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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I figured i'd try and make a variation of this jutsu:

    (Sennin Fuuin: Ero Toki) - Sage Sealing art: Pervy time
    Rank: S
    Type: Seal breaking
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 20 (to break the seal)
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: Before the battle, the user will have placed a special seal on their body while in sage mode. As they did, the would have have sealed 100 chakra points worth of natural energy into this seal placed on their body (like how jiraiya sealed the black flames into the scroll). The user will then perform one quick handseal thrusting their hands outwards releasing the seal. Upon doing so, they will release the large blast of natural energy outwards in all directions from their body. This is purely for damage, the user can't use this natural energy for sage mode. (see video below)

    Note: Useable once
    Note: Must be placed on bio or stated at the begining of the battle.
    Note: No fuuin jutsu for 2 turns
    Note: Can only be used by those able to control natural energy.
    Note: This takes up two of the users 3 jutsu for the turn.
    Note: The natural energy acts purely as a blast of energy with no added characteristics.
    Note: Can't use while in Sage Mode (or similar).

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=Eov2wy1SZGU



    (Fuuin: Ero Gekido) - Sealing art: Pervy Rage
    Rank: S
    Type: Seal breaking
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 20 (to break the seal)
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: Before the battle, the user will have placed a special seal on their body. As they did, the would have have sealed 100 chakra points worth of each of the basic 5 elements into this seal placed on their body (like how jiraiya sealed the black flames into the scroll). The user will then perform one quick handseal thrusting their hands outwards releasing the seal. Upon doing so, they will release the large blast of the chosen element outwards in all directions from their body. If the earth seal is released, mud will errupt from the users body. The element released wont hurt the user


    Note: Useable three times
    Note: Must be placed on bio or stated at the begining of the battle.
    Note: No fuuin jutsu for 2 turns.
    Note: This takes up two of the users 3 jutsu for the turn.
    Note: Only 1 element can be released at a time
    Note: See video below, but instead of a pure blast of chakra it will be a chosen element

    ~Declined~ Umm, no. Do not think of resubmitting it as it stands.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=Eov2wy1SZGU
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-14-2012 at 10:48 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Approved Minato biography.

    (Doton/Sekiyuton: Sekiyu Numa) - Earth/Oil Release: Oil Lake
    Type: Supplementary , Offense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user using his Earth chakra manipulation causes the ground underneath the opponent to descend with a large circular radius that's big enough to trap a Large summoning creature, and a height of 10 meters causing the opponent's balance to be disrupted, afterwards by forming 3 quick handseals of Ram → Monkey → Boar the user causes Oil to seep from the ground underneath and around the opponent "the walls of the circular area which descended" filling the area with Oil making it hard for the opponent to move through the Oil, this technique can be used for other Oil techniques.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Must have signed the Toads contract.
    ~Leaving for Mathias~
    ~Declined~ Having signed the Toad contract does not give you the ability to create oil related techniques from the ground. The oil is produced by the toads themselves which are usually used in fire combinations. Putting that aside, the fact remains that this would collide with the oil Release CE that has been already approved by another member.

    (Ninpō: Akuma Hōka) - Ninja Art: Demonic Fire
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 5
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a basic ninjutsu technique used by Ryūzetsu, to give her fire techniques a more "unique" shape than the other users of fire techniques, similar to the shape of the "Fire Release: Demon Lanturn" technique, Ryūzetsu's fire techniques have somewhat of a transparent effect to it, allowing Ryūzetsu and others to see through the fire technique but a more of a distorted vision of what's behind the fire, and whenever she's using a fire technique that consists of small fireballs like for example the "Fire Release: Phoenix Fire Technique" all of the small fireballs attain a demonic head-shaped fireball, this technique doesn't increase or decrease the strength of any fire techniques whatsoever.
    Note: Will remain continuously activated once used.
    Note: Can only be used by Ryūzetsu.

    Ryūzetsu biography.
    ~Approved~ Pretty well done.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 05-14-2012 at 11:09 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    Raiton: Getsuga Tenshō (Lightning: Moon Fang Heaven-Piercer)
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type: Attack / Defence
    Range: Short / Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: At the instant of the slash, the user absorbs the lightning energy and channels it to his balde and releases highly condensed lightning energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack and then flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or in the shape of a wave. Getsuga Tenshō is a powerful technique with great force, capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. It can be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    ~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-14-2012 at 11:15 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    re-submit

    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. House View Post
    (Hakke Kakureta sainō) 8 Trigrams Hidden Talents
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using the abilities where a hyuuga member is able to emit a sharp chakra line through his palms, he'll be able to access one's chakra system. As this sharp chakra line had impaled one's body, the user will be able to access the enemies' chakra system as the chakra from the chakra line has infected the system, by sending chakra/going through the paths of his chakra system. As the chakra spread through the chakra system, it will completely stun his body/disturbing chakra flow for a turn, or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
    Note:
    ~It won't hurt the opponent, only paralyze him for a turn or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
    ~The chakra line is just as fast as hinata shown using it to create a barrier.
    ~Can be used 2x in a battle.
    ~Dr. House may teach it.
    ~No S-rank or higher elemental chakra for the following turn

    ±± Declined ±± OP


    (Hakke Shatā tamashī) 8 Trigrams Soul Shatter
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 in each turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 Ninjutsu / +10 Taijutsu)
    Description: The hyuuga member will focus his chakra throughout his body, thus using his excellent chakra control over his body, convert his whole body into raw chakra. In this state, he is able to be one with his jutsus and is able to take any physical damage. While active, the appearance of the user's chakra system can be seen and the shroud of chakra which makes up the body. The user may use his elemental chakra affinity while this is active. The elemental chakra affinity can only be used in the way of shaping the raw chakra which makes up the user's body. To go into more deeper, the user won't be able to make any techniques which is only the affinity the user has, but only to use it as a shape manipulator of the raw chakra.
    Note:
    ~Can only use his elemental affinity and no other elemental techniques.
    ~Two jutsus in every turn while this is active
    ~Only kages or higher
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Useable once per battle
    ~Lasts 4 turns
    ~When this ends, user may only use elemental chakra up to A-rank for the next 3 turns.


    ±± Declined ±± OP and the description has serious flaws.
    (Hakke Shatā tamashī) 8 Trigrams Soul Shatter
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 in each turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 Gentle Fist / +10 Taijutsu)
    Description: The hyuuga member will focus his chakra throughout his body, thus using his excellent chakra control over his body, convert his whole body into raw chakra. In this state, he is able to be one with Gentle Fist techniques like the Twin Lion Fist and is able to take any physical damage. While active, the user's appearance looks dark blue raw chakra which suppose to make up the user's body. While this mode is active, the user is vulnerable to lighting. If the opponent touches the user, it will burn him.
    Note:
    ~The user won't be able to mold any of the 5 elements while this is active
    ~While this is active, it counts as one of the 3 jutsus per turn

    ~Only kages or higher
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Useable once per battle
    ~Lasts 5 turns
    ~User won't be able to use tai or gentle fist for two turns after the jutsu has de-activated.
    ~When this ends, user may only use elemental chakra up to A-rank for the next 3 turns.

    Changes I've made
    ~took out the whole elemental affinity thing
    ~cleared it up more
    ~Made it so only gentle fist can be used
    ~Made it last 5 turn
    ~Declined~ Overpowered still. I like the idea though.

    (Hakke Kakureta sainō) 8 Trigrams Hidden Talents
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using the abilities where a hyuuga member is able to emit a sharp chakra line through his palms, he'll be able to access one's chakra system. As this sharp thick chakra line had impaled one's body, the user will be able to access the enemies' chakra system as the chakra from the chakra line has infected the system, by sending chakra/going through the paths of his chakra system. As the chakra spread through the chakra system, it will completely stun his body/disturbing chakra flow for a turn.It takes 3 seconds ti'll the opponent completely becomes stunned (meaning his whole body) if the opponent is hit anywhere else then his chakra core.
    Note:
    ~It won't hurt the opponent, only paralyze him for a turn or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
    ~The chakra line is just as fast as hinata shown using it to create a barrier.
    ~Can be used 2x in a battle.
    ~Dr. House may teach it.
    ~No elemental chakra is allowed to be used by the user in the same turn. CW is an exception where the user can only channel raw chakra into his CW to activate any affinity the CW has.

    Changes I've made:
    ~Put more restriction
    ~Made it a-ranked
    ~cleared it up more
    ~Declined~ Incorrect chakra cost. Plus, how is it mid-range?

    (Katon: Geretsuna Harikēn) Fire release: Vile Hurricane
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will channel his fire chakra to the opponent and when the katon chakra has reached the opponent, massive flames will appear around the opponent, engulfing him in massive flames, burning him alive.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 3x
    ~No other Katon technique in the same turn,
    ~No S-ranked katon or higher in the next turn.
    ~Dr. House may teach it.
    ~Must master fire
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-18-2012 at 02:01 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Rōzugāden) - Earth Release: Rose Garden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to the user)
    Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Snake, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the snake handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the concentrated doton chakra in a burst, the enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction. By doing this the user will create giant roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, being one of the basic earth crust elements, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of rare minerals only found in the earth crust thus gaining a redish-greenish, making them look like actual roses thought they are just earth minerals given actual form by chakra. These gigantic roses are sharper than blades and much denser having dozens gigantic spikes stiking out of the core not the mention the green colored branches. These gigantic roses reach out up to 30-40 meters in the air, in a mayhem of branches and leaves each capable of piercing through metal, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, being highly infused with the users Doton chakra, granting the user the ability to use earth techniques from the garden with increased speed and reduced difficulty, from the large amount of silicate minerals.

    ♦ Note: This technique can only be used/taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
    ♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.
    ♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for two turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user will take enormous damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-30)
    ♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat due to the severe damage taken by this jutsu. (doing so will result in killing the user.)

    ~ First, the part I bolded is a contradiction. Second, the technique needs to be depowered. ~

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    (Fūton: Amatsukaze) – Wind Release: Heavenly Wind
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user touches his left hand with the other hand, releasing a great deal of wind chakra into the air arround the targets causing a bluish walls wind from the right and left side to side of the targets, while the wind wall on right side bends and rotates inwards the left wind wall rotates outwards with many wind blades hidden inside the wind gust. This prompts a powerful storm to strike the area around the user, lifting targets and objects with great force and sending them flying in a circular motion into the skies, whil skreding tehem to pieces while inside the twister. This jutsu is also capable of lifting even a summoning animal such as gamaken into the air. It can also be combined with a fire jutsu to form a fire/wind twister, causing twice as much damage.

    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use any wind techniques the following turn.

    ~ Rephrase the description, it's confusing ~
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    Link to the approved summoning contract.
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Supitto Faia) - Summoning Technique: Spitfire
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and most powerful out of the elemental griffins; Spitfire, the fire emperor, Spitfire is a fairly large gryphon and is able to carry a total of four people on his back, he is the exact same size as pain's giant bird, but the thing that makes Spitfire really special is his appearance, his fur is completely orange-yellow, with the tip of her feathers colored light red and his both wings and all four legs are on fire this won't do any harm to the gryphon's because they are impervious to fire, Spitefire's eyes are the color of hell one might say completly red with yellow splits resembeling his power, superiority over other of his kind and his elemental affinity, Spitfire has a very interesting bone strucutre which is solid yet hollow from the inside and very thin but hard as stones, thus it makes him much faster and much more powerful than other gryphons of the round he is also very muscular, a normal ninja could easly loose track of him in the skies or on the ground. Spitfire has the manipulation of the wind affinity, from his birth he trained to master the fire element and thus he became more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the fire element upto S-Rank (counting towards the users moves of course), without the use of any handseals. Spifire is often refered to as the fire monster, or simply Spitfire.

    ♦ Note: Spitfire can only be summoned once per battle.
    ♦ Note: Spitfire can stay on the field for 5 turns per battle.
    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.

    ~ I'm going to be a bit of an ass here, and say that I'm not checking it because you used extra font modifications ( colours ). Read the rules. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-21-2012 at 12:57 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Lightning Release: Lightning Limb (Raiton: eda)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will send his lightning chakra through a puddle of water and as the lightning has almost reached the opponent the user will make his lightning chakra bounce and hit his opponent in the said body part leaving the opponent electrocuted.

    -must have a stream of water to conduct electricity through.
    -only usable three times per battle.
    -can only be used by mangekyo byakugan and those thought by him.

    ±± Declined ±± Already exists


    Lightning/Earth Release: Electro Limb Armor/attack(Raiton/Dotpn:eda bugu/batsu)
    Type: Defense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will uses his earth chakra to form an armor around a certain limb of his body then he will use his lightning chakra around the limb so that the lightning chakra travels on the covered limb the user then can hit his opponent with his limb causing the opponent to get electrified
    -usable only twice per battle

    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit


    Summoning Animal: Addax
    Scroll Owner: mangekyo byakugan
    Other Users who have signed contract: none
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: The Addax is a rare antelope that inhabits the great mountains of mount addax they formed a contract with a shinobi of the name mangekyo byakugan allowing him to summon the addax kind to help him in battle.


    ±± Approved ±± Although i could have sworn i saw an antelope contract before. I can't find it though so your subspecies is approved.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Hyouton: Mabayui bakari no rifurekushon | Ice Release: Blinding Reflection
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: While the field is on ice, user quickly channels chakra through his legs and sends it into the ground. While quickly spreading his chakra through the ground he calculates his opponents position and the position of the sun, which he then uses to manipulate the frozen ground in order create a small ice bump which deflects the sun into his opponents’ eyes. Due to the reflection being very strong and concentrated into one point, i.e. opponents’ eyes, he gets blinded enough for the user to move from long to mid or mid to short, and vice versa.
    Note: Usable only two times per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this

    Link to declined jutsu in previous CJ thread.

    ~ Approved ~

    Hyouton: Kinkyū-ji no bāsuto | Ice Release: Emergency Burst
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User does a single handseal and releases a strong unfocused burst of Hyouton chakra that even disturbs his own chakra flow. That burst is also capable of freezing and stopping an S-Rank Suiton or Fuuton jutsu that is directed towards the user. Because of the burst, user's skin turns blue-ish which raises his skin's resistance and makes him resistant to C-Rank taijutsu and normal or chakra enchanced ninja tools. While his skin is blue-ish he can't perform any Katon jutsus. The blue-ish state lasts two rounds, until his body temperature raises again.
    Note: Usable only two times per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this

    Link to declined jutsu in previous CJ thread.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    Hyouton: Mizu no hentai | Ice Release: Water transformation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: +20 to Suiton jutsu
    Description: After the user released a Suiton jutsu he immediately releases an extremely cold Hyouton chakra wave. The wave is very fast and it catches up with the previous Suiton jutsu before it hits the target. It carries very cold air which freezes any body of water on contact. The air wave is cold enough to freeze a meduim-big body of water. As the wave catches up, with the Suiton jutsu and freezes/powers it up, it disperses through the air, this way, not being nearly enough close to the opponent in order to harm him. The only effect the opponent can feel is a minor decrease in temperature due to the wave dispersing in all directions across the battlefield. Dispersion of the wave lasts about one turn until it totally disappears leaving the field a few degrees °C colder. This jutsu can't be used unless a Suiton jutsu is used previously. When the cold air wave freezes the water, its structure changes and forms into hexagonal prisms which make the attack solid. Due to the attack being solid it’s powered up for a whole rank. Note that an S-ranked Suiton jutsu doesn't become Forbidden but instead a very strong S-rank jutsu.
    Note: Usable only after a Suiton jutsu is performed
    Note. Usable only two times per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this

    Link to declined jutsu in previous CJ thread.

    ~ Won't this stop the jutsu in its tracks ? ~

    I'm very sorry that those above aren't quoted because the original CJ thread is locked. Thanks.
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-21-2012 at 01:00 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Shakuton:Hihashira )- Scorch Release: Blazing Pillars
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: the user forms a dragon handseal then slams his or her hands on the ground in front of them. Instantly a whole line of geysers made of scorch release shoot up in the front of the user in a forwards direction.
    (can only be used by daemon)

    ~ Restrictions ? Yes, Scorch has the potential to be extremely powerful, we need restrictions on it. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-21-2012 at 01:01 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suiton: Watatsumi Hanamoyou Joukuu | Water Release: Sea of the Floral Skies
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The user will preform one handseal and release water chakra up to mid-range from the user. The chakra will take a thin layer of water on the ground. By using chakra manipulation the user is able to control viscosity of the water. When the target is on this thin layer, watery flowers appear around the target (360degrees) these flowers are manageable in terms of sending at the target thin slice layers of water and/or compressed water bullets. This attacks around large but very thin an very sharp to be able to cut like paper cuts. The water is like a layer of sticky syrup that even when disturbed it goes back to its original state on the ground. If the target runs on this layer, the flowers appear anywhere they go as long as they're on it. The main purpose of these water slices is to hit the targets hands to stop them from preforming handseals. Due to the reflective ability of the water when the target begins handseals the slices are triggered to hit the hands and stop them from preforming the move.

    Restrictions:
    - Only usable twice per battle
    - Lasts on field for 2 turns
    - Cannot be redone again until 1 turn has passed
    - Only usable by Coyote

    ~ Description is unclear, the line I bolded particularly so. ~

    Suiton: Konpaku Sono Watatsumi | Water Style: Ghosts of the Unforgiving Sea
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    The user will preform a series of 4 handseals and then release their suiton chakra into a water source or a wet ground. From that point 2 humanoid-like beings will be formed and will have a syrup texture, which is done by manipulating the waters viscosity. These beings cannot be harmed by means of water, earth, wind, taijutsu, or kenjutsu due to their ability to reconstruct themselves if hit by a blunt or slicing attack. When the beings are made they are formed in front of the user. The beings are similar to Deidara clay minions without the cord. They begin to move at a very quickened pace towards the target. After running the beings suddenly fall and sink into the ground or water, to the target they would think that the users technique has failed. The beings sink deep into the ground and/or water, when they get deep enough they mix with water deep under the ground/water and control it. After a short time has passed a 2 massive pillars of water will rise up from the ground at an alarming quick pace, the rising pillars are pinpointed to where the target it. The pillars of water rise 200 feet in the air and has a diameter of 100 feet. So it's very large. Both pillars can rise up at the same time or one after another. If the water is risen from the ground is different then that if it's risen from deep under water.

    Restrictions:

    - If water is risen from the deep underground, it will be extremely hot
    - If water is risen from the deep undersea, it will be extremely cold.
    - Pillars cannot be risen until the next turn, takes 1 turn for the water beings to get to water.
    - Unable to use a water technique the turn of the rising water pillars.
    - Only usable once per battle.
    - Only usable by Coyote.

    ~ Decline, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    神レイジング: Raging God
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range:Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The Raging God sword was made in the heavens and in 1300 B.C, it was sent to the Earth in a meteorite that crash landed in the mountains of Voldern. The sword was kept in a secret chamber by wizards. This sword was made from a special type of material that is still unknown, but there is titanium and meteorite in the sword making it indestructable. The sword have special abilities, it can manipulate/release Raiton and Katon jutsus and can defend against any kind of jutsu from those two elements. Another great ability of the sword is to gather Natural energy and release it from the sword as a strong shock-wave that can smash through solid objects and the ground as it goes to the enemy. This shock-wave can fend of up to A-rank elemental jutsus and cause serious damage. The Raging God sword was made in the heavens and carries some of heavens mythical power with it.

    Note: Can only be wielded by Jellal
    Note: Can use up to S-rank Katon and Raiton jutsus
    Note: When using Katon/ Raiton with sword, can't S-rank or higher Katon/Raiton jutsu without sword, for same turn and turn after
    Note: Shock-wave can only be used every 2 turns becasue needs time to gather up natural energy

    ~ OPed ~

    Doton: Mage Stone-Gorrilla
    Type: Offensive/Deffensive
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user builds up a large amount of Doton chakra and channel it into the ground. Making the Ox handseal, they will use that Doton chakra in the ground to manipulate the earth making a huge gorilla. The gorilla stands 20 ft tall and can shoot large amounts of mud from its mouth. The amount of mud is compareable to a mud river. This earth gorilla can also turn into a wall when defending.

    Note: Can only be used/taught by Jellal
    Note: Shooting Mud counts as one turn.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    (Raiton- Denkou Enban)- Lightning Release: Lightning Disk
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    He lifts up his dominent hand and opens his palm, then by channeling a good amount of the user's lightning chakra into the same palm creating a disk made out of lightning, being extremely sharp, that is then thrown towards the opponent with enough cutting power to even cut a tree and B-rank and smaller earth techniques due to the lightning affinity. It only follow a straight path, it can't take curves nor change direction, it follows the path it's thrown at.

    ~ May only be used by Nagato.. and those who he may allow.
    ~ Can only be used 4 times per battle.

    ~ Declined, similar techs exist ~

    (Raiton- Katsu Enban)- Lightning Release: Splitting Disk
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    By using the same order as Lightning Release: Lightning Disk, since it's a variation of it, the user when thrown the disk, by using nature manipulation splits the disk into many (6) smaller disks, all half the size of a normal one, and all head towards the opponent always following the order of 3 aiming towards upper body and the other 3 towards the lower body, due to being half sized, their power decreases as well being able to break only through C-rank and lower earth techniques.

    ~ May only be used by Nagato.. and those who he may allow.
    ~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.

    ~ Declined, lightning disk was declined ~

    (Doton- Hitsu Benkai)- Earth Release: Heads of Defense
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    The user by using earth release, performing the next hand seals snake->rabbit->snake channels the chakra into his dominant hand and slamss it on the ground creating a whole infront of him, and short range infront of the user 4 (5-feet tall) earth lodges with dog-like heads with there mouth open, wich are all conected with tunnels that were created as well when the user slammed his hand on the ground, the whole created where the hand was placed can be used by the user shooting Fire into it, and making the fire come out from all 4 mouths of the heads burning anything in mid range from them.

    ~ The earth head lodges last 3 turns on the field (without emitting fire unless done by the user)
    ~ The fire when used, counts seperatly as 1 of the 3 techniques per turn of the user.
    ~ May only be used by Nagato.. and those who he may allow.

    ~ Description is unclear ~
     
         
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    Your not making it easy for me Scorps -_- lol



    Kuro Kontan Katana (Dark Soul Blade)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 15 Damage
    Description:
    Dark Soul Blade was forged and handed down from generations of Kenesu's family so it can only react to Kenesu's chakra alone and no one else's. Its a very light and long curved blade that is Black and has a Blood stained tint to it with a Silver dragon hand guard. This sword has been in countless battles (which is why the blade is tinted red) over the long, long years since it was crafted from a very special dark metal called oujou·metaru (Death Metal) which is a Osmium and Titanium Alloy. Kenesu's chakra is the only chakra that the sword reacts to so if someone else try to use the sword it will catch on fire and burn the other user. Dark Soul Blade has the ability to be infused with Katon Chakra along with Raiton Chakra. When infused with Katon chakra the swords blade will be engulf with flames and can even slice through steel due to the heat like its nothing. When infused with Raiton chakra the blade is surrounded with lightning and has piercing power and increased speed (if thrown)

    ~Can only be wielded by Kenesu
    ~The sword Katon ability can only be used 2 times in battle
    ~The sword Raiton ability can only be used 2 times in battle
    ~When either Raiton or Katon ability is active 20 chakra is being used.

    I took out "Kenesu's chakra is the only chakra that can infuse within the blade itself and to use the swords secret ability. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. Kenesu can channel his chakra into the blade and change the shape and form of the blade itself allowing more than just one fighting option. After he does this the blade will bend and straighten into a longer blade with demonic writing on it. Only in this form of the blade can kenesu use the swords Technique. Kenesu charges up his chakra into his hands increasing the vibrations and frequency to form Raiton chakra. Once his chakra is charged to make electricity Kenesu then channels his Raiton chakra into the blade and then slams his sword into the ground blade first. As soon as the blade is slamed to the ground an electric dome forms around kenesu from the blade protecting him from harm for the time being. When something or someone touches the dome it sends an electric current into the object or person shocking them as well as blasting the object or person away a few yards from kenesu." ~The shield can repel any weapons/human touch(even non human touch) but can be dispersed by any C rank or higher jutsu and ~Changing the sword from the first stage to stage 2 is takes up 2 moves
    ~Only when the blade is in the 2nd stage can Kenesu use the sword ability.

    ~ Again, it has nothing differentiating it from like 15000 other swords ~




    Summoning Animal: Lemur's
    Scroll Owner: Kwalker394
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: N/A

    As of now there are no Lemurs approved. I will also edit the description and background as well create a boss if it gets approved.

    ~ Actually, Hasashi possesses the lemur contract; it was approved for him ages ago, and due to his inactivity he hasn't updated the list. ~

    Kuro Kontan Katana (Dark Soul Blade)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 15 Damage (+5 for each ability if used)
    Description:
    Dark Soul Blade was forged and handed down from generations of Kenesu's family so it can only react to Kenesu's chakra alone and no one else's. Its a very light and long curved blade that is Black and has a Blood stained tint to it with a Silver dragon hand guard. This sword has been in countless battles (which is why the blade is tinted red) over the long, long years since it was crafted from a very special dark metal called oujou·metaru (Death Metal) which is a Osmium and Titanium Alloy. Kenesu's chakra is the only chakra that the sword reacts to so if someone else try to use the sword it will catch on fire and burn the other user. Dark Soul Blade has the ability to be infused with Katon Chakra along with Raiton Chakra. When infused with Katon chakra the swords blade will be engulf with flames and can even slice through steel due to the heat like its nothing. When infused with Raiton chakra the blade is surrounded with lightning and has piercing power and increased speed (if thrown). This sword has 2 main ability's. The first ability is the Katon ability. While the sword is infused with Katon chakra and the blade is on fire Kenesu can activate the Katon ability of the sword which allows the sword to deflect/disperse weapons and jutsu's. When Kenesu activates this ability the sword begins to glow bright blue and has a Fire "shield" around the sword making it untouchable by an opponent attack. The blue flames are so hot that even the moisture in the air around the sword begins to evaporate and the air becomes dry. Dark Soul Blade's other ability while Raiton chakra is infused and surrounded by lighting Kenesu can activate the Raiton ability of the sword which allows the sword to send an electric field through the air attaching to the H2O particles making the air in a 20ft diameter electrifying. Kenesu can control the electrified air by channeling his chakra into the sword and then moving the sword in a direction and the air in that direction become electrified.

    ~Can only be wielded by Kenesu
    ~The sword Katon ability can only be used 2 times in battle
    ~The sword Raiton ability can only be used 2 times in battle
    ~When either Raiton or Katon ability is active 20 chakra is being used
    ~The Raiton ability must be done while moisture is still in the air
    ~The Katon ability cant deflect Strong C rank jutsu's only mid-low C rank
    ~Both ability's may cause Kenesu damage as well as the opponent (if close) if Kenesu chakra control is disrupted

    I Took out Nothing

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit.


    Raiton: TeiWaNoRaikou (Lighting Style: Air Ring of Lighting)
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: D-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 10 Chakra
    Damage: 20 Damage
    Description:
    Kenesu channels his chakra to his hands up to his finger tips. Kenesu can then wave his hands in the air in a circle motion and flow his Raiton chakra out making an electric ring around his hand. Kenesu can control the size and location of the ring by just manipulating the ring by using his chakra. The lightning is able to attach to the H2O Particles in the air and by jumping from molecule to molecule. When the enemy enters the ring area he will then be in the danger zone. Kenesu will send the lighting ring straight to the enemy shocking and slightly paralyzing the enemy by "short circuiting" the enemy's nervous system for a short amount of time.




    ±± Declined ±± do not resubmit


    Summoning Animal: Snow Leopard's
    Scroll Owner: Kwalker394
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: N/A

    There are no current Snow Leopard summons approved. I will also edit the description and background as well create a boss if it gets approved.


    Please edit if needed.


    ±± Declined ±± Leopards are already a contract.
     
         
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    (Kōton: Ken Bibo)- Steel Release: Blade Tail
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will make three handseals then focus their fire and earth chakra into their back, then mold the chakra into a large curved double edged blade that wraps around the users body, extending out to just outside of mid range once the blade is created the user will then begin to spin rapidly, catching the opponent in the curve of the blade causeing the opponent multiple slashes across the back and/or chest if the opponent isnt caught inside of the curve on the blade. due to the size of the blade it become brittel and dull the next turn after its molded.
    - Blade will only last for 2 turns after being molded.
    Blade Tail
    ~Declined~ Why is this a supplementary technique? Its clearly used offensively/defensively. Lastly, correct the chakra information.
    (Kōton: Eki Hada)- Steel Release: Lizard's Skin
    Type: Supp
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: (10 damage per physica touch to the scales.)
    Description: The user makes a fast four handseals then focuses their fire and earth chakra around thier body, then begin to mold the chakra together a make one more handseal creating steel scales which appear and cover their body, from head to toe, the scales are thin and light weight and very durable. The the scales cause damage buy being physicaly touched, the scales are strong enough to withstand attack from the Kaguya Clans Shikotsumyaku, reducing the Kaguya bone to pieces due to the scales having spikes on them. The Scales cover the body for four rounds then begin to shatter, from the legs up to the sholders. The Scaled skin makes the user imperviuse to A-Rank and down Taijutsu.
    - The molding of the chakra takes two moves out of the user three per post.
    - The shattering takes place the four post after the post with the justu on it.
    Image in the bottom of the page
    ~Declined~ Considering this is pretty much an advanced version of the Iron skin technique, you would need to add a note in which you can only use earth and fire style techniques while the scales are active around your body. This is because you're constantly emitting chakra out of your body to keep the scales formed and move accordingly with your body motions. Lastly, I'd like you to add a usage restriction and clarify if its "posts" or "turns". If its turns then you are going to have to lower the turns that it stays active.
    (Kōton: Igata)- Steel Release: Remold
    Type: Supp
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user will pull out a steel weapon, ore, or eve a simple ball of steel, the user will then heat the steel, and then reshape it into what ever shape user wishes. Giving the user the abililty to even reshape thier weapons during battle.
    ~Declined~ You need to state that the object you are reshaping can not exceed the mass level of the original object itself. Meaning that if I take a steel kunai, I can't reshape it into a forty foot high steel tree.
     
         
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    (Doton : Juudensai) - Earth Release : Charging Rhinoceros
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : With the use of a summoning scroll, the user will summon an earthen Rhinoceros that will charge towards the front just as fast as 'Earth Release : Earth & Stone Dragon' with massive strength. Receiving a direct blow from this Rhinoceros will result in the victim's bones breaking. After summoning the earthen Rhinoceros, the user may channel fire chakra into the animal to cause it to violently explode, sending rock debris in a 360 degree manner, hitting anybody within a short-range radius.

    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Rock debris or explosion may harm the user if in range of it
    Note : No earth techniques higher than A-rank to be used in the same turn
    Note : Making it explode counts as another technique use towards the 3 jutsu rule

    -Declined-
    Size of the rhinoceros? Add that you need physical contact with it to infuse your fire chakra inside. Also, an S-rank usable 3 times per battle? No. For how long does it stay on the field if it isn't destroyed?
    (Doton : Juudensai) - Earth Release : Charging Rhinoceros
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : With the use of a summoning scroll, the user will summon an earthen Rhinoceros that will charge towards the front just as fast as 'Earth Release : Earth & Stone Dragon' with massive strength. Receiving a direct blow from this Rhinoceros will result in the victim's bones breaking. After summoning the earthen Rhinoceros, the user may channel fire chakra into the animal to cause it to violently explode, sending rock debris in a 360 degree manner, hitting anybody within a short-range radius. After infusion of fire chakra, the user shall decide when he detonates the animal, it doesn't explode on moments infusion of the fire chakra.

    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Rock debris or explosion may harm the user if in range of it
    Note : No earth techniques higher than A-rank to be used in the same turn
    Note : Fire chakra must be infused into the rhinoceros while it is in short-range
    Note : Making it explode counts as another technique use towards the 3 jutsu rule
    ~Declined~ Alucard asked you to include physical contact to infuse the fire chakra, not a short range restriction. He also asked you to lower the times it can be used per battle and you did neither.
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    Renewing this really old techniques (Can't find them in the old CJ submission thread and yes, my old username is ~Yondaime~) :

    (Hando Suna)- Hand of Sand
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This allows the user to be able to create a hand out of sand which can be used for blocking or attacking the enemy.

    Note : Must be a sand user
    Note : Can only be used/taught by ~Yondaime~
    Note : Can only be used 3x
    Note : Last only one turn.
    (Sabure : Hando Suna) - Sand Style : Hand of Sand
    Type: Offense / Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This technique allows the user to materialize a pair of large hands made out of sand, palms big enough to fit a whole person in it. The purpose of the technique is really up to the user, whether he wants to smash someone in between the two hands, lifting the user's self up into the sky or merely just punching someone in the face. Anything for offensive or defensive purposes that two large pairs of hands are capable of doing.

    Note : Only usable three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Lasts until destroyed or technique is released

    (Suna : Kadoubakuha) - Sand Style : Vortex Blast
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user will slam both wrists together, appearing as though they user was handcuffed to the front. With both palms open, the user will start gathering his sand around his arms, letting them swirl in the air around it. After a few seconds, the users arms will be completely out of sight due to the fast-swirling sand around the arm and only the front is open, showing both the user's palms. When the user wants to, he will release all that sand at once to the front or the targeted direction hence unleashing a powerful vortex of sand. The sand gained the momentum to spin at the rate of a vortex while it was fire swirling around the user's arms along with the chakra boost. Vortex are usually right side up but this vortex is perpendicular to the direction of the user's arms.

    Note : Takes a few seconds to prepare
    Note : Can only be used by a sand user
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : The vortex is perpendicular to the direction of the user's arms
    Note : No sand techniques during the turn used and for another two turns
    Note : No handseals to be performed while this technique is in preparation as the user's arms are busy
    About this, I really can't stand the no sand techniques restriction. Really kills my mind. @_@...

    (Suna : Kadoubakuha) - Sand Style : Vortex Blast
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user will slam both wrists together, appearing as though they user was handcuffed to the front. With both palms open, the user will start gathering his sand around his arms, letting them swirl in the air around it. After a few seconds, the users arms will be completely out of sight due to the fast-swirling sand around the arm and only the front is open, showing both the user's palms. When the user wants to, he will release all that sand at once to the front or the targeted direction hence unleashing a powerful vortex of sand. The sand gained the momentum to spin at the rate of a vortex while it was fire swirling around the user's arms along with the chakra boost. Vortex are usually right side up but this vortex is perpendicular to the direction of the user's arms.

    Note : Takes a few seconds to prepare
    Note : Can only be used by a sand user
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : The vortex is perpendicular to the direction of the user's arms
    Note : No S-rank sand techniques can be used in the same turn or the next
    Note : No handseals to be performed while this technique is in preparation as the user's arms are busy

    ~Both Declined~ You still need to include the link in which the techniques were approved.
     
         
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    (Katon:Ume no Kaki)- Fire release:Rope of fire
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description:The user will exhale a condensed fireball the size of a coconut into the air above him.Then he will attach a rope of chakra from his fingers to the fireball and once he does that he will be able to swing the fireball around as a mace.The fireball upon impact with an solid object will burst in a large fireball the size of the Great Fireball Technique.
    ~Note:Can be used twice per battle.
    ~Note:The user must wait 2 turns before using it again
    ~Declined~ What makes the coconut sized fireball suddenly increase in size so much? I'm not referring about the impact but exactly how is such a small sized fire ball increasing in chakra so much to acquire that size? Also you need to fix the chakra information on the template.
     
         
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    (Byākugan Karyuu appa-katto) - Byakugan Swirling uppercut
    Type: Attack/Defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The moment the oppenent attacks, once close enough, the user ducks and swiftly swirls around beneath their attack and rises up with a chakara-concentrated palm and uppercuts the opponents jaw which sends them flying.
    ~Declined~ Is this a gentle fist custom or a chakra-enhanced taijutsu attack? And do you process the required training for either options?
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    (Suiton: kanashibari Hebi) - Water Release: Binding snake
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user creates the necessary hand signs and focuses his chakara on the water and creates a long water snake which quickly wraps around the opponents legs and arms disabling his movements.

    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ~Requires water source.
    ~Taijutsu users up to rank B can physically break free.
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    ~Declined~Similar techniques exist.
    Make edits if needed ^_^
     
         
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    Summoning Animal:toco toucan
    Scroll Owner:dm1202
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    Description and Background:The Toco Toucan has a striking plumage with a mainly black body, a white throat, chest and uppertail-coverts, and red undertail-coverts. What appears to be a blue iris is actually thin blue skin around the eye. This blue skin is surrounded by another ring of bare, orange skin. The most noticeable feature, however, is its huge bill, which is yellow-orange, tending to deeper reddish-orange on its lower sections and culmen, and with a black base and large spot on the tip. It looks heavy, but as in other toucans it is relatively light because the inside largely is hollow. The tongue is nearly as long as the bill and very flat. With a total length of 55–65 cm (22–26 in), incl. a bill that measures almost 20 cm (8 in), and a weight of 500–860 g (17.5-30 oz), it is the largest species of toucan and the largest representative of the order Piciformes.[2] Males are larger than females, but otherwise both are alike. Juveniles are duller and shorter-billed than adults. Its voice consists of a deep, coarse croaking, often repeated every few seconds. It also has a rattling call and will bill-clack.




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    (Sogyo no Kotowari) Truth of Pisces
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Long (depends on the technique it absorbs)
    Damage: 80
    Chakra: 40 (for ability)
    Description:
    These legendary swords, said to be a gift from the gods are quite unique and formidable.
    These twin swords are around to size of a normal katana with an extended section of blade just over half way up the blade. The blades have a red hilt and a golden guard with a fish design engraved into it. Also the two blades are connected by a long silver chain.
    The ability of these swords is that the left sword absorbs opponents attacks and the chakra from those attacks is transfered via the long silver chain to the right sword where that technique is then fired back at the opponent.

    This sword can absorb projectile jutsu up to A Rank and can absorb other jutsu (within reason) up to B Rank

    - Can only be wielded by Kato Rokuemon
    - Use of the swords ability counts as one of the three moves


    ~Declined~ Do I even need to say why this is being declined? Well I will say it anyways; A lot of similar swords already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Link to Crane Contract

    Kure-n Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Sono Aoi Keimei | Crane Summoning Technique: The Blue Dawn
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The Blue Dawn is a big blue crane, with red eyes and a orange long beak, with a wing spam of 15 meters. Calm, composed and with a naturally leadership demeanor, when she is on the ground, standing on her two legs, she is about 3 meters tall. Being the Matriarch of the Cranes, she stands as their leader. Capable of communicating with his summoner either through speech or through a special mind link. Her powers are unrivaled as are her flying grace and speed while also being a master manipulator of Water. Unable to use Water jutsu themselves, she can, however, use 3 water based abilities which more than make up for that small short coming.

    Abilities:
    -She is capable of exhaling a strong, wide, S-Rank, short to long range, dense stream of Water, which can be used as a water source for the users techniques
    -She can materialize water from the atmosphere around her to create a spherical, transparent S-Rank Water Shield around her, protecting her and her summoner
    -She can sense any water molecule in the field, up to Long Range
    -Can be summoned anywhere between short to mid range of the summoner

    Restrictions:
    -Can only be summoned once
    -Can stay on the field for a max of 4 turns
    -Using the Water Stream and the Water Shield count towards the users move count
    ____________
    -Approved-


    Kure-n Geijutsu: Kiai | Crane Arts: Screech
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    This technique is the ultimate showcase of the Cranes and their ancestry skills. The crane summon inhales and focuses chakra into its throat. As it exhales, it produces a loud, high screech that travels at the speed of sound. The screech leaves any enemy in the field momentarily deaf while disturbing their inner ear and equilibrium, making them stumble and lose balance, unable to move correctly or coordinated. The screech however, has additional effects, specially on enemy summons. Upon hearing the painful sound, the enemy summons immediately disperse back into their "homelands". This technique can also be used to release the summoner from genjutsu or mind manipulation techniques when used by a Crane Summon, by sheer shock the screech produces in the user's hearing.

    Abilities:
    -Deafens the enemies for 3 turns
    -Severely decreases the enemies balance and equilibrium for 2 turns
    -Dispels any summon on field
    -Releases the user from Genjutsu up to S-Rank (including MS related Genjutsu)

    Restrictions:
    -While usable by every crane summon, each crane summon can only use it once per battle.

    ____________
    -Approved-


    Link to Panda Contract

    Panda Geijutsu: Dasai Houkou | Panda Arts: Primal Roar
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank (Forbidden when used by Myoshu)
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (50 when used by Myoshu)
    Damage: N/A (90 when used by Myoshu)
    Description:
    A manifestation of the primal ancestry of Pandas, this last resort technique has been passed down for generations of Pandas, being a manifestation of the ultimate bound to their origins. The Panda focuses a large amount of his chakra in his throat and executes a very loud, strong Roar. Using his most primal instincts, the roar is (much like the killing intent technique) charged with aggression and rage. The bloodlust contained in the roar is so intense that any enemy in the field will shiver in pure fear, regardless of any other aspect in play. The technique, while simple in its essence, its very complex. The technique is boosted to its ultimate effect when used by the boss summon, Myoshu who's roar can level anything in its path.

    Abilities:
    -Enemies will experience fear and pressure, putting less effort and chakra into their offensive and defensive techniques, which results in a -10 damage penalty to their techniques
    -Any summon on the field immediately disperses in fear, running to his/her "homeland"
    -The summoner's gain a momentary (5 turns) bonus in strength (+10 to Taijutsu) and damage in Ninjutsu (+10 to elemental techniques), as the primal roar increases their adrenaline flow and clears their mind, dispelling harmful emotional or illusional (up to S-Rank) effects, regardless of their origins
    -When executed by Myoshu (the boss summon), the Primal Roar is labeled as a Forbidden Rank and produces a shockwave that levels everything in its path, much like a wind technique, due to the the size and enormous chakra Myoshu has.

    Restrictions:
    -While usable by every Panda Summon, each summon can only use it once per battle
    -The user can use it twice per battle
    -Can only be used by Pandas or by signers of the Panda Contract.
    ____________
    -Approved-
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    |Kei Sekken| Hardening Touch
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A (+5 to taijutsu due to hardened attack)
    Description: A technique used in conjunction with taijutsu. The user coats his/her attacking limb in a flexible chakra capable of channeling any of the 5 natures while hardening that particular limb, making it feel like rock. When in contact with an opponent who for instance changed their body into water or hardened it through earth release, once this flexible chakra comes into contact with the opponent's body, it takes on the enemy's properties allowing the user to effectively hit the opponent regardless of their new defense while also doing extra damage due to the hardened limb.
    Notes:
    -User must know and have mastered all chakra natures up to B-rank.
    -Doesn't work against defences of A-rank and above
    -Can't be used on defences made of a KG
    -Usable 5 times and last as long as the taijutsu technique used



    ±± Approved ±± Excellently done
    To further add on to the Kei-Sekken Style:

    |Kei-Sekken| Strong World Chesto
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack|Defend|Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:40
    Description: The most powerful defensive move within the Kei-Sekken style. The user constricts all the muscles in his body while charging his entire body with chakra. Once whatever the opponent's technique is that makes contact with the user, he/she makes his/her muscles explode, releasing all that chakra creating a pulsating barrier that bounces off everything around the user except for piercing attacks of B-rank. If the opponent is caught in this blast, the pulse is powerful enough to break any defense and seriously injure them. This blast is also capable of breaking powerful genjutsu.
    Notes:
    -Usable twice
    -After use, the user muscles collapse in a similar manner to someone using the gates. They become weakened, unable to perform taijutsu of B-rank and above, they weaken by 3 ranks after use.
    -These effects last 3 turns and thats when this move can be used again
    -Can block all techniques except for piercing attacks, One Shotters, techniques that come from the ground, and any other techniques within reason. (A-rank nin/genjutsu, S-rank taijutsu)


    ±± Declined ±± You make your muscles explode? O_o you sure about that?

    |Kei-Sekken| Strong World Illusion
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack|Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: Based off the same method as Strong World Chesto, but to a lesser exstent. The user will charge and constrict only their arm with chakra and punch the opponent, releasing all that chakra to create an impact capable of breaking bones. If the opponent manages to dodge the intial strike, the blast of chakra from the arm is capable of blowing back the opponent, placing them in a daze capable of allowing the user with a follow up technique.
    Notes:
    -Usable 4 times
    -After use, the user's muscles in the arm collapse in a similar manner to someone using the gates. They will be unable to use that arm for a turn.

    ~Leaving it to Scorps~


    ±± Declined ±± Define the daze effects, how long it lasts, the overall effects it produces. Also, this is more like a B-rank at most.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Futoon: Yayakoshii Saku) - Wind Release: Tangled Rope
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates his wind chakra around his opponent and performs 1 hand seal to suddenly materialize the wind and use shape manipulation to turn it into a rope which wraps around his opponent tightly making sure he can't move his arms whatsoever in return this prevents his opponent from performing any hand seals.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No S-rank wind in same turn.
    ~Declined~ Materialize wind? I believe you must be confusing it with water and moister in the air. Anyways, I will not allow it to form around the opponent, you need to change it into an appropriate distance away from the opponent.
     
         
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    Water Pillar bullet - Suiton Chuuseki
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user forms a pillar of water within their hand. Then suddenly they manipulate it to fire off move pillars in every direction of the users whim. Each shot is the size of a senbon and hardened. The user can keep firing until all the water is gone. In volume the water is 100m cubed.
    ~Can only be taught by Zoro..
    ~Can be used four times per battle
    ~Declined~ Did you mean more? Either way, you need to be very careful and clear when describing techniques, because one little word can make a big change.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yard- View Post
    Link to Jeet kun Do approval: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...5&postcount=31




    (Setsuju Nunchaku) Intercepting Nunchucks
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: These Nunchucks were given to Ulquiorra by a Cougar tribe after saving one of their cubs from an opposing side. After the tribe witnessed the Unique style of his Taijutsu (Jeet Kune Do) that he used to defeat the opposing cougars, they were reminded of an old contract holder that died centuries ago, known for his advanced Taijutsu. The tribe gave Ulquiorra the mans Famous weapon, as a means of finally "passing down the torch". Due to his advanced mastery over Jeet Kune Do, He could already wield it with fast speeds, due to the built up momentum that Nunchucks have when being wielded/swung around. He could attack much faster, with Jeet Kune Do already giving the ability to move his arms at a very fast pace, he could move the Nunchucks with incredible speed. Once he mastered them, he could swing them at speeds that could defend him from speeds that of rock lee without weights. Each strike from them had much more force of impact than a normal punch, being able to break bones with a strike from it as regular nunchucks already can.


    Abilities:
    - Can move the Nunchucks with great speed that can keep up with Lee without weights.
    - The Nunchucks are unbreakable.

    Notes:
    - The Nunchucks movement is still trackable through normal eyesight.
    - Can only be wielded by Yard.

    ~ Again, remove the history. It only unnecessarily clutters and confuses battles. ~

    I figure this would compliment my style more than anything as I Idolize Bruce Lee in terms of Martial arts, that being said he used Nunchucks as well and was very skilled with them and I'm not looking for some fancy weapon with tons of abilities, just something I can use freely that isn't restricted constantly. I'm not sure what kind of restrictions to put tho.



    (Raiton: Koudo Setsuju Hirate) Lightning Release: Advanced Intercepting Palm
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This is an advanced form of The intercepting fist. The user will run electricity through their hands and When the user is being punched or kicked the user with fast reactions as well as fast movements that "Jeet Kune Do" provides, will quickly react by taking palm and swiping the punch or kick away. The user can either hit the opponents Fist/hand/foot directly or hit their wrist, mid forearm, ankle or mid leg section to swipe away the attack. but will send a shock through the opponents limb, paralyzing it, making them unable move it for one turn. The user can then strike the opponent. This technique wastes no movement and is done quickly.
    Note: Can be used 3x per match
    Note: This can still only swipe away Taijutsu up to B rank.
    Note: Must know Jeet Kune Do.

    ~ Up to what speeds can you catch ? How fast is it ? ~

    (Doton: Sono Monogatari Karejiko) Earth Release: The Legend Himself
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A +10 To Taijutsu
    Description: The user will make 3 handseals and will make a body of earth rise from the ground similar to the Earth Clone technique. However, the earth appears to not look like the user, but another man. This figure carries the resemblance of Bruce Lee, he can perform Jeet Kune Do Style Taijutsu along with Basic Taijutsu. What makes this so special is that him being made of earth release, he can use Jeet Kune Do in a more stronger advanced style, using the earth release chakra for making strong yet quick strikes that can easily break bones due to the force of impact and his rock like structure. He can reform instantly when struck so long as he is standing on an earth source unless the earth chakra is negated which would cancel the technique.
    Note: Can create up to 4 at once like the shadow clone rule.
    Note: Counts as a Shadow clone technique.
    Note: He/they stay on the field for 4 turns.
    Note: They must stay within mid range of the User.
    Note: Despite being made of earth/earth chakra, he cannot perform earth release.
    Note: Must be a Jeet Kune Do Master to use this and have great respect for the art.

    ~ The reforming needs a limit; four is too much; and the last bit isn't even a restriction and doesn't need to be said. ~




    (Setsuju Nunchaku) Intercepting Nunchucks
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Due to the users advanced mastery over Jeet Kune Do, the user can already wield it with fast speeds, due to the built up momentum that Nunchucks have when being wielded/swung around. The user can attack much faster, with Jeet Kune Do already giving the ability to move his arms at a very fast pace, he could move the Nunchucks with incredible speed. Once he mastered them, he could swing them at speeds that could defend him from speeds that of rock lee without weights. Each strike from them had much more force of impact than a normal punch, being able to break bones with a strike from it as regular nunchucks already can.


    Abilities:
    - Can move the Nunchucks with great speed that can keep up with Lee without weights.
    - The Nunchucks are unbreakable.

    Notes:
    - The Nunchucks movement is still trackable through normal eyesight.
    - Can only be wielded by Yard.

    ~ Approved ~

    Deleted the story, changed words around to fit.


    (Doton: Sono Monogatari Karejiko) Earth Release: The Legend Himself
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A +10 To Taijutsu
    Description: The user will make 3 handseals and will make a body of earth rise from the ground similar to the Earth Clone technique. However, the earth appears to not look like the user, but another man. This figure carries the resemblance of Bruce Lee, he can perform Jeet Kune Do Style Taijutsu along with Basic Taijutsu. What makes this so special is that him being made of earth release, he can use Jeet Kune Do in a more stronger advanced style, using the earth release chakra for making strong yet quick strikes that can easily break bones due to the force of impact and his rock like structure. He can reform instantly when struck so long as he is standing on an earth source unless the earth chakra is negated which would cancel the technique.
    Note: Can create 1
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Counts as a Shadow clone technique.
    Note: He stays on the field for 4 turns.
    Note: He must stay within mid range of the User.
    Note: Despite being made of earth/earth chakra, he cannot perform earth release.
    Note: Must be a Jeet Kune Do Master to use this
    Note: Can Reform 2 times unless his earth chakra is negated or he is destroyed with a lightning attack of one rank lower or higher.




    Edited as Instructed. ^^
    ~Leaving for Emperor~
    ~ Again, the reforming needs a limit ~
     
         
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    Hyouton: Sen kōri no ya | Ice Release: Thousand Ice Arrows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 30 Chakra
    Damage points: 60 Damage
    Description: User simply gathers Hyouton chakra in his mouth and does an Ox handseal after which he starts spewing out a thousand of ice arrows at the opponent. As the ice arrows travel towards the opponent they line up in order to travel parallel in a formation much resembling to a shield. The shield has a diameter of approx. 3 meters. Due to the structure of the ice arrows and their formation they have a mirror-like effect, if looked at, from the opponents side. The user, however, can clearly see the opponent and all of his actions. Due to the size of the jutsu it can serve as a source for other Hyouton jutsus.
    Note: Usable only three times per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can use this
    ~Declined~ Reduce the number of arrows released.
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 05-15-2012 at 12:02 AM.

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