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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    死の外科医|The Surgeon of Death
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: "The Surgeon of Death" is a large version of the Japanese sword type known as nodachi. It is a long sword with an oblong-shaped hand-guard coated with short white fur, sheathed in a black scabbard decorated by white crosses from the opening to the bottom, and with a small piece of red rope tied near its opening. This sword cannot be broken thanks to the metal used for it's creation. Due to its size, it is usually carried on the back or over the shoulders. Although being longer than an ordinary sword, this sword isn't heavy, allowing the user to use it just as effectively as a regular sword. This sword has the ability to manipulate the user's chakra in relation to Illusionary Techniques. The sword has only use for it's master, no other being may manipulate it's abilities unless they share the same exact chakra of it's master. The Surgeon of Death has the ability to cast genjutsu on opponents. This may be done by striking/cutting the opponent with the sword to activate the Genjutsu known as "Surgery" (B Rank). In this genjutsu, the person is placed in the situation of being stabbed and tortured by floating knives and swords which poof onto the battlefield. The sword may also perform this genjutsu through self activation. If a person other than it's master tries to wield the sword, it will detect that the chakra isn't that of it's master's and release onto them the chakra stored within it to activate the genjutsu.
    ♞ May only be wielded by Drizzeh.
    ♞ Genjutsu mastery is required to wield this sword.
    ♞ The Sword's Genjutsu, "Surgery" may only be used 4 times per battle and counts as a move/jutsu.
    ♞ The Genjutsu, "Surgery" can only be self activated 3 times due to the limited amount of chakra in the sword itself.


    [Genjutsu: Yakuwari] Illusionary Technique: Shambles
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After performing the Tiger handseal, the user will release his chakra onto the opponent, which he will then manipulate to disrupt the opponent's senses, trapping him/her in a Genjutsu. In this Genjutsu, a visible dome of chakra will form around the user and opponent. The opponent then visualizes being cut by the user. In this genjutsu, anything cut by the user's sword sword will become dislocated from it's original place. The user can even cut living things clean in half and have them float around by making hand movements. The user can also join dislocated parts together, for example, sticking the opponent's head on an animal or tree. Being only an Illusion, everything in reality remains the same.
    Note: Usable only three times per battle.
    Note: The user must have a sword.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh, thus can only be taught by him.
    Note: This Genjutsu lasts up to two turns if uninterrupted.


    X-Both Declined-X The Genjutsu Shambles exist, techniques from other anime don't take long to be submitted as CJ's.
    Resubmitting the weapon (no changes). Spoke with Xylon, the reason why the sword was declined before was because he thought it was made specifically for the genjutsu shambles which was declined. ^^

    死の外科医|The Surgeon of Death
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: "The Surgeon of Death" is a large version of the Japanese sword type known as nodachi. It is a long sword with an oblong-shaped hand-guard coated with short white fur, sheathed in a black scabbard decorated by white crosses from the opening to the bottom, and with a small piece of red rope tied near its opening. This sword cannot be broken thanks to the metal used for it's creation. Due to its size, it is usually carried on the back or over the shoulders. Although being longer than an ordinary sword, this sword isn't heavy, allowing the user to use it just as effectively as a regular sword. This sword has the ability to manipulate the user's chakra in relation to Illusionary Techniques. The sword has only use for it's master, no other being may manipulate it's abilities unless they share the same exact chakra of it's master. The Surgeon of Death has the ability to cast genjutsu on opponents. This may be done by striking/cutting the opponent with the sword to activate the Genjutsu known as "Surgery" (B Rank). In this genjutsu, the person is placed in the situation of being stabbed and tortured by floating knives and swords which poof onto the battlefield. The sword may also perform this genjutsu through self activation. If a person other than it's master tries to wield the sword, it will detect that the chakra isn't that of it's master's and release onto them the chakra stored within it to activate the genjutsu.
    ♞ May only be wielded by Drizzeh.
    ♞ Genjutsu mastery is required to wield this sword.
    ♞ The Sword's Genjutsu, "Surgery" may only be used 4 times per battle and counts as a move/jutsu.
    ♞ The Genjutsu, "Surgery" can only be self activated 3 times due to the limited amount of chakra in the sword itself.


    X-Approved-X Make sure to submit other genjutsu you intend to use with the sword in a template form here. Ideas are abundant you could make good ones.

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    [Doton/Fūton: Nibai Shou Iwa Kobushi] Earth/Wind Release: Double Destructive Rock Fists
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Earth/Wind Release: Double Destructive Rock Fists is a technique in which the user manipulates pre-existing earth to create two large fists. The Earth Fists will then be enhanced with Wind to grant it additional speed and force for penetrating target(s). The user performs the Ox-Boar-Tiger handseals then proceeds to slam both palms onto the ground below. Upon slamming his palms on the ground, the user will release his chakra into the earth then manipulate it to eject several chunks of rock upwards, which combine to form two large fists of rock which levitate above ground. Each fist is the size of a Dragon Head created from the 'Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique'. Located on each knuckle of the fists is a stone spike capable of piercing along with crushing a target upon impact. Once the Earth Fists are created, the user will then infuse the Earth fists with his wind chakra, proceeding to mold the chakra to create a continuous wind pressure which erupts out of the back of the fists, launching them towards the target. Since the Rock Fists are infused with wind, if the user performs an additional handseal (Bird), he may create an expansion of compressed wind within the Rock Fists which violently ejects countless chunks of rocks that scatter up to Mid Range, great for striking multiple targets.
    Note: No other Earth or Wind techniques in the same turn.
    Note: No S Rank and above Earth and Wind techniques the following turn.
    Note: The Rock Fist Explosion counts as a move/jutsu.
    Note: Usable only once per battle.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by mangekyo byakugan View Post
    Hyouton: Kagirinai(Ice Release: Unlimited)
    Type: Attack/Defense*
    Rank: Forbidden*
    Range: Short-Mid Range*
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: *The user first performs a sequence of five hand seals and creates six ice weapons(any kind of weapon sword, spear, axe...)two of the weapons will be in the users hands the other four will be on his sides (from, back, left, and right)After the weapons are created the user will hold out the two weapons in his hands and spin inside the perimeter of the weapons, while the user spins he release his chakra *from the weapons and manipulate it so it forms a ice wall that is above the four weapons this causes the weapons in his hand to disappear and "go" to the wall and the weapons on the ground will have their "tip" inside the wall the user will then use further shale and chakra manipulation to increase the length of the weapons so they are "spikes" on top of the wall the user then performs five hand seals and causes the same process to occur but this time the weapons will cover the entire wall. The user can make a maximum of 6 walls with a minimum of 3 walls. Now after tue desired number of walls are created the user will perform two hand seals and direct then"cyclone" of weapons toward his opponent(s) the "cyclone" has a radius of 3 meters and it can be decreased to a smaller radius through the user will, the "cyclone" has the weapons on it's "tip" and the walls(inside and out) are fill of jagged pillars of ice that are emerging from every direction of walls. The user can attack using this technique by either directing the "tip" of the cyclone to the opponent(s) or by trapping the opponent(s) inside the "cyclone" and let it close in on them.
    -Usable once
    -must have mastered ice
    -must be member of yuki clan.
    -no forbidden ranked techniques for the rest of the battle.
    -can't be performed by shadow clones or when shadow clones are created.
    -for the next three turns the user is restricted to D rank water and wind and no ice.


    Hyouton: *Zairu (Ice Release: Spiked Laso)*
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Mid Range*
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will first perform two hand seals and send his chakra to his index finger after that is done he will swing his finger in the air above him and follow it up by directing his finger towards his opponent as the user directs his finger towards his opponent he releases the Hyouton chakra built up in his finger in the form of a transparent (similar to the transparency of ice disk tech) rope that has a "whole" in it in the front after the opponent is caught inside the rope the user will "click" one finger to his index finger and cause the rope to tighten around the opponent since chakra is built up in the second finger and through the clickage the user sends his chakra down the rope the user will then click his other finger and cause the rope to harden and cause ice spikes to "emerge" from the area that surrounds the opponent and impale them.
    -Must be from Yuki Clan.
    -Must have mastered Ice release.
    -Usable three times per battle.
    -No s rank ice and above on the same turn.

    X-Both Declined-X Very vague descriptions, not that i mind. I'd check 10 times if i need to understand properly, but text based RP needs proper explanation of moves. It would be a hindrance during battles.

    Hyouton: Handanryoku (Ice Release: Pillars of Judgment)*
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Mid range*
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: *The user first performs three hand seals and causes 4 pillars of ice to emerge from The ground or be created around the opponent(s). The pillars are arranged so that they form a parallelogram with point A(left of opponent) 6 meters away from point B(right of opponent) and point A 4 meters away from point C(back left of opponent) and point D like point C but from B, the user then performs another hand seal and causes ice to emerge from the pillars and connect to the other points so a parm is made(Ice does not cover the ground nut it covers the "roof" and there are no diagonals) the ice that emerges from the pillars are from inside reflective like a mirror and from the outside are similar to this found in investigation rooms so the user can see his opponent while they are inside but the opponent can only see his reflection, this technique serve as a capturing technique. More techniques related to it will be added like "Sin", "Slice" etc*
    -Usable four times per battle.
    -Lasts until destroyed or escaped from.
    -No S rank ice on same and next turn.

    X-Approved-X Additional techniques may or may not be approved, that's given.

    Note when I say more techs related will be added I mean in a another submission if this gets approved*
    For Pillars of Judgment
    Hyouton: Handanryoku "Betrayal" (Ice Release: Pillars of Judgment)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After the technique pillars of judgment been in play, the user will judge the opponent and the opponent in the users mind will be labeled as "betrayal". The user will pass the judgment into 'real life' and perform two hand seals and cause the pillars or judgment to explode inwards towards the trapped opponent(s). The explosion however is unique, it happens at a fast pace and all sides explode at the same time so the opponent will have little time to counter.
    -Like pillars of Judgment it is usable four times per battle.
    -No S rank ice in the same turn.
    -Must have mastered ice release.

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    How does Ice Explode? And why would it explode? You simple assume it explodes but you fail to explain how it explodes.

    Resubmitting the others with changes.

    Hyouton: Kagirinai(Ice Release: Unlimited)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user first performs a sequence of five hand seals and creates six ice weapons(any kind of weapon sword, spear, axe...)two of the weapons will be in the users hands the other four will be on his sides (from, back, left, and right)After the weapons are created the user will hold out the two weapons in his hands and spin inside the "square" of weapons, while the user spins he release his chakra from the weapons in his hands and manipulates his chakraso it forms a ice wall that is above the four weapons this causes *the weapons in his hand to "disappear" and "form" wall and the weapons on the ground will have their "tips"(the area which is pointing upwards) "inside the wall"(the chakra added by the weapons that were in the users hand will form the wall, so the weapons on the ground will be encased by the wall) *the user will then use further shape and chakra manipulation to increase the length of the weapons that are encased in/by the wall so they are "spikes"(for example if a spear will have the spear head as the "spikes" a sword will have it's tip as the spikes so on and so forth for other weapons) on top of the wall the user then performs five hand seals and causes the same process to occur but this time the weapons will cover the entire wall(so weapons are now on the inner and outer sides of the wall as well). The user can make a maximum of 6 walls with a minimum of 3 walls. Now after the desired number of walls are created the user will perform two hand seals and direct the "cyclone" of weapons toward his opponent(s) the "cyclone" has a radius of 3 meters and it can be decreased to a smaller radius through the user will, the "cyclone" has the weapons on it's "tip". The user can attack using this technique by either directing the "tip" of the cyclone to the opponent(s) or by trapping the opponent(s) inside the "cyclone" and let it close in on them and get hit by the weapons from the inside
    -The user can manipulate the weapons on the side of the wall to either stay sharp or to cease to be sharp if the user chooses to use the technqiue as a defensive.

    -Usable once but when used as a defense it lasts until the user attacks with it
    -must have mastered ice
    -must be member of yuki clan.
    -no forbidden ranked techniques for the rest of the battle.
    -can't be performed by shadow clones or when shadow clones are created.
    -for the next three turns the user is restricted to D rank water and wind and no ice.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Ever heard of periods? sentences? and nvm that, ever heard of english? This technique is a mess and such poorly described it can't even be checked anymore. Either learn to explain what you want in a simpler, easier way to understand or get someone to help you.

    Didn't bold changes in discretion due to vast changes.
    Hyouton: Zairu (Ice Release: Spiked Laso)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will first perform two hand seals and send his chakra to one of his index fingers as the chakra is in his finger the user will "swing" his finger towards the opponent and a rope completely made of ice will travel towards the opponent, the rope is like a Laso so it has a circular area on the front side of it. The user will capture a part of the opponents body with the circular area and will follow it up by clicking his index finger to another finger causing the rope where the circular area is present to tighten and squeeze the opponent, the user will then once again click his index finger with another finger and cause the area where the circular form is present to have spikes emerge from it and impale the opponent. For example if I made the rope captures my opponents left hand palm area and I continue the jutsu they will get spikes passing through his arms and the spikes that are opposite to each other will collide at the center so there is where it will stop progressing p.
    -The size of the circular area can be controlled with a minimum size that of an ant and maximum size of that of a elephant so this technique can be used on some summons.
    -When the user clicks his index finger with another finger their chakra will be sent through the rope towards the circular area there is a delay of 3 second until the chakra reaches if used from mid range.
    -The user can choose not to use the secondary ability of the technique(spikes) but if he uses it on another turn it will count to the jutsu limit

    -Must be from Yuki Clan.
    -Must have mastered Ice release.
    -Usable three times per battle.
    -No s rank ice and above on the same turn.

    X-Pending -X Leaving for someone else

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    Work the description. For something so simple it has such a complicated description that leaves it almost incomprehensible.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 12-01-2012 at 09:55 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Oasis Nara View Post
    Resubmitting

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “Folklore”.
    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<

    Custom Weapon

    (Folklore, Abusōbā) Folklore, the Absorber
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description : Folklore is a magical mirror with average size of big mirror, known as one of the 5 treasure which the Wombat empire have. Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu.

    Note: Every Folklore ability count as one of the user moves
    Note : Folklore can’t be summoned, it must always be carry by the Wombat warrior
    Note: Folklore can only be wield by the Wombat warrior (summons), can’t be use by the user (Summoner)
    Note: Can only be use to absorb 1 elemental per turn
    Note : Can only be use 5 times or absorbing per battle



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    You didn't get what I said. To have the mirror on the field you need to spend a move. So, if it comes with the wombat, the wombat needs to summon the mirror or transform into it or whatever it might be, spending a move so that you gain access to it.

    New Submission.

    (Doton: Futago no sutōkāhebi) – Earth Release : The Twin Stalker Snake
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user perform 2 hand sign to emerge twin giant snakes made of earth come to the surface, pop out their head to tail with their giant size like Manda, Orochimaru’s Snake. When they start to emerge from the ground, they will stare at the opponent with fears look, thus their appearance shall petrified the opponent. Then the user perform a single hand seal to sink them into the ground, by then they will traveling underground which able to emerge suddenly from beneath the ground to the surface to attack the opponent at different locations, such as directly below the enemy, wrap their body and pulling them down into the earth or constricting them for another attack to hit from different angle, rear, front, left and right side of the opponent. The user could also use the twin snake to conduct an effective scout from underground or patrol/scanning a certain area to instantly gain information from the surface relying on their vibrations sense. But when they do the scout/patrol/scanning task, they will not be able to attack the opponent and will stay on the ground as the user required. The twin snake vibration sense are connected with the user.

    Note: Usable only twice per battle
    Note: Last for 5 turn then auto vanished (this effected also to the scout/patrol/scanning task)
    Note: Can’t attack the opponent while they conduct a scout / patrol / scanning an area and count as one of the user moves.
    Note: No S-Rank earth tech in the same turn
    Note : can only be taught by Oasis Nara

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    Don't resubmit.
    Resubmitting

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha are granted a magical mirror called “Folklore” from the Wombat Elders which have sign the contract of the mirror by conducting a unique ritual where Alpha have to write his name with his blood upon the mirror’s back. To be able to use the mirror, Alpha must summon it by drawing his blood and perform 4 serial hand seal then wipe his blood upon his shoulder, Folklore then would appear and strap around at Alpha’s back. Folklore itself is a special mirror with average size of big mirror, known as one of the 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu.

    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Every Folklore ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Alpha and Folklore,may be in battle field for 4 turns then auto vanished although the mirror can't be on the field without its summoner.
    Note: Folklore can only be wield by the Wombat warrior (summons), can’t be use by the user (Summoner)
    Note: Folklore can only be use to absorb 1 elemental per turn 2 times per battle.
    Note: Can only be summoned once




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    (Doton / Fuuton: Inton ten) Earth / Wind release: heavenly cloistered
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S / Forbidden Rank
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 40/50
    Damage: 80/90
    The user facing his both palm upon the sky to gather a massive amount of his wind chakra in his left palm and earth chakra in his right palm until his palms emitting a blurry light, then he draws down his palm and change it into a fist in front of the user’s face, so now the user could clearly see’s his fists emitting light and small vibration occur upon his fist which notify him that he already gain a massive amount of chakra within his both palm which he require. Then the user pummel the ground using his left and right fist alternately 2 times, 1st pummel would splitting the ground between the user and the opponent and move it mid range gap between them, 2nd pummel would destroyed the ground of the opponent side. This could also destroy a large scale of ground such as a city depending of the user require. A mid scale destruction are only destroying the ground to long range, but the large scale of destruction could destroy half of a city like half of fire country. Anyone withing the range of destruction shall be crush and shred into pieces.

    Restriction of Using mid scale destruction
    - Count as S-Rank Technique
    - could only be use 3 times per battle
    - No S-Rank or above of wind and earth technique in the same turn.
    - No earth and wind tech for the following turn.

    Restriction of Using Large scale destruction.
    - Count as Forbidden Technique
    - Could only be use 2 twice per battle
    - Minus (-40%) of his life. If the user insist to perform the 2nd times of this scale, then his life is in jeopardy and if the user not ending the fight in 2 turns, then he will die in the following turns.
    - Causing an extremely exhausted so his speed and strength are down – 40 point.
    - Unable to walk nor run correctly for 2 turns
    - No wind and earth attack for 3 turns
    - Severe a painful upon his fists and can’t perform hand seal for 2 turns

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    Simultaneous manipulation of 2 elemental chakras is a Yin/yang ability. Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Link of approval of this CFS: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post8871180

    Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Suka-Ta

    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: -
    Description: The user channels his wind element chakra beneath his skate and manipulate the wind creating a strong balanced wind that makes your skate fly currying the user with it. This technique can also be used to move around at the same speed level of the user's rank. This technique can get the user up to 4 meters above the ground. If directed against any thrown objects, the wind current will push them away.
    -Can only be used three times per battle.
    -Stays for up to 3 turns per use, and cost 15 chakra points for each turn it is in use.
    -No other jutsu can be used while using this technique, however the user can use some of the fighting style's techniques and get back aboard with this jutsu activated.

    X-Approved-X

    Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Beneath the Cracker - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Shita kanpan

    Type: Attack/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: As the user gets close to the enemy, the user channels his chakra through the wind used to blast the skate up and manipulate it to make it side flip in the mid air as he jumps for it, letting it twist with wind elemental effect of cutting at its edges to cut his legs as he channels his earth chakra through his foot as he directs a kick toward the enemy's chest to break his/her bones confusing him/her with two attacks out of the sudden making them pretty hard to dodge. After using this technique, the user stand back over the skate and continuing to fly above the ground.
    -Can only be used once per battle

    X-Declined-X Umm.. from what i got you cut your legs with your skateboard.

    Kuchyose No Jutsu: Gitasura No Sono Shinku Sangaku -Summoning Technique: Gitasura of The Crimson Mountains

    Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: -
    Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 5-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the guardian of the empire's borders around the volcanic mountains. It has four huge wings, two arms and two mouths on its beak. Gatisura could use up to A rank fire element techniques of the techniques the user know. He is great at transporting and unlike many of the vultures he is friendly.
    -Can only be summoned once.
    -Must have the vulture contract and mastered up to A rank of the fire element to be able to form this summoning.

    X-Declined-X Well everything is fine, but how long does it last?

    Link of contract approval:
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...58#post8871158

    And submitted in:
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...05#post8989105
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Raiton: Dendou Mizu Hara (Lightning Style: Electric Water Field)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user focus on his Raiton chakra and release a surge of electrical energy around him. This field of electricity will travel through the water anywhere near the user (3 feet) electrifying anything touching, in, and in a short distance from the water (3 inches from the water). While also surging the molecules in the water making them unstable causing them to weaken and not able to hold together thus dispersing the water jutsu. The user is safe from any shock damage due to it being his chakra but also the heat from the electricity will evaporate the water in the air around the user as soon as the surge of electrical energy is released around him.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used for water attacks ONLY
    ~Can not use a Water based attack during the same turn as this or next due to the field of electricity
    ~Can be used 3 times during battle

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Similar to an old custom and your description lacks logic.


    Genjutsu: Shigai Buhin Kai Ofu (Illusionary Arts: Body Part Cut Off)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will send his chakra into the target by either touching or by making him look at a false hand sign. The user will then effect the sense's of the target making him believe he's frozen and can't move. Then while frozen the targets body parts begin to dismantle from his/her body starting from the fingers and toes up. Even though the leg's of the targets are gone he is suspended in the air not able to move as his body parts are falling off and then turn into dust. While in reality the target is just standing there.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used 3 times during battle
    ~Can not use another genjutsu next turn

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing customs.

    Doton: Reikyuu Yougo (Earth Release: Coffin Protection)
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra (+10 for each turn +10 for repairs)
    Damage: N/A (+20 if target comes in contact with it)
    Description:
    The user will quickly preform the Dragon~Dog~Bird~Tiger hand seals and rise up from the ground 6 pillars of really hard and dense rock around him touching each other (basically creating a wall around the user with no gaps or anything in a Hexagon shape). He will then preform the Ox hand seal and a roof will cover the opening above the user as well as make sharp earth spikes appear on the outside of the pillars and roof (4 spikes on each pillar going up vertical and 8 spikes on the roof in a circle pattern) protecting the user from harm. The user can also repair the walls if damaged by channeling chakra to the walls either by touching or by releasing chakra from his/her body. If the user wants to come out he will then preform the Tiger hand seal making the rock and earth around him crumble and fall around him without harming the user.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used 2 times during battle
    ~Can not use Doton the same turn or next after this jutsu is active
    ~The user has no idea what is happening on the out side
    ~below the user is still vulnerable to enemy attacks

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.
    Doton: Reikyuu Yougo (Earth Release: Coffin Protection)
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra (+10 for each turn +10 for repairs)
    Damage: N/A (+20 if target comes in contact with it)
    Description:
    The user will quickly preform the Dragon~Dog~Bird~Tiger hand seals and rise up from the ground 6 pillars of really hard and dense rock around him touching each other (basically creating a wall around the user with no gaps or anything in a Hexagon shape). He will then preform the Ox hand seal and a roof will cover the opening above the user as well as make sharp earth spikes appear on the outside of the pillars and roof (4 spikes on each pillar going up vertical and 8 spikes on the roof in a circle pattern) protecting the user from harm. The user can also repair the walls if damaged by channeling chakra to the walls either by touching or by releasing chakra from his/her body. The user will then preform the Ram hand sign and the pillars of earth will move on the ground moving the user to where ever he desires on the battle field like a tank. If the user wants to come out he will then preform the Tiger hand seal making the rock and earth around him crumble and fall around him without harming the user.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used 2 times during battle
    ~Can not use Doton the same turn or next after this jutsu is active
    ~Only last for 2 turns max
    ~The user has no idea what is happening on the out side but can create a small hole so he can see out side
    ~below the user is still vulnerable to enemy attacks

    X-Declined-X Still similar to a multitude of existing techniques

    Katon: Ki Ukiyo (Fire Style: Tree of Life)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description:
    The user will preform a sequence of 7 hand seals: Dog~Bird~Ram~Ox~Dragon~Tiger~Dragon and spit out a very small fire seed. The user will again Preform the Tiger hand seal and release the stored up Katon in the small fire seed causing it to erupt violently and very quickly out of the ground burning anything it hits. Once erupted the flames will take shape into a tree, and as each ember fall's, taking shape of a leaf, and hit the ground they will erupt and catch anything thats solid that it hits on fire. When all embers hit the ground symbolizing that the tree is dead the user will preform the Ox hand seal and the tree will erupt in a fiery storm catching anything in the area on fire.
    ~Only Kwalker394 can teach this jutsu
    ~While this jutsu is active the user will gain a +10 damage to his Katon jutsu's
    ~This jutsu will last 3 turns
    ~The user cannot use a Katon jutsu the same turn as this jutsu is preformed
    ~Due to the heat of the tree that is given off every Suiton jutsu loses one rank if it comes in short range of the tree

    X-Declined-X Afraid thats not fire release

    Katana Kuro Reikon (Blade of Dark Souls)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Handed down from generations of Kwalker394 family, the Blade of Dark Souls is a big long blade that is Black and silver. It has a Blood tinted fire crystal ball on a spiral loop by the handle. Connected to the handle of the blade is a metal chain that connects to the users pants or gloves allowing for more reach and maneuver ability. By channeling his chakra through this sword for so many years the sword has grown aware of the users presence and allows no one except it's master to wield it. This sword was crafted from a very special dark metal called Reikon~Metaru (Soul Metal) which is indestructible metal that is soaked with chakra when forged and crafted.

    Ability's:
    Blade of Dark Souls being so keen on the users chakra for over such a long period of time only responds to Kwalker394. The blade can extend or retract by using the users raw chakra making it a deadly sword to be in battle with. When the blade retracts the metal is compressed in the handle like a knife, while when it extends its stretched from the handle bigger than a claymore. The weight is different as well depending on the size of the blade as well making a swift attack from a dagger blade into a heavy attack by a claymore. The sword can also be attracted to the user meaning that if the user looses the sword or the sword is knocked out of the users hand he can simply command the sword to return as long as the sword is in short distance away. Using the red crystal at the handle as a medium the user can cast a Genjutsu known as "The Void" (A Rank). This Genjutsu makes the opponent believe that they are floating aimlessly in a realm of lost souls and darkness and then being dragged into a portal of unknown by limitless hands of souls. Releasing this genjutsu on to the opponent requires a cut, opponent looking at the sword, or some way come in contact with the opponent. If the opponent touches this sword by the means of picking it up and using it for any reason the genjutsu is released automatically by the stored up chakra already in the sword from its master.
    ~Only Kwalker394 can use this sword
    ~Must be a Master of Genjutsu in order to use this sword
    ~The Genjutsu "The Void" can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Self activating of the Genjutsu by opponents touch can only happen 1 time
    ~Either activation of the Genjutsu counts as a move towards the users 3 move limit/jutsu
    ~Can come back to the users hands if in short range and the user is able to use his hand
    ~Retracting/extending the blade can be used freely (But only 1 retract or extend per turn)

    Sword looks:


    Will be dropping THIS if approved

    X-Declined-X Similar to existing weapons and poorly made.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Kuchiyose: Kishida) - Summoning: Kishida
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kishida, a white locust 8 meters in height wearing armor made of numerous rectangular metal plates covering his body. Regarding himself as a knight, he spends the majority of his time wearing this armor which has developed his strength substantially. He has no trouble moving around with it regularly but cannot fly while wearing it. The armor contains chakra, allowing it to withstand damage from an S-rank attack before being destroyed. Kishida is able to disassemble his armor and levitate it through the air to form protective barriers up to mid range from himself. He can also mold the metal plates together after levitating them to create a large lance used to attack with the strength of an A-rank jutsu. With his fire affinity, he may imbue the metal with fire chakra which can increase the power of the lance to S-rank and allow the armor to endure An S and an A-rank attack. Anything that touches the metal is burned by the flames on it and flammable materials are turned to ash almost immediately. While wearing the armor, the flames are on the outer part of it, preventing Kishida from harming himself.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Can stay for 5 turns
    -Levitating the armor, imbuing the armor with fire chakra, and creating a lance each count as a move of the user.
    -Must have signed the Locust contract

    Link to Training or signing the contract would be nice, i'm sorry would bother to look through myself before declines but busy time of the year
    Resubmitting:

    (Kuchiyose: Kishida) - Summoning: Kishida
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kishida, a white locust 8 meters in height wearing armor made of numerous rectangular metal plates covering his body. Regarding himself as a knight, he spends the majority of his time wearing this armor which has developed his strength substantially. He has no trouble moving around with it regularly but cannot fly while wearing it. The armor contains chakra, allowing it to withstand damage from an S-rank attack before being destroyed. Kishida is able to disassemble his armor and levitate it through the air to form protective barriers up to mid range from himself. He can also mold the metal plates together after levitating them to create a large lance used to attack with the strength of an A-rank jutsu. With his fire affinity, he may imbue the metal with fire chakra which can increase the power of the lance to S-rank and allow the armor to endure An S and an A-rank attack. Anything that touches the metal is burned by the flames on it and flammable materials are turned to ash almost immediately. While wearing the armor, the flames are on the outer part of it, preventing Kishida from harming himself.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Can stay for 5 turns
    -Levitating the armor, imbuing the armor with fire chakra, and creating a lance each count as a move of the user.
    -Must have signed the Locust contract

    X-Declined-X Its a nice summon but you need to seriously restrict its defensive capabilities.

    I'm the holder of the locust contract: Link to contract

    New:

    (Doton: Terafōmingu) - Earth Release: Terraforming
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A-S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (40 for S-rank)
    Damage: 60 (80 for S-rank)
    Description: The user forms the Snake handseal and spreads vast amounts of doton chakra throughout the target area. By molding the earth and changing its elevation, the user may create tall hills and deep valleys in various shapes as long as the amount of earth raised is equal the the amount lowered. This process happens quickly and can drastically change the geography of the land to the user's benefit. The chakra always flowing throughout the earth makes it more resistant to attacks. The Snake handseal may be held in order to dynamically change the earth's features but for only one turn. The S-rank version of this technique allows the user to change the features of the earth over a massive area and is even capable of creating a giant mountain.
    -A-rank usable 3 times per battle
    -A-rank can effect a maximum radius of 10 meters
    -S-rank usable once per battle
    -After using the S-rank version no earth jutsu can be performed for the next two turns
    -Cannot be used to move earth sideways

    X-Declined-X You know thats freeform manipulation even though restricted to just hills and mountains but still.

    (Suiton: Hidora Taihō) - Water Release: Hydra Cannon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user forms the Ram handseal and creates two Hydra heads from a water source. They then fire spiraling streams of pressurized water from their mouths at the enemy powerful enough to rip off clothing and cause internal damage.

    X-Approved-X Removed the restriction
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Illusionary Arts: Human petrifaction (Genjutsu: Ninnin sekika)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Snake hand seal and puts the opponent under illusion that an earth jutsu is performed (as snake hand seal is commonly associated with earth jutsus) which proceeds to petrify his body from the feet towards the head with distinct crackling sound leaving him immobilized according to level of illusionary petrifaction. The user can control the level of illusionary petrifaction for example leaving the opponent's head unaffected to gain information from him.
    Note:
    • Can use 3 times per battle.
    • Can only be used in alternate turns.
    • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).


    Lightning Release: Double Deadly Claws (Raiton: Nibai Nai Tsume)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user concentrates their lightning chakra at the tip of their fingers in both hands, which begins to glow pale yellow as a result of huge amount of lightning chakra while using careful shape manipulation and swipes their hand like a 'X' to unleash 10 sharp blades of lightning (5 from each hand) from his finger tips which proceeds towards the target in crossed manner intersecting at the center leaving the blades separate at the periphery. The lightning blades retain the properties of lightning element and can cut through solid rock owing to its sharpness.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    • No S-rank lightning jutsu in same turn and immediate following turn.
    • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

    Example of how the jutsu will it be executed:

    X-Both Declined-X Existing techniques
    Summoning Animal: Weedy seadragon
    Scroll Owner: -Jiraiya-
    Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Sea horse, Leafy seadragon, Ribboned seadragon, Pipefish (If the summoning scroll gets approved)
    Description and Background:Weedy seadragon, is a marine fish related to the seahorse. Adult weedy seadragons are a reddish colour, with yellow and purple markings; they have small leaf-like appendages that provide camouflage and a number of short spines for protection. Males have narrower bodies and are darker than females. They rely on their camouflage as protection against predation; they drift in the water and with the leaf-like appendages resemble the swaying seaweed of their habitat.

    Individuals are observed either on their own or in pairs; feeding on tiny crustaceans and other zooplankton by sucking prey into their toothless mouths. Like seahorses, seadragon males are the sex that cares for the developing eggs.

    Weedy seadragons are related to Sea horse, Leafy seadragon, Ribboned seadragon, Pipefish as they all belong to the same family Syngnathidae.
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    X-Declined-X Um well, id prefer you get Zanji's permission here for using the term Dragon. Although its a totally different specie, he will allow it.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Fuuton: Kurasshu) - Wind Style: Crash
    Type: Defensive|Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short(Activating the technique)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The technique is based off of the user utilizing their chakra, and inserting it into an intangible substance. The substance acts as a medium to contain for your chakra to be inserted into. As the chakra is successfully inserted into the substance, by utilizing the slicing trait that the wind is well known for, the wind chakra slices through the bonds of the chakra particles within that substance causing it to spread outwards. By manipulating your chakra with great precision, the wind continues ravaging inside the substance, causing it to spread outwards to the point it severs totally, turning into many smaller harmless particles of the substance, making it neutral, and causing it to disperse entirely.

    - Can be used two times per match
    - No wind techniques in the same turn, or the turn after
    - After using it for the second time in a match, the user loses their ability to mold wind chakra properly
    - For elemental techniques the user can neutralize it up to A-Rank, where as non elemental techniques can be neutralized up to S-Rank.
    - Can only be taught by Toshiro
    - Is useless against large attacks that would still travel towards useless such as Intense Pain




    -Limited to only intangible objects
    -Reduced limit to two times per match
    +Added a restriction

    ~Approved~
    (Fuuton: Kurasshu) - Wind Style: Crash
    Type: Defensive|Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short(Activating the technique)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The technique is based off of the user utilizing their chakra, and inserting it into an intangible substance. The substance acts as a medium to contain for your chakra to be inserted into. As the chakra is successfully inserted into the substance, by utilizing the slicing trait that the wind is well known for, the wind chakra slices through the bonds of the chakra particles within that substance causing it to spread outwards. By manipulating your chakra with great precision, the wind continues ravaging inside the substance, causing it to spread outwards to the point it severs totally, turning into many smaller harmless particles of the substance, making it neutral, and causing it to disperse entirely.

    - Can be used two times per match
    - No wind techniques in the same turn, or the turn after
    - After using it for the second time in a match, the user loses their ability to mold wind chakra properly
    - For elemental techniques the user can neutralize it up to A-Rank, where as non elemental techniques can be neutralized up to S-Rank.
    - Can only be taught by Toshiro



    -Removed a restriction a checker added. As it somewhat confuses me in terms of what techniques I can use this against.

    X-Approved-X

    (Katon: Hanabi) - Fire Style: Fireworks
    Type: Offensive | Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40

    Description: The user first channels their fire chakra into the ground around the opponent. Subsequently, the user materializes the fire chakra into countless yet tiny fireballs around the size of a raindrop. The fireballs emerge from the ground, rising upwards, surrounding the opponent at short-range. The fireballs are highly condensed, hence the reason why it is so small. The user can cause the fireballs to explode simultaneously around the opponent with a simple snap of a finger. As there are many fireballs exploding simultaneously in a haphazard manner, it resembles a firework. Due to the low rank of this technique and the relatively small size of each fireball, the resultant explosion can cause close to no harm, perhaps some minor burns. However, as there is a large quantity of explosions, and at such close range to the opponent, it would cause a lot of noise. Furthermore, due to the fireballs being in extremely close proximity to the opponent when they explode, the explosion would temporary blind the opponent for a couple of seconds as the fireballs are very bright. However, the user will not be affected as the fireballs are not close enough to affect him.

    - Can only be taught by Toshiro

    X-Approved-X Increased the rank, like it or not its outside the capabilities of a C rank.

    -For this I honestly see no restrictions really needed, as it's a C-rank, and not really a technique which can kill an opponent.
    Techniques up till B rank dont require restrictions unless felt necessary.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Kujira Suiton Izumi (whale water release fountain)
    Type: Summoning/ Supplimentary
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user summons a Blue whale, the Whale uses it's suiton release to unleash a massive flow of water that fills a large area. It can be used for further water release techniques by the whale or user, or be used to turn a large area into a pool for the Whale to swim in.

    ~This technique provides a significant water scource for water jet movement (see following technique)

    Restrictions:
    ~Requires blue whale contract.
    ~If used to make a pool or vessel of water, the area must be able to support it (I.E. you cant turn a flat grassy field into an ocean)
    ~Water remains in play for 5 turns before evaporating if simply left on the ground. If used to make a pool of water, lasts 7 turns
    ~Can only be used 5 times
    ~Whale summon must be A rank or higher to use and must have an affinity to water

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    Bold changes

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    Kuchiyuse:Jidambo (Summoning:Jidambo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range:N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Jidambo is a small adult blue Whale, who is 50 ft long and wieghing 100 tons. He can use A rank water techniques by using his fins to create waves or whirlpools. Jidambo can be summoned in the air and dropped on opponents and crushing them with his weight. Jidambo's mouth accomadates one person and can dive underwater with the summoner in his mouth.

    Restrictions:
    ~Creating a wave is a move. It is A-rank and does 40 damage
    ~Creating a whirlpool is a move. It is C-rank and does 30 damage
    ~If summoned onto land he stays on the field for 3 turns
    ~If summoned into a large lake or ocean he can stay on the field for 6 turns
    ~while holding somebody in his mouth, he can only stay underwater for 3 turns before coming up for air.
    ~In order to use Water Jet movement, the water scource must be either a large lake, ocean, or Water Whale fountain must be used at least once

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    Bold changes


    Whale summoning contract:Here
    Kujira Suiton Izumi (whale water release fountain)
    Type: Summoning/ Supplimentary
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user summons a Blue whale, the Whale uses it's suiton release to unleash a massive flow of water that fills a large area. It can be used for further water release techniques by the whale or user, or be used to turn a large area into a pool for the Whale to swim in.

    ~This technique provides a significant water scource for water jet movement (see below)

    Restrictions:
    ~Requires blue whale contract.
    ~If used to make a pool or vessel of water, the area must be able to support it (I.E. you cant turn a flat grassy field into an ocean)
    ~Water remains in play for 5 turns before evaporating if simply left on the ground. If used to make a pool of water, lasts 7 turns
    ~Can only be used 5 times
    ~Whale summon must be A rank or higher to use and must have an affinity to water


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Incorrect name. Incorrect type. Similar to existing techniques.

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    Kuchiyuse:Jidambo (Summoning:Jidambo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range:N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Jidambo is a small adult blue Whale, who is 50 ft long and wieghing 100 tons. He can use A rank water techniques by using his fins to create waves or whirlpools. Jidambo can be summoned in the air and dropped on opponents and crushing them with his weight. Jidambo's mouth accomadates one person and can dive underwater with the summoner in his mouth.

    Restrictions:
    ~Creating a wave is a move. It is A-rank and does 40 damage
    ~Creating a whirlpool is a move. It is C-rank and does 30 damage

    ~If summoned onto land he stays on the field for 3 turns
    ~If summoned into a large lake or ocean he can stay on the field for 6 turns
    ~while holding somebody in his mouth, he can only stay underwater for 3 turns before coming up for air.
    ~In order to use Water Jet movement, the water scource must be either a large lake, ocean, or Water Whale fountain must be used at least once (see previous and following technique)


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    ±± Declined ±±
    No range? Too big. Summoned above the enemy? With that size? Will never allow that and regardless of what you want, if this whale is summoned in dry land its the same as killing it as it can't simply survive unless you find a narutoverse feasible explanation for why it can stay on dry land.

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    (Not an edit, this is a new technique created to support Blue whale summons)
    Mizufunsha Shintai (Water Jet Movement)
    Type: Summoning/ Supplimentary
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A technique used by whale summons by using nearby water scources or water scources created by ninjutsu techniques, to allow a blue whale to propel themselves on land by creating a wave of water underneath them. This allows blue whales to remain on land longer and allows them to move around.

    Restrictions:
    ~Requires Whale contract and summon must have water affinity
    ~If using a natural water scource such as ocean water or Lake water, the whale must first be summoned into said water scource before using the technique. If not summoned directly into water, the whale must be moved into water through some method before using this technique
    ~If this technique uses water from a ninjutsu, the technique has to provide reasonable amount of water. In general techniques of A-rank and up (including Whale water release fountain)
    ~Can only be used 4 time in a fight.
    ~Effects only last 3 tuns
    ~Unless the battlefield is a vast ocean, if this technique is used multiple times, new water scources must be suplied each time, whether from natural rescources or Whale water release fountain


    Whale summoning contract:Here

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else. Sorry for all the pendings @_@ im not good with summons

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    If it uses existing water why would this be useful to fight in dry land? I mean, you're clearly forgetting the concept of size and logic in this one. You have gigantic whales jetting around in water above ground in battle fields where you're normally 10-15 meters away from your opponent. These techniques and the summons aren't getting narutoverse applicable or viable.
     
         
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    Shadow Combat Style: Arc Slash (Kage no Sentō: Ākusurasshu)
    Type: Supplementray
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user form a sharp blade in his right or left hand. The blade is made over the hand, possessing a few small tendrils rising along the blade.When it hits the enemy, the tendrils elongates and sew the enemy with shadow and make them immobile. The user afterward can throw him as he wish.
    - Can only be user by Nara.. and person he taught
    - Can only be formed at one hand at a time
    - Sew for one turn
    Link: [X]

    X-Approved-X

    Scorch Release: Pointed Beam (Shakuton: Saki no togatta rēzā)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrate his scorch chakra at the tip of a finger and then point it at the enemy. With shape manipulation, one can shape it into beam, and release a very small, concentrated narrow beam at the enemy, which can burn everything in it path. The beam travel very fast with nearly speed of sound. Since the beam is so small, the chakra is superlatively concentrate like how a beam of light is concentrated.
    - The beam can be launched quickly that it is launched as soon as the user pointed

    X-Declined-X No speed in comparison to sound. Dont use the term beam, it conflicts with my Radiation CE. Make it a blast of scorching heat you could direct at your opponent.

    Shadow Combat Style: Crushing Land (Kage no Sentō: Tochi o funsai)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user first add strong layer to his leg and then jump high into the air, and then add more layers to his leg and come down with such weight that it creates an earthquake around the landing place when it reaches the ground.
    - The user can perform jutsu while in the air and then crush down together
    Link: [X]

    X-Declined-X Weight using shadows?
    B]Scorch Release: Pointed Blast (Shakuton: Sukōchiburasuto)[/B]
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrate his scorch chakra at the tip of a finger and then point it at the enemy. With shape manipulation, one can shape it into a small blast and release a very small, concentrated narrow blast at the enemy, which can burn everything in it path. The beam travel very fast with 30 metere per second. Since the beam is so small, the chakra is superlatively concentrate like how a beam of light is concentrated.
    - The blast can be launched quickly that it is launched as soon as the user pointed(Does not mean it just hit the enemy)


    X-Approved-X Remember the range is mid.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Summoning Animal:Magpie
    Scroll Owner:Me(Blaise12)
    Other Users who have signed contract:none
    Summoning Boss if existing:Azula
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:none
    Description and Background:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magpie

    Remaining true to the animals nature the magpie is ferociously fierce and aggresive it can speak like a human in english.They will attack anyone who is not from the users village friendly or not.They are generally black and white colour but can also be in other colours such as Sri Lanka Blue Magpie which as the name suggest is mainly blue.
    The user also recieves a tatoo of a magpie in their shoulder.



    Azula the Azure-winged Magpie
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:It is rougly the size of peins bird summon which from the show seems to be 2-3 meter in length and 1-2 meters in width it has a shallow beak and slim body.It can shoot S rank water or below from its mouth/beak at enemies or objects.
    Restrictions:
    ~water blast counts towards users move limit
    ~summonable only once per battle.

    NOTE:for the azula magpie no japanese name came up for it.

    feel free to edit anything that you need/want to.

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    ±± All Declined ±±
    Under the Blue Rule
    Edited
    Summoning Animal:Magpie
    Scroll Owner:Me(Blaise12)
    Other Users who have signed contract:none
    Summoning Boss if existing:Azula
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:none
    Description and Background:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magpie

    Remaining true to the animals nature the magpie is ferociously fierce and aggresive it can speak like a human in english.They will attack anyone who is not from the users village friendly or not.They are generally black and white colour but can also be in other colours such as Sri Lanka Blue Magpie which as the name suggest is mainly blue.
    The user also recieves a tatoo of a magpie in their shoulder.


    X-Approved-X

    Azula the Azure-winged Magpie
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:It is rougly the size of peins bird summon which from the show seems to be 2-3 meter in length and 1-2 meters in width it has a shallow beak and slim body.It can shoot S rank water or below from its mouth/beak at enemies or objects.
    Restrictions:
    ~water blast counts towards users move limit
    ~summonable only once per battle.

    X-Declined-X How long does it stay in the feild?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Bengal Tiger
    Scroll Owner: SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: not yet!
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    note: This isn't just tiger, its specific bengal tiger. Tiger contract has not yet been made but lion and cat!

    X-Pending-X Well it might be sub specie but from what i know it is merely a regional difference nothing genetic. Even so it would still be too similar to the tigers. Leaving for another mod
    Resubmitting:

    Summoning Animal: Bengal Tiger
    Scroll Owner: SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: not yet!
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    note: This isn't just tiger, its specific bengal tiger. Tiger contract has not yet been made but lion and cat!


    (Kuchiyose Gava) - Summoning Gava

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After making few handseals the user summons a giant and heavy crow named GAVA, who shows no mercy on his opponent and use powerful wind attacks. he looks like a big Raven with white eyes, which is extremely powerful and battle type,he can use powerful attacks with his beak and his wings, it has sharp edge beak which is able to pass through the solid rock defenses also has very strong claws, strong enough to carry away other summonings [depend on the weight/size of other summoning and cant use elemental attacks while carrying any summing in his claws] user can ride on his back to use combos.he has got very fast speed and also has very loud noise which can disturb/distract the opponent, it is able to fly high in the sky where opponent's jutsu's are unreachable but the same goes for him too, means his very own techniques wont be effected (cause damage to the opponent) from that range.

    - Can be summon trice a battle.
    - Can only use Wind jutsu and up to F rank.
    - Able to pass through A rank wind attacks




    (Kuchiyose karasu Xee) - Summoning Crow Xee

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:After making needed handseals, user summons a crow named XEE.He is extremely violent and badass fighter.He has crystal white eyes and full black body. As compare to boss Gava, he's a little small in size but faster than him.He has double sized wings as compare to his body, that makes him move quickly and dodge many speedy and sudden attacks as well as gives him incredible speed and makes him undetectable by naked eye.His specialty is using genjutsus, thats why he's feared in crows world as illusion master and Illusion sage. As having mastery over genjutsus and due to his fierce training in illusion arts, he finally possessed the same ability as Itachi, and can cast genjutsu just by moving his body parts. (wings and beak etc)

    • Can only be summon once per battle.
    • User can't ride on him.
    • User can't use genjutsu techniques as long as summoning is in the battlefield/fighting (exception of summoning's genjutsu techniques).

    Abilities:

    • Can only cast genjutsu,can cast upto Forbidden rank.
    • Can cast genjutsu from long range.


    UchIha ItachI bio link = http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=200497
    Crow Summoning Thread = http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=229461

    X-All Declined-X
    -Falls under the blue rule
    -Tigers exist, sub-species of tigers exist as well
    -The summons are poorly made
    -XEE cant be that fast
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (doton-Hokori meisai) Earth style- Dust camouflage
    Rank: S
    Type: defence/attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user stomps on the ground,whilst spreading his/her chakra through out the earth surface,causing dust to rise and envelop the whole terrain,while this is active the user is completely hidden from the naked eye,with the exception of byakugan users as the are able to see even through chakra.
    -twice per battle
    -lasts for 3 turns
    -this jutsu can't be used on all terrains.

    (Genjutsu-Hitojichi) - illusion technique- Hostage
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/defence
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user induces the target into a strong illusion,instantly making them notice a kunai that is held to the neck,the kunai is weilded from behind the target by an exact copy of the user thus why in some cases the target doesn't know its an illusion. upon noticing the kunai,the target hears threatening words,to be completely still or get their throat slit,if the target hesitates,the being slits their throat whilst disappearing, though its just a mere illusion the target is left in intense pain,once the illusion disperses.
    -Once per battle
    -No s-rank and above genjutsu next turn.
    -The target is held hostage for the period of 3 turns then the illusion disperses leaving the target unharmed.

    X-Declined-X Both are too generic and certainly dont qualify to be S ranked

    (Genjutsu-shitsumei) illusion style- blindness
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence/offense
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user casts a unique illusion on the foe making them think they have gone naturally blind suddenly and instantly.This illusion works fine on MS users as they would think that,the blindness is as a result of over useage of the MS and thus,has lost it's light but however,the target must already have the MS active and is in useage to belive this.
    -Lasts for two turn.
    -Ones per battle.

    X-Declined-X We're talking about placing a genjutsu over the dojutsu the specialize in genjutsu, do i need to say more? Not saying its impossible but you need to be reasonable
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Irounaku Ukibukuro Hodo | Illusionary Arts: Complete Bladder Limit
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user injects the target with chakra. The user then makes the target believe that his/her bladder is full. Causing them to feel the urge to urinate desperately. The target will probably cross their legs and slouch a bit to try to ease the discomfort of the process.
    ~Can only be used Twice
    ~No Genjutsu in this turn or the next

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    Genjutsu: Aisukuri-mu Zutsuu | Illusionary Arts: Ice-Cream Headache
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user channels their chakra in to the target and manipulate the senses in the target's oral cavity. The user then causes the target to feel a sudden coldness in their mouth, causing an abrupt change in temperature in the tissue at the roof of the target's mouth, causing the blood vessels to quickly swell in an effort to warm the area back up. Causing Brain Freeze and pain.
    - Can only be used twice per battle
    - No Genjutsu techniques in the same and the next turn.
    - Last 2 turns


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    X-Declined-X =_= Sorry if im rude but im not in the mood.
     
         
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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Shizaku) -Summoning Technique-Shizaku
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes some blood and wipes it on their snake tattoo, then they make the snake hand sign and slam their hand into the ground to summon Shizaku. Shizaku is a massive black spitting cobra roughly the size of the snake Orochimaru used in the forest of death. Shizaku is a Fire Style specialist snake and can use up to A rank Fire jutsu that don't require hand signs. Being a fire style snake Shizaku can shoot fireballs from his mouth and being a spitting cobra he is able to spit burning venom that burn through the enemies skin and paralyze on contact. He is large enough for a group of 5 people ride on his head.


    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Shin) -Summoning Technique-Shin
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes some blood and wipes it on their snake tattoo, then they make the snake hand sign and slam their hand into the ground to summon Shin. Shin is a massive black and green pitviper roughly the size of the snake Orochimaru used in the forest of death. Shin is a Lightning Style specialist snake and can use up to A rank Lightning jutsu that don't require hand signs. Being a lightning style snake Shin can move at very high speeds that only a 3t Sharingan and a Byakugan can track being a spitting pitviper he can spit out venom that can numb an area uppon contact . He is large enough for a group of 5 people ride on his head.


    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Shizaka) -Summoning Technique-Shizaka
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes some blood and wipes it on their snake tattoo, then they make the snake hand sign and slam their hand into the ground to summon Shizaka. Shizaks is a massive blue water python roughly the size of the snake Orochimaru used in the forest of death. Shizaka is a Water Style specialist snake and can use up to A rank Water jutsu that don't require hand signs. Being a water style snake Shizaka can swim underwater far deeper than any opponent can reach her and move at very high speeds underwater. She is large enough for a group of 5 people ride on her head also about 3-4 people can ride in her mouth for underwater adventures


    Snake signing

    X-All declined-X Place restrictions
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Crow Claw (Kuroukurou)
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels raw chakra in their forarms. The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of chakra. The blade is blue in color and is long as the user's arms. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through B rank and below earth and water. This can also be used with the user shins.



    X-Declined-X How do they form?

    Sealing Arts: Three Songs of Hell (Fuuinjutsu: Jigoku no san-kyoku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user slams both of their hands down onto the ground. A glow of light is seen is around thier target of this jutsu. Once the glow is seen white fabric wraps around the target really fast(meaning with less time to react to it since the glow blinds the target). The user raises their hands and short katanas come out of a hole around the ground and surrounds the target and peierces them. The user claps their hands and up above a large metal pillar forms out of a hole in the sky which the user created. The pillar slams down on the target and seals them into a barrier and right then forms into a medium size scroll. The fabric is very strong that it can even wrap around a Bijuu like the Four Tails beast.
    -No sealing the same round
    -No sealing for the next two turns
    -The user can only use this twice per battle
    -Only use one other jutsu when this is used.


    This is some what it looks like but I added a few things and took somethings out.



    X-Declined-X Um be more narutoverse oriented when it comes to sealing you could try to make it in such a manner it would make sense to naruto fans.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kaminari yari tate
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Description: The Lightning shield spear is a long silver spear. At the.end of it it's spearhead is sharp and has many edges. If it is stabbed into someones chest it could take their whole heart out. Though the spear was originally made for defence. Once the user holds it out with 2 hands he must insert lightning chakra into the spear. Once he lets go of the spear it starts spinning around making a sort of shield. This spinning -shield is lightning based and can block all elemental attacks up to B-rank exept those lightning is weak against. Those elements such as wind can be blocked up to C-rank. Since this shield is lightning based it can absorb suiton techs. Every Suiton tech it absorbs ups the rank of elements that its weak against that it can block. absorbing a suiton attack would allow it to block B rank wind and so on.
    -need to know at least C rank lightning
    -Can be used 3 times per battle
    - Is not very strong as an attacking weapon.
    -Lasts up to 3 turns
    -Can only be used by Cursed Prince unless permission is given


    X-Declined-X You could really make something better and it probably exists as well.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal: Shearwaters
    Scroll Owner: Shin Kaito
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: not yet.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: not yet.
    Description and Background: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shearwater




    Shearwaters are medium-sized long-winged seabirds. There are more than 30 species of shearwaters, a few larger ones in the genus Calonectris and many smaller species in the genus Puffinus.
    like the summons in narutoverse the size of the Shearwater varies. the larger one among the Shearwater is large enough to carry a person on his back while flying with little effort (almost the same size of sasuke's hawk that he summoned during the battle with danzo). they are also capable of using jutsu of one element according to their natural affinity.

    while signing the contract a tattoo will be placed on the bio.



    X-Approved-X They keep bringing newer species. Should've focused during biology classes >_>"
    (Kuchiyose Scar) - Summoning Scar
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: The user, after biting his thumb or using blood from any other injured place of the body, performs 3 hand seal Ram>Boar>bird and hits his palm on any solid thing or even in the air just below the user. This will summon Scar, the king or shearwaters. Scar is a huge bird, almost two time bigger than sasuke’s hawk. Scar can perform any lightning based jutsu known to the contract holder.
    Note:
    -Scar stays in the battle field for 5 turns.
    -Scar can be only summoned by someone who has signed the shearwater contract.
    -Scar can be summoned only once per battle .
    -Scar can perform only one jutsu per turn and it is counted as 1 of the 3 jutsu per turn.
    - the user can perform hand seals for scar only when riding on him, which allows Scar to perform the jutsu that requires hand seals.
    -can fly with maximum of 3 people on his back
    -can speak English.
    -can communicate with the contract holder through telepathy.

    X-Declined-X Reduce the turn limits, it wont be able to to perform Forbidden technique nor the lightning techniques its anotomy wont allow. And lol, no jap?
     
         
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    (Raiton: osore) Lightning release:Astraphobia
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:This type of Genjutsu works by inflicting human fears into the targets body so that they may be scared of a certain element such as lightning.By doing this when the target has been placed in the Genjutsu every time he see's a lightning jutsu being uses including the target using lightning also,the Genjutsu will trigger.The person under the Genjutsu will become so scared off the lightning that he is unable to move.As a result if the target tries to snap out of the Genjutsu using a lightning jutsu it will only make things worse as the sight of lightning will make the target become even more scared.
    -Only usable two times a battle
    -Has to be taught by lysander

    X-Declined-X , it falls under Alucards CE and Yamanaka

    (Raiton:asoko temae) Lightning release:There you are
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:15
    Damage: 30
    Description:The user will unleash small lightning particles unnoticeable by the naked eye throughout the terrain.Once he has done this anything which comes into contact with the small lightning particles the user will know allowing them to sense anyone who is within range of the lightning particles.
    -Has to be taught by Lysander
    -Only those with a dojutsu can see the lightning particles

    X-Declined-X Cant be invisible to naked eye
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Severus Snape- View Post
    (Genjutsu: Sekushīna watashi) | Illusionary Arts: Sexy me
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user lets out a burst of chakra towards the opponent, to put him under genjutsu. As soon as the opponent is under the genjutsu, he will see a mist in front of him for a split second, and when the mist disappears, the user will be replaced with the person the opponent desires most. This person starts to slowly undress himself/herself, causing the opponent to be immobilised on his spot.
    Note: Can be used 3 times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

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    ±± Declined ±±
    needs handseals. also, how can you know the person the enemy wants the most without knowing him? and why would someone undressing cause you to be immobilized?
    ~Resubmitting

    (Genjutsu: Sekushīna watashi) | Illusionary Arts: Sexy me
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After preforming the 'Ram' handseal the user lets out a burst of chakra towards the opponent, to put him under genjutsu. As soon as the opponent is under the genjutsu, he will see a mist in front of him for a split second, and when the mist disappears, the user will be replaced with a desirable man/woman of the opposite sex. This person starts to slowly undress himself/herself, causing the opponent to be distracted and giving the user a chance to attack.
    Note: Can be used 2 times per battle

    X-Declined-X LOL OPED

    (Genjutsu: Sourubyū) | Illusionary Arts: Soul View
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user preforms a string of 5 handseals Rat Dog Boar Dragon Ram and release a burst of chakra towards the opponent(s), placing them under a genjutsu. As soon as the users chakra interferes with the opponent's chakra flow, the opponent will have the feeling that he leaves his body, and starts flowing towards the sky. As the opponent 'floats' in the sky he sees his body on the ground in a frozen stance, and vulnerable to attacks. In reality, the opponent stands immobilised on his place.
    Note: Can be used once
    Note: Lasts two turns
    Note: No Genjutsu in the same or next turn
    Note: Can affect multiple targets

    X-Declined-X Why S rank?
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-30-2012 at 11:55 PM.

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