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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Common Cuttlefish
    Scroll Owner: Dkdankong

    Other Users who have signed contract: None

    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None yet

    Description and Background:
    Cuttlefish belong to the same class as squids, and octopi, but are extremlely different and should not be considered the same. Cuttlefish have 8 arms and two tentacles, covered in suckers. They have odd, W shaped eyes.Their bodies are soft, except for their small beak and the cuttlebone, a hollow bone that helps with buoyancy. Cuttlefish are very intelligent, and are said to be smarter than monkeys.

    Cuttlefish have 3 hearts, green blood, and are instantly able to change their coloring, which is one of their defensive tactics. Other defensive tactics are that they can change the texture of their skin, squirt ink, jet away from predators, and hide within very small areas. It is known as the smartest of all invertebrate and is able to see backwards. Also, not only do they reflect colors, they are able to merge almost completely with the seafloor.

    They have a fin all the way around their body instead of tail fins, which help them to move very quickly. These animals are stealthy, and can help in escapes, but can also serve as a good defensive or offensive summon, serving many purposes.



    (This next photo is an octopus but was the only one i could find, but still serves the same idea to offer a visual aid)


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    Animal is ok but you need to add a few lines explaining how will they be summoned on dry land...how can this work in Narutoverse? You need to take into account your summoning a sea creature into dry land and you need to, in your contract submission, explain to us how it will survive in the normal enviroment.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon:Shakunetsu-chō - Fire Release:Burning birds
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user gathers up chakra and converts it into katon. The user then blows out a large ball of fire and divides into 6 smaller balls. The 6 balls of fire are then shaped into birds that can change their flames from blue to red-orange. The flame birds then fly towards the opponent in different directions and bombard the opponent, bursting on impact.
    Note:
    -Can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
    -Can only be used 3x
    -The birds turn blue when not attacking, then turn to red-orange when about to attack

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques exist, normally the color of flames is orange/red, it's not blue, and we don't allow Fire color variations anymore, the only blue colored flames are the Second Tailed Jinchuuriki Yugito Nii.

    Katon:Nenshō Fenikkusu Kuresuto - Fire Release:Burning Phoeix Crest
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user gathers chakra and transfers it through their hair causing the hair to temporary grow really long. The user then converts the chakra flowing through the hair into katon chakra, causing their hair to ignite in flames. The user then begins to whip their flame hair back and forth towards the opponent. The user can also manipulate their flame hair and wrap it around the opponent causing serious damage.
    Note:
    -Can be only be taught by Kage Phoenix
    -Can only be used 2x
    -Lasts 2 turns


    ~Declined~ Growing hair is an ability exclusive to Jiraiya and Fuguki, the Samehada wielder before Kisame, not to mention this technique is unrealistic, don't resubmit.

    Katon:Kobushi no Kagutsuchi - Fire Release:Fists of Kagutsuchi
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 (+10)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user gathers their chakra and converts it into Katon chakra. The user then creates a large ball of fire and shapes it into a fist. The user can manipulate the fist to attack at the opponent and repel projectiles. The fist can punch,uppercut, and slam down on the opponent. The user can also launch the fist at the opponent for a one time attack.
    Note:
    -Can only be used by Kage Phoenix
    -Can only be used 2x
    -Cannot perform Katon ninjutsu for 2 turns
    -With the cost of 10 chakra, the user can create another fire fist
    -Only can have 1 to 2 fire fists up
    -If two fist are up and one gets destroyed or launched, then you can't create another fist until the other fist is destroyed or launched and also must wait 2 turns.

    ~Declined~ similar techniques exist, not to mention i'm not going to allow such a technique.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Inuzuka's Songu Aisu ken Kasai| Inuzuka's Song of Ice and Fire
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    This ancient whistle was long brought down through the Inuzuka Clan and only known to those whom proven their worth. Due to recent changes within the clan, only those who are clan heads and advisers are allowed to use this technique. The whistle these Inuzuka shinobi use trigger a response with their ninkens brains This dormant trigger overflows the ninkens body with an incredible amount of adrenaline that spreads through the body nearly instantaneously. The overflow of adrenaline triggers two different responses depending on which whistle is executed. The Inuzuka shinobi named each response Ice and Fire based on how the ninken would react and the changes in their appearance. Below the differences between the two are listed with restrictions of there use.

    氷 Ice
    This whistle is done at a high pitch - triggering the brain to increase adrenaline to muscles within the legs highly advancing them beyond the norm. In a typical functional ninkens body, their very fast due to use of four legs and natural speed but once their body is forced with adrenaline by use of the Ice whistle their speed increases to the point of blur. The ninken will be able to move at speed that 2 tome and below sharingan are unable to track. Reaction time is also enhanced while in this form. While in this advanced form, the fur and eyes of the ninken become an icy blue and white that covers their entire body.

    災 Fire
    This whistle is done at a more low pitch - triggering the brain to increase adrenaline within the entire body highly advancing them beyond the norm. Generally, the strongest part of the ninken would be the bite due to their natural selection and evolution but once their body is force with the adrenaline from the Fire whistle their strength all over goes greatly beyond of what is normal. The ninken bite alone is enough to sever any body part off with ease, their overall strength in terms of take downs are equivalent to being hit directly with a landslide. Their strength increases Inuzuka techniques that require a ninken by +15. The fur and eyes of the ninken grow a deep fiery red as if they've entered a rage.

    Note: Usable once per battle (either Ice or Fire, just one)
    Note: Effects only one ninken at a time
    Note: Lasts 3 turns
    Note: Once ended the ninken is out of commission for 1 turn
    Note: +15 to Inuzuka techniques only lasts during the Fire phase
    Note: Unable to use Inuzuka Techniques for 1 turn after it has ended

    ~Declined~ don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Flash07 View Post
    (Kage Matorikkusu) Shadow matrix
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: A shadow technique invented by Flash07, where the user concentrates his shadow chakra to his shadow and materializes it which gives it steel like strength. Then the user extends his shadows, (he can divide it into 3 in the start) where it digs through the earth and travels towards the opponent. The shadows travels 5 inches underground but it makes no noise or any disturbances so the opponent is unaware of it. When the shadow comes out of the other end, it divides into 5 spikes each and then jags the opponent and holds him in place. This technique works exactly in the same way as used by Shikamaru in his match against Temari i.e. using his shadows underground.

    Note: When underground, the shadows are unaffected by light.
    Note: Can only be used by Naras.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07.
    ♠ Declined ♠
    Not reasonable for me at all. You dig your shadows into the earth without your opponent knowing? That's literally impossible considering the power of this move and how long it reaches.
    It would definitely create sound and disturbances in the ground when it happens and you never stated how large or wide it would be as well.
    Also, add a usage limit.
    (Kage Matorikkusu) Shadow Matrix
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: A shadow technique invented by Flash07, where the user concentrates his shadow chakra to his shadow and materializes it which gives it steel like strength. Then the user extends his shadows, (he can divide it into 3 in the start) where it digs through the earth and travels towards the opponent. The shadows travels 5 inches underground but it makes little to no noise or any disturbances as they have a thickness of only 5 cm so the opponent is unaware of it. When the shadow comes out of the other end, it divides into 5 spikes each and then jags the opponent and holds him in place. This technique works exactly in the same way as used by Shikamaru in his match against Temari i.e. using his shadows underground.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Can attack multiple opponents.

    Note: When underground, the shadows are unaffected by light.
    Note: Can only be used by Naras.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07.

    ~Declined~ you can't write "the opponent is unaware of it", also shadow doesn't materialize, you manipulate the shadow that's already there, when it digs through the earth it surely will make a sound noticeable by the opponent, and i find the spikes part similar to the Shadow Sewing technique, don't resubmit.




    (Ninjutsu: Yurusa rezaru mono) Ninja Arts: The Unforgiven
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: Same as the technique used by opponent.
    Description: This jutsu is more like a summoning jutsu. The user performs quick 3 handseals and slams his hand on the ground to create 5 poles of metal that erupt from the ground. These metals will redirect any listening jutsu used against the user through the poles. The metallic poles are insulated underground. The ends of these poles come out from behind the opponent. Hence any lightening jutsu that the opponent uses against the user can be redirected back to the opponent or somewhere else.
    Note:
    -Can only be used twice.
    -Cannot protect from sky based lightening attack.
    -Protects from S-Ranked Lightening.
    -Can only be taught by Flash07

    ~Declined~ First, this is weapon ninjutsu, weapons generally can't be summoned anywhere, they are summoned through scrolls "ninjutsu/fuuinjutsu", so in order for you to summon a weapon you have to have fuuinjutsu, that's not all, like i said it isn't summoned this way, it's summoned through a scroll, like all of the weapon ninjutsu we have as cannon, you can't mention that any lightning technique will be redirected, depends on the lightning technique, a Chidori will cut through the steel, because it's a concentrated technique, a chidori nagashi will stop the advance of the pillars, a B-rank is capable of destroying the pillars since it's raw chakra.



    Quote Originally Posted by Flash07 View Post
    (Genjutsu: Taiketsu) Illusionary Arts: Showdown
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user weaves a single handseal and traps his opponent in a genjutsu. In the genjutsu, the opponent sees the user forming quick three handseal (including the first one which he actually sees) and then the user slams his hands on the ground. Once done, the user raises the ground under him and his opponent (more like pillars) to hundreds of meter above the ground. The opponent also feels the temperature, atmosphere etc. to be changed that suits the high altitude. The ground is raised at a very high speed leaving little to no time for the opponent to react. The ground raised by the user is in a peculiar manner. The opponent has only 1 meter radius earth under his feet. So this means that the opponent is restricted to a fixed place. While the user has an earth surface that surrounds the opponent in a semicircle leaving a gap/hole between them. So this means the user can move around in a semicircle around the opponent maintaining the same distance. To make it clear, it looks like the opponent is stranded on an island of 1 meter radius at a high altitude. If the opponent comes out of the circle/if he uses any unfocussed lightening attack (might break the weak pillar), there might be a possibility of him falling in the gap.

    Note: Can only be used twice in a match.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07.

    Consider 1 pillar for the opponent, and the surrounding area for the user



    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. ♠
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    X-Both Declined-X 1st technique exists as cannon, search genjutsu. Other is vague and generally unusable.

    (Genjutsu: Taiketsu) Illusionary Arts: Showdown
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user weaves a single handseal and traps his opponent in a genjutsu which takes control over his 5 senses. In the genjutsu, the opponent sees the user forming a handseal and then slamming his hands on the ground. Once done, the opponent sees the user raising the ground under him and the user to hundreds of meter above the ground. The ground is raised at a very high speed leaving little to no time for the opponent to react. The ground raised by the user is in a peculiar manner. The opponent has only 1 meter radius earth under his feet. So this means that the opponent is restricted to a fixed place. While the user has an earth surface that surrounds the opponent in a semicircle leaving a gap/hole between them. So this means the user can move around in a semicircle around the opponent maintaining the same distance. To make it clear, it looks like the opponent is stranded on an island of 1 meter radius at a high altitude. If the opponent comes out of the circle/if he uses any unfocussed lightening attack (due to the fear of breaking the weak pillar), there might be a possibility of him falling in the gap. This jutsu is basically to restrict the opponent into a single place.

    Note: Can only be used twice in a match.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07.

    Consider 1 pillar for the opponent, and the surrounding area for the user


    ~Declined~ Like Xylon said, the technique is unusable, and just for that colored portion, don't resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Steel Release: Liquid Steel Membrane ( Koutetsu Kaihou- Rikkido Koutetsu Maku)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An advanced and new form of the Steel Kekki Genkai. By combining their water chakra into their steel chakra, the user is able to create a liquid steel. The liquid protrudes from the openings in the users pores enabling them to use the liquid quickly and easily. With that, the user can encase their entire body in a 2inch case of liquid steel. With there being no gaps, the user is protected from most of the elements, and thanks to its texture, most taijutsu & physical attacks only serve to knock back the user, dealing little to no physical pain at all. Because of the density of the liquid, the users movement is slowed.

    Note: Since it is Steel AND Water, lightning element jutsu do double the damage it normally would.
    Note:Immune to A-Rank and lower Taijutsu.
    Note: Immune to Water jutsu within reason.

    ~Declined~ That's not how Liquid Steel is formed, it's done by heating the steel using Fire chakra to a certain degree until it melts, infusing water chakra with steel does absolutely nothing, also this kind of technique won't be approved, you can't incase your entire body in liquid steel without dying, because of how heated it would be, i'm not going to allow immunity to any kind of Ninjutsu or Taijutsu either.

    Steel Release: Steel Cable Whip ( Koutetsu Kaihou- Koutetsu Sakoujou Hoippu)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user launches out a single thick steel cable from both wrists each. The cables can extend for several feet. The user can use these cables to lash at the enemy, causing blunt damage. Or to wrap around the enemy and entangle them. Can also use the cables to latch on to nearby ledges and protrusions such as tree branches to manuever, or escape harm.
    Note: Lasts for 2 turns once used.

    ~Approved~ Just for reference, you wouldn't be able to escape large scaled techniques fast enough using this CJ and you'd always need something to maneuver yourself with like a tree branch or a large ledge, added a minor note, and replaced "bone breaking damage" with "blunt Damage" a C-rank technique wouldn't cause bone breaking damage, if hit the appropriate place it can knock out the opponent, otherwise it will just knock them away.

    Steel Release: Stainless Steel Armor ( Koutetsu Kaihou- Sutenresu Koutetsu Yoroi )
    Type: Supplementary/ Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: + 20 Taijutsu
    Description: The user does the Dog and Ram handseals, then channels an massive amount of Steel chakra. By doing so, they make their skin all over their body transform into a silver, steel-like armor, pushing their body's defensive capability to its utmost limits. It is said to be one of the known "Ultimate Defenses" Alongside the Hyuuga's Rotation, and Gaara's Sand. Most attacks that are directed at the user are rendered useless, the user's Taijutsu and defensive power are increased dramatically to the point that the user themselves can break through any form of rock effortlessly, and can even break through steel itself.

    Note: Immune to Earth & Water based Jutsu within reason. Immune to all lower ranked Taijutsu within reason.
    Note: Can only use C-Rank and below Steel Jutsu while jutsu is active.

    ~Declined~ Like i said i'm not granting immunity to any ninjutsu or taijutsu, and this is a rip off of the Earth Spear Technique that turns your skin into a steel-like quality, only a bigger degree, so it won't be approved.

    Link to my approved Steel Release Bio: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=286099 (not quite updated.)
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Reopon Gigei: Honoo Heki) ~ Leopon Arts: Flame Burst
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Ippo, the Flame Guardian, manipulates his flame mane and creates wings. With the wings, and his powerful muscles, Ippo makes one charge (A jump forward with a strong gust from his wings) with a sudden burst of speed, Head first to knock the target in to long-range with the target's breath knocked out and stunned for a short time. (Like someone hitting your Solar Plexus). Burst of speed can only be visible with 3T sharingan. With no 3T sharingan, Ippo will look like a blur
    ~Can only be used by Ippo
    ~Can be used twice (After 1 turn break)
    ~Opponent is stunned for the 1st move of their turn

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    (Reopon Gigei: Kasai Nenshou) ~ Leopon Arts: Fire Combustion
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Ippo the Flame guardian, uses his fire chakra and his Leopon Arts knowledge to create a giant fireball which he spews from his mouth. Ippo then roars through the fireball with his chakra to cause vibrations to run through the fire and cause multiple fireballs to spew out from the main ball and head towards the target.
    ~Can only be used by Ippo
    ~Can only be used twice (After 1 turn cooldown)
    ~Every 2 fireballs branched off the main decreases all the balls overall strength by one rank

    ~Pending~ Where is this "Ippo, the Flame Guardian"? you should quote it next time, then i'll start looking at these.

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    (Kuchiyose: Sono Sensei) ~ Summoning: The Doctor
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the teacher of the Leopon, The Doctor, Myo. Myo is the most intelligent of all the Leopons, hence why he is instated the role of the sensei. He is part of the TriGuardian (Consists of 3 of the toughest Leopons) which serve to protect the King. Myo mane is made out of strong hair in a black and white swirl. The swirl of hair signify his life force and determination. Myo although strong physically, his true strength is in mind tricks, also known as genjutsu. Myo has some Leopon Art techniques that is unique to Myo himself.
    ~Can only be summoned by those signed to the contract and with my permission
    ~Lasts 3 turns
    ~Can be summoned twice (Needs 2 turn break after dispersion)
    ~Can do up to A-rank cannon Genjutsu techniques

    ~Declined~ Can he use NB genjutsu? that has to be defined, also up to B-rank genjutsu is the extent i'm going to allow Custom summons to have, make him summoned only once and lasts for 4 turns, specify his size, and what does the "Short-Long" range refer to exactly?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Tsuchi Juuton) - Earth Release: Carpet Peel
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user channels his earth chakra into the ground and stomps his foot causing the ground in front of him to start rapidly peeling, rolling like a carpet, covering a wide range of 20 meters. The Thickness of the Earth while peeling is 3 inches but increases rapidly in-size as at rolls. If the target get's caught in the earth his body will be squashed and trapped within the earth carpet.
    -Usable Twice

    ~Declined~ Not bad, i like the idea, though 20 meters isn't a Mid range, it's a long range, so either decrease the width it covers, or increase the range of the technique, also how far can it roll up to? you say it covers 20 meters in width, but how far can it reach in front of it? does it roll sideways, or forwards?

    (Fuuton: Sui-Pu) - Wind Release: Swoop!
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: The user releases wind chakra on the ground in front of him and claps his hands together causing a fast gust of wind to travel along the ground sweeping the targets legs 90 degrees behind them, making their face to smack off the ground.

    ~Declined~ That's not the application of Wind Release techniques, wind doesn't travel underground, it's ok for any other element other than wind.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kindan no ohitsujiza āto: Suu~ōmutekunikku o shōkan | Summoning Technique: Forbidden Aries Art: Swarm
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will weave 5 handseals and place their palms forward creating a summoning seal. Next, a hole large whole in the air in front of the seal will open. Then, 500 normal sized cardinals will race out of the large opening and into the skies hovering over the entire battlefield. All of cardinals bear the kanji that explosive tags do on their back. After a set amount of time, the cardinals will begin to descend upon a single target one by one. On impact, the cardinals cause an explosion no different from a normal explosive tag explosion. Once they start to descend upon the set target it cannot be changed until all 500 have descended upon the target. This technique is very exhausting and even deadlier. This is a last resort technique.

    Note: The birds all descend on the opponent in rapid succession with a 1 second period between each cardinals descent.
    Note: Once the cardinals are summoned you cannot stop the move until it is finished.
    Note: The cardinals follow the targets chakra. This means that they hardly miss when they have a target.
    Note: If a target is lost or not found, the cardinals will strike the ground at random potentially injuring both sides.

    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: Counts as two techniques
    Note: Can only be taught by Shade Dracova

    ~Declined~ 500 is a bit too much, i was thinking more like 100 is enough, also i don't like having them descend one by one, have them all descend at the same time, remove the colored, following chakra is sensing, and i'm not allowing sensing anymore, the description is still a bit vague, and do you have fuuinjutsu? if you don't then you can't have the kanji seal on their back, you can only have an explosive tag on each of them, mention where it attacks the opponent from.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Igneel View Post
    Raiton: Burikka no Jutsu| Lightning Release: Flicker Technique
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 20( 10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A technique where the user does a small sequence of 2 hand seals and release raiton chakra to make himself flicker like a pulsating light rapidly turning on/off/on/off repeatedly. Others will literally see the user appear and disappear as he flickers and their eyes will find it very difficult to follow the user.If they focus their eyes to see the user,their eyes could suffer making it harder for them to concentrate their eyes on the user.A more pronounced eye damage from the bright flickering is temporary blindness which lasts for a few seconds,if not careful. The result is a confused opponent having difficulty tracking and following the user's movements, his position or his actions.This technique is very effective when used in conjunction with Taijutsu.This technique does not work against Doujutsu.
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Usable 2 times per battle
    -Can only use lightning techniques while active otherwise the technique ends.
    -Doesn't affect doujutsu.
    -Can only be used/taught by Igneel

    Link to Approval: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post8972935
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    Raiton: Burikka no Jutsu| Lightning Release: Flicker Technique
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 20( 10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A technique where the user does a small sequence of 2 hand seals and release raiton chakra to make himself flicker like a pulsating light rapidly turning on/off/on/off repeatedly. Others will literally see the user appear and disappear as he flickers and their eyes will find it very difficult to follow the user.If they focus their eyes to see the user,their eyes could suffer making it harder for them to concentrate their eyes on the user.A more pronounced eye damage from the bright flickering is temporary blindness which lasts for a few seconds,if not careful. The result is a confused opponent having difficulty tracking and following the user's movements, his position or his actions.This technique is very effective when used in conjunction with Taijutsu.This technique does not work against Doujutsu.
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Usable 2 times per battle
    -Can only use lightning techniques while active otherwise the technique ends.
    -Only Byakugan user's are unaffected by the light.
    -Can only be used/taught by Igneel

    ~Declined~ lol no, leave it the way it was approved.

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    Genjutsu:Hai joumae|Illusion Release:Lung Lock
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:An incredibly simple Genjutsu which is cast on the opponent,when the user performs the bird handseal.In the genjutsu,the opponent would see a tonado of wind form around himself almost instantly with absolutely no time to react ,with him trapped at the eye of the tornado.Because of being trapped inside the tornado,the opponent would feel as if he can't breathe as the air is supposedly getting sucked out of the confined air space inside the tornado.In reality,the opponent is just paralyzed and would take damage due to the stress on his mind.
    -If the opponent doesn't free himself in the next turn,he will pass out
    -Only Taught/Usable by Igneel
    -No genjutsu in same turn and next turn.
    -This does not effect their breathing in any other way.

    ~Declined~ Remove the colored, and if it's a simple genjutsu, then it isn't an A-rank, it's a B-rank from what i'm seeing, change that the opponent can't breathe inside the tornado with something else, also the mental damage only happens when the opponent is attacked inside the genjutsu, it doesn't happen like that.

    Suiton:Amatsu Supin|Water Style:Heavenly Spin
    Rank:B
    Typeffensive/Defensive
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:After creating a solid constructs made out of water,the user simply performs the tiger seal manipulating the water construct to spin rapidly at high speeds.If anybody was caught inside the construct before it started spinning,he/she would get dizzy and will eventually pass out due to dizziness.
    -Usable 4 times per battle
    -A solid construct has to be made prior to the usage of this jutsu
    -Spinning lasts for a whole turn
    -Only taught/usable by Igneel

    ~Declined~ what do you mean by a solid construct? make it more understandable so i can understand what do you want from it lol
     
         
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    (kuchiyose no jutsu: ojichan ohashi)-Summoning technique: Grandpa Toucan
    Type:supplementary/summoning
    Rank: A
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:None
    Description: the user properly performs the summoning technique before summoning the elder toucan. Grandpa Toucan is blind but somehow very aware of his surroundings. he is large enough to stand on the user's shoulder and doesn't leave that position until he returns to his home. Grandpa Toucan wears a withered gray cloak and the colors on his beak are faded which really shows his age. He is the oldest of the toco toucans and therefore speaks the ancient language of the toucans which only the contract signer and the boss toucan are taught thru training. As he speaks the language the sound of his voice causes those that are used to his voice to become immune to genjutsu as long as he is summoned and at the same time put those that aren't in an A-rank genjutsu.
    note: usable only to toco toucan contract signers
    note: last three turns
    note: genjutsu usable only once
    ||Pending|| Is this genjutsu user-specific or is it just any NarutoBase Genjutsu?

    approved contract

    (Futago no doragon: Kirikaeru To Kakeru)-Twin Dragons: Kirikaeru and Kakeru
    Type:weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(when cut by kakeru)
    Description:legend has it that there was a warrior in the ninja world that was so strong that he never lost a battle, including the battle between him and nidaime hokage, tobirama senju. After a while the warrior had gotten bored from all the weaklings he had defeated. After hearing legend about the power of two dragons in the distant land he traveled to face them but not for power but for the thrill of battle he had been longing for. After defeating the dragons, their power was absorbed by the warrior’s wakizashi and katana. the blade is made of dragon scales and the sheath made of dragon claw thus making both the blade and the sheath indestructable. Knowing that this power would make future challenges less entertaining due to the combined strength of his skill and the dragons’ power he discarded them leaving them for someone weaker and less skilled.

    Abilities:

    Kirikaeru: the wakizashi’s ability after cutting the opponent the sword can grant the ability to switch places with the opponent after focusing chakra into it.

    Kakeru: the katana’s ability after focusing chakra into the katana multiple blades can extend short range from the original blade making it more difficult to avoid. The blade returns to it’s original state after chakra is withdrawn.

    image of swords


    ||Declined|| Can you explain the Kirikaeru better? Also, these swords are pretty similar to those that already exist.
    Resubmitting

    (kuchiyose no jutsu: ojichan ohashi)-Summoning technique: Grandpa Toucan
    Type:supplementary/summoning
    Rank: A
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:None
    Description: the user properly performs the summoning technique before summoning the elder toucan. Grandpa Toucan is blind but somehow very aware of his surroundings. he is large enough to stand on the user's shoulder and doesn't leave that position until he returns to his home. Grandpa Toucan wears a withered gray cloak and the colors on his beak are faded which really shows his age. He is the oldest of the toco toucans and therefore speaks the ancient language of the toucans which only the contract signer and the boss toucan are taught thru training. As he speaks the language the sound of his voice causes those that are used to his voice to become immune to general genjutsu as long as he is summoned and at the same time put those that aren't in an A-rank genjutsu.
    note: usable only to toco toucan contract signers
    note: last three turns
    note: genjutsu usable only once
    note: immunity doesn't pertain to sharingan genjutsu

    ~Declined~ Where's the approved link of the summoning contract? posting it in your submission when you are making a new summoning is mandatory.

    (Futago no doragon: Kirikaeru To Kakeru)-Twin Dragons: Kirikaeru and Kakeru
    Type:weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(when cut by kakeru)
    Description:legend has it that there was a warrior in the ninja world that was so strong that he never lost a battle, including the battle between him and nidaime hokage, tobirama senju. After a while the warrior had gotten bored from all the weaklings he had defeated. After hearing legend about the power of two dragons in the distant land he traveled to face them but not for power but for the thrill of battle he had been longing for. After defeating the dragons, their power was absorbed by the warrior’s wakizashi and katana. the blade is made of dragon scales and the sheath made of dragon claw thus making both the blade and the sheath indestructable. Knowing that this power would make future challenges less entertaining due to the combined strength of his skill and the dragons’ power he discarded them leaving them for someone weaker and less skilled.

    Abilities:

    Kirikaeru: the wakizashi’s ability after cutting the opponent the sword can grant the ability to switch places with the opponent after focusing chakra into it. This ability is effective only when the opponent is mid-range distance from the user. Usage takes up one move and can be only used 4 times in battle.

    Kakeru: the katana’s ability after focusing chakra into the katana multiple blades can extend short range from the original blade making it more difficult to avoid. The blade returns to it’s original state after chakra is withdrawn.

    ~Declined~ First, no chakra infusable swords are allowed, second abilities are ridiculous, and you can't make a CW out of someone else's summoning contract, the dragon contract is held by Hellsbadass, don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Gobi Gobletsson View Post
    aprroved cfs: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...53#post5738953

    Tsubaki no Haya****a Sennin: Yopparatta Kobito | Dance of the Bearded Sage: Toxicated Dwarf
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will unleash a fixed amount of hair from his body, towards a water source. Using the natural ability of hair, to absorb liquids, the user will further increase this with the help of chakra, making his facial hair work as a sponge, sucking up any liquid source his beard is making contact with. The liquid will be stored within his hair. The absorption can also occur with already-existing hair jutsus, meaning it can be combined with other Bearded Sage techniques. The absorption procces doesn't last long, though of course, the bigger source the longer time. Naturally it would be able to empty a big pond of water, within very few seconds. The user's running speed will be slightly altered when having absorbed a high amount of water, however it will also be functional as a potential water source for the user, for future use.
    ~ Useable three times per match
    ~ Must wait one turn before re-use of the technique
    _______________________________
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    Too generic. Would enable you to suck up virtually almost any volume of water. Also, shoots hair? No...you would make facial hair grow and absorb water in contact with it. But the volume of your hair is directly related to the water volume you can absorb. So more water, more volume. Add that somewhere. And don't forget, the water would need to go somewhere if you want to absorb again.
    Tsubaki no Haya****a Sennin: Yopparatta Kobito | Dance of the Bearded Sage: Toxicated Dwarf
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will unleash(grow) a fixed amount of hair from his body, towards a water source. Using the natural ability of hair, to absorb liquids, the user will further increase this with the help of chakra, making his facial hair work as a sponge, sucking up any liquid source his beard is making contact with. The liquid will be stored within his hair. The absorption can also occur with already-existing hair jutsus, meaning it can be combined with other Bearded Sage techniques. The absorption procces doesn't last long, though of course, the bigger source the longer time. Naturally it would be able to empty a big pond of water, within very few seconds. Depending on the amount of water the user absorbs, the more hair he would have to produce in order for the water to be absorbed properly (more water means more hair). The user's running speed will be slightly altered when having absorbed a high amount of water, however it will also be functional as a potential water source for the user, for future use. After having absorbed water, the user needs to get rid of the water stationed in his beard in order to absorb water again.
    ~ Useable three times per match
    ~ Must wait one turn before re-use of the technique

    ~Declined~ I need you to define the amount of water it can absorb, it'd be OP if i left that undefined, also can it absorb water techniques? or simply a water source? meaning water that has no chakra of the opponent present within it.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Oumu no Jutsu: Sonson ) Parrot Arts: Song

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: Allows the parrot to use clicking noises from it's beak or through patterns of it's wings and feathers as a medium to cast a genjutsu. Depending on the intent behind the genjutsu, the generic illusion is either peaceful or aggressive, Samba and Capoeira. Samba creates a festival of colour and sound, carrying feelings of join and fun, with a multitude of colours and motions covering the target's vision. Capoeira carries feelings of urgency and power, with a multitude of pecks and scratches felt all over the body. Experienced users, (B rank and above), my turn the confusing illusions into actual shapes of parrots, making it more realistic.
    A passive ability that comes with this technique is the ability to, through the same medium, release any known genjutsu to the summoner, up to the rank of the technique, without addition jutsu cost (Casting the genjutsu counts as one technique). Parrots summoned by genjutsu specialists may use up to one rank higher.
    *Only one genjutsu per turn*
    *Human Summoners may use this jutsu by recreating the clicking sounds with their tongue or fingers, or by moving their arms similarly, with the addional visual ilusion of colour signaling the technique. They require +5 chakra in addition (35 for generic, +5 per other genjutsu)*

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    ( Oumu no Jutsu: Hina Katsu ) Parrot Arts: Chick Bomb

    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: Allows the user to create a parrot chick made of chakra, though resembling a real parrot, which will detonate with the power of a normal paper bomb. These can be created up to mid range and thrown up to long range.
    *Can have an added nature, for additional effects*
    *One bomb per usage*

    ( Oumu no Jutsu: Tori Rashin ) Parrot Arts: Aviary Compass

    Rank: B
    Type: Passive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Activates an enhanced version of the parrot's innate geographic compass, as described in Monkey Chase, allowing the parrot to sense chakra and electromagnetic signatures with pinpoint precision, over a radius of 50 meters around. With the Aviary Compass activated, specific chakra signatures over long distances locked by Monkey Chase are lost.
    *Can only be activated by parrots*

    Based on Monkey Chase, I should make it more like a passive ability on the summoning description, but I guess this passive technique would work the same.
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...46#post7881246

    ~Auto Declined~ Alt account submission rule violation, if you need further explanation, talk to Scorps.
     
         
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    (Doton: Ketsugō Kusari) - Earth Release: Binding Chains
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will manipulate the ground to form extremely durable chains that surreptitiously emerge from underneath the opponent, proceeding to bind the opponent by wrapping his legs. Because the ground provides an unlimited supply of doton, these chains can be as long and big as the user wills, making it possible to bind summon bosses and shinobi alike.
    Note:
    -This jutsu isn't to be used for launching chains above ground level, or in any fashion similar to chakra chains.
    -The user must remain in contact with the ground as the chains emerge.
    -Only usable 4 times per battle

    ~Declined~ So going by the colored portion, that means that the chains are unbreakable? because when the opponent attempts to break them it will be "supplied" with more earth? that needs to be removed, and if you say the technique isn't used for launching chains above the ground level, how are you going to wrap it around the legs of the opponent, which is above the ground level o_O Earth Release isn't as flexible as to form chains that wrap around the target, so i'm not going to accept this, this is more like Steel Release, or Wood Release.

    (Meiton: Henkan) - Dark Release: Conversion
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Deffensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: Depends on the absorbed jutsu.
    Description: The user uses his dark release to forcibly extract the physical and spiritual energy (chakra) of another ninja's jutsu and absorb it through the upper square of the mark on his hand, Identically to the process of using Inhaling Maw. However, instead of storing the chakra in order to release it as light blue flames the user will inject the raw chakra into his chakra system giving him a short temporary increase in power.
    The jutsu used after the conversion gets infused with half the absorbed jutsu's chakra. Eg; If the user uses this jutsu to absorb a jutsu which costed the opponent 20 chakra points and causes 40 damage points, the user's next jutsu will be infused with 10 extra chakra points and will have an extra 20 damage points added to it.
    Note:
    -Only usable three times
    -After the conversion of chakra and infusing a jutsu with it, the user isn't able to use S-ranked jutsu or above for a whole turn.

    ~Declined~ Don't resubmit.

    Updating http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post8974425
    Quote Originally Posted by 'Kurapika View Post
    (Meiton: Yami no kōtingu) - Dark Release: Dark Coating
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to wrap objects in an immensely compressed and condensed layer of dark chakra. The coating makes said objects resistant to the flames and bolts of lightning produced by the techniques of Katon and Raiton Release. However, this coating is not strong enough to overcome or stop the techniques of said elements of disadvantage due to the technique's effect being limited to observing the chakra that comes in contact only.
    Note:
    -This coating can't be applied to living beings as it would absorb the natural heat generated by their bodies, resulting in their death.
    -The coating must be applied while the user is physically in contact with the said objects or connected through a third object. However, the object can be disconnected/thrown after the coating has been applied.
    -The coating can only last for 2 turns, and regenerating the coating or increasing it after the turn it was originally used counts as using the jutsu for a second time.
    -The infused items will glow in a blue color

    ±± Approved ±±
    (Meiton: Yami no kōtingu) - Dark Release: Dark Coating
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to wrap objects in an immensely compressed and condensed layer of dark chakra. The coating makes said objects resistant to the effects of elemental jutsu from the elements of disadvantage, such as the flames and bolts of lightning produced by the techniques of Katon and Raiton Release. However, this coating is not strong enough to overcome or stop the techniques of said elements of disadvantage due to the technique's effect being limited to observing the chakra that comes in contact only.
    Note:
    -The larger the area, the longer it takes to coat it.
    -This coating can't be applied to living beings as it would absorb the natural heat generated by their bodies, resulting in their death.
    -The coating must be applied while the user is physically in contact with the said objects or connected through a third object. However, the object can be disconnected/thrown after the coating has been applied.
    -The coating can only last for 2 turns, and regenerating the coating or increasing it after the turn it was originally used counts as using the jutsu for a second time.
    -Coming in contact with a chakra source (a technique) allows the coating to last for another turn.
    -The infused items will glow in a blue color.

    ~Declined~ keep the original
     
         
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    (Fuuton: Iki Fureshhu ea) Wind Release: Breath of Fresh air
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user takes a deep breath of non-contaminated oxygen, and uses it as a source of oxygen. This helps immensely if there is some sort of poison in the air. The user will of course have to clear the air of the poison (assuming he knows it's there).

    Restrictions

    -Can use as a breathing source for 3 turns-
    -Can only be used twice-
    -Can only be taught by PB-

    ~Declined~ Clearing poison is related to medical ninjutsu, you can't just do it like that lol, don't resubmit.

    (Fuuton: Kaze gentsuki)Wind Release: Air Scooter
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Self
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The air scooter is a spherical ball of wind and chakra that the user makes by concentrating wind chakra under his feet and quickly rotating it. The user then quickly balances on top of it like a top. It is used mainly to provide quick bursts of speed and can also be used to scale vertical walls, and can remain stationary for about 5-10 seconds. When at full speed, it is about double the user's running speed.

    Restrictions

    -Usable once per battle-
    -Lasts about 30 seconds when not stationary-
    -Lasts about 5 seconds when stationary-
    -No other techniques can be used while on top the air scooter-
    -Can only be taught by PB-

    ~Declined~ no speed enhancing CJs, been done like 909249724 times already, don't resubmit.

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    (Katon: Doragon Kobushi ba-suto) Dragon Fist Explode!
    Type:Offence
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user concentrates and pressurizes katon chakra into his right fist. The user then has two choices, run at the opponent and punch him softly in the stomach-which would release the katon chakra into the opponents insides with such force that it would burn a whole straight through causing a large image of a chinese dragon made completely of flame to come out of the other end about the width of an average human body and the length of an average human. The other way is if the user from around mid range makes a punching motion and a stream of fire in the shape of a chinese dragon to travel towards the opponent from the user's fist.

    Restrictions

    -Usable once per battle-
    -No katon jutsu in the same turn or next turn-
    -Can only be taught by PB-

    From a distance:


    Close range through the stomach:


    ~Declined~ Inserting chakra inside the opponent by punching, or physical contact overall is an ability of Jyuuken, and fire streams have to be released from the mouth, because you have to constantly reinforce the fire with air and chakra, that's why it's called a "stream" it's a continuous blast of chakra, instead you can just make it a normal dragon shaped blast, although it's been made before, you need to define the size of the dragon, and choose either method, because both aren't going to be allowed, and for me the first one is not going to be approved.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    -Resubmitting-




    Emplarer Drainer
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40{if ability is used}
    Damage:80{if it comes in contact}
    Description: The Emplarer Drainer is and sword that can when channel your chakra become extremly strong, but without chakra just any regular sword. It has the abilty to take small amount like up front attack water jutsu and drained them if the user is in close contact could do raw amount of damage.
    -Can drain only B rank water
    -Can only be held by Virus..
    -Only can channel your chakra into the sword 3 times

    (Katon Bouei) Fire Style- Protection
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage[10+ if combined with another fire jutsu.]
    Description:The user focus their fire chakra all throughtout their body and comprese the chakra down after that they gather the fire chakra into lung exhale the fire chakra out slowly all around their body to create an armor of fire around them.
    Note: Can be combined with close range attack fire jutsu to so more damage.
    Note: Fire only can last 3 Turns.

    (Ninpou -Howaido Jouki) Ninja Arts-White Steam
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: 80 Damage(More if added a jutsu)
    Description:The user focus his chakra all through his body comprese down the chakta release the chakra after that he release it focus more chakra bring chakra his released back. When this happens his skins become bright white with steam comeing out this allows him. Speeding up the blood flow in all or selected body parts, in order to provide them with more oxygen and nutrients thus making him much faster and stronger. Do this he focus his chakra through one part his body that he feel need speed and strenght.Also Combined with basic elemnt do so extremly amount of damage.
    Note: Can only be taught by Virus..
    Note:Can only use this tech 2 times
    Note:In use for three turn then it runs out
    Note:Not able to use no S or A rank Ninjutsu.

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    Like i told you in your profile no font formatting or alignment, i've warned you about this, so don't expect me to be easy going if you did it again, you are also supposed to bold the changes you made when resubmitting.
    Resubmitting

    Emplarer Drainer
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40{if ability is used}
    Damage:80{if it comes in contact}
    Description: The Emplarer Drainer is and sword that can when channel your chakra become extremly strong, but without chakra just any regular sword. It has the abilty to take small amount like up front attack water jutsu and drained them if the user is in close contact could do raw amount of damage.
    -Can drain only B rank water
    -Can only be held by Virus..
    -Only can channel your chakra into the sword 3 times

    ~Declined~ Chakra infusable swords are not allowed.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Raiton: Raikou Taka Genkotsu | Lightning Release: Lightning Hawk Fist
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 50
    Description: The user channels a large amount of lightning around one of his fists. The manipulated lightning takes the shape of a small hawk with wings. It can be used to jab & cut your opponent if in close combat or it can be fired as a projectile.

    Note: Can only be used twice per match
    Note: Can only taught by Danzo Auditore De Firenze
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    Incorrect damage info, it should be "60" for A-rank not "50", define the exact size of the hawk.
    Raiton: Raikou Taka Genkotsu | Lightning Release: Lightning Hawk Fist
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user channels a large amount of lightning around one of his fists. The manipulated lightning takes the shape of a small hawk with wings. It can be used to blow the opponent back while numbing the area it touches in close combat or it can be fired as a projectile. The hawk is about the size of the average human head.

    Note: Can only be used twice per match
    Note: Can only taught by Danzo Auditore De Firenze

    ~Approved~ Edited the "cut and jab the opponent" and replaced it with "blow the opponent back while numbing the area it touches", only Lightning techniques that are compressed enough to pierce through objects are Chidori and Raikiri, having cutting capabilities like that will be a rip off of them. Keep in mind that if you used it as a close combat technique, then used it as a projectile it will count as 2 techniques.

    Kiten | Raijū
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user envelops his hands in a giant tiger-shaped balls of lightning which he can guide with his hands. They are entirely composed of lightning and the tigers cannot be shot as projectiles. They are capable of biting and being used to deflect incoming projectiles. When slammed into a persons body they electrocute the target, leaving small burn marks on skin, and then disappear.

    Note: Can only be used twice per match
    Note: Can only taught by Danzo Auditore De Firenze
    Lasts 3 turns.

    ~Declined~ First of all, a lightning technique should've a title that mentions "Raiton | Lightning Release/Lightning Style" so we can know what the technique is exactly, the technique is a ripoff of Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique, i won't allow you to direct a technique with your hands.
     
         
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    (Raiton: Hiraishin) Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user places a small metal instrument previously charged with a large amount of Raiton chakra somewhere on the battlefield. The user then makes two hand seals and releases a bolt of lightning from their dominant hand directly at the small metal instrument. Upon releasing this bolt of lightning, the previously placed instrument also releases an identical bolt of lightning, which travels directly towards the bolt of lightning released towards the user's hand. Upon meeting in the middle, the two bolts merge and stay in place for a split-second before fading into nothing (similarly to how real lightning does). This destroys the small metal instrument. Although the user may have multiple instruments on the battlefield at once, they are only able to draw/shoot lighting from one instrument per use of this jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
    Note: The small metal instrument looks like this.

    ~Declined~ What is this exactly? what do you want from it? why does it have a damage info when i don't see any sign of attacking in the description, all i see is a metal instrument that shoots a bolt and you shoot another towards it, both canceling out each other, seems like a pointless technique to me o_o

    (Raiton: Dendō Darūnfīrudo) Lightning Release: Electric Balloon Field
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user makes two hand seals and slams their palm on the ground, causing several volley-ball sized orbs of electricity to rise from the ground up to a mid-range from themselves. Up to five total orbs can be created. These electric orbs work as motion detecting mines. If anything within 5 meters of them moves, they will trigger, creating a devastating electric explosion with a 5 meter radius from the orb. Upon exploding, the orbs vanish. The orbs will stay in place for two turns before fading away. The orbs will rise 1 meter into the air before exploding.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    ~Declined~ No sensing techniques, either pressure, motion detection "which is pressure" and chakra sensing is going to be approved anymore.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Fire Release: Second Wind|Katon: Niban Kaze
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user will use this jutsu in order to absorb a fire jutsu of any rank except forbidden rank. When the fire jutsu is closing in on the user he will suck the jutsu into his body, suppressing it in his chest. The user will have to suppress the jutsu so that it does not cause him any major internal damage this will finish as soon as the jutsu has been fully absorbed. Once the user has completely absorbed the fire jutsu into his body he will release it again through his mouth in the form of a massive fireball, one rank lower than the original jutsu. When the jutsu is absorbed it is suppressed in the chest surrounding the lungs, the heat will wear out the users lungs, which will make it hard for him to breathe, so in turn he will not be able to use any wind or fire jutsus that involve the chest, lungs or releasing through the mouth for one turn.

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    ~All fire jutsu can be absorbed by this jutsu except forbidden rank
    ~No fire jutsu or wind jutsu can be used for one turn
    ~This can only be used once per battle

    ~Declined~ Are you kidding me? don't resubmit, like ever!
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Seblax View Post
    Link for the weapon's approval: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...05#post8989105


    Art of the Jade Warp: Fabric Shield - Tamamayu no Jutsu: Tanmono Koukyo
    Rank: A
    Type: Differensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Using Tamamayu, The user manipulate the strings into sewing into each other taking the shape of a large shield of fabric that bends itself against the ground with needle of fabric. The strong as the jutsu it counter is, the more it would bend itself inward to absorb its strength and equalize it. The shield can be directed against any angle the user wishes and could hold up against any jutsu of any element up to A rank. The user could also use this technique without making the needles appear which would cause the shield to protect the user and be used by the user as a Trampoline allowing him to flee as it protect him.
    -Can only be used thrice.
    -The sleeves can only extend to mid range.
    -The lower part of this manga page explaining how it work as a shield:

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    ✘ Declined ✘
    I said i won't allow 360 degrees defenses, when you say "any angle" that means any angle whether it's around you or not, so i'm gonna make it easier for you, make it able to form in front of you, or to either of your sides, or behind you, not below you, so if you made it somewhere like to your right it counts as a usage of the technique, then if you made it to your left it will count as another usage of the technique, saying "large" doesn't specify the size of the wall of fabrics, remove that trampoline thing, remove extending up to Mid range, if the needles don't form the shape of that defensive wall how would it be performed exactly? it doesn't magically appear.
    Link for the weapon's approval: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...05#post8989105

    Art of the Jade Warp: Fabric Shield - Tamamayu no Jutsu: Tanmono Koukyo
    Rank: A
    Type: Differensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Using Tamamayu, The user manipulate the strings into sewing into each other taking the shape of a large shield of fabric that bends itself against the ground with needle of fabric. The strong as the jutsu it counter is, the more it would bend itself inward to absorb its strength and equalize it. The shield can be directed against the specified direction(in front, or to either of your sides, or behind the user) the user wishes and could hold up against any jutsu of any element up to A rank.

    ~Declined~ For the love of god, where's the size of the shield that i asked for not once, but twice?

    Link of approval of this CFS: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post8871180

    Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Dance of The Crying Storm - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Odori no Sho-Ro Arashi
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80(-10 to the user)
    Description: While standing above the skateboard the user preforms either a 360 shuv, heel flip or side heel flip tricks with it in midair along with him as he release wind chakra through it making its movement cause a a strong wind current that takes the shape of a hurricane, depending on the trick the user uses, the hurricane will take a different shape and direction.
    360 Shuv would make the a hurricane that surrounds the user and nearby people pushing anything in one meter away from the user away and violently cut them.
    Heel flip would cause a hurricane horizontal hurricane that looks like a tube surrounding the user which violently cut and push away anything that comes in contact from the sizes or front and back even if they were in mid or short range from the user's body.
    a kick
    Side heel flip would be just like the heel flip but the user make the hurrincane attack his right and left instead of front and back.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Causes many minor cuts to the user.
    -Can be used while having Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater activated.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Why is this S-Rank?


    Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Rapid Blows - Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Jinsoku Atemi
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack\Supplementary\Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user places his left hand over his skateboard directing his legs at his enemy delivering repid kicks toward his enemy sending a strong wind blow at him with each kick. This technique can also be used to aim at multiple targets.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Can be used while having Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater activated.

    ~Leaving for both Scorps~

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Sakashima Kyokusei) - Earth Release: Reverse Polarity
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This techniques manipulates the magnetic field that Earth carries. The user performs the Snake hand sign and concentrates on a specific patch of Earth. From there a small immobile black spot appears, and all matter that exists on Earth are attracted to that point, and their direction will be manipulated to travel to that location. Mud will start to travel towards the point, and any solid Earth jutsu from B-rank and below will break apart and travel towards the point, Any Water technique from A-rank and below will also travel towards . The effect can be stopped if the epicenter is destroyed. The force is not strong enough to break apart the ground and to stagger the opponent.
    ~Can only be used thrice
    ~No Earth jutsu on the same turn
    ~No technique above S-rank on the same turn

    ~Declined~ This isn't an earth technique, this is a Mangnetism Release technique.

    (Doton: Shingen Myaku) - Earth Release: Epicenter Pulse
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Short (Epicenter) Long (Range)
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user performs the Snake hand sign and stands still, arms extended outwards. From his body, he emits a single pulse made out of Earth particles that carry a tremendously high density, and extreme bone-breaking power. The pulse will begin from the epicenter being the user, and where it is at its strongest power. Then it will travel along the entire battlefield in every angle, slowly getting weaker as its range gets wider. The pulse will never stop and keep continuing spreading unless destroyed. However if an opponent is hit by the pulse, they will be dragged along with the wave as it spreads out.
    ~Can only be used once
    ~No technique above A rank on the same turn
    ~No Earth technique on the same and next turn
    ~Due to the pressure, user will be unable to perform hand signs for the next turn

    ~Declined~ OP, and similar techniques exist, don't resubmit.
     
         
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