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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: Po-zu) - Illusion Style: Pause
    Rank: A
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An Illusion that that is cast on an opponent where every animation stops. The opponents sees everything around him freeze including himself, and he also sees the user freeze also if he had previously sent a projectile/or jutsu, they also seem to freeze but however in real life everything is normal and moving but the opponent who will be in a trance-like state.
    Note
    -Twice per match
    -Last two turns
    -No A-rank and above gen next turn


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    DNR.

    (Genjutsu: Okeru Seken Shuuryou) - Illusion Style: At World's End
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Sup
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user induces an opponent in an illusion where he sees chaos. Everywhere would turn hell immediately ranging from earth quakes to falling asteoids, premature volcanic eruption and massive flooding due to hurricane, dangerouz blizards and snow storms that is enough to cause something as big as National disaster. However each chaotic situation is factored with respect to the terrain the opponent is in. The flooding ofcos would be when the terrain has a large water source(say lake or ocean), and the volcanic eruption where there should be at least a mountian on the terrain and so on. The opponent would see himself and the user engulfed in the situation which gives him no idea its of the users doing. In real life, the opponent is just standing there while the user uses this opening to launch an attack.
    The opponent also mentally surfers every damage done by the disaster.
    -Useable only twice per match
    -No S-rank and above gen in the same turn and next
    -Last for 2 turns

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    Why does seeing the world end (so to speak) do damage to your opponent and what is happening to him in reality?

    (Ninpou: Finga Furiku) - Ninja Art: Finger Flick
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges enormous amount of chakra while compressing it into his middle finger. He builds up the middle finger's force by holding it down with the thumb. The user then releases the thumb leaving the middle finger to catapult invisible compressed chakra powerful enough to bring down a building.
    -No S-rank Ninjutsu in the next turn
    -Useable only 3 times per battle
    -Must wait after one turns to re-use

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    Don't copy other people's techniques. This is a copy of my own technique. Cali made it as well for his CE. DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Setsudan | Illusion Technique: Mutilation
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary | Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A(-80 from the stress of the mental torture)
    Description: The user places an opponent in a genjutsu in which their skin/body cracks into what appears to be little shreds of flesh and is then blown away by a flowing breeze, hence removing a body part completely. This idea is gotten from the way the body part of someone resurrected via the Edo Tensei reforms after it has taken a hit. But in this genjutsu, instead of reforming, the body is being deformed. To add flair to the usage of this genjutsu, the user can effect selected parts of the opponent's body with it, thus rendering those body parts unuseable in reality. For instance, the user can, in the genjutsu, cause the opponent's arms to crack and be blown away/erased by the breeze, making them armless; but in reality, because of the mental torture of not having arms anymore, the opponent would be unable to use their arms as they would be numb, paralysed, lifeless. It can be used to affect the opponent's eyes, rendering them blind; their ears, rendering them deaf and so on.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Naizen.

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    Too high level. Too powerful in its effects.

    Ame no Inpei | Rain Concealment
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced form of (Amegakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Rain Technique, hence it is more stable and usable than the latter is. It requires that the user performs 3 hand-seals, allowing them to perfectly conceal themselves in rain and at the same time move at a really fast pace without being spotted easily. This technique on activation not only causes the users body to mimic the rain but also focuses chakra beneath the users feet, hence making their steps lighter than normal so that when they step on a puddle of water, instead of creating a splash, only a calm ripple is formed. What makes the creation of the ripples by the user's quick and light steps hard to spot is that they keep stepping on places were ripples are being created by raindrops. This skill completely masks the ripples made by the user's quick steps in the ripples made by the raindrops on water. By following the ripples that lead to his destination with his quick and light steps, the user is able to move at a moderate speed which is trackable by 3T sharingan and above. If this technique is used in rain created by the user, it completely fools the Sharingan and the Rinnegan as the chakra signatures of the rain and the user would be the same but it is unable to fool the Byakugan.
    -Concealment lasts for 5 turns but can be deactivated by the user whenever they wish.
    -Usable 3 times per match and the user has to wait 2 turns before each activation.
    -Requires Rain training to learn.
    -Can only be taught by Naizen

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    DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-18-2013 at 10:41 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suiton: Mizu Tekkidan | Water Release: Water Grenade
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: the user will materialize a large amount of water into one or two hands under the form of a compressed water sphere the size of a normal apple. He will then hurl the sphere at his target. Upon contact or upon the users will, the sphere will detonate, releasing about 200m3 of water in a flash. The decompression is so violent that it actually does more concussive and impact damage than a normal explosion, obliterating an area short range around the impact point. The grenade can be set up to stick to a target if the user has inbued it with the sticky properties of the Sticky Infusion technique, exploding at the users will. The limitation of the technique is that the projectile needs to be hurled at the enemy, making its trajectory and its range and speed dependent on the users physical strenght and the istuation where he is using it. The water of the technique is kept on the battlefield and can be used as a water source for other techniques. If the sticky infusion has been used, the grenade gains +20 damage since the thicker liquid will make for a much stronger impact damage.

    Note: can only be used 3 times
    Note: cannot used water release techniques above A-Rank on the same turn
    Note: can only be taught by Scorps
    ||Declined|| Similar Technique Exists

    Katon: Hai to Kitai Chunyu | Fire Release: Ash and Gas Infusion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: N/A (+5 to mold Fire techniques)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Similar to Water Release: Sticky Infusion, the user will make all his following fire techniques produce either the flammable, scolding hot ash of ( Katon: Haisekishō ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning Technique or the flammable toxic gas of ( Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique. This doesn't add any damage or range to the technique, rather simply making it produce either ash or gas. Off course this cannot be applied to all techniques, only those that would be logically possible to produce either Gas or Ash and still be usable. Activating this ability is instant and not time consuming.
    Note: Once activated lasts 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used 2 times
    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    ||Approved|| With some minor changes.

    Panda Hijutsu: Wuxi Yubi no Haaku | Panda Hidden Art: The Wuxi Finger Hold
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damange: 90 (+20 if used with elemental chakra)
    Description:
    One of the most devastating Nintaijutsu moves known to Pandas, the legend of the Wuxi Finger Hold is as great as is the rarity of those who can use it. The user will, when facing an enemy in taijutsu, grab hold of his hand, finger, knee, elbow, etc, basically the extremity with which the enemy is attacking him, between his index and thumb, with his own pinky held upright. Then, focusing a very large amount of compressed chakra, the user will flex his pinky sending it all through the enemy's body. This causes massive damage as the chakra is conducted trhough the enemy directly. As a result, the chakra bursts out of him and sends a shockwave all around, clearing the area mid range around which is left as a "steaming" crater with the enemy and the user standing in the middle. The enemy doesn't move as a result of technique, since the technique isn't an impact on him but rather the channeling of that large chakra onto him. The damage is, however, enough to knock an enemy out cold in one hit. If the user is awesome he can say in a dramatic way something like "squadoosh", "kaboom" or "kapow" upon lowering his pinky, giving that much drama to the scene. The legends and mental pressure of facing such a technique is enormous and the enemy will genuinely feel afraid to move while the user is holding him. The effect is somewhat a mimic of what Killing Intent produces but not nearly as powerful, producing only minor shivers and the sensation of fear. By adding elemental chakra the user is able to increase the damage and its properties, although also increasing the damage to himself in return. Adding Wind damage produces massive cuts all over the enemy, Fire leaves him burnt as the chakra channels through him, Water ripples through his body, damaging his soft tissues, Earth damages his bones and fractures many of the smaller ones and lightning electrifies the enemy, which can lead to heart failure.
    Note: usable once
    Note: cannot use hand based Taijutsu for 2 turns
    Note: user takes 15 damage and suffers an additional 20 damage if he uses it with elemental chakra.
    Note: Can only be used by Panda masters
    Note: can only be taught by Scorps.
    ||Approved|| Nice.
     
         
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    (itonami douyou ato eiga) Life's like a movie
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The user will perform a single hand seal and trap the target into a Genjutsu. This Genjutsu is different from others as although he is already trapped inside the Genjutsu he doesn't see the effects until he does one of two things; Receive a hit from the user or he makes a successful hit towards the user.When one of these two things have happened three men will appear,one from behind him,one from the left and one from the right all within four meters of the target.These men will be holding a piece of film recording equipment which can be one of three things such as a microphone,cam recorder or a green screen.The one with the green scene will appear behind the target at all time and when he appears the background behind the target will all turn white with the previous background being shown on the green screen which is 3*3 meters.The illusions will then start shouting words such as 'cut' or 'stop' as if they are on a film set and begin walking to the target showing no sign of hostile actions.The target will then believe that the whole fight has been nothing more than a mere shooting of a film scene which he is apart.The whole point towards this Genjutsu is to confuse the target and stall them.While in reality the user of the Genjutsu can target the user if he wishes portraying one of the three men unknown to the target as he will be standing in the same place as he was previous acting annoyed as the scene has to be restarted when really that is also part of the illsuion.
    -Only usable two times per fight
    -Has to be taught by Lysander
    -No other Genjutsu can be used during the same turn
    -The initial hit can be from any attack it doesn't have to be physical

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    Incorrect name. If you don't even name things correctly, I won't bother to check them.

    (kuroi soshite howaido) Black and white
    Type: Supplmentray
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will perform one hand seal and place the target into a Genjutsu. This makes the target of the Genjutsu see everything in black and white like they are in a old film.The use of this Genjutsu is to make attacks look different to what they really are to the colour being lost in them.
    -Has to be taught by Lysander
    -Only usable three time a fight

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Same as above

    (Katon: pirittokuru tei) Fire release:Hot air
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This Jutsu works similar to how people are able to float in the water.When trapped in water or surrounded by water the user will concentrate there katon chakra throughout the inside of their body making their body have katon chakra channeled throughout their body and fill with hot air.Once the user has done this he is able to float on large amounts of water or rise to the surface when trapped by water.
    -Only usable three times a fight
    -Has to be taught by Lysander

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    This would kill you and you don't need this...ever noticed that ninjas can walk on water and you have a water technique to merge with water or to swim insanely fast? And damage why? At least submit useful things please. DNR
     
         
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    (Doton: Konbeya Sanjaku)- Doton: Conveyor Belt
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs 2 handseals, then slams there hands to the ground. Causing the center of the ground between the opponent and the user to move in opposite directions. Causing the rage of the battle field to legthen.
    Note: Can change short range to mid range, mid range to long range.
    Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.

    (Katon: Yama Versuvius)- Katon: Mt. Versuvius
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user performs a long sequece of handseals. (6) Then releases a long dense stream of fire into the air. Once the stream of fire gets into the air, the user claps his hands. Causing the stream of fire to harden into molten rock and fall down all over the battle field. The rocks are the size of a small boulder.
    Note: Molten rocks fall all over the battlefield hitting the user and the opponent
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: If the user doesn't clap their hands, this jutsu can be used to warm the sky up for kirin
    Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

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    DNR. This makes no sense...fire that hardens into rock? Thats Lava genius... :sy:

    (Fuuton: Shippuu Tama)- Fuuton: Hurricane Bullet(s)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user flicks his middle finger outwards releasing a small blast of wind. By performing a single handseal, the blast of wind turns into a hurricane sending the opponent flying.
    Note: You can shot off more then one bullet
    Note: The more bullets, the less strong it is and the mre handseals
    Note: Can only be taught by Gecko


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    Don't copy other peoples techniques. I've made this and cali has as well. DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Mokushiroku:Apocalypse
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:Apocalypse is the name given to a sword which rumuor had it was forged by one of the sages son himself however that remains unclear and yet to be proven. The sword is 20 meters tall in height and was from titanium and lead and thus is indestructible. The sword though being powerful has its limits and cannot be infused with any elemental chakra. However it has two unique traits which sets it aside from other swords. The sword shares its own unique chakra signature from the user and can knock the user out a genjutsu he is casted upon by creating a chakra surge which he redirects towards the user body, however the genjutsu which can be broken is limited to [A Rank and below] The other ability of the swords is its ability to create minor shockwaves blast[B Rank] by the swinging of the sword in a to and Through movement which creates such effects.

    Note:Can only be used /wielded by thunderbolt
    Note:Last for only 4 turns
    Note:Creation of shockwaves and genjutsu breaking Count as a Move.

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    Follow correct template.

    Genjutsu sutairu: Enjin no shōgai: Genjutsu Style: All Engines Failed
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs the Tiger-Dog-Ox hand seals and casts a genjutsu upon the opponent manipulating the flow of chakra in their brain, and creating an illusion where the opponent sees himself on an airplane which engines has failed and is no longer functional and thus is plunging and accelerating to hit the ground at more than 700km/h ,which upon impact the plane along with the opponent would be crushed and would be burning due to explosion. Whereas in reality the opponent is unharmed and ready for battle.

    Note: Can only be Taught by thunderbolt
    Note: Can only be done once in a battle
    Note: No Genjutsu Higher than A rank for the rest of the battle

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    Follow correct template.
     
         
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    ~New cycle~
    (Tenrai Yajuu: Uzumaki Shikon)-Divine Beast: Whirlpool fang
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After performing the Heaven Twin Fang, the user and their ninken focus they're suiton chakra to envelop their giant piercing fang into the form a giant spinning whirlpool. The user and their ninken then, proceed to drill through the target leaving behind three small pillars of water that rise upward after passing through.

    Restrictions:
    -Must be a member of the Inuzuka clan to use this.
    -Must have started training in water.
    -Can only be taught by fang.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Done already. DNR.

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    (Kuchiyose: Go-rudo Neko)-Summoning: Gold Cat
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user tosses a large scroll into the air above the targets head and summons a large golden statue of a grinning cat that drops down onto the target, resulting in gold coins scattering about it around the area.

    Restriction:
    -Must have been trained in ninjutsu.
    -Can only be taught by fang.

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    Why gold coin? Don't add useless restrictions. Off course you need training in ninjutsu...duh! :sy: its a ninjutsu technique... No handseals? no restrictions? no size of the cat? why gold coins?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Nami Burēka) - Water Release: Wave Breaker
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user places his hands on the ground and from each hand produces a jet of pressurized water running across the ground towards his target. As they travel the jets rapidly expand into huge torrents of water that demolish whatever is in their way. The jets normally move in strait lines but the user can designate a path for them to follow before releasing them.

    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon/Fuuton: Kaon Gufuu) – Fire/Wind Release: Pyroclastic Cyclone
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Kakuzu causes his wind-element mask to reach out from his back and mount itself above his shoulder before exhaling a powerful rotating wave of wind in the direction of the opponent. Simultaneously, Kakuzu begins spewing an immense stream of flammable superheated ash (similar to Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning) towards the intended target. The rotating wave of wind begins carrying the stream of ash, greatly augmenting its speed, heat and abrasive ability, making it a dangerous technique in all aspects. Due to the nature of the wind technique, it carries the stream of ash towards the opponent rather than dispersing it. The abrasiveness of the rotating wind-fused ash is on such a level its capable of skinning an opponent with mere contact. Afterwards, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in the technique becoming a dangerous stream of flames. This jutsu can also be performed with a clone with the Katon/Fuuton affinity or by both of Kakuzu's Fire and Wind masks.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
    Note: For other bios to use this technique, they must have a clone/summon with the Katon/Fuuton affinity.

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    Nice. I like it! good job!

    -Resubmission-

    Quote Originally Posted by Negative Knight View Post
    -Resubmitting-

    (Kuro Ito Roiyaru Koujou) – Dark Threads Royal Siege
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground. Within seconds, the underground of the terrain is infested with a network of dark threads infused with the user’s own chakra. Straight after creation, the user detaches themselves from the created source. The underground network extends to a 20 meter radius around the position the user first casts the jutsu. This allows the user to manipulate the dark threads directly from the terrain itself to perform various jutsus, however this jutsu can't be used to attack the opponent directly. Once the technique is cancelled the underground source of threads can no longer be manipulated. Whilst this jutsu is active, underground travel is impossible as the user/opponent will become tangled in a dense mass of threads if they attempt to do so. Furthermore, Earth techniques which affect/devastate the terrain will render this jutsu useless as the source of threads will be destroyed in the process.

    Note: Lasts for Four turns
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
    Note: Can only be Used by Negative Knight



    ~Declined~ I was just going to approve it then i saw the "twice" per battle thing, that's a definite no, supplementary techniques like this can only be used once, also add another restriction that says you can't use threads from your body anymore, as long as this is active, because all of the threads are released underground, an amount of threads that covers 20 meters are quite a massive one, unless you have fuuinjutsu or something and can summon other threads, like i told you before it's a bad idea, but needs those kind of restrictions.

    Removed "Must have Dark Threads active"

    Removed chakra cost in place of a turn limit.
    (Kuro Ito Roiyaru Koujou) – Dark Threads Royal Siege
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground. Within seconds, the underground of the terrain is infested with a network of dark threads infused with the user’s own chakra. Straight after creation, the user detaches themselves from the created source. The underground network extends to a 20 meter radius around the position the user first casts the jutsu. This allows the user to manipulate the dark threads directly from the terrain itself to perform various jutsus instead of feeding dark threads from his body into the ground. However this jutsu can't be used to attack the opponent directly. Once the technique is cancelled the underground source of threads can no longer be manipulated. Whilst this jutsu is active, underground travel is impossible as the user/opponent will become tangled in a dense mass of threads if they attempt to do so. Furthermore, Earth techniques which affect/devastate the terrain will render this jutsu useless as the source of threads will be destroyed in the process.

    Note: Lasts for Four turns
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
    Note: Can only be used by Negative Knight
    Note: Whilst this jutsu is active, Kakuzu cannot use dark threads directly from his body



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    Raizu| Vengeous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Vengeous is a large sentient sword created by Kakuzu himself using his dark threads and the heart of a fallen foe. The sword itself is two meters in length (including the hilt) and is the same width as a compacted Samehada. The entirety of the sword is composed of spiky black threads, and the exterior is tightly weaved together into a dense structure, which is impossible to cut through by normal means. The hilt of the sword is constructed of pure obsidian and shape of the blade of itself looks much like a curved arrowhead with its tip resembling a crab’s pincer. The heart inside of the sword is located in the center of the blade and is fully functioning, resulting in Vengeous being considered both a living creature and a sentient ally to Kakuzu. As a result Vengeous is capable of acting of its own accord, rational thought and has a malicious personality inherited from Kakuzu. The sword itself can go weeks without nutrition and has a strict diet of blood which it ingests through its skin. The sword is usually carried around in a black and red scabbard, on the user’s back.

    Abilities
    -The sword is near impossible to break/cut through due to it’s tightly weaved exterior.

    -The sword is capable of releasing dark threads as tendrils to restrict and ensnare the opponent. The tendrils are capable of extending up to five meters and can come from anywhere on the blade. These tendrils can pierce the opponent's body, prevent their mobility or even disarm them of their weapon.

    The sword is capable of shooting out countless needles composed entirely of dark threads, which are about thirty centimeters in length and five times the width of a normal senbon. This will count as one of the user’s jutsu per turn.

    -The blade possess the ability to extend up to two meter spikes from everywhere on the blade or hilt at any time which are capable of skewering through the body of anyone they come into contact with.

    -When damaged, the sword can repair itself by growing new layers of dark threads. This is taken further by the sword’s ability to shed the outer layers of its skin, with a new layer of threads growing in its place.

    -The sword is capable of crawling, telepathically communicating with Kakuzu and acting of its own accord

    Restrictions
    -Can only be wielded for five turns per battle
    -Kakuzu is unable to use the heart of this sword for "Heart Reaper"
    -The sword possess no mouth and isn't capable of talking
    -Must have a Kakuzu bio to wield the sword
    -Vengeous is incapable of transferring chakra to the wielder
    -The Sword can be killed

    -Negative Knight is the only person capable of wielding this weapon. In response to anyone else who attempts to wield the blade, the sword erupts in a violent outburst, extending 10 meter spikes from everywhere on its body (including the hilt), severely impaling the unsuspecting wielder.

    -The sword possess a symbiotic relationship with the wielder, draining them of chakra every turn to maintain itself

    How the Sword Looks


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    ±± Pending ±±
    I don't feel I would approve this ever but thats just my "feel" of it. I'll leave it to another mod.

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    -Declined- I honestly love the idea and i will consider approving it if you worked well on the abilities a bit more, some need defining and all in general are broad, remove the telepathic stuff, last you say that the sword can be killed, but you say it can't be cut through or broken and when hurt will repair itself, so how can it be killed exactly? =_= i'll give you only one shot at this, and next time if i don't see everything i need i'll DNR it.
    -Resubmission-

    Raizu| Vengeous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Vengeous is a large sentient sword created by Kakuzu himself using his dark threads and the heart of a fallen foe. The sword itself is two meters in length (including the hilt) and is the same width as a compacted Samehada. The entirety of the sword is composed of spiky black threads, and the exterior is tightly weaved together into a dense structure, which is impossible to cut through by normal means. The hilt of the sword is constructed of pure jade and shape of the blade of itself looks much like a curved arrowhead with its tip resembling a crab’s pincer. The heart inside of the sword is located in the center of the blade and is fully functioning, resulting in Vengeous being considered both a living creature and a sentient ally to Kakuzu. As a result Vengeous is capable of acting of its own accord, rational thought and has a malicious personality inherited from Kakuzu. The sword itself can go weeks without nutrition and has a strict diet of blood which it ingests through its skin. The sword is usually carried around in a black and red scabbard, on the user’s back.

    Abilities
    -The sword is near impossible to break/cut through due to it’s tightly weaved exterior.

    -The sword is capable of extending dark threads as tendrils to restrict and ensnare the opponent. These tendrils are capable of reaching up to five meters (short range) and can come from anywhere on the blade. The tendrils can pierce the bodies of other shinobi, can prevent the opponent's mobility by wrapping around them or even disarm a foe of their weapon. The amount of tendrils that can be released at any one time varies between 8 and 16. The tendrils themselves are each about the same width as a basic rope (ten centimeters) and all have sharp pointed ends. This is a B-Rank Ability

    -The sword is capable of shooting out countless needles composed entirely of dark threads, which are about thirty centimeters in length and five times the width of a normal senbon. The needles can be shot from anywhere on the blade and have a mid-range reach (10 meters). This will count as one of the user’s jutsu per turn. This is an A-Rank ability

    -The blade possess the ability to extend spikes from everywhere on the blade or hilt at any time, which are capable of skewering through the body of anyone they come into contact with. The spikes can reach up to two meters in length. Spikes which emerge from the blade resemble basic spears in both shape and width and the end result makes the sword look like its coated in an armour of spikes. Spikes which emerge from the hilt are much smaller, resembling needle-like thorns in shape and width. The spikes can be released at any time, adding a further element of surprise to the wielder's fighting style. Shortly after release the threaded spikes re-enter the sword, restoring the weapon's ordinary shape. This is an A-Rank ability

    -The blade can use a limited amount of the elemental chakra present in its heart. It can use it to unleash blasts of pure elemental chakra (of the main elemental afinity of that heart) in various forms as both streams, blasts, projectiles, crescents, etc by swinging the sword. The sword can only use one element which is the main element of that heart. This ability is S-Rank.

    -The sword is capable of crawling and acting independently

    Restrictions
    -Kakuzu is unable to use the heart of this sword for "Heart Reaper"
    -The sword possess no mouth and isn't capable of talking but it does communicate with the wielder in an unknown form
    -Must have a Kakuzu bio to wield the sword
    -Vengeous is incapable of transferring chakra to the wielder
    -The Sword can be killed by being burnt, melted or severely shocked. This makes the weapon extremely prone to death from Fire, Lightning and similar attacks, specially S-Rank and above.
    -Negative Knight is the only person capable of wielding this weapon. In response to anyone else who attempts to wield the blade, the sword erupts in a violent outburst, extending 10 meter spikes from everywhere on its body (including the hilt), severely impaling the unsuspecting wielder.
    -The 4 main abilities of the sword count as moves from the users move count and each can only be used 3 times.
    -If the sword is severely damaged, the user can give it a heart and renew it.

    How the Sword Looks


    Removed the sword's telepathic ability, its ability to repair itself and the ability to shed layers of its skin.

    Changed the hilt's material from obsidian to jade, I prefer green xD

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    Edited. Added an ability i think you'll like. Seemed logical that it would have something like this.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kuchiyose: Chakra Senpuku Yakke- Summoning: Chakra Concealing Cloak
    Type: Supplementary/Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Description: The user forms the ram - Tigher hand seal and summons a special cloak and puts it on. Once the cloak is activate, it blocks all chakra sensors/dojutsu and keeps the user concealed. The cloak is all black and has a hood. This doesn't supress the users chakra, however if the user does a technique over A rank, the cloak automatically turns off. This isn't invisibility, the user can still be seen. He just can't be sensed or his chakra system seen by a dojutsu.

    -No modes can be active with this cloak (Sage Mode, Curse Mark, EIG)
    - During a battle, the chakra concealment lasts 5 turns
    -Can only be used 3 times
    - Can only be taught by better



    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Why would you summon this? Also, acts too much like the Nekura clan.


    (Doton:Ganzan) - Earth Release:Rock Mountain
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user claps their hands together. The user then manipulates the earth around them to create a rock mountain that can be used to block incoming attacks. This mountain is intricately designed, sculpted into what seems to be a giant warrior

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    ♠ Declined ♠
    Exactly what kind of attacks? Rank? Also, give it an usage limit.


    (Doton:Tetsu Iwa Kobushi) - Earth Release:Iron Rock Fist
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user begins by performing the Horse->Dog hand seals and then stretches the index and middle fingers towards the target. This prompts a very large arm made of rocks, whose appearance is reminiscent of an intricate gauntlet, to emerge from the earth not far from him, and to move towards the foe with its fist clenched. This stone limb can be elongated for great lengths, with its "forearm" taking the form of an extremely long succession of segments; something which also makes it free to twist, allowing the user to move it around as he wishes and change its trajectory, if the enemy does somehow manage to send the fist back at the user.



    ♠ Declined, do not resubmit ♠
    Too similar to existing techniques.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigō View Post
    Resubmitting; hope it's better now ^^ Edited a few parts> Roses are 4-5 meters big, and the user can freely move due to the lack of roses and vines surrounding the user

    (Kinjutsu Doton: Rōzugāden) - Forbidden Earth Art: Rose Garden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to the user)
    Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Snake, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the snake handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the concentrated doton chakra in a burst, the enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction. By doing this the user will cause gigantic roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, silicate is basic earth mineral that can be found in the earth crust, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of this mineral, that can only found in the earth crust thought the user has to use a great amount of chakra to control this mineral it gains a redish-greenish color, making them look like actual roses thought they are just silicate minerals combining the minerals with rock hard and dense stones given actual form by chakra. These gigantic roses are sharper than blades and much denser having dozens gigantic spikes stiking out of the core also on the green colored branches and vines. Each of the roses are about 1 to 2 meters big reaching out up to 15 meters into the heavens, in a mayhem of branches and leaves (which are solid and have spikes stiking out of them) each capable of piercing through metal, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, thought the user can move freely due to the lack of roses surrounding the user each being highly infused with the users Doton chakra, granting the user the ability to use earth techniques from the garden with increased speed and reduced difficulty, from the large amount of silicate minerals the ground will also be completely covered by this mineral.
    ♦ Note: This technique can only be used by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
    ♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for two turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will take enormous damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-30)
    ♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat due to the severe damage taken by this jutsu. (doing so will result in killing the user)

    ±± Declined ±± No reference to the speed chart. Also, no, you can't use other earth techniques from these roses as those techniques specially not with increased speed. Allowing you to shape the earth into such an intricate and complex construct is already pushing the limits of what you can do with earth release that that would be simply overkill. Kinjutsu? No. The name of this technique is a "DOTON/EARTH RELEASE/EARTH ARTS/EARTH STYLE" technique.

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    Resubmitting: I've removed the ability to perform earth techniques from these roses, added reference to the speed chart. And made several other changes..

    (Doton: Rōzugāden) - Earth Style: Rose Garden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-20 to the user)
    Description: The user makes a quick sequence of five handseals, Horse → Tiger → Dragon → Bird → Serpent, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the Serpent handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the gathered doton chakra in a burst. The enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction of the battlefield. By doing this the user will cause gigantic roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, silicate is basic earth mineral that can be found in the earth crust, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of this mineral, thought the user has to use a great amount of chakra to control this mineral, it gains a red-light green color, making them look like actual roses. These roses and spike branches are created by combining the silicate minerals with dense stones found deep in the ground. These gigantic roses and branches are sharper than blades and denser than Iron itself, having dozens of gigantic spikes stiking out of the core and the branches, vines etc. all covered with razor sharp spikes, which can easily penetrate earthen domes and whatnot. Each of the roses are about 1 to 3 meters in diameters, and as tall as 10 meters with the vines included. Causing the battlefield to be covered in a mayhem of branches and leaves each capable of piercing or tearing through very dense materials, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, thought the user can move freely due to the lack of roses surrounding the user.

    ♦ Note: This technique can only be taught by Ichigo.
    ♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
    ♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart. (being an sage by post reduces your speed to S-Jounin)
    ♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for five turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will take damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-20)
    ♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat for the rest of the battle due to the weakend state of the body.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users' moves, due to the abnormal amount of chakra used to perform this jutsu.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Prusias' Cane
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This cane was found to be in the possession of Prusias. While he was running his big business empire, he had acquired this artifact. It was from ancient times, it was intricately carved and had a dragon on the top. Upon closer inspection, Prusias realized that he could pull on the dragon and a blade would come out. The blade functioned just as a normal katana, Prusias was fascinated with this cane. The cane itself was unbreakable, it could be used as a blunt insturment to beat enemies with. However, the cane had two specific abilites. One of which was that it could make constructs made of extremely dense fire chakra. These constructs were limited though, Prusias discovered that he could only make 4 specific constructs (listed below). The other ability of the cane is that it could initiate a small C ranked genjutsu when the opponent heard the user tap the cane to the ground. The illusion made it seem as if, the user had become a great red dragon with 3 heads. The dragon would then grab the opponent with it's mouth and swallow him. Then, the opponent would feel stomach acids slowly digesting him.

    List of Constructs
    ~All these constructs are C ranked~

    -The first construct is a swarm of bees made entirely of dense fire chakra that would swarm the opponent. One bee alone could only do the damage of a small bee sting, but several together could cause some damage. The amount of bees, are the same as the amount in a small bee hive.-

    -The second construct is a Rhino made of fire. It rushes the opponent, and does damage. It is smaller however than a real rhino, about 3/4 the size of a real rhino.-

    -The third construct is a large phoenix made of fire, it doesen't do damage at all. Instead, it flies high into the air and then it explodes in a brilliant display of light. The light has the same effect a flash bomb would. This doesen't affect dojutsu users or chakra sensors.-

    -The final construct is two large arms. The arms smash into the ground directly near the opponent, this is to try to protect the user if the opponent comes into close range.-

    All the constructs can reach up to mid range, except for the last which can only reach into short range.




    -Restrictions-

    Can only stay in effect for 4 turns before it poofs away
    Can only be wielded by PresidentBush
    Genjutsu ability can only be used once per turn
    Can only make one of the four specific constructs a turn
    Genjutsu and construct ability, can't be used together in the same turn

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't copy other peoples CW. DNR.

    (Raiton: Aoi Tatsu)Lightning: Blue Dragon
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90 (-10 to user)
    Description:The user concentrates intense raiton chakra, and condenses it while using shape manipulation to make it into the form of a blue dragon. The dragon is completely made of dense raiton chakra. It is dense enough for the dragon to be able to punch at someone. The dragon can smash through S rank and below earthern defenses easily. It has the power to launch an A rank beam of lightning from it's mouth at the opponent. The dragon itself can move extremely quickly (twice the speed of a thrown kunai)

    What it looks like


    -Restrictions-

    Lasts only 1 turn
    Leaves the user unable to use lightning in the same turn or next turn
    Can only be used once a battle
    Must be taught by PB

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Similar to existing techniques.

    (Fuuton: Altairis)Wind Release:Altairis
    Type:Offense
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user crosses their arms above their head, and begins to gather chakra. He then causes a lot of air to rush to a single point right above the user. It forms a small black orb of condensed wind. The user then unleashes the orb at the user, and as it flies the orb is still absorbing air getting bigger. As it gets closer to the opponent, it feels as if it is drawing them in. This makes it difficult to dodge.

    -Restrictions-

    Can only be used twice per battle
    No other wind jutsu in the same turn
    Can only be taught by PB

    What it looks like:


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Description makes no sense and from what i'm understanding its similar to existing techniques. reword it
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    CFS technique

    Spirits of Balance: Hellhounds (Onryodo: Yomi no Ryoken)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user offers a blood sacrifice and a seal stating “Hell (Jigoku)” forms on the floor where the blood drips. Moments later the technique activates when shadowy figures starts to surround the user, these figures takes the form of hounds with black fur and a glowing streak of red. They have red eyes, intangible bodies and feral behavior. There are three hounds in total: Barghest, Black Shuck, & Gytrash. These hounds are composed entirely of Yin energy alone, Black Shuck & Gytrash chase their targets, surrounding and attacking them. The area these hounds successfully touch suffers from necrosis which begins to expand to the rest of the body, this is a result of Yin energy disrupting the Yang energy of the target and the sudden loss of vitality causes the body parts to quickly die and decay. Once the target is unable to defend himself, barghest then moves to deal the final blow which seals the opponent’s dead remains as well as his chakra inside the user’s consciousness.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.
    -Lasts two turns.

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    Add a note saying this can be countered by destroying the "dogs" with any tchnique capable opf doing so. And that the blood needs to be spilled on the ground, no where else. Als, remove the lasts 2 turns. Makes no sense. Remove the seals him inside your mind. Thats a no go.


    Sealing Technique: Shell of the Black Turtle (Fuinjutsu: Genbu no Kai)
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30 + Damage absorbed
    Damage:N/a
    Description: Shell of the Black turtle is a powerful Defensive-Barrier Sealing technique, named after of the 4 Guardian Beasts Black Turtle (Genbu). The technique is performed using the boar seal, it forms an array of several hexagonal shields of solidified energy, the color of these shields is translucent red. The shields levitate around the user and move with him as he travels, the shields move with the users will and can be used to form a defensive grid as well as spherical barrier, because of the unique shape of the shields it makes the technique very versatile to both defend and attack at the same time. The barrier does not extends to user alone, the shields could be moved (Medium distances) to trap the opponents or to protect allies. Named after Genbu, the technique itself has outstanding Defensive capabilities though it requires an equally skilled user to wield. The shield has some drawbacks:
    The amount of energy required to maintain the shield is proportional to the amount of energy being blocked by the shields. So to say, blocking a technique with 80 Damage requires a Chakra tax of 80, this makes the technique only suitable for users with good chakra reserves. Because the technique cannot be replayed over and over, its not too good for weak techniques, getting struck with strong techniques on the other hand consumes a good amount of chakra instantly (Chakra worth 2 S ranks, to defend against 1) which can be exhausting against overly powerful techniques. The defense is otherwise absolute but when put against close range techniques that require a constant supply of chakra such as Chidori, continuous contact will quickly drain the user’s chakra requiring him to break the technique if possible. When a shield breaks, it creates a small concussion knocking back opponent a few meters away.
    Note: Last 2 turns, usable twice per conflict.
    Appearance: X

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    Railgun (Rerugan)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Railgun is a buster sword technique that uses the main blade and an ordinary kunai to create a powerful projectile. The use unlocks the main blade and hooks a kunai near the hilt, using the sword’s ability to generate electromagnetism he charges both ends of the sword to emit small electromagnetic fields that charges lorentz force between the swords where the kunai is held then using the same fields the user accelerates the kunai shooting out it , the user experiences a small kick back upon release. Because of the principle applied in the technique the kunai doesn’t loses trajectory even after traveling a very long distance despite being shot with great force and speed making this technique incredibly accurate and precise. Upon impact the kunai deals non chakra based, kinetic damage strong enough to push back and kill a large summon suffice to say a human wont survive either. That said, the technique’s own precision and force can become a drawback, it cannot be used in close proximity or else the user won’t able to escape the techniques own force and it requires the user to be stationary with a good footing to take aim, given the precision of the technique minor disturbances can cause the user to miss an opponent who is already at a long distance. The projectile can be tracked by 3T (and above or similar) but the overal complex procedure of the technique takes some time to perform and prepare, making the effectiveness of the technique relative to the situation and the opening the user might have found to use it. The projectile is a raw chakra projectile, heavily dense, capable of fighting in equal terms with any elemental nature.
    Note: Usable 2 times per battle

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    (Suiton: Shelob No Yūwaku) Water Release: Shelob's Temptation
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs two handseals, manipulating the moisture in the air and ground so as to create a gigantic web made of wire thin threads comprised of water. The web envelops the area mid range around the user, being exceptionally inconspicuous due to the thin size of the threads and the translucency of the water. The threads have an exceptionally sticky like quality, as well as being rather elastic and having a solid like property. Should the opponent move, they would find themselves running into one of the threads, when they do so the vibrations of the threads movement would be sent directly back to the user, who is connected to the web via use of a single thread that attaches to the users chest. This effectively allows the user to detect the movement of any objects within the webs range of influence lest they find a way to avoid the webs entirely. This single web attached to the users chest is optional, and is not a requirement, leaving it up to the user whether he/she'd want it, as it'd be more or less useless if the user and his opponent have a clear view of each other. Also, when an object comes in contact with a thread, the web clings to them as it begins to expand and propagate, fully consuming the opponent in a sticky mass of water in an attempt to drown them or fully cease the objects movements. The user is capable of traversing through the web with ease, without being hindered. The user is also capable of removing the webs attachment from their chest, so as to prevent attacks conducting through the web and directly into them. Alternatively the user can perform an extra handseal upon the opponent being ensnared, this causes the web to abruptly snap in on the targeted object, trapping them within its wired embrace as it consumes them in an exceptionally large and exceptionally strong sticky bubble of imprisonment.
    Note: Can only be used 2x
    Note: Web lasts until either destroyed, or four turns pass.
    Note: No Water jutsus higher than S-rank, in the same turn.

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    Well done. Loved it.

    (Ototon: Saishō's Kaiketsu Suru ) - Sound Release: Saishō's Resolve
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/defence/suplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (Excluding the pieces which may or may not hit opponent.)
    Description: A specific sound jutsu which involves the user recognizing the resonant frequency of any solids brought before him and using his sound mastery to recognize and mimic the frequency with which said object would vibrate, allowing the user to cause it to smash into thousands of pieces almost instantly. This jutsu would be able to destroy any and every solids, but would be useless against anything energy based and/or intangible (Wind, Fire, Lightning etc). Although the jutsu itself is mainly defence, as it simply destroys solid constructs, upon destruction, the pieces which made the solid construct would burst and fly everywhere short range from the point of their explosion, allowing the user of this jutsu to do harm to the opponent whilst destroying their jutsu. Moreover, the direction in which the pieces go can be somewhat controlled by the user, there are two options, the user can either make the pieces go outwards as already stated, or by the addition of a mere hand seal and more chakra, cause the pieces which made the object to smash and go inward, almost as if said object had imploded, this would be used if the users allies are nearby, as it'd allow them to remain safe whilst destroying the opponents jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: No other sound jutsu in the next turn.
    Note: No other Sound jutsu for the rest of the turn.
    Note: Can't be used on humans or any other living beings.

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    Controlling the debris is a no no so remove it. And what do you do? Do you scream? Do you clap your hands? do you touch the object? Because even if you know the frequency which you can't just like that btw (so find a way that you can get that information), you still need to produce a sound that actually overcomes that frequency and makes the object shatter.

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Yangu no Kanashimi) - Summoning Technique: Sorrow of the Young
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A summoning jutsu which works in a slightly way, which allows the user to set up a trap and/or prepare for a situation, without having to use his strongest summon straight away. Sorrow of the young is a summoning jutsu which requires the user to summon a small baby of whatever animal they have under their contract, that small animal would have a special ability of summoning an elder summon (whatever they consider 'elder', so they're more or less able to summon any created summoning they wish) animal of their same specie at any point they feel threatened or are ordered to do so. The animal they summon is summoned short range away from their location. Moreover the small summon would be able to talk and it'd also have any passive abilities which that specific contract allows
    Note: Can be used 3 times.
    Note: Small animal making the summoning for an 'elder' counts as one of the 3 moves per turn.
    Note: The young animal can summon an 'elder' from any point after the turn they're summoned in.

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    ( wabisuke ) the penetant one.
    Rank:S Rank
    Type: Weapon
    Range: short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This blade is a very unique blade as it is in a beheading shape of sorts and has a unique ability. The blade itself is made from iron deep in the ground which was found under the heaviest weighted boulder.The ability of wabisuke is similar to weighted boulder the doton technique it utilizes this ability ie doton weighted boulder but to a squared amount of weight anything this blade slices becomes twice as heavy and so fourth if three slices are made the enemy become three two the power heavier. This ability can be used on anything from enemy's to kunai or shuriken or even enemy's arms making them unable to lift them to make handsigns. The blade itself is held in a special sheath while traveling to prevent myself from being affected or nicked by the blade. The blade is regular weight of a sword meaning the ability it possesses does not directly affect the weight of the blade but rather what the blade cuts or comes into contact with.
    Note: can only be wielded by Roju.
    Note: can only be used as long as doton is mastered as the weighted boulder tech is based in this sword.
    Note:can be used on solid based CE's examples caramel, tar, sand, doton, wood.
    Restrictions: the blades ability can be used as many times as needed on any objects.
    On enemy's the blade's ability can only be used 3 times and not in the same turn.




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    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: 360* Pressure Damage
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything around it's radius: Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed extending all around the user and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, blast radius some how then the user will die instantly from the pressure of the wind at close range.

    Restriction only usable once in battle.
    Note cannot use wind the following turn.
    Note can only be taught by Roju*

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    (Katon: Keshi Makuga batafurai) - Fire Release: Exploding Butterflies
    Rank: S rank
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user first performs a sequence of four handsigns gather's Katon chakra into their mouth and proceeds to exhale small flaming butterflies. Which flutter out scattered across the field. The butterflies explode on contact of anything they touch and can be harmful to the user if touched as well. A limit of 10 butterflies can be made per usage of this jutsu. The butterflies in themselves are regular size and no other differences to normal butterflies. Sipped of the attack is not fast by any means the butterflies float around In the combat range's of short to mid range. The blast from one of e butterflies alone is a radius of 4feet.

    Restrictions: only 10 butterflies are able to be formed at once.
    -Cannot use fire above C rank for the next two turns
    Note -the butterflies running into each other will not cause them to explode, however if the explosion of one butterfly goes into the radius of another they will all explode creating a giant explosion and can hit the user if you do not relocate your postion.
    - can only be taught by Roju*

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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
     
         
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    (Supura Modu: Tekuts Walu) - SuperMod power: Wall of text
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: infinite
    Chakra Cost: none
    Damage Points: Instant Death upon being read
    Description:A Wall of text that owns everyone's ass. Side effects include repetitive strain injury, carpal tunnel syndrome, and arthiritis.

    -Can only be used once per battle
    -Only teachable by yang or mods

    example of jutsu:
    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post
    Lord of Kaos wins, no doubt there, Kaziname already died after LoK first attack of Water Explosion, Weight of the World and Earth Annihilation. You overestimate Assimilate all Creation Technique way way way way too much. Just because you had the idea of using diamond rings you think you found one of the most ultimate defences as diamond is so hard and that you can reassemble after every attack.

    Wrong. It's still only a C-rank jutsu, so that defence, whether it's diamond or anything else, is C-rank. For some reason you completely ignore the basics of RP battling. If diamond armour would be that indestructable, the diamond element would be seriously OP. Do you think a C-rank diamond jutsu would survive an S-rank water and two S-ranked earth jutsu's? No, that would be directly unacceptable but still for some reason you think it doesn't apply to you. Why? Because you can reassemble? If you could do that after every attack then the guy who used that jutsu in the anime wouldn't have lost from Kakashi.

    Tell me why didn't he reassemble when Kakashi hit him with the Chidori? Because earth is weak against lightning? Lightning destroys earth, so in fact it would do the exact same thing as you turning to sand. Still it beat him. Highely likely because lightning chakra beats earth chakra which he was pretty much using, the same goes for when used another elemental jutsu. In the end if the jutsu is so strong the chakra would just crush that C-rank jutsu, no matter which material it is and whether you reassemble or not. Saying that he survived an explosion is not an argument either. That was an exploding tag and the result were chunks the size of arms and hands, which makes it pretty realistic to still reassemble. After those S-rank jutsu's there's nothing left of you anymore.

    That you're diamond doesn't mean anything either as it's not even real diamond, only a copy produced by your chakra. That's something Kakashi even stated at the end of the battle that he's still only copying jutsu's. It doesn't matter if your diamond or earth, it's not really a big deal, those S-ranks killed you. Then we get to another point, even though it can never be proven completley, it's highely likely you can't even use water jutsu's when using that jutsu for the simple fact you're using your chakra permanently for as long as that jutsu is active. In the anime that guy only used earth based jutsu's or ninjutsu that can be used in conjunction with his body of rocks, using elemental chakra is something completely different or do you think that guy would have been able to preform a Chidori himself? Using common logic it would be highely unlikely for using any kind of elements other than the one directly applied.

    That jutsu isn't much different from Suigetsu's body, still his body isn't that much rated apparantly as your jutsu, while it's nearly exactly the same, can survive nearly everything while Suigetsu's body is certainly not deemd the same. It can survive small explosions and hits, however large jutsu's not. You got hit by 3 S-rank jutsu's, so you're completely dead. Even elemental weaknesses don't apply anymore as the difference in power is so big.

    In the end that ninjutsu, diamond or not, will only be able to survive things like exploding tags, kicks, hits and low lvl offensive jutsu's. Every A-rank offensive jutsu will beat it, most of the B-rank jutsu's will beat it and even several C-ranks will beat it. If I would use that jutsu in the same way as you, I could make myself nearly invincible.

    Summary: Lord of Kaos won, it's not relevant what happend after that. Kaziname died.
    Extra info: Should be approved for the s

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    DNR. This, believe it or not, was attempted before. Difference is that submitter had the intelligence to actually make something narutoverse feasible.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Monocerus (Unicorn-like variation of the Monocerus)
    Scroll Owner: Yonkou Pandaman
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing:

    (Kuchiyose: Hinata-hime) Summoning: Princess Hinata
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Range (Below the user)
    Chakra: 40 (80 if summoned for the second time)
    Damage: 30 for kicks, 40 for horn thrusts
    Description: Hinata-hime is the eternal princess of the Monocerus', she is a very large Monocerus (120, taller than Gamabunta but not as wide-fat) with a long beutiful horn on her forehead, her fur is white with a Cherry Blossom tint, she has womanly pink eyes, and is rather slender and very beutiful, her horn can cast Genjutsu and she has a very powerful kick, her "mane" or hair is very long and can be grabbed on, one of her weaknesses is her tail, if another large summoning grabs her tail, she would be paralyized because of the pain, but will not disperse, Hinata-himes tail is very long but she can move it freely to prevent any direct attacks that are going for her weakness, Hinata-hime may not look like it, but her skin can block Fuuton, Doton, Raiton and Suiton attacks up to A-Rank, Fire techniques however will still hurt her, she has very large wings on her back but will not let anyone but the scroll owner and her citizens, to ride with her as she takes flight, and will only fly for a very brief time unless her citizens are riding with her, Hinata-himes personality is very caring and is always prepard to die for her young Monocerus, she treats both the Citizens and the royal familly the same, she mostly cares for her younger brother, Kuro, and refuses to be summoned in the same place as he is, she can also use Fire techniques upto her rank without handseals as long as they are projected from the mouth/lungs, and can stop Raiton using the wind generated from her wings upto B-Rank.

    Note: Can only stay for 4 turns
    Note: Can only use Genjutsu up to B-Rank
    Note: Flight lasts for only one turn, but if carrying any other Monocerus flight is for two turns
    Note: If any summoner other than the scroll owner attempt to fly, they would fall immediatly and die (As in, will lose the match)
    Note: Can not be summoned in the same turn Kuro is summoned
    Note: Can only summoned twice, if summoned for the second time the chakra cost is doubled and will not be able use jutsu higher than B-Rank for the turns Hinata-hime is onnthe battlefield
    Note: If summoned by the scroll owner or first signer, will be summoned directly below the summoner, other than that Hinata-hime will be summoned behind the user

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    (Kuchiyose: Kuro) Summoning: Black
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Kuro is a member of the Royal Family, he is a large Monocerus (20 feet tall), although easy enough to tell, he is completely pitch-black, his horns, his fur, everything, except his eyes, he has shining red eyes, he has very long black wings (6m wingspan) that can be used for flight, Kuro is rather energetic and young, so he has alot of stamina, he can fly as much as he wants, so he can be used for transportation, he isn't a fighting machine, but is rather agile and fast.

    Description and Background: Monocerus on Wikipedia
    The monocerus is a legendary animal with only one horn. It derives from the Greek word Μονόκερος, a compound word from μόνος (monos) which means one and κέρας (neuter gender, keras) which means horn. Although the name has been applied to a variety of genuine and mythological animals, it is usually applied to the unicorn or rhinoceros. Medieval bestiaries describe the monocerus as "having a stag's head, a horse's body, an elephant's feet, a boar's tail, and a single very long black horn growing from the forehead. It makes deep lowing sounds. It is the enemy of the elephant and when fighting it aims at the belly of its opponent. The monocerus is probably based on the African or Indian Rhinoceros (Rhinoceros unicornis)".


    Side Note: Yes this summoning is the Unicorn-like variation, but i am just being creative and would not want this to be dissapproved due to not being serious, but i am not just jokingly making this, Monocerus are etched onto many walls and cave drawings, they might had existed, and this animal was indeed believed to exist.

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    3rd submission of the cycle - Resubmitting:
    Quote Originally Posted by Lokí View Post
    (Yomazu) - War Cry
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A katana with its sheath being attached to either side of the wielder's hip. It sported a reddish, traditional Japanese hilt-wrapping, and its large, simple circular tsuba, which had a golden color, was decorated by a flower-motif. Not only that, but it's properties are nearly indestructable. Yomazu became Loki's right hand, being able to perform numerous unique assaults, known as Bo, Kan, Zan, & Anko, all together are known as the 4 Kin of Purgatory. Mainly based on chakra control and raw chakra. No elemental chakra is known to work with Yomazu, with the exception of wind release.
    Bo: This assault creates a strong defensive wall in the form of a cloud of chakra, which shields the user from enemy attack and is powerful enough to remain intact after being hit by B rank or lower ninjutsu techniques. The user puts his free palm against the side of the blade while the other hand holds the handle, and lifts it foward, releasing a burst of chakra that forms into the cloud shield.
    Kan: The user writes hols Yomazu with both hands and channels massive amounts of raw chakra into it. Then releasing it at once in a compressed state, creating a beam of energy which pierces the target set by the user, with ease. It can successfully rip through B rank and lower ninjutsu techniques, all within reason. It however, can only reach mid ranges.
    Zan: The user infuses wich chakra into Yomazu and then swings Yomazu, creating a giant and wide air blade, to slice across everything within range. Having a reach of Mid range, and a strength of B rank wind.
    Anko: The user creates a dark wave from Yomazu, which cuts through everything in its path. This works by the user rushing towards his enemy, whom he slashes and then goes past, unsheathing his blade. A few seconds before this, raw chakra is focused into Yomazu, thus, when it's unsheathed it release the chakra in a dark-ish color.

    Only 2 Kin of Purgatory assaults can be used per turn.
    The same Kin of Purgatory can not be used in consecutive turns.
    Each Kin of Purgatory counts towards one of the user's 3 techniques.
    May only be wielded by Loki

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    Bo ability can't be a cloud. Makes no sense. Anko ability needs more definition and a better explanation. Rest seems fine. Good weapon.
    (Yomazu) - War Cry
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A katana with its sheath being attached to either side of the wielder's hip. It sported a reddish, traditional Japanese hilt-wrapping, and its large, simple circular tsuba, which had a golden color, was decorated by a flower-motif. Not only that, but it's properties are nearly indestructable. Yomazu became Loki's right hand, being able to perform numerous unique assaults, known as Bo, Kan, Zan, & Anko, all together are known as the 4 Kin of Purgatory. Mainly based on chakra control and raw chakra. No elemental chakra is known to work with Yomazu, with the exception of wind release.
    Bo: This assault creates a strong defensive wall in the form of a cricle of chakra, which shields the user from enemy attack and is powerful enough to remain intact after being hit by B rank or lower ninjutsu techniques. The user puts his free palm against the side of the blade while the other hand holds the handle, and lifts it foward, releasing a burst of chakra that forms into the circle shield.
    Kan: The user writes hols Yomazu with both hands and channels massive amounts of raw chakra into it. Then releasing it at once in a compressed state, creating a beam of energy which pierces the target set by the user, with ease. It can successfully rip through B rank and lower ninjutsu techniques, all within reason. It however, can only reach mid ranges.
    Zan: The user infuses wich chakra into Yomazu and then swings Yomazu, creating a giant and wide air blade, to slice across everything within range. Having a reach of Mid range, and a strength of B rank wind.
    Anko: The user creates a dark wave from Yomazu, which cuts through everything in its path. This works by the user rushing towards his enemy, whom he goes past (through either side) while unsheathing his blade, slashing them as they move. A few seconds before this is done, raw chakra is focused into Yomazu, thus, when it's unsheathed and slice the target it releases the chakra in a dark-ish color. This has a strength of B-Rank raw chakra and the movement of the user is dependent on his own basic speed.

    Only 2 Kin of Purgatory assaults can be used per turn.
    The same Kin of Purgatory can not be used in consecutive turns.
    Each Kin of Purgatory counts towards one of the user's 3 techniques.
    May only be wielded by Loki

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Name: (Voido Gia) Void Gear

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The Void Gear's teeth and head are black with a red outline and possesses a round, cog-like shape. The handle is red and the guard has the same coloration and cog-like shape as the teeth. The shaft is predominantly colored in shades of grey and sports a copper-colored gear in the center, with two intersecting, black chains wrapped around it. Two more chains are wrapped around the base of the shaft in a similar fashion. This keyblade increases total chakra at time of summoning by +10. Deals +5 damage when using kenjutsu based techniques.



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    This is not a viable CW.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Swinging Sword Fury

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: A Sword that is green at the bottom of the Sword, and golden at the top of the Sword. The user has a sword strapped to his back, taking it out then starts swinging it furiously in anger. Once it strikes the enemy they start to lose chakra, and the chakra is sucked into the Sword. Not only does it take away chakra, this sword puts a lot of damage when hit in your body parts, such as the stomach, and heart.

    Note: Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle
    Note: Can Only Be Wielded By Visor
    Note: It Takes 20% Of The Enemy's Chakra When Hit By The Sword
    Note: Since It Can Be Used Twice Per Battle, It Can Take Up 40% Of Chakra If Hit A Second Time.

    What It Looks Like



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    Follow template. Read the first post of this thread. Where's the japanese name?
     
         
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