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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Pitohui Geijutsu: Hane Engi - Pitohui Arts: Feathery Omen
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: A Hooded pitohui hums a moderately slow tune which instantly puts anyone who hears it except the summoner and other pitohui summons, into a malicious illusion where large feathers grow all over the body of the opponent causing great pain as instead of normal thin hair occupying the sweat pores, they are critically expanded and strained with the growth of the large feathers from each of the pores making blood to ooze out painfully from the pores. This restricts the opponent movement and also the opponent may collapse from mental stress is he doesn't release the illusion in 2 turns.
    Note
    ++Useable 3 times per match
    ++No other Pitohui Art in the same turn or next
    ++No A-rank and above genjutsu in the same turn or next
    ++Can only be used by Hooded Pitohuis
    ++Must be taught by Priest
    Hooded Pitohui's Approval

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     Approved 


    Ansi-Serapi - Anti-Therapy
    Type: Taijutsu/Defense
    Rank: N/A (Self Inflicted)
    Range: Self
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/A(Enough to break out from any genjutsu)
    Description: A Special taijutsu where through rigorous physical body training the user is able to build up energy and concentrate it into the muscles/Ligament/Tendons around any ball and socket joint of his body, then he tighten them up and shrinks them temporarily. This in turn leaves no space for the containment of the ball joint in the socket thereby causing a slight displacement of the ball from the socket meaning, this dislocates the ball from its initial position through a very short distance causing grievious pain to the user. This is a defensive measure to break out of genjutsu and paralysing jutsus. However, the pain is a sharp and short one meant to instantly break one out of a hold and only last for a few seconds. The user then corrects the situation by once again expanding the muscle into its original position giving room for the ball to lock itself back into its initial position. However, due to the excessive pain this technique causes, its useage is limited.
    Note:
    ++Doesn't work on Kaguya Clan members
    ++Useable only 4 times
    ++Must be taught by Priest

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     Declined 
    Can't approve this as its something you can do in free form. DNR.

    Pitohui Kuchyose: Arwin - Pitohui Summoning: Arwin
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user smears blood on their palm, makes the neccesary handseals then presses their palm on the ground or clap both hands together to summon Arwin in a cloud of white smoke.
    Arwin is a large Hooded Pitohui(as large as Sasuke's hawk), elegant and beautiful but she still remains one of the most foulest among her specie. She is fast and has fluid and excellent manouvreability in mid-air and is able to navigate through dense clouds and fogy condition. She is with inteligence and she is as smart as Minato being able to access every battle situation with ease and come up with a counter very quickly. She can communicate with her summoner through Pitohuian Language which only the summoner or any body who signed the contract can understand.
    Abilities:
    -Arwin even as she is of moderate size compared to other hooded Pitohuis, posseses a very high content of neurotoxin in which a single scratch from her claws, beak, tail and wings would cause brief localized paralysis.
    -She secretes odours to which anyone apart from the summoner that gets into short range of her would begin to feel tingling sensation all over themselves which is quite distracting and somewhat painful.
    -She is able to mold chakra and she is good at it where she can use "Suiton" techniques upto A-ranks. This, she can spew directly from her mouth or form by flapping her wings.(she needs no water source as she can produce a voluminous water from her mouth, except in extreme cases where a very large water source is needed)
    -She can also use Pitohui Arts, A set of arts that are taught to every capable pitohuis in the training mangroves of Modakeke by the elder sage of the Hooded pitohuis "Majele". (Pitohui arts would be submited separately)

    NOTE
    ++Can only be summoned once
    ++Lasts 4 turns for each time summoned
    ++Can only be summoned when there are not more than one other hooded pitohui summoned.
    ++Can use water upto A-rank which would also take a spot in the 3 move slot of the summoner
    ++Hooded Pitohui summon can only be taught by Priest
    Hooded Pitohui's Approval

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    Last edited by Scorps; 04-19-2013 at 07:01 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Palm Thrust of Destruction (Pāmu wa hakai no suiryoku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Charka Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user does several palm thrust coated in chakra. But this chakra is advance shape manipulated around the user hands to defend against an elemental attack of the same rank and below. The user uses his taijutsu knowledge and strength to defend against the elemental attack.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to a multitude of existing customs. DNR.

    Sensor Sphere (Sensā-kyū)
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short(made)-Long(thrown)
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user after learning the Rasengan, uses the dense and shell of the Rasengan as a base of this technique. The user makes a sphere twice the size of a smoke bomb. The sphere once launched can detect other chakra sources by detonating into pulses of chakra only in short range of the sphere. The chakra is connected to the user of the sphere and detects everything with chakra around it.
    -Only three can be made at a time
    -The user can make the spheres detonating or the spheres detonate one turn after they are thrown

    Looks kind of like this


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    ±± Declined ±±
    No Rasengan variations. DNR.

    Katana Style: Rain of a Thousand Katanas (Katana Sutairu: Sentō no Ame)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes five hand seals and claps. A storm forms over the battle field raining down katanas from the sky. The katanas come from a large portal the user makes just like with the Fall Mud jutsu and Dropping Lid jutsu. The katanas rain down as fast as normal rain drops would. This is a set up jutsu for another jutsu the user can make another this has been used.
    -Only used twice per battle
    -Must wait two turns to use again
    -No other katana type jutsus can be used in the same turn as this jutsu
    -The user can only use two jutsus in the same turn as this jutsu so one other jutsu can be used

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    ±± Declined ±±
    How would katanas rain from the sky? If its a summoning technique, similar techniques exist. If its a Fuuinjutsu, Similar techniques exists. You cannot say something happens if you don't explain how. Thats inviting an easy decline and a possible DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-10-2013 at 10:00 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Omentric)- Omentric
    Type: Weapon.
    Rank: S
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 40 [+5 every turn to sustain it]
    Damage: N/A
    Description:An ability of the Omentric is that it can release steady and timed pulses of chakra out to mid-range, using it to sense objects and sources of chakra in the surrounding area by receiving information in much the same way Rain Tiger at Will work, relaying the information's gained directly into the senses of the wielder. These chakra pulses are not strong enough to effect anyone or anything they hit and cannot be seen without the assistance of a Doujutsu. The chakra pulses radiate outwards like the ripples of a pond and as such can be blocked by large obstructions, making it impossible to detect anything hidden behind said objects. This can be overcome by shooting a chakra infused arrow from the bow that can sense anything within a short range reach of it and can be fired out to long range. At any given time, three chakra sensing arrows can be active on the field and remain active where they are planted for three turns, these arrow inflict the same damage as any normal arrow meaning they are capable enough to pierce to human flesh to certain degree.
    Notes:
    - Chakra sensing from the Bow is a passive ability and remains active for as long as the user has chakra to sustain it,
    - The chakra pulses from the arrows only detect objects within short-range of where they land/fly.
    - The shooting of arrow count's as move.

    ♠ Declined ♠
    No chakra sensing weapons.


    Doton hisan saihen- Earth Release Flying Debris
    Type:Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short - Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user begins by either stomping the earth with his hand or leg, While stomping the ground the user releases his chakra into the ground which causes several average size debris of earth to rise from the earth, the debris rises up from all around the opponent even from his back side, this technique extends up-to mid range from opponent meaning the chunks of earth will rise from all directions with in mid range area of the opponent [he will be at the center], The user than goes on to weave a single hand seal and all the stones/chunks of earth start to converge onto the opponent and inflict great damage to him.
    Note:
    - The user can't use any A rank and above Doton technique in the same turn.
    - Can only be used thrice
    - Can only be taught by -Gitanshu-

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    http://www.mangareader.net/fairy-tail/326/17

    ♠ Approved ♠

    Genjutsu: saishutsu- Illusionary Arts: reappearance
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user either weaves 2 hand seal [Dog → Tiger] or looks directly into the eyes of his opponent to cast him under the genjutsu, this genjutsu takes effect by affecting the 2 of the basic 5 sense's of his opponent, the first being his sight and the other being his hearing, the moment the genjutsu comes into the play the opponent see's a blinding light has started to emerge from user's body much like (Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar) although it's intensity is not that great but the opponent as a stimulus reaction to that bright light either covers his eyes or closes them and if he does not do so he becomes temporarily blind due to the lightning itself [for a few seconds only], the moment his vision is no longer focused on the user the second part of the technique is initiated and as a result the opponent hears the sound of foot step's moving in a certain direction [the noise of foot step is completely normal], when the opponent open up his eyes again or regains his eye sight [which will not take more than few seconds] he see's his opponent [the user] standing at new position which is 5-6 meter away from the user's previous position [any direction], Now what ever action's which are performed by the user can be seen by the opponent as the user's hologram completely replicates the user's move but the trick here is that the opponent is unaware of the true origin of the technique, like if we throw a kunai towards him, for the opponent it is coming from 5 meter right to the user's original thrown kunai but in reality it is on 5 meter to the left of the image they are perceiving, This technique remains active for 3 turns per usage and while it is active it effect's both the sense of sight and hearing of the opponent and therefor all the sound which originate and the action which are being made are heard and seen from the new position of user [hologram], the other three senses are perfectly fine.

    Note:
    - No genjutsu in the same turn it is used.
    - Can only be used 2 times with a cool down period of 2 turns between usage.
    - If performed for the second time user will loose the ability to cast S rank and above genjutsu for 1 turn.
    - Can only be taught by -Gitanshu-

    ♠ Declined ♠
    That's just way too OP.
     
         
    Last edited by Adachi; 04-18-2013 at 06:37 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Kaen Kabushi) - Fire Release: Flame fist

    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user focuses his fire chakra to his dominant hand and upon the releasing of the chakra he clenches his hand into a fist, By doing this the users hand will be covered in flames, the user then attacks with his flaming fist.

    - Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
    - The user is unaffected by the flames covering his hand.

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.


    (Fuuton: Kaze Kaizen) - Wind Release: Wind Rotation

    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Type: Defensive
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (+20 when opponent comes into cotact with the wind)
    Description: The user forms two hand seals and then rotates releasing the wind chakra from their hands, By doing this the user releases wind all around them in a circular formation.

    - Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
    - This technique only defends against attacks coming from the front, sides and back of the user, unlike the heavenly palm rotation which protects all around the user.
    - Can only be used twice per battle

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.


    (Tsuin Kaosu Katana) - Twin Chaos Blades

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The twin blades of chaos are short blades with a rigged shape all around the blades, the blades has a skull shape by the hilt and has a reddish orange color. (See Image if the description isn't understandable.) The Blades have the ability to absorb fire techniques up to A-Rank and the technique absorbed by the blades is then usable to attack later in the battle, However only one technique can be absorbed at a time. The wielder of the chaos blades can also channel their fire chakra into the blades to add burning power to each slash.

    Restriction;

    - The twin blades can only be wielded by -Yashiro-
    - The wielder of the chaos blades has to have mastery over the Fire Release Elemant and Kenjutsu.
    - Once a technique is absorbed, it only stays within the blades for 3 turns, after that the technique absorbed isn't usable anymore.
    - If chakra is channeled into the blades, it will only last for 3 turns and can only be used once per battle.



    ♠ Declined ♠
    You can't absorb techniques with your sword.
     
         
    Last edited by Adachi; 04-18-2013 at 06:38 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hyouton:Aisu Ryu:Kyanon)Ice Release: Ice Make Style : Ice Cannon)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After performing the "Ice Release Technique" to create snow to descend on the battle field the user will perform a string of 4 handeseals,channeling their ice chakra into the snow,the user will rise a sample of the snow into there hands and using shape manipulation the user will compact the snow into the shape of a bazooka,the user will the channel his ice chakra more into the bazooka to fire off a giant blast of ice and snow towards the target,however the technqiue can only travel in a straight path,making it easier for advance shinobi to avoid it.This technique can be used without "Ice Release Technique" if snow is already present in the area.

    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Aoi.
    -Must be a Ice user


    ♠ Approved ♠

    (Komandomentsu no Titania: Blumenblatt) Commandment of the Queen of Fairies: Petal
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80(+10 per each sword used)
    Description:This technique is utilized by the user first taking out a special marked scroll and unweaving it into the air,unleashing a barrage of swords(up to 4),where as the user will then manipulate there chakra into each sword as they fall causing the to levitate in the air infront of the user,they will then procede by pushing Wind chakra into there feet to advance at highspeeds towards the target,where as they are in range the user will slash the target with two swords in a X path but following behind the user are the previously summoned swords where they will fly towards the target also slashing the target dealing extra damage towards them.

    -Can only be used once per battle
    -No Wind Techniques in the next 2 turnd
    -Can only be taught by Aoi.


    ♠ Declined ♠
    I really don't see a way for you to pull this jutsu completely in battle. Seems too unrealistic.
     
         
    Last edited by Adachi; 04-18-2013 at 06:40 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Ninja Art:Seal Inscription|Ninpou:Fuuhimei
    Rank:C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:10
    Damage:N/A
    Description:A rather simple jutsu to help Ninja's perform fuuinjutsu's faster.Fuuinjutu's usually take alot of time to perform based on the fact that,time is needed to inscribe the seals onto the scrolls.To overcome this disadvantage,this jutsu was developed.The user channels chakra to the scroll and inscribes sealing formula's(along with the kanji's) into the scroll without actually scribbling on the scroll using his hands.By doing this the user can inscribe sealing formula's in no time.The user can only inscribe formula's of those fuuinjutsu's that he already knows.The user should have great mastery over Fuuinjutsu,as the user needs to know all the seals by heart.
    -Must know Fuuinjutsu
    -Only taught by Igneel

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     Declined 
    DNR. Makes little sense.

    Ninja Art:Possession|Ninpou:Senryou
    Rank:C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:A simple Ninjutsu which allows the user to insert his chakra into any inanimate objects like(chunks or rocks,kunai's,shurikens etc..) and control it remotely to his benefit.Although a useful jutsu,it has it's limitations as it cannot be used to control objects of great size and density.This jutsu cannot be used to take control of any elemental or non-elemental jutsu's.
    -Objects greater than the size of 0.5mX0.5m cannot be manipulated
    -Usable 6 times
    -Can only be taught by Igneel

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     Declined 
    Control? As in Telekinesis? Thats Alucard's CE. DNR.

    Ninja Art:Single Hand Style|Ninpou:Hitouetekamae
    Rank:C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Self
    Chakra:15(15 per turn)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The exact amount of chakra necessary to perform a technique is manipulated through hand seals.There are different sequences of hand seals for every technique.After years of training,it is possible for a shinobi to perform hand seals with just one hand.The user will first perform the seal of confrontation,initiating this ability which enables the user to perform handseals using a single hand.This jutsu requires great focus and cannot be used whilst in modes,which constantly uses the users chakra.
    -Cannot be used to perform jutsu's above F-rank,as those jutsu's require greater focus.
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Usable 4 times per battle
    -Only taught by Igneel.

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     Declined 
    DNR. This is an ability only one ninjas has shown so far and if you want it make his bio: Haku.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Torigurau no ikari) The Wrath of Triglav
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu is one of the Akimichi Clan's NinTaijutsu that utilize the weight and force behind attacks, increased size, and added elemental chakra in order to perform moves that have various effects on the environment. In order to perform this jutsu the user must have Super Multi-size activated. The user then kneads their earth chakra into one leg, where they then stop in the direction of the opponent, while releasing the built up earth chakra into the ground. The chakra change the composition of the earth to the point that it flows like water while still keeping its heavy density. This makes the earth move in a wave like manner, directly one after another, in a ripple like formation in the direction they stomped in. This results in the opponent getting picked up and toppled over by 6 continuous wide 2m tall earth waves as they are brought towards the start of the ripples.(Due to earth not being a liquid the opponent would just be thrown over the top of the waves, in the opposite direction to where it is moving, continuously until the last wave passes. The earth ripples moves like water ripples so they would be released relatively quick one after another.)
    NOTES:
    -Super Multi-size must be active
    -No S Rank and over Earth techniques next round.
    -Must be taught by ZandaT

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     Declined 
    If this is earth, is wrongly named. Its also an effect similar to existing techniques.

    (Fūinjutsu: Rokettohōmingu) Sealing Arts: Homing Rocket
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid.
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This is a special Fūinjutsu formula made by Zanda. It consists of three kanji on a sealing tag that is then placed around a kunai. The kanji stand for "Fuel", "Homing", and "Detonation" listed in that order starting from the base of the kunai to where the blade begins. The process begins when the user inserts fire chakra into the "Fuel" kanji before throwing it towards the opponent. The "Homing" kanji then activates once the kunai reaches into short range of a chakra source that doesn't match up with the chakra inserted into the "Fuel" kanji. The "Homing" kanji then uses the fire chakra from the "Fuel" kanji to release a quick burst of fire chakra from the kunai in which it is used to passively change direction and propel the kunai towards the largest source of foreign chakra. The kunai has enough fuel to change directions 3 times in order to dodge, within reason, any lower amounts of foreign chakra in its way. Once the kunai is 1m away from the target the "Detonation" kanji activates and the kunai explodes releasing a multitude of small heated shrapnel that can pierce into the targets body. If the sealing tag becomes wet, the kunai is unable to reach the target within its 3 bursts, or the kunai gets stuck into a something before it reaches into 1m of the opponent then the technique stops.
    NOTES:
    -Can used it only 3 times, throwing one kunai at a time
    -Can only be taught by ZandaT

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     Approved 


    (Fuuton: Gaizā no hōga) Wind Style: Spouting Geyser
    Rank: A Rank
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short/Mid.
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user performs 2 hand seals and then kneads their wind chakra into the ground allowing the user to create several large steam geysers to explode from out of the earth within short range of the user. The user can create up to a total of 2 steam geysers simultaneously and they can shoot out of the ground at various angles and positions. The user can manipulate these geysers to shoot out around together to form a wall or even at a slanted angle towards the opponent. The geysers can reach up to a height of 6m in order to attack opponents above them.
    NOTES:
    -Can be used 3x
    -Can only be taught by ZandaT


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     Declined 
    DNR. Done before.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-19-2013 at 07:06 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Katon: Hayashi Sendo) - Fire Style: Forest of Death
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short (when initiated)
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+5 for each animal after 10)
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: User focuses a large amount of fire chakra in his body before releasing it as a chakra surge. While user releases the fire chakra, it surges user in fire from top to bottom covering him in intense flames, after which user manipulates the fire, making dozen(s) of animals from it, which can spread throughout the battlefield, much like Sai's Ink Ninjutsu. By reducing the no. of animals, size of the animals can be increased accordingly. Upon user's command these animals can explode, and the blast from the explosion covers the short range of the animals.

    Note: -Must have had the Sai bio with Ink Ninjutsu for at least a year.
    -The animals can be of any variety, like, bull, dog, eagle, elephant, turtle, dragon, phoenix etc.
    -User cannot use any other fire technique in same turn.
    -User cannot use other fire technique above A-rank in next turn.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined~ Ya like i'm gonna approve something like that, you can't mix Sai's ink with elemental ninjutsu, it's just ink.
    (Katon: Hayashi Sendo) - Fire Style: Forest of Death
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short (when initiated)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (-30 to user)
    Description: After a few encounters with Sai, Enzup tried to figure out the secret behind the Sai's Ink Ninjutsu. But even after a lot of struggle, he couldn't. So not using the Sai's Ink technique but only the raw "idea" originated from it, user focuses a large amount of fire chakra in his body before releasing it as a chakra surge. While user releases the fire chakra, it surges user in fire from top to bottom covering him in intense flames, after which user manipulates the fire, making dozen(s) of animals from it, which can spread throughout the battlefield, much like Sai's Ink Ninjutsu, even if it has nothing to do with it. By reducing the no. of animals, size of the animals can be increased accordingly. Upon user's command these animals can explode, and the blast from the explosion covers the short range of the animals.

    Note: -(-30) to the user due to severe burns. His efficiency reduces for next 2 turns (which includes speed, stamina etc.)
    -The animals can be of any variety, like, bull, dog, eagle, elephant, turtle, dragon, phoenix etc.
    -User cannot use any other fire technique in same turn.
    -User cannot use other fire technique above A-rank in next turn.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Ok, let me be clearer since you didn't understand what Dante said: DNR.

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    (Suiton: Geyser) - Water Style: Geyser (no jap name)
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: User focuses his chakra in the ground, and creates 2 geysers within range, out of which extremely hot water is forced out. The water is hot enough to melt even strong solid objects like earth, upto certain extent. The water is fired with great pressure and momentum, enough to toss big summonings like gamabunta into air. The 2 geysers can be made in many ways, like both can be made simultaneously or consecutively one after other, both can be made near to each other or anywhere within range. If the ground in which geysers are made is near a big water source like river, lake etc then this technique happens faster than usual because of the fact that water is easily available for the technique, but if geysers are made on barren lands, then this technique takes adequate time, longer rather than usual because in that case, user have to pull water from deep within the earth.

    Note: -Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    -No other water techniques of above F-rank in same turn.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Do not copy other peoples techniques. DNR.

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    (Doton/Katon: Yuugi Yo Nuke !!) - Earth/Fire Style: Game Over Nuke !!
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to uer)
    Description: User slams his hands on the ground and passes his fire chakra in the ground and concentrates it in small area, compressing it highly. After few seconds, he passes his earth chakra in the earth, around that compressed fire chakra and molds the earth into a nuke looking object. The molded earth completely covers the fire, after which the nuke is shot from the ground at certain angle in the sky, propagating in the sky as a projectile it falls on the target and finally explodes, grasping everything within 10m of radius. This technique is very risky but of high potential. The biggest risk of the technique is, that if user is caught in that explosion then there is a high possibility that user would die too. Another demerit of the technique is that initiation time for this technique is bit more than usual high rank techniques which makes it a slow technique. Along with some demerits it have some merits, like with a Ram handseal, user can, anytime explode the nuke, even if it hasn't crashed with another solid substance. Also the intensity of this technique is great enough to use it in wars.

    Note: -Counts as 2/3 user's moves.
    - (-30) to the user due to excessive amount of chakra used.
    -In same turn user can't use any other earth or fire above A-ranks.
    -In next turn, user can't use any earth or fire technique above S-ranks.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    You cannot, without Y/Y Nature Manipulation, mold two elemental chakras at the same time. DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-10-2013 at 10:03 PM.

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    Updating
    Kasia kaen hensei (Fire style Blazing Formation)

    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description:I do 1 hand sign. as i do. 4 blazing poles appear around the oppenet in a square formation. as it does i then do 5hand signs. igniting each of the polls. making a fire wall to each poll making it like a fire wall where the user cant get out.. after that is complete. i then do 1 more hand sign. sending all the fire from each poll into the middle causing an explosion 10ft in height (The square is 10ft wide also)
    -Note:Cant use no fire jutsu for 2turns afterwards
    -Note:Can only use B-rank or lower fire jutsus for the whole battle after use
    -Note:Can only be used Once
    -Note:Can break through the fire walls with A-Rank Water or S-Rank Wind
    -Note:If jutsu is to close to me i take half the damage

    (Edit or add or take away ANYTHING if needed or wanted)
    can be used by teno757 and sadako
    Submitted this on my alt when it was allowed
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post4514572

    (Katon/Doton: Kasia kaen hensei) Fire/Earth Style:Blazing Formation)
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost:50
    Damage:90 (-30 to user)
    Description: The user will start off by doing 1 handseal and stomp their leg causing 4 Earth Pillars to Erupt from out of the ground around the opponent in a Square formation 6 feet apart With the opponent in the middle. Each Fire Pillar is roughly 12Ft High. Once The Earth Pillars have risen the user will then do 3 handseals Igniting one earth pillar, causing the fire from that earth pillar to travel towards the next earth pillar connecting to each other, Closing the gap from each Ignited Pillar with fire Until Each Earth pillars is ignited. It will now look like a box made out of fire, With each corner being Ignited earth, With pure fire in between each pillar, preventing an opponent from just walking out due to the firewalls. . Soon as it looks like the opponent is trapped inside a fire box. The user will then do 2 handseals ending with the Horse, Causing the fwalls made from fire from the side of the opponent to travel towards each earth pillar now leaving the user with nothing but Ignited Earth Pillar with the firewalls now gone. This gives the ignited pillars more fire power since the fire from the firewalls fueld the earth pillars causing the ignited pillars to be blazing with intense raging flames. Once Each Earth pillar is ignited even more the user will then do a half handsign (Or full, it dont matter) to cause the fire from the earth pillars to violently explode. The explosion reaches travels long range in height, and travels long range in widgth. Meaning, If the user does not take cover properly he will get caught in the explosion.
    -Note: Due to the crazy amount of chakra used for this jutsu. It Leaves the user very fatigue. Only allowing him to use 2 jutsus for the next 3 turns.
    -Note:Cant Use S rank or above jutsu the next turn
    -Note:Cant use no fire jutsu for 2 turns afterwards
    -Note:Can only use S-rank or lower fire jutsus for the whole battle after use
    -Note:Cant user any Earth Rank Jutsus In the same turn as this
    -Note:Cant use any Fire jutsus in the same turn as this jutsu
    -Note:If not defended properly, the user can also get caught up in the jutsu
    -Note: Can only use once
    (I redid the whole jutsu due to bad grammer, etc)

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    ±± Declined ±±
    It wasn't submitted with your account so it can't be submitted. Don't try it again as its the same as submitting something from another user. DNR.

    (Fuuton: Karada danpen) Wind Style: Body Shredder
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will do 1 handseals, summoning sharp wind currents to rotate around every part of the users body. The wind currents are only 3 inches away from the body, also the wind currents are not visible to the naked eye due to the speed, and how thin it is. The wind currents are sharp enough to shred through C rank and below earth If it comes in contact with me.. Just to give a hint at the cutting properties. The wind currents do not increase or decrease and inch meaning I cant extend it, nor is it able to touch my skin. If somebody comes within 3 inches of the user body, the wind current around the user body will do major damage to the by severely cutting up whatever body part came within a 3 inch reach of the user body. The user can also attack an opponent with this wind around themselves, delivering a shredding punch, causing massive cuts at the area that was hit.
    Note: Can only stay active for 3 turns
    Note: Cant turn off once activated
    Note: Cant user no fire jutsus while this is activated
    Note: Can only use once

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to at least 2 existing wind techniques. DNR.

    (Shakuton:setto touhou)Scorch Style: Ignite Me
    Type: Attack/Defensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-40 to user)
    Description: The user will emit half of his scorch chakra from his body, to the surface of his body. As it lays on the surface on the body, you can see reddish, yellowish flame sparks resonate around the user (they do no harm). Once something, or somebody touches the user. All the scorch chakra that was on the surface of the user body will then ignite in that direction in a very violent blast up to mid range. Draining all the water out of the opponent or whatever it comes in contact with. The drawbacks is, that the scorch chakra is so immense that it even burns the skin on the user, causing massive burns.
    -Note: Can only remain active for 2 turns before the scorch jutsu is deactivated
    -Note: Due to using half scorch chakra causing a massive strain on the body. The user can only use A Rank and below Scorch jutsus for 3 turns
    -Note: Due to the intense burn on the skin.. All attacks dealt to the users body is +15 for 3 turns (till the burn heals)
    -Note: Can only use once
    Link to approved scorch bio

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Ok, let me explain why i'll DNR this: omni blasts have been done already and this has no special ability, you want a forbidden rank technique, omni directional, that lasts 2 turns, its forbidden rank, it doens't require handseals, it says it consumes half of your chakra...so you only have 180 chakra points? This is so unreasonable that its DNR.
     
         
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    ( Genjutsu: Mayakashi ) - Illusionary Arts: Deception
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A ( Based on the technique )
    Description: The user sends his chakra towards the opponent trapping him in a genjutsu where he controls the opponent(s) eyesight making him see a different version of the actual reality. For example, the user traps the opponent in a genjutsu where he appears to be using a fire technique where in reality he is actually using a technique of a different element if he chooses to do so and the techniques must be of the same Rank.

    Note: Can only be used (3) times.
    Note: Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    I can do this with a D-Ranked Genjutsu.


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    ( Fuuton: Mōjin no shiryoku ) - Wind Release: Sight of the Blind Man
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damange: 90
    Descritption: The user will channel his wind chakra through his body and into his mouth, the user then sends out a "sigh" of which he channels his wind chakra into the air mixing it with his wind chakra up to short range. Once the opponent(s) breathes in, he also breathes the user's wind chakra. This wind chakra is utilized to aim for the opponent's eye sockets, of which then the chakra becomes preassurized and condensed into a scale that is enough to poke out the eyes of the opponent, leaving his eye sockets empty, and causing him to go blind.

    Can only be used once.
    Cannot use wind chakra for the same turn and the next.
    Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé

    ♠ Declined ♠
    That's like instant kill. Tone it down or don't resubmit.


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    ( Heiwa no chikyū āmā ) - Earth Armor of Peace
    Type: CW - Armor
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Before the forming of The village hidden by rocks; Iwagakure, there was a small peaceful village that had lived there for centuries and was known as the Village Hidden in Armors. In that village resided an old man with an ability to craft an infinite amount of protective gear that could render most offensive techniques useless. That allowed the village to avoid many confrontations and attacks and keep it's reputation as a harmless, peaceful village. The neighboring villages would attack them day and night with no success due to them having such gear that allowed them to push off enemies as they all would give up seeing no success in raiding such villagers with such gears. The peaceful villagers never told anyone that their protective gear cannot be use for offense and can only be used for protection against incoming attacks, but keeping the information to themselves, the other villages were intimated and wouldn't dare to attack them more than once or twice in fear of them getting killed. On a cold winter morning, in a time before the sun rose, a shinobi that was a spy for a neighboring village had snuk into the peaceful village of armors and managed to steal imprints of one of these protective gears. Returning to his home village, the shinobi was met with praise and compliments on the success of his mission, unaware that the people who created these imprints implanted their own chakra into them to keep track on their location incase something like theft ever happened and the imprints got stolen. Knowing the important piece of information and seeing the limits of which the neighboring villages would go for to get their hands on the imprints and win the war, the actual peaceful village have became a village full of hate and anger towards their neighboring villages. By that, they decided to create a piece of armor that would serve for both Defense and complete annihilation of what and who wants to attack them. War has risen between multiple villages in that area, during of which lots of people died by the hands of these armors, there was no actual winner, a lot of people and innocent villagers have met their fate. To end all of this madness, a new and further improved piece of armor was crafted, one that would put an end to all wars, and end to all this hate, one that would protect and not kill, the people called it "Heiwa no chikyū āmā" - Earth Armor of Peace.

    Centuries passed and the land changed, the village hidden in Armors no more existed, and not a trace of it's armors was found, until one day a young Iwarian known by the name L through tons of usage of earth techniques in a single spot managed to locate an imprint of one of these armors, knowing the history of the land Iwa resided on, he was amazed and filled with excitement of his discovery. He took the imprint back to his apartment in the village, not telling anyone about it, while spending a full 365 days alone with that imprint with only going out to gather minerals and materials he managed to complete it, to recreate the Final Earth Armor of Peace, of which he made an oath to himself to use it for the protection of his beloved Village.

    • Shape of the Armor


    •General Description of the Armor
    The armor as seen in the picture above, has a Navy-ish blue color, with white and yellow light glows on parts of it's structure. It is a bit over 6 feet tall, enough to cover Lawliet's whole body while keeping his comfort at the same time.

    •Abilities of the Armor
    ~ Being made from earth minerals and materials and with a whole bunch of Iron allows this Armor to sense anything that sets foot on dry land around the border of Iwa covering the whole border perimeter.
    ~ The Armor is strong against:
    Water: Water would do little to no damage to the armor.
    Wind: Wind would do little to no damage to the armor.
    Earth: Earth would be destroyed and turned into bits by the armor.
    Taijutsu: being made of metal and earth minerals, the Armor can withstand up to B rank Taijutsu attacks with minimal damage. A rank and higher techniques would knock back the user delivering a bit more damage than the B rank techniques.
    ~The Armor is weak against:
    Lightning: Lightning technique with a high enough rank ( same rank or higher as the armor ) would be able to reach the user under the armor and electrify him, and seeing that the armor is made of metal, the technique would cause more damage.
    Fire: Fire technique with a high enough rank ( same rank or higher ) would be able to heat up the armor enough to heat it up and cause serious injury to the user under it.

    •Restrictions
    ~ Can only be used once and lasts 3 turns.
    ~ Can only withstand one attack of each element that it's strong against.
    ~ Can only be used by Vasto Lordé

    ♠ Declined ♠
    You can't have chakra sensing armor. Also, no, you can't also completely nullify elements.
     
         
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    (Genjutsu: Po-zu) - Illusion Style: Pause
    Rank: A
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An Illusion that that is cast on an opponent where every animation stops. The opponents sees everything around him freeze including himself, and he also sees the user freeze also if he had previously sent a projectile/or jutsu, they also seem to freeze but however in real life everything is normal and moving but the opponent who will be in a trance-like state.
    Note
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    -Last two turns
    -No A-rank and above gen next turn


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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR.

    (Genjutsu: Okeru Seken Shuuryou) - Illusion Style: At World's End
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Sup
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user induces an opponent in an illusion where he sees chaos. Everywhere would turn hell immediately ranging from earth quakes to falling asteoids, premature volcanic eruption and massive flooding due to hurricane, dangerouz blizards and snow storms that is enough to cause something as big as National disaster. However each chaotic situation is factored with respect to the terrain the opponent is in. The flooding ofcos would be when the terrain has a large water source(say lake or ocean), and the volcanic eruption where there should be at least a mountian on the terrain and so on. The opponent would see himself and the user engulfed in the situation which gives him no idea its of the users doing. In real life, the opponent is just standing there while the user uses this opening to launch an attack.
    The opponent also mentally surfers every damage done by the disaster.
    -Useable only twice per match
    -No S-rank and above gen in the same turn and next
    -Last for 2 turns

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Why does seeing the world end (so to speak) do damage to your opponent and what is happening to him in reality?

    (Ninpou: Finga Furiku) - Ninja Art: Finger Flick
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges enormous amount of chakra while compressing it into his middle finger. He builds up the middle finger's force by holding it down with the thumb. The user then releases the thumb leaving the middle finger to catapult invisible compressed chakra powerful enough to bring down a building.
    -No S-rank Ninjutsu in the next turn
    -Useable only 3 times per battle
    -Must wait after one turns to re-use

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't copy other people's techniques. This is a copy of my own technique. Cali made it as well for his CE. DNR.
     
         
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    Genjutsu: Setsudan | Illusion Technique: Mutilation
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary | Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A(-80 from the stress of the mental torture)
    Description: The user places an opponent in a genjutsu in which their skin/body cracks into what appears to be little shreds of flesh and is then blown away by a flowing breeze, hence removing a body part completely. This idea is gotten from the way the body part of someone resurrected via the Edo Tensei reforms after it has taken a hit. But in this genjutsu, instead of reforming, the body is being deformed. To add flair to the usage of this genjutsu, the user can effect selected parts of the opponent's body with it, thus rendering those body parts unuseable in reality. For instance, the user can, in the genjutsu, cause the opponent's arms to crack and be blown away/erased by the breeze, making them armless; but in reality, because of the mental torture of not having arms anymore, the opponent would be unable to use their arms as they would be numb, paralysed, lifeless. It can be used to affect the opponent's eyes, rendering them blind; their ears, rendering them deaf and so on.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Naizen.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Too high level. Too powerful in its effects.

    Ame no Inpei | Rain Concealment
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced form of (Amegakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Rain Technique, hence it is more stable and usable than the latter is. It requires that the user performs 3 hand-seals, allowing them to perfectly conceal themselves in rain and at the same time move at a really fast pace without being spotted easily. This technique on activation not only causes the users body to mimic the rain but also focuses chakra beneath the users feet, hence making their steps lighter than normal so that when they step on a puddle of water, instead of creating a splash, only a calm ripple is formed. What makes the creation of the ripples by the user's quick and light steps hard to spot is that they keep stepping on places were ripples are being created by raindrops. This skill completely masks the ripples made by the user's quick steps in the ripples made by the raindrops on water. By following the ripples that lead to his destination with his quick and light steps, the user is able to move at a moderate speed which is trackable by 3T sharingan and above. If this technique is used in rain created by the user, it completely fools the Sharingan and the Rinnegan as the chakra signatures of the rain and the user would be the same but it is unable to fool the Byakugan.
    -Concealment lasts for 5 turns but can be deactivated by the user whenever they wish.
    -Usable 3 times per match and the user has to wait 2 turns before each activation.
    -Requires Rain training to learn.
    -Can only be taught by Naizen

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR.
     
         
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    Suiton: Mizu Tekkidan | Water Release: Water Grenade
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: the user will materialize a large amount of water into one or two hands under the form of a compressed water sphere the size of a normal apple. He will then hurl the sphere at his target. Upon contact or upon the users will, the sphere will detonate, releasing about 200m3 of water in a flash. The decompression is so violent that it actually does more concussive and impact damage than a normal explosion, obliterating an area short range around the impact point. The grenade can be set up to stick to a target if the user has inbued it with the sticky properties of the Sticky Infusion technique, exploding at the users will. The limitation of the technique is that the projectile needs to be hurled at the enemy, making its trajectory and its range and speed dependent on the users physical strenght and the istuation where he is using it. The water of the technique is kept on the battlefield and can be used as a water source for other techniques. If the sticky infusion has been used, the grenade gains +20 damage since the thicker liquid will make for a much stronger impact damage.

    Note: can only be used 3 times
    Note: cannot used water release techniques above A-Rank on the same turn
    Note: can only be taught by Scorps
    ||Declined|| Similar Technique Exists

    Katon: Hai to Kitai Chunyu | Fire Release: Ash and Gas Infusion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: N/A (+5 to mold Fire techniques)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Similar to Water Release: Sticky Infusion, the user will make all his following fire techniques produce either the flammable, scolding hot ash of ( Katon: Haisekishō ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning Technique or the flammable toxic gas of ( Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique. This doesn't add any damage or range to the technique, rather simply making it produce either ash or gas. Off course this cannot be applied to all techniques, only those that would be logically possible to produce either Gas or Ash and still be usable. Activating this ability is instant and not time consuming.
    Note: Once activated lasts 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used 2 times
    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    ||Approved|| With some minor changes.

    Panda Hijutsu: Wuxi Yubi no Haaku | Panda Hidden Art: The Wuxi Finger Hold
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damange: 90 (+20 if used with elemental chakra)
    Description:
    One of the most devastating Nintaijutsu moves known to Pandas, the legend of the Wuxi Finger Hold is as great as is the rarity of those who can use it. The user will, when facing an enemy in taijutsu, grab hold of his hand, finger, knee, elbow, etc, basically the extremity with which the enemy is attacking him, between his index and thumb, with his own pinky held upright. Then, focusing a very large amount of compressed chakra, the user will flex his pinky sending it all through the enemy's body. This causes massive damage as the chakra is conducted trhough the enemy directly. As a result, the chakra bursts out of him and sends a shockwave all around, clearing the area mid range around which is left as a "steaming" crater with the enemy and the user standing in the middle. The enemy doesn't move as a result of technique, since the technique isn't an impact on him but rather the channeling of that large chakra onto him. The damage is, however, enough to knock an enemy out cold in one hit. If the user is awesome he can say in a dramatic way something like "squadoosh", "kaboom" or "kapow" upon lowering his pinky, giving that much drama to the scene. The legends and mental pressure of facing such a technique is enormous and the enemy will genuinely feel afraid to move while the user is holding him. The effect is somewhat a mimic of what Killing Intent produces but not nearly as powerful, producing only minor shivers and the sensation of fear. By adding elemental chakra the user is able to increase the damage and its properties, although also increasing the damage to himself in return. Adding Wind damage produces massive cuts all over the enemy, Fire leaves him burnt as the chakra channels through him, Water ripples through his body, damaging his soft tissues, Earth damages his bones and fractures many of the smaller ones and lightning electrifies the enemy, which can lead to heart failure.
    Note: usable once
    Note: cannot use hand based Taijutsu for 2 turns
    Note: user takes 15 damage and suffers an additional 20 damage if he uses it with elemental chakra.
    Note: Can only be used by Panda masters
    Note: can only be taught by Scorps.
    ||Approved|| Nice.
     
         
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    (itonami douyou ato eiga) Life's like a movie
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The user will perform a single hand seal and trap the target into a Genjutsu. This Genjutsu is different from others as although he is already trapped inside the Genjutsu he doesn't see the effects until he does one of two things; Receive a hit from the user or he makes a successful hit towards the user.When one of these two things have happened three men will appear,one from behind him,one from the left and one from the right all within four meters of the target.These men will be holding a piece of film recording equipment which can be one of three things such as a microphone,cam recorder or a green screen.The one with the green scene will appear behind the target at all time and when he appears the background behind the target will all turn white with the previous background being shown on the green screen which is 3*3 meters.The illusions will then start shouting words such as 'cut' or 'stop' as if they are on a film set and begin walking to the target showing no sign of hostile actions.The target will then believe that the whole fight has been nothing more than a mere shooting of a film scene which he is apart.The whole point towards this Genjutsu is to confuse the target and stall them.While in reality the user of the Genjutsu can target the user if he wishes portraying one of the three men unknown to the target as he will be standing in the same place as he was previous acting annoyed as the scene has to be restarted when really that is also part of the illsuion.
    -Only usable two times per fight
    -Has to be taught by Lysander
    -No other Genjutsu can be used during the same turn
    -The initial hit can be from any attack it doesn't have to be physical

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Incorrect name. If you don't even name things correctly, I won't bother to check them.

    (kuroi soshite howaido) Black and white
    Type: Supplmentray
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will perform one hand seal and place the target into a Genjutsu. This makes the target of the Genjutsu see everything in black and white like they are in a old film.The use of this Genjutsu is to make attacks look different to what they really are to the colour being lost in them.
    -Has to be taught by Lysander
    -Only usable three time a fight

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Same as above

    (Katon: pirittokuru tei) Fire release:Hot air
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This Jutsu works similar to how people are able to float in the water.When trapped in water or surrounded by water the user will concentrate there katon chakra throughout the inside of their body making their body have katon chakra channeled throughout their body and fill with hot air.Once the user has done this he is able to float on large amounts of water or rise to the surface when trapped by water.
    -Only usable three times a fight
    -Has to be taught by Lysander

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    This would kill you and you don't need this...ever noticed that ninjas can walk on water and you have a water technique to merge with water or to swim insanely fast? And damage why? At least submit useful things please. DNR
     
         
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    (Doton: Konbeya Sanjaku)- Doton: Conveyor Belt
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs 2 handseals, then slams there hands to the ground. Causing the center of the ground between the opponent and the user to move in opposite directions. Causing the rage of the battle field to legthen.
    Note: Can change short range to mid range, mid range to long range.
    Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.

    (Katon: Yama Versuvius)- Katon: Mt. Versuvius
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user performs a long sequece of handseals. (6) Then releases a long dense stream of fire into the air. Once the stream of fire gets into the air, the user claps his hands. Causing the stream of fire to harden into molten rock and fall down all over the battle field. The rocks are the size of a small boulder.
    Note: Molten rocks fall all over the battlefield hitting the user and the opponent
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: If the user doesn't clap their hands, this jutsu can be used to warm the sky up for kirin
    Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

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    DNR. This makes no sense...fire that hardens into rock? Thats Lava genius... :sy:

    (Fuuton: Shippuu Tama)- Fuuton: Hurricane Bullet(s)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user flicks his middle finger outwards releasing a small blast of wind. By performing a single handseal, the blast of wind turns into a hurricane sending the opponent flying.
    Note: You can shot off more then one bullet
    Note: The more bullets, the less strong it is and the mre handseals
    Note: Can only be taught by Gecko


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't copy other peoples techniques. I've made this and cali has as well. DNR.
     
         
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    Mokushiroku:Apocalypse
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:Apocalypse is the name given to a sword which rumuor had it was forged by one of the sages son himself however that remains unclear and yet to be proven. The sword is 20 meters tall in height and was from titanium and lead and thus is indestructible. The sword though being powerful has its limits and cannot be infused with any elemental chakra. However it has two unique traits which sets it aside from other swords. The sword shares its own unique chakra signature from the user and can knock the user out a genjutsu he is casted upon by creating a chakra surge which he redirects towards the user body, however the genjutsu which can be broken is limited to [A Rank and below] The other ability of the swords is its ability to create minor shockwaves blast[B Rank] by the swinging of the sword in a to and Through movement which creates such effects.

    Note:Can only be used /wielded by thunderbolt
    Note:Last for only 4 turns
    Note:Creation of shockwaves and genjutsu breaking Count as a Move.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Follow correct template.

    Genjutsu sutairu: Enjin no shōgai: Genjutsu Style: All Engines Failed
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs the Tiger-Dog-Ox hand seals and casts a genjutsu upon the opponent manipulating the flow of chakra in their brain, and creating an illusion where the opponent sees himself on an airplane which engines has failed and is no longer functional and thus is plunging and accelerating to hit the ground at more than 700km/h ,which upon impact the plane along with the opponent would be crushed and would be burning due to explosion. Whereas in reality the opponent is unharmed and ready for battle.

    Note: Can only be Taught by thunderbolt
    Note: Can only be done once in a battle
    Note: No Genjutsu Higher than A rank for the rest of the battle

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Follow correct template.
     
         
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    ~New cycle~
    (Tenrai Yajuu: Uzumaki Shikon)-Divine Beast: Whirlpool fang
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After performing the Heaven Twin Fang, the user and their ninken focus they're suiton chakra to envelop their giant piercing fang into the form a giant spinning whirlpool. The user and their ninken then, proceed to drill through the target leaving behind three small pillars of water that rise upward after passing through.

    Restrictions:
    -Must be a member of the Inuzuka clan to use this.
    -Must have started training in water.
    -Can only be taught by fang.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Done already. DNR.

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    (Kuchiyose: Go-rudo Neko)-Summoning: Gold Cat
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user tosses a large scroll into the air above the targets head and summons a large golden statue of a grinning cat that drops down onto the target, resulting in gold coins scattering about it around the area.

    Restriction:
    -Must have been trained in ninjutsu.
    -Can only be taught by fang.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Why gold coin? Don't add useless restrictions. Off course you need training in ninjutsu...duh! :sy: its a ninjutsu technique... No handseals? no restrictions? no size of the cat? why gold coins?
     
         
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    (Suiton: Nami Burēka) - Water Release: Wave Breaker
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user places his hands on the ground and from each hand produces a jet of pressurized water running across the ground towards his target. As they travel the jets rapidly expand into huge torrents of water that demolish whatever is in their way. The jets normally move in strait lines but the user can designate a path for them to follow before releasing them.

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    (Katon/Fuuton: Kaon Gufuu) – Fire/Wind Release: Pyroclastic Cyclone
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Kakuzu causes his wind-element mask to reach out from his back and mount itself above his shoulder before exhaling a powerful rotating wave of wind in the direction of the opponent. Simultaneously, Kakuzu begins spewing an immense stream of flammable superheated ash (similar to Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning) towards the intended target. The rotating wave of wind begins carrying the stream of ash, greatly augmenting its speed, heat and abrasive ability, making it a dangerous technique in all aspects. Due to the nature of the wind technique, it carries the stream of ash towards the opponent rather than dispersing it. The abrasiveness of the rotating wind-fused ash is on such a level its capable of skinning an opponent with mere contact. Afterwards, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in the technique becoming a dangerous stream of flames. This jutsu can also be performed with a clone with the Katon/Fuuton affinity or by both of Kakuzu's Fire and Wind masks.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
    Note: For other bios to use this technique, they must have a clone/summon with the Katon/Fuuton affinity.

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     Approved 
    Nice. I like it! good job!

    -Resubmission-

    Quote Originally Posted by Negative Knight View Post
    -Resubmitting-

    (Kuro Ito Roiyaru Koujou) – Dark Threads Royal Siege
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground. Within seconds, the underground of the terrain is infested with a network of dark threads infused with the user’s own chakra. Straight after creation, the user detaches themselves from the created source. The underground network extends to a 20 meter radius around the position the user first casts the jutsu. This allows the user to manipulate the dark threads directly from the terrain itself to perform various jutsus, however this jutsu can't be used to attack the opponent directly. Once the technique is cancelled the underground source of threads can no longer be manipulated. Whilst this jutsu is active, underground travel is impossible as the user/opponent will become tangled in a dense mass of threads if they attempt to do so. Furthermore, Earth techniques which affect/devastate the terrain will render this jutsu useless as the source of threads will be destroyed in the process.

    Note: Lasts for Four turns
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
    Note: Can only be Used by Negative Knight



    ~Declined~ I was just going to approve it then i saw the "twice" per battle thing, that's a definite no, supplementary techniques like this can only be used once, also add another restriction that says you can't use threads from your body anymore, as long as this is active, because all of the threads are released underground, an amount of threads that covers 20 meters are quite a massive one, unless you have fuuinjutsu or something and can summon other threads, like i told you before it's a bad idea, but needs those kind of restrictions.

    Removed "Must have Dark Threads active"

    Removed chakra cost in place of a turn limit.
    (Kuro Ito Roiyaru Koujou) – Dark Threads Royal Siege
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground. Within seconds, the underground of the terrain is infested with a network of dark threads infused with the user’s own chakra. Straight after creation, the user detaches themselves from the created source. The underground network extends to a 20 meter radius around the position the user first casts the jutsu. This allows the user to manipulate the dark threads directly from the terrain itself to perform various jutsus instead of feeding dark threads from his body into the ground. However this jutsu can't be used to attack the opponent directly. Once the technique is cancelled the underground source of threads can no longer be manipulated. Whilst this jutsu is active, underground travel is impossible as the user/opponent will become tangled in a dense mass of threads if they attempt to do so. Furthermore, Earth techniques which affect/devastate the terrain will render this jutsu useless as the source of threads will be destroyed in the process.

    Note: Lasts for Four turns
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
    Note: Can only be used by Negative Knight
    Note: Whilst this jutsu is active, Kakuzu cannot use dark threads directly from his body



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    Quote Originally Posted by Negative Knight View Post

    Raizu| Vengeous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Vengeous is a large sentient sword created by Kakuzu himself using his dark threads and the heart of a fallen foe. The sword itself is two meters in length (including the hilt) and is the same width as a compacted Samehada. The entirety of the sword is composed of spiky black threads, and the exterior is tightly weaved together into a dense structure, which is impossible to cut through by normal means. The hilt of the sword is constructed of pure obsidian and shape of the blade of itself looks much like a curved arrowhead with its tip resembling a crab’s pincer. The heart inside of the sword is located in the center of the blade and is fully functioning, resulting in Vengeous being considered both a living creature and a sentient ally to Kakuzu. As a result Vengeous is capable of acting of its own accord, rational thought and has a malicious personality inherited from Kakuzu. The sword itself can go weeks without nutrition and has a strict diet of blood which it ingests through its skin. The sword is usually carried around in a black and red scabbard, on the user’s back.

    Abilities
    -The sword is near impossible to break/cut through due to it’s tightly weaved exterior.

    -The sword is capable of releasing dark threads as tendrils to restrict and ensnare the opponent. The tendrils are capable of extending up to five meters and can come from anywhere on the blade. These tendrils can pierce the opponent's body, prevent their mobility or even disarm them of their weapon.

    The sword is capable of shooting out countless needles composed entirely of dark threads, which are about thirty centimeters in length and five times the width of a normal senbon. This will count as one of the user’s jutsu per turn.

    -The blade possess the ability to extend up to two meter spikes from everywhere on the blade or hilt at any time which are capable of skewering through the body of anyone they come into contact with.

    -When damaged, the sword can repair itself by growing new layers of dark threads. This is taken further by the sword’s ability to shed the outer layers of its skin, with a new layer of threads growing in its place.

    -The sword is capable of crawling, telepathically communicating with Kakuzu and acting of its own accord

    Restrictions
    -Can only be wielded for five turns per battle
    -Kakuzu is unable to use the heart of this sword for "Heart Reaper"
    -The sword possess no mouth and isn't capable of talking
    -Must have a Kakuzu bio to wield the sword
    -Vengeous is incapable of transferring chakra to the wielder
    -The Sword can be killed

    -Negative Knight is the only person capable of wielding this weapon. In response to anyone else who attempts to wield the blade, the sword erupts in a violent outburst, extending 10 meter spikes from everywhere on its body (including the hilt), severely impaling the unsuspecting wielder.

    -The sword possess a symbiotic relationship with the wielder, draining them of chakra every turn to maintain itself

    How the Sword Looks


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    ±± Pending ±±
    I don't feel I would approve this ever but thats just my "feel" of it. I'll leave it to another mod.

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    -Declined- I honestly love the idea and i will consider approving it if you worked well on the abilities a bit more, some need defining and all in general are broad, remove the telepathic stuff, last you say that the sword can be killed, but you say it can't be cut through or broken and when hurt will repair itself, so how can it be killed exactly? =_= i'll give you only one shot at this, and next time if i don't see everything i need i'll DNR it.
    -Resubmission-

    Raizu| Vengeous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Vengeous is a large sentient sword created by Kakuzu himself using his dark threads and the heart of a fallen foe. The sword itself is two meters in length (including the hilt) and is the same width as a compacted Samehada. The entirety of the sword is composed of spiky black threads, and the exterior is tightly weaved together into a dense structure, which is impossible to cut through by normal means. The hilt of the sword is constructed of pure jade and shape of the blade of itself looks much like a curved arrowhead with its tip resembling a crab’s pincer. The heart inside of the sword is located in the center of the blade and is fully functioning, resulting in Vengeous being considered both a living creature and a sentient ally to Kakuzu. As a result Vengeous is capable of acting of its own accord, rational thought and has a malicious personality inherited from Kakuzu. The sword itself can go weeks without nutrition and has a strict diet of blood which it ingests through its skin. The sword is usually carried around in a black and red scabbard, on the user’s back.

    Abilities
    -The sword is near impossible to break/cut through due to it’s tightly weaved exterior.

    -The sword is capable of extending dark threads as tendrils to restrict and ensnare the opponent. These tendrils are capable of reaching up to five meters (short range) and can come from anywhere on the blade. The tendrils can pierce the bodies of other shinobi, can prevent the opponent's mobility by wrapping around them or even disarm a foe of their weapon. The amount of tendrils that can be released at any one time varies between 8 and 16. The tendrils themselves are each about the same width as a basic rope (ten centimeters) and all have sharp pointed ends. This is a B-Rank Ability

    -The sword is capable of shooting out countless needles composed entirely of dark threads, which are about thirty centimeters in length and five times the width of a normal senbon. The needles can be shot from anywhere on the blade and have a mid-range reach (10 meters). This will count as one of the user’s jutsu per turn. This is an A-Rank ability

    -The blade possess the ability to extend spikes from everywhere on the blade or hilt at any time, which are capable of skewering through the body of anyone they come into contact with. The spikes can reach up to two meters in length. Spikes which emerge from the blade resemble basic spears in both shape and width and the end result makes the sword look like its coated in an armour of spikes. Spikes which emerge from the hilt are much smaller, resembling needle-like thorns in shape and width. The spikes can be released at any time, adding a further element of surprise to the wielder's fighting style. Shortly after release the threaded spikes re-enter the sword, restoring the weapon's ordinary shape. This is an A-Rank ability

    -The blade can use a limited amount of the elemental chakra present in its heart. It can use it to unleash blasts of pure elemental chakra (of the main elemental afinity of that heart) in various forms as both streams, blasts, projectiles, crescents, etc by swinging the sword. The sword can only use one element which is the main element of that heart. This ability is S-Rank.

    -The sword is capable of crawling and acting independently

    Restrictions
    -Kakuzu is unable to use the heart of this sword for "Heart Reaper"
    -The sword possess no mouth and isn't capable of talking but it does communicate with the wielder in an unknown form
    -Must have a Kakuzu bio to wield the sword
    -Vengeous is incapable of transferring chakra to the wielder
    -The Sword can be killed by being burnt, melted or severely shocked. This makes the weapon extremely prone to death from Fire, Lightning and similar attacks, specially S-Rank and above.
    -Negative Knight is the only person capable of wielding this weapon. In response to anyone else who attempts to wield the blade, the sword erupts in a violent outburst, extending 10 meter spikes from everywhere on its body (including the hilt), severely impaling the unsuspecting wielder.
    -The 4 main abilities of the sword count as moves from the users move count and each can only be used 3 times.
    -If the sword is severely damaged, the user can give it a heart and renew it.

    How the Sword Looks


    Removed the sword's telepathic ability, its ability to repair itself and the ability to shed layers of its skin.

    Changed the hilt's material from obsidian to jade, I prefer green xD

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    Edited. Added an ability i think you'll like. Seemed logical that it would have something like this.
     
         
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    Kuchiyose: Chakra Senpuku Yakke- Summoning: Chakra Concealing Cloak
    Type: Supplementary/Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Description: The user forms the ram - Tigher hand seal and summons a special cloak and puts it on. Once the cloak is activate, it blocks all chakra sensors/dojutsu and keeps the user concealed. The cloak is all black and has a hood. This doesn't supress the users chakra, however if the user does a technique over A rank, the cloak automatically turns off. This isn't invisibility, the user can still be seen. He just can't be sensed or his chakra system seen by a dojutsu.

    -No modes can be active with this cloak (Sage Mode, Curse Mark, EIG)
    - During a battle, the chakra concealment lasts 5 turns
    -Can only be used 3 times
    - Can only be taught by better



    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Why would you summon this? Also, acts too much like the Nekura clan.


    (Doton:Ganzan) - Earth Release:Rock Mountain
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user claps their hands together. The user then manipulates the earth around them to create a rock mountain that can be used to block incoming attacks. This mountain is intricately designed, sculpted into what seems to be a giant warrior

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    ♠ Declined ♠
    Exactly what kind of attacks? Rank? Also, give it an usage limit.


    (Doton:Tetsu Iwa Kobushi) - Earth Release:Iron Rock Fist
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user begins by performing the Horse->Dog hand seals and then stretches the index and middle fingers towards the target. This prompts a very large arm made of rocks, whose appearance is reminiscent of an intricate gauntlet, to emerge from the earth not far from him, and to move towards the foe with its fist clenched. This stone limb can be elongated for great lengths, with its "forearm" taking the form of an extremely long succession of segments; something which also makes it free to twist, allowing the user to move it around as he wishes and change its trajectory, if the enemy does somehow manage to send the fist back at the user.



    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigō View Post
    Resubmitting; hope it's better now ^^ Edited a few parts> Roses are 4-5 meters big, and the user can freely move due to the lack of roses and vines surrounding the user

    (Kinjutsu Doton: Rōzugāden) - Forbidden Earth Art: Rose Garden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to the user)
    Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Snake, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the snake handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the concentrated doton chakra in a burst, the enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction. By doing this the user will cause gigantic roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, silicate is basic earth mineral that can be found in the earth crust, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of this mineral, that can only found in the earth crust thought the user has to use a great amount of chakra to control this mineral it gains a redish-greenish color, making them look like actual roses thought they are just silicate minerals combining the minerals with rock hard and dense stones given actual form by chakra. These gigantic roses are sharper than blades and much denser having dozens gigantic spikes stiking out of the core also on the green colored branches and vines. Each of the roses are about 1 to 2 meters big reaching out up to 15 meters into the heavens, in a mayhem of branches and leaves (which are solid and have spikes stiking out of them) each capable of piercing through metal, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, thought the user can move freely due to the lack of roses surrounding the user each being highly infused with the users Doton chakra, granting the user the ability to use earth techniques from the garden with increased speed and reduced difficulty, from the large amount of silicate minerals the ground will also be completely covered by this mineral.
    ♦ Note: This technique can only be used by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
    ♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for two turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will take enormous damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-30)
    ♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat due to the severe damage taken by this jutsu. (doing so will result in killing the user)

    ±± Declined ±± No reference to the speed chart. Also, no, you can't use other earth techniques from these roses as those techniques specially not with increased speed. Allowing you to shape the earth into such an intricate and complex construct is already pushing the limits of what you can do with earth release that that would be simply overkill. Kinjutsu? No. The name of this technique is a "DOTON/EARTH RELEASE/EARTH ARTS/EARTH STYLE" technique.

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    Resubmitting: I've removed the ability to perform earth techniques from these roses, added reference to the speed chart. And made several other changes..

    (Doton: Rōzugāden) - Earth Style: Rose Garden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-20 to the user)
    Description: The user makes a quick sequence of five handseals, Horse → Tiger → Dragon → Bird → Serpent, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the Serpent handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the gathered doton chakra in a burst. The enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction of the battlefield. By doing this the user will cause gigantic roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, silicate is basic earth mineral that can be found in the earth crust, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of this mineral, thought the user has to use a great amount of chakra to control this mineral, it gains a red-light green color, making them look like actual roses. These roses and spike branches are created by combining the silicate minerals with dense stones found deep in the ground. These gigantic roses and branches are sharper than blades and denser than Iron itself, having dozens of gigantic spikes stiking out of the core and the branches, vines etc. all covered with razor sharp spikes, which can easily penetrate earthen domes and whatnot. Each of the roses are about 1 to 3 meters in diameters, and as tall as 10 meters with the vines included. Causing the battlefield to be covered in a mayhem of branches and leaves each capable of piercing or tearing through very dense materials, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, thought the user can move freely due to the lack of roses surrounding the user.

    ♦ Note: This technique can only be taught by Ichigo.
    ♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
    ♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart. (being an sage by post reduces your speed to S-Jounin)
    ♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for five turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will take damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-20)
    ♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat for the rest of the battle due to the weakend state of the body.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users' moves, due to the abnormal amount of chakra used to perform this jutsu.

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    Prusias' Cane
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This cane was found to be in the possession of Prusias. While he was running his big business empire, he had acquired this artifact. It was from ancient times, it was intricately carved and had a dragon on the top. Upon closer inspection, Prusias realized that he could pull on the dragon and a blade would come out. The blade functioned just as a normal katana, Prusias was fascinated with this cane. The cane itself was unbreakable, it could be used as a blunt insturment to beat enemies with. However, the cane had two specific abilites. One of which was that it could make constructs made of extremely dense fire chakra. These constructs were limited though, Prusias discovered that he could only make 4 specific constructs (listed below). The other ability of the cane is that it could initiate a small C ranked genjutsu when the opponent heard the user tap the cane to the ground. The illusion made it seem as if, the user had become a great red dragon with 3 heads. The dragon would then grab the opponent with it's mouth and swallow him. Then, the opponent would feel stomach acids slowly digesting him.

    List of Constructs
    ~All these constructs are C ranked~

    -The first construct is a swarm of bees made entirely of dense fire chakra that would swarm the opponent. One bee alone could only do the damage of a small bee sting, but several together could cause some damage. The amount of bees, are the same as the amount in a small bee hive.-

    -The second construct is a Rhino made of fire. It rushes the opponent, and does damage. It is smaller however than a real rhino, about 3/4 the size of a real rhino.-

    -The third construct is a large phoenix made of fire, it doesen't do damage at all. Instead, it flies high into the air and then it explodes in a brilliant display of light. The light has the same effect a flash bomb would. This doesen't affect dojutsu users or chakra sensors.-

    -The final construct is two large arms. The arms smash into the ground directly near the opponent, this is to try to protect the user if the opponent comes into close range.-

    All the constructs can reach up to mid range, except for the last which can only reach into short range.




    -Restrictions-

    Can only stay in effect for 4 turns before it poofs away
    Can only be wielded by PresidentBush
    Genjutsu ability can only be used once per turn
    Can only make one of the four specific constructs a turn
    Genjutsu and construct ability, can't be used together in the same turn

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    Don't copy other peoples CW. DNR.

    (Raiton: Aoi Tatsu)Lightning: Blue Dragon
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90 (-10 to user)
    Description:The user concentrates intense raiton chakra, and condenses it while using shape manipulation to make it into the form of a blue dragon. The dragon is completely made of dense raiton chakra. It is dense enough for the dragon to be able to punch at someone. The dragon can smash through S rank and below earthern defenses easily. It has the power to launch an A rank beam of lightning from it's mouth at the opponent. The dragon itself can move extremely quickly (twice the speed of a thrown kunai)

    What it looks like


    -Restrictions-

    Lasts only 1 turn
    Leaves the user unable to use lightning in the same turn or next turn
    Can only be used once a battle
    Must be taught by PB

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Similar to existing techniques.

    (Fuuton: Altairis)Wind Release:Altairis
    Type:Offense
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user crosses their arms above their head, and begins to gather chakra. He then causes a lot of air to rush to a single point right above the user. It forms a small black orb of condensed wind. The user then unleashes the orb at the user, and as it flies the orb is still absorbing air getting bigger. As it gets closer to the opponent, it feels as if it is drawing them in. This makes it difficult to dodge.

    -Restrictions-

    Can only be used twice per battle
    No other wind jutsu in the same turn
    Can only be taught by PB

    What it looks like:


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    Description makes no sense and from what i'm understanding its similar to existing techniques. reword it
     
         
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    CFS technique

    Spirits of Balance: Hellhounds (Onryodo: Yomi no Ryoken)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user offers a blood sacrifice and a seal stating “Hell (Jigoku)” forms on the floor where the blood drips. Moments later the technique activates when shadowy figures starts to surround the user, these figures takes the form of hounds with black fur and a glowing streak of red. They have red eyes, intangible bodies and feral behavior. There are three hounds in total: Barghest, Black Shuck, & Gytrash. These hounds are composed entirely of Yin energy alone, Black Shuck & Gytrash chase their targets, surrounding and attacking them. The area these hounds successfully touch suffers from necrosis which begins to expand to the rest of the body, this is a result of Yin energy disrupting the Yang energy of the target and the sudden loss of vitality causes the body parts to quickly die and decay. Once the target is unable to defend himself, barghest then moves to deal the final blow which seals the opponent’s dead remains as well as his chakra inside the user’s consciousness.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.
    -Lasts two turns.

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    Add a note saying this can be countered by destroying the "dogs" with any tchnique capable opf doing so. And that the blood needs to be spilled on the ground, no where else. Als, remove the lasts 2 turns. Makes no sense. Remove the seals him inside your mind. Thats a no go.


    Sealing Technique: Shell of the Black Turtle (Fuinjutsu: Genbu no Kai)
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30 + Damage absorbed
    Damage:N/a
    Description: Shell of the Black turtle is a powerful Defensive-Barrier Sealing technique, named after of the 4 Guardian Beasts Black Turtle (Genbu). The technique is performed using the boar seal, it forms an array of several hexagonal shields of solidified energy, the color of these shields is translucent red. The shields levitate around the user and move with him as he travels, the shields move with the users will and can be used to form a defensive grid as well as spherical barrier, because of the unique shape of the shields it makes the technique very versatile to both defend and attack at the same time. The barrier does not extends to user alone, the shields could be moved (Medium distances) to trap the opponents or to protect allies. Named after Genbu, the technique itself has outstanding Defensive capabilities though it requires an equally skilled user to wield. The shield has some drawbacks:
    The amount of energy required to maintain the shield is proportional to the amount of energy being blocked by the shields. So to say, blocking a technique with 80 Damage requires a Chakra tax of 80, this makes the technique only suitable for users with good chakra reserves. Because the technique cannot be replayed over and over, its not too good for weak techniques, getting struck with strong techniques on the other hand consumes a good amount of chakra instantly (Chakra worth 2 S ranks, to defend against 1) which can be exhausting against overly powerful techniques. The defense is otherwise absolute but when put against close range techniques that require a constant supply of chakra such as Chidori, continuous contact will quickly drain the user’s chakra requiring him to break the technique if possible. When a shield breaks, it creates a small concussion knocking back opponent a few meters away.
    Note: Last 2 turns, usable twice per conflict.
    Appearance: X

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    Railgun (Rerugan)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Railgun is a buster sword technique that uses the main blade and an ordinary kunai to create a powerful projectile. The use unlocks the main blade and hooks a kunai near the hilt, using the sword’s ability to generate electromagnetism he charges both ends of the sword to emit small electromagnetic fields that charges lorentz force between the swords where the kunai is held then using the same fields the user accelerates the kunai shooting out it , the user experiences a small kick back upon release. Because of the principle applied in the technique the kunai doesn’t loses trajectory even after traveling a very long distance despite being shot with great force and speed making this technique incredibly accurate and precise. Upon impact the kunai deals non chakra based, kinetic damage strong enough to push back and kill a large summon suffice to say a human wont survive either. That said, the technique’s own precision and force can become a drawback, it cannot be used in close proximity or else the user won’t able to escape the techniques own force and it requires the user to be stationary with a good footing to take aim, given the precision of the technique minor disturbances can cause the user to miss an opponent who is already at a long distance. The projectile can be tracked by 3T (and above or similar) but the overal complex procedure of the technique takes some time to perform and prepare, making the effectiveness of the technique relative to the situation and the opening the user might have found to use it. The projectile is a raw chakra projectile, heavily dense, capable of fighting in equal terms with any elemental nature.
    Note: Usable 2 times per battle

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    (Suiton: Shelob No Yūwaku) Water Release: Shelob's Temptation
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs two handseals, manipulating the moisture in the air and ground so as to create a gigantic web made of wire thin threads comprised of water. The web envelops the area mid range around the user, being exceptionally inconspicuous due to the thin size of the threads and the translucency of the water. The threads have an exceptionally sticky like quality, as well as being rather elastic and having a solid like property. Should the opponent move, they would find themselves running into one of the threads, when they do so the vibrations of the threads movement would be sent directly back to the user, who is connected to the web via use of a single thread that attaches to the users chest. This effectively allows the user to detect the movement of any objects within the webs range of influence lest they find a way to avoid the webs entirely. This single web attached to the users chest is optional, and is not a requirement, leaving it up to the user whether he/she'd want it, as it'd be more or less useless if the user and his opponent have a clear view of each other. Also, when an object comes in contact with a thread, the web clings to them as it begins to expand and propagate, fully consuming the opponent in a sticky mass of water in an attempt to drown them or fully cease the objects movements. The user is capable of traversing through the web with ease, without being hindered. The user is also capable of removing the webs attachment from their chest, so as to prevent attacks conducting through the web and directly into them. Alternatively the user can perform an extra handseal upon the opponent being ensnared, this causes the web to abruptly snap in on the targeted object, trapping them within its wired embrace as it consumes them in an exceptionally large and exceptionally strong sticky bubble of imprisonment.
    Note: Can only be used 2x
    Note: Web lasts until either destroyed, or four turns pass.
    Note: No Water jutsus higher than S-rank, in the same turn.

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    Well done. Loved it.

    (Ototon: Saishō's Kaiketsu Suru ) - Sound Release: Saishō's Resolve
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/defence/suplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (Excluding the pieces which may or may not hit opponent.)
    Description: A specific sound jutsu which involves the user recognizing the resonant frequency of any solids brought before him and using his sound mastery to recognize and mimic the frequency with which said object would vibrate, allowing the user to cause it to smash into thousands of pieces almost instantly. This jutsu would be able to destroy any and every solids, but would be useless against anything energy based and/or intangible (Wind, Fire, Lightning etc). Although the jutsu itself is mainly defence, as it simply destroys solid constructs, upon destruction, the pieces which made the solid construct would burst and fly everywhere short range from the point of their explosion, allowing the user of this jutsu to do harm to the opponent whilst destroying their jutsu. Moreover, the direction in which the pieces go can be somewhat controlled by the user, there are two options, the user can either make the pieces go outwards as already stated, or by the addition of a mere hand seal and more chakra, cause the pieces which made the object to smash and go inward, almost as if said object had imploded, this would be used if the users allies are nearby, as it'd allow them to remain safe whilst destroying the opponents jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: No other sound jutsu in the next turn.
    Note: No other Sound jutsu for the rest of the turn.
    Note: Can't be used on humans or any other living beings.

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    Controlling the debris is a no no so remove it. And what do you do? Do you scream? Do you clap your hands? do you touch the object? Because even if you know the frequency which you can't just like that btw (so find a way that you can get that information), you still need to produce a sound that actually overcomes that frequency and makes the object shatter.

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Yangu no Kanashimi) - Summoning Technique: Sorrow of the Young
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A summoning jutsu which works in a slightly way, which allows the user to set up a trap and/or prepare for a situation, without having to use his strongest summon straight away. Sorrow of the young is a summoning jutsu which requires the user to summon a small baby of whatever animal they have under their contract, that small animal would have a special ability of summoning an elder summon (whatever they consider 'elder', so they're more or less able to summon any created summoning they wish) animal of their same specie at any point they feel threatened or are ordered to do so. The animal they summon is summoned short range away from their location. Moreover the small summon would be able to talk and it'd also have any passive abilities which that specific contract allows
    Note: Can be used 3 times.
    Note: Small animal making the summoning for an 'elder' counts as one of the 3 moves per turn.
    Note: The young animal can summon an 'elder' from any point after the turn they're summoned in.

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    You can't submit a custom summon from no contract. You need to specify which contract you're using for this.
     
         
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    ( wabisuke ) the penetant one.
    Rank:S Rank
    Type: Weapon
    Range: short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This blade is a very unique blade as it is in a beheading shape of sorts and has a unique ability. The blade itself is made from iron deep in the ground which was found under the heaviest weighted boulder.The ability of wabisuke is similar to weighted boulder the doton technique it utilizes this ability ie doton weighted boulder but to a squared amount of weight anything this blade slices becomes twice as heavy and so fourth if three slices are made the enemy become three two the power heavier. This ability can be used on anything from enemy's to kunai or shuriken or even enemy's arms making them unable to lift them to make handsigns. The blade itself is held in a special sheath while traveling to prevent myself from being affected or nicked by the blade. The blade is regular weight of a sword meaning the ability it possesses does not directly affect the weight of the blade but rather what the blade cuts or comes into contact with.
    Note: can only be wielded by Roju.
    Note: can only be used as long as doton is mastered as the weighted boulder tech is based in this sword.
    Note:can be used on solid based CE's examples caramel, tar, sand, doton, wood.
    Restrictions: the blades ability can be used as many times as needed on any objects.
    On enemy's the blade's ability can only be used 3 times and not in the same turn.




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    Done already. DNR.
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    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: 360* Pressure Damage
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything around it's radius: Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed extending all around the user and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, blast radius some how then the user will die instantly from the pressure of the wind at close range.

    Restriction only usable once in battle.
    Note cannot use wind the following turn.
    Note can only be taught by Roju*

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    DNR.

    (Katon: Keshi Makuga batafurai) - Fire Release: Exploding Butterflies
    Rank: S rank
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user first performs a sequence of four handsigns gather's Katon chakra into their mouth and proceeds to exhale small flaming butterflies. Which flutter out scattered across the field. The butterflies explode on contact of anything they touch and can be harmful to the user if touched as well. A limit of 10 butterflies can be made per usage of this jutsu. The butterflies in themselves are regular size and no other differences to normal butterflies. Sipped of the attack is not fast by any means the butterflies float around In the combat range's of short to mid range. The blast from one of e butterflies alone is a radius of 4feet.

    Restrictions: only 10 butterflies are able to be formed at once.
    -Cannot use fire above C rank for the next two turns
    Note -the butterflies running into each other will not cause them to explode, however if the explosion of one butterfly goes into the radius of another they will all explode creating a giant explosion and can hit the user if you do not relocate your postion.
    - can only be taught by Roju*

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
     
         
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