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    Crade Chapter 2

    Chapter 2


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    Everyone couldn't understand what they were seeing. They never thought anything like this was possible. Their strength is so much stronger than an actual human, and their speed is so fast that the human eye cant keep up.
    Crade even healed so fast it was as if he was never even hurt. The students were all stunned, in fear.

    Takeru thinking: Finally it worked, but the look in his eye...Crade is no longer himself....this is perfect.

    Reika: Crade I...

    Reika fell straight to the ground with her back against the wall from where Takeru had pushed her against. Leaving her in relief and petrified at the same time, while the dust from the wall fell on her. And In an blink of an eye, Crade & Takeru were no longer there. Everyone was shocked and curious. No one knew what had happen.... That was until someone from the massive crowd of students pointed in the sky and yelled for everyone to look.

    Everyone at once looked at where he was pointing, looking at the black blur coming from what looked like through the clouds, it looked like Takeru was falling, head first, from thousands of feet in the air. Everyone quickly scatterd from the area, getting to a safe distance.

    Takeru still coming from the sky, Crade instantly appeared behind Takeru with only a few hundred feet from hitting the ground. Crade then grabbed his arms and performed the Izuna drop. Causing the ground underneath them two to shatter like there was a bomb underneath.

    Within the dust and rubble, Crade was savagely beating his brother in the face, causing massive blood loss. Crade growled in anger, punching harder and harder with every second, until he vanished again. People looked all over to find where they went. But Crade didnt make them wait long. Crade appeared by a near by wall pushing Takeru's face against the brick wall and dragging it while beating his head in. After Crade was done, he threw his brother in the air. Crade then ran, caught his brother by his shouldars, then threw him against the wall that Takeru was choking Reika.... only this time when Takeru's body hit the wall, the wall caved in.

    Crade then growled with a voice so strong, all the windows surrounding the area broke, causing glass to spread everywhere. Crade then picked his brother up through the rubble, only this time, Crades eyes were back to they once were, and Crade pinned his brother against the wall.

    Crade: Takeru, I may not stand up for myself, beating me to a pulp is fine... but no one will ever lay there hands on Reika.

    Takeru heavily breathing: I know you hate me... but i did this for your own good, you need to be strong to protect the people you love. Any longer I couldve killed Reika, and if you didnt react like that, I couldve killed you.

    Crade: Not everything is about people's strength Takeru.

    Takeru then appeared on the rooftop of the school, leaving Crade not surprised at all.

    Takeru: In this world, it does!

    Crade looked over his shouldar, then appeared on the roof top in front of Takeru.

    Crade: I hear sirens! Takeru we need to leave the school now!
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    nice an what makes it even nicer is that you made it in good time
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by H1dd3nD3m0n View Post
    nice an what makes it even nicer is that you made it in good time
    oh wow thank you whatd you mean good time?
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    another nice one and i think he means u made it pretty quickly and it was still awesome:D
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha seeker View Post
    another nice one and i think he means u made it pretty quickly and it was still awesome:D
    Oh!! Thank you seeker!
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Awesome chapter :D
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Thank you :D I really hope you guys will read chapter 3 when i make it Would anyone recommend me in the fanfiction of the month?? I wana know if you guys think itd be a good idea?
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    yeah u should id vote for u
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha seeker View Post
    yeah u should id vote for u
    :D Thank you that means alot. Do you know when theyre gonna have it?
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Id vote for you for FF of the month
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    I would vote for you btw awsome chapter
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Id vote for you.
     
         

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    Re: Crade Chapter 2

    Thank you guys!! if anyone knows when it is please tell me id love to enter
     
         

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