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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Water Style: Water Spikes(Suiton:Sui Supaiku)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will focus chakra into their feet and/or hands then stomp their feet creating water spikes that run the distance of their feet to mid-range in a 3 foot wide space and the spikes have a width of 2 inches and are 3 feet tall,they come out in different directions making it difficult to dodge everyone or the user will jump into the air and hit the ground on essentially all four as they hit the ground spikes will shoot up around them instantly from all angles creating a wall of water spikes that have a width of 2 inches and 3 feet tall.
    Notes/Restrictions
    -Can only be taught by Sonnelion
    -Require one turn breaks between use
    -Doesn't require a water source

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.


    Water Style:Water Dragon's Return(Suiton: Doragon No Modori Sui)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: THe user will perform the dragon handseal then slam their hand on the ground creating out of no where two dragons will appear and go towards the opponent(s) at an incredible speed,20 mph, the dragons will both bite the person(s) on the upper and lower body while carrying them towards the sky before bringing them back towards the ground, the dragons dissipate 1 foot above the ground, making a small crater where the opponent hits.
    Notes/Restrictions
    -Can only taught by Sonnelion.
    -Can only be used 3 times.
    -No water source required.

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.


    Twin Death Sentence:Soul Reaver( Tsuin Shikei: Sourusoururiibaa)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A(+15 for either ability)
    Damage: 30(+10 when ability active)
    Description: They are two twin short sword that have blades of 3 feet in length and 4 in width. The blades are composed of steel,chakra metal, and titanium alloy making it very strong and unbreakable. The short swords can heat up or electrocute, once chakra is applied, depending on the type of chakra being applied. The other ability of these short swords is to create a sharp chakra aura around themselves that can stretch into mid range.
    Notes/Restrictions
    -Can only be used by Sonnelion/with permission
    -Abilities last 3 turns per activation
    -Each ability can be activated 4 times
    -Requires 1 turn breaks between uses of abilities




    ♠ Declined ♠
    What exactly do you mean by it creating a chakra aura around yourself? Could you emphasize more on its abilities and usage?
     
         
    Last edited by Adachi; 04-18-2013 at 05:49 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Terrakion sutanpīdo) - Summoning Technique: Terrakion the Stampede
    Type:Summoning
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will first bite there thumb,wiping it on there summoning tatto,the user will then procede to perform 4 handseals to summon,Terrakion the Stampede.Terrakion is a Chital Sepcies summon of the Deer Contract,he begin the second strongest after the leader Xerneas.Terrakion is a earth based deer,being a master of the element capabable of using them up to S-Rank without handseals,he also can use the Deer Arts with ease. Terrakion is a bit shorter than Xerneas but much bulkier than he is, Terrakion wears a special armor around him,that seems infused into his body,he is capable of infusing his chakra into the armor twice per battle to increase the durability of the armor to reduce the damage of attacks by half when used against him. Terrakion has his own technique the allows him to grow his antlers similar to the Samurai Sabre to make a giant brown sword to tear though defenses up to A-Rank. Terrakion is however slow in movement and only moves up to Jounin Rank ninja.

    -Increasing his armor power only can be used twice and reduces the power by half
    -His sword technique is capable of slashing through techniques up to A-Rank.
    -His armor can also resist C-Rank and below Taijutsu/Kenjutsu.
    -Stays in battle for 4 turns
    -Can be summoned once per battle.

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    ±± Approved ±±
    Removed HP. No need for that

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kaiusu Shadoumonāku)- Summoning Technique: Caius The Shadow Monarch
    Type:Summoning
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will bite their finger to draw blood, or use any other source of blood,then placing it on there summoning tattoo the user will then proceed to slam his hand summoning Caius the Shadow Monarch,the dark emperor of the Deer Contract. Caius is the leader of the White Tailed Deers,which are the enemies of the main Deer Speices,the Chital.Unlike other Deer Caius is dark in personality and leads them with noting but pure hatred. Caius like all male deers have large antlers on his head which he can use as a weapon in combat and as well when utilizing the Deer Arts.Caius is a prodigy of Fire and Lighting techniques but can only use them up to B-Rank,but this is not his down fall as he is capable of doubling the power each technique used by him,but takes twice the damage from enemy techniques.When using his antlers they are equal to a A-Ranked Kenjutsu technique by applying chakra into them increasing there hardness,silimar like a Kaguya. He is also capable to to move at high speeds up to a Taijutsu Master at Sage Rank while on 4 legs and can run the same pace on 2 legs.He is also able to carry only 2 people as its his personal limit.

    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -All jutsus used by Caius costs as towards 3 turn limit
    -The user can apply the double damage by having Caius use x1.5 the normal amount of chakra.
    -Caius takes twice the damage from any element.
    -Caius has 90 Hp and remains on the field for 4 turns.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    No double element summon.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Derira Reitō kōgō) Summoning Technique : Dalila The Frozen Empress
    Type:Summon
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 60
    Damage:
    Description:The user will bite there thumb,drawing the blood or by using blood from any other way(must still be there own),then by slamming there hand on the ground the user will summon Dalila The Frozen Empress.Dalila is the twin sister of Caius but unlike Caius's dark behavoir,Dalila is much more lighter than he is.Dalila is the complete opposite of Caius where as her brother is much more offensive,Dalila is much more defensive,taking only half the from techniques used against her by applying a special chakra coat around her body,but her elements are much weaker where as a technique doing 30 will be reduced to 15.She has no antlers like her brother due to her being a female,she is able however to use Water and Wind techniques up to A-Rank.She is no as fast as her brother but can manage on her own,moving at speeds equal to a Taijutsu Specialist at S-Class rank.She is very intellegent and is very friendly with people allowing 4 people to ride on her back.She is also capable of standing on 2 feet,though she prefers 4 legs.

    -Dalila has Hp of 100
    -Dalila can remain for 4 turns
    -Dalilia can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Water/Wind Moves used by Dalila counts as towards 3 jutsu limit.

    Link to contract approval:http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...s#post10019650

    ♠ All Pending ♠
    Leaving for Scorps/Xylon. I'm not sure if half of those things are technically allowed.


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Same as above.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-18-2013 at 09:26 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Fuuinjutsu: Masutāraitoninguekusupu Sealing Arts: Master Lightning Exploder
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: An upgrade from the usual explosion tag; The user will make contact with an object (kunai, tree, ground, etc) and focus lightning chakra onto it. As he does a seal forms on the object bearing the kanji for explosion forms on it. At the user's command the tag will activate and exoplode like a regular exploding tag except instead of a regular explosion there will be shap tearing lightning that goes outwards in all directions in an orb shape of a 4m radius all around the object. Anything caught in the orb will suffer A rank lightning damage.

    -Can only be taught by Broly
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -No fuuinjutsu above A rank the next turn

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     Declined 
    This is similar to existing Seals. I like the concept but the way you worded it makes it very similar to some seals that are essentially variations of the explosive tag. You need to make yours something more than that.


    Fuuinjutsu: 5 Yōso no kaifū Sealing Arts: 5 Element Unseal
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Simply a reverse of the cannon 5 element seal; The user, who has pre sealed S rank basic 5 elemental natures in a sealing tag, will simply insert his chakra into one of the prewritten tags with the Kanji for the element it holds. Upon doing this and pointing it at the enemy a vapor will release and a concentrated beam of the chosen nature will be fired at the enemy.

    -Can only be taught by Broly
    -Can only use 3 times a battle
    -No a rank and above fuuinjutsu the next turn

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     Declined 
    DNR.


    Katon: Kyūkyoku no doragonfaiyā Fire Style: Ultimate Dragon Fire*
    Type: *Offensive/ Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: *While in contact with a rope, chain, wire, or any other long object the user will channel fire chakra through their arm which will run through the object towards the opponent. Once the object makes contact with the opponent it will have an "exploding" effect and shower the opponents skin with intense fire that will give him severe burns.*

    -Fire lasts for 2 turns
    -Can only be taught by Broly
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-20-2013 at 01:47 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    Summoning Animal: Goshawk
    Scroll Owner: Cursed Prince
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: The Goshawk is a medium large Bird of prey. It is a raptor with short, broad wings and a long tail, both adaptations to manoeuvring through trees in the forests it lives and nests in. Across most of the species's range, it is blue-grey above and barred grey or white below, but subspecies in particular range from nearly white overall to nearly black above. The juvenile is brown above and barred brown below. Juveniles and adults have a barred tail, with dark brown or black barring. Adults always have a white eye stripe. Juveniles have pale-yellow eyes, and adults develop dark red eyes usually after their second year, although nutrition and genetics may affect eye color as well. They have a great wingspan, and adults are known to be able to carry humans. The are very vicious, and their baks are strong enough to tear flesh.

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    Uncanny Sword
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 [-20 per turn]
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Uncanny Sword actually consists of 2 gloves and a somewhat standard black Katana. The user charges chakra into the gloves, which then charges chakra into the sword. What makes this weapon "Uncanny" is that the user charges chakra with one of the 5 elemental natures. This chakra does not however, make the sword stronger. Instead, the chakra itself winds around the sword, and since it is infused with a chakra nature, can "negate/absorb" certain chakra. For example, Opponent uses earth flowing spears, I use raiton charged chakra, and when my chakra touches it, it stops and causes it to recede back into the ground. The chakra that winds arounds the sword is extendable, able to extend up to 5 meters. The chakra can lash out extremely quickly and can go on all sides of the user. It spins against frontal attacks to make it easier to negate/absorb the chakra. It can only absorb/negate B-rank chakra. Against an A, S, or F-ranked attack, it simply decreases the damage by 20.
    ~ Goes by elemental weaknesses/strengths. (In other words, only raiton can absorb/negate doton, only katon can negate/absorb wind, only wind can negate/absorb lightning, only doton can negate/absorb water, only water can negate/absorb fire)
    ~ Can only negate chakra up to B-rank
    ~Can only be used/taught by Cursed Prince
    ~Can only be used 5 times per battle

    Example^^^

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    ±± Declined ±±
    This is nothing more than yet another chakra infusable sword. They have all be done before. And chakra absorbing swords as well.

    Kenjutsu: Nagai- Katana (Sword Art: Longsword)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user inserts chakra into his sword, causing it to glow a dull blue. Then, using their mastery of kenjutsu, the user can release their chakra from the sword to extend from the sword, basically making the sword suddenly extend, that can cut through the opponent. This technique is capable of countering ninjutsu of A rank due to the chakra charge
    -Can last for 1 turn
    -Usable only once per battle
    - Blade can nd up to 4 extra meters

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Done before. Almost exactly the same. DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-10-2013 at 10:21 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Re-submitting, Changes in bold, Removed the things which was told to remove in previous submission.

    Quote Originally Posted by -Jiraiya- View Post
    Elephant Summoning Technique: Zephyrus (Zou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Zephyrus)
    Type: Summoning animal
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user draws some blood and performs the Boar -> Dog -> Bird -> Monkey -> Ram hand seals to summon Zephyrus. He is a giant elephant about the size of Gamabunta with proportionate trunk & tusks to his body size which projects in front of his head. Zephyrus' tusks are covered with a thin steel coating with several steel spikes projecting from the tip which can be used for offense as well as for defense. His trunk can reach up to short range in front of him when fully extended and can be used to grab objects or persons. He also wears a 2 inch steel armor knee caps over his knees with several sharp steel spikes projecting from them.
    Zephyrus specializes in wind release and can use wind jutsus up to A rank using his trunk/mouth without need of hand seals. He is able to suck in objects and targets within the short range in front of his trunk's openings.
    His skin is dry & rough (which is a natural ability of elephants) and can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons. Because of his natural ability of dry & rough skin, Zephyrus can resist lightning jutsus of B rank and below as his skin provides high resistance to the flow of electricity thereby rendering them ineffective. However lightning jutsus used after breaching his skin will have normal effect on him.
    Note:
    • Must have signed Elephant contract to summon Zephyrus.
    • Can stay in the field for 4 turns once summoned.
    • Can use wind jutsus up to A rank using his trunk/mouth without need of hand seals and each move counts as the user's move.
    • Can suck in targets with his trunk within short range and this counts as one of user's move if used.
    • Can resist lightning jutsus of B rank & below with intact skin, however lightning jutsus used after breaching his skin will have normal effect on him.
    • Can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons.
    • Can perform ordinary physical attacks using its tusks, legs at close range and can grab objects/persons with his trunk.
    • Can speak and form elemental combination with the summoner.
    • Can carry up to 3 people on his back.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Gained ownership of Elephants contract >>Here<<


    ~Declined~ The wind suction ability needs to counts as a move and needs to have a usage limit, remove everything about being resistent to lightning techniques because i don't allow summons being impervious to elements anymore, mention that he can only be summoned once, remove that he can perform elemental combinations with the summoner, rest seems fine.
    Elephant Summoning Technique: Zephyrus (Zou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Zephyrus)
    Type: Summoning animal
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user draws some blood and performs the Boar -> Dog -> Bird -> Monkey -> Ram hand seals to summon Zephyrus. He is a giant elephant about the size of Gamabunta with proportionate trunk & tusks to his body size which projects in front of his head. Zephyrus' tusks are covered with a thin steel coating with several steel spikes projecting from the tip which can be used for offense as well as for defense. His trunk can reach up to short range in front of him when fully extended and can be used to grab objects or persons. He also wears a 2 inch steel armor knee caps over his knees with several sharp steel spikes projecting from them.
    Zephyrus specializes in wind release and can use wind jutsus up to A rank using his trunk/mouth without need of hand seals. He is able to suck in objects and targets within the short range in front of his trunk's openings, which counts as user's move if used.
    His skin is dry & rough (which is a natural ability of elephants) and can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons.
    Note:
    • Can only be summoned once per battle & must have signed Elephant contract to summon Zephyrus.
    • Can stay in the field for 4 turns once summoned.
    • Can use wind jutsus up to A rank using his trunk/mouth without need of hand seals and each move counts as the user's move.
    • Can suck in targets with his trunk within short range 4 times per battle and each time counts as one of user's move if used.
    • Can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons.
    • Can perform ordinary physical attacks using its tusks, legs at close range and can grab objects/persons with his trunk.
    • Can talk.
    • Can carry up to 3 people on his back.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Gained ownership of Elephants contract >>Here<<


    ♠ Approved ♠

    New submissions,

    Elephant Summoning Technique: Galene (Zou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Galene)
    Type: Summoning animal
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user draws some blood and performs the Boar -> Dog -> Bird -> Monkey -> Ram hand seals to summon Galene. She is a giant elephant about 10 meters in height with proportionate trunk & tusks to his body size which projects in front of her head. Her trunk can reach up to short range in front of her when fully extended and can be used to grab objects or persons. Galene specializes in water release and can use water jutsus up to A rank using her trunk/mouth without need of hand seals. Like other elephants, she is able to suck in objects and targets within the short range in front of his trunk's openings, which counts as user's move if used. Her skin is dry & rough (which is a natural ability of elephants) and can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons. She is a skillful swimmer. While in a large water source, she can hide her entire body under the water with only her tip of the trunk over the water surface for breathing and can swim underwater or just stay there still.
    Note(s):
    • Can only be summoned once per battle & must have signed Elephant contract to summon Galene.
    • Can stay in the field for 4 turns once summoned.
    • Can use water jutsus up to A rank using his trunk/mouth without need of hand seals and each move counts as the user's move.
    • Can suck in targets with his trunk within short range 4 times per battle and each time counts as one of user's move if used.
    • Can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons.
    • Can perform ordinary physical attacks using its tusks, legs at close range and can grab objects/persons with her trunk.
    • Can talk.
    • Can carry up to 2 people on her back.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Gained ownership of Elephants contract >>Here<<


    ♠ Approved ♠

    Fire Release: Feather missiles (Katon: Feza-misairu)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The frigate bird focuses its fire chakra in both of its wings and forcibly flaps them one time which releases an array of stiff, faint red glowing feathers (20 feathers from each wing) imbued with fire chakra from both the wings like a projectile which spreads out and strikes the target producing an explosion on impact which coalesce to form a massive explosion.
    Note(s):
    • Must have signed Frigate birds contract and should've summoned a Frigate bird with fire affinity beforehand to use this jutsu.
    • Only Frigate birds with fire affinity can use this jutsu.
    • Can be used 3 times per battle and each usage counts as the user's move.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Link of summoning contract approval >>Click Here<<


    ♠ Approved ♠
     
         
    Last edited by Adachi; 04-18-2013 at 05:57 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Masashi Kishimoto | Illusionary Technique: Masashi Kishimoto
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will perform three hand seals and then disrupts the opponents chakra within the brain. When the user performs the three hand seals it will appear as if the hand seals were for a lower ranking summoning jutsu. However instead of a summon, the opponent will see an illusion of Masashi Kishimoto. The creator of Naruto and Naruto Shippuden. Masashi Kishimoto will proceed to bring out his paper and pencil premade a drawing of a shinobi. Then he will proceed to erase anything within the paper at the users desires. For example, Masashi Kishimoto will erase the leg of the opponent that is effected. The opponent will see his leg disappear and loose all feelings as if the leg has been erased. He will also lose internal balance and fall towards the ground. There will be minimal pain due to it being the genjutsu and just a random disappearence of a leg but he won't feel anything once it's disappeared. He will though feel the blood pumping and throbing where the leg would be, simulating amputated leg. The illusion of the erased portions are not limited to a leg. It could be any part of the body or organ, the user must specify. However the user will not be able to specify multiple limbs and organs within this one jutsu. If it was layered genjutsu than it would be possible. Inconjunction, Masashi Kishimoto is able to draw something and make it come to life. Ofcourse it's only an illusion and doesn't really harm the opponent, though the opponent won't know that. Masashi Kishimoto is also able to change the terrain as the user see's fit, but again only an illusion to the opponent and only last till it is broken.

    Note: Only able to use twice per battle
    Note: Can only specify one limbs or organs, unless layered and not broken before hand
    Note: Masashi Kishimoto is intagible as it's only an illusion and can not be used like a clone
    Note: Must skip a turn to reuse this technique
    Note: Can only be taught by Vision

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     Declined 
    but no.


    Genjutsu: Tired | Illusionary Technique: Tsukareta
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform a single handseal and then cast a genjutsu on the opponent by disrupting the chakra flow of their brain. Simoutanously, all at once, the opponent will feel fatigued, tired, and lazy. While feeling those effects the opponent will also get the urge to yawn because of being tired. While a slight visual illusion will take place as well with eye boogers [crusting of the eyes] will form slightly around the eyes.

    Note: Can only be taught by Vision

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    Ok, you can creat an illusionary effect or effects/sensations that might make him experience the same thing as if he was tired but you cannot induce "fake" exhaustion just ike that. I mean, does he fel joint or muscular pain? does he feel cramps? does he feel spasms? what?Also, you cannot make him feel lazy... thats not a sense, thats an emotion. Urge to yawn? are you making him sleepy or tired? I just feel this is a bit overstretching but if you want to go in this direction, more definition is needed specially in what this reopreesents in a fight for your opponent. What in temrs of techniques, speed, movement, etc does this alter?

    Genjutsu: Kick Out | Illusionary Technique: Ketobatsu
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Through the gesture of the user clinching the fist in front from open palm, the user will simulate and act as if he is pulling something towards him. While at that time a visual illusion will set in as if all of the opponents chakra has been pulled towards the user and absorbed all of the opponents chakra. After a second, the opponent will feel as if all of his chakra has depleted. Causing him to feel as if he can not mold chakra, concentrate on the task at hand, whatever it may be. Being able to concentrate alone is hard for the opponent as he would feel as if he has no chakra left in reserve. The opponents physical abilities become slower, muscles would feel week and his mind won't be clear. In conjunction, as the opponent see's the chakra being absorbed by the user, he will also see a visual illusion of the user's phsyical speed and physical prowess increase, any injuries occured on the user seems to be healed and will see the user with overflow of chakra as if it was a biju chakra.

    Note: Only able to use twice per battle.
    Note: The user's physical speed does not increase in reality.
    Note: The user's ninjutsu doesn't gain in power or increase in power.
    Note: The users physical prowess doesn't increase.
    Note: Can only be taught by Vision

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     Declined 
    Same observations i made for the other one. Its a bit of a stretch in terms of what normal genjutsu is capable of doing.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-10-2013 at 11:31 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (bakuyaku magpie no jutsu)explosive magpie no jutsu
    Rank:A
    Range:Mid-range
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user after performing 3 handseals will bite their thumbs and place them on opposite forearms. then lift their arms towards the enemy.Upon doing so relasing a dozen magpies from the users sleave.Which all upon impact explode creating a devestation explosion.The magpies are no bigger than that of a baby chiken so roughly 10cm(height) by 5 cm(width) making extremely hard to hit them with ninja weapons.They are also fast and agile.
    Restrictions
    ~Track the enemy for 1 turn
    ~Lasts 1 turn upon that they automaticly explode.
    ~Cant use any techniques.Only explode.
    ~Explode upon impact.

    X-Declined-X Explode how? perhaps attach paper bombs to them?

    (Azula sono konpeki magpie)Azula the azure magpie
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:It is roughly the size of pains bird summon which from the show seems to be 2-3 meter in length and 1-2 meters in width it has a shallow beak and slim body.It can shoot S rank water or below from its mouth/beak at enemies or objects.It is capable of holding 2 or less people on its back during flight.It can also protude chakra claws from its claws.Giving it the ability to cut through even the most dense of objects.It can in addition communicate with the summoner telepathicly.
    Restrictions:
    ~water blast counts towards users move limit
    ~summonable only once per battle.
    ~Remains in battle for 2 turns.

    X-Approved-X

    Link to magpie contract approvale.


    (amatsu enkou kajou chakram)Heavenly flame spiral chakrams
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short-Mid range
    Chakra:40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    The chakrams Made out of white steel and compose of 8 spikes on the outside with a cross over handle allowing manuverable weilding. the two chakrams Are extremely light.And infused with The users chakra.The user can use them as a hand to weapon/hand combat weapon.They can be infused with wind and fire elements.Wheninfused with fire it will have a slight reddish glow to it and burn all those but the user who make contact with it.This includes objects.When infused with wind chakra the chakrams become much more sharp capable of cutting through stone.It gains a slight green glow.In addition to this.The chakram is able to be thrown and moved around when infused with the user chakra.Be it fire or wind.Upon performing thesnake handsign after throwing the user is able to make the chakram(s) spin so rapidly they produce a cyclone which will suck in and rip apart all things around them.When added with fire.It will cause a defestation wind +fire attack.
    Restrictions
    ~Can only be taught and given by blaise12
    ~The whirlwind ability of it can only be used twice per battle.
    The user can only infuse chakra within it 4 times per battle. and can never switch between wind and fire within the same turn.
    Abilities(too make more clear)
    ~When infused with wind chakra. increse in speed of weapon not user and added sharpness.
    ~When infused with fire. burns all other than user who touches.
    ~Can create cyclone of wind.Which added withfire makes a devestating attack.



    X-Declined-X Why not just submit the cyclone as a seperate technique? keep the orginal weapon nice and clean and without any exploits
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Meikainote) Earth Release: Hand of The Underworld
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C-Rank
    Range:Short-Mid Range
    Chakra:15 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description: after preforming the tiger handseal, the user will make 2 stone shaped as a mature man hands to raise from the ground under his opponent. the hands will grab the legs of the target tightly making him unable to move. by applying more chakra to the hands the user will make them hold the opponent's legs tighter.
    note: the user can use no B-ranked or higher lightning jutsus in the same turn of using this jutsu
    note: only Pain... can teach this jutsu.
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    (Suiton: Mizu tako no shokushu) Water Style: Tentacles of The Water Octopus
    Type:Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range:Short Range
    Chakra:20 Chakra
    Damage:40 Damage
    Description: After standing on a water source, the user will manipulate the water under him shaping it as octopus' tentacles. the tentacles will rise in a circle of diameter 50 cm around the user's legs. the tentacles are 1 meters long but they're able to extend to reach the target standing 3 meters away from the user.
    note: requires a water source.
    note: the user can't move his legs while using this jutsu.
    note: only Pain... can teach this jutsu.



    ♠ Both declined, do not resubmit ♠
    The first one has been done too many times. And lightning jutsu? What?
    Second one also has plenty other jutsus that does what it does, nothing creative about it.
     
         
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    (Genjutsu: Gansaku Mizu Oshi) Illustionary Style: Fake Water Pressure
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/ Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40 due to the stress
    Description: The user begins by performing a mere single handseal, upon doing so, he/she transmits an illusion displaying two large waves of water appearing 2 meters from either side of the opponent, these waves of water then pressurize the opponent and explode immediately upon contact, resulting in the opponent's brain malfunctioning due to the stress

    Notes: Can only be taught by Ezio..
    Notes: Only usable thrice per battle.

    ♠ Pending ♠
    Leaving for Scorps/Xylon.


    ______________
    ±± Approved ±±


    (Fuuton: Ken Sanran) Wind Release: Blade Dispersion
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user begins by performing two hand seals, he/she releases their Wind chakra into the area 10 meter above the opponents head. As they release the chakra, they'd use shape manipulation to form countless of needles of wind (roughly 5 cms long) by manipulating the air in the location above the opponents head. Upon making the needles, they'd perform a downward thrust with their hand which suddenly sends the countless of needles of Wind to rain down upon the opponent, covering short range in diameter, making them deadly. Due to the fact that they're made out of wind and very thin, the opponent wouldn't be able to see them properly.

    Notes: Can only be taught by Ezio..
    Notes: Only usable twice per battle
    Notes: No Wind jutsu higher than S-rank, next turn.


    ♠ Declined ♠
    I generally have no issue with the concept, but you either gotta make it up to mid range and somehow make the jutsu detectable by the enemy opponent or this would be too OP.


    (Raiton: Nechinechi Tekidan) Lightning Release: Sticky Grenades
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing two hand seals, once done he uses shape manipulation to change Lightning Chakra into the form of 5-10 tiny birds, which resemble the appearance of Deidara's explosive clay birds, the user then provides it with static properties. Upon finishing the steps above, he then throws them at the opponent with excellent precision and upon contact due to the static nature of the birds, it sticks to them and causes a short range explosion.

    Notes: Can only be taught by Ezio..
    Notes: Only usable twice per battle
    Notes: No Lightning jutsu higher than A-rank, next turn.

    ♠ Approved ♠
    Edited a few things.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by KeotsuEclipse View Post
    Decision:If Agrias get's approved, she'll be replacing Waka; meaning if Agrias gets approved, I'll be dropping him.

    I hold and created the Columbidae Contract.

    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose:Aguriasu Ōkusu) Columbidae Summon: Agrias Oaks
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon. In her dove form, she appears as a regular size dove with yellow plumage. Her only ability in this form is the ability to summon other Columbidae at their normal summoning cost, by trilling a tune specific to each summon; conversely, she can be summoned through use of a piece of special reed grass that grows only in Eden, the realm where the Columbidae reside – using this grass allows her to be summoned at a regular chakra cost, but bypasses summoning ninjutsu, by using chakra to activate the glyphs found inscribed upon the wheat when a tune is blown on it; in essence, Agrias is summoning herself to the Summoner, but using their chakra for the job. As a Human, Agrias is a stunning young woman of 20 years old with long, golden hair that comes down to her hips and amber eyes; she keeps her hair tied back in one large braid, though. She wears a navy trench cloak and a pair of leather breaches, boots, and gauntlets, as well as wearing a steel breastplate, and her personal sword, Save the Queen; she also speaks with a slightly Old-English dialect. In human form, she is capable of using any Kenjutsu or Taijutsu that the summoner can use, and is also treated as the same rank (HP and Chakra). As a human, she also gains access to a personal Kenjutsu technique known as “Divine Ruination”, an S-rank technique that fires a helix-shaped shockwave at the enemy (described below).[/B]
    *Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon, and thus remains on the field indefinitely when summoned by him. When summoned by others, she remains for four turns.
    *Save the Queen can only wielded by Agrias and Columbidae Contract signers; the sword itself is indestructible, but has no special powers.
    *Though Agrias has her own Health and Chakra pools, her moves still count towards the summoner’s 3 moves per turn.
    *Divine Ruination is a double helix (DNA) shaped, blue shockwave. The shockwave itself does no damage, but when it comes into contact with an object, causes a cross-shaped explosion to occur from within the object - this is the damaging aspect of the attack. When used by Agrias, it is treated as a justu with S-rank power and chakra cost; it can be used by the summoner as well, if they have a sword, but only while Agrias is in play. It reaches up to Mid-range before disappearing.
    *Transforming to/from Avian/Human form costs 30 chakra to Agrias and counts as a move.
    *Though she can perform Columbidae Summoning Techniques while in Avian form, Agrias is treated as a “Samurai” in human form.
    *Agrias in Human form:


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Yeah, you can't drop customs. You can only update them. This is not an update.
    In that case, I'll make her, her own summon.

    I hold and created the Columbidae Contract.

    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose:Aguriasu Ōkusu) Columbidae Summon: Agrias Oaks
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Agrias is the guardian of the Columbidae Contarct. In her dove form, she appears as a regular size dove with yellow plumage. Her only ability in this form is that she can be summoned through use of a piece of special reed grass that grows only in Eden, the realm where the Columbidae reside – using this grass allows her to be summoned at a regular chakra cost, but bypasses summoning ninjutsu, by using chakra to activate the glyphs found inscribed upon the wheat when a tune is blown on it; in essence, Agrias is summoning herself to the Summoner, but using their chakra for the job. As a Human, Agrias is a stunning young woman of 20 years old with long, golden hair that comes down to her hips and amber eyes; she keeps her hair tied back in one large braid, though. She wears a navy trench cloak and a pair of leather breaches, boots, and gauntlets, as well as wearing a steel breastplate, and her personal sword, Save the Queen; she also speaks with a slightly Old-English dialect. In human form, she is capable of using any Kenjutsu and Taijutsu that the summoner can use. As a human, she also gains access to a personal Kenjutsu technique known as “Divine Ruination”, an S-rank technique that fires a helix-shaped shockwave at the enemy (described below).
    *Save the Queen can only wielded by Agrias and Columbidae Contract signers; the sword itself is indestructible, but has no special powers.
    *Though Agrias has her own Health and Chakra pools, her moves still count towards the summoner’s 3 moves per turn.
    *Divine Ruination is a double helix (DNA) shaped, blue shockwave that causes a cross-shaped explosion to occur on impact. When used by Agrias, it is treated as a justu with S-rank power and chakra cost. It reaches up to Mid-range before disappearing and can only be used 3 times.
    *Transforming to/from Avian/Human form costs 30 chakra to Agrias and counts as a move and she is always summoned in Avian form.
    *Can only be summoned once and lasts for 4 turns.
    *Agrias in Human form:


    ♠ Pending ♠
    Leaving for Scorps/Xylon. More like the nature of the contract confuzzles me.


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    ±± Approved ±±
    Had to tweak and edit the restrictions and abilities a lot. Be reasonable please.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton - Kozumikku Haro | Lightning Release – Cosmic Halo
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing the handseals, Tiger-Dragon-Ox. Once performed the user channels a large amount of their lighting chakra to both their hands. The users hands begins to glow due to the large amount of chakra based in the hands of the user. By manipulating the chakra the user creates a large circle of electricity that floats above the user. The circle has a diameter of three meters, making it big enough to encircle a average sized human. The user waves his hand towards the opponent causing the circle of electricity to fly across towards the opponent. As the circle is traveling towards the opponent, the user causes the the circle to rise up above the user. Once above the user, the circle of electricity lowers and becomes smaller in size trapping and electrocuting the opponent.



    Note:
    - Can only be used twice per battle
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-


    ♠ Declined ♠
    Need to clear a few things here. Approximately how fast does it travel, and how long does it paralyze for?


    Raiton - Oni Kiri | Lightning Release – Demon Ray
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user begins by charging a large amount of lighting chakra in their index finger. The users finger begins to glow due to the large amount of chakra based their. Once ready the user fires two beams of lightning towards the opponent. One beam of lightning travels towards the opponent while the other one coils itself around the first one. This gives the attack a more drilling effect than the normal piercing attack.

    Note:
    - Can only be used twice per battle
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Concept overused.


    Doton - Ingo Shuushi | Earth Release Release – Can't stop
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing the handseals Dragon-Boar, while channeling his earth chakra into the ground. The user creates a large hamster wheel made from earth that forms around the opponent. The user manipulates the wheel to spin rapidly, causing the opponent to run along with the wheel. The wheel is roughly five meters in diameter and thirty centimeters thick. Unlike most hamster wheels, this wheel has earth bars on each side that is five centimeters wide apart from each other. Allowing the user to keep an eye on the enemy. The user has the ability to create several spikes to be formed from inside the wheel, skewing the opponent.

    Note:
    Can only be used twice in a battle
    Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Herushinsei Hebi) Fire Release: Nova blast of the Hell Serpent
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user will focus a large amount of Katon Chakra into their hand in a near instantaneous speed resulting in a high build up in the fastest possible time. The user will then punch their hand forward releasing this high amount of Chakra as a constrained blast of fire that is releases like a flame thrower. This fire will take form an a Giant Eel that rivals the size of a large summon. This Eel can then be directed at a target where it will smash into it with extreme burning and crushing force before expelling out leaving the surrounding area in flames. Because of the sudden build-up of Katon Chakra in the opponents hand, it will be burnt to such a degree that during the attack it will turn black and after the attack the hand will crumble away as ash leaving the user with only one good hand. On top of the overall usage of chakra, the user will cause a slight strain to his Katon Chakra supply making him unable to use powerful Katon for awhile.
    Note:
    -Can only be used one time per battle
    -No Katon Above A-ranked Next 3 turns.
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

    ♠ Approved ♠
    You really want to be left with one hand?


    (Genjutsu: Nendai) Illusion Technique: Age
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (80 psychological damage)
    Description: The user will make the fallowing handseals, Ram-Tiger-Snake, placing their opponents in a Genjutsu. In this Genjutsu the opponents will find themselves bound by thin yet strong wire where they are faced with a Mirror looking upon themselves in a dark abyss. They will then begin to feel time pass as they feel there hair and nails grow at an accelerated rate. In the Mirror the effects will be shown as they Age from young to old to dust. The overall effect of this Genjutsu happens fast and thous releases the targets in a few seconds. The key to this Genjutsu is to tire the opponents mind out quickly by tricking it's sub systems into believing a long time has passed, even if the targets know its a Genjutsu. By tiring the opponents mind there movements and reflexes take a plunge by half by causing overall exhaustion.
    Note:
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Requires a 3 turn cool down
    -Exhaustion last 3 turns
    -No Genjutsu next turn.
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

    ♠ Pending ♠
    Leaving for Scorps/Xylon.


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Why would seeing oneself in the mirror aging be something bad? I don't get where this is offensive or useful in nature.

    (Suiton: Jinzouningen) Water Release: Prone
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will make a single handseal forming a basic Dome of water around them that is able to block incoming techniques of the appropriate rank. The dome is able to be maintained so after blocking the attack, the user will form another handseal causing the water to explode outward forming small hair like needle of dense water in all directions. These Needles cannot penetrate targets of greater density.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Requires a 2 turn cool down
    -Requires a water source
    -If maintained, the user spends another move.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    ♠ Approved ♠
     
         
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    (Suiton: katana mizu kadou no jutsu) -water style: sword water vortex
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Mid-Long range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user pulls out his sword and focuses his/her chakra through it then levitates and spins it in front of him, the user then form ox-ram-tiger hand seals and then grabs the sword while the blade points towards the ground, focusing his chakra through the sword, the use will then release a strong wave of vortex of water at his target, the vortex of water has tiny water blades in it, allowing it to cut up the target, if the target is caught in the water vortex.(due to the spinning of the sword that’s how the vortex is created, and it being a blade also make the tiny water blades in it)
    NOTES
    - The water vortex is 5meters wide and can reach up to 25meters long.
    -can only be taught by neilson
    -can be used any time, but 1 turn cool down between each use

    (suiton: asshuku mizu metsubou)- Water style: pressured water destruction
    Type: offensive
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: the user will build his water chakra and focus it to his dominant hand, using the recessive hand as a support, the user will then release and charge the chakra in his dominant hand, making it look like a big bubble or an ord(this is to pressurize the water) then the bubble will break apart releasing a wide pressured stream of destructive water at his/her target, the water is so destructive that it can break the through earth.
    NOTES
    - the user must be s class
    -the user must have water as a specialty in his/her bio
    -can only be used twice in a battle

    ♠ Both declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    (Katon: Okibi kobushi) - Fire Style: Blazing Fire Fist
    Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user jumps into the air and channels fire chakra into his fist.As he lands the user slams his fist against the ground releasing the gathered fire chakra in the form of flames in a circle hitting all the enemys in the area
    Note:
    Can only be taught by -Reaper-
    Can only be used three times per batle

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too generic and overused.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal: Squids
    Scroll Owner: Kensei muguruma
    Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:*
    Description and Background:
    See also: Giant squid, Colossal squid, and Cephalopod size
    The majority are no more than 60 cm (24 in) long, although the giant squid may reach 13 metres (43 ft).
    In 1978, sharp, curved claws on the suction cups of squid tentacles cut up the rubber coating on the hull of the USS Stein. The size suggested the largest squid known at the time.
    In 2003, a large specimen of an abundant but poorly understood species, Mesonychoteuthis hamiltoni (the colossal squid), was discovered. This species may grow to 14 m (46 ft) in length, making it the largest invertebrate. Squid have the largest eyes in the animal kingdom. The kraken is a legendary tentacled monster possibly based on sightings of real giant squid.
    In February 2007, a New Zealand fishing vessel caught a colossal squid weighing 495 kg (1,090 lb) and measuring around 10 m (33 ft) off the coast of Antarctica. This specimen represents the largest cephalopod to ever be scientifically documented.



    tattoo of the contract will recieve the squid mark.
    http://www.google.ca/search?q=squid+...869Nbl2969M%3A

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Squids are cannon animals with a connection to Kumogakure. If they are summons or not to the ninja seen comunicating with it, its uncertain. Still its enough not to approve it. DNR.
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    Kuchiyose no Jutsu:issen heika Ika| Summoning Technique: 1000 arms of squid
    Rank: B Rank
    Type: Summoning
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: 200 mini squids about 1foot in length each are summoned to the field and attach onto the enemy leaving him motionless for up to 8 seconds from chakra absorption by the squids which have chakra suction cups on their tentacles which drain chakra keeping the enemy from moving.
    * chakra abortion hold only lasts for 8 seconds.
    *Must have signed Squid contract to summon
    *Can only be summoned twice per battle
    *Must wait 2 turns before summoning again


    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Contract was not approved.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Time Wizard's Staff
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The Time Wizard's Staff is a 2 meter long staff found years ago by the user. The handle is a light blue with a gold spike at the bottom and at the top is a small red, blue and gold clock. The strange material that forged the staff ages ago is indestructible, has shown no signs of rust or decay and appears to be some kind of non-magnetic metallic alloy as Magnetic ninja have attempted to magnetize it and failed. Despite its strange coloring and simple design the staff posses a unique power, when held in a proper wielder's hand the staff is able to be used as a medium for a powerful Genjutsu, the hands of the clock spin and when they stop any enemies that the user inserts his chakra into is induced into an illusion where time rapidly speeds up around them and their bodies age 100 years in a matter of seconds. After years of using the weapon the user was able to control his flow of chakra through the weapon to be able to cast his own genjutsu through the staff as well not only the staff's unique illusion, however at the cost of spending extra energy to cast the same illusions he would normally be able to perform with hand seals. When casting other Genjutsu the face of the clock flashes red and blue.
    If a person who has not been accepted by the staff touches it they will be placed in an S rank illusion where their entire body ages rapidly and their body dissolves into dust in a matter of seconds rendering them unconscious, even if it's chakra is initially rejected it will continue to pour chakra into the enemy body until either the illusion sets in or the constant flow of foreign chakra destroys all of the tenketsu in their arm.
    -Can only be held by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only use the Time Genjutsu once per battle. Genjutsu is A rank, lasts 3 turns and counts as one of the user's jutsu use.
    -Can't cast any Genjutsu for 2 turns after using Time Genjutsu
    -Time Genjutsu reduces the enemy's taijutsu ability to C ranks and cuts their hand seal and running speeds in half.
    -Other Genjutsu used through this weapon costs an additional 20 chakra to use but maintains the same rank of power.
    -Must be holding the staff to cast any Genjutsu with it.

    pic for reference, the staff he's holding but longer


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    DNR.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Sun Wukong Hebereke ) - Summoning Technique: Wukong the Drunk
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the 5 great Monkey warriors that serve under Monkey King Enma, Wukong is 2 meters tall, wears a sake-stained white shirt and a blue sleeveless Haori over it with his name written on the back and white pants. Under his clothing Wukong's body is covered in brown fur. Wukong carries a jug of Sake and his black steel Bo with him at all times.
    Wukong is a close combat expert with speed that matches Enma however he lacks the same raw strength as Enma due to his lack of training as he is more often then not, drunk. Due to his near constant state of intoxication he has become a natural in the drunken monkey style as well as being very proficient with his Bo.
    Twice per battle Wukong is able to infuse his Bo with chakra and strike an attack or enemy with it, discharging the chakra into the target and causing great damage from a blunt chakra discharge that shatters Earth techniques up to A rank and cause bone shattering damage to a human body.
    His speed is comparable to a Sage Ranked Taijutsu master and his strength is easily comparable to that of the 4th Raikage without his Lightning Armor, Wukong is capable of using Taijutsu techniques, mostly those from Strong Fist and not taking damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu attacks C-Rank and below.
    -Requires monkey contract.
    -Chakra strike counts as a move and can only be used twice per battle.
    -Can only be summoned once and lasts 4 turns

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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Chen Ishi) - Summoning Technique: Chen the Stone
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the 5 great Monkey warriors that serve under Monkey King Enma, Chen is 2 meters tall, wears black and green armor similar to a samurai including the helmet (without a face mask) and a green haori over it with his name written on the back. Chen also wields a black steel Sasumata in one or both hands with great skill. Under his armor his body is covered in brown fur. Chen is the Monkey warrior with the greatest Defense next to Monkey King Enma's indestructible staff form, being able to use Earth Release to harden his body to the levels of steel which gives him a B rank defense while active. His special training has given him equal strength to that of even Monkey King Enma however at a loss of his speed. His speed is comparable to a Sannin Ranked Taijutsu master but his strength is easily comparable to that of Hashirama with chakra enhanced strength.
    Chen is capable of using Taijutsu techniques, mostly those from Strong Fist and is immune to taking damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu attacks C-Rank and below (B rank and below while in his hardened state). Like Enma, Chen is able to transform into a specialized weapon in the form of a black bodysuit that covers the user's limbs up to the ankles/wrists and their torso up to the neck, in this form his defensive powers surpass their previous levels and can defend from up to A rank attacks to the user's body within reason.
    -Requires monkey contract.
    -Transformation counts as a move.
    -Can only be summoned once.

    (have 2 more monkeys to submit as a set next week. Sarutobi bio approved here for proof of Monkey contract:http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=330707)

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    Suit part is unreasonable. If i approve this you can become imaune to -A-Rank attacks for the rest of the match once you summon him. Ridiculous. Next time i'll dNR directly.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Hijutsu: Yōso Seigyo | Hidden Technique: Elemental Kinesis
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The user will use his chakra and hand gestures to move inert elements around him. Basically, the user is able to move any manifestation of the basic five elements as long as they don't have chakra above B-Rank in them. This means that the user can move water, earth, air, lightning or fire as long as it not part of an active technique A-rank or above. He cannot produce more of the element or alter is basic properties or form nor can he affect active techniques A-Rank and above. However, while it may seem like a simple technique with little practical use, it gives the user a great variety of supplementary uses and applications. He gains a multitude of defensive applications of all elements and also the ability to produce simple yet versatile attacks.
    Note: Can only be used on the aforementioned manifestations of the basic 5 elements
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle
    Note: Control over the element requires chakra to be expended each turn to maintain as well as focus and concentration
    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    ||Declined|| Been done in many ways, in different forms. This pretty much complies them all into a bending-esque technique, so it's a no go.

    Ninpou Hijutsu: Mazu Tsumibito | Hidden Ninja Art: The First Sinner
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will use hand gestures to infuse a patch of solid earth or rock with a given elemental chakra. Upon doing so, the material will fragment and rise into the form of a protector, with the fragments of its body connected to each other by a raw form of the element used. The material used is nothing but a vessel for the chakra infused in it and makes up the body of the guardian and its main form. The various clumps of the material will be engraved in several kanji markings, reminiscent of a fuuinjutsu technique, that will serve as the chakra's path way. The clumps will then be lifted, seamlessly held together in the raw humanoid form of the guardian by the chakra used. Depending on the chakra used, the guardian will have different attributes and abilities, but will always be about the same size, namely, twice as big as a normal human. The guardian floats above ground (between 10 and 20 cms) and lacks real lower limbs but does have rudimentary hands and facial features, carved upon the rock that makes up his head. The guardian can use techniques the user knows of its elemental chakra up to S-Rank without handseals (his rudimentary hands are used to substitute the handseals with simple hand gestures). The guardian cannot speak but its chakra link with the user allows a hidden form of instant communication between the user and the guardian. The guardian is a sentient entity, capable of acting on its own but, due to its elemental composition, cannot be mentally or sensorily manipulated. Likewise, if the user loses conscious or the ability to sustain the guardian, it will collapse on the ground.

    Kaminari Tsumibito (Thunder Sinner): This guardian is produced using lightning chakra to infuse the rocks. Capable of using lightning techniques, it passively numbs and zaps (harmlessly) any enemy nearby due to the lightning chakra that keeps the clumps together. Once per battle, the user can either detonate the Tsumibito, producing an S-Rank lightning blast, short range in radius or make the Tsumibito collapse upon itself, attracting any small metal object the enemy may possess or that happens to be in the battle field, up to mid range upon itself (kunais, shurikens, senbons, etc).

    Kazan Tsumibito (Volcano Sinner): This guardian is produced using fire chakra to infuse the rocks. Capable of using fire techniques, it burns any enemy on contact and is immune to basic weapons (shuriken, kunais, etc) which simply melt upon contact with it. Once per battle the user can detonate the Tsumibito producing an S-Rank Fire blast, mid range in radius, that will scatter countless molten earth debris.

    Arashi Tsumibito (Storm Sinner): This guardian is produced using wind chakra to infuse the rocks. Capable of using wind techniques, it has the unique ability to fly. Its flight abilities are strong enough to carry the user while easily out maneuvering most flying summons of his size. Due to the aura of wind that surrounds him and enables flight, its completely immune to Lightning techniques but very vulnerable to Fire techniques. Once per battle the user can make the Tsumibito collapse upon itself, effectively creating a miniature S-Rank "wind hole", sucking anything short-range from its center into it and crushing/shredding it in the process.

    Jishin Tsumibito (Earthquake Sinner): This guardian is produced using earth chakra to infuse the rocks. Capable of using earth techniques, it has the unique ability to reform if hit by any technique apart from Lightning or Lava, while being immune to Water techniques. Once per battle the user can make the Tsumibito merge with the earth, negating its use by both the user and any enemy for 3 turns.

    Umi Tsumibito (Sea Sinner): This guardian is produced using water chakra to infuse the rocks. Capable of using water techniques without the need for a water source, its completely immune to Fire or otherwise, high temperature related Techniques. Once per battle the user can siphon any and every heat or fire from the battle field on to the Tsumibito, negating it completely.

    Note: Usable 3 times per match, with each Tsumibito being used only once per match.
    Note: Each Tsumibito can only be sustained for 5 turns.
    Note: The ultimate ability of each Tsumibito results in its destruction.
    Note: The user cannot mold techniques above A-Rank of the element he used for the Tsumibito on the same turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps.

    This is based upon The Elder Scrolls: Skyrim's Storm Atronach:

    ||Approved||
     
         
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    (Kekkai: Yajuu Kouchi Hou) - Barrier: Beast Confinement Method
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user will perform a row of six hand seals, creating a parallelepiped barrier all around him and the area up to mid range. To the naked eye, the barrier seems to be cubical, however, that is only because half of it is above the ground, being the other half beneath it.
    This barrier is used to trap the user and the opponent and confine them to a determined area, conditioning the opponent and giving the user an advantage, in the way that his opponent can't get away easily. This is a self regenerative barrier, meaning it is constantly ''feeding'' on the user's chakra to keep it functioning correctly, meaning in the case a wall is destroyed, it will immediately regenerate itself (+20 chakra each time this happens). Due to this, in order for an effective escape, the opponent must destroy at least three walls at once, which is not an easy task, since each wall must get hit by at least an S-rank technique, however, may this happen, the wall will be completely destroyed, with no chance of being repaired. One other way to destroy a wall is to hit it with a single A-rank technique, with enough piercing power, which can cause enough pressure on a single point of the wall.
    - Usable twice per battle
    - Lasts until destroyed
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: Kage no jiko o ukeire) Illusionary Arts: Embracing The Shadow Self
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will open his palm towards the opponent. The opponent's vision will become life a negative (seeing everything in a blue perspective, with wight eyes and hair). Then, he will realize all the parts of his personality he has been denying, all the parts of himself he has locked away, from fear or from shame, in other words, his shadow (which, in psychology, is the term to describe a person's hidden desires). This will paralyze the target for the rest of the turn. If however the opponent has not been defeated by the end of the turn, his speed and strength will go one rank higher, due to the deep focus he will obtain from the realization, for the next 2 turns. If used on shinobi 2 ranks or lower of the user, they will faint by the end of the turn.
    -Cannot use more than once on the same target, as after their realizations, they will have no more "shadow personality" (for the rest of the battle), and will be immune to this genjutsu.
    -Can be used on self, by performing a face-palm.
    -The target must see the palm of the user to start the genjutsu. If however he does not, the genjutsu will be casted uncompleted, and the target will still get the negative vision effect, which will affect his ability to react, and will confuse him for one turn. During this turn, his reflexes and ability to respond will be diminished.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR.

    (Genjutsu: Batsu Gōmon) Illusionary Arts: Penalty Torture
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (due to feeling pain) (40 to user)
    Description: With this genjutsu, the user will send chakra to his opponent's body, which will amplify the pain the user feels at the moment he uses the genjutsu, and make the user feel twice that pain. In the opponent's perspective, he will see red lighting emerging from his body, which will stimulate all of his pain receptors. However, this genjutsu has a major drawback: At the moment casted, the user must feel a zenith of pain. This can be done by stabbing himself on a nerve, or by receiving an opponent's attack. The pain from the jutsu will overwhelm the opponent, and will drive him crazy by the end of the next turn, unless dispelled.
    -The opponent must be up to 2 meters from the user
    -Cannot use unless in great pain.
    -Can only use once per battle.
    -Must be at least Kage level to use

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Nothing new here.

    (Mukuro no Mitsumata) Corpse's Trident
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20 (to summon to the hand)
    Damage: 40
    Description: Although it's name suggests otherwise, this weapon is actually a Sai. The metal's properties resonate when genjutsu chankra is focused on it, and will make any genjutsu channeled from it one rank higher. Short range genjutsu can also be focused to the metal, and will be released to the enemy upon contact with the sai.
    -To strengthen the rank of a genjutsu, the weapon must have direct contact with the user.
    -To summon it, the user will make the half tiger hand seal with his left hand, wile he will have a trident tatoo on his right hand. The Sai will appear in his right hand.
    -Summoning the Sai counts as a move of the 3 moves per turn.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Don't be silly. We're not blind.
     
         
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    (Sono Sutago, Cepheus) | The Five Stars, Cepheus
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A (+10 to Rain techniques, -10 to Fire techniques)
    Description: Cepheus is a unique Kusarigama that was crafted by a legendary weapons smith in Amegakure during Hanzo the Salamander's reign. The forger created the weapon as a gift to Hanzo as a symbol of respect and obedience. It was created using a rare and powerful metallic alloy known only to this legendary weapons smith. The sharpness of the sickle is unrivaled and the metal is incredibly strong rendering the weapon indestructible. The most unique feature of the kusarigama is that rather than having a single weight and chain attached to the sickle, it has five chains each with a spiked weight at the end. These weights represent the five stars of the Cepheus constellation which is named after the Greek King Cepheus. By creating this weapon for Hanzo to represent the constellation the weapons smith was showing his recognition of Hanzo as his King. At the beginning of the chains near the handle of the sickle are specialized chain links that are circular rather than ovular. These are made to fit onto the fingers of the wielder's hand. The rings allow each chain and weight to be manipulated by a single finger letting the wielder manipulate all five weights at the same time and independent of each other. The level of difficulty in using the weapon is high and requires someone experienced in kusarigama-jutsu to wield effectively. The sickle portion is fairly large and well crafted, but not much different in style or size than the sickle seen on Hanzo's standard kusarigama. A final feature of the weapon was that the weapons smith imbued it with chakra from the Great White Salamander, Talaya. The strong chakra empowers the wielder by increasing the effectiveness of their rain techniques. While rain techniques are enhanced, fire techniques are inversely weakened. A final feature of the weapon is that due to the imbued salamander chakra, when a person who hasn't signed the Salamander contract tries to hold it, a slime is excreted from the weapon causing it to slip out of that person's hands.
    -Can only be wielded by a person who has signed the Salamander contract.
    -User gains 10 damage to rain techniques.
    -User loses 10 damage to fire techniques.
    -Indestructible, but can't cut through everything.

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    No more damage boosting weapons. Find something unique to submit.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Talaya) | Summoning Technique: Talaya
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Considered to be the creator of Amegakure's rain style, Talaya is one of the most powerful salamanders known. She is considered a matriarch by other salamanders and is one of the three great salamander warriors along with Kasei and Ibuse. Her calm and cooling nature has made her one of the few beings capable of controlling Kasei's temper. She is a benevolent white salamander of similar size to Ibuse and has an elemental affinity for water. Talaya's body constantly channels water chakra into the sky causing a constant rain storm in a large area around her that covers the battlefield. She is able to use all the rain techniques up to S-rank and has one unique S-ranked attack in which she causes the rain over the opponent to take the form of a giant salamander which crashes down on the target with its mouth open, swallowing them in a torrent of rain water. This can be used twice per battle and counts towards the three move set. Like Ibuse, and other salamanders, she is capable of tunneling through the ground.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Rain storm covers the battlefield and remains as long as Talaya is on the field.
    -Rain techniques count towards one of the three moves per turns.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Axol-chan) | Summoning Technique: Axol-chan
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Axol is the oldest known salamander and one of the elders. He has a very unique appearance due to being a species of salamander called Axolotl. His size is very small compared to others reaching the length of an average man's forearm with a white body. Due to Axolotls usually living in aquatic environments they possess external gills that appear as feathery pink extensions from just behind their heads. While these are generally used to increase oxygen intake in water, Axol has developed the ability to sense chakra with them using them as antennae to pick up chakra signals. Once summoned he latches on to the summoner's back and communicates via speech.
    -Can be summoned twice per battle.
    -Remains on the field for three turns per summoning.

    Note: I was allowed to resubmit theses by Typhon.

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    Link to summoning contract?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Cleopatra (Summoning Technique: Cleopatra)
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Cleopatra is one of the Goddesses of the Caracals. She is praised as one of the most beautiful and stunning caracals as well as one of the most deceitful and dangerous. In her domain within the Caracal Sanctuary she rules with an iron fist, charm, and deception. Upon being summoned, Cleopatra will appear as an averaged sized female caracal with jet black fur and emerald green eyes. If transformed into a human, Cleopatra appears as a fair skinned beautiful woman with straight silky black hair, garbed in a regal white dress, with green eyes and eye shadow, resembling that of the queen she's name after. In order to summon Cleopatra, the user must first draw blood and create the Tiger → Bird → Snake seals. The symbol of Cleopatra is her cobra diadem that is warped around her head upon being summoned.

    Cleopatra possess a possess a unique collaboration technique that allows her to share her sensory abilities with her summoner. After being summoned, the shinobi summoner will make the tiger hand seal while Cleopatra transforms, taking the shape of the of a black Pharaoh's headdress with a golden snake charm around the forehead. Atop the user's head, Cleopatra uses her unique chakra transference technique, which will allow for her to share her powers of chakra sensory with her summoner. However, there is a sizable draw back for this technique. In order to borrow the powers of Cleopatrata, the summoner must pay tribute with his own chakra for as long as she remains passing chakra into him.
    ~Cleopatra being a Goddess is one of the stronger Caracal summons. Her chakra is half that of a Kage (700).
    ~When not using her special technique, Cleopatra can cast A-ranked genjutsu 3 times per battle.
    ~When combined with her summoner, Cleopatra cannot use any other techniques.
    ~For every turn combined with her summoner, the summoner pays tribute to Cleopatra with 15 of his own chakra.
    ~When Combined with Cleopatra, the summoner gains the ability to sense chakra.
    ~The summoner and Cleopatra can only stay united for a total of 5 turns, by which time Cleopatra will be disperse from the field completely. If she is not combined with the user, she remains on the field until she has exhausted 80% of her chakra capacity, by which time she will disperse from the field to rest.
    ~The collaboration technique can be dispersed at will before the 5 turns, however, once disconnected, the user summoner will feel drained and energy and weakened due to the effects of the chakra draining. The level of fatigue felt by the summoner is dependent on the time spent combined. They will feel more offset from a full usage of the technique than say one turn. However, this collaboration technique can only be used once per battle. As well, the user cannot use techniques above S-ranked or genjutsu above A-ranked after this technique for the same amount of time as they were converged with Cleopatra.

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    (Mira-Kitsuen) | The Smoking Mirror
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A (-10 per turn for special ability)
    Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke techniques)
    Description: The Smoking Mirror or Obsidian Mirror is a legendary item from Jaguar lore that was a personal item of the Jaguar God, Tezcatlipoca. It consists of a wooden handle that's roughly a foot long attached to an ovular golden frame. Inside the golden frame is a finely crafted black obsidian mirror. When chakra is applied to the mirror the golden frame appears to separate and the mirror floats between the two golden halves while emitting a dense black smoke. The ability to emit smoke allows the user to create smoke techniques through it, increasing their strength in the process. After the mirror is used for a technique it requires a turn to replenish itself. The user can also activate a special ability of the mirror in which it constantly produces a thick black smoke that fills the battlefield for four turns. Since the smoke is created through the user's chakra they're able to sense anything caught within the smoke. Other than its special smoke abilities, it can function as a sturdy war club, though other more standard weapons are better suited for direct physical combat.
    -Can only be wielded by someone capable of summoning Tezcatlipoca.
    -Weapon is indestructible, though it can't break everything.
    -Requires a turn after being used to replenish itself.
    -Special ability can only be used once per battle and lasts four turns.
    -All techniques used through the mirror (including special ability) count as a move in the user's move set.
    With:

    (Sethaka) - Set's Tomb
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: While the desert sands surrounding Sunagakure provide Gaara with a limitless supply of sand, not every battlefield provides him this luxury. Seeking to prepare himself for a sand-less terrain, Gaara created a new gourd which would act as his own portable desert. To do this he created a gourd not unlike the one in which he normally carried. It was similar in size, color and shape, but differed in one important way. Three seals were painted on to the gourd, one on each of the sides save for the side facing Gaara's back. These seals read "Sahara", "Namib" and "Atacama". When activated they glow red and release sand into the gourd providing Gaara with an endless supply. Only one of these seals can be activated at a time, but the sand summoned forth from each seal carries unique characteristics:

    Atacama - The sand from Atacama is rumored to be the driest sand in the world. The sand is infused with earth chakra which acts as a double edged sword. It prevents the sand from becoming wet, but at the same time it increases its vulnerability to lightning. This gives it a double strength against water techniques, but a double weakness against lightning.

    Sahara - The sands from the Sahara are larger in grain size than typical deserts. This gives sand techniques used when wielding this sand a much stronger punch as well as giving defensive techniques more durability. Sand techniques used with this source gain a +10 damage boost, but due to the size of the sand grains its also heavier and slower making techniques move half as fast (when used with Shield of Sand, the speed the sand can keep up with is halved, though it can defend against A-rank taijutsu techniques).

    Namib - This sand was taken from what is said to be the oldest desert in the world. As such, time has worn this sand down to very fine particles making it light and easy to manipulate. This allows the sand to move faster at twice its normal speed making it even more difficult to avoid, though the fine grain of the sand makes it more capable of soaking up water and becoming weighed down (when used with Shield of Sand, the speed the sand can keep up with is doubled).

    In order to alternate between seals, Gaara must first deactivate any currently active seal. When this is done, the sand that had been released by the previous seal is drawn back into Gaara's gourd and sealed away, preventing him from mixing the sands of the different sources.

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    (Suna no Jutsu: Sabakuarashi) - Sand Technique: Desert Storm
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user lifts their arms to the sky and raises a massive amount of sand into the air. Well above the battlefield the sand forms into large clouds that suspend themselves in the sky. The solid nature of the sand blots out the sun creating shade over the battlefield as "raindrops" of sand begin to fall from the clouds all over the battlefield. Since the sand is solid compared to rain which is liquid, this can be quite the distraction to those not accustomed to it. But its true purpose lies in the user's ability to use this sand as a starting point for their sand techniques, given the range is correct. When the rain storm ends the battlefield is covered in a five inch layer of sand.
    -Lasts for four turns.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Requires a large amount of sand.

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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tankumo) - Summoning Technique: Tankumo
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user preforms the standard summoning technique and calls forth Tankumo of the Tanuki. His stands taller than most Tanuki, almost a head taller than an average man and is generally pleasant and care-free. Like most Tanuki he has quite the stomach, but he keeps it hidden underneath a red kimono that's held by a yellow sash. Tankumo carries a small gourd of saki and wears an abnormally large and broad leaf on his head in place of a rice hat. This leaf doubles as a folding fan which he uses to create wind techniques in battle. He has a unique transformation technique in which he turns his body into a larger version of his leaf which the user can wield as a folding fan.
    -Can use wind up to A-rank.
    -All techniques count as a move in the user's turn.
    -Lasts four turns once summoned.
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    Link to approved contract: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...1#post10532317

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    3 out of 3. Well done!
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-19-2013 at 06:49 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ±± New Cycle and Notice ±±

    Ok, new cycle of 7 days where you can submit 3 techniques. The cycle ends on the 11th of April.


    Now, I will put these reminds as directly as I can:

    -Just because we don't post a marker doesn't mean that you can post techniques. We might be busy or we might be doing it on purpose to buy some time to check the tread.

    -This brings me to the new issue: summons. Use the search button on this thread and the archived one to see if someone has submitted your contract. The amount of invalid and senseless submissions is truly stupid. Its a waste of your time and ours.

    -Don't rip of techniques. One thing is a similar technique and that is normal when there are 4 years of customs approved already. Another is a completely identical submission. If the issue is kept, punishments will be issued.

    Also, on the 11th of April, the thread will be closed for checking. I didn't close it right now because I want to give everyone a chance to not only edit their submissions if they need to but also to post up to 3 more.

    Thank you!
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Rikiddo Saifon No Jutsu) Water Release: Liquid Siphoning Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    This technique enables the user to draw water from any living surroundings such as trees, leaves, flowers, etc until they wither and die and the resulting water is usually formed into a compact sphere. Due to their cellular structure and no chakra control, plants and fungi are more suited to use this jutsu than other living creature such as animals and humans, who can interrupt the technique with their chakra flow. This technique is usually used to create a source of water in which to use some Water Release Techniques in a small radius, though it can be used on a massive scale to clear landscapes and get opponents out of hiding provided the user is greatly skilled.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to an old custom. DNR.
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    (Meiton: Burakku Ousho) Dark Release: Black Hollow
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40 (+15 if used at point blank range)
    Description:
    Dark Release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemy technique. The user shall thrust their arm in front of themselves, aiming at their target. The user will then release all of the absorbed chakra along with their own dark chakra from the bottom diamond on his hand the dark chakra will travel towards at the opponent, creating a giant blast of black chakra. Even though it is powerful from long and mid-range, it's much more devastating when the user is point blank from the opponent.
    Notes:
    - Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use of this technique.
    - Can only be used twice per-match.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    How is this different from Judgement?
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    (Genjutsu: Mesu-ka) Illusionary Arts: Under the Knife
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will make a single hand seal locking them within a Genjutsu. A torrent of leaves covers up the users body giving him a moment to leave the scene so that the Genjutsu is not ruined. Following that a fake of the user appears, and places his fingers through the head of the opponent. When it seems the user has reached the brain the target watches everything turn pitch black, simulating unconsciousness. A moment later the target will find themselves strapped down onto an operating table while the user operates on their body. The user feels the stimulus of pain from medical procedures without any sort of numbing before hand.
    Notes:
    - Can only be used once per-match.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.

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    This ended up as a mish mash of existing genjutsu. Like the operating part.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-10-2013 at 09:58 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fuuton/Suiton: Kemono Kiri) | Wind Release/Water Release: Feral Mist
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user channels water chakra all throughout their body, forcefully expelling an incredibly thick and dense almost liquid like mist which traverses outwards to short range in the form of a 360 degree blast. The user then continues to perform two handseals, releasing their wind chakra into their surroundings and utilizing it to take hold of the surrounding mist. The mist begins to swirl inwards, becoming thinner and thinner as it does so, while multiple feral hand like claws begin to form from the now compact mist. The claws are comprised of dense translucent white wind; with highly compressed water vapor at its core. While the claws source of origin is the user, who now has a thick yet rather small (around a meter in diameter) armour like revolving mist wrapped around their mid and lower section, from which the claws originate. This revolving mist is capable of granting the user pseudo flight, although the flight is much more like levitation, as it grants rather slow aerial maneuverability, a rank lower than what the user is capable of running at to be precise. The area short range around the user remains to be covered in mist, albeit an exceptionally thin one which only slightly lowers visibility rather than completely reducing it. At the users discretion the tendril like claws can race forth at fairly high speeds, snaking towards their target. The claws can be used for attack or defense, being capable of grabbing physical objects or can even be used to lasso onto objects due to their highly compressed nature, which makes them almost solid like. The extending arms of the claws are relatively sharp, and can be used to slice through rocks and the like. The tips of the claws also possess a rather acute piercing power. A maximum of eight claws can be created, all of varying sizes. However the maximum combined size cannot exceed that of two 'Water Dragon Bullet Technique'.

    Note:
    - Can only be used 2x
    - No Suiton or Fuuton techniques above S rank for the rest of, and the next turn.
    - Can only be taught by Scaze.

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     Declined 
    It has too many abilities stacked into it. The core idea is good but i want you to simplify a bit. Also, this, because of its complexity, would count as two techniques.

    (Genjutsu: Oujou Warai) | Illusionary Technique: Death by Laughter
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs two handseals, placing the opponent under a genjutsu. In the genjutsu pressure is applied to the spots that are most likely to induce gargalesis, tickle spots. At first the pressure starts out as a incredibly light and cold touch, however the sometimes rhythmic and sometimes erratic strokes begin to grow firmer and firmer, evolving into gentle caresses, and before long morphing into heavy strokes. The once cold touch also begins to grow warmer and warmer while the frequency of the strokes increases. As the opponent is tickled they might begin to involuntarily twitch, perhaps even laugh. However after but a few blissful moments the pleasurable yet distracting tickling turns into rather painful scratching. The opponents skin feels raw as the now sandpaper like pressure ravages their body, the previously warm touch grows to become searing hot, scorching the users skin; and painting them an awful shade of red. The relentless frequency granting no time for relief. The scratching soon begins to reach its dreadful crescendo, the enemies clothes becoming bloodstained as their flesh starts to melt and peel. Molten melting fat weeping along the users skin, eroding into the flesh, further adding to the abhorrent wounds. Broken skin quickly develops into large chunks of meat, fat and muscle that slowly and painfully oozes away. Leaving the opponent a bloody mess.

    Note:
    - Can only be used 2x
    - No Genjutsu S rank or above for the rest of, and the next turn.
    - Can only be taught by Scaze

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     Declined 
    Love it but there is somethign missing: what is happening to the enemy in reality while he suffering this?

    (Katon/Raiton: Musutangu's Inferuno) | Fire Release/Lightning Release: Mustang's Inferno
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A particularly quick technique. The user snaps their fingers, channeling their katon chakra through their hands, manipulating it so as to release spark like flames outwards from their clicked fingers. Immediately after having release the flames, the user releases their lightning chakra, coating the sparks of fire in bolts of lightning. The lightning being released with such haste that it may seem that the two elements were released in conjunction. The spark of fire and lightning races forth at high speeds, having a flaming core comprised of a mass of dense fire chakra and a electric exterior made of similarly dense lightning chakra. The size of the spark can vary, ranging from a rope like size down to a thread like size which can be used for pinpoint accuracy. The spark follows an extremely predictable set route, traveling in straight lines or basic arcs, albeit in a rather jagged manner. Upon reaching its target, the spark explodes into a mayhem of blazing flames surrounded by raging lightning. The flames incinerating all that's caught in its path while the lightning ravages, electrocutes and tears through the opposition. The size of the explosion is controlled by the user, it can be limited to be exceptionally small, although still extremely powerful, or can be made to consume an area of a 5 meter radius. Although originally only one spark is created, this spark can be manipulated to branch outwards into up to three sparks, which can be used to strike different areas, or the same area in quick succession. Of course the size and power of the explosion is divided among the three sparks, although not always equally.

    Note:
    - Can only be used 3x
    - No fire or lightning above S rank for the rest of, and the next turn.
    - Can only be taught by Scaze.

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     Declined 
    This is too powerful, too fast and too undefined in what it really is. A spark? A spark doesn't have the properties (in size, shape, etc) that you describe in the technique. I think something was lost in translation.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-19-2013 at 06:54 PM.

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