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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    ( Fuuton: Me no Magnus ) - Wind release: Eye of Magnus
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Eye of Magnus is an advanced wind technique that can be triggered by user releasing wind chakra from all of his/her chakra points. This causes user to create a currents of wind around them that's blowing outwards in form of an orb that surrounds the user. Utilizing these currents, the user is able of neutralizing three different types of attacks; Energy (Fire, Lightning), Solid (Earth) and Non-solid (Wind). Eye of Magnus can blow earth techniques back with the effectiveness of the blowing back defined by the mass of the earth technique it is used on. Since it blows outwards it can also blow fire techniques of low ranks backwards and blow higher ranked fire techniques that required an impact to detonate back. Like any S - ranked wind technique, it can defend user from a Forbidden ranked Lightning technique as it's a full body shield.
    • Can be used only twice per battle.
    • Can defend from S - ranked fire techniques that require an impact and A - ranked ones that don't.
    • Can defend user from A - ranked earth techniques of high mass and S - ranked techniques of lower mass.


    ±± Declined ±± You are expecting too much of this as it would make you (according to the basic guidelines of your elemental system) vulnerable to Fire. It would, yes, be highly effective against Wind and Lightning but not Fire. Also, you must bare in mind that this does resemble something that would need Hyuuga abilities and even resemble other omnidirectional elemental techniques, even with wind. Try making it more special. Also it does lack restrictions for the gains you put on it. Basic idea: tone it down and make it more "unique".
    ( Katon/Raiton: Houka ) - Fire/Lightning release: Beacon
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 10
    Description: Flare is an advanced elemental technique that requires the user to circulate lightning and fire chakra into their hands and convert it into two forms of energy; electricity and heat. Having those two charged in their hands, user simply points their hands at a target to release a visible surge of combined heat and electricity at their target's direction. Hitting on the target will cause a pulse of energy to blow them backwards without dealing any actual life threatening damage. This is mainly used to escape an opponent reaching close quarters by blowing them backwards several meters or to create structural damage. This technique can be used with only one hand as well and by doing so will cost the normal amount of chakra that the technique requires even though the damage it causes will be halved. Releasing two beacons that hit each other will cause a large overload which is capable of blowing everyone short range from it backwards.
    • Using this technique in rapid succession for several times without proper intervals can cause burns and paralyzing on user's hand.
    • Converting energy into a blast takes around a second to charge, leaving user open during that time.


    To anyone checking this: since the technique doesn't generate any actual damage and is meant to be a suppressive technique, so I was hoping not to have to restrict it any further.
    ~Declined~ Rather similar to other techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-02-2012 at 12:26 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Akame) - Summoning Technique: Akame
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user must bite his thumb and wipe the bloood on his tattoo and snaps his fingers to summon Akame, Prince Of The Griffins. Akame meaning Red eyes was given that name by his Dad, The Griffin King. He is a Griffin chick, he is about the same size as a bear cub. Due to the fact that he has no fur yet he is placed in jet black looking armor which is given to all baby Griffins.The armor protects him from projectiles.The armor is made of strong yet very light material still allowing Griffins to fly at fast speeds. He has extremely sharp talons that can be used to cut and tear into the opponent. Being the son of the Griffin King he has a natural affinity to fire and can shoot out small C-rank fireballs that move extremely fast due to their size. He has an extremely heightened sense of smell which allows him to pinpoint the enemy locations. He has been training with Mugen ever since Akame was born, due to the special bond they have developed a fighting style with each other making them the ultimate tag-team.
    *Can only be taught by Mugen Ryukyu
    * Fireball counts as 1/3 moves a turn
    * Fireball is short-mid range
    *Daggers have no special ability
    Contract approval link http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...6&postcount=22

    ~Approved~ However, I removed the dagger part. If they aren't going to do anything, don't throw them in.

    Katon: Jetto Suishin | Fire Style: Jet Propulsion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user focuses his firechakra to the bottom of his feet and unleashes a burst of fire that propels the user forward at extremely fast speeds. It can be used to propel the user horizontally and vertically.

    ~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-02-2012 at 12:46 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Fire Style: Fire Punch Kick (Katon: Hi Panchi Kikku)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user does a punch and kick at the same time. While doing this the user releases a stream of fire straight forward. The user can widen the range out by basicly adding space between his/her leg and arm but this does not increase the range to long but just widen the attack out a little. When the user widen the range the rank, it doesn't increase at all. Basiclly what I am saying, if the user is using this jutsu and the user spaces out the arms and legs the attack is wider with no increase in damage, chakra, range or rank



    Fire Style: Fire Three Stream (Katon: Hi San Kasui
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user holds his/her hands in any direction he/she perfer and opens his/her mouth. As he/she does this, the user releases a fire stream from each of his/her hands and mouth.



    Fire Style: Over Doing It (Katon: Ue Tsukai Sore)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (+25 to the user)
    Description: This an advanced version of Fire Style: Fire Three Stream making the flames for concentrate and focus. The user claps his/her hands together in front of their face and closes their eyes. The user channels fire chakra through their body to the point they start to release steam as if the user had just got out a hot shower. The user opens their eyes and holds his/her hands in any direction he/she perfer and opens his/her mouth. As the he/she does this, the user releases all the channeled fire chakra making three flame throwers, one from each hand and one from the mouth. With this attack the attack is harming the user to the point the user mouth and hands are burnt after the attack is done. The user can not use his/her mouth or hands for attacks for the next three turns for attacks but hand motions and mouth movements still can happen.
    -Only used once per battle
    -No more fire jutsus for the rest of the battle from the user of this jutsu
    -Only used as a last resort
    -No use of mouth or hands for the next three turns.




    ~ All declined, similar to existing techs. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-02-2012 at 01:02 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hakke Pointo ea Sonshitsu) 8 Trigrams Point Air Loss
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will put his palms side by side vertically and coats his hands with chakra, turning it bright white. The user takes a lower stance and leaning towards the opponent, exerting chakra from his toes for greater speed. With great strength, user will thrust his coated fingers on the solar plexus causing the diaphragm to act violently, literary knocking the air out of the opponent, having temporary suffocation from the thrust. While, the user had also injected the coated chakra into the area, thus, the impact causes a large explosion within outside and inside the opponent, damaging and throwing back the suffocated opponent.
    Note:
    ~User suffers -15 damage from explosion
    ~Must be a hyuuga member with activated byakugan
    ~No A-ranked or higher elemental jutsu in the same and next turn
    ~Can be used 2x
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Must have A-ranked Taijutsu and Mastered Jyuuken
    ~Since user had focused everything on a single point, making an explosion, this may puncture F-ranked armors and can't be used anymore.

    ±± Declined ±± similar cannon techniques can be used to achieve this result...in a much better way


    (Hakke Gaishō) 8 Trigrams Over the Limit
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to hyuuga techs)
    Description: As the hyuuga had meditated, had his body and spirit be balanced within his Gentle Fist techniques, it enabled him the ability of having the hyuuga's chakra points widen its limits/balance of the chakra system/exhaustion of chakra being more lenient and firing off chakra bursts at a faster speed then normal, having chakra bursts be done without interruption meaning to eliminate the time between each chakra exhaustion.
    Note:
    ~Must be hyuuga member and master of gentle fists
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Lasts 6 turns
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~While this is active, user can't use A-ranked or higher elemental jutsus and for 3 more turns.

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. This doesn't use the basic principles of Gentle fist and the only way to do what you want through Gentle Fist is already taken by Demosthenes with his reversed gentle fist


    (Hakke Chakuraāmu) 8 Trigrams Chakra Arms
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A (60 if user decides to release chakra burst)
    Description: As the user is dealing with multiple opponents, while he is dealing with the opponent infront of him and an opponent attacks him from behind, the user may channel chakra onto any parts of his body to create chakra arms as the same length as the user's arms. Upon contact, these chakra arms release a burst of chakra and disappear as the burst of chakra had happened. The user may wish to either release a chakra burst upon contact, or not.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 4x
    ~Byakugan must be activated
    ~only sannin or higher may perform this.

    ~ Left for Scorps, since he knows more about Hyuugas ~


    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. As if we'd let you have the same ability basically as a jinchuriki. Besides, the maximum exponent of shape manipulation that a hyuuga can do with gentle fist is seen in 3 techniques: the kaiten (all 3, through extreme spinning), the twin lion fists (concrete static shapes) and the blades hinata uses (linear forms). Nothing this elaborate and complicated can be done with gentle fist.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:21 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Chikyū mage) - Earth Release, Earth Bending.
    Type: Supplementary.
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This is the purest form of earth earth jutsu ever to be created. One must have mastery of the earth elemen't to so much as attempt this style. This jutsu is used by utilizing one's chakra source into the earth below them, and becoming one with earth. Once this is complete, the user can bend earth at his/her will. One is capable of manipulating the earth completely without the use of handseal's, by creating virtually anything he/she can think of. Because the earth is imbued with the user's chakra, the user can bring slab's of shapely earth from the ground, and cause them to lose weight and levetate for short period's of time. This is mainly used to launch heavy slab's of earth toward the opponent at fast speed's.





    ♦ Must have mastered the earth elemen't to use this style.
    ♦ Can only be used in 4 turn's during one battle.
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit. Love Avatar, though
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-02-2012 at 12:49 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Katon fenikkusu - Fire Release Phoenix
    Type:Offensive/Defensive
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90
    Description:The user releases a great amount of katon chakra form throughout his body and make a total of 5 fire phoenix which then can fly around and attacks the opponents at great , they even posses the specialty of combining together and thus increase there over all attack power .

    If 5 phoenix are in play then each of them provide attack power equal to an A rank technique

    If 3 phoenix combine together so there power is raised up to an S-rank technique

    If all the 5 of them combine there power is equal to a F-rank technique

    size of the phoenix increases when they combine

    #can only be used by gitanshu and people who he has taught it#
    #Must have mastery over Fire#
    #Can only be used 1 times #
    #No S-rank or above in the next turn it is used due to exhaustion #
    #No Fire in the same turn it is used #

    ±± Declined ±± Similar techniques exist


    Reaper Scythe Arts Justus
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    (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù:Kama Katon tounyuu ) Reaper Scythe Arts: Scythe Fire throw
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user quickly throws his scythe towards the opponent with fire base chakra added to it and while throwing the scythe towards the opponent he also charges the scythe with normal chakra and thus grant him the ability to maneuver the scythe even after it has been launched by waving of his hands the scythe upon contact causes great burns and cuts because of it razor sharp tips
    -Must know scythe art to use it-
    -Must have scythe in the bio-
    -Can only be used thrice -
    -Must posses mastery over fire style-

    ±± Declined ±± Only the owner of the CFS can submit techniques for it.



    Can be seen at 0:20, just imagine aw if it is infused with fire base chakra
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iS_hFUXSS0M



    Merodīāto Genjutsu:tenshoku ikimono| Melody Art : Calling the animals
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:(look at the description)
    Description:The user chanells his chakra into his throught and start's to whistle in a very unique frequency which can only be heard by the animals od the surronding area and because of the unique frequncy the whistle can not be heard by the opponent and neither can the user also actually hear it but all the animals of area can easily hear the sound and due to the users chakra mixed in the whistle he uses that as a source to acquire help from the animals of that area and upon listening the note they all attack the opponent with there beaks and claws but due to it being totally untraceble it comes as a surprise attack as the opponent is unawre of it till the very last moment
    #Can only be used three times#
    #Doujutsu user can see the chakra travelling through the air if not hear it#
    #Sound ninjas are also able to hear it to a certain extent due to their intense training#
    #The opponent's summons are not affected by it#

    ~Declined~ How do you determine which animals are around? Also, unless you have permission to make Melody Arts or Music Arts, do not make another.
    Since Im owner of the CFS Ill submit his with some changes

    (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù:Kama Nageru kama ) Reaper Scythe Arts: Scythe Throw
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user quickly throws his scythe towards the opponent with while throwing the scythe towards the opponent he also charges the scythe with normal chakra and thus grant him the ability to maneuver the scythe even after it has been launched by waving of his hands the scythe upon contact causes. cuts because of it razor sharp tips
    -Must know scythe art to use it-
    -Must have scythe in the bio-
    -Can only be used thrice -
    -It has other effects when the elemental infusion jutsu is used before

    ~ How the heck dows infusing chakra into a weapon allow it to change direction ? ~

    Summoning Animal: Armadillos
    Scroll Owner: ~Johninto~
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet
    Description and Background: Armadillos are New World placental mammals with a leathery armor shell. The Dasypodidae are the only surviving family in the order Cingulata, part of the superorder Xenarthra, along with the anteaters and sloths. The word armadillo in Spanish means "little armored one". The Aztec called them azotochtli, Nahuatl for “turtle-rabbit."

    ~ Left for Scorps ~

    ±± Declined ±± Contract taken
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:24 PM.

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    Summoning Animal: Eagles
    Scroll Owner: Home
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: All eagles
    Description and Background: the eagles are massive, proud and powerfully built beasts who inhabit the barren and arid mountains just outside the boarder of kumogakure their large feather covered bodies are commonly seen flying through the air around kumogakure. They are proud fierce and determined fighters how never give up a mission or a fight. they are larger than almost every other bird in the world and there speed is truley incredible they have long, sharp talons and large streamlined bodies and they posses incredible strength that is unrivalled in the bird kingdom all these things combined add up to make them perfect fighting and hunting machines. however their abilities don't stop there, not only are there bodies perfect for fighting, their minds are too. intelligent, cunning and well versed in battle tactics the eagles are a force to be reckoned with both mentally and physically . the reason for both the minds and bodies of eagles are so well adapted for battle is the fact that as soon as they are old enough to fly all citizens are enrolled in an academy that is purely devoted to battle tactics and fighting. this means that almost every eagle has some battle experience (many decide to drop it and pursue other jobs because of how hard the course is) this makes them one of the greatest animal nations in the world.

    the generally fight using their huge speed and strength to out manuvere and overpower opponents and often use there diamond hard beaks and claws that can easily cut through metal as there main weapon generally finishing an enemy in a flash of gray talons and beak however they will sometimes use there massive and powerful wings to create massive gales of wind that can finish even the most hardy of foes in seconds. it beacause of this huge battle prowess that they and the people who summon the are feared by almost all who oppose them.

    the eagles will only fight for someone who has shown great power, cunning, intelligence and determination and even if someone does show all these the eagles will not completley obey their summoner unless the trust and respect him/her completley both of these often taking months and normally years to gain.

    ~ Left for Scorps, though I believe it exists ~

    ±± Declined ±± You must be trolling me... 3th eagle submission so far... Eagles are taken, period.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-02-2012 at 09:24 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ~ New Cycle of submissions. It will start from this post and will end on the 6th of May.

    I must remind members that reading the first post of this thread is essential to be able to submit techniques properly and get them approved. Following the proper templates, formatting rules/restrictions and general guidelines for submitting a technique is half way through to getting your Cj approved ~
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Raiton: Sakasa Rai kiba)- Lightning Release: Reverse Lightning Fang
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short - Long Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 30
    Description: This technique is much similar to lightning fang, but uses the opposite method. The user will send an electrical essence into the ground below them and then creates a lightning strike that shoots from the ground and reaches up towards the sky. Because the lightning come from the ground, meaning it passes through earth, it becomes equivalent to an C-rank attack and as such, doesn't "kill" but causes minimum damage to the user and leaves electric sparks on the user once finished.
    Note: can only be used 3x a battle

    -Declined-

    The lightning forms because the electrical essence was sent to the sky/clouds. To make this work you'll have to re-word it and give a different explanation of how the lightning forms underground. Also, you damage yourself? O.o


    (Futon: Kyodaisō Kesshū)- Wind Release: Spike Assault
    Type: Supplementary, Defense, Offense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short - Long Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user preforms the Rat → Boar → Snake and utilizes wind release to create a white translucent triangular, spindle-shaped object (much like a pyramid) and making the hole pyramid as sharp as a sword. The user then thrust their hands forward, extending the sharp point at one end at high speeds towards the opponent in what looks like long spike. The spike can pierce through bedrock.
    Note: can only be used 4x a battle
    Note: can't use S-rank wind next turn

    -Declined-
    How big is the pyramid and where it forms? In front of you? Or can you just make it appear on top of the opponent?
    (Futon: Kyodaisō Kesshū)- Wind Release: Spike Assault
    Type: Supplementary, Defense, Offense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short - Long Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user preforms the Rat → Boar → Snake and utilizes wind release to create a white translucent triangular, spindle-shaped object (much like a pyramid)in-between the palm of their hands with one end pointing towards the opponent. The user makes the hole pyramid as sharp as a sword. The user then thrust their hands forward, extending the sharp point at one end at high speeds towards the opponent in what looks like long spike. Before the pyramid extends, its about the size of orochimaru's snake sword. The spike can pierce through bedrock.
    Note: can only be used 4x a battle
    Note: can't use S-rank wind next turn

    ~ What is, high speeds ? ~

    (Raiton: Kanshouno Nori)- Lightning Release: Universal Ride
    Type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user utilizes lightning based chakra and focuses it around their spine, electrically stimulating the users nervous system. The technique speeds up neural synapses to react faster to danger. This however, doesn't make the user faster in terms of speed, however this does allow the user to react with speed equal to the raikage's Armour. This technique uses a large amount of lightning chakra.
    Note: can only be used once
    Note: last for a maximum of four turns
    Note: can't preform S-rank lightning in the same turn

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    (Sunaton hijutsu: Saikō Zettai Bōgyo)- Sand Release Hidden Jutsu: Ultimately Hard Defense
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Mid - Long Range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user slams both their hands on the ground and creates a giant dome composed of sand and the hardest minerals derived from the earth, and pressurizes it using pure chakra, creating an extremely hard and virtually indestructible shield of sand. The sand shield can be large enough to protect a village
    Note: can only be used three times due to the scale
    Note: Can not A-rank and above sand the next turn

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-03-2012 at 01:22 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for every extra person)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The technique was developed after studying the unique mind techniques of the Yaminaka, which bare close resemblance to genjutsu. In this illusion, the user will focus their chakra on two or more opponents which will initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims believe as if their opponent is using a wind technique, by experiencing a huge gust of wind mixed with dust, blocking their vision. Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and believe their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both shinobi victims will then ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, believing that they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies and believing their comrade to be dead, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
    ~For use on more then two opponents, the hand seals Horse → Bird must be used in order for the user to focus their chakra to a wider range of enemies
    ~Since this jutsu requires has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
    ~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
    ~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

    -Declined-
    Restrict the amount of times it can be used and what's the process which activates the gengutsu (eye contact, hand seals, etc). Just focus chakra isn't a valid reason. Also, about that 'huge gust of wind', add that it isn't enough to do damage your opponent. It only blinds them.
    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    ~Resubmission~

    Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for each person above 2)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The technique was developed after studying the unique mind techniques of the Yaminaka, which bare close resemblance to genjutsu. The caster will make the Horse → Bird seals to initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims believe as if their opponent is using a wind technique, by experiencing a huge gust of wind mixed with dust, blocking their vision (no physical harm comes from the gust). Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and believe their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both shinobi victims will then ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, believing that they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies and believing their comrade to be dead, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
    ~Since this jutsu requires has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
    ~Can be used 3 times in a match
    ~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
    ~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

    ~ Ridiculous. The Yamanaka mind techniques have nothing to do with Genjutsu. Your technique also has nothing to do with Yamanakas, since the whole enemy fighting themselves thing is not exactly an uncommon idea ~
    ~Resubmission~

    Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for each person above 2)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The caster will make the Horse → Bird seals to initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims believe as if their opponent is using a wind technique, by experiencing a huge gust of wind mixed with dust, blocking their vision (no physical harm comes from the gust). Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and believe their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both shinobi victims will then ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, believing that they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies and believing their comrade to be dead, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
    ~Since this jutsu has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
    ~Can be used 3 times in a match
    ~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
    ~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

    ~ For all Gen, you cannot use "believe", as you cannot make someone believe something. You can only create some fake images and let him take it to the conclusion he wishes. Fix the wording. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Information, link of signing, and link of me taking over the contract, and link of the contracts approval can all be found by following said link and a few other links afterwards >_>
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    (Suiton : Suiton Waku) Water Release : Water Slide
    Typeffensive|Supplementuary
    Range: Short-Long
    Rank: B
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user causes a fair amount of water to well up from beneath the opponent, the water spraying to the sides of the opponent and drenching them severly, the water that gushes up immeaditly begins moving in a set course, carrying the opponent in any direction, and off balancing them as it does so. Alternatively this can be used on ones self, allowing for high speed movement.

    ~ Define high-speed. ~

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Batoidea: Slip-Stream)- Summoning: Batoidea: Slip-Stream
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Slip-Stream, is a rather small Sting-ray in comparison to most of the other Rays and has the body shape and looks of a Spotted Eagle Stingray. Slip-Stream, was the last student of the Elder Wind Sage who was said to have been faster than any two-leg who ever walked the earth. Slip-Stream is just large enough to carry a single human on her back for short periods of time, although she could carry two if the need should arise, Slip-Stream is hardworking, and has a extremely bubbly personality as a testimony to her youth. Slip-Stream is one of, if not the fastest of all the residents of Kodai no mizuumi. Slip-Stream is able to fly through air, moving faster than a Sage ranked ninja would with ease and a level of unmatched grace, and underwater her prowess is increased greatly. Slip-Stream’s most prominent ability, is that she is able to release a burst of wind from beneath and behind her, or anywhere she may wish for that matter, Slip-Stream then rides the updraft that the wind burst creates, giving her even more insane speeds and allowing her to be propelled forwards in any direction she likes at speeds that most ninja would be hard pressed to keep track of. Slipstream, is also able to excrete chakra from her body as she flies or swims, the chakra creates a mirage of her, the mirages left in the position she was last at, increasing her evasion and giving Slip-stream a opportunity to strike at the opponent's blind spot. A sort of motion blur effect. The faster Slip-stream is moving, the more mirages there are and the more potent they are. Slip-Stream is able to use this ability so well, that she could constantly swim rings around the opponent, creating dozens of Slip-stream’s that form a ring that are all looking towards the opponent confusing the opponent and giving her opportunities to attack. The mirages however fade after 1-3 seconds, leaving only a small window to attack.(Mirages aren’t a genjutsu, but more a form of ninjutsu). Slip-stream, is also able to channel her fuuton chakra to her pectoral fins, causing her pectoral fins to stiffen,and becoming fairly sharp at the edges, allowing her to slice her opponents as she passes by. (A rank hardening and sharpening). Slip-Stream is unable to use jutsu, but makes up for it with her unique abilities. Slip-Stream Can speak fleunt Italian, Enlgish and Japanese.
    -Activation of the Mirage technique counts as a move and lasts for two turns, after which it must be activated again, and equates to A rank.
    -Slip-Stream’s hardening and sharpening of her pectoral fins counts as a move.
    -Slip-Stream can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Slip-Stream is able to stay on the field for 5 turns.
    -Slip-Stream can fly through the air at three turns at a time, before returning to water, or alternatively being de-summoned.
    Example of Mirages


    ~ Left for Scorps ~

    ±± Declined ±± Look at what i bolded. You don't need such a huge description to say she's fast. That slipstream needs to be ranked and needs to have a max number of usings. The mirages are a cannon technique...E-Rank...She can use that technique passively...i have no problems with that. But the mirages through movement are a bit too much. She'd need to move so fast that a 3T sharingan of a S-class ninja couldn't track. Too much for a summon.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hāto Kurosu no Yoroi)-Heart Kreuz Armor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Heart Kreuz Armor is a legendary armor created in ancient times back when the Sage of Six Paths roamed the world. That being said, the lustrous colors of the metals, of finest quality that were used to create this top-class armor in durability and strength, were made from legendary craftsmen and blacksmiths. The armor consists of many abilities predominantly to be activated.



    This armor itself has many properties, and is able to 'change' its form upon the user releasing an additional chakra into the armor for it to leech off the user, and absorb it, in order to morph into a different armor with its own unique properties. The armor's are given the special names thus, Black Wing, Flame Empress, Lightning Empress, Sea Empress, and Purgatory Armor. All these armors have each their own special attributes to assist them in combating and attacking with the five basic elemental nature transformations, wind, fire, lightning, water, and earth respectively.

    Black Wing Armor

    The Black Wing Armor primarily assists the wielder in combating with the Wind Element, and giving it special properties relating and enhancing the Wind Element. The armor has two wings that have black metal "arms" acting as the wings' leading structure, but the parts used to fly are composed of a membrane-like material. With the large flight muscles, the wings, it would allow the wielder to take flight. That being said, the user, being able to take flight into the air, similar to birds, it would gain extra speed. The wings being extra powerful, it gives the wielder +10 speed bonus when flying, which makes it extremely fast in mid-flight in battles. In fact, it is almost untraceable to the untrained naked eye. Furthermore, the user is capable of swerving, winding in and out, changing directions easily, maneuvering and moving rather flexibly, with the help of the powerful wings. In addition, the armor, which helps combat the Wind Element, makes the wielder completely impervious to Wind Element attacks C-rank and below, but instead is susceptible to fire, which is twice as effective as a result.

    Flame Empress Armor

    Flame Empress Armor helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the Fire Element. Furthermore, a crimson blade is held in the hands of the wielder when wearing this armor, infused with Fire chakra. When the user is wearing this armor, he is impervious to Fire attacks C-rank and below completely, but yet would be susceptible to water, which is twice as effective. 3 times a battle, the user is able to shoot out a crimson wave of fire around the size of a human, B-ranked, at the opponent

    Purgatory Armor

    The Purgatory helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the Earth Element. It is deemed the toughest armor, the strongest, and the most durable. Whilst in this form, the user can withstand all B-ranked Earth Attacks without trouble, and physical attacks are completely useless to the wielder's extremely strong and hard body. Furthermore, physical attacks of lesser density would break upon impact with the armor's hard surface.

    Lightning Empress Armor

    The Lightning Empress Armor helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the power of Lightning-based attacks. The armor’s weapon is a long spear, with a very large blade and a decorated circle resembling a shield attaching it to the shaft, which is adorned by a large ribbon. Apparently, the weapon acts as a lightning rod, also, as an offensive weapon, both in physical combat and shooting out attacks. 3 times per battle, it can shoot out a B-ranked blue beam of lightning which can paralyze opponents. Furthermore, this armor allows the wielder to be completely impervious to C-ranked Lightning attacks and below, whilst being susceptible to Wind attacks, which is twice as effective.

    Sea Empress Armor

    The Sea Empress Armor is a renowned armor known to assist the wielder in combating and enhancing the powers of water-based attacks. The armor comes equipped with a long sword which seems to be made of crystal, with many small crystals jutting out in every direction from the handguard. Whilst within this form, the user gains the ability to breathe underwater. The wielder also gains immunity, letting the wielder be completely impervious and nullify Water Attacks C-rank and below, but leaves the user susceptible to Earth attacks, in which the damage is accentuated to twice as effective.

    Restrictions
    • Can only be used|Taught by Titania
    • Each elemental armor form can only be used 2 times per battle, and once activated, lasts for 2 turns
    • Cooldown time of 1 turn before you can use another armor
    • The user is left slightly taxed out and tired after using the same form twice.
    • Requires a subtle amount of time to 'change' armor, at least 1 second, which means distractions that disrupt the user would prohibit them from changing form








    ~ Too many in one. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Katon: Hotarubi) - Fire Release: Firefly Light
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user creates many small, glowing redish crimson fireballs that float around the enemies by pointing both hands at the target, releasing a large amount of fire chakra into the air and compressing it into tiny balls, firing it out of the fingers-tips which apparently look like fireflies flying above the targets head (about 5 meters). Hence the name, the user then forms the 'serpent' handseal and sends them all flying into the target(s) all at once detonating them, each emitting blinding light after making impact, creating massive explosions.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use any fire techniques the following two turns.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use wind techniques above A-Rank the following turn.

    -Declined-
    Number of fireflies. State that you can't perform any other technique while you are controlling them and define the size of that massive explosion.
    Resubmitting.: The explosion is roughly of the same size as the fireball jutsu.

    (Katon: Hotarubi) - Fire Release: Firefly Light
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user creates many small, glowing redish crimson fireballs that float around the enemies by pointing both hands at the target, releasing a large amount of fire chakra into the air and compressing it into tiny balls, firing it out of the fingers-tips which apparently look like fireflies releasing exactly 10 fireflies, the size of smoke bombs, flying above the targets head (about 5 meters). Hence the name, the user then forms the 'serpent' handseal and sends them all flying into the target all at once detonating them, each emitting blinding light after making impact, creating massive explosions. These explosions will stay within short range of the target(s), and the size of the explosions are roughly the same as the fireball jutsu but the explosions are more intense thus more powerful.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use any fire techniques the following two turns.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use wind techniques above A-Rank the following turn.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot perform any other jutsu while controlling the fireflies.

    ~ Approved. ~

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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Amaimon) - Summoning Technique: Amaymon
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty Amaymon, the earth emperor, Amaymon is a very large Gryphon and is able to carry a total of five people on his back, he is the exact same size as gamahiro, Amaymon usualy wears silver armor, which protects him from kunai's and basic weapons, as seen in the picture, but what makes him special is his looks his fur/feathers are goldish/silver of color, with the tip of his feathers colored light brown, and his eyes are the color of the desert repersenting his elemental affinity, he has a very interesting body strucutre which is very well build even amongs the Gryphon's it's muscular and just as hard as rocks. Amaymon has the manipulation of the Earth affinity, from his birth he trained to master the earth element in Iwagakure and thus he became more accustomed to it, therefore she can use the wind element upto S-rank, with out any use of handseals, and he can only perform his jutsu's while he is on the ground. Amaymon is often refered to as the Earth King, Amaymon.

    ♦ Note: Amaymon can only be summoned once per battle.
    ♦ Note: Amaymon can stay on the field for 4 turns per battle.
    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.
    ♦ Note: The user must be Sannin rank or above to summon this gryphon.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use the same element in the same turn used by Amaymon.
    ♦ Note: The user must have mastered the Earth element inorder to summon Amaymon.

    ~ Left for Scorps ~
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    (Doton/Katon: Mokushi) - Earth/Fire Release: Apocalypse
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-20 to the user)
    Description: The user will focus his earthen chakra through his feet into ground and stomp his both fist on the ground to send a shockwave of chakra into the earth beneath, and create a massive tunnel underneath the target(s) and under the batlefield. Then the user will materialize an enormous ammount of fire into the tunnels, by releasing it through the users legs, as the the ground gets pressurized the user will form the ' Tiger ' handseal and create a massive fire eruption with an enormous amount of fire from underground blasting everything from long to short range into the air causing enormous casualties to the enemies, thus leaving first degree burns or worse on the targets and as the small rocks will rain down due the eruption and also heated up by the fire they will turn into volcanic rocks producing enough heat to melt through humans, but it will not turn to lava. Due to the heavy explosion it will completely change the scenery of the battlefield and leave a enormous craters with holes around. The crater is equivalent to that left in Konogakure.

    ♦ Note: The user will be left in weakend state.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used once per battle.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users moves as it's an elemental combo.
    ♦ Note: The user can only perform A-Rank and bellow jutsus after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will be restricted to perform one jutsu per turn for the following two turns.

    ~ Declined, similar techs exist. On a side note, stop using red for the first letter. Technically I could decline it for that alone. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Doton toorisugarino chakra - Earth Release passing chakra
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:E-F
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:05-50
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This is very basic but useful jutsu and is used for future earth base attacks the user passes his doton chakra into the ground and leaves it there and then when required he uses that chakra to create a offensive or Defensive move basically most earth base techniques require contact with earth to pass chakra in earth to manipulate the earth to perform the technique but with the help of this jutsu the user gains the ability to perform those techniques even when he is not in contact with the ground as he uses his per-released chakra and manipulate it to get desired results.

    Note:Must have complete mastery of earth
    Note:Can only use one technique with one of it's move
    Note:Two techniques will count as two different moves
    Note:Can only be used 3 times
    Note:If used for a F-rank attack it can only be used once and user suffers through slow reflexes

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~
     
         
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    [Fuuton - Raiton: Metsuryū Mahō 滅竜魔法] Dragon Slayer Style: White Dragon's Roar.
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user releases a tornado of both the wind and lightning element's from his mouth to attack the target. The attack possess highly destructive power, having causing great damage to the area it effects, ripping through the ground, and anything else in it's path. This jutsu is performed by spitting out a tornado of wind, while infusing the wind with your raiton chakra. The mixture of element's cause the lightning to become white, so it blend's with the wind creating a devestating combination. This roar can be done on the spot, and it does not require handseal's.

    ► Only Sting Eucliffe can perform this technique.
    ► Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ► No A rank or above wind or lightning techniques in the next turn.


    ~ Wind + lightning ? How id the lightning not nullified ? ~
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    [Fuuton: Kyōryokuna ikioi] Wind Release: Powerful Momentum.
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense / Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will begin this jutsu by performing the tiger handseal. Once the tiger handseal is performed, a small burst of of wind occur's, which surround's the user's body. This is dangorous wind, though it does not effect the user due to the jutsu having a second thin protective wind coat surrounding the body, the outer effect's cut up anyone within arm's length. That is not all, the jutsu earn's it's name by fulfing the user with a great burst of speed and momentem. When this jutsu is activated the user can launch themselve's toward an opponent with great speed to up their chances of landing a hit, one strong leap can send the opponent in flight over the ground up to mid range in length to land a hit on the target. Not only that but if the user is close to the ground, in mid speed flight he/she can quickly change direction due to having complete control over themselves with the help of the jutsu.

    ► This specific jutsu is a highly advance fuuton technique. One must have mastered the fuuton elemen't to attempt this jutsu due the elemental chakra control required to pull it off.
    ► Can only last up to a maximum of two turn's, and cannot be in flight to use a differen't jutsu.
    ► This is not a mode due to lack of turn's it can be used.
    ► Can only be used twice per battle, and after the jutsu only B-Ranked and below wind techniques can be used in the next two turn's.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
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    [ Tsuin doragon sureiyāzu, The White Dragon Twin's| ツインドラゴン-滅竜魔法 ]
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense - Defense
    Range: Varied
    Chakra Cost: -
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The White Dragon Twin's, said to be among the most powerful Katana's ever to be recorded in shinobi history. The Twin Dragon's are also thought to be only a legend, few have had the chance to witness these monster's. The all powerful white dragon is known to be the sky king in most legend's, god of wind and lightning. These Katana are said to be the god's children in a way, connected to the almighty dragon. This is believed due to the blade's ultimately being indestructable, and having a much sharper edge then any other Katana known to man. These quality's are god like, and they create the ultimate weapon's. But a Katana does not simply earn the name of a god's child for good quality's, they earn the name for their attribute's. The lightning twin goes by the name of Kaminari ōji, meaning Lightning Prince. The name is fairly earned. Kaminari is capable of contucting electricity around it's blade, creating an unbeatable edge over sharpness. Not only that but Kaminari can eat lightning. Whether he decide's to spit it back out at the opponent is his master's choice. And his brother's name is Kaze ōji, meaning Wind Prince. Kaze's special attribute allow's him to create large gust's and blade's of sharp wind at any givin moment, and like his brother Kaze, he can eat up wind techniques, and spit them out. But the most astonishing attribute is that the blade's have God Like voices, and they can speak to their master. Distinctly Kaze's voice is a bit deeper than Kaminari's. The twin's are best when they are used together as one. For when you combine the blade's, they submerge into each-other becoming one beutiful Katana. The Katana shine's bright, and due to the element's mixing together in such a way, with the sweep of the blade a wave of white lightning is summoned. In this form the blade can even cut through steel. This lightning is the Wind God's technique, it is dominant over earth, fire, and water.

    Kaminari ōji: The lightning blade can only be summoned once per battle, count's as a technique, and last's three turn's. Kaminari can also eat up lightning jutsu and send it back at the opponent up to S-Ranked twice per battle.

    Kaze ōji: Can only performe wind blade and gust twice per battle which include's both techniques. Kaze can also eat up wind jutsu and send it back at the opponent up to S-Ranked Once per battle.

    Combined God's: Can only be combined once per battle. White lightning wave only happen's once per battle, and once used the blade's are split and cannot be used for the rest of the battle.

    Blade's: Both blade's can only be unsheathed twice per battle. One can be used at a time. All techniqes excluding white lightning used by the twin's are A-ranked, and when used they count as a move. White lightning is S-ranked, and also count's as a move. The jutsu absorbing also count's as one move each time.


    ~ TOO LONG. Just put in the important stuff, not its history and things. ~
     
         
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    (Bakuton: Kibaku Doragon no Su)- Explosion Release: Explosive Dragon's Nest
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90(45 per Dragon)
    Description: The user, after ingesting a large amount of explosive clay, releases it from his mouth in a quick movement, similar to how Garuda is created. The entire process of consuming and releasing the clay lasts about five seconds. As the explosive clay is released from the mouth, it takes the shape of two dragons, similar to the C-2 Dragon. However, these dragons are smaller, more muscled and agile, and capable of flying at speeds up to 80mph. The dragons have the ability to be independently controlled similar to how clones function. Each dragon can separately be detonated with a single hand seal, and the blast radius of a single dragon goes out to mid-range from the location it was detonated from. The dragons stay on the battlefield until they are destroyed by the opponent, or detonated by the user.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Only one dragon can be detonated per turn
    *Note: No Clay techniques for the remainder of the battle
    *Note: The user suffers a moderate fatigue after the use of this technique, being incapable of using or moving their legs for two turns

    ~ Too fast. At that speed, no one can dodge the dragons once they get even in mid-range, since the explosion also has to be accounted for ~
    (Bakuton: Kibaku Doragon no Su)- Explosion Release: Explosive Dragon's Nest
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90(45 per Dragon)
    Description: The user, after ingesting a large amount of explosive clay, releases it from his mouth in a quick movement, similar to how Garuda is created. The entire process of consuming and releasing the clay lasts about five seconds. As the explosive clay is released from the mouth, it takes the shape of two dragons, similar to the C-2 Dragon. However, these dragons are smaller, more muscled and agile, and capable of flying at speeds up to 50mph. The dragons have the ability to be independently controlled similar to how clones function. Each dragon can separately be detonated with a single hand seal, and the blast radius of a single dragon goes out to mid-range from the location it was detonated from. The dragons stay on the battlefield until they are destroyed by the opponent, or detonated by the user.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Only one dragon can be detonated per turn
    *Note: No Clay techniques for the remainder of the battle
    *Note: The user suffers a moderate fatigue after the use of this technique, being incapable of using or moving their legs for two turns

    ~ Approved ~

    (Koishi Byōga Supia)- Pebble Drawing Spear
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Pebble Drawing Spear is a famed weapon rumored to be used by the Shodai Tsuchikage himself. The shaft itself its 5ft in length, and made from a heavy, chakra reinforced stone material. However, Selendrile has trained with the Spear for such a long amount of time; he is able to wield the heavy spear with normal dexterity. The triangular, bladed tip is composed of a tempered metal. Using his earth affinity, Selendrile is capable of channeling chakra into the spear. When this is performed, stones manifest themselves on the spear tip, using the shaft as a stone source. The stones can range from marble sized stones, to basketball sized ones. Using the Spear tip similar to a pencil, the user can draw various shapes and figures using the stones. After using this special ability two separate times, the user must replenish the stone shaft in order to maintain a source for drawing. This is done my simply placing the shaft against the ground, and elongating the shaft back to its original length using shape manipulation.
    *Note: Only usable by Selendrile
    *Note: Only usable by those with an Earth affinity
    *Note: If not wielded by Selendrile, the Spear becomes impossible to lift due to its weight unless given permission first
    *Note: The rocks produced by the Spear are B-ranked

    ~ What do you do once you draw with the rocks ? ~

    (Bakuton: Kibaku Gōsuto Kamikaze Keisei)- Explosion Release: Explosive Ghost Kamikaze Attack
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will put a single hand in their side pouches filled with clay, and begin to mold and shape it. They then will release ten small, white, ghostlike figures, resembling the user’s appearance. The tail ends of their bodies taper off to a point, giving them a ghost-like appearance. The ten ghosts are able to be individually controlled similar to clones, yet cannot use any jutsu. When moving, they are able to use the clay in their bodies to stretch their midsection up to mid-range from where their lower half is. Meaning, the lower half stays stationary, while the upper half travels up to mid-range away. Normal travel using their entire body is also possible. They are able to travel as fast as a normal explosive clay bird. Once they come in contact with anything, the user will perform a single hand seal, and detonate the ghosts individually. Each ghosts explodes with the force of five C1 bombs.
    *Note: Can only be used by Selendrile
    *Note: Only usable by Deidara
    *Note: No clay techniques for 2 turns



    ~ Impossibly long extension capabilities, lol. ~
     
         
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    (Fūton: Poppu) Wind Release : Pop
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates his wind chakra to form a highly compressed bubble of wind which is the same size as a tennis ball anywhere on the battle field, the user then makes the tennis ball blow up which results in a loud pop sound which affects the opponents hearing for 2 turns, making the hearing extremely bad due to the after affects of the pop. (like if someone had hears an explosion, their hearing would be phased and they get a ringing or buzzing sound in their ears.) And because of this the opponent would not be able to hear things very clearly giving the user an advantage.
    Note: Can only be used twice.

    ±± Declined ±± similar technique is being made by mcknockout
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Karasu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Myōjō) –Hyakutakarasu no Jutsu - One Hundred Scattered Crows Technique
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Self
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A ( )
    Description:Hyakutakarasu is a summoning Technique developed by Law Hyuuga with the Aid of his Summoning Crows. Performing the Summoning Jutsu Law will call forth 100 (harmless) Crows to appear within an area so as to flood it with activity. These Crows will fly where directed by Law, usually around a target, causing confusion with their constantly and rapidly moving forms and endless screeches. Law or an ally could move within the flock almost undetected. With the target distracted by the Crows, Law can strike more easily and undetected till the last moment. Also the mass of crows can obscure any retreating ninja. When no longer needed, the crows will simply puff away in smoke, which by itself can also prove quite effective to cover ones movements.
    - Can only be use twice per battle.
    - Must wait one whole turn before using again.

    ~ Tell me this isn't similar to http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Scatter...rows_Technique. It has the exact same abilities. EXACT SAME. Do not submit canon techniques under a different name. I should infract you, but I'm just warning you for now. ~

    ( Taka Ishuu ) : One With The Crows
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range:Short – Self
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description: This is a special Crow Art Technique Law learned. Forming a single focusing hand sign Law can make himself disperse into a multitude of crows, usually numbering 20 or so. Able to reform at any time, he is still able to speak while in this multi Crow form, speaking from each and every one of them. There are no real offensive capabilities in this form, and his health and Chakra are split evenly among the Crows, meaning that for each crows destroyed he suffers injury and Chakra loss once reformed, As long as a Single Crow remains he can reform, but his health will reflect the loss. If all Crows are killed or destroyed than Law will die also. Also Law is aware of what each crows sees, hears, smells, experienced etc, allowing him to perceive event from multiple points of view. Usually this crows swam must remain within a certain distance from each other, within one mile.
    - Can only be use twice per battle.
    - No jutsu that needs handseal can be use while this jutsu is in play.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    Hargot
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Self
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A ( )
    Description:Hargot is comparable in size to Gamabunta with a very large wing span. His name is given to him not because of treason towards his own people, but rather because of the way he hunts and the way he battles. Large enough to be mounted, Law can use Hargot for transportation, but he is not the most likely to accept to act as ride for any one. Hargot, is quiet, withdrawn and rather mysterious. His wings and back are nearly pure black, while his eyes are of the purest blue. At three hundred years of age Hargot is one of the most skilled (A rank) Genjutsu users of his people. With a single stair he can paralyze an opponent with fear, Make them believe they are fallng from open sky, make them believes they are trapped in a powerful whirlwind, or even make them believe that they are suffocating. His powerful cry can deafen his opponent, render them mad with fear, or make them believe that the scream has broken their body. ( These jutsu has to be created so he can't do them right now) A powerful and experienced warrior as well, his Talons can tear into nearly any material. His grip can squeeze the life out of a grown man. and among his people he is an exception, being a Fire ( A rank and below) user rather than Wind. Like all Crows, he is extremely agile and swift.
    - Can only be summon once per battle
    - The caster can't use Fire jutsu for 3 turns
    - Only last 3 turns

    ~ Proper format ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    3.) (Ninpou: Mitsukai Tsubasa) - Ninja Art: Angelic Wings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User uses his ink brush to draw giant wings on his back. Once drawn, it appears like the wings are emerging out of user's back and gives user somewhat angelic look and flying ability. Because of giant size of wings, user can fly with very great speed which is equivalent to Rock Lee without weights.
    Note: -Must know Ink ninjutsu.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.



    @Above tech: There are many ink ninjutsu which helps the user in flying for infinite amount of time (see spoiler below). Also user can create many birds, dragons and animals at a time. And I am creating just one thing. Also other ink ninjutsu can be used any no. of times. So I am just making a new ink custom which resembles other ink ninjutsu completely.. which is for fun..
    Also there are not many people who possess ink ability on nb, and those who possess they "don't have a similar custom."
    You can remove the great speed (lee without weights) part if you want..

    (Ninpou: Choujuu Giga) - Ninja Art Beast Imitation
    Rank: C
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:15(-3 for each additional animal created)
    Damage Points:30
    Description:The user draws out small animals that can attack(lions), bind(snakes),and allow the user to fly(birds).This jutsu consists of 5 small animals.The pictures can be pre-drawn but you must open the scroll.
    Note:The 5 animal limit can be any variety of small animals.

    (Ninpou: Chou Choujuu Giga) - Ninja Art: Super Beast Imitation
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20(-6 for each additional large animal past 3 or -3 for each small animal past 10)
    Damage Points:40
    Description:This is a more powerful version of beast imitation.The user can create huge animals.This can range form 3 huge dragons or 10 small animals.The pictures can be pre-drawn but you must open the scroll.



    ±± All Declined ±±It has been stated countless times before, by Izuna and not only him that no submission that uses Spoilers without them being for images or videos will be checked.

    As stated in the first post of this thread:

    "-No submission that uses font or formatting alterations such as underline, bold, allignement, color, size, spoilers, etc will be checked. The only exception is that you are allowed to Bold or underline the title of each technique you submitt and you can use spoilers for videos or images you need to post for references.

    -An exception to the above rule is the requirement to bold the alterations on re-submissions. Its required that every altered or add part is bolded. If you simply take out something, write beneath the jutsu stating "I took out the part where..."."
    @Below Ink tech: There are many ink ninjutsu which helps the user in flying for infinite amount of time (see ninjutsu list). Also user can create many birds, dragons and animals at a time. And I am creating just one thing. Also other ink ninjutsu can be used any no. of times. So I am just making a new ink custom which resembles other ink ninjutsu completely.. which is for fun..
    Also there are not many people who possess ink ability on nb, and those who possess they "don't have a similar custom."
    (Ninpou: Mitsukai Tsubasa) - Ninja Art: Angelic Wings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User uses his ink brush to draw giant wings on his back. Once drawn, it appears like the wings are emerging out of user's back and gives user somewhat angelic look and flying ability. Because of giant size of wings, user can fly with very great speed such that only sharingan 2T and above will be able to keep up with speed.
    Note: -Must know Ink ninjutsu.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.



    ~ Do you have like super-bendy arms or something ? o_O ~

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Katon/Raiton: Jisatsu Maniakku) - Fire/Lightning Style: Suicidal Maniac
    Type: Offense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-Death of user-)
    Description: This forbidden technique requires sacrifice and a lot of lightning and fire chakra. So user stands still and then starts concentrating his lightning and fire chakra in his stomach in a small ball. He keeps on concentrating the chakra for some time, and once tremendous amount of chakra is concentrated in the stomach, user makes Tiger handseal and says "baku" and as the moment he says "baku", the ball inside the user's stomach expands instantly turning into a giant sphere and thus user explodes. The sphere envelopes everyone and everything within 10m radius (mid-range). The impact of the explosion is that great that everything is turned into ash within range.
    Note: -For concentrating chakra in stomach, user must stand still for 3 seconds. In this period of time, he can't move, or do anything.
    -Can only be used if user hasn't used any lightning or fire move in his previous turn.
    -Can only be used if user hasn't used any S-Rank or above technique in previous turn.
    -If user explodes and opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw.
    -Can only be used by Enzup.


    ±± Declined ±± Op. Also, this makes it so that it provides easy draws or wins even if you die.
    (Katon/Raiton: Jisatsu Maniakku) - Fire/Lightning Style: Suicidal Maniac
    Type: Offense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-Death of user-)
    Description: This forbidden technique requires sacrifice and a lot of lightning and fire chakra. So user stands still and then starts concentrating his lightning and fire chakra in his stomach in a small ball. He keeps on concentrating the chakra for some time, and once tremendous amount of chakra is concentrated in the stomach, user makes Tiger handseal and says "baku" and as the moment he says "baku", the ball inside the user's stomach expands instantly turning into a giant sphere and thus user explodes. The sphere envelopes everyone and everything within 10m radius (mid-range). The impact of the explosion is that great that everything is turned into ash within range.
    Note: -For concentrating chakra in stomach, user must stand still for 5 seconds. In this period of time, he can't move, or do anything.
    -Can only be used if user hasn't used any lightning or fire move in his previous turn.
    -Can only be used if user hasn't used any S-Rank or above technique in previous turn.
    -If user explodes and opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw.
    -Can only be used by Enzup.

    ~ Remove what I bolded. You have no idea whether he would turn to ash or not, depending on the defenses. ~

    Changed it to 5 seconds. And I think 5 seconds are more than enough time for someone, to stop me from using this (or to kill me). Also just b'coz I said that "if opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw", I think you are assuming that whenever I will use this and explode, then opponent will not be able to block it? Although its a F-Rank, but it can also be blocked like other F-rank jutsus are blocked. I mean, even if I explode (die), then also my opponent can block the impact of the explosion.
    And I have to stay still for 5 seconds (before using it), and thats no joke.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -General Phaze- View Post
    (Ration: itsutsu sutaffu metsubou) Lightning Style: 5 Staff Destruction
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Chakra Damage: 90 (-40 To user)
    Description : The User Will Release do 5handseals and take out 5 staffs and stab them all in the ground in front of him. Once done, the user will channel 95% of their lightning chakra into those staffs. Once done, the staffs will then all charge. Once they are done charging the staffs will then channel the lightning that was charged up, underground towards the opponent. The ground will then glow a yellowish color., Once it glows it will be a huge explosion under the opponent that spreads throughout 10yards in height and width of the oppenent


    -No Lightning Throughout the whole turn
    -Must possess staffs to use this
    -If used in Short-Mid Range. The user will get caught up in the explosion
    -Counts as 2/3 user moves
    -Takes 1 turn to charge up
    -While Charging the user cant use any Nin or Genjutsu
    -Once the move is done it strains the body and only allows the user to do 2 moves up to B rank throughout the whole battle.
    -Only Taught by general Phaze

    ~ If you're using 95% of the lightning chakra, which, by the way, is a misnomer since there is no store of "lightning chakra", its just chakra that you give a lightning nature to, you'll be unable to use lightning for more than one turn. Second, all Forbidden ranks can be used only once, so add that. Also, is it 2 or 3 ? How are you supposed to use it in battle if you're unsure how many moves it counts as ? ~
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    (Ration: itsutsu sutaffu metsubou) Lightning Style: 5 Staff Destruction
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Chakra Damage: 90 (-40 To user)
    Description : The User Will Release do 5handseals and take out 5 staffs and stab them all in the ground in front of him. Once done, the user will channel 95% of their chakra into those staffs. Once done the staffs will then all charge. Once they are done charging the staffs will then channel the lightning that was charged up underground towards the opponent. The ground will then glow a yellowish color Giving off alot of static currents from below the enemy stunning them,. Once it glows and gives off the lightning currents (about 5seconds) it will be a huge lightning explosion under the opponent that spreads throughout 10yards in height and width of the oppenent

    -Can only use once
    -Cant use lightning throughout the whole battle after
    -Must possess staffs to use this
    -If used in Short-Mid Range. The user will get caught up in the explosion
    -Counts as 2 of the 3 of the user moves
    -Takes 1 turn to charge up
    -While Charging the user cant use any Nin or Genjutsu
    -Once the move is done it strains the body and only allows the user to do 2 moves up to A rank throughout the whole battle.
    -Only Taught by general Phaze

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. This has no salvation. Its too similar to existing techniques even with the staff shenanigan going on.


    Quote Originally Posted by -General Phaze- View Post

    SUMMON Submission



    (Ni kashira: Prometheus) Two Headed: Prometheus
    Type: Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Chakra Damage:60
    Description: General Will do 5handseals. once done he will bite his thumb till blood drip, wipe it on his tattoo , slam his hands on the ground and the 2 headed snake (Prometheus) will appear under him. Prometheus is about 3/4 the size of manda. about the same size of the snake that swallowed naruto. Prometheus is one of the rare breeds as it has 2 heads. He can use up to A rank Earth . Also he can go underground without using a jutsu. The Scales on this snake is so rough its not penetrated by B rank and Below Earth Jutsu. The snake is not poisonous so General Can ride inside their mouth if need be,. Both of the snakes speaks English,Spanish,and Dutch. (They was taught by oro) >_>

    -Can only use Once
    -Only last for 4turns
    -No Ninjutsu while summon active
    -All jutsus done by the snake counts as 1 towards the user
    -The snake do not need to do hand seals for Earth techs
    -Only can be used by General Phaze

    Link to signing of Scarface snake contract

    ~ Left for Scorps ~


    ±± Declined ±± going underground without a technique? No. Also, dutch? spanish? =_= Yeah, because in narutoverse the concept of language is something that is equal to the RW. Remove that part.




    (Ni kashira: Prometheus) Two Headed: Prometheus
    Type: Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Chakra Damage:60
    Description: General Will do 5handseals. once done he will bite his thumb till blood drip, wipe it on his tattoo , slam his hands on the ground and the 2 headed snake (Prometheus) will appear around him (Like a Cork screw). Prometheus is about 3/4 the size of manda. about the same size of the snake that swallowed naruto. Prometheus is one of the rare breeds as it has 2 heads. He can use up to A rank Earth . The Scales on this snake is so rough its not penetrated by B rank and Below Earth Jutsu. The snake is not poisonous so General Can ride inside their mouth if need be,. Both of the snakes are able to speak.

    -Can only use Once
    -Only last for 4turns
    -No Ninjutsu while summon active
    -All jutsus done by the snake counts as 1 towards the user
    -The snake do not need to do hand seals for Earth techs
    -Only can be used by General Phaze


    Link to signing of Scarface snake contract

    ±± Approved ±± Note however that you put a restriction that makes it so that while this snake is on the field you can't use Ninjutsu... Which means that while this is in play you can only use Genjutsu and Taijutsu.


    Majestic (yuusou)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Chakra Damage: N/A (+20 To the user for each time he activates the sword)
    Description: This Sword was said to be set in stone and could not be pulled out by anybody. They sooner realize the weapon was KG coated Meaning only people with a certain KG can Obtain and hold it. Many tried and All have failed... Bloody Asch then came and pulled on the sword and with great force the sword was lifted. He is able to maintain the sword cause the sword choose him (Ik lame) Asch Fought Days and Days. Train months and months with the sword to gain mastery of the sword. When The sword Activates the Gold Lines in the sword turn Bright Red. Asch Channels his Chakra into the sword when activating it. Causing it to give off a huge huge Red Glare with immense heat (Like a solar flare) making water evaporate under A rank and Earth turn into clay Under A rank Due to heat sulking up all the water (Meaning B rank and below) Due to the Immense Heat Asch takes recoil damage, And can not do any S jutsus the next turn. If he does it again he cant Use S nor A rank jutsus the next Turn. If he uses it again he wont be able to use S,A,nor B jutsus the next turn. If he uses it one more time he will gain permanent damage and wont be able to do No jutsus above C rank nor jutsus that require handseals.. The sword is very sharp and can cut down huge boulders with ease without activation. If the sword cuts an opponent it will have the same affect as the Scorch suns. Due to the immense heat it will drain water out of the opponents body causing them to only be able to do 2jutsus. In order to do that. It must be activated as well.

    -Only Can be used my Bloody Asch (My Scorch bio) and not my other bio
    -Can only Activate 4times
    -Cant Use Fire Nor Wind in the same turn as activation
    -Activates once Asch Inputs his chakra into the sword (Must say so in battle if activate)
    -The Flare does not have full affect on me since i am the sword wielder and the attack is not facing my direction
    -Can only activate it once pr turn
    -Activation counts as 1 of the 3 users turns

    (Cali said nothing is wrong with a KG BIO. and since scorps re declined my other weapon i have no weapon as of now) Take off anything with the activation or add in anything if you must or want to make it approvable

    ~ All left for Scorps ~


    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Similar to many swords in existence and OPed.

    Also...Chakra damage? Don't you mean Damage? Follow proper template.
     
         
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    (Katon: Kyousei Shoumei) Fire Release: Great Illumination
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will perform the Tiger hand seal, before releasing a massive amount of fire from his body, whereas it will surround him like a barrier, releasing a massive amount of heat and light around it, blinding the opponent. The intense light from the barrier will also block the user’s vision of the opponent. When the huge barrier is released into the area, standing 10 meters in height and has a circular area of 10 meters in diameter. It will automatically explode outwards towards the opponent with immense speed and heat while the opponent is blinded by the extreme light source. The fire explosion itself is so intense it will rip up pieces of earth, rocks and trees in the process while crushing almost anything in its path towards the enemy. The user himself will lose a huge amount of stamina as possible pass out from the lack of oxygen.
    Note: The user will be sluggish while recovering from the loss of oxygen
    Note: If the user keeps the barrier up for more than two turns they will pass out
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used/taught by JiraiyaEroSennin

    ~ Similar techniques exist. ~

    (Katon/Doton: Kaen Arashi Toukai) Fire Release: Blazing Storm of Destruction
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user creates a small hole in the ground, by stomping the ground once; this hole will extend into several small tunnels underground in the surrounding area. The tunnels will be surrounding the opponent in a diameter of 20 meters and be 5 meters underground, the tunnels will be crossing each other (X). This is followed by releasing a massive amount of fire into the hole which extends into several tunnels underground, while the fire is travelling; it becomes more compact and more heated as the ground above it will become warmer. When the fire has travelled into all the tunnels, the user will then weave a single hand sign, as the fire beneath will explode into a furry of massive flames, making the ground above it explode. The fire and earth will explode in all directions making a massive crater in the ground where as the user himself will be an easy target for his own jutsu if not being careful. The crater after the explosion is 40 meters in diameter and 10 meters deep. The explosion itself will reach into the air and the surroundings with massive force reaching far into the sky.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Cannot use any fire release for the next turn
    Note: Can only be used/taught by JiraiyaEroSennin

    ~ OPed. ~

    (Katon: Enkou Genkaku) Fire Release: Flaming Illusion
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will perform the Serpent-Tiger hand sequence, where as they will create a huge fireball which is only served as a distraction. The fireball served as a distraction is send directly towards the opponent as a B-ranked fire, while another massive fire is released from the user’s mouth upon the ground surrounding the opponent quickly. The fire will then extend high into the air (about 15 meters high), making nothing visible outside of the fire. The fire itself is still controlled by the user, making the surroundings and the user seem like an illusion to the opponent. Making them believe they have been caught in a genjutsu, as the flames will dance around and make everything look unreal. The fire will slowly become stronger and close in on the opponent while the heat will make the opponent lose stamina and become weak by the second, while the user will merely wait for the opponent to collapse from the intense flames and the belief of being controlled by someone else. Both the opponent and the user himself will have a great strain on their bodies, because of the lack of oxygen, and will faint for the lack of stamina and oxygen.
    Note: can only be used/taught by JiraiyaEroSennin
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Cannot use fire release the next turn

    ~ Sorry, but you cannot make the opponent think it as an illusion, it is still within bounds of possibility.~

    NOTE: Can be used/taught only by JiraiyaEroSannin is a contradiction. If it can only be used by you, it cannot be taught; if it can be taught, it cannot be used only by you.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    summoning animal: Fox
    contract owner: william24 a.k.a me :D
    other users who have signed contract: N/A
    summoning boss if existing: none yet
    other animals tied to this contract: N/A
    description and background: will do a background and discription if approved, don't wanna waste my time ya know..

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Doro pitto) Earth Style: Mud Pit
    Type:Offense
    Rank:B
    Range:Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:0
    Description: The user sends a wave of chakra into the ground and under their opponent. The user has it mix with the ground and, after turning the ground into mud, cause the floor of earth under the opponent to collapse and cave in on itself, creating a large hole or pit. The walls of the pit are made of mud and slide inwards towards the opponent until it rises up to the opening of the pit, filling the pit with mud. Due to the mud not rising upwards like a platform, but pouring all around the opponent and surrounding them, the opponent's feet are usually trapped in a matter of seconds, making it impossible for them to stand on the mud
    -Can only be thought by rikerslade-

    ~ Declined, similar techniques exist. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Resubmitting all

    Genjutsu: Maboroshi Fukusuu | Illusionary Technique: Multiple Vision
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will disrupt the opponents flow of chakra within the brain by performing two hand seals Snake → Bird so that it effects the part of their eye sight. Once the opponent is under this genjutsu, they will begin to see trails of the person they are looking at. Almost as if they are seeing a clone but not quite. The effect lasts three turns and the person under the genjutsu will not be able to attack with accuracy, although a large scale attack would still be effective against the user but won't take a direct hit due to it's inaccuracy.

    Note: Must know up to A rank genjutsu in order to use this technique
    Note: Able to use it 2 times in battle
    Note: Lasts 3 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-

    ~ You know the massive error in this technique ? If he sees a trail, then he can just shoot the farthest one in the direction in which you move and hit you, since all the others will be behind the real you. ~


    Genjutsu: Chien Taimu | Illusionary Technique: Time Delay
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will cast a genjutsu towards the opponent by disrupting their chakra flow in their brain. The user will simply point towards the opponent and make a single hand seal Tiger → Boar to put them under this genjutsu. While the opponent is under this genjutsu, any action performed will be delayed by one second. Rather it's a jutsu, any form of taijutsu, or even running. The person under this genjutsu, they will think that they are performing the action right away however this is not the case. Whatever is performed it will be delayed by two second.

    Note: Able to use twice in battle
    Note: Must have mastered genjutsu
    Note: Lasts two turns unless broken
    NoteL Can only taught by -Vision-

    ~ Rephrase that to will not notice ~

    Katon: Nami Atsusa | Fire Release: Heat Wave
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will make a hand seal tiger, then will slam their hands on the ground. Directing the chakra as the users desire of location. Then then a red ring will rise from the ground which turns into an orb of ash cloud that surrounds the opponent and is highly concentrated and dense with Katon chakra therefore highly combustable and once it gets in contact with any fire and lightning source it will instantly explode and create a chain reaction of explosions within the orb of the ash cloud. Once this jutsu is activated and the opponent gets caught in it some of the ash will stick to the clothes and skin due to the thick and dense concentration of the ash cloud. The orb of ash will move along with the opponent that is caught in it, however the cloud is not harmful in anyway. In order for the user to make it move with the opponent one must keep his hands on the ground to control the orb of ash cloud moving with the person that is surrounding it. The speed of the ash cloud is strictly determined by the users ability to track their opponent. Dojutsu users would be able to move this orb of ash cloud faster than normal shinobi, as well as any sensor or sound ninja's.

    Note: Can use once in battle
    Note: Last 3 turns and moves with the opponent as he moves
    Note: EIG and Swift users are able to escape with ease
    Note: A rank fire or above have to be used to be effective
    Note: Must have Mastered Katon element to be able to use this jutsu
    Note: Speed of the ash cloud is determined by the user and their ability to track their opponent.
    Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-

    ~ Declined. You're not submitting it directly under the opponent, no way. ~

    Please edit any for approval. All changes are made in bold.



    Resubmitting again ~_~
    Changes in bold




    Genjutsu: Maboroshi Fukusuu | Illusionary Technique: Multiple Vision
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will disrupt the opponents flow of chakra within the brain by performing two hand seals Snake → Bird so that it effects the part of their eye sight. Once the opponent is under this genjutsu, they will begin to see trails of the person they are looking at. Additional effect is that once the trails happen the opponent will also be dizzy and disorientated, as if the opponent is showing drunk like qualities of their sense's. The opponent will also feel nausea followed by extreme migrane. The effect lasts three turns and the person under the genjutsu will not be able to attack with accuracy, although a large scale attack would still be effective against the user but won't take a direct hit due to it's inaccuracy.

    Note: Must know up to A rank genjutsu in order to use this technique
    Note: Able to use it 2 times in battle
    Note: Lasts 3 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

    Genjutsu: Chien Taimu | Illusionary Technique: Time Delay
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will cast a genjutsu towards the opponent by disrupting their chakra flow in their brain. The user will simply point towards the opponent and make a single hand seal Tiger → Boar to put them under this genjutsu. While the opponent is under this genjutsu, any action performed will be delayed by two seconds. Rather it's a jutsu, any form of taijutsu, or even running. The person under this genjutsu, they will think that they are performing the action right away but may not notice what is actually happening.Whatever is performed it will be delayed by two seconds.


    Note: Able to use twice in battle
    Note: Must have Mastered genjutsu
    Note: Lasts two turns unless broken
    Note: Can only taught by -Vision-

    ~ Approved. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-03-2012 at 05:37 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: Hanshin Soshi) Illusionary Technique: Rebellious element
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: - (Depends on rank of Water jutsu used)
    Description: The user releases his chakra into the opponents brain where it stays dormant until the opponent uses a water jutsu, the chakra will then take it's action and control the users vision and make them see their own attack suddenly take place on themselves, because of the element suddenly attacking them, they lose concentration and the attack they performed on the user of this genjutsu stops as they are no longer concentrating their chakra into that attack. Because of the various water jutsus the opponents reaction in reality will depend on the water jutsu used. For example should they use water gushing imprisonment they will think they are stuck in the water and drown as they struggle to disrupt the water, but in reality they will just stand at a point and later fall unconscious should they not figure out it's a genjutsu and get out of it. If the water jutsu used is more of a full on attack such as Water bullet then they will imagine getting hit by the brute force of the attack and get knocked back several meters whereas in reality they are again left standing at a spot screaming due to the injuries they think they are receiving. Whilst this genjutsu is active the opponent can see everything and anything the user does as normal.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Lasts 2 turns each time
    Note: No Genjutsu in same and next turn after use of this technique.

    ~ You want to control your own vision ? o_O ~

    (Futon: Meimei Shouheki) Wind Release: Invisible Barrier
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates on his Wind chakra and creates an invisible dome like structure which forms around both him and his opponent and remains stationary and keeps everything within the dome inside, although it does no harm when used with things like the Hidden mist technique, this dome means the mist is not as easily dispersed as normal hence the opponent would have to use an A-rank or higher wind technique in order to fully blow away the mist and destroy the dome. Should the opponent be in mid range, the user can form the dome at mid range just behind himself and the opponent so that whatever is contained inside (should it be the mist, or smoke) is more concentrated and harder to see through then normal.
    Note: Can be used 4 times.
    Note: No S-rank wind in same turn.
    Note: Doujutsu users can see the dome as it has users chakra.

    ~ Short-Long is too large a dome. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-03-2012 at 05:39 AM.

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