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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fuuinjutsu: Jetto Tagu) - Sealing Technique: Jet Tag
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplmentary/Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Self(Depends on usage.)
    Chakra cost: 20(Everytime replenished)
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Jetto Fuin is tags which can expell high pressured wind chakra from itself, and outward. Whereafter the it will replenish itself if located on a chakra containing object, such as a shinobi. It can be used in many kind of different ways, such has having them located on ones elbow, it will be able to drastically boost the mometum of a normal punch, seemingly making it dissapear, by releasing high pressured wind chakra the opposite way of the punch. One downside however is that, once released it can be near impossible to actually stop the punch again, which may be needed in dire sitautions. Another one is aswell that due the friction it would most likely rip apart clothes where the tag is released.
    This technique must be stated in ones biography, and it must be stated where the user is having the tags located.

    ~ Similar techniques exist to boost the speed/power of a punch ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Kaki Tsuba) - Fire Release: Fire Spit
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: 20
    Description: The user infuse fire chakra in their spit so that unlike a normal spit this one would be made of fire and can set aflame the opponents face hair or clothes, a great technique for deception.
    You can for example spit on someones eyes to burn them and render the person blind.

    ~ Unless you can literally spit streams of saliva ( what a horrible thought ) this is unlikely to do anything more than lightly singe an opponent. NOT blind them. As such, this is mostly useless. `
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-25-2012 at 02:51 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Howard View Post
    (Doton: Doro Rappu) - Earth Style: Mud Wrap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The person takes hold of Chakra infused mud already in play and wraps it around the opponent. It will surround their body making movement harder as well as restricting breathing and possibly asphyxiating the opponent. The mud can be controlled slightly and forced to surround the opponent's head making it's way into their nose, mouth and eyes. The user must have used a Mud based Earth jutsu prior to this jutsu.
    Notes:

    -Must have already used a mud based jutsu such as Swamp, Mud Fall, or mud bullets
    -Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
    -Must be the own person's Chakra infused Mud

    ~Declined~ We don't accept technique that lets you manipulate an element freely. I need you to be very clear how this jutsu takes effect, just so you can't diverge from your description and start abusing this technique. Also, where do the 60 damage come from? You say it slows down the opponent, possibly asphyxiate him, but no real damage deal (or at least no sure damage). Make it a supplementary technique unless you change the description.

    (Doton: Doro Rappu) - Earth Style: Mud Wrap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The person takes hold of Chakra infused mud already in play due to the chakra already found in the mud it can be slightly manipulated to surround the opponent. It basically blasts out and around the opponent covering their body in mud. This makes moving harder as well as restricts breathing. This is due to the chakra infused mud that covers the opponent It has the same effect as Swamp of the Underground as it saps the enemy of his strength. The mud can possibly asphyxiate the opponent if it successfully covers the opponent completely. The mud can be controlled slightly and forced to surround the opponent's head making it's way into their nose, mouth and eyes. The user must have used a Mud based Earth jutsu prior to this jutsu.
    Notes:

    -Must have already used a mud based jutsu such as Swamp, Mud Fall, or mud bullets
    -Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
    -Must be the person's own Chakra infused Mud

    ~ How is that even possible ? It's mud, not some life-sucking leech. If you mean it slows them down, prevents them from moving, bla bla, that's fine, but not sapping their strength, because that's just silly. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-25-2012 at 02:54 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summon has been approved but updating due to new signer and a few updates.


    Summoning Animal: Tuatara
    Scroll Owner: Saizo
    Other Users Who Have Signed Contract: The Seven-Scaled boy
    Summoning Boss If Existing: none currently
    Other Summoning Animals Tied To Contract: Currently None

    Origin:
    It is said if you keep going southeast from kirigakure, far beyond an endless sea where seemingly time has stopped due to the lack of winds, waves and currents, you'll reach their place. It is an elysian archiepielago of lush, green islands called the eternal nest or, in their mother toungue, mutunga kore kōhanga.

    General Description:
    Tuataras or sphenodons, are reptiles which look like lizards, however they are not related whatsoever. They are incredibly long-living and some are even considered living fossils. They are fast, agile, flexible and nimble. Also they have limited regenration capabilties, they can snap off their tail and then regenerate it. Also they posses spikes on their backs which can be stiffened if provoked.

    Summon General Abilities:
    In size, tuatara's vary, from their real life-size to sizes above humans or even large summon sizes.
    Thanks to their incredible life-force and regenerative abilties, the tuataras are fearless (although not immortal of course) to attack and opponent. They can walk on all fours for maximum speed or in a bipedal way. Their claws are comparable to ninja tool metal (they can run their chakra through them to increase damage), also they are capable of handseals. The tuatara's are a complex tribe, divided into 5 districts depending on their elemental affinity and the royal family capable using two or more elements. Barring the ninjutsu, tuatara's are shown as fans of hand-to-hand combat usually carrying weapons to battle (metal claws, tail claws, scythes, daggers, bows) usually stringing intense combos aiming to surprise the opponent(s). They communicate in human words or even sounds often camouflaged as bird calls and surroundings sounds which can only be understood by signers of the contract. The spikes on their backs can be hardened to land piecing and curshing impacts in taijutsu (they extend all around their back including all of the shoulders).

    Summoning:
    The canon summoning jutsu will bring forth a single Tuatara's (per usage) from the districts the size of 2m when biped, clad in light-metal plated armour (like the first hokage's) with a claw/mace on their tail and another weapon; while also being able to use elemental jutsus of their affinities C-rank or below 5 times per summon and creating a A-ranked blast when combining his affinity with the user's elemental chakra in a collaboration jutsu once per summon (all count as a move and if all 5 are used he/she reverse summons). Also the cannon summoning jutsu can be used for bringing up to ten real-life sized tuatara's which don't have any weapons nor elemental jutsus and can be used for scouting/guarding. Summoming with higher and more specific amounts of chakra will bring forth specific summons to the arena which will be submitted later.


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    Last edited by Emperor; 04-25-2012 at 02:55 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal:Cardinal
    Scroll Owner: Goku2000
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Summoning: Love Goddess, Aphrodite
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description:*
    The user uses his summoning tattoos to summon the Love Goddess of Cardinals, Aphrodite. The Love Goddess possesses an almost regal air about her, though it may mostly be the self righteous egotistical behavior she possesses. Strange as it seems, she prefers to walk rather than fly, unless she deems it necessary to do so.*

    When entering a battle, a whirl of flame envelopes the cardinal, altering her drastically in almost an instant. What emerges is a vastly changed creature, the frame of a predatory bird now larger than most men. Light plating armor sits strategically placed upon her body, glimmering as it shields wing, head, chest and legs from immediate dangers. Aphrodite’s legs are no longer the feeble limbs they once were, noticeably more muscular and every bit as strong as their appearance suggests. The flame that begat this transformation leaves its mark, the feathers making up the bird’s wings alight with a flickering blaze. She is ¾ of the size of Gamabunta, with an enormous wing span of 15 meters. Nevertheless, she may be the Love Goddess but she has also earned the title of Mistress of Ninjutsu. She earned the title due to her Dual affinity to Fire and Wind, which she can perform up to A-Rank.

    Proud, flirty, and unable to cope with most summoner’s unless they somehow prove themselves to her. These are the greatest flaws Aphrodite has, not that she sees them in such a way. Once she determines a course of action, she often follows through without considering it any further. Thankfully, even as brash as it may seem, she often prepares before acting in the case of any sort of emergency that may result from a miscalculation. So in spite of her abrasive self assureds she does have the forethought to consider these things beforehand. If only she weren’t such a self important smart ass, then her company would be more tolerable.

    *Note*: Can be Only Summoned Once.
    *Note*: The Armor takes 3 C-Rank hits and breaks.
    *Note*: Must sign Cardinal Contract to use.
    *Note*: Only one element may be used in a move.

    Description and Background: Keleano is the Love Godess Aphrodite's younger sister. She was born in a storm in the valley of the cardinals and this was prophesied to be a great sign of things to come consequently she has a dual affinity to lightning and water, which she can perform up to b rank .She is about half the size of gamabunta and can fit one rider on her back. Due to flying in storms many times and dodging lightning she is very agile and fast flying at up to 150 miles per *hour. She is very fierce which represents her affinity and will immediately fight anyone she does not see fit to summon her. However when she does trust her summoner she is a very good fighter and helpful as well.
    Note: Can be Only Summoned Once.
    Note: Summoning counts as a move*
    Note: Must sign cardinal contract to use
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=175313


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    Last edited by Emperor; 04-25-2012 at 02:56 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hakke Harikēn no kaiten) – 8 Trigrams Hurricane Rotation
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: The user will start spinning at an immerse rate, spinning at an even faster rate then he ever did. Because of the spinning rate of the user has became so fast, the chakra barrier becomes irregular, forming a crater in the ground and starts to manipulate the surroundings like air. As it is forming a hurricane the air will surround it and rocks begin to catch the current of the hurricane, becoming a fierce hurricane filled with rocks from the crater the rotation has caught up. Because of the irregularity of the chakra, it will expand and be mostly everywhere within the hurricane, helping the formation of the spinning hurricane and its density.
    Note:
    ~User won't be able to do A-ranked or higher jutsus in the next 2 turns.
    -No to jyuuken, custom fighting style, strong fist, freestyle, any forms of taijutsu, meaning the user have to remain stationary for 2 turn, because of the technique's impact on the user's body.
    ~Causes -30 damage to user.
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Dr. House may teach this.

    ±± Declined ±± A defensive technique that causes damage? Filled with pointless restrictions. OPed. Copy of a cannon technique only more powerful. Don't Resubmit. And when i mean Don't Resubmit i mean Don't resubmit any more variations of the rotation techniques already existing.


    Had been asked to provide proof of sign of snake, so Re-submit from this post: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...&postcount=392

    (Kuchiyose:Bobu Hebi) ~ Summoning: Boosting Snake
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 Ninjutsu +10 Taijutsu)
    Description: The user will bite his thumb, smear blood in his tattoo, summoning "Past". Past is a very calm and really reliable snake, making a great connection with the user. As Past is summoned, he will auto channel his chakra into the user, boosting his strength and chakra powers by +10 for 5 turns. After 5 turns, the snake will be exhausted and will disappear.
    Note:
    ~May be taught by Dr. House
    ~Stays for 5 turns.
    ~Can be summoned 1x
    ~must sign snake contract

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit


    (Kuchiyose:Bobu Hebi) ~ Summoning: Trilogy Snakes of Speed
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 15 (-5 each exertion)
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 Taijutsu)
    Description: The user will bite his thumb, smear blood on his tattoo, and summon five snakes for each body parts. However this is five snakes, but only counts as one summoning since one can't be summoned without the other/can't live without the other. As these snakes are around the user's body on each side and around his foot, they will exert highly condensed air from their mouth, creating an explosion of the condensed air which will drive the user into the direction of the user's wishes. With this, user is able to achieve lee without weights speed.
    Note:
    ~Can be summoned 3x if snakes gets killed.
    ~Can't hurt the opponent
    ~Taught by Dr. House
    ~Stays active ti'll the end of battle.
    ~must sign snake contract

    Proof of signing contact: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=115373
    ~Leaving for Scorps~


    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-28-2012 at 12:08 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suiton: Shuushuku No Hebi |Water Release: Constriction of the Snake
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user focuses his suiton chakra into the air behind the opponent. He creates 2 small snakes out of the moist and water molecules in the atmosphere, that then silently (due to the fluidity of their body) go towards the opponent. When they are close to the opponent, they bite him, and inject water into his arteries and muscles, causing an enormous amount of pain and other medical errors in the body.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used once (if the snakes are able to bite the opponent)
    Note: No Lightning in the same turn.
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton:Bakuretsu Ganzai)-Exploding Pill
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra cost:30
    Description:The user pulls out a round shaped pill,he then performs a water jutsu and lets it get close to the opponent,then he procceeds to throw the Bakuretsu Ganzai into the stream of water,which creates an explosion of 10 PSI
    The Bakuretsu Ganzai are made of very powerful antacids which when in contact in water they being to fizz and create a high amount of pressurized gas,increasing the damage a water technique does and it's spread.
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit an item like this.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Hagfish approved on this post.

    (Kuchiyose: Babauo: Akina)- Sumoning: Hagfish: Akina
    Type: Sumons
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Akina is a large hagfish that measures 2 meters in length (6 feet), once summoned she releases a slime from her body that oozes from her skin and begins to cover the feild (Can cover the field in 2 turns). Akina having having the ability to create the slime she has mastered the ability to use slime from her body to attack and defend. By forming the slime into multipule types of simple 3D shapes, walls, spheres, cones, pryminds, cubes, and even simlpe weaponry (blunt weapons) and use the slime weapons or shape as an extension of her body.
    - Making anything of Slime counts as a summoners move.
    - She doesnt need handseals for the munipulation of the slime.
    - Can stay on the feild for 3 rounds.


    ±± Declined ±± Rank of this slime technique? Also, covering the whole field in it is a no specially because you haven't explain the properties of this slime.


    (Baba: Baba Gatto)- Hagfish arts: Hagfish Gut
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will summon a hagfish from their stomach and shot them at the opponent from their mouths. The Hagfish is able to stretch its body up to mid range to catch the opponent, then wrap their body around the opponent to their legs, the hagfish can also be used to release a slime from its mouth that works a glue like substance to trap the opponents leg or if shot right can even catch the opponents mouth and stop them from being able to breath.
    - Can only be used if signed the hagfish contract.

    ±± Declined ±± Summon it in another place of your body, not inside your stomach


    (Baba: Baba Bunshin)- Hagfish Arts: Hagfish Clone
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user makes a clone of themselves out of hagfish, once the clone is physicaly touched (By an opponent or physical oject) the clone will collapse and release a mass of sticky slime from the bodies of the hagfish, and the hagfish will cover the opponent were they are.
    - Normal clone rules apply.
    - The slime is released as the opponet makes contact with the clone.

    ~ Left for Scorps ~


    ±± Declined ±± What can this clone do? Also, you don't make it...you must summon it, same as every other summon. You must summon several hagfish which use the transformation technique to resemble a copy of you.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù: Shinigami no tatsumaki) Reaper Scythe Arts: The Grim Reaper's Tornado
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will attach chains onto their Scythes/Scythes and start swing the in a circular motion or around the user in any direction. This allows the user to attack multples enemies from diiferent direction and also allow them to deflect ninja tools coming towards them.

    ~ Doesn't really deserve to be a technique ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-26-2012 at 02:26 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Entei no Yoro) Flame Empress Armour
    Type: Custom Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 60
    Description: This armor is dark red predominantly, but also sports orange and black parts, with the first ones being shaped like flames and the second resembling dragon’s limbs. It’s basically made up of three different parts: the revealing breastplate with dragon like wings attached to it, the orange gauntlets and the dragon claw shaped greaves. The armors special ability allows the user to absorb up to A-Rank fire techniques, and using the fire chakra absorbed they channel it towards the sword and with a swing the release a A-Ran fire stream.
    -Can absorb one fire technique per turn
    -Can only be used by Toshiro



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    Last edited by Emperor; 04-26-2012 at 02:27 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I'll need to close this thread for a few days to get it up to date. As you know, we've been suffering staff changes and since we've been needing to pitch in here and there, some things have been left behind a bit, namely in my case, my duties in this thread and the CFS thread.

    I'm sorry for any inconvenient and i'll try my best to do this as fast as possible. I hope everyone understands and i promise this will be brief

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ±± New Cycle of submissions. This cycle however, won't last a full week. It will start from this post and will be end at the 29th of April.

    I must remind members that reading the first post of this thread is essential to be able to submit techniques properly and get them approved. Following the proper templates, formatting rules/restrictions and general guidelines for submitting a technique is half way through to getting your Cj approved ±±

    Personal note: thanks to all that helped get the thread checked and under control in such a short window of time
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Howard View Post
    (Doton: Doro Rappu) - Earth Style: Mud Wrap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The person takes hold of Chakra infused mud already in play due to the chakra already found in the mud it can be slightly manipulated to surround the opponent. It basically blasts out and around the opponent covering their body in mud. This makes moving harder as well as restricts breathing. This is due to the chakra infused mud that covers the opponent It has the same effect as Swamp of the Underground as it saps the enemy of his strength. The mud can possibly asphyxiate the opponent if it successfully covers the opponent completely. The mud can be controlled slightly and forced to surround the opponent's head making it's way into their nose, mouth and eyes. The user must have used a Mud based Earth jutsu prior to this jutsu.
    Notes:

    -Must have already used a mud based jutsu such as Swamp, Mud Fall, or mud bullets
    -Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
    -Must be the person's own Chakra infused Mud

    ~ How is that even possible ? It's mud, not some life-sucking leech. If you mean it slows them down, prevents them from moving, bla bla, that's fine, but not sapping their strength, because that's just silly. ~
    (Doton: Doro Rappu) - Earth Style: Mud Wrap
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short ( of mud )
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The person takes hold of Chakra infused mud already in play due to the chakra already found in the mud it can be slightly manipulated to surround the opponent. It basically blasts out and around the opponent covering their body in mud. This makes moving harder as well as restricts breathing. This is due to the chakra infused mud that covers the opponent It has the same effect as Swamp of the Underground as it makes movement harder. The mud can possibly asphyxiate the opponent if it successfully covers the opponent completely. The mud can be controlled slightly and forced to surround the opponent's head making it's way into their nose, mouth and eyes. The user must have used a Mud based Earth jutsu prior to this jutsu.
    Notes:

    -Must have already used a mud based jutsu such as Swamp, Mud Fall, or mud bullets
    -Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
    -Must be the person's own Chakra infused Mud

    ~ Edited the range to short. Short here means the opponent must be in short range of the mud, not short range of you, so that's fine. Removed the part about regaining strength. Approved. ~

    I edited it. I basically meant the same as the Swamp of the Underground how it becomes harder to move the more you struggle.

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    (Doton: Kasui dou) - Earth Style: Spiked Body
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user concentrates doton chakra throughout his body, he then releases the doton chakra through his skin forming a thin layer of hardened earth. He can then manipulate the thin layer to form spikes all around his body skewering anything that is in immediate contact with the user. This comes in handy when in close range combat if the user has the opponent in a hold the spikes can skewer the opponent fatally wounding him. The spikes can not be shot out from the users body and when he releases hold of them they simply fall off of the user. This can be controlled to make a single spike or dozens.
    Notes:

    -Can only be used thrice per battle
    -Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
    -The spikes can only reach out an arms length
    -While covered in spikes the user is weakened to Raiton based attacks.

    ~ Too long. Also, how long does each use last ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fūton: Kami Kizu )- Wind Release: Paper Cut
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user concentrates his wind chakra at a point and produces a small sharp blade of wind which is 2cm long and as thin as a needle to cut the opponent immediately. This slice of wind resembles something like a paper cut and will do nothing overly harmful to the opponent but it can be useful to interrupt a string of hand seals the enemy may be performing, as the cut is instant.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.

    ~ Interesting idea, but it can easily be abused. Declined. ~

    (Genjutsu: Niwa Tougenkyou) - Illusionary Arts: Garden of Eden
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user releases his chakra into his opponents brain and makes him see trees and flowers grow out of the ground in the most beautiful way, whilst the opponent is distracted by this roots of a plant grow out of the ground extremely fast and bind the opponent to a spot, with the roots wrapping tightly around the opponent and restricting any movement. Due to the user thinking he/she is constricted by the plant roots he/she is unable to move.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No Genjutsu in next turn.

    ~ Similar to that Genjutsu Kurenai uses ~

    Quote Originally Posted by Erzo View Post

    (Fūton: Kase) - Wind Release: Handcuffs
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates on his wind chakra and forms a thick line of wind with two holes on each side which form around the users two wrists. The holes which fit tightly around the users wrists and the hole size can be changed by the user at will as different opponents will have different size of wrists. Furthermore the thick line of winds length can be changed by the user depending on whether the opponents hands are closer or further away from each other. This jutsu is mainly used to restrict the opponent from bringing his hands together thus preventing him from using hand seals.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times.
    Note: No S-rank wind on same turn.

    ~ Read the description carefully, you plan to handcuff yourself ? Or is it a line of wind-handcuffs that goes from your wrist to theirs ? In either case, modify the explanation. ~
    Resubmitting the following :

    (Fūton: Kase) - Wind Release: Handcuffs
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates on his wind chakra and forms a thick line of wind with two holes on each side which form around the opponents two wrists. The holes fit tightly around the opponents wrists and the hole size can be changed by the user, at will as different opponents will have different size of wrists. Furthermore the thick line of winds length can be changed by the user depending on whether the opponents hands are closer or further away from each other. This jutsu is mainly used to restrict the opponent from bringing his hands together thus preventing him from using hand seals.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times.
    Note: No S-rank wind on same turn.

    ~ Essentially inescapable, since he needs his hands to do most handseals to escape. Declined. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Soshi Soroi) Elemental Suit
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (Depending on if the user attacks using this.)
    Description: The user will release an elemental chakra that has an actual physical substance such as water or earth and will release it from their body making a highly concentrated suit of that element that encases their body. This acts as a defense and attack mechanism. It attacks by utilizing the element that the suit is made of to create anything (within reason) from it. If the user for example creates a suit of earth, they can make a shield form from the earth on their right arm that covers their body, same goes for if they use the water element. They can make a spike erupt from the earth or water from the suit that will pierce through the opponent or make spikes erupt from all over the suit to strike multiple targets. The user could make springs under their feet allowing them to jump to great heights. The size of what they create from the suit can be up to only 5 meters in height and 1 meters in width.


    Notes:
    - Each suit lasts for 3 turns.
    - Must wait 2 turns before making another suit.
    - The user can only use the suit to create one thing once per turn and it counts as one of their 3 jutsus per turn.
    - A suit can be made only once per battle, so once if you make a suit of water and it 3 turns are over then you cannot create it again, but you can still make a suit of earth.
    - Can only be used by -Yard-

    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit





    (Kagenresu Katana) Shadowless Sword
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu
    Description: This sword was forged by the elder snakes and infused with Swift chakra by Ulquiorra. This making it so that he can make the sword move at great speeds while wielding it in his hands, slashing anyone in reach in an instant with great cutting power due to the speed. The blade is made of an unknown material that is impossible to break and never dulls. The blade it'self is sharp enough to cut through solid bone like butter. The user can only use the infused chakra to benefit towards increasing movement of strikes with the sword, as well as grant the arm that is wielding the sword the ability to move at enhanced speed for blocking and striking as long as he is wielding the sword.

    Notes:
    ~ Only Yard may Wield this sword.
    ~ This cannot be used to enhance run speed.
    ~ The user can only use the chakra of the sword to enhance the movement of the arm or arms wielding the sword and that is for strikes and defending.
    ~Declined~ There are no true restrictions here. The restrictions you made should go without saying.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fūton: Kaze Tenjou )- Wind Release: Rumbling ceiling
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user creates a large vertical spherical wall of flowing wind above the opponent, the wall of wind, immeaditly forces the opponent to the ground, inflicting a large amount of blunt damage and slicing the opponent in several places as it does so leaving various three inch deep slashes in the opponent. The flowing wind wall can be used to prevent the enemy from launching themselves into the air.
    -No forbidden rank fuuton jutsu for the rest of the turn.

    ~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~

    Quote Originally Posted by -Scaze- View Post

    (Jakou)-Musk
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Type:Supplementry
    Description:The users Ninken releases a large amount of pheromones mixed with chakra that spreads out across the battle field, the chakra used so as to make the pheromones react with human skin. The chakra mixed scent reacts well with the oils on the skin of humans marking them with a potent scent that is nigh on impossible to get off, in a similar way to how dogs mark their territory with the pugent scent that they produce naturally. The musk also can make the opponent nauseas, however it also allowers the Ninken and their human companion to track them by smell with ease. Inuzuka clan members are usually immune to this musk as they produce their own naturally. Doujutsu users will also see the release of the pheromones due to it being melded with chakra.
    -Nausia lasts for one turn and can prevent the opponent from using techniques that require exhaling in fear of vomiting, it also disrupts the opponents sense of balance.
    -The pheromones will not be able to use the air as a medium if it is raining.
    -Declined-
    You can't control what your opponent's think/feel, so the part about the opponent having fear of exhaling as to go.
    (Jakou)-Musk
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Type:Supplementry
    Description:The users Ninken releases a large amount of pheromones mixed with chakra that spreads out across the battle field, the chakra used so as to make the pheromones react with human skin. The chakra mixed scent reacts well with the oils on the skin of humans marking them with a potent scent that is nigh on impossible to get off, in a similar way to how dogs mark their territory with the pugent scent that they produce naturally. The musk also can make the opponent nauseas, however it also allowers the Ninken and their human companion to track them by smell with ease. Inuzuka clan members are usually immune to this musk as they produce their own naturally. Doujutsu users will also see the release of the pheromones due to it being melded with chakra.
    -Nausia lasts for one turn disrupts the opponents sense of balance.
    -The pheromones will not be able to use the air as a medium if it is raining.

    ~ Approved ~

    (Fūton: Kaze Sakura )- Wind Release: Wind Petals
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra on anywhere on the battle field, bringing forth dozens upon hundreds of sakura shaped blades of wind. The blades of wind being no larger than 2 inches, and being extremely flat and sharp at the edges. The blades of wind are relatively invisible, however the only saving grace the opponent has, is that they can be seen slighty if the suns glow hits them, and that they create a slight faint, yet just noticeable by anyone who is being aware of their surrondings breeze. The user is able to direct the swarm of petals with several fluid hand movements, using them to attack or defend.
    -Can only be used 2x.
    -No A rank or above fuuton jutsu for the rest of the turn.

    ~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-27-2012 at 02:27 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Fire body (kasai bodi)
    Type:Defence
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user channels fire chakra all around his body and releases it turning his whole body into fire making him able to be hit by attack and them pass through him.
    -Can only be used three time a battle
    -Can send attack through him a rank or lower.But only B rank or lower water.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-26-2012 at 02:35 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for every extra person)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The technique was developed after studying the unique mind techniques of the Yaminaka, which bare close resemblance to genjutsu. In this illusion, the user will focus their chakra on two or more opponents which will initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims believe as if their opponent is using a wind technique, by experiencing a huge gust of wind mixed with dust, blocking their vision. Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and believe their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both shinobi victims will then ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, believing that they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies and believing their comrade to be dead, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
    ~For use on more then two opponents, the hand seals Horse → Bird must be used in order for the user to focus their chakra to a wider range of enemies
    ~Since this jutsu requires has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
    ~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
    ~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

    -Declined-
    Restrict the amount of times it can be used and what's the process which activates the gengutsu (eye contact, hand seals, etc). Just focus chakra isn't a valid reason. Also, about that 'huge gust of wind', add that it isn't enough to do damage your opponent. It only blinds them.
    ~Resubmission~

    Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for each person above 2)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The technique was developed after studying the unique mind techniques of the Yaminaka, which bare close resemblance to genjutsu. The caster will make the Horse → Bird seals to initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims believe as if their opponent is using a wind technique, by experiencing a huge gust of wind mixed with dust, blocking their vision (no physical harm comes from the gust). Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and believe their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both shinobi victims will then ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, believing that they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies and believing their comrade to be dead, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
    ~Since this jutsu requires has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
    ~Can be used 3 times in a match
    ~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
    ~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

    ~ Ridiculous. The Yamanaka mind techniques have nothing to do with Genjutsu. Your technique also has nothing to do with Yamanakas, since the whole enemy fighting themselves thing is not exactly an uncommon idea ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton:Howaito Raiton) -Lightning Style:White Lightning
    Rank:B
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15( -10 For Every Turn This Is In Use )
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The User Makes The Horse Hand seal as the User Does This He Gathers Ration Chakra ,The user Then covers His/her body With Raiton charka By using Shape Transformation And Nature Transformation The User Then Turns The Raiton Chakra covering The Users Body Into a lightning shield And Also Giving The user A White Lightning Aurora, and it's able to reduces psychical and Elemental damage

    Note:Can only Be Used 3 times per Battle
    Note: While Active The User Cannot Use Any Element Other Than Raiton
    Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces psychical damage (25%)
    Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces Elemental damage by 50% (Doton)
    Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces Elemental damage by 35% (Raiton)
    Note:Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage
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    ±± Both Declined ±± Similar techniques exist.
    (Raiton:Howaito Raiton) -Lightning Style: White Lightning
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive /Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15( -10 For Every Turn This Is In Use )
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user makes the horse hand seal as the user does this he gathers raiton chakra ,The user then covers his/her body with raiton charka and by using shape transformation andnature transformation the user then turns the raiton chakra covering the users body into a white lightning aurora , a side effect of this causes the users eyes and hair to turn pure white , and the user will get white lightning marks throughout the users body. The white lightning shield is also able to reduces psychical and Elemental damage, while In this form the user psychical attacks become electrified , and the user can slam their hands together with Great Force And When The users Hands collide They releases Raiton Chakra That They Gathered from the white lightning Creating A Flash So Bright That Any Thing in Close To Mid-Range Is Blinded with a white flash(Hand clap)

    Note: Can only Be Used 3 times per Battle
    Note: While Active the User Cannot Use Any Element Other Than Raiton
    Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces psychical damage (25%), Elemental damage by 50% (Doton), and Elemental damage by 35% (Raiton)
    Note: Will Not Work If the Opponent Is Not Looking at the User (Hand clap)
    Note: If User or the Opponent Eyes Are closed They Will Be Unaffected (Hand clap)
    Note This can Only be Used Two Times per battle (Hand clap)
    Note: If Caught in This Flash the User/Opponent Will be Unable to See for That Turn (Hand clap)
    Note: The user’s physical attacks are electrified (sending waves of electric into objects when the attacks connect)
    Note: The user physical attacks are capable of breaking solid rock/Steele
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used
    Note: The user can only keep the white lightning shield up for three turns at a time
    Note: A side effect of this causes the users eyes and hair to turn pure white , and the user will get white lightning marks throughout the users body
    Note:Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage
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    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto uzumaki bujii sage View Post
    (Raiton:Howaito oujou) -Lightning Style:White Death
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:15
    Damage:5
    Description:The User Will Gather Raiton Charka Into Four Fingers ,The index finger And The middle finger Of Each Hand, The User Then Focus Their Raiton Chakra Into Those Four Fingers As The User Does This Their Four Fingers Start To Turn White, The User Then Uses Shape Transformation To Transform That Charka Into Tiny Bots Of White Lightning And It's Now Giving Off A High Pitch Sound
    The User The Proceeds To Slide Two Fingers Across The Other One's Creating A Sound So High Pitch That It Causes Anyone In Close Range To Become Death ( Loss Of hearing ),causing a little pain to the user and the target, This Happens Because When The Fingers on One Hand Comes In Contact With The Fingers On The Other Hand The Friction Becomes So Great That When The two Sounds Mix It Causes An Ever Higher Pitched Sound To Form, because of this the user and target fells slight pain

    Note:Can Only Be Used If White Lighting Is In Use
    Note:The User And Opponent Goes Death For That Turn
    Note:Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage
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    Basically Just Make A Fist And Bring index finger And The middle finger Out Of It And Just Place One On Top Of The Other One And Slide It Across


    ±± Declined ±± This is not a C-Rank. Also, you can't keep capitalizing the first letter of each word you type. It makes it very hard to read and understand. Also, this needs more explanation on both its effects and also its abilities, although i must admit the general idea isn't that bad.
    (Raiton:Howaito oujou) -Lightning Style: White Death
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user gathers raiton charka into four fingers ,The index finger And The middle finger Of each hand, The user then focus their raiton chakra into those four fingers As the user does this their four fingers start to turn white, the user then uses shape transformation To transform that charka into tiny bots of white lightning and It's now giving off A high Pitch sound. The user then proceeds to rub their two fingers across their other one's creating A sound so high pitch that it causes anyone in close range to mid-range to become death ( complete Loss of hearing ),and also causing severe pain to the the target, This happens because when the fingers on one hand comes in contact with the fingers on the other hand the friction becomes so great that when the two sounds mix it causes an even higher pitched sound to form, that new sound gives off vibrations at such a high speed that it causes the targets ears drums to become extremely stricken with pain ,the high pitched sound causes the loss of hearing(hearing a loud ringing sound) , and the vibrations cause the pain

    Note: Can Only Be Used If White Lighting Is In Use
    Note: The Opponent Goes Death For two turns
    Note: The high pitched sound causes the targets ears to become damaged and the target will hear ringing sounds, when the target is hit with this jutsu his ears will not be death (no hearing at all), but the target will hear a loud ringing sound causing him/her to become unable to hear anything else for two turns
    Note: The user can aim this in a single direction (causing any one in that direction to become affected)
    Note: The width of the sound 6 feet
    Note: The user cannot adjust the range, it always goes up to mid
    Note: This is capable of affecting many targets at once ( as long as there in range )
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used
    Note: When hit by the sound the target slows down due to the pain this jutus causes ( by one speed level),and it lasts for two turns
    Note: Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage
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    ~ And why won't you get hurt by the sound ? ~

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto uzumaki bujii sage View Post
    (Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade
    Type:Weapon (sword)
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:N/A (20 when you add Raiton chakra )
    Damage:40
    Description:The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form

    when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form


    Note:
    The white lightning blade can only be used 3 times per battle

    Note:When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state

    Note:There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.

    NoteWhen the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade

    Note:
    When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele

    ~ So..this sword, for all its forms and things, only has the power to cut steel ? How is it different from thousands of custom weapons that can do that AND something else ? Declined. ~

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    (Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade
    Type:Weapon (sword)
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2)
    Damage: 40
    Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form
    , in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally.

    when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form
    , in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see , like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent .


    Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
    Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
    Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
    Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.

    ~ When you say pierce, you mean that the pulses can go through them without causing damage, or with causing damage ? ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-27-2012 at 02:32 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Appurippu!) - Water Style: Rip-up!
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User utilizes his mastery over water element in order to divide H2O (water) molecules into H2 and O thus effectively 'erasing' selected volume of water. After user separates them he has to keep them divided by coating them with chakra in order for them to not merge again into water.
    *Due to complexity of jutsu user cannot use S-rank or above water jutsus during his next turn
    *Can be used two times per battle
    *Can only be taught by Kaziname

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    I know that this would require quite a chakra control, but when you consider that here on NB we use chakra to create complex chemical compounds, various frequencies and whatnot, this jutsu turns out to be a piece of cake :D

    (Genjutsu: Kokoro no Rinku) - Illusionary Style: Mind Link
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This genjutsu was made in order to increase the team cohesion in battle. User of jutsu can use it on a maximum of 5 people (including himself). Through it, those in effect, can transmit various information or feelings to select or even all users. For example, if one ninja hears something he can immediately synthesize a sound in his fellow ninja head which says: "Someone is approaching." or if one ninja sees an enemy jutsu coming for them he can synthesize an image or 'video feed' of sorts in his ally's head in order to let him know about it.

    The next jutsu is a CW I posted quite some time ago and it got declined due to it's abilities not being organized. Now, I know I have to quote it, but it's in archived thread so... link

    ~ Declined, Yamanaka-ish ~

    (Fuer Grissa ost Drauka) – Bringer of Death
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Rather remarkable and unique weapon created by chakra molders of the old. Said to originate from distant land in the north, where blacksmiths used chakra along with mastery of their talent to forge armor and weapons, this weapon comes in form of surprisingly normal looking, brown, leather bracer which covers entire forearm, its only exception being round, blue crystal embed into its center which shines upon every usage. In ancient texts, named as "One that is All" and "Form without Form", it brought many scholars and historians of the time into heated debate which was to conclude if weapon ever existed. After many years of arguments and counter-arguments, texts were labeled as nothing more than bedtime stories and as such soon fell into depths of oblivion. After hundreds of years, a man stumbled over a weapon while searching for gold in long-forgotten crypts of northern lords. After spending over twenty years on discovering and mastering abilities of the weapon he possessed, he systematically assassinated key people in the rule over northern districts while at the same time activating himself in the field of politics. Soon enough, he ensured himself and his bloodline a constant seat of power in rule over north. Weapon then passed from father to son and one of them was foolish enough to write down abilities on his deathbed because he didn't want his son to spend years on mastering abilities on his own. Not long after father's death, son was killed in his cradle and weapon was stolen where it's every traces is lost. Now, after all these centuries and decades, rumors has it that a lone ninja got his hands on it and secrets to its abilites...
    Abilities: User can, by using his chakra, create any weapon, shield or armor on any place on his body through use of special bracer. While they don't possess any special abilities they can be imbued with elemental chakra in order to increase their effectiveness. Although they can be thrown or shot, they will dissolve into thin air in a short time after hitting the target as they got too far from bracer. Every creation counts as a jutsu, but creating multiple copies of same thing still count as only one jutsu (for example, a handful of shurikens).
    *Can only be used by Kaziname

    ~ Is that even Japanese ? ~

    btw. I know you said I ought to make it special, but I think I'll make a set of CJs just for it... If I add any other abilities to it right now, I'm pretty sure it would be deemed as an OP weapon and rightly so.
     
         
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    (Fuuton:Kaze Supea)-Wind Release:Wind Spear
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B
    Range:Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:After performing the Ram->Boar hand seals the user will exhale a stream of wind that is small in diameter but very long and it resembles a long staff.And it is sharp enogh to pierce the oponent.
    ~Note:Can be used three times per battle.
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    (Fuuton:Kaze Toku)-WInd Release:Wind Shiled
    Type:Defensive
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will form a large shield of wind wich he can hold in his hand like a normal shield.The shield is large enough to cover the whole users body if the user stands on his knees.The shield can remain active for 3 turns before disspearsing.
    ~Note:Usable twice per battle
    ~Note:Lasts for 3 turns once activated unless it is destroyed.
    ~Both Declined~ Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Sand Falll
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user makes the sand under the opponent un-dense, causing the opponent to sink


    ~ Japanese name ~
     
         
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    (Iriko Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Snivellus) Sea Snail Summoning: Snivellus
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description:
    Snivellus is the boss summon of the Sea Snails that reside in the underwater caves near Kirigakure. Snivellus isn't the biggest snail but he also isn't the smallest. He has a very bright purple-orange shell with spikes that cover it except for a small area on top (where the summoner stands or sits). Snivellus is big enough to have one user ride on the shell so about 8 feet high and 10 feet long. He is faster then the typical snail on land but his speed on water is increased to that of the user. Being the boss of the Sea Snails he does have unique abilities that only pertain to him. Snivellus has complete mastery over the lightning element and can use most techniques (except forbidden). The spikes that reside on his back have the ability to conduct incoming lightning/electric techniques and nullify them (up to B-Rank). Unlike other snails, sea snail's bodies are closer to the ground and when they emerge from the shell there face/eyes are at the base of the shell while the very long antennas they have rise to the higher of the shell. This goes for the same towards Snivellus and from these antennas is where he is able to unleash a very powerful electrical charge throughout the ground. Snivellus will slam his antennas into the ground and release a very powerful lightning current that takes the form as a spear. A current emits from both antennas and is sent towards the target in a crescent path so it hits a target from both sides.

    Notes:
    - Can use lightning techniques up to S-Rank which count towards the users moves
    - Diffuses targeted lightning techniques up to B-Rank // twice per battle
    - Lightning Spear Current is up to mid-range // once per battle // counts as technique // is Forbidden Ranked and dispels him due to the damage caused
    - No other summons allowed when Snivellus is on the field
    - Snivellus lasts 4 turns on field or until destroyed
    - Must have signed the "Sea Snails" contract
    - Only trainable/usable by Coyote

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    (Iriko Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Beauregard) Sea Snail Summoning: Beauregard
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: n/a
    Description:
    Beauregard is a Sea Snail that is slightly bigger than a human male hand. He is summoned on the should of the user and remains there. Beauregard has a green shell with bright yellow stripes. However, Beauregard antennas are very heightened beyond the normal snail. Similar to the Inuzuka senses with smell, Beauregard can sense chakra very easily on the battlefield. Beauregard speaks to the user and doesn't attack. He's simple there for the purpose of sensory.

    Notes:

    - Beauregard remains of the field for 5 turns
    - Must have signed the "Sea Snails" contract
    - Can sense chakra up to mid-range either it be in the sky or ground
    - Only usable/trainable by coyote.

    ±± Declined ±± Sorry, i won't approve chakra sensory summons even if they are easily countered


    (Iriko Katatsumuri Gigei: Omowazu Katatsumuri Chouhou) Sea Snail Arts: Spontaneous Snail Salute
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    The user will preform 1 handseal then lift both of their hands up towards the target and from within both sleeves on both arms hundreds of rapidly spiraling snail shells with be launched at the target like bullets. These shells are from a sect of the Sea Snail species that hail from the icy north in the sea near Yukigakure. The shells are as hard as ice and steel so in reality they're able to penetrate skin and weak defenses.

    Notes:
    - Must have signed the "Sea Snails" contract
    - Only usable/trainable by Coyote

    ~ Left for Scorps ~


    ±± Approved ±±
     
         
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    [Shitoryu: Kiba] Four Swords Flow: Fangs
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: (Shitoryu: Kiba literally meaning "Four Sword Flow: Fangs" or "Four Swords Style: Fangs") is a specialized form of using the fang swords. The weapon set consists of four different fangs, each having two special natures and highly attractive to one of the swords, however, repulsive to the other two. All four fangs are made with different Metals and elemental Chakra. When used together they become set of extremely powerful weapons with high durability.
    The Fangs were considered to be super natural weapons, recorded by earlier generations that they were bestowed in the ninja world to keep balance in power. The legend continues to state that each of the sword was sent down to one of the country in the ninja world, some people trying to attain the power ended up slaughtering innocent people for their evil purpose. The Fangs were then sealed in an stone located in middle of those countries. Over the time the seal broke, once again revealing the power of legendary fangs to the mere humans.

    暗殺者芳 | The Messiah's Fang:

    This particular fang has said to be the most cursed of all, the blood of countless ninjas was drawn by this very sword in the stealthiness of nights. The Blade holds two elemental natures; Wind and Ice, and it is made up of sharpest metal. The Fang was also shaped with spikes like all other fangs and is attractive to Demon's Fang. Being Attractive to a weapon means that the end of the handle (start of the sword) fits into the end of the handle of other sword allowing the user to hold two swords in one hand, both pointing in opposite directions.

    悪魔芳 | The Demon's Fang:

    The Demon's Fang, the most fearful one is made up of Fire and abundant Chakra. It is attractive to The Messiah's Fang, meaning it connects with that sword allowing user to wield both at once. The sword is known for its intensity of damage.

    悪魔芳 | The Devil's Fang:

    The Devil's Fang is the strongest of all the fangs. It holds the call to earth and is known for the magnitude of damage. It is also able to slice through bones and flesh of the opponent and is attractive to The Angel's Fang, which means the end of The Devil's Fang connects with the end on The Angel's fang, allowing user to wield the swords in one hand, where both sharp ends pointing at different directions.

    天使芳 | The Angel's Fang:

    The Angel's Fang is mightiest of all, It has the most piercing abilities and is the lightest in mass. The Sword is made up of elemental chakras; lightning and water. Its smoothness and piercing range allows user to use it in coalition with The Devil's Fang. The sword itself is shaped like The Messiah's Fang, "fangs" "spikes" pointing downwards.
    Note:
    ♦ The Elemental Natures have nothing related to the technique itself, Like all metals they are able to conduct only those specific natures barely increasing the stats.
    ♦ The Wielder of the four fangs can use them separately, in pairs or the entire set.
    ♦ The set of four fangs will be wielded using the connecting mechanism where two swords are combined together by their handles and the pointy edge pointing outwards in opposite direction. Two swords in each hand.
    ♦ Using all of them together will effect the speed, but Taijutsu masters are not affected by it.
    ♦ The Shitoryu is merely a name to the set of sword and not a fighting style allocated to the fangs.
    ♦ Each sword can be summoned only once per battle or all of them together (still once).
    ♦ To use the jutsu allocated to the weapon, all fangs must be wielded. A single fang cannot perform the jutsu alone.
    ♦ The swords/fangs can only be wielded by -Blizzard-.
    ♦♦♦ Special Note: The chakra natures are not ability, just giving the sword the uniqueness.
    Dropping: The Frozen Fang

    -Declined-
    This is a set of weapons and not a weapon. Also, the fact that each weapon has it's own chakra nature makes it looks like they're 4 different custom weapons. And you didn't mention any kind of ability. If you want, you can have normal swords with no effects on your bio and then just create jutsus for them
    [Shitoryu: Kiba] Four Swords Flow: Fangs
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: (Shitoryu: Kiba literally meaning "Four Sword Flow: Fangs" or "Four Swords Style: Fangs") is a specialized form of using the fang swords. The weapon set consists of four different fangs, each having two special natures and highly attractive to one of the swords, however, repulsive to the other two. All four fangs are made with different Metals and elemental Chakra. When used together they become set of extremely powerful weapons with high durability.
    The Fangs were considered to be super natural weapons, recorded by earlier generations that they were bestowed in the ninja world to keep balance in power. The legend continues to state that each of the sword was sent down to one of the country in the ninja world, some people trying to attain the power ended up slaughtering innocent people for their evil purpose. The Fangs were then sealed in an stone located in middle of those countries. Over the time the seal broke, once again revealing the power of legendary fangs to the mere humans. The elemental nature of each sword helps the user to channel that chakra (once; not constant supply) and increase the sword's range to 2 foot in length and 12 inches to the sides providing the user more cutting ability than normal.

    暗殺者芳 | The Messiah's Fang:

    Elemental Nature; Ice
    This particular fang has said to be the most cursed of all, the blood of countless ninjas was drawn by this very sword in the stealthiness of nights. The Blade holds two elemental natures; Wind and Ice, and it is made up of sharpest metal. The Fang was also shaped with spikes like all other fangs and is attractive to Demon's Fang. Being Attractive to a weapon means that the end of the handle (start of the sword) fits into the end of the handle of other sword allowing the user to hold two swords in one hand, both pointing in opposite directions.

    悪魔芳 | The Demon's Fang:

    Elemental Nature; Fire
    The Demon's Fang, the most fearful one is made up of Fire and abundant Chakra. It is attractive to The Messiah's Fang, meaning it connects with that sword allowing user to wield both at once. The sword is known for its intensity of damage.

    悪魔芳 | The Devil's Fang:

    Elemental Nature; Earth
    The Devil's Fang is the strongest of all the fangs. It holds the call to earth and is known for the magnitude of damage. It is also able to slice through bones and flesh of the opponent and is attractive to The Angel's Fang, which means the end of The Devil's Fang connects with the end on The Angel's fang, allowing user to wield the swords in one hand, where both sharp ends pointing at different directions.

    天使芳 | The Angel's Fang:

    Elemental Nature; Lightning
    The Angel's Fang is mightiest of all, It has the most piercing abilities and is the lightest in mass. The Sword is made up of elemental chakras; lightning and water. Its smoothness and piercing range allows user to use it in coalition with The Devil's Fang. The sword itself is shaped like The Messiah's Fang, "fangs" "spikes" pointing downwards.

    Note:
    ♦ The Wielder of the four fangs can use them separately, in pairs or the entire set.
    ♦ The set of four fangs will be wielded using the connecting mechanism where two swords are combined together by their handles and the pointy edge pointing outwards in opposite direction. Two swords in each hand.
    ♦ Using all of them together will effect the speed, but Taijutsu masters are not affected by it.
    ♦ The Shitoryu is merely a name to the set of sword and not a fighting style allocated to the fangs.
    ♦ Each sword can be summoned only once per battle or all of them together (still once).
    ♦ To use the jutsu allocated to the weapon, all fangs must be wielded. A single fang cannot perform the jutsu alone.
    ♦ They are SET of swords but they have the same ability which is chakra conduction, They conduct chakra but that is limited to what nature they hold.
    ♦ If One of the sword is conducting chakra the others sword cannot conduct any chakra, which means only one of the sword gets the ability at one time.
    ♦ The swords/fangs can only be wielded by -Blizzard-.

    Dropping: The Frozen Fang
    ---
    I was actually confused since you are asking me to make a basic set of swords with fusing together ability to make it more complex, like i stated in the previous post that the chakra was just to add uniqueness to the sword, but now i am putting it to use with a limitation.

    ~ Since you clearly didn't understand what Alucard said, let me repeat it. THESE ARE 4 ( FOUR ) SWORDS. Each has their own ability and chakra nature. THESE CANNOT BE ONE ( 1 ) WEAPON. It will never be approved like this. Pick ONE weapon and submit it.~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 04-27-2012 at 02:42 AM.

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