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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Doton: Beatorappu | Earth Style: Bear Trap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses chakra beneath the opponent and manipulates the earth around that them. The user makes the earth from two parallel directions quickly pounce up on the opponents leg(s). The two slabs are full of spikes on the inside and moulds to the opponents leg upon clamping to it. The height can range from the top of the thigh to just the ankle. It happens in a quick, surprising action, like a bear trap.

    Restrictions
    – Can only be taught by Kryptiic
    – Can only be used three times per match.
    ♠ Leaving for Scorps, Xylon, or Dante. I like it, just seems a little generic to be an unique CJ. ♠

    X-Approved-X Reduced the rank.

    Futon: Sore wa Kaze no Nakada | Wind Style: It's in the Wind
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs two hand seals and infuses their chakra into the wind around a target. They cause the air, two meters around the target to rapidly move in different directions. Hidden in the wind are very small, tangible sheets of wind. The sheets cut into the opponents body, not deep enough to kill, but because of the sheer amount of sharp sheets it feels like they are being torn to shreds and by the end of it their body is completely covered in cuts and their clothes completely torn. Although it's not meant to kill, the sheer number of cuts causes an immense amount of pain all over the body.

    Restrictions
    – Can only be taught by Kryptiic
    – Can only be used two times per match.
    – No wind jutsu above A rank in the same turn.
    ♠ Approved ♠
    Mid range only or too OP.


    Genjutsu: Saizu wa Jūyō | Illusionary Arts: Size Matters
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: To perform this Genjutsu the user just has to have some sort of vision on the opponents body. In the Genjutsu the user can alter the length of their weapons or limbs. This is used to put off the opponent in close combat and can be very useful if doubled up with certain Genjutsu.

    Restrictions
    – Can only be taught by Kryptiic
    – Can only be used 4 times per fight.
    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. ♠


    X-Approved-X
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 01-07-2013 at 02:24 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Shōnetsu Jigoku) Fire Release: Blazing Hell
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short to Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user molds a small amount of chakra in their hands and then flicks it into a small ball of fire towards the enemy. The purpose of the technique is not to strike an enemy, but to make sure it reaches near the area they are currently on. Once the small ball of fire comes into contact with the ground, it’ll immediately grow and surround the target in a complete circle. There is a small five second delay before the flames begins to ignite and erupt into a huge column of fire, reaching up to twenty feet high. The heat generated from the flames is so hot that anything coming into contact with the column will be burned instantly. This technique is mostly used to trap an opponent inside a blazing fire like prison and it is large enough to encompass one or two people. Suffocation is possible and likely should they not be able to escape, as the flames will quickly devour all available oxygen.
    Note: Can only be used twice per-match.
    Note: Five second delay before the flames ignite.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nathan.
    ♠ Declined, do not re-submit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.

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    (Meiton: Ura — Koten) Dark Release: Palm — Solo
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemy jutsu. The user discharges a quick burst of dark-natured chakra in a shockwave in order to knock their opponent back a large distance. The point of impact acts as a "marker" by leaving behind residual chakra on the target. From there the user builds up chakra in their hand and fire it as a condensed beam of energy from the Dark Release marking on their palm, using the earlier marker in order to hit the exact same spot at range.
    Notes:
    - Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    - Can only be used twice per-match.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.
    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. ♠
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    I like the idea, but things won't be left vague, so i'm gonna need you to specify the exact size of this "condensed beam" and add a note that states that the shockwave doesn't cause any kind of damage considering it's used to mark the spot only.


    (Meiton: Ura — Gakudan) Dark Release: Palm — Orchestra
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemy jutsu. The user attacks with a surprisingly powerful set of palm strikes, each of which delivers a miniature bursting shockwave of dark-natured chakra. Each attack avoids the chest up until the final blow which packs a larger amount of force than the rest in order to knock the opponent back a fair distance. After which the user discharges a flurry of condensed beams of chakra which all aim for previously damaged points on the target before colliding in a collective explosion upon impact.
    Notes:
    - Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    - Can only be used twice per-match.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.
    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. Not very experienced about Dark Release CJs. ♠

    X-Approved-X Raised the rank
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-11-2013 at 08:34 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
    Originally Posted by blaise12
    Summoning Animal:Magpie
    Scroll Owner:Me(Blaise12)
    Other Users who have signed contract:none
    Summoning Boss if existing:Azula
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:none
    Description and Background:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magpie

    Remaining true to the animals nature the magpie is ferociously fierce and aggresive it can speak like a human in english.They will attack anyone who is not from the users village friendly or not.They are generally black and white colour but can also be in other colours such as Sri Lanka Blue Magpie which as the name suggest is mainly blue.
    The user also recieves a tatoo of a magpie in their shoulder.



    Azula the Azure-winged Magpie
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:It is rougly the size of peins bird summon which from the show seems to be 2-3 meter in length and 1-2 meters in width it has a shallow beak and slim body.It can shoot S rank water or below from its mouth/beak at enemies or objects.
    Restrictions:
    ~water blast counts towards users move limit
    ~summonable only once per battle.

    NOTE:for the azula magpie no japanese name came up for it.

    feel free to edit anything that you need/want to.

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    ±± All Declined ±± Under the Blue Rule
    Edited
    Summoning Animal:Magpie
    Scroll Owner:Me(Blaise12)
    Other Users who have signed contract:none
    Summoning Boss if existing:Azula
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:none
    Description and Background:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magpie

    Remaining true to the animals nature the magpie is ferociously fierce and aggresive it can speak like a human in english.They will attack anyone who is not from the users village friendly or not.They are generally black and white colour but can also be in other colours such as Sri Lanka Blue Magpie which as the name suggest is mainly blue.
    The user also recieves a tatoo of a magpie in their shoulder.

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    Azula the Azure-winged Magpie
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:It is rougly the size of peins bird summon which from the show seems to be 2-3 meter in length and 1-2 meters in width it has a shallow beak and slim body.It can shoot S rank water or below from its mouth/beak at enemies or objects It can also perform any water techniques that the user knws and do so without any handseals.(they still count towards 3 tech limit per turn)
    Restrictions:
    ~water blast counts towards users move limit
    ~summonable only once per battale
    ~Stays on feild for 2 turn

    X-Declined-X Quote it properly
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 01-03-2013 at 07:30 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Frozen Gauntlets(Touketsu Kougake)*
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short range
    Chakra: 10 per turn and 40 when used
    Damage: 80
    Description: The frozen gauntlets are two specially made gauntlets, they are unique, powerful, and extremely useful. It's uniqueness comes from it's shape, which can be devided into two forms, the first is the 'suppressed' form, in which the gauntlets extend towards the user's upper shoulder in a 'compressed' form where it is not bulky, but rather sleek and 'thin' similar to how a normal undershirt *extends on the arms area. The other form is the 'released' form in which the gauntlets take a more bulky shape(similar to picture shown below but without the nails sticking in and in a more 'clean' cut shape). The gauntlet's base color is light blue, it has black stripes around it shaped as flames. It's power comes from it being made of unknown metal, which makes the gauntlets very durable, the gauntlets being made of metal were conductive to electricity, the user being wary of such a disadvantage added a feature to the gauntlets, the inner side of the gauntlets were made of insulating material which 'appeared' in the 'released' form. The usefulness of the gauntlets came from three abilities, the first being the suppressing technique presented by the gauntlets, this technique was constantly active, regardless if the gauntlets were in the 'suppressed' or 'released' form, the chakra that is present in the hands of the user is suppressed or rather hidden, meaning that chakra sensing nin can't see chakra in the hand area. The second ability was the gauntlets ability to freeze water when it comes in contact with it, it allowed the user to freeze water based attacks of the opponent B rank and below, and all water techniques created by the user, it also was capable of freezing entire lakes making them 'ice rings', also when the gauntlets were in the 'released' form they will cause numbness to the opponent when it comes in contact with, and it can cause frost bites if it stays in contact with the opponent limb for more than 6 seconds. The third 'ability' was the user himself, if the individual trying to wield the weapon isn't permitted and isn't from the Yuki clan they will get frozen in their place.
    -Must have mastered ninjutsu to use and be a member of the Yuki clan with ice release mastered .
    -Each ability when used counts towards the three jutsu limit, except the suppressing technique it only counts as one move in the initial turn of the battle.
    -The changing in the form of the weapon doesn't count towards the three jutsu limit, and the user can change one arm if he wants.
    -While in the 'released' form no hand seals can be performed.
    -The freezing ability can be used four time per battle.
    -Each gauntlet can take a damage of 160 damage points.
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    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. Not too sure about those abilities it has.♠

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Too much. Unreasonable. It makes all your Water techniques turn into Ice techniques... =_= Its too much.

    Ice Release: Frost Giants Sphere(Hyouton: Kanki Kyoukan tama)*
    Type: Attack
    Rank: F-Rank
    Range: Long range*
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90(-10 or full damage when hit by it)
    Description: *The user will first perform five hand seals and release their chakra into the air, as the chakra is in the air, the user will condense it to the form of a small ice orb levitating in the air in front of the user. After the orb/sphere is formed the user will perform another hand seal and cause the orb to travel towards the opponent(s) with speed(equivalent to that of user) the user then has two choices detonating the orb before it reaches the opponent by performing a hand seal and causing the orb to explode and have shrouds of ice spread in all directions from the detention point or the user cam allow the orb to hit the opponent and explode sending shrouds of ice through the body of the opponent and anyone near him(if in range).
    -Usable Once
    -No wind and water techs of B rank and higher for the next two turns so no B rank ice as well.
    -must be member of Yuki clan and mastered ice.
    -The technique is similar to Atsugai but in a wider effect so anyone within mid range will get pelted by the shrouds of ice.
    -The shrouds of ice will be of the size of Kunias in length and width of 1.5 kunia.
    -The shrouds of Ice are formed from the pressure the explosion presents in the air, it is like when a cold breeze of air passes through a warm patch the warm patch will become cold, here it is similar, and the reason why the air takes form of kunia is the special way the explosion occurs(in a manner that makes a molding block for the kunia)
    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. ♠

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Similar to existing technique.

    Ice Release: Advanced Ice Phasing(Hyouton: Koudo Hyouton Sou)*
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S rank
    Range: self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:*This technique is an advanced version of ice phasing technique, this version allows the user after performing six hand seals to phase through ice techniques of his creation of A rank and below, and B rank and below techniques created by the opponent.
    -Usable Twice per battle.
    -No ice moves above A-Rank that turn.
    -Must have mastered ice and be a Yuki clan member.

    ♠ Approved ♠
    Added another restriction

    Approval of the original ice phasing below
    Quote Originally Posted by mangekyo byakugan View Post
    Fixing a mistake on my end and updating.

    Ice release: Ice phasing (Hyouton: Hyouton sou)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user after performing three hand seals to phase through ice techniques of his creation of B rank and below for example in 1000 needles the user will no longer have to jump to avoid the needles, the techniques also enables the user to phase through C rank ice techniques created by the opponent.
    -Must be member of Yuki clan.
    -Usable four times per battle.
    -Can only be used by mangekyo byakugan and those taught by him.

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    ±± Approved ±±
    with the same note as Roku...*

    Ice Release: Sticky Ice( Hyouton : Betabeta Hyouton)
    Type: Supplemenatry
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Now ice release is based on water and wind now in the water element there are techniques that derive from the normal water uses into different categories like (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field the user will use the characteristics of the chakra used in that technique and cause his ice techniques to be sticky for example ice release technique can be used to trap the opponent and create a medium for ice techniques that will become sticky, the user can avoid getting stuck in the ice by channeling chakra through his body while he does that he can't use lightning, earth, and fire if the user doesn't channel chakra then they will get caught by their own techniques stickiness
    -Usable on a total of 3 ice techniques.
    -when used the user will use the normal technique as he will normally do but the technique will have sticky characteristics.
    -Must be member of Yuki clan.
    -Can only be used by mangekyo byakugan and those taught by him.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    *Did you even read the technique once you wrote it? Doesn't make sense.

    New Submission

    Flux Blades of Heaven(Tengoku No Furakkusuburedo)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid-Long Range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Flux Blades of Heaven are a set of 3 spinning objects(Bey-Blades) that are attached to a holder located in the users arm. The user will attach a Flux blade to the holder/launching pad locating on his arm and the holder/LP will release the Flux Blade with great speed, the flux blade will spin with great speeds and heads towards the opponent the blades are made of materials similar to this of swords so it has the same characteristics as a sword and to add the spinning effect and momentum the power is greatly increased.
    The three Flux blades have the same cutting ability and durability(stated below).
    But each has a characteristic: one flux blade takes when released the characteristics of the ice element(blue glowing and frost bites will appear where it hits) the second takes out characteristics of the fire element(red aura and burn marks appear on the opponent where hit) the third takes on the characteristics of the lightning element(yellow aura and if it hits let's say the palm of the right hand and the opponent for some reason doesn't take damage the right hand palm will be numbed for 1 turn).*
    The holder/LP of the Flux blade can launch the first one of the flux blades or the user can take out the third flux blade and place it in the holder if he chooses to launch that blade first.
    -The holder/LP is indestructible but is conductive to electricity due to it being made of metal.
    -The Flux blades can withstand a damage of 100 in total so a S rank and D rank will destroy the flux blade shattering it. The blades have a cumalitive system so if it is hit with D rank at first turn and S rank at 7th turn it will still get destroyed.
    -The flux blades can "jump" and change direction freely for example the Flux Blades can approach the opponent while spinning and and before they reach him they will "jump" and hit him in the nose.
    -The flux blades have blades to it's sides that is what gives them the cutting ability of a sword.
    -The blades without elemental weaknesses can cut through C rank earth attacks/defenses without loosing any of there momentum and power this is due to the way they are designed to move through rocky terrains.
    -The blades are resistant to C rank heat attacks although if they get hit by a fireball of C rank they will continue through it with same speed and strength as it was released but it will get 15 damage towards it durability.(half of the damage).
    -The blades can be released by the user hands without the LP but they will stop spinning after 1 turn and they won't have the above two "abilities."
    -The blades when releases by the LP will be capable of spinning for 4 turns.
    -Two Flux blades can be released simultaneously from the LP.
    -If a single flux blade is released it counts toward the attacks per turn as 1 but if two are released from the LP simultaneously they wil also count as 1 attack but if one is released by the LP and one through the usage of arm then it will count as two.
    -The LP can't be placed on different limbs in the same battle, for example it was on my left arm then I got my left hand cut off I can't put it on my right arm for the rest of the fight.
    -Can only be wielded by Me.
    THe holder looks like this but without the wires connected to the body and without the swords so the launching area will be were the eye is.
    the lightning bladeThis
    The ice one this
    and the fire like the ice one but wil be red


    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    ±± Declined ±±
    *Don't resubmit. Narutoverse....does the name ring a bell?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suiton: Fukai Kitsui Oshi | Water Release: Deep Inner Pressure
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, thanks to their special affinity to the release of water, can raise the destructive force of a following water release technique. With Fukai Kitsui Oshi, the user prepares the next technique with more precision and deeper and stronger manipulation. The user increases the pressure of the water technique, increasing its destructive and strength to pierce. With the water affinity, the user can do it almost in conjunction with the water technique itself. After using this, the water technique released increases in 1 rank, and its destructive properties are increased, and the water can pierce through Earth and Fire (The techniques must be put in consideration before use of technique!)

    Note: Techniques have to put in consideration (As this will only work with projectile related water techniques such as Water Bullet). And the opposing technique (If using as a defense).
    Note: No Water Release in the next turn
    Note: Bio must have a Water Specialty
    Note: Can be used 3 times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Cookie..

    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. Not sure if elemental boost techniques are allowed. ♠
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    Ninjutsu: Kyoukou Zero | Ninja Arts: Panic Zero
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, surges their body with chakra, specifically the Heart and Medulla, and soothes the bloodflow and the breathing rate. The user's chakra soothes the Medulla and manipulates it to maintain normal breathing to prevent Hyperventilation. The user also soothes the bloodflow to prevent bleeding out. This technique is used to prevent the response of panic and panic related problems such as Hyperventilation. This technique can also be used while in a genjutsu, allowing the user to think calmly and not panic (Some technique cause the user to hyperventilate).

    Note: Can be used 3 times
    Note: Cannot be used while in a F-Rank genjutsu (Only S-Rank and below)
    Note: Can only be taught by Cookie..
    ♠ Declined, do not re-submit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 01-07-2013 at 02:32 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Frozenstein View Post
    resubmitting

    (Fuuton: Youkai Masurao) - Wind Style: Phantom Warrior
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After a short sequence of 2 hand seals the user creates a human body from wind which has similar characteristics (shape) as a real person. However being made from only wind it can't be hit by average physical attacks. It's attack pattern is similar to a real human being when he is using free form taijutsu moves, but the actual attack is a concentrated wind blast generated upon contact. These attacks doesn't have any cutting ability, but instead blunt force which makes it more similar to a human being, but with increased strength. Any attack has the potential to send the opponent flying. As the phantom is only wind, it can be moved in mid air freely.
    - can only be used 5 times per battle
    - can only be created 3 meters away from the opponent on his sides/above/under or in front of him
    - can only last 1 turn
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein

    Changed some parts to make it more useful and added a new restriction.
    ♠ Declined ♠
    A human body from wind? Give me an idea of what it looks like as this seems like another clone jutsu. This needs to be detectable by the opponent.
    Also, how far can it move away from its original creator? And what do you mean it can move in mid air freely? Does it fly?


    (Raiton: Raikou Issou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Escape
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short (Short-Long when moving)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (60 if direct contact occurs)
    Description: The user performs a single hand seal and turn his body into lightning. Once turned into lightning he can move with high speed in every direction and even change directions freely. He can travel high into the air, on the ground, or in a water source. If the user turns into lightning he can’t see or hear anything around him, but can sense up to mid range. In lightning form he can’t even attack or use jutsus, however if the enemy gets in contact with him, he becomes paralised. User can't travel through earth, but if the opponent uses an earth jutsu againt the user, it can be destroyed.
    - can only be used 3 times per battle
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein
    ♠ Declined ♠
    Lack of details. You can move in high speed in every direction? Approximately how fast, is it detectable by the naked eye? Also, put a limit on high you can travel in the air, and no, you can not travel in the water, that's ridiculous.
    Exactly what can he sense in such a state? Chakra only?
    Contact? As in touching contact or a certain range?
    Lastly, very vague. What level of earth jutsus are in-effective against this?

    Jutsu looks like this.


    (Raiton: Raikou Kubochi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Pit
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs 2 hand seals and making rain falling from the sky. As the first rain drops reach the opponent, the user can change his chakra into lightning and use the rain drops as conductors to create a giant lightning pit. This pit extends to 3 meters in every direction around the target if there’s rain or any other water source in that vicinity. The lightning attacks and damages everything inside the pit and make them roast. This technique can be used with any already existing rain or water drops around the target and can be performed with 1 hand seal at that time. The created rain looks like regular rain for the naked eye, making extremely hard to predict the lightning attack.
    - can be used with pre-existing rain or water source around the target
    - can only be used 3 times per battle
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein
    ♠ Declined ♠
    This can be too OP and it's very confusing. You're basically saying you're infusing rain drops with lightning chakra and then aiming them at specific places around the enemy to create a pit? And then the pit is somehow interconnected with the lightning?
    I can barely understand this, you gotta be more detailed and specific. I'm having trouble imagining it.
    (Fuuton: Youkai Masurao) - Wind Style: Phantom Warrior
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After a short sequence of 2 hand seals the user compresses wind into a human-like form which has similar characteristics (shape) as a real person. However being made from only wind it can't be hit by average physical attacks, but can be seen because of the high amount of compressed wind. It's attack pattern is similar to a real human being when he is using free form taijutsu moves, but the actual attack is a concentrated wind blast generated upon contact. These attacks doesn't have any cutting ability, but instead blunt force which makes it more similar to a human being, but with increased strength. Any attack has the potential to send the opponent flying. As the phantom is only wind and wind can move in the air, it can be moved in mid air freely (fly).
    - can only be used 3 times per battle
    - can only be created 3 meters away from the opponent on his sides/above/under or in front of him
    - can only last 1 turn
    - can only travel to mid range from the user regardless the place it was created
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein

    Well I don't quite get this. It was only a minor update for my already approved tech and it wasn't a problem back there, but whatever. I changed those parts, however if it says short-mid range, it's obviously travels only to mid range max from the user and I think if it's just wind, it should be able to move in mid air. fly if it's clearer.
    ♠ Approved ♠
    Alright, fixed one thing.


    (Raiton: Raikou Issou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Escape
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short (Short-Long when moving)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (60 if direct contact occurs)
    Description: The user performs a single hand seal and turn his body into lightning. Once turned into lightning he can move with high speed (a bit above the speed of an average lightning attack) in every direction and even change directions freely. He can travel high into the air or move close to the ground. If the user turns into lightning he can’t see or hear anything around him, but can sense chakra up to mid range, allowing him to react to incoming attacks. In lightning form he can’t even attack or use jutsus, however if the enemy touches the user, he becomes paralyzed. User can't travel through earth, but if the opponent uses an earth jutsu (A-rank or lower) against the user, it can be destroyed and the user can still travel toward his destination with half of the previous speed, but if the opponent uses an S-rank earth jutsu, the technique can be destroyed, but the user turns back to human form afterwards.
    - the user can only travel high in the air up to mid range
    - speed decreasing only occurs when A-rank earth jutsus are used against the user
    - can only be used 2 times per battle
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein

    Jutsu looks like this.


    Changed those questionable parts, but I don't know why you brought up the visibility part. a lightning always visible no matter how fast it is and the description doesn't even say it can't be seen (btw I put the gif into the spoiler so it's clearer how it works and looks like). well about the earth part you are right, but it is an A-rank lightning jutsu, so A-rank and below earth jutsus would be ineffective by default in my opinion.
    ♠ Approved ♠
    Alright. Use it well then.


    (Raiton: Raikou Kubochi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Pit
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (10/turn)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user channels his lightning chakra within existing rain clouds (made by the user or otherwise), causing the rain drops that fall towards a particular area of the feild to be more piercing, harming the opponents with a burning feeling as well as slightly restricting his body movements. The affect increases the longer the target stays within the rain with a complete paralysis in 2 turns.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.

    Well the idea was to create the rain and then create lightning around the target. The rain drops contains chakra what I turn into lightning so I don't have to shoot it out. That would be totally useless that way. Hope with these changes it's more understandable. I also removed some usage limits to make it less OP.
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    X-Approved-X Remade the description, you could have asked me to make this a village custom. You can resubmit if you dont like it
     
         
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    Suiton: Kyabitēshon | Water Release: Cavitation
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Cavitation is a very advanced technique where the user, after performing a single handseal, uses his own chakra to create air pockets in a body of water. The size and number of the pockets, so called cavities, differs from each body of water. After being created the cavities collapse on itself, i.e. implode, under the pressure of the water. When the cavitation bubbles collapse, they force energetic liquid into very small volumes, thereby creating spots of high temperature and emitting shock waves, the latter of which are a source of noise. The implosion effect is so strong that it can easily create holes in metal objects over a prolonged period of time. It also causes instability in the body of water and harm to anything caught within it.
    Note: Needs a water source
    Note: Usable only twice (2) per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can teach this
    ♠Declined ♠
    Some details missing such as exactly how many cavities you can create in a single body of water and I need some more examples as to how the size of the water affects the cavities. It's really hard for me to imagine this.


    Suiton: Chika mizu | Water Release: Subterranean Waters
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Using his own chakra the user can, unbeknownst to his opponent, create a single or multiple water sources within the earth. The water sources can vary in size, depending on the need of the user. They can be from a single drop of water to a human sized pond of water. They don't form too deep in the ground, but about a meter or two beneath the surface. They can be used, afterwards, as a source for water techniques that would attack the opponent from beneath and could also prevent the opponent to go underground.
    Note: Usable only thrice (3) per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can teach this
    ♠ Declined ♠
    Again, another great idea, but I need a limit on the idea on about how large you can make it. "They can be from a single drop of water to a human sized pond of water." Is this the clear limit?
    Also, if your opponent does go underground, you wouldn't be able to detect him either, so not sure how you would utilize that as an attack.
    Lastly, if you were to attack your opponent with such a jutsu, what would be the approximate power of it? More water = more power? Less water = less power? The speed where it comes up from the ground? A lot of details missing if I can't put it to image.
    Suiton: Kyabitēshon | Water Release: Cavitation
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Cavitation is a very advanced technique where the user, after performing a single handseal, uses his own chakra to create air pockets in a body of water. The size and number of the pockets, so called cavities, differs from each body of water. After being created the cavities collapse on itself, i.e. implode, under the pressure of the water. When the cavitation bubbles collapse, they force energetic liquid into very small volumes, thereby creating spots of high temperature and emitting shock waves, the latter of which are a source of noise. The implosion effect is so strong that it can easily create holes in metal objects over a prolonged period of time. It also causes instability in the body of water and harm to anything caught within it. The cavities usually differ in size, from the moment they are created to the moment they implode. Even so, they never exceed the size of a somewhat regular marble (1/2 to 1 inch). The number of the cavities depends on the size of the water source because they can be created in every inch of the water source giving a better implosion effect overall. Bigger water source equals more cavities.
    Note: Needs a water source
    Note: Usable only twice (2) per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can teach this

    ♠ Approved ♠


    Suiton: Chika mizu | Water Release: Subterranean Waters
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Using his own chakra the user can, unbeknownst to his opponent, can create a single or multiple water sources within the earth. The water sources can vary in size, depending on the need of the user. The user can create up to 3 seperate sources but their size altogether can't exceed the size of a human sized pond. They don't form too deep in the ground, but about a meter or two beneath the surface. They can be used only as a source for other water techniques.
    Note: Usable only thrice (3) per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can teach this
    ♠ Approved ♠
    Water boi.
     
         
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    (Genjutsu: Za Ge-to Tekiya) - Illusionary Arts: The Gates Faker
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 for each turn) (+5 for each higher level gate)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User starts by sending his chakra into his opponent(s)'s brain, affecting his senses and fiddling with his mind, casting a genjutsu upon him. In this genjutsu opponent sees the user opening gate(s), and thus the chakra bursting from their body and turning into beast like, similar to Lee or Gai. He also see user getting tremendous speed and strength equivalent to gates. In real, what actually happens is user fiddles with his opponent's mind after sending chakra into his brain, and slows down the rate of receiving of signals to the receptors in case of vision sense, and boosts up in case of touch sense. Means, depending on the gate used, opponent eyes would have trouble keeping up with user's speed, touch sense becomes so sensitive, that when user even flicks his finger on his opponent, he would feel great pain. Rest 3 senses are adjusted in such a way that would fit this genjutsu. Since it affects the receiving of signals of brain, user also affects the signals reaching the brain which affects opponent's reflexes, slowing him down and each and every action of him drastically in same proportion to the gate no. used, which makes him feel like the user is running with fast speed.

    Note: -Once the genjutsu is casted, the fooled senses only reacts to the user, not to anything else.
    -Lasts 4 turns, unless countered.
    -Depending on the gate used, user is left exhausted after this technique ends, because of the amount of chakra used. [for eg: if user opens 4th gate, then it would cost him 40+15(5 for each extra gate)+20(maintained for 4 turns) = 75, which is very much]
    -Cannot open 8th gate as the amount of chakra required in it is very high and would take user's life, the moment he would try to enter in it.
    -Cannot use any other genjutsu while the time this is active.
    -Once this genjutsu ends, user can't use any S-rank genjutsu for next turn.
    -Requires 2 turns cool down between another usage.
    -Usable 2 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.
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    It's like all the genjutsu i'm checking lately has no medium to trigger whatsoever, genjutsu isn't performed like that, first you'd need either handseals, or another medium to trigger it, i.e. light, sound etc, the sound medium requires sound training, i'd go for handseals myself, anyway about the genjutsu, the slowing speed of receiving signals is similar to a genjutsu Reborn has that's called Time Delay, so that basically messes the core that your genjutsu depends on, also don't say that the 3 other senses are adjusted in ways, you have to mention each and every sense you affect by your genjutsu and how the genjutsu fools the sense.


    (Genjutsu: Hitoshirezu Sharingan) - Illusionary Arts: Hidden Copy Wheel Eye
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 each turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: An advanced illusion technique used by members of the Uchiha clan in order to prevent their opponents from noticing their doujutsu. The user blinks his eyes for activating his sharingan. In the brief moment when user's eyes closes for blinking, user fools his opponent's vision sense by inducing a genjutsu upon him, in which the opponent doesn't see the activated sharingan, instead he see's normal eyes.

    Note: -Usable by sharingan users only.
    -Usable only at the time of activation of sharingan.
    -Usable twice per battle and lasts until deactivated or dealt by opponent.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    P.S. This is NOT a sharingan genjustu
    __________________________________
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    Actually ya it's a Sharingan genjutsu, like the one Itachi used without the Sharingan, the genjutsu called Ephemeral, that's also a Sharingan genjutsu


    (Ninjutsu: Za Binte-ji) - Ninja Arts: The Vintage
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique is based on real life physics principle that a car is the safest place to hide in, when lightning occurs. This is because, when we are standing on earth, and lightning strikes us, the circuit is completed with us and earth, since earth is a very good conductor of electricity and thus the current flows from us to the ground and hence that lightning takes our life easily. But if circuit is incomplete then it do not damages us to that level (since circuit in imcomplete, current will not flow; thats why it is advised to wear slippers/shoes made up of rubber while dealing with some eletrical wires so that we do not make direct contact with earth and hence the circuit is incomplete). For dealing with very high level of lightning, user summons a "engineless" car around him such that he is inside it when the car is summoned. So when a lightning technique strikes the car, the whole charge of lighning spreads on the surface of car but since the tires of car are made up of rubber(insulator) the circuit is not completed and hence rendering the lightning technique useless which do not damages the user even a bit.

    Note: -The car cannot be used to drive.
    -The car stays on field for dealing with only one complete lightning technique after which it poofs away.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.
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    What the.. the reason we are struck by lightning isn't because the earth is a very good conductor of it, it's because the earth has a positive charge and the lightning comes in from the clouds with a negative charge and viseversa, the earth is a very poor conductor to lightning, that's why Earth Release is weak to lightning release, because when the lightning strucks an area in the earth it cuts through it not spread through the earth around it, same thing goes for Wood Release, this technique makes no sense whatsoever, how are you planning to summon a CAR in Narutoverse, are cars used there? dude guns are made before cars and we say no guns =_= also i won't allow a technique to make you impervious to lightning.
     
         
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    (Kuro Ito Roiyaru Koujou) – Dark Threads Royal Siege
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground at an astonishing speed. Within seconds, the underground of the terrain is infested with a network of dark threads infused with the user’s own chakra. Straight after creation, the user detaches themselves from the created source. The underground network extends to a 50 meter radius around the position the user first casts the jutsu. This allows the user to manipulate the dark threads directly from the terrain itself to perform various jutsus. However, it is highly chakra taxing to maintain the source of chakra infused threads, resulting in a steady depletion of chakra every turn the technique is active. Once the technique is cancelled the underground source of threads can no longer be manipulated.

    Note: Must have Dark Threads active
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
    Note: Can only be Used by Negative Knight
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    Too broad, how is this going to affect traveling through the earth? and Earth techniques used through the terrain, an earth technique like the Rising Earth Excavation or Destructive Rising Rock Pillars will render your technique useless, and 50 meters is too much, up to 20 meters and that's it, which is considered a long range, remove that whole "astonishing speed", and mention that you can't use this technique itself to attack the opponent, make it last up to 4 turns max.


    (Kuro Ito Gizagiza Supaiku) – Dark Threads Jagged Spikes
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through his dark threads and releases it into a sudden outburst, causing the user to be covered in countless hardened spikes, impaling everything in the immediate vicinity within them. The technique reaches a radius of 10 meter spikes in every direction, allowing it to impale multiple enemies all at once. Anyone hit by this technique is skewered through their body.

    Note: Must have Dark Threads active
    Note: Can only be used Twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
    Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
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    what do you mean by a sudden "outburst" where exactly will the threads be released from, your hands, feet, head? that should be mentioned, and remove that "immediate" from before the vicinity, i won't allow vague terms that lead the technique to be abused anymore, also similar to Fuguki's hair technique, how is this going to affect a 10 meter radius when short range is 5 meters and you made it short ranged? o_o i won't allow a further increase than short range anyways, also mention if this can attack underground or not.


    (Kuro Ito Chimeiteki Domu) – Dark Threads Lethal Harpoon
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within is body and releases a sharpened stream of threads from his mouth to impale the opponent. The stream of threads resembles an enlargened tongue and is roughly 30cm in width. The threads are released so quickly the technique can be used against incoming assaults from even close range opponents. Once the sharpened threads pierces someone, the user causes the individual threads to sporadically spike and branch out in every direction, impaling them in an innumerous amount of places. The stream of threads is capable of extending up to 30 meters and can be retracted by the user to pull the opponent back towards them after initially piercing them.

    Note: Can only be used Twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
    Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
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    30 meters? =_=, Mid range is 15 meters max, i like the technique itself, but remove that the threads are released "so quickly" anyone can react to this kind of technique.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: New World monkeys
    Scroll Owner: -Jiraiya-
    Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Capuchins, Tamarin, Marmoset, Squirrel monkey, Night monkey, Spider monkeys (if the contract is approved)
    Description and Background:
    New World monkeys are the five families of primates that are found in Central and South America: Callitrichidae (containing Tamarin & Marmoset), Cebidae (containing Capuchin monkeys & Squirrel monkeys), Aotidae (containing Night monkey), Pitheciidae, and Atelidae (containing Spider monkey). They differ from other groupings of monkeys and primates, such as the Old World monkeys and the apes.

    New World monkeys differ slightly from Old World monkeys in several aspects. The most prominent phenotype distinction is the nose, which is the feature used most commonly to distinguish between the two groups. The scientific name for the New World monkeys, Platyrrhini, means "flat nosed". The noses of New World monkeys are flatter than the narrow noses of the Old World monkeys, and have side-facing nostrils. New World monkeys are the only monkeys with prehensile tails (the tail of an animal that has adapted to be able to grasp or hold objects to aid arboreal creatures in finding and eating food in the trees, anchor an animal's body to dangle from a branch, or as an aid for climbing) - in comparison with the shorter, non-grasping tails of the anthropoids of the Old World.

    They eat fruits, nuts, insects, flowers, bird eggs, spiders, and small mammals. Unlike humans and most Old World monkeys, their thumbs are not opposable (except for some Cebids).
    For more info:
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_World_monkey
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Old_World_monkey
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ape
    The signers of the contact will get this cool tattoo..
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    Monkeys are a cannon summon, this is a subspecies of monkeys, so not approvable, i remember also seeing a custom Monkey summon made but it's not mentioned in the approved summons list, regardless, subspecies of cannon summons aren't allowed.


    Wind Release: Silent Step (Fuuton: Sairanto Suteppu)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 20 (-5 for each turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates wind chakra to their feet while using shape manipulation and chakra control and creates a foot -pad made of wind, of about 5-7 inches thickness beneath their each foot. The foot-pad itself is made of wind & chakra and the chakra helps in anchoring the user to the contact surface while using this jutsu.
    With this, every time they step, the wind beneath the user's feet prevents the contact of his feet with the ground (or contact surface), thus effectively silencing the user's foot steps.
    However this jutsu will be only helpful in silencing the foot steps when used on a solid surface or on surface which will not crack easily or will not produce much noise like short grassy area, so if they step on a dry twig or on a board that creaks the cracking could still be heard and if they run on a water body using this jutsu, the splash of water could still be heard . However, they could run on a solid surface at full speed using this jutsu and not be heard.
    Note:
    • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    • Can last for 3 turns once activated and can be deactivated at will.
    • The user can only use wind jutsus while this jutsu is in effect.
    • This jutsu in no way increases the running speed of the user but sprinting speed is slightly boosted due to lack of friction of the user's feet to the surface of contact.

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    how is this going to be possible when the wind that you are making underneath your feet should be normally pressurized so it will make noise, wind isn't stationary, it circles around itself normally or blows in one trajectory, otherwise it won't have a "solid" form, this also could collide with Zero's flying wind god technique, and boosting sprinting speed? lol no.


    Lightning Release: Electric Mist (Raiton: Erekutorikku Misuto)
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Monkey -> Ox -> Ram hand seals and channels his lightning chakra into a nearby water source and makes the molecules of the water to vibrate at high frequency, electrifying/charging them, heating them up causing evaporation, forming electric mist to surround the area. The charged water molecules in the mist are connected to each other by the user's lightning chakra forming a fine electric mesh.
    The thickness and range of the mist is determined by the availability of the water source and the amount of chakra the user decides to put in the jutsu.
    As the mist rises up, containing electrified/charged water molecules, the person(s) caught in the mist will experience a mild warm, tingling sensation. The electric mist is capable of reacting to the bio-electricity (produced naturally by cells & tissues) of anyone other than the user making them the center point of attraction and all the lightning imbued in the water molecules gets attracted towards the location of the foreign bio-electricity, electrocuting and paralyzing them.
    The user can clearly notice/feel the sudden shift of his lightning chakra imbued in the mist towards the target (foreign bio-electricity) and can determine the direction and distance of the target.
    One other way of using this jutsu is by using Kirigakure No Jutsu (Hidding in Mist Jutsu) at first and then performing the above hand seals to imbue lightning chakra into them, charging them up.
    Note:
    • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    • Requires a nearby water source.
    • The user cannot use any S-rank lightning jutsu in same turn.
    • The paralyzing effect lasts for 1 turn.

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    how are you planning to produce the lightning? lightning chakra doesn't materialize the lightning, it's either released from your body or the ground, not to mention why would the mist react to bio electricity of the opponent's chakra and not yours? and lightning vaporizing water? that's new.
     
         
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    (Suiton: Kasumi Yusou) - Water Release: Mist Transportation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate his chakra into the humidity in the air, which is made by water. And while his chakra is in the surrounding humidity, the user will be able to turn their entire body into water, within a second, which blends in with the water in the humidity and through this; the user will be able to travel at running speed unable to be seen by the naked eye, while his chakra is still visible to dojutsu and sensory shinobi. The user will rematerialize at the users will, and the re-materialization takes one to two seconds.
    Note: Must have a large proportion of humidity in the air such as a mist
    Note: Can only travel through short range
    Note: Visible to Byakugan & Sensory
    Note: Visible to Sharingan except if a mist is formed with the users’ chakra
    Note: Only teachable by Gutsy Jiraiya
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    turning yourself into a Houzoki that's invisible and can travel through mist? running speed not noticeable by the opponent? ya not going to happen.

    (Suiton: Mizu Tanchi Myaku) - Water Release: Water Detection Pulse
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform the Ox hand seal before releasing his water chakra through the air which expands into long range, using the humidity in the air to sense the movement of an enemy, while also sensing the pressure on humid ground. This allows the user to detect enemy movement in the air and on the ground even if eye sight is restricted and will be able to pinpoint the enemy.
    Note: Active for 4 turns
    Note: Only teachable by Gutsy Jiraiya
    ____________________________
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    No sensing techniques will be allowed anymore whether it relies on pressure or chakra, too much of both are already made.


    (Suiton: Amatsu Mizu Ayatsuri) - Water Release: Heavenly Water Manipulation
    Type: Defensive / Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will while standing on top or beside a water source, transfer their chakra into the water, whereas the user will be able to manipulate the water within short range at will. While the water is infused with the user’s chakra, he will be able to manipulate the movements of the water with his hand just like Gaara did with the sand, capable of blocking incoming projectiles, and fight off an opponent in close combat.
    Note: Usable four times per battle
    Note: Only teachable by Gutsy Jiraiya
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    Too broad, and no free manipulation techniques will be approved.
     
         
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    Suiton: Bareru Ro-Ru| Water Release: Barrel Roll
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing the monkey hand seal and them slamming one hand on the surface of the water source. Once done, they channel their water chakra into the source, while using shape manipulation to create a large crocodile that forms from underneath the opponent. The crocodile takes down the opponent and drags them down into the waters depths.

    Note: Can only be used on a water source
    Note: Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle
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    Mention the exact size of the crocodile, and that your opponent has to be standing on top of the water source.


    Resubmitting Spike Boy.

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    (Suiton: Gosunkugi Gyaruson ) Water Style: Spike Boy
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Point: 30
    Description:
    Note: The users begins by gathering their water chakra throughout their body. Once collected the user releases the chakra in a quick burst. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the released water into thin 'senbons' that cover the users whole body and can pierce anybody in close combat.


    - Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    - Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

    X-Both Declined-X They are C rank... given the abilities, atleast elevate them to B. And make sure to give a proper reason why, arms of water that are being controlled by chakra itself lets you manipulate your chakra for other techniques.

    (Suiton: Gosunkugi Gyaruson ) Water Style: Spike Boy
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Point: 30
    Description:
    Note: The users begins by gathering a large amount of water chakra throughout their body. Once collected the user releases the chakra in a quick burst. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the released water into thin 'senbons' that cover the users whole body and can pierce anybody in close combat. The user has the option to manipulate the sebon created from their body, to shoot out from all over their body, piercing everything in short range.

    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    - Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
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    i was fine up to that point of shooting the senbons from all over your body piercing everything around you in Short range, can't have that, make the water senbons each have like a 4 times bigger than a normal senbon, so they can be clearly seen by the opponent.


    Watatsumi Ryoushi | Sea Slayer
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Sea Slayer is a legendary sword, with the blade being constructed from most porous blue pearls on the planet. Traditionally, the prodigy Hozuki of every generation is bestowed with the sword, imbuing their chakra into the sword before taking ownership so that the sword becomes more potent for every successive generation it’s passed down to. Over time, the continuous infusion of chakra into the sword, caused it to become almost symbiotic to Hozuki chakra, feeding off its user’s chakra and eventually gaining the Hozuki trait itself, allowing for it to far surpass any weapon in the history of the Hozuki clan. Over generations the sword became far too gluttonous for Hozuki chakra, consuming certain hosts whole by feeding off the moisture in their bodies. Only the truly daring now attempt to wield this blade, even then it must be held in moderation to prevent similar circumstances from occurring.

    Abilities
    -The sword has the chakra of generations of Hozuki clansmen stored within it, thus granting it the ability to utilize their clan’s trait, making it capable of liquefying at any time the user chooses.

    -The weapon can endure extreme pressures but can be broken by other means. However, once broken if the sword comes into contact with water it will simply reform.

    -The sword has the ability to absorb all the moisture from A-Rank and below Suiton and Ameton techniques by forming a protective cyan dome around the user. During absorption the sword transmits this stole moisture to the user, causing them to grow in size proportional to the amount of moisture absorbed. This ability can only be used 3 times per battle and this will count as one of the user’s jutsu per turn.

    -Due to the sword being capable of liquefying, it can grow in size when exposed to any form of water

    Restrictions
    -The Sword can only be wielded for 5 Turns
    -Must be a Hozuki to wield the blade
    -Whilst wielding the blade the user is unable to use Lightning Release Techniques
    -Lightning Release Techniques do 20 extra damage against the user whilst wielding the blade
    -The Sword absorbs moisture and not chakra
    -The sword is not sentient but naturally feeds off moisture to maintain itself

    -Cerebus and Hozukis he allows are the only people who can wield this weapon, if anyone else attempts to wield it; the sword begins sucking the moisture out of their body, the effects worsening the longer they wield it.

    -The sword requires a constant supply of chakra when being held to maintain its regular level of moisture and so a steady chakra cost every turn.

    How the Sword Looks

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    ✘ Declined ✘
    No chakra infusable swords, and no absorbing sword abilities whatsoever.


    Note to checker: The part where the sword absorbs moisture will become my 1 Custom jutsu for the sword which I plan on submitting later on. There I’ll explain what exactly the sword can do with its moisture absorption, so its far more clear for my opponent what exactly I’m doing.

    Note: next time you make that note, i'll decline your whole submission because it collides with the blue rule, if you don't bother to make your submission follow the rules i won't bother checking it.
     
         
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    (Genjutsu: Raitoningu O Gyakuten) - Illusionary Technique: Reverse Lightning
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This genjutsu is one that stays dormant until the opponent uses a Lightning jutsu, however, the moment that happens, the user would see his own Lightning jutsu turn back and form into several Lightning ropes which go on to bind his whole body, wrapping tightly around it, numbing the opponents whole body completely preventing him/her from continuing with whatever was planned. In addition, the lightning ropes would go on to wrap around the opponents body in a way that causes him/her to face slightly upwards, making sure he can't see what's in front or around him. Despite this being a genjutsu, the opponents jutsu wouldn't go on to happen due to the sudden interruption, which would prevent the focus of chakra into the specific jutsu, causing the chakra to simply disperse not doing any harm to anyone.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No S-ranked genjutsu in same or next turn.

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    A dormant genjutsu? when did you trigger it? handseals? how long does it last? I'll be honest, I don't like these dormant Genjutsu that much... They tend to be unreasonable in a fight.
    Resubmitting:

    (Genjutsu: Raitoningu O Gyakuten) - Illusionary Technique: Reverse Lightning
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user performs the Tiger ~> Rat and Ox hand seals whilst releasing their chakra into the opponents brain, activating this genjutsu which stays dormant until the opponent uses a Lightning jutsu, however, the moment that happens, the user would see his own Lightning jutsu turn back and form into several Lightning ropes which go on to bind his whole body, wrapping tightly around it, numbing the opponents whole body completely preventing him/her from continuing with whatever was planned. In addition, the lightning ropes would go on to wrap around the opponents body in a way that causes him/her to face slightly upwards, making sure he can't see what's in front or around him. Despite this being a genjutsu, the opponents jutsu wouldn't go on to happen due to the sudden interruption, which would prevent the focus of chakra into the specific jutsu, causing the chakra to simply disperse not doing any harm to anyone.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No S-ranked genjutsu in same or next turn.
    Note: Like most genjutsus, it stays active for 2 turns if not released by the opponent, or it has completed it's purpose.
    Note: It only works on lightning techniques that are released from the opponent's body, if the opponent utilize a lightning technique that comes from the sky or the ground it won't be affected by the genjutsu, but it won't deactivate the genjutsu either.
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    Edited a note and added another one, if you aren't satisfied with the changes pm me and i'll decline it.


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    (Suiton: Mizuchi's Kōken'nin) - Water: Mizuchi's Guardian
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Mizuchi's Guardian requires the user to have a water source (one artificially created via a jutsu or the user needs to be near/in a lake or ocean) or the user can simply spew out water, using that to form the Guardian. Once the user adds his chakra into the water source, he/she uses shape manipulation to create a man made of pure water to come out from the water source available. The size of this man is similar to the size of the Golem created by the A-rank Earth jutsu. This Earth Golem sized Water Guardian is not able to use cannon water jutsus, however, he has his own special water abilities which allow him to create sucking whirlpools, small blasts of water which are able to blast the opponent into the air/sides (depending on where they come out from) and water constructs (spikes, walls, pillars) made purely of water, all of these are equivalent to S-rank and if in a water source, he has the ability to release his chakra (Equivalent to S-rank) everywhere short range from his initial position, meaning the opponent can't manipulate the water short range around him. Due to his water abilities, the Guardian/man made of water has the ability to turn into a puddle of water and reform himself from other water sources, as long as the puddle of water he forms and the water he's looking to reform from are connected. If the user creates the Water Guardian by spewing out the water and there is no water source available, the water constructs are created by the Water guardian (by manipulating moisture in the air and using that to materialize the water) the water is then controlled by the use of hand movements, he can't however, use the whirlpool ability since the opponent would need to be under a body of water for that to be done.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Lasts 3 turns each time it's used.
    Note: All abilities of the Guardian count towards the users 3 moves per turn.
    Note: No Water jutsu higher than S-rank, after the Guardian is gone. (Gone = jutsu is deactivated or the number of turns he lasts are finished)
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    OP o_o there's already a technique that can do that called the water beast, as you might already know not all of the abilities you mentioned though, if you want this technique approved your gonna have to trim down the abilities, take out the reforming, i won't allow you to keep him reforming and prevent your opponent from using water techniques, remove the ability of using the moisture in the air, make him only use the water attacks from the water source and make them A-rank, add that you can't use Fire while the technique is active and add a +20 continuous chakra cost, make the damage 60 basically equivalent to an A-rank, honestly i don't like the technique myself.


    (Olm No Jutsu: Nensei no aru Shin ) - Olm Technique: Viscous Sin
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (Though, can cause death if the opponent drowns in it)
    Description: Olms have a layer of Slime covering their outer body. The user can slam his hands down onto the ground, summoning a large amount of Slime (the amount is equivalent to the B-rank version Exploding Water Colliding Wave) from the land of the Olms. This slime is slightly viscous and so travels at a slower rate than water, however, due to it's thickness it can overcome large bodies of water with ease, making it so that only water jutsus 1 rank higher than the slime to overcome it. The user has his chakra infused within the slime, allowing him to choose the direction in which it flows via hand movements. In addition, the slime is extremely sticky, allowing it to be used to hold the opponent in place and/or drown them within it.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No other Olm Techniques in the same turn.
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    Having the amount equivalent to the Exploding water colliding wave? you do realize that means the whole battlefield will be covered in slime? both you and your opponent will be caught in it and unable to move? remove the death when drowned in it thing, make it as big as the Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop technique and remove the hand moving ability to control the slime, also mention how exactly it is summoned, does it come from the ground? or a portal made in the sky?


    Approval of Olms: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post7135287
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Hōgyoku no Keiyaku)Crystal Promise
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90 (+ 40 to the user)
    Description:Guren preforms four hand seals and then claps her hand together, As she does this she starts sending a massive amount of chakra into the air long range from her current location, A gigantic crystal structure starts to forming rapidly in the sky, The crystal structure takes five seconds to form. Once the five seconds are up, Guren makes the snake hand seal sending the structure flying down with great speed and momentum, The user can either make the tiger hand seal causing the structure to shatter and rain down a shower of sharp crystal glass or she can make the ox hand seal causing the structure to start rotating at extremely high speeds crashing into the ground creating a massive crater as it's sends out a powerful shock wave. The crystal is 20 meters long, 20 meters high and 20 meters in width. The crater it leaves in the earth reaches up to mid range from the point of impact and when it's shattered it covers every thing below up to mid range in sharp crystal shards, These shards can reach up to 10 feet under the surface of the ground.

    -Declined-
    20x20x20 might be a little to much comparing to the amount of time it needs to be formed (only 5 seconds). So, either reduce its size and de-power it a bit, meaning this wouldn't need to be a Forbidden rank, or get a bigger time frame in order to get this thing ready. On top of that, a forbidden rank technique with no restrictions?
    (Shōton: Soukei Yakusai )-Crystal Release: Total Calamity
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90(-40 damage to user from excessive chakra strain)
    Description: Guren preforms four hand seals and then claps her hand together, As she does this she releases a massive all directional burst of chakra into the air mid or long range from her current location, A gigantic crystal structure starts to forming rapidly in the sky, The crystal structure takes a full turn to form and during this time guren is free to attack/defend. Once completely formed, Guren makes the snake hand seal causing the structure to descend with great speed and momentum, Guren can either make the tiger hand seal causing the structure to shatter and rain down a shower of sharp crystal glass which can be guided using chakra with extreme accuracy and precision or she can make the ox hand seal causing the structure to start rotating at extremely high speeds crashing into the ground creating a massive crater as it's sends out a powerful shock wave capable of knocking down multiple opponents up to mid-range from point impact, Which includes the user if used in mid range. The crystal structure is 20 meters long, 20 meters high and 20 meters wide. The crater it leaves in the earth reaches up to short-range from the point of impact and when it's shattered it covers everything below up to mid-range in sharp crystal shards, Unless the user guides them. these shards can penetrate up to 10 feet under the surface of the ground.

    Note: Can only be used once.
    Note: No S-rank or above for the following two turns.
    Note: No crystal release for the following two turns.

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    Very OP, that's not de-powering it, you can put all the restrictions you want but it won't matter when it's OP, make it's size equivalent to the Great Stone Golem technique max, remove the shattering and redirecting crystal glass stuff, remove the shockwave that knocks everything up to mid range, include physical drawbacks, when using Forbidden techniques your body should be a mess, i mean something that really cripples you, you could make your speed decrease to a walking speed for example, or handseal speed decrease, etc this restriction goes along with the others you mentioned. i'm going to give you just one chance, if it's not approvable then it's DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Resubmitting CW Changes in Bold. Took out heat sensing ability... Meant to take that part out but forgot about it. Sorry for the confusion.


    Maboroshi Kagirinai | Eternal Vision
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 [when active]
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Made during ancient times in the high mountains by multiple black smiths. Forged in fire with silver and an unknown metal to make it indistructable. As well as infusing the necklace with their own chakra. It has said that the necklaces power are the ability to protect it's user. Through the use of pure chakra that it emmits and reacts to the users chakra. The necklace would be activated by channeling the users own chakra into the necklace, thus creating a reaction with the necklace and mixing both chakra's together. Once this happens the necklace will emmit a thin chakra layer around the users body. Protecting them from projectiles and debris that may be falling from the sky or towards the user. Also the necklace was forged in fire and has a natural affinity to it. Thus being able to absorb B rank and below fire through the users will. Since the necklace has an affinity to fire, smoke will emmit from the user through the chakra layers around the body, long as the necklace is active. However the smoke itself is not harmful to the user as it is created from their own chakra. Once the user activates the necklace, the user will start to glow red.

    Abilities:
    -Activates, once the user channels chakra into the necklace
    -User will start to glow red once the CW is active
    -Able to absorb B rank and below Katon jutsu's
    -Adds a thin protection layer of chakra around the user's whole body
    -Emmits smoke from the user's body from the necklace's chakra as it has affinity to fire


    Restrictions:
    -Lasts 4 turns once active
    -Able to activate once per battle
    -Need to skip two turns before activating it once more
    -Necklace constantly feeds off the users chakra
    -Can only absorb fire three times per battle
    -Can not absorb fire consecutively on the same turn
    -Can only absorb the fire when extremly close to the source or the jutsu
    -Absorbing fire counts towards the users three moves allowed per turn
    -Only smoke users are able to manipulate smoke emmiting from the body
    -Smoke only emits from the body when this CW is active
    -Only to be used by -Vision-

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    ~Approved~ Changed the bolded.

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    New Submission

    Genjutsu: Tou Setsu | Illusionary Technique: Section Freeze
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will cast a genjutsu on the opponent by performing the hand seal Snake. Once done so, nothing immediatly will happen until the user performs the additional hand seals needed for the desired effected. Which is binding any part of the opponents body at will. The user will state which body part is going to be effected once the hand seal is made. Soon as the second hand seal is made, the opponent will begin to feel numbness around the area effect, stated by the user. Which in turn the area effected will fall asleep and the limb or that part of the body will not move at the opponents desires.

    Note: Lasts 1 turn to the area effected
    Note: No S rank or above genjutsu on the next turn
    Note: Able to use twice in battle
    Note: Must skip a turn when reusing this technique
    Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit. Period.

    Genjutsu: Konmei Kemuri | Illusionary Technique: Smoke Confusion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long [Please read description // notes as to why it is long range]
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An area of effect genjutsu through the use of chakra infused smoke. The user will first be required to create smoke using their wrist launcher and while the smoke is in the area, the user will perform the Horse hand seal to put the opponent under genjutsu. When hand seal is made anyone other than the user that is surrounded by the smoke will end up in the genjutsu. Once the genjutsu is in place, the smoke will travel through the tenketsu of the opponents 361 chakra points and into the brain effecting their chakra flow. Once this happens the opponent will lose their ability to concentrate and mold chakra quickly by continuously distrupting the chakra flow by slowing it down immensly. For example if the opponent wants to use a jutsu, it would be natural for them to gather it really quickly by speeding up the flow of their chakra to gather it. Simply by disrupting it's chakra constantly, they will be hindered and take longer to perform their jutsu's. Once the smoke has entered the opponents body through their chakra points, the opponent will be hindered and will not be able to use any chakra based jutsu's as quickly as expected.

    D Rank Jutsu's - Will have a slight effect but won't notice the difference in gathering chakra as the chakra required is not that great.

    C Rank jutsu's - Will take 1/2 a second longer to perform to gather chakra

    B Rank jutsu's - Will take 1 second longer to perform to gather chakra

    A Rank jutsu's - Will take 1 1/2 second longer to perform to gather chakra

    S Rank jutsu's - Will take 2 seconds longer to perform to gather chakra

    F Rank jutsu's - Will take 2 1/2 seconds longer to perform to gather chakra

    Note: Only smoke users are able to use this genjutsu
    Note: Able to use once per battle
    Note: Must have mastery of smoke and genjutsu to be able to use this
    Note: Lasts 2 turns unless broken and the user have to be inside the smoke to be casted
    Note: No A rank or above genjutsu on the next turn
    Note: Smoke surrounding the opponent has to be created by the user
    Note: Range of the genjutsu is determined by the smoke that covers the area
    Note: Only able to be taught by -Vision-
    ~Declined~ I'm not sure I follow you on this technique. Why make it S-rank if all it does is change the time it takes to perform jutsu by a scant 1-2 seconds? Is there an ulterior motive?
    Updating CW

    Maboroshi Kagirinai | Eternal Vision
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 [when active]
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Made during ancient times in the high mountains by multiple black smiths. Forged in fire with silver and an unknown metal to make it indistructable. As well as infusing the necklace with their own chakra. It has said that the necklaces power are the ability to protect it's user and give extra abilities to the user who holds it. Through the use of pure chakra that it emmits and reacts to the users chakra. The necklace would be activated by two ways. One, by channeling the users own chakra into the necklace, thus creating a reaction with the necklace and mixing both chakra's together. Two, by the necklaces own will of being able to sense the user’s chakra and constantly monitoring the user’s chakra to determine if there are any foreign chakra within their body. Once this happens the necklace will emmit a thick chakra layer around the users body. Protecting them from projectiles and debris that may be falling from the sky or towards the user. The chakra that is layered around the users body will also enhance speed and strength for the user as such the user will be able to move like lee without weights and can punch strong as if they used the super added weighted technique when the strike with a taijutsu move. However this only lasts until the duration of the necklace’s activation. Also the necklace was forged in fire and has a natural affinity to it. Thus being able to absorb B rank and below fire through the users will. Since the necklace has an affinity to fire, smoke will emmit from the user through the chakra layers around the body, long as the necklace is active. However the smoke itself is not harmful to the user as it is created from their own chakra. Once the user activates the necklace, the user will start to glow red and while active at any given point through the users will, the necklace can give the user an influx of all of it’s chakra into the user all at once, however once that happens the necklace will stay deactivated for the remain of the battle

    Abilities:
    -Activates, once the user channels chakra into the necklace or When the necklace chakra forcefully enters the users tenkets on it’s own.
    -User will start to glow red once the CW is active
    -Able to absorb B rank and below Katon jutsu's
    -Can give the user an influx of chakra all at once from the necklace, however only once per battle and stay’s deactivated for the rest of the battle.
    -Adds a thick protection layer of chakra around the user's whole body.
    -Emmits smoke from the user's body from the necklace's chakra as it has affinity to fire


    Restrictions:
    -Lasts 5 turns once active
    -Able to activate twice per battle
    -Need to skip one turns before activating it once more
    -Necklace constantly feeds the users chakra
    -Can only absorb fire three times per battle
    -Can not absorb fire consecutively on the same turn
    -Can only absorb the fire when extremly close to the source or the jutsu
    -Absorbing fire counts towards the users three moves allowed per turn
    -Only smoke users are able to manipulate smoke emmiting from the body
    -Smoke only emits from the body when this CW is active
    -Only to be used by Vision

    ______________
    ±± Approved ±±


    Quote Originally Posted by Vision View Post
    Genjutsu: Shita no Kata o Mitsumeru | Illusionary Arts: Stare Down
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A momentary genjutsu where the user would place a genjutsu on the opponent by saying the words “look and eyes” within a sentence or a phrase. The chakra that is placed within the opponent will regulate the flow of the opponents chakra within their brain to break their concentration. Thus leaving them open to looking into the eyes of the user as they hear those words.

    Note: The opponent has to be looking at a body part of the user other than the eyes.
    Note: A momentary genjutsu, the opponent will only look into the users eyes briefly before being able to turn away to look somewhere else.
    Note: Only Vision is able to use this technique.
    ____________
    -Approved-



    Genjutsu: Sōzōshī Chinmoku | Illusionary Arts: Loud Silence
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will charge their chakra into both of their hands and then slap it quickly. The opponent soon as he hears the slapping sound of both hands but the chakra is released through the hands as the user is clapping but not traveling through the sound that makes when clapping, the opponent will be placed under a genjutsu where the users chakra is in the opponents brain disrupting the flow of the opponents brain. The illusion will set it by the disruption of chakra flow within the brain so that the there is no blood running through the ear drums of both ears. The opponent under the genjutsu will immediatly hear a static ringing noise which is high pitched, casuing a headache to be felt. However, because it effects the ear drums or the illusion of effecting the ear drums, the opponent will appear to be bleeding from the ear, followed by loss of balance as they stand or walk, being distorted around his surroundings as well as dizziness settling in. By the third turn of this technique the opponent would have to kneel down as the sense are being amplified as time goes on. Constant dizziness and everything spinning will cause the body to feel like if it is having motion sickness which could or may result in puking. Eventually the headache intensifies as well breaking all concentration of the opponent and rendering them useless.

    Note: Able to use three times per battle.
    Note: Last 4 turns unless broken.
    Note: Can not use or layer another genjutsu while the opponent is under this genjutsu.
    Note: Can only be taught by Vision
    ____________
    -Declined-
    The point of a genjutsu is to create an illusion, not to cause physical damage. Making the brain think that it can't hear and therefore making your oponent deaf would work, but stopping the bloodflow to the eardrumms is a simple no.
    Resubmitting -the whole jutsu is reworded pretty much

    Genjutsu: Sōzōshī Chinmoku | Illusionary Arts: Loud Silence
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will charge their chakra into both of their hands and then slap it quickly. The opponent, soon as he hears the slapping sound of both hands [the chakra is released through the hands as the user is clapping but not traveling through the sound that makes when clapping] the opponent will be placed under a genjutsu where the users chakra is in the opponents brain disrupting the flow of their chakra into their brains. The illusion will set in by the disruption of chakra flow within the brain so that it feels as if there is no blood running through the ear drums on both ears. The opponent under the genjutsu will immediatly hear a static ringing noise which is high pitched, casuing a headache to be felt. However, because the illusion is effecting the ear drums, the opponent will appear to be bleeding from the ear and the opponent will feel as if they are bleeding from the ear, followed by loss of balance as they stand or walk, being distorted around his surroundings as well as dizziness settling in. By the third turn of this technique the opponent would have to kneel down as the sense are being amplified as time goes on. Constant dizziness and everything spinning will cause the body to feel like if it is having motion sickness which could or may result in puking. Eventually the headache intensifies as well breaking all concentration of the opponent and rendering them useless. Because this technique distorts the opponents sense’s to the extreme, the opponent will not be able to use any techniques B rank or higher while the genjutsu is in place. However, if the opponent fails to break the genjutsu within the 4th turn and the deactivation of the jutsu[as it last only 4 turns] the opponent loses the ability to mold chakra as they won’t have enough concentration to do so for 2 turns after the deactivation of the genjutsu. If the genjutsu is broken within the first turn, the opponent will be fine and no residual effects will take place. While if broken on the 2nd turn, it would leave some residual effect as they will be restricted to B ranks and below techniques for two turns. If the genjutsu was broken on the 3rd turn, the opponent would be restricted to C rank and if the genjutsu wasn’t broke and the opponent took the full four turns and it deactivated on it’s own. The opponent will not be able to mold chakra and lose the ability to do so for three turns.

    Note: Able to use two times per battle.
    Note: Last 4 turns unless broken.
    Note: Restriction based on turns are listed above.
    Note: Can not use or layer another genjutsu while the opponent is under this genjutsu.
    Note: Can only be taught by Vision

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    ±± Declined ±±
    I can't allow this without Sound training. Because the only way to achieve what you want is trhough sound. Even if you say you can't, by saying you can't and adding your explanation you are simply making it impossible to work. Make the induction method doing hand seals.

    Doton: Suu~Ifutomūbingurokku | Earth Release: Swift Moving Rock
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will concentrate on their doton chakra and then release the chakra into the ground by having any contact with the ground. The user would then appear to 'grab' the Earth by their hands and use the Earth chakra channelled into the Earth to perform a tug which would affect the Earth up to long range from the user, even though the tug can be performed from short range. The tug causes the opponent and anybody else on the same Earth, to lose their footing and balance as they feel as if the Earth from below them has suddenly been removed. Due to the users chakra already being in the Earth, the user can manipulate that Earth further and cause constructs of Earth to emerge from the Earth whilst they're performing the tug. These constructs can be made into anything, with only the users imagination being the limit. However, the larger the construct the longer it takes to come into distances. So, something like a wall of Earth which is only 3/4 meters long would be able to form extremely quick whereas an Earth dragon which is the same size as the Greater Earth Golem would take a lot longer to form.

    Note: Can be used 4 times per battle
    Note: Can flip, pull, or fling the ground that the opponent is standing on
    Note: The move is fairly fast but depends on the size of the ground that they are moving. Larger the scale larger the technique takes to perform.
    Note: Using another earth jutsu in conjunction with this one will take up a move of the users 3 move per turn.
    Note:The jutsu is short range as the user only need to reach over and grab, but the section of the ground can reach long range.
    Note: Can only be taught by Vision

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    existing techniques are very similar to aspects of this one. This one is almost a miss mash of other techniques. DNR
     
         
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    (Raiton: Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō) - Lightning Release - Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-25 to the user)
    Description: The user charges up all his raiton chakra throughout his body, to the point where his body has shocks of lightning coming out around his body, after focusing all that chakra in his body, the user forms 5 hand seals and sticks his hand out in front of him with his palms facing out, four finger facing up and their thumb across his palm. The user then releases a large wide spread blast of lightning that tears up everything in its path.
    - Can only be taught by Better
    - Can only be used once
    - The user is can't use lightning techs in the same turn or the turn after.


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    Don't get why this is a forbidden ranked, it's just one directional lightning blast but ok, if you want it to be then your gonna have to follow some set of rules, first define the actual size of the blast, saying "large" or "huge" or "widespread" are vague terms which i won't allow anymore, and where's the physical drawbacks for being a Forbidden technique? a forbidden ranked technique should have some that really cripple you, that whole "-25" thing doesn't work, i need something like speed decrease, or the slightest movements put a strain on your body, so your overall speed is decreased, that also includes performing handseals and what not, also remove that whole "tearing up everything in it's path", and replace that whole "charges all of his lightning chakra" to "charges a large amount of lightning chakra" the earlier term means you can't perform lightning chakra anymore, also handseals are made to limit the amount of chakra being used for your technique, so it should be done before your chakra is charged not after it. after that put that you can't use any lightning techniques for the next 2 turns and any S-rank technique in the next turn.


    ( Magen: Sonyu ) Demonic illusion: Insertion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An elementary illusionary technique that is used mainly to gain trust. The user sends chakra into the target[s] brain and begins disrupting their chakra flow and manipulating their brain particularly those that deal with short and long-term memory, the user can add onto the user's memory.
    This is used mainly to gain trust, usually implanting himself within key parts of their life to gain instant trust, aiding in the use's infiltration of organizations and Hidden Villages. The user can also fabricate an entire past for someone which they will believe without a seconds doubt. Even if the illusion is broken, the knowledge is still retained within the opponent's mind.
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    Putting thoughts in your opponent's head is a Sharingan genjutsu ability, normal genjutsu can't do that, you control how your opponent's senses process what's happening around them, not put thoughts in his head, that's why Sharingan genjutsus are banned to be made into CJ.
     
         
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    (Fuuton: Omoi Tenkuu) - Wind Release: Heavy Air
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Sort - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user channels his wind chakra around the area of the battle field and as he does so, he coats himself in a layer of wind chakra. Once he releases his wind chakra, he manipulates the air to become more heavier making it much harder for the opponent to move. The user isn't effected by the dense air due to the coat of wind chakra covering his body. The wind chakra covering the users body is only visible to two tomoe sharingan and above, and the byakugan. Lightning attacks preformed by anyone on the battlefield are now weaker due to dense are making it harder for lightning to form.
    -Lasts 4 turns.
    -User is more vulnerable to fire jutsu due to the coat of wind chakra
    -Can only be used once.
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    Seriously now?


    (Fuuton: Kaze Sentou) - Wind Release: Wind Punch
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user channels their chakra into the air and forms a condensed part of wind in front of the target. The user then channels chakra to their hand in conjunction to the condensed wind and uses his hand to control it. The user then throws a strong punch directed at the target making the condensed wind move at the same velocity and size as the users fist, sending the opponent flying backwards. This is not a wind blast but more like an extension to the users fist. The condensed wind is only visible the sharingan and byakugan users.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
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    Similar to the Hurricane fist cannon technique and Igneel's Wind hand technique.


    (Fuuton: Choudai Yo Koko) - Wind Release: Get Over Here
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user faces both his palms at his target and channels his wind chakra to his palms. He then, instead of releasing, uses his wind chakra to absorb the wind in a sudden burst directed at the target. The target is suddenly pulled towards the target at a great speed. The wind isn't continuous it is just a sudden burst.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
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    Similar to the Wind Vacuum cannon technique
     
         
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    [Fuuinjutsu: Takedakeshi Urufus] - Sealing Technique: Ferocious Wolves
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Fuuinjutsu: Takedakeshi Urufus is a technique which allows the user to seal specific body parts of the opponent. This is done by creating a pack of four wolves which bite the specific area to seal it. To perform this jutsu, the user takes out an already prepared scroll with the kanji "Seal" marked inside. The user will then form the seal of confrontation which activates the scroll. Four chakra wolves will then be released from the scroll. With the wolves active, the user proceeds to control them, making them charge towards the opponent (up to long range) to bite him. If the opponent is bitten by a wolf, he will experience great pain. On the area of the bite, the kanji for "Seal" will appear, sealing the area for three turns. Once the area is sealed, it cannot be moved/used. If the opponent is bitten and the seal is completed, that wolf which had bitten him disperses immediately.
    Note: Usable only two times per battle.
    Note: The wolves stay active for only 3 turns before dispersing.
    Note: No other Fuunjutsu may be used while the wolves are active.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh and can only be taught by him.
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    Ya sealing parts of the opponent's body isn't going to happen, and it's bordering medjutsu as well.


    [Katon: Houka Kawarimi] - Fire Release: Fire Replacement
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After forming the seal of confrontation, the user manipulates his Fire chakra to rapidly rotate throughout his chakra network. Due to this, the user is able to freely transform his body into fire, similar to the Water Release: Water Replacement Technique. If the opponent strikes the user while he is in this form, he will be burn't if he makes physical contact. This jutsu can be cancelled in an instant if necessary. A major disadvantage of this form is that the user becomes vulnerable to water techniques.
    Note: Usable only once per battle.
    Note: Can remain active for up to three turns.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh and must be taught by him.
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    similar to existing techniques, Jokey has a technique that's called Fire substitue which turns all of your body into fire, and if you want complete elemental manipulation then it's similar to Hasashi's mera mera body technique, not that elemental manipulation technqiues going to be approved or anything.
     
         
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    (Raiton: Sajō Sabaku) Lightning Release: Locking Bondage Stripes
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This technique is used mainly for binding the opponent. The user raises his/her palm up to the target and closes his/her hand into a fist. Th user focuses their raiton based chakra and creates very thick rope of raiton chakra to ensnare an opponent, its similar to the Tornado lightning technique, but much stronger, this technique binds the upper body of a target. The lightning shocks the opponent and retsricts their movements. It has a unfocused charge like nagashi, thus is incapable of killing, but paralyzing. Paralisis lasts 1 turn if not dealt with. This technique can only be used thrice per battle and deprives the user of lightning chakra for one turn.

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    That's not how lightning techniques work, lightning can't be materialized like water, it only comes out of your body or the sky/ground, it's not used like that, i'm okay with a rope that comes out of your hand for example, but that's going to be similar to the water whip technique anyway.
     
         
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    (jiton: Denji Kyodo)-magnetism release: electromagnetic strength
    Type:supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40
    Damage: (+15 magnetism jutsu)
    Description:with the mastery of magnetism release Goh creates a powerful electromagnetic field that extends up to a 5m radius. this increases awareness and gives him easier control over matter, making anything with the least bit of iron detectable including the iron in human blood. With great control over the change in polarity he can repel himself from the ground giving him the ability to hover up to long range from the ground making it much easier to maneuver. Since he uses the power of his electromagnetic field as a medium for his magnetism jutsu it can propel all ninja tools at a faster rate making it more lethal. The strength of the magnetic field makes it completely resistant to B-rank raiton jutsu but does not protect him from other elemental jutsu
    -note: usable only once
    -note: last three turns
    -note: taught only by dm1202
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    Ya not going to happen.
     
         
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