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    Custom Jutsu Submission



    Please be sure to read the Battle Arena Rules before making a submission.


    ±±Custom Techniques±±


    -Each person has his/hers own fighting style or preferences and much like in Narutoverse, you sometimes feel the need for a certain ability or technique that better complements your fighting style or preferences. The solution? Custom Techniques. In Naruto Base's Role Play you have the ability to submit custom techniques here. To be able to properly submit those you need to follow these rules. Also, don't forget to check the previous Custom Jutsu Submission thread, ±±Here±±



    ±± How to submit a Custom Technique? ±±

    1. Step One: Pick the Name and Japanese Translation. Use this Online Translator to help you. Be sure to name the techniques correctly by stating the skill/element/area to which the technique belongs. Don't use Japanese in Kanji form; use standard Romanji instead.

    Use the following list if needed:

    Doton - Earth Release/Earth Style
    Raiton - Lightning Release/Lightning Style
    Suiton - Water Release/Water Style
    Fuuton - Wind Release/Wind Style
    Katon - Fire Release/Fire Style

    Ninjutsu/Ninpou - Ninja Arts/Ninja Style
    Genjutsu - Illusionary Arts
    Goken - Strong Fist [Cannon Taijutsu Sytle]*
    Kenjutsu - Sword Arts
    Fuuinjutsu - Sealing Arts
    Kinjutsu - Forbidden Arts
    Jukenpo/Jyuken - Gentle Fist
    Mokuton - Wood Release
    Suna/Subaku - Sand Release
    Satetsu - Iron Sand Release
    Yoton - Lava Release
    Ranton- Storm Release
    Jinton - Dust Release
    Meiton - Dark Release
    Jokiton - Steam Release
    Koton - Steel Release
    Bakuton - Blast Release/Explosion Release
    Shakuton - Scorch release
    Jiton - Magnetic Release [Also used for Gold Sand and Iron Sand]
    Hayaton - Swift Release
    Hyouton - Ice Release
    Futton - Boil Release
    Kessho/Shoton - Crystal Release
    Mushiton - Bug Release/Bug Style/Bug Arts
    Shabondama/Shondama - Bubble Release
    Kage - Shadow Arts
    Senpo - Sage Arts/Sage techniques
    Ameton - Rain Release
    Kugutsu - Puppet Techniques/Puppet Arts
    Bijutsu - Bjiu Techniques/Biju Arts

    §§ Others may exist or be added later §§

    *You may chose to name your technique simply with its name, not using the Goken/Strong Fist naming.


    2. Step Two: Chose the type of your Custom Technique.

    Offensive/Attack
    Defensive/Defense
    Supplementary
    Weapon
    Summoning

    3. Step Three: Rank The Jutsu According to Power and Effects.

    E-Rank
    D-Rank
    C-Rank
    B-Rank
    A-Rank
    S-Rank
    Forbidden-Rank

    4. Step Four: Put a Range in your Jutsu.

    Short Range
    Mid Range
    Long Range

    5. Step Five: Fill in the correct Chakra and Damage points for the rank of the technique

    E Rank: 05 Chakra / 10 Damage
    D Rank: 10 Chakra / 20 Damage
    C Rank: 15 Chakra / 30 Damage
    B Rank: 20 Chakra / 40 Damage
    A Rank: 30 Chakra / 60 Damage
    S Rank: 40 Chakra / 80 Damage
    Forbidden: 50 Chakra / 90 Damage

    Note: In certain types of techniques, some of the fields (either Damage or Chakra) may not be required to fill, like with the damage of a defensive technique . If that is the case simply put N/A (Non-Aplicable).

    6. Step Six: Describe the Jutsu.

    Make a brief description of your jutsu and its effects. Don't forget to make it clear and understandable by using proper grammar. Keep it simple and clean. Also, you are required to make a logical explanation of how you achieve the effect of the jutsu. For example, if you have a technique that states "can detect enemy's location" you are required to explain how that is achieved.

    7. Step Seven: Resctritions.

    Add any restrictions that are deemed necessary for the rank of the technique and its correct use. Usage limit, duration limit, etc. Don't forget to make it logical and simply don't add restrictions in an attempt to make your technique more approvable. Restrictions won't change the fact that your technique may be OverPowered. In terms of logic, it pertains to the correct comprehension of the RP and its skills. For example, a high rank Lava technique would affect your use of Lava and to a minor extent, Fire and Earth but it wouldn't affect your use of Water.

    8. Step Eight: Post and Wait for Approval!



    ±± Template for Custom Techniques ±±


    PHP Code:
    [B][/B]
    [
    B]Type:[/B]
    [
    B]Rank:[/B]
    [
    B]Range:[/B]
    [
    B]Chakra:[/B]
    [
    B]Damage:[/B]
    [
    B]Description:[/B
    Note: between the first bolded code, simply insert the name of the technique.



    ±±Formatting Restrictions±±


    -No submission that uses font or formatting alterations such as underline, bold, allignement, color, size, spoilers, etc will be checked. The only exception is that you are allowed to Bold or underline the title of each technique you submitt and you can use spoilers for videos or images you need to post for references.

    -An exception to the above rule is the requirement to bold the alterations on re-submissions. Its required that every altered or add part is bolded. If you simply take out something, write beneath the jutsu stating "I took out the part where...".

    -In addition, please use proper English whenever describing your Custom Jutsu. Take note that if the context of your CJ is incomprehensible, then it will be automatically declined.



    ±±Resubmissions±±


    -When resubmitting a custom that was previously declined, you need to quote the original submission and bold the parts you changed in your new submission.



    ±± Rank and Training Restrictions ±±


    -You can submit techniques regardless of your ninja rank but you must obey the following table:

    Code:
    Genin              ->   up to E and D rank jutsu of the selected element
    
    Chunin            ->   up to D and C rank jutsu of the known element (s)
    
    Special Jounin   ->  up to C and B rank jutsu of the known elements
    
    Jounin              ->   up to B and A rank jutsu of the known elements
    
    S-Class Ninja   ->   up to A and S rank jutsu of the known elements
    
    Sannin              ->  up to S and Forbidden rank jutsu of the known elements
    
    Kage       ->   no limitations in rank regarding jutsu of the known elements
    
    Sage       ->   no limitations in rank regarding jutsu of the known elements
    -You are not allowed to submit customs without proper training for the area and rank you are posting.

    Example:

    User has training in Earth up to B-Rank (doesn't matter if its one technique or the whole B-Ranks) so he can only submit up to B-Rank earth techniques.
    -This fact is regardless of user rank.

    Example:

    If user is Sage Rank but has training in Water only up to C-Rank he will only be able to submit up to C-Rank Water Techniques.
    -Only exception are submitting D-Ranks of elemental ninjutsu. These can be submitted without training.



    ±±Declined, Do Not Resubmit±±

    -When one of your techniques was declined with a "Do Not Resubmit" note, you can't resubmit that technique without the permission of the Staff member who checked that technique.



    ±±Animal Summons and Summoning Contracts±±

    -When you reach Jounin rank you can make your own summoning contract with an animal. Use the search tool of the Custom Jutsu Thread both on this thread and in this to see if your contract was already submitted in the past. You can also check the Approved Summoning Contract List. And most importantly, don't forget to check the rules for Summoning Contracts posted here and here.

    -To submit the contract please use this template:

    PHP Code:
    [B]Summoning Animal:[/B]
    [
    B]Scroll Owner:[/B]
    [
    B]Other Users who have signed contract: [/B]
    [
    B]Summoning Boss if existing:[/B]
    [
    B]Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:[/B]
    [
    B]Description and Background:[/B
    -When submitting a summon you are required to post the link to the signing or owning of the contract.



    ±±Custom Fighting Styles±±

    -All fighting styles are now to be submitted in the Custom Fighting Style Submission Thread and should follow the rules posted there.

    -Techniques from custom fighting styles are still submitted in this thread but need a mandatory linking to the approved fighting style.



    ±±Weekly Submissions and Amount of Customs±±


    -The custom jutsu thread works through weekly cycles of 7 days, marked by a post done by the staff, that contains the date of the beginning of the cycle and the date the cycle ends. In addition to that, the current cycle can always be checked here.

    -You can submit 3 custom techniques per cycle. Remember that summoning contracts and weapons all count as techniques.

    -You are allowed to have 35 Custom Techniques of your own. These don't include fighting styles, summoning contracts or custom elements and custom elements techniques.

    -Each custom is property of only its submitter. If you add a note stating said custom can only be used by you, that custom can't be taught to anyone else. Your custom can't have co-creators.

    -



    ±±Custom Jutsu Users±±


    -Once you get your first custom technique approved you are required to make your own custom jutsu thread in the Custom Jutsu Users Sub-forum.

    -You are required to post every jutsu you made and all jutsu that others allow you to use.

    -Each and everyone of your custom techniques posted in your thread needs to be numbered(from #1 to #35).

    -When posting your technique, you are required to post the link to the techniques approval, by copying the link to the individual post in which the technique was approved.

    -You are forbidden to use any custom technique that isn't posted in your own custom jutsu thread.

    -The custom jutsu thread is your responsibility and its your duty to keep it up to date, clean and complete.

    -Each custom technique can only be taught to 6 people (this excludes special cases such as Custom Summoning Contracts or Custom Element Jutsu which follow their own guidelines).

    -A custom exchange/training cannot be revoked by any of the parties; its permanent.



    ±±Spam±±


    -"Markers", or empty posts (with no actual custom jutsu being submitted) created for the sole purpose of being edited later on, are strictly forbidden and shall be considered as nothing more than spam.

    -Any post that does not contain a custom technique submission is considered spam and thereby falls under the violation of the global rules of Narutobase.

    -Posting a technique that has requirements such as bios or tests and that are pending approval or verification is considered posting a marker. When you post a technique you are required to make sure you fulfill all the conditions needed to do so. That includes training, bios, permissions, etc. Posting them ahead of having the requirements to do so to get your submission checked faster is considered posting a marker and is punishable.



    ±±Ripping and Copying±±


    -You cannot copy or bluntly base your submissions in another members submission without his or hers permission. This is strictly forbidden and is a severe offense.

    -If you find a submission that you feel is too much like yours or that is clearly and bluntly a copy of any of yours, please contact one of the RP mods with the link to your technique and the one that supposedly copies yours.

    -The RP Mods may require you to prove you have traded a given jutsu. Be sure you can provide such proof if required.



    ±±Edits±±


    -No one is allowed to edit his/her post after a moderator has already edited it. Resubmit if you feel that your technique needs to be altered in some way.



    ±±Alternate Accounts±±


    -You are hereby forbidden to submit techniques from your alternate accounts in the same cycle you submit techniques with your main account.

    -You cannot exchange techniques between your accounts, allowing techniques from your main on your alternate account and vice-versa, bypassing the limit for custom techniques.

    -Failure to abide these rules may lead to infraction and in some cases, to a temporary/permanent ban of your alternate or main accounts from the RolePlay.



    ±±The Red Rule±±

    -The red rule exists and you should check it if you don't know what it is. Bugging any RP mod regarding CJs that were declined and to which you weren't required to contact the given mod, is breaking said rule. The techniques are declined for a reason which is most of the times explained even if we are not required to do so. This is never respected but I urge you to start taking this seriously.

    ±±The Blue Rule±±

    -You aren't allowed to direct us into how to check your customs or tell us to make edits on the submissions to make them approvable. Also, providing expressions like "I talked to X senior sensei and he said its possible" or any variation of such expressions is forbidden. Adding explanations outside the technique's description (or, by that matter, any expression or sentence directed at us) is also forbidden. Anything you wish to explain you need to do so in the technique itself, using the correct template, as it needs to be perfectly understandable by anyone if its to be approved. The necessity to explain or justify things outside of it renders such premise invalid and thus makes the technique unapprovable.



    ±±Disclaimer±±


    -NB's moderators have every right to deny any move we wish without true explanation, because some techniques submitted do not reach a certain criteria that we feel should be accepted. Please do not complain, please do not argue, just take it as it is and please move on by creating something else. Most Jutsus however will state a reason why a technique or custom will not be accepted.



    ________________________________________

    These rules are based on Izuna's changes to Rei's original rules. Special thanks to Mina for the header!
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-16-2014 at 11:37 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ±±This thread will open on the 27th of February for the beginning of the next weekly cycle that will last until the 4th of March.

    Until then it will continue closed so that every member can get familiar with all the new rules and updates. While that happens, the submissions of the previous thread will be checked fully.

    Thank you all ^^
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (jiton: sakin tsubasu) magnetism release: gold dust wings
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A-Rank(10*)
    Range:Short - Long Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user creates wings made out of gold dust on their back. these wings can fly by creating a magnetic field on the ground and then manipulating the field so that the wings can grind on them, simulating flight
    Note: only last five turns

    ±± Declined ±± Similar techniques exist already.


    (go-ruden subaku washi) Golden Desert Eagle
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short Range
    Chakra:N/A(-20 per turn)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The Fourth kazekage used a great volume of gold dust and compressed it into the shape of an oversized elegant cleaver. This greatly increases the hardness, creating a gigantic steel-like weapon. The sword is as tall as Gaara, 166.1cm. The cloth on the hilt can also be used to swing the weapon like a flail and toss it at opponents for mid-range combat, but this is rarely done. go-ruden subaku wash wide blade can be used as a shield from incoming attacks. The blade as a thin layer of wind around it, increasing the sharpness of the blade, making it so sharp that if a butterfly were to land on the sharp end of the blade, it would be cut in two. After the death of the fourth kazekage, Gaara took the blade for his own. The Blade has no special ability other than being sharp and made out of gold dust.The user can reflect light off the blade which can be used to blind the opponent temporally.
    Note: The gold dust on the blade is hardened as hard as possible, making it unable to be cut or be broken
    Note: since the blade has a thin layer of wind surrounding it, lightning cannot be channeled into it.
    Note: If the blade is wielded by anyone other than gaara or the foruth kazekage, the blade weighs itself down to where not even tsunade with her brute strength can pick it up
    Note: Can't cut through enemy techniques or be used to defend against lightning projectiles
    Note: Wind coating and the sharpness given is only usable against non special weapons or flesh

    ±± Approved ±±


    (jikashu Ninpou:sakin parusu) magnet ninja art: gold dust pulse
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:Forbidden-Rank
    Range:Long Range
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description: The user preform's the Boar → Dog → Snake hand-seals and then claps their hands together. Once the hand-seals are finished, The user gathers a large volume of Gold Dust and compresses it into small sphere, and then rises it 20 feet in the air and drops to the ground then it explodes into a giant white light filled with electromagnetic energy that covers 20KM width and 10km in height.The abrupt pulse of electromagnetic energy causes changes to the electric fields and magnetic fields causes anyone within the blast to loose their magnetic fields and unable to use lightning type techniques for the next two turns.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Must have mastered magnetism
    Note: The magnitude of the technique causes the user to take damage because of chakra usage(30*)
    Note: This uses all of the user's magnet chakra, causing them unable to use magnetism at all in the next turn
    Note: No lightning above B in the following turn
    Note: The user will not be able to preform more 3 hand-seals the next turn
    Note: can only be used by Gaara NB member




    ±± Declined ±± OP OP OP OP
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 02-28-2012 at 05:35 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton: Raikou teppou : Lightning style Lightning gun
    Typeffensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 25
    Damage:40
    Description: The user will make the Tiger, Snake, Boar, Ox, Rat, Rooster, Tiger, snake, sheep, pig, dog and tiger and start to gather ligtning chakra in his hand then after that the user will shoot out a blast of lightning through his index finger.

    Note
    - Can only be used by Sage of Darkness and those he tought to.
    - The user can not use any B rank Lightning that same turn
    - The user hand will go numb for a bit
    ~Declined~ Similar jutsu exists.

    Buki: Seirei Gai: Weapon Spirit Scythe
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: N/a (i think)
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The spirit Scythe is a special scythe formed in Kumogakure. It was given to Sage of Darkness by his father when he was an academy student. The spirit scythe has the ability to cause tremoundous fear. It is said that its weilder has power over the dead but it hasn't been collaborated yet. The spirit scythe has blue color and a Light blue color with an iscription on it which no one has decifered.



    Note
    - This weapon is personal to the Sage of Darkness and can only be used by him
    ~Declined~ Please explain the extent of the tremendous fear this scythe causes. Also explain to what extent it has the power to control the dead.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 02-26-2012 at 10:56 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ninjutsu: Kemuritadai no Jutsu) | Ninja Arts: Heavy Smoke Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke Techniques)
    Description: When using a smoke technique the user forms two extra hand seals and focuses on creating more particulate matter for their smoke. The increased particulate matter causes the smoke to become thicker and heavier giving it a darker gray tone. Because of the increased weight it hits with more force and makes it even more difficult to breathe. It also gives the smoke resistance to being blown away giving the technique used resistance to A-rank and below wind techniques.
    -Requires wrist launcher(s) for use.
    -Cannot be used in conjunction with a technique that uses smoke bombs.
    -Can be used four times per battle.

    ±± Declined ±± The resistance against A-Rank and below wind isn't possible. If you use this in a B-Rank Smoke jutsu, it will be a Strong B-Rank but a B-Rank smoke non the less which would make it weak against B-Rank and above wind. Be it a normal B-Rank Smoke and it would be weak against C-Rank wind and above.


    (Ninjutsu: Kemuri Sekkan) | Ninja Art: Smoke Sarcophogus
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user forms three hand seals and releases a stream of smoke from their wrist launcher that rapidly envelopes a target and condenses around their body. This acts to restrict their movements while also suffocating them if they are caught in it for more than 2 turns. This can also be used to condense pre-existing smoke (created through smoke jutsu from the user) around them to bind the target.
    -Can be used three times per battle.
    -Must know the location of the target.

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Ninjutsu: Tsuin Kemuri-ryu) | Ninja Art: Twins Smoke Dragons
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms three hand seals and then streams smoke out of a pair of wrist launchers. The smoke from each of the launchers forms into a dragon similar to the one produced by Kiho. The dragons race towards the target and can be controlled to change direction by the user.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Requires two wrist launchers.
    -Cannot use smoke techniques above S-rank the following turn.
    ~Leaving for Another Moderator~


    ±± Approved ±±
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 02-29-2012 at 08:44 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Chou Tengen Toppa)- Earth Release: Giga Drill Breaker
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and then place one palm onto the ground. When they remove the palm, they will cover their hand with earth, and use shape manipulation to form a massive drill at begins at the wrist, and extends outward six feet. When desired, the user has the option to fire the drill from the wrist via chakra towards the opponent. The range of the fired drill can extend to long range. The incredible drilling and puncture impact of this technique allows it to pierce most walled/flat surface defenses.
    Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    Note: Usable twice per battle
    Note: Due to the weight of the drill, the user must have had mastered Taijutsu

    ~Approved~

    Link to Approved Summon Contract

    (Heron Geijutsu: Dākuburū no Bunsan)- Heron Technique: Dark Blue Dispersal
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and then spread their arms out straight to the side of them. From both of their wide sleeves, a flock of small Herons will erupt, and fly outwards from the user. As the Herons fly away from the user, the user's body will disperse. The user can them reform from any Heron of his choosing, but can only move one range at a time. This technique can be used to avoid incoming attacks. The summoned Herons will disperse after the user reforms from one of them.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron contract
    *Note: Usable two times per battle
    ~Approved~ I limited it to two times, and note that the dispersion does not make you impervious to any form of damage.

    (Bakuton: Cho-shin no Shinka Ju ni Tsubasa no Robu)- Explosion Release: Evolved Twelve Winged Robe of the Butterfly God
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While Explosion Release: The Clay Cloak of the White Butterfly Lord is activated, the user will release a thread of clay onto themselves, further manipulating their clay armor. The already existing clay robe will sprout three large wings used for flying on the upper back, on each side. On each side of the lower back, three smaller wings used for quick aerial maneuvering and speed appear. The flying speed while in this armor can only be tracked by 1 Tomoe Sharingan or above or another doujutsu. The robe is even more effective at blocking attacks than the original, having the ability to fully block up to A-rank elemental ninjutsu attacks. This is done by folding the wings down in front of the chest, forming a cocoon around the user's body. Even the momentum from attacks is slowed, leaving almost no transfer of energy to the actual user's body. Being partly earth based, it it also very resistant to water, having the ability to defend against water S-rank and lower. However, due to its natural weakness to lightning, a direct A-rank lightning attack will destroy the cloak.
    *Note: Must have a Deidara biography
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Can only be used while "Explosion Release: The Clay Cloak of the White Butterfly Lord" is activated
    *Note: Usable once per battle; Lasts for 3 turns
    *Note: Can block up to 2 techniques total, before it begins to crack and fall away; (Any mix of Suiton/Futon/Katon/Doton)

    (Explosion Release: The Clay Cloak of the White Butterfly Lord is a previous jutsu you approved. If you need me to post it, please just put pending on this technique and ill send you the link so I dont have to resubmit next week)



    ~Declined~ The bolded is a bit silly, and there should be a continuous chakra cost for the duration. At the very least, get rid of the 1 Tomoe sharingan part, as anyone should be able to follow it if only a 1 Tomoe Sharingan is needed.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 02-27-2012 at 09:19 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Maruchi-Heica no Jutsu)- Water Release: Multi-Arms Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: the user concentrates chakra into his arms and sides and forms either 2 or 4 replica arms, 1 or 2 each side both below the original arms on the users sides. This allows the user to wield more weapons at once, hold short range enemies off while doing hand seals with another pair of arms or deliver taijutsu combinations in shorter times.
    -Only lasts 4 turns.
    - Can only be used by members of the Hozuki Clan.

    Summoning Technique: Akainu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood on their hand the user can summon Akainu, a middle aged hyena with red and black fur who had been trained by a member of Iwagakure that has mastered Lava release to perform Lava up to A rank.
    -Once per battle
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Can only be used by those who have signed the Hyena contract.

    Summoning Technique: Kuzan
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood on their hand the user can summon Kuzan, a young hyena with blue and white fur who had been trained by a member of Iwagakure that has mastered Ice release to perform Ice jutsu up to A rank.
    -Once per battle
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Can only be used by those who have signed the Hyena contract.

    Hyena contract approval: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...42#post3588142

    ~All Declined~ Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=5761


    (Kunai Shikyo Genkaku) Kunai Death Illusion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: If the opponent throws a kunai at you, you essentially make 2 handseals placing the opponent under genjutsu and throw a kunai back, deflecting the kunai the opponent threw. However the opponent is set in a genjutsu as soon as the two seals were done. The genjutsu is that he sees you throw a kunai back, but his hits yours at a certain angle that makes him think it knocked yours away and killed you. Because he sees that happening in the genjutsu.

    - Can only be used twice per match
    - Lasts two turns
    - Must skip 2 turns before using
    - Must be used in mid range only to allow enough time for the two handseals.
    ~Declined~ Don't see the applicability of this and it seems really silly for the user to be supposedly killed by a single kunai that has been knocked away.

    I got permission from Caliburn to make this


    (Doton: Kabe-O Honsho No Jutsu) Wall Of Text No Jutsu
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will make 5 hand-signs and slam their hands to the ground. A giant hollow wall will rise from the ground with two giant doors, it is as tall as Gamahiro and 3x thicker than Gamabunta's Sword. The user makes another handseal causing the doors to open and letters will burst out from inside the wall into 4 chains made of text made from the earth of the wall that will attempt to wrap around the opponents limbs. If successful the user then makes one more handseal, causing the chains to tighten, crushing the opponents limbs as the chains retract, pulling the opponent into the wall where the doors then slam shut, trapping the opponent inside. The wall will then go back into the ground and close in on it'self, crushing the opponent.

    Notes:
    - Can only be used once per battle
    - Must have mastered Earth
    - Must be of at least Sannin Rank
    - No A Rank Earth for the next turn
    - Due to the walls Size, it takes 15 seconds for it to completely rise and 3 seconds for the doors to open.
    - The chains take 2 seconds to get to the opponent per 5 meters. So, 2 seconds for short range, 4 seconds for mid range and 6 seconds for long range.



    Kind of simple to counter as all you have to really do is avoid the chains. But if approved let's just leave that for the opponent to figure out since the only thing that attacks is the chains so it should be common sense.
    ~Pending~ I'll leave this for Caliburn

    ~Approved~ you're so into bondage
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton:Byakurai)-Pale Lightning
    Type:Attack|Supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:This technique is similar to Chidori Sharp Spear, but its power far exceeds it. The technique is performed by the user focuses their lightning chakra towards their index finger. They then begin to compress the stored chakra in their finger. Then, by releasing the chakra from their index finger, into a dense spherical shaped beam of lightning, roughly 3x the size of chidori sharp spear. It can reach up to long-range, wrecking and piercing through many objects, however, the user is unable to control the trajectory, the direction, like Chidori Sharp Spear. The beam simply goes in one direct manner, and thus, the lack of flexibility. The technique is forbidden due to the fact that because of the huge amount of chakra built in your puny index finger, and releasing it all at once, quickly, at the same time, it is lightning chakra, it would cause your index finger to be numb for one full turn, unable to move it, remaining limp. The finger will also look slightly burnt and black during this time, causing some stinging pain to the user. This makes it impossible to perform hand seals during this duration

    -Can only be taught by Toshiro
    -Only usable 2 times per battle
    -Cooldown of 3 turns(including the turn the finger is numb)
    -No S-rank Lightning and above in the cooldown period



    ~Approved~

    ~Resubmitting since I never finished editing my post in the previous thread~

    (Raiton:Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō)-Flying Dragon Striking Heaven Shaking Thunder Cannon
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short-Long Range
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user raises their arm forward and outstretched, occasionally using their free hand to grip the firing arm for extra support, with the palm facing flat toward the target. They then fire a gigantic beam of electricity and chakra powerful enough to destroy anything that it comes into contact with. When the jutsu gets within short range from the target, it breaks into thousands of small senbons, which goes through the users body cutting off their chakra network due to the senbons being so tiny. This effect is a lot similar to Rasenshuriken, but the Senbons aren't fatal.

    -Can only be taught|used by Toshiro
    -Only usable 2 times per battle
    -Three turn for cooling down
    -No B-rank Lightning and above during the cooldown period


    ~Declined~ Anything that it comes into contact with? Also, how would the senbon not be fatal if they cut the chakra network at a microscopic level?

    (Doton: Doro Souran)-Mud Control
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:D-rank
    Range:n/a
    Chakra:10
    Damage:n/a
    Description:The user begins by focuses a small amount of Doton chakra towards both of their legs. Using the Earth Chakra the user can now travel ontop of a mud surface without sinking due to the earth chakra.

    -Can only be used|taught by Toshiro
    -While using this jutsu, the user cannot perform any earth techs

    To be honest I think a D-rank shouldn't have many restrictions thus why I made only two.-.

    FEEL free to edit what needs changing.-.
    ~Declined~ Mud manipulation/control is a CE. Plus, it shouldn't need restrictions. I don't see why this needs to be a jutsu, regardless.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Logion no fukusūgata mōdo: Kaze no fōmu) Logia Mode: Wind

    Type: Attack/Defense

    Range: Supplementary

    Chakra cost:40

    Damage Points: -10 Damage points to the opponent

    Description: This technique is one of a strange and unique yet odd background .Ancient shinobi who had affinity to wind decided shortly after the third ninja world war that they where going to attempt to accomplish a new feat and step up to their elemental affinity by attempting to turn their body temporarily to wind this as in order to give them a more and fast and powerful response lightning affinity ninja .The user focuses on his fuiton chakra and fuses it completely with his raw chakra up to the point were the fuiton chakra is seen leaking out of his body as if it were an armor or shield he then fuses his body with the fuiton chakra changing the cell structure and composition given the user a temporarily wind based body .While in this mode the user can travel at high speed due to the wind and also can dodge lightning attacks which much easiness .While using this jutsu the user body Takes a form of a ghostly like smoke made of wind but still Remains its bodily properties such as hands palms ans feet to do hand seals and thee ability for the body parts to take a similar appearance as if it were not using the jutsu.This jutsu and technique is only applied to the chest and upper part of the body which most offensive attacks are aimed at by the opponent.

    神のサイレントアサシン。怒り Kami no sairentoasashin. Ikari:Silent Assassin .Wrath of the God
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range Mid-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This sword has been rumored countless times to be a myth by Shinobi and samurai due it immense and un equaled strength and abilities however the sword true background comes from a time w the ninja world was barely existent and new villages such as Konoha were merely formed or just made. Ninja who had a single affinity to wind where looking for a way to create a weapon which will retain and withhold or the properties of wind and at last give them the upper edge against ninja who have ration as their main affinity. How ever the sword was evolved from having and being a weapon which was intended to merely be for wind affinity ninja to an elemental weapon capable of usage by an shinobi with another element this is because the sword also took it properties and acted as if it were mainly only used by that affinity. Ninja who were wind affinity as their main element were given the upper edge than other single element users this is because the sword was initially designed for the purpose of being for wind user. While wielding the sword any elemental user (In this case being wind)Infuses his wind chakra into the sword up to the point t were the wind chakra is seen leaking out of the sword and the sword is giving a glowing like look the user while wielding the sword can cut any s rank ration attacks in half or absorb it but this is only for ration ,due to the elemental weakness and the wind elemental strength over it. However this does not apply to other elements as the sword can only cut other elements such as doton,katon,suiton,mokuton,Jinton To A rank. It is an ornamentally decorated blade with a length of 7 feet it is made with titanium which makes it indestructible and a coating which called porcelain. Porcelain enamel is defined as a substantially vitreous or glassy inorganic coating bonded to metal by fusion at a temperature above 800°f. which is an inorganic coating attached to metals which serves as a shield or cover against high temperatures and degrees and also to resist against t heat such as fire lava etc. The sword physical strength and properties alone gives it the ability slice tiny rocks and overpower normal swords and Block kunai with ease merely by a single slash .

    Fire: User which decide to use fire instead of wind. Must infuse their own elemental affinity into the sword .However this can cut s rank wind attacks due to it elemental strength and power over it but can only cut A rank techniques for the other elements .This excludes water which it can only cut or absorb the jutsu up to b rank due to the water elemental strength over it.

    Water: If the user decide to use Water instead of wind. The user will then infuse his suiton chakra in the sword thus making it share or having the properties of water but still remaining it strength and original sword components such as its titanium and porcelain component structure .This will be able to slash and absorb S rank fire technique. It can slash and absorb other a rank Elemental techniques in half excluding earth which it can only absorb or slash b rank jutsu due to earth elemental strength over it.

    Earth: If the user decide to use Earth instead of wind. The user will then infuse his Doton chakra in the sword thus making it share or having the properties of water but still remaining it strength and original sword components such as its titanium and porcelain component structure .This will be able to slash and absorb S rank Water technique. It can slash and absorb other a rank techniques elemental techniques in half excluding Lightning which it can only absorb or slash b rank jutsu due to lightning elemental strength over it.


    Lightning : If the user decide to use Lightning instead of wind. The user will then infuse his Doton chakra in the sword thus making it share or having the properties of water but still remaining it strength and original sword components such as its titanium and porcelain component structure .This will be able to slash and absorb S rank Earth technique. It can slash and absorb other a rank techniques elemental techniques in half excluding Wind which it can only absorb or slash b rank jutsu due to Wind elemental strength over it.

    Note:Must have mastered wind to use the wind version.

    Note:The sword can only be used once in a battle.

    Note:The weapon last for three turns.

    Note:The user must decide which mode to use before the battle .

    Note:The user can only change from one mode to another once in a battle

    Note:To change modes count as a jutsu.

    Note:The wind mode can cut and absorb attack for 4 turns

    Note:The other modes and slice and absorb attacks for 2-3 Turns.

    Note:Must Need Thunder Bolt Permission To Use.

    Note:Must have started training in the other modes to use.

    忍術スタイル:チャクラアーム Ninjutsu sutairu: Chakuraāmu:Ninjutsu Style:Chakra Arms

    Rank: A

    Type: Offensive/Defensive

    Range: Supplementary

    Chakra cost:30

    Damage points: N/A

    Description: The user channels his raw chakra around his body distributing it equally to all parts he then focuses his chakra on one region being his back some meters before his shoulder bones the user focuses. The jutsu user then uses his pure raw chakra and sprout at 4 arms which retain some physical properties of that of a real arm due to the chakra thickness and intangibility. The arms shaped appearance is gotten from chakra manipulation and shape manipulation arms are capable of performing jutsu which require hand seals and can be done through the hand such as rasengan and chidori .The arms are also capable of countering and shielding the opponent against small projectiles such as swords and explosive kunai by using their chakra to make a slim wall of chakra which can defend against c rank attacks and below. This jutsu is also useful in genjutsu as it can be used as a form of releasing it this can be done by the chakra arms landing or performing or shooting small jutsu such as small projectiles at the user.

    Note:Can only be done once in a battle

    Note:Last for 2 turns

    Note:Must have mastered Ninjutsu

    Note:Must have thunder bolt permission to use

    ~All Declined~ The first one has been made already. The Second One is Overpowered and essentially 5 swords in one. The last one is just a rip-off of Jinchurikki Chakra Arms. Do not Resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Approved Minato bio: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=157594

    Sakasa Hiraishin no Jutsu | Inverted Flying Thunder God Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (if used with a kunai slash as the finisher)
    Description: This is a space/time ninjutsu.This jutsu can only work if the user has placed a seal or has direct contact with the item/target. This jutsu has an inverse effect to Flying Thunder God Technique, as it does not instantly teleport the user, but the item/target he has direct contact or had previously been marked with the Seal of Flying Thunder God. The user can only teleport the item/target to another previously made seal.
    - Only Yondaime/Fourth hokage can use this jutsu,And is unavoidable unless with space/time ninjutsu and can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be used by Gin-San.

    ±± Declined ±± Hum...so you put the tag on something and teleport it to another tag. 4 times? Too much. Also, you need to make this a bit more restrict...not in terms of uses but in terms of its ability. The way it stands is quite OP albeit possible within the concept. Take out the damage also.


    Jikūkan: Rasenrengan | Space-Time Double Spiral Sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: All ranges
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After scattering FTG seals all over the field (By kunai or other means) Minato will teleport in random patterns to confuse the opponent. When reaching the opponent's blind spot, Minato will make a huge forward burst toward the enemy, and as he does it, he will slam two rasengan into him, sending him flying.
    -Can only be used two times per battle
    -Can only be used by Yondaime Hokage bios
    -Cannot use any jutsu above S-rank in the next turn
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San

    ±± Declined ±± Good idea but this has a flaw. Each teleportation of Minato counts as a move in our RP. If you teleport multiples times, its a mess in terms of approval as it makes you very difficult to counter. Make it 2 consecutive teleports within scattered kunais and take away the blind side part. Also, make it 1 rasengan.


    Raijin no Gyakujou |Frenzy of the Thunder God
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: All Ranges
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This technique will only work if the target has been marked with the special shiki-jutsu(seal jutsu) or if a previously marked item is within close range of the opponent. Minato will instantly teleport to the nearest seal from the opponent, and will burst quickly toward the opponent (fast enough to look like a blur), slashing him. He then will redo the pattern for a total of six times, though all of them coming from different angles (this is, teleporting to the same kunai but in a different angle than the opponent, as FTG allows the user to teleport at any position within close range). After the final slash, Minato will kick the opponent in such way that will throw him upwards in the air.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be used by Yondaime Hokage bios
    -Can not use any jutsu above S-rank next turn
    -Can only be taught by Gin-San


    ±± Declined ±± Same problem as above with the multiple teleports. Only cannon combos for minato will be allowed to have more than 2 teleports in one move. Keep it at a level that a small sliver of hope for countering this still exists lol
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Mazohisuto-Do (Illusionary Technique: Way of the Masochist)
    Type:Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+15 for S-ranked)
    Damage: +40 to user (+15 for S-ranked)
    Description: This technique is a self inflicted genjutsu meant to ward off other genjutsu. When the shinobi realizes that they're trapped inside a powerful genjutsu, they shall use this neutralize the affects in order to render the jutsu ineffective. What this technique does is cast the simple illusion of pain onto the the victim, they layer this technique on top of the affects they already feel or notice from. The user of this technique will receive the sensation of breaking or dislocating an arm, being stabbed, etc. The affects of this technique cause the sensation of physical trauma enough to release them from their opponent's genjutsu.
    ~This jutsu causes the illusion of physical pain, which does hinder the user of this technique after this jutsu is released.
    ~Can be used 2 times in a match
    ~For release of genjutsu of S-class, more pain and more chakra is required
    ~Using this technique to release S-class genjutsu will prevent use of genjutsu for the next turn and any technique above A-rank

    ~Can only be taught by Reborn


    ±± Declined ±± Excellent idea but it will only release up to A-Rank gen so you need to resubmit with proper restrictions and edits. But good job ^^
    ~Resubmitting~

    Genjutsu: Mazohisuto-Do (Illusionary Technique: Way of the Masochist)
    Type:Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 40 to user
    Description: This technique is a self inflicted genjutsu meant to ward off other genjutsu. When the shinobi realizes that they're trapped inside a powerful genjutsu, they shall use this neutralize the affects in order to render the jutsu ineffective. What this technique does is cast the simple illusion of pain onto the user, they layer this technique on top of the affects they already feel or notice from. The user of this technique upon doing two hand seals will focus on his own chakra flow to forcefully alter it, receiving the sensation of breaking or dislocating an arm, being stabbed, etc. The affects of this technique cause the sensation of physical trauma enough to release them from their opponent's genjutsu.
    ~This jutsu causes the illusion of physical pain, which does hinder the user of this technique after this jutsu is released.
    ~Can be used 2 times in a match
    ~Technique ends after user's phase is over
    ~Can only release genjutsu A-ranked and below

    ~Can only be taught by Reborn

    ±± Approved ±± Tweaked some things ^^


    Bolded sections within the quote have been excluded. Bolded sections in the technique have been added...Since the old thread was closed I couldn't quote it properly so I copy and pasted it and wraped the quote BB code around it.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Dropping this :

    Kaji Katana : Fire Blade
    Rank:S
    Type: Weapon - Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra: (+20 for fire jutsus rank A and above deflected, +15 for any Earth jutsu cut)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Fire blade looks like an ordinary blade, with leather straps surrounding the area where the user holds it from, the leather is not ordinary leather as it is - for an unknown reason it is not able to burn. It has a sharp tip which is useful against opponents at close range. The blade also has the ability to deflect small fire jutsus ranked A and lower without difficulty. Furthermore due to its sharp tip the sword is able to cut through Earth jutsus ranked B and lower.
    Note: Fire deflection counts as one of the users move.
    Note: Fire deflection jutsu can be used 3 times.
    Note: The blade can only be wielded by RockLeeGreenBeast.
    Note: By Hard materials I mean Earth jutsus ranked B and lower.
    Note: The cutting of Earth jutsus ranked B and lower counts as a move.
    Note: Cutting Earth can only be done 3 times.
    For this:

    Hansou Katana:- (The Transporting blade)
    Rank:S
    Type: Weapon/ Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Range:Short
    Descrition: The ‘Transport blade’ is a blade which has a unique ability of being able to create a perfect clone of itself in the users other hand (depending on which hand he is holding it on) at any time the user requires her too. This enables the user to switch from a one sword fighting style to a dual sword fighting style and can also be used perform a surprise attack on his opponents.
    Note: Can only be wielded by Erzo and those he allows.
    Note: Creating a clone of the blade counts as one of the users move.
    Note: Creating a clone the of blade can only be used 4 times.

    Took out
    ''Another abiltiy the blade has is to be transported from one hand to the other at extremely fast pace this means, the wielder can transport the blade whilst it’s moving, giving it the same momentum when it's is transported on to the other hand, making it harder to dodge attacks, however when this is done, the blade transports from one hand to the other instead of just cloning itself to give the user 2 katanas.''

    ±± Approved ±±

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    (Raiton: Raiton Mari)-Lightning Style: Lightning Ball
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user concentrates his lightning chakra and uses shape manipulation to create a ball of lightning which gets created around him, making him/her protect from all angles, if necesasry the user can then perform 1 hand seal (Tiger) and make the lightning all around him suddenly get pushed away from him, with him being the epicenter and destroy anything/everything in its paths. (Within reason and within the laws of the basic 5- its strengths/weaknesses.)
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.

    ±± Declined ±± similar technique already exists. Lightning bubble if I'm not mistaken.

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    (Doton: Arata Daichi )- Earth Style: New Ground
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user concentrates his earth chakra on his feet and releases his earth chakra into the ground causing the ground to harden up, regardless of what is there already. This jutsu can be used to overcome things like Swamp of the underworld jutsu, by overcoming the amount of chakra that is already infused into it with your own chakra and hardening the mud making it into dried up mud enabling you to walk on it as if it was any other ground.
    Note: Can only be taught by Erzo.
    Note: can only be used twice
    Note: Has no effect if the user is standing on water.


    ±± Declined ±± similar technique has already been made in both large and small scale.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Gyaku Reinforu) - Reverse Rain Fall
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: This technique allows the user to manipulate a falling water source so that it forms rain drops that go up into the sky. This jutsu allows the user to form rain techniques that come from below the target as well as above the target. Since this jutsu seemingly produces rain from both below the opponent and above the target, they can't predict where a rain jutsu will come from.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -The rain lasts two turns going up and down. Depending on the size of the water source, the rain will be heavier or lighter.

    ±± Pending ±± Is this a rain technique or a water technique? Proper naming is essential. Also, this isn't a b-rank.


    (Suiton: Kakusareta Mizun no Hari) - Water Release: Hidden Water Needles
    Type:Attack
    Rank: D
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user is able to release incredibly stealthy needles of water by from their mouth by utilizing their own saliva as ammunition. The water is incredibly small and difficult to see, either requiring adequate lighting or using one's doujutsu to see the needles. These needles can be used by a medical ninja to strike vital joints and disrupt the movement of their joints for a mere moment.

    (Suiton: Mizu-Yaki-Ire) - Water Release: Water Hardening
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user is able to cause any small amount of water (C-rank and below) and harden the quality of the water. This only works on the user's water created water or manipulated water. This jutsu follows the same principle as the Water Sword of Draining in which it will harden the water so much so that it can match steel's hardness.


    ±± Both Declined ±± first one is more like a C-Rank and second one is definitely at least a B-Rank.
    I can't post an exact quote as the thread has been closed.

    (Suiton: Kakusareta Mizun no Hari) - Water Release: Hidden Water Needles
    Type:Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user is able to release incredibly stealthy needles of water by from their mouth by utilizing their own saliva as ammunition. The water is incredibly small and difficult to see by normal ninjas but are still visible in most conditions. These needles can be used by a medical ninja to strike vital joints and disrupt the movement of their joints for a mere moment.

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Suiton: Mizu-Yaki-Ire) - Water Release: Water Hardening
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does 2 hand seals and is able to cause any small amount of water (C-rank and below) to harden temporarily. This only works on the user's water created water or manipulated water. This jutsu follows the same principle as the Water Sword of Draining in which it will harden the water so much so that it can match steel's hardness. However, it will only last a few moments, as chakra needs to be fueled into it to keep it harden.
    Note: User can keep it harden for a maximum of 2 turns, as long as he keeps focusing chakra into it and doesn't perform other techniques.

    ±± Approved ±± Edited a bit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    The previous thread was closed so i couldnt quote my re-submission post...but here is the post
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=5788
    Only re-submitting the Summon. ^^

    Summoning Animal: Starraptor ( akai-mukuhoku)
    Scroll Owner: Dead Bones B
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Later to come...
    Description and Background:
    The user cuts his thumb and covers his palm with his blood then does the needed hand-seals, then places his hand on the ground summoning Starraptor. This summoning calls upon Starraptor (Gender-Male) starraptor is a large bird. Is known for a large red hair covering his right eye. He can understand and speak the summoner's language. He can use B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is large enough to carry one person.

    NOTE: Can only be summoned by Dead Bones B and those who may sign the contract.
    ~Each Jutsu counts as a move toward the three jutsu of the summoner
    ~This summoning can be summoned Once per battle.
    ~Once summoned, this summoning lasts for 3 turns.
    ~Can speak English, Japanese
    Looks:

    Please edit anything if needed ^^

    ±± Declined ±± You didn't change a single thing. Can you please read through contract and summoning submissions to understand how to properly submit?


    Doton: Wall of shurikens (hei deba)
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 30 Damage
    Description:
    After doing the necesary hand seals (Rat >snake >rat) and slaming his hands on the ground the user creates a wall of earth in front of him...and then by putting his hands on the wall, making his earth chakra flow through the wall creating and shooting many earth type shurikens at the opponent. However a B-rank lightning attack will make it fall/fail. Also this jutsu carries risks leaving the user unprotected and vunerable since his hands have to be on the wall in order to work.

    Note: Can only be taught/used by Dead Bones B.
    ~ Can be used 3 times per battle.
    ~ Must wait 2 turns before using again.
    ~ the user can stop shooting shurikens at will by removing his hands from the wall.
    ~ the earth shurikens only go in a straight path.

    ±± Declined ±± similar technique already exists.


    Please edit anything if needed ^^

    Doton: Shaking world hands (yurasu yochi te)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 30 Damage
    Description:
    The user after doing the necesary hand seals (snake > horse > rabbit) and slaming his hands on the ground makes two big hands of earth rise and hit the ground hard enough, pushing the nearby ground down, and the opponent,s ground up..making the opponent be thrown towards the user.

    Note: Can only be taught/used by Dead Bones B.
    ~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~ Must wait 3 turns before using again.

    ±± Declined ±± Mixed concepts but this has already been accomplish in several techniques.


    Please edit anything if needed ^^
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 02-28-2012 at 06:11 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon: Katon Misairu (Fire: Fire Missiles)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses fire chakra to his finger tips. Once it is there he releases it forming ten blasts, the fire blasts come out like pillars of the fingers with a diameter of three centimeters. Each pillar will take its own path towards the opponent flying in a random patter taking up a massive area since each pillar can miss the opponent by at most five meters, meaning the range is five meters all around the opponent making these extremely difficult to dodge. The fire will usually take the easiest path where there is the most oxygen to feed its way towards the opponent.
    ~The user cannot use any water techniques the turn this is used
    ~Can only be taught by ZoroOP
    ~Declined~ Do not resubmit, similar jutsu exists

    Raiton: Koushoku Raiton (Yellow lightning)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+25 to lightning)
    Description: The user uses this technique and pumps extra chakra into all of his lightning techniques increasing their power drastically and having them change their color to yellow. The user has to use this technique before using his move to boost its power by forming one handseal. Once the handseal is made the user can unleash any lightning attack with a massive power boost and the lightning itself turns yellow.
    ~Once used the next attack must be a lightning attack
    ~Can't use any wind within the same turn
    ~Can only be taught by ZoroOP
    ~Declined~ Similar jutsu exists (Lightning expansion, Pervy sage has one for each element)

    Raiton: Raiton No (Lightning: Lightning field)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100 (-20 to user)
    Description: The user forms a string of six handseals and then cups his hands placing his fingers together to one another. Focusing their Raiton chakra into that area they will severely damage their hand since its just unfocused lightning. The user will then proceed to raise his hand into the air and push out the lightning chakra will then create a massive dome somewhat smaller then the size of Kisame's water dome. This will create a massive electric field, when the user forms the Boar handseal which is extremely painful due to his burned hands lightning will all move towards the ground using anything as a conductor but the user, thus if his opponent has any kind of metal upon him (kunais, shurikens..ect) he will be used as a conductor for a massive amount of lightning. The lightning itself has enough watts to stop a human heartbeat for good.
    ~Once used the user cannot perform any handseals for the rest of the fight due to completely burned hands
    ~The burning on the users hands will cause him a great deal of pain
    ~Can only be used in an area where your opponent is amongst the tallest objects or near it, also the opponent must have lightning upon it.
    ~Can be used once
    ~Can only be taught by ZoroOP
    ~Declined~ Kumogakure has that jutsu, except its not forbidden rank

    Feel free to edit anything Scorps ^_^
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 02-28-2012 at 05:53 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Pegasus Blade

    Type: Attack Weapon (Sword)

    Rank: S

    Chakra Cost: N/A (40 when flowing Katon through it)

    Damage Points: 60 (80 with Katon)

    Description: Pegasus Blade: A Blade made of Steel. This blade has been passed down from users of the legendary Pegasus beyblade. This blade is mainly made of Steel, but this Steel is imbued with Fire Chakra, so you can combine Katon with this blade to increase the Swiftness and Strength, and also to make the cuts and slashes much hotter and sharper. The hilt is made of Pegasus feathers and more Steel covered with the feathers.

    Pictures: Pegasus Blade:

    ~Declined~ So original o_o Similar cw exists
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..


    Side Note: We all remember this cannon technique that was removed and replaced with "Earth Flow Divide." It was removed because it wasnt the same as the one shown in the series so I thought Id remake it as a custom jutsu. ^^


    ±± Declined ±± Similar jutsu exists. Bisha's if i'm not mistaken ^^
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Buki: Seirei Gai: Weapon Spirit Scythe
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: N/a (i think)
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The spirit Scythe is a special scythe formed in Kumogakure. It was given to Sage of Darkness by his father when he was an academy student. The spirit scythe has the ability to cause tremoundous fear. It is said that its weilder has power over the dead but it hasn't been collaborated yet. The spirit scythe has blue color and a Light blue color with an iscription on it which no one has decifered.



    Note
    - This weapon is personal to the Sage of Darkness and can only be used by him
    ~Declined~ Please explain the extent of the tremendous fear this scythe causes. Also explain to what extent it has the power to control the dead.
    Buki: Seirei Gai: Weapon Spirit Scythe
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: N/a (i think)
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The spirit Scythe is a special scythe formed in Kumogakure. It was given to Sage of Darkness by his father when he was an academy student. The spirit scythe has the ability to cause tremoundous fear. The fear caused by this weapon is because of its control over dead spirits which it can summon to aid in battle. Now then these spirits can only help by binding the oponent only just a few seconds. It is said that its weilder has power over the dead but it hasn't been collaborated yet. The power over the dead this scythe posesses is the power to summon dead spirits and bind the oppnent only just a few seconds. The spirit sycthe has power over the dead by a jutsu cast into it by Kumogakure ninja while forming it.(something like samehada has the power to suck chakra and itachis swords traps them in a genjutsu world) The spirit scythe has blue color and a Light blue color with an iscription on it which no one has decifered.

    -Note-

    -The spirit scythe can only summon dead spirits once per battle and by doing so the dead spirits take 20 chakra from the weilder.
    - Can only be used by Sage of Darkness
    - Bold parts added

    Feel free to remove or edit something it needed to be approved ^^

    ~Declined~ And how does one defend against dead spirits? Is it like a genjutsu, or like "Killing Intent"? And "a few seconds" is a lifetime when in a battle. Completely unrealistic.. "control over spirits" has never been shown in narutoverse
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Lightning Drilling Fang ( Raiton Kussaku Kiba)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Descriptions: A more heightened version of Fang over Fang. The user spins while releasing lightning chakra making him approach at a much faster speed than usual. The only thing that can keep up with it is at least a 2t sharingan, byakugan, or if the user is ranked below the opponent.
    -only Blade Hyuga and anyone with permission can use it
    -Must be in the Inuzuka clan
    -No S ranked lightning jutsu for 4 turns
    -Must have used Dynamic marking to effectively find the target, or have a scent of the opponent

    ±± Declined ±± Overpowered. The original technique is a C-Rank so this with added lightning would be a B-Rank. Also, can you do this with your dog? If so then nop...you'd kill your dog.


    Flaming Drilling Fang (Honō kussaku kiba)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage:60
    Descriptions: Another heightened version of Fang over Fang. As the user is spinning he/she spews fire out of their mouth which engulfs the users spin in flames burning everything in its path.
    -Must be an Inuzuka
    -Only me and anyone I allow can use this
    -Even if the fire is put out during the spin via water the user is still able to continue the normal fang over fang
    -No S ranked fire for 3 turns

    ±± Declined ±± The lightning one was iffy but its is simply impossible. You'd kill your dog with this one, burning him to a crisp. O_o And since you are basing this one in the C-Rank one that can be done with or without your dog, it needs to have that part explained. Also, again, with added elemental chakra this would be a B-rank...


    Earth Drilling Fang ( Chikyū kussaku kiba)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user begins spinning toward the target while gathering earth from the ground engulfing himself in stone due to the excessive weight the user is slowed down dramatically though increases his power in the process
    -Must be an Inuzuka
    -Only I can use this and anyone I allow
    -No S classed earth for 3 turns

    -Please edit if needed-


    ±± Declined ±± Same as the above.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Ikazuchi Uesama Modo Reveru Shunkan - Thunder Emperor Mode Level Two
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Close-Short (self)
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: n/a
    Description: When the user is in his Thunder Emperor Mode, he can power himself up into Level Two. Its power is almost the same as the Raikage's Lightning Release Armor (3/4) The user is can now slip through weak Fire jutsus just as Lightning goes through Fire. But the user is very vulnerable in Wind and Water jutsus, a critical decision. During the mode his Raiton affinity is more powerful, he doesn't use handseals anymore up to three handseal Raiton jutsus. Mostly used as a last resort, the user will faint after three turns, and will lose to his opponent. In duration of this technique, clouds become dark and lightning flashes to the ground and thunder can be heard although it doesn't harm the enemy.

    Ikazuchi Uesama Raiton Panpan - Thunder Emperor Lightning Release Clap
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: The Thunder Emperor During his Level Two state, claps his hands and two lightning bolts appear from the sky and strike down the opponent if the user decides to strike him. It can also be used as a defense to blind the opponent so it cannot see. Also thunder can be heard after the lightning and it can cause deafness to the opponent. When the thunder is heard the opponent falls to a genjutsu that he is electocuted by his father. The thunder can be stopped if the lightning is countered or defended or if the opponent doesn't see the light. The genjutsu lasts for two turns.

    Ikazuchi Uesama Jisatsu - Thunder Emperor Suicide
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: The Thunder Emperor During his Level Two state, goes near to his opponent while he focuses a Rasengan on his right hand then uses it to smash himself resulting to a discharge and causes a massive explosion that kills the user and the opponent near him. The opponent cannot be killed if he makes a move to an unreached range. The jutsu makes a huge crater making it impossible to go underground to evade it.

    Feel free to edit Scorps ^^

    ~All declined~ OP, do not resubmit.
     
         
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    (Tengoku no hoīruāmā)Heaven's Wheel Armor
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:Self
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:60(+10 if rival come in contact)

    Description:The breastplate of this armor is small and is composed of feather-shaped plates pointing upwards, which cover only the users breasts, revealing a fair amount of there cleavage and sporting a large metal flower on the front, extending down along there hips, exposing her stomach. There biceps are covered by straps seemingly made of metal, and her very large plated gauntlets sport feather-shaped plates at the edges.The metal of this armor is there sharp and hurt when come in direct contact.It also comes with a pair of duel swords.

    Note:The user gains the ability to fly shorts distance but due to the weight only for 2 turns.
    -User can rebound B rank and lower Raiton Jutsus
    -Can be summoned during the match or in the start
    Feel free to add anything I really want it approved
    How it looks

    ~Declined~ Most metals conduct lightning very well... So lightning up to b-rank "rebounded" by a metal armor is just stupid
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ranton: Shinjouran) Storm Release: Body of Storm
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+1 Rank Ranton | +5 Taijutsu)
    Description: The user will push all of his Ranton based Chakra out of his body forming a bright aura around the user. This aura takes shape of Ancient Battle Armor that is semi-transparent. This drastically increases the users ability to use Storm Element, allowing the user to use stronger Storm based techniques then normal. Because of the Ranton Armor the user is able to achieve greater speed in similar fashion to "Raiton Armor", however this only allows the user +8 to their speed, instead of the +20 Raiton would allow. Thanks to the speed gained by the Ranton Taijutsu becomes more efficient. Ranton Armor seems like an excellent technique but because of output of Ranton, the user can only use Ranton based Jutsu and Taijutsu during this mode, upon deactivation of this mode the user will feel totally drain. As a side effect, the user will feel dizzy and move at half speed because of the lack of chakra and the strain on their body.
    Notes:
    -Last 5 turns.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Only Ranton and Taijutsu during this Mode.
    -User moves at half speed for 2 turns after Jutsu.
    -No S-ranks for two turns after this Jutsu.
    -No Ranton Rest of Battle after this mode is deactivated.
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

    ~Pending~ Need another Mod's opinion. I'm not fond of Raiton Shroud copies, but it's adequately restricted.

    ±± Declined ±± No speed chart references. Also, we generally don't approve copies of cannon techniques that are this powerful as the one you are basing this one in. Resubmit and Izuna or Roku will have the last word.


    (Suiton: Koi Kihou) Water Release: Dense Pressure
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After the user catches their opponent in "Water Style: Water Prison" the user will make a single handseal with their free hand. this causes the pressure of the water to build as if going deep into water, this causes the trapped opponent ear drums to burst. the pressure will continue to build until the opponent is completely crushed by the Jutsu, however because the user's hand is withing the water, their hand will be crushed as well.
    Note:
    -Can only be used after "Water Style: Water Prison"
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

    ~Declined~ This should rather be a Forbidden Jutsu because it crushes the user's arm. Also, restrict it to once per battle (you'll likely not need more). Otherwise, it's fine.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Magen: Jigoku mirā hyōji) - Demonic Illusion: Hell Mirror Viewing
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: -
    Description:
    • The user, using some sort of weapon (katana, scythe etc.) will channel a thin layer of chakra into it. They will then swipe this weapon in front of the target's eyes as a feint move. When this happens, a thin wave of chakra is expelled and inserted through their eyes and into the brain, which slightly blurs their vision. When their vision is regained, everything they see is mirrored to what's normally happening. This is a great jutsu to use in conjunction with Taijutsu or Kenjutsu techniques.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used three times in battle.
    ~Declined~Similar jutsu exists. (Performed differently)
    (Kugutsu: Rasen Kugutsu no Mai) - Puppetry Technique: Spiral Dance of Puppets
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 35 (+10 for additional puppet)
    Description:
    • Using various weapons such as swords and spikes concealed in two or more puppets, the user will control them to spiral around towards the target in a circular motion similar to Gatsūga, though it's no where near the speed of that spinning. The pronged sharp objects as well as the force from the puppets has the potential to cause deep cuts and wounds.
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kenjutsu: shadan) Sword Arts: interception
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases chakra unto their sword and quickly coats the sword with pure chakra. Then as the enemies attack is coming at the user, he twists the katana and and hits the attack with the non-sharp part of the katana. As the katana makes contact the user releases chakra and instead of breaking apart the jutsu, the user blocks and sends it to the left or right. Using the katana like a baseball bat to block and send the attack to the side.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Because its pure chakra, it can only block A rank and below elemental jutsu.
    ~Must be Kage rank to use this
    ~It can block S rank pure chakra attacks
    ~Can not send the jutsu back, only to the right or left side of the user
    ~Can only be taught by Piccolosan
    ~Declined~ You expect to deflect an incomming giant fireball that covers the whole field with a small sword? Good luck with that.
     
         
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