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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Genjutsu: Heki Riariti) Illusion Technique: False Reality
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Rank: S- rank
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This jutsu is a more advanced version of the false darkness genjutsu. The false darkness creates a black illusion taking away one of your senses, sight. This jutsu blocks all 5 senses of the person bound in the genjutsu. The target/targets will not be able to hear anything, alls they will see is blackness, they wont be able to smell anything, they wont be able to taste anything (like this will make a difference? ) and they wont be able to feel anything when they go to touch it. This technique was perfected to go with the silence homocide jutsu. This jutsu only stops the feel of touch, not the feel of pain. This is used by the user performing one handseals releasing their chakra into the area around them up to mid range.

    Note: Useable once
    Note: Anyone within mid range can be caught in this illusion
    Note: The user of this technique can't use any other jutsu while it is active (doesn't apply to additional bodies/clones)
    Note: This lasts for up to 3 turns
    Note: Can't use genjutsu for 2 turns after this
    Note: Can't use S ranks in the same turn as this (even with clones)
    Note: Clones can't use this jutsu.
    ~Declined~ Overpowered

    (Raiton: Ikkyou) - Lightning style: Suprise
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - long
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: +1 rank
    Description: This jutsu will be used after the user has used a lightning jutsu. It is similar to the way that when Darui used a lightning jutsu to add to his water jutsu as he was spitting it out against Sasuke. After having release a lightning jutsu, the user will focus more chakra into it. As they do they will focus upon the heat of the lightning itself (30,000 °C (54,000 °F)). In doing so they can do one of two things. They will either:

    1. By adding the extra chakra they will control the heat, causing flames to wrap around the lightning jutsu the user jutsu make, making it a fire lightning combo. This will add 1 rank to the power of the jutsu from the extra chakra used. The fire would stay wrapped around all the lightning as it's being produced from the lightnings heat.

    2. Use their chakra to convert the full heat of the lightning into fire, changing the state of the energy, so that the lightning now becomes a fire attack. So if the user used chidori spear, they would be extending it, then control the heat to change it into a sharp flame spear extending form their hand, changing the chakra nature through the use of physics.

    The user can only used this on one jutsu, and once they have used it they can't change it back.

    Note: Useable 3 times
    Note: Can only be used on A ranks and below
    Note: Can't use water jutsu in the same turn after having used this.
    ~Declined~ Pervy, why is this a Lightning Release technique?


    I based this weapon off scorp's weapon on how he restricted it because of how he explained weapon submissions to me a while back. I've also messaged him with a link to this post to make sure he's ok with it and he has given me permission to make a weapon based off his.

    (Tenbun Bisento) - Destiny Bisento
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:
    Description: This bisento as seen in the image below, is about 1.5 meters long with a 30cm blade on the end. It was forged as a gift for the sage of the sixth paths, made from an unknown metal that made it indestructable. A special red leather bandage has been wrapped around the staff where the user will hold it, to help improve their grip.

    Staff abilities:
    Indestructable
    (Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation (B rank wind) can be used through the blade on the staff and gains two ranks when doing so and can go up to mid range.
    (Hari Jizou) - Underworld Guardian Spikes (B rank nin) gains two ranks when the users is holding the staff and the hair will wrap around the staff handle too. When the user has the staff in hand or on their back, the jutsu doesn't require handseals.
    (Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return can be used through the staff like it was seen being used through a sword and gains 2 ranks when doing so, meaning it can send back A ranks and below.
    Bisento can dispel a Raiton or Doton jutsu up to B-Rank 2 times per battle (this is done by the user channeling his Raiton/Doton chakra into the staff and hitting the jutsu with it, which disrupts, dispels or stops the jutsu) and/or dispel/disrupt/stop 1 complete A-Rank Raiton/Doton jutsu once per battle (with the same principle).
    Kenjutsu techniques can be used through the blade on the end of the staff, to a certain extent. (Such as blowing wind on the blade, releasing a chakra wave ect)

    Resctrictions:
    -All abilities of the staff count towards the move count and don't require hand seals if the user is holding the staff on his hands.
    -When used to counter 1 B-Rank technique it can only be used again to counter another B-Rank.
    -While holding the staff in his hands, the user can't channel Genjutsu.
    -To wield the staffs abilities the user must have it with him either in hand or strapped to his back.
    -The staff can only be wielded by The Pervy Sage; if someone else tries to wield the staff it will become blazing hot burning all the leather burning who ever is holding it.


    ~Declined~ Some of the restrictions don't make sense. Why would you be unable to use Genjutsu? The weapon has too many abilities, as well. And 2 ranks to Peacock Whirlwind Formation? Seriously?

    Dropping:

    (Igneel's atae) - Igneel's Gift
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: N/a
    Chakra cost: N/a
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: Long ago, when Natsu was young and Igneel found him, Igneel gave this special scalf to Natsu. At the time Natsu didn't understand why, but now it's all he has left of his "Father". This scarf has several Kanji seals and formulas said to have been written by a Fire Dragon. Although the full extent of the scarfs power is still unknown, it has been shown that fire techniques used by someone wearing the scarf are slightly more powerful, bigger and faster. The scarf passively feeds on the users chakra to create an aura of fire chakra around him that reduces incoming fire by one rank. The users fire jutsu increase in size and gain +10 damage. Not only this, but the Scalf gives Natsu the determination to fight so that he can meet Igneel again and make him proud, much like Jiraiyas determination. This will increase his will power and will be able to continue to fight even while in pain, such as losing an arm. Natsu always wears this scalf.

    Note: The aura reduces only the damage of Katon techniques, not elemental combinations with fire or fire related CE's or KG.
    Well gen isn't my thing so not bothered about first cj


    (Katon/raiton: Ikkyou) - Fire/lighting style: Suprise
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - long
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: +1 rank
    Description: This jutsu will be used after the user has used a lightning jutsu. It is similar to the way that when Darui used a lightning jutsu to add to his water jutsu as he was spitting it out against Sasuke. After having release a lightning jutsu, the user will focus more chakra into it. As they do they will focus upon the heat of the lightning. In doing so they can do one of two things. They will either:

    1. By adding the extra chakra they will control the heat, causing flames to wrap around the lightning jutsu the user jutsu make, making it a fire lightning combo. This will add 1 rank to the power of the jutsu from the extra chakra used. The fire would stay wrapped around all the lightning as it's being produced from the lightnings heat.

    2. Use their chakra to convert the full heat of the lightning into fire, changing the state of the energy, so that the lightning now becomes a fire attack. So if the user used chidori spear, they would be extending it, then control the heat to change it into a sharp flame spear extending form their hand, changing the chakra nature through the use of physics.

    The user can only used this on one jutsu, and once they have used it they can't change it back.

    Note: Useable 3 times
    Note: Can only be used on A ranks and below
    Note: Can't use water jutsu in the same turn after having used this.

    I changed this from lightning to fire style. I figured that was alls that was wrong with it?
    ~Approved~ Although, keep in mind that chakra lightning is not the same as natural lightning, therefore, I removed the whole 54,000 degrees Fahrenheit part



    I based this weapon off scorp's weapon on how he restricted it because of how he explained weapon submissions to me a while back. I've also messaged him with a link to this post to make sure he's ok with it and he has given me permission to make a weapon based off his.

    (Tenbun Bisento) - Destiny Bisento
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:
    Description: This bisento as seen in the image below, is about 1.5 meters long with a 30cm blade on the end. It was forged as a gift for the sage of the sixth paths, made from an unknown metal that made it indestructable. A special red leather bandage has been wrapped around the staff where the user will hold it, to help improve their grip.

    Staff abilities:
    Indestructable
    (Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation (B rank wind) can be used through the blade on the staff and gains one rank when doing so and can go up to mid range.
    (Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return can be used through the staff like it was seen being used through a sword and gains 2 ranks when doing so, meaning it can send back A ranks and below.
    Bisento can dispel a Raiton jutsu up to B-Rank once per battle (this is done by the user channeling his Raiton chakra into the staff and hitting the jutsu with it, which disrupts, dispels or stops the jutsu) and/or dispel/disrupt/stop 1 complete A-Rank Raiton jutsu once per battle (with the same principle).
    Kenjutsu techniques can be used through the blade on the end of the staff as it was a sword originally that was forged into the staff but only to a certain extent. (Such as blowing wind on the blade, releasing a chakra wave ect)

    Resctrictions:
    -All abilities of the staff count towards the move count and don't require hand seals if the user is holding the staff on his hands.
    -When used to counter 1 B-Rank technique it can only be used again to counter another B-Rank.
    -While holding the staff in his hands, the user can't use genjutsu as their chakra will be continuously channeled into the staff when holding it, and so the user can't focus their chakra into the opponent to create the genjutsu as they would normally do.
    -To wield the staffs abilities the user must have it with him either in hand or strapped to his back.
    -The staff can only be wielded by The Pervy Sage; if someone else tries to wield the staff it will become blazing hot burning all the leather burning who ever is holding it.




    Removed the hair jutsu useage/bonus
    Only adds one rank to peakock wind formation instead of 2
    Reworded the bit about using kenjutsu
    Explained why i can't use gen (not sure if it counts)

    ~Approved~ Removed the Doton part. That's just silly. And I changed it to 1 B-rank and 1 A-rank.


    (Bukku of Zetsubou: Bundan 1 – Fuu no Matsuro) Book of despair: Chapter 1 – Seal of Fate
    Type:Attack
    Rank: Gen = A, Seal = A, Fire = forbidden
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: gen = 30, seal = 30, fire = 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: This is the first sealing spell of the Book of despair, written by the dark lord himself. The book of despair is one of 4 books containing ninjutsu “spells” said to be written by the dark lord himself. The book was found many years ago after being lost for thousands of years and is the only one of its kind. The user will always carry this book. The blank pages of the book have the seals on the for fuuin jutsu, to save the user having to carry scrolls. If they are not carrying it, they will have it sealed within a special seal on their hand or glove if they are wearing one. If the book needs to be summoning it will be a part of this jutsu and will cost 10 chakra. Once the book has been summoned the user will break the seal (B rank) on the book opening it to its first spell, the Seal of Fate. There are 3 stages of this seal.

    Stage 1: Upon breaking the seal to release this jutsu, the user will chant the ancient words written on the page.
    “Let the darkness of hell burn yours soul for eternity”
    Upon doing so, the words of this “spell” will cast genjutsu upon anyone within range of this jutsu who can hear it. The illusion spreads around the field of the night, darkness and a red moon. As it does, dark flames erupt from the ground in a square formation mid-range around the user. This gives off the presences of evil that would send chills down a man’s spine. As the illusion is created, the targets will see hands, like those of zombies, come out of the ground grabbing their legs holding them in place. As this genjutsu is a distraction for the second layer of the jutsu. (This genjutsu is A ranked when it comes to breaking it and it spreads across the field pretty fast)

    Stage 2: As the dark flames of the illusion spread around the field, kanji formula spread across the floor beneath the flames making a circle of kanji formula all around the user, creating one giant seal on the floor. This can’t be seen as it’s hidden within the genjutsu, which is hard for people to tell that they are in. If the user is in the air the kanji formula will be written in the air, making a sealing circle that stops a person from going underground. If the ground is destroyed the seal remains until broken. (The seal written is A ranked and acts in sync with the genjutsu. If the genjutsu is broken, the sealing circle will still continue but can be seen).

    Stage 3: The genjutsu will have been cast distracting the opponent as the seal is set up ready to release the seal of fate. All the kanji formula around the field will light up as a pentagram forms under the targets within the circle so that they are standing on one of the lines. The user will activate the seal by closing the book saying:
    “Release, Seal of Fate”
    As they do, the seal will release spiralling black flames from all the seals in the pentagram. The users won’t be standing on any of the lines, but all his targets will be. These flames will shoot up long range into the air burning all in their path, leaving nothing but the seal of the dark lord burnt into the ground. The circle of flames is as shown in the image below with the user stood in the middle.


    Note: This jutsu takes up 3 of the users jutsu in one turn.
    Note: The jutsu can be ended at any time. Each stage takes up one of the user’s jutsu per turn, so if the user ends the jutsu before stage 3, they can still use one more jutsu ect.
    Note: The genjutsu is A rank. The seal formed on the floor is A rank. The fire released is forbidden ranked.
    Note: The black flames are just normal fire, but the blackness of them is to represent evil in the jutsu.
    Note: Useable once per battle.
    Note: If the 3rd stage is released, the will feel the heat of the flames himself, though he may not touch the fire, the heat given off is unbelieveably hot and so his skin will still be burnt. As it is, the user will be unable to use any form of taijutsu for 2 turns due to the sourness of his skin and won’t be able to use S ranks or above in his next turn.
    Note: The genjutsu spreads around like the first Hokage’s infinity darkness jutsu, and about the same speed, along with the circle of kanji formula.
    Note: The 3rd stage can be released at any point, but isn’t as effective as it would be when the full pentagram forms as less area is covered with the jutsu.
    Note: The seal itself isn’t forbidden ranked, the fire released from it is, the seal holding the fire is A ranked. Like how jiraiya’s sealing method could hold amaterasu.
    Note: No fuuin in the next turn.
    Note: The user can't use any other elements while this is active apart from fire. But he can't use the fire in the same turn, because the 3 stages take up the 3 jutsu per turn, unless the user doesn't release the seal in the same turn

    ~Leaving for Scorps or Emperor~
    ~ First pick a single rank, then we'll look at this again ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-11-2012 at 07:54 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suiton: Tsuin Doragon | Water Release : Twing Raging Water Dragons
    Type: Attack/Supplement
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long.
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (+30 if raining or snowing)
    Description: The user will send their suiton chakra into the sky, manipulating the water present in the atmosphere, materializing two gigantic water dragons that descend down on the opponent, intertwining and spinning around each other at such speeds that they begin to resemble a drill, and also begin to whip up air currents around themselves. The dragons being so long, that their tails remain high in the clouds even when they begin to strike the earth. The radius of the “Drill” being 5 meters wide. If rain/storm clouds are already formed this jutsus power increases by + 30 due to allowing much more water to be materialized due to the already high precipitation levels. This jutsu takes a large physical toll on the user, leaving the user bedraggled and sweating for the rest of the turn as well as leaving their body uncontrollably shaking due to muscle spasms and depleting their suiton chakra reservoirs for the rest of the turn.
    Note: Can only be used 1x
    Note: No other water jutsu for the rest of the turn.
    Note: No hand to hand combat for the rest of the turn due to lethargy.
    Note: No Suiton jutsu for the rest of the turn.

    Quote Originally Posted by -Scaze- View Post
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    (Kuchiyose:Batoidea: Artemis)- Summoning: Batoidea: Artemis
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Artemis, is a Stingray who is just larger than a human. Artemis’s secondary ability is that rather than having a single barbed stinger, he has a indefinite amount. All grown through the stimulation of chakra, as a result the back of Artemis’s tail resembles a spiked flail. Artemis is able to grow stingers on any point of his body, at rapid speeds and shoot them if need be. On the turn that Artemis is summoned he will immediately begin to grow a large amount of stingers, each set of stingers that Artemis grows will be infused with one of the basic 5 elemental chakras. The chakra will stay dormant until required by Artemis or the user. Artemis's main abilitiy is the ability to transform into a stark greyish dark turquoise bow of the finest quality and a quiver. His stingers acting as the arrows that fill the quiver and still retaining their venomous capabilities ( the venom from a single stinger produces paralysation for two turns, on the third the opponent dies). “Quiver” Artemis is able to change the shape of the arrows in accordance to the users will. The user is able to fire the arrow shaped stingers through use of “Bow” Artemis at high speeds with extreme dexterity, while firing the user can add a small amount of basic chakra that reacts with the dormant elemental chakra. Causing the fired stinger to become coated in a aura of elemental chakra that leaves a trail (3m long) behind the arrow at all times that slices anything that it comes in contact with (Within reason). Artemis's abilties allows multiple elemental arrows to be fired simultaneously. If the user fires a lightning or fire coated arrow, he can perform a single hand seal, (Ox) causing the arrow and its coating to explode in a A rank equivalent electrical/fiery discharge sending venomous shrapnel flying all over the place. Once per turn the user is able to fire five arrows each with one of the five basic elements at the same time, activating the dormant element within with a huge surge of basic chakra. Creating a mixed elemental coating that races towards the enemy, taking on the form of a gigantic multi colored arrow equal to Forbidden rank. The arrow demolishes everything in its path while travelling at extreme speeds. This takes a toll on the user as the backlash effect of releasing the combo pulsates throughout their body. Leaving them paralysed for 3 seconds as well as dealing strain to their torso. It also takes a extreme toll on Artemis, who is capable of only releasing two of these per battle. This technique is known as “Maximum Arrow” and has no elemental weaknesses or strengths.

    Note: Artemis can only stay on the field for 5 turns.
    Note:Making the arrow explode counts as a jutsu.
    Note:Firing an element imbued arrow does not count as a jutsu.
    Note:Artemis can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Maximum Arrow Counts as Jutsu
    Note:
    Note:The chakra/elemental chakra imbued stinger arrows are capable of piercing through D rank jutsu that their neutral to, and C rank that their element is strong against.

    ±± Declined ±± The parts are bolded need to be clarified. Also, the idea is awesome. Indeed it is. But you are adding too many abilities to the arrows and the spikes and the chakra and and and and and and and and.... you get my drift. Simplify it.
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    (Kuchiyose:Batoidea: Artemis)- Summoning: Batoidea: Artemis
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Artemis, is a Stingray who is just larger than a human. Artemis’s secondary ability is that rather than having a single barbed stinger, he can have a innumerable amount. All grown through the stimulation of chakra, as a result the back of Artemis’s tail resembles a spiked flail. Artemis is capable of growing hard as steel stingers almost anywhere on his body and ejecting them if need be, on the turn that Artemis is summoned he will begin to grow a large amount of stingers on his body, all imbued with dormant elemental chakra. Artemis's main and most prominent ability however, is the ability to transform himself into a deep sea blue bow and arrow quiver. His stingers acting as the arrows that fill the quiver and still retaining their venomous capabilities ( the venom from a single stinger produces paralysation for two turns, on the third the opponent dies) and changing shape in accordance to Artemis's will. The user is able to fire the arrow shaped stingers through use of “Bow” Artemis at high speeds with extreme dexterity, while firing the user can add a small amount of basic chakra that reacts with the dormant elemental chakra. Causing the fired stinger to become coated in a aura of elemental chakra that leaves a trail (3m long) behind the arrow at all times that slices anything that it comes in contact with (Within reason). Artemis's abilties allows multiple elemental arrows to be fired simultaneously. Once per turn the user is able to fire five arrows each with one of the five basic elements at the same time, activating the dormant element within with a huge surge of basic chakra. Creating a mixed elemental coating that races towards the enemy, taking on the form of a gigantic multi colored arrow equal to Forbidden rank. The arrow demolishes everything in its path while traveling at extreme speeds. This takes a toll on the user as the backlash effect of releasing the combo pulsates throughout their body. Leaving them paralyzed for 3 seconds as well as dealing strain to their torso. It also takes a extreme toll on Artemis, who is capable of only releasing two of these per battle. This technique is known as “Maximum Arrow” and has no elemental weaknesses or strengths.

    Note: Artemis can only stay on the field for 5 turns.
    Note:Firing an element imbued arrow does not count as a jutsu.
    Note:Artemis can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Maximum Arrow Counts as Jutsu
    Note:The chakra/elemental chakra imbued stinger arrows are capable of piercing through D rank jutsu that their element is strong against.

    I removed the exploding arrow thing, and reworded some things in a attempt to make it more understandable.

    Suiton: Sawa | Water Release : Swamp
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long.
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (+30 if raining or snowing)
    Description: The user preforms two handseals and focuses a large amount of suiton chakra beneath their opponent, drawing out a mass of water and moisture from the ground and focusing it beneath their opponent, forcing most of the earth and sediment down, creating a large marshy swamp beneath their opponent. Like Swamp of the Underworld, the size of this swamp relies solely on the amount of chakra used. The swamp produces a incredibly large amount of flammable methane gas. Unlike normal water, the opponent will be unable to focus chakra to their feet to stop themselves from sinking.
    ~Can only be used 3x.

    ~ All declined, do not resubmit. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-11-2012 at 07:57 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Dakrazyebi View Post
    (Kaminari No You Na Boufuu) - Thunderous Gale


    -Notice-
    My CW composes of only the two swords that he is using in the picture below.

    Type: S
    Rank: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:40
    Description:

    Two swords which were said to be forged long ago by the very gods, and thought to be a mere legend. It is said that the swords bring misfortune to all those who come across them. It is said that these swords have many dormant abilities.The swords' name are: Warship Breaker and Zanmaken.
    Warship Breaker has the appearance of a normal sword, while Zanmaken is composed of two blades connected through a hilt. The blades are approximately 8 feet long (4 feet for Zanmaken) and its hilt is roughly a foot long (including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches, the weight of sword is approximately 500 Kg . The swords were forged from a special alloy called Gale, which resides on the highest peak in Kumogakure which is said to be struck by lightning several times a day. The raw material from which the swords were forged is several times harder than the normal steel, as lightning has struck it several times, it is also known to rival diamonds in terms of hardness. The user can only infuse raiton chakra in to the swords, the swords' abilities are as followed:


    -Only raiton chakra can be infused into the swords.
    -The swords are not indestructible but they are far stronger than your average sword due to their size and density.
    -While Raiton chakra is channeled into the swords, the swords gains extra abilities giving the user:

    • +5 to all raiton justu
    • The sword can only be infused with raiton chakra for three turns, afterwards the sword requires a one turn cooldown before it can be infused again.
    • No wind justu above B rank can be used while holding the swords.
    • Can only be wielded by Dakrazyebi and up to [3] people who he sees fit to use.


    Example: 0:27 onwards



    Note: An Example for this jutsu can also be shown in the video above (excluding the huge sword on the last scene.)


    Genjutsu: Sen No Kao No Hīrō (Illusion Technique: Hero Of A Thousand Faces)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: D-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: 20
    Description:

    After making four hand seals, the user casts the genjutsu upon the opponent disrupting his chakra flow, soon after the user manipulates the opponent's sight giving him the illusions of 10 swords floating around the user in a defensive manner, then instills within the oponnent's brain the sight of 1,000 swords falling from the sky. If the opponent falls under the genjutsu and is unable to break out, then the opponent might take somewhat low real damage if he fails to dodge the swords.

    -Note-

    This jutsu can only be used by Dakrazyebi.
    This Genjutsu takes effect while the opponent is within a 10 feet range of the user.

    Note: If you are not satisfied with the 1,000 swords you may decrease the number.


    Summoning Animal: Lightning Tiger.
    Scroll Owner: Dakrazyebi
    Other Users who have signed contract: None Yet.
    Summoning Boss if existing:Ruemon
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Raiku, Raltz, Ryoko
    Description and Background:





    Although they were thought to be extinct long ago, four lightning tigers hid themselves within the land of Kumogakure to seek refuge from extinction. Each one of them seeking a home of their own, headed into different cardinal point borders within Kumogakure, Ruemon to the North, Raiku to the South, Raltz to the West, and Ryoko to the East; adaptation was a requirement in their new home, and so they all evolved and learn how to use the raiton chakra within their bodies, as well as infusing raiton chakra with their enormous fangs that are said to be 2 feet long, surviving in an environment in which they weren't familiar with, took so many hardships and so forth their bodies toughened making their skins unpierceable by normal swords.


    Edit: Feel free to edit anything that you deem necessary, Thank you.

    ±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers

    Resubmitting-

    (Kaminari No You Na Boufuu) - Thunderous Gale


    -Notice-
    My CW composes of only the two swords that he is using in the picture below.

    Type: S
    Rank: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:40
    Description:

    Two swords which were said to be forged long ago by the very gods, and thought to be a mere legend. It is said that the swords bring misfortune to all those who come across them. It is said that these swords have many dormant abilities.The swords' name are: Warship Breaker and Zanmaken.
    Warship Breaker has the appearance of a normal sword, while Zanmaken is composed of two blades connected through a hilt. The blades are approximately 8 feet long (4 feet for Zanmaken) and its hilt is roughly a foot long (including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches, the weight of sword is approximately 500 Kg . The swords were forged from a special alloy called Gale, which resides on the highest peak in Kumogakure which is said to be struck by lightning several times a day. The raw material from which the swords were forged is several times harder than the normal steel, as lightning has struck it several times, it is also known to rival diamonds in terms of hardness. The user can only infuse raiton chakra in to the swords, the swords' abilities are as followed:


    -Only raiton chakra can be infused into the swords.
    -The swords are not indestructible but they are far stronger than your average sword due to their size and density.
    -While Raiton chakra is channeled into the swords, the swords gains extra abilities giving the user:

    • +5 to all raiton justu
    • The sword can only be infused with raiton chakra for three turns, afterwards the sword requires a one turn cooldown before it can be infused again.
    • No wind justu above B rank can be used while holding the swords.
    • Can only be wielded by Dakrazyebi and up to [3] people who he sees fit to use.


    Example: 0:27 onwards



    Note: An Example for this jutsu can also be shown in the video above (excluding the huge sword on the last scene.)

    ~The hell, remove the picture from the middle of the jutsu details ~


    Genjutsu: Sen No Kao No Hīrō (Illusion Technique: Hero Of A Thousand Faces)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: D-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: 20
    Description:

    After making four hand seals, the user casts the genjutsu upon the opponent disrupting his chakra flow, soon after the user manipulates the opponent's sight giving him the illusions of 10 swords floating around the user in a defensive manner, then instills within the oponnent's brain the sight of 1,000 swords falling from the sky. If the opponent falls under the genjutsu and is unable to break out, then the opponent might take somewhat low real damage if he fails to dodge the swords.

    -Note-

    This jutsu can only be used by Dakrazyebi.
    This Genjutsu takes effect while the opponent is within a 10 feet range of the user

    ~ Clearly not a Drank ~

    Note: If you are not satisfied with the 1,000 swords you may decrease the number.


    Summoning Animal: Lightning Tiger.
    Scroll Owner: Dakrazyebi
    Other Users who have signed contract: None Yet.
    Summoning Boss if existing:Ruemon
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Raiku, Raltz, Ryoko
    Description and Background:





    Although they were thought to be extinct long ago, four lightning tigers hid themselves within the land of Kumogakure to seek refuge from extinction. Each one of them seeking a home of their own, headed into different cardinal point borders within Kumogakure, Ruemon to the North, Raiku to the South, Raltz to the West, and Ryoko to the East; adaptation was a requirement in their new home, and so they all evolved and learn how to use the raiton chakra within their bodies, as well as infusing raiton chakra with their enormous fangs that are said to be 2 feet long, surviving in an environment in which they weren't familiar with, took so many hardships and so forth their bodies toughened making their skins unpierceable by normal swords.

    ~ Nothing exists called a 'lightning tiger'. If you want tigers that control lightning, submit a tiger contract ( if it doesn't exist already ) and make custom summons. ~

    Edit: Feel free to edit anything that you deem necessary, Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Rayleigh View Post
    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - Crow Arts : Two In one !!
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user grapes his sword with his right hand then he throw the sword so It travels towards the opponent on a high speed with a vertical pattern.Afterwards and at a sudden time the user performs the "Snake' hand seal turning the sword into two big crows each one has the half size of Gamabunta.As the user turns his sword into two big crows the two crows spin around each other creating a very huge drill made of the two crow's body aiming towards the opponent.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per turn.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique in the same turn nor the next one.
    ❖ Can't use any S ranked technique in the same turn.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract.

    ~ You 'grape' your sword oO ? ~


    [Genjutsu: Karasu Hane Uwappari] - Illusion Technique : Crow's Feather Duster

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user transfer his mind's chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on him causing him to see the user begins to disappear slowly into a feathers till he completely disappears then suddenly the user gets attacked by hundreds of crow's beaks from all the directions causing his body to bleed badly causing him to die.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract..
    ❖ Can't use any other genjutsu on the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use any crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can only be used by Kage ranked Ninjas or above due to their chakra.

    ~ The user gets attacked ? Also, how is this activated ? ~

    [Ninpō : Shinkan] - Ninja Arts : Silence

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing a lightning attack the user is able to control the lightning properties by using his already infused chakra with the lightning attack causing the lightning attack to be silent and allowing the lightning technique to attack the opponent with out making any sound.
    ❖ Can only be used 4 times.

    ~ Nice idea, but won't work. ~
    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - Crow Arts : Two In one !!
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user takes his sword and hold it with his right hand then he throw the sword so It travels towards the opponent on a high speed with a vertical pattern.Afterwards and at a sudden time the user performs the "Snake' hand seal turning the sword into two big crows each one has the half size of Gamabunta.As the user turns his sword into two big crows the two crows spin around each other creating a very huge drill made of the two crow's body aiming towards the opponent.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per turn.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique in the same turn nor the next one.
    ❖ Can't use any S ranked summoning technique in the same turn.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract.

    Edited the bolded parts.

    ~ How does a sword become a crow ? Declined, do not resubmit. ~


    [Genjutsu: Karasu Hane Uwappari] - Illusion Technique : Crow's Feather Duster

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user transfer his mind's chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on him causing him to see the user begins to disappear slowly into a feathers till he completely disappears then suddenly the opponent gets attacked by hundreds of crow's beaks from all the directions causing his body to bleed badly causing him to die.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract..
    ❖ Can't use any other genjutsu on the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use any crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can only be used by Kage ranked Ninjas or above due to their chakra.

    Edited the bolded parts and I clearly stated that the person activaites the technique by transferring his chakra into the opponent's mind.

    ~ I presumed you knew something about genjutsu before submitting this. Let me give you the basics of Genjutsu, something I presume you should know before submitting S-rank ones. All genjutsu work by transferring your chakra into the opponent's mind/chakra system. The question is how. Handseals, sight, sound....~


    Quote Originally Posted by Rayleigh View Post
    ~Resubmitting :

    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the same size as Pein's bird one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.
    ~Declined~ Didn't I tell you to keep it A-rank like 7 submissions ago? Change the rank. The size should be fine.

    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the same size as Pein's bird one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

    ~ How far from the opponent are they summoned ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Updating:

    Quote Originally Posted by Kato Rokuemon View Post
    (Kougake Shippuu) Hurricane Gauntlets
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage: 80
    Chakra: 40 (for abilities)
    Description: The hurricane gauntlets are two gauntlets that cover the users whole forearm.
    They have two abilities, the first is the ability to release wind chakra in the form of hurricanes around the users forearms.
    the second is the abilitly to transform into two swords which can be strengethened by having the user channel wind chakra through the swords making them sharper and stronger.
    The two abilitys are activated in different ways. To activate the hurricanes around the users forearms the user simply has to pump wind chakra through the gauntlets and the gauntlets will make the wind into a violent hurricane around the forearm.
    But to activate the twin sword ability the user performs the tiger handseal and applies chakra, this causes the gauntlets to turn into two swords bound to the users forearms but a chain at the end of the swords hilt.
    When using the hurricane ability of the gauntlets the user can fire the hurricanes that have been created at the opponent up to mid range away (the hurricanes are A Rank).
    One of the main uses of the hurricane ability for the gauntlets is for more powerful close combat fighting.

    The hurricane gauntlets, when active can block projectile/stream type lightning jutsu up to A rank and B/A rank water projectiles, aswell as basic ninja tools by the user pointing his arms towards the jutsu/projectile and applying more chakra to the gauntlets, causing the hurricanes to increase in size and strength. (this is with the hurricane ability) This will cause projectile/stream type lightning jutsu's to be canceled out due to the wind hurricanes and water projectiles will either be blown back towards the opponent or will be re-directed.

    - Cannot perform any wind jutsu whilst the Hurricane Gauntlets are activated
    - Cannot perform jutsu that requires handseals whilst the twin swords ability is active
    - The user can alternate the abilities ie. have a sword active in one hand and the hurricane active in the other
    - The hurricanes that are fired are A rank
    - The hurricanes can only be fired 4 times
    - Firing the hurricanes counts towards the users 3 moves
    - Can block up to A rank projectile/stream type lightning jutsu, B/A rank water projectiles and basic ninja tools up to 4 times.
    - Blocking counts as a move from the 3 per turn.
    - Can only be used by Kato Rokuemon

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    (Kougake Shippuu) Hurricane Gauntlets
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Long
    Damage: 80
    Chakra: 40 (for abilities)
    Description: The hurricane gauntlets are two gauntlets that cover the users whole forearm.
    They have two abilities, the first is the ability to release wind chakra in the form of hurricanes around the users forearms.
    The second is the ability to transform into a single sword which has a whirlwind that is wrapped around the blade of the sword that boosts the strength of the sword and the damage it causes. Also the gauntlets can transform into a bow that has the ability to shape wind chakra into the shape of arrows and fire them.

    The two abilitys are activated in different ways. To activate the hurricanes around the users forearms the user simply has to pump wind chakra through the gauntlets and the gauntlets will make the wind into a violent hurricane around the forearm.
    But to activate the sword ability the user performs the 'Tiger' handseal and applies chakra, this causes the left gauntlet to turn into the single sword bound to the users forearm by a chain at the end of the swords hilt. When the sword is active its damage is increased by +10 due to the whirlwind that is wrapped around the blade.
    To activate the bow ability the user forms the 'Ram' handseal and the right gauntlet turns into a bow with the ability to turn wind chakra applied by the user into arrows that can be fired as projectiles. The arrows are A Ranked and can fire up to Long range.


    When using the hurricane ability of the gauntlets the user can fire the hurricanes that have been created at the opponent up to mid range away (the hurricanes are A Rank).
    One of the main uses of the hurricane ability for the gauntlets is for more powerful close combat fighting.

    The hurricane gauntlets, when active can block projectile/stream type lightning jutsu up to A rank and B/A rank water projectiles, aswell as basic ninja tools by the user pointing his arms towards the jutsu/projectile and applying more chakra to the gauntlets, causing the hurricanes to increase in size and strength. (this is with the hurricane ability) This will cause projectile/stream type lightning jutsu's to be canceled out due to the wind hurricanes and water projectiles will either be blown back towards the opponent or will be re-directed.

    - Cannot perform any wind jutsu whilst the Hurricane Gauntlets are activated
    - The user can alternate the abilities ie. have a sword active in one hand and the hurricane active in the other
    - The hurricanes that are fired are A rank
    - The hurricanes can only be fired 4 times
    - Firing the hurricanes counts towards the users 3 moves
    - Firing arrows count as one of the users 3 moves
    - Can block up to A rank projectile/stream type lightning jutsu, B/A rank water projectiles and basic ninja tools up to 4 times.
    - Blocking counts as a move from the 3 per turn.
    - Can only be used by Kato Rokuemon

    ~ No sets of weapons. Anything that can be gauntlets, swords or bows counts as a set of weapons. ~

    Bolded the changes

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    (Sakura Atogama) Cherry Blossom Replacement
    Type: Supplimentary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user transforms parts of their body into cherry blossom petals. This allows the user to avoid direct damge from physical attacks, but leaves the user suseptable to fire attacks

    -Can only be taught by Kato Rokuemon

    (Raiton: Katai Raiden Tentei) Lightning Style: Leg of the Thunder God
    Type: Offence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will gather his Raiton chakra around his feet and lower leg, the user then creates sparks of lightning allot like chidori, but around their leg. This greatly improves the striking power of the users kicks and delivers the same kind of damage as the chidori

    -Can only be taught by Kato Rokuemon

    ~ Both Declined, do not resubmit. -_-" ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Ekitai Seigen) - Water Release: Liquid Restriction
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (40 if S rank)
    Damage points: 60 (80 if S rank)
    Description: The user performs the Dog -> Boar -> Ram handseals and creates a semi-solid wall of water from a water source. Several strong belts of water shoot out from the wall that can swiftly bind an opponent movements by wrapping around his body or attack by lashing out with the belts. A lightning jutsu can be used to electrify the wall and shock anyone in contact with it. Because of this, if an opponent attempts to break free of the belts using Chidori Nagashi, he will only be shocked with his own jutsu. This jutsu can be performed on a greater scale while utilizing a large water source which increases the strength of this jutsu to S-rank. The amount of water needed for the S-rank version is similar to what is created from the Waterfall Basin and Exploding Water Colliding Wave techniques.
    -Usable 4 times per battle but the S-rank version costs an extra use.
    -No S-rank water techniques next turn

    ~ Approved ~

    (Kuchiyose: Netsu) - Summoning: Netsu
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Netsu, an orange-brown locust 4 meters in height known as the flame locust. With a fire affinity he can perform fire jutsu the summoner knows up to B rank that do not require handseals. By rubbing his legs against another part of his body Netsu may produce a genjutsu inducing sound that makes opponents feel like they are surrounded by raging flames that obstruct their vision.
    -Can be summoned twice per battle
    -Can stay for 4 turns
    -Any techniques used count towards the summoner's 3 moves per turn.
    -Must have signed the locusts contract

    ~ Specify that the genjutsu also counts as one of the moves per turn ~

    (Kuchiyose: Hado) - Summoning: Hado
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Hado, a dark brown locust 4 meters in height known as the earth locust. With an earth affinity he can perform earth jutsu the summoner knows up to B rank that do not require handseals. By rubbing his legs against another part of his body Hado may produce a genjutsu inducing sound that makes opponents see a dome of earth suddenly form around them, leaving them in complete darkness and cut off from outside sounds.
    -Can be summoned twice per battle
    -Can stay for 4 turns
    -Any techniques used count towards the summoner's 3 moves per turn.
    -Must have signed the locusts contract

    ~ Same as above ~

    Link to Contract
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon: Putto-Auto | Fire style: Douse
    Type: Fire
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A (30 if falls on)
    Description: If a static fire is lingering nearby on the ground. The user preforms the tiger hand-sign and channels his chakara into the fire and releases most of its entities through great chakara control and douses the fire in one second leaving burning cinders, also known as red-hot rocks, laying on the ground from the fire. If someone falls on these it deals moderate burns. This may only be used if the fire is not being manipulated by anyone on the battle field. The user cannot use this technique to douse an incoming fire attack.
    Note: Can only be taught be ShikamarUchiha10
    Note: The fire can only be put out if its caused by a A rank or lower fire attack

    ~ Approved ~

    -If minor changes are needed, feel free to make them.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kyöka Suigetsu|Heavenly moon
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:40(-20 per turn)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:*Kyöka suigetsu is a unique sword developed by the famous genjutsu master named Nurarihyon,The lord of pandamoneum.It is made from a special material which was gifted to nurarihyon by hidemoto the 13th heir of the kuramaa clan. The sword has the ability to cut through most of the substance(except diamond hard substance).Kyoka suigetsu has the ability to affect the opponents mind and cause illusions.Its most promising ability is to create multiple images(clones) of the user which even the sharingan can't distinguish(much like in shadow clones).The images appear on the field just like how shadow clones appear.These images of the user can produce the illusion of using various jutsu's which would intimidate and confuse the opponent.If an image of the user is attacked it turns into black smoke.The sword also keeps the user immune from the opponents genjutsu.

    Note:
    >Sword can only be used for a total of 5 turns
    >-15 chakra per turn
    >Must have a complete mastery over genjutsu
    >After the 5 turns user can't use genjutsu anymore
    >The ability to make multiple images of the user counts to 1 of the 3 jutsu per turn
    >The images cannot harm the opponent physically in anyway
    >kai cannot release the opponent from the genjutsu caused by kyöka suigetsu.
    >can only be used by Igneel

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user performs three handseals (Tiger -> Hare -> Ram) and concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create up to two dozen of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). The bubbles can only be created at a minimum distance of 10 meters from the opponent. Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will (which would require the user to perform an additional handseal). That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building; [B]with the radius of each explosion to be roughly five metres. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain (due to the high amount of mental concentration required in order to perform and maintain such precise charka control).
    *Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 3 turns after activation.
    *Note: Can only use up to A-rank wind in the same turn.
    *Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage and can not use wind jutsu above S-rank for the rest of the match.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ±± Declined ±± Its still oped and its becoming more and more like a Bubble Release technique, even if you describe it as being a Wind technique. Also lets be honest...5 meters around each bubble vs 24 bubbles = ... OP. One more try. Then its DNR
    (Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user performs three handseals (Tiger -> Hare -> Ram) and concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create up to two dozen of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). The bubbles can only be created at a minimum distance of 10 meters from the opponent. Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will (which would require the user to perform an additional handseal). That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building; with the radius of each explosion to be roughly two metres. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain (due to the high amount of mental concentration required in order to perform and maintain such precise charka control).
    *Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 3 turns after activation.
    *Note: Can only use up to A-rank wind in the same turn.
    *Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage and can not use wind jutsu above S-rank for the rest of the match.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit

    Quote Originally Posted by McKnockout View Post
    (Katon: Tenkuu Inmetsu) - Fire Release: Celestial Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user concentrates a large amount of Katon chakra throughout his body and by using their mastery of chakra control and Katon Release, the user suddenly releases a huge burst of fire which radiates out from his body in a series of rings (radiates horizontally out, a cylinder of fire the height of the user). However, these rings of fire radiate only out to short range from the user from which the series of rings/cylinder suddenly bursts/extends upwards towards the sky, creating a huge fireball to form above the user which proceeds to travel upwards at great speed towards the heavens. Then at the peak of its ascent, the huge fireball suddenly explodes dispersing/scattering countless smaller-sized fireballs i.e. exploding and sending a rain of fireballs to descend and scatter at and around the target leaving large, molten craters on impact with the earth.
    *Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    *Note: Must wait three turns to use again.
    *Note: Can not use fire techniques above S-rank for two turns afterwards.
    *Note: The user is also hurt if caught in the rain of fireballs.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ±± Declined ±± I want you to add a note you can't use this to enable the use of Kirin.
    (Katon: Tenkuu Inmetsu) - Fire Release: Celestial Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user concentrates a large amount of Katon chakra throughout his body and by using their mastery of chakra control and Katon Release, the user suddenly releases a huge burst of fire which radiates out from his body in a series of rings (radiates horizontally out, a cylinder of fire the height of the user). However, these rings of fire radiate only out to short range from the user from which the series of rings/cylinder suddenly bursts/extends upwards towards the sky, creating a huge fireball to form above the user which proceeds to travel upwards at great speed towards the heavens. Then at the peak of its ascent, the huge fireball suddenly explodes dispersing/scattering countless smaller-sized fireballs i.e. exploding and sending a rain of fireballs to descend and scatter at and around the target leaving large, molten craters on impact with the earth.
    *Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    *Note: Must wait three turns to use again.
    *Note: This technique does not create the necessary conditions for Kirin.
    *Note: Can not use fire techniques above S-rank for two turns afterwards.
    *Note: The user is also hurt if caught in the rain of fireballs.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit (Similar Technique Exists)

    New:
    (Rosuto no Shishou) - The Lost Impaler
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Rank: S
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80 (+10 to Aburame Jutsus)
    Description: The Rosuto no Shishou, a famous bladed pole arm, is rumored to be created by a legendary blacksmith and Aburame clan member who only crafted for clan members he believed to be worthy of his works. It is essentially a large metal spear that is slightly over 2metres in length, weighs roughly 20kg and has countless engraved kanji inscriptions all over it (which allows the user to summon various weapons by channeling chakra through them [which are in fact summoning seals]); this weapon is usable only by the most skilled Aburame. If used by anyone else, the spear will seem to weigh 2tonnes and will become extremely hot, almost melting the person's hands. This spear was forged from a specially made metal alloy containing extremely high quality Platinum metal in combination with a very large amount of ancient Kikaichū (Aburame bugs) remains/exoskeletons (the spear is entirely made from this metal); this peculiar composition is rumored to be the source of this weapon's special abilities. The spear is comprised of, on one end, a large double-edged and pointed blade which spans 1/4 of the spear's overall length which is attached to the rest of the spear (a long cylindrical staff with a relatively heavy flanged mace on it's other end [picture below]). But that is not all, this spear (the staff part) is in fact hollow keeping a length of chain inside the spear which is connected to either end of the spear; this allows the user to abruptly shoot out (at the speed of a thrown kunai) either the blade or mace in order to increase the range of his attacks and in most cases, either bind or fatally maim the target. Users of this spear, being an Aburame, usually store a relatively large amount of their own Kikaichū additionally inside the spear (which can be used for Aburame jutsus and provide an added element of surprise in close quarter combat - the bugs can rush out when either end of the spear is shot out). When the chain is shot out, the user can charge chakra into the chain to make it stiffen or unstiffen at will.

    The peculiar mix of Platinum and ancient Kikaichū remains allows this spear to, when in contact with an object, to absorb chakra (chakra absorption being a fundamental characteristic of Kikaichū, chakra feeding organisms). It can only absorb A-rank worths of regular, non-elemental chakra (i.e. A-rank jutsus that do not have a large area of effect), and can not absorb elemental chakra. Another special ability which arises from it's unique composition is that it grants the user and his Kikaichū a much higher understanding of one another, acting as a affinity/kinship amplifier of sorts, which allows the user to use Aburame jutsus with minimal effort and with increased efficacy.

    *Note: Can only be used by Aburame Members.
    *Note: Due to its weight, can only be wielded by a user that is at least Kage Rank.
    *Note: Is indestructible though it can't cut through everything.
    *Note: Chakra absorption can only be used 4 times per battle.
    *Note: Chakra absorption counts towards the user’s jutsu count.
    *Note: To use the spear’s abilities, the user must have it in his hands or strapped to his back.
    *Note: Must have mastered ninjutsu.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout.

    Spear End:

    Except that it is glistening Platinum all over, minus the guard bit between the blade and the staff.

    Mace End

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 06-11-2012 at 06:13 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Water: yougu ) - Water Style: Shurikcans Whirlwind
    Type: Defensive/ offensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user gather a large amount of water chakra into their body, and when they've gathered enough. They release it and shape manupliate it into 10 Shurikcans that will circle around the user at fast speed, protecting the user. The shurikcans can also be used to attack the oppent, just by the user pointing their finger at the oppent the shurikcan will go straight in the direction the user pointed at. And once all of the shurikcans are gone the user can make more just by releaseing another large portion of the user water chakra.
    - Can only be used 2 Times
    - Can't use any water justu for 2 Turns if the user uses this technique twice.
    ~Declined~ This is supposed to be S-rank? I don't think so. Elaborate on it more, as well.

    (Suiton: kyuutai ) - Water Style: Destruction Orb
    Type: offensive
    Rank: B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user forms an orb of water in their hand, and the user shoot's the orb at the enemy. As the orb is traveling towards the oppent, the user peforms the Tiger handseal, and once the user performs the tiger handseal the orb expands in size to the size of a sphere. And once the oppent is caught, the user than performs Tiger handseal again condensing the water inside of the sphere crushing the oppent. The orb can vary in size going from a sphere, to the size of a regular ball, and it can even go small as a raindrop.
    - Can only be used 4 times
    - No water justu for 2 turns if used 4 times
    ~Declined~ What the heck is the "size of a sphere?" A sphere is a geometric shape. It has no definite size.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 06-11-2012 at 06:27 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Lili-Chwan View Post
    (Genjutsu: Mikkoku Kurouido) Illusion Technique: Black Widow's Betrayal

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs 3 handseals and creates a genjutsu that latches onto the opponent's brain, gaining control of the user's chakra. It will suddenly and powerfully make the opponent fear his own jutsu, which will translate in seeing the jutsu transform into something menacing or deadly to the user. For example, turns a dragon fireball around and has it attack the opponent, turns an earth armor into a spiked one, where the spikes grow inwards instead of outwards, etc etc. This only works on jutsus of the same rank as the technique. Genjutsu specialists will be able to affect 1 rank above.
    In case of the Kurama, the effects actually become real. By latching itself on the part of the brain that controls the chakra, shortly after preforming the technique, the genjutsu will have the opponent resume the contact with the jutsu and have it's own chakra reshape, re-manipulate the jutsu into what the genjutsu is creating.
    *Can affect up to three people, the genjutsus will be linked*
    *Can only be used once every 2 turns*
    *Can only be used 4 times*

    ~ A brilliant idea. However when combined with your Kurama-ness, its too OP. ~
    (Genjutsu: Mikkoku Kurouido) Illusion Technique: Black Widow's Betrayal

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs 3 handseals and creates a genjutsu that latches onto the opponent's brain, gaining control of the user's chakra. It will suddenly and powerfully make the opponent fear his own jutsu, which will translate in seeing the jutsu transform into something menacing or deadly to the user. For example, turns a dragon fireball around and has it attack the opponent, turns an earth armor into a spiked one, where the spikes grow inwards instead of outwards, etc etc. This only works on jutsus of the same rank as the technique. Genjutsu specialists will be able to affect 1 rank above. As the genjutsu kicks in, the target will hear a loud church bell ringing on their ears, and they'll see their jutsus stop. Then, a few seconds later, a second ring will be heard, and the jutsu will turn on them.
    In case of the Kurama, the effects actually become real. By latching itself on the part of the brain that controls the chakra, shortly after preforming the technique, the genjutsu will have the opponent resume the contact with the jutsu and have it's own chakra reshape, re-manipulate the jutsu into what the genjutsu is creating.
    *Can affect up to three people, the genjutsus will be linked*
    *In case of the Kurama, the genjutsu is short-ranged*
    *Can only be used once every 2 turns*
    *Can only be used 4 times*
    *Kurama's restrictions only apply when the Inner Demon is activated*

    ~ Boost it to S-rank, reduce number of uses, and make it affect only a single target and its approvable ~

    Note: Added a warning sign and a range restriction on the Kurama case. Also made it clear that it's only when the Inner Demon is activated, in case there was any doubt.

    The spoiler bellow is a technique I decided to drop, but Roku had already edited this post. He allowed me to replace it with a new technique, even though he had already edit the thread. I leave his previous comment beneath the spoiler.
    Quote Originally Posted by Lili-Chwan View Post
    ( Akari no Shinka ) Custom Weapon: Light of the Evolution

    Rank: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Points: N/A
    Damage Points: Based on the Blunt or Sharp Stats
    Description: Akari no Shinka is the name given to an organic metal extracted from the cells of the Chakra three. Over the course of several eras, the metal would be extracted and tempered by the finest of artisans, craft-smiths and jewelers, until a very thin and light amorphous metal was created, the Akari no Shinka, as bright as diamond. While it's most usual state is in the form of a long beaded string, which is wrapped around the neck and bosom like a brilliant and light sautoir, by charging chakra through it, ever so slightly, it quickly assumes nearly any shaped object, such as a whip, a katana, a gauntlet or even a shield, this comes at no cost. It's most unusual characteristic, though, is the way it responded to beatings of the craftsmen. Every time it was beaten, it would respond in a similar way, as if the more blunt force it was put into it, the more strength would the metal endure, as if evolving at a fast pace.

    The idea behind this metal is a weapon that evolved the more usage it gets. The more damage points a certain jutsu has, the more the weapon evolves. If the damage points of the jutsu surpass the stats, then the weapon won't be able to affect it, or could even shatter until the user gives her own life points to save it.

    Akari no Shinka acquires stat points by being hit by the category's damage. For example, if an Earth jutsu were to hit the staff directly, it would cause blunt damage. If the damage points are equal or lower than the stat, then the said damage will be absorbed and 5% of it will be used to increase the stat.

    Thus, for the base stat, a B rank Earth jutsu, 40 Damage, would hit the metal and it's blunt force/momentum would be stopped, then 5% will be absorbed, thus the stat will change to 42.
    The damage the metal gives when whip/katana/sharp form is given by the Sharp Force, the strength of the gauntlet/shield/blunt form is given by the Blunt Force. The metal will absorb the technique just enough so that the user is missed entirely, thus, even if the technique is much bigger than the user, if the damage is lower than the stat, it will part harmlessly.

    Only official battles on the Battle Arena or Ninja World will count (No restrictions, stealing/killing allowed). Only one bio at a time will be able to wear the metal and count it officially and if it's being used in the Ninja World, points won't be absorbed permanently in the Battle Arena (and vice-versa). A link will be given for every stat change, and will kept track in my Custom Jutsu Thread.

    Breaking the metal will require the user to give 100 health points to bring it back, which will cause exhaustion and the user won't be able to use S rank techniques in the current battle. The stats will be reset.


    Stats (Base Stat, 40):

    Blunt Force: 40
    Sharp Force: 40
    Heat Resistance: 40
    Freeze Resistance:
    Electricity Resistance: 40
    Radiation Resistance: 40
    Vibration Resistance: 40
    PH Resistance: 40

    ~ Declined. The rule on no 'sets of weapons' applies to this. If it can transform into anything, it's like a whole huge set of weapons. ~


    ±± Leaving All for Kiwi Sorbet ±±
    ( Akari no Shinka ) Custom Weapon: Light of the Evolution

    Rank: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Points: N/A
    Damage Points: Based on the Blunt or Sharp Stats
    Description: Akari no Shinka is the name given to an organic metal extracted from the cells of the Chakra three. Over the course of several eras, the metal would be extracted and tempered by the finest of artisans, craft-smiths and jewelers, until a very thin and light amorphous metal was created, the Akari no Shinka, as bright as diamond. The Light of Evolution is a long sharp string, which is wrapped countless times around the neck and bosom like a brilliant and light sautoir. By charging chakra through it, ever so slightly, it quickly hardens, so it can be held as a whip or as a sword, or curled and become a round shield, this comes at no cost. It's most unusual characteristic, though, is the way it responded to the beatings of the craftsmen. Every time it was beaten, it would respond in a similar way, as if the more blunt force it was put into it, the more strength would the metal endure, as if evolving at a fast pace.

    The idea behind this metal is a weapon that evolved the more usage it gets. The more damage points a certain jutsu has, the more the weapon evolves. If the damage points of the jutsu surpass the stats, then the weapon won't be able to affect it, or could even shatter until the user gives her own life points to save it.

    Akari no Shinka acquires stat points by being hit by the category's damage. For example, if an Earth jutsu were to hit the staff directly, it would cause blunt damage. If the damage points are equal or lower than the stat, then the said damage will be absorbed and 5% of it will be used to increase the stat.

    Thus, for the base stat, a B rank Earth jutsu, 40 Damage, would hit the metal and it's blunt force/momentum would be stopped, then 5% will be absorbed, thus the stat will change to 42.
    The damage the metal gives when whip/katana/sharp form is given by the Sharp Force, the strength of the gauntlet/shield/blunt form is given by the Blunt Force. The metal will absorb the technique just enough so that the user is missed entirely, thus, even if the technique is much bigger than the user, if the damage is lower than the stat, it will part harmlessly.

    Only official battles on the Battle Arena or Ninja World will count (No restrictions, stealing/killing allowed). Only one bio at a time will be able to wear the metal and count it officially and if it's being used in the Ninja World, points won't be absorbed permanently in the Battle Arena (and vice-versa). A link will be given for every stat change, and will kept track in my Custom Jutsu Thread.

    Breaking the metal will require the user to give 100 health points to bring it back, which will cause exhaustion and the user won't be able to use S rank techniques in the current battle. The stats will be reset.


    Stats (Base Stat, 40):

    Blunt Force: 40
    Sharp Force: 40
    Heat Resistance: 40
    Freeze Resistance:
    Electricity Resistance: 40
    Radiation Resistance: 40
    Vibration Resistance: 40
    PH Resistance: 40


    Note: Changed it from an amorphous metal substance to a long string that can be hardened at will.
    ~Leaving the above two for Emperor~



    Technique to replace the weapon:

    ( Genjutsu: Sacchuu Shikkan Shikyo) Illusion Arts: Insectum Pandemia Mortalitas

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user preforms 3 handseals, casting an illusion on the targets where multiple disease-bearing hosts swarm on them and sting their flesh. These serve as a medium through which the genjutsu will induce a certain disease, or several biological symptoms to hinder the targets. The user is able to freely control or manipulate how the body reacts to the infection, removing immunity answers or trigering an overly aggressive reaction to the target's own bodies, genjutsu-speaking. Medical Knowledge (Med-Student and Above) or Genjutsu specialists will be able to preform this technique 1 rank above, turning it to an S rank jutsu at the cost of an A rank, as the effects will be much more realistic and well-put.
    *Lasts 4 turns*
    *Can only be used 3 times*
    *Requires 3 turns between usages*

    ~ Declined. I love the idea, however it is too OPed. Do not resubmit the with the same idea. ~

    New:

    ( Katon/Suiton: Ojika Enten no Keiteki ) Fire/Water Style: The Antlers of the Blazing Stag

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After 4 handseals, the user spits out a large structure of fire in the shape of a flaming stag, which can be sent towards the opponent at great speed. The stag will have the consciousness of a normal clone, but will not have any ability to make jutsus, just to move like an above average stag in terms of power, strength, speed and size. With 1 handseal though, the user can apply water into the fire, which will create a coat of vapor across it, honing it to make it thicker and more tangible. The usage of water and chakra enhances and heavily induces a phenomenon called the Leidenfrost effect, where the water vapor coating the fire will make every and all liquid, water especially, to hover over it, allowing the stag to dive into water and water jutsus, piercing through them without them actually touching the fire, while just overall increasing the tangibility of the fire.
    *The stag remains in play for 2 turns before the fire consumes itself*
    *This jutsu can only be used once every 3 turns*
    *The user is unable to preform Fire or Water jutsus higher than S rank in the next turn*
    *Can only be used thrice per battle*
    *The user can apply the water effect to a different fire jutsu by the cost of 30 chakra, increasing the damage of the fire jutsu +10 and making it impervious to water jutsus of the same rank. It counts as a jutsu towards the jutsu count and can only be used 4 times per battle*
    ~Declined~ Excellent idea, but it seems quite a bit overpowered. It's essentially an S-ranked Fire jutsu immune to nearly all Water techniques as well that can be used multiple times and on different techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Toku View Post
    (Raiton- Chikyū ītā no Ken) Lightning release- Earth Eater’s Fist
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the user will perform the necessary hand seals and focus a large amount of lightning chakra into his fist. He will then strike the ground w/ his fist releasing large amounts of lightning that will surge through the ground “eating” through it destroying anything underground that is within range. The lightning will leave a plain field a rocky wasteland once it has ripped through it. The area that the user stands on is unaffected by the jutsu because of the lightning being pushed away from him.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.
    *Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    *Note: Note: Cant use any Lightning jutsu next turn or any S-rank Lightning and above the turn after that.

    ±± Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers
    (Raiton- Chikyū ītā no Ken) Lightning release- Earth Eater’s Fist
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the user will perform the necessary hand seals and focus a large amount of lightning chakra into his fist. He will then strike the ground w/ his fist releasing large amounts of lightning that will surge through the ground “eating” through it destroying anything underground that is within range. The lightning will leave a plain field a rocky wasteland once it has ripped through it. The area that the user stands on is unaffected by the jutsu because of the lightning being pushed away from him.
    *Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    *Note: Note: Cant use any Lightning jutsu next turn or any S-rank Lightning and above the turn after that.
    ~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

    (Raiton- Sekiha Tenkyoken) Lightning release- Rock Breaking, Sky Shocking Fist
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the user will perform the necessary hand seals and focus a large amount of lightning chakra into his fist. He will then mold all of the lightning chakra into a compressed ball of energy that he shoots at the opponent expanding it to the size of an oodama rasengan as it is released. Once the lightning sphere makes contact it will shock the opponent as it pushes him all the way to long range.
    *Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: Cant use any Lightning jutsu next turn or any S-rank Lightning and above the turn after that.
    ~Approved~

    (Katon- Bāningu Mashingan Panchi o Funshutsu) Fire release- Erupting Burning Machine Gun Punch
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Attack points: 90
    Description: the user focuses fire chakra on his fist after performing “Earth release- Earth Gun Punch” and launches a barrage of punches releasing multiple bursting fire gloves to be sent in the direction of the opponent causing tremendous damage to the opponent and incinerating the area around him from the inferno cause by the bursting fire. The bursting of fire from the user’s hands burns them causing damage to the user.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: The exhertion of fire chakra severely damages the users hand, slowing his hand seal speed for 2 turns or until healed.
    *Note: Cant use any Fire jutsu next turn or any S-rank Fire and above the turn after that.

    **link to "Earth Gun Punch".. http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...39&postcount=1 ..under A-ranks
    ~Declined~ Seems too generic. Several other techniques do essentially the same thing. Also, why is Earth Gun Punch required?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Photon View Post
    Summoning Animal: Giant Scropions
    Scroll Owner: Photon
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A (will create one if accepted)
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A (will create one if accepted)
    Description and Background:
    Scorpions are predatory arthropod animals of the order Scorpiones within the class Arachnida. They have eight legs and are easily recognized by the pair of grasping claws and the narrow, segmented tail, often carried in a characteristic forward curve over the back, ending with a venomous stinger. Scorpions range in sizeThe scorpion has a fearsome reputation as venomous, and about 25 species are known to have venom capable of killing a human being.All known scorpion species possess venom and use it primarily to kill or paralyze their prey so that it can be eaten; in general, it is fast-acting, allowing for effective prey capture. It is also used as a defense against predators. The venom is a mixture of compounds (neurotoxins, enzyme inhibitors, etc.)



    ~ Declined, no scorpions ~

    [Aidentiti maru | Identity disc]
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 0-40 (depending on the level of raiton infused)
    Damage: 5-80 (depending on level of infusion)
    Description:
    The identity disc can be used in one of two ways, it can be used as a ranged weapon by throwing it and rebounding it off of objects when used this way its effects are much like a shuriken digging into the opponent but because of the size it cause more damage, or it can be used as close combat weapon designed to slice the opponent this is done by the user holding the disc and using swinging motions to slice the opponent causing long and deep lacerations or jabbing motions to stab and cause deeps cuts.
    the identity disc can be infused with different levels of raiton depending on the mastery of the element, because of this it can be used to negate earth style jutsu by the infused disc making contact with the jutsu (can be done by throwing the disc at the jutsu or the opponent slamming the disc into the jutsu) when infused the disc then takes on the level of damage of the corresponding rank of raiton infused in the disc. when the disc is infused with raiton chakra this gives its characteristic glow and gives it several properties, increased penetration as a weapon due to vibrations, and when being used in close combat the disc augments the speed at which you attack with it by stimulating your nervous system.
    Abilities:
    -the Identity Disc is indestructible
    -when infused it takes on the characteristic of a raiton jutsu e.g. weak to wind and strong against earth
    -if any contact at all is made with the disc while its infused the person gets shocked and goes into spasm aswell as being cut if it was a slicing attack (photon does not get shocked as he wields it with a rubber glove)
    -Even at long range the disc is pinpoint accurate and due to the raiton chakra travels through the air extraordinarily fast reaching the target in under a second.
    Restrictions:
    -infusing the disc counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn
    -can only be rebounded off of 2 objects consecutively any more and it will not have the necessary kinetic energy to keep in flight
    -infused chakra only lasts 3 turns (unless canceled out by a wind jutsu of appropriate rank for the level of infusion)
    -can only be used by photon


    ~ Declined for the font alignment ~

    [Aidentiti maru | Identity disc]
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 0-40 (depending on the level of raiton infused)
    Damage: 5-80 (depending on level of infusion)
    Description:
    The identity disc can be used in one of two ways, it can be used as a ranged weapon by throwing it and rebounding it off of objects when used this way its effects are much like a shuriken digging into the opponent but because of the size it cause more damage, or it can be used as close combat weapon designed to slice the opponent this is done by the user holding the disc and using swinging motions to slice the opponent causing long and deep lacerations or jabbing motions to stab and cause deeps cuts.
    the identity disc can be infused with different levels of raiton depending on the mastery of the element, because of this it can be used to negate earth style jutsu by the infused disc making contact with the jutsu (can be done by throwing the disc at the jutsu or the opponent slamming the disc into the jutsu) when infused the disc then takes on the level of damage of the corresponding rank of raiton infused in the disc. when the disc is infused with raiton chakra this gives its characteristic glow and gives it several properties, increased penetration as a weapon due to vibrations, and when being used in close combat the disc augments the speed at which you attack with it by stimulating your nervous system.
    Abilities:
    -the Identity Disc is indestructible
    -when infused it takes on the characteristic of a raiton jutsu e.g. weak to wind and strong against earth
    -if any contact at all is made with the disc while its infused the person gets shocked and goes into spasm aswell as being cut if it was a slicing attack (photon does not get shocked as he wields it with a rubber glove)
    -Even at long range the disc is pinpoint accurate and due to the raiton chakra travels through the air extraordinarily fast reaching the target in under a second.
    Restrictions:
    -infusing the disc counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn
    -can only be rebounded off of 2 objects consecutively any more and it will not have the necessary kinetic energy to keep in flight
    -infused chakra only lasts 3 turns (unless canceled out by a wind jutsu of appropriate rank for the level of infusion)
    -can only be used by photon
    ~Declined~ Overpowered

    [Katon:Makai Ryouku | Fire release:Hell hound
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user channels his Fire chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of fire which stays attached to the users hand through a leash of fire. As long as the hound stays connected to the user by the leash the user can control its movements as he pleases but as soon as it disconnects it bolts at the opponent creating a intense explosion of fire and heat on impact.
    - Can not perform Jutsu which requires 2 handed handseals while the Hound is connected by a leash as one hand is occupied.
    ~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

    [Raiton:Tei den'atsu | Lightning release:Stopping voltage]
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user channels lightning chakra through their body just before the impact of the opponents lightning Jutsu creating a magnetic field which reflects all lightning attacks up to B rank and cancels out A rank lightning techniques.
    -Because this relies on a defense of repelling charged particles with equally powerfull charged particles of the same type of charge it only defends against raiton techniques and no other types of elements.
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Jisshitsu) - Essence
    Type : Weapon
    Rank : S
    Range : Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : Jisshitsu is a black, chakra metal-forged katana and doesn't seem to reflect any light at all hence, no reflection. When you look deep into it, all you would see is a dark void and would suddenly feel nothingness. Its power lies within the weapon itself. The katana has the capability to store the essence of the elemental chakra that constantly leaks out of an elemental technique on the battlefield within itself. It is only capable of storing only two different types of chakra at the same time. With a single slash, Jisshitsu is capable of expelling a crescent chakra wave of the element it has stored. When there are two elements, the crescent chakra wave would be an elemental combination. The chakra wave can be used twice before the element disappears and has to be collected again. The first time the chakra wave is shot, it has the level of S-rank but decreases to A-rank upon reaching long-range. The second time it is shot, it has the level of A-rank but decreases to B-rank upon reaching long-range.

    (Created by Gondar)
    (Usage of chakra wave counts as a technique)
    (Can only hold two different types of elements at the same time)
    (The elements stored within can be released upon the user's will)
    ~Leaving for Scorps~

    ±± Declined ±± similar weapons exist.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    Magen: Hando no Shinigami (Demonic Illusion: Hand of the Death God)
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn active)
    Damage: 80
    Description: This technique was derived from Yondaime Hokage's Dead Demon Seal. The user will create the Bore → Hare Seals and then clap his hands together to initiate the illusion. Once the illusion is initiated the victim will begin to experience an excruciating wave throughout their body. While this happens the victim will see and feel their hands and feet becoming black and the pain in those sections of their body will feel even more excruciating. The process the victim feels himself going through is similar to the affects of the Dead Demon Seal as it happened on Orochimaru's arms. The process of corrosion due to the necrosis. The corrosion of the victims hands and feet spreads up their arms and legs and onto their body. Once the corrosion of this technique has spread to the entire body from the neck down, the world around the victim will become a dark mist of bloody crimson and the Death God will appear before the victim and place his hand on the their head. The victim will feel as if the soul from his head is being pulled out and the corrosion of the rest of his body from the neck up will occur.
    ~This technique lasts 4 turns unless broken. During the first turn the corrosion of the hands and feet will occur, the second turn the victims arms and legs will be immobilized completely due to the corosion. The third turn takes care of the body and the neck and the fourth turn the Shinigami appears and finishes the process with victim causing the corrosion to spread onwards up the neck to their head.
    ~This technique can only be used twice per battle and one must skip two turns before attempting the second time.
    ~If used twice the user cannot use genjutsu for the rest of the match
    ~No other genjutsu can be used while this technique is in play

    ±± Declined ±± I like it but Corrosion and Necrosis are different things. You need to find a new "word" to describe it. Other than that, seems ok




    ~Resubmission~

    Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each person above 2)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The caster will make the Horse → Bird seals to initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims experience the sensation a huge gust of wind mixed with dust as if their opponent is using a wind technique. The resulting seensation will block their vision (no physical harm comes from the gust). Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and see their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, as if they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
    ~Since this jutsu has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
    ~Can be used 2 times in a match
    ~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time and can only be used on different victims
    ~This technique can only be taught by Reborn

    ±± Approved ±±


    Magen: Shini Yuragi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Mind Tremor Technique)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This is a technique meant to cause temporary confusion. The user will make the Dragon → Hare seals to initiate the illusion. Once cast, the victim will experience their vision to blur and appear to be as if it were being shaken and spun around in a very chaotic manor. The victim's chakra will be disrupted in their brain to a point where the damage causes a slight tremor in their brain, which will also result in a severe headache. The headache mixed in with the vision distortion will cause the victim to be very unbalanced while trapped in this illusion and also makes it difficult for them to focus while affected by this technique.
    ~Can be used 4 times per battle
    ~The inability for the victim to focus completely due to the severe headache and vision equilibrium distortion means they can't focus on techniques above S-rank while in the state of this technique and will have difficulty standing and moving
    ~This technique lasts 2 turns, after the second turn, the victim will succumb to vomiting as the stress becomes too much of them, the inducing of vomit will be the breaking factor.
    ~The user of this technique can't use genjutsu for the next 3 turns after this jutsu is cast.
    ~The user cannot use any other genjutsu while this technique is active nor can he use techniques above A-rank


    ±± Approved ±± Had to edit to make it more reasonable
    ~Resubmission~

    Hando no Shinigami (Hand of the Death God)
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This technique was derived from Yondaime Hokage's Dead Demon Seal. The user will create the Bore → Hare Seals and then clap his hands together to initiate the illusion. Once the illusion is initiated the victim will begin to experience an excruciating wave throughout their body. While this happens the victim will see and feel their hands and feet becoming black and the pain in those sections of their body will feel even more excruciating. The process the victim feels himself going through is similar to the affects of the Dead Demon Seal as it happened on Orochimaru's arms, necrosis (The Death of cells). The necrosis of the victims hands and feet spreads up their arms and legs and onto their body. Once this has spread to the entire body from the neck down, the world around the victim will become a dark mist of bloody crimson and the Death God will appear before the victim and place his hand on the their head. The victim will feel as if the soul from his head is being pulled out and the necrosis of the rest of his body from the neck up will occur.
    ~This technique lasts 4 turns unless broken. During the first turn the victims hands and feet will turn black as a result of the affects of the illusion. The second turn will cause the illusion to spread to completely immobilize and affect the arms and legs. The third turn will cover the rest of the body from the neck down and in the final turn the Shinigami will appear and the user will feel the soul from their head being pulled out by the shinigami, which will cause the illusion's affect to spread from the neck upwards.
    ~This technique can only be used twice per battle and one must skip two turns before attempting the second time.
    ~If used twice the user cannot use genjutsu for the rest of the match
    ~No other genjutsu can be used while this technique is in play
    ~Approved~ Excellent
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 06-13-2012 at 03:03 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I've searched both the CJ threads with different names each time, and found no Similar Technique.

    (Ninjutsu: Kunai Boudai) - Ninja Style: Kunai Expansion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After throwing kunai, user makes "Ram" handseal, expanding the size of the kunai to 2m in length.
    Note: -Can only be used on maximum of 2 kunais at a time.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.
    ~Approved~
    ____________________________________
    Dropping my below CW, iff this CW gets approved.
    Link to where it got Approved.

    Shinigami Reaper
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
    Description: The sword was made by ancient priests of hell and heaven at a sacred place by using hairs, bones, skin, blood and senses of a living shinigami himself which gave the sword life and transforming ability. The sword was named after the shinigami. And it is believed that the shinigami is living in the form of sword now.
    The size of the sword is very big. The hilt itself is of 2m height, and the blade is of 3m height making a total length of 5m. It is a double-edged sword. And have a little curvature in the edge part and pointed on front. The sword is quite thick but the whole blade is covered with the hairs of shinigami which are very sharp, as a normal katana. The blade is bloody red in colour which is supposed to be the blood of millions of people killed by it and of shinigami himself. It also has 2 black strips originating from the rain guard to some extent on blade, and it was supposed to be the curse of people died from it.

    Abilities:
    -This sword is indestructible
    -It has life of its own just like samehada and thus it can react on its own when required when its transformed into an animal.
    -When Chakra is passed to the sword, the sword transforms into an elemental animal familiar that represents the element used |Fire- Phoenix|, |Water-Shark|, |Earth- Dragon|, |Lightning- Snakes|, |Wind- Porcupine|
    -The sword only listens to Enzup.

    Restrictions:
    -Passing any chakra to the sword, counts as a move, which is equivalent to S-rank Offense/Defense/Supplementary.
    -Transformation lasts for a maximum of 4 turns and can only be done twice
    -If opponent's chakra neutralizes or overcomes the animal's chakra (when transformed), then the transformed animal will come to its normal form again. i.e. in sword form.
    -The sword transforms into an elemental version of the animal and not an animal on itself.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this sword, then he will receive an addition of +20 damage points.
    -Sword cannot sense chakra.
    -The size of the animal in which the sword transforms differs little to nothing from the normal size of the sword.
    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Kurodoa) - Klodoa
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
    Description: Klodoa is a living staff whose lower part is made up of flexible element. The upper part is skull with a blue sphere in its mouth. It can levitate on its own. Enzup made Klodoa his personal weapon after he found it in very bad condition when Brain/Zero crushed it in pieces. After taking it into his possession, Enzup made a few changes in it, which made it indestructible and gave it form chaging ability. He also put a lot of his own chakra in the sphere so that Klodoa can use it in battles, since klodoa was not having chakra of its own. It is quite frightening from its looks, but can be funny at times.
    When the staff changes its form it takes the form of a giant 5m axe-like weapon bearing two crescent moon-shaped blades fused together at the backs, with a large looped chain connected to the shaft at the end of the handle. This is known as "Ultimate form". The chain can be connected to user's waist, allowing him to perform long-ranged attacks. The special ability which makes the form of the weapon unique is that it can vibrate its crescent moon-shaped blades on its own, at very high speeds, such that the blades start looking blur. This is done when the weapon comes to know that the user is going to attack something using it, so using its sense, it start vibrating on its own and thus it can literally cut through any solid with ease.

    Abilities:
    -It is indestructible in both forms.
    -Klodoa has life of its own in both of its forms. But can speak only in its original form.
    -When in Ultimate form, it can cut through any solid.

    Restrictions:
    -Only original form can levitate on its own, which is similar to "(Kusanagi No Tsurugi: Kuu no Tachi)" but in this case user don't have to do anything.
    -Can change its form anytime, but once form is changed it has to remain in that form for minimum of 3 turns.
    -After using the vibration ability to cut a solid, it needs some time to re-use it again, i.e. once per every 2 turns.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this weapon, then he will receive an addition of 10 damage points.
    -Every elemental ninjutsu used by user gets -5 damage points while the time the weapon is on battlefield.
    -User's concentration level decreases a bit and as a result user have to apply +5 chakra points in any technique used, regardless of rank. Also user have to perform an addition of 5 handseals in any technique which requires more than 8 handseals.
    -User's speed slightly decreases while holding the Ultimate form because of its quite heavy weight.
    -User can't use any Forbidden-Rank jutsu while holding the weapon.
    -It only listens to Enzup. And no one can lift the ultimate form b'coz of its heavy weight, but due to mastery and practice in wielding of this weapon, and support of weapon itself, only Enzup can lift it without any serious problem.

    Completely removed the "Water Boosting ability by 2 ranks".



    Note: -My previous CW was also having life, and since I am dropping it, I am putting life in this CW.
    -The chakra in the sphere can be used for using jutsus, which I will be making in future, like in the spoiler below.


    ~ Declined, the vibrating thing exists in different techniques already. ~

    ±± Leaving all of these for Emperor ±±
    (Kurodoa) - Klodoa
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
    Description: Klodoa is a 2m long living staff whose lower part is made up of unknown special flexible element. The upper part is skull with a blue sphere in its mouth. It can levitate on its own. Enzup made Klodoa his personal weapon after he found it in very bad condition when Brain/Zero crushed it in pieces. After taking it into his possession, Enzup made a few changes in it, which made it indestructible. He also put a lot of his own chakra in the sphere so that Klodoa can use it in battles, since klodoa was not having chakra of its own. It is quite frightening from its looks, but can be funny at times.

    Abilities:
    -It is indestructible, kinda immortal but that does not mean that it can't be slowed down or paralyzed.
    -Klodoa has life of its own and thus the senses.

    Restrictions:
    -It can levitate on its own, which is similar to "(Kusanagi No Tsurugi: Kuu no Tachi)" but in this case user don't have anything to do with it.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this weapon, then he will receive an addition of 10 damage points.
    -Every elemental ninjutsu used by user gets -5 damage points while the time the weapon is on battlefield.
    -It only listens to Enzup.

    Removed every reference of "Ultimate form". And thus removed the cutting through solid ability and the restrictions based on it.



    Note: -My previous CW was also having life, and since I am dropping it, I am putting life in this CW.
    -The chakra in the sphere can be used for using jutsus, which I will be making in future, like in the spoiler below.

    ~Declined~ Most of the "restrictions" aren't even restrictions. There aren't many kenjutsu techniques you can apply to a spear of this shape.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by mist01 View Post
    (Raiton: Kibaku jirai) - Lightning Release: Exploding Land mine
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user channels raiton chakra into the ground where he stands then compresses it underground letting some of his chakra leak from the ground, then upon attack from the target the user jumps away from the spot to which if the target steps on that spot, the chakra which is invisible senses a strange chakra which immediately triggers the compressed lightning surge underground letting out a powerful explosion almost instantly(just like a mine bomb).
    the user can make a hand-seal to let off the explosion when the target is in range.
    -The user must coat himself with a lightning armor such as "Chidori Nagashi" or he too will receive some damage from the explosion since it is short range though the damage to the user is not much.
    -Last for 2 turns
    -Can only be used 3 times in a battle
    -Can only be used by Mist01

    ±± Declined ±± Uh? O_o i didn't understand it... Really. Rephrase it and word it in a comprehensible way


    (Fuuton: funka) - Wind Release: Eruption
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user channels fuuton chakra through his legs into the ground then spreads it out underground to the position where the target is standing then the user compresses the fuuton chakra which becomes unstable underground then after making Dog ? Bird hand-seal, the user claps his hands then compressed air having been released, will start gushing out at successive intervals from the ground covering an area of 30 meters radius. this compressed air are thin, fast and strong enough to cut through rocks.
    -Lasts for 2 turns
    -the user must have mastered fuuton
    -Can only be used twice in a battle
    -Can only be used by Mist01

    ±± Declined ±± Similar technique exists.



    Summoning Animal: Egyptian Vulture
    Scroll Owner: Mist01
    Other Users who have signed contract: Not ATM
    Summoning Boss if existing: Not ATM
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Not ATM
    Description and Background:
    Egyptian Vulture is a species of Vultures also called White Scavenger Vulture or Pharaoh's Chicken. Egyptian Vulture is found from southwestern Europe and northern Africa to India. The contrasting under-wing pattern and wedge-shaped tail make it distinctive in flight as it soars in thermals during the warmer parts of the day.
    Egyptian Vultures feed mainly on carrion but are opportunistic and will prey on small mammals, birds, and reptiles. They also feed on the eggs of other birds, breaking larger ones by tossing a large pebble onto them.
    An adult Egyptian vulture is white, with black flight feathers in the wings with pointed wings while the tail is wedge shaped thus having a strong wind affinity using its pointed long wings and wedged tail as a medium.
    The legs are pink in adults and grey in juveniles. The claws are long and straight, and the third and fourth toes are slightly webbed at the base.
    He has a size twice of a fully grown horse and has a wing size of 40 feet, or 12.192 meters.


    ±± Declined ±± contract taken
    RESUBMITTING... REWROTE THE DESCRIPTION

    (Raiton: Kibaku jirai) - Lightning Release: Exploding Land mine
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs chidori nagashi first then channels raiton chakra through his legs into the ground below him then compresses it to form a lightning sphere that covers a 10meter radius area underground. The user then spread some of his raiton chakra on the surface of the ground which is connected to the sphere then upon attack from the target, the user jumps away from his position to which if the targets step on the leaking chakra which is invisible, triggers the underground lightning sphere which immediately becomes unstable causing a massive explosion which catches up with the user also but can't hurt him because of the lightning armor covering him. The user can make a hand seal to trigger the explosion when the target is in range.
    -Must have mastered raiton
    -Last for 2 turns
    -Can only be used 3times in a battle
    -Can only be used by Mist01
    ~Declined~ What? You lost me at the last three sentences.
    ______________________________________


    (Bo no Elendil) - Bow of Elendil

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80(-40 if splited)
    Description: Bow of Elendil is a 70" metallic chakra bow made of adamantium with up to 35" draw length. it has a reddish color with body frame like that of a dragon's scales. It also has sharp spikes all over the curves except for the hilt in the middle which serves as the handle. the string is made of a thing metallic spring that draws chakra from the users hand thereby forming an arrow made of thick dense pure chakra as the user pulls it. the arrow that it shoots been mainly pure chakra is fast and precise and can pierce through any form of defense except shields of metal which the bow itself was made(adamantium).
    Abilities:
    +-the spikes can be used to slash and pierce opponent in close range.
    +-because of its metallic composition, it is indestructible
    +-can fire upto 3 arrows at once but the power is halfed for each arrow
    +-can be combined with fire and lightning element(+10 damage)
    Restrictions:
    +-can't use elemental techniques when using this since the wielder won't be able to do handseals except its elemental combinations which can only come as projectiles.
    +-can only be wield and only listen to Mist01
    ~Declined~ Restrict it's usage period.
    _______________________________________________


    (Doton: Shuriken buyou) - Earth Release: Shuriken dance

    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels doton chakra to the ground then lift small rocks using shape manipulation to turn the rocks to shurikens which he sends at the target at high speed from different angles.
    -the user can only send up to 10 shurikens at a time.
    -Can only be used 4times in a battle
    -Can only be taught by Mist01
    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Secret art: Bug cloud
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user “summons” a swarm of bugs, the bugs form in a shape of a cloud. The user will use this cloud as people will use wings for transportation. The user will stand/sit/sleep/etc.. on the cloud and will command the bugs to move and transport him.
    - Can only be used by those who are allowed by mangekyo byakugan and mangekyo byakugan.
    -The cloud can be summoned at any range.
    -Usable twice per battle.
    -Lasts four turns.
    -Must be separated by a post interval between each use.
    -Moving in the cloud after the initial “summoing” doesn’t count as a move .
    ~Declined~ Lasts too long, plus, I don't like the "it can be summoned at any range" part. That's a very easy and obvious exploit.

    Lightning/Earth/Wind Release: Ultimate defense
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra:
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user creates two clones one made up of lightning and another made up of earth. The clones and the user then each release an amount of their chakra to the sky(Lightning Clone: Lightning, Earth Clone: Earth And user Wind) they then begin to manipulate their chakra so it forms a barrier/dome made up of lightning/Earth/wind chakra. The lightning acts as a defense against A rank earth techniques, the Wind act as a defense against A rank lightning techniques, and the earth acts as a barrier against A rank Water techniques, and the barrier all in all acts as a defense against B rank taijutsu, C rank Kaitos taijutsu and C rank ninjutsu(except summonings)
    -Usable twice per battle.
    -Counts as two moves.
    -Lasts for two turns.
    -The user can attack from inside the dome but at the cost that the area attacked from becomes hollow.
    -Clones must still be using their chakra to keep the dome in check so a third clone is usually created.
    -Must be separated by a three turn after de-activation, to be used again.
    -Usable by those allowed by mangekyo byakugan and mangekyo himself
    ~Leaving for Emperor or Scorps~

    ±± Declined ±± Very similar techniques exist already

    Summoning technique: Kinka
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage 80
    Description: After performing the required hand seals and putting enough blood the user will summon Kinka the mighty addax capable of using bug techniques up to the user's rank. Kinka is as the size of katsuyu and has an armor surrounding his body which is capable of blocking D rank ninjutsu, taijutsu, and kenjutsu.
    -Can only be summoned once.
    -Lasts four turns.
    -Must have signed Addax contract.
    -Techniques that require hand seals must be performed by the summoner.
    X
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -General Phaze- View Post
    Updating boss summon

    Proof of both summon and contract being approved

    Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi)Genesis the Porcupine
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will Bite his/her thumb. Wipe the blood on his/her porcupine tattoo. and do 3handseals and palm their hand on the ground. The porcupine Appears in front of The user at all times. It is the size of the Boss Toad Jariya always summon. This porcupine has only 2 Real vulnerable spots. Under his Body (No Quills are there) and On the top . The point at top is where the user rides or sit. It can only fit 2 people though. This porcupine can fire off quills when it feels it is in danger or just to simply attack. He Also Specializes in S rank Earth and He does not need to do handsigns for jutsus that require handseals due to it being his specialty. The Quills fire off with very Great Speed. 60Mph to be exact. And Can Break Through A rank Earth

    -Can only stay on the field for 4 turns
    -The Quills are Short-Mid range
    -Not phase by A rank and below Earth
    -Quills Can only be shot 2 times pr battle
    -If the porcupine use his quills twice He no longer will have them. making his whole body vulnerable.
    -Can only be Taught By -General Phaze- and must be a signer of the porcupine contract

    ~ Description is confusing. On the top ? Top of what ? His head ? His back ? His...well, his rear ? ~

    (Take out anything you feel please)

    Proof of both summon and contract being approved

    Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi)Genesis the Porcupine
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will Bite his/her thumb. Wipe the blood on his/her porcupine tattoo. and do 3handseals and palm their hand on the ground. The porcupine Appears in front of The user at all times. It is the size of the Boss Toad Jariya always summon. This porcupine has only 2 Real vulnerable spots. Under his Body (No Quills are there) and On the top (His back) . The point at top (His Back) is where the user rides or sit. It can only fit 2 people though. This porcupine can fire off quills when it feels it is in danger or just to simply attack. He Also Specializes in S rank Earth and He does not need to do handsigns for jutsus that require handseals due to it being his specialty. The Quills fire off with very Great Speed. 60Mph to be exact. And Can Break Through A rank Earth

    -Can only stay on the field for 4 turns
    -The Quills are Short-Mid range
    -Not phase by A rank and below Earth
    -Quills Can only be shot 2 times pr battle
    -If the porcupine use his quills twice He no longer will have them. making his whole body vulnerable.
    -Can only be Taught By -General Phaze- and must be a signer of the porcupine contract
    ~Approved~
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    (Shakuton:Shakuton kyuutai) Scorch Style: Scorch Orb
    Type: Attack/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The User will do a set of 3 handseals. following after, A Orb will form around the Opponent infused with my chakra The orb is twice the size of Dodai rubber ball (Can fit two people in it). Causing Massive heat burns to the opponent body. The orb shrinks within time (3seconds) when the orb touches the opponent body the water starts to boil in their body causing agony pain, and eventually their water in their body evaporate. (The whole process for that is about 6seconds) The orb can also be used on myself In a case of an incoming water or mud attack or anything that contains mid amounts of water. The user will do 3 handseals and a orb will form around the user. Due to the Scorch chakra in my body the orb does not cause degree burn to me and it can Evaporate up to A Rank with anything with water in it when comes in contact with the orb.

    -Can only use Twice
    -Once You are in the Orb you can not see on the outside (For both me and the opponent)
    -Can only be dispersed by S rank Water ,A rank or Above Wind. Or something that's legit...
    -Cant use Scorch jutsus for the next turn
    -Cant use Fire and Wind above A rank for the next turn
    -Only can be Taught by General Phaze
    ~Declined~ I don't think you have an understanding of Scorch Release's strengths and weaknesses. Why would it only stop A-rank water?
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    (Doton: Doton sacchi) Earth Style: Earth Sonar
    Type:Sup
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Chakra Damage: N/a
    Description: The user will do the tiger handsign and Slam their feet on the ground. By slamming their feet on the ground they are sending their chakra all throughout the battle field and even underground. Kind of like a sonar. This jutsu purpose is to find somebody that's hiding, Masking their chakra... or even if you aren't able to see .

    -Can be used twice
    -No S rank earth the same time as this is used
    -Can only be taught by General Phaze
    ~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

    7:06 and.....9:43 but used in a earth style
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Naruto- View Post
    (Raiton: Raito no tama) - Lightning Release: Body of light
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 (-10 for each turn active)
    Damage: 40
    Description: Similar to the Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar jutsu, the user will disperse raiton chakra throughout their whole entire body, creating an bright glow that emits from their body. This jutsu is powerful enough to stimulate the effect of a flash bomb for anything within short range of the user and lasts for 5 turns at max, mainly being used to dispel shadow based jutsu and ease fighting in the dark.

    Note: Last 5 turns max
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Requires no handsigns
    Note: Can only be taught by -Naruto-

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    (Raiton: Raito no tama) - Lightning Release: Body of light
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 (-10 for each turn active)
    Damage: 40
    Description: Similar to the Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar jutsu, the user will disperse raiton chakra throughout their whole entire body, creating an bright glow that emits from their body. This jutsu is powerful enough to stimulate the effect of a flash bomb for anything within short range of the user and lasts for 5 turns at max, mainly being used to dispel shadow based jutsu and ease fighting in the dark.

    Note: Last 5 turns max
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Requires no handsigns
    Note: Can only be taught by -Naruto-
    ~Declined~ Lasts 5 turns? Yeah, I don't think so.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Nain Mirimeitoru) Nine Millimeter
    Type: Offense
    Rank: Forbidden(OP)
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 1000
    Description: The person brings out a gun called nine millitmeter or as i like to call it "Nine-mil" you focus chakra in the gun and condense it into a bullet shotting it at someone, the bullet shot travels at 999999999/ per second which is faster then the speed of light. Thanks to its speed it can pierce the body but leave a huge whole which only burns bigger due to the immense friction from the penetration and eventually eradicates the person out of existence. The gun can be loaded with an infinite amount of bullets.
    Basically if you have it, you´re like a god, if someone have this weapon it don´t matter how strong you are ONE-SHOT U DIE!! While the person is holding the gun you get put under a genjutsu where your life flashes before your eyes which is why they call this weapon "The Flashback".


    (Hijutsu: Himo Hando) Secret technique: Pimp hand
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: All ranges
    Damage: 80 for males but 0 to females - it´s actually healthy for girls
    Description: The male when angered takes out his fappage hand and focus all his chakra into it while picturing the subject he is targeting. The user then proceed to swing his arm and hip for support as he deals a loud and hard slap to the subject, as the male connects with a chin or bodypart, the chakra in his hand flies into the person and if used on a male then he dies but used on a female and she will submit to the users will from that point.
    If further then short-range then the user focus the chakra to mold a large chakra hand that can reach mid/long range.
    The chakra hand will be twice the size of gamabunta but has no weight to it at all.

    ±± All Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. Next time i'll ban you from this thread forever. Consider this disciplinary action a warning.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Makarov View Post
    Re-submitting the following;

    (Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: -
    Damage: -
    Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power, making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's. When having this suit on, Warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders. After putting the suit on, Inspiration of his Village sunagakure causes him to become stronger. The downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become one ranks weaker then the original.

    Note: -10 chakra every turn
    Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
    Note: Only Makarov can wield this suit
    Note: 10+ Damage On wind technique's
    Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower one rank then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become A-Rank)
    Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points


    Deleted the blink of an eye part.


    ±± Declined ±± No elemental boosting weapons. The suit is a weapon, even if supplementary
    (Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: -
    Damage: -
    Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power, making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's. When having this suit on, Warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders. After putting the suit on, Inspiration of his Village sunagakure causes him to become stronger. The downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become one rank weaker then the original.

    Note: -10 chakra every turn
    Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
    Note: Only Makarov can wield this suit
    Note: 10+ Damage On wind technique's
    Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower one rank then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become A-Rank)
    Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points

    ~Declined~ Pretty sure Scorps said no element boosting weapons. You didn't even change anything in the description.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user shouts "Kyoukugen" to induce a genjutsu on the opponent where it seems that the user is moving at speeds high enough to create afterimages . But in reality , the user gathers chakra into his legs to increase his speed for a brief moment and his fists to increase his striking power momentarily for one clean corkscrew blow to the opponent's chest which knocks the breath out of the opponent , causing the opponent to breathe heavily and unable to catch his breath for a brief moment , leaving him open to a follow-up attack .

    -Genjutsu is of S-rank
    -Pattern of the way the user moves while using this jutsu is up to the user
    -No other Genjutsu the turn this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Rokusho

    ~Approved~
    Updating . . .

    (Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage Points: -

    Description: The user shouts "Kyoukugen" to induce a genjutsu on the target where it seems that the user is moving at speeds high enough to create afterimages and that the target himself is moving at turtle speed , ruining his ability to perceive the actual motion of the user and his ability to react accordingly . In reality , the target's muscles are being restricted to a certain extent by the genjutsu to avoid resistance from the target while being able to close in for a taijutsu attack . To the user , the target will seem to be moving in slow-motion and the user has to follow up with Taijutsu and nothing else .

    -No other Genjutsu the turn this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Rokusho
    ~Approved~

    ( Joukai no Kado ) - Heaven's Gate
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A ( +20 to power up techniques )
    Damage: N/A ( +15 to Taijutsu and Ninjutsu )
    Description: This gloves were passed down from master to pupil for many generations , it's true origins are unknown . All that is known about it is that the gloves are fitted with a unique gem that intensifies the purity and density of chakra that is channeled into it , the chakra is then stored within the crystal and can be used to power up techniques which requires the use of hands . Another way of utilizing the chakra stored within the gem is to use it for propulsion by releasing a burst of the condensed chakra through the palm , allowing for extreme mobility and maneuverability .

    - The gloves requires huge amounts of chakra which drains the user's stamina fairly quickly ( Only when the gem on it is put to use )
    - Propulsion can only be used 5 times
    - Can only be used by Rokusho..
    ~Declined~ The propulsion note is a bit vague. Elaborate on it, in which way you can maneuver, and how fast you can move. Also, decrease the number of times you can be propelled. 5 is too much. Lastly, how long do these gloves last?



    Tell me if there are any areas which can be editted to make it more approvable ^_^ .
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Yard- View Post
    Signed snake contract.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=193206

    (Kuchiyose: Shuiro) Summoning: Scarlet
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: +10 To fire jutsu (-10 For the bite)
    Description: The user will make two handseals (Tiger - Boar) and summon "Scarlet" onto their shoulder. Scarlet is a small very kind and friendly snake that's about the size of a human hand, she has a fire affinity, but due to her size she doesn't have much chakra and can only perform C rank fire jutsus that don't require seals. She can speak, and her voice however is soft and quiet, the opposite of what you would expect from a snake. She's usually used for relaying information. She has an actual more useful ability however, which is that due to her fire affinity, she can bite the user, and send her fire chakra through her fangs as if it were venom, and constantly inject the user with fire chakra, increasing their fire jutsu by +10 for a short amount of time. Her bite causes slight pain for that turn only, before it settles, it's only painful enough to break B rank genjutsu in the turn bitten.

    Note: The increase to fire jutsu lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Scarlet stays on the field for 5 turns.
    Note: The fire ability can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Scarlet can be summoned only once per battle.
    Note: Her bite can break the user from B rank Genjutsu.

    ~ Declined. Enough with the elemental boosts. ~
    Signed snake contract.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=193206

    (Kuchiyose: Shuiro) Summoning: Scarlet
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: (-15 For the bite)
    Description: The user will make two handseals (Tiger - Boar) and summon "Scarlet" onto their shoulder. Despite her appearance with her large 3 inch long fangs, Scarlet is a grey, small very kind and friendly snake that's about the size of a human hand, She doesn't have much chakra and can't perform Jutsus, similar to how others in Naruto who have chakra but can't control it like Lee. She can speak, and her voice however is soft and quiet, the opposite of what you would expect from a snake. She's usually used for relaying information. She has an actual more useful ability however, which is that, with her abnormally large, sharp fangs she can bite the user/tear slightly through flesh to break him/her from genjutsu of A rank for the first 4 turns of battle. After which her gums will be in too much pain to do it any further, due to her small size, her gums can't support much pressure, such as tearing through flesh and biting excessively.

    Note: She can stay on the field for 4 turns.
    Note: Must have signed the snake contract to use.
    Note: Can be summoned twice per battle.
    Note: On the 2nd turned summoned, she cannot use her fangs to break the user from genjutsu.
    Note: She cannot tell if the user is under genjutsu automatically, but she can take into account obvious signs of how the users acting that they may be under genjutsu.



    Removed the elemental boost, Removed the ability to use fire jutsu, added more damage to the bite to make more sense for A rank genjutsu, Increased the restrictions all to make up for the A rank genjutsu I added and the ability to summon her twice but as her just being a normal snake the second time with no further ability. Simply because I think it could make things more interesting with dialogue in battle. I'd like to make the 2nd time summoning her to have no turn limitation for that purpose, but this will do xD.

    Jeet Kune Do

    (Jeet Kune Do: Doragon's Kei) Jeet Kune Do: Dragon's Thorn
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 40
    Description: Deriving from the destructive force of a kick from Bruce Lee. The user will send a kick to the chest of the opponent with enough force behind it to crack the opponents chest slightly, making it so that the opponents arms are slower due to pain. This would make the opponents arms slower due to the pain they will feel by moving their arms due to their cracked chest. It can halfen the speed of the opponents arms. After the first kick to the chest, any other kick afterwards will reduce the speed of their opponents arms by 10%, until finally, the opponent can't move their arms anymore due to pain. Once the kick is executed, it will also knock the air from the opponents lungs, immobilizing them for a few seconds. The kick it'self will send the opponent away by 5 meters, allowing the opponent to catch their breath before needing to defend the user again.

    Note: Must be a Jeet Kune Do master to perform this.
    Note: People or masses with great density and muscle mass won't be affected as much or affected at all. Examples: Bee, 3rd and 4th raikage.



    (Hebi Boushi Renzus) Snake Eye Lenses
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will make a single handseal and mold a lens over their eyes made from chakra. These lenses give the users eyes the appearance of snake eyes. The lens coat the users eyes with chakra creating a barrier over the users eyes which can block foreign chakra from accessing the users eyes, thus making the user immune to visual genjutsu, however, the user limits themselves as well by not being able to perform visual genjutsu either. The lens also shield the users eyes from dust, water drops and also protects the user from bright lights that could easily blind the average ninja. This works by the pupils of the lens filter the light that hits the eyes, allowing only enough light that the users eyes can handle to actually pass through to let them see, ensuring that they aren't hit with a massive amount of light that blinds them. Similar to how sunglasses work, except instead of making what the user sees darker, it simply filters the amount of light the eyes receive through chakra manipulation.

    Note: Lasts 4 turns.
    Note: This can be used 2x per battle.
    Note: Must have the snake contract.



    ±± All Declined ±± As said tons of times before, no formatting on submissions besides bolding the title and the changes on resubmissions.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kakushigoto Doton: Dai Li Douin ) Secret Earth Release: Dai Li Agents
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user infuses his chakra into the ground and creates advanced earth clones styled after the user (although their appearance can be altered to the user's will)
    These advanced clones can use Earth release up to A rank and Taijutsu up to B rank. They are very strong and durable physically due to being made of stone.
    These clones are unique creations and hold 3 secret techniques. They can fire their fingertips as C rank earth bullets (short only). They can fire their entire hands as B rank projectiles at high speed up to Mid range, if the hands touch a human they can be used to clamp down (if it hits their hand it can cover their hand in a sealed ball of stone for example). If the clone is within short-mid range of the released hands they can pull the earth hands back towards them, dragging the enemy towards them as well. And finally they can create A rank chains of earth from their sleeves that can attach to the enemy's limbs that reaches up to mid.
    -Can only have/create up to 2 clones out at once.
    -Can't use for 5 turns between use.
    -Can't use more than one of their 3 techniques on the same turn and each technique counts towards the user's 3 moves per turn.
    -As long as the Dai Li are in contact with earth such as a rocky terrain or mountain they can draw upon the earth to repair minor damage twice per clone.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.





    Kakushigoto Genjutsu: Tsuchi Kingu Yuuchi) Secret Illusion Technique: The Earth King's Invitation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user makes 4 hand seals and sends a large amount of chakra into the brain of their enemy that lays dormant until the user triggers the illusion by saying the target name and the phrase "The Earth King has invited you to Lake Laogai". As the illusion activates the Target replys "I am honored to accept his invitation." as the chakra controls the higher brain functions of the target to put them in a trance like state for 4 turns. While entranced, the targets will follow the user's command as long as it does not directly threaten their lives. During the trance the enemy will believe they are relaxing at a lake, their mind clear of violent thoughts.
    -Once per enemy, 3 per battle.
    -Must wait at least one turn between creation and trigger
    -Must have mastered Genjutsu.
    -User can't use Genjutsu or ninjutsu for 5 turns after triggering the illusion.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    (Genjutsu: Heki Kaku )Illusionary technique: False Victory
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive/ Supplementary
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user makes a single hand seal and sends his chakra into an enemy's chakra system that lays dormant until triggered. When the user and enemy are in short range the user manipulates the chakra to induce the illusion of the enemy's next attack landing when in reality they have been paralyzed before finishing the attack. In the illusion they see their technique play out perfectly and see the user dead (or knocked out if not using a fatal attack) in front of them. The 2nd part of this technique can be done very quickly.
    -Twice per battle
    -No A rank or above genjutsu for 3 turns after use.
    -Must be taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    No DNRs please if turn numbers or ranks need adjusted or extra restrictions feel free to change/add them if either of these are close to approval, any questions VM me


    ±± All Declined ±± Don't resubmit. First one falls under the "elemental clone type" which is banned aside from CE versions. Second one falls under the mind controlling thing with genjutsu which is also DNR. And the last one makes little to no sense. Also, we don't vm anyone about anything and you don't have the right to tell us if we should DNR or not something.
     
         
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