ~Approved~ A very nice, simple and clean technique, well done.

    Francium Release Technique | Francumiton no Jutsu
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After preforming 2 hand seals the user uses the Francium to create medium sized pillars,weapons,shields,walls,domes,spikes and tools of Francium. The constructions do not make a lot damage but can lead to an explosion if used with water.
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-
    Note:Can only be used once per turn
    ~Declined~ It may not cause a lot of damage but you still need to include damage to the technique itself. Also I'd like you to clarify on the walls, domes, etc etc part. Exactly how many can you make?
    Francium Release: Francium Coating | Francumiton: Francium Tosou
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description: The user channels Francium chakra into his hands thus allowing him to coat smaller objects with a thin layer of Francium with just the slightest touch. This is mostly used to coat weapons and tools, but it may also be used in taijutsu to place a thin but lethal layer of Francium on the opponents skin.
    Notence activated it lasts 3 turns unless canceled by the user.
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ~Approved~
    Francium Release: Field of Francium | Francumiton: Francium Hara
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After having gathered enough Francium the user covers an extensive area with a couple of inches thick layer of Francium. If the Francium gets in touch with water, it will lead to a mediocre explosion destroying anything it has covered. Depending on how big the terrain covered is, the covering may take some time. The user can also create a thin layer beneath the grounds surface thus allowing him to perform a surprise attack. In order to perform this technique the user needs to be in touch with the ground or object he is covering.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: If used in a long range radius, the Francium requires 2 turns to cover the field. If used in any other range it forms in a couple of seconds.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ~Declined~ Reword the "destroying everything in its path" part. Also, will this prevent yourself and the opponent from utilizing earth style? Depending on the rank of course.
    Francium Release: Kill Switch | Francumiton: Uchitoru Irege
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is a very complex technique which can only be performed by those with great chakra control. By using this technique, the user gains the ability to remove or activate the Francium's reactivity with water. When removing the reactivity from the Francium, the user removes it's ability to explode when in touch with water thus making it completely harmless. The user can reactivate the explosion ability by using this technique again.
    Note: Once used, it cannot be used again for the following 2 turns.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ~Approved~ Thank you sir for allowing me to read nice and simple techniques for a change.
    Resubmitting:

    Francium Release Technique | Francumiton no Jutsu
    Rank: C
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description:After preforming 2 hand seals the user uses the Francium to create medium sized pillars, weapons, shields, walls, domes, spikes and tools of Francium. The constructions do not make a lot damage but can lead to an explosion if used with water. The number of medium sized structures is limited to one per move (dome, wall and other larger constructions).
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-
    Note:Can only be used once per turn.
    ~Approved~ Edited "Larger" to "Medium Sized". The technique won't be able to create multiple medium sized walls, etc etc but it will be able to be used to create more than one kunai and things that have low mass levels.

    Added the damage and restricted the creation of larger constructions.

    Francium Release: Field of Francium | Francumiton: Francium Hara
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After having gathered enough Francium the user covers an extensive area with a couple of inches thick layer of Francium. If the Francium gets in touch with water, it will lead to a mediocre explosion which will destroy only the objects covered by Francium. Depending on how big the terrain covered is, the covering may take some time. The user can also create a thin layer beneath the grounds surface thus allowing him to perform a surprise attack. In order to perform this technique the user needs to be in touch with the ground or object he is covering. In case someone uses Earth Release when this technique is activated (for example someone raises a plateau or pillar) only the top layer will be covered in Francium unless the user creates a thicker layer (more than half a meter beneath the ground). In that case B-rank and below Earth Release techniques cannot be used (within reason).
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: If used in a long range radius, the Francium requires 2 turns to cover the field. If used in any other range it forms in a couple of seconds.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ~Approved~
    Rephrased the part you asked me to and added the Earth Release thing. I'm glad you enjoyed my submissions ^^.

    New techniques:

    Francium Release: Francium Shadow Clone Technique | Francumiton: Francium Kage Bunshin No Jutsu
    Type:Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user performs the hand seal for creating regular clones and uses the Francium created to form clones. The user can create up to four clone and they are able to use up to B-rank Earth Release and Ninjutsu techniques (since Earth Release and Chakra control are necessary to control Francium) and Francium techniques up to S-Rank. If they get in touch with water they will explode.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note: After creating the max number of clones the user cannot use this technique again for 2 turns after using it the first time. Can be used several times in a row if creating less then the max number one at a time.
    ~Approved~ Edited a bit.
    Francium Release: Francium Arms | Francumiton: Francium Heiki
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user performs a hand seal and uses the gathered Francium to create silver colored arms. The arms can be created from the users body to be used to create hand seals, throw tools or help in taijutsu. The arms can also be created from the ground though they will be much larger and able to sustain more damage. The arms created from the ground are used to restrict the opponents movement and grab him. They can be used to crush the opponents limbs. If they get touched by water they will explode.
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Can be used three times per battle.
    ~Declined~ Too many similar techniques exist.
    Francium Release: Francium Body| Francumiton: Francium Karada
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This technique allows the user to convert his own chakra into Francium allowing him to create pieces of the explosive metal from his own body and chakra. This way he is able to create small to medium sized objects made completely out of Francium. He can than use them as projectiles or bombs to attack the opponent. The explosions of the objects go up to mid range no matter of the size. This is extremely useful when the user wants to create tools completely made of Francium such as kunai, shuriken and other.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note: Can only be used once every two turns.
    Note: Two objects can be created per usage of technique.
    Note: Can be used three times per battle.
    ~Approved~ Added note
    Just an explanation to this technique: I want to create tools of Francium with a large explosive ability. Thus the reason why it is A-rank.

    Greater Francium Release Technique | Kyousei Francumiton No Jutsu
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: After performing 2 hand seals the user is able to create stronger and more durable objects of Francium such as pillars, weapons, shields, walls, domes, spikes and tools of Francium. The number of larger constructions is limited to one per move (walls, domes, etc.)
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Can only be used once every two turns.
    Note: Can be used three times per battle.
    ~Approved~ Added note

    Francium Release: Loss of Control | Francumiton: Sonmou Shihai
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This technique is a technique applicable only to previously created bodies of Francium. The user removes the control of chakra from the Francium and lets it turn into a liquid, sticky substance which has a silvery glow (similar to the one created with the technique "Syrup Capture Field"). The user can use this technique to either capture the opponent (when they are in the liquid Francium the user uses this technique again to make it solid) or reform the Francium into another shape from a distance. This technique also allows to reverse the process by turning the liquid Francium into solid again. If any of the liquid Francium touches the opponents skin it will cause a burning sensation on that spot creating 3rd degree burns.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note: Four times per battle only.
    Note: One conversion per usage
    ~Approved~ Added note
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 08-30-2012 at 12:28 AM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yusuke- View Post
    (Shindou : Totsunyuumoui) - Vibration Release : Rushing Fury
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the air surrounding the enemy and four barely visible furiously spinning sphere-like balls, much like Sonic Hedgehog if you seen him. Each ball is short-range in front, on the left, on the right and to the target's back. With the user's pre-set directions, they will speed towards where they were set. Despite being a sphere-like shape, it should not be taken lightly due to it's sharp property from spinning extremely fast, capable of shredding human flesh and bones. The user is also capable of setting these balls of pure extreme vibrations on fire by increasing the speed rate they go at, giving them the burning property to go though it would be more visible to people now. This does not give it a boost in strength though, just the capability to burn now. The fire is not chakra-formed but made by the extreme friction in air just like Morning Peacock.

    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Cooldown period of a turn before second usage
    Note : The user can reduce the number of spheres that appear
    Note : No Vibration techniques higher than S-rank may be used in the same turn
    Note : With hand gestures, the user can manipulate a change in direction if needed, counts as a technique use
    ~Declined~ So where are all the real restrictions? All I see is a very powerful S-Ranked technique that is created in short range of your target. I'd like you to specify exactly how far away meter wise, the spheres can be created. The reason I'm asking this is because short range can vary from around 2-5 meters. Keep in mind that if you do keep it in that short of a distance I will ask you that you decrease the range of the technique itself from long to medium.
    (Shindou : Zokunenjuju) - Vibration Release : Unholy Gathering
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the ears of the opponent that brings in natural vibrations from the surroundings and enhances those vibration to be louder than normal. Even the enemy will hear his own heart beat slightly, which just shows how powerful this technique can be although, this technique isn't capable of killing an enemy and doesn't enhance the target's ability to hear like Inner Sonar Skill as the sounds the targe will hear, will be overpowering. The target will be forced to place his hands onto his ears and fall onto his knees due to the sheer pain he faces. Though, this technique doesn't last long and only for a minute usually. After the technique ends, target suffers from a minor headache and the incapability to hear properly, making earth techniques that cause sounds much more effective.

    Note : Lasts for a minute
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Technique is incapable of killing target used on
    Note : Targets with techniques that are similar to Inner Sonar Skill activated will fall unconscious against this technique
    __________________________

    ~Declined~ You can't predict what the opponent will do when going through that pain. For example, if the opponent has a mode currently activated that allows him to ignore pain, he wouldn't fall on the ground. You understand? If I approve this, you will be allowed to forcefully tell the person you are fighting that he falls on his knees, etc etc. Include a note that states you can't perform any other techniques while this is active. The reason being is that you are currently focusing on vibrating your chakra for that entire minute. As for the highlighted note, that is a contradiction.


    Quote Originally Posted by -Yusuke- View Post
    (Shindou : Totsunyuumoui) - Vibration Release : Rushing Fury
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the air surrounding the enemy and four barely visible furiously spinning sphere-like balls, much like Sonic Hedgehog if you seen him. Each ball is five meters away in front, on the left, on the right and to the target's back. With the user's pre-set directions, they will speed towards where they were set. Despite being a sphere-like shape, it should not be taken lightly due to it's sharp property from spinning extremely fast, capable of shredding human flesh and bones. The user is also capable of setting these balls of pure extreme vibrations on fire by increasing the speed rate they go at, giving them the burning property to go though it would be more visible to people now. This does not give it a boost in strength though, just the capability to burn now. The fire is not chakra-formed but made by the extreme friction in air just like Morning Peacock.


    Note : No changing of directions after usage
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Number of spheres can be reduced if wanted
    Note : While forming, no usage of wind/earth/water chakra is allowed
    Note : No Vibration Release techniques higher than S-rank in the same turn
    ~Declined~ On re-submission please bold the changes and/or include a note on things you have removed.
    (Shindou : Zokunenjuju) - Vibration Release : Unholy Gathering
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the ears of the opponent that brings in natural vibrations from the surroundings and enhances those vibration to be louder than normal. Even the enemy will hear his own heart beat slightly, which just shows how powerful this technique can be although, this technique isn't capable of killing an enemy and doesn't enhance the target's ability to hear like Inner Sonar Skill as the sounds the target will hear, will be overpowering. Different affects ranging from nothing to death may occur varies among the target used upon. Though, this technique doesn't last long and only for a minute. After the technique ends, target suffers from a minor headache and the incapability to hear properly, making earth techniques that cause sounds (incapability to hear properly) and vibrations (headache) much more effective.

    Note : Lasts for a single minute
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : No performance of any other techniques while this is active
    Note : This technique is incapable of killing naturally, it depends on the target
    Note : Targets with techniques that enhance hearing, such as Inner Sonar Skill, will fall unconscious against this technique
    ~Declined~ "Include a note that states you can't perform any other techniques while this is active. " Also you need to tone the inner sonar one that I just noticed. As it stands its pretty much a one shot deal against sound users. You need to give them a chance in some way or I will not be approving this technique.
    (Shindou : Totsunyuumoui) - Vibration Release : Rushing Fury
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the air surrounding the enemy and four barely visible furiously spinning sphere-like balls, much like Sonic Hedgehog if you seen him. Each ball is five meters away in front, on the left, on the right and to the target's back. With the user's pre-set directions, they will speed towards where they were set. Despite being a sphere-like shape, it should not be taken lightly due to it's sharp property from spinning extremely fast, capable of shredding human flesh and bones. The user is also capable of setting these balls of pure extreme vibrations on fire by increasing the speed rate they go at, giving them the burning property to go though it would be more visible to people now. This does not give it a boost in strength though, just the capability to burn now. The fire is not chakra-formed but made by the extreme friction in air just like Morning Peacock.


    Note : No changing of directions after usage
    Note : Can only be used two times per battle
    Note : Number of spheres can be reduced if wanted
    Note : While forming, no usage of wind/earth/water chakra is allowed
    Note : No Vibration Release techniques higher than A-rank in the same turn or next turn.
    ~Approved~ Edited a bit.



    (Shindou : Zokunenjuju) - Vibration Release : Unholy Gathering
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user molds his Vibration Release chakra into the ears of the opponent that brings in natural vibrations from the surroundings and enhances those vibration to be louder than normal. Even the enemy will hear his own heart beat slightly, which just shows how powerful this technique can be although, this technique isn't capable of killing an enemy and doesn't enhance the target's ability to hear like Inner Sonar Skill as the sounds the target will hear, will be overpowering. Different affects ranging from nothing to death may occur varies among the target used upon. Though, this technique doesn't last long and only for a minute. After the technique ends, target suffers from a minor headache and the incapability to hear properly, making earth techniques that cause sounds (incapability to hear properly) and vibrations (headache) much more effective.

    Note : Lasts for a single minute
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : No performance of any other techniques while this is active
    Note : This technique is incapable of killing naturally, it depends on the target
    Note : Targets with techniques that enhance hearing, such as Inner Sonar Skill, will fall unconscious against this technique. Though, if they deactivate them, they will suffer normal damage before the minute is complete.
    ~Approved~ Added a last touch up.


    UPDATING AND RESUBMITTING :

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yusuke- View Post
    (Shindou : Fusenmei) - Vibration Release : Blur
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : C
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 15
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : One of the most basic of Vibration release techniques. The user first concentrates his Vibration Release chakra into a moving projectile or object and causes it to vibrate. Once done, the object will look blur and seems as though its on the left and right at the same time. Small objects such as kunais will look as though they have doubles or triples. This technique's main purpose is to cause confusion to the enemy and is one of the fastest techniques that can be activated among most Vibration Release techniques.

    Note : Must know Vibration Release
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    ___________
    -Approved-


    (Shindou : Joutatsu Yuresacchi) - Vibration Release : Advanced Vibration Sensing
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : B
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 25
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : The user will emit his Vibration Release chakra throughout the battlefield, into the ground and air. When this is done, whatever vibrations that come into contact with the chakra such as breathing, muscle movement or any of the sort that basically produces vibrations, will be sensed. This information will be sent back to the user through the Vibration Release chakra and instantly, the user will know each and everything that is on the field once it has made the slightest bit of vibration.

    Note : Lasts for the entire battle
    Note : Must know Vibration Release
    Note : Can only be used once per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only sense things that make the slightest bit of vibration
    ___________
    -Declined-
    This is Vibration Release, not Vibration Gathering
    (Shindou : Fusenmei) - Vibration Release : Blur
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : C
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 15
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : One of the most basic of Vibration release techniques. The user first concentrates his Vibration Release chakra onto the outer layer of the target's eyes. Once done, the user will set the vibrations to constantly vibrate hence disturbing incoming light particles that try to enter the target's eyes hence all the target will see would be a blur. This does not in any way, harm the target. This technique's main purpose is to cause confusion to the enemy and is one of the simplest techniques among Vibration Release.
    ~Declined~ Leave it as is.
    (Shindou : Joutatsu Yuresacchi) - Vibration Release : Advanced Vibration Sensing
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : B
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 25
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : The user will emit his Vibration Release chakra throughout the battlefield, into the ground and air. When this is done, whatever vibrations that come into contact with the chakra such as breathing, muscle movement or any of the sort that basically produces vibrations, will be sensed. Due to the chakra belonging to the user, they are linked much like other sensing techniques allowing the user to sense whatever the chakra senses.

    Note : Only senses vibrations
    Note : Lasts for the for only four of the user's turn
    ~DNR~ No more sensing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 08-30-2012 at 12:37 AM.

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    (Shiningumizu: Chōchin no Hyōji) - Shiningwater Release: Display of Lanturns
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user manipulates their chakra releasing from their mouth a medium amount of shiningwater in small pellets creating a strong spray that pelts the opponent. The user can also use this in supplementary means by using the multiple pellets of water reflecting lights as a means to distract or disorentate the opponent.

    (Shiningumizu: Hanashasuru Hyōji) - Shiningwater Release: Reflective Display
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per turn active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to manipulate their shiningwater chakra and molding with their normal water release to provide the properties of shiningwater and making them more effective for a period of time.
    Note: Techniques effects last for 4 turns and must wait two turns before use.
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    Last edited by Mathias; 08-30-2012 at 12:38 AM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    Taiyofuuton: Rorien no Nisshoku [Solar Wind: Lorien Eclipse]
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-50 to user)
    Description: An Advanced form of Lorien Hands, the user first release a surge of Solar Wind chakra from their body AND THEN begins performing 8 handseals in the air. The user will then project their hands in front of their body while channeling Solar Wind chakra through their hands (in a quick burst) into the air covering the entire battlefield to form a dome like prison. While being formed, the dome uses the sun to give off a green light that will blind the opponent causing the reflex motion to shield their eyes. This as well as casting extreme heat provided by the Solar Wind and amplified by the rays of the sun while inside the dome, burns the opponent beyond recognition with a green heat wave. The extreme heat is enough to ignite anything flammable as well as make the ground turn to lava, which will be cooled after 1 turn.

    -Note: Must be Sage/Unofficial Sage Rank in order to perform.
    -Note: When done without sunlight, blinding doesnt happen.
    -Note: Heat is strong enough to evaporate up to B ranked water techniques.
    -Note: No Solar Wind Techniques Above B rank for 2 turns.
    -Note: No Solar Wind Techniques for 1 turn

    -Note: This technique can only be used once per battle.
    -Note: This cannot be done with a large body of water in the terrain(Ocean, sea, lake, Raining, etc)
    -Note: The forceful push/release of so much chakra at once causes extreme pain to the arms of the user, no handseals for 2 turns.
    -Note: The handseals must be performed in the air or while raising into the air and not before. The exuding of the chakra can be performed on the ground, and then the user jump into the air and begin performing the handseals. The exuding of the chakra is done so that the user can push their chakra throughout the battlefield, making it easier to perform the dome.
    ~Declined~ What prevents the user from being blinded? As for the first bolded note, please don't include useless restrictions. And regarding the other two bolded notes, they are contracting themselves. No SW above B rank for two turns but one of those two turns SW techniques can't even be used?



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    Taiyofuuton: Rorien no Te [Solar Wind: Lorien Hands]
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user channels concentrated Solar Wind Chakra into their hands that issues forth a short 5 foot green light source of immense heat that is capable of igniting or burning anything flammable. This is often used as an taijutsu component, capable of blinding and burning the flesh of the opponent.
    Note: This does not hurt the user as they are immune to Solar Wind.


    This is what the projection from the hands looks like in Lorein GreenHouse Effect. It is done in a quick burst instead of constant light protruding from the hands
    Taiyofuuton: Rorien no Nisshoku [Solar Wind: Lorien Eclipse]
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-50 to user)
    Description: An Advanced form of Lorien Hands, the user first release a surge of Solar Wind chakra from their body AND THEN begins performing 8 handseals in the air. As the user is performing the handseals, the hands as well as the eyes glow green with Solar Wind chakra. The user will then project their hands in front of their body while channeling Solar Wind chakra through their hands (in a quick burst) into the air covering the entire battlefield to form a dome like prison. While being formed, the dome uses the sun to give off a green light that will blind the opponent causing the reflex motion to shield their eyes. This as well as casting extreme heat provided by the Solar Wind and amplified by the rays of the sun while inside the dome, burns the opponent beyond recognition with a green heat wave. The extreme heat is enough to ignite anything flammable as well as make the ground turn to lava, which will be cooled after 1 turn.

    -Note: Reasons user is immune to the light
    *The sunlight reflects on the solar wind and travels inside of the dome, the user would have no reason to be blinded.
    *Just like Lorien Hands, the effects are immune to the user.

    -Note: When done without sunlight, blinding doesnt happen.
    -Note: Heat is strong enough to evaporate up to B ranked water techniques.
    -Note: Solar Wind Restrictions after usage of this technique
    *First Turn - No Solar Wind.
    *Second Turn - No Solar Wind above B Rank.

    -Note: This technique can only be used once per battle.
    -Note: This cannot be done with a large body of water in the Previously on the terrain(Ocean, sea, lake, Raining, etc)
    -Note: The forceful push/release of so much chakra at once causes extreme pain to the hands of the user, no handseals for 2 turns.
    -Note: The handseals must be performed in the air or while raising into the air and not before. The exuding of the chakra can be performed on the ground, and then the user jump into the air and begin performing the handseals. The exuding of the chakra is done so that the user can push their chakra throughout the battlefield, making it easier to perform the dome.
    ~Approved~ Well restricted.

    Taiyofuuton: Furasshu bakudan {Solar Wind: Flash Bomb}
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user stretches their hand behind them while sending a surge of Solar Wind chakra into and through their hand and forms a large blinding solar wind aura around their hand (5 feet in diameter). While the opponent is blinded the user will condense and compress the aura into a small ball and throw it towards the opponent. While the ball traveles, the constrain that the user held on the ball will be released, causing it to flare up and become twice the size of the natural blinding aura (10 Feet in diameter). The user can condense the chakra into two separate balls, one in each hand, thus separating the power of the technique (Becomes two A Ranked Flash Bombs). Upon contact with any source (Other than anything it is capable of absorbing as they simply get absorbed to make the balls stronger and larger), the balls will release a great heat wave explosion in all directions capable of burning or igniting anything it makes contact with.
    Note: Can only be used once every 5 turns per battle.
    Note: No Solar Wind above A Ranked for 1 turn.
    Note: Blinding and heat wave does not affect user as they are immune to its effects as well as the aura being behind the user when it happens.
    Note: If the technique comes in contact with anything it is capable of absorbing the technique will double in size.
    Note: If used 5 times, Solar Wind cannot be used for rest of battle
    Note: The balls have a short range blast radius.
    ~Approved~ Added a note.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 08-30-2012 at 12:44 AM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    Shinju: P1 Bunshin "Petron" (Pearl Release: P1 Clone "Petron")

    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: P1 clone is a copy of the user but in shape of a white pale person. The clone itself can only use pearl release according of the user gain and knowledge of the pearl release, it can also utilize any pearl release even without having the white Jar or the shell summoning up until S-Rank pearl release.

    Notes:
    - P1 using his body to release the pearl jutsu so it can only be used 2 pearl jutsu per turn
    -Only last for 3 turns and then vanished
    - Can only be use 2 times per battle from the Jar / Shell Summoning
    ~Declined~ Seems like you completely ignored the body mass thing.

    Shinju: P2 Katachidzukuru "Prime" (Pearl Release: P2 Shape "Prime")
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will summon his giant shell which it will throw out a giant pearl with size 25 feet long into the ground then the user perform 5 serial hand seal then push and placed his right hand into the giant pearl while his left hand hold his right wrist and yell “PRIME” to manipulate the giant pearl and shape it into a giant bird about 25 feet tall, Prime is the 2nd form of pearl level manipulation called the “P2”, prime able to fly into the sky high with his white wing in high speed similar speed with Deidara C2 Exploding Flying Dragon while the user ride it, Prime shape pale white and have the ability to shoot out rapidly pearl ball size of a basket ball from the sky into the opponent and the pearl ball will crush everything within the impact, prime also able to defend from similar rank jutsu using it wing.

    Note: can only be use 3 times
    Note: Must have Shells summoning contract
    Note: Can only last 2 turn in field then auto disappear
    Note: No other pearl tech while the user ride Prime
    Note: Count as two turn as the user has to summon his giant shell
    ~Declined~ Once again, 25 feet long in what? Diameter?

    Note to submitter: Please take an extra minute of your precious day to remove all the approved and unnecessary quoted techniques in the spoilers. This simply makes my job that much harder when I have to edit your posts and also read my comments carefully because it seems you've missed a few quite frequently, Thank you.[/COLOR][/I]

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    Shinju: P1 Bunshin "Petron" (Pearl Release: P1 Clone "Petron")

    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: P1 clone is a copy of the user but in shape of a white pale person. The clone itself can only use pearl release according of the user gain and knowledge of the pearl release, it can also utilize any pearl release even without having the white Jar or the shell summoning up until S-Rank pearl release and because pearl made of water and earth, so P1 also able to perform Water and earth jutsu according to the user knowledge

    Notes:
    - Each time using pearl release, P1 will losing his weight based on how big the size of pearl release he performed that’s way he only stand on the battle field for only 4 turn after losing his both arm and foot to use the pearl then auto vanished

    - Can only be use 2 times per battle from the Jar / Shell Summoning.
    ~Declined~ I've given you enough chances, do not resubmit.
    Shinju: P2 Katachidzukuru "Prime" (Pearl Release: P2 Shape "Prime")
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will summon his giant shell or using his White Jar which it will throw out a giant pearl with size 25 feet long in diameter into the ground then the user perform 5 serial hand seal then push and placed his right hand into the giant pearl while his left hand hold his right wrist and yell “PRIME” to manipulate the giant pearl and shape it into a giant bird about 25 feet tall, Prime is the 2nd form of pearl level manipulation called the “P2”, prime able to fly into the sky high with his white wing in high speed similar speed with Deidara C2 Exploding Flying Dragon while the user ride it, Prime shape pale white and have the ability to shoot out rapidly pearl ball size of a basket ball from the sky into the opponent and the pearl ball will crush everything within the impact, prime also able to defend from similar rank jutsu using it wing.

    Note: can only be use 3 times
    Note: Must have Shells summoning contract
    Note: Can only last for 3 turn in field then auto disappear
    Note: No other pearl tech while the user ride Prime
    ~Approved~

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    Shinju: P3 Keisei “pyragones” Shiro no usui ryū (Pearl Release: P3 Formation “pyragones” the White pale dragon)

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-10 Chakra when use pearl release)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is the greatest level 3 pearl shape to create upon white pale shape of a dragon, this white pearl dragon named “pyragones” could be use by only 3 member due to hard to perform and the user must release all of his pearl chakra to create and shape like a dragon. First the user gather a massive amount of pearl chakra upon their white Jar then he place his both arm forward to release enormous amount medium size of pearls from his white jar, the pearls gather up in front of the user like a humongous mountain with size like a great earth golem, afterwards the user perform 3 serial hand seal Snake -> Tiger -> Dragon to shape the pearl mountain into a massive size white dragon look alike with size of Gamabunta, the white pale dragon itself has a long tail which able to slam and whip out a giant summon size as Manda to bounce backward causing a severe damage then it also has double white wings project horizontally in his left and right side which capable of blocking any elemental jutsu up until S-Rank except of lightning jutsu only up until B-Rank while he close together his both wings. And like any other wings ability, pyragones also able to fly up high with fast speed, similar speed like Pain’s summoning the Giant Drill – Beaked Bird , his 4 legs and sharp claws could tear up and destroy buildings or mountain which could cause casualties to every human being surround. Due to it made of pearl and the pearl created based on Water and earth so pyragones able to use Water and earth jutsu up until S-Rank with no hand seal, and also be able to use pearl release up until S-Rank using his own body mass and will lost weight every usage.

    Restrictions

    - pyragones can be destroyed by a strong lightning jutsu with similar rank.
    - pyragones is not an Animal summoning and Can only be use once
    -Stays on the battle field for 5 turn then auto vanished
    - Every ability which pyragones use is counts as one of the user 3 moves
    -After using this jutsu, the white Jar lost its ability to produce pearls and will be able to back producing pearls again after 5 turns then could only use B-Rank pearl release for the rest of the battle
    - The user can’t use pearl release for 5 turns
    - Every time the white dragon using pearl releases then he will lost 1/5 of his weight body mass then auto disappears after using the last 5 pearl jutsu.
    - Needs 10 second to take off flies

    ~Declined~ Do not resubmit.
    Pyragones Picture look alike
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 08-30-2012 at 12:56 AM.

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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

    (Kiastsu: Kamisori Sa-kasu) Atmospheric Pressure Release: Razor Circus
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: All ranges
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus a tremendous amount of atmospheric pressure in their foot, then the user will stomp their foot onto the ground and release all the stored atmospheric pressure into the ground in a tremendous burst. The atmospheric pressure will rip into the ground and quickly disperse all over the battlefield beneath the opponent's feet in a matter of seconds. Then the atmospheric pressure will abruptly explode out of the ground in the shape of many massive razor sharp blades that look almost like blades of grass as tall as the greater golem technique. The blades of atmospheric pressure erupt all around the opponent and beneath him as well and begin rotating like a blender with the opponent as the point of focus. The shape of the all the blades rotating together would be similar to a giant rotating circus tent composed of blades giving the technique its name. But the blades rotate with no pattern or coherence preventing the opponent of any chance of staying inside the blades and avoiding them. As the blades rotate and skim one another, the interaction causes a very sharp distinctive screech inside of the formation causing the victims trapped inside to experience excessive damage to their ears as well as a headache because of the high frequency sound overwhelming their brain preventing them from using high level techniques that are equivalent or higher than the rank of this technique. The blades rotate ripping everything caught in their area. After the technique is over, the only thing that will be left in the area is a giant crater that is filled with fine sand because all of the earth has been completely eroded. The remains of the opponent's body will be untraceable as it is mixed in with the sand to a degree beyond recovery.
    ~Can only be used once per battle. The user cannot use Atmospheric Pressure on the same turn and Atmospheric Pressure techniques that are above S-rank for the following two turns after that, and the user cannot use any wind techniques that are above S-rank on the next turn.
    ~Declined~ You have to tone this down a lot and add some more restrictions.

    (Kazan Suiton: Izumi no Shouten) Volcanic Water Releases: Fountain of Death
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: All ranges
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus a massive amount of volcanic water energy to their foot and then stomp the ground releasing all of the stored volcanic water into the ground. The volcanic water will begin travelling through the ground and will begin branching off like the roots of a tree over the entire area beneath the opponent. As the volcanic water travels underground, its extreme heat and pressure will be released, and blast upward toward the surface and be released in bursts of steam in a completely random basis that will cause anything caught in them to be vaporized. This prevents the opponent from trying to get close to the user as the burst of steams are so frequent and random due to the massive amount of volcanic water underground that the path becomes impossible to cross. The volcanic water underground absorbs any source of heat (fire or lightning) underground that it comes in contact with into itself. The volcanic water spreads rapidly in seconds over the entire battlefield below the opponents feet in a countless series of underground channels that continuously branch off from each other. The volcanic water will then erupt in a massive uprising in the form of a reverse vortex large enough to trap the great golem technique that traps the opponents within its currents and launches the opponent into the air and batters them inside the currents of the vortex. The victims of the vortex will experience intense heat vaporizing the skin and tissue off their bodies in a just a few seconds leaving nothing but a heavily degraded skeleton as the remains.
    ~Can only be used once per battle. The user cannot use Volcanic Water on the same turn and Volcanic Water techniques that are above S-rank for the following two turns after that, and the user cannot use fire and water techniques that are above S-rank on the next turn.

    The technique below is based on the combination of an advanced wind element and an advanced water element as seen in Typhoon Water Vortex. The user does not need Yin Yang to perform Typhoon Water Vortex thus performing a similar technique using advanced version of the two component elements should be completely possible. The technique being a combination will count as both a Volcanic Water custom and a Atmospheric Pressure customs, taking a spot in both elements technique limit count.
    ~Pending~ Requires Nexus to check as I'm a VW student.

    (Kiastsu Ken Kazan Suiton: Tenrai Arashi) Atmospheric Pressure and Volcanic Water: Divine Tempest
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Basically a combination of Volcanic Water and Atmospheric Pressure to form a technique similar to Typhoon Water Vortex Techniques. It is the same size as Typhoon Water Vortex and performed the same way, but with different component elements. The incredible suction of the technique forcibly vacuums any fire or lightning source in the vicinity and absorb it into itself.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle. This techniques counts as two techniques in the move count per turn when it is used. The user cannot use techniques of either element individually on the same turn and techniques of either element above S-rank on the next turn. The user cannot use water, wind, and fire above S-rank on the next turn and must have not used water, wind, or fire above S-rank on the previous turn in preparation for this technique. This technique can only be used by someone who knows both Atmospheric Pressure and Volcanic Water.
    ~Declined DNR~ I will not accept CE combinations.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 08-30-2012 at 01:09 AM.

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