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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigō View Post
    Resubmitting; hope it's better now ^^ Edited a few parts> Roses are 4-5 meters big, and the user can freely move due to the lack of roses and vines surrounding the user

    (Kinjutsu Doton: Rōzugāden) - Forbidden Earth Art: Rose Garden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to the user)
    Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Snake, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the snake handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the concentrated doton chakra in a burst, the enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction. By doing this the user will cause gigantic roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, silicate is basic earth mineral that can be found in the earth crust, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of this mineral, that can only found in the earth crust thought the user has to use a great amount of chakra to control this mineral it gains a redish-greenish color, making them look like actual roses thought they are just silicate minerals combining the minerals with rock hard and dense stones given actual form by chakra. These gigantic roses are sharper than blades and much denser having dozens gigantic spikes stiking out of the core also on the green colored branches and vines. Each of the roses are about 1 to 2 meters big reaching out up to 15 meters into the heavens, in a mayhem of branches and leaves (which are solid and have spikes stiking out of them) each capable of piercing through metal, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, thought the user can move freely due to the lack of roses surrounding the user each being highly infused with the users Doton chakra, granting the user the ability to use earth techniques from the garden with increased speed and reduced difficulty, from the large amount of silicate minerals the ground will also be completely covered by this mineral.
    ♦ Note: This technique can only be used by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
    ♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for two turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will take enormous damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-30)
    ♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat due to the severe damage taken by this jutsu. (doing so will result in killing the user)

    ±± Declined ±± No reference to the speed chart. Also, no, you can't use other earth techniques from these roses as those techniques specially not with increased speed. Allowing you to shape the earth into such an intricate and complex construct is already pushing the limits of what you can do with earth release that that would be simply overkill. Kinjutsu? No. The name of this technique is a "DOTON/EARTH RELEASE/EARTH ARTS/EARTH STYLE" technique.

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    Resubmitting: I've removed the ability to perform earth techniques from these roses, added reference to the speed chart. And made several other changes..

    (Doton: Rōzugāden) - Earth Style: Rose Garden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-20 to the user)
    Description: The user makes a quick sequence of five handseals, Horse → Tiger → Dragon → Bird → Serpent, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the Serpent handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the gathered doton chakra in a burst. The enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction of the battlefield. By doing this the user will cause gigantic roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, silicate is basic earth mineral that can be found in the earth crust, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of this mineral, thought the user has to use a great amount of chakra to control this mineral, it gains a red-light green color, making them look like actual roses. These roses and spike branches are created by combining the silicate minerals with dense stones found deep in the ground. These gigantic roses and branches are sharper than blades and denser than Iron itself, having dozens of gigantic spikes stiking out of the core and the branches, vines etc. all covered with razor sharp spikes, which can easily penetrate earthen domes and whatnot. Each of the roses are about 1 to 3 meters in diameters, and as tall as 10 meters with the vines included. Causing the battlefield to be covered in a mayhem of branches and leaves each capable of piercing or tearing through very dense materials, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, thought the user can move freely due to the lack of roses surrounding the user.

    ♦ Note: This technique can only be taught by Ichigo.
    ♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
    ♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart. (being an sage by post reduces your speed to S-Jounin)
    ♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for five turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will take damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-20)
    ♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat for the rest of the battle due to the weakend state of the body.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users' moves, due to the abnormal amount of chakra used to perform this jutsu.

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    Last edited by Scorps; 04-17-2013 at 04:53 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Prusias' Cane
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This cane was found to be in the possession of Prusias. While he was running his big business empire, he had acquired this artifact. It was from ancient times, it was intricately carved and had a dragon on the top. Upon closer inspection, Prusias realized that he could pull on the dragon and a blade would come out. The blade functioned just as a normal katana, Prusias was fascinated with this cane. The cane itself was unbreakable, it could be used as a blunt insturment to beat enemies with. However, the cane had two specific abilites. One of which was that it could make constructs made of extremely dense fire chakra. These constructs were limited though, Prusias discovered that he could only make 4 specific constructs (listed below). The other ability of the cane is that it could initiate a small C ranked genjutsu when the opponent heard the user tap the cane to the ground. The illusion made it seem as if, the user had become a great red dragon with 3 heads. The dragon would then grab the opponent with it's mouth and swallow him. Then, the opponent would feel stomach acids slowly digesting him.

    List of Constructs
    ~All these constructs are C ranked~

    -The first construct is a swarm of bees made entirely of dense fire chakra that would swarm the opponent. One bee alone could only do the damage of a small bee sting, but several together could cause some damage. The amount of bees, are the same as the amount in a small bee hive.-

    -The second construct is a Rhino made of fire. It rushes the opponent, and does damage. It is smaller however than a real rhino, about 3/4 the size of a real rhino.-

    -The third construct is a large phoenix made of fire, it doesen't do damage at all. Instead, it flies high into the air and then it explodes in a brilliant display of light. The light has the same effect a flash bomb would. This doesen't affect dojutsu users or chakra sensors.-

    -The final construct is two large arms. The arms smash into the ground directly near the opponent, this is to try to protect the user if the opponent comes into close range.-

    All the constructs can reach up to mid range, except for the last which can only reach into short range.




    -Restrictions-

    Can only stay in effect for 4 turns before it poofs away
    Can only be wielded by PresidentBush
    Genjutsu ability can only be used once per turn
    Can only make one of the four specific constructs a turn
    Genjutsu and construct ability, can't be used together in the same turn

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    Don't copy other peoples CW. DNR.

    (Raiton: Aoi Tatsu)Lightning: Blue Dragon
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90 (-10 to user)
    Description:The user concentrates intense raiton chakra, and condenses it while using shape manipulation to make it into the form of a blue dragon. The dragon is completely made of dense raiton chakra. It is dense enough for the dragon to be able to punch at someone. The dragon can smash through S rank and below earthern defenses easily. It has the power to launch an A rank beam of lightning from it's mouth at the opponent. The dragon itself can move extremely quickly (twice the speed of a thrown kunai)

    What it looks like


    -Restrictions-

    Lasts only 1 turn
    Leaves the user unable to use lightning in the same turn or next turn
    Can only be used once a battle
    Must be taught by PB

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Similar to existing techniques.

    (Fuuton: Altairis)Wind Release:Altairis
    Type:Offense
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user crosses their arms above their head, and begins to gather chakra. He then causes a lot of air to rush to a single point right above the user. It forms a small black orb of condensed wind. The user then unleashes the orb at the user, and as it flies the orb is still absorbing air getting bigger. As it gets closer to the opponent, it feels as if it is drawing them in. This makes it difficult to dodge.

    -Restrictions-

    Can only be used twice per battle
    No other wind jutsu in the same turn
    Can only be taught by PB

    What it looks like:


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    Description makes no sense and from what i'm understanding its similar to existing techniques. reword it
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-10-2013 at 09:48 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    CFS technique

    Spirits of Balance: Hellhounds (Onryodo: Yomi no Ryoken)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user offers a blood sacrifice and a seal stating “Hell (Jigoku)” forms on the floor where the blood drips. Moments later the technique activates when shadowy figures starts to surround the user, these figures takes the form of hounds with black fur and a glowing streak of red. They have red eyes, intangible bodies and feral behavior. There are three hounds in total: Barghest, Black Shuck, & Gytrash. These hounds are composed entirely of Yin energy alone, Black Shuck & Gytrash chase their targets, surrounding and attacking them. The area these hounds successfully touch suffers from necrosis which begins to expand to the rest of the body, this is a result of Yin energy disrupting the Yang energy of the target and the sudden loss of vitality causes the body parts to quickly die and decay. Once the target is unable to defend himself, barghest then moves to deal the final blow which seals the opponent’s dead remains as well as his chakra inside the user’s consciousness.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.
    -Lasts two turns.

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    Add a note saying this can be countered by destroying the "dogs" with any tchnique capable opf doing so. And that the blood needs to be spilled on the ground, no where else. Als, remove the lasts 2 turns. Makes no sense. Remove the seals him inside your mind. Thats a no go.


    Sealing Technique: Shell of the Black Turtle (Fuinjutsu: Genbu no Kai)
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30 + Damage absorbed
    Damage:N/a
    Description: Shell of the Black turtle is a powerful Defensive-Barrier Sealing technique, named after of the 4 Guardian Beasts Black Turtle (Genbu). The technique is performed using the boar seal, it forms an array of several hexagonal shields of solidified energy, the color of these shields is translucent red. The shields levitate around the user and move with him as he travels, the shields move with the users will and can be used to form a defensive grid as well as spherical barrier, because of the unique shape of the shields it makes the technique very versatile to both defend and attack at the same time. The barrier does not extends to user alone, the shields could be moved (Medium distances) to trap the opponents or to protect allies. Named after Genbu, the technique itself has outstanding Defensive capabilities though it requires an equally skilled user to wield. The shield has some drawbacks:
    The amount of energy required to maintain the shield is proportional to the amount of energy being blocked by the shields. So to say, blocking a technique with 80 Damage requires a Chakra tax of 80, this makes the technique only suitable for users with good chakra reserves. Because the technique cannot be replayed over and over, its not too good for weak techniques, getting struck with strong techniques on the other hand consumes a good amount of chakra instantly (Chakra worth 2 S ranks, to defend against 1) which can be exhausting against overly powerful techniques. The defense is otherwise absolute but when put against close range techniques that require a constant supply of chakra such as Chidori, continuous contact will quickly drain the user’s chakra requiring him to break the technique if possible. When a shield breaks, it creates a small concussion knocking back opponent a few meters away.
    Note: Last 2 turns, usable twice per conflict.
    Appearance: X

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    Railgun (Rerugan)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Railgun is a buster sword technique that uses the main blade and an ordinary kunai to create a powerful projectile. The use unlocks the main blade and hooks a kunai near the hilt, using the sword’s ability to generate electromagnetism he charges both ends of the sword to emit small electromagnetic fields that charges lorentz force between the swords where the kunai is held then using the same fields the user accelerates the kunai shooting out it , the user experiences a small kick back upon release. Because of the principle applied in the technique the kunai doesn’t loses trajectory even after traveling a very long distance despite being shot with great force and speed making this technique incredibly accurate and precise. Upon impact the kunai deals non chakra based, kinetic damage strong enough to push back and kill a large summon suffice to say a human wont survive either. That said, the technique’s own precision and force can become a drawback, it cannot be used in close proximity or else the user won’t able to escape the techniques own force and it requires the user to be stationary with a good footing to take aim, given the precision of the technique minor disturbances can cause the user to miss an opponent who is already at a long distance. The projectile can be tracked by 3T (and above or similar) but the overal complex procedure of the technique takes some time to perform and prepare, making the effectiveness of the technique relative to the situation and the opening the user might have found to use it. The projectile is a raw chakra projectile, heavily dense, capable of fighting in equal terms with any elemental nature.
    Note: Usable 2 times per battle

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    Last edited by Scorps; 09-12-2013 at 11:38 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Shelob No Yūwaku) Water Release: Shelob's Temptation
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs two handseals, manipulating the moisture in the air and ground so as to create a gigantic web made of wire thin threads comprised of water. The web envelops the area mid range around the user, being exceptionally inconspicuous due to the thin size of the threads and the translucency of the water. The threads have an exceptionally sticky like quality, as well as being rather elastic and having a solid like property. Should the opponent move, they would find themselves running into one of the threads, when they do so the vibrations of the threads movement would be sent directly back to the user, who is connected to the web via use of a single thread that attaches to the users chest. This effectively allows the user to detect the movement of any objects within the webs range of influence lest they find a way to avoid the webs entirely. This single web attached to the users chest is optional, and is not a requirement, leaving it up to the user whether he/she'd want it, as it'd be more or less useless if the user and his opponent have a clear view of each other. Also, when an object comes in contact with a thread, the web clings to them as it begins to expand and propagate, fully consuming the opponent in a sticky mass of water in an attempt to drown them or fully cease the objects movements. The user is capable of traversing through the web with ease, without being hindered. The user is also capable of removing the webs attachment from their chest, so as to prevent attacks conducting through the web and directly into them. Alternatively the user can perform an extra handseal upon the opponent being ensnared, this causes the web to abruptly snap in on the targeted object, trapping them within its wired embrace as it consumes them in an exceptionally large and exceptionally strong sticky bubble of imprisonment.
    Note: Can only be used 2x
    Note: Web lasts until either destroyed, or four turns pass.
    Note: No Water jutsus higher than S-rank, in the same turn.

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    Well done. Loved it.

    (Ototon: Saishō's Kaiketsu Suru ) - Sound Release: Saishō's Resolve
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/defence/suplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (Excluding the pieces which may or may not hit opponent.)
    Description: A specific sound jutsu which involves the user recognizing the resonant frequency of any solids brought before him and using his sound mastery to recognize and mimic the frequency with which said object would vibrate, allowing the user to cause it to smash into thousands of pieces almost instantly. This jutsu would be able to destroy any and every solids, but would be useless against anything energy based and/or intangible (Wind, Fire, Lightning etc). Although the jutsu itself is mainly defence, as it simply destroys solid constructs, upon destruction, the pieces which made the solid construct would burst and fly everywhere short range from the point of their explosion, allowing the user of this jutsu to do harm to the opponent whilst destroying their jutsu. Moreover, the direction in which the pieces go can be somewhat controlled by the user, there are two options, the user can either make the pieces go outwards as already stated, or by the addition of a mere hand seal and more chakra, cause the pieces which made the object to smash and go inward, almost as if said object had imploded, this would be used if the users allies are nearby, as it'd allow them to remain safe whilst destroying the opponents jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: No other sound jutsu in the next turn.
    Note: No other Sound jutsu for the rest of the turn.
    Note: Can't be used on humans or any other living beings.

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    Controlling the debris is a no no so remove it. And what do you do? Do you scream? Do you clap your hands? do you touch the object? Because even if you know the frequency which you can't just like that btw (so find a way that you can get that information), you still need to produce a sound that actually overcomes that frequency and makes the object shatter.

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Yangu no Kanashimi) - Summoning Technique: Sorrow of the Young
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A summoning jutsu which works in a slightly way, which allows the user to set up a trap and/or prepare for a situation, without having to use his strongest summon straight away. Sorrow of the young is a summoning jutsu which requires the user to summon a small baby of whatever animal they have under their contract, that small animal would have a special ability of summoning an elder summon (whatever they consider 'elder', so they're more or less able to summon any created summoning they wish) animal of their same specie at any point they feel threatened or are ordered to do so. The animal they summon is summoned short range away from their location. Moreover the small summon would be able to talk and it'd also have any passive abilities which that specific contract allows
    Note: Can be used 3 times.
    Note: Small animal making the summoning for an 'elder' counts as one of the 3 moves per turn.
    Note: The young animal can summon an 'elder' from any point after the turn they're summoned in.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    You can't submit a custom summon from no contract. You need to specify which contract you're using for this.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-17-2013 at 05:00 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ( wabisuke ) the penetant one.
    Rank:S Rank
    Type: Weapon
    Range: short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This blade is a very unique blade as it is in a beheading shape of sorts and has a unique ability. The blade itself is made from iron deep in the ground which was found under the heaviest weighted boulder.The ability of wabisuke is similar to weighted boulder the doton technique it utilizes this ability ie doton weighted boulder but to a squared amount of weight anything this blade slices becomes twice as heavy and so fourth if three slices are made the enemy become three two the power heavier. This ability can be used on anything from enemy's to kunai or shuriken or even enemy's arms making them unable to lift them to make handsigns. The blade itself is held in a special sheath while traveling to prevent myself from being affected or nicked by the blade. The blade is regular weight of a sword meaning the ability it possesses does not directly affect the weight of the blade but rather what the blade cuts or comes into contact with.
    Note: can only be wielded by Roju.
    Note: can only be used as long as doton is mastered as the weighted boulder tech is based in this sword.
    Note:can be used on solid based CE's examples caramel, tar, sand, doton, wood.
    Restrictions: the blades ability can be used as many times as needed on any objects.
    On enemy's the blade's ability can only be used 3 times and not in the same turn.




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    Done already. DNR.
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    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: 360* Pressure Damage
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything around it's radius: Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed extending all around the user and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, blast radius some how then the user will die instantly from the pressure of the wind at close range.

    Restriction only usable once in battle.
    Note cannot use wind the following turn.
    Note can only be taught by Roju*

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    DNR.

    (Katon: Keshi Makuga batafurai) - Fire Release: Exploding Butterflies
    Rank: S rank
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user first performs a sequence of four handsigns gather's Katon chakra into their mouth and proceeds to exhale small flaming butterflies. Which flutter out scattered across the field. The butterflies explode on contact of anything they touch and can be harmful to the user if touched as well. A limit of 10 butterflies can be made per usage of this jutsu. The butterflies in themselves are regular size and no other differences to normal butterflies. Sipped of the attack is not fast by any means the butterflies float around In the combat range's of short to mid range. The blast from one of e butterflies alone is a radius of 4feet.

    Restrictions: only 10 butterflies are able to be formed at once.
    -Cannot use fire above C rank for the next two turns
    Note -the butterflies running into each other will not cause them to explode, however if the explosion of one butterfly goes into the radius of another they will all explode creating a giant explosion and can hit the user if you do not relocate your postion.
    - can only be taught by Roju*

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Supura Modu: Tekuts Walu) - SuperMod power: Wall of text
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: infinite
    Chakra Cost: none
    Damage Points: Instant Death upon being read
    Description:A Wall of text that owns everyone's ass. Side effects include repetitive strain injury, carpal tunnel syndrome, and arthiritis.

    -Can only be used once per battle
    -Only teachable by yang or mods

    example of jutsu:
    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post
    Lord of Kaos wins, no doubt there, Kaziname already died after LoK first attack of Water Explosion, Weight of the World and Earth Annihilation. You overestimate Assimilate all Creation Technique way way way way too much. Just because you had the idea of using diamond rings you think you found one of the most ultimate defences as diamond is so hard and that you can reassemble after every attack.

    Wrong. It's still only a C-rank jutsu, so that defence, whether it's diamond or anything else, is C-rank. For some reason you completely ignore the basics of RP battling. If diamond armour would be that indestructable, the diamond element would be seriously OP. Do you think a C-rank diamond jutsu would survive an S-rank water and two S-ranked earth jutsu's? No, that would be directly unacceptable but still for some reason you think it doesn't apply to you. Why? Because you can reassemble? If you could do that after every attack then the guy who used that jutsu in the anime wouldn't have lost from Kakashi.

    Tell me why didn't he reassemble when Kakashi hit him with the Chidori? Because earth is weak against lightning? Lightning destroys earth, so in fact it would do the exact same thing as you turning to sand. Still it beat him. Highely likely because lightning chakra beats earth chakra which he was pretty much using, the same goes for when used another elemental jutsu. In the end if the jutsu is so strong the chakra would just crush that C-rank jutsu, no matter which material it is and whether you reassemble or not. Saying that he survived an explosion is not an argument either. That was an exploding tag and the result were chunks the size of arms and hands, which makes it pretty realistic to still reassemble. After those S-rank jutsu's there's nothing left of you anymore.

    That you're diamond doesn't mean anything either as it's not even real diamond, only a copy produced by your chakra. That's something Kakashi even stated at the end of the battle that he's still only copying jutsu's. It doesn't matter if your diamond or earth, it's not really a big deal, those S-ranks killed you. Then we get to another point, even though it can never be proven completley, it's highely likely you can't even use water jutsu's when using that jutsu for the simple fact you're using your chakra permanently for as long as that jutsu is active. In the anime that guy only used earth based jutsu's or ninjutsu that can be used in conjunction with his body of rocks, using elemental chakra is something completely different or do you think that guy would have been able to preform a Chidori himself? Using common logic it would be highely unlikely for using any kind of elements other than the one directly applied.

    That jutsu isn't much different from Suigetsu's body, still his body isn't that much rated apparantly as your jutsu, while it's nearly exactly the same, can survive nearly everything while Suigetsu's body is certainly not deemd the same. It can survive small explosions and hits, however large jutsu's not. You got hit by 3 S-rank jutsu's, so you're completely dead. Even elemental weaknesses don't apply anymore as the difference in power is so big.

    In the end that ninjutsu, diamond or not, will only be able to survive things like exploding tags, kicks, hits and low lvl offensive jutsu's. Every A-rank offensive jutsu will beat it, most of the B-rank jutsu's will beat it and even several C-ranks will beat it. If I would use that jutsu in the same way as you, I could make myself nearly invincible.

    Summary: Lord of Kaos won, it's not relevant what happend after that. Kaziname died.
    Extra info: Should be approved for the s

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    DNR. This, believe it or not, was attempted before. Difference is that submitter had the intelligence to actually make something narutoverse feasible.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Monocerus (Unicorn-like variation of the Monocerus)
    Scroll Owner: Yonkou Pandaman
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing:

    (Kuchiyose: Hinata-hime) Summoning: Princess Hinata
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Range (Below the user)
    Chakra: 40 (80 if summoned for the second time)
    Damage: 30 for kicks, 40 for horn thrusts
    Description: Hinata-hime is the eternal princess of the Monocerus', she is a very large Monocerus (120, taller than Gamabunta but not as wide-fat) with a long beutiful horn on her forehead, her fur is white with a Cherry Blossom tint, she has womanly pink eyes, and is rather slender and very beutiful, her horn can cast Genjutsu and she has a very powerful kick, her "mane" or hair is very long and can be grabbed on, one of her weaknesses is her tail, if another large summoning grabs her tail, she would be paralyized because of the pain, but will not disperse, Hinata-himes tail is very long but she can move it freely to prevent any direct attacks that are going for her weakness, Hinata-hime may not look like it, but her skin can block Fuuton, Doton, Raiton and Suiton attacks up to A-Rank, Fire techniques however will still hurt her, she has very large wings on her back but will not let anyone but the scroll owner and her citizens, to ride with her as she takes flight, and will only fly for a very brief time unless her citizens are riding with her, Hinata-himes personality is very caring and is always prepard to die for her young Monocerus, she treats both the Citizens and the royal familly the same, she mostly cares for her younger brother, Kuro, and refuses to be summoned in the same place as he is, she can also use Fire techniques upto her rank without handseals as long as they are projected from the mouth/lungs, and can stop Raiton using the wind generated from her wings upto B-Rank.

    Note: Can only stay for 4 turns
    Note: Can only use Genjutsu up to B-Rank
    Note: Flight lasts for only one turn, but if carrying any other Monocerus flight is for two turns
    Note: If any summoner other than the scroll owner attempt to fly, they would fall immediatly and die (As in, will lose the match)
    Note: Can not be summoned in the same turn Kuro is summoned
    Note: Can only summoned twice, if summoned for the second time the chakra cost is doubled and will not be able use jutsu higher than B-Rank for the turns Hinata-hime is onnthe battlefield
    Note: If summoned by the scroll owner or first signer, will be summoned directly below the summoner, other than that Hinata-hime will be summoned behind the user

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    (Kuchiyose: Kuro) Summoning: Black
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Kuro is a member of the Royal Family, he is a large Monocerus (20 feet tall), although easy enough to tell, he is completely pitch-black, his horns, his fur, everything, except his eyes, he has shining red eyes, he has very long black wings (6m wingspan) that can be used for flight, Kuro is rather energetic and young, so he has alot of stamina, he can fly as much as he wants, so he can be used for transportation, he isn't a fighting machine, but is rather agile and fast.

    Description and Background: Monocerus on Wikipedia
    The monocerus is a legendary animal with only one horn. It derives from the Greek word Μονόκερος, a compound word from μόνος (monos) which means one and κέρας (neuter gender, keras) which means horn. Although the name has been applied to a variety of genuine and mythological animals, it is usually applied to the unicorn or rhinoceros. Medieval bestiaries describe the monocerus as "having a stag's head, a horse's body, an elephant's feet, a boar's tail, and a single very long black horn growing from the forehead. It makes deep lowing sounds. It is the enemy of the elephant and when fighting it aims at the belly of its opponent. The monocerus is probably based on the African or Indian Rhinoceros (Rhinoceros unicornis)".


    Side Note: Yes this summoning is the Unicorn-like variation, but i am just being creative and would not want this to be dissapproved due to not being serious, but i am not just jokingly making this, Monocerus are etched onto many walls and cave drawings, they might had existed, and this animal was indeed believed to exist.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    3rd submission of the cycle - Resubmitting:
    Quote Originally Posted by Lokí View Post
    (Yomazu) - War Cry
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A katana with its sheath being attached to either side of the wielder's hip. It sported a reddish, traditional Japanese hilt-wrapping, and its large, simple circular tsuba, which had a golden color, was decorated by a flower-motif. Not only that, but it's properties are nearly indestructable. Yomazu became Loki's right hand, being able to perform numerous unique assaults, known as Bo, Kan, Zan, & Anko, all together are known as the 4 Kin of Purgatory. Mainly based on chakra control and raw chakra. No elemental chakra is known to work with Yomazu, with the exception of wind release.
    Bo: This assault creates a strong defensive wall in the form of a cloud of chakra, which shields the user from enemy attack and is powerful enough to remain intact after being hit by B rank or lower ninjutsu techniques. The user puts his free palm against the side of the blade while the other hand holds the handle, and lifts it foward, releasing a burst of chakra that forms into the cloud shield.
    Kan: The user writes hols Yomazu with both hands and channels massive amounts of raw chakra into it. Then releasing it at once in a compressed state, creating a beam of energy which pierces the target set by the user, with ease. It can successfully rip through B rank and lower ninjutsu techniques, all within reason. It however, can only reach mid ranges.
    Zan: The user infuses wich chakra into Yomazu and then swings Yomazu, creating a giant and wide air blade, to slice across everything within range. Having a reach of Mid range, and a strength of B rank wind.
    Anko: The user creates a dark wave from Yomazu, which cuts through everything in its path. This works by the user rushing towards his enemy, whom he slashes and then goes past, unsheathing his blade. A few seconds before this, raw chakra is focused into Yomazu, thus, when it's unsheathed it release the chakra in a dark-ish color.

    Only 2 Kin of Purgatory assaults can be used per turn.
    The same Kin of Purgatory can not be used in consecutive turns.
    Each Kin of Purgatory counts towards one of the user's 3 techniques.
    May only be wielded by Loki

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    Bo ability can't be a cloud. Makes no sense. Anko ability needs more definition and a better explanation. Rest seems fine. Good weapon.
    (Yomazu) - War Cry
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A katana with its sheath being attached to either side of the wielder's hip. It sported a reddish, traditional Japanese hilt-wrapping, and its large, simple circular tsuba, which had a golden color, was decorated by a flower-motif. Not only that, but it's properties are nearly indestructable. Yomazu became Loki's right hand, being able to perform numerous unique assaults, known as Bo, Kan, Zan, & Anko, all together are known as the 4 Kin of Purgatory. Mainly based on chakra control and raw chakra. No elemental chakra is known to work with Yomazu, with the exception of wind release.
    Bo: This assault creates a strong defensive wall in the form of a cricle of chakra, which shields the user from enemy attack and is powerful enough to remain intact after being hit by B rank or lower ninjutsu techniques. The user puts his free palm against the side of the blade while the other hand holds the handle, and lifts it foward, releasing a burst of chakra that forms into the circle shield.
    Kan: The user writes hols Yomazu with both hands and channels massive amounts of raw chakra into it. Then releasing it at once in a compressed state, creating a beam of energy which pierces the target set by the user, with ease. It can successfully rip through B rank and lower ninjutsu techniques, all within reason. It however, can only reach mid ranges.
    Zan: The user infuses wich chakra into Yomazu and then swings Yomazu, creating a giant and wide air blade, to slice across everything within range. Having a reach of Mid range, and a strength of B rank wind.
    Anko: The user creates a dark wave from Yomazu, which cuts through everything in its path. This works by the user rushing towards his enemy, whom he goes past (through either side) while unsheathing his blade, slashing them as they move. A few seconds before this is done, raw chakra is focused into Yomazu, thus, when it's unsheathed and slice the target it releases the chakra in a dark-ish color. This has a strength of B-Rank raw chakra and the movement of the user is dependent on his own basic speed.

    Only 2 Kin of Purgatory assaults can be used per turn.
    The same Kin of Purgatory can not be used in consecutive turns.
    Each Kin of Purgatory counts towards one of the user's 3 techniques.
    May only be wielded by Loki

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    Name: (Voido Gia) Void Gear

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The Void Gear's teeth and head are black with a red outline and possesses a round, cog-like shape. The handle is red and the guard has the same coloration and cog-like shape as the teeth. The shaft is predominantly colored in shades of grey and sports a copper-colored gear in the center, with two intersecting, black chains wrapped around it. Two more chains are wrapped around the base of the shaft in a similar fashion. This keyblade increases total chakra at time of summoning by +10. Deals +5 damage when using kenjutsu based techniques.



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    This is not a viable CW.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Swinging Sword Fury

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: A Sword that is green at the bottom of the Sword, and golden at the top of the Sword. The user has a sword strapped to his back, taking it out then starts swinging it furiously in anger. Once it strikes the enemy they start to lose chakra, and the chakra is sucked into the Sword. Not only does it take away chakra, this sword puts a lot of damage when hit in your body parts, such as the stomach, and heart.

    Note: Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle
    Note: Can Only Be Wielded By Visor
    Note: It Takes 20% Of The Enemy's Chakra When Hit By The Sword
    Note: Since It Can Be Used Twice Per Battle, It Can Take Up 40% Of Chakra If Hit A Second Time.

    What It Looks Like



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    Follow template. Read the first post of this thread. Where's the japanese name?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Updating:
    (Kamei Gigei: Dai ni no Inori: Zekkyōdan) Command Art: Second Prayer: Broken Mirror Severing
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The second in the “Prayer” series of Command Arts, Zekkyōdan differs in its working depending on if the user’s blade is being resheathed or drawn, though in both cases the move is a strange type of Battōjutsu, meaning that it involves multiple cuts. In the event that the sword is being sheathed, there is a quick flash as the blade’s guard meets the top of the scabbard, during which a chakra burst creates a countless number of cuts in a 360 degree short-range dome around the user, shredding any incoming attack to dust; this being the defensive variant of the move. When unsheathing the blade, however, the affect is “launched”; that is, when the blade is unsheathed, a cyclone of chakra is shot forward, with the chakra inside the cone-like structure acting as tiny knives, shredding that which they come into contact with; this is the offensive variant of the move.
    *Cannot be used unless the first “Prayer” has been activated.
    *Can only be used once per turn.
    *Due to needing to reset their stance, this move cannot be used back-to-back, even between turns, meaning another technique must be used in between uses.
    *The same version of this move cannot be used consecutively – meaning, if the defensive variant is used first, the offensive variant must be used the next time the technique is used.
    (Kamei Gigei: Dai ni no Inori: Zekkyōdan) Command Art: Second Prayer: Broken Mirror Severing
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The second in the “Prayer” series of Command Arts, Zekkyōdan differs in its working depending on if the user’s blade is being resheathed or drawn, though in both cases the move is a strange type of Battōjutsu, meaning that it involves multiple cuts. In the event that the sword is being sheathed, there is a quick flash as the blade’s guard meets the top of the scabbard, during which a chakra burst creates a countless number of cuts in a 360 degree short-range dome around the user, shredding any incoming attack to dust; this being the defensive variant of the move. When unsheathing the blade, however, the affect is “launched”; that is, when the blade is unsheathed, a cyclone of chakra is shot forward, with the chakra inside the cone-like structure acting as tiny knives, shredding that which they come into contact with; this is the offensive variant of the move.
    *Cannot be used unless the first “Prayer” has been activated.
    *Can only be used once per turn.
    *Due to needing to reset their stance, this move cannot be used back-to-back, even between turns, meaning another technique must be used in between uses.
    *The same version of this move cannot be used consecutively – meaning, if the defensive variant is used first, the offensive variant must be used the next time the technique is used.
    *All restrictions bar the need for the First Prayer to be active are lifted if Gokumonken is activated, as the restrictions tie into the way the First Prayer functions; weaknesses that are removed once Gokumonken is activated.

    Gokumonken, for reference:
    (Kamei Gigei: Fukutsu no Inori: Gokumonken) Command Art: Prayer of Fortitude: Prison Gate Sword
    Rank:B
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A refinement of the First Prayer: Hikaru Aki Hasira, this technique expands the ability of the First Prayer. Where as Shinning Autumn Pillar is locked only to the user’s weapon, and forces them to stand in a specific stance, this technique turns it into a full on “Mode”, covering the entirety of the user’s body and thoroughly saturating it with the same effect; This allows the user to fight unhindered by having to remain in one stance, while also allowing the effects of the First Prayer to extend to their entire body. Besides this saturation, Gokumonken provides one extra effect: techniques that would be destroyed by the First Prayer’s effect can instead be reflected back at the opponent, taking the place of the First Prayer’s defensive ability, but still counting as an additional move per turn.
    *Cannot be used unless the First Prayer is active.
    *Remains active until the First Prayer wears off.
    *Can only be used twice in a battle.
    *Reflecting attacks back counts as a move per turn, and is bound by the limitations of the First Prayer's abilities of defense.


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Samehada Kenjutsu: Mizu Bakuha - Sharkskin Sword Art: Water Blast
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user will channel their water chakra into samehada and then channel the chakra up to the tip of the sword. As chakra travels up the sword it becomes visible as a ring that travels up the sword. The water travels up the blade very quickly and at the top it forms a rotating sphere of water. Similar to a rasengan. The user then sprints at their opponent and lunges with the tip of the sword pointed at the opponent slamming the rotating sphere of water into their opponent. This is if you are at a short range from your opponent. If however you are at mid range you can swing the blade in a vertically slashing motion and release the spinning sphere of water, sending towards your opponent. This sphere moves very fast and can only be tracked by 1 tomoe sharingan and above.

    • Can only be used twice per battle
    • Can only be taught by Tsuna...


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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    My Korra bio has Snakes so here is the link to the bio xD http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=345452

    Hebi No Tanjō - Birth Of Snakes
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 (-15 to maintain)
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user does the Snake hand sign and then starts having 6 snakes (3 on each side) come out of his back and stay connected to them. Each snakes is 7 feet long. The snakes can be used to attack the opponent and and be used to grab ninja tools out of the air and help protect the user. The snakes can also grab onto near trees or pillars to help pull the user out of the way of incoming attacks like ninja tools. The snakes and the user have connected version and the snakes can alert the user on what they sense using their senses through temperature and smell but the user does not get the these sense and must have the snake use their senses and get alerted through the snakes.
    Note: Usable 3 times a match
    Note: Last 4 turns and must wait 1 turn before reusing.
    Note: Must know Snake summoning
    Note: Must be taught by Korra

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    DNR. Collides with some things.


    (Genjutsu : Shi No Hanten Sekai) Illusionary Arts: Death's Inverted World
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive/Supplementary
    Range : Short- Mid
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : N/A
    Description : The user will trap the opponent in a genjutsu where the opponent will see them self in a world that is darken and everything is destroyed completely. The opponent will then see Death and his demons appear in front of them and reaching out to grab them. When they grab the opponent this will cause stress to their mind and cause them to be immobilized to the point where they barely can move their arms. In reality the opponent is standing still and then collapse while the user there watching or getting ready to attack.
    Note: Must be taught by Korra
    Note: Usable 4 times a match.

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    Why does he collapse? It should require handseals.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton:Sekai Dōyō) - Lightning Release:World Shaking
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user will begin by raising their hand above their head, causing a ringed sphere of energy to form inside it. When the energy sphere is fully formed, the user will then hurl it toward the ground in the direction of the opponent. The sphere will then zigzag through the ground, causing a small tremor that causes the opponent to lose balance, then rise above the ground just before hitting the target.
    Note:
    -can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
    -can only be used 3x


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    Your description has a flaw: why does it cause a tremor? And the gif shows a different thing. What you describe appears to be not the same as what you want.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Youton: Rōpubaindo) – Lava release: rope bind
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: short-long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user creates from his mouth out of a rubbery substance a very tall, strong rubber rope, after doing 3 hand seals . The rubber rope is either shaped as a tall small snake, dragon or a tentacle. The animal shaped rubber rope will move towards the opponent and bind it, and makes sure the opponent can’t move. The dragon/snake/tentacle rope can even bind a large summoning.
    ~note: can only be taught by ~Khallil-Sama~
    ~note: can only be used by Dodai biographies
    ~note: the user can’t perform a rubber jutsu the following turn

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    (Youton: Yōgan ryū) – Lava release: Lava dragons
    Type: offensive/attack
    Rank: A
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user shoots 3 balls of lave out of their mouth in the air. The lava globes transform into 3 small dragons, and attack the opponent. It’s mostly common to use 1 dragon to attack the opponent in the front, one dragon attacks the left side and the other one the right side.
    ~note: can only be taught by ~Khallil-Sama~
    ~note: no HOT lava release jutsu can be used the same turn
    ~note: no A rank lava jutsu (or higher) can be used the following turn

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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR
     
         
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    Summoning Technique: Enchousura, The Dome - Kuchyose No Jutsu: Enchousura, Sono Tengai

    Rank: S
    Type: Deffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 6-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the Vulture-Shield of every Vulture summoner. Through her lifetime, she tried to master all sort of ninja methods; elements, ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu.. even kinjutsu, but all attempts failed. However, through all of the training she proceed through, her resistance to pain and muscle mass were impressively increased, so she decided to become the vulture-shield for others, a way she found herself useful for others and summoners when needed. She earned herself many titles; The dome, the iron boulder and the barrier, all of them were inspired by her specialty; taking hits and completely block the enemy's attacks. She corner the user with her body and armor as it knee inward at him, covering his body from the incoming attacks from most direction, hold against the pain then buff away when the attack is done. She is usually summoned behind the user at short range so that when it bend, she would still be able to see the enemy.
    - Can only be summoned once per battle.
    - Cannot summon other vultures for three turns.
    - Can block up to S rank techniques.

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    Jutsu the following submits are based on:
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    Link of approval of this CFS: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post8871180

    Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Suka-Ta

    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: -
    Description: The user channels his wind element chakra beneath his skate and manipulate the wind creating a strong balanced wind that makes your skate fly currying the user with it. This technique can also be used to move around at the same speed level of the user's rank. This technique can get the user up to 4 meters above the ground. If directed against any thrown objects, the wind current will push them away.
    -Can only be used three times per battle.
    -Stays for up to 3 turns per use, and cost 15 chakra points for each turn it is in use.
    -No other jutsu can be used while using this technique, however the user can use some of the fighting style's techniques and get back aboard with this jutsu activated.

    X-Approved-X
    Proof of the fighting style's approval: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post8871180

    Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Double Chop - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Nibai Kire

    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: While using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user get at close range of the enemy then dash from over the skater toward the enemy leaving it to spin with the hurricane beneath it toward the enemy after infusing its sides with wind chakra making them razor sharp. After dashing, the user will simultaneously attack the enemy with the skater, each targeting the enemy from the different side(Right/left or Front/behind) depending on the direction the user came from, the user will channel wind chakra through his straightened fist, making it as strong as a wind nature enhanced kunai only longer and chop the enemy from the opposing side of the skater which also is to chop the enemy with its sides, cutting the enemy and separate the pieces with the hurricane which contains the skater caused by Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater which was formed before hand.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

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    Description is messy and confusing. Reword it please.

    Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Hurricane Clone - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Bunshin

    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: -
    Description: While using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user balance the hurricane below the skater at the enemy's direction sending strong gusts of wind that could push back thrown weapons and create dust from the ground covering his sight as the user form the shadow clone handseal, creating a clone which is identical to the user using the Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater over a skater that looks the same as the user's. The clone is to advance toward the enemy through the dust to attack him. The enemy is to believe, if he wasn't a sensor or a doujutsu user, that he's being attacked by the user at close range unable to figure out that its just a clone. The clone can mainly use the hurricane skater martial art techniques, however, he could also jump off the skater and act as a regular shadow clone.
    -This technique count as a shadow clone technique usage and is treated accordingly to the rules.
    - Only one clone can be created through this technique.
    - Can only be used thrice per battle.
    - This technique can also be used to take the hit and block up to A rank techniques.
    -Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Same as above. Its amazingly confusing.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-17-2013 at 05:14 PM.

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    (Fuuinjutsu: Unmei no gyakuten) -Sealing Arts: Reversal of Fortune
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/a (chakra abosrbtion)
    Description: This is a seal on the user's body with the kanji for "Reversal". This seal activates upon the users chakra being forced out of him and placed into something else (that is, his chakra being absorbed by the opponent or being taken out of him and sealed away somewhere). When activated this seal immediately blocks and ends the opponents absorbtion technique and releases a barrier with a short range radius all around the user that starts to absorb the opponents chakra into the seal.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-
    -No Fuuin above A rank the next turn

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    Method doesn't make sense. This might work on some absorption techniques but not all. It needs tons of revision.

    (Fuuinjutsu: Suji shikan shīru) -Sealing Arts: Muscle Relaxation Seal
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/a
    Description: This is a seal on the users body with the Kanji for "Relax" on it. In what can be seen as the opposite of the muscle restriction seal, this seal activates whenever the users muscles are restricted and he is either slowed down or completely paralyzed because of them. This seal will release an electrical impulse immediately after this which will quickly unrestrict his muscles leaving him able to move immediately almost as if he never even got hit with the technique. This seal only works on things that paralyze the user by his muscles such as Chidori: Nagashi, Muscle restriction seal, and things of that nature and do not work on things like Killing Intent and genjutsu.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-
    -No Fuuin above A rank the next turn

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    This collides with things made before. DNR.

    (Fuuinjutsu: Chokusetsu chakura tenso gijutsu) - Sealing Arts: Direct Chakra Transfer Technique
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: +40 to the next technique
    Description: A Fuuin version of (Chakra Tensõ no Jutsu) Chakra Transfer Technique; Before the battle the user seals a large amount of his chakra into a seal and places it on his body or on an ally of his during the battle. When needed the user will activate this seal, giving him 20 points of chakra and boosting his next technique's damage by 40 points, healing any minor injuries that he may have, or breaking the opponent out of genjutsu. This is better than using the cannon technique due to the user not needing his ally to take his attention away from the battle or having to have perfect timing in order to complete it, needless to say it cuts down on alot of time as well. Not only this but for members of the Nekura clan who instantly reject foreign chakra, this makes the Chakra Transfer Technique accessible to them whereas normally it wouldn't be.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -No A rank and above fuuijutsu next turn
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-

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    DNR.
     
         
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    (Katon:Kyuushuu Bowser ) - Fire Release: Revenge Of Bowser
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user begins by performing the handseals Dragon-Boar-Rabbit. Once performed, the user gathers his fire chakra in his gut and spews out a large fire ball that turns into a giant demon looking turtle by the use of shape manipulation. The turtle is roughly twice the size of a average human. The turtle has the ability to shoot out C ranked fireballs. The user has the ability to cause the turtle to explode creating a wave of fire that burns everything short range from it.



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    too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    (Doton: Ōkuninushi no Dojō) Earth Release: The Earth God's Soil
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-Forbidden
    Range: N/A (depends on affected jutsu)
    Chakra Cost: N/A (+10 to the new rank's chakra cost)
    Damage Points: +5 to the new rank's damage (+5 to user for D-A (turned into C-S); +10 to user for S-rank (turned into Forbidden))
    Description: The user, after forming the handseals for an earth release ninjutsu, will then add a final handseal (unique from the common 12) and channel their chakra into the ground below their feet. Then, acting on the same principle as Gaara's "Ultimately Hard Absolute Defense: Shield of Shukaku", the users chakra seeks out the strongest minerals in the ground of the area, and pulls them to the surface to use for the user's technique, instead of the common rock normally used. After a slight delay due to the collection of these minerals, the user's technique will then continue as it would normally, now comprised out of minerals harder than the regular rock sitting on the surface of the battlefield, and thus making the technique stronger than normal (by the equivalent of one rank changing chakra cost and damage accordingly).
    Note: ~The user cannot use another Doton jutsu on the same or next turn as this jutsu is used due to strain on the user's chakra system
    ~This jutsu cannot, under any circumstances, be used on a Forbidden, or can-be-Forbidden-rank (ie. Rank: S-Forbidden) jutsu.
    ~This jutsu cannot be used on jutsu that do not rise from the ground (ie. Sticky Earth Drop), or on a technique that affects a person's body (ie. Earth Spear and Light Weight Rock Technique)
    ~Due to the properties of the techniques, this jutsu cannot be used on any mud-based technique
    ~This jutsu can only be used on rocky terrain, with a sand-covered area constituting "rocky"
    ~This jutsu can only be used three times per battle
    ~This jutsu can only be used on an S-rank (becoming a Forbidden) jutsu one time per battle, and the user cannot move for one turn afterwards due to the amount of strain on their chakra system
    ~This jutsu cannot be used again for at least three turns after any use
    ~This jutsu can only be taught by Sharingdork

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    You cannot make an S-Rank turn into a forbidden rank. You can add damage that would make it able to fight on equal terms with a Forbidden rank but it won't be a forbidden rank. it will be an S-Rank with added damage. But this isn't the main issue. This technique is virtually a more detailed version of Pervy's Earth Expansion technique. DNR.

    (Kaika Kunai) Blossoming Kunai
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user reaches into a pouch filled with explosive tags and channels their chakra through the tags, allowing them to control each tag with their chakra, similar to the "Hidden Explosive Tags Technique". The user then causes several exploding tags to "crawl" around his hand and stick together with his/her chakra, ultimately creating a kunai shape. The tags on the outer-most layer of the "kunai" take on a grey color, giving the illusion that it's a real kunai. The user then throws the "kunai", the collection of tags travelling almost like a normal kunai. The difference is that since the kunai is much lighter than a normal one, it travels with both different speed and kinetics. On contact with another object, or when the user forms the "tiger" handseal, the "kunai" will no longer be held together by the user's chakra, and the explosion tags will begin to flutter in the air for a moment, hovering, giving the target a second to realize what's happened before all of the tags explode at once.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

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    ±± Approved ±±
    Perfect. Well done!
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Shikou Kensai) Supreme Feint
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: E-D Rank
    Range:Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Chakra: 5
    Damage:0

    Description:
    Through out countless months of dodging Hiro's blade or shurikens**See Bio - The Second Kidnapping**
    Benn has built up an evasive nature. So much so he bases his taijutsu souly on this evasiveness.
    Benn will weakin his chakra on a certain part of his body, causing his chakra to change its antibiotic nature.
    Whats not Benn's chakra should be avoided says the mind to the body causing any chakra to get within 0~5m of Benn to trigger his body to avoid contact or even touch.
    With projectiles, a trace of the opponents chakra is slightly embedded within each projectile the opponent touches.
    Once the projectile gets in range it works the same as if a punch or kick is avoided.
    The chakra will run through his body, reaching the point needed, and cause Benn's body to avoid letting that area be touched by another persons chakra. Once the technique is set, the users distance will ignite it and the users chakra will do its job on cue.
    Benn will wait for the very last moment before an enemies strike can connect, and swiftly dip and slide himself out of direct contact with the opposing force. He also uses this during power struggles to allow the opponent fall towards him as he slides to a side and makes his next move.
    Benn can be grazed by the attack while using this.
    Just because its activated does not mean Benn cannot be hit.


    Examples
    Direct taijutsu/weapon
    If a person were to try a direct taijutsu attack, Benn would lean to the side of the punch/kick and spin either away from the opponent
    or work off this dodge towards a grab or attack.
    **Enemy lunges with blade attempting to stab Benn's chest., Benn send chakra to his upper back and his legs causing him to plant his feet and lean completely back and watch the blade hover over him.**

    Weapon or Ninjutsu *Shuriken/Kunai/Head sized boulder size
    Benn will dodge the object with a swift jerking motion.
    Due to the speed of projectiles Benn's body has not developed enough for his chakra to travel at such speeds.
    Benn allows the chakra to work but after it reaches where it needs to in his body and the proj. has been dodged he quickly releases it and relies on his own hand eye co-ordination. Benn will either be hit by the following projectile after using the technique, dodge it without the tech., or use his sword to block the proj.


    Restrictions
    1) Opposing attack must be smaller then no bigger than Benn's size otherwise Benn will either try to divert it with an attack, be hit by the attack or simply jump out of the way

    2) Activation will cost Benn 5 chakra.

    3)As said above..Benn will use this to dodge 1 projectile but the following proj. is faster then his chakras rate of speed thus causing him to naturally dodge it...naturally dodging means Benn will dodge slower then with the tech. causing him to be more focused of the proj. then the opponent.

    4) Cool down = 3 posts between each use


    5) No one but Benn can teach this technique.

    Looks like a break dancing loose sort of maneuver.

    Looks like this Yet Naruto even says Sage mode allows him to have better timing to counter...

    Looks like this Yet Sasuke's sharingan and training allows him to have better timing to counter...
    Where as Benn's technique is based on a A Chakra vs B Chakra Interaction system.


    2nd Jutsu

    (Ninpou - Horogurafikku) Ninja Art - Holographic
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: 0m -15m
    Chakra: 10
    Description:
    Similar to a pump fake in basketball or a hologram in Halo, this jutsu distracts the opponent. A clone emerges off of the users body facing the direction of the target. At the proper angle the clones image will block the user from sight allowing the user to attack off of the opponents lack of attention to his/herself.
    Benn will send the clone towards the target and then trail the clone 5 seconds after.
    The clone will show off as if its going for the kill.
    Hopefully causing the opponent to use a powerful strike on the clone, giving Benn the advantage.
    Binded by his/her technique, the user will not only instruct the clone, but enforce his/her body to mimic what the clone was instructed to do.
    If the opponent dodges instead of attacks the user, the user can be seen if the opponent describes where he/she is **AKA point of which the jutsu was started.**

    Example:
    Benn Jumps backward onto the tree behind him. He then forms a few hand seals and plunges himself from the tree towards the opponent. *Assuming the opponent dodges and quickly strikes me after missing** The clone vanishes after a seemingly dead acting scene, and I repeat the same move the clone made lunging from the tree.

    Diagram (B = Benn, C = Clone, O = Opponent, * = Hit)

    Scene 1
    Tree
    |
    |
    |___B_________O
    Scene 2
    Tree
    |B
    |
    |_________O
    Scene 3
    Tree
    |B
    |____C
    |_________O
    Scene 4
    Tree
    |B
    |
    |_________C*O Clone vanishes
    Scene 5
    Tree
    |
    |______B
    |_________O
    Scene 6
    Tree
    |
    |
    |_______B*O

    The clone basically emerges off Benn's body and blocks the targets site of the actual Benn in order to fool the user as if Benn left the tree.
    Benn must do exactally what the clone did.



    Example 2
    Benn is in a stand off with another ninja...they stand face to face red dead redemption style. He forms a couple seals and stands still.
    **Secretly after the seal Benn backflips backwards a few times and the clone is the one standing still above**

    Diagram (B = Benn, C = Clone, O = Opponent, * = Hit)

    _______B_______O

    ___B___C_____O

    _B____C*O

    _B_O **Benn must stand still as long as it took for the clone to be hit since the clone stood still.**


    Restrictions:

    1) What ever move the clone performs must be taijutsu, and the users next move must be exactly identical in every way shape form and location(Unless clone stood still **Example 2**).

    2) Cooldown = 5 posts between use.

    3) User must show a signal of using this technique such as hand seals.

    4) This technique requires the users feet to be planted due to this jutsus rank. Elevation of this jutsu may allow it to be done in air.

    5) If the clone stood still, Benn has no control of his body from the waist down for how ever many turns are between Jutsu activation and Clone destruction. Benn will however have control from the waist down. Thus allowing him to block/dodge(depending on size of attack) an attack but unable to leap out of the attacks way.

    6) Benn and only Benn can teach this technique and with permission it can be passed on.

    ______________
    ±± All Declined ±±
    DNR. First you need to understand the RP before you try and submit techniques. And when you do submit them, please do it in a decent way.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-10-2013 at 09:55 PM. Reason: **New Jutsu**

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Majutsu-shi) - Earth Release: Conjurer
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (If used offensively)
    Description: An ability allowing the user through hand gestures to exert his chakra into dust/dirt particles on the field, shaping, forming and bending them accordingly to his will. This can be used in various ways, such as lifting the dust from the field into the air, creating a dustscreen, or merely blinding their opponent by sending small particles into their eyes. However this can also be used in a defensive, or offensive by further forming the dust particles, such as creating solid constructs such as a sword, and hardening it into rock.
    ~Can only be used 5 times per match

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR.This is the same as my water technique just for earth.
     
         
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    (Ototon: Mayonaka no Doragon) - Sound Release: Midnight Dragon
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive | Defensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user excites the sound chakra in his hands creating a high frequency tune that vibrates the the very air around him. He then focuses on unleashing the sound waves in a fury of punches, exciting the air around him, creating several waves of visible sound waves that give off a vibrant yellow aura to be unleashed traveling through the air that all form together forming what appears to be a dragon made of sound waves that soars towards the target. The sound frequencies that form the dragon let out a high pitched tune that makes it sound like a roaring dragon. Upon contact the dragon explodes into several tiny sound wave bursts leaving craters of devastation on the battlefield when its over.

    Can only be used twice per battle
    Must Know Sound Release
    No sound Release B rank and above for 2 turns.
    Must wait 3 turns before using again.
    Can only be taught by Nagato..

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    (Ototon: Shokushu) - Sound Release: Tendrils
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user makes the handseals Tiger - Snake to create excite the air with sound waves that forms a large tendril made out of sound waves that rushes towards the opponent impaling them. The tendril can be split into 3 to hit multiple targets at the cost of decreasing its power to that of B rank.

    Must know sound release
    Can only be used 3x per battle
    Must be taught by Nagato..

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    This doesn't make much sense. You're stretching what sound can do too much.

    (Ototon: Baruhara No Ikari) - Sound Release: Wrath of Valhalla
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user focuses their sound chakra into sky above the terrain exciting the air to vibrate intensely causing a massive sonic boom to occur in the sky, pushing away everything in the sky (clouds, rain, etc) as if something had exploded in the air. Though a high pitched echo that sounds like a choir is humming is beginning resonating throughout the battlefield that cripples the opponents equilibrium and makes them lose balance, having limited control over their motor functions they feel as though their bodies weight a ton, but that's only because they have no control over their balance.

    Must Know sound release
    Opponents lose balance for one full turn.
    Can only be used twice per battle
    No sound for two turns
    Must be taught by Nagato..

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Too high ranked, the effects on the user are excessive and you can't simply make that happen like that. You would be able to shout at the sky and produce that effect but not like this. And i don't get why this would do damage.
     
         
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    1. Satsui no Hado: Shun Goku Satsu | Surge of Murderous Intent: Instant Hell Murder
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description. Instant Hell Murder, also known as the Raging Demon, is the most powerful technique belonging to the Satsui no Hado fighting style. The user, using the principles behind the Ashura Senku, surges their entire body with an immense amount of Satsui no Hado chakra, channeling so much that it begins to materialize around the user as he charges more and more, spreading it throughout the range (however, this takes little to no time) and then charges towards their opponent at double his speed due to the incredible boost in strength and power from such a large amount of Hado chakra. The user moves at great speeds due to "gliding" across the ground at heightened speeds; the reason this technique is so dangerous is that with the aforementioned speed of the user, they leave behind an after image (more accurately described as a chakra impression) of themselves that fools the opponent's sense of depth perception when looking at the user, allowing them to think he's further away than he actually is with only 3T Sharingan users being able to actually pinpoint the user's actual location, though being able to see the user's location and being able to react to it are two different situations. When near the opponent, the user attempts to grab them somewhere around the torso or head. Upon successfully grabbing the opponent, the enhanced Satsui no Hado chakra latches on to the enemy and they are immersed in a world of swirling darkness, which is actually the previously released Satsui no Hado aura of the user now formed around both user and opponent in the form of a sphere with a 5 meter diameter. Inside the dark sphere, the user used the enhanced power of Satsui no Hado to deliver several taijutsu precise blows to the opponents body, all aimed at vital organs, causing internal organs to rupture and bones to break and shatter from repeated blows. Once the user has grabbed the enemy, this attack cannot be dodged unless by space/time jutsu (though that is not to say that it cannot be countered, just at this point unavoidable). Upon completion of this technique, the user's legs and arms are so strained that his speed is effectively cut down drastically (in case a reference to the speed chart is needed, the user's speed is decreased to half his base speed + additional bonuses such as being a taijutsu master, Raikage armor, EIG, etc.) and taijutsu strength is decreased as well, becoming -10 weaker.
    Note: Can only be performed once per battle.
    Note: Only Masters of Satsui no Hado can perform this technique.
    Note: After using, the user is unable to utilize Satsui no Hado chakra for the remainder of the fight.
    Note: The shock the body receives from losing the enhanced speed and power granted from the Satsui no Hado causes -40 pain to the user.
    Note: No taijutsu techniques above A ranked can be performed by the user for two turns and all taijutsu used during those two turns and subsequently weakened by -10 due to fatigue and physical strain.

    Video of jutsu being used:


    ~Leaving for Scorps~

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Tone it down. OPed as it is. Also, I want real effects to your body from using this. Not only numeric damage which we know count little to nothing.
    1. Satsui no Hado: Shun Goku Satsu | Surge of Murderous Intent: Instant Hell Murder
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description. Instant Hell Murder, also known as the Raging Demon, is the most powerful technique belonging to the Satsui no Hado fighting style. The user, using the principles behind the Ashura Senku, surges their entire body with an immense amount of Satsui no Hado chakra, channeling so much that it begins to materialize around the user as a cloak of dark chakra . he charges more and more, spreading it throughout the range and then charges towards their opponent at double his speed due to "gliding" across the ground at heightened speeds; just like the original Ashura Senku, they leave behind an after image (more accurately described as a chakra impression) of themselves that fools the opponent's sense of depth perception when looking at the user, allowing them to think he's further away than he actually is with only Doujutsu, EIG Masters and users of Enhanced Senses (sensory, hearing, smell, etc) being able to actually pinpoint the user's actual location as the chakra impression trails behind him. When near the opponent, the user attempts to grab them somewhere around the torso or head. Upon successfully grabbing the opponent, the enhanced Satsui no Hado chakra will help the user to deliver several (up to 9) taijutsu precise blows to the opponents body, all aimed at vital organs, causing internal organs to rupture and bones to break and shatter from repeated blows. Upon completion of this technique, the user's legs and arms are so strained that his speed is effectively cut down drastically (in case a reference to the speed chart is needed, the user's speed is decreased to half his base speed + additional bonuses such as being a taijutsu master, Raikage armor, EIG, etc.) and taijutsu strength is decreased as well, becoming -10 weaker.
    Note: Can only be performed once per battle.
    Note: Only Masters and Grandmasters of Satsui no Hado can perform this technique.
    Note: After using, the user is unable to utilize Satsui no Hado chakra for the remainder of the fight.
    Note: The shock the body receives from losing the enhanced speed and power granted from the Satsui no Hado causes great pain to the user, limiting his movement for two turns to a half of his current speed
    Note: No taijutsu techniques above A ranked can be performed by the user for two turns and all taijutsu used during those two turns and subsequently weakened by -10 due to fatigue and physical strain.
    Note: The user is unable to mold chakra for jutsu over S-rank and above the next turn as well due to the strain of generating a large amount of chakra at the beginning of this jutsu.


    Video of jutsu being used:


    __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________
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    Last edited by Scorps; 04-20-2013 at 01:44 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Kyuushin Kemuri) – Fire Release: Hiding in Fumes
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (40 if ignited)
    Description: After performing a single handseal, the user begins releasing their katon chakra into the ground to cause an extremely flammable mist (Similar to Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique) to begin emerging from the cracks, holes and crevices in the floor to fill the air around the opponent, leaving them in a dense and volatile mist which surrounds their whole body. In appearance, the gas itself is almost identical to the mist produced in the Hiding in Mist Jutsu, leading the opponent to believe some sort of variation rather than a Katon technique. Whilst inside the flammable mist, the opponent is unable to see the user and vice versa. Due to its volatile nature, the flammable mist can be ignited with the slightest of sparks/embers.

    Note: Can only be used Thrice per battle
    Note: Can only be Taught by Nnoitrâ

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.


    (Katon: Kyuushin Kemuri) – Fire Release: Radical Fumigation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing two handseals, the user begins releasing their katon chakra into the ground to cause multiple geysers of flammable gas (Similar to Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique) to suddenly emerge beneath and around the opponent, with enough force to propel the opponent high up into the air. By this time, the extremely volatile gas has filled the entire vicinity around the opponent, leaving them in a minefield waiting to explode. Continuing to release their katon chakra into the ground, the user now causes geysers of flame to erupt from the same openings as before, instantly igniting the flammable environment and blowing the opponent to smithereens in the process. The opening(s) in the ground cannot be small cracks or holes, but must be at least fifty centimeters in length.

    Note: Can only be Used once per battle
    Note: Can only be Taught by Nnoitrâ
    Note: No S-Rank or above Fire in the user's next turn

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to CE techniques that basically do the same. DNR.

    (Katon: Kaibunu Kawarimi) - Fire Release: Ash Replacement
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user can freely transform his body into ash. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form. The user is extremely prone to ignition from fire and lightning techniques, meaning they should take extreme precaution when this technique is used.

    Note: Can only be Taught by Nnoitrâ

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-17-2013 at 05:29 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (link to appoved summoning http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post9314573)

    (Kuchiyose: Te-ra) Summoning: Terra
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user taps their tattoo sending a pulse of chakra into it, summoning Terra. Terra is the King of the Firefly's, being a large male, that is 4 meters long head to tail. He is big enough to carry two people on his thorax with a large Yellow Tail glow. He can use any Raiton techniques the summoner knows up to A-rank. He communicates through wing vibrations, although those that can summon firefly's have been taught the language.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    restrictions?

    (Kuchiyose: Hotaru furash) Summoning: Firefly Flash
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A Summoning Firefly technique, the user smears their blood onto their tattoo, and pushes a portion of chakra into it, summoning forth 100 fireflies into the vicinity. These firefly's are normal size and nothing special, except that they intermediately continuously flash. This begins to distort the opponents vision so that they become blind by being overcome with light sources.
    Notes: Must have signed Firefly contracts
    Lasts 3 Turns.
    No summoning next turn

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing summoning techniques and some bug techniques.

    (Kuchiyose: Robin) Summoning: Robin
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: By putting a finger onto the users tattoo and pulsing some chakra, the user can summon forth Robin, a medium sized Firefly. Robin has a white tail, having an affinity for wind. Robin can use any wind techniques the user has up to B rank.
    Robin is a 2 meter long firefly able to carry one person. Having a wind affinity, Robin is agile, and can fly quickly. Can also talk through wing vibrations

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    ±± Declined ±±
    restrictions?
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-17-2013 at 05:30 PM.

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