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    Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    Chapter 18: True Words


    Soto stands at the edge of the cliff looking down at the river, “damn, they got away.” He feels a hand on his leg and notices Koji holding firmly onto his leg. “Get your hands off me!” He snatches his leg away from Koji and backs away.

    “Sorry boss, that cut should have killed him already.” One of the Kusa nin says.

    “Don't worry, at the rate he's bleeding at he should be dead in no time. Do you want us to finish him anyway?”

    “No, I want this one kept alive for now, kill him once you bring his little friends back, I want him to watch.” Soto says cynically. “Find them now!”

    The two-shinobi nod and one of them goes over to Koji and slings him over their shoulder. The two shinobi head out in search of Koichi and Ryoko while Soto walks away, heading back towards the pass.
    ~Along the River~

    Koichi and Ryoko flow down the river until Koichi grabs onto a rock in the middle of the river. He grabs Ryoko's hand before she gets too far back and they hold on.

    “Hang on Ryoko!”

    “Koichi, what are we going to do?”

    “I don't know, this river is too strong.”

    “I don't mean that. I mean what are we going to do about Koji?” Koichi turns his head and doesn't reply to Ryoko and remains silent. “Koichi, don't tell me whatever this thing between the two of you is, you're just going to forget what Koji said to you?!”

    “When we get out of here, we're going to find Soto and those ninja.” Koichi says plainly.

    “Koichi, is that all you're focused on? The mission?”

    Suddenly an arrow shoots past the two genin from over head onto the left side of the mountain. They turn and see Toshiro and three of the other soldiers from the bear country over head on the other side of the pass. The arrow they shot down had a thick rope attached to it. “Hurry, grab on and climb up!” Toshiro yells over the river. Koichi pulls Ryoko in and has her climb up first and he follows. The two genin eventually make it up onto solid ground and they pant moderately “Are you two alright?”

    “We're fine.” Ryoko says. “What about you? How are the other soldiers?”

    Toshiro turns his head down solemnly. “They're all dead. The only survivors are the three you see before you and myself, the avalanche killed everybody else, including Soto's own men.” Toshiro clinches his fist and anger as Ryoko looks and sees how tattered up the soldiers' clothing and bodies are. They're all exhausted and two of them are wounded. “We truly did underestimate Soto, and because of that I lost dozens of fine men...wait, where is Koji?”

    Ryoko turns to Koichi who stands looking over the river. “He sacrificed himself to save the two of us. Those shinobi were too strong and he made sure that the two of us got away but he...” Ryoko begins to remember the words Koji said to Koichi and she clinches her fist. “Koichi—”

    “We're going to find Soto and those shinobi, and I'm going tear their asses apart!” Koichi yells. Ryoko sees drops of water dropping from Koichi's face and realizes he's crying, she releases her fist realizing the pain Koichi is feeling. “Those bastards...those bastards took my little brother!”

    *Koichi...* Ryoko thinks. “Koichi, we will find them and we will avenge Koji.”

    “How are we supposed to do that?” One of the soldiers asks irritated. “You saw what just two of them did to our entire platoon, and they killed one of your own. How are we supposed to defeat them huh?”

    “We'll find a way.” Toshiro says, “We'll find a way or die trying. We gave our word that we would bring Soto Kagami to justice and that's what we're going to do. If we can't then we've shamed ourselves and our country and the only honor we'll have left is to die. Remember your oath when you decided to fight for our country all of you.” Toshiro turns to Koichi and Ryoko. “You two shinobi, I still have faith in you will you continue to fight with us?”

    “That's our mission, and we're going to see it through to the end.” Ryoko says.

    “Besides, this is personal now.”

    The group of 6 get expressions of fierce determination in their eyes, as they resolve to see their mission through to the end. “So how are we going to do this?” A soldier asks.

    “We can't attack them head on, that would be suicide, we need to ambush them.” Ryoko says.

    “How are we going to do that? They're probably looking for us right now and we have no idea where they might be.” Toshiro says.

    “Not quite.” Ryoko says pulling out a piece of cloth from her shirt. “During my fight with one of them I managed to snag a piece of their clothing.”

    “How does that help?” Koichi asks.

    Ryoko smiles and she bites her finger drawing blood. She makes a few quick seals and places her hand on the ground. “Kuchiyose no Jutsu!” A cloud of smoke appears and from the smoke a meerkat appears.

    “Ryoko-chan? I didn't expect you, what's the matter?” The small little animal says.

    “Is that a talking rat?!” Koichi says surprised. At that moment Ryoko punches Koichi in the face, knocking him out.

    “Idiot...sorry about that Nana...I need your help. I need you to track down this scent for me please.” Ryoko hands the cloth to her summon and it begins sniffing it. She then dives into the earth, making a tunnel in mere seconds and heads out. “Nana is extremely fast, she can cover several kilometers in seconds under ground. It shouldn't take long for her to locate them.”

    “So once she comes back we can track them down and ambush them.” Another soldier says.

    “No, I don't think we should go out looking for them. I think we should let them find us.” Toshiro says.

    “What do you mean?” Koichi asks as he rubs his face.

    “I'm saying, if let them find us.” Toshiro brings begins explaining his plan to the others. A few moments later Nana returns and explains the whereabouts of the two shinobi.
    ~Several Minutes Later~

    Koichi and Ryoko run through the forest area by themselves as they prepare themselves for the plan initiated by Toshiro. As the two run, Ryoko shifts her head towards Koichi, who bares an expression of intense, dark seriousness.

    “Koichi.” Ryoko says, stopping as she does. Koichi stops running as well and turns his head in attention towards her. “Koichi tell me what happened between you and Koji earlier.”

    “Like I said before, it's none of your business.” Koichi says coldly.

    “Listen, I don't like all these secrets. How do you expect us to be a team if you can't even trust me enough to know what's going on with you?”

    “Oh, so now you're worried about us being a team? I thought it was you who said before that you didn't need a team or something, what makes this time different? Why are you so interested in what's going on huh?”

    Ryoko clinches her first in irritation, “you're such a jerk you know that!”

    “I'm the jerk?! I'm just curious as to why you care all of a sudden. Neither me nor Koji concerns you and you didn't give a damn before so why now!”

    “Because I want to even the score!” Ryoko shouts with confession. Koichi looks at her with surprise and confusion. “I don't like owing people...when you and Koji saved me back when we were training with Kankuro sensei, and all the other times you or Koji saved me...I felt like you were always looking out for me and that I couldn't do anything for the team. You have no idea how much being a kunoichi means to me. I need to get stronger not just for my reasons but because of the two of you.”

    “Ryoko...”

    “Don't get me wrong here, you annoy the hell out of me still but I do admit that I owe you a lot. I feel like, maybe...if we could trust each other that we could help each other get stronger. I've always been kept out of the loop of things, I've always been treated...” The image of Ryoko's dad comes into her head and she shakes it off. Suddenly she feels a hand on her shoulder and looks at Koichi.

    “Alright, I tell you what, when we make it out of this I'll tell you everything and you can tell me everything alright?” Koichi smiles at Ryoko warmly and reassuringly and she begins to blush, she quickly turns away from him and nods. The two genin continue on their way in silence. “Oh and Ryoko,” Koichi says, breaking the silence. She looks back at him and sees Koichi's eyes in a guilty painful expression “I never saved you...that was all Koji.”

    Ryoko doesn't say anything more as the two continue onwards. Just like before, overhead a large eye opens up above in the sky. In the distance the two shinobi stand atop a tree looking down on Koichi and Ryoko.

    “Did you find them?”

    “Yeah, go get Soto, he's going to want to be here for this.” The head shinobi says. As his companion leaves, he picks up Koji and heads towards the two genin.

    A few minutes pass and another explosive arrow is shot down in front of Koichi and Ryoko. The two react fast and get out of the way of as the explosive. From the smoke, the head Kusa shinobi appears smiling mockingly at the two genin.

    “I must admit you kids are pretty good at hide and seek, although that doesn't matter now.”

    “You bastard.” Koichi takes one step and then the shinobi holds up his hand, stopping Koichi.

    “For the record, I just wanted to let you know that I didn't kill the other one yet.” He points to a tree behind him and Koichi and Ryoko look up to see Koji strapped to it. “Surprisingly that wound didn't kill him yet, but it'll get the job done don't worry.”

    “You bastard!” Koichi yells as he darts towards the shinobi. The shinobi smirks arrogantly as the young shinobi heads towards him. Koichi leaps up while using Shunshin simultaneously to get to behind the shinobi. Koichi swings a powerful kick towards the shinobi's ribs and he blocks it with ease. The shinobi whips Koichi away from him, just as Ryoko descends from above with her blade. The shinobi moves out of the way just as Ryoko lands. Ryoko swings horizontally towards the shinobi.

    “Get real kid!” He whips out a kunai and blocks her advance and doesn't even budge. The shinobi jumps up, kicking off of Ryoko and goes into the air. Ryoko smiles as she swings her blade, sending a gust of wind towards the shinobi, forcing him back into the air even faster.

    “Now Koichi!” The shinobi looks back and sees Koichi behind him, ready to swing down a powerful double fist.

    “Pathetic.” The shinobi makes four quick seals, and as Koichi lands his attack, the shinobi times his movements carefully, turning in the air, blocking Koichi's attack with his elbow, causing Koichi's body below his own. He spits out a powerful mud bullet down at Koichi, sending him crashing down into ground, creating a moderate sized crater. “Truly unimpressive, although you are only genin.” The shinobi lands down and places his foot on Koichi's chest.

    “Koichi!” Ryoko yells in worry, as the shinobi smiles.

    “I kind of didn't want to kill you before Soto-sama came but this is just too sad.” The shinobi mocks as he presses down harder on Koichi's chest. At that moment, Koichi hears a gasping chuckle come from Koichi. “What are you laughing at?”

    Koichi pants heavily from the weight on his chest but he opens his eyes and brings himself to as smile. “I'm laughing...at you.” Suddenly the hissing of exploding tags can be heard all around the area and several explosives go off in the trees around Koichi, Ryoko and the Kusagakure shinobi. The trees begin to collapse over the area. Koichi then strikes the shinobi on his thigh, causing him go kneel down and releasing Koichi. Koichi uses Shunshin and leaves the area with Shunshin.

    The shinobi looks over to where Ryoko was and notices that she was gone as well. “Damn it.” As the tree's fall, the shinobi begins leaping up through them, evading them as they fell. As he leaps through the trees, several arrows from several different directions begin shooting towards him. He blocks a majority of them with his kunai however he's hit with two of them, one in his left shoulder and in the right side of his ribs. He gets out of the debris and immediately the Bear country soldiers’ ambush him. The Kusa shinobi gets an expression of annoyance on his face, as the four soldiers run towards him, “Don't take me for a fool!” The shinobi blocks one of the soldier’s advances overhead with his kunai and grabs his arm, and whipping him into another soldier. He then catches Toshiro, disarms him and cuts him, all in one swift movement, and then cuts the neck of the last oncoming shinobi.

    “Ryoko!” Toshiro calls. The shinobi sees Ryoko at the far end of the open field they're in and she makes several quick seals, and slams her palms on the ground.

    “Ninpo: Suricata Soutei Tsuchi Kansui”

    Note: Ninja Art: Mongoose Binding Earth Submersion


    At that moment several chains arise from wrapping all round the Kusa shinobi and binding him. Several meerkats rise from the earth and they are revealed to be the ones holding the chains. “What the hell is this?!”

    “This is where you die...do it now.” Ryoko says.

    “Hold it!” The meerkats prepare to go underground again but before they do, the voice of another stops them. Everybody turns to look and sees the other Kusa shinobi in the tree where Koji is and he holds a blade to his neck. “Nobody's doing anything, not unless you want this one's death to be assured in seconds.” Koichi and Ryoko both look with expressions of frustration as their plan is hindered by threat of the shinobi. “I suggest you release my partner now.”

    “Damn it...we came so close.” Koichi says in disappointment.

    “You forget, you're just kids, nothing more.” Soto says walking towards the others. The Bear country soldiers proceed towards Soto, however the shinobi places the blade closer to Koji's neck and they back off. Soto laughs maniacally at the entire group, “Truly nothing but pathetic ants, now I believe you were given an order to release him were you not?” He says sarcastically.

    Koichi turns towards Ryoko, this time both with regret and guilt. Before Ryoko gives the order, Koji's voice is heard through a mumble.

    “I see...you weren't the one who cast the genjutsu that was spying on us earlier.” Koji says softly in the tree.

    “What the hell are you talking about?” Koji smiles just as his body fades away like a mirage. Everybody in the field is shock as they see Koji's body disappear. “What the hell?!” Koji appears, limping from behind another tree, holding his frontal wound. He pants as he makes the one-handed tiger seal. Suddenly, the hissing sound from a tag is heard by the shinobi and he turns his head to see part of the tag on his back. “What?!” Before he can even react the bomb goes off and he explodes and is killed instantly.

    Without hesitation, Ryoko gives the signal to her summons to complete their actions. The meerkats head under ground and they go deep enough to begin to drag the other shinobi down to the ground, with the intentions to suffocate and crush him by dragging him down with them. “No! Wait!” His pleas fall on def ears and he's dragged to his death underground. Soto begins to run away, fearful and Koji turns to him and another explosive goes off on Soto's leg. The explosion is smaller and isn't deadly, but is cripples Soto.

    “You, know nothing of shinobi...your best bet would've been to kill me the moment you realized I was still alive. If you had, you wouldn't have needed to worry about those bombs I placed on you and your hired gun.” Koji mumbles under his breath. Koji begins to fall exhausted but Koichi catches him. “Brother...I'm—”

    “Don't say it Koji, I know I was an ass. I was taking everything out of proportion. I was more concerned about what other people thought of me that I neglected true feelings of the people who actually cared about me I also understand...I understand why now.”
    ~Several Hours Later~

    The sun begins to set in the Land of Bears, Soto has been imprisoned and is awaiting execution, Koji has been patched up as well as Toshiro and the genin team begins their trek back to Sunagakure.

    “The Daimyou sends his most sincere thanks to all of you for your efforts. I am extremely grateful to you three as well. All the men who died on behalf of this mission have not died in vain thanks to you three. I cannot express my gratitude.” Toshiro says, bowing to the three.

    “Aww, shucks it's no big deal.” Koichi says with his nose up in the air. Both Ryoko and Koji hit him on the top of his head, knocking him to the ground as they bow to Toshiro as well. With their goodbyes said, the genin begin the long trek home. Surprisingly, Koichi's energy seems rejuvenated as he speeds ahead of his two teammates. “Hurry up slow pokes!” He yells in excitement.

    “Jeez, how can he still have so much energy after all that?” Ryoko sighs. She turns and looks at Koji and smiles. “I take it that what you said back there on the cliff about Koichi, you guys are good now right?”

    “Yeah, we are, however,” Koji makes a small smile on his face “What I said back there...was to the both of you.” Ryoko looks surprisingly at Koji. He speeds up to get level with his brother and Ryoko remembers the words spoken by Koji, just before he saved them on the cliff, “You're, too important to me for me to let you die.”

    ~Scroll~
    Jutsu Archive

    Ninpo: Ukio Enko (Ninja Art: Life Connection)
    Rank: A
    Developer: Kankuro
    User(s): Kankuro
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: Developed by Kankuro of Sunagakure, this technique grants temporary animation to an puppet/inanimate object via transfering a portion of one's own chakra into the puppet. Similar in a way to the Shadow Clone Jutsu, the puppet acts and moves of it's own will, however it's mind and vision are linked to the user and the puppet itself has no base intelligence beyond instinctual fighting. The jutsu lasts for a period of time pending on the amount of chakra transfered into puppet. Chakra used up in this technique takes longer to replenish and extracts large amounts on base activation alone and more so as the jutsu is continued to be used in one single day. As a result the more times activated in one day the more chakra consumed and the less time the puppet remains active.

    Myaku Bushin (Pulsing Clone)
    Rank: C
    Developer: Mai Shichiyo
    User(s): Mai Shichiyo, Koichi Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This is a taijutsu technique from the style Suuxe-sensu, created by Mai Shichiyo. In this technique the user releases a full body blast of chakra from their body and it takes the shape of the user. The technique isn't an actual clone, however, the chakra takes the shape of the user, which gives the appearance of such. The jutsu has three uses: One, to distract or frighten one's opponent. Two to force one's opponent backwards as the chakra is dense enough, at its lowest chakra requriment to shatter through a tree. The third use is to make the user faster for a brief moment in time, as the release of such a great force of chakra all at once, temporarily gives one an almost weightless form, but with the same density allowing them to move faster. This jutsu takes chakra control on top of having a high level of chakra.

    Suuxe-sensu (Sway Style)
    Rank: N/A (fighting style)
    Developer: Mai Shichiyo
    Users(s): Mai Shichiyo, Koichi Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: Suuxe-sensu is the taijutsu fighting style developed by Sunagakure kunoichi Mai Shichiyo. In this style of fighting the user utilizes precice chakra control to line one's body with chakra. Derrived from Konoha's Hyuuga style, and the medical-nin fighting style of Chakra enhanced strength, the most basic of the techniques involves defensive circular movements meant to block and use an opponent's force against them. However when combined with chakra, the circular patterns become sharp and a circular block and be used as a blade. The few strikes and kicks used in this style are powerful. This style requires chakra control and large storages of chakra.

    Kansai Kekkai Rasengan (Trapping Barrier Spiraling Sphere)
    Rank: S
    Developer: Naruto Uzumaki
    User(s): Naruto Uzumaki
    Origin: Konohagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This is another advancement of the Rasengan created by Naruto Uzumaki. In order for this technique to work, several shinobi as the radius perimeter of the jutsu is large then that of a normal Rasengan. In Naruto's case, he would summon shadow clones to assist him in preforming the jutsu. The group would then surround the intended target and entrap them in a sphere of chakra. They would then begin to rotate their chakra as if a normal Rasengan and the billions of rotating chakra blades within the jutsu would come to overshadow the target and anything within the barrier would be virtually obliterated. The primary use of this jutsu is to create an inescapable trap around several shinobi or one/few large opponents.

    Oshi-eiei Kage (Push-pull shadow)
    Rank: B
    Developer: Shikamaru Nara
    User(s): Shikamaru Nara, Shikaku Nara, Nara clan (advanced)
    Origin: Konohagakure (During WWIV)
    Description: This is a varriation of the Shadow Imitation jutsu, the funadamental jutsu of the Nara clan. The user would extend his/her shadow just like in the normal technique to one or several targets. The user can then forcefully push away or attract their targets, closer to them (via extending or retracting their shadow (s)). One could also preform both tasks simultaniously. The advantages of this jutsu is that, if an one's opponent is primarily close ranged fighter while the user is not, they can repel them and keep them in their more comfortable range. However, this jutsu requires advanced chakra control as the acts of extending and/or retracting while keeping your target attached, and you stationary is a difficult feet.

    Boushi Kenhandou (Spinning Blade kick)
    Rank: C
    Developer: Mai Shichiyo
    User(s): Mai Shichiyo, Koichi Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: Part of the Suuex-sensu style, the user focues their chakra into legs and feet. While in the air they spin at a rapid pace, which would cause the white chakra to appear as if spinning around them. The user would then let down a powerful ax kick which holds two possible outcomes. The first out come, is if the user lands on their opponent with their foot, they will slice through whatever part of the body aimed for as the feet will possess the highest form of chakra control in the source of the blade. The second outcome would be if the user strikes with their shin, they will demonstrate a devestating force and power rather then a cutting affect.

    Shisho Kekkai (Four Symbols Barrier)
    Rank: A
    Developer: Naruto Uzumaki
    User(s): Naruto Uzumaki
    Origin: Konohagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This jutsu is activated via the Dragon-Rabit-Snake-Tiger seals. This is a defensive barrier technique designed to sheild several persons from large scale attacks. The four symbols insignia will appear underneath the area of defense and an invisible barrier of chakra will be set up around the targests. When impacted by chakra or weapons of any kind only the part being hit by the barrier will be shown via the chakra reacting to the blow. The strength of the barrier and how much it can take all depends on the user's chakra levels. Suprisingly enough the jutsu requires minimal chakra control, only to conjure up the seal and then once that's done the chakra is to be sent exited from the user's body and the seal will navigate the chakra to create the barrier, without the need for additional chakra control from the user. The main draw back to this jutsu is the fact that, while the barrier is up, the user cannot use their chakra to preform anymore techniques while inside the barrier, as the seal will have to be broken in order for the user to utilize their chakra without it going into the barrier.

    Kage Bushin Kansai (Shadow Clone Trap)
    Rank: B
    Developer: Shikamaru Nara
    User(s): Shikamaru Nara
    Origin: Konohagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This is a combination jutsu developed by Shikamaru Nara. The user will create a shadow clone, and since the clone contains the same chakra netowrk as the user, in the case of a Nara, they have knowledge of their clan's hidden shadow jutsu. The user would then get the clone close to their opponent and have the clone gain a hold of the shinobi, long enough for the user to release the clone, but instead of disapearing in a cloud, the clone would become a shadow that engulfs one's target. That being said, the shadow clone's shadow is now a part of the target and can now be accessed by the user. The shadow surrounding the target will then extend to the origional user and give him control over the target.

    Note: Fukyuu Kage Bushin no Jutsu (Eternal Shadow Clone Technique)
    Rank: S (Forbidden)
    Developer: Naruto Uzumaki
    Users: Naruto Uzumaki
    Origin: Konohagakure (During WWIV)
    Description: This technique is perhaps the strongest form of cloning jutsu to ever exist in the world. Created by Naruto Uzumaki, this technique allows for all clones created to remain on the battle field until and sustain any amount of damage without the justu being dispelled. Being taught how to manipulate/isolate only his YinYang elements by the Kurama, Naruto learned how to create a clone which exibits heavy durrability. This jutsu is unique to Naruto as it utilizes the chakra of Kurama as well. Naruto isolates his Yin chakra and the Kyuubi's Yang chakra and fuses it together to make the clone. Essencially the clone is only made up of those two elemental chakra bases and both Yin&Yang give it specific qualities. The Yang chakra gives it the physical manifestation of a clone, while the Yin chakra makes the clone unable to be destroyed, regenerating if need be. Naruto can only sustain one clone however, and the Konoha 11 have forbidden Naruto from using the jutsu as the justu's side affects are highly dangerous. Using the jutsu keeps an active link between the user and the clone's chakra meaning the longer it is used the more chakra is being sucked away from Naruto and Kurama. Similar to how Naruto's chakra mode left him vulnerable to the Kyuubi sucking away all his chakra before their cooporation. Also, after the jutsu is released the user only gains a fraction of the chakra lost back and his natural reserves are lowered, replenishing vastly slower then before. Naruto has only used the jutsu once and only half of the chakra he expended using the jutsu has returned to him...after 20 years.
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    Ninpo: Suricata Soutei Tsuchi Kansui (Ninja Art: Mongoose Binding Earth Submersion)
    Rank: B
    Developer: N/A
    Users: Kai Taiyou, Ryoko Taiyou, Shinobi Meerkat
    Origin: Sunagakure (Pre-WWIV)
    Description: This is a collaboration technique between the meerkat summoning animals and any who are signed to the contract. In this technique, the shinobi will preform a modified version of the summoning technique hand seals, and place their hands on the ground. The shinobi will simultaniously summon a mob of meerkats and several chains. The meerkats will launch the chakra enfused chains up through the earth towards the desired target and restrict them. The meerkats will then tunnle deeper into the earth, dragging their opponent down into the ground forcefully, eventually crushing them under the preassure and also suffocating them. This is a fairly skilled technique as the summoner is responsible for summoning the mob of meerkats in the desired positions for them to preform this task, as well as having the chains shoot up through the ground (which requires chakra to enhance their power allowing them to go upwards) and home in on where they need to go.

    Author's Note:
    I know, this chapter was just as long, maybe even longer then the last one, but it was necessary because I just had to get this peice of the chapter done. I've also added a jutsu in here which wasn't in its intended creation to be a jutsu made during or post the 4th war. Most varrients of the summoning jutsu aren't really new, however I made the technique up and the summoning animals to be used so I felt it appropriate to do so. Anyway there will be much better chapters later on, as I felt this chapter acompished it's main goal, yet it took the long, unnecessary way around it almost. I hope you all enjoy and for those of you who read/comment/rep this post I thank you
     
         

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    Awesome Chapter. When I read, I somehow always become confuse with the Brothers about which is which. Though, I know one of their mind-state reflects that of ANBU (or Root). I sense in later Chapters, if the Brother does get admitted into ANBU, Ryoko is going to become jealous and start hating him.
     
         
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    nice new chapter mate, keep it up ^_^
     
         

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    its cool though why is not sand coming to koichi's rescue he is the jink isnt he now if its a spoiler then dont answer
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

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    Awesome Chapter. When I read, I somehow always become confuse with the Brothers about which is which. Though, I know one of their mind-state reflects that of ANBU (or Root). I sense in later Chapters, if the Brother does get admitted into ANBU, Ryoko is going to become jealous and start hating him.
    I like it when people make guesses at what's going to happen next, it allows me to say...wait and see

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    nice new chapter mate, keep it up ^_^
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    its cool though why is not sand coming to koichi's rescue he is the jink isnt he now if its a spoiler then dont answer
    Don't worry, I don't neglect anything here, everything I do is for reason, you'll see the reason for this in a later date.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    Can't edit the post, forgot to add the previous chapter link as well, so here are the previous and following chapters

     
         
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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    Meerkat-ninjitsu!



    Good story. Now on to the next!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    Quote Originally Posted by Bodhisattva View Post
    Meerkat-ninjitsu!



    Good story. Now on to the next!
    Hell yeah, who needs insanely large when you can have a mob of them mofos

    You're on early today. If you finish before Friday (which you probably will) then you should love my next chapter which is a favored one of mine.
     
         

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    Hell yeah, who needs insanely large when you can have a mob of them mofos

    You're on early today. If you finish before Friday (which you probably will) then you should love my next chapter which is a favored one of mine.
    You're not done yet
     
         

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    Don't say things like that
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

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    Hell yeah, who needs insanely large when you can have a mob of them mofos

    You're on early today. If you finish before Friday (which you probably will) then you should love my next chapter which is a favored one of mine.
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    But you said you gave up
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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    Good chapter..not as hood as previous ones though.

    +rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    as usual very well done ok i have repped you i have now caught up to the ones you have entered in this months contest i will read them soon i really enjoying this FF keep up the good work you really inspire me along with TOC there are many others as well but i wont list them all.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    Meerkats are evil, so their cute faces are just to decieve you. Wow, so again Koji seems to be another Itachi, nobody can be that good at genjutsu, even fooling a ninja who is most likely Chunin level. Overall great chap.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XVIII

    Quote Originally Posted by Uzumaki16 View Post
    Meerkats are evil, so their cute faces are just to decieve you. Wow, so again Koji seems to be another Itachi, nobody can be that good at genjutsu, even fooling a ninja who is most likely Chunin level. Overall great chap.
    Shichiyo=Genjutsu

    Except Koichi, That's one of Koji's primary skills and will be emphasised throughout the series.
     
         

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    Loved it
     
         

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