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    naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    these are two chapters fused into single one so the fan will be happy ( i'm speaking like i was kishi lol )

    naruto chapter 592: NO LOSING
    sidetext: the uchiha brothers won their fight, will the kages and naruto team be able to do the same thing ?

    scene start with sasuke standing before kabuto:
    sasuke: i will kill all the konoha bastard nii-san i promise it !
    kabuto in izanami: he....help ....nee....need....hel....help....need help
    sasuke: kabuto you was a member of konoha ninjas so you'ra on my list too, prepare yourself
    kabuto in izanami world: so that's my truth ? my family i had a family but konoha took it ? I WILL KILL KONOHA ... i'm kabuto yakushi , I'M MYSELF
    at that moment kabutowake up and see sasuke with his sword
    kabuto:wait... NO NO don't kill me
    ???:don't kill him sasuke we need him
    sasuke turns his head and see jugo and suigetsu
    scene switch to madara and the five kages:
    madara: i'm back to end your life pitiful shinobis , and i'll end your pathetic life but i'll do it slowly that i'll be able to enjoy it ... be prepared to face your death kages!!
    tsunade: i'll fight you till my last breath !
    scene switch to naruto and tobi:
    (we hear a sound of something moving in the trees)
    tobi: so you hired a backup naruto
    naruto: any backup ? what are you speaking about ?
    many ninja come from the forest and naruto is surprised
    kakashi: they ended their fights thanks to your help naruto and now they are here to help you in your fight
    naruto: hahaha it looks like things are going bad for you masked idiot
    tobi: you're not the only one to bring back up uzumaki naruto ...
    tobi do a handseal then we see somthenig coming out of the gedo mazo
    gai: IMPOSSIBLE
    kakashi: this is ...
    a konoha ninja: it can't be ...
    shikamaru: you has to be kidding be me
    darui: this is .... shodaime hokage .... hashirama senju the most skilled kage in the shinobi history
    tobi: well i was able to recupare his body after his death and now i'm able to control his power ....
    naruto: that's dirty
    tobi: GO hashirama senju
    hashirama dissapear from his place and appear in front of naruto
    naruto: what a speed
    then all the ninjas behind hashi fall ( yes he did it with his speed )
    gai enter his gates state and kakashi use raikiri, their attacks are point blank but when they almost touched him he dissapeared
    gai: even with my gates his speed was greater than mine !
    hashirama appear next to tobi
    hashirama: MOKUTON: ki no kage ( wood's shadow )
    hashirama's clones strat raisinf from ninja's shadows ( behind them ) without them noticing then the clones trasform their hands into wood spears and kill hundreds of ninjas at the same time
    random ninjas: aaaaay
    random ninja: aaaaaaah
    randomninja: ayaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    killer bee: what a slaughter !

    part 2 is in a spoiler tag
    the three division captains darui the rock guy ( sorry i forget his name ) and mifune dash toward hashirama
    hashirama: MOKUTON: seicho ki ( growing trees )
    two wood clones come out from his body but they are attached to him ( somehow the same way of 4 tails naruto devise his body in anime ) , the main body block mifune attack with his sword a clone block darui's attack with wind release enhanced sword ( darui use lighting ) and the last clone grow a big wood fist and bock the rock guy's rock fist with it
    mifune: what a skill first hokage
    darui: even if you are strong we still an entire army you have no chace against us
    hashirama: MOKUTON: hana o hikiage ( raising flowers )
    the rock guy: what is this i can't move my body !!!
    all the army are paralysed
    tobi: this one of hashirama strong jutsus it grows flowers in the ground that paralyse all the enemys when they touch them
    hahsirama clones dissapear then with a single roundhouse kick he send all the three captains flying away
    naruto: what a monstrious power !
    bee:what should we do ?
    kakashi: MANGEKYO sharingan !!!
    kakashi is free now
    bee: oh i get it
    bee goes into his v2 form
    gai: 5th gate OPEN
    gai and bee are free also
    naruto: how ?
    kakashi: this jutsu pralayse your chakra system but when you enter a different state or yo rise your chakra level you can break free from it
    naruto: i get it
    hachibi to kyuubi: we have no choice left you should tell him
    kurama: it'll take some time but his chakra mode now is much stronger so ge should be able to rivalise hashirama with it until i teahc him that
    hachibi: are you sure he can do it ? this ninja is very strong
    kurama: i faced him and i know his power ... don't worry
    kurama to naruto: enter your chakra mode right now !!
    naruto: okey
    hashirama dash toward the ninja then start slaughering them with his sword and his speed then
    hashirama: MOKUTON: jukai kotan (Wood Release : Nativity of a World of Trees ) ( it's the same justus that madara used in the start of his battle )
    killer bee: i'll try to stop it
    naruto: no i'll do it
    gai: why does you look so different naruto ?
    naruto is in a chakra mode even more cool than the old one
    only by dashing with his amazing speed and strength naruto destroy the jutsu
    tobi: what's this power ?
    gyuuki: i didn't expect him to be that strong
    kurama: yes but that still nothing compared to his true power .. i need you to buy time also that's a naruto clone the original is hidden in the forest now
    gyuukil: well i'll help out in teachinging that to him
    naruto: why did you take me far away from the battle field ?
    kyuubi: i need to say something naruto
    naruto: ?
    scene switch back to naruto clone and tobi :
    tobi: hashirama attack him
    naruto: not so fast
    naruto clone appear behind tobi and punch in him in the face thus breaking his mask but tobi is in the dark so we can't see his face
    tobi: hahaha not bad at all ... hashirama show him your true power !!
    hashirama: ULTIMATE JUTSU: CREATION BIRTH: MANFISTASTION
    an aura that looks like the senju ancestor aura start manifesting around hashirama
    scene switch to madara and the kages:
    mei: his power doesn't know a limit or what ?
    tsunade: that's even worse than what i expected
    madara: enought playing time to finish the game
    someone appear behind madara: not so fast
    MADARA is cut with a sword but he regenerate
    madara: who are you ?
    sasuke: i'm uchiha sasuke
    madara: !! ?
    madara: and you count on defeating me ? i surpassed the level of a uchiha long time ago
    sasuke smiles
    scene switch to tobi:
    tobi: before killing you i'd like to now why are you doing all this uzumaki naruto ?
    naruto: what a stupid question it's because i'll win
    tobi: and are you sure about that ?
    naruto: yes ...
    sasuke: i can't loose...
    naruto: because loosing is not a possibilitie ...
    sasuke: i should win ....
    sasuke and naruto: because winning is the only possibilitie

    chapter ends

    next chapter: surpass gods
    sorry for the long prediction .... i know it's not amazing but i think it's decent
     
         
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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    hashirama senju was sealed .....
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    i doubt anyone will read this
    maybe if you tidy up a little divide into sections with spoiler tags
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    what the witty?
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    rep+ please hurry up and make the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by Chode View Post
    hashirama senju was sealed .....
    tobi has hashirama's body ...
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by Safater View Post
    i doubt anyone will read this
    maybe if you tidy up a little divide into sections with spoiler tags
    i don't think that spoilers tag will be cool in predictions but i'll trey to make it shorter
    Quote Originally Posted by narutorikudoumode View Post
    rep+ please hurry up and make the next chapter
    thanks alot friend
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
    tobi has hashirama's body ...
    doesn't matter its the soul that has been sealed not the body

    Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
    i don't think that spoilers tag will be cool in predictions but i'll trey to make it shorter


    thanks alot friend
    you could also make names bold madara: xyz
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
    tobi has hashirama's body ...
    a body is no good with out a soul to move it .....
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    well its pretty good fan fiction wise but I don't see sasuke saving the kage's,
    maybe sparing kabuto because of the scrolls contents that was a nice prediction ,
    As for Naruto breaking Tobi's mask - nah he wouldn't stop going intangible ,
    and as for Hashirama - nah he is sealed and its highly unlikely he'd crawl out of the gedo maze or enter the battlefield in that fashion,
    I like where your going with the body though I think something is going to happen revolving around hashi's body :P
    *I mean if Tobi apparently made zetsu and those clones , you'd think he'd be able to make the body alive like zetsu or something or at least working and able to use jutsu's
    nice ideas bro
    rep+ for the effort - I read the whole thing
     
         
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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by Safater View Post
    doesn't matter its the soul that has been sealed not the body



    you could also make names bold madara: xyz
    tobi is controlling him even if his soul is not here he still use his body like a puppet somehow like sasori
    also yeah i lik ethe bold idea thanks
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    i will + rep you for effort buddy space your sceens out more was hard to read good job all round
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    nice bro :D
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
    well its pretty good fan fiction wise but I don't see sasuke saving the kage's,
    maybe sparing kabuto because of the scrolls contents that was a nice prediction ,
    As for Naruto breaking Tobi's mask - nah he wouldn't stop going intangible ,
    and as for Hashirama - nah he is sealed and its highly unlikely he'd crawl out of the gedo maze or enter the battlefield in that fashion,
    I like where your going with the body though I think something is going to happen revolving around hashi's body :P
    rep+ for the effort - I read the whole thing
    o thanks for rep and reading the whole prediction
    also sasuke isn't saving the kages i'll show his true reason in the next chapter
    tobi has hashirama body and he is controlling him like a puppet like sasori do ( not with wires )
    Quote Originally Posted by Chode View Post
    a body is no good with out a soul to move it .....
    tobi is controlling the body directly it's somehow like what sasori do for example
    also for lss broly tobi didn't go intangible because he was busy cotrlolling hashirama body ( that take alot much more chakra and effort than doing it to the bijuu in order to use his fullpower )
     
         
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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by sage mode beat down View Post
    i will + rep you for effort buddy space your sceens out more was hard to read good job all round
    thanks i'm working on correcting it

    Quote Originally Posted by myhayjeff View Post
    nice bro :D
    thanks bro
    EDIT: first post edited
    also after all i think the spoiler tag thing was a good idea
     
         
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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
    o thanks for rep and reading the whole prediction
    also sasuke isn't saving the kages i'll show his true reason in the next chapter
    tobi has hashirama body and he is controlling him like a puppet like sasori do ( not with wires )

    tobi is controlling the body directly it's somehow like what sasori do for example
    also for lss broly tobi didn't go intangible because he was busy cotrlolling hashirama body ( that take alot much more chakra and effort than doing it to the bijuu in order to use his fullpower )
    Oh really ? can't wait for the next chapter then ? :D nice ideas you deserve more rep, but i can't give it to you so next chapter I will
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
    Oh really ? can't wait for the next chapter then ? :D nice ideas you deserve more rep, but i can't give it to you so next chapter I will
    oh thanks so much bro
    i'm working in the next chapter ... i'd like to thank you hundreds of times but i can't so in the next chapter i will do it
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
    oh thanks so much bro
    i'm working in the next chapter ... i'd like to thank you hundreds of times but i can't so in the next chapter i will do it
    Okay keep it up bro :D you obviously put a lot of effort into your threads you deserve more rep haha can't wait for the next one even though i'll have to wait a while
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
    Okay keep it up bro :D you obviously put a lot of effort into your threads you deserve more rep haha can't wait for the next one even though i'll have to wait a while
    thanks man you really are one of these goods NB members that encourage you in keeping the work
    +rep
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
    thanks man you really are one of these goods NB members that encourage you in keeping the work
    +rep
    thanks :D and no problem see you when I see your next chapter ! :D
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
    thanks :D and no problem see you when I see your next chapter ! :D
    yeah we will meet in the next prediction
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Great Great
    thats right, tobi got hashi's body.
    please do another cahpter.
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by David1996 View Post
    Great Great
    thats right, tobi got hashi's body.
    please do another cahpter.
    thanks dude well tomorrow i'll make naruto 593: surpass gods
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    yeah it was great please continue! +rep
     
         

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    Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

    Quote Originally Posted by Erikhog View Post
    yeah it was great please continue! +rep
    thanks bro i make the next chapter: SURPASS GODS check it out if you want
     
         

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