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    Genesis bio

    Basic info
    Name: Genesis Rhapsodos
    Nickname: G
    Gender: male
    Age: 20
    Clan: Aburame

    Looks: long coat, black clothing underneath, black boots, shoulder guards, and a large sword. Genesis is right-handed and red hair,caucasian(white)

    Personality:a deserter, arrogant and childish. Genesis was adopted, causing him to feel betrayed by both his true and false parents, He takes pride in the handsome figure he cuts, his fighting style and the popularity they garner him, however, he does not like mingling directly with people,

    Village info
    Village of birth: Konohagakure
    Village of alliegance: Iwagakure

    Rank/chakra info
    Ninja rank: chunin
    Speciality: none
    Elements: Lightning (needs training)
    Ninjutsu:(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

    Background info
    History: Genesis was born in the Aburame clan, but adopted at the age of two in another family. He never knew his true parents but when he found out he was adopted at the age of 14 he began to ask many questions but all he ever got was that they died with honor. his foster parents enrolled him into the ninja academy when he was 10. He became chunin by 11. He was an outcast though untill he met zack a chunin like him they helped eachother through all of their endevors. on genesis's eightenth birthday zack was murdered by a shinobi from the hidden sound now genesis's ultimate goal is revenge.

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    Theme song and Background Music: /

    Battles:

    Win: 0
    Lost: 0

    ~Approved~ edited several things or it didn't make any sense
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 01-27-2012 at 02:01 PM.

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    Re: Genesis bio

    please critizie me im willing to edit
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    The name Genesis... it doesn't really fit, but nice work
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    thanks
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    It's pretty good you just need to spoiler some stuff like the ninjutsu.
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    A bit of colour and spoilers
    Other then that Nice^^
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    Well it needs pics, and maybe a video. some color wouldnt kill you.
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    my computer wont let me post pics
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    Ill do it
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    I thought you needed 1000 posts for Aburame?
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    heck no
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    Niceeeee BRO want me to touch up your bio a lil bit?
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    Quote Originally Posted by ten tails jinchuriki View Post
    I thought you needed 1000 posts for Aburame?
    No. Aburame bios have no restrictions. Only Torune needs 1000 posts
     
         

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    Re: Genesis bio

    cool bio
     
         

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