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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (kuchiku)- Destruction
    Rank:S
    Type: Weapon/ Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Range:Short
    Descrition: This blade is said to be created by the original creator of the of the seveen swords oif the mist. This sword is said to never have touched human ands/ninja. It is a sword with a long blade, star-shaped tsuba, and a crescent-shaped blade attached to its hilt by a long metal chain, which can extend greatly if necessary by force of will. The chain itself can be used as an attack or to entangle a target. The sword is light weight and is able to cut throught hard solid objects.

    -Can only be used by minato491
    -Can be imbued with all chakra elements
    -When imbued can cut throughht it element weakness up to B rank
    -Not indistructable but very hard to destroy
    -Can only be imbued with one element at a time
    -Needs to have training in all elements to use sword



    ~Declined~ Pretty unoriginal (or, rather, generic). Hundreds of these kinds of weapons exist. There's no need for another.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-02-2012 at 11:02 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suro-dagger)
    throwing daggers
    type:
    weapon
    rank:short
    chakra:N/A(20 if infused an element)
    damage:30+10 if infused an element)
    decription:these are 1 feet(30 centimeters,12 inches long)it can be thrown to long range but can be used as a sword too
    +-given by me only
    +-can be infused with any element (so damage +40)
    note:its like kunai,shiruken
    +-maximum10 daggger can be thrown per battle(max=10)
    ~Declined~ Again, what?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-01-2012 at 09:56 PM.

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    (Karasu Geigei: Karasus Soshi Buntai) - Crow Arts: Crows Element Squad
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user summons five different crows each one has an affinity to a single element.Natsu the fire crow : Natsu is able to spit fire blast up to B rank.Erza the water crow : she is able to spit water up to b rank. Lucy the wind crow: she is able to exhales up to b rank wind.Gray the lightning crow : he is able to create lightning bolts up to b rank.Mugen the earth crw : he is able to create create earth up to b rank.As the user summon the five crows they flies in the sky in a "O" pattern and as the user orders them each one shoot at the opponent b rank blast from it's element creating huge S rank blast has the same size as the Earth and Stone Dragon made of the five elements rushing at the opponent at high speed.
    ❖ Can only be used once per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the Giant Crows contract.
    ❖ Can't use any crow arts techniuqe at the same turn.
    ❖ After creating that blast all the crows that have been summoned to create that blast disappears.
    ~Declined~ 5 Elements in one attack? I don't think so. At least not with these restrictions.


    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user summon two giant crows one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.
    ~Pending~ I don't see why this needs to be an S-ranked jutsu. It's relatively simple and highly linear. The result is stabbing and blunt force. I'd say make this A-rank, but you can give me your opinion.


    (Kaji Doragon Hane Raishuu ) - Fire Dragon's Wing Attack

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:the user rushes forward against two opponents. While doing so, he/she produces a large stream of fire from each of his/her arms, which, when it comes in contact with the foes, burns them and at the same time sends them flying away behind him/her due to the blunt force of the produced fire. Such flames take the rough form of a pair of dragon's wings, thus the name of the attack. This attack can also by employed by first grabbing the targets' heads and then producing the fire to strike them, tor the user can use this attack in different way: the user first jumps into the air, and then ignites two streams of fire from his/her hands,subsequently swinging such streams at his/her opponent and blowing them away.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Requires mastery over Taijutsu.
    ❖ Requires mastery over Naruto Base Taijutus.
    ❖ Can't use any Kaito's taijutsu fire attack at the same turn.
    ❖ Can only use Kaito's Taijutsu fire attack up to A rank at the next turn.
    ❖ Requires mastery over Fire release.

    ~Pending~ Again, I don't see the need for this to be S-ranked if it's mostly blunt force from FIRE. At least, the description did not make it seem fatal enough or devastating.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-02-2012 at 11:10 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kaze no sutairu: Ningen no barūn)- Wind style: Human Balloon
    Rank: C

    Type :Supplementary

    Range: Mid –Long

    Chakra cost:20

    Damage Points:30

    Descriptions: The user open his mouth and inhale wind in it he does this up to the point were his whole body is engulfed with air and wind Given him the shape of a circular balloon. He then adds his pure chakra in the inhaled wind and releases it out in a form of a giant breeze which levitates him up wards during the process and allows him to change directions on a battle field. This can also be used to target the opponent and this is done by the user releasing the wind at the opponent direction in an attempt to force him in a particular direction or make him lose balance.

    Note: Can Be done 3 times a battle

    Note: Can only be used By God Of War/Thun
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    ~Declined~ Explain how you're able to survive inflating yourself with that much air.


    (Kaze no sutairu: Urusasushokku)- Wind style: Ursus shock

    Rank: S

    Type: Attack

    Range: Mid/Long

    Chakra Cost:40

    Damage points: 80

    Description: The user focuses his raw chakra on his palms and keep’s on adding more of his chakra gradually over time till it shares similar identical resemblance to that of a big hot air balloon which has been filled with chakra he then focuses on his wind chakra and infuses it in the chakra ball which makes the ball of chakra become denser and sharper due to the wind which has been infused. He then uses shape manipulation and chakra manipulation and reduces the size of the infused wind chakra ball as he does the region between his two palms get smaller due to the chakra being reduced ,he does this till the chakra ball around his palms gets to a merely 5 meters of distance between each other, then he releases it into the air with great force and speed and direct it to the opponent which upon impact we slice and cut the opponent body tearing apart his skin and body muscles.

    Note: Can only be done once in a battle.

    Note: No S rank can be used in the same turn.

    Note: Can only be used by Thunderbolt/God Of War.

    ~Declined~ This doesn't make much sense. Also, how does one spread their arms to be 5 meters apart?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-02-2012 at 11:15 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    The Jashin Way (Jashin Ikikata)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 30
    Description: Hidan clears his mind and leaves only one thought; Utter destruction to please Lord Jashin. He pumps his chakra to his adrenal glands which puts him in a fit of rage and increased strength. He attacks his foe with his Triple Bladed Scythe to draw blood for The Jashin Ritual. The adrenaline also makes him devoid of feeling the pain of any C-rank or below jutsu that turn.

    -Only a person with a Hidan Bio may use this move.
    -This move may only be taught by defg.
    -This move may only be used twice per battle.


    Curse Wheel (Jashin Norou Kuruma)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: n/a
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Hidan draws the Jashin symbol on the ground and stands in it after getting the blood of an opponent and licking it. Hidan then pierces himself in different places causing the same pain to his foe. Even though opponent can still move,every attack on Hidan affects the foe equally.

    -Only a person with a Hidan Bio may use this move.
    -While in the Curse Wheel th user may not use any jutsu above B-rank


    Curse of Forgiveness (Jashin Noroi Yurushi)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 35
    Description: This move is done when Hidan wants to capture an opponent. Hidan while in the Curse Wheel impales himself near the vital organs thus inflicting immense pain on a foe under his curse. This ritual is done to appease Lord Jashin when Hidan doesn't kill an opponent. The opponent may pass out after the third turn if he/she uses 5 or more jutsu B-rank and above during the three turns

    -Only a person with a Hidan Bio may use this move.
    -Move only lasts for 3 turns and the pain increases with users skill/rank.
    -Move can only be used once in a battle.
    -This move can only be taught by defg.
    ~All Declined~ Pointless
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 03-02-2012 at 11:16 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Last submission, Can't Quote properly since thread is closed.

    Resubmitting

    Hyouton: Kuroi Yuki [Ice Release: Black Snow Technique]
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: All
    Chakra: 25 (+15 per turn)
    Damage: +10 to all jutsu made from Black Snow
    Description: This technique is formed as a result of the user having used Ice Release: Glazed Black Ice Intrusion followed by Ice Release: Ice Technique(making it snow). As Glazed Black Ice Intrusion is a technique requires no handseal and that triggers itself upon sensing Ice or Earth Chakra of the user and manipulating it, Glazed Black Ice Intrusion can only be sensed by Doujutsu users and is triggered with the usage of an Ice or Earth technique, then followed up by Ice Release: Ice Technique that also requires no handseals, makes a very thicker than normal black snow fall across the entire terrain. The snow maintains the properties of Glazed Black Ice Intrusion, allowing all ice techniques made from the black snow have the extra resistance to lightning (takes a lightning jutsu of the same rank to cancel out any jutsu made from black snow) and a +10 damage to all black ice jutsu as a result, losing some of its damage from the former technique. In two turns, the ground will be completely covered in snow up to the ankles. . The user is capable of using the Black Snow to recreate/duplicate any Ice Release techniques that do no originate from inside the body of the user, by manipulating their chakra that is already inside of the Black Snow.
    Note: The user, can use this jutsu in place of creating Glazed Black Ice Intrusion and Ice Technique(to make it snow).
    Note: Other precipitation techniques (rain, snow etc) cannot be used at the same time as or used to cancel out Black Snow unless it is of a higher Rank.
    Note: Only the user of this technique can create other jutsu out of the Black Snow.
    Note: Another Ice user can post Glazed Black Ice Intrusion to use techniques from the Black Snow.
    Note: Must be taught by Oraan Nguyen

    - Took out the Precipitation part like you suggested.
    - Took out 2/3 turns part like you suggested.
    - I FINALLY understand what you are talking about. I had to go and read Typhoon Vortex and Wind and Fire Blast to understand what I was doing wrong. In the description previous to this one, I had placed "having used tech1 with 2 two, the user can....", when what I should have put is "this is formed as a result of the user using tech1 immediately after tech2". Sorry for my incompetence.

    ±± Approved ±± Well done!


    Hyouton: Kuroi Yuki Hyō [Ice Release: Black Snow Leopard]
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (+10 due to being formed Black Snow)
    Description: the user, after having created black snow, forms 3 handseals and creates a large 10 foot tall leopard out of the black snow. The Black Snow Leopard is only capable of being formed on an area that has black snow already on it. The leopard, is incredibly fast, and stands at 5 feet when on all fours and is capable of taking Fire and Lightning Damage up to A Rank without melting. A Rank Fire and Lightning will damage the Black Snow Leopard, however it is capable of reforming 1 turn later as long as Black Snow Technique is still in play. S Ranked Fire or Lightning completely destroys the Black Snow Leopard. This is normally used when a quick attack is needed to unsettle an opponent, causing them to focus more on the leopard than the user from its Raw Speed. The Leopard moves at the speed of Rock Lee without weights as long as it remains running on Black Snow. When not on black snow, the Leopard runs at the speed equivalent to that of a normal leopard.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: Can only reform if Fire or Lightning (A Rank and below) hit the Leopard but are not enough to destroy it.
    Note: Can only be used after Ice Release: Black Snow Technique
    Note: Due to being formed of Black Snow, retains the Lightning Resistance of the technique and +10 damage.
    Note: The Leopard, due to its sheer size, is still trackable by normal eyesight when running at Rock Lee Speed.
    Note: reforming counts as one move.
    Note: Must be taught by Oraan Nguyen

    ±± Approved ±±


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    Hyouton: Kuro Kōri Wa Mitomeru [Ice Release: Black Ice Admission]
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 0
    Description: User does 4 handseals and inserts his Hyouton chakra into the body of up to 2 people. The chosen people are allowed to enter and exit Demonic Ice Mirrors the same way the user can as long as the user is alive. This technique can only be detected by doujutsu users.
    Note: The people chosen are limited to Earth/Lightning/Fire jutsu when traveling from one mirror to the next or else it will interfere with the user's chakra.
    Note: User is capable of using Earth/Lightning/Fire jutsu only when traveling between mirrors.
    Note: The User inserting his chakra into these people can also be used as a way to help escape S Ranked and below Genjutsu.
    Note: Can only be used 3X per battle.
    Note: User must wait 2 turns to use again.
    Note: If used 3x in a battle, user cannot transport through any mirrors for the remainder of the battle
    Note: If put into 1 person, counts as 1/3 jutsu. If in 2 people, counts as 2/3 jutsu.


    ±± Declined ±± The genjutsu part...no no. The Earth, lightning, fire things is actually the opposite. If its Ice, you'd be only able to use Water and Wind otherwise you'd unlabance your chakra and disturb the technique. Also, the same applies to your targets.

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    Last edited by Scorps; 02-26-2012 at 05:05 AM..
    Resubmitting.

    Hyouton: Kuro Kōri Wa Mitomeru [Ice Release: Black Ice Admission]
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User does 4 handseals and inserts his Hyouton chakra into the body of up to 2 people as long as he has physical contact with them. The chosen people are allowed to enter and exit Demonic Ice Mirrors the same way the user can as long as the user is alive. This technique can only be detected by doujutsu users.
    Note: The people chosen are limited to Wind/Water/Ice and any KG/CE jutsu made with the 2 elements. Otherwise it will interfere with the user's chakra.
    Note: User is capable of using Wind/Water/Ice and any KG/CE jutsu made with the 2 elements while the technique is active

    Note: Can only be used 3X per battle.
    Note: User must wait 2 turns to use again.
    Note: If used 3x in a battle, user cannot transport through any mirrors for the remainder of the battle
    Note: If put into 1 person, counts as 1/3 jutsu. If in 2 people, counts as 2/3 jutsu.
    Note: User may dispel this technque with a handseal.
    Note: Can only be used on Ninjas or Samurais.


    -Edited it the way you said and took out the Genjutsu part.

    ±± Approved ±± Editted some things. This would require physical contact.


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    Hyouton: Ieti no Jōsho) Ice Release: Rise of the Black Yeti
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: The User, when the ground is completely covered by ice/snow, sends a massive amount of Hyouton chakra into the ice/snow at the range of the opponent. 4 6 foot tall Yeti monsters made of Black Ice and Snow raise out of the ground to surround the opponent. One attacks from behind the opponent, one attacks from the front, and the other two from the left and right partially coming out of the ground to grab the leg of the opponent keeping them held in place. The Yetis latch onto the opponent like a tongue thats stuck on a pole in the winter and drag them into the ground and to their death. The user is capable of using this technique on up to two opponents, 2 yeti, one to grab a leg and the other to appear at either the front or back of the opponents and try to drag them downwards.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: User must wait 5 turns to use again
    Note: No Ice techniques above B-Rank the previous turn
    Note: No Ice techniques above A-Rank for two turns
    Note: User takes 50 damage due to strain on chakra.
    Note: Can only be taught by Oraan Nguyen

    ±± Declined ±± 2 times for a forbidden rank? drags him to the ground to their death? don't you mean, crushes him against the ground to their death? also, 50 damage from strain on chakra...what does this mean actually in the rp? this is nothing that hard to do that would require this to be forbidden. This would be an S-Rank. Wouldn0t you need to use your black ice "activation" techniques/snow techniques before?


    Hyouton: No Arashi) Ice Release: Black Ice Hail Storm
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 100 (+10 Damage from Black Snow Technique is already applied)
    Description: After Black Snow Technique, the user forms 3 handseals and sends a massive amount of Hyouton chakra in the Black Snow. The already thick Black Snow lumps together into heavy golf ball sized Ice spheres of hail that rain downwards trapping the opponent inside of the Hail Storm and preventing them from leaving the area. If anything tries to leave the area, they will suffer massive damage.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Hail Storm lasts for 2 turns
    Note: User must wait 5 turns to use again
    Note: No Ice techniques above B-Rank the previous turn
    Note: No Ice techniques above A-Rank for two turns
    Note: User takes 50 damage due to strain on chakra.
    Note: Can only be taught by Oraan Nguyen

    Black Snow technique is approved above.


    ±± Declined ±± Op. Most of the notes i used for the former apply to this one.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-04-2012 at 10:18 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Last submission of this cycle.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mathias View Post

    (Houtai Gigei: Rappingu Sono Mashin) - Bandage Arts: Wrapping the Devil
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Attack Points: 40
    Description: By focusing fire chakra in the tip of a bandage, the user will burn his own skin to close an open wound caused by foreign objects that pierced into the user. The user will then manipulate that same bandage to wrap around the wounded area. The user can also extend the bandages up to mid range to either use this as an offensive move by burning the opponent then binding him in place or it could also be used to help out a team mate.

    Notes:
    - Must be taught by Mathias
    ~Declining~ If you heat up a bandage to a temperature that can cauterize a wound, wouldn't the bandage just burn up? And if you are wrapped in them(Which I assume you are, or atleast some of your body parts) then that means you'd burn up.
    Resubmitting:

    (Houtai Gigei: Rappingu Sono Mashin) - Bandage Arts: Wrapping the Devil
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Attack Points: 40
    Description: The user will focus chakra throughout a selected bandage and manipulate it to grab a hold of a metallic object, which in most cases is a kunai. By focusing fire chakra in only the tip of the kunai, the user will burn his own skin to close an open wound caused by foreign objects. The user will then manipulate that same bandage to release the heated kunai towards his target while simultaneously wrapping around the wounded area with a different bandage. The user can also use this technique in an offensive manner by manipulating up to four bandages/kunais and heating the tips to throw them towards the desired target or simply use the bandages as tentacles to slash the opponent with the heated kunais.

    Notes:
    - Must be taught by Mathias
    - If by the second turn the kunais are still being held, the heat will start burning the used bandage.
    ____________
    -Approved-
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal:Margay
    Scroll Owner:xXNocturnusXx
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ~Resubmitting this Jutsu to break it down into two separate techniques and update Tim, as he has grown quite a bit ~

    (Kuchiyose: Timu)- Summoning: Tim
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user summons Tim, the son of Meiunha. Tim is a 4-5 foot tall wolf pup who has the ability to use any water technique up to B-rank that the user knows. Tim can transform into a pure white katana that can cut through nearly anything, including bones and metal, and can turn into a large shield. The sword leaves a white streak 2 feet forward in the area where it was swung for about 2 seconds afterwords that can cut the opponent if they are within range of it, however, the sword uses a great deal of chakra and puts a strain of 10 damage, each turn it is active, on the user.


    (Kuchiyose: Timu)- Summoning: Tim
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user summons Tim, the son of Meiunha. Tim is a young, 4 foot tall white wolf (though he has grown significantly older since his days as a pup) who has the ability to use any water technique up to S-rank that the user knows. Over the years, Tim has developed a rather powerful affinity for combination techniques like his father, Meiunha, and is thus capable of combining water and wind techniques with the user effectively. Due to living on Mount Fang for his entire life, Tim is also more resistant to cold temperatures than other creatures and will not be affected by the bitter conditions of blizzards and snowstorms (does not actually affect the effectiveness of temperature-based attacks on him). In addition to developing an acute sense of smell (though not to the extent of those of the Inuzuka Clan) and a rather keen intellectual mind, Tim is quite skilled in burrowing through snow very quickly, as said activity was a pastime of his in his days as a pup. Tim's white fur and ability to burrow in deep snow makes him especially suitable for quick stealth attacks to deliver minor damage to the opponent through scratches and/or bites. One of Tim's major skills, however, is his ability to transform into a katana and shield (described in following Jutsu).
    ~Can only be summoned once.
    ~Tim cannot be summoned if another wolf is present (unless the latter is Meiunha)
    ~Tim can only use one jutsu per turn and lasts for 4 turns before he disperses (unless dispersed by choice of the user).
    ~While Tim is present on the battlefield, the user cannot use any Water Release jutsu of their own.
    ~In this basic form, Tim is surprisingly not very durable and will disperse if he endures the brunt of an A-rank technique or higher.
    ____________
    -Approved-


    (Kita no Shinsei Na Nuno)- Holy Cloth of the North
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: For the user to activate this technique, Tim must have been summoned prior. Utilizing this technique, Tim can transform into a set of a katana, with a pure white blade and hilt, and a large white and silver shield bearing the symbol 北風 (North Wind). An interesting feature of the sword is, aside from it's immense cutting capabilities that allow it to easily slice through metals and hard alloys, that a constant stream of white energy is emitted up to 3 feet from the tip of the sword, allowing the blade to cut the opponent or target while being out of the range so long as the target is still within the line of fire from up to 3 feet of the blade. The katana is also rather light, allowing it to be handled with great efficiency, swiftness, and comfort. The shield itself is capable of absorbing Wind and some Water (those without a large area of effect) techniques up to A-rank but requires that the user get into a defensive pose to accomplish the feat. In the defensive position, the user can also negate a small percentage of damage from Fire, though the shield does not make the user exempt from the the brunt of the damage resulting from the latter kind of attacks. The primary drawback of the katana and shield are that both pieces of equipment are bound to the user by technique's namesake white cloth which coils around the user's arm halfway to their shoulder, preventing the user from forming any hand seals (thus preventing them from using a vast majority of techniques).
    ~This technique can only be activated once per battle. If the user dispels this form, Tim also disperses and cannot be summoned for the rest of the battle.
    ~This form lasts for 3 turns at maximum. The latter is dependent upon how many turns Tim has been present on the battlefield (the longer he has been present, the shorter this form lasts) It's primary purpose is to help the user to more confidently engage in close combat.
    ~Kenjutsu skills gain a +15 boost in attack power and can be executed more effectively.
    ~Any non-kenjutsu/taijutsu/Kiyoshi techniques used while the sword and shield are active (what techniques they may be that do not require hand seals) are made only 75% as effective.
    ____________
    -Approved-

    __________________________________________________ ________

    ~New Submission~

    (Ongakupou: [No Proper Translation Available])- Music Arts: Flaying of Marsyas
    Type: Genjutsu/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A (+60 after Genjutsu Ends)
    Description: In preparation for this technique, the user will seamlessly strum several strings of a lyre, resulting in a slow, visible sound wave resonating throughout the battlefield from the lyre. Once the wave travels through the entire battlefield after ten seconds, the technique will take effect, and the opponent will first notice the user turn 180 degrees until he appears to be standing on his head, holding the lyre. As this occurs, the opponent's perception of the world becomes like that of a forest with a dark red sky and a golden sun in the clear red sky, and they are promptly bound to a pine tree and turned upside down. Immediately, the opponent will be met with a horrendous noise of a flute failing to be properly sounded and begin to feel their skin being viciously gripped. At this point, the target is literally flayed alive by satyrs until all of their skin is removed from their body, and once the deed is finished, the opponent is forced to look upon their skin as it is suddenly nailed to a pine tree. The genjutsu promptly ends, however, shortly after the opponent is flayed, and the effects of the genjutsu become evident as the opponent is faced with tremendous amounts of physical trauma as a result of enduring such a degree of excruciating pain. The physical trauma, essentially, results in constant unease and trembling throughout the opponent's body, thus making them increasingly sensitive to physical contact--so much so, evidently, that the opponent is highly susceptible to panicking and shrieking at the slightest touch by their opponent physically. The trembling is so prominent, in fact, that it often causes the opponent to stumble and decreases their speed in forming hand seals to a small degree (due to this, hand seals cannot be used at high speed. This does not, however, have an effect on the opponent's ability to use certain jutsu with less hand seals). Interestingly enough, the technique has the effect of making the opponent immune to other genjutsu (save for Tsukuyomi) for the duration of the match, as the physical and psychological trauma the opponent endures is so great that nearly all other forms of illusionary deception become less than adequate in the mind of the opponent.
    ~This jutsu can only be used once per battle.
    ~The trauma period lasts for two turns after the Genjutsu takes effect.
    ~The user cannot use any Music Arts related techniques for four turns after this jutsu.
    ~The User cannot attack during the Illusion.
    ~Because of the brevity and callousness of the illusion, Sharingan Users must possess a 3 Tomoe Sharingan to be capable of breaking this genjutsu without the use of any other genjutsu-breaking special ability.
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Ninpou: Yami no Honoo no Ryu) Ninja Art: Dragon Of The Darkness Flame
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100

    Description: The user will channel massive amount of chakra to purge from their body then controlling it to burst from their arm at rapid speeds similar to pressure damage. As it rushes it takes on the form of a dragon/serpent made out of chakra, swirling around to attack the opponent from any direction above ground. The Dragon is attached to the users arm and can be manipulated to change directions at will. When the dragon is near the user when entering short range from the opponent it will expand also opening its mouth to consume them.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: When the dragon expands its mouth at close range, its big enough to consume a summon like gambunta.
    Note: The user is left vulnerable due to being attached to the dragon.
    Note: The burst of raw chakra levels the ground short range around the user.
    Note: Their dominant hand will be left paralyzed for one turn which means no handseals.
    Note: No A ranks or above of any sort for 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..
    ~Approved~

    Meiton: Kurai Tatsumaki | Dark Release: Dark Tornado
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid- Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100 (+20 if using absorbed chakra)
    Description: The user will build up there chakra in the air, quickly allowing them to create a high powered tornado by adding dark release chakra to it they will manipulate it to rotate rapidly creating a dangerous dark tornado of that thrashes the area with dark matter. This attack can be created infront of or around the opponent, but if the user is withing short range of this attack they will take the same amount of damage.

    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: No Dark release for 3 turns
    Note: No S ranks or above the next turn
    Note: User will take 30 damage too if used at mid
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..
    ~Declined~ You aren't creating Dark Matter. Dark Release is not the same as the Dark Release CE, as this Dark Release has a more applied use. Try to be more practical and creative with the element instead of just destroying things with the element.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Kenjutsu: shadan) Sword Arts: interception
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases chakra unto their sword and quickly coats the sword with pure chakra. Then as the enemies attack is coming at the user, he twists the katana and and hits the attack with the non-sharp part of the katana. As the katana makes contact the user releases chakra and instead of breaking apart the jutsu, the user blocks and sends it to the left or right. Using the katana like a baseball bat to block and send the attack to the side.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Because its pure chakra, it can only block A rank and below elemental jutsu.
    ~Must be Kage rank to use this
    ~It can block S rank pure chakra attacks
    ~Can not send the jutsu back, only to the right or left side of the user
    ~Can only be taught by Piccolosan
    ~Declined~ You expect to deflect an incomming giant fireball that covers the whole field with a small sword? Good luck with that.
    (Kenjutsu: shadan) Sword Arts: interception
    Type: Defensive/Defense
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases chakra unto their sword and quickly coats the sword with pure chakra. Then as the enemies attack is coming at the user, he twists the katana and and hits the attack with the non-sharp part of the katana. As the katana makes contact the user releases chakra and instead of breaking apart the jutsu, the user blocks and sends it to the left or right. Using the katana like a baseball bat to block and send the attack to the side.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Can only block jutsu the size of 2 meters in diameter max
    ~Because its pure chakra, it can only block A rank and below elemental jutsu.
    ~Must be Kage rank to use this
    ~It can block S rank pure chakra attacks
    ~Can not send the jutsu back, only to the right or left side of the user
    ~Can only be taught by Piccolosan
    Declined~ I don't see the point in that restriction, anyway. What S-rank or A-rank Elemental Jutsu are 2 meters in diameter. Too cheap, anyway. You can't simply deflect an S-ranked blast like a baseball.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Scythe of Sorrow
    Type:Weapon
    Rank : B
    Range : Long
    Chakra : N/A (20 if infused with ration)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The blade was created from a meteorite. This unknown substance was used to forge the blade. The body of the scythe is made fully of steel and the steel was hollowed out later to add a spiked chain on the inside that connects to the blade. By adding the spiked chain the scythe was given longer range and made the scythe lethal. The user can channel lightning through the scythe making it move faster and if the chain is not being used the blade can create a lightning slash with the infused ration chakra
    Can only be used by Kisamerox9 and anyone he chooses
    ~Declined~ Be more specific with regards to the scythe's abilities. How much damage can the lightning slash to and to what extent can the lightning be manipulated.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Yōton: Kazan Hibi) - Lava Release: Volcanic Fissure
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This technique is one of the most devastating techniques of the Lava release, similar to the swamp of the underworld technique, after the usage of 3 handseals [Horse → Monkey → Tiger] the user channels his Lava elemental chakra into the ground underneath his opponent's direction, causing a large lake of Lava to form underneath the opponent but instead of sucking the opponent underneath the Lake of lava causes very severe burns to the opponent whenever he comes in contact with them, as the Lake of lava forms with the usage of one additional handseal of "Ram" the user can cause 4 large hands of lava rise up out of the Lake of Lava grabbing the opponent's legs and bringing him back to the Lava if he tries to escape, the hands are visible once they are rising out of the lake of lava due to their size, as one of the hands are at the size of one of the Pillars of the "lightning release: 16 pillar bind" technique, making them hard to avoid.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Can only be used by a Kurotsuchi, Rōshi, Dodai or Mei Terumi biography.
    Declined, the hands should be removed as that would count as a different technique
    (Yōton: Kazan Hibi) - Lava Release: Volcanic Fissure
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This technique is one of the most devastating techniques of the Lava release, similar to the swamp of the underworld technique, after the usage of 3 handseals [Horse → Monkey → Tiger] the user channels his Lava elemental chakra into the ground underneath his opponent's direction, causing a large lake of Lava to form underneath the opponent but instead of sucking the opponent underneath the Lake of lava causes very severe burns to the opponent whenever he comes in contact with them as the Lava suddenly erupts upwards to the sky, however it's drawback is that the Lake of Lava erupts in a straight line upwards
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: No Lava techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Can only be used by a Kurotsuchi, Rōshi, Dodai or Mei Terumi biography.
    Note: Created by ~Crow~
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Resubmitting from old custom jutsu thread here is the link http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=5636

    (Ninjutsu no sutairu: Māku senjō) Ninjutsu Style :Marked Battle Field
    Rank: A

    Range: Short-Mid

    Chakra Cost:30

    Damage points:60

    Description: The user bites his thumb and uses his blood similar to , if he was about to commence a summoning but instead he draws the blood and sticking it on the ground he then focuses on his chakra for some time creating it in large quantities after this the user then releases his chakra along with the blood and channels his chakra around the ground this can be extended up to 15 meters but can not pass any more than that chosen range. When the chakra is being spread and lay out around the 15 meters range the user can detect and sense and detect any incoming offensive attack or underground sneaks made by the opponent.

    Explanation To The Moderator Checking

    This is simply a sensing techniques which is limited to a certain range and allows the opponent to detect enemy presence, surprise attacks,or suspicious happening around that area which is 15 meters from the opponent any more will make the jutsu ineffective, and thus this jutsu is actually used against the underground attacks and lightning strikes basically its to make the user aware during the battle field the only difference is it is withing a radius or range.

    ±± Declined ±± Instead of posting "explanations" why not actually work on the description of the CJ? The current description is completely and utterly not understandable. why would this do damage? sensing techniques are not approvable unless very different and yours is similar to one. And, did i mention its impossible to understand?

    (Ninjutsu no sutairu: Māku senjō) Ninjutsu Style :Marked Battle Field
    Rank: A

    Range: Short-Mid

    Chakra Cost:30

    Damage points:60

    Description: The user bites his thumb and uses and sucks the blood from it , similar to if he was about to commence a summoning. He draws the blood and sticks it on the ground then then focuses on his chakra for some time channeling it up in massive quantities. After this the user then releases his chakra along with the blood and channels his chakra around the ground this can be extended up to 11 meters but can not go larger than that.When done this jutu will allow the opponent to sense and pick up on any sneak attacks or uNderground movements done by the opponent within the range which has chakra has bee distributed on.

    Can be used 3 times a battle

    The user must wait three turns to use again.

    Can not use a rank and above for the next turn.

    I worked on my grammar and use punctuation an full stop in my description of the jutus/technique better i change the range at which the can flow to 11 meters making it less over powered and leaving the opponent chances of countering it appropriately.
    ~Declined~ It makes a bit more sense, but again yours is similar to other sensing techniques. Also, how does this do any damage whatsoever?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ( Genjutsu: Akumu no *******)-Genjutsu:Temple of Nightmares
    Type: Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short to long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:This is a genjutsu where the user make their opponent believe that the user has summoned a giant temple from the ground and surrounded the opponent with it the temple appears to be made out of rock leaving the opponent to believe its a strong Doton Jutsu as the opponent tries to find their way out of the temple the user will appear in various locations and or rooms and strike the opponet with a bladed weapon may it be a sword or a kunia the strikes are not deadly strikes as the opponent makes it from room to room of the temple the user will appear to only slightly slash the opponents armslegs and minor cuts on the chest the temple appears to have 10 different rooms. And only one exit that's at the top of the temples roof as the opponent believes he has made it through the last room the temple will start to cave in immeditly when in real life the opponent will collapse from mental exhaustion unless broken out of by the opponent

    Restrictions
    *This Jutsu may only be used by -Itachi- unless Taught to another member
    *This jutsu will stay in effect for two turns or until the opponent breaks the Genjutsu
    *This Jutsu takes away the use of any Genjutsu from the user for the Rest of the Battle
    *If this Jutsugoes the full two turns the user will go temporaly insane and will remain that way for three turns
    *This Genjutsu leaves the User extremely exhausted the minute the genjutsu is activated
    *This Genjutsu can not effect more then one Target at the time of use leaving the opponents teammate/ clone if any to free the target from this Genjutsu
    *The User of this Genjutsu. will not be allowed to use any S-Ranked Jutsus or above for atleat four turns from the moment this genjutsu is activated
    ~Declined~ Doesn't make much sense, honestly. How does the opponent collapse from minor mental damage? Also, to what extent does the user's insanity affect them?


    (Raitoningurirīsu: Bakuhatsu no bokkusu)- Ligthning Release:Explosion Box
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:=he user will gather up a extreme amount of Raiton Chakra after and do four Handsigns [Ram+Snake+Horse+Bird] after doing these Handsigns the user will release the Raiton chakra and spread it throughout the Air after spreading out the Chakra the user will change the Raiton chakra into actually lightning and have it surround the opponent in the shape of a box. As the Lightning Box surrounds the opponet the user will do the Ram handsign again cause the surrounding Lightning to shoot inwards at the opponent shocking the opponent to near death ending in a big explosion

    Restrictions:
    *This Jutsu may only be Taugh by -Itachi-
    *This Jutsu May only be used once a Battle
    *This Jutsu Leaves the user Exhausted and damages by the stray strikes of lightningand the Explosion
    *This Jutsu does not kill the Opponent but brings them close to death and gives them Major injuries
    *This Jutsu takes up to One complete turn to activate
    *This Jutsu Can only cover the range it was used in (so if the opponent is in long range when this jutsu is used the Box will only cover Long Range )
    *The user of this Jutsu can not use A-Ranked or above Jutsus of any kind of up to 3 Turns
    ~Pending~ It seems alright, but what exactly does the bolded mean?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ikazuchi Uesama Fainaru Bentsu) - Thunder Emperor Final Vent
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Close-Short (self)
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: n/a
    Description: When the user is in his Thunder Emperor Mode, his fighting spirit and intent increases and finally resulting him to release his wind and water abilities to gain more power in his lightning affinity. Like the Fourth Raikage, the effect is the user's nerve become more stimulated and speeds up the neural synapse in order to react faster. However the user now cannot use Wind and Water jutsus and the Fire jutsu is limited to a certain rank.
    Note:
    - Must use Thunder Emperor to use this jutsu
    - Can only use Katon up to A-rank
    - Raiton damage increases to 75%
    - Fuuton and Suiton damage intake increases to 75%
    - Lasts for only 3 turns
    ~Declined~ Please no Raiton Shroud rip-offs with random restrictions like Fire up to A-rank only.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Kangaroo
    Scroll Owner: Wesobi
    Other Users who have signed contract: Alternative, Nafan
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    ~Pending~ Get permission from Gin-sama first...
     
         
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    Summoning Animal: Mosquito
    Scroll Owner: Yanto
    Other Users who have signed contract:
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    ~Contract Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Sorry, I can't really quote properly cause the thread has been closed..
    (Jigoku no ringu)- Ring of Hell
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage:
    Description: The user will wear a ring on his or her right hand. The ring is locked with a tremendous amount of chakra that only certain users may be capable of harnessing. The chakra is a different color then the normal blue it is a metallic color looking almost silvery. It is a black color though it is made from tungsten one of the strongest metals around.
    Ability:
    The ring gives the user a substantially higher amount of chakra for the user to use, though when taken off the users health will decrease.
    - -50 health after full use.
    - Full use= 6 turns used


    The chakra will look a lot like the chakra that the user has when using the curse mark



    ±± Declined ±± Ok...and what does this do...yet again you failed to explain. Saying it gives you further chakra is useless and simply doesn't state a thing. What does this weapon give you? what can you do with it? You simply state it takes health (another thing with no impact in our RP) and nothing more. One more change then DNR. Its a waste of time to submit such useless things mate. Oh and next time bold the changed parts or i won't check it.

    (Jigoku no ringu)- Ring of Hell
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage:
    Description: The user will wear a ring on his or her right hand. The ring is locked with a tremendous amount of chakra that only certain users may be capable of harnessing. The chakra is a different color then the normal blue it is a metallic color looking almost silvery. It is a black color though it is made from tungsten one of the strongest metals around.
    Lvl 1 use.
    Chakra cost: (40)
    Range: Depends on the weapon used
    (Short term) Weapon creation
    The user may manipulate the chakra to make it into almost any weapon ie. Sword, flail, bullet (not gun just the bullet), and any other imaginable (that is allowed by NB’s rules)
    Short term Restrictions
    ~When in use (Weapons actually being used) other jutsus can not be used

    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kuro Henshintan)-Black Shapeshifter
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A(30 for every shape change)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The Black Shapeshifter is a weapon made of rare metals that can be found only on high mountains.The weapon can change into two diferent forms.It's primary form is a form of a long black katana.The second form is a form of a long black scythe with a red edge that has a long thick wire conected to it that is held on the back of a shinobi.

    ~Note:The weapons form can be changed only twice per battle.


    ~Approved~

    Jutsu for this weapon

    (Rensa Raikou Baindo)-Chain Lighning Bind
    Type:Supplementary/Atack/Defence
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description:The user using his Black Shapeshifter in it's scythe mode spreads the thick wire around the battlefield in a shape that looks a little like a spiderweb.When the opponent inside the last line of the chain the user slams his scythe to the ground and the wire wraps around the oponent emiting electricity,shocking the oponent.The force of the electric atack is equal to a C rank lighning atack.
    ~Note:Can only be used with the Black Shapeshifter in scythe mode.
    ~Note:Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Declined~ If this is a B-rank technique, why does it only do up to C-rank damage. I'd advise you to bump it up to B-rank.

    (Kurenai Raikou Bakuha)-Crimson Lighning Blast
    Type:Atack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user using his Black Shapeshifter in sword mode sends his chakra to the sword.Crimson colour electricity will start spining around the blade of the sword. When the enemy is hit by any side of the blade of the sword,the electricity will enter the oponents body,badly damaging his inner organs.If the oponent defends against the sword while the crimson electricity is spining with a metal weapon the electricity will past through it and make the same damage to the oponent.The user can cause damage to himself if he touches the blade of the sword.
    ~Note:Can only be used with the Black Shapeshifter in it's primary form.
    ~Note:Can only be used twice per battle.
    ~Note:The user can perform only C rank and below lighning jutsu in the turn this jutsu has been used.
    ~The user must wait two turns after he used this jutsu to perform it again.
    Change anything you want,if you want.
    ~Declined~ Please define the bolded. "If the opponent defends" is vague. In what manner of the opponent's defense will the sword still have an effect?
     
         
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