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    Maha
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30 (summoning) (+10 per turn enlarged to an inhuman size)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Maha is a very unique halberd-type pole-arm weapon. While at first glance the weapon appears to be an average halberd, Maha has had the soul of the original wielder, who shared the weapon's new name (as it originally was not called Maha), sealed inside it. Because the weapon has the original wielder's soul sealed within it, whoever touches the halberd now will see an apparition of Maha before them, as an orange-colored spectral being. Maha the soul's abilities are limited, though he has the capability to speak with the current wielder and decide who's worthy to use the mighty weapon he now resides in.
    Abilities:
    Maha the Weapon: The weapon itself, while appearing to be a perfectly normal halberd at first glance, has the capability of changing its size when it comes into contact with chakra. By acting like a sponge, when Maha comes into contact with chakra, the halberd "soaks" up the chakra to change its size involuntarily, growing up to a maximum point where the main blade is twice as tall as the six foot tall apparition of the original wielder (as seen in the first pic below). The weapon is so sensitive to chakra, that even coming into contact with a person or object containing chakra will cause it to grow, albeit not to such a grand size. The wielder of Maha, should Maha the Soul approve of him/her, has the ability to control how large the halberd grows, and can even control the growth in certain areas, such as on the handle to keep the diameter to a size which the human hand is capable of getting a good grip on (the growth of Maha is limited to the main blade being 12 feet tall, and the handle being approximately mid-range long).
    When Maha changes its size, its weight changes with it. As a part of its defense mechanism, Maha the Soul can draw the chakra out of an unworthy wielder to make the weapon grow, thus rendering it unable to be wielded due to its inhuman weight. However, as Maha was a ninja as well during his own time, should a worth wielder come along, Maha will offer some of his chakra sealed with his soul to the current wielder, which combined with the users chakra can allow for him to hold up the massive weight presented by an enlarged halberd, similar to Tsunade's Chakra Enhanced Strength (the strength only applies to the muscles required to lift, swing, and hold an object, and will be negated once Maha is released or shrunk).
    Maha the Soul: Maha the Soul has the ability of appearing to anyone who Maha the Weapon is pulling chakra from (which is anyone touching Maha), and no one else (no one else sees, hears, feels, smells, or tastes him). Being only a soul tethered to the halberd, Maha is completely intangible and thus cannot attack or be attacked. However, his presence gives off a small chakra signature to sensors and dojutsu users, which may interpreted as the sensor/dojutsu user sees fit. Maha can only exist within short-range of his halberd, not only because the seal prevents him from moving further, but he doesn't like being more than arms-length away from his beloved weapon, thus his request to be sealed within it before he died. Being forced to remain close to the user, Maha can act like a clone, turning to watch all around the battlefield and relaying anything he sees to the current wielder of Maha.

    ^Maha Alongside the Halberd^

    ^The Normal-Sized Pole-Arm in Use^

    ^Maha as seen by the Wielder^


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    Leaving for someone else. I wouldn't approve this but I prefer to have someone else put their opinion.

    Raiton: Hoshizora no Yoru (Lightning Style: Starry Night)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user places their fingertips to their temples, and focuses their raiton chakra throughout their body. Then, the user releases their raiton chakra from their forhead, creating several beams of lightning which shoot out in all directions towards multiple targets. This jutsu is best used from a height advantage, as the beams of lightning tend to arc downwards.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used twice per battle


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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR

    Genjutsu: Giji Ryōshin (Illusion Technique: Pseudo-Conscience)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After casting the illusion on the desired target, the target will begin hearing voices in their head that sound like how the caster percieves the target to sound like. These voices will begin telling the target various things, normally pertaining to how pointless the battle is and various other arguments as to why the target should stop fighting. Because the voices sound like the targets own, the jutsu is often mistaken as the targets conscience, and often under such circumstances, listened to. Even if not listened to, the numerous voices in the target's head sounding like their own provides a distraction while the target has to think over these voices to tell themselves they're not real, giving the user time to either flee or strike.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

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    DNR
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-30-2012 at 11:36 PM.

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    (zanzo ken)-afterimage fist
    Type:attack/supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: a ninjutsu where the user focuses chakra throughout the entire body before weaving the confrontation seal to cause speed to briefly double. with the movement being so fast it leaves a tangible clone in the place of the user last known location. this can be used to give the enemy the idea that he has struck the opponent. this is done by infusing chakra into the muscle fibers of the users body but this can only be done three times. since the user is not a taijutsu master it would cause muscle strain and will rip and tear the muscle fibers rendering the user immobile.

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    (Genjutsu: Shizen saigai) -
    Illusion Art: Natural disaster

    Type: Attack/supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    The user does the Ram hand seal which is used as a medium to transfer chakra to opponents nervous system. Once that is done, the users sense of touch, sight and sound will be manipulated. Once the manipulation begins the user is able to make the victim think that a chosen natural disaster is happening; such as a F5 tornado is coming down, an earthquake is happening, a hurricane is brewing, an avalanche is happening etc. The effects of the disaster will be created and manipulated at the users will in order to fit certain situations.

    - Only taught by william24
    - Can only be used 2x with a 1 turn cool down between uses.
    - Lasts 2 turns

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    Don't resubmit. The genjutsu is too generic and can be easily exploitable. Also, think narutoverse. You would make the enemy see a technique or something.

    (Genjutsu: Karāburaindo) -
    Illusion Art: Color blind

    Type: Attack/supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    The user activates this genjutsu by doing the snake hand seal which is used as a medium to transfer chakra into the opponents brain. With that done the user takes over the opponents sense of sight and calls out a single color. In return the said color is completely invisible to the sight of the genjutsu's victim. I.e. by calling out the color blue, the opponent would see a body of water and to them it would seem non existent all together.

    - Only taught by william24
    - Only used 2x
    - Lasts 3 turns after activation

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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR

    (Nejikomi buki ) -
    Threaded arms

    Type: Attack/supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:
    Kakuzu, by manipulating the threads within his body will make several arms of thread (4 max) emerge from anywhere on his upper body in order to give him the upper hand in close range. The hands can be used to perform jutsu or to just use physical attacks. Each arm can extend out to mid range in order to grab/entangle an enemy or to attack at a distance.

    - Only taught by william24

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    Last edited by Scorps; 11-30-2012 at 11:33 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Yukio Okumura View Post
    Suiton: Mizurappa Shippuu | Water Release: Violent Water Wave Hurricane
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and is manipulated to form a small water hurricane that surrounds the user, washing away the enemy at close quarters.
    Restrictions: Usable only once per battle.
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    Suiton: Mizurappa Shippuu | Water Release: Violent Water Wave Hurricane
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and is manipulated to form a small water hurricane that surrounds the user, washing away the enemy at close quarters.

    Note: Can only be taught by Yukio Okumura.

    Changes
    Restriction: Usable only once per battle is changed to Note: Can only be taught by Yukio Okumura.






    Quote Originally Posted by Yukio Okumura View Post
    (Fukusuu Taka Dageki no Jutsu) - Multiple Falcon Strike Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: User forces chakra flow to muscles and joints in the arm allowing user to perform several rapid strikes in quick succession.
    Restrictions: Usable only with Kame Raikou Ken and once per battle.
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    Fukusuu Taka Dageki no Jutsu | Multiple Falcon Strike Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: User forces chakra flow to muscles and joints in the arm allowing user to perform several rapid strikes in quick succession.

    Note: Must use with a sword, katana, or tanto.
    Note: Can only be taught by Yukio Okumura




    Changes
    Restrictions: Usable only with Kame Raikou Ken & only once per battle is changed to Note: Must use with a sword, katana, or Tanto & Note: Can only be taught by Yukio Okumura.


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Third submission for this cycle, could'nt edit my previous post.

    Sennyo Uyoku: - Fairy Wings
    Rank: B
    Type: Suplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 for every turn active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: An advanced ninjutsu coupled with good chakra control. The user would channel chakra onto his back while it leaks out of his back( just located between both his shoulder-blades/scapulars), it compresses to form a pair of dense sheet of chakra, he then proceeds using shape manipulation and form a pair of thin layered wings made of chakra. Coupled with fast flaping wing movements, the appearance of the wings is like that of a fairy, thus light but strong.
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    -Must have good chakra control
    -Last for 3 turns
    -Must be taught by Priest

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    Wings have been done for virtually anything in the RP countless times before. Don't resubmit
     
         
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    Genjutsu: esa touhou | Illusionary Arts: Feed Me
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: For this technique, the user will focus their chakra, sending it into there opponents nervous system, attacking their sense of sight. As the chakra has been implanted the opponent will then be trapped in a genjutsu. The opponent will see a large gaping mouth raise out of the ground, 4m away from them. They will then feel like a calm breeze, which acts like a suction, pulling them into the mouth. The large mouth will then yell, "Feed Me", allowing little hands to appear out of the mouth, grabbing the victim, pulling them to get eaten. The opponent will not get hurt, but will just be shocked from the traumatic event.

    -Useable 2x
    -Must have mastered genjutsu
    -Must be Sannin ranked or higher
    -Must be taught by Light...

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    Similar to existing genjutsu. DNR
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Thread will be opended shortly after going through a check of all left over/pending submissions. If by any chance your custom is left out even after the thread is opened up. Contact us preferably with PM.
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    X-Thread Opened-X

    New Cycle lasts from Today, 2nd of December and ends at the start of 9th.

    No comments this time, Just Good luck!
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: Hatsuchi Hanshouko) - Illusionary Arts: Mother Earth's Breed
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description: The user will perform 1 handseal (bird) and focus chakra into the target's mind, putting them under an illusion where they will feel as if butterflies where moving inside their stomach, when truly it's flies what is moving inside them, thousands of flies, then due to the huge amount of flies inside of them, they will start to come out from the target's ears, mouth, and nose aswell as start flying around them randomly, while many that still remain inside them, will begin to eat their internal organs, this will cause the target to feel disgusted and tormented by the flies eating them from within aswell as crawling out of their face.
    - May be used x3 per battle.
    - May only be taught by -Castiel-
    ||Declined|| This is a pretty powerful illusion with a speedy activation. Care to restrict it?

    (Suiton: Ijin's kagi Sutoringu) - Water Release: Devil's Eternal Sewings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15 Chakra
    Damage: 30 Damage
    Description: The user will gather suiton chakra and send it underground through either their feet or hands, once done so the user creates a small but good enough water source under the target's feet, then the user will perform 1 handseal and manipulate the water under the opponent to rise in form of very thin but resistant strings of water composed of water and dense chakra, this strings will start sewing the opponent's shoes's bottom area where the opponent can't feel to the ground, this is done to both feet and despite the process it is done in less than 3 seconds, this helps to restrict the opponent to the ground only and forbid them to move or jump from their location. The target is not aware of this untill they try to move their feet.
    - The water strings last 2 turns, unless they are countered before the 2 turns end.
    - May be used x4 per battle, but not in consecutive turns.
    - May only be taught by -Castiel-
    ||Declined|| Overpowered. 2 Turns? Really?

    (Fuuton: Okami's Kaze dan'atsu Chuuseki)- Wind Release: Emperor's Wind Pillar Pressure
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description: The user will focus massive amounts of wind chakra into the air above and around the target then by applying dense chakra aswell to the same location, the user will follow by clapping his hands together will apply pressure on to the wind chakra and make turn into a dense and heavy "pillar" of wind that will smash the target to the ground, this technique has bone breaking strength, the user can either release it once the opponent is smashed down or can maintain his hands together to keep the wind pressure "pushing" the target downwards, not allowing them to move, not only that but apart from the heavy wind it also contains cutting wind strength, dealing small but many cuts to the target's body in the process, however the user won't be able to perform any other ninjutsu (elemental or not) techniques due to having to keep focus on the wind. This technique covers a 5 feet radius around the opponent with the center being where the opponent is standing.
    - May be used x2 per battle.
    - May only be taught by -Castiel-
    - Example of Technique [4:26 - 4:33]

    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaara View Post
    (Kyōka Suigetsu) ɸ Mirror Flower, Water Moon

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A(-15 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles.
    The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
    The katana's special ability is that three times per battle, the user can, for 1 turn, control the opponents sense of sight. The user can make the target see hawks appear next to them, but they wouldn't smell it, hear it, taste it(>.>) or feel if they grabbed it. It only affects the sense of sight and none of the other 4 senses. This can be done 3 times a battle and only last 1 turn. Effects count as one of three moves per turn. The requirements for this ability to work is for the target to look at the blade, and then the user will be placed in a genjutsu. The downside of this sword is that it is extremely "destructible", it will break apart if it comes in contact with the something of greater density. The current density is that of a regular blade. User can’t use effect two consecutive turns. Effects is equivalent to D-rank genjutsu.


    X-Pending-X

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    A D-Rank Genjutsu that can basically, without any restriction or cost to you, make it so that you can deliver a final blow to an opponent without him even realizing it. Too generic, to exploitable, to easy to abuse. Define, restrict, limit.
    (Kyōka Suigetsu) ɸ Mirror Flower, Water Moon

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A(+10 per Genjutsu)
    Description:
    The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles.
    The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
    Abilities:
    -The blade acts as a medium for all genjutsu techs used by the user, much like uchiha use their eyes as a medium for genjutsu. The target however, must have made eye contact with the sword in order for this to work.
    -It gives a very small boost to kenjuts as it is very sharp and highly durable
    -It rejects foreign chakra that tries to enter the weilders body
    Restrictions:
    -Must be holding the blade for any of the abilities to work
    -Can only act as a medium for genjutsu once per turn
    -Must have Genjutsu MASTERED to wield

    ||Declined|| The above are not true restrictions.

    (Eru Esukūdo)- El Escudo
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The technique allows for the creation of a light green, hexagonal barrier that is normally fixed to one central area and, when inactive, remains invisible. Once this technique is used, it can stay invisible until an attack hit it. Upon contact with an outside force, the barrier enlarges to fully to protect whatever it is affixed to. The barrier protects from the attack keeping it away from the target, gathers the energy in one area, then it momentarily absorbs the energy from the attack and then forces the attack outward away from the shield in effect, dispersing the attack altogether. It is powerful enough to block a point-blank attack with a rasengan. This technique, once activated stays invisible until a attack heads towards it. The user must state where the central point is. This can only be used twice per battle and once at a time. Only defends up to an A-rank technique and most Tai-Ken.

    ||Declined|| Define "center point." Can you make the barrier anywhere you want (which is exploitable)? If it's a center point on the user's body, then this is good to go.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Bloo View Post
    (Kuchiyose: Aoi) Summoning technique: Aoi
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The user will first bite there thumb, drawing blood. The user will then perform the bird handseal summoning flint. Flint is the brother to the boss booby, flint like his brother is a blue footed booby. Flint isn't as big as his brother, He only stands 10 meters tall. Flint wears a hooded that covers his face but leaves his beak sticking out, the hood extends down to the base of his neck. Flint has the mastery over genjutsu allowing him to perform genjutsu up to S rank without handseals. He can speak English. He also has a telepathic link with the user.

    -Can be summoned once per battle.
    -Stays on the field for 4 turns
    -Can carry two people
    -Must have signed the booby contract

    X-Declined-X Im confused, so why is the name aoi?
    Link gaining ownership of Boobies
    Sorry did a last minute name change and forgot to change it in the description

    (Kuchiyose: Aoi) Summoning technique: Aoi
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The user will first bite there thumb, drawing blood. The user will then perform the bird handseal summoning aoi. Aoi is the brother to the boss booby, aoi like his brother is a blue footed booby. Aoi isn't as big as his brother, He only stands 10 meters tall. Aoi wears a hooded that covers his face but leaves his beak sticking out, the hood extends down to the base of his neck. Aoi has the mastery over genjutsu allowing him to perform genjutsu up to S rank without handseals. He can speak English. He also has a telepathic link with the user.

    -Can be summoned once per battle.
    -Stays on the field for 4 turns
    -Can carry two people
    -Must have signed the booby contract


    Link gaining ownership of Boobies
    ||Declined|| A flying bird that can use genjutsu without any hand seals? Yeah......
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Solf J. Kimblee View Post
    Crow Claw (Kuroukurou)
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels raw chakra in their forarms. The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of chakra. The blade is blue in color and is long as the user's arms. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through B rank and below earth and water. This can also be used with the user shins.



    X-Declined-X How do they form?

    Sealing Arts: Three Songs of Hell (Fuuinjutsu: Jigoku no san-kyoku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user slams both of their hands down onto the ground. A glow of light is seen is around thier target of this jutsu. Once the glow is seen white fabric wraps around the target really fast(meaning with less time to react to it since the glow blinds the target). The user raises their hands and short katanas come out of a hole around the ground and surrounds the target and peierces them. The user claps their hands and up above a large metal pillar forms out of a hole in the sky which the user created. The pillar slams down on the target and seals them into a barrier and right then forms into a medium size scroll. The fabric is very strong that it can even wrap around a Bijuu like the Four Tails beast.
    -No sealing the same round
    -No sealing for the next two turns
    -The user can only use this twice per battle
    -Only use one other jutsu when this is used.


    This is some what it looks like but I added a few things and took somethings out.



    X-Declined-X Um be more narutoverse oriented when it comes to sealing you could try to make it in such a manner it would make sense to naruto fans.
    Crow Claw (Kuroukurou)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels raw chakra in their forarms or shins. The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of chakra. The user releases the chakra out of their forearms or shins and using shape manipulation, shapes the released chakra into a blade similar to a scythe. The blade is blue in color and can be as long as the user's arms or shin. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through B rank and below earth and water.



    X-Declined-X Then how is it any different from chakra scalpel?


    I will be dropping the weapon in the quote. Here is where it was approved------> http://narutobase.net/forums/showpos...postcount=5631

    -Snake Tail (Hebi No O)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Hebi No O(Short version:Hebi) was after Dei Dei made is stretchable scarf. He made this sword whip out of the same material just more stronger. Hebi is a 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread that is a very strong material, making Hebi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Dei Dei swordsmanship. Hebi's guard and handle remain the same as a normal katana. While Hebi can be stretched to incredible lengths in its whip form, Dei Dei has a limit of three consecutive attacks before having to bring the segments of Hebi back together for recovery -which makes him fairly vulnerable during this time interval. To make up for this, Dei Dei has to have a plan ahead of time. It is also wrapped in bandages when not in use and the bandages is attached on the hilt which acts on the user will.

    -Mid range is the limit it can reach
    -It can be used three times back to back when it is stretched out. After the third use it has to retract to recover for one turn.
    -Only used by Dei Dei




    (This sword just acts the same as in Bleach but without it going to long range.)

    Dropping this http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showpost.php?p=4318676&postcount=4663] weapon[/url] for the one above if it gets approved.

    I took out the bold part the mod had bolded. It really didn't mean anything but oh well it is out now.

    ±± Approved ±± Yeah it did actually. It meant you could grow your sword segments almost without limit. lol
    Hollow Mask (Horoumasuku)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This mask was made by an Anbu shinboi. The mask is made of a thick metal which is painted white and two red stripes going down from the top to the bottom. The Anbu member wanted to make a mask that hid his faced while he was on the go. The mask was ment for hiding his face but he developled it into more then he wanted it. He made the mask have two special abilitities. The first ability is to increase the rank of three jutsus of the user. The three jutsus the mask increase the rank for are (Suiton: Suikoundan) - Water Style: Water shark bomb, ( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball and (Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique. These jutsus gain one extra rank. The last ability is to absorb chakra into the mask and protect against A rank and below genjutsus. The mask also change the eyes and voice of the user. The user eyes are changed into yellow and the user voice is deeper then their own.
    -Must be wearing the mask to use the abilities
    -No hand seals for the three jutsus but if the water jutsu requires a water source then a water source is still needed and if the earth jutsu requires ground then the user must be on the ground.
    -The user cannot use all the jutsus in the same turn and cannot block genjutsu in the same turn.



    X-Declined-X Reason why it has such abilities? and the genjutsu part wont work

    Illusionary Arts: Inverted World (Genjutsu: Hanten sekai)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A (-30 to the user; mental pain)
    Descriptions: The user releases chakra all around them. The chakra puts whoever gets caught in the released chakra in a visual genjutsu. The genjutsu is forbidden for it happening to release a large amount of chakra and the user having so much different things in the illusion. The illusion puts everything backwards in their opponent(s)'s mind. All the things such as: back and forth, up and down, left and right, and direction of attacks. This genjutsu is so strong that no matter how powerful the shinobi is, even if they could figure out what is going on it is to late to escape the genjutsu. No one body can adapt to the genjutsu so the relaxes of the opponent(s) will continue on with the genjutsu effects no matter what.
    -The user can only use one of jutsu when using this
    -Only two jutsus per turn when this is active
    -Only used once per battle
    -The genjutsu can only be released by another foreign chakra(entering Sage Mode(any mode that uses foreign chakra), EIG(eh I think so lol)).
    -The genjutsu last five turns
    -While this is active, no genjutsu from the user
    -After this deactivates, no genjusu for two turns

    X-Declined-X Existing technique
     
         
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    Kuchiyose: Hahanarudaichi Summoning: Mother Earth
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Mother Earth is Father Time's wife and is equally as old. Having to have the trickery of a woman to stand up against the wisdom of her husband, she of course learned and studied Genjutsu for many many years. Thus she is able to use any genjutsu the user knows up to A rank. Mother Earth also has a telepathic connection with her summoner and any cardinal on the field. She is a brown cardinal as small as the Ma toad and sits on her summoners shoulder, channeling chakra into her feet so that she does not fall of even when the user moves at high speeds, the chakra is just to her feet and will not break the user out of a genjutsu

    -Stays on the field for 4 turns
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-
    -After being on the field for four turns Mother Earth requires a 3 turn cooldown before being summoned again

    I am the owner of cardinal contract
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    This can only be summoned once and she needs to do something to trigger the genjutsu. Can she do handseals? Don't think so.
    Kuchiyose: Hahanarudaichi Summoning: Mother Earth
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Mother Earth is Father Time's wife and is equally as old. Having to have the trickery of a woman to stand up against the wisdom of her husband, she of course learned and studied Genjutsu for many many years. Thus she is able to use any genjutsu the user knows up to A rank. Mother Earth also has a telepathic connection with her summoner and any cardinal on the field. She is a brown cardinal as small as the Ma toad and sits on her summoners shoulder, channeling chakra into her feet so that she does not fall of even when the user moves at high speeds, the chakra is just to her feet and will not break the user out of a genjutsu. Mother Earth is able to trigger these genjutsus by releasing a high pitched call.

    -Stays on the field for 4 turns and can only be summoned once
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-

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    (Ryū-Ken Bakuhatsu) Dragon Fist Explosion
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Dragon Fist Explosion is an incredibly powerful attack, this technique is capable of destroying foes much more powerful and much larger then the user himself. The user begins by charging a fair amount of chakra into his hands and forearms the chakra sharpens the user's fist to an extent. The user then attacks by holding his fists out straight at the opponent positioning both arms facing the enemy with his elbows slightly bent, then once his fists are aligned he extends them releasing the chakra as he punches with both hands in unison this is all done in one fluid motion without any stopping. The punches themselves are able to crack the sternum causing pain if it hits the chest. (This movement resembles a Double Push Palm with closed fists) The chakra goes through intense shape manipulation as it forms into a large dragon that can be sent out to Mid range doing a fair amount of damage to the opponent if it hits him. It appears to look similar to a Mythical Chinese Dragon long and slim and it can pierce through the enemy if it hits him right. The real damage comes in when this jutsu is used in short range. The user can use the force of the chakra along with the weight of his own body to to deal a fatal blow to the opponent. If the punches directly hit the opponent the dragon made of chakra blasts through the opponent destroying their body leaving a large wound to the effected area. As the users fist are slightly sharpened by the chakra they also pierce deep into the opponent's body (if used in short range.) Since the basic chakra goes through shape change it is comparable in strength to Elemental jutsu of the same rank. The basic chakra can be swapped out for elemental chakra of the base five creating varying effects to the opponent. The Chakra Nature must be intangible to an extent meaning Doton and Suiton based chakra cannot be used for this jutsu.

    Lightning: If the Basic Chakra is swapped out for Raiton Chakra the Dragon will look like a long bolt of lightning in the shape of a Dragon. If used Mid range the Dragon has enough force to reach out and hit the opponent shocking him slightly causing a bit of paralysis and a numbing feeling this only lasts one turn. If used in short range it'll cause severe shock to the opponent's body tensing up his muscles and tearing through the effected area much like a Raikiri. It'll shock internal organs possibly causing organ failure it will also cause slight paralysis as well as a numbing feeling to the core muscles. The numbing and paralysis lasts two turns and doesn't stop the opponent from moving it only slows them down a bit.

    Wind: If the Basic Chakra is swapped out for Fuuton Chakra the dragon will look like a vortex of compressed wind. If used Mid range the wind dragon will have enough force to knock the opponent away and fracture a few bones. If used in short range it'll cause deep lacerations cutting deep into the opponent's body enough to be almost fatal. The Wind will have enough force behind it to fracture bones and cut and slice at muscle tissue making movement harder on the opponent.

    Fire: If the Basic Chakra is swapped out for Katon Chakra the dragon will look like a large jet of flame. If used in Mid range it'll have enough heat and will be dense enough to cause severe burns to the exterior of the opponent. If used in short range it'll cause severe burns to the opponent's body internally and externally. The heat will be so intense that it'll be able to roast the opponent as it passes through their body (not killing them but it'd be quite painful.) It'll cause dehydration and leave the opponent feeling burned throughout their body inside and out.

    Notes:

    -The jutsu can be used while moving and the user doesn't have to stand still to perform.
    -Can only be used twice per battle and must wait 3 turns before using again
    -If Basic Chakra is used no Basic Ninjutsu or Basic Genjutsu (this includes Nb gen and advanced Basic Ninjutsu) can be used the turn this jutsu is used and no Basic Ninjutsu of A rank or above the next turn.
    -The user can not use the chakra nature used, again that turn and no A ranks or above of that nature the next turn. (So if Lightning is used in exchange for the Basic Chakra the user can't use any other lightning jutsu that turn and no Lightning jutsu A rank or above the next turn.)


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    (Doton: Enbun sono Koudo) Earth Release: Salt the Earth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs two hand seals (Boar -> Rabbit) and slams his hand (dominant hand) onto the ground. He stabs his fingers into the ground releasing his doton chakra as he manipulates it into a dense sphere that encompasses five - twenty five meters around the user in all directions. The doton chakra kills off any plant life and makes it harder for plant life to grow from the ground. It does this by absorbing and restricting the nutrients in the soil in turn it changes the soil from a soft dirt like quality into a rocky cement like consistency this change in soil makes it harder for plant life to thrive it also drastically lowers the ph of the soil making the soil acidic to plant life. It specifically affects plant nutrient availability by controlling the chemical forms of the nutrients. This can be used to stop the use of plant like jutsu that originate from the ground as well as make growing of roots, wood and plants impossible.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Effects last entire battle unless nullified
    -No other doton jutsu can be used this turn and no S rank doton the next turn
    -Can kill off wood, root and plant jutsu up to B rank and the ground won't be able to support wood, root or plant based jutsu A rank and below

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    Earth is weak to all plant related elements in our RP: Wood, Plant Release and Mushroom Release. You can't change that. And the explanation in your technique is nothing that would fit the normal definition of what can be done with earth release. Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal:Albatross
    Scroll Owner:Asuna
    Other Users who have signed contract:
    Summoning Boss if existing:Storm, the Mirage Albatross
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Jet the Eclipse,Wave the Huntress
    Description and Background:Real World Info:Albatrosses, of the biological family Diomedeidae, are large seabirds allied to the procellariids, storm-petrels and diving-petrels in the order Procellariiformes (the tubenoses). They range widely in the Southern Ocean and the North Pacific. They are absent from the North Atlantic, although fossil remains show they once occurred there too and occasional vagrants are found.

    Albatrosses are among the largest of flying birds, and the great albatrosses (genus Diomedea) have the largest wingspans of any extant birds, reaching up to 12 feet. The albatrosses are usually regarded as falling into four genera, but there is disagreement over the number of species.

    Custom Wise:The Albatrosses are a majestic group of birds the reside in the island of Babylon Garden where they soar though the air and live together in Harmony under the rule of Storm the Albatross Boss.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Jiton: Tosu no Jiki (Magnetism Release: Magnetic Toss)
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user channels their magnetic chakra into their hands and then force it outwards to surround an object(s), giving them a magnetic field that the user can manipulate. Magnetizing multiple small objects, medium or large sized objects, the user can then deflect and or send the object at an opponent uses one of their hands as a medium to control the object. This can also be used to bring an object towards the user.
    Note: Cannot be used on Summons or people as they would be too hard to maintain complete immobility.
    Note: Cannot be used on an opponent's CW or weapon such as the Seven Swordsman Swords
    Note: User cannot manipulate more than one medium or large sized object at a time with one hand.
    Note: Can only be used 5x per battle.



    Please watch from 1:27 - 2:35

    [video=youtube;Rqnuz0MQvwc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rqnuz0MQvwc[/video


    X-Declined-X Existing technique, you might want to ask zenryoku to add this if it isn't already there: http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Magnet_...finite_Meteors
    Jiton: Tosu no Jiki (Magnetism Release: Magnetic Toss)
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user channels their magnetic chakra into their hands and then force it outwards to surround an object(s) [including but not limited to rocks, metal, weaponry, etc], giving them a magnetic field that the user can manipulate. Magnetizing multiple small objects, or medium or large sized objects, the user can then deflect and or send the object(s) at an opponent using one of their hands as a medium to control the object. This can also be used to bring the object(s) towards the user.
    *Small objects range from Senbon and Kunai to decent sized rocks and all weaponry.
    *Medium objects range from rock boulders to Stone Golem and things under 5m.
    *Large objects range from Greater Stone Golem and things over 5m

    Note: Cannot be used on Summons or people as they would be too hard to maintain complete immobility.
    Note: Cannot be used on an opponent's CW or weapon such as the Seven Swordsman Swords
    Note: User cannot manipulate more than one medium or large sized object at a time with one hand.
    Note: Picking up things of multiple size ranges requires multiple uses of this technique.
    Note: Can only be used 5x per battle.



    Please watch from 1:27 - 2:35





    Infinite Meteorites is the cannon technique below

    (Jishaku Ninpou: Mugen Inseki) - Magnetic Ninja Art: Infinite Meteorites
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will magnetize a spot behind the target and break up nearby earth.Then the earth will attack the use since he/she is in the filed of he magnetically charged spot.

    X-Declined-X I did read your PMs, what you said was alright. But here youre magnetising everything within range without the need for medium (fix it, just magnetising the ground was another case, you simply had to touch it to flow the chakra). For which let me point out magnetism release is the only canon element that hasn't been shown used offensively directly. It uses metallic objects to harm. A direct approach may have problems but its nothing that i wont encourage. Explore the possibilities of this element.

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    Raiton/Jiton: Jiki Shōgekiha (Lightning/Magnetism Combo: Magnetic Shockwave)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user channels lightning chakra into the ground and then begins charging Magnetism chakra into one of his hands. The Magnetism chakra gives off a purplish color while it surrounds the user's hand like an orb. The user punches his hand towards the ground and uses the magnetism chakra to direct the lightning chakra in geyser like force upwards. The Lightning chakra forms into lightning bolts that are wrapped with Magnetic chakra, giving off the appearance of a purple beam of energy that is charged with lightning. The geyser's can range from one large or 4 alternating geysers that go out to Mid range and reach up to 10 meters in height. The user can charge the geyser's with either positive or negative magnetic chakra.
    Note: No other Magnetism or Lightning techniques can be used in this turn.
    Note: No Magnetic or Lightning techniques above A ranked next turn
    Note: Can only be used 5x per battle.
    Note: If used 5x, the user cannot use Magnetism Above A Ranked for the remainder of the battle






    The first move in this video
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I1Ds7gJYtdU



    X-Declined-X Ah magneto is here already xD what unique abilities does this lightning have?

    Raiton/Jiton: Jūryoku-jō (Lightning/Magnetism Combo: Gravitational Force Field)
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user channels lightning chakra into their hands and begins performing 4 handseals while surging magnetic chakra around their hands. The Magnetic and lightning chakra mix together quickly to form a transparent, purple orb of magnetism that cackles with lightning chakra around their body. This force field is capable of protecting the user from metal, Earth, wood, crystalline, gravity, heat and light based techniques. The force field is capable of withstanding the concussion blasts and multiple kunai explosions without harm to the user. The force field moves along with the user protecting them until destroyed or until the user casts a technique from inside the bubble that would compromise its shape or moves out of the range in which the technique was used.
    Note: Any technique above B Ranked formed inside of the bubble that tries to puncture it from the inside such as a lightning bolt or fireball would cause the force field to be destroyed.
    Note: No Jiton or Raiton techniques above B Ranked in the same turn.
    Note: Can only be used 5x per battle.
    Note: Any object that has been previously magnetized cannot harm the shield.
    Note: The field is weak to water, but cannot conduct the lightning from outside contact with the shield.
    Note: If opponent touches the shield, they will be knocked backwards with a minor jolt of electricity that doesnt cause any damage.
    Note: Water and Wind techniques pass through the shield without damaging the force field or weakening it.






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    [Raiton: Raikou Teppou] Lightning Release: Lightning Gun
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Similar to the "Water Release: Water Gun Technique" of the Hozuki Clan, the user forms a finger gun (hand gun mimic) by raising their thumb above their fist , and extending one or two fingers perpendicularly to it. With the hand gesture formed, the user may proceed to release a small, yet powerful bolt of lightning with tremendous force from the "tip" of the index finger. This technique is strong enough to pierce through someone.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh, and can only be taught by him.

    X-Declined-X Existing technique
     
         
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    Suiton/Muon Satsujin: Kuikkukabā (Water Style/Silent Homicide: Quick Cover)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user, with his current position unknown to the target (either already hidden within Mist or darkness, or is behind them without their noticing), will begin by manipulateing the moisture in the air, generating a thick, but localized area of mist (the mist, if used with Hidden Mist Jutsu, is even thicker than the previous technqiue). While hidden within the mist, the user will quickly come out of hiding, impale the target with a sword, kunai, or other sharp weapon, and then retreat to their previous hiding place as the mist fades away.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    X-Declined-X Too generic. Wont you be able to do it by simply using hidden mist and moving in and out of it?

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    (Bakuton: Monsutā no Dai Abare) Blast Style: Monster's Rampage
    Type: Attack | Defense | Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The sister technique to "Blast Release: Bombshell", the user focuses their Bakuton chakra around their body, creating a small aura of Bakuton chakra around themselves, which moves with the user's body. The aura is visible to the naked eye as a distortion of light (much like a distortion created through high heat). Any physical object which comes into contact with the aura (other than the surface the user is standing on when the jutsu is used) will cause the aura to spontaniously combust outwards from the point of impact, rendering an opponents projectiles and taijutsu useless. However, this technique takes it to the next level of its sister, allowing the shell to explode multiple times in a single use, instead of the lesser jutsu's single explosion per use.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used 1 time per battle
    ~The aura lasts for two turns
    ~The aura is in the shape of the user, fits around the body of the user, and is 6 inches away from the user (the aura does not extend past the soles of the feet)

    X-Declined-X Sorry... i think i was the person to approve bombshell or atleast checked it once, but i forgot how it looked like and i cant search with the work pile. Resubmit it with the quote
    Quote Originally Posted by Sharingdork View Post
    Resubmitting (additions in bold)

    (Bakuton: Bakudan Hatsugen) Blast Release: Bombshell
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their Bakuton chakra around their body, creating a small aura of Bakuton chakra around themselves, which moves with the user's body. The aura is visible to the naked eye as a distortion of light (much like a distortion created through high heat). Any physical object which comes into contact with the aura (other than the surface the user is standing on when the jutsu is used) will cause the aura to spontaniously combust outwards from the point of impact, rendering an opponents projectiles and taijutsu useless.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle
    ~The aura lasts for two turns, or until it is used
    ~The aura is in the shape of the user, fits around the body of the user, and is 6 inches away from the user

    X-Approved-X
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    (Bakuton: Monsutā no Dai Abare) Blast Style: Monster's Rampage
    Type: Attack | Defense | Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The sister technique to "Blast Release: Bombshell", the user focuses their Bakuton chakra around their body, creating a small aura of Bakuton chakra around themselves, which moves with the user's body. The aura is visible to the naked eye as a distortion of light (much like a distortion created through high heat). Any physical object which comes into contact with the aura (other than the surface the user is standing on when the jutsu is used) will cause the aura to spontaniously combust outwards from the point of impact, rendering an opponents projectiles and taijutsu useless. However, this technique takes it to the next level of its sister, allowing the shell to explode multiple times in a single use, instead of the lesser jutsu's single explosion per use.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used 1 time per battle
    ~The aura lasts for two turns
    ~The aura is in the shape of the user, fits around the body of the user, and is 6 inches away from the user (the aura does not extend past the soles of the feet)

    X-Approved-X

    New:

    Suiton: Inpei no Misuto (Water Style: Mist of Concealment)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, by either manipulating a nearby water source or by expelling mist from their mouths, will generate a mist which at first glance is identical to Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden in Mist Technique). However, the water molecules suspended in the air, making up the mist, are several times denser than normal mist, being suspended in the air by chakra. The denser water molecules are so abnormally dense, that they have the property of reflecting sound waves which hit them, which then bounce off of other water droplets, making it so every sound made within the mist is amplified and echoed everywhere within the mist. The technique is designed to be an alternative to the Silent Killing technique, by making sound come from all directions so as to still stop ones opponent from finding them by sound.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    X-Declined-X Wont really be mist then, it'll be a cloud of water vapour which would condense quickly
     
         
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    Summoning Technique: Man O'War | Magnificent Frigatebird (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Man O'War | Magnificent Frigatebird)
    Type: Summoning animal
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user after smearing his small amount of blood over his palm (which they used while signing the contract), perform the Boar -> Dog -> Bird -> Monkey -> Ram hand seals to summon The Man O'War, the head of battalion of all Frigate birds who specialize in wind style attacks.
    The Man O'War is somewhat larger than the hawk summoned by Sasuke in manga, apparently because of his wide wing span and deep, long forked tail. The user can ride on top of him.
    The Man O'War specializes in wind techniques and can use wind jutsus up to A rank. . He is also silent in flight, which is one of his natural attributes and can effectively perform aerial piracy(stealing/snatching) attacks.
    As similar to all frigate birds, he is essentially aerial, able to glide in the wind and can maintain flight without wing flapping using rising air currents, has the largest wingspan to body weight ratio of any bird and he can stay aloft for more than a week.
    He can build up and store the wind chakra effectively in his large scarlet colored gular pouch located in his neck and in his wings thus he can effectively perform the wind jutsus. While not using any jutsu via his mouth, he can carry small objects, scrolls or a person in his red gular pouch.
    As he has a long wing span, he can also defect shurikens and kunais thrown at him by creating small gusts of air using his wings, deflecting them.
    Notes:
    • Can be summoned only by those who've signed the frigatebirds summoning contact and must be taught by me(-Jiraiya-).
    • The Man O'War specializes in wind & can perform wind jutsus without the need of hand seals.
    • Can be summoned only once in a battle.
    • Can stay for 3 turns once summoned.
    • Can perform up to A rank wind jutsus and each jutsu counts as the user's jutsu.
    • Can perform elemental combo with the user.
    • Can perform physical attack with wings.
    • Can talk and interact with the User.
    • Link of summoning contract approval >>Click Here<<

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    Ninja Arts: Eye Flicker (Ninjutsu: Me Burikka)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30 (-5 every active turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user quickly focuses his own chakra to his eyes and blocks them, and then rapidly withdraws the blocking effect and continues to repeat this action rapidly in quick succession. This produces an effect much like a strobe light, making the objects and their motions appear more like frame-by-frame movement making it easier to assess where someone is attacking from and also to counter multiple high speed projectiles. However, because of the rapid flickering, one will find a headache setting in when they use this jutsu, not to mention the fact that it takes quite a degree of chakra control to maintain the effect.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used twice per battle and not in immediate succession.
    • Can remain active for 3 turns once activated and can be terminated at will.
    • Can be used without any side effects for a total of 4 turns(not in succession) but will result in headache in the 5th turn and dizziness in the 6th turn which will require rest for 1 turn.
    • Can be used in both eyes synchronously or separately in either right/left eye provided the other eye is closed.
    • Can only be taught by me(-Jiraiya-).


    X-Declined-X It wont work like that

    The Unlimited Blade | Mugenjin (無限刃)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (40 When summoned via scroll)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Mugenjin is one of the highly searched, legendary sword even among the great five nations which has taken a countless lives during the 2nd ninja war.

    This legendary sword was said to be forged by the master sword smith Arai Shakku, the head of Takumi Village (Literally meaning "Village of Artisans") during the formation of 5 great nations using a secret alloy combination which made the sword near hard as diamond and conferred protection against corrosion by rust.

    It was rumored that the Mugenjin was lost in the chaos of the 2nd great ninja war somewhere in the depths of the hidden grass village. This sword came into the possession of -Jiraiya- while he went a stealth mission to the hidden grass village where he accidentally discovered it in a hidden cave. Since then -Jiraiya- became the wielder of the Mugenjin.

    Externally the Mugenjin appears as a regular sword of normal size with a bright lustrous blade and a deep dark purple hilt of higher insulation quality residing in a deep dark purple sheath. But on very close examination of the blade, one can see a fine serrated edge flaked away in a regular pattern, which has become soaked in the flesh and body fat of the victims it had cut/killed over the years.

    Abilities:
    • Each serration on the blade has a micro-pore leading to a blind end(of few millimeters) within the sword which acts by passive capillary action to store the oils/fats which comes in contact with blade.
    • Further the serration itself can grab the fat particles from the opponents owing to friction.
    • The wielder can also feed the sword with oil from externally by pouring it over the sword but the imbibing action/quality of the sword requires no special technique by the user as it is passive due to the capillary action of the micro-pores in the sword.
    • As a result above special qualities, the wielder can ignite the imbibed fat/oils using his fire/lightning chakra or lightning sparks or fire jutsus from externally.
    • The Mugenjin can be used as a normal sword when not using any special jutsus through it, but the oil/fat imbibing quality of the sword continues to work until the space in serrations and storage sacs are saturated as it is a passive quality of the sword due to capillary action and friction produced while coming in contact with the opponent's flesh.

    Note:
    • Can only be wielded by me(-Jiraiya-).
    • The sword is indestructible.
    • The user can incorporate combustible oils into the sword externally by pouring them over the sword from a storage container or through ninjutsus that produce oil.
    • The harvested oil/fat can be ignited using fire chakra, fire jutsus, lightning sparks.

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    Note: The serrations will be even smaller than what is shown in the picture, which will not be noticeable by the opponent under normal circumstances.








    X-Approved-X Note that, being as hard as diamond doesn't give this the ability to be as sharp as diamond.
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 12-09-2012 at 10:32 PM.

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