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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Kenjutsu: shadan) Sword Arts: interception
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases chakra unto their sword and quickly coats the sword with pure chakra. Then as the enemies attack is coming at the user, he twists the katana and and hits the attack with the non-sharp part of the katana. As the katana makes contact the user releases chakra and instead of breaking apart the jutsu, the user blocks and sends it to the left or right. Using the katana like a baseball bat to block and send the attack to the side.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Because its pure chakra, it can only block A rank and below elemental jutsu.
    ~Must be Kage rank to use this
    ~It can block S rank pure chakra attacks
    ~Can not send the jutsu back, only to the right or left side of the user
    ~Can only be taught by Piccolosan
    ~Declined~ You expect to deflect an incomming giant fireball that covers the whole field with a small sword? Good luck with that.
    (Kenjutsu: shadan) Sword Arts: interception
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases chakra unto their sword and quickly coats the sword with pure chakra. Then as the enemies attack is coming at the user, he twists the katana and and hits the attack with the non-sharp part of the katana. As the katana makes contact the user releases chakra and instead of breaking apart the jutsu, the user blocks and sends it to the left or right. Using the katana like a baseball bat to block and send the attack to the side.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Can only block jutsu the size of 2 meters in diameter max
    ~Because its pure chakra, it can only block A rank and below elemental jutsu.
    ~Must be Kage rank to use this
    ~It can block S rank pure chakra attacks
    ~Can not send the jutsu back, only to the right or left side of the user
    ~Can only be taught by Piccolosan
    Declined~ I don't see the point in that restriction, anyway. What S-rank or A-rank Elemental Jutsu are 2 meters in diameter. Too cheap, anyway. You can't simply deflect an S-ranked blast like a baseball.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Scythe of Sorrow
    Type:Weapon
    Rank : B
    Range : Long
    Chakra : N/A (20 if infused with ration)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The blade was created from a meteorite. This unknown substance was used to forge the blade. The body of the scythe is made fully of steel and the steel was hollowed out later to add a spiked chain on the inside that connects to the blade. By adding the spiked chain the scythe was given longer range and made the scythe lethal. The user can channel lightning through the scythe making it move faster and if the chain is not being used the blade can create a lightning slash with the infused ration chakra
    Can only be used by Kisamerox9 and anyone he chooses
    ~Declined~ Be more specific with regards to the scythe's abilities. How much damage can the lightning slash to and to what extent can the lightning be manipulated.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    -Resubmitting- ~Link~

    (Yōton: Kazan Hibi) - Lava Release: Volcanic Fissure
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This technique is one of the most devastating techniques of the Lava release, similar to the swamp of the underworld technique, after the usage of 3 handseals [Horse → Monkey → Tiger] the user channels his Lava elemental chakra into the ground underneath his opponent's direction, causing a large lake of Lava to form underneath the opponent but instead of sucking the opponent underneath the Lake of lava causes very severe burns to the opponent whenever he comes in contact with them, as the Lake of lava forms with the usage of one additional handseal of "Ram" the user can cause 4 large hands of lava rise up out of the Lake of Lava grabbing the opponent's legs and bringing him back to the Lava if he tries to escape, the hands are visible once they are rising out of the lake of lava due to their size, as one of the hands are at the size of one of the Pillars of the "lightning release: 16 pillar bind" technique, making them hard to avoid.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Can only be used by a Kurotsuchi, Rōshi, Dodai or Mei Terumi biography.
    Declined, the hands should be removed as that would count as a different technique
    (Yōton: Kazan Hibi) - Lava Release: Volcanic Fissure
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This technique is one of the most devastating techniques of the Lava release, similar to the swamp of the underworld technique, after the usage of 3 handseals [Horse → Monkey → Tiger] the user channels his Lava elemental chakra into the ground underneath his opponent's direction, causing a large lake of Lava to form underneath the opponent but instead of sucking the opponent underneath the Lake of lava causes very severe burns to the opponent whenever he comes in contact with them as the Lava suddenly erupts upwards to the sky, however it's drawback is that the Lake of Lava erupts in a straight line upwards
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: No Lava techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Can only be used by a Kurotsuchi, Rōshi, Dodai or Mei Terumi biography.
    Note: Created by ~Crow~
    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-03-2012 at 02:53 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Resubmitting from old custom jutsu thread here is the link http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=5636

    (Ninjutsu no sutairu: Māku senjō) Ninjutsu Style :Marked Battle Field
    Rank: A

    Range: Short-Mid

    Chakra Cost:30

    Damage points:60

    Description: The user bites his thumb and uses his blood similar to , if he was about to commence a summoning but instead he draws the blood and sticking it on the ground he then focuses on his chakra for some time creating it in large quantities after this the user then releases his chakra along with the blood and channels his chakra around the ground this can be extended up to 15 meters but can not pass any more than that chosen range. When the chakra is being spread and lay out around the 15 meters range the user can detect and sense and detect any incoming offensive attack or underground sneaks made by the opponent.

    Explanation To The Moderator Checking

    This is simply a sensing techniques which is limited to a certain range and allows the opponent to detect enemy presence, surprise attacks,or suspicious happening around that area which is 15 meters from the opponent any more will make the jutsu ineffective, and thus this jutsu is actually used against the underground attacks and lightning strikes basically its to make the user aware during the battle field the only difference is it is withing a radius or range.

    ±± Declined ±± Instead of posting "explanations" why not actually work on the description of the CJ? The current description is completely and utterly not understandable. why would this do damage? sensing techniques are not approvable unless very different and yours is similar to one. And, did i mention its impossible to understand?

    (Ninjutsu no sutairu: Māku senjō) Ninjutsu Style :Marked Battle Field
    Rank: A

    Range: Short-Mid

    Chakra Cost:30

    Damage points:60

    Description: The user bites his thumb and uses and sucks the blood from it , similar to if he was about to commence a summoning. He draws the blood and sticks it on the ground then then focuses on his chakra for some time channeling it up in massive quantities. After this the user then releases his chakra along with the blood and channels his chakra around the ground this can be extended up to 11 meters but can not go larger than that.When done this jutu will allow the opponent to sense and pick up on any sneak attacks or uNderground movements done by the opponent within the range which has chakra has bee distributed on.

    Can be used 3 times a battle

    The user must wait three turns to use again.

    Can not use a rank and above for the next turn.

    I worked on my grammar and use punctuation an full stop in my description of the jutus/technique better i change the range at which the can flow to 11 meters making it less over powered and leaving the opponent chances of countering it appropriately.
    ~Declined~ It makes a bit more sense, but again yours is similar to other sensing techniques. Also, how does this do any damage whatsoever?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-03-2012 at 02:55 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ( Genjutsu: Akumu no *******)-Genjutsu:Temple of Nightmares
    Type: Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short to long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:This is a genjutsu where the user make their opponent believe that the user has summoned a giant temple from the ground and surrounded the opponent with it the temple appears to be made out of rock leaving the opponent to believe its a strong Doton Jutsu as the opponent tries to find their way out of the temple the user will appear in various locations and or rooms and strike the opponet with a bladed weapon may it be a sword or a kunia the strikes are not deadly strikes as the opponent makes it from room to room of the temple the user will appear to only slightly slash the opponents armslegs and minor cuts on the chest the temple appears to have 10 different rooms. And only one exit that's at the top of the temples roof as the opponent believes he has made it through the last room the temple will start to cave in immeditly when in real life the opponent will collapse from mental exhaustion unless broken out of by the opponent

    Restrictions
    *This Jutsu may only be used by -Itachi- unless Taught to another member
    *This jutsu will stay in effect for two turns or until the opponent breaks the Genjutsu
    *This Jutsu takes away the use of any Genjutsu from the user for the Rest of the Battle
    *If this Jutsugoes the full two turns the user will go temporaly insane and will remain that way for three turns
    *This Genjutsu leaves the User extremely exhausted the minute the genjutsu is activated
    *This Genjutsu can not effect more then one Target at the time of use leaving the opponents teammate/ clone if any to free the target from this Genjutsu
    *The User of this Genjutsu. will not be allowed to use any S-Ranked Jutsus or above for atleat four turns from the moment this genjutsu is activated
    ~Declined~ Doesn't make much sense, honestly. How does the opponent collapse from minor mental damage? Also, to what extent does the user's insanity affect them?


    (Raitoningurirīsu: Bakuhatsu no bokkusu)- Ligthning Release:Explosion Box
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:=he user will gather up a extreme amount of Raiton Chakra after and do four Handsigns [Ram+Snake+Horse+Bird] after doing these Handsigns the user will release the Raiton chakra and spread it throughout the Air after spreading out the Chakra the user will change the Raiton chakra into actually lightning and have it surround the opponent in the shape of a box. As the Lightning Box surrounds the opponet the user will do the Ram handsign again cause the surrounding Lightning to shoot inwards at the opponent shocking the opponent to near death ending in a big explosion

    Restrictions:
    *This Jutsu may only be Taugh by -Itachi-
    *This Jutsu May only be used once a Battle
    *This Jutsu Leaves the user Exhausted and damages by the stray strikes of lightningand the Explosion
    *This Jutsu does not kill the Opponent but brings them close to death and gives them Major injuries
    *This Jutsu takes up to One complete turn to activate
    *This Jutsu Can only cover the range it was used in (so if the opponent is in long range when this jutsu is used the Box will only cover Long Range )
    *The user of this Jutsu can not use A-Ranked or above Jutsus of any kind of up to 3 Turns
    ~Pending~ It seems alright, but what exactly does the bolded mean?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-03-2012 at 03:01 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ikazuchi Uesama Fainaru Bentsu) - Thunder Emperor Final Vent
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Close-Short (self)
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: n/a
    Description: When the user is in his Thunder Emperor Mode, his fighting spirit and intent increases and finally resulting him to release his wind and water abilities to gain more power in his lightning affinity. Like the Fourth Raikage, the effect is the user's nerve become more stimulated and speeds up the neural synapse in order to react faster. However the user now cannot use Wind and Water jutsus and the Fire jutsu is limited to a certain rank.
    Note:
    - Must use Thunder Emperor to use this jutsu
    - Can only use Katon up to A-rank
    - Raiton damage increases to 75%
    - Fuuton and Suiton damage intake increases to 75%
    - Lasts for only 3 turns
    ~Declined~ Please no Raiton Shroud rip-offs with random restrictions like Fire up to A-rank only.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Kangaroo
    Scroll Owner: Wesobi
    Other Users who have signed contract: Alternative, Nafan
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    ~Pending~ Get permission from Gin-sama first...
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Mosquito
    Scroll Owner: Yanto
    Other Users who have signed contract:
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    ~Contract Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Sorry, I can't really quote properly cause the thread has been closed..
    (Jigoku no ringu)- Ring of Hell
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage:
    Description: The user will wear a ring on his or her right hand. The ring is locked with a tremendous amount of chakra that only certain users may be capable of harnessing. The chakra is a different color then the normal blue it is a metallic color looking almost silvery. It is a black color though it is made from tungsten one of the strongest metals around.
    Ability:
    The ring gives the user a substantially higher amount of chakra for the user to use, though when taken off the users health will decrease.
    - -50 health after full use.
    - Full use= 6 turns used


    The chakra will look a lot like the chakra that the user has when using the curse mark



    ±± Declined ±± Ok...and what does this do...yet again you failed to explain. Saying it gives you further chakra is useless and simply doesn't state a thing. What does this weapon give you? what can you do with it? You simply state it takes health (another thing with no impact in our RP) and nothing more. One more change then DNR. Its a waste of time to submit such useless things mate. Oh and next time bold the changed parts or i won't check it.

    (Jigoku no ringu)- Ring of Hell
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage:
    Description: The user will wear a ring on his or her right hand. The ring is locked with a tremendous amount of chakra that only certain users may be capable of harnessing. The chakra is a different color then the normal blue it is a metallic color looking almost silvery. It is a black color though it is made from tungsten one of the strongest metals around.
    Lvl 1 use.
    Chakra cost: (40)
    Range: Depends on the weapon used
    (Short term) Weapon creation
    The user may manipulate the chakra to make it into almost any weapon ie. Sword, flail, bullet (not gun just the bullet), and any other imaginable (that is allowed by NB’s rules)
    Short term Restrictions
    ~When in use (Weapons actually being used) other jutsus can not be used

    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kuro Henshintan)-Black Shapeshifter
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A(30 for every shape change)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The Black Shapeshifter is a weapon made of rare metals that can be found only on high mountains.The weapon can change into two diferent forms.It's primary form is a form of a long black katana.The second form is a form of a long black scythe with a red edge that has a long thick wire conected to it that is held on the back of a shinobi.

    ~Note:The weapons form can be changed only twice per battle.


    ~Approved~

    Jutsu for this weapon

    (Rensa Raikou Baindo)-Chain Lighning Bind
    Type:Supplementary/Atack/Defence
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description:The user using his Black Shapeshifter in it's scythe mode spreads the thick wire around the battlefield in a shape that looks a little like a spiderweb.When the opponent inside the last line of the chain the user slams his scythe to the ground and the wire wraps around the oponent emiting electricity,shocking the oponent.The force of the electric atack is equal to a C rank lighning atack.
    ~Note:Can only be used with the Black Shapeshifter in scythe mode.
    ~Note:Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Declined~ If this is a B-rank technique, why does it only do up to C-rank damage. I'd advise you to bump it up to B-rank.

    (Kurenai Raikou Bakuha)-Crimson Lighning Blast
    Type:Atack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user using his Black Shapeshifter in sword mode sends his chakra to the sword.Crimson colour electricity will start spining around the blade of the sword. When the enemy is hit by any side of the blade of the sword,the electricity will enter the oponents body,badly damaging his inner organs.If the oponent defends against the sword while the crimson electricity is spining with a metal weapon the electricity will past through it and make the same damage to the oponent.The user can cause damage to himself if he touches the blade of the sword.
    ~Note:Can only be used with the Black Shapeshifter in it's primary form.
    ~Note:Can only be used twice per battle.
    ~Note:The user can perform only C rank and below lighning jutsu in the turn this jutsu has been used.
    ~The user must wait two turns after he used this jutsu to perform it again.
    Change anything you want,if you want.
    ~Declined~ Please define the bolded. "If the opponent defends" is vague. In what manner of the opponent's defense will the sword still have an effect?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Weapon: Ryūkyū Kotōmaru (竜糾虎淘丸, Dragon-Seeking Tiger Culler)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage: N/A
    Chakra: N/A
    Description:
    The sword is normal at first. But when fed chakra, Kotōmaru becomes a deadly weapon of destruction. When the user feeds the sword chakra, a mass of dense energy erupts around the user obscuring the vision of others. When the energy clears the weilder is found with a new attire.



    A dragon head's head envelops the user's shoulder and grey strips of cloth cover the forearm. Kotōmaru's blade is now entirely composed of blue energy, and a cape of the same color as the cloth drapes the user's back. Two slivers of blue energy float next to the user's right shoulder, and a disc next to the user's right. The user also has a cape on their waist to foot.

    A charged Kotōmaru immensly increases the user's strength and also speed and defense increase. This is achieved through the chakra enhanced attire and the actual weapon. The chakra condenses (Not sure if that's the right word) the user's weight so that in short, they are extremely lightweight during movement, but certain aspect (Such as strength) are unaffected. The blade of energy, is the main source of strength. The energy is absolute raw power. The energy works similar to a high powered water machine used to cut steel. The strength has less to do with the user, and more to do with the actual weapon. The chakra infused with the attire is hardened and molded by an ancient technique that creates the kind of feel of a lightweight steel. The user will still feel the impact of an attack, but physical injury will be much lessened.

    Strengths:
    -Blade is indestructible (It is just pure energy)
    -Blade can be extended till mid range in a swing (Max)
    -The user's speed is boosted tenfold. Through the attire which is chakra infused causing the user to be able to move swiftly through the battle field without resistance and yet full control. (-1 To Kotōmaru Complete)
    -User has absolute defense against D-rank techniques
    -During Speed boosting, the user can move straight in to certain techniques without recoil or damage. (C-Rank and below)
    -The time of Kotōmaru Complete (4-turns) begins in the next turn

    Elemental Strengths:
    Suiton (Defense): Can vapourize water technique (Up to C-rank)
    Fuuton (Defense): Weakens all Wind techniques (2-ranks) {Through massive energy of the sword and the attire causing Pressure changes around the user weakening Wind Techniques}

    Weaknesses:
    -Blade can only extend twice
    -User can only use the Speed Boost twice
    -Absolute Defense can only be used twice.
    -Kotōmaru Complete only lasts 4 turns MAX (Some techniques reduce length of Kotōmaru Complete)
    -Kotōmaru disintergrates to the Shrine it is from to recharge it's energy (Will be gone for the rest of the battle)
    -The user's right arm will be damaged from the use of Kotōmaru Complete
    -Activation of Kotōmaru Complete takes up 2 moves instead of 1

    Note: Can only be weilded By ~CoOkie Monster~

    Note to Scorps: The last Weakness "-Activation of Kotōmaru Complete takes up 2 moves instead of 1" if it's possible, could it be scratched out. If it balances the weapons abilities then it can stay

    Oh and I couldn't exactly quote from the last declined one cause it's closed. But I looked at your comment and I bolded what I think should correct the criteria.

    ~Declined~ Doesn't this seem a bit OP to you?
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    Name:Ryūkyū Zesshō Kentai (竜糾虎淘丸, Dragon-Seeking Finishing Thrust Combination)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack (Combo)
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage: 80
    Chakra: 40
    Description: During Kotōmaru Complete state the user charges chakra and Koto's energy. The user the uses an extreme speed boost to dive past the opponent slashing him. The user then straight after comes back and slashes the target through the back and stops in front of the user. The user then manipulate Kotōmaru's energy as the user swipes in an Uppercut motion stunning the target as the sword engulfs the user in a form a Energy Dragon. The user then comes down hard on the Opponent extending the sword to mid-range.
    -Can only be used once
    -Kotōmaru Complete ends immediatly
    -Counts as 2 moves instead of one
    `Can Only be used by Kotōmaru weilders
    ~Declined~ Above Weapon was Declined
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I was told by someone that these restrictions for my weapon seem more set for a heavy forbidden type attack so Im resubmitting:

    "Bakusaiga"
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description: "Bakusaiga" the weapon of legend that gave the holder the supposed power of a tailed demon. Whoever held this weapon would get a very dense chakra so ominous that they were put into legends and folk tales. Taiketsu Yagami found this sword and the truth behind it came with a tablet only readable by those combatible with the chakra. The sword's abilities actually come from a monster known as "Kaze Yama" A artificial chakra monster who's chakra resembled wind and had chakra levels so dense and high, it was considered a 0 tailed beast. The Sage of Six Path's decendent was able to kill off the monster and seal his chakra into the sword while engraving a seal that allowed the chakra to mix with the person who held it if compatable. When the user releases the seal, they become infused with the chakra making them a monster in a sense by giving them demonic chakra with very high chakra levels. The user's most distinguishing features are his godly like blue eyes and chakra streaming from his body in the form of a demonic wind.

    ~Abilities:
    -This sword syncs with the user making the user's chakra become very dense and demonic while taking on a green-blue hue in the form of wind, increasing the power of non-elemental ninjutsu[+5] aswell as making all chakra based techniques to be equal to an elemental technique of the same rank[+10].
    -The amount of chakra being channeled causes the user's chakra levels to rise substantually. (They can be considered a tailed beast without a tail like Kisame)
    -When a foreign object touches the user's chakra, they get burned in a similar manner to Naruto in his incomplete form since the chakra is so demonic.
    -The sword itself is virtually indestructable due to alloy it is made from and can stand very high temperatures.

    ~Restrictions:
    -While using this sword, the user can only use techniques that require creating the jutsu or element itslef since this chakra can't be channled into foreign objects(except the sword itself).
    -The sword's granted abilities last 5 turns after activation
    -After the effects go away (after 5 turns) the user needs 2 turns to recuporate only being able to use B-rank and below techniques
    -The arm carrying the sword becomes paralyzed (no more hand sealed jutsus)
    -Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Yagami and those deemed worthy




    Declined.
    Resubmitting:

    "Bakusaiga"
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description: "Bakusaiga" the weapon of legend that gave the holder the supposed power of a tailed demon. Whoever held this weapon would get a very dense chakra so ominous that they were put into legends and folk tales. Taiketsu Yagami found this sword and the truth behind it came with a tablet only readable by those combatible with the chakra. The sword's abilities actually come from a monster known as "Yama" A artificial chakra monster with chakra levels so dense and high, it was considered a 0 tailed beast. The Sage of Six Path's decendent was able to kill off the monster and seal his chakra into the sword while engraving a seal that allowed the chakra to mix with the person who held it if compatable. When the user releases the seal, they become infused with the chakra making them a monster in a sense and the user's most distinguishing features are his godly like blue eyes and chakra streaming from his body in the form of a demonic wind..

    ~Abilities:
    -This sword syncs with the user making the user's chakra become very dense and demonic while taking on a green hue, increasing the power of non-elemental ninjutsu[+5] aswell as making all chakra based techniques to be equal to an elemental technique of the same rank.
    -The amount of chakra being channeled causes the user's chakra levels to rise substantually. (They can be considered a tailed beast without a tail like Kisame)
    -Once activated. the user will snap out of any genjutst A-rank and below and be immune to B-rank and below while active.
    -The sword itself is virtually indestructable due to alloy it is made from and can stand very high temperatures.

    ~Restrictions:
    -While using this sword, the user can only use techniques that require creating the jutsu or element itslef since this chakra can't be channled into foreign objects.
    -The sword's granted abilities last 5 turns after activation
    -The user suffers with physical shut down in the arm that released the seal and a large drawback on the the user's chakra system. (No more hand seals and only able to perform A-rank and below techniques for the rest of battle.)
    -The user is limited to only two moves a turn while this is active
    -Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Yagami (Anyone else, the chakra would severly injure as it can't mix with theirs.)



    ±± Declined ±± Do Not Resubmit. No Bijuu-wannabe variations can be accepted.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Suiton: Koi Kihou) Water Release: Dense Pressure
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After the user catches their opponent in "Water Style: Water Prison" the user will make a single handseal with their free hand. this causes the pressure of the water to build as if going deep into water, this causes the trapped opponent ear drums to burst. the pressure will continue to build until the opponent is completely crushed by the Jutsu, however because the user's hand is withing the water, their hand will be crushed as well.
    Note:
    -Can only be used after "Water Style: Water Prison"
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

    ~Declined~ This should rather be a Forbidden Jutsu because it crushes the user's arm. Also, restrict it to once per battle (you'll likely not need more). Otherwise, it's fine.
    This is the last submission of this cycle, I didn't want to edit my old post as RokuNR has already checked it..

    (Suiton: Koi Kihou) Water Release: Dense Pressure
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 100
    Description: After the user catches their opponent in "Water Style: Water Prison" the user will make a single handseal with their free hand. this causes the pressure of the water to build as if going deep into water, this causes the trapped opponent ear drums to burst. the pressure will continue to build until the opponent is completely crushed by the Jutsu, however because the user's hand is withing the water, their hand will be crushed as well.
    Note:
    -Can only be used after "Water Style: Water Prison"
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ikazuchi Uesama Seiteki Tsukainotori) - Thunder Emperor Static Remnant
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Close-Short (self)
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The Thunder Emperor while retreating or moving to another location leaves a lightning clone that can electrocute the opponent when he/she touches it. The lightning clone cannot move and can be noticed by any ninja above Jounin rank through its bright light of lightning glowing inside it.
    Note: Must use Thunder Emperor Mode
    ~Declined~ No restrictions and generic. Also, why would only Jounin-level opponents and higher be able to see it? You didn't note any special properties about it. Gennin and Chunin aren't blind.



    (Ikazuchi Uesama Saishuu Goku) - Thunder Emperor Last Words
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Close-Short (self)
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: The Thunder Emperor releases points his left index finger to the sky while his right hand is pointed to the opponent. While in that state a large lightning bolt will hit the enemy and after that thunderclaps can be heard. The thunder brings a loud noise to the enemy and makes the opponent's ears bleed. The opponent will be fallen into a genjutsu seeing himself being electrocuted by his loved ones. The user must stay in his position in order to continue the jutsu. He can be stopped if he is disturbed. The jutsu, if perfectly executed with no disturbances, will last for 2 turns. If he is disturbed, the thunder emperor mode deactivates and cannot be used again.
    ~Declined~ Overpowered, no restrictions, and a genjutsu after hitting the opponent with lightning and having the opponent's ears bleed? I don't think so.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Shindou Katana: Sword of Vibration
    Rank:S
    Type: Weapon/ Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Range:Short-Long
    Descrition: The "Sword of Vibration" is a blade that is made by using very thin and fine strings of metal put together into a strong blade. It looks as if it's a regular blade as the strings are combined in a microscopic level and the opponent won't be able to see. It is just as hard as a regular katana however with a flick of a finger on the blade. Creates a constant vibration at a frequency that a human can not hear. Thus making it able to cut through anything with ease. The blade itself has an affinity to wind, therefore once the user infuse it with fuuton chakra it has the ability to create sound in a frequency level that no human can hear. Thus putting the opponent in a genjutsu where they won't be able to detect right away. Once the Genjutsu has been applied the opponent won't be able to hear any movements when the user is moving or performing any jutsu.

    Note: A rank Katon jutsu directed at the blade will cause the blade to stop vibrating and cancels the Genjutsu.
    Note: Can deflect up to B rank Fuuton jutsu. Only 3 times per battle
    Note: Always have to flick the blade with a finger or other means (like hitting a pebble) to start the vibration and counts as 1 move of the 3 moves allowed.
    Note: Needs only one hand seal to perform fuuton jutsu when wielding it.
    Note: Genjutsu lasts 2 turns.
    Note: Genjutsu can only be used twice per battle and if it's canceled the first time can't use it again for the remaining of the battle.
    Note: Can only be wielded by NineVision and those he allows.
    ~Declined~ Seriously? Do not Resubmit


    (Fuuton: Ekusupuro-Jon Uindo): Wind Release: Wind Explosion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: During movement of the user. The user will release a burst of exploding wind towards the bottom of their feet to move at the speed of sound. It will appear to the opponent as the user had teleported, however this is not the case. Anyone with a KG will be able to track the users movements up to a certain point before losing them at the last second.

    Note: User has to be moving to use this jutsu.
    Note: Can be used three times per battle.
    Note: Can't use to move in the air or fly around
    Note: Can use it to change direction but counts as 2 moves from the 3 allowed per turn.
    Note: Can only use this to move within the line of sight. (Meaning can't go around walls without changing directions)
    Note: If ran into something the user will take -50 damage as a result of the great speed
    Note: Can only be taught by NineVision
    ~Declined~ Please better explain the last part. A few Naruto characters can already react to supersonic attacks. Also, anyone with a KG doesn't make any sense as it'd be like assuming Ice Release users have better reactions than the average ninja. There's no basis. I believe you meant to say Doujutsu users.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    -Resubmission of Roshida Mode-

    (Roshida Mode) - Roshida Mode
    Type: Mode
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user marks their eyes and face with blood so that it appears as tears of blood. Within one turn, the blood turns black and the user has entered a mode known as Roshida Mode. The user's weight decreases slightly, they appear to wear a cloak of brightly or darkly colored feathers, they grow wings that are capable of flight, and their hands grow long talons. (See image below)
    ~Lasts for up to 3 turns.
    ~Usable once per battle.
    ~Users must sign the hummingbird contract.
    ~The user can summon Hummingbird summon without sacrificing blood and with only 1 hand seal.
    ~During use, the user's speed and jumping height increases due to their decreased weight. The user can also use Roshida Jutsu while in this mode.
    ~After use, the user's speed and jumping ability is decreased slightly due to the adjustment in their return to normal weight. The user will feel drained after use.


    ~Pending~ Need another mod to check this.
    ±±Declined±± Do not resubmit.
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    (Roshida Jutsu: Tenshi no Uta) - Roshida Jutsu: Song of the Angels
    Type: Genjutsu; Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user sings a beautiful song that causes the opponent to fall asleep and hallucinate that they are still completing the task they were previously occupying themselves with. Their body goes numb, losing their sense of feel.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be used by a hummingbird or a human in Roshida Mode.
    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

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    (Roshida Jutsu: Tori no Kuchi) - Roshida Jutsu: Mouth of Birds
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user bites their tongue, leaking blood onto the summoning tattoo placed on it. The user then opens their mouth, and thousands of sharp-beaked hummingbirds of the sword-billed variety who attack the target from all angles.
    ~The user must be a hummingbird or a human in Roshida Mode.
    ~Declined~ Restrictions?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I've still got one more submission for the week.

    (Kugutsu: X no Mai) - Puppetry Technique: Dance of the X
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    • This is a technique which requires the use of three puppets. Exerting their strength, the user will make two of the puppets fly into the air. Then with a quick motion, they will fly down at the target, charging at them with sharp weapons in a X formation. Then the user will control the third puppet to use a weapon to pierce the target's body when disoriented.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used three times in battle.
    • All the puppets must have a weapon of some sort for the technique to work.
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by WastedMonkey
    Kanshō and Bakuya
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release red electrical current that will shock the opponent making them drop the sword. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword will return to the wielder much like a boomerang.

    Note: If not wielded in the beginning of the match the sword must be summoned by the user unless stated.
    Note: Summoning the swords count as a jutsu.
    Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
    Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey




    when swords is infused with chakra


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    Kanshō and Bakuya
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release red electrical current that will shock the opponent making them drop the sword. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword will return to the wielder much like a boomerang. The sword can also be connect on the hilt to use it as a double edge halbred. when connected you can attach a wire on both ends to use it as a bow as well.

    Note: Attaching the wire counts as a move in the 3 moves per turn rule.
    Note: If not wielded in the beginning of the match the sword must be summoned by the user unless stated.
    Note: Summoning the swords count as a jutsu.
    Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
    Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey




    when swords is infused with chakra



    ~Declined~ Don't get crazy with the attachments. Where do you intend to get arrows from?
     
         
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    (Fuuton: Kanki Kuchi) - Wind Release: Air Vent
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user stomps his foot and sends earth chakra throughout the ground to create many small tunnels underground from him to his opponent, reinforced with hardened earth and forming very quickly. He then blows wind into the tunnel that will emerge at the other end in a pressurized state and pierce through the opponent like spears with the sharpness of the wind element.
    -Usable 3 times per battle

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Kūchū Kōgeki) - Sniper Art: Aerial Assault
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40 (+5 if used with explosives)
    Description: The user shoots up to 9 arrows infused with wind chakra from his bow at a target. Wings of wind appear on the arrows that allows them to control their flight path and even stay airborne. The wind chakra enhances their piercing ability and speed. Exploding tags may be hidden on the arrows to cause more damage.
    ~Both Declined~ Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hakke Guraindā horo) 8 Trigrams Grinder Tatter
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Member of the hyuuga bloodline will constantly exert chakra from his palms, creating chakra lines. These chakra lines are extremely sharp, but only be able to reach onto mid-range from the user. From years of training, the user had came to master the flexibility of the arms and as the user is emiting a constant stream of chakra from his palm, as because of the hyuuga's hand movement is extremely fast (his movements becomes a blur), with extreme precise, the user will be able to create a wall, curved in/out wall or a half dome or a (full dome, the user has to be inside) circle (by waving their hands in circles) or creating a full dome in the air (infront of himself), or the user may encircle himself thus having himself be in a giant sphere, if the user wishes infront of themselves. The user may control the size of the technique, and they may create it at anywhere within mid-range in no time. User may control the size of the beam which is exerting from their palms, thus controlling the size, or the distance where the user wishes to create it. This is an extremely fast technique, thus the creation of the technique happens in no time.
    Note:
    ~Can be used by Dr. House
    ~Only be used 3x and no higher then S-ranked Jyuuken in the same round.
    ~Only Master of Jyuuken and A-ranked Taijutsu may use this.
    ~User must at least have Kage level

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. To similar to Hinata's technique.


    re-submit:

    (Jūho 64 tsuki ) – Gentle 64 Pokes
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The hyuuga master had battled a lot of fighters, but had a tough time with battling guys who used armors which isn't solid like Earth. He had learned to have a constant swirling chakra exertion around both of his fingers, in order to evade any kind a damage that the enemies armor might have. This technique will work best on a non-solid chakra armor like if the enemy has covered himself in fire/wind/lightning/water, and Nagashi for example. For an example, as the enemy has brought up a fire armor onto themselves, as the hyuuga approaches him, the hyuuga master will keep a wide swirling chakra exerted from the top of his fingers, which will protect his fingers(meaning the chakra which is exerted from the tip of the finger will disturb/nullify the intended point/area where the hyuuga member will strike) and most of his body from any kind of burning, electricity or whatever may expose it. Like I said, this technique works best if it isn't used against solid chakra armors like steel or earth, or any solid based chakra armor. As the hyuuga has gone through this defense, the hyuuga master then eject his chakra 64 times, causing disruption, as tendon/join/muscle cell injuries within the enemie's chakra system/body. The wide swirling chakra around the user's finger, thus the swirling chakra will be protecting from most of the exposure of the opponent's chakra armor, thus will keep away any danger from the enemy's chakra armor like burning/cutting, or any kind a effects. Tip of the fingers contain the most powerful chakra, and it is the most weakest at the end of its swirls. The swirling of the chakra from the exertion of chakra from the fingers are thick and strong enough to protect the user, in order to be able to poke through jutsus like Nagashi, without taking any harm that could influence the user's future performance. If the user is poking through a not solid forbidden chakra armor, he will take -30 damage, thus making this technique unusable for the rest of the battle.
    Note:
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Doujutsu may see the swirling chakra around the fingers
    ~Can be used 4x
    ~Due to the chakra usage, you can't use S-ranked or above Gentle Fist For the same turn.

    Note for the checker:
    I added this for a restriction:
    ~Due to the chakra usage, you can't use S-ranked or above Gentle Fist For the same turn.
    I added this for description:
    ~I've added that "chakra" armor like you said it
    ~and this to explain that this jutsu isn't just defending the fingers. "The wide swirling chakra around the user's finger, thus the swirling chakra will be protecting from most of the exposure of the opponent's chakra armor, thus will keep away any danger from the enemy's chakra armor like burning/cutting, or any kind a effects. Tip of the fingers contain the most powerful chakra, and it is the most weakest at the end of its swirls. The swirling of the chakra from the exertion of chakra from the fingers are thick and strong enough to protect the user, in order to be able to poke through jutsus like Nagashi, without taking any harm that could influence the user's future performance."

    ±± Declined ±± Creating a swirl of chakra around your fingers won't in any way protect your whole body. It may enable you to poke through an enemy technique one rank lower but you can't in any way protect your whole body. Also, how many strikes can you do with this technique? The way its worded now you'll only be able to do one. You complicated something that is very simple "The user creates a dense swirl of chakra around his main two fingers (index and middle) and uses it like a localized drill that he can use to breach through low rank armor and elemental-armor like techniques such as Earth Spear." You keep adding things on it that keeps making it impossible to be accepted.
    [QUOTE](Jūho 64 tsuki ) – Gentle 64 Pokes
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The hyuuga master had battled a lot of fighters, but had a tough time with battling guys who used chakra armors. He had learned to have a constant exertion from their palms onto their limbs which may be exposed to harm. These chakra which defends the body from damage is constantly exerted from the palms, around the limbs which may be exposed to harm. In order to this, the user has to move his arms in a very fast movement, in order to accomplish the swirling chakra line around their limbs which may be exposed to harm. This technique will work best on a non-solid chakra armor like if the enemy has covered himself in fire/wind/lightning/water, and Nagashi for example. For an example, as the enemy has brought up a fire armor onto themselves, as the hyuuga approaches him, the hyuuga master will stream a fine chakra line from their palms which will enhance their destruction, and protect his limbs and most of his body from any kind of burning, electricity or whatever may expose it. As the hyuuga has gone through this defense, the hyuuga master then eject his chakra 64 times (its a technique consists of 64 strikes), causing disruption, as tendon/join/muscle cell injuries within the enemie's chakra system/body. If technique charged for F-ranked, he may only use this 1x time, meaning can't be used anymore, takes -30 damage, won't be able to use b-ranked or higher Jyuuken for the same, next turn.
    Note:
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Doujutsu may see the exertion of chakra line form palm onto the limbs
    ~Can be used 4x
    ~Due to the chakra usage, you can't use S-ranked or above Gentle Fist For the same turn.
    ~Only Kage may use this.
    ~User has to say whether is it charged for F-ranked, if not, then it is auto S-ranked.

    Note for checker:
    I've added this:These are 64 strikes, as the name states it.
    I've added this for clarification on the swirling chakra: These chakra which defends the body from damage is constantly exerted from the palms, around the limbs which may be exposed to harm. In order to this, the user has to move his arms in a very fast movement, in order to accomplish the swirling chakra line around their limbs which may be exposed to harm.
    Added this: The hyuuga master will stream a fine chakra line from their palms which will enhance their destruction, and protect his limbs and most of his body
    Removed: the "tip of their fingers" idea and I've removed the extra sentences which stated the same thing as I had written in the beginning.
    added this: He had learned to have a constant exertion from their palms onto their limbs which may be exposed to harm.
    added this:As the hyuuga has gone through this defense, the hyuuga master then eject his chakra 64 times (its a technique consists of 64 strikes), causing disruption, as tendon/join/muscle cell injuries within the enemie's chakra system/body.
    added: If technique charged for F-ranked, he may only use this 1x time, meaning can't be used anymore, takes -30 damage, won't be able to use b-ranked or higher Jyuuken for the same, next turn.

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Became a complete complicated useless mess. Sorry but this one has no salvation.


    (Hakke Kyōki no mojiretsu) – Step Strings of Madness
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will raise both of his hand onto either side he wishes, thus making a zig-zag motion as he is sweeping he's hands in the air (lets say diagonally from up to down) He'll release a really wide burst of chakra with chakra lines in the middle, thus throwing back the enemy. Because the chakra lines are within the jutsu, it will cut him severaly, and the burst of chakra will disturb his system.
    Note:
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Can be used 4x
    ~Due to the chakra usage, you can't use S-ranked or above Gentle Fist For the same turn.
    ~Only Sannin may use this.

    ±± Declined ±± To similar to many techniques. This type of technique has been done before both in elemental teachniques and not.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I have a steel bio http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=159303
    (Koton: Hagane yari) Steel Release: Steel Spears
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description: The user will gather there Koton chakra and create a 5 steels spears and throw them diretly at the opponent.
    Note:Must have Steel Release
    Note: Must Be Taught by ~Johninto~
    ~Approved~

    (Koton: Bakkusuchīrufenikkusu) Steel Release: Black Steel Phoenix
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will do 1 hand sign and gather their Koton chakra and create a Phoenix the size of Sasuke's Hawk made out of Black Steel. The user will than send the dragon straight at the opponent. The Phoenix can also block ninja tools.
    Note: Must have Steel Release
    Note: Has to be taught by ~Johninto~
    Note: Usable 4 times a battle
    ~Declined~ Care to specify the "black steel" scheme?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-06-2012 at 10:15 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton: Tsuzuri Raiden) - Lightning Style: Bound Lightning
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user focuses his lightning chakra infront of him and forms a small sequinces of handseals summoning a rod made of lightning, the rod is 2 meters tall and it is thrown towards the target(s) before it disintegrates into four smaller rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile, upon reaching short range it will generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from the four rods surrounding the opponent, so paralizing them, and causing a great amount of damage to their bodies.

    Example; Link

    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user can't use any lightning jutsu for two turns after this jutsu is used.
    ♦ Note: The user can only perform A-Rank and below jutsu of this element, for the rest of the battle.

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    (Raiton: Aka Odori) Lightning Style: Bloody Dance
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus his raiton chakra into his/her fingers tips coverting it to lightning and shoot out a range of ten needles of lightning out of each finger one needle directed torwards the target, and as it reaches short range it will explode into many smaller needles and strike the opponent(s) on different places from different angles, striking vital organs.

    ♦ Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ Note: Canonly be used four times per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user can't use any lightning jutsu for the next two turns.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used if the user has mastered lightning.
    ~Both Declined~ Do not Resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-06-2012 at 10:19 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Weegeeのテンペスト) - Weegee's Tempest.
    Alternate Name: (狂った男の目を通して見た悲しい男 死) - A death of a sad man seen through the eyes of a mad man
    Type: Supplementive/Offensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: Two blades that are attached to the arm. The interesting part of these blades are that they have two different forms. The first form is the blades are held by rubber sticks on the blade hilts. The second form is the blades' hilts will wrap around the user's arm, and there will be no need of the sticks. The user can also extend the actual blade further to attack people with chains made of Tungsten metal, and can be loosen up, or be rigid chains.
    Pictures: First Form: The shape of the hilt of Second Form:
    ~Declined~ Chains? At least give the sword an ability that differentiates it from every other weapon like this.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-06-2012 at 10:21 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fuuton Seppaku: Kakou no Washi) - Wind Pressure style: Decent of the Eagle
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user concentrates his Fuuton chakra throughout the air and by using their mastery of charka control and Fuuton Release, the user manipulates the air pressure (number of air molecules) of a chosen area. Manipulating the air pressure alters the force per unit area exerted on the target by the weight of air above them - and to perform this technique, the user creates a large low pressure column around their target. After the low pressure area is created, the pressure gradient (difference in air pressure) in the atmosphere around the target proceeds to fill the void created by this technique. That is, the air in the atmosphere flows (from high to low pressure) at a very rapid pace downwards onto the target in an attempt to balance out the variation (i.e. due to equilibrium). The result is that a powerful, yet artificial, downburst of wind/air that crashes down and expands outward on the target with a force that could level buildings and trees. This technique can be considered the Fuuton analogous of "Kirin" since it utilizes natural wind, as opposed to Fuuton chakra (the chakra is used to set up the jutsu but once in affect nature takes over).
    *Note: Must have a Wind Affinity.
    *Note: Can only be used twice.
    *Note: No S rank wind techniques the same turn.
    *Note: Must wait at least 2 turns to be used again.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    Based on real life phenomena (Wind Speed & Air Pressure).

    ±± Declined ±± The idea is ok in general but don't put useless restrictions in techniques. Also, i don't see this as an S-Rank. More of an A-Rank. If you want to keep it as S-Rank reduce its use to one time and no other S-Rank wind or above for the same and next turn.


    (Fuuton Seppaku: Taiki Konwaku) - Wind Pressure style: Atmospheric Disturbance
    Rank: S-Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40-50
    Damage: N/A-100
    Description: A technique based on the concept of supplying too much air into a flame (essentially blowing out the flame) - despite being the elemental weakness of fire, wind/air is only good for fire in certain proportion. The user concentrates his Fuuton chakra throughout the air and by using their mastery of charka control and Fuuton Release, the user manipulates the air pressure (number of air molecules) of a chosen area. This technique allows the user to either decrease or increase air pressure; and was developed to combat Fire techniques. This is achieved by rapidly decreasing the air pressure in the location of the flame effectively causing them to be robbed of oxygen thereby completely diminishing the jutsu (only up to A-rank Fire jutsus). Conversely, increasing the air pressure at the location of flames rapidly increases the availability of oxygen which can cause it to violently and prematurely explode (only up to S-rank Fire jutsus).
    *Note: Must have a Wind Affinity.
    *Note: Decreasing air pressure is S-rank.
    *Note: Increasing air pressure is Forbidden.
    *Note: S-rank version can only be used twice.
    *Note: Forbidden version can only be used once.
    *Note: No S-rank techniques in the same turn.
    *Note: When Forbidden version is used, the user's speed is reduced in half for 2 turns after activation.
    *Note: When Forbidden version is used, the user can not use any Wind techniques in the next turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Atmosferic pressure manipulation is a CE. The other jutsu is approvable but this isn't.


    (Genjutsu: Hyoumenka Seken) - Illusionary Arts: Shattering World
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs a quick sequence of two handseals (Horse -> Inverted Bird) and traps the target in an illusion where they think that the sky has shattered into millions of pieces of glass which rain down upon them, piercing/skewing their body. This technique is primarily used to serve as a diversion allowing the user to escape or attack.
    *Note: Can only be used thrice.
    *Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout
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    ±± Declined ±± Resubmit with proper chakra info.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-08-2012 at 01:12 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    [Doton: Muchi] - Earth Style: Whip
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    For this Jutsu the shinobi makes a single Ram seal while concentrating on his Doton chakra. Then he causes a whip made of earth to erupt from the ground around the opponent extremely rapidly, meaning extremely fast. This whip is then used to strangle the opponent or restrict his hand or leg movement or in any other way the user sees it fit. In short this is used to create a momentary distraction which would be enough to land a deadly blow.
    -A single whip always erupts from the ground not more.
    -Requires earth style Jutsu mastered.
    ~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-06-2012 at 10:28 PM.

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