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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Baikingusutairu: Asgaard no Shukufuku) - Viking Style: Asgaard's Blessing
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Asgaard no Shukufuku, is a very basic jutsu revolving around the five basic elements. The user will make a gesture or form two hand signs, and channel one of the five elemental chakras into a regular chakra based jutsu, and succesfully convert it into what elemental chakra that the user used. The jutsu can only be used three times per battle, and can only be used on regular chakra based jutsus, such as Rasengan. Obviously the user cannot channel an elemental chakra that he haven't been taught yet.

    (Baikingusutairu: Ken no Hokuō Senshi) - Viking Style: Fist of the Norse Warrior
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary, Offensive, Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid(Ranged version)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will pump his muscles with chakra, strenghting himself, along with covering his limbs in a layer of chakra, enabling to do severe damage on his targeted object. The chakra layer can be used in two kind of ways, ranged and upon contact. Interacting with an opponent in close range, and making contact to his target, the user will release the layer of chakra around the limb which made contact and create an impulsive wave of chakra upon impact with the target, sending him flying back, with severe damage and broken bones. The ranged version works the way that the user will perform a punch(Or other sorts of movements like that.) and release the chakra around the limb, expelling chakra fitting the movement. In this case it was a punch, so an orb having the look of a fist, is released at the target, if it was a kick, it could be crescent formed.
    ~ Can be used 4 times per battle.
    ~ Must wait one turn between each usage.
    ~Both Declined~ Do not Resubmit. Also, were you trying to copy the Kiyoshi Clan abilities with the second one? It seems awfully similar...
     
         
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    Raiton: Ketsugō-tai Sōseiji No Setsuna | Lightning Style: Juncture of the Siamese Twin
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user punch forward and release a blast of lightning. While the blast of lightning travels towards the opponent, the user performs the Horse hand seal, and the lightning splits up in two, and then comes back together, letting it avoid any incoming jutsu that would block it. This, however is a double edged blade as it requires impeccable timing so that the user does not get hit by the attack that was sent out to block it in the first place.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: The user can either split the lightning in the turn used or in his next turn, if the lightning has not hit the opponent yet or if he has enough time to split it Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Each individual bolt of lightning is A-rank, and the moment at which they once again combine forms the technique's S-rank power.
    Note: Can not use above S-rank in the same turn, nor can the user use lightning in the same turn or the next.
    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-06-2012 at 04:49 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Gogyou Nami) Fire Release: Fire Wave
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user focus chakra that covers his legs before molding that chakra into fire as the user gets down and spins his legs around in a breakdance manner while releasing a wave of fire from his legs that travel. The fire that gets released is about 8ft vertically and covers a wide-range horizontally.
    The fire has the potential to take with it the opponent as it travels which lets the target stay in the wave for a short-time before getting blown back, giving the person second-degree burns.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by ~Yubel~
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    ±± Declined ±± for being banned
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 05-08-2012 at 10:21 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Jokey View Post
    Updated everything, hope it's fixed now.

    (Raiton Houmen: Kyojin no Gekirin) - Lightning Release: Giant Wrath
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Makarov exudes a constant surge of destructive lightning that surrounds him, which shakes the surrounding environment and destroys stuff within the vicinity, he feels hate and anger running trough his whole body getting the relish to destroy everyone who harmed or attacked his friends, allies or himself, his eyes will become white causing lightning currents surround him and during this state, Makarov will also be able to walk or run around while having the lightning currents cover his body, every earth that touches him get's destroyed in a instant.

    Note: Every C-Ranked water technique and below will evaporate because of the high ranked lightning covering him, every Water technique above that rank will be lethal for Makarov.
    Note: Because of the high ranked lightning, not even forbidden ranked Earth technique's are able to handle the lightning currents
    Note: The user won't be able to perform any Lightning technique's the following turn after dis-activating it
    Note: -10 chakra points every turn

    ~ Bold the changes ~

    (Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: -
    Damage: -
    Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power by 10+ making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's, warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body and thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders he gains the ability to only sweep with his hands to perform wind technique's, Makarov already got the ability to use every wind technique with one single handseal, but this also gives him the opportunity to use wind techniques with only sweeping his hands like Gaara does with sand, only related to the part of when he sweeps his hands, when Makarov does so, he will be able to perform a wind technique with only sweeping with his hands. (other CJ'S will get submitted) Inspiration of his guild causes him to have an aura of wind flow around him giving him wind based attacks an additional 10+ damage however, the downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become two ranks weaker then the original.

    Note: -10 chakra every turn
    Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
    Note: Only Makarov can wield this suit
    Note: 10+ On wind attacks or 10+ Damage on wind attacks
    Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower two ranks then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become B-Rank)
    Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he then won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points
    Note: The bolded part means that when he sweeps his hands, he is able to perform a wind technique, which counts as a technique (ex; When he uses a S-Ranked Serial waves technique, he is able to sweep his hands back and forth, meaning that he will release the technique without making handseals, but this counts as 1 technique in a turn, meaning that he then only got two spots over for other technique's)


    Added/changed the bolded parts.

    ~ We don't have guilds in the Naruto World. ~
    Resubmitting.

    (Raiton Houmen: Kyojin no Gekirin) - Lightning Release: Giant Wrath
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Makarov exudes a constant surge of destructive lightning that surrounds him, which shakes the surrounding environment and destroys stuff within the vicinity, he feels hate and anger running trough his whole body getting the relish to destroy everyone who harmed or attacked his friends, allies or himself, his eyes will become white causing lightning currents surround him and during this state, Makarov will also be able to walk or run around while having the lightning currents cover his body, and while doing so, every forbidden earth technique and below will crumble when it comes in contact with Makarov.

    Note: Every C-Ranked water technique and below will evaporate because of the high ranked lightning covering him, every Water technique above that rank will be lethal for Makarov.
    Note: Because of the high ranked lightning, not even forbidden ranked Earth technique's are able to handle the lightning currents
    Note: The user won't be able to perform any Lightning technique's the following turn after dis-activating it
    Note: All wind techniques lose one rank when performed.

    ~ Approved, edited ~

    (Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: -
    Damage: -
    Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power by 10+ making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's, warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body and thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders he gains the ability to only sweep with his hands to perform wind technique's, Makarov already got the ability to use every wind technique with one single handseal, but this also gives him the opportunity to use wind techniques with only sweeping his hands like Gaara does with sand, only related to the part of when he sweeps his hands, when Makarov does so, he will be able to perform a wind technique with only sweeping with his hands. (other CJ'S will get submitted) Inspiration of his Village causes him to have an aura of wind flow around him giving him wind based attacks an additional 10+ damage however, the downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become two ranks weaker then the original.

    Note: -10 chakra every turn
    Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
    Note: Only Makarov can wield this suit
    Note: 10+ On wind attacks or 10+ Damage on wind attacks
    Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower two ranks then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become B-Rank)
    Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he then won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points
    Note: The bolded part means that when he sweeps his hands, he is able to perform a wind technique, which counts as a technique (ex; When he uses a S-Ranked Serial waves technique, he is able to sweep his hands back and forth, meaning that he will release the technique without making handseals, but this counts as 1 technique in a turn, meaning that he then only got two spots over for other technique's)


    ~ You're repeating yourself over and over in the technique's description. Fix it. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-10-2012 at 03:39 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ~CoOkie Monster~ View Post
    Link to Custom Summoning's Approval

    1.


    Kuchiyose: Honoo Hogosha Ippo) ~ Summoning: Flame Guardian Ippo
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the Flame Guardian Leopon, Ippo. Ippo is the most fiercest of all the Leopons, hence why he is instated the role of the Protector. He is part of the TriGuardian (Consists of 3 of the toughest Leopons) which serve to protect the King. Ippo mane is made out of strong raging flames which can't be doused with water. The Flames signify his life force and determination. His mane's flames can spread out and create wings which he can use for short flights and attacks. Ippo has some Leopon Art techniques that is Unique to Ippo himself, not even Leo could use them.
    ~Can only be summoned by those signed to the contract and with my permission
    ~Lasts 3 turns
    ~Can be summoned twice (Needs 2 turn break after dispersion)
    ~Can do up to A-rank cannon Fire techniques

    ~ An A-rank summon whose flames can't be doused ? Declined. ~

    2.
    (Reopon Gigei: Honoo Heki) ~ Leopon Arts: Flame Burst
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Ippo, the Flame Guardian, manipulates his flame mane and creates wings. With the wings, and his powerful muscles, Ippo makes one charge (A jump forward with a strong gust from his wings) with a sudden burst of speed, Head first to know the target in to long-range with the target's breath knocked out and stunned for a short time. (Like someone hitting your Solar Plexus).
    ~Can only be used by Ippo
    ~Can be used twice (After 1 turn break)
    ~Opponent is stunned for the 1st move of their turn
    ~During burst, Ippo's speed is immensely increased

    ~ Get the summon approved first. ~
    Kuchiyose: Honoo Hogosha Ippo) ~ Summoning: Flame Guardian Ippo
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the Flame Guardian Leopon, Ippo. Ippo is the most fiercest of all the Leopons, hence why he is instated the role of the Protector. He is part of the TriGuardian (Consists of 3 of the toughest Leopons) which serve to protect the King. Ippo mane is made out of strong raging flames. The Flames signify his life force and determination. His mane's flames can spread out and create wings which he can use for short flights and attacks. Ippo has some Leopon Art techniques that is Unique to Ippo himself, not even Leo could use them.
    ~Can only be summoned by those signed to the contract and with my permission
    ~Lasts 3 turns
    ~Can be summoned twice (Needs 2 turn break after dispersion)
    ~Can do up to A-rank cannon Fire techniques

    ~ Approved ~
    ---

    (Reopon Gigei: Honoo Heki) ~ Leopon Arts: Flame Burst
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Ippo, the Flame Guardian, manipulates his flame mane and creates wings. With the wings, and his powerful muscles, Ippo makes one charge (A jump forward with a strong gust from his wings) with a sudden burst of speed, Head first to know the target in to long-range with the target's breath knocked out and stunned for a short time. (Like someone hitting your Solar Plexus).
    ~Can only be used by Ippo
    ~Can be used twice (After 1 turn break)
    ~Opponent is stunned for the 1st move of their turn
    ~During burst, Ippo's speed is immensely increased

    ~ Explain ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-10-2012 at 03:41 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Disuta-bu Shikaku) - Earth Release: Disturbed Vision
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will begin by stomping the ground and channelling his Earth chakra into it. He will then gather Earth particles from within the ground and bring them onto the battlefield, sending them towards their opponent. The purpose of these Earth particles is to temporarily blind the opponent, by flying straight towards his eyes. the particles are invisible to the naked eye.

    ~ Approved ~

    (Doton: Chika Shisoui) - Earth Release: Underground stabs
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will perform the Snake and Ram Hand sign, and then place both fists onto the ground. Then by sending a massive amount of chakra into the Earth beneath them. It allows them to change the structure of it, manipulating the hard dense structure into that of hundreds of needle-like spikes. This for example, can be used when a person goes underground, to stab them repeatedly with the needles while they are in the process. Or it can also be used even before, so that it will prevent them from going underground in the first place.
    Note: Due to the amount of chakra required, this technique can only be used twice per match.
    Note: The needle-like spikes will remain in their form for 2 turns.
    Note: Needs to wait two turns before using again.

    ~ Similar techniques exist ~

    Feel free to edit anything you see fit ^^
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-10-2012 at 03:42 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Genjutsu: Genso no Konran) - Illusionary Technique: Elemental Confusion
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: -
    Description:
    • A simple genjutsu where the user puts the target in an illusion where they will perceive the next jutsu as a specific element of the user's choosing. They will feel the effects of the element when it draws close to them, such as heat from fire, shuddering ground from earth and so on. This is most effective when using jutsu of the same calibre, such as making them think that "Fire Release: Running Fire" is really "Water Release: Water Tornado".
    Notes:
    • Can only be used twice a match.
    • The user is incapable of using the element chosen through this for this and their next turn.

    ~ Your description and example are at odds; your description states you fake change the element, but in your example you're not only changing the element but also the form of the technique to make it look like a tornado. ~
    (Genjutsu: Genso no Konran) - Illusionary Technique: Elemental Confusion
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: -
    Description:
    • A simple genjutsu where the user puts the target in an illusion where they will perceive the next jutsu as a specific element of the user's choosing. They will feel the effects of the element when it draws close to them, such as heat from fire, shuddering ground from earth and so on. The jutsu will still take on the same properties as depicted (shape, process etc.), but is most convincing when the jutsu is similar to another jutsu in the chosen element, such as "Wind Release: Drilling Wind Bullet" and "Water Release: Water Bullet".
    Notes:
    • Can only be used twice a match.
    • The user is incapable of using the element chosen through this for this and their next turn.

    ±± Declined ±± Been strolling in my CJ thread i see. This is a copy of my Genjutsu, Misleading Words. Don't resubmit.


    (Raiton: Ikari no Tetsui) - Lightning Release: Hammer of Justice
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    • The user will charge a plethora of lightning chakra into their fist to make their arm shrouded in a lot of lightning which takes on the form of the user's arm but about 6 times larger. They will then slam the lightning into the ground with their fist like it were a hammer. The force is capable of pulverising the ground enough to leave a small crater.
    Notes:
    • This can only be used a maximum of twice a match. Any more than that and the user's arm will fry from the lightning and is rendered useless.


    ±± Declined ±± So this can only be used to punch the ground? O_o
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Gitanshu View Post
    Katon netto- Fire Release Fire Net
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release fire from his hand during his way to the opponent the user quickly transform it into a net made up of fire of diameter of approximately 5m and use it to trap the opponent with in it and due to it being made up of fire it causes deep burn to the opponent and can even be used to trap multiple opponents at the same time
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Fire element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher fire base jutsu in the same turn

    -Declined-

    State that you need hand seals. Explain how the net forms and you trap the opponent? You go around hanging a fire net? A net of fire expands and shoots forward, towards the opponent? Change the range to Short-Mid only.



    Raiton boruto - Lightning Release Bolts
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release a dozen of bolts of lightning towards his opponent which causes numbing effect as well as damage to the opponent the but they are unique in the way how they approach the opponent , they approach him in arc like shape and completely engulf him as the approach him from all the different angles mainly from a 360 degree arc.
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Lightning element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher Lightning base jutsu in the same turn



    -Declined-
    Number, size and speed of the bolts? Hand seals needed.


    Raiton dangan - Lightning Release Bullet
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release a dozen of bullets made up of lightning effect these bullets are released with great velocity and quick succession does cause severe damage and numbs the opponent and user while shooting those dozens of opponent can change his aim to another project or opponent meaning we can attack multiple opponents at the same time also
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Lightning element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher Lightning base jutsu in the same turn


    -Declined-
    I believe similar jutsu already exists
    Raiton boruto - Lightning Release Bolts
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release a dozen of bolts of lightning towards his opponent which causes numbing effect as well as damage to the opponent the but they are unique in the way how they approach the opponent , they approach him in arc like shape and completely engulf him as the approach him from all the different angles mainly from a 360 degree arc.
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Lightning element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher Lightning base jutsu in the same turn
    Note : Eight bolts are released towards the opponent
    Note : They travel at the same speed of (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness mainly at a speed that any normal lightning attack does
    Note: A little bigger (1.75 times) in width then that of (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness

    Note: It requires three hand seals to be performed


    Katon netto- Fire Release Fire Net
    Typeffensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release fire from his handand send that fire toward's the opponent and also insert's some extra chakra into it and whent he fire is going to reach the opponent the user quickly transform it into a net made up of fire of diameter of approximately 5m and use it to trap the opponent with in it and due to it being made up of fire it causes deep burn to the opponent and can even be used to trap multiple opponents at the same time
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
    Note : Must need mastery over Fire element
    Note : Can not use any S rank or higher fire base jutsu in the same turn
    Note: It requires three hand seals to be performed

    ~ CAN BE USED OR TAUGHT ONLY BY Gitanshu/Alucard is a CONTRADICTION ! If it is only used by you, it cannot be taught, If it is taught by you, it cannot be only used by you. I would have thought this is simple logic. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by mist01 View Post
    (Fuuton: Kurushimeru tengai) - Wind Release: Dome of Torment
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60(+20 when combined with fire)
    Description: The user builds up wind chakra then perfoming the ram+bird+boar handseals and claps his hands together, then he forms a cubic dome made of thick dense air around the opponent using the air surrounding him(opponent). This technique traps the opponent and the opponent won't be able to escape until the user releases his hand. The user is not able to perform any other jutsu unless if he already made a clone. The longer an opponent is trapped in the dome the lesser air he had to breathe because of the dense air within the dome so its like a torture chamber.
    -This last for 3 turns.
    -Can only be used 3 times in battle.
    -A duojutsu user except byakugan would be able to attack without a clone
    -The wind is made of chakra so a chakra absorber will easily break this jutsu.
    -Can only be performed by someone that has mastered fuuton.
    -Can only be taught by Mist01

    -Declined-
    Remove the coloured parts. State the size of the chamber as that's important to the quantity of air the opponent has to breath and how much time does it take for the opponent to be completely locked inside it. And what happens to the opponent as the oxygen decreases? Suffocates and passes out, movements get slower, etc?


    ____________________________________


    Summoning Animal: Lynx
    Scroll Owner: Mist01
    Other Users who have signed contract: Not ATM
    Summoning Boss if existing: Not ATM
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Not ATM
    Description and Background:
    Lynx (Lynx rufus) are special bobcats that inhabit a range that stretches throughout a large portion of North America, from southern Canada to southern Mexico. Lynx have a cream to buff colored coat that is dappled with dark brown spots and stripes. They have short tufts of fur at the tips of their ears and a fringe of fur that frames their face.
    Taking all the characteristic of both a domestic and a wild cat, the Lynx are skillful climbers and are most active at dusk and during the night. Lynx are territorial and have acute hearing and a refined sense of smell. They stalk and ambush their prey, often killing their victims by biting the base of the neck. The species on which lynx prey includes small mammals, ground-dwelling birds, and reptiles.

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    REMOVED THE COLORED PART AND MY EDITS ARE BOLDED

    (Fuuton: Kurushimeru tengai) - Wind Release: Dome of Torment
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60(+20 when combined with fire)
    Description: The user builds up wind chakra then perfoming the ram+bird+boar handseals and claps his hands together, then he forms a cubic dome made of thick dense air around the opponent using the air surrounding him(opponent). This technique traps the opponent and the user is not able to perform any other jutsu. The longer an opponent is trapped in the dome the lesser air he had to breathe because of the dense air within the dome so its like a torture chamber.
    Note: the dome has an area of 37 x 37 inches square and a height of 80 inches which is equivalent to the size of a phone booth. this fits an average person so this take up to 5 seconds before the opponent is completely locked inside because of the small area which gives the opponent no chance of movement. The longer the opponent stays in the dome, he uses up the oxygen content which slows his movement and then he eventually passes out due to suffocation.
    -This last for 3 turns.
    -Can only be used 3 times in battle.
    -The wind is made of chakra so a chakra absorber will easily break this jutsu.
    -Can only be performed by someone that has mastered fuuton.
    -Can only be taught by Mist01

    ~ The effect of the "dense" air makes no sense. Also tell me, what in god's name is a "cubic dome" ? It's either a cube ( which it isn't, based on your description) or a dome ( which it also isn't ), so what exactly do you mean by that ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Tauburn- View Post
    Hagfish approved on this post.

    (Kuchiyose: Babauo: Akina)- Sumoning: Hagfish: Akina
    Type: Sumons
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Akina is a large hagfish that measures 2 meters in length (6 feet), once summoned she releases a slime from her body that oozes from her skin and begins to cover the field (Can cover the field in 2 turns). Akina having the ability to create the slime she has mastered the ability to use slime from her body to attack and defend. By forming the slime into multiple types of simple 3D shapes, walls, spheres, cones, pryminds, cubes, and even simple weaponry (blunt weapons) and use the slime weapons or shape as an extension of her body.
    - Making anything of Slime counts as a summoners move.
    - She doesn't need handseals for the manipulation of the slime.
    - Can stay on the field for 3 rounds.


    ±± Declined ±± Rank of this slime technique? Also, covering the whole field in it is a no specially because you haven't explain the properties of this slime.

    (Baba: Baba Bunshin)- Hagfish Arts: Hagfish Clone
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user makes a clone of themselves out of hagfish, once the clone is physicaly touched (By an opponent or physical oject) the clone will collapse and release a mass of sticky slime from the bodies of the hagfish, and the hagfish will cover the opponent were they are.
    - Normal clone rules apply.
    - The slime is released as the opponet makes contact with the clone.

    ~ Left for Scorps ~


    ±± Declined ±± What can this clone do? Also, you don't make it...you must summon it, same as every other summon. You must summon several hagfish which use the transformation technique to resemble a copy of you.
    (Kuchiyose: Babauo: Akina)- Sumoning: Hagfish: Akina
    Type: Sumons
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Akina is a large hagfish that measures 2 meters in length (6 feet), once summoned she releases a slime from her body that oozes from her skin and begins to cover the field (Can only cover up to mid range), Akina can control the properties of the slime making, sticky or deloting it with water making it runny. Akina having the ability to create the slime she has mastered the ability to use slime from her body to attack and defend. By forming the slime into multiple types of simple 3D shapes, walls, spheres, cones, pryminds, cubes, and even simple weaponry (blunt weapons) and use the slime weapons or shape as an extension of her body.
    - Slime (blunt weapons are B-rank, shapes are C-ranked)
    - Changing the properties of the slime from her body takes a turn for the user.
    - Making anything of Slime counts as a summoners move.
    - She doesn't need handseals for the manipulation of the slime.
    - Can stay on the field for 3 rounds.


    ±± Approved ±±


    (Baba: Baba Bunshin)- Hagfish Arts: Hagfish Clone
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user summons servile hagfish which make a clone of the summoner out of hagfish, once the clone is physically touched (By an opponent or physical object) the clone will collapse and release a mass of sticky slime from the bodies of the hagfish, and the hagfish will cover the opponent were they are, trapping the opponent where they hit the clone. The clone is only able to do simple things such as ninjutsu.
    - Normal clone rules apply.
    - The slime is released as the opponet makes contact with the clone.

    ±± Declined ±± Nope, i can't allow a clone that can use ninjutsu, specially without a rank limitation. This needs to be a Taijutsu only clone. Also, slime will be b-rank max and only trap something in direct contact.


    Steel Release Bio: Wabisuke

    (Kōton: Dou Ken)- Steel Release: Body Blades
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user focuses his fire and earth chakra into their forearms and lower legs (shins), then the user will mold the chakra into a hardened steel scythe blade, stronger than any normal weapon, that looks as if its coming right out of the skin (extends out ward 1yrd from the skin). The blades on the forearms are made just below the elbow then curve outward with the scythes edge towards the users hands. The blades made on the shins are just above the users ankles, and the blade curves upwards blades edge to the user. The blades will begin to weaken the third turn after being molded.
    Forearm and shin blade pic
    - The blades will last for 4 turns then be very dull/brittel.

    ~ Scorps ~


    ±± Approved ±±
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by goku2000 View Post
    Mushiton Bagu no Shinka - Bug Style Bug Evolution
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The bugs inside the user release more pheromones increasing the birth rate of bugs which makes them stronger and faster. While doing this the user has to remain still so that the birthing process isnt disturbed and cannot use any bug techniques that require releasing more bugs. Once the bugs are done spawning boosts all bug techniques 20 damage points

    Note: Cannot use any bug techs that involve releasing more bugs for that turn
    Note: Must remain still for 1 turn.
    Note: This can only be used by an Aburame clan bio
    Note can only be taught by Goku2000

    -Declined-

    +20 damage points is too much. Also, it doesn't make much sense for the birth process occur in a single turn and produce enough bugs for you to perform large scale techniques with your bugs. Also, add a chakra cost. The bugs alone can't do that since it isn't one of their natural abilities. State that you stimulate that type of pheromones by feeding them with more chakra


    (Kuchiyose:Arashi no Onna Keleano )- Summoning: Keleano Lady of the Storm
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30 Chakra
    Damage:60 Damage
    Description:
    Keleano is the Love Godess Aphrodite's younger sister. She was born in a storm in the valley of the cardinals and this was prophesied to be a great sign of things to come consequently she has a dual affinity to lightning and water, which she can perform up to A rank .She is about half the size of gamabunta and can fit one rider on her back. Due to flying in storms many times and dodging lightning she is very agile and fast flying at up to 150 miles per *hour. She is very fierce which represents her affinity and will immediately fight anyone she does not see fit to summon her. However when she does trust her summoner she is a very good fighter and helpful as well.
    Note: Can be Only Summoned Once.
    Note: Summoning counts as a move*
    Note: Must sign cardinal contract to use

    -Leaving for Scorps-

    ±± Declined ±± Proof of signing said contract?



    Mushiton: Sensa no Bagu - Bug Arts: Sensor Bugs
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The user releases scout Kikaichū across the battlefield that gather information and detect chakra signature around the battlefield. They relay this information back to the user using the pheremones the Kikaichū release to communicate and can be released in very few numbers for short range or disperesed in a large area for long range.

    Note: Can only be used by an Aburame clan member
    Note can only be taught by Goku2000

    -Declined-
    They can locate people, but it's the scout bugs who do that. They are left on a target and locate them through smell or the bugs must come back to the user to inform him. Something you should already be able to do since its one of their abilities. How are you a bug user and you don't even know their abilities?
    Mushiton Bagu no Shinka - Bug Style Bug Evolution
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The bugs inside user release chakra to make the bugs release more pheromones increasing the birth rate of bugs which makes them stronger and faster. While this is happening the user cannot use any Aburame techniques for 3 turns so as not to disturb the process. Once the bugs are done spawning it boosts all bug techniques 15 damage points

    Note: Can not use bug techniques for 3 turns before this
    Note: This can only be used by an Aburame clan bio
    Note can only be taught by Goku2000

    ps if 15 is still too much just change it to 10

    ~ Increasing the birth rate only gives you more bugs, not stronger bugs. ~

    Me signing the cardinal contract
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    Mushiton: Sensa no Bagu - Bug Arts: Sensor Bugs
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The user releases scout Kikaichū across the battlefield that gather information and detect chakra signature around the battlefield. The user can then , by using the bugs can see wherever the opponents are due to the bugs relaying the messages by the pheremones they release

    ~ Makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. Declined, do not resubmit. ~

    Note: can only be used by aburame bio
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Kwalker394 View Post

    Kuro Kontan Katana (Dark Soul Blade)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: N/A(+20 Chakra if using stage 2 +10 Chakra for the technique)
    Damage: 15 Damage (+20 Damage if using the sword technique)
    Description:
    Dark Soul Blade was forged and handed down from generations of Kenesu's family so it can only react to Kenesu's chakra alone and no one else's. It is a long curved blade that is Black and has a Blood stained tint to it with a Silver dragon hand guard. This sword has been in countless battles (which is why the blade is tinted red) over the long, long years since it was crafted from a very special dark metal called oujou·metaru (Death Metal) which is a Osmium and Titanium Alloy. Kenesu's chakra is the only chakra that can infuse within the blade itself and to use the swords secret ability. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. Kenesu can channel his chakra into the blade and change the shape and form of the blade itself allowing more than just one fighting option. After he does this the blade will bend and straighten into a longer blade with demonic writing on it. Only in this form of the blade can kenesu use the swords Technique. Kenesu charges up his chakra into his hands increasing the vibrations and frequency to form Raiton chakra. Once his chakra is charged to make electricity Kenesu then channels his Raiton chakra into the blade and then slams his sword into the ground blade first. As soon as the blade is slamed to the ground an electric dome forms around kenesu from the blade protecting him from harm for the time being. When something or someone touches the dome it sends an electric current into the object or person shocking them as well as blasting the object or person away a few yards from kenesu.



    ~Can only be wielded by Kenesu
    ~Changing the sword from the first stage to stage 2 is takes up 2 moves
    ~Only when the blade is in the 2nd stage can Kenesu use the sword ability.
    ~The sword Secret ability can only be used 1 time in battle
    ~The sword ability can only be used 3 times in battle
    ~The shield can repel any weapons/human touch(even non human touch) but can be dispersed by any C rank or higher jutsu

    I took out "As legend tells, the Dark Soul Blade was forged by demons themselves," "electricity and " ''which are the hardest, and strongest metals on earth.' "The Titanium is there to give the sword its strength, high strength:weight ratio, high ductility, resistance to corrosion and a decently high melting point. Titanium has a relatively lower ability to conduct heat and has paramagnetic properties. The Osmium gives the sword its density, color, and gives off a soft sheen even at night. Because this sword has a high melting point that reaches over 3000°F and has a low ability to conduct heat." because it wasnt needed and also "it is a perfect sword to channel your Katon chakra into it for attacks. ".





    Summoning Animal:Fire Salamander's
    Scroll Owner: Kwalker394
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: In progress

    ~ Left for Scorps ~


    ±± All Declined ±± Your sword is too similar to existing swords and the salamander contract is a cannon contract
    Your not making it easy for me Scorps -_- lol



    Kuro Kontan Katana (Dark Soul Blade)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 15 Damage
    Description:
    Dark Soul Blade was forged and handed down from generations of Kenesu's family so it can only react to Kenesu's chakra alone and no one else's. Its a very light and long curved blade that is Black and has a Blood stained tint to it with a Silver dragon hand guard. This sword has been in countless battles (which is why the blade is tinted red) over the long, long years since it was crafted from a very special dark metal called oujou·metaru (Death Metal) which is a Osmium and Titanium Alloy. Kenesu's chakra is the only chakra that the sword reacts to so if someone else try to use the sword it will catch on fire and burn the other user. Dark Soul Blade has the ability to be infused with Katon Chakra along with Raiton Chakra. When infused with Katon chakra the swords blade will be engulf with flames and can even slice through steel due to the heat like its nothing. When infused with Raiton chakra the blade is surrounded with lightning and has piercing power and increased speed (if thrown)

    ~Can only be wielded by Kenesu
    ~The sword Katon ability can only be used 2 times in battle
    ~The sword Raiton ability can only be used 2 times in battle
    ~When either Raiton or Katon ability is active 20 chakra is being used.

    I took out "Kenesu's chakra is the only chakra that can infuse within the blade itself and to use the swords secret ability. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. Kenesu can channel his chakra into the blade and change the shape and form of the blade itself allowing more than just one fighting option. After he does this the blade will bend and straighten into a longer blade with demonic writing on it. Only in this form of the blade can kenesu use the swords Technique. Kenesu charges up his chakra into his hands increasing the vibrations and frequency to form Raiton chakra. Once his chakra is charged to make electricity Kenesu then channels his Raiton chakra into the blade and then slams his sword into the ground blade first. As soon as the blade is slamed to the ground an electric dome forms around kenesu from the blade protecting him from harm for the time being. When something or someone touches the dome it sends an electric current into the object or person shocking them as well as blasting the object or person away a few yards from kenesu." ~The shield can repel any weapons/human touch(even non human touch) but can be dispersed by any C rank or higher jutsu and ~Changing the sword from the first stage to stage 2 is takes up 2 moves
    ~Only when the blade is in the 2nd stage can Kenesu use the sword ability.

    ~ Again, it has nothing differentiating it from like 15000 other swords ~




    Summoning Animal: Lemur's
    Scroll Owner: Kwalker394
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: N/A

    As of now there are no Lemurs approved. I will also edit the description and background as well create a boss if it gets approved.

    ~ Actually, Hasashi possesses the lemur contract; it was approved for him ages ago, and due to his inactivity he hasn't updated the list. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Shadow Star Approved:

    Quote Originally Posted by Jacob Moore View Post
    (Kage☆Boshi)-Shadow☆Star
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30(+15 for every turn after activation)
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 to Kenjutsu)
    Description: The user begins by altering their stance, placing the left foot slightly forward, and holding their sword upright with the hilt in front of the right shoulder. The blade should also slope slightly to the rear (The Hasso Kendo stance for those who don't know). Upon taking this stance, the user performs a "Soul Resonance" with themselves, and with their weapon. By focusing chakra all throughout the body, the user establishes an equilibrium between themselves and their weapon where the chakra resonates within , much like what is done with the Samurai Sabre Technique. However, whereas usually the chakra would envelop the blade, this chakra forms a shell within the blade itself, where the chakra can rebound infinitely and effectively resonate with itself; As it forms a shell of resonating chakra within the blade, it allows it to cut through near anything. The constant stream of chakra throughout the body serves to forcefully augment the muscles of the body, bringing the user into a peak condition increasing their speed and strength up to 20%.
    ~Can only be used once
    ~Lasts for a total 5 turns maximum
    ~Must be wielding the sword or have it on his possession to keep active.

    I fixed it so that it has less abilities fit within one technique, only augmenting ones own body, and making it so that the blade can cut through nearly anything.
    ~Leaving for Kaito or Scorps~

    ±± Approved ±± Edited the duration. Added restriction. Added damage to Kenjutsu.
    Quote Originally Posted by Jacob Moore View Post
    (Kage☆Boshi: Yosegiri)-Shadow☆Star: Checkmate Slash
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: N/a
    Damage Points:
    Description: After having already used Shadow Star, the user will release subtle amounts of chakra from all of their tenketsu, and shape their chakra into various whip like entities. These whips can then be used to repeatedly attack the enemy with the intention of landing multiple crushing blows that are capable of slicing the opponent apart. These whips can also be used to grab and restrict the movements of a target, to make them a much easier target. While being capable of delivering crushing blows, the whips can also be used as an effective defense, blocking incoming ninja tools.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~One must have already activated Shadow Star prior to using this.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uJugUYSohqY
    3:04-3:16 in the above video


    ±± Declined ±± Too general. Needs more explanation. how many whips? how long does it last? are they simply black chakra? Are they shadow? You need to rework this a bit
    Resubmitting:

    (Kage☆Boshi: Yosegiri)-Shadow☆Star: Checkmate Slash
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: After having already envoked Shadow Star, the user will release subtle but constant amounts of chakra from the tenketsu in the spinal cord area. The chakra then becomes visible due to the friction with the shoulder blade-this is similar in principle to the initiation of the Butterfly Bullet Bombing technique. After releasing this chakra, one will utilize shape transformation to form the released chakra into a maximum of four solid and compact whips. As they are compacted and light reflects off of them, they begin to take on a slightly different appearance, becoming almost completely black in color-reminiscent, but different from shadows. The whips can be used to curve around from the back and repeatedly attack the enemy with the intention of landing multiple crushing blows, capable of slicing a person apart on lashing at a time. The whips can also serve as a defense against incoming Ninja Tools, knocking them away as they come forth.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ~This technique can last for the entire turn in which it is used.
    ~Shadow Star must be activated prior to using this.
    ~Because Shadow Star must have been activated prior to use, this technique can only be used three times total within the allotted five turns of Shadow Star.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uJugUYSohqY
    3:04-3:16 in the above video

    ~ Approved ~

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    (Suiton:Agrona's Nakigoe)-Water Release: Agrona's Cry
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After the performance of a quick three handseals, the user begins by materializing and releasing a three and a half foot wave of water uniformly in all directions extending as far out as Mid Range, with their body at the epicenter. The water will take on different characteristics than that of ordinary water, having a much higher viscosity than normal, similar to that of 'Starch Syrup Capture Field' only without the sticky qualities. Because of the heightened viscosity, this technique serves as an excellent defense against blunt force attacks, absorbing the blows and maintaining its form without crumbling like an earth barrier. The velocity of the water causes it to deal a great amount of blunt damage to anything hit and being powerful enough to break the bones of an ordinary individual at the point of contact. Once it envelops someone or something, the water mass will pin them down or trap them by flowing over them and heavily restricting movement, similar to the way syrup flows over a square of butter on pancakes, completely covering it-The Syrup of course being the water, and the Butter the target. To add to the damage dealt on contact, one can infuse his Katon chakra into the water to quickly heat it up, stopping just before the boiling point. If one chooses to heat up the water, once covered it will severely burn anyone caught inside (2nd Degree Burns). For self security, there is a 85 centimeter "safe zone" around the user in which no water will take form. This technique only happens faster if there is a present water source, however the hand seals are still a necessity.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~The user is restricted to using A Rank and below Water techniques in their next turn.
    ~In the case that the water is heated, one is restricted to using A Rank and below Katon in the following turn as well.
    ~Fun Fact: In Proto-Celtic Agronā, translates to carnage or slaughter.

    ~ Mmm...pancakes. Remove the fire chakra bit. ~

    (Suiton:Sono Painappuru Sokutatsu)-Water Release:The Pineapple Express
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user begins by concentrating their Suiton chakra to the palm of their hands, and causing it to physically materialize as a rather large sphere of water. The water will initially hold no specific shape, but through the use of shape transformation, one will alter the shape of this water to resemble that of a Pineapple. Once formed, it is ideally thrown at the head of an intended target, but is often mistaken for being nothing more than a prank. The deception within this technique is that once thrown, the Pineapple acts as a 'grenade,' and can be remotely 'detonated' so that once it reaches the desired location, it blows out in all directions in the form of fragments of its former self (It will basically blow out in all directions like a grenade does, only in the form of several pencil eraser sized water bullets at the command of the user). The small water bullets act similar to the shrapnel of an actual grenade, and have great piercing power being able to easily pierce the skin of anyone nearby because of the incredible speed at which they move (They so fast that it is hard to keep up with the water droplets with the naked eye, considering their size). The 'shrapnel' hits anything within a 15 meter radius, leaving room for the user to escape the range. Once the Pineapple detonates, the shrapnel moves incredibly fast and is just as hard to avoid as it is fast.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.

    ~ First pancakes and now pineapples ? You're making me hungry. Approved. ~
     
         
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    Futon kaze dansu ( wind style wind dance)
    Type: Offensive/defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will first make 3 hand seals ( boar,dog and snake) and then the user will take a one hand stance with their legs curled up behind them. They will then focus futon chakra into their entire body and spin around releaseing a large wave of wind knocking all those around him backwards he will then spin upwards into a standing position with one leg up to his gut and bend backwards releaseing a small wave from his foot and a large one from his hand. each wave of wind can easily knock and enemy backwards even a summoning animal one quarter the size of gamabunta ( so about 25 ft tall)
    note: can only be used 3 times
    note: no wind jutsu above A rank next turn.




    futon kaze gentsuki ( wind style wind scooter )
    Type: Offensive/supp
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will make 3 hand seals Tiger,rat and dog. and will then focus futon chakra into his hands. He will then proceed to jump into the air and circle his hands around each other while releasing the wind chakra making a medium sized ball of win d. The user will then throw the wind ball onto the ground causing it to explode and making a large dome of wind come from the point of contact with the ground to mid range but it is only strong enough to cut through skin and knock an enemy backwards. Another use this jutsu has is after its formed the sure can jump on top of it and travel with it riding it like a scooter.
    Note: if used for traveling purposes jutsu only lasts four turns.
    note: no wind jutsu next two turns.
    note: can only be used twice.

    -Declined-
    Similar jutsu already exists (Ace's)
    This one wasn't even checked so not really a re submission

    Futon kaze dansu ( wind style wind dance)
    Type: Offensive/defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will first make 3 hand seals ( boar,dog and snake) and then the user will take a one hand stance with their legs curled up behind them. They will then focus futon chakra into their entire body and spin around releaseing a large wave of wind knocking all those around him backwards he will then spin upwards into a standing position with one leg up to his gut and bend backwards releaseing a small wave from his foot and a large one from his hand. each wave of wind can easily knock and enemy backwards even a summoning animal one quarter the size of gamabunta ( so about 25 ft tall)
    note: can only be used 3 times
    note: no wind jutsu above A rank next turn.




    ±± Declined ±± Similar techniques exist




    Quote Originally Posted by -Haku Yuki- View Post
    hyouton: koori rippoutai ( ice relase: ice Cube)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/defensive
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will make 3 hand seals and focus his water and wind chakra into the palms of his hands he will then slam his hands together in the ram seal and mix the chakra into one small cube of ice. The user will then throw the ice cube at whatever and will then make the tiger hand seal the ice cube will increase in size and become a giant ice cube but is hallow on the inside as soon as it comes in contact with the water the water will be absorbed by the ice cube into its inside and freeze the water making the insides no longer hallow but no filled with hard ice.
    note: can only be used 3 times.
    note: after absorbing water once it fill up entirely and is able to suck in any more.
    note: can withstand up to A rank fire.
    note: can absorb up to a rank water.
    note: at any point the user can cancel the ice cube and it will melt into normal water as the jutsu would have been stopped.
    note: ice cube stays on the field until destroyed or released.

    ~Declined~ I need you to elaborate on the bold part. How big a mass of water can you absorb? Does it need to make a very subtle contact to absorb all the water or only the water that makes direct contact with the ice? Also, re-read yourself, the whole definition is half clear.

    hyouton: koori rippoutai ( ice relase: ice Cube)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/defensive
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will make 3 hand seals, Dog, Tiger and Ram. Then he will focus his water and wind chakra into the palms of his hands he will then slam his hands together in the Snake hand seal seal and mix the chakras, useing shape manipulation the user will form his water and wind chakra into one small cube of ice. The user will then throw the ice cube at whatever and will then make the tiger hand seal And focus more chakra into it, useing his chakra he will release some of the shape manipulation he put into the cube allowing it to grow to the size of The ice whale jutsu. The user will make sure to leave the center of the cube empty but filled with Cold wind chakra and normal chakra so as soon as it comes in contact with the water That all of the water from the jutsu will be absorbed into the cube like a sponge absorbs water. however the ice cube is only able to absorb one water jutsu, and is only able to absorb water up to the size of water crashing wave jutsu. Once the water jutsu has been absorbed into the cube it will freeze the water making the insides no longer hallow but no filled with hard ice.
    note: can only be used 3 times.
    note: after absorbing water once it fill up entirely and is unable to suck in any more.
    note: can withstand up to A rank fire.
    note: can absorb up to A rank water.
    note: at any point the user can cancel the ice cube and it will melt into normal water as the jutsu would have been stopped.
    note: ice cube stays on the field until destroyed or released.
    Note: no ice,water or wind jutsu above B rank next two turns.
    Note: Must make at least some contact with jutsu to absorb it.
    Note: jutsu does not take affect until ice cube expands.


    proof to me owning an ice bio: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=184240

    ±± Declined ±± Jutsu makes no sense whatsoever. How would water and wind (ICE) suck up water? This makes no sense what so ever.



    Summoning: Gaint whippoorwills
    Scroll Owner: -Haku Yuki-
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract n/a




    if approved i will drop the bat contract ( i don't think i even earned the right to have the contract since i didn't beat tauburn so i don't really have it anyway>)

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    ±± Declined ±± Nightjars already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Gyakufuu-Kijin) Aeolus
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (-20 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Aeolus is an extremely light, 1 meter long, katana that slightly curves from the bottom of the blade to the top. It was forged by the 1st Kazekage back in the 1st shinobi world war. It has black tribal design traveling up along the blade in a smoke-like fashion. It has the ability to be infused with wind chakara extending its reach even further for attacking or defending.

    ~ Can only be infused with wind chakara.
    ~ Infusing wind chakara to increase blade length counts as a move due to the difficult chakara control.
    ~ Once held, allows the user to preform one-hand handseals of B rank and lower wind jutsus.
    ~ Can only be used by ShikamarUchiha10

    ~ Similar to some 100,000,000 swords already existing ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal:Hippopotamus
    Scroll Owner: Mangomango
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Description and Background:
    The hippopotamus is semi-aquatic, inhabiting rivers, lakes and mangrove swamps. The hippopotamus is recognizable by its barrel-shaped torso, enormous mouth and teeth, nearly hairless body, stubby legs and tremendous size, it is the third largest land mammal by weight.The hippopotamus is one of the most aggressive creatures in the world and is often regarded as one of the most dangerous animals.

    Hippo's have a natural affinity to either Earth or Water, depending on the element (the element each summon will have as its affinity will be provided) the certain summon can use all of that elements Jutsus up to the rank of the certain summon. (Rank will also be provided).

    Hippo's also discrete a red "sweat" which is infused with Chakra, from glades in their skin, the Hippos red "sweat" is a natural sunscreen and antiseptic - thanks to the red and orange pigments. The pigments can absorb harmful ultraviolet rays (290-400 nm). Also, the pigments inhibit the growth of pathogenic bacteria Pseudomonas aeruginosa and Klebsiella pneumoniae. The antibacterial role of the "sweat" explains why hippos manage to have scratches and wounds in their skin cured readily and rarely infected.

    ±± Approved ±±

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Nyūshi) Summoning Technique: Nyūshi
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short.
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user draws blood and performs the Snake hand seal and smudges the blood onto a surface.

    Nyushi is the smallest and youngest of all of the Hippo Summons. He is roughly the same height as a human (from legs to back as he travels on all fours). Ressarikui has a natural affinity towards Earth and can use all Earth Jutsu up to A-rank without hand seals. (Although the preparation time for the Jutsu is the same, as well as all other requirements such as contact with earth).

    Notes:
    Can only be summoned once and lasts four turns.
    ±± approved ±±


    (Kaba geijutsu: Akai ase) Hippopotamus Arts: Red Sweat
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A Hippopotamus summon discrete a red "sweat" which is infused with Chakra, from glades in their skin, the Hippos red "sweat" is a natural sunscreen and antiseptic - thanks to the red and orange pigments. This allows for Hippo summons to continue fighting an extra turn after they have been defeated and makes Hippos immune to fire Jutsu of A-Rank.

    Notes:
    -Every Hippo summon can use this once per Battle.

    (Please feel free to edit until acceptable. ^.^)

    ~ Scorps again O___O ~


    ±± Declined ±± One more turn? Nope. Max thing this will do is to defend against something. Also, immunity to fire up to A-Rank? At what cost? just like that?
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Anubis~ View Post
    ---------Summoning Technique---------



    Summoning Animal:The Himalayan Monal(Lophophorus impejanus)
    Scroll Owner:~Anubis~
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing:need to be created
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:need to be created
    Description and Background: The Himalayan Monal, Lophophorus impejanus also known as the Impeyan Monal or Impeyan Pheasant or Danphe is a bird of genus Lophophorus of the pheasant family, Phasianidae. It is the national bird of Nepal, where it is known as the Danfe, and the state bird of Uttarakhand.

    Traditionally, the Himalayan Monal has been classified as monotypic. However, studies have shown that the male Himalayan Monals of northwestern India lack the white rump that other Himalayan Monals have, and have more green on the breast, indicating the possibility of a second subspecies.

    It is a relatively large-sized bird with reference to family Phasianidae. About 70 cm in length, the weight of males and females range between 1980-2380g and 1800-2150g respectively. Adult males possess a long crest, are feathered with multicoloured plumage throughout their body, while the females, like in other pheasants, are dull in colour with the upper parts covered with dark brownish-black feathers. Notable features in males are a long crest that is metallic green, changeable reddish copper on the back and sides of the neck, and a prominent white back and rump while in flight (birds of northwestern India lack this). Tail feathers of males are uniformly rufous being darker towards the tips, whereas the lower tail coverts of females are white, barred with black and rufous. Females have a prominent white patch in the fore neck and a white strip on the tail. First year males and immatures resemble females, but first year males are larger and the immatures are less distinctly marked.
    -Can only be summoned by me or people who has signed the contract-
    -last 2 turns-
    -can be summoned once only-
    -Has affinity to wind release-

    ~ Left for Scorps ~


    ±± Pending ±± I'll save the animal for you but be you need to submit this following proper template please. Read other contract submissions to understand how do correctly do so

    Resubmitting

    Summoning Animal: The himalayan Monal
    Scroll Owner: Anubis
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Kuchiyose:Himaraya karanijikiji ) Summoning:The Himalayan Monal
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:the user bites his thumb then smears the blood on his palm after doing so he performs needed hand seals and summons a Himalayan monal. He has a long crest that is metallic green color and fairly large about as big as deidera's clay owl.He's large enough to carry one person on his back while flying.he as affinity with Wind release and can use wind release up to the rank of the contract holder.The Himalayan monal is a very proud bird so sometimes he won't listen to the summoner and does as he wants and speaks English foully But he becomes serious while battling with opponents .he has ability to fly at a great speed making an opponent difficult to target him.
    Note:
    -Can speak foul English-
    --Can only be in play for 5-turns.-
    -Can only be Summoned by someone who has signed or owns the Monal contract -
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.-
    -Each Jutsu counts as a move toward the three jutsu of the summoner-
    -There are varieties of Monal so this contract is for all the species and no one can claim for the species that are related with monal-
    ~Declined~ Restrictions? Up to Forbidden Rank Wind Jutsu, High Speed Flight, and 5 turns?
     
         
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    (Raiton: Shitai no Raikou) - Lightning Style: Body of Lightning
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 50
    Description: The jutsu that was created to make the best of what others see as a terrible situation, but what he sees as normal. This is done by forcing the users lightning element chakra through their scars as soon as anything cuts their body open, like a small cut, a deep wound, or a cut off limb. This is used as a surprise element when the opponent already thinks victorious, the jutsu itself works as a defense mechanism, it actually brightens up the situation a little when a blade is cutting, it slows down the process and weakens the sword creating a smaller wound than it normally would, but still allows to cut with a reduced effect. Ultimately when a wound is inflicted, the user without preparations or handseals forces out gathered blunt lightning chakra from the scar, almost instantaneously paralyzing and causing severe burns on contact, giving the user time to react and counterattack. The lightning slowly spreads from the wound around the users body and slowly disperses if no contact is made, but the quickest it makes contact with anything in front of from where it came out.
    ~The technique can only be used twice a battle.
    ~The damage it deals is mediocre and leaves the opponent standing, if the user hasn't dealt a strike.
    ~After using the technique, the user is exhausted after the spontaneous burst of lightning chakra and cannot use the nature for the next turn.
    ~The user still receives damage, but with less consequences.
    ~Declined~ I understand what you're getting at here, but the with the way you make light of the technique's strength, I wonder if it should actually be S-rank or not. I think it should be at most A-rank, but also specify what level of damage the user can withstand with this technique. Be specific.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Titania View Post
    (Hāto Kurosu no Yoroi)-Heart Kreuz Armor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Heart Kreuz Armor is a legendary armor created in ancient times back when the Sage of Six Paths roamed the world. That being said, the lustrous colors of the metals, of finest quality that were used to create this top-class armor in durability and strength, were made from legendary craftsmen and blacksmiths. The armor consists of many abilities predominantly to be activated.



    This armor itself has many properties, and is able to 'change' its form upon the user releasing an additional chakra into the armor for it to leech off the user, and absorb it, in order to morph into a different armor with its own unique properties. The armor's are given the special names thus, Black Wing, Flame Empress, Lightning Empress, Sea Empress, and Purgatory Armor. All these armors have each their own special attributes to assist them in combating and attacking with the five basic elemental nature transformations, wind, fire, lightning, water, and earth respectively.

    Black Wing Armor

    The Black Wing Armor primarily assists the wielder in combating with the Wind Element, and giving it special properties relating and enhancing the Wind Element. The armor has two wings that have black metal "arms" acting as the wings' leading structure, but the parts used to fly are composed of a membrane-like material. With the large flight muscles, the wings, it would allow the wielder to take flight. That being said, the user, being able to take flight into the air, similar to birds, it would gain extra speed. The wings being extra powerful, it gives the wielder +10 speed bonus when flying, which makes it extremely fast in mid-flight in battles. In fact, it is almost untraceable to the untrained naked eye. Furthermore, the user is capable of swerving, winding in and out, changing directions easily, maneuvering and moving rather flexibly, with the help of the powerful wings. In addition, the armor, which helps combat the Wind Element, makes the wielder completely impervious to Wind Element attacks C-rank and below, but instead is susceptible to fire, which is twice as effective as a result.

    Flame Empress Armor

    Flame Empress Armor helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the Fire Element. Furthermore, a crimson blade is held in the hands of the wielder when wearing this armor, infused with Fire chakra. When the user is wearing this armor, he is impervious to Fire attacks C-rank and below completely, but yet would be susceptible to water, which is twice as effective. 3 times a battle, the user is able to shoot out a crimson wave of fire around the size of a human, B-ranked, at the opponent

    Purgatory Armor

    The Purgatory helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the Earth Element. It is deemed the toughest armor, the strongest, and the most durable. Whilst in this form, the user can withstand all B-ranked Earth Attacks without trouble, and physical attacks are completely useless to the wielder's extremely strong and hard body. Furthermore, physical attacks of lesser density would break upon impact with the armor's hard surface.

    Lightning Empress Armor

    The Lightning Empress Armor helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the power of Lightning-based attacks. The armor’s weapon is a long spear, with a very large blade and a decorated circle resembling a shield attaching it to the shaft, which is adorned by a large ribbon. Apparently, the weapon acts as a lightning rod, also, as an offensive weapon, both in physical combat and shooting out attacks. 3 times per battle, it can shoot out a B-ranked blue beam of lightning which can paralyze opponents. Furthermore, this armor allows the wielder to be completely impervious to C-ranked Lightning attacks and below, whilst being susceptible to Wind attacks, which is twice as effective.

    Sea Empress Armor

    The Sea Empress Armor is a renowned armor known to assist the wielder in combating and enhancing the powers of water-based attacks. The armor comes equipped with a long sword which seems to be made of crystal, with many small crystals jutting out in every direction from the handguard. Whilst within this form, the user gains the ability to breathe underwater. The wielder also gains immunity, letting the wielder be completely impervious and nullify Water Attacks C-rank and below, but leaves the user susceptible to Earth attacks, in which the damage is accentuated to twice as effective.

    Restrictions
    • Can only be used|Taught by Titania
    • Each elemental armor form can only be used 2 times per battle, and once activated, lasts for 2 turns
    • Cooldown time of 1 turn before you can use another armor
    • The user is left slightly taxed out and tired after using the same form twice.
    • Requires a subtle amount of time to 'change' armor, at least 1 second, which means distractions that disrupt the user would prohibit them from changing form








    ~ Too many in one. ~
    (Hāto Kurosu no Yoroi)-Heart Kreuz Armor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Heart Kreuz Armor is a legendary armor created in ancient times back when the Sage of Six Paths roamed the world. That being said, the lustrous colors of the metals, of finest quality that were used to create this top-class armor in durability and strength, were made from legendary craftsmen and blacksmiths. The armor consists of many abilities predominantly to be activated.



    This armor itself has many properties, and is able to 'change' its form upon the user releasing an additional chakra into the armor for it to leech off the user, and absorb it, in order to morph into a different armor with its own unique properties. The armor's are given the special names thus, Black Wing, Flame Empress, Lightning Empress, Sea Empress, and Purgatory Armor. All these armors have each their own special attributes to assist them in combating and attacking with the five basic elemental nature transformations, wind, fire, lightning, water, and earth respectively.

    Black Wing Armor

    The Black Wing Armor primarily assists the wielder in combating with the Wind Element, and giving it special properties relating and enhancing the Wind Element. The armor has two wings that have black metal "arms" acting as the wings' leading structure, but the parts used to fly are composed of a membrane-like material. With the large flight muscles, the wings, it would allow the wielder to take flight. That being said, the user, being able to take flight into the air, similar to birds, it would gain extra speed. The wings being extra powerful, it gives the wielder +10 speed bonus when flying, which makes it extremely fast in mid-flight in battles. In fact, it is almost untraceable to the untrained naked eye. Furthermore, the user is capable of swerving, winding in and out, changing directions easily, maneuvering and moving rather flexibly, with the help of the powerful wings. In addition, the armor, which helps combat the Wind Element, makes the wielder completely impervious to Wind Element attacks C-rank and below, but instead is susceptible to fire, which is twice as effective as a result.

    Flame Empress Armor

    Flame Empress Armor helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the Fire Element. Furthermore, a crimson blade is held in the hands of the wielder when wearing this armor, infused with Fire chakra. When the user is wearing this armor, he is impervious to Fire attacks C-rank and below completely, but yet would be susceptible to water, which is twice as effective. 3 times a battle, the user is able to shoot out a crimson wave of fire around the size of a human, B-ranked, at the opponent

    Purgatory Armor

    The Purgatory helps and assists the user in combating and enhancing the Earth Element. It is deemed the toughest armor, the strongest, and the most durable. Whilst in this form, the user can withstand all B-ranked Earth Attacks without trouble, and physical attacks are completely useless to the wielder's extremely strong and hard body. Furthermore, physical attacks of lesser density would break upon impact with the armor's hard surface.


    Restrictions
    • Can only be used|Taught by Titania
    • Each elemental armor form can only be used 2 times per battle, and once activated, lasts for 2 turns
    • Cooldown time of 1 turn before you can use another armor
    • The user is left slightly taxed out and tired after using the same form twice.
    • Requires a subtle amount of time to 'change' armor, at least 1 second, which means distractions that disrupt the user would prohibit them from changing form





    -Removed two armors-

    ~Declined~ The armors are all very powerful, and the restrictions are hardly restrictions at all.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    2nd Submission of this cycle.

    Shiori Manatachi (White Touch)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This Raiton technique resembles Sandaime Raikage's technique. The user will channel their raiton chakra into the tips of the index and middle fingers. What differs this technique with that of Chidori and the Raikage's technique is the fact that it doesn't focus on penetrating power rather on extremely high voltages meant to overload the body. The user channels such high amounts of lightning and chakra into their finger tips that the electricity will eventually create a white gleaming light around their fingers. When the user thrusts their fingers, they will released the massive amounts of lightning. Due to the amount of chakra generated into the finger tips, the discharge of lightning will have an effective in length and width. If the users fingers come into direct contact with or they are within close range of their opponent this is a definite kill as the voltage is too much for the body to contain, however if mid-ranged, the user's opponent is mid-ranged this technique will only cause severe shock and cause hindrance.
    ~Can be used 4 times per battle
    ~The user can either summon the chakra to one or both of his hands. If the technique is used in both hands the release of chakra can be used instead of together, however it looses power in each hand as the distribution of power has to be equal.
    ~Declined~ Overpowered. A Rank...really?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-10-2012 at 10:42 PM.

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