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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    If any adjustments are necessary feel free to make them to make these approvable ^_^

    Raging Bolt (レイジングボルト Raiton:Rējingu Boruto)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will hold up their arm channeling raiton chakra into it. As they do they will release it into a ball above their head. Then swing their hand their hand downwards the ball of lightning will launch down on the users target with great speed expanding on impact creating a large blast.

    ~Must be Kage rank
    ~Can be used twice per battle.

    ~Approved~

    Lightning Dragon's Roar (雷竜の咆哮 Raiton:Rairyū no Hōkō)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user gathers lightning in his/her mouth and releases it in a concentrated, destructive blast, capable of destroying everything in a wide area in front of him/her. The special effect of this attack is that, even if the targets survive the head on blast, the lightning paralyzes them, preventing them from escaping the user's next attack.
    ~Must be Kage rank
    ~Can be used three times per battle

    ~Declined~ How wide is the blast and how long does paralysis last? For an A-rank technique with a huge blast radius and paralysis, it's not really even restricted.

    Heavenward Halberd (雷竜方天戟 Raiton:Rairyū Hōtengeki)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user lifts his/her hands and forms lightning between them, creating a very large spear out of it, massive. He/she then hurls such spear at the enemy at incredible speeds.
    ~Must be Kage rank
    ~Can only be user twice per battle

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 04-09-2012 at 11:10 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Link to approved contract

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Puchi) - Summoning Technique: Tiny
    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Tiny is a Kea bird that is colored in an assortment of white and red feathers. He carries small scrolls on his back that he is capable of using for weaponry ninjutsu. The weapons are normal size even though the scroll is incredibly small. He fits into the palm of one's hand and he is flies at high speeds, about the speed of a Kage-ranked ninja, and he has knowledge over ninjutsu. He is capable of using up to S-rank basic ninjutsu yet he can only use two jutsu before returning home. Due to his knowledge of ninjutsu, he can also use Kai on the user but this counts as one of his two only jutsu per summoning. He can speak English.
    Restrictions:
    ~Can only be summoned twice per battle.
    ~Lasts on the field for 3 turns or 2 jutsu.
    ~Declined~ Any S-ranked ninjutsu? You do realize there are quite a bit of jutsu that a bird should not be able to use, right?

    (Doton: Hakyoku) - Earth Release: Cataclysm
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive / Defensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will charge a large amount of earth chakra to the soles of their feet and then launch at the target. When they land on the ground, they will press down into the ground while releasing their earth chakra in a radius around the user and then cause the earth chakra to uplift as a circular radius (About 10 meters) of medium-sized pillars. The pillars crumble a moment after they have been uplifted at high speeds.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable once.
    ~No S-rank Earth jutsu last turn.
    ~Declined~ Doesn't seem worthy of S-rank, to be honest. Lower the rank and work on the description a bit. I'm still unsure how to properly visualize the end effect of this technique.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 04-11-2012 at 10:05 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user clasps his hands together and creates a circular mark in the palm of each hand that emit powerful jets of flame that can propell the user for a total of 5 seconds. The jutsu's timing and jet power are controlled by the user. They can get the user to a target at mid range in 2.5 seconds.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz
    Editing the above technique that was previously approved to this:

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user claps his hands together and creates a circular mark in the palm of each hand that emit powerful jets of flame used to propel the user at high speeds through the air. The jutsu's timing and jet power are controlled by the user. They can get the user to a target at mid range in 2.5 seconds.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    High speed flight then? ~Declined~

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 each turn)
    Damage: N/A (+10 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques, -10 to other ninjutsu)
    Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which manifests a web-like crosshair in front. It acts as a barrier against frontal attacks and strengthens arrows shot from the bow with once they pass through the one-sided barrier.
    -Usable once per battle
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Can protect the user from 3 C-rank, 2 B-rank, or 1 A-rank attack
    -Only 2 jutsu per turn may be used while this is active excluding the turn it was used
    Editing the above technique that was previously approved to this. Most of the description is changed but only related to its form:
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    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 each turn)
    Damage: N/A (+15 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques, -10 to other ninjutsu)
    Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which causes it to glow and release a pulse of chakra that is manifested as a barrier in the shape of a dome with the bow at the center. The barrier is one-sided, meaning the user can be protected from outside attacks and objects can leave the barrier freely. When the user aims his bow, a crosshair appears on the surface of the barrier and the arrows that pass through it are strengthened. A variation of this technique is performed by aiming the user's bow at a target and create the barrier around them instead in a reversed state so he can be trapped inside while the user attacks him from outside. The dome remains stationary when trapping a target.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 2 turns
    -Can protect the user from 3 C-rank, 2 B-rank, or 1 A-rank attack
    ~Declined~ I like the new idea (the trap), but it's an A-rank technique. How exactly should a small web be able to block B-rank techniques (2, no less)?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 04-11-2012 at 10:10 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Doton/Fuuton: Deburi Koudo) - Earth/Wind Style: Debris of Earth
    Type: Offense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The technique requires a huge amount of earth chakra, so user claps his hands and sends his earth chakra throughout the ground. So after the whole battlefield is filled with user's earth chakra, the earth start shaking and shoots out infinite number of spear shaped pillars from the whole battlefield, with cannon speed. The length of each pillar is about 10m, and thickness is about half a metre. The spears are shot with that great speed that they reaches 100m height and covers the whole sky. And after they've reached their maximum height, they start falling and then user clicks his teeth and pillars gets coated in a very thick and sharp layer of wind chakra. So they falls with very great speed and user can direct them towards his enemy by clenching his fist and directing his hand towards his target.
    Note: -When spears been shot, so between every two succesive spears there will be a gap of half metre which is equal to the thickness of one spear i.e. this technique uses half of the whole ground.
    -1 Spear will not shoot where the user is standing. Or its upto the user if he don't want to shoot more than 1 spear.
    -In order to use this jutsu user must not use any Earth jutsu in same and in previous turn.
    -After using this technique user can't use any Earth technique for his next 2 turns.
    -And no S-rank Earth and 3rd turn after using this technique.
    -No S-Rank and above wind in same and in next turn.
    -Can't use any S-rank technique in next turn.
    -After the usage of this technique, the ground will somewhat be destroyed, so every earth technique used by any person will require more time, chakra, handseals and will be weak as usual.
    - (-30) to the user because of exessive amount of chakra used
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Because of pain in the user's body, for concentrating chakra user must perform an additional of 3 handseals for every jutsu he uses, for next 3 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    Plz add more restrictions, or change any part so it'll be approvable.

    ±± Declined ±± I tell you no limitations on earth techniques afterwards and you still maintain it. Also, you changed it to wind...ok...and what is the effect of that? You can restrict this as much as you want that it doesn't make it less OP.
    (Doton/Fuuton: Deburi Koudo) - Earth/Wind Style: Debris of Earth
    Type: Offense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: The technique requires a huge amount of earth chakra, so user claps his hands and sends his earth chakra throughout the ground. So after the whole battlefield is filled with user's earth chakra, the earth start shaking and shoots out infinite number of spear shaped pillars from the whole battlefield, with cannon speed. The length of each pillar is about 5m, and thickness is about half a metre. The spears are shot with that great speed that they reaches 50m height and covers the whole sky. And after they've reached their maximum height, they start falling and then user clicks his teeth and pillars gets coated in a very thick and sharp layer of wind chakra. So they falls with very great speed and user can direct them towards his enemy by clenching his fist and directing his hand towards his target.
    Note: -When spears been shot, so between every two succesive spears there will be a gap of half metre which is equal to the thickness of one spear i.e. this technique uses half of the whole ground.
    -1 Spear will not shoot where the user is standing. Or its upto the user if he don't want to shoot more than 1 spear.
    -In order to use this jutsu user must not use any Earth jutsu in same and in previous turn.
    -After using this technique user can't use any Earth technique for his next 2 turns.
    -And no S-rank Earth and 3rd turn after using this technique.
    -No S-Rank and above wind in same and in next turn.
    -Can't use any S-rank technique in next turn.
    - (-30) to the user because of exessive amount of chakra used
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    lol. Sry, I misunderstood from this "No limitation of the enemy usage of earth afterwards." that you are asking that aren't there be limitation of the enemy usage afterwards. Thats why I bolded "any person"

    -Removed the enemy's limitation part.
    -Bolded the wind effect.
    -Reduced the height to 50m (halved) and pillar height to 5m

    ~Approved~

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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kamereon of za Akunochimata) - Summoning Technique: Chameleon of the underworld
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50 (-10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User opens a giant scroll, and performs a row of 18 handseals after which he bites his thumb and slams his hand on the scroll and thus summoning the giant chameleon which is of same size height that of gamahiro and same length that of manda. It was made by a unknown village for the usage in extreme and sudden situations like in Great Ninja War. It was made by combining several metals which makes him immune to S-Rank and below techniques, but inside of its body is mechanically functioned, which allows the user to control its body parts, but user must pass chakra continuously for its working.
    Note: -30 damage to user because of using high amount of chakra.
    -It can't use anything.
    -Stays on field for 4 turns max.
    -Can't use any summoning technique for next 3 turns.
    -Can't perform any S-Rank or above technique in same turn.
    -Can't perform any S-Rank or above technique for next 2 turns.
    -Need not to sign the chameleon contract as it is just made up of a few metals.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined~ I can't approve this.
    _________________________
    Resubmitting >>LINK<<


    Link to approved summoning

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hungry) - Summoning Technique: Hungry
    Rank: S
    Type: All
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User claps his hands and summons a terrapin named "Hungry". Who is of same size that of Gamahiro. Like his name, he is very hungry all the time. He has the ability to eat jutsus, upto S-ranks. And after eating a jutsu, he can add his own chakra to the jutsu in his stomach and uses that jutsu on his opponent by making it one rank higher. His is also immune to A-rank and below jutsus because of his back shell.
    Note: -He can eat 3 jutsus per battle.
    -He can't eat solid jutsus, like that of earth.
    -Every jutsu he uses on his opponent, counts as a move.
    -Stay on battlefield for 3 turns max.
    -Can be summoned 2 times per battle.
    -Must've signed the "Terrapin" contract.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.
    ~Declined~ Overpowered.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 04-11-2012 at 10:30 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kchuysei: Takodenrei) Summoning: Kiterunner
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb drawing blood he then summons a Kiterunner. It is summoned directly below the user basically picking the summoner up onto it's back. It is large enough to easily carry 1 person it is roughly 10 feet tall. A Kiterunner is a ground based summon that can not fly for long periods of time, it can fly for periods of 10 to 15 seconds getting about 5 to 10 feet off the ground. It's legs are much stronger than any other Kite being able to run long distances at fast speeds. It can move as fast as 45 miles per hour while sprinting and can sprint for distances of 10 miles at a time. A Kiterunner stays active on the field until the user dismounts him or until an attack makes contact with the Kiterunner. They come in a variety of colors if not specified the jutsu just summons a purple one.
    Note:

    -Can only be summoned 3 times per battle
    -Is active until the user dismounts
    -Must have signed the Kite contract
    -Must be taught how to summon



    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=5308

    ~Approved~
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    (Katon: Mizu Jouhatsu) Fire Release: Water Evaporation
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (If the water vapor comes into contact with the opponent while being converted.)
    Description: The user performs two hand seals (Ram-Tiger). He then releases katon chakra into a small-medium sized water source. He uses his katon chakra to evaporate the water at an incredible speed. This causes the water to disperse throughout the air in one quick burst changing the liquid into vapor. This can convert a water source as small as a drop of water or a water source as large as a small pool of water into a mass of steam. The steam can cause minor burns to the skin possibly causing blisters. This can only be used on one source of water at a time.

    Notes:

    -Only works on B rank and below Water
    -Must have a water source to use.
    -The user doesn't manipulate the steam.
    -Can't use S rank Katon or above the next turn.

    ~Declined~ A similar technique already exist. Also, steam is considered a CE.

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    (Doton: Doro Rappu) - Earth Style: Mud Wrap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The person takes hold of Chakra infused mud already in play and wraps it around the opponent. It will surround their body making movement harder as well as restricting breathing and possibly asphyxiating the opponent. The mud can be controlled slightly and forced to surround the opponent's head making it's way into their nose, mouth and eyes. The user must have used a Mud based Earth jutsu prior to this jutsu.
    Notes:

    -Must have already used a mud based jutsu such as Swamp, Mud Fall, or mud bullets
    -Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
    -Must be the own person's Chakra infused Mud

    ~Declined~ We don't accept technique that lets you manipulate an element freely. I need you to be very clear how this jutsu takes effect, just so you can't diverge from your description and start abusing this technique. Also, where do the 60 damage come from? You say it slows down the opponent, possibly asphyxiate him, but no real damage deal (or at least no sure damage). Make it a supplementary technique unless you change the description.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Newts (Imori)
    Scroll Owner: Baldy..
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: To be created
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Larva, Efts, Kodai no mizūmi Newts
    Description and Background:

    Origin:
    The Newts are from a hidden secretive and mysterious lake found in a valley within a obscured mountain range called Kodai no mizūmi, translated to Lake of Antiquity.

    General Description:
    A newt is an aquatic amphibian of the family Salamandridae, although not all aquatic salamanders are considered newts. Newts are classified in the subfamily Pleurodelinae of the family Salamandridae, and are found in North America, Europe and Asia. Newts metamorphose through three distinct developmental life stages: aquatic larva, terrestrial juvenile (called an eft), and adult. Adult newts have lizard-like bodies and may be either fully aquatic, living permanently in the water, or semi-aquatic, living terrestrially but returning to the water each year to breed.
    Newts share many of the characteristics of their salamander kin; Caudata, including semi-permeable glandular skin, four equal sized limbs and a distinct tail. Aquatic larvae have true teeth on both upper and lower jaws, and external gills. They have the ability to regenerate limbs, eyes, spinal cords, hearts, intestines, and upper and lower jaws. The cells at the site of the injury have the ability to de-differentiate, reproduce rapidly, and differentiate again to create a new limb or organ. One theory is that the de-differentiated cells are related to tumour cells since chemicals which produce tumours in other animals will produce additional limbs in newts. Newts produce toxins in their skin secretions as a defense mechanism, some newts toxins being potent enough to kill a fully grown adults, however the toxins only prove fatal if ingested, or excreted on broken skin or wounds.

    Summon General Abilities:
    Kodai no mizūmi Newts vary in size, being as small as a standard pencil to being as large as gamabunta, and other great summons. Like all Newts, Newts that hail from Kodai no mizūmi also known as Lake of antiquity or sometimes referred to as Lake of the past or Lake of time, excrete toxins from their skin, these toxins however being particularly more potent than that of a standard newt, being able to ravage a human body if allowed into their blood stream. Furthermore, they also have heightened regenartive abilities, being able to increase their limb regeneration through the use of chakra. Most of the Newts are Semi-Aquatic, however there are some that are fully Aquatic, regardless both types are particularly strong swimmers being able to navigate through water with great speed, agility and prowess. Kodai no mizūmi being a epitome of beauty, nature untouched and unspoiled by the average human, however unfortunately the Newts that reside in the Lake of Antiquity, are segregated due to a civil cold war brought about due to twins being born as heirs to the throne, and no record remaining of which is older, thus they both strived to establish dominance resulting in a stalemate and the Newt population being separated. As such the twins are both bosses of the two segregations keeping a level of peace, but still regarding eachother as traitors, leading to much tension between the two segregations. Something that every signer since has been striving to amend

    Summoning:
    A signer of The newt contract, is able to summon newts from Kodai no mizūmi, they are also able to summon efts. Aswell as larva which in most cases spell out a unsucessfull summoning.
    The standard summoning jutsu, causes a asortment of Newts to be summoned all of different sizes some being fully and others beign semi aquatic, most carrying a type of weapon.

    Kind of copied Lili's format because it was simply awesome D:

    ±± Declined ±± Newts are from the salamander family which is a cannon contract.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Crane
    Scroll Owner: Foxnaruto
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background:Cranes are a family, Gruidae, of large, long-legged and long-necked birds in the order Gruiformes. There are fifteen species of crane in four genera. Unlike the similar-looking but unrelated herons, cranes fly with necks outstretched, not pulled back. Cranes live on all continents except Antarctica and South America.

    ±± Declined ±± Taken by McRazor
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    ( Kouton: Horimono ) Box Arts: Ta Moko
    Rank: B
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This stands as the ability that Archipelago's Box Jellyfishes have to stretch out their tentacles 3 times the original size. Each usage allows the Box to stretch 2 tentacles, and then return them back to normal.
    Human summoners mimic this technique by summoning long tentacles which wrap around the user's arms, legs and face, giving them the appearance of Moko, elegant carvings wore by Maori villagers, which can then manipulate and stretch the tentacles up to Mid-Range.
    *Each usage of the technique stretches 2 tentacles*
    *Summoning the tentacles uses the same technique, but requires 3 handseals*
    *The tentacles last 3 turns on human summoners, after which, the user must wait 1 turn to summon them again*
    *Human summoners are immune to the venom*
    ____________
    -Declined-


    (Kouton: Pishari ) Box Arts: Fa'ataupati
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user secretes a large amount of venom, which assumes the shape of a big jellyfish. In case of a human user, requires 3 handseals and is spat from the mouth.
    Then the user is able to control the jellyfish with a conjunction of various slap-like motions, gestures, making the jellyfish move (Up, Down, Sides, back, Front) and even change in shape (Become taller, blunter, sharper, bending, etc), in a large area around the user, up to Mid-Range around the user. The jellyfish can move as fast as the user can run.
    *While controlling the venom, the user can't preform other jutsus except Taijutsu*
    *The venom can be controlled for 2 turns, after which it falls motionless*
    *The jutsu can only be used twice*
    *The user is immune to the venom*
    ____________
    -Declined-
    Both were declined based on:

    + Inherit Immunity (By a Human)
    + Creation of Poison without Poison Arts (By a Human)
    + Summoning of Poison without Fuuin (By a Human)
    + Summoning Animal Parts

    ( Kouton: Horimono ) Box Arts: Ta Moko
    Rank: B
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This stands as the ability that Archipelago's Box Jellyfishes have to stretch out their tentacles 3 times the original size. Each usage allows the Box to stretch 2 tentacles, and then return them back to normal.
    Human summoners mimic this technique by summoning a box on their back, with long tentacles, which wraps around the user's arms, legs and face, giving them the appearance of Moko, elegant carvings wore by Maori villagers, which can then manipulate and stretch the tentacles up to Mid-Range. The tentacles have the particularity of having one side with nematocysts and one side without. The side that attaches to the skin is without nematocysts.
    *Each usage of the technique stretches 2 tentacles*
    *Summoning the tentacled box uses the same technique, but requires 3 handseals*
    *The tentacles last 3 turns on human summoners, after which, the user must wait 1 turn to summon them again*
    *Human summoners have higher resistance to the poison, but are not immune*

    (Kouton: Pishari ) Box Arts: Fa'ataupati
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user secretes a large amount of venom, which assumes the shape of a big jellyfish. Then the user is able to control the jellyfish with a conjunction of various slap-like motions, gestures, making the jellyfish move (Up, Down, Sides, back, Front) and even change in shape (Become taller, blunter, sharper, bending, etc), in a large area around the user, up to Mid-Range around the user. The jellyfish can move as fast as the user can move. The jelly can be separated into up to 5 smaller jellyfishes.
    *While controlling the venom, the user can't preform other jutsus except Taijutsu*
    *The venom can be controlled for 2 turns, after which it falls motionless*
    *The jutsu can only be used twice*
    *Human summoners have higher resistance to the poison, but are not immune*
    *Can only be used by Boxes*

    ±± Both Approved ±±


    New

    ( Koukurage Kuchyose no Jutsu: ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Technique: Coatrischie

    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Coatrishie is a clan of Archipelago Boxes that has wind chakra, and a higher resistance to drought. They come in various sizes, from very small ones to large enough to carry 2 people in their floater. They can swim freely through the air as they can through the water. Twice per battle, they can charge wind jutsu on their tentacles, acquiring a saw-like appearance, equivalent to A rank and will last for 2 turns max each time.
    *Can only stay on field for 5 turns max unless there is a water source nearby, in which case they can bathe in the water and renew the duration of their stay by 5 more turns*
    *Can only summon up to 3 Coatrishie per battle but only one at a time*


    ±± Approved ±± Edited.
     
         
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    (Fuuinjutsu- Chikyū Sēji no Shukufuku) Sealing technique- The Blessing of the Earth Sage
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: n/a
    Description: the user will perform the needed hand seals and immediately slam his hand on the ground where the “kanji” for Blessed will appear under the user. The earth underneath the user within short range of him and long range in depth shall become sealed and not allow foreign chakra, other than that of the user of this jutsu, to penetrate it. Once performed on an area the seal stays active for a total of 5 turns not allowing an opponent to attack or merge w/ it. The seal is stationary and does not move with the user, meaning if he leaves the area he wont be protected anymore.
    *Note: Can’t perform any Fuuin next turn.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.

    ±± Pending ±± As far as i know, Fuuin above A-Rank require permission from Nexus to submit but i might be wrong. I'll ask nexus. Also, this is a bit underrestricted. The only thing you become unable to do is use fuin on the next turn...and genjutsu (fuuins own restrictions)
    (Fuuinjutsu- Chikyū Sēji no Shukufuku) Sealing technique- The Blessing of the Earth Sage
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Attack points: n/a
    Description: the user will perform the needed hand seals and immediately slam his hand on the ground where the “kanji” for Blessed will appear under the user. The earth underneath the user within short range of him and long range in depth shall become sealed and not allow foreign chakra, other than that of the user of this jutsu, to penetrate it. Once performed on an area the seal stays active for a total of 5 turns not allowing an opponent to attack or merge w/ it. The seal is stationary and does not move with the user, meaning if he leaves the area he wont be protected anymore.
    *Note: Can’t perform any Fuuin next 2 turns.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.

    ~Approved~

    (Katon- Netsu no Maisō) Fire release- Heat Burial
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the user will chain together the necessary hand seals while molding his fire chakra into a highly compressed orb (the size of a fist) that he slams into the ground. The orb disperses throughout the earth sending a heat wave underground that evaporates every water molecule underground within range. The heat wave has no effect on the people standing on the ground, just underneath the surface.
    *Note: can only be used by Toku.
    *Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: Cant perform any fire next turn or S-rank and above the turn after that.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (look for Kagustuchi's techniques). Yours is a less powerful version of his OP fire jutsu.

    (Doton- Onparēdo Ushi) Earth release- Bulls on Parade
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the user will gather his earth chakra while performing the necessary hand seals and finish by shoving both palms forward to raise a stampede of rock bulls from the ground. The bulls explode out from in front of the user and expand out at a 180 degrees going long range. The rock bulls are strong enough to punch through concrete raising a dust cloud behind them and leaving only devastation behind.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.
    *Note: Usable 2 times per battle.
    *Note: Cant use any Earth jutsu next turn or any S-rank Earth and above the turn after that.

    ~Pending~ Give an approximate number of bulls and please specify whether or not you control them (are they simply going into a straight line?). Resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Kamishiro- View Post
    ~Resubmitting.

    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing
    Crows

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the same size as the earth and stones dragon one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

    ±± Declined ±± To big for an A-Rank


    New Submissions :


    [Hyotoun : Urufu] - Ice Release Wolf
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses his Ice chakra into his dominant hand causing his hand to be surrounded with ice then the user use shape manipulation to turn the ice in the form of wolf's head which can be used to strike enemies.
    ❖ Can only be used 3 times


    ±± Declined ±± Why is this an A-Rank?



    [Hyotoun :Washi] - Ice Release : Eagle

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:The user gathers a decent amount of his Ice chakra.Afterwards he releases his ice chakra from his body the he use shape manipulation to turn the Ice chakra to multiple ice eagles that fly through the air to strike the user's opponents from all directions.
    ❖ Can only be used 3 times



    ±± Approved ±±
    Resubmiting :
    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the half size of gamabunta one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

    ~Declined~ Still too big for A-rank. You may not know this, but the maximum size I allow for bird summon is the size of Gamabunta. Otherwise, a bird as big as Gama would simply flap its wing to send massive gust through the field, destroying everything. So, with this technique you've just summoned two boss sized bird summon.


    [Kemuri : Kemuri Doragon No Jutsu] - Smoke Release : Smoke Dragon

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user summons very big and wide dragon made of smoke that has the same size as the dropping lid size,crushing the opponent and on the same time causing the opponent to be surrounded by smoke from all size so he won't be able to see nor breath.
    ❖ Usable 3 times per battle.

    [Kemuri : Kemuri Maunten No Jutsu] - Smoke Release : Smoke Mountain

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates 2 big and wide mountains made of smoke one on the opponent's left side and one on the opponent's right side each mountain has the same size as half size of gamabunta,then as the user summons the two smoke mountains successful he crashes the opponent in between them.
    ❖ Usable 3 times per battle.

    ~Both declined~ Smoke? I've checked both your bio and none refffers to you mastering smoke release. Furthermore, if this is a CE, you've submitted those in the wrong thread. Provide a link to the element next time.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 04-12-2012 at 01:01 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Judas kouza)-Judas Chair
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user channels their chakra into the opponents mind casting them in a genjutsu that causes them to believe a large chair has appeared below them that binds there arms and legs to the said chair, The chair is covered completely with metal nails that slowly begin extending through the opponents body causing immense mental pain and anguish, If the jutsu is not escaped in two turns the mental trauma will leave the opponent unable to fight.

    ~The effects of this jutsu last two turns~
    ~Can not use any Genjutsu for the next three turns~
    ~Can only be used Once per battle~
    ~Can only be taught by ReXii~

    http://www.medievality.com/chair.html
    Image of the chair ^
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit

    (Hayaton: Senjigusuri Hayai) - Swift Release: Swift infusion
    Type: Supplementary/ Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user infuses a kunai with his Swift Chakra, letting it move much faster, as well as increasing its piercing power due to the sheer speed added.
    Note: Can only be taught by Rexii
    Note: Can only be used twice
    ~Declined~ Why is this A-rank?

    Adauchi Naka no Yūkai tetsu: Vendetta of the Melting Iron
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user throws 3 kunai, one directly at the opponent and two to both his sides. Then, the user Focuses his Swift Chakra through his body. He then runs up to his kunai (one of the three, he can choose which), and intercepts it before the kunai hits his opponent (the two kunai that are thrown to the sides of the opponent however, aren't aimed at his main body but more in a 45° angle away from his body). As he intercepts it, he throws it again with full force, letting the kunai increase its speed even more.
    Note: can only be taught by ReXii
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: No swift techniques above B in the same turn, or 1 turn after this
    Note: Can also be used to intercept an incoming kunai.
    ~Declined~ Why in the world is this S-rank?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 04-12-2012 at 10:49 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by The Seven-Scaled boy View Post
    *Facepalms; First world problem* I was editing my post andhit ctrl+S thinking it would save...

    (Raiton: Raitoningu Purazuma) - Lightning release: Lightning Plasma
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will concentrate his raiton chakra on either or both hands and mold it with 2 handseals. Then he'll proceed by punching forwards and making thousands of small light-like surges of yellow lightning rush everywhere. By themselves each stream is able to numb the area they touch and give quite a shock, yet the importance comes when two beams intercross. When they do a small explosion of lightning the size of clenched fist occurs and both rays continue on their way. Basically, the opponent will feel as if trapped in a cage of shinning yellow lights all around him. The speeds at which the lightning sourrounds the opponent is quite formidable making complicated rows of handseals hard to perform before getting hit by a stream (rows of more than 3 handseals are hard to perform) also the beams may go below the ground and upwards making this no easy technique to avoid. Also the lightning streams are created in such way they emulate lightning illusion pillar making each single lightning stream extremly bright and so in combination and as they approach proggressively, they aim focefuly blind the opponent. The streams also generate a buzzing sound as they stretch, making them quite bothering for sensitive ears.
    Notes: No Lightning S-rank or higher next turn.
    Notes: No lightnig jutsus the same turn after its usage.
    Notes: Can only be used twice per battle.

    (Hachimon: Kyomon: Rozan Hyaku Ryū Ha) - Eight Gates: Gate of Wonder: One hundred Raising dragons
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A (+20 if you want to add elemental chakra, this only available to Eight Inner Gates Masters)
    Damage: 80
    Description: After Opening the seventh gate, the user will begin a barrage of punches which will , as shown with daytime tiger a technique also used while in 7th gate, manifest as an intense air pressure blast but in shape of lung dragons. The user will bombard the opponent with punches which will make the dragons come from every direction aiming to crush the opponent under their tremendous force, capable of tunneling through the ground leaving, deep craters (around 4 meters) in their wake. Thanks to the user's greenish sweat, the dragons will seemingly take green color appearing even more realistic. Each element infused will add a certain turn to the technique. Wind Will make the air pressure of the dragons revolt as it it was a vortex of scythes flung with the very strength of the seventh gate. Lightning will make the dragons electrified and add to their penetrative force. Fire will make the dragons to be engulfed with flames, making a single dragon reduce a forest to ash. Earth will make the dragons impact even heavier. Water will make the dragons capable of dousing fires and strike with more power. The Dragons direction and way of striking is dependant on the users way of punching. The dragons are the size of a water dragon technique dragon.
    Notes: Can only be used once per battle.
    Notes: No Eight Inner gates Techniques the next turn.
    Notes: Only a single element per usage.
    Notes: The speed of the dragons is tremendous, be them released at the speed of the seventh gate and the user giving his/her all in each of them.
    ~All Declined~ Still overpowered. And the last one, 7th Gate Speed for the dragons? Really?
    ~Declined~ Sorry, I can't allow you to add elemental chakra to this. It's already strong and fast enough as is.

    (Raiton: Raitoningu Purazuma) - Lightning release: Lightning Plasma
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will concentrate his raiton chakra on either or both hands and mold it with 2 handseals. Then he'll proceed by punching forwards and making thousands of small light-like surges of yellow lightning rush everywhere. By themselves each stream is able to numb the area they touch and give quite a shock, yet the importance comes when two beams intercross. Basically, the opponent will feel as if trapped in a cage of shinning yellow beams surrounding him restricting the freedom of his movements. It races to the opponent at normal lightning jutsu speed also the beams may go below the ground and upwards making this no easy technique to avoid. Also the lightning streams are created in such way they emulate lightning illusion pillar making each single lightning stream extremely bright and so in combination and as they approach proggressively, they aim focefuly blind the opponent. The streams also generate a buzzing sound as they stretch, making them quite bothering for sensitive ears.
    Notes: No Lightning S-rank or higher next turn.
    Notes: No lightnig jutsus the same turn after its usage.
    Notes: Can only be used twice per battle.

    Removed lightning exlposions, lessened speed.

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. OP


    (Hachimon: Kyomon: Rozan Hyaku Ryū Ha) - Eight Gates: Gate of Wonder: One hundred Raising dragons
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A (+40 if you want to add elemental chakra, this only available to Eight Inner Gates Masters)
    Damage: 80
    Description: After Opening the seventh gate, the user will begin a barrage of punches which will , as shown with daytime tiger a technique also used while in 7th gate, manifest as an intense air pressure blast but in shape of lung dragons. The user will bombard the opponent with punches which will make the dragons come from every direction aiming to crush the opponent under their tremendous force, capable of tunneling through the ground and ravaging it leaving, deep craters (around 2 meters) in their wake. Thanks to the user's greenish sweat, the dragons will seemingly take green color appearing even more realistic. Each element infused will add a certain turn to the technique. Wind Will make the air pressure of the dragons revolt as it it was a vortex of scythes flung with the very strength of the seventh gate this does not mean 7th gate speed. Lightning will make the dragons electrified and add to their penetrative force. Fire will make the dragons to be engulfed with flames, making them capable of barring an entire forest leaving just a scorched wasteland. Earth will make the dragons impact even heavier. Water will make the dragons capable of dousing fires and strike with more power while the wind within the dragons cools it off. The Dragons direction and way of striking is dependant on the users way of punching. The dragons are the size of a water dragon technique dragon.
    Notes: Can only be used once per battle.
    Notes: No Eight Inner gates Techniques the next turn.
    Notes: Only a single element per usage.
    Notes: The speed of the dragons is tremendous, comparable to the speed of daytime tiger, but with less time of acting since the technique does not use decompression of air but it's striking capacities.

    ±± Leaving for Izuna or Roku ±±


    ~Second custom summoning contract ( I would be quitting swallows)~
    Summoning Animal: Tuatara
    Scroll Owner: The Seven-Scaled boy
    Other Users Who Have Signed Contract: None
    Summoning Boss If Existing: none currently
    Other Summoning Animals Tied To Contract: Currently None

    Origin:
    It is said if you keep going southeast from kirigakure, far beyond an endless sea where seemingly time has stopped due to the lack of winds, waves and currents, you'll reach their place. It is an elysian archiepielago of lush, green islands called the eternal nest or, in their mother toungue, mutunga kore kōhanga.

    General Description:
    Tuataras or sphenodons, are reptiles which look like lizards, however they are not related whatsoever. They are incredibly long-living and some are even considered living fossils. They are fast, agile, flexible and nimble. Also they have limited regenration capabilties, they can snap off their tail and then regenerate it. Also they posses spikes on their backs which can be stiffened up.

    Summon General Abilities:
    In size, tuatara's vary, from their real life-size to sizes above humans or even large summon sizes.
    Thanks to their incredible life-force and regenerative abilties, the tuataras are fearless (although not immortal of course) to attack and opponent. They can walk on all fours for maximum speed or in a bipedal way. Their claws are comparable to ninja tool metal (they can run their chakra through them to increase damage), also they are capable of handseals. The tuatara's are a complex tribe, divided into 5 districts depending on their elemental affinity and the royal family capable using two or more elements. Barring the ninjutsu, tuatara's are shown as fans of hand-to-hand combat usually carrying weapons to battle (metal claws, tail claws, scythes, daggers, bows) usually stringing intense combos aiming to surprise the opponent(s). They communicate in human words or even sounds often camouflaged as bird calls and surroundings sounds which can only be understood by signers of the contract. The spikes on their backs can be hardened to land piecing and curshing impacts in taijutsu (they extend all around their back including all of the shoulders).

    Summoning:
    The canon summoning jutsu will bring forth a single Tuatara's (per usage) from the districts the size of 2m when biped, clad in light-metal plated armour (like the first hokage's) with a claw/mace on their tail and another weapon; while also being able to use elemental jutsus of their affinities C-rank or below 5 times per summon and creating a A-ranked blast when combining his affinity with the user's elemental chakra in a collaboration jutsu once per summon (all count as a move). Also the cannon summoning jutsu can be used for bringing up to ten real-life sized tuatara's which don't have any weapons nor elemental jutsus and can be used for scouting/guarding. Summoming with higher and more specific amounts of chakra will bring forth specific summons to the arena which will be submitted later.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tuatara


    ±± Declined ±± Contract already taken: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=4690
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±





    Summoning Animal: Raccoon

    Scroll Owner: Lazyboi

    Other Users Who Have Signed Contract: None

    Summoning Boss If Existing: The Great Rabid

    Other Summoning Animals Tied To Contract: Currently None

    Description and Background:
    After Drawing Blood from anywhere on the Body the user than performs 3 Handseals and Slams the palm of their hands against any surface Causing The Great Rabid: Raccoon to appear with a Fierce Rawr and/or Having a Summoning Scroll with The Users Blood all ready on it, the User than opens the scroll while laying on any flat surface and performs 1 hand seal to Summon The Great Rabid: Raccoon. TGR[The Great Rabid] can be summoned anywhere from Mid-Long Range. TGR[The Great Rabid] is 3/4's[75%] the size of Gamabunta. TGR[The Great Rabid] is capable of Running at High Speeds, Jumping High Distances, Climbing anything, and Viscously tearing almost anything apart due to his extremely large razor sharp teeth and his Razor sharp nails. Both his Teeth and Nails are harder than steel. TGR[The Great Rabid] has rubbery like material as the skin on his hands making him able to deflect S-rank Lightning Techniques, TGR is also able to perform Earth Techniques up to S-rank with out needing to perform Hand signs. TGR can also perform Wind and Fire Techniques up to S-rank with one hand seal, While he does not perform any Water Techniques. Due to his Blubbery type skin underneath his Fur, he can deflect Earth and Water Techniques up to S-rank, Fire how ever can still harm him [if not avoided/blocked] since he has fur. Being a raccoon, he possess heavy poison in his mouth called Rabies, if bit or taken in through any wounds can cause the person(s) to become infected, it's an B-Rank Poison so it's curable, if not cured within' 3 turns the infected person(s) body becomes useless and rendering them incapable of fighting and are subject to whatever fate the User has decided for them. Raccoons are mostly nocturnal so in day time TGR can see but not as well has he can see in the Dark or in Foggy areas, so during the daylight TGR relies mostly on he's heightened Hearing, Feeling[Touching], and Smelling senses. TGR is able to see through dense weather conditions due to him being mainly Nocturnal. TGR is B-Rank in Taijutsu attacks.
    Note: Any Technique performed by The Great Rabid: Raccoon counts as a move of the User
    Note: TGR can only be summoned once per-battle and can only be on the battlefield for 4 turns.
    Note: Only accessible to people who have signed the TGR: R Contract


    ±± Declined ±± Please follow proper template when submitting a summoning contract. You mixed the contract with a summon.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Mentsu Masuku) Water Style: Face Mask
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrates his suiton chakra and makes an orb of water materialize anywhere in the battle field (within the said range). The orb for example can be materialized on an opponents face, allowing the user to drown an opponent who may be standing on dry ground.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No S-rank water jutsu on same turn.

    ±± Declined ±± this is very similar to many techniques, including one i have.


    (Doton: Hebi Kyouran) - Earth release: Snakes Frenzy
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After using Swamp of the underworld the user does one hand seal and concentrates his chakra on the swamp to make several (Maximum of 7) snakes to emerge from the swamp and head towards the target at fast pace, these snakes are roughly around 1 meter long and have the strength of an average snake, meaning they can bind the opponent and easily stop him from moving but they can also be destroyed easily with the appropriate technique.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: can only be used after Swamp of the underworld.
    Note: User can make the snakes emerge from anywhere in the swamp.
    Note: No S-rank Earth technique next turn.

    ±± Approved ±± Edited. This is more a B-Rank


    Approval of Stick Insects contract.

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Toshishita Otome) - Summoning Technique: Younger daughter
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates a small amount of his chakra and after performing the needed hand seals he summons a baby stick insect who has no abilities what so ever but sticks to the user as she is usually scared of strangers, whether they're the enemy or other people near the person who has summoned her. However as the baby insect cannot look after herself she can summon another stick insect who gets summoned in order to look after her, she can do this when she wants or when she feels threatened, the summoning of the other stick insect does not count as one of the users move as it is done by the baby insect. (the other stick insect she summons can be any random stick insect made by the user.)
    Note: Takes 2 or 3 turns before other stick insect appears on the battlefield.
    Note: Stick insect is summoned right next to the baby insect.


    Feel free to add or take away anything ^_^


    ±± Declined ±± any move your summon does, counts as your own.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Plx edit them, to approve them :izuna:


    Fuuton kyojin torune-do - Wind Release giant tornado
    Typeffensive
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90 (-20 to user)
    Description:The user quickly inhales some air from his surrounding and at the same point of time he even releases his chakra in the surrounding in a rotating pattern and then he releases the inhaled wind which is now infused with his chakra now again in a rotating pattern then using that wind as an epic center of the tornado and using the nearby wind which is infused by users chakra he starts to rotate the surrounding wind in tremendous speed and velocity and with great cutting power and releases that tornado in a horizontal manner towards the opponent with whole his might ..

    #can only be used by gitanshu and people who he has taught it#
    #Must have mastery over Wind#
    #Can only be used 2 times and with a interval of 2 turn between it's use#
    #No S-rank or above in the next turn it is used due to exhausation #
    #No wind in the same turn it is used #



    Raiton butoukai - Lightning Release, ball
    Typeffensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user sends chakra in his palms and then create bolts of lightning appear in both his hand and then quickly bring them close to each other and release it in a shape of ball with lightning sparks constantly out of it which upon contact posses the power of paralyzing
    #can only be used by gitanshu and people who he has taught it#
    #Can only be used 3 times #



    ±± Both Declined ±± First one already exists as a village custom and second one is a blunt copy of a cannon one.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Divine,Blade of Heaven
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:80
    Description:The Divine Blade of Heaven is a duel wielding sword and Bow at once.The user can split the blade into 2 swords and use both for close range combat.They can also be put together to form a Bow and the user can channel there selected element and fire element enhanced arrows at the enemy.The also can be be twirled at a powerful pace to start tornadoes all over the battlefield.
    -Can only be used by XxFallenUchihaxX
    -Blade cannot be held by others as there hand will be stung
    -Must have training in specific element in order to use arrows
    -Tornadoes last 3 turns and blade cannot use ability for 2 turns


    ±± Declined ±± so many infusable bows and swords and double swords... :/
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton Kuchiyose Feza arashi kujo Summoning Lightning style Feather Storm Destruccion
    Type: Summoning/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will the follwing hand seals (Tiger>Boar>Ox>Rooster>Snake) and slam his hand on the ground. After doing so a flock of Blue Jays covered in Lightning will appear and charge at the opponent. Causing Paralizes and Damage.
    -Note-
    Can only be used by those who have signed the Blue Jay Contract
    Can Only Be Taught by Sage of Darkness
    Can only be used twice in a Battle

    ±± Declined ±± Work the description a bit better, its messy.


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    Kuchiyose Skyrus Summoning Skyrus
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will bite his/her thumb. After doing so he will slam his hand on the ground and call fourth Skyrus The Mighty Blue Jay Guardian. Skyrus has a strong affinity to wind. He is a bit smaller than Gamabunta but he is a fierce opponent.He can fly up to speeds of 70miles. He mastered the wind element back in Celestia The Home of the Blue Jays. Skyrus is able to use Wind Techs S-Ranks and below without the need for hand seals and is unaffected by Wind Jutsu's Rank C and below.
    -Note-
    Can Only be on the field for 4 turns.
    Must Have signed the Blue Jay Contract to use.
    Can Only be Taught by Sage of Darkness.
    Can only be summoned once.

    ±± Approved ±± Edited


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    Katon Kuchiyose Enkou Feza arashi Summoning fire style Flame Feather Storm
    Type: Offensive/Summoning
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description: The user will make the follwing Hand seals (Snake>Rooster>Ox>Boar>Tiger) After doing so he will slam his hands on the ground summoning a flock of Blue Jays covered in flames. Those Blue Jays will Head towards the enemy and strike them thus creating several burns and damage.

    -Note-
    Can Only be used by those who signed the Blue Jay Contract
    Can only be taught by Sage of Darkness
    Can Only be used twice in battle

    ±± Declined ±± Same issue as with the lightning one


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    (Mukei Mizu Megami Shuu)-Holy Water Goddess State
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:100
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Chakra is focused to every part of the users body.The users body takes on a liquid like form while staying in human likeness. The user still have the mobility of a human and can still physically touch things at will. While in this mode, water jutsu is easier. Certain jutsu like Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique, that require 44 handseals, will be brought down to 10 handseals. Another Example is if a water jutsu requires 5 handseals it would only need 1 handseal. Also while in this mode, the user is only permitted to use Water jutsu, ninjutsu, genjutsu, and Taijutsu. In this state, the users water jutsu get a +20 power increase and a -10 chakra requirement for the jutsu to be performed. This state renders the user impervious to physical attacks or attack from any weapon(unless stated otherwise). The user may draw in water from other sources to increase their size or regrow certain limbs that may have been lost in battle. The user can also manipulate their body into certain weapon shapes.
    Restrictions:
    - Can only be taught be Daemon
    - Must have completed water training.
    - State only lasts 5 turns
    - Once state is deactivated, the user is left exhausted, Movements are slowed down and no water jutsu for the rest of the battle due to the usage of all water chakra available to the user.
    - In this mode, the user must stay hydrated to keep it going for the full 5 turns.

    ±± Pending ±± I find this Ridiculously OP but i'll get you a second opinion on this


    (Tate no Hiramekarei )- Shield of Hiramekarei
    Type: Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:the user envelopes their chakra around Hiramekarei. The chakra protrudes out of the sword forming a large wall in front of the user.This jutsu can defend up to A-rank jutsu.
    (can be used 3 times per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)
    (Only usable if the user wields Hiramekarei)

    (Sekisho no Hiramekarei )- Barrier of Hiramekarei
    Type: Defense
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:the user envelopes their chakra around Hiramekarei. The chakra protrudes out of the sword forming a large wall in front of the user. the chakra wall will expand till it makes a dome or chakra around the user. This jutsu can defend S-rank techniques
    (can be used 2 times per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)
    (Only usable if the user wields Hiramekarei)


    ±± Both Declined ±± Second one completely overcomes the concept of the sword itself, first one has been made countless times before in ninjutsu (i have one like that) and in custom weapons also.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Kira.. View Post
    (Genesis | Exodus) - Genesis | Exodus
    Type: Genjutsu; Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The target, though still very much alive, repeatedly halucinates the deaths of each person they have killed from a first hand perspective. Though still completely consious (and not dead in any way) this Genjutsu manipulates not the sence of sight, hearing, taste, or scent, but the sense of feel, forcing them to repeatedly expirience pain and anguish. The Genjutsu has two phases: Genesis and Exodus. In Genesis, as previously explained, for five turns the user expiriences extreme pain and anguish of all whom they have killed, though still capable of fighting. After five turns, this jutsu enters the Exodus stage, in which the brain can no long take the excessive pain and, due to the extreme stress, a coronary artery spasm is caused, and the target suffers a heart attack.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~After use, the user will no longer be able to use Genjutsu for the remainder of the battle.
    ~Should the user suffer extreme pain themselves, the Genjutsu is broken.
    ~The user cannot control the timing of the pain, rather it is a constant entity that must be discontinued from an internal or external sorce.


    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. OP




    (Roshida Jutsu: Tenshi no Uta) - Roshida Jutsu: Song of the Angels
    Type: Genjutsu; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sings a beautiful song that causes the opponent to fall asleep and hallucinate that they are still completing the task they were previously occupying themselves with. Their body goes numb, losing their sense of feel.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user will not be able to use A-Rank or Above Genjutsu for the remainder of the battle.
    ~The user cannot use any other Roshida jutsu in the same turn.
    ~Can only be used by a hummingbird or a human in Roshida Mode.

    ±± Declined ±± Is this a sound genjutsu? If so...it lacks serious restrictions. Also, going numb? So he can't feel pain if he stabs himself? LOL Not going to happen.




    (Roshida Jutsu: Tori no Kuchi) - Roshida Jutsu: Mouth of Birds
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user bites their tongue, leaking blood onto the summoning tattoo placed on it. The user then opens their mouth, and thousands of sharp-beaked hummingbirds of the sword-billed variety who attack the target from all angles.
    ~Can only be used a maximum of twice per battle.
    ~Cannot be used with any other non-humming bird jutsu in the same turn.
    ~The user must be a hummingbird or a human in Roshida Mode.


    ±± Declined ±± First things first, why is this S-Rank? Second bolded restriction...whats that about? It doesn't make sense. Third, restrictions?
    (Roshida Jutsu: Tenshi no Uta) - Roshida Jutsu: Song of the Angels
    Type: Genjutsu; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sings a beautiful song clouded with Roshida chakra that causes the opponent to fall asleep and hallucinate that they are still completing the task they were previously occupying themselves with. Their body goes numb, meaning minor wounds will not be felt.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user will not be able to use A-Rank or Above Genjutsu for the remainder of the battle.
    ~The user cannot use any other Roshida jutsu in the same turn.
    ~Can only be used by a hummingbird or a human in Roshida Mode.

    ±± Declined ±± This is still too powerful. Sound genjutsu is basically unblock able for the most part as as long as there is sound, even if you produce pain, the genjutsu sets upon the enemy again unless the source of the sound is dealt with and this one is seriously overpowered. You make your opponent sleep while he thinks nothing is happening differently than when he was awake and yet you also numb his body so minor things can't break the genjutsu, You also make this Long range and yet the restrictions barely restrict you. Sorry, but again, tone the technique down.


    (Hachidori Jutsu: Genesis) - Hummingbird Jutsu: Genesis
    Type: Summoning; Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user creates a larger and longer-ranged version of Hachidori Hands that is more closely related to a summoning than a unique jutsu. The user performs a single hand seal, and a large bird head with its beak opened emerges from the ground, defending the user or ensnaring the target. The beak of the bird is extremely thick and strong, like that of Kaguya bone, however easily succumbs to an equal or greater strength attack.
    ~Can only be used once per battle, and cannot be used in conjunction with another summon that is activated in the same turn.
    ~Can be used on land, water, or in air.
    ~Cannot be used after the user has exited Roshida mode, but can be used during Roshida Mode.

    ±± Declined ±± Are you summoning the hummingbird? Or is this a technique? the description is confusing


    (Roshida Jutsu: Exodus) - Roshida Jutsu: Exodus
    Type: Summoning; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: In this "form" of Hachidori Hands, the user takes a completely different method. As opposed to creating a beak or head, the user creates wing in the form of a bird attached to their back, making the user capable of flight after performing the bird hand seal.
    ~Can only be used for a maximum of five turns.
    ~The wings are strong in the sense that they act like an extension of the users body, like a sword wielded in the users arm. As a result, there may be a delay in the amount of time the user can react to certain movements due to their sheer size and attachment rather than spontaneous growth.
    ~The user cannot use any form of Hachidori Hands - including Hummingbird Jutsu: Genesis - while using this jutsu.
    ~This jutsu counts as a summon, and can only be used once per battle, due to the fact Roshida Mode can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be used by a human in Roshida Mode.


    ±± Declined ±± Same as above. Also, it would help if you quote or link this "Hachidori Hands"
     
         
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    (Bodi sono fenikkusu) Body of the phoenix
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short/long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user will coat his whole body in flames and slam his chest.Once the user has slammed his chest he will use shape manipulation to turn the flames on his arms into wings attached to the user.Once he has made these wings he controls the wings/fire on his arms by moving them back and forward at high speeds granting him the power of flight.Once he is surrounded by the flames he is able to to withstand getting hit by attack sending the attack straight through him like the he is made purely out of fire.The user is also able to send the fire around him into fire attacks.To turn his body fully into fire he must cover every inch of his body into fire.
    Note:
    -Once the wings are created you only last two turns in the air but the fire remains
    -Can only create the wings every two turns and last two turns
    -To withstand attack sending them straight through him only can take attack up to a rank or b rank wind techniques.
    -Can only allows the user to send attack through him every three turns for one attack.
    -Must have mastery over fire.
    -Can only be used/taught by foxnaruto


    ±± Declined ±± Many similar techniques exist, sorry
     
         
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    (Dokubutsu: Doku-Gouben) Posion-Pool
    Type: Offensive/Attack Summoning
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Mid Range-Long Range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The User with four quick hand seals summons a Pool of Poison directly underneath the Opponent(s) quickly and unexpected causing the Opponent(s) to fall immediately into the Pool of Poison instantly Poisoning them. Around 8 meters deep and around 6 meters wide.
    Note: If the Opponent doesn't cure themselves of the poison within 3 turns their body becomes useless rendering them unable to fight allowing the User to decide the opponents(s) fate.
    Note: After performing, the user cannot perform any other Poison Jutsu's within 3 turns.
    Note: This Jutsu can only be used twice per battle
    Note: This Jutsu can only be used by Me [Username: Lazyboi], therefore can only be taught by Me [Username: Lazyboi]




    (Kugutsu: Sono-Keiji) Combination of the 5 Basic Releases: The Apocalypse
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Long Range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The User releases Water, Wind, Fire, Lightning, and Earth Chakra into the Puppets controlled by the User causing the puppets bodies to be surrounded in Wind, Lightning, Fire, Water, and Earth chakra-type armor [one element per puppet] and then the user is able to launch the puppets into the Opponent(s) without damaging the puppets but dealing Great damage - if not Killing the Opponents and causing catastrophic damage to the terrain that was hit during the attack.
    Note: This Jutsu can only be used once per battle
    Note: This Jutsu lasts for 2 turns
    Note: After performing this jutsu the user cannot perform any S-rank Ninjutsu for 3 turns
    Note: This Jutsu can Only be used by Me [Username: Lazyboi], therefore can Only taught by Me [Username: Lazyboi].


    ±± Both Declined ±± Do not resubmit. You need medical training to use the first one and the second one has a very similar technique already
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by XxFallenUchihaxX View Post
    Divine,Blade of Heaven
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:80
    Description:The Divine Blade of Heaven is a duel wielding sword and Bow at once.The user can split the blade into 2 swords and use both for close range combat.They can also be put together to form a Bow and the user can channel there selected element and fire element enhanced arrows at the enemy.The also can be be twirled at a powerful pace to start tornadoes all over the battlefield.
    -Can only be used by XxFallenUchihaxX
    -Blade cannot be held by others as there hand will be stung
    -Must have training in specific element in order to use arrows
    -Tornadoes last 3 turns and blade cannot use ability for 2 turns.

    Summoning Animal:Penguins*
    Scroll Owner:XxFallenUchihaxX
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:Pesgo,Lord of Penguins
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Tenzen,the Fire Penguin
    Description and Background:Penguins (order Sphenisciformes, family Spheniscidae) are a group of aquatic, flightless birds living almost exclusively in the southern hemisphere, especially in Antarctica. Highly adapted for life in the water, penguins have countershaded dark and white plumage, and their wings have become flippers. Most penguins feed on krill, fish, squid, and other forms of sealife caught while swimming underwater. They spend about half of their lives on land and half in the oceans.
    Penguins exist, they are mine. I got them a year or so ago
    Due to my inactivity afterward, I haven't put them on the official list, so I can see how you woud think it free.


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    ( 主 Kamiumi 主 Hisureiya 主 Kaiyo no Ketsuchoryu 主 ) 主 God Creation Myth 主 Fireslayer 主 Blood Tide of the Ocean 主
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (+10 per turn )
    Damage: 90
    Description:
    The use of this technique dips his hand into a water source, and withdraws it. As he withdraws it, a dark blue shimmering blade of highly compressed mist forms in his hand, the mist being formed from the water of the water source. There is so much mist compressed in such a small area, that the blade looks nearly as if it were made of solid blue metal.
    The blade can thus be used much as a normal katana would, and is much sharper, allowing it to cut through B-ranked techniques and below with ease.
    However, the true power of this technique lies in its ability to combat fire. With each slash of the sword, a large amount of cool, dense mist is released in the area of the slash, effectively stopping any and all fire and heat from entering the area. The mist is so dense it actually looks like a flow of water has been released. As it is mist, however, on contact with fire, it not only quenches the heat but recondenses quickly on evaporation due to the presence of other mist particles and repeatedly retards any fire in that area.
    With this technique activated, the user can merely slash at an incoming fire technique to harmlessly disperse it. Even if the incoming technique attacks from different directions, slashing around the area of the user prevents the fire from encroaching into it.
    With the Blood Tide of the Ocean in hand, the user cannot use any water techniques at all while he holds it, severely limiting his offensive abilities with water to only short-range slashes. Also, the sword is incapable of warding off advanced fire elements beyond A-rank repeatedly, and disperses after defending against one advanced fire technique of a higher rank. Furthermore, it can only be created once, and can be destroyed by a sufficiently powerful earth technique. Also, while the sword is in hand, the user cannot release the EIG, summon or go to Sage Mode, as all these activities cause a sudden large-scale fluctuation in the user's chakra that disrupts the sword.


    ±± Declined ±± Love the idea and its brilliantly worded. Just need you to define the bolded parts better and its good to go. So B-Rank techniques...regardless of size, natures, kgs, etc? Any fire? CE fires also? Scorch? Advanced fire techniques...how come? do you mean any technique above A-Rank? For me it would make sense some sort of limitation in terms of how many techniques you can stop with this and i'd allow 2 Forbidden rank Fire techniques max, while no limit in its duration for S-ranks and below in terms of fire. Also, to be a Forbidden rank it needs to do damage to yourself. This damage needs to manifest in the form of exhaustion, lack of speed, pain or something similar after the technique ends. Also, you need to define a max duration for this knowing it won't last more than 4 turns.
    ( 主 Kamiumi 主 Hisureiya 主 Kaiyo no Ketsuchoryu 主 ) 主 God Creation Myth 主 Fireslayer 主 Blood Tide of the Ocean 主
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (+10 per turn )
    Damage: 90
    Description:
    The use of this technique dips his hand into a water source, and withdraws it. As he withdraws it, a dark blue shimmering blade of highly compressed mist forms in his hand, the mist being formed from the water of the water source. There is so much mist compressed in such a small area, that the blade looks nearly as if it were made of solid blue metal.
    The blade can thus be used much as a normal katana would, and is much sharper, allowing it to cut through B-ranked techniques and below with ease - depending of course on whether or not they have a form ( and are not formless, like lightning or wind ).
    However, the true power of this technique lies in its ability to combat fire. With each slash of the sword, a large amount of cool, dense mist is released in the area of the slash, effectively stopping any and all fire and heat from entering the area. There are however, restrictions to what ranks of various fire elements can be stopped; see the end of the technique for details. The mist is so dense it actually looks like a flow of water has been released. As it is mist, however, on contact with fire, it not only quenches the heat but recondenses quickly on evaporation due to the presence of other mist particles and repeatedly retards any fire in that area.
    With this technique activated, the user can merely slash at an incoming fire technique to harmlessly disperse it. Even if the incoming technique attacks from different directions, slashing around the area of the user prevents the fire from encroaching into it.
    With the Blood Tide of the Ocean in hand, the user cannot use any water techniques at all while he holds it, severely limiting his offensive abilities with water to only short-range slashes. Also, the sword is incapable of warding off advanced fire elements ( SunFire, White Fire, etc. ) beyond A-rank repeatedly, and disperses after defending against one advanced fire technique of a higher rank. The sword can block an unlimited number of S-rank and below normal fire techniques but only two Forbidden rank fire techniques before it disperses; it can block an unlimited number of A-rank and below advanced fire techniques but only one above that; and since Scorch evaporates water, it cannot defend against even B-rank techniques of Scorch. Furthermore, it can only be created once, and can be destroyed by a sufficiently powerful earth technique. Also, while the sword is in hand, the user cannot release the EIG, summon or go to Sage Mode, as all these activities cause a sudden large-scale fluctuation in the user's chakra that disrupts the sword. The user's body comes under severe stress, leaving him in pain and unable to perform Taijutsu above B-Rank for three turns after the sword is destroyed or disperses. The sword can only be wielded for 4 turns max, before dispersing.

    ( Fuuton: Koshokeidai ) - Wind Release: Gallows Frame
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    A simple but effective wind technique for assassinations, the user makes three handseals causing the wind around the target's throat to form itself into a noose that suddenly binds the target's throat and lifts them up a metre, leaving them dangling - much like they have been hanged. This technique is particularly useful for taking out weak opponents or clones, but any experienced ninja will have enough time even after he is "hanged" to pull off a technique of some sort to free himself. The Byakugan can spot the chakra forming around the throat, and hence Hyuuga have more time to prepare a counter. Also, the Sharingan can spot the chakra forming - but unlike the Byakugan, since they cannot see in every direction and are likely to be staring at their opponent instead of at their own neck, still only have the same time as normal ninja - though this is, as stated before, sufficient.


    ±± Both Approved ±± Had to edit the first one. Love the second one.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal: Hornets
    Scroll Owner: Melizzle
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Jaune the Queen
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Lumière and Marée
    The summoner can use either a scroll of any size their choose or a tattoo that requires a swipe of their blood to call on the hornets. These hornets are lead by a royal family of fierce warriors that each specialize in an elemental jutsu and a special sting. They can fly as well as speak with humans but Aburame may also communicate with them through the clan secret of their bug communication.

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Suzumebachi Yakujou: Jaune) Hornet Summon: Jaune
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Jaune is the boss and queen of the royal family. She is a black and yellow, very large Hornet about twice the size of Lumière and Marée making her about the size of a city bus. Jaune is an Earth style user and can eat through Earth allowing her to burrow and make large holes. A sting from Jaune to a humanoid will kill however if she stings something closer to her size that being's speed will be slowed to 20% for two turns.
    -Can be summoned once per battle
    -Lasts three turns
    -Can carry up to two people on her back at a time

    ±± Declined ±± Ok she is an earth user...is her only ability to borrow in the earth? Notice that as a flying summon she'd only be able to use most (almost all) earth technique while in contact with the ground. Also, you forgot the chakra information.


    Note: Got permission from scarface who holds a similar contract.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Hyouton: Onifea) Ice Release: Demon of Fear
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40 (only if hit by explosion)
    Description: The user will release water and wind chakra infront of themselves then make two handseals, and create a wall of Ice in the shape of a demons face. The wall will be created in short range of the user, and will beformed by pushing the water towards the opponent while at the same time freezing it, as it flys at the opponent. Once the wall/face is fully created it will drop and hit the ground, Then the user has only to hit the wall to smash through it but if the wall is hit it will explode in a mass of needles which fly at the opponent from the face and stab through the opponent.
    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    - Must be of the Yuki clan.
    - No Ice the next turn.
    Demon of Fear Pic


    ±± Declined ±± What exactly did you change? Bold the changes you've made. Also, wrong chakra and damage infos
    All i did was make it Attack type. and fixed the chakra and damage.

    (Hyouton: Onifea) Ice Release: Demon of Fear
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (only if hit by explosion)
    Description: The user will release water and wind chakra infront of themselves then make two handseals, and create a wall of Ice in the shape of a demons face. The wall will be created in short range of the user, and will beformed by pushing the water towards the opponent while at the same time freezing it, as it flys at the opponent. Once the wall/face is fully created it will drop and hit the ground, Then the user has only to hit the wall to smash through it but if the wall is hit it will explode in a mass of needles which fly at the opponent from the face and stab through the opponent.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - Must be of the Yuki clan.
    - No water or wind above S-Rank in the same and next turn and no ice in the next turn.
    Demon of Fear Pic

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Batto: Batto Bomu) Bat Style: Bat Bomb
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user summones multiple bats (in short range) that fly around the opponent (in short, mid or long range of the user), then lach themselves onto the opponent. The user then makes a handseal and then the bats explode (If the user is in short range of the explosion he takes half the damage himself.).
    - Must have signed Bat contract.
    - Can be used 3 times per battle.
    - Cannot be used with any other Bat style jutsu in the same turn.
    Part 1 of jutsu (summoning and bats flying)
    Part 2 of jutsu (Bats explosion)

    ±± Approved ±±



    Summoning Animal: Hagfish
    Scroll Owner: -Tauburn-
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: (Will be posted if approved.)
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a
    Hagfish wiki link
    Description and Background: Hagfish are eel-shaped slime-producing marine animals (occasionally called slime eels). They are the only living animals that have a skull but not a vertebral column. Along with lampreys, hagfish are jawless and are living fossils; hagfish are basal to vertebrates, and living hagfish remain similar to hagfish 300 million years ago.
    Abilities:
    - Hagfish have elongated, eel-like bodies, and paddle-like tails. They have cartilaginous skulls (although the part surrounding the brain is composed primarily of a fibrous sheath) and tooth-like structures composed of keratin.
    - Hagfish are long and vermiform, and can exude copious quantities of a slime or mucus of unusual composition. They secrete the microfibrous slime, which expands into a gelatinous and sticky goo when combined with water.


    ±± Approved ±± You found a cool animal. The slime has endless possibilities
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by mangekyo byakugan View Post
    Link to mouse contract


    Summoning Technique: Imado (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Imado )
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:* The user after cutting his thumb and performing the required hand seals summons Imado the lightning element mouse. Imado stands at the height of Manda and has a body length that of Gambuta. Imado is light blue in color.

    ~Can only use up to A rank lightning techniques.
    ~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
    ~Lasts three turns.

    ±± Declined ±± a summon the size of Gamabunta and Manda isn't an A-Rank. Also, something that big can only be summoned once and up to 4 turns max. It can use up to S-Rank lightning that you know.

    ____________________________

    Summoning Technique: Dimai (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Dimai)
    Type: Supplemntary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:* The user cuts his thumb and performs the required handseals summons Dimai the Wind Element mouse. Dimai stands as the same height of his brother Imado. Dimai is white in color

    ~ Can only use up to A rank wind techniques.
    ~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
    ~Lasts three turns.

    ±± Declined ±± Same as above.

    ______________________


    Weapon: Sulpher (Buki: Sulpher)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:* The sword sulpher is a sword special of it's kind it is one of a kind because it is the fusion of the cat Sulpher and it's owner Vayne Aurelius of the Inuzuka clan this is a variation of the beast technique used by Akamaru and his owner. The sword is attached to the wielder's shoulder and reaches the user's ankles in length. This sword is made up of a material that is unbreakable. Sulpher also comes with a shield that covers the other side of the user's hand this shield can block lightning and fire techniques up to C rank.

    ~Can only be used by a Vayne Aurelius bio.
    ~Must have permission to use it by mangekyo byakugan.
    ~Can only stop C rank Fire and lightning techniques.
    ~Must be from Inuzuka clan.
    ~his counts as two moves due to using combination technique also.
    ~Must be the owner of Sulpher the cat.

    It looks like this

    Note: On the weapon I will keep on putting more restrictions if needed since I really want this weapon.


    ±± Declined ±± You need to explain the weapon better. It has nothing to do with restrictions. Don't understand the bolded. Also, what does this have to do with inuzuka? Look at the part i bolded and underlined...i don't understand this.
    Link to mouse contract

    Summoning Technique: Imado (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Imado )
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:* The user after cutting his thumb and performing the required hand seals summons Imado the lightning element mouse. Imado stands at the height of Manda and has a body length that of Gambuta. Imado is light blue in color.

    ~Can only use up to S rank lightning techniques that the user knows although without hand seals.
    ~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
    ~Lasts Four turns.
    ~Can only be summoned once.


    Summoning Technique: Dimai (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Dimai)
    Type: Supplemntary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:* The user cuts his thumb and performs the required handseals summons Dimai the Wind Element mouse. Dimai stands as the same height of his brother Imado. Dimai is white in color

    ~ Can only use up to S rank wind techniques that the user knows although without hand seals .
    ~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
    ~Lasts Four turns.
    ~Can only be summoned once.

    ±± Both Approved ±±

    Weapon: Sulpher (Buki: Sulpher)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:* The "weapon" Sulpher is a combination of Sulphur the cat(ninken) and it's owner vayne Aurelius this weapon is a variation of the combination technique used by the inuzuka clan in this combination Sulpher changes and becomes a sword and a shield(pic below) the shield is strong enough to block B rank water and lightning and A rank Earth techniques.

    ~Can only be used by a Vayne Aurelius bio.
    ~Must have permission to use it by mangekyo byakugan.
    ~Must be from Inuzuka clan.
    ~the usage of this weapon counts as two moves since the combination technique is used in the process of "fusing" together (Sulpher and vayne)
    ~Must be the owner of Sulpher the cat.
    -must be stated in bio to be used

    It looks like this



    ±± Declined ±± This weapon is still a mess. Reword the description and explain this better.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-13-2012 at 10:04 PM.

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