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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Šamaš kotei) Summoning Technique: Šamaš The Emperor
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Šamaš The Emperor, one of the oldest bustard. He has a golden colored crest on his head as result of his fire affinity. He is a fairly large summon about as big as the Hawk Sasuke summoned. He is able to use fire techniques up to S-rank and 1 S-rank lightning technique as a result of intense training with the user. As he grew up in extremely hot climate and by having a affinity towards fire, he is impervious to fire techniques B-rank and below(see contract). He is exceptionally fast and can carry one person on his back with great maneuverability providing the user with good aerial skills. He has trained himself to use his beak and claws as extra means of attack.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
    Note: Any other techniques used by Šamaš counts towards the user's move count.
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    Only one elemental affinity allowed per summon so remove the lightning, remove being impervious to Fire techniques i won't allow that, you can replace it with another ability if you want but make it reasonable, again all that great maneuverability and good aerial skills are all vague so fix it.


    Link of contract approval.
    ~Resubmitting

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Šamaš kotei) Summoning Technique: Šamaš The Emperor
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Šamaš The Emperor, one of the oldest bustard. He has a golden colored crest on his head as result of his fire affinity. He is a fairly large summon about as big as the Hawk Sasuke summoned. He is able to use fire techniques up to S-rank as a result of intense training with the user. He is exceptionally fast and can carry one person on his back and with his sharp senses he provides the user all the aid he needs. Šamaš also has the ability to shoot feathers infused with his katon chakra from his fingered wingtips that can pierce through rocks. He has trained himself to use his beak and claws as extra means of attack.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
    Note: Any techniques used by Šamaš counts towards the user's move count.

    ~Declined~ *sigh* what sharp senses are you talking about? you just got yourself into a whole other issue, keep in mind that the fire chakra infused feathers can't counter other techniques, they are simply projectiles infused with fire chakra, like a kunai, unless you give it a rank, and a usage limit.

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    (Katon: Jigoku no Uzumaku Honō no Niwa) Fire Release: Hell's Swirling Flame Garden
    Type: Supplementary/defensive/offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 40(+10 to keep it active)
    Damage points: 80
    Description: In this technique the user performs the Tiger hand seal, and then kneads the Chakra inside his body converting it into fire. He then expels from his mouth a massive wall of swirling flame, that covers a wide range as it races along the ground and sets the vast area ablaze. After expelling the intense flame from the user's mouth, the user manipulates this massive flame as it travels forward along the ground, and spreads it in different directions creating multiple circular walls of intense flame spiraling inwards, which are of the size 2m and 1m in diameter and are 2 feet thick that looks similar to a swirl pattern. These circular walls are formed alternate to each other along it's widespread area. This technique can engulf the target(s) in a veritable sea of flames as long as it lasts on the field. If used on a combustible terrain such as a forest or in a confined area, it can greatly increase the possibility of the target's incineration.

    *Can be used twice.
    *The jutsu lasts for 2 turns.
    *No S-rank and above fire jutsus in the same and the following turn.
    *The user needs to wait for at least 2 turns before he can use it again.


    ~Declined~ OP and Similar techniques exist, and not to mention very vague.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 02-02-2013 at 04:15 PM.

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    (Futon: Oshi Kujiku ) - Wind Release: Pressure Crush
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user focuses a huge amount of wind chakra into their hand and slams it to the ground sending the chakra underground which causes a noticeable shaking of the ground before then releasing two enormous blasts of wind that erupt towards the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous wind pressure and speed, smashing everything caught in between. Both of these blasts of wind are capable of dwarfing even the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path in size.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -No Wind techniques A rank or above for 2 turns afterwards.

    ~Declined~ OP.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 02-02-2013 at 04:18 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Meiton: Gōsuto Hanabi) Dark Release: Ghastly Fireworks
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short to Mid range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After the absorbing the enemy's energy based technique using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user will mold the chakra from Inhaling Maw into their left arm, then user extends their arm forward and releases ghosts from a sphere in his/her left wrist. They seem to follow a set and guided path and they differentiate from it but they can cause enough damage to an opponent by slamming into there stomach. This move covers a up to a mid range at max and shoots what seems to be an endless wave of Dark Fireworks.

    Note: Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nathan.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
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    When i said define the considerable damage i meant define how much damage it affects the opponent not how it is done, meaning burning damage etc, when i also mentions to determine the considerable distance i meant the size of the technique not the extension of it.
    (Meiton: Gōsuto Hanabi) Dark Release: Ghastly Fireworks
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short to Mid range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After the absorbing the enemy's energy based technique using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user will mold the chakra from Inhaling Maw into their left arm, then user extends their arm forward and releases ghosts from a sphere in his/her left wrist. They seem to follow a set and guided path and they differentiate from it but they can cause enough damage to an opponent by slamming and leaving deep burning marks onto there stomach. The ghosts the user fires are only small (about two feet wide and five feet long) and shoots what seems to be an endless wave of Dark Fireworks.

    Note: Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nathan.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

    ~Approved~ keep in mind that this is like a "stream" so if you use another technique means that this technique is stopped.

    Quote Originally Posted by Nathan. View Post
    (Meiton: Ura — Koten) Dark Release: Palm — Solo
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemy jutsu. The user discharges a quick burst of dark-natured chakra in a shockwave in order to knock their opponent back a large distance. The point of impact acts as a "marker" by leaving behind residual chakra on the target. From there the user builds up chakra in their hand and fires it as a strong A-rank beam of energy from the Dark Release marking on their palm, using the earlier marker in order to hit the exact same spot at range.
    Notes:
    - Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    - Can only be used twice per-match.
    - Shock-wave doesn't cause damage as it's only a marker.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.
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    Where's the size of the beam that i mentioned before? keep in mind that if the opponent gets out of short range from you then that marker won't be able to reach him, and that it only works for this beam not for other Dark Release techniques.
    (Meiton: Ura — Koten) Dark Release: Palm — Solo
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemy jutsu. The user discharges a quick burst of dark-natured chakra in a shockwave in order to knock their opponent back a large distance. The point of impact acts as a "marker" by leaving behind residual chakra on the target. From there the user builds up chakra in their hand and fires a five by five feet beam of energy from the Dark Release marking on their palm, using the earlier marker in order to hit the exact same spot at range.
    Notes:
    - Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    - Can only be used twice per-match.
    - Shock-wave doesn't cause damage as it's only a marker.
    - If the opponent gets out of the short range the beam won't work.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.

    ~Approved~

    Quote Originally Posted by Nathan. View Post
    (Meiton: Sekai wa Bunkatsu) Dark Release: Worlds Split
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: All ranges
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After the use of Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user concentrates a large amount of their dark chakra into the palm of thier hand, the user can generate a dark force that will darkened their hand, after doing the hand seals Snake → Goat → Dog the user will simply wave his arm to create large-scale explosions in a linear pattern.

    Note: Can only be use twice per-match.
    Note: Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nathan.
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    Follow the template, "All ranges" isn't considered a definite range, it's Short, Mid or Long.
    (Meiton: Sekai wa Bunkatsu) Dark Release: Worlds Split
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Mid-range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After the use of Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user concentrates a large amount of their dark chakra into the palm of their hand, the user can generate a dark force that will darkened their hand, after doing the hand seals Snake → Goat → Dog the user will simply wave his arm to create large-scale explosions in a linear pattern.

    Note: Can only be use twice per-match.
    Note: Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
    Note: The explosions only go up to a mid-range radius.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nathan.

    ~Declined~ how large of a scale are the explosions? where exactly does it generate from and how does it generate? all of those needs to be defined.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Mokuton: Yoroi Megami Medeina) Wood Release: Armor of the Goddess Medeina
    Type:Defense, Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A (+10 to taijutsu)
    Description:
    The user will first perform two handseals and then channel there wood chakra to the center of there chest. They will then mold the chakra into wood. The wood will then spread outwards until it has covered the whole users body in wood. It also covers the users head with a wolf shaped helmet, which only covers the users head and leaves the face area open. The wood is molded perfectly to the users body so that it leaves the user with full mobility of there hands and feet. The user can also reshape any part of the armor into whatever fits the situation. (i.e extending the wood on the hands to create a sword, widening the back to make shield.)

    -Usable twice per battle.
    -Armor lasts for three turns.
    -Reshaping can only be done three times before the armor crumbles.
    -Reshaping counts as one of the users three moves.
    -Can only be taught by Bloo.

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    DNR


    Tsurugi Megami Medenia: Sword of the Goddess Medenia
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    This sword is made from the branch of a special chakra tree that feeds off the worlds chakra. The branch was formed into a sword by a great ninja. The sword is completely made out of wood but it still has a sharp enough edge to flesh and bones. The sword is indestructible due to the chakra that the sword was made with. The sword has the ability to let the user use explosion of dense woodland on any wood that the user has already created. The explosion rank is the rank of the wood that was exploded. (ex. D rank wood would cause a D rank explosion.) The explosion size also depends on the size of the wood that exploded. The sword can also chance shape depending on what the user calls for.


    -The exploding ability can be used unlimited amount of times but must wait 1 turn before using it again
    -Shape changing can only be done three times a battle.
    -The wood use to cause the explosion must have been created the turn before or the current.
    -Can only be used by wood bios.
    -Only me and people I allow can use this weapon.





    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    DNR. You really think i was going to simply allow a sword to negate a resctrition that exists in a cannon technique? This would make 2 (at least) wood customs of other members useless. Wordl Chakra? Really?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Link to approved CFS Here

    1. Satsui no Hado: Shun Goku Satsu | Surge of Murderous Intent: Instant Hell Murder
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description. Instant Hell Murder, also known as the Raging Demon, is the most powerful technique belonging to the Satsui no Hado fighting style. The user, using the principles behind the Ashura Senku, surges their entire body with an immense amount of Satsui no Hado chakra, channeling so much that it begins to materialize around the user as he charges more and more, spreading it throughout the range (however, this takes little to no time) and then charges towards their opponent at double his speed due to the incredible boost in strength and power from such a large amount of Hado chakra. The user moves at great speeds due to "gliding" across the ground at heightened speeds; the reason this technique is so dangerous is that with the aforementioned speed of the user, they leave behind an after image (more accurately described as a chakra impression) of themselves that fools the opponent's sense of depth perception when looking at the user, allowing them to think he's further away than he actually is with only 3T Sharingan users being able to actually pinpoint the user's actual location, though being able to see the user's location and being able to react to it are two different situations. When near the opponent, the user attempts to grab them somewhere around the torso or head. Upon successfully grabbing the opponent, the enhanced Satsui no Hado chakra latches on to the enemy and they are immersed in a world of swirling darkness, which is actually the previously released Satsui no Hado aura of the user now formed around both user and opponent in the form of a sphere with a 5 meter diameter. Inside the dark sphere, the user used the enhanced power of Satsui no Hado to deliver several taijutsu precise blows to the opponents body, all aimed at vital organs, causing internal organs to rupture and bones to break and shatter from repeated blows. Once the user has grabbed the enemy, this attack cannot be dodged unless by space/time jutsu (though that is not to say that it cannot be countered, just at this point unavoidable). Upon completion of this technique, the user's legs and arms are so strained that his speed is effectively cut down drastically (in case a reference to the speed chart is needed, the user's speed is decreased to half his base speed + additional bonuses such as being a taijutsu master, Raikage armor, EIG, etc.) and taijutsu strength is decreased as well, becoming -10 weaker.
    Note: Can only be performed once per battle.
    Note: Only Masters of Satsui no Hado can perform this technique.
    Note: After using, the user is unable to utilize Satsui no Hado chakra for the remainder of the fight.
    Note: The shock the body receives from losing the enhanced speed and power granted from the Satsui no Hado causes -40 pain to the user.
    Note: No taijutsu techniques above A ranked can be performed by the user for two turns and all taijutsu used during those two turns and subsequently weakened by -10 due to fatigue and physical strain.

    Video of jutsu being used:


    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    Tone it down. OPed as it is. Also, I want real effects to your body from using this. Not only numeric damage which we know count little to nothing.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 02-08-2013 at 03:51 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Suiton/Muon Satsujin: Kuikkukabā (Water Style/Silent Homicide: Quick Cover)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user, with his current position unknown to the target (either already hidden within Mist or darkness, or is behind them without their noticing), will begin by manipulateing the moisture in the air, generating a thick, but localized area of mist (the mist, if used with Hidden Mist Jutsu, is even thicker than the previous technqiue). While hidden within the mist, the user will quickly come out of hiding, impale the target with a sword, kunai, or other sharp weapon, and then retreat to their previous hiding place as the mist fades away.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    X-Declined-X Too generic. Wont you be able to do it by simply using hidden mist and moving in and out of it?



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    (Bakuton: Monsutā no Dai Abare) Blast Style: Monster's Rampage
    Type: Attack | Defense | Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The sister technique to "Blast Release: Bombshell", the user focuses their Bakuton chakra around their body, creating a small aura of Bakuton chakra around themselves, which moves with the user's body. The aura is visible to the naked eye as a distortion of light (much like a distortion created through high heat). Any physical object which comes into contact with the aura (other than the surface the user is standing on when the jutsu is used) will cause the aura to spontaniously combust outwards from the point of impact, rendering an opponents projectiles and taijutsu useless. However, this technique takes it to the next level of its sister, allowing the shell to explode multiple times in a single use, instead of the lesser jutsu's single explosion per use.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used 1 time per battle
    ~The aura lasts for two turns
    ~The aura is in the shape of the user, fits around the body of the user, and is 6 inches away from the user (the aura does not extend past the soles of the feet)

    X-Approved-X

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    Suiton: Inpei no Misuto (Water Style: Mist of Concealment)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, by either manipulating a nearby water source or by expelling mist from their mouths, will generate a mist which at first glance is identical to Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden in Mist Technique). However, the water molecules suspended in the air, making up the mist, are several times denser than normal mist, being suspended in the air by chakra. The denser water molecules are so abnormally dense, that they have the property of reflecting sound waves which hit them, which then bounce off of other water droplets, making it so every sound made within the mist is amplified and echoed everywhere within the mist. The technique is designed to be an alternative to the Silent Killing technique, by making sound come from all directions so as to still stop ones opponent from finding them by sound.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    X-Declined-X Wont really be mist then, it'll be a cloud of water vapour which would condense quickly
    Updating:

    (Bakuton: Monsutā no Dai Abare) Blast Style: Monster's Rampage
    Type: Attack | Defense | Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The sister technique to "Blast Release: Bombshell", the user focuses their Bakuton chakra around their body, creating a small aura of Bakuton chakra around themselves, which moves with the user's body. The aura is visible to the naked eye as a distortion of light (much like a distortion created through high heat). Any physical object which comes into contact with the aura will cause the aura to spontaneously combust outwards from the point of impact, rendering an opponents projectiles and taijutsu useless. However, this technique takes it to the next level of its sister, allowing the shell to explode multiple times in a single use, instead of the lesser jutsu's single explosion per use. In addition, the user constantly channels chakra into the "shell" so that it doesn't weaken as objects hit it (ie. being hit with an A-rank attack doesn't reduce the shell to D-rank).
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used 1 time per battle
    ~The aura lasts for two turns
    ~The aura is in the shape of the user, fits around the body of the user, and is 6 inches away from the user (the aura does not extend past the soles of the feet)
    ~The user can only use two jutsu on the second turn of this jutsu because of the chakra being focused into the shell

    ~Declined~ keep the original one, i'm not allowing you to be impervious to A-rank and below, the abilities are already high enough.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Elephant Illusionary Arts: Stampede (Zou Genjutsu: Hitonami)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After summoning, the elephant summon will rise its trunk and make its trumpet sound casting a genjutsu on the opponent in which he/she will wake up tired and as if they've been asleep for a long time only to find out their hands and legs have been spread apart and shackled with iron chains fixed to the ground. Also in that illusion they see the elephant summon near them which soon rises its front legs and crushes the opponent over their chest-abdomen region making the opponent confused, agitated with fear & with severe excruciating pain. In reality, the opponent becomes immobile with a blank stare on their face.
    The stress on the mind (due to illusionary pain) causes the target to take damage.
    Note:
    • Must have signed the Elephants contract to use this jutsu.
    • Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    • No S-rank and above genjutsu in the same or next turn.
    • If successfully executed, can immobilize the opponent(s) for 2 turns.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Gained ownership of Elephants contract >>Here<<


    ~Declined~ similar techniques exist

    Elephant Summoning Technique: Zephyrus (Zou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Zephyrus)
    Type: Summoning animal
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user draws some blood and performs the Boar -> Dog -> Bird -> Monkey -> Ram hand seals to summon Zephyrus. He is a giant elephant about the size of Gamabunta with proportionate trunk & tusks to his body size which projects in front of his head. Zephyrus' tusks are covered with a thin steel coating with several steel spikes projecting from the tip which can be used for offense as well as for defense. His trunk can reach up to short range in front of him when fully extended and can be used to grab objects or persons. He also wears a 2 inch steel armor knee caps over his knees with several sharp steel spikes projecting from them.
    Zephyrus specializes in wind release and can use wind jutsus up to A rank using his trunk/mouth without need of hand seals. He is able to suck in objects and targets within the short range in front of his trunk's openings.
    His skin is dry & rough (which is a natural ability of elephants) and can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons. Because of his natural ability of dry & rough skin, Zephyrus can resist lightning jutsus of B rank and below as his skin provides high resistance to the flow of electricity thereby rendering them ineffective. However lightning jutsus used after breaching his skin will have normal effect on him.
    Note:
    • Must have signed Elephant contract to summon Zephyrus.
    • Can stay in the field for 4 turns once summoned.
    • Can use wind jutsus up to A rank using his trunk/mouth without need of hand seals and each move counts as the user's move.
    • Can suck in targets with his trunk within short range and this counts as one of user's move if used.
    • Can resist lightning jutsus of B rank & below with intact skin, however lightning jutsus used after breaching his skin will have normal effect on him.
    • Can resist damage from simple projectiles like kunais, shurikens, senbons.
    • Can perform ordinary physical attacks using its tusks, legs at close range and can grab objects/persons with his trunk.
    • Can speak and form elemental combination with the summoner.
    • Can carry up to 3 people on his back.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
    • Gained ownership of Elephants contract >>Here<<


    ~Declined~ The wind suction ability needs to counts as a move and needs to have a usage limit, remove everything about being resistent to lightning techniques because i don't allow summons being impervious to elements anymore, mention that he can only be summoned once, remove that he can perform elemental combinations with the summoner, rest seems fine.

    Wood Release: Faunus, The wooden golem (Mokuton: Faunus, Za mokuzou gōremu)
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
    Chakra: 40 (+5 for each active turn)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms the snake hand seal and creates a large wooden golem to erupt from the ground. The golem is about 20 meters in height and 7 meters in width with two hands and two legs and with a head. The golem itself appears to be covered with several irregular wooden vines from neck to foot.
    Abilities:
    The golem is mobile and its actions can be manipulated by the user.
    The golem can create single or several wooden pillar(s) from its hands which can be used to impale the opponent(s).
    The golem can also create several wooden vines from its hands separately or together with which it can bind and/or impale the opponent(s).
    The golem can also fire 3-5 wooden spikes of about 0.5 meter length from each hand.
    All wood jutsus used by the golem is equivalent to B rank wood jutsu.
    Apart from these, the golem can also use simple grasping action or physical attacks using its hands, legs.
    Note:
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle and can stay for 3 turns.
    • No S rank or above wood jutsus in the same turn.
    • The golem is created within short range of the user and can reach up to long range.
    • Creating wooden pillars or vines or shooting wooden spikes from the golem's hands (either with hands separate or together) or grasping a wooden pillar to attack count as the user's move.
    • All wood jutsus used by the golem is equivalent to B rank wood and has short-long range and counts as user's move.
    • Once the last turn up to which the golem can stay is over, the golem becomes immobile in whatever position it was in the last turn and cannot be manipulated anymore.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

    Picture of Wood golem:
    ~Declined~ rip off from -Broly-'s technique, do this again and i will ban you from the CJ thread for 2 months and infract you for breaking the rules.
     
         
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    (Kōton/Katon: Yōsenha no Jutsu) Steel/Fire Release: Molten Metal Wave Technique
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short to Mid range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    After using Steel Release: Impervious Armour the user will send more steel chakra into their arm and by adding katon chakra to heat the users steel arm, then the user will send waves of molten steel at their foes which easily leaves major burns on the target when hit. The metal can also cool and harden on the target to restrain and encase them.
    Notes:
    - Must have used Steel Release: Impervious Armour before use.
    - Can only be used three times per-match.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.

    ~Declined~ The Steel Release: Impervious Armour technique makes you turn a part of your body into steel, by using this you basically cause your arm to melt off your body, are you sure you want this? the size of the waves needs to be defined, the liquid form of steel was done through a technique that was submitted in the past, don't remember who submitted it because i lost track of all the name changes lol.

    (鋼遁 Kōton: Aianhada no Subeta) Steel Release: Iron Skin like Sword
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (-20 to the user)
    Description:
    The user creates a thick skin or steel over his own skin. The steel has reshaping properties, making it able to turn into a blade. When the user uses it, they gains an all black body with red shoulder markings. In this State, the user becomes incredibly strong and can use Taijutsu to a much greater degree. This steel skin has one major weakness, if the enemy uses fire release, the user will be left incredibly burnt and unable to move.
    Notes:
    - Can only be used once per-match.
    - Taijustu/Kenjutsu up to S-rank doesn't affect the user.
    - Steel skin only lasts for 3 turns.
    - The user will take damage after the use of this jutsu.
    - No steel release jutsu's for two turns once this wears off
    - The user will be left completely drained, takes three turns to be at half strength.


    ~Declined~ Similar techniques exist.

    (Doton: Deido kisaki) Earth Release: Mud Guardian Technique
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After the use of Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld; the user will perform the required hand seals. The user will place both hands on the ground near the swamp they created. Then a large figure will rise from the swamp that is said to be the guardian to the entrance of the underworld. It appears as a giant golem-like figure that is cloaked by the swamps muck. If the muck monster has been decapitated, it can regenerate limbs as long as it is in the swamp. It cannot go far from the swamp since it seems to be connected with it, but if it tries to go out of range it will simply fall apart. The golem grabs the person in the swamp and drags them down into the swamp.
    Notes:
    - Can only be used once per-match.
    - Must have used Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld before use.
    - Can only be taught by Nathan.

    ~Declined~ Size of the "golem" needs to be defined, you might want to rethink the short range though, because it means that you can only make him short range from yourself, meaning the swamp has to be short ranged from yourself as well, i dislike the regeneration ability, so make that only restricted to "physical" attacks, and give it a duration limit.

    Approved steel release bio: Dexter Morgan
    I also have Scorps permission for have steel auto via PM.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by dm1202 View Post
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    (kuchiyose no jutsu: ojichan ohashi)-Summoning technique: Grandpa Toucan
    Type:supplementary/summoning
    Rank: A
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:None
    Description: the user properly performs the summoning technique before summoning the elder toucan. Grandpa Toucan is blind but somehow very aware of his surroundings. he is large enough to stand on the user's shoulder and doesn't leave that position until he returns to his home. Grandpa Toucan wears a withered gray cloak and the colors on his beak are faded which really shows his age. He is the oldest of the toco toucans and therefore speaks the ancient language of the toucans which only the contract signer and the boss toucan are taught thru training. As he speaks the language the sound of his voice causes those that are used to his voice to become immune to general genjutsu as long as he is summoned and at the same time put those that aren't in an A-rank genjutsu.
    note: usable only to toco toucan contract signers
    note: last three turns
    note: genjutsu usable only once
    note: immunity doesn't pertain to sharingan genjutsu

    ~Declined~ Where's the approved link of the summoning contract? posting it in your submission when you are making a new summoning is mandatory.

    (Futago no doragon: Kirikaeru To Kakeru)-Twin Dragons: Kirikaeru and Kakeru
    Type:weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(when cut by kakeru)
    Description:legend has it that there was a warrior in the ninja world that was so strong that he never lost a battle, including the battle between him and nidaime hokage, tobirama senju. After a while the warrior had gotten bored from all the weaklings he had defeated. After hearing legend about the power of two dragons in the distant land he traveled to face them but not for power but for the thrill of battle he had been longing for. After defeating the dragons, their power was absorbed by the warrior’s wakizashi and katana. the blade is made of dragon scales and the sheath made of dragon claw thus making both the blade and the sheath indestructable. Knowing that this power would make future challenges less entertaining due to the combined strength of his skill and the dragons’ power he discarded them leaving them for someone weaker and less skilled.

    Abilities:

    Kirikaeru: the wakizashi’s ability after cutting the opponent the sword can grant the ability to switch places with the opponent after focusing chakra into it. This ability is effective only when the opponent is mid-range distance from the user. Usage takes up one move and can be only used 4 times in battle.

    Kakeru: the katana’s ability after focusing chakra into the katana multiple blades can extend short range from the original blade making it more difficult to avoid. The blade returns to it’s original state after chakra is withdrawn.

    ~Declined~ First, no chakra infusable swords are allowed, second abilities are ridiculous, and you can't make a CW out of someone else's summoning contract, the dragon contract is held by Hellsbadass, don't resubmit.
    ~Resubmitting~

    (kuchiyose no jutsu: ojichan ohashi)-Summoning technique: Grandpa Toucan
    Type:supplementary/summoning
    Rank: A
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:None
    Description: the user properly performs the summoning technique before summoning the elder toucan. Grandpa Toucan is blind but somehow very aware of his surroundings. he is large enough to stand on the user's shoulder and doesn't leave that position until he returns to his home. Grandpa Toucan wears a withered gray cloak and the colors on his beak are faded which really shows his age. He is the oldest of the toco toucans and therefore speaks the ancient language of the toucans which only the contract signer and the boss toucan are taught thru training. As he speaks the language the sound of his voice causes those that are used to his voice to become immune to general genjutsu as long as he is summoned and at the same time put those that aren't in an A-rank genjutsu.
    note: usable only to toco toucan contract signers
    note: last three turns
    note: genjutsu usable only once
    note: immunity doesn't pertain to sharingan genjutsu

    ~Declined~ Not going to allow immunity against genjutsu.

    Approved custom Contract
     
         
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    (Hyōi Gattai)Spirit Unity
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A-Rank
    Range:Short(self)
    Chakra:60(-10 each turn active)
    Damage:(see description)
    Description:Spirit Unity,is a technique that is used by the swordsman of the past and present date,the mechanics behind this technique is the user while begin releasing what is known as Ki(warrior spirit) while channeling there chakra slowy though there body.The user using the spiritual side of there chakra will use it to manifest the Ki in a form of a physical chakra by manipulating there chakra into the physical state,once achieved the user's while form this newly formed chakra in there palm of there hand,it will appear as a orb of chakra varying in color depending on the spiritual nature of the user's Ki(example a blood thirst warriors ki would appear red),the user will then using the concept behind "A sword is an extension of the swordsman's soul" will take a blade in there possession and pass the blade though the orb.While this is happening the user is allowing the chakra to enter the blade of the sword,but will move there hand with the orb till they reach the shoulder of the other arm holding the blade,with this the sword and arm of the user will be covered by a layer of pure physical chakra in the appearance of a samurai's armor plating that would be around there arms.Using this aspect the technique however needs more chakra to keep it active meaning the moment the user stops feeding chakra the technique will end instantly and will leave them drained,however the technique is using physical chakra,which can block B-rank and below Taijutsu as well as A-rank and below Kenjutsu.The technique makes a sword lose its cutting power making it dull that it cannot cut even a tree but the mechanic to this is the pure chakra is able to diffuse energy based techniques(Fire Lighting,etc) and break it down and can unleash a wave of chakra by rebounding the diffused chakra back towards the original source,however it cannot diffuse physical techniques like Earth but can in some case Water,but Water of wider ranges cannot be diffused.The technique only cover one hand making it possible to still attack the user.

    -Lasts as long as the user has enough amounts of chakra to fuel it.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Yoh..
    -Can block physical techniques of Taijutsu up to B-Rank and A rank Kenjutsu
    -Requires two moves to active this
    -Diffusing and Rebounding an jutsu counts a move

    ~Leaving For Scorps~

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    Ki is what in Narutoverse we call chakra... Your explanation is flawed off the bat.


    (Kodai)Antiquity
    Type:Weapon,Supplementary
    Rank:A-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:-20 to activate Spirit of Sword,-20 for Shock Wave
    Damage:N/A
    Description:Antiquity is a secret weapon that has been in the Asakura Family for generations and generations since the times of the Sage of Six Paths.This red knife shaped piece of rock at first looks harmless but when in the possession of a swordsman can unlock its true potential.The rock has the ability to be used as a medium to unlock its true form which is the Spirit of Sword,this is achieved when the chakra of the welder enters the rock it will react towards it causing a sort of metamorphose stage to begin.This will require the welder to then,using a regular katana in there possession as a medium for the Spirit of Sword to take form.The rock will change the regular katana into a sword with red armor around it where the guard once was and a red tsbua(handle),and a chakra blade instead of a metal blade.This is the true form of antiquity though this form is only a casing around the original katana.The sword becomes indestructible,though two S-rank techniques can cause the Spirit of Sword to reform back to the rock stage,the blade is much longer making it able to reach up to mid range instead of short,it is also capable of slashing though A-rank and lower physical techniques(Earth and Water).The main ability behind the sword is a shockwave,which can cause even A-ranked summons to fall unbalanced

    -Can only be used by Yoh..
    -Requires a normal katana to active Spirit of Sword
    -Activating Spirit of Sword counts as a move
    -Shockwave can only be used once per battle and will cause Spirit of Sword to reform back into its rock stage and cannot be reactivated for 4 full turns
    -Indestructible in rock and sword form but two S-Ranks will cause it to reform into rock stage and cannot be used for the rest of the match.

    Antiquity in rock form

    Spirit of Sword Form


    Dropping old cw here:http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...70#post8235270

    ~Declined~ No elemental blasts released from swords, "shockwaves" are not allowed anymore in general and has been done countless times, cutting through A-rank Earth and Water? 2 S-rank will cause it to reform? that means it can guard against 2 S-ranks? abilities are a bit too much.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal: Tanuki (Raccoon Dog)
    Scroll Owner: Typhon
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Description and Background: Raccoon Dogs, despite their common names, are not closely related to Raccoons nor are they actually dogs. Instead they are a basal species in the Canidae family and one of the few that like to climb trees. Their bodies are similar in shape and size to foxes with a long body but short legs. The fur coloration is very similar to Raccoons which led to the poor misnomer of a name. In Japanese culture the Raccoon Dog goes by the name "Tanuki" and is a common figure in classic folklore. They are often depicted with big round eyes, a pudgy build, and enlarged....how should I say this.... cojones. They're used to represent a trickster, and are considered talented shape-shifters, but are presented in a light-hearted and aloof manner.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raccoon_dog

    The Tanuki of this contract generally stand on two feet like humans growing on average to the same size as a typical person. They're not the most physically fit species and often develop strong attachments to sake that leads to being overweight. Despite their physical short comings they're talented users of genjutsu and fuuinjutsu, staying true to their reputation as tricksters. Upon discovery of the Ichibi, the Tanuki immediately became drawn to the tailed beast which shared their form, though on a much larger and monstrous scale. They began to worship Shukaku as a God, and the creator of all Tanuki. Even the vessel for the Ichibi became worshiped and revered as a holy figure. This infatuation with the Ichibi led to the Tanuki moving their village to the deserts around Sunagakure. They found an abnormally large oasis in the western half of the desert which became their homes. The new village became known as the "Hachi-takioashisu" or "Eight-Falls Oasis", named after the eight waterfalls that supplied the water. Travelers lucky enough to stumble upon this paradise often can't remember the details of their stay due to the large amount of sake forced upon them, but they swear it to be the best time of their life.

    (I no longer own the Lyrebird contract as I handed it over to Himura here: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=320271)

    ~Declined~ Remove the genjutsu and fuuinjutsu reference, not going to allow genjutsu to be a passive ability for a contract, nor fuuinjutsu is going to be allowed for a summon to use.

    (Subakukaze no Jutsu: Suna no Jikoku) - Desert Wind Technique: Sands of Time
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Gaara mixes the hardest minerals of his sand with a very strong current of wind that swirls at incredible high speeds emitting a howling sound. He then envelopes his target in the storm where the sand particles whip into the target and grind them away. This technique can be used to devour an earth technique by having the sand almost immediately grind down the earth into even more sand, adding to the volume of the attack and making it even more deadly.
    -Can only be used by Gaara.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Devouring an earth technique increases the damage by 1/3 the power of the technique used (i.e. an A-rank tech would add 20 dmg).

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    Needs to be labeled as Sand/Wind technique and you need to explain what it actually is: avortex, a blast, a current, etc? Also, while the idea is good, you can't forget that sand is not strong to earth so there needs to be a reference of its interaction with earth and up to what rank can it interact with earth. Rest is ok.

    (Bijutsu: Subakukazedama) - Tailed Beast Skill: Desert Wind Bomb
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80 (+20)
    Description: After going into either his initial, or full transformation, Gaara uses the principles of the tailed beast bomb to create a similarly devastating attack. He arcs his tail over his body holding the tip in front of his mouth and begins to construct a highly compressed ball of wind and sand. Once made Gaara fires the ball at his target where on impact it erupts into a giant storm of wind and and that shreds apart everything caught within it. The scope of this storm is the same as the explosive radius of a typical tailed beast bomb, leaving a large barren field covered with sand in its wake.
    -Can be used once per transformation.
    -Can be used in the initial or full transformation.
    -Damage is boosted by +20 if used during the full transformation.
    -No Sand or Wind techniques above S-rank the following turn.

    ______________
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    ~Leaving both for Scorps~
     
         
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    (Kchuysei: ASAP & Rocky)Summoning: ASAP & Rocky
    Rank:A Rank
    Type:Summon
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Chakra Damage:60
    Description: The user bites their finger, does 3 hand seals, and wipes blood on their LB tattoo, summoning ASAP & Rocky. ASAP & Rocky are two yellow, capable of talking, twin sibling Lesser Birds of Paradise with lightning affinity. Due to their lightning affinity, they are surrounded by positive charges, which can be seen as a blue orb with a 90cm diameter, (the birds themselves are about 60cm long),their affinity also gives them additional speed (x1.4 of users speed). If the two birds fly next to each other, and their orbs touch each other, it creates a current, emitting heat that causes a blinding light to shine(Like a light bulb). The two birds have mastered the art of simultaneous attacks and when they attack an opponent together the damage is equal to B Ranked lightning attack. The birds can also materialize themselves into pure lightning and attack together equaling an A Ranked lightning technique. If somehow they didn't attack together, the opponent would take no damage.
    Note:
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Summon lasts 2 turns
    -Can only do simultaneous attacks
    -Simultaneous attack count as 1 jutsu of users 3
    -Once taught, you can teach anyone on the LBoP Contract
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    Why is this Short - long ranged? does that mean you can summon them anywhere? only up to short range away from you that i'm going to allow, remove that whole boost in speed, what would happen if they materalize to lightning and the lightning technique was overpowered/cancelled? would that mean that they will be reverse summoned? put a usage limit on those 2 techniques they can use.
    (Kchuysei: Asap)Summoning: Asap
    Rank:A
    Type:Summon
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Chakra Damage:60
    Description: The user bites their finger, does 2 hand seals, and wipes blood on their LB tattoo, summoning Asap in the air short range of the user. Asap is light yellow, 90cm, capable of talking, lightning affinity Lesser Bird of Paradise. Asap is skilled in A Rank lightning jutsu and can perform lightning up to A Rank with no hand seals. Asap also has the ability to freely emit a blinding light from his body, that affects the eyes of anyone in short range of him, but he can only maintain the light for two seconds.(It's basically like a bright camera flash that gives momentary blindness).
    Note:
    -Can be summoned 1 times per battle
    -Summon lasts 3 turns
    -User cannot use lightning once Asap is on the field
    -Asap's lightning jutsu counts as 1 of the users 3
    -Flash technique can be used 1 per turn, but ASAP cannot attack in the same turn
    -Once taught, you can teach anyone on the LBoP Contract
    Taught here: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=294325"]Here

    ~Declined~ Please follow the proper template, it's "Damage Points" not "Chakra Damage", and fix the grammar in the technique lol.

    (Katon: Enjou Tenshin) Fire Style: Blazing Will
    Rank:S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid.
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:(+10 Katon, +5 Tai.)
    Description: This user circulates their fire chakra throughout their body rapidly, to the point the body rises in temperature. You would see heat lines above the user and the ground beneath user would burn causing small footstep fires as they walk. The user can instantly ignite kunai's before throwing, but kunai can only travel up to mid.range before incinerating. If opponent is hit with a kunai, touched, or touches user they will receive a painful 2nd degree burn. Jutsu lasts 1 turn.
    NOTES:
    -Can only use Fire Jutsu and Taijutsu in turn actived
    -Can be used 2 times
    -1 Turn cool down
    -No fire next turn
    -Must be taught by ZandaT

    ~Declined~ I would've considered it if you even described how the boost is done to Fire techniques, but you didn't mention anything related to that, you only said that the body rises in temperature and some other irrelevant abilities, there's not even a duration limit. Don't resubmit.

    (Nikudan Gyorai) Human Torpedo
    Rank:B-A
    Type:Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:20-25
    Damage Points: 40-50
    Description: While any Partial or Super Expansion technique is activated the user will increase the strength and size of their lower leg's, making them able to leap in a sudden burst in any forward facing direction at various angles, headbutting the opponent in the stomach with great power and speed often sending them backwards in great pain. When used offensively, the attack can range in damage depending on the Expansion Technique used, but regardless of the technique used the move must be done in short range and the stomach pain can sometimes stun the opponent or cause internal bleeding.
    Partial Expansion- B Rank Headbutt/Opp. pushed back into Mid.Range/Opp. Momentary pain stun
    Super Expansion- A Ranked Headbutt/Opp. pushed into Long range/Opp. receives internal bleeding
    NOTES:
    -Can be used 3 times
    -Must be taught by ZandaT

    ~Declined~ With the size that you gained from the super expansion technique, how are you able to headbutt the opponent "in the stomach"? considering how big of a difference your size and your opponent's size, and this is a simple headbutt? if so it's not A-rank, seems like a C/B-rank to me.
     
         
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    ( Genjutsu: Hyakujuu ) Illusion Technique: Animalia

    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: By preforming 1 handseal, the user is able to cast an illusion where the opponent will feel (5 senses) a great amount of animals of any chosen size, within some limit (No boss sized animals), around himself. The illusion will manifest itself as body parts, whole animals, living or dead, attacking the user or standing still. While it can create any animal, it is more frequently used to summon animal specimens of one's summoning contract. Blood can be added to further reinstate the realism of the illusion.
    *In order to summon up to boss sized animals, one must add another handseal, and it's considered an A rank technique
    *Genjutsu specialist can cast a more complex and detailed illusion, usually casting a firmer grip on the opponent's senses (more than just the basic senses, adding a sense of body temperature, chakra perception, electromagnetic pulse, etc) it is considered an A rank technique or a stacked S rank technique.
    *The S rank version of the technique can only be used 4 times per battle*

    ~Declined~ I'm fine with the technique itself, not the multiple ranks, needs to be defined into one rank and one rank only, the colored portion is a bit too much and you left it too generic, choose one rank, this seems like a B-rank, and S-rank being used 4 times is way too much.

    (Genjutsu: Ganmi no Ichi Ni Gama) Illusion Technique: The Taste of the Yucky Pucky Toad

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This jutsu acts both as a form of Kai and an actual genjutsu. Yucky Pucky Toad allows the user to manipulate the jutsu and make it work towards her own purposes, while trapping the opponent. This jutsu comes in 2 phases.
    In the first phase, the user will burst sharply, manipulating the Genjutsu she's on. For example, if an opponent genjutsu creates a tree that envelops the user, it will make it seem as if lightning burst from the user and destroys the tree. (The user can have any creativity she wants). This marks the release of the opponent jutsu.
    In the second phase, the opponent will feel as if he has been shocked or stung, a very sharp and intense feeling. The shock and the genjutsu itself is very short-lived, but it's intensity leaves behind an underlying sensation of hesitation when attempting to to trap the user in a genjutsu again, as part of the brain will be programmed to shock the opponent again at the attempt (further blocking the genjutsu before it is efficiently cast, spending chakra but casting no illusion).
    *Effects last 5 turns unless the target is struck by sufficient physical pain, (similar to genjutsu rules) which will cut the effects short. This is not about releasing a genjutsu, though, just the lingering effect of an already auto-released genjutsu*
    *Can only be used against techniques of the same rank or lower*
    *The user will not be able to use genjutsus for 3 turns*
    *Can only be used 3 times per battle
    *Genjutsu specialist or doujutsu specialist will be able to counter techniques one rank above*

    ~Declined~ OP, no long range genjutsu, the colored portion is not going to be accepted because i'm not going to approve a genjutsu technique that has a release ability of other genjutsu techniques, and won't leave it this broad, you really need to tone down your techniques.

    (Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will make one handseal and expel her chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of thin and sharp but strong wires, this chakra wires, which will have an Elemental Nature in order to be effective, will immediately wrap around the opponent. Wind will make the wires much sharper. Lightning would numb the opponent, and make the wires sharper. Fire would burn the opponent and make add to the sharpness of the wires melting properties, Earth will make the wires thinner but stronger. Water is useless to the effect desired.
    Upon trapping the opponent, the user will quickly constrict the wires, severing the thinner limbs and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
    *This jutsu can only be used twice per battle*
    Note: The wires created aren't enough no envelop the whole body, so only a limb/body part can me affected.


    Approved

    (Katon: Kitsune no Uen ) Fire Release: Devious Fox
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user preforms a row of 5 handseals, and places her hand on the ground. From each finger, an extremely fast string runs along the floor, against the opponent, that then multiplies into a series of wires that engolf the opponent, locking his movements and burning him severely.
    *Can only be used twice per match*


    Approved
    Updating both in one (Mainly the first technique):

    (Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will expel chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of 5 wires, thin and sharp but strong, which will immediately wrap around the opponent. While they can be used on their own to powerfully constrict the opponent, they can be used more efficiently by adding an elemental nature to them. Strong elements (Earth, Metal, etc) or Slicing elements (Wind, Lightning, etc) will strengthen or sharpen the thin wires, which will allow them to slice through flesh and bone by the inherited constriction force. Other elements may weaken the body itself, allowing the said slicing effect (Fire burning, Rotting elements, etc). Elements that do not fall in these characteristics will simply add their characteristics to the wires, but will only have the tight grip of normal chakra wires, and not the slicing property.
    With one handseal, the wires can be shot from the ground, the sharpness/strength/power of the wires can be gradually increased till rupture point as a method of capture and torture, by keeping the handseal
    *If used from the ground, can't preform any further jutsu until the grip is released*

    The wires are only able to severe the thinner limbs/weak spots and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
    *This jutsu can only be used thrice per battle, at max 1 usage every two turns*
    The wires follow the element's and rank's weaknesses and strengths

    ~Declined~ So your attempting to merge two already approved techniques in one to leave you one more slot for a CJ? ya not going to happen, if you want to update each technique separately, but i won't allow merging both together.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ( Summoning:Golden Tiger )

    Summoning Animal: Golden Tiger
    Scroll Owner: Yin..
    Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None yet
    Description and Background: A golden tiger, golden babby tiger or strawberry tiger is one with an extremely rare color variation caused by a recessive gene that is currently only found in captive tigers. Like the white tiger, it is a color form and not a separate species. In the case of the golden tiger, this is the wide band gene; while the white tiger is due to the color inhibitor gene.Golden tigers also tend to be larger and, due to the effect of the gene on the hair shaft, have softer fur than their orange relatives.Like their white cousins, all golden tabby tigers have mainly Bengal parentage, but are genetically polluted with the genes of the Amur tiger via a part-Amur white tiger called Tony, who is a common ancestor of almost all white tigers in North America

    Those who sign the summoning contact will get this cool tattoo:

    For more info:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golden_tiger

    Approval From Cat Summoning Owner To Make Sub Species:http://narutobase.net/forums/convers...0172&u2=161034

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    Tiger contract already exists. DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Yuusou Kaerun) - Earth Release: Majestic Frog Frenzy
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user sends earth chakra into the area around and under the opponent. Once done so, the user performs the Tiger - Bear handseals and manipulates the earth to give creation to small fist sized frogs to rise from a 2 meter radius around the opponent, using the opponent as the epicenter. These frogs instantly start jumping at the target from every angle around them, attaching to there body one after another. The user can create from 1 to several frogs around the opponent at will. The user is able to perform 1 last handseal (tiger) and cause the earth frog(s) to expand in size, up to a standard adult heigh, covering the target in a thick layer of earth, wich decreases their movements by a lot, and possibly blocks their vision and/or ability to breath, depending on where the frogs attach and expand. However, if the user expands more than 2 frogs, they will only expand up to 3 times their size. They can also be used as a defensive medium by creating 1 or more infront (around) of the user and expanding their size, defending against other techniques or weapons within reason or to be used as simple distractions aswell. Not only are they used for offensive and defensive purposes, but if wanted, the user may create 1 frog to rise on the field in order to keep an eye on the field/opponent and since it's connected to the creator via chakra, it's able to alert the user of what's happening on the field. In short, is able to be used as a scout, however, when used for this purpose, only 1 frog maybe be created. Also, the scout frog is the only one capable of reaching long ranges, the offensive side can reach short and mid ranges, and the defensive one only up to short range, since it's used as a defense.
    - May only be taught by Lokí
    - May only be used 4 times per battle.
    - May not be used in consecutive turns.
    - No A rank or higher earth may be used on the same turn.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to 2 existing earth techniques and at least one water technique. DNR.

    (Doton:sawa oni) Earth Style: Swamp Demon
    Type: Attack/Supplamentary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for every turn he says on the field)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu can only be done if a swamp is present on the field. the user will do 2 handseals and slam one of his hands on the ground sending their chakra into a nearby swamp. A human/demon like figure will then emerge from the swamp and can be controlled Via the user. Being 2 meters tall, the creature is only able to move on the swamp, or under the swamp. The demon is similar to a clone and can perform earth techniquse up to C rank, but all physical hits phase right through him and simply get dragged down into the swamp. The power of this creature has enough force to break bones.
    Note: Can only be summoned on a swamp.
    Note: Cant use any Earth Jutsus Above A rank while the demon is on the field.
    Note: Can only stay on the field for 3 turns
    Note: Can use twice

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Done before countless times. Just use an Earth clone. DNR.

    (Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu: ajuu akunochimata) Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu Style: Beast of the underworld
    Type: Attack/Supplamentary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will take out his sword and run his fingers down the sword channeling chakra into it. The user will then swing the sword towards the enemy causing a blue slash thats visible. As the slash reaches the atmosphere 5 mini small demon like creatures made out of raw chakra with shape manipulation launch out of the slash as if the slash was a portal for the demons, and launch towards the opponent. These mini demon creatures does not attack physically but attack the chakra. The demon creature will launch through the opponents body taking out a piece of their chakra along with it. This will cause the opponents body to not be able to produce S rank or above Jutsu in their next turn if landed succesfully. If anybody is within contact of the blue slash, it will cause major damage strong enough to slice through even C rank and below Earth.

    Note: Cant use No Ninjutsu for the next 2 turns
    Note: Can use Twice
    Note: Cant use it in the same turn or back to back
    Note: Cant Use Jutsus Above S rank for the next 2 turns

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    Demons that attack chakra? A portal for demons btw? The ability you want is equal to the ability used by the Gedo Mazo used in the anime when summoned the first time by Nagato. Its a Fuuinjutsu. DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Ushiro View Post
    Resubmitting:

    (Kuchiyose: Kishida) - Summoning: Kishida
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kishida, a white locust 8 meters in height wearing armor made of numerous rectangular metal plates covering his body. Regarding himself as a knight, he spends the majority of his time wearing this armor which has developed his strength substantially. He has no trouble moving around with it regularly but cannot fly while wearing it. The armor contains chakra, allowing it to withstand damage from an A-rank attack before being destroyed. Kishida is able to disassemble his armor and levitate it through the air to form protective barriers up to mid range from himself. He can also mold the metal plates together after levitating them to create a large lance used to attack with the strength of an A-rank jutsu. With his fire affinity, he may imbue the metal with fire chakra which can increase the power of the lance to S-rank and allow the armor to endure an S-rank attack unless it is of the water element. Anything that gets within a few feet of the metal is burned by the flames on it and flammable materials like wood or dry earth are turned to ash almost immediately. While wearing the armor, the flames are on the outer part of it, preventing Kishida from harming himself. Once a battle, Kishida may summon another set of armor from a scroll he produces from his mouth.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Can stay for 4 turns
    -Levitating the armor, imbuing the armor with fire chakra, creating a lance, and summoning armor each count as a move of the user.
    -Must have signed the Locust contract
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    Needs a usage limit to all of the abilities, remove the colored, make the barrier extend up to Short range not Mid, and when you say barrier, do you mean a 360 meters defense? if so then i don't approved 360 degrees defenses or omni directional techniques anymore, add that after enduring the S-rank attack it's destroyed, when adding the fire chakra to it, and can he use any Fire techniques?


    Link to contract

    (Suiton: Hidora Taihō) - Water Release: True Hydra Cannon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms the Ram, Snake, and Boar handseals and calls forth a massive amount of water from the ground at any point of his choosing that quickly turns the battlefield into a small ocean deep enough to submerge a two-story building. Once the water has been created, seven giant hydra heads with long necks emerge from it and attack enemies with their sharp teeth and heads. Each hydra head is double the size of the Water Dragon Jutsu and can reach 20 meters from where it orginated. They can also fire spiraling streams of pressurized water from their mouths at the enemy, crushing them with the immense force of the water. This counts as an additional move of the user and is A-rank in strength.
    -Usable once per battle
    -No other S-rank or higher water jutsu this turn or next
    -The hydra heads can also be created from a large water source.
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    Overpowered, needs de-powering so i'll leave that for you, for god's sake seven Giant Hydra twice as big as the Water Dragon, able to reach up to Long range, in addition to form an ocean? =/ honestly if Kiri hadn't checked that i would've put a DNR on it.


    Updating from:Old jutsu

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    (Doton: Kage Shinkō)- Earth release: Shadow Emerging
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user slams his hand on the ground, opening a deep, jagged fissure beneath his target. The shadows within this fissure materialize into several large shadow tendrils which emerge from the fissure and branch out numerous times, covering a wide area and impaling the target. The shadows can reach up to mid range from the fissure's opening. The user must maintain contact with the ground or this jutsu will end.
    -Usable 2 times per battle
    -This jutsu counts as two moves this turn.
    -No A-rank or higher shadow jutsu next turn
    -Must be a member of the Nara clan to use.
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    keep the original version.
    Resubmitting:

    (Suiton: Hidora Taihō) - Water Release: True Hydra Cannon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms the Ram, Snake, and Boar handseals and calls forth a great amount of water from the ground nearby which takes the form of a large hydra with seven heads that attacks enemies with their sharp teeth and heads while also defending the user. Each hydra head is the same size of the Water Dragon Jutsu and can reach up to mid-range. They can also fire spiraling streams of pressurized water from their mouths at the enemy, crushing them with the immense force of the water. This counts as an additional move of the user and is A-rank in strength. The hydra can travel but cannot move very fast on land.
    -Usable once per battle
    -No other S-rank or higher water jutsu this turn or next
    -The hydra can also be created from a large water source.

    ~Declined~ Seems fine, just the body of the hydra needs a size defined, the "Large" definition is broad lol, i need to know how big it exactly is, rest seems okay.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaara View Post
    (Kyōka Suigetsu) ɸ Mirror Flower, Water Moon

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A(+10 per Genjutsu)
    Description:
    The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles.
    The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
    Abilities:
    -The blade acts as a medium for all genjutsu techs used by the user, much like uchiha use their eyes as a medium for genjutsu. The target however, must have made eye contact with the sword in order for this to work.
    -It gives a very small boost to kenjuts as it is very sharp and highly durable
    -It rejects foreign chakra that tries to enter the weilders body
    Restrictions:
    -Must be holding the blade for any of the abilities to work
    -Can only act as a medium for genjutsu once per turn
    -Must have Genjutsu MASTERED to wield

    ||Declined|| The above are not true restrictions.

    (Eru Esukūdo)- El Escudo
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The technique allows for the creation of a light green, hexagonal barrier that is normally fixed to one central area and, when inactive, remains invisible. Once this technique is used, it can stay invisible until an attack hit it. Upon contact with an outside force, the barrier enlarges to fully to protect whatever it is affixed to. The barrier protects from the attack keeping it away from the target, gathers the energy in one area, then it momentarily absorbs the energy from the attack and then forces the attack outward away from the shield in effect, dispersing the attack altogether. It is powerful enough to block a point-blank attack with a rasengan. This technique, once activated stays invisible until a attack heads towards it. The user must state where the central point is. This can only be used twice per battle and once at a time. Only defends up to an A-rank technique and most Tai-Ken.

    ||Declined|| Define "center point." Can you make the barrier anywhere you want (which is exploitable)? If it's a center point on the user's body, then this is good to go.

    (Kyōka Suigetsu) ɸ Mirror Flower, Water Moon

    Rank: A
    Type: Weopan
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles.
    The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
    The ability of the blade is to act as a medium for the use of A Generic genjutsu. This can be used on multiple people at once. Once the opponent looks at the sword, the user can hallucinate all sorts of things such as field of flowers seem to be a swamp, or a fly seem like a dragon.
    Note: The ability count as a jutsu and is equal to B-rank Genjutsu
    Note: Usable once per turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Sosuke Aizen


    ||Declined|| I'm still not particularly keen on this, and you should understand why given the pretext of this weapon.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Oraan View Post
    Katon: Purometeusu no Okurimono to Noroi | Fire Release: Prometheus - The Gift and the Curse
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs 3 handseals and casts their opponent in a A Ranked Genjutsu where they believe themselves to have their head, arms and legs bound in chains (stretched outwards away from each other) unable to move as a large 5 meter griffon vulture descends upon them from the clouds/sky with a means to eat at their body. Outside of the Genjutsu, the user has channeled their fire chakra into the clouds/sky 20 meters above their paralyzed opponent and causes a large 5 meter flaming vulture with a 10 meter wingspan to quickly falling down from the sky towards them. When hit, the flaming vulture severely burns the body of the opponent, causing the opponent in the illusion to feel that their skin is being rapidly picked and torn at by the griffon vulture as they scream in agony.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: User must wait 3 turns before using this technique again.
    Note: No Genjutsu for 2 turns.
    Note: No Fire techniques can be used the turn this technique is used.
    Note: Counts as 2/3 moves in a turn

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    Name is wrong. Its unreasonable as the Genjutsu needs to be B-Rank max since its not that strong. And where does the damage come from? from the fire? Long range? No. No Long Range Genjutsu. Period.
    Magen: Purometeusu no Okurimono to Noroi | Demonic Illusion: Prometheus - The Gift and the Curse
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs 3 handseals and casts their opponent in a B Ranked Genjutsu where they believe themselves to have their head, arms and legs bound in chains (stretched outwards away from each other) unable to move as a large 5 meter griffon vulture descends upon them from the clouds/sky with a means to eat at their body. Outside of the Genjutsu, the user has channeled their fire chakra into the clouds/sky 20 meters above their paralyzed opponent and causes a large 5 meter, S Rankedflaming vulture with a 10 meter wingspan to quickly falling down from the sky towards them. If successfully hitting the opponent, the flaming vulture severely burns the body of the opponent. If the opponent does not successfully defend against the illusion and the technique, it causes the opponent in the illusion to feel that their skin is being rapidly picked and torn at by the griffon vulture as they scream in agony.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: User must wait 3 turns before using this technique again.
    Note: No Genjutsu for 2 turns.
    Note: No Fire techniques can be used the turn this technique is used.
    Note: Genjutsu lasts for 1 turn.
    Note: Damage comes from the flaming vulture.

    Note: Counts as 2/3 moves in a turn

    ~Declined~ The core of the genjutsu is very similar to a CJ of Ushiro's i think, has the same thing of chains binding the opponent and a bird coming to feast on their body, i don't like the idea of mixing a ninjutsu technique with a genjutsu one, but the problem i have is how exactly is this flaming vulture released? the clouds can't release fire nor can the sky, Fire doesn't materialize like Water does from the thin air, make it only usable once.

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    Ototon/Suiton: Māmansonābīmu | Sound/Water Combination: Merman Sonar Beam
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: the user, being submerged in water, channels sound chakra into their lungs and screams at a certain resonate frequency. The Sound picks up the water and travels as a combination towards the opponent. The sound/water combination then travels at an incredibly fast speed towards the opponent. The force of the blast is enough to send the user out of the water or deeper into it depending on the body of water and the angle at which the technique is used. The speed of this technique gives it incredible piercing power. The sound waves and water continue to spread out further as it travels, a small vortex with a 3 meter diameter.
    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: This technique can also be used to deflect an A Ranked or lower Water technique back at the opponent as a sound/water combination without the user being submerged in water.
    Note: No Sound or Water techniques in the same turn.


    ~Declined~ Nice one, but one thing i don't agree with, which is the power blowing you into the water or out of it due to the force of the blast, this needs a medium to blow against, like a solid earth or water, or if you release a continuous stream of pressurized sound waves, tell you what, you can add the release out of the water or into it as a separate usage of the technique, like i said a continuous stream of sound waves that's close to you, because when you use it to move you it can't continue as a projectile but blows in the reversed direction, you can't use both the redirection and projectile attack with the same usage, and both would require using the technique twice.
     
         
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