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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Kuchiyose: Hono Gurifin kōtei) Summoning: Hono, The Griffin Emporer.
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (60 w/ fire stream's)
    Description: Hono is the emporer of all Griffin's. He is also known to be the most powerful of all Griffon's. Hono earned this title by defeating Tsume in an all out battle for the title. He has a very calm, nice, and forgiving personality. Hono mean's blaze, and Hono certainly live's up to his name. He is a very powerful creature, who does not have to rely on special ability's or ninjutsu in a battle. Hono is very capable physically, having a very muscular body and razor sharp claw's that can tear through flesh like butter. He can move and run with immense speed, and he can soar through the air even faster. Due to his speed he can easily dodge slow moving ninjutsu. But Hono earned his name through special ability's. Hono is no affected any fire technique's, and he can easily breathe stream's of fire that are capable of scortching anything in his path.

    ♦ Can only be summoned once per battle.
    ♦ Must have signed Griffin Contract.
    ♦ Fire Stream count's as a move.
    ♦ Lasts 4 turn's before dispersing.

    Note: When the contract was approved it was said that all griffin's are completely immune to fire. But due to all the new system's and such he is the only one.



    Contract Submission: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...6&postcount=22

    On the approved list: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=106633

    My contract was created in the first ever custom summon's thread, which was trashed. And it was approved by Rei. That is why it was approved in the first place.


    -Leaving for Scorps-


    ±± Declined ±± First things first...no dodging techniques. Second, rank of the fire streams? Range? Also, the part about him being immune to fire...nope. He can be resistant to fire up to B-rank if he uses fire techniques or A-Rank if he doesn't. Since he does, he can be immune to B-rank fire.
    Kuchiyose: Hono Gurifin kōtei) Summoning: Hono, The Griffin Emporer.
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (60 w/ A-Ranked fire stream's)
    Description: Hono is the emporer of all Griffin's. He is also known to be the most powerful of all Griffon's. Hono earned this title by defeating Tsume in an all out battle for the title. He has a very calm, nice, and forgiving personality. Hono mean's blaze, and Hono certainly live's up to his name. He is a very powerful creature, who does not have to rely on special ability's or ninjutsu in a battle. Hono is very capable physically, having a very muscular body and razor sharp claw's that can tear through flesh like butter. He can move and run with immense speed, and he can soar through the air even faster. Due to his speed he move's faster then a shinobi sage. But Hono earned his name through special ability. He can easily breathe stream's of fire that are capable of scortching anything in his path.

    ♦ Can only be summoned once per battle.
    ♦ Must have signed Griffin Contract.
    ♦ Fire Stream count's as a move.
    Fire Stream's are A ranked, and reach up to mid range.
    ♦ Lasts 4 turn's before dispersing.

    ~ Left for Scorps ~

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Raiton: Kaminari no kami) Lightning Style, The God Of Thunder.
    Rank: Forbidden.
    Type: Supplementary.
    Range: Short-Long.
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Descripton: The user will prepare for this massive technique by performing the bird handseal. When this handseal is performed, massive amount's of lightning will be released into the sky above the battle field. This chakra will form large thunder cloud's over the whole area of the field. These thunder cloud's can only be harnessed by the user, due to them being imbued completely within his/her chakra. Once these cloud's have completed forming, the user will perform the final Dragon Handseal. Once this handseal is complete, there will be a loud roar from the dark cloud's. Followed by this roar, an enormous lightning dragon will emerge from the hevean's. This dragon is said to be the width Gamabunta's, and the length of three King Manda's. This thunder dragon will completely obliderate and destroy anything in it's path. The dragon can be split into many more lightning dragons. The Thunder God can be used with various lightning jutsu also.

    ♦ Can only be used once per battle, attempted twice.
    ♦ Take's one whole turn for the thunder cloud's to form.
    ♦ The user must maintain the bird handseal while the cloud's form.
    ♦ Once the jutsu end's, only A-Ranked and below jutsu can be used for the rest of the battle.
    ♦ Once the jutsu end's the user's body will be inactive for one whole turn due to strain on the body.

    ~ Firstly, lightning-natured chakra cannot form thunderclouds, they have zero to do with each other. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 08:53 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Kamishiro- View Post
    Resubmiting :
    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the half size of gamabunta one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

    ~Declined~ Still too big for A-rank. You may not know this, but the maximum size I allow for bird summon is the size of Gamabunta. Otherwise, a bird as big as Gama would simply flap its wing to send massive gust through the field, destroying everything. So, with this technique you've just summoned two boss sized bird summon.


    [Kemuri : Kemuri Doragon No Jutsu] - Smoke Release : Smoke Dragon

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user summons very big and wide dragon made of smoke that has the same size as the dropping lid size,crushing the opponent and on the same time causing the opponent to be surrounded by smoke from all size so he won't be able to see nor breath.
    ❖ Usable 3 times per battle.

    [Kemuri : Kemuri Maunten No Jutsu] - Smoke Release : Smoke Mountain

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates 2 big and wide mountains made of smoke one on the opponent's left side and one on the opponent's right side each mountain has the same size as half size of gamabunta,then as the user summons the two smoke mountains successful he crashes the opponent in between them.
    ❖ Usable 3 times per battle.

    ~Both declined~ Smoke? I've checked both your bio and none refffers to you mastering smoke release. Furthermore, if this is a CE, you've submitted those in the wrong thread. Provide a link to the element next time.
    ~Resubmitting
    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user summon two giant crows They both have the same size as Gamabunta one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

    ~ Left for Scorps ~

    ±± Declined ±± 2 Crows the size of gamabunta? LOL! Yeah...and i'm santa. Make this reasonable or its DNR on the next submission


    Made each crow has the same size as Gamabunta as Izuna said.

    Quote Originally Posted by -Kamishiro- View Post

    Other Information
    • Water Release : Lyon is able to use all the water techniques with the usage of one hand seal.
    • Smoke : Lyon is able to use all smoke techniques.
    • Silent Killing & Mist : Due to his time on Kirigakure Lyon is able to go react just like the Seven Swords Man while being on the mist.

    The Quote above is from my bio and it clearly states that my ice bio is able to use all of the smoke techniques.

    [Kemuri : Kemuri Doragon No Jutsu] - Smoke Release : Smoke Dragon

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user summons very big and wide dragon made of smoke that has the same size as the dropping lid size,crushing the opponent and on the same time causing the opponent to be surrounded by smoke from all size so he won't be able to see nor breath.
    ❖ Usable 3 times per battle.

    ~ Declined ~

    [Kemuri : Kemuri Maunten No Jutsu] - Smoke Release : Smoke Mountain

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates 2 big and wide mountains made of smoke one on the opponent's left side and one on the opponent's right side each mountain has the same size as half size of gamabunta,then as the user summons the two smoke mountains successful he crashes the opponent in between them.
    ❖ Usable 3 times per battle.

    ~Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 08:54 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Futon kaze dansu ( wind style wind dance)
    Type: Offensive/defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will first make 3 hand seals ( boar,dog and snake) and then the user will take a one hand stance with their legs curled up behind them. They will then focus futon chakra into their entire body and spin around releaseing a large wave of wind knocking all those around him backwards he will then spin upwards into a standing position with one leg up to his gut and bend backwards releaseing a small wave from his foot and a large one from his hand. each wave of wind can easily knock and enemy backwards even a summoning animal one quarter the size of gamabunta ( so about 25 ft tall)
    note: can only be used 3 times
    note: no wind jutsu above A rank next turn.




    futon kaze gentsuki ( wind style wind scooter )
    Type: Offensive/supp
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will make 3 hand seals Tiger,rat and dog. and will then focus futon chakra into his hands. He will then proceed to jump into the air and circle his hands around each other while releasing the wind chakra making a medium sized ball of win d. The user will then throw the wind ball onto the ground causing it to explode and making a large dome of wind come from the point of contact with the ground to mid range but it is only strong enough to cut through skin and knock an enemy backwards. Another use this jutsu has is after its formed the sure can jump on top of it and travel with it riding it like a scooter.
    Note: if used for traveling purposes jutsu only lasts four turns.
    note: no wind jutsu next two turns.
    note: can only be used twice.

    -Declined-
    Similar jutsu already exists (Ace's)
     
         
    Last edited by Alucard; 04-30-2012 at 05:25 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Odun Summoning Jutsu Odun
    Type: Summoning/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will bite his thumb and slam his hand on the ground. Summoning a mighty Odun. Odun is a a Blue Jay Warrior he is about the size of Orochimarus Three head snake and is covered in a thick steel amor. Odun is pretty fast for being covered in a Thick amor but not as fast as other Blue Jays he can spped up to 30 mile per hour. When Odun is summoned he can Defend against almost any attack thanks to his Mighty armor. Odun can use up to S-Rank Fire Techniques the user knows and he can withstand up to 3 B-Rank Techniques,2 A-Ranks Or 1 S-Rank. Odun's amor is used mainly for a tight situation so People tend to summon him when they are in need of a strong defense.
    -Note-
    -Can only be summoned once per Battle
    -Stays on the field for 5 Turns
    -If he defends to much he goes away quikcly
    -Must have signed the Blue Jay Contract
    -No Other Blue Jays can be in play while he is on

    ±± Declined ±± Define the bolded parts, also max 4 turns, speed is measured in our RP comparing it with a given ranked shinobi or other cannon summon, not to real life measurements.


    Katon: Kuchiyose Odun's Doki: Fire style: Summoning Odun's Wrath
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will slam his hand on the ground and summon Odun The Blue Jay warrior. Odun will appear covered in fire He will then charge at great speed (20-25 MPH) to the opponent causing him a great deal of Damage and burning him to death with the great flames that engulf Odun. When Odun is stopped or has attacked the opponent he go's away like a normal summon.
    -Note-
    -This jutsu can only be used twice per battle
    - This Jutsu requieres the sighning of the Blue Jay contract
    - NO Fire jutsu's for 3 whole turns


    Blue Jay contract signing
    Signin

    ~ Left for Scorps ~


    ±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 08:57 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by AntiHero View Post
    Summoning Animal:River Otters
    Scroll OwnerAntihero
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Zalog, the Don
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Mina, the Thorn... Chlick, the Yellow... Cliff, the Swift
    Description and Background:River otters are sleek, furry, streamlined aquatic mammals that live in rivers, streams, ponds, and marshes. They are a large type of weasel. River otters are from 3 to 4 feet long and weigh about 44-82 pounds. The tail is 1 to 1 1/2 feet long. Webbed feet help the otter swim. These sleek mammals have dense fur, short legs, and semi-retractible claws. Both the ears and the nostrils close when the animal is under water. River otters are kept warm by their dense fur and high metabolism. They are active all year long, even through very cold winters. Careful grooming with their forepaws keeps the fur waterproof.

    -Leaving for Scorps-

    ±± Declined ±± Contract already exists and taken by Shinjitsu

    Knuckle Duster
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 40 when elemental charkra is being chanled through it
    Damage: 40, 80 when charkra is cheanled through
    Description: Knuckle Duster are a pair of gauntlets made from a flexible fabric and leather covered by fully articulated scale-plates. It can be used for both attack and defense in hand-to-hand combat or used against a Kunai or short-sword. When making a fist the backhand is protected, from the fist just above the knuckles, this allowed the user to utilize the gauntlets as melee weapons while still protecting the hand from damage when punching.


    -Declined-
    You're missing the japanese name and the chakra cost is wrong. Explain how the gauntles enhance your hand to hand combat skills as so far you haven't mentioned any kind of ability. Remove the damage points. That way you could do 80 damage which is equivalent to a S-rank technique each time you perform a punch.
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    Summoning Animal: Squirrels
    Scroll OwnerAntihero
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Zalog, the Don
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Mina, the Thorn... Click, the Yellow... Roc, the Swift
    Description and Background: Squirrels typically have slender bodies with bushy tails and large eyes. Their fur is generally soft and silky, although much thicker in some species than others. The color of squirrels is highly variable between—and often even within—species. The hind limbs are generally longer than the fore limbs, and they have four or five toes on each foot. Their paws on their fore feet include a thumb. The feet also have soft pads on the undersides.Squirrels live in almost every habitat from tropical rainforest to semiarid desert, avoiding only the high polar regions and the driest of deserts. Their large eyes indicate, have an excellent sense of vision. They also have very versatile and sturdy claws for grasping and climbing. Many also have a good sense of touch, with vibrissae on their heads and limbs. The teeth of sciurids follow the typical rodent pattern, with large gnawing incisors that grow throughout life.

    -Leaving for Scorps-
    ±± Approved ±± Amazingly i couldn't find this submitted anywhere. Good animal you got there. Congrats


    Raiton Yoyo: Lighting Yo-yo
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A (20 when raiton charka is being channeled through it).
    Damage: N/A

    Description: Lighting Yo-yo is an Imperial style yoyo made from a titanium-gold-tungsten alloy, called Darthore. The shape's design is helpful in performing looping tricks. Looping is a yo-yo technique which emphasizes keeping the body of the yo-yo in constant motion, without sleeping. Lighting yo-yo is optimized for looping having its weight concentrated in the center, so it may easily rotate about the string's axis without its mass contributing to a resistance due to a gyroscopic effect.

    Note: May be used in conjution with a lighting jutsu up to B-rank.
    Note: Lighting chakra can be channled through the the the string and Yo-yo.
    Note: Can only use Raiton chakra while using Lighting Yoyo.


    Resubmission
    Nakkuru Uwappari: Knuckle Duster
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Knuckle Duster are a pair of gauntlets made from a flexible fabric and leather covered by fully articulated scale-plates. It can be used for both attack and defense in hand-to-hand combat or used against a Kunai or short-sword. When making a fist the backhand is protected, from the fist just above the knuckles, this allowed the user to utilize the gauntlets as melee weapons while still protecting the hand from damage when punching. Knucle Duster can have basic elemental charka applied to it to applify its striking capiblities.
    Note: Knucle Duster can only be worn/used by AntiHero.


    To Mod: Feel free to add or change this post inorder for it to be apporved. Thanx...

    -Both declined-
    You can only have 1 custom weapon
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:00 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yard- View Post
    (Soshi Soroi) Elemental Suit
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (Depending on if the user attacks using this.)
    Description: The user will release an elemental chakra that has an actual physical substance such as water or earth and will release it from their body making a highly concentrated suit of that element that encases their body. This acts as a defense and attack mechanism. It attacks by utilizing the element that the suit is made of to create anything (within reason) from it. If the user for example creates a suit of earth, they can make a shield form from the earth on their right arm that covers their body, same goes for if they use the water element. They can make a spike erupt from the earth or water from the suit that will pierce through the opponent or make spikes erupt from all over the suit to strike multiple targets. The user could make springs under their feet allowing them to jump to great heights. The size of what they create from the suit can be up to only 5 meters in height and 1 meters in width.


    Notes:
    - Each suit lasts for 3 turns.
    - Must wait 2 turns before making another suit.
    - The user can only use the suit to create one thing once per turn and it counts as one of their 3 jutsus per turn.
    - A suit can be made only once per battle, so once if you make a suit of water and it 3 turns are over then you cannot create it again, but you can still make a suit of earth.
    - Can only be used by -Yard-

    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit





    (Kagenresu Katana) Shadowless Sword
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu
    Description: This sword was forged by the elder snakes and infused with Swift chakra by Ulquiorra. This making it so that he can make the sword move at great speeds while wielding it in his hands, slashing anyone in reach in an instant with great cutting power due to the speed. The blade is made of an unknown material that is impossible to break and never dulls. The blade it'self is sharp enough to cut through solid bone like butter. The user can only use the infused chakra to benefit towards increasing movement of strikes with the sword, as well as grant the arm that is wielding the sword the ability to move at enhanced speed for blocking and striking as long as he is wielding the sword.

    Notes:
    ~ Only Yard may Wield this sword.
    ~ This cannot be used to enhance run speed.
    ~ The user can only use the chakra of the sword to enhance the movement of the arm or arms wielding the sword and that is for strikes and defending.
    ~Declined~ There are no true restrictions here. The restrictions you made should go without saying.





    (Kagenresu Katana) Shadowless Sword
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra: 40 On activation (-10 Per turn)
    Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu (When activated)
    Description: This sword was forged by Ulquiorra and infused with Swift chakra by Ulquiorra. This making it so that he can make the sword move at great speeds when activated and while wielding it in his hands, slashing anyone in reach in an instant with great cutting power due to the speed. The blade is made of an unknown material that is impossible to break and never dulls. The blade it'self is sharp enough to cut through solid bone like butter. The user can only use the infused chakra to benefit towards increasing movement of strikes with the sword, as well as grant the arm that is wielding the sword the ability to move at enhanced speed for blocking and striking as long as he is wielding the sword.

    Notes:
    ~ Only Yard may Wield this sword.
    ~ This cannot be used to enhance run speed.
    ~ The user can only use the chakra of the sword to enhance the movement of the arm or arms wielding the sword and that is for strikes and defending.
    ~ Activating the sword counts towards one of the users 3 jutsu per turn.
    ~ The sword stays active for 6 turns, after those turns it becomes a standard sword with no abilities

    -Leaving for other mod-

    Not really sure what else to put, seems like a pretty basic sword to me, However, if you have any suggestions, feel free to add the needed restrictions. That would be appreciated ^^


    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Yeah Yard, a Swift Sword... Not going to happen
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:01 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton: Sakasa Rai kiba)- Lightning Release: Reverse Lightning Fang
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short - Long Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 30
    Description: This technique is much similar to lightning fang, but uses the opposite method. The user will send an electrical essence into the ground below them and then creates a lightning strike that shoots from the ground and reaches up towards the sky. Because the lightning come from the ground, meaning it passes through earth, it becomes equivalent to an C-rank attack and as such, doesn't "kill" but causes minimum damage to the user and leaves electric sparks on the user once finished.
    Note: can only be used 3x a battle

    -Declined-

    The lightning forms because the electrical essence was sent to the sky/clouds. To make this work you'll have to re-word it and give a different explanation of how the lightning forms underground. Also, you damage yourself? O.o


    (Futon: Kyodaisō Kesshū)- Wind Release: Spike Assault
    Type: Supplementary, Defense, Offense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short - Long Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user preforms the Rat → Boar → Snake and utilizes wind release to create a white translucent triangular, spindle-shaped object (much like a pyramid) and making the hole pyramid as sharp as a sword. The user then thrust their hands forward, extending the sharp point at one end at high speeds towards the opponent in what looks like long spike. The spike can pierce through bedrock.
    Note: can only be used 4x a battle
    Note: can't use S-rank wind next turn

    -Declined-
    How big is the pyramid and where it forms? In front of you? Or can you just make it appear on top of the opponent?
     
         
    Last edited by Alucard; 05-01-2012 at 04:29 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Mushiton Bagu no Shinka - Bug Style Bug Evolution
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The bugs inside the user release more pheromones increasing the birth rate of bugs which makes them stronger and faster. While doing this the user has to remain still so that the birthing process isnt disturbed and cannot use any bug techniques that require releasing more bugs. Once the bugs are done spawning boosts all bug techniques 20 damage points

    Note: Cannot use any bug techs that involve releasing more bugs for that turn
    Note: Must remain still for 1 turn.
    Note: This can only be used by an Aburame clan bio
    Note can only be taught by Goku2000

    -Declined-

    +20 damage points is too much. Also, it doesn't make much sense for the birth process occur in a single turn and produce enough bugs for you to perform large scale techniques with your bugs. Also, add a chakra cost. The bugs alone can't do that since it isn't one of their natural abilities. State that you stimulate that type of pheromones by feeding them with more chakra


    (Kuchiyose:Arashi no Onna Keleano )- Summoning: Keleano Lady of the Storm
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30 Chakra
    Damage:60 Damage
    Description:
    Keleano is the Love Godess Aphrodite's younger sister. She was born in a storm in the valley of the cardinals and this was prophesied to be a great sign of things to come consequently she has a dual affinity to lightning and water, which she can perform up to A rank .She is about half the size of gamabunta and can fit one rider on her back. Due to flying in storms many times and dodging lightning she is very agile and fast flying at up to 150 miles per *hour. She is very fierce which represents her affinity and will immediately fight anyone she does not see fit to summon her. However when she does trust her summoner she is a very good fighter and helpful as well.
    Note: Can be Only Summoned Once.
    Note: Summoning counts as a move*
    Note: Must sign cardinal contract to use

    -Leaving for Scorps-

    ±± Declined ±± Proof of signing said contract?



    Mushiton: Sensa no Bagu - Bug Arts: Sensor Bugs
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The user releases scout Kikaichū across the battlefield that gather information and detect chakra signature around the battlefield. They relay this information back to the user using the pheremones the Kikaichū release to communicate and can be released in very few numbers for short range or disperesed in a large area for long range.

    Note: Can only be used by an Aburame clan member
    Note can only be taught by Goku2000

    -Declined-
    They can locate people, but it's the scout bugs who do that. They are left on a target and locate them through smell or the bugs must come back to the user to inform him. Something you should already be able to do since its one of their abilities. How are you a bug user and you don't even know their abilities?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Kira.. View Post
    Hachidori hands and an Explanation of the Technique:

    Hummingbird Hands (Hachidori no Te)
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user unleashes the beak of a hummingbird (that is very sharp) from their sleeve. The beak can open to grab the target.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    ---

    Hachidori Hands was a technique inspired by Orochimaru's Hidden Shadow Snake Hands. While the main variation between the techniques is the species used, the Hummingbirds pierce and grab rather than simply bite onto the target. Other variations of Hachidori hands have been created, however they all derive from this central technique. Sorry for the spoiler, I wanted to keep this separate from the techniques. Hope this clears things up for you.


    (Hachidori Jutsu: Genesis) - Hummingbird Jutsu: Genesis
    Type: Summoning; Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user creates a larger and longer-ranged version of Hachidori Hands that is more closely related to a summoning than a unique jutsu. The user performs a single hand seal, and a large bird head with its beak opened emerges from the ground, defending the user or ensnaring the target. The beak of the bird is extremely thick and strong, like that of Kaguya bone, however easily succumbs to an equal or greater strength attack.
    ~Can only be used once per battle, and cannot be used in conjunction with another summon that is activated in the same turn.
    ~Can be used on land, water, or in air.
    ~Cannot be used after the user has exited Roshida mode, but can be used during Roshida Mode.

    ~ How big is the beak exactly ? ~

    (Roshida Jutsu: Exodus) - Roshida Jutsu: Exodus
    Type: Summoning; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: In this "form" of Hachidori Hands, the user takes a completely different method. As opposed to creating a beak or head, the user creates wing in the form of a bird attached to their back, making the user capable of flight after performing the bird hand seal.
    ~Can only be used for a maximum of five turns.
    ~The wings are strong in the sense that they act like an extension of the users body, like a sword wielded in the users arm. As a result, there may be a delay in the amount of time the user can react to certain movements due to their sheer size and attachment rather than spontaneous growth.
    ~The user cannot use any form of Hachidori Hands - including Hummingbird Jutsu: Genesis - while using this jutsu.
    ~This jutsu counts as a summon, and can only be used once per battle, due to the fact Roshida Mode can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be used by a human in Roshida Mode.

    ~ The sentence I underlined makes absolutely no sense. It's both an extension of your body and something that slows you down ? Generally, when a sword is called an extension of your body, it means that the sword is used instinctively and with as much ease as a normal arm, not something that is bulky and causes slow responses. ~


    (Roshida Jutsu: Tenshi no Uta) - Roshida Jutsu: Song of the Angels
    Type: Genjutsu; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Close Mid-Ranged
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sings a beautiful song clouded with Roshida chakra that causes the opponent to fall asleep and hallucinate that they are still completing the task they were previously occupying themselves with. Their body goes numb, meaning minor wounds will not be felt. The song ends after the target is ensnared.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user will not be able to use A-Rank or Above Genjutsu for the remainder of the battle.
    ~The user cannot use any other Roshida jutsu in the same turn.
    ~Can only be used by a hummingbird or a human in Roshida Mode.

    ~ What is Roshida chakra ? If its some special ability gained by you via some other jutsu, please quote that technique when you submit something based off it. ~
    (Hachidori Jutsu: Genesis) - Hummingbird Jutsu: Genesis
    Type: Summoning; Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user creates a larger and longer-ranged version of Hachidori Hands that is more closely related to a summoning than a unique jutsu. The user performs a single hand seal, and a large bird head with its beak opened emerges from the ground, defending the user or ensnaring the target. The beak of the bird is extremely thick and strong, like that of Kaguya bone, however easily succumbs to an equal or greater strength attack. The beak is approximately equivalent in height to a telephone pole (approx. 30 ft. tall) and 10 feet wide.
    ~Can only be used once per battle, and cannot be used in conjunction with another summon that is activated in the same turn.
    ~Can be used on land, water, or in air.
    ~Cannot be used after the user has exited Roshida mode, but can be used during Roshida Mode.

    -Declined-
    On the description you say you make it come out of the ground, then on the notes you say it can be used on land, water or air. Work that out. Also, if it can appear out of thin air, you need to mention you're summoning it and as such, it's a summoning technique. If you do that, don't forget to mention an approximated distance at which it appears from the opponent/target.



    (Roshida Jutsu: Exodus) - Roshida Jutsu: Exodus
    Type: Summoning; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: In this "form" of Hachidori Hands, the user takes a completely different method. As opposed to creating a beak or head, the user creates wing in the form of a bird attached to their back, making the user capable of flight after performing the bird hand seal.
    ~Can only be used for a maximum of five turns.
    ~The wings are strong and durable, but also very heavy. As a result, there may be a delay in the amount of time the user can react to certain movements due to their sheer size and attachment rather than spontaneous growth, as they are not a limb.
    ~The user cannot use any form of Hachidori Hands - including Hummingbird Jutsu: Genesis - while using this jutsu.
    ~This jutsu counts as a summon, and can only be used once per battle, due to the fact Roshida Mode can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be used by a human in Roshida Mode.

    -Declined-
    If the wings are very heavy, how can you fly?


    As per Emperor's request...

    Roshida Mode
    Roshida Mode (Roshida Mode)
    Type: Summoning Mode
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user marks their eyes and face with blood so that it appears as tears of blood. Within one turn, the blood turns black and the user has ented a mode known as Roshida Mode. The user's weight decreases slightly, and they appear to wear a cloak of brightly or darkly colored feathers. (See image below)
    ~Lasts for up to 4 turns.
    ~Usable once per battle.
    ~Users must sign the hummingbird contract.
    ~The user can summon Hummingbird summon without sacrificing blood and with only 1 hand seal.
    ~During use, the user's speed and jumping height increases due to their decreased weight. The user can also use Roshida Jutsu whle in this mode.
    ~After use, the user's speed and jumping ability is decreased slightly due to the adjustment in their return to normal weight. The user will feel drained after use.



    (Roshida Jutsu: Tenshi no Uta) - Roshida Jutsu: Song of the Angels
    Type: Genjutsu; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Close Mid-Ranged
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sings a beautiful song clouded with Roshida chakra that causes the opponent to fall asleep and hallucinate that they are still completing the task they were previously occupying themselves with. Their body goes numb, meaning minor wounds will not be felt. The song ends after the target is ensnared.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user will not be able to use A-Rank or Above Genjutsu for the remainder of the battle.
    ~The user cannot use any other Roshida jutsu in the same turn.
    ~Can only be used by a hummingbird or a human in Roshida Mode.

    -Declined-
    Take off the Roshida chakra as Roshida Mode doesn't mention anything to that.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal:African Crowned Eagle
    Scroll Owner:veduto
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:yet to be created
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:yet to be created
    Description and Background:
    Found in the rainforests of tropical Africa, this eagle measures around 90 cms long and has a 2 meter wingspan. However, it has been known to hunt animals up to 35 kgs! This powerful and aggressive eagle is known by the Africans as “the leopard of the air”. It’s main killing weapon are its deadly talons, which are strong enough to crush the skull of a monkey (its favorite prey) killing it instantly and sometimes causing the eyes to pop out of their sockets! Not even the largest monkey, the mandrill, is safe from the attack of the Crowned Eagle, although usually only juvenile mandrills are taken.

    Other usual victims of this bird are hyraxes, Guinea fowl, agwantibos (a nocturnal primate), chevrotains and even small antelopes. In prehistoric times, these eagles preyed on our australopithecine ancestors as well; the marks of the Crowned Eagle talons have been found in the two million year old skulls of juvenile hominines.

    Even in modern times, Crowned Eagles still see small humans as potential prey. Skulls of human infants have been found in their nests, and in Zambia, a seven year old was once attacked by a Crowned Eagle in his way to school. He received serious injury to the head, chest and arms as the raptor tried unsuccessfully to carry him away, and was only saved when a woman arrived on time to help him and managed to kill the bird. Later examination of the area found no Crowned Eagle nests, and besides, the eagle turned out to be a juvenile, which means that it wasn’t protecting a nest, and that the attack had been predatory.

    -Leaving for Scorps-

    ±± Declined ±± Eagles are taken...
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Updating this custom:

    Kuchiyose: Sinbad| Summoning: Sinbad
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: N/A
    Description: Large, angry and quick-tempered describes Sinbad, the boss of Ligers. Sinbad is roughly the size of Gamabunta if Sinbad is sitting on his hind legs. He wields a katana on his back that if the user comes in contact with, shrinks to a normal sword height (sword has no special power other than that). Like most other ligers, Sinbad can contact the summoner via telekinetic communication as well as verbally. Sinbad also has Lightning Affinity and therefore is capable of using Lightning jutsu up to A rank that the summoner can use and can create a S-rank powered lightning blast roar ( unidirectional blast ) twice a battle ( counts as a jutsu of the user ).
    *Can only be summoned once a battle.
    *Can only be summoned by Lord of Kaos.
    *Last three turns.

    Into this one below:

    Kuchiyose: Theseus| Summoning: Theseus
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: N/A
    Description: The user wipes his hands over his summoning tattoo, or makes several handseals and summons, Theseus, Boss of the ligers. Theseus, when on all fours, is roughly the size of Gamabunta, and his height is double that when he stans bipedally. Dressed in traditional Ancient Greek armor with the skull of the slew Minotaur from his deadily show-down on his skull as a type of helmet, he wields an unbreakable gold katana that shrinks to the size of a normal katana (blade length 30inches). A trait characteristic of ligers, Theseus can contact the summoner via telekinetic communication as well as verbally. Theseus, having Lightning Affinity, can use up to A-rank lightning jutsus that the user knows by means of his sword and is also capable of releasing a S-rank unidirectional blast twice a battle.
    *Lightning blast and/or useage of lightning jutsus by Theseus counts as jutsu per turn*
    *Minotaur skull around his head somewhat limits his vision and makes it difficult to turn his head more than 90 degrees.*
    *Can only be summoned once a battle.*
    *Last three turns.*

    -Leaving for Scorps-


    ±± Declined ±± Proof of signing the contract? Also, you can't update it to transform it into a different thing all together. Updating is to add minor tweaks here and there. This is a new submission.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton:Howaito oujou) -Lightning Style: White Death
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user gathers raiton charka into four fingers ,The index finger And The middle finger Of each hand, The user then focus their raiton chakra into those four fingers As the user does this their four fingers start to turn white, the user then uses shape transformation To transform that charka into tiny bots of white lightning and It's now giving off A high Pitch sound. The user then proceeds to rub their two fingers across their other one's creating A sound so high pitch that it causes anyone in close range to mid-range to become death ( complete Loss of hearing ),and also causing severe pain to the the target, This happens because when the fingers on one hand comes in contact with the fingers on the other hand the friction becomes so great that when the two sounds mix it causes an even higher pitched sound to form, that new sound gives off vibrations at such a high speed that it causes the targets ears drums to become extremely stricken with pain ,the high pitched sound causes the loss of hearing(hearing a loud ringing sound) , and the vibrations cause the pain

    Note: Can Only Be Used If White Lighting Is In Use
    Note: The Opponent Goes Death For two turns
    Note: The high pitched sound causes the targets ears to become damaged and the target will hear ringing sounds, when the target is hit with this jutsu his ears will not be death (no hearing at all), but the target will hear a loud ringing sound causing him/her to become unable to hear anything else for two turns
    Note: The user can aim this in a single direction (causing any one in that direction to become affected)
    Note: The width of the sound 6 feet
    Note: The user cannot adjust the range, it always goes up to mid
    Note: This is capable of affecting many targets at once ( as long as there in range )
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used
    Note: When hit by the sound the target slows down due to the pain this jutus causes ( by one speed level),and it lasts for two turns
    Note: Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage
    Note to mod checking: if you need to change anything to approve it please do it

    ~ And why won't you get hurt by the sound ? ~
    (Raiton:Howaito oujou) -Lightning Style: White Death
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user gathers raiton charka into four fingers ,The index finger And The middle finger Of each hand, The user then focus their raiton chakra into those four fingers As the user does this their four fingers start to turn white, the user then uses shape transformation To transform that charka into tiny bots of white lightning and It's now giving off A high Pitch sound. The user then proceeds to rub their two fingers across their other one's creating A sound so high pitch that it causes anyone in close range to mid-range to become death ( complete Loss of hearing ),and also causing severe pain to the the target and their self, This happens because when the fingers on one hand comes in contact with the fingers on the other hand the friction becomes so great that when the two sounds mix it causes an even higher pitched sound to form, that new sound gives off vibrations at such a high speed that it causes the targets ears drums to become extremely stricken with pain ,the high pitched sound causes the loss of hearing(hearing a loud ringing sound) , and the vibrations cause the pain [/B]

    Note: The user and the Opponent(s) Goes Death For two turns
    Note: The high pitched sound causes the targets ears to become damaged and the target will hear ringing sounds, when the target is hit with this jutsu his ears will not be death (no hearing at all), but the target will hear a loud ringing sound causing him/her to become unable to hear anything else for two turns
    Note: The user cannot adjust the range, it always goes up to mid
    Note: This is capable of affecting many targets at once ( as long as there in range )
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used
    Note: When hit by the sound the target slows down due to the pain this jutus causes ( by one speed level),and it lasts for two turns
    Note: Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage


    -Declined-
    It's deaf, not death xD. On the first coloured note, add that it also affects you (unless you have prevented yourself beforehand or give a reasonable explanation). Take out the second coloured note. Some characters do not feel pain or can ignore it, so they should be able to move freely. It just affects their audition, unless you give another reasonable explanation why people would move slower.



    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade
    Type:Weapon (sword)
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2)
    Damage: 40
    Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form
    , in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally.

    when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form
    , in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see , like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent .


    Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
    Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
    Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
    Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.

    ~ When you say pierce, you mean that the pulses can go through them without causing damage, or with causing damage ? ~
    (Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade
    Type:Weapon (sword)
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2)
    Damage: 40
    Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form
    , [B]in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally.These pulse can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything

    when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form
    , in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see , like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent. These pulse can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything


    Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
    Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
    Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
    Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.

    -Declined-
    If you send the pulses and they can pierce through objects, how do they come back to you with the info? Also on v2, you didn't mention if the pulses do damage or not. You only did that on v1. Add a limit on the amount of times v2 can be used
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I already possess the penguin contract, but it was on the old CJ thread. I never got around to making summons for it, so I'm resubmitting it in the new format.

    Summoning Animal: Penguins
    Scroll Owner: Emperor
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background:
    Penguins ( Pengin, in Japanese ) are a race of flightless birds, who waddle around and look cute and harmless. This is the greatest misconception of all time.
    Although true that penguin summons are diminutive compared to other species ( penguin summons have never grown beyond six feet in height ), they make up for this lack of height and bulk with a plethora of other abilities.
    Penguin summons array themselves in a militaristic hierarchy, lead by a "General". Penguins who hold the ranks of Colonel and above possess a strength that belies their small frame, able to replicate the strength of much larger summons, such as ripping out trees, shattering rocks, etcetera. Penguin summons are also incredibly agile in water, capable of swimming at high speeds, and are about as agile as a ninja on land. Their blubber and feathers make them incredibly resistant to any Ice-based techniques and drops in temperature. Like ninja, they enjoy using "tools" such as kunai, exploding bombs, and so on.
    The Penguins have a variety of specializations, some summons specializing in explosives, others in hand-to-hand warfare and a rare few in the art of cooking. Dangerous little birds, really.
    ____________
    -Approved-


    I'll explain the individual abilities and strength of each summon in their description itself, this is just a broad overview.

    ( Gyakugen: Iroke no Kagami ) - Inverse Illusion: Mirror of Desire
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user emits a piercing high-pitched noise, resulting in a Genjutsu being cast over the opponent. Unlike almost all Genjutsu, which severely affect the opponent if he does not wield the Sharingan, this Genjutsu actually does not affect non-Sharingan wielders but instead truly affects only Sharingan wielders. Once the illusion is cast on the opponent, due to it being auditory the Sharingan does not automatically recognize it. However, the purpose of the Genjutsu is this- if the Sharingan wielder looks at themselves to check their chakra patterns for distortion ( to identify illusions, since that is how the Sharingan recognizes non-visual illusions ) the genjutsu kicks into effect and shows the chakra flow as being normal. As a result, an Uchiha grown proud of his Sharingan and ability to avoid illusions will trust his eyes and not realize he is in an illusion. Further illusions can then be cast on the Uchiha, all the while leaving him thinking he is fine.
    Strangely, the stronger the Sharingan of the Uchiha, the more his trust in it, and the more susceptible he is to the illusion; equally strangely, Uchiha with weaker Sharingans who double-check often note the presence of this Genjutsu.
    Once this technique has been identified, it is incredibly easy to dispel. Pain equal to a moderate cut will suffice.
    The user must know Sound for him to be able to manipulate the illusion so precisely. This technique may be used only thrice per battle.
    ____________
    -Declined-
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton : Naya) - Earth Release : Shed
    Type : Defensive / Supplementary
    Rank : B
    Range : Short
    Chakra cost : 20
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : The user sends an outburst of earth chakra from his body outwards and just as it makes contact with the skin, the user molds the chakra and produces a layer of earth on his skin that immediately falls off the body. The purpose of the technique is to get rid of pores or any sort of acidic substance that might have got onto the user's body since it would be impossible to get rid of them through using the user's hands. The user can also direct the earth chakra into one point instead of the whole body if the user knows where the unwanted object has landed on.

    Note : Usable four times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-

    -Approved-
    Nice


    (Doton : Juudensai) - Earth Release : Charging Rhinoceros
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : With the use of a summoning scroll, the user will summon an earthen Rhinoceros that will charge towards the front just as fast as 'Earth Release : Earth & Stone Dragon' with massive strength. Receiving a direct blow from this Rhinoceros will result in the victim's bones breaking. After summoning the earthen Rhinoceros, the user may channel fire chakra into the animal to cause it to violently explode, sending rock debris in a 360 degree manner, hitting anybody within a short-range radius.

    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Rock debris or explosion may harm the user if in range of it
    Note : No earth techniques higher than A-rank to be used in the same turn
    Note : Making it explode counts as another technique use towards the 3 jutsu rule

    -Declined-
    Size of the rhinoceros? Add that you need physical contact with it to infuse your fire chakra inside. Also, an S-rank usable 3 times per battle? No. For how long does it stay on the field if it isn't destroyed?
     
         
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    Katon netto- Fire Release Fire Net
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release fire from his hand during his way to the opponent the user quickly transform it into a net made up of fire of diameter of approximately 5m and use it to trap the opponent with in it and due to it being made up of fire it causes deep burn to the opponent and can even be used to trap multiple opponents at the same time
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Fire element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher fire base jutsu in the same turn

    -Declined-

    State that you need hand seals. Explain how the net forms and you trap the opponent? You go around hanging a fire net? A net of fire expands and shoots forward, towards the opponent? Change the range to Short-Mid only.



    Raiton boruto - Lightning Release Bolts
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release a dozen of bolts of lightning towards his opponent which causes numbing effect as well as damage to the opponent the but they are unique in the way how they approach the opponent , they approach him in arc like shape and completely engulf him as the approach him from all the different angles mainly from a 360 degree arc.
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Lightning element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher Lightning base jutsu in the same turn



    -Declined-
    Number, size and speed of the bolts? Hand seals needed.


    Raiton dangan - Lightning Release Bullet
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release a dozen of bullets made up of lightning effect these bullets are released with great velocity and quick succession does cause severe damage and numbs the opponent and user while shooting those dozens of opponent can change his aim to another project or opponent meaning we can attack multiple opponents at the same time also
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Lightning element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher Lightning base jutsu in the same turn


    -Declined-
    I believe similar jutsu already exists
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    Mizu Temtei † [Water God]
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/A

    Description: The Unholy Death is an ancient and a beautiful sword, blue in color, that represents the water and it's features of smoothness and ability to take on the characters of its vessel. This sword is special in itself, with it's ability to use water, and it's nature as an attack and defense mechanism. The sword has a special connection between the user with the user's chakra and it's use in manipulating it to water.

    Note: Must have mastered water

    -Declined-
    No forbidden rank weapons. Also, so much text to describe a simple weapon which reacts to water chakra? That almost isn't worth of turning into a CW. Btw, you won't be the only one with the rights to have a water based sword since this is just too vague.


    : Jutsu's :

    Mizu Kawarimi [Water Replacement]
    Type: Defense / Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60

    Description: Upon user's wish, the user can utilize his chakra to manipulate the sword [Water God] and turn it into water, to defend against a very strong incoming attack. The sword can almost be solidified in an instant, allowing the user to attack the moment the incoming attack is gone. When turned into water, the sword, however, maintains it's shape and molecular composition

    Note: Can only be used 3 times in a battle.

    -Declined-
    Weapon was declined
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Lucifer View Post
    I recently signed the Gryphon contract, link to the convo. And approved contract.



    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Berufegōru) - Summoning Technique: Belphegor
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty Belphegor, the thunder emperor, Bell is a extremly large Gryphon and is able to carry a total of three people on his back, he is the exact same size as gamaken, but what makes him special is his fur/feathers it has gray-brown-blueish colors, with the tips of his feathers colored deep royalblue, and his eyes are completely blue with the round border being gray. Bell has the manipulation of the lightning affinity, from his birth he trained to master the lightning element and thus he become more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the lightning element upto S-rank, but the user has the perform the handseals inorder for Bell to perform the jutsus. Belphergor is often refered to as the Lightning Emperor.

    ♦ Note: Bell can only be summoned once per battle.
    ♦ Note: Belphegor can stay on the field for 4 turns per battle.
    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.
    ♦ Note: The user must be Sannin rank or above to summon this gryphon.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use the same element in the same turn used by Bell.
    ♦ Note: The user must have mastered the Lightning element inorder to summon Belphegor.

    -Leaving for Scorps-

    ±± Declined ±± I can't believe i'm explaining this again to a member who has mastered elemental ninjutsu, genjutsu, etc etc You don't need nor is it logical that you could make hand seals for your summons techniques.

    In ninjutsu there are 2 steps to perform a technique: Focusing your chakra and Molding your chakra (which is then done in two principles, shape and nature manipulation).

    Focusing your chakra is basically "willing" your chakra into being molded by focusing the correct amount needed. Molding your chakra is shaping it and manipulating its nature so that you can produce the end result. Molding can be done with hand seals or without them, depending on your skill, rank, mastery of the element, etc etc etc.

    So, why and how can you make hand seals to mold your summons chakra? I mean, how can your hands mold HIS chakra? Specially, not being in contact with him?
    Resubmitting; changed a few parts.

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Berufegōru) - Summoning Technique: Belphegor
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty Belphegor, the thunder emperor, Bell is a extremly large Gryphon and is able to carry a total of three people on his back, he is the exact same size as gamaken, but what makes him special is his fur/feathers it has gray-brown-blueish colors, with the tips of his feathers colored deep royalblue, and his eyes are completely blue with the round border being gray. Bell has the manipulation of the lightning affinity, from his birth he trained to master the lightning element and thus he become more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the lightning element upto S-rank, he does not need any handseals to perform lightning techniques, due to his mastery over the lightning element he even rivals the Gryphon King. Belphergor is often refered to as the Lightning Emperor.

    ♦ Note: Bell can only be summoned once per battle.
    ♦ Note: Belphegor can stay on the field for 4 turns per battle.
    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.

    -Scorps -
    ±± Approved ±±


    Quote Originally Posted by Lucifer View Post
    (Katon: Bakuenjin) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Blades
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After a series of destructive attacks, the user finishes with a torrent of blade-shaped flames that strikes the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy is hit with a blade, it explodes and burns the enemy. Described as one of the ultimate fire technique, this attack is so powerful and destructive that it has been shown to smash through giant stones which is known to have extremely tremendous endurance capabilities. This technique is mainly used as a finishing move and it's extremely hard to evade, due to the unpredictable flame blades which come from multiple direction, as seen in the gif below.

    Example; Link

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: The user must have mastered katon inorder to use this jutsu.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot perform fire technique above A-Rank, the next turn.

    -Declined-
    You didn't explain how this technique is performed. You just said you create a torrent of blades. How do you make them? Also, i'm not very found about the idea of destroying giant rocks with a fire technique as simple as that. Define giant (give an approximated size). Also, restrict the amount of times you are able to use this technique. It's an A-rank, not a D-rank
    Resubmitting; About the giant rocks, they are more like the Destructive rising rock pillars technique, so the flame blades are able to destroy them with ease being of the same rank. You can edit if you wan't.

    (Katon: Bakuenjin) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Blades
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After a series of destructive attacks, the user finishes with a torrent of blade-shaped flames by rotating the body in a cirkel pattern, thus releasing the blades from both hands while rotating that strikes the enemy in a spiral formation, from multiple direction. Every time the enemy is hit with a blade, it explodes and burns the enemy. Described as one of the ultimate fire technique, this attack is so powerful and destructive that it has been shown to destroy big rocks once the flames explode, such as gigantic pillars 2-3 meter tall, which is known to have extremely tremendous endurance capabilities amongs the Iwagakure shinobi. This technique is mainly used as a finishing move and it's extremely hard to evade, due to the unpredictable flame blades which come from multiple direction, as seen in the gif below.

    Example; Link

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user must have mastered katon inorder to use this jutsu.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot perform fire technique above A-Rank, the next turn.

    -Approved-
    Added coloured note. Fire doesn't > earth, so why would it be able to smash through and continue?


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    (Katon: Hotarubi) - Fire Release: Firefly Light
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user creates many small, glowing redish crimson fireballs that float around the enemies by pointing both hands at the target, releasing a large amount of fire chakra into the air and compressing it into tiny balls, firing it out of the fingers-tips which apparently look like fireflies flying above the targets head (about 5 meters). Hence the name, the user then forms the 'serpent' handseal and sends them all flying into the target(s) all at once detonating them, each emitting blinding light after making impact, creating massive explosions.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use any fire techniques the following two turns.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use wind techniques above A-Rank the following turn.

    -Declined-
    Number of fireflies. State that you can't perform any other technique while you are controlling them and define the size of that massive explosion.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:08 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fuuton: Kurushimeru tengai) - Wind Release: Dome of Torment
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60(+20 when combined with fire)
    Description: The user builds up wind chakra then perfoming the ram+bird+boar handseals and claps his hands together, then he forms a cubic dome made of thick dense air around the opponent using the air surrounding him(opponent). This technique traps the opponent and the opponent won't be able to escape until the user releases his hand. The user is not able to perform any other jutsu unless if he already made a clone. The longer an opponent is trapped in the dome the lesser air he had to breathe because of the dense air within the dome so its like a torture chamber.
    -This last for 3 turns.
    -Can only be used 3 times in battle.
    -A duojutsu user except byakugan would be able to attack without a clone
    -The wind is made of chakra so a chakra absorber will easily break this jutsu.
    -Can only be performed by someone that has mastered fuuton.
    -Can only be taught by Mist01

    -Declined-
    Remove the coloured parts. State the size of the chamber as that's important to the quantity of air the opponent has to breath and how much time does it take for the opponent to be completely locked inside it. And what happens to the opponent as the oxygen decreases? Suffocates and passes out, movements get slower, etc?


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    Summoning Animal: Lynx
    Scroll Owner: Mist01
    Other Users who have signed contract: Not ATM
    Summoning Boss if existing: Not ATM
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Not ATM
    Description and Background:
    Lynx (Lynx rufus) are special bobcats that inhabit a range that stretches throughout a large portion of North America, from southern Canada to southern Mexico. Lynx have a cream to buff colored coat that is dappled with dark brown spots and stripes. They have short tufts of fur at the tips of their ears and a fringe of fur that frames their face.
    Taking all the characteristic of both a domestic and a wild cat, the Lynx are skillful climbers and are most active at dusk and during the night. Lynx are territorial and have acute hearing and a refined sense of smell. They stalk and ambush their prey, often killing their victims by biting the base of the neck. The species on which lynx prey includes small mammals, ground-dwelling birds, and reptiles.

    -Leaving for scorps-


    ±± Declined ±± For the 1000000000000th time, contract taken
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Mangomango View Post
    (Doton: Heahorudo) Earth release: Hare Hold
    Type: Supplementary/defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Long.
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Jutsu is to be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Flow River. While the previously mentioned Jutsu is active, the user then performs the Hare hand seal. From the mud multiple Hares made of mud emerge similar to the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet Jutsu. These Hares are smaller and lighter so can move much faster, although have no real damage dealing potential. The hares hit the enemy, causing the mud nature of the hares to slow the enemy, especially if directed at the feet or legs. This Jutsu can also be used to stop projectiles, both physically thrown or Jutsu in nature. Once the mud has made contact with the enemy it can then be reformed back to its natural earth state.

    -Declined-
    How many hares can you create? Do the Hares stay in field after usage?




    (Doton: Heahorudo) Earth release: Hare Hold
    Type: Supplementary/defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Long.
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Jutsu is to be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Flow River. While the previously mentioned Jutsu is active, the user then performs the Hare hand seal. From the mud four Hares made of mud emerge being able to move freely. These Hares are smaller and lighter so can move much faster, although have no real damage dealing potential. The hares hit the enemy, causing the mud nature of the hares to slow the enemy, especially if directed at the feet or legs. This Jutsu can also be used to stop projectiles, both physically thrown or Jutsu in nature. Once the mud has made contact with the enemy it can then be reformed back to its natural earth state. Once the Hares hit the target they cannot be used again.

    Notes:
    Lasts for 3 turns, if the Hares don't hit anything within the three turns then they turn back to rocks.


    -Approved-


    Made it so that four hares emerge and that the Hares can't be used after they hit the target and if they don't hit anything then they just go back to normal.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Fire shield (kaja tate)
    Type:Defence
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The use opens his palm and channels fire chakra around the chosen palm.Once he has channelled chakra around the palm he sends a blast of wind from his hand and uses shape manipulation to make the fire into a strong shield covering the area chosen.
    Note:
    -Only usable three times a battle
    -The defence can only block up to a rank attacks.
    -After use the user can only use a rank fire jutsu for 3 turns.
    -The fire shield only covers half of the body depending on hand used.If he places his hand forward it covers the front of and ect..

    -Declined-
    This isn't near an S-rank technique. This would be a B-rank. No matter how strong you want to make it. It's just a simple shield. Also, you cannot channel wind and fire chakra through the same hand at the same time. To do so, you'd need to do it with the other hand. And why do you even need the wind chakra? Also, an S-rank usable 3 times per battle? No
     
         
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    Summoning Animal:Armadillo Lizard
    Scroll Owner:Mangomango
    Other Users who have signed contract: None.
    Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None Yet.
    Description and Background: The Armadillo Lizard are a rare species of animal and are named because of their appearance. The can range in size and often appear golden or light brown in colour, although this is only the colour of their outer scales. The scales cover their whole body apart from their stomach and are hard as rock. These scales are so hard that they can deflect and withstand thrown projectiles and lower physical attacks (free form and up to C-Rank Taijutsu, free form and up to C-rank Kenjutsu and up to C-Rank Earth Jutsu). The scales also get harder the older the Armadillo Lizard gets. A Armadillo Lizard can also roll up into a ball leaving only its scales revealed for defensive purposes.
    The Armadillo Lizard summoning’s also have a natural affinity to either Earth or Fire, depending on the element (the element each summon will have as its affinity will be provided) the certain summon can use all of that elements Jutsus up to the rank of the certain summon. (Rank will also be provided).

    -Leaving for Scorps-

    ±± Declined ±± Lizards are taken...
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Jutsu Shinten) Techinque extension
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: n/a
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: n/a
    Description: By performing the necessary handseals, the chakra balance of the user is tilted towards a particular element. And hence jutsu of that element is increased in intensity when performed. (simply it raises the level of any jutsu of element A by one at the cost of lowering the strength of jutsus of element B)
    Element B is the element directly stronger than A on the elemental table
    eg if i use this move on fire, my fire moves acquire +1 rank but my water moves get -1 rank.

    Restrictions:- Jutsus effects last for 3 turns or until cancelled.
    -The jutsus affects all techniques up to A-rank but has no effect on S-ranked jutsus due to obvious reasons.

    -Declined, do not re-submit-



    (Fuuton:Kyojin te inmetsu) Giant Hand of Destruction
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: short/mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user makes the required handseals and stomps on the ground creating a tunnel from where he is to anywhere near the user.He then sticks his right hand into the tunnel and channels his wind chakra through it to form a manoeuverable hand of violent slashing wind to be formed. The user controls this hand by his thoughts and the hand lasts for as long as the user has his hand is still in the ground.The hand is made a feet taller than the average opponent and is big enough to hold a fat shinobi.

    -Declined-
    What are the required hand seals? Restrictions? And controllable by your thoughts? You have to edit that to chakra manipulation or something more reasonable. I edited the coloured part to make it more understandable. LOOOL fat shinobi




    (Bure-do Achiles) Blade of Achiles
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: n/a
    Chakra: n/a
    Damage: n/a
    Description: This weapon was made in the fiery depths of the village hidden in volcano.It has a streamlined and incredibly sharp blade allowing it to cut through materials as hard as rocks and bones effortlessly. The blade was made to honor the greatest kentaijutsu user from that village . The swords handle was made using materials merged with the warriors cells. This allows the bearer to use some of his deadly ninjutsu,taijutsu and kenjutsu .
    Note: Just as yamatos abilities were inproved by hashiramas necklace, the wielder of this blade is made stronger and a resistant to all physical attacks C-rank and below(except those with piercing effects).
    Note: The extra strength and resistance is only active when the user is in direct contact with the sword.

    -Declined-
    Change range to short. The coloured part is WAY too vague. The resistance to C-rank attacks is too much.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Resubmitting from who knows when it is in the previous CJ thread.

    (Genjutsu:Explosive Cat):Bakuyaku Neko
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user makes the enemy see a scared cat coming towards them and it hides behind the enemy which is actualy a few explosive tags tied together and explode at the users will.It would be hard for the enemy to notice it is a genjutsu because the cat won't appear out of nowhere but will come out from behind the closest cover from the enemy.

    ±± Declined ±± No long range genjutsu will be approved. Also were do the explosive tags come from? do you throw them? And btw...its a cat in a middle of a battlefield. Off course your enemy will notice its something abnormal.
    (Genjutsu:Explosive Cat):Bakuyaku Neko
    Type:
    Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user makes the enemy see a scared cat coming towards them and it hides behind the enemy the cat is actualy a few explosive tags tied together that the user will throw and they can explode at the users will.

    -Declined-
    Provide the link


    (Majo Ryoushi)-Witch Hunter
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user using his Black Shapeshifter in scythe mode will send his chakra to the blade of the scythe and enlarge it.It should become larger to both sides of the blade and the blade will take the shape of a cresent Moon.The user will than normaly strike the opponent and due to that the new,enlarged blade is made out of chakra do massive damage to the opponents body.
    ~Note:Can be used only with the Black Shapeshifter in scythe mode.
    ~Note:Can be used twice per battle.
    ~Note:No S rank regular ninjutsu the same turn this jutsu was used.


    -Declined-
    Is the extended part made of chakra? Does it only get bigger or also stronger? How many turns does it last for? Add that you can't flow elemental chakra to the weapon while using this technique,


    The CW can be found here

    Link to approved summoning contract:X


    (Kawauso Kuchiyose No Justu:Spike)-Otter Summoning Technique:Spike
    Type:Summon
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:The user smears blood on his Otter Tatoo and then they slam their hand on the ground which summons Spike the otter. Raikou is 4ft tall and is 10ft long and is very strong.He is also a little faster than the other otters.His tail is the source of his strength and can knock a grown man out cold when it is swung.He doesn't have any elemental affinity but he posses the ability to harden his fur so they become as hard as steell because of that he hardens every hair individuately he looks like he has countless short spikes on his body.He can also fire some of his fur twice per battle like short senbons.Due to his ability to harden his fur he is imune to C rank and below regular ninjutsu when he has hardened his fur.

    ~Only signers of the Otter contract may use him
    ~His shooting of hairs counts for the users 3 jutsu per turn.
    ~Spike stays on the field for 4 turns before returning to the secret palace in the seas of Amegakure
    ~He can fire some of his fur twice per battle
    ~Can only be used once a match

    -Scorps, again-


    ±± Approved ±± I must tell you though, this summon is useless for the most part. Its severely underpowered...
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:14 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
    Damage Points: 90 (+15 if ignited by fire)
    Description: The user concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create dozens of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will. That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain.
    *Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 2 turns after activation.
    *Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage.
    *Note: No S rank or above wind techniques the same and next turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ~ I like the idea, but its OP as it is now. ~
    (Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
    Damage Points: 90 (+15 if ignited by fire)
    Description: The user concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create up to two dozen of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will. That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain.
    *Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 3 turns after activation.
    *Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage.
    *Note: No S rank or above wind techniques the same and next 2 turns.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout


    -Declined-

    Amount of hand seals you need to perform? Add that the spheres appear at 10 meters distance from the opponent and that you need to perform one more hand seal to detonate them. Remove the +15 damage caused by a fire technique. Define that mental strain. Which is the radius of the explosion of each sphere?


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    (Genjutsu: Kanchi O-ba-ro-do) - Illusionary Arts: Perception Overload
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs two handseals (Horse -> Monkey) to use Kanchi O-ba-ro-do.
    Kanchi O-ba-ro-do is a powerful and surprisingly simple technique which allows the user to alter the target's ability to sense external stimuli in quite a unique manner. Under normal circumstances a person is unable to detect a stimuli until it has reached a certain intensity referred to as the absolute threshold. It is the body's natural mechanism to allow a person to block out unnecessary stimuli that would otherwise be distracting and preventative to accomplishing a focused goal. As such the body constantly sends a multitude of sensory signals that aren't registered by the brain. That is, the absolute threshold is the lowest intensity at which a stimulus can be detected; stimuli with intensities lower than this threshold are not registered by the brain. This technique effectively removes the mind's ability to block out these sensations i.e. removes the absolute threshold. This means that target(s) under its effect has all of their senses magnified/sensitized to all stimuli in and around him to the point that it clouds/completely engulfs their mind's ability to focus on anything but what they are sensing. In most cases this will immediately cause a target to fall into a comatose-like state due to the mass of information that is being channeled from every single one of their nerves. However, these effects are only temporary as the target's mind will eventually reestablish the sensory limitations over the course of roughly five minutes.
    *Note: Can only be used twice.
    *Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
    *Note: Must wait two turns to use again.
    *Note: No technique above S-Rank in the same turn.
    *Note: The target must counter/release this genjutsu in his countering turn or he'll lose consciousness at the beginning of the users following turn (from the pain and mental strain).
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    (Genjutsu: Kokoro no Kichigai) - Illusionary Arts: Mind of the Schizophrenic
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs a sequence of three handseals (Horse -> Monkey -> Inverted Bird) to cast this technique which allows the user to manipulate the target's perception of reality, so to speak. This technique can be considered the polar opposite of (Genjutsu: Kokohin) - Illusion Technique: False surrounding, in which the target is essentially made to hallucinate i.e. seeing something that isn't actually there (alters perception of surroundings). Unlike Kokohin, this technique makes the target become delusional, it makes him have a belief held with strong conviction despite being implausible, bizarre or patently untrue. For example, the target strongly believes that a huge fireball is coming from behind him or that his body is somehow diseased, abnormal or changed - infested with parasites/Kikaichū, for example. Or that his fire jutsus will somehow spontaneously explode prematurely causing harm him to himself or that the there are clones present on the field who are stalking him from below underground. This technique can not be used to increase the damage of techniques nor can it be used to create delusions that are impossible in the Narutoverse.
    *Note: Can only be used twice.
    *Note: Must wait three turns to use again.
    *Note: No genjutsu in the same and next turn.
    *Note: Counts as two jutsus in the user's jutsu count.
    *Note: No technique above S-Rank in the same turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    -Leaving both for other mod-
    ~ Both Declined. Both your Genjutsu actually affect his mind and beliefs. For a Gen, this is impossible. It cannot actually lower his absolute threshold. Five MINUTES ? That's an insta-win, when battles change in seconds. You cannot make the opponent actually believe a fireball is behind him, you can only fake-create a fireball; which is False Surroundings anyway. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-02-2012 at 01:13 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±



    Summoning Animal:American Bald Eagle
    Scroll Owner: Z-ONE
    Other Users who have signed contract: None Yet
    Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet
    Description and Background: The plumage of an adult Bald Eagle is evenly brown with a white head and tail. The tail is moderately long and slightly wedge-shaped. Males and females are identical in plumage coloration,The beak, feet and irides are bright yellow. The legs are feather-free, and the toes are short and powerful with large talons. The highly developed talon of the hind toe is used to pierce the vital areas of prey while it is held immobile by the front toes. The beak is large and hooked, with a yellow cere. The eagle, has a couple abilities,the eagle's feather can be used as needles when plucked out. The eagle's natural wind jutsu's are incressed depending on area, all jutsu with wind element become stronger in the birds presence. The bird's beak is razor shap and can cut through almost anything

    -Scorps, again-
    Though eagles were already created by Andy. However with the amount of new Rp'ers, i don't know if by going more specific, the contract can be approved



    ±± Declined ±± for the 9999999999th time, eagles are taken.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:16 PM.

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