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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Genjutsu) Nenshou Oni: Burning Devil
    Type:Offensive/Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: When Kimi flashes her golden oni tattoo at her opponent, they instantly fall into a genjutsu where they get the sensation that their body has burst into flames. The panic causes them to lose control of their body interupting anything they were doing. After 1 turn the stress and sensation will break the genjutsu if they have not already released themselves.The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
    ~Taught by Melizzle
    ~usuable by Kimi
    ~Usuable twice per battle
    ~Declined~ Remove the bolded; Its been said, time and time again that genjutsu does not allow you to control how someone will react physically unless its sharingan genjutsu. Also, remove the word "instant" and include hand seals to cast it.
    (Genjutsu) Touketsu Oni: Frozen Devil
    Type:Offensive/Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: When Kana flashes her blue oni tattoo the opponent will instantly fall into an illusion where they are frozen in a block of ice with their apendages spread. They are completely frozen unable to move to make hand seals.The hot ice burns the body and numbs the body as well. The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
    ~Taught by Melizzle
    ~Usuable by Kana
    ~Usuable once per battle
    ~Declined~ Remove the word instant and include some hand seals.
    (Genjutsu) Hinketsushou: Anemia
    Type:Offensive/Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user holds their hand out to the opponent triggering the technique. The opponent falls into a genjutsu where they see the user fly quickly towards them. As soon as the user's illusion reaches the opponent's body, or the opponent attacks the illusion, the illusion burst into blood. Then liquid forms 3 bloddy humanoid figures next to the opponent. Immediately when formed, they bite the opponent. The opponent becomes drowsy as if they've lost a lot of blood, decreasing their attack and reaction time by 50%. For example if the user is Kage rank, they will become Jounin rank and be able to use the appropriate speed tables, jutsu, etc. of the reduced rank.
    ~Taught by Melizzle
    ~Lasts 2 turns
    ~Able to take effect once per battle
    ~No genjutsu for 2 turns when attempted
    ~Declined~ Do not resubmit.
    (Genjutsu) Nenshou Oni: Burning Devil
    Typeffensive/Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description: When Kimi flashes her golden oni tattoo at her opponent, they fall into a genjutsu where they get the sensation that their body has burst into flames. The feeling of their entire flesh likely causes them to lose control of their body interrupting anything they were doing, but does not have to. After 1 turn the stress and sensation will break the genjutsu if they have not already released themselves.The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
    ~Taught by Melizzle
    ~Usable by Kimi
    ~Usable twice per battle

    ±± Approved ±± Editted. This was a B-rank from the start.


    Changed "instantly" to quickly and added hand seals to cast. Changed the bold phrase to say that the victim would likely go into panic/be interrupted from their actions, but not have to.

    (Genjutsu) Touketsu Oni: Frozen Devil
    Typeffensive/Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: When Kana flashes her blue oni tattoo the opponent and casts a couple hand seals, the opponent will quickly fall into an illusion where they are frozen in a block of ice with their appendages spread. They are completely frozen unable to move to make hand seals.The hot ice burns the body and numbs the body as well. The trigger for this genjutsu is visual, human nature causes the opponent to look when shown.
    ~Taught by Melizzle
    ~Usable by Kana
    ~Usable once per battle

    Changed "instantly" to "quickly" and added some hand seals.


    ±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. Too much.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-19-2012 at 08:36 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ninpo: Chisana Shuriken no Jutsu) - Ninja Art: Small Shuriken Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will throw a projectile towards the enemy, and will then use his chakra to rapidly decrease the projectile's size. The size can be reduced down to the size of a marble. However, with the size being decreased, the damage done by the projectile is also dramatically decreased. This technique is based upon the less advanced version, "Ninja Art: Giant Shuriken Technique."
    *Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Ninpo: Giso)- Ninja Art: Disguise
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to mask the presence of a technique simply by controlling how light reflects off the object. Similar to the Hiding in Camouflage Technique, this technique gives the user the ability to use his chakra to essentially make an object invisible. The user, after performing a technique, or throwing a weapon, will extend his chakra tightly, and completely around the released object after a short sequence of two hand seals. For example, if the user throws a kunai, he will form a tight layer of chakra around the kunai, controlling the reflections of light. This is turn, would make the kunai "invisible" while the kunai continues on towards the opponent. The amount of chakra used depends on the object that is being turned invisible. However, large scale techniques such as "Pressure Damage" are simply too large for the user to cover completely in chakra. This technique works most effectively on techniques that have a mostly constant, unchanging shape. The object must be covered in chakra before it leaves short range from the user, but the cloaking effect can last up to long range.
    *Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    *Note: Usable three times per battle
    *Note: No ninjutsu above A-rank the same, or following turn


    ±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-19-2012 at 08:37 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:All
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90
    Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast.
    *Lasts three turns
    *while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
    *the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
    *can only be used once
    *can only be used by Ice users

    Removed the lowering of fire and lightning jutsu.

    (Fuuton: shindou) Wind Release: Vibration
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:
    The user, releases a rapid succession of wind chakra into the wind around him. The wind then is rapidly manipulated around the user, creating intense vibrations that distort the way sound is perceived by the opponent, causing imbalance, impairing the ability of the opponent to coordinate taijutsu and make hand seals. (this justu works by affecting the labyrinth of the ear, which is a series of fluid filled channels that send signals of balance to the brain, by vibrating the fluid in them, it disorients a person's sense of balance, causing coordination issues with opponents)
    *jutsu's effects last two turns
    *only usable once per battle


    52 bachi-roppou(52 Pick-up)
    Rank-S
    Type-Weapon
    Range-Short/Long
    Chakra-40
    Damage-80
    Description-
    The weapon 52 pick up, is a set of 52 thinly pounded, sharp rectangular iron cards.
    The user carries them in a small pouch that allows easy access to them.
    These cards are used by means of normal throwing (like a kunai) or chakra manipulation of either wind, or magnetism chakra. Using wind chakra, the cards gain cutting strength and speed, while when used with magnetism they may be freely manipulated in mid-air.

    Feel free to make edits as you see fit ^_^

    sorry I didnt read earlier :/


    ±± All Declined ±± If i read this correctly, this is a resubmission. On resubmissions you are required to quote the original submission and bold all changes. Look at what i bolded...
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-19-2012 at 08:39 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fuuton: Eāfan'neru) Wind Release: Wind Funnel
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    After performing a single handseal, the user creates a small funnel of air, trough which items can be thrown, by a shadow clone or team mate, to increase their speed. Due to the pressure inside the funnel, small items such as kunai and shuriken can speed up to almost the speed of sound, making it almost impossible to dodge in short and mid range.



    ±± Declined ±± Speed of sound? why not speed of light while you're at it? Make it reasonable please.


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    ( Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Suzume-ō Jack) Summoning Jutsu: Sparrow King Jack
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    After the user bites his thumb and smears blood across his tattoo, he places his hands on the ground to summon Jack, the King of the Sparrows. Jack is giant sparrow, about 12 feet high, and while he is on the field, it costs his summoner only half of his chakra on Fuuton attacks. The summoner is able to fly on his back

    Note:
    -Stays in the battle for 4 turns
    -Can be summoned once per battle
    -Jack cannot be harmed by any Fuuton-Attacks below B-Rank
    -Must have summoned Sparrow Contract

    Link to contract approval


    ±± Declined ±± why would your summon allow your techniques to cost less chakra? Also, why is this Long range? What size is he? What can he do exactly?
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-19-2012 at 08:41 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Hazama~ View Post
    Ototon: Kuno no Oto (Sound Release: The Sound of Kunai)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: +1 per kunai
    Description: The user channels their chakra into kunai. Their chakra then acts as a solid wall of sound wave barrier between the force of gravity that immediately surrounds the kunai as they travel towards the desired location, allowing the kunai to travel at the speed of sound.
    *Travels at 315 Speed.

    ~ Declined. As I said. Sound is unaffected by gravity, but that does not mean it can negate it. ~

    Ototon: Attōtekina Obujekuto (Sound Release: Resounding Object)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: +10 Damage to object
    Description: Taking in the same principle as "The Sound of Kunai", the user channels their chakra into an object and performs a hanseal. Their chakra then acts as a Solid Wall of sound wave barrier between the force of gravity that immediately surrounds the object as it travels towards the desired location, allowing the object to travel at the speed of sound.
    *Travels at 395 Speed.

    ~ Same as above. ~

    Ototon: Boryūmukontorōru - Kon'ya Wa Tōku· Hādo (Sound Release: Volume Control - Pump up the Volume)
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40 (Only if increase in sound)
    Description: The user, after producing sound waves, will move one of their hands in such away that it appears as if they are decreasing or increasing the sound of a speaker (Clockwise to increase; Counterclockwise to decrease). Doing this allows the user to change the decibel of any sound waves produced so that it becomes either extremely loud and deafens the opponent or extremely soft to where the target could no longer hear it. Increasing the sound can cause the opponent's eardrums to blow, causing extreme pain and deafness.

    ~ Interesting. Needs some restrictions. ~

    Sound Training
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    Ototon: Boryūmukontorōru - Kon'ya Wa Tōku· Hādo (Sound Release: Volume Control - Pump up the Volume)
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (Only if increase in sound)

    Description: The user, after producing sound waves (Either naturally or by a technique), will move one of their hands in such away that it appears as if they are decreasing or increasing the sound of a speaker (Clockwise to increase; Counterclockwise to decrease). Doing this allows the user to change the decibel of any sound waves produced so that it becomes either extremely loud and deafens the opponent or extremely soft to where the target could no longer hear it. Increasing the sound can cause the opponent's eardrums to blow, causing extreme pain and deafness.
    Note: Can only Change the Volume 3x a battle
    Note: Can only be used with Sound Techniques A Ranked and Below.
    Note: Opponent(s) goes deaf for one turn.
    Note: Opponent(s) suffer from bleeding of the ears and throbbing pain for 2 turns after deafness dissipates.
    ~Approved~ I made a little change.

    I increased rank to add restriction Notes......I've never seen a B Ranked Tech with restrictions and I figured these would be suitable. If you deem it still B Ranked worthy, please change it back if you dont mind. Thanks. ^_^

    New

    Ototon: Kyōmei sonikkubūmu (Sound Release: Resonating Sonic Boom)
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user charges sound chakra into each of their arms while stretching their arms out wide. They then simultaneously swing both arms inwards across their chest sending forth two bursts of sound waves from their arms. One of the sound Waves resonate at a pitch and frequency to shatter any object into pieces before it comes into contact with the two sound waves. The first sound wave will dissipate as soon as the object in question shatters. The Second sound wave emits a loud noise that will shatter the eardrums of anyone in hearing distance other than the user causing extreme pain and forcing them to raise their hands to their ears to block the pain.
    Note: This technique happens extremely quickly.
    Note: The first sound wave can only shatter anything other than Fire/Lightning/Wind as long as it has a physical mass (Works against Earth/Water/Metals/Crystals/Ice/Lava/etc) of S Rank and below.
    Note: Can only be used once ever 3 turns.
    ~Declined~ It's a bit too strong for an A-rank technique. I would suggest changing the first wave's shattering capability to anything physical of A-rank and below. S rank is too much.



    Ototon: Anata No Komaku O Fukitobasu (Sound Release: Blowing Your Eardrum)
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: (Enough Pain to cause bleeding and get out of S Ranked Genjutsu)
    Description: The user, when placed under a Genjutsu, commits the ultimate sacrifice a sound user could and charges Sound Chakra into both of their eardrums. With a forceful push, they cause their eardrums to pop extremely loud, instantly releasing them from the Genjutsu. The pain caused by this leaves the user feeling rather unbalanced, however the constant residual pain in their ears allows them to become resistant to Genjutsu. The hearing of the opponent will be gone throughout the remainder of the battle, however the feeling of unbalance lessens as the battle draws on.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Causes 50 damage user
    Note: No Sound jutsu above A Ranked for 3 turns.
    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 07-01-2012 at 10:48 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Kwalker394 View Post

    ^Summoning tattoo ^


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Akuma (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Akuma)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Akuma The King of Robins. Akuma is about 1/2 the size of Gamabunta. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a grey crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts grey to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Akuma is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Abilities:
    ~Akuma can speak English but he can also communicate to his summoner by telepathic means.
    ~Akuma can fly with the summoner on him
    ~Akuma can also do a synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu with his summoner
    ~Capable of using Fuuton and Katon up to C Rank
    ~Because of his wing strength he can deflect any weapons thrown at him as well as any D rank attacks by flapping his wings.

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Kwalker394 can only teach how to summon Akuma
    ~Each jutsu counts toward the summoner's 3 moves
    ~synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu counts as 2 moves of the summoners 3 move limit
    ~Riding Akuma counts as a move
    ~Can only be summoned once per battle
    ~Can stay in the fight up to 4 turns

    ±± Declined ±± A 50 meter tall bird is hardly an A-Rank summon. Summons can only use one element and can use it up to S-Rank and without the need for hand seals. And take the english part. He talks, its enough. And obviously he can fly with you on his back...he's 50 meters tall...he can fly with a bus on his back. (50 meters because gamabunta is roughly 100...)


    Raiton: Dendou Hora Ryouiki (Lightning Style: Electric Mine Field)
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A (10 Damage if stepped on)
    Description:
    The user concentrates on his Raiton chakra. The user then molds his chakra and channel it to his mouth while squishing it into small flatly round pellets. The user then spits out the small lighting pellets (about 30) to the ground in a wide area (8ft-13ft). When the opponent steps on the pellets they will send off a electrical signal through the air as well as shocking the opponent. These pellets are rather small and are usually unnoticeable to the naked eye. When these pellets go off the user can sense the electrical signal in the air by using his Raiton chakra within him/her to locate the enemy. This jutsu is very useful due to the fact that the user can locate the enemy in a split second and counter the opponent unsuspectingly or to set up a ambush for the unsuspecting enemy.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~May also cause the user damage as well if stepped on
    ~Sensing only happens if the user is within mid-range of the pellets.

    ±± Approved ±± Edited rank and added note


    Feel free to edit in anyway.
    Quote Originally Posted by Kwalker394 View Post
    Raiton/Katon: Nenshou Kimochi(Lightning/Fire Style: Burning Sensation)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user channels and molds his Raiton and Katon chakra at the same time to his hands. The user then sends both chakra to the out side of his hand forming a thin layer around his palm consisting of Raiton and Katon chakra. Once this is done if the user touches the enemy the touched area is then burned and shocked. The burned and shocked area isnt life threatening but the sensation still is felt enough to distract the opponent. The Katon chakra is for burns and discomfort, and the Raiton is also for discomfort but also the stinging sensation and slight shock to the 1st layer of nerves of the area touched. If the area is not cooled down quick enough it will lead to 1st degree burns of that area. If the user grabs on to the enemy and the enemy dosnt get away quick enough it can cause 2nd-3rd degree burns.

    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used once during battle
    ~Counts as 2 moves
    ~The burning sensation last for 3 turns (if not treated sooner)
    ~Medical care can treat the wounded area also Water jutsus (D rank or higher or any source of water) can also treat it to cool down the area
    ~If the user's hand is forced back at him with the jutsu still active it can harm the user the same way as the enemy

    ±± Declined ±± You can't mold two elemental chakras at the same time unless you have yin/yang mastery


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hogosha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Hogosha)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Hogosha. The Guardian of the contract. Hogosha is half that of a human. He has a red-black face, throat and upper breast with a red crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark blue. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Hogosha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Ability's:
    ~Can speak
    ~Capable of using Fuuton
    ~Carries the Black-throated Robin Contract in a scroll on his back

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be used by the current contract owner of the Black-throated Robin Summon
    ~Can only be summoned 3 times during battle
    ~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
    ~Fuuton attacks count towards the summoners 3 move limit

    ±± Declined ±± This is not a D-rank summon and he can use fuuton up to what rank?


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Musha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Musha)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Musha. The Robin Warrior. Musha is 10 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a black crown and nape, and a red diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Musha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Ability's:
    ~Can speak
    ~Carries a large sword with him at all times and is very skilled at it
    ~Can use Fuuton

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be summoned 2 times during battle
    ~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
    ~Sword and Fuuton attacks as well as flying count towards the summoners 3 move limit

    Summoning approval


    Edit anyway you see fit :D


    ±± Declined ±± a B-rank summon can only use Up to B-Rank techniques.




    ^Summoning tattoo^


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Akuma (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Akuma)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Akuma The King of Robins. Akuma is about 60 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a grey crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts grey to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Akuma is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Abilities:
    ~Akuma can speak
    ~Akuma can also do a synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu with his summoner
    ~Capable of using Fuuton up to A rank
    ~Because of his wing strength he can deflect any weapons thrown at him as well as any D rank attacks by flapping his wings.

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Kwalker394 can only teach how to summon Akuma
    ~Each jutsu counts toward the summoner's 3 moves
    ~synchronized elemental combination collaboration jutsu counts as 2 moves of the summoners 3 move limit
    ~Riding Akuma counts as a move
    ~Can only be summoned once per battle
    ~Can stay in the fight up to 4 turns

    Took out: (~Akuma can fly with the summoner on him), (English but he can also communicate to his summoner by telepathic means.)

    ±± Declined ±± Read what i wrote. Its 60 meters tall.... ITS TOO BIG for an A-Rank summon. Also, its too big in general. Make him smaller. Also, i never said to take out the part were he can fly with you on his back.


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hogosha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Hogosha)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Hogosha. The Guardian of the contract. Hogosha is half that of a human. He has a red-black face, throat and upper breast with a red crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark blue. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Hogosha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Ability's:
    ~Can speak
    ~Capable of using Fuuton up to C rank
    ~Carries the Black-throated Robin Contract in a scroll on his back

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be used by the current contract owner of the Black-throated Robin Summon
    ~Can only be summoned 3 times during battle
    ~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
    ~Fuuton attacks count towards the summoners 3 move limit

    ±± Approved ±±


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Musha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Musha)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Musha. The Robin Warrior. Musha is 10 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a black crown and nape, and a red diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Musha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Ability's:
    ~Can speak
    ~Carries a large sword with him at all times and is very skilled at it
    ~Can use Fuuton up to B rank

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be summoned 2 times during battle
    ~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
    ~Sword and Fuuton attacks as well as flying count towards the summoners 3 move limit

    Summoning approval


    Edit anyway you see fit :D


    ±± Declined ±± If he's a bird, how can he hold and use a sword?
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-19-2012 at 08:46 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton: Kyouseki kabe)- Lightning Release: Polarity Wall
    Rank: B
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20*
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user rises their hand in front of them and creates an shield of electrical energy to protect himself from most forms of harm. The shield is completely transparent except for the outer part of the shield which emits blue or red electricity. The shield is around 2 inches thick and is circular shaped. The size is completely up to the user, however the max size is thrice the size of the user. The user can do anything while using the shield except attack , which includes moving, jumping, gliding, climbing and grinding making it useful to use in enemy-infested areas. It can be set so blocked damaged chakra is absorbed.

    Note: Can only be used thrice a battle
    Note: Can only block up to A-ranks(Can only defend against B-ranks)
    Note: The shield last two turns max
    Note: -10 per turn still active*
    Note: Can only be taught by Better

    (Raiton: Rai katana)- Lightning Release: Electric Blades
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:This technique channels a large high concentration of electricity to the user's hands. The amount of energy is so great that it becomes visible. This forms blades of pure energy around each of their hands in, and they cause massive amounts of damage when used as a melee attack. Once the technique is completed, the user(if not in short-range already) charges forward and thrusts the blades into the target. This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal. The user can also slam their hands on the ground with this active cause all the lightning to surge through the ground. They are one-use weapons and must be re-triggered every time they are used. In order to re-activate them it cost 30 chakra. They will also be deactivated with time if not used.

    Note: Can only be taught by Better


    ±± Both Declined ±± Don't resubmit. First one was done countless times before, second one already exists also.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Lysander View Post
    (Futunomitama no Turugi ) Antiquity
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:Antiquity is a red sword.This sword is small in size only half a meter in length.The sword itself has been passed down from generation to generation with each unlocking new abilities in the sword.The first ability to the sword is the ability to mold you chakra into the sword and extend the length and the power of the sword.There are multiple levels to the sword.
    -The first level is only chakra covering the sword but has the power to slice through a rank earth and water.
    -The second level has the strength to cut through a rank lighting only and the red shield covers half of the user on which the sword is held and can block b rank attacks within reason.
    -The third version is 3 meters long and can cut through fire.
    -The last version is the strongest one of them all and can cut through a rank water,earth and lightning.
    -Can only be used be Lysander
    -One switching between levels it counts as one of the three moves and switching between levels has a cool down of one turn

    This is the sword without any chakra in it or around it:


    The first one looks like this but without the face and the user is holding the sword and there is no chakra coming from anywhere but the sword:


    The second level to the sword is this but yet again without the face and is one meter in length like the first one.


    The third level looks like this:


    And the last level looks like this:


    ~ Declined. Why not just submit it at its peak power -.- ~
    (Futunomitama no Turugi ) Antiquity
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:Antiquity is a red sword.This sword is small in size only half a meter in length.The sword itself has been passed down from generation to generation with each unlocking new abilities in the sword.The first ability to the sword is the ability to mold you chakra into the sword and extend the length and the power of the sword.There are multiple levels to the sword.The sword is made out of a special material which can combine with the users chakra to mould into a shield.


    This is the sword without any chakra in it or around it:



    Level 2
    The user will release their chakra into the sword to unlock the second level. The second level surrounds the blade extending it, making it able to cut through A rank lightning jutsu and below. The second level also creates a red shield around the users arm capable of blocking B rank attacks and below that aren't bigger than the shield.
    Note: Activating level 2 counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turns and costs 15 chakra for every turn active
    Looks:


    Level 3
    The user will release more chakra into their sword to unlock the 3rd level. This differs from the level 2 as more chakra is focussed into the blade and not is focussed on defence. This is a more advanced useage of shape manipulation making the blade razor sharp. When this is active, the user can cut through A rank water, A rank earth and A rank lightning.

    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Lasts up to 3 turns
    Note: While this level is active, it counts as one of the users 3 jutsu per turn
    Looks:


    I could not bold the changes as you told me to remove them.
    ±± Leaving for Emperor but this seems like an over complication of something quite simple... ±±
    ~ Exactly. Why this obsession with levels ? ~


    Elemental rotation (soshi jiten)
    Type: Attack/Deffence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description: The user will focus one of the five basic elements into their staff. The they will begin spinning their staff, like a helecipter blade in front of them at great speeds releasing their elemental chakra. Fire/water/wind element will create a fire/water/wind shield. If lightning or earth chakra they create a dense sheild infront of the user, the earth style rotation will defect all solid objects, where as the lighting will destroy all earth that is coming at the user.
    -Only usable three times.
    -Only usable every two turns.
    -Only usable by Lysander and those who are taught it.

    ±± Declined ±± I will only accept this if you have a Staff CW


    Earth impact wave (yochi shindou shuuha)
    Type: Attack/Deffence
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user with hold their staff vertically, with both hands together in the middle of the staff. They will then in a swift motion raise their staff up above their head, focussing their earth chakra, then slam the staff down on the ground releasing their earth chakra, causing a small crater to form around the user sending a wave of earth 1.5 meters high in directions.As the staff is slammed down, a small shockwave is released around the user as the chakra is released into the ground This can be used to counter taijutsu and other close combat attacks.
    -Only usable four times.
    -Only usable by Lysander and those taught.


    ±± Declined ±± Same as above
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-07-2012 at 04:14 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Korra~ View Post
    (Hachi no hakai ) Bee's Destruction
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will call forth there bees and have them engulf the enemy inside a cloud of Bees. The bees will use their stingers to drain the opponent's chakra making them weak the longer they have the bees stinging them.
    Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan.

    (Hachi no tatsumaki )-Tornado of Bees
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will have their bees surround the enemy in a tornado like shape. Some of the bees will go after the opponent striking them while the other bees shoot out their stingers at the enemy from different directions and angles.
    Note: Usable 4 times a battle
    Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan

    (Shūen no mure )Swarm of Demise
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will generate a swarm of thousand of bees that will cover the entire sky. The bees will then shoot out their stingers from above with great speed than swarm down taking out any remaining enemies that survive the stingers.
    Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Must be part of the Kamizuru
    Note: Usable 3 times a battle

    Have a Kamizuru user here http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=188771
    Feel free to edit


    ±± All Declined ±± Having a kamizuru bio doesn't mean you can make techniques that are basically Aburame techniques. You can summon bees... Its different.
    Resubmitting the first one for now Scorps said I could here http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...=3623&u2=71560

    (Hachi no hakai ) Bee's Destruction
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will call forth there bees and have them engulf the enemy inside a cloud of Bees. The bees will use their stingers to drain the opponent's chakra making them weak the longer they have the bees stinging them.
    Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan.

    ±± Approved ±±


    New
    Approved CFS http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...to#post5822928
    Name: (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù:Ōra baai shinigami)Reaper Scythe Arts: Aura of the Grim Reaper
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 20
    Type:Supplementary
    Description: When the battle starts the user will channel their chakra through the body and calm their mind. This will enhance the user reaction and allow them to perform Reaper Scythe Arts jutsus easier and faster. This will also let the user use their scythes with more flexibility and faster. Being that this is the aura of the Grim Reaper the user's eyes will turn completely black until this is deactivated and the emotions will be killed of temporary giving them the fearness of a grim reaper.

    ±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. This has nothing to do with your CFS and it makes not sense. Also, this is very similar to the concept behind elder teachings, six sense.


    Reaper Scythe Arts:Reaper's Judgement (Sishen Liandao Yishu: Shinigami no hantei )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user holds their scythe with hands and channel a large amount of chakra to the blade of the scythe. The chakra envelpe the blade and streteches out into a crescent moon shape with an eye in the middle.
    -Only used twice per battle
    -Can cut through B rank and below Earth Elemental jutsus.
    -This jutsu last four turns and must wait two turns
    Note:Can only be taught by ~Korra~
    Note:Must be activated at the start of the battle.
    Note::Lasts for 8 turns when activated.
    Note: Need to learn the Reaper Scythe Arts
    what it looks like



    ±± Declined ±± Why is this Long range if you are just engulfing your scythe and making it larger?
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-19-2012 at 09:05 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Jinton: Surikesu | Dust Release: Erase
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the horse hand seal and creates a small cone of Dust Release on his index-finger tip, that is aimed at his opponent. The user then releases it, sending a slim conical beam at the opponent. The beam is not bigger than his finger. Like all Jinton attacks, the speed of this attack is significantly high and can go through most things with relative ease.
    Note: Must be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used by a Mu/Onoki bio
    Note: Can be used twice
    Note: The user can not use Wind, Fire, Earth or Jinton techniques in the same turn.
    ____________
    -Declined-
    Why make a strong element even more OP? And "can go through most thing" isn't an acceptable capability description.

    Fuuin Genkotsu: Koara no Nemuri | Sealing Fist: Slumber of the Koala
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: /
    Description: The user will focus his chakra into his palms and on his fingertips. The kanji for “Push” will appear on each palm. Once the user engages combat and hits opponent in a certain place (for example hand, foot or stomach), he “pushes” the chakra out of the said limb or organ, but also puts a barrier on that place, making it impossible for chakra to circulate in the affected area for 2 turns. This is different from Gentle Fist techniques as Gentle Fist techniques hit the tenketsus, and disable the chakra flow, while this techniques pushes out the chakra and makes it impossible for the chakra to push through the barrier placed on it. The user can also use this to “push” natural energy out of the opponents body, causing Sage Mode users to forcibly and prematurely leave sage mode, even if they are able to collect it through other means as they barrier makes it impossible for the sage chakra to circulate.
    Note: Must be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Can’t use taijutsu (a.k.a. Strong Fist, Gentle Fist, EIG, etc), fuuinjutsu or Fuuin Genkotsu in the same round or the next
    ____________
    -Declined-
    OP


    0:12 and ongoing is an example


    Fuuton: Ketsugō-tai Sōseiji No Setsuna | Wind Style: Juncture of the Siamese Twin
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user punch forward and release a blast of Wind. While the blast of wind travels towards the opponent, the user performs the Horse hand seal, and the wind splits up in two, and then comes back together, letting it avoid any incoming jutsu that would block it. This, however is a double edged blade as it requires impeccable timing so that the user does not get hit by the attack that was sent out to block it in the first place.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: The user can either split the wind in the turn used or in his next turn, if the wind has not hit the opponent yet or if he has enough time to split it
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Each individual blade of wind is A-rank, and the moment at which they once again combine forms the technique's S-rank power.
    Note: Can not use above S-rank in the same turn, nor can the user use wind in the same turn or the next.
    ____________
    -Approved-


    Note for the last jutsu: Roku approved a lightning variety of this one, hence why I am submitting a similar one for each element.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Buru no hane) Water Release: Blue Wing
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra:20 Chakra
    Damage: 30 Damage
    Description: This sword can be used to slash flames apart with Suiton chakra. It extrudes Suiton chakra around it, making it superior to Katon chakra, and if it hits/ hurts them, the Katon chakra will be weakened. If the user slams the blade into ground, the ground will soak, become wet. The original owner of this sword is Aruko Sarutobi, and only he can use it.


    ~Declined~ Far too generic. How is this different from any other water sword?
    (Suiton: Buru no hane) Water Release: Blue Wing
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra:20 Chakra
    Damage: 30 Damage
    Description: This sword can be used to slash flames apart with Suiton chakra. It extrudes Suiton chakra around it, making it superior to Katon chakra, and if it hits/ hurts them, the Katon chakra will be weakened. If the user slams the blade into ground, the ground will soak, become wet. It can be extruded with chakra, making it longer and wider anytime. The original owner of this sword is Aruko Sarutobi, and only he can use it.


    ±± Declined ±± Yeah....you didn't edit anything nor did you even read what the checker wrote. This is nothing that can be approved in such a generic manner and its nothing that hasn't been done before multiple times before. Don't resubmit. Also, i suggest that you look around the thread to get a feel of how to properly submit a technique.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Genjutsu: Matenrō (Illusion Technique: Skyscraper)
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user, after perform five hanseals, casts an illusion upon the intended target. The illusion makes the target believe the ground beneath them has exploded, and the brute force has shot them up into the darkness of space. Then, the target will see four belts appear from nowhere and bind them in place, which binds them in reality as well. Then a demonic toad-like creature will appear from the darkness and torture the bound target.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used three times a battle
    ~Paralysis lasts until the end of the turn this jutsu is used


    Genjutsu: Yotta Kasumi (Illusion Technique: Drunken Haze)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, after engaging in hand-to-hand combat with the target, applies a Genjutsu through the sense of touch which causes the target to begin to see multiple copies of the user, like an after image or the E-rank Clone Jutsu. The copies of the user follow the user's movements perfectly, (like playing the same movie on different screens and starting them all seconds apart), confusing the target as to which is the real user, and which is the real one to block.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Only one "copy" can be create per use of the jutsu
    ~This jutsu can stack, allowing the user to create up to three "copies" of themselves
    ~Each copy lasts for two turns after it's made

    Fuuton: Animâ (Wind Style: Anima)
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra into the sky above the battlefield, and create a large, fast spinning air current in the clouds, which draws in clouds to give the appearance of a thunderstorm. Because of the fast-moving air currents, in the middle of the clouds is a gaping hole. The air currents then begin to move at F-5 tornado speed while staying high in the sky, dragging objects (and people) from the ground into the clouds. By utilizing the same principle as the Tree Climbing Excersize, one can remain planted on the ground.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Lasts until the end of the opponents next turn
    ~Can only be used three times a battle


    ±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers
    Seeing as they were declined for being outside of the weekly markers, I'm resubmitting them to actually be looked at without changing anything.
    __________________________________________________ ______________
    Genjutsu: Matenrō (Illusion Technique: Skyscraper)
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user, after perform five hanseals, casts an illusion upon the intended target. The illusion makes the target believe the ground beneath them has exploded, and the brute force has shot them up into the darkness of space. Then, the target will see four belts appear from nowhere and bind them in place, which binds them in reality as well. Then a demonic toad-like creature will appear from the darkness and torture the bound target.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used three times a battle
    ~Paralysis lasts until the end of the turn this jutsu is used


    ±± Declined ±± Its a genjutsu....so how does it bind the opponent in reality? Also, this is an A-Rank gen, not an S-Rank. Take the word "paralysis" out. You don't paralyze your enemy, you make him feel as if he's bound and impossible to move.


    Fuuton: Animâ (Wind Style: Anima)
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra into the sky above the battlefield, and create a large, fast spinning air current in the clouds, which draws in clouds to give the appearance of a thunderstorm. Because of the fast-moving air currents, in the middle of the clouds is a gaping hole. The air currents then begin to move at F-5 tornado speed while staying high in the sky, dragging objects (and people) from the ground into the clouds. By utilizing the same principle as the Tree Climbing Excersize, one can remain planted on the ground.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Lasts until the end of the opponents next turn
    ~Can only be used three times a battle


    ±± Declined ±± Similar technique exist.


    New:

    Genjutsu: Fuantei (Illusion Technique: Unsteadiness)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Tayuya plays a high C sharp on her flute, which when hear by her target, triggers the genjutsu. This genjutsu affects the Cerebellum, and by stopping impulses from leaving this part of the brain, effectivly takes away all of the target's balance, making them unable to stand on their own.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used by a biography with a flute
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ~Lasts until the end of the target's next turn
    Link to approved Tayuya biography


    ±± Leaving for Emperor or Roku ±±
    ~ A Genjutsu doesn't actually stop all impulses from the cerebellum, it only makes the brain think so. Also, all impulses is too generic, the cerebellum has other functions too. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by V1nC3N7 V1c10U5 View Post
    Boseki (Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon (Sword)
    Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
    Range: Close/Mid
    Chakra: 0
    Damage:
    Description: Boseki was forged by Kuro Tamash in hopes of having a personal companion Boseki is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy.

    ~Boseki can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
    ~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
    ~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

    ~ ...It's a weapon ? Because the description looks like its a puppet. ~
    ___________________________________________
    Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponet causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponet to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attck the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponet cn see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confussion. This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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    Boseki Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the oppent uses chidori for example the Boseki can not absorb it). This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).

    ~ Get Boseki aproved first. ~


    Reposting
    Boseki Buredo (Tombstone the Blade)
    Type: Weapon (Sword)
    Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
    Range: Close/Mid
    Chakra: 0
    Damage:

    Description: Boseki Buredo is a sword thatwas forged by Kuro Tamashi in hopes of increasing his skill as a shinobi. Since he was born in the mist he was aware.of the power that the seven swordsmen held. He himself wanted a sword that could be considered for the acceptance if such organization. So he forged Boseki. Boseki Buredo is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki Buredo has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki Buredo was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy. This sword was made for use by only Kuro Tamashi, due to his size and the size of the sword he can use it with ease.

    ~Boseki Buredo can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
    ~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
    ~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki Buredo after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

    edit if need. ^^

    Consider these only if above custom weapon gets approved.

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    Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponent causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponent to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attack the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponent can see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confusion.

    ~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
    ~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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    Boseki Buredo Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki Buredo can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki Buredo is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the opponent uses chidori for example the Boseki Buredo can not absorb it).

    ~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
    ~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).


    ±± All Declined ±± First step to make something approvable... FOLLOW CORRECT TEMPLATE. Read the first post of this thread and look at what i bolded.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Tauburn- View Post
    (Baba: Baba Bunshin)- Hagfish Arts: Hagfish Clone
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user summons servile hagfish which make a clone of the summoner out of hagfish, once the clone is physically touched (By an opponent or physical object) the clone will collapse and release a mass of sticky slime from the bodies of the hagfish, and the hagfish will cover the opponent were they are, trapping the opponent where they hit the clone. The clone is only able to do simple things such as ninjutsu.
    - Normal clone rules apply.
    - The slime is released as the opponet makes contact with the clone.

    ±± Declined ±± Nope, i can't allow a clone that can use ninjutsu, specially without a rank limitation. This needs to be a Taijutsu only clone. Also, slime will be b-rank max and only trap something in direct contact.
    (Baba: Baba Bunshin)- Hagfish Arts: Hagfish Clone
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The user summons several hagfish which make a clone of the summoner out of hagfish, once the clone is physically touched (By an opponent or physical object) the clone will collapse and release a mass of sticky slime from the bodies of the hagfish, and the hagfish will cover the opponent were they are, trapping the opponent where they hit the clone. The clone is only able to do simple things such as free style Taijutsu (not Taijutsu techs).
    - Normal clone rules apply.
    - The sticky slime is released as the opponent makes contact with the clone.

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Futon: Kiri Sentou)- Wind Release: Drilling Fists
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (+5 for the fracture caused)
    Description: The user focuses wind chakra through their arm, then release it and forms a twister-like air current around his arm. Then once the user punches the twister acts as a drill capable of breaking through A rank earth, if the opponent is hit by the twister they're body will sustain a major fracture to the area hit.
    - Can never be used twice in the same post
    - Cannot use another wind jutsu for two jutsus after.

    ±± Declined ±± similar technique exists


    (Doton: Ookami Hora)- Earth Release: Wolf Cave
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will make two handseals focusing their earth chakra into their foot where they the slam their foot on the ground and create a giant wolf head out of the earth behind the opponent, the head emerges from the earth and closes its jaws on the opponent.
    - Can be used 4 times per battle


    ±± Declined ±± Similar technique exists.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Anubis~ View Post
    Re-Submitted
    Wind release : Wind vectors (Fuuton:Kaze bekutoru)
    Rank:B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user perform bird seal and than mold wind chakra throughout his body,then the user release out thin and sharp wind vectors(hand shaped) that can extend up to 10m radius and has slashing and cutting ability.the user can use this hands to deflect some advanced weapon like shuriken and kunais and the slash leaves a deep cut in the opponents body.
    Note
    -can be used twice in a battle-
    -user can create up to 4 wind vectors -
    -cannot use other wind technique while this technique is activated-
    -can be use/taught by anubis only-
    ~Declined~ Chakra cost is way off. And "while this is activated?" How long does this technique last, exactly?
    Re-Submitting again
    Wind release : Wind vectors (Fuuton:Kaze bekutoru)
    Rank:B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: the user perform bird seal and than mold wind chakra throughout his body,then the user release out thin and sharp wind vectors(hand shaped) that can extend up to 10m radius and has slashing and cutting ability.the user can use this hands to deflect some advanced weapon like shuriken and kunais and the slash leaves a deep cut in the opponents body.
    Note
    -can be used twice in a battle-
    -user can create up to 4 wind vectors -
    -cannot use other wind technique while this technique is activated and last only for 5min approx-
    -can be use/taught by anubis only-

    ±± Declined ±± 5 minutes? Yes, because our RP counts time through minutes and hours. Makes plenty of sense... =_= Just in case you don't understand my point, time in the RP is measure in TURNS. Also, vectors...what are those? because the name can mean so many things... You should explain a bit better.


    Earth Style Barrier:great earth dome destruction (Doton kekkai:kyousei doro domu kujo)
    Rank:A
    Range: short-mid
    chakra cost:20(+10 while collapsing the dome)
    damage cost:40
    Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user overturns the earth, causing it to rise up around his opponent(s).After the opponents are trapped under the dome the user does snake hand seal and collapse the dome turning the ground as it was before the dome was created crushing the opponent inside .
    Note:
    -can be used twice in battle-
    -can be use /taught by anubis only-


    ±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. If you submit a blunt copy of a cannon technique again, you will be punished by being banned for 2 submission cycles of this thread.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Sode no Shirayuki{Sleeved White Snow}
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40{if ability is used}
    Damage:80{if it comes in contact}
    Description:Sode no Shirayuki is a special sword developed by Rukia.When the sword is not active it does noting.But when Rukia says the word *Dance* her sword becomes frozen soild.A the ice is very ragged and can cut enemys really bad and cause the to bleed due to it being soild ice.Only C-Rank fire can melt the ice.When this sword comes in contact with water i freezes it and anything in it although Fire Techniques can melt the though.When some one besides Rukia tries to touch the blade will become frozen until she say *Release* in order to reverse it.
    -Can Freeze up to A-Rank Water
    -Can only be held by XxFallenUchihaxX
    -When Hit by a Wind Technique it tempurature drops make the frost harder
    -Sword loses frost if hit by C-Rank or higher Tecniques
    -Can only refrost 3 times per battle
    -Can cut through Wind jutsus up to A rank



    ±± Declined ±± A Sode no Shirayuki sword already exists so you might want to edit the name and base it out of something else.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I apologize ahead of time to whoever checks this

    Link to CFS Approval.

    Making the Ashura Senku into an actual jutsu. A quick description as well as a gif can be found in the link above.

    1. Ashura Senku|Asura Flashing Sky
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+10 if struck while Ashura Senku is active; -10 to user when Ashura Senku is active)
    Description: After activating the Satsui no Hadō, the user focuses a large amount of chakra throughout his/her body, using his rage and anger to 'warp' the chakra, so to speak, causing the characteristic red chakra flares around his/her body to bend around his body, creating a coat of chakra that manifests itself as a kind of after-image when the user moves, making it harder for the enemy to strike him head-on. The increase of chakra throughout his body also increases his speed sharply, effectively doubling it (note: this only applies if the user has not used any other jutsu/mode that enhances his strength, meaning it can't be used in conjunction to EIG, Sage Mode, etc. and only works DURING the Ashura Senku, thus making it an ideal jutsu for quick escape) during the time the jutsu is used. Once he has activated the Satsui no Hadō, the user widens his stance, and his enhanced chakra-cloak glows red. He then lifts one knee and quickly "glides" along the ground to another location with his eyes aglow. Where he glides depends on whether the user choices to move forward, backwards, or any other direction, so long as it is in a straight line from his starting position and no item (i.e. tree, giant rock, building, etc) is in his path. The glide can be used to get away from an opponent bearing down on him, to suddenly launch an attack (often from behind), or perhaps to simply psych out the opponent and keep them guessing. Due to the dark nature of the Satsui no Hadō, the red chakra around the user is imbibed with such an evil intent, that it actually hurts the user's skin and burns his skins slightly as he uses it, similar to how Naruto's skin is burned when using the 4-tailed transformation; however it works on both ends of the spectrum: as long as the Ashura Senku technique is active, the user's skin will be in intense pain but if an enemy were to strike him while it is active, they will feel the same pain, though on a greater scale when compared to the user. However, given all the perks of the jutsu, the user has much to be wary about. Only able to use the jutsu 3 times per fight, shall the user use it all three times, he runs the risk of the dark nature of the Satsui no Hadō taking over, causing him to become enraged and lose control of his sanity, making him unable to use jutsus higher than C-rank for two turns and no taijutsu for the rest of the fight due to intense physical pain. After using it, he speed is also dramatically decreased by half, causing him to severally be limited in terms of movement. Furthermore, the user is unable to use the jutsu in rapid succession. It takes a minimal of three turns in between before he is able to use the jutsu again.

    Notes:
    *Can only be used three times at a most, with a three turn waiting period in between.
    *After using once, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than A-rank that turn and no taijutsu of A-rank and higher for two turns.
    *After using twice, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than B-rank that turn and no tai of B-rank and higher for 5 turns.
    *After using all three times, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than C-rank for 3 turns and no taijutsu for the rest of the fight.
    *The user can only move uni-directionally, meaning he can only glide in straight lines. He also can only glide from one range to the next, meaning he can move from short range to mid range, mid range to long range and vice-versa but not short range to long range or long range to short range.
    *After the technique has ended, the user's speed is severely cut in half, causing him to move at speeds that make Gaara's running speed seem fast (Gaara is used as a reference, due to him being considered one of the slowest in-manga characters). This effect only lasts the turn the user uses the Ashura Senku. However, if the user uses this technique at the end of his turn, then his NEXT turn, he will have this lowered speed the entire turn.
    *Can't be used with any other mode or speed-enhancing jutsus.
    *Can only be used after the Satsui no Hadō has been activated.
    *Must have learned Satsui no Hadō and be at least 'User' rank within the Satsui no Hadō ranking system (See CFS for details).
    *Gilding isn't the same as flying or hovering. The user "kicks/jumps" into a direction so fast that he "glides" until he reaches the destination. As such, this technique can't be used in mid-air.

    ±± Approved ±± I actually think you made it have too many restrictions for what it really is and how it can be avoided/countered. I added a note and removed a restriction that didn't make sense


    I added as many restrictions as limits I could think of at the moment. There's a chance that it'll get declined but I'm willing to work as hard as I can to get it approved, even if it means submitting a heavily editted version where I can only jump backwards 4 feet with no chakra coating. Also, sorry for the wall of text .
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    (Hinode go-ruden)Golden Sunrise
    Type:Weapon
    Rank: E-A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: 10-60(Depends on wielders rank)
    Description: A brutal weapon forged with versatility and speed in mind.It is part chain-sickle weapon, part kyoketsu shoge (dagger with chain, hook and ring), and part modern fighting knife. The chain stretches about 9ft while the dagger and its black handle cover 10in. The stainless ball and chain allow for crushing blows, at ranges both near and far, as well as the ability to entrap enemy weapons or hands.A black nylon sheath with belt loop is included for carry while on the move, and the chain assembly may be easily detached and reattached using metal rings.
    When used to attack, the force created by the tension in the chain is all concentrated at the dagger making it capable of even splitting low ranked earth(D).The user can also channel lightening chakra through the chain and dagger causing it to numb a part of an opponent it comes into contact with for 1 turn(counts as a move).


    ±± Declined ±± to submit an A-Rank weapon you need to be at least Jounin rank
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Lava Style: Lava Streams (Youton: Yōgan-ryū)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: this is a technique that was invented by kurotsuchi after seeing darui perform laser circus at the 5 kage summit .the user gathers a large amount of dense lava style chakra into a ball the floats in front of him (the lava can be gathered from any lava source) the user can then manipulate it so that any number of dense, sharp lava streams (the number can range from 1 to 15) can burst out of the orb (the less there are the stronger they are) these will then shoot out at fast pace toward a desired target these can then be used to burn, restrain, distract or cut the enemy
    Note: Move very fast
    Note: can change direction mid use
    Note: can only be used 4 times a battle
    Note: must have lava source
    Note: streams lose power depending on the number made losing a rank for every 5 made (1-5 is A, 5-10 is B and 10-15 is C)

    ±± Declined ±± Move very fast? No... Lava "beams" is already pushing the reality of the element to the extreme. Making them move very fast is simply illogical. Also, the streams lose their power...take that off. Also, Mid-range tops.


    Lava Style: Viscosity Change (Youton:Neba tabi henka)
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Any
    Chakra: +10
    Damage: +10 (if decreasing viscosity this is due to the increased heat and if increasing due to the added concussive power)
    Description: by adding extra fire or eath chakra when performing/preparing a lava style jutsu the viscosity of the lava produced can be changed. if viscosity is decreased by adding more fire chakra the lava will flow more quickly because it is less dense however the concussive power behind it will be lessened due to the loss of density. the opposite will happen if more earth chakra is kneaded in because the earth will be melted less and as a result thicker.

    Note: if viscosity is increased then due to the added amount of earth chakra the lava jutsu will gain a plus one rank advantage to jutsu's that rely on releasing the concussive power to be effective (like many defensive earth jutsu) at the trade off of moving more slowly and being cooler in temperature.
    Note: if you add more fire chakra the lava will be much hotter and move much more quickly but will be weak (lose one rank) against jutsu that rely on cancelling out concussive power
    Note: can only be used once per turn
    Note: more viscous techs are weaker against techs that rely on cooling (most water techs) to stop a lava tech (1 rank) were as less viscous are more resistant (1 rank) this is due to the difference in temperature

    ±± Declined ±± Idea is good but the way you worded it specially in the restrictions makes little to no sense. +10 why? also, can you use this in another technique that you just used? do you activate this? Also, you have a problem in your logic. Fluid lava = hotter lava, Denser Lava = cooler one.


    Name: Lava wolves (Yoton: Yōgan no ōkami)
    Type: offensive
    Rank: S-rank
    Damage: 80
    Chakra cost: 40
    Description: the user gathers up lava chakra from all over there body and depending upon which method they choose can either spew it out of their mouth in the form of a massive gathering of lava or pour it down into the earth turning it into a large amount (about 15m) of lava (this can be skipped if a large amount of lava (15m) is present). once this has been done the user compacts the the lava near its limit forming it into 1-6 wolves each slightly bigger than a regular wolf (due to how pressurized and dense the wolves are they are very hard to destroy). they then send the wolves toward an intended target once they reach the target the wolves can scratch maul and burn the target, however their most dangerous trait is that they can bite a target and as their jaws close down upon it the pressure builds up even more greatly pushing the lava to such a point that i cant be held together anymore causing them to explode into a shower of thick scolding hot lava that can both crush and burn an enemy to death.

    Note: can only be used 3 times a battle
    Note: due to the immense pressure inside the wolves the jutsu can only be held for two turns
    Note: they move slightly faster than an average ninja running
    Note: each of the wolves is B-rank
    Note: the pressure inside the wolves takes a couple of seconds to be released meaning that once an opon there is about a 3 second interval before the wolf actually explodes giving the opponent a chance to escape
    Note: due to the massive amount of concentration it takes to keep the wolves together (this is because of the massive pressure inside them) the user can not perform more then 2 jutsu for the period of time in which the wolves are activated
    Note: The explosion reaches up to mid range


    ±± Declined ±± done countless times before for almost all other elements...
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Hayate Gekko View Post
    (Fuuton:Kyuutou Teishi)-Wind release:Jump Prohibitor
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user will perform the Ram hand seal and exhale a large stream of wind a little above the opponent and the perform another hand seal wich will make the previously exhaled stream of wind take the form of a large,flat just around 20 cm above the opponents head.The disc will cover a 10m radius around the opponent.Once formed the disc of wind will start spinning rapidly unabling the opponent to jump and move upwards.If someone touches the disc of wind it causes deep cuts and wounds.
    ~Note:If not destroyed the disc will remain on the field for two turns.
    ~Note:No S rank wind techniques the same turn this is used.
    ~Can be used two times per battle.
    ~Declined~ Takes the form of a large, flat what? Disk? I'd like you to reduce the radius, considering this technique is of B rank. Either reduce it or increase its rank.
    I added the damage.
    (Fuuton:Kyuutou Teishi)-Wind release:Jump Prohibitor
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user will perform the Ram hand seal and exhale a large stream of wind a little above the opponent and the perform another hand seal wich will make the previously exhaled stream of wind take the form of a large,flat disc just around 20 cm above the opponents head.The disc will cover a 10m radius around the opponent.Once formed the disc of wind will start spinning rapidly unabling the opponent to jump and move upwards.If someone touches the disc of wind it causes deep cuts and wounds.
    ~Note:If not destroyed the disc will remain on the field for two turns.
    ~Note:No S rank wind techniques the same turn this is used.
    ~Can be used two times per battle.

    I increased the rank instead.


    ±± Declined ±± The idea may be interesting but it has been done before. Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hachidori) - Hummingbird
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will flow their chakra into their sword and concentrate it. Through the motion os swinging the sword the user causes the chakra to react abnormally causing it to vibrate within the blades edge to high frequencies that when clashing with an object or opponent causing the vibrating energy to be released at the opponent which generates a noise like a hummingbirds wings but with more potency that causes the opponent to involuntarily fall back into covering their ears in an attempt to muffle the sound and subsequently leaving them open for further attack.
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    (Junrei no Michi) - Pilgrims Road
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user by flowing their chakra into their sword will control and manipulate it to create multiple blades of chakra to extend from the initial blade branching out in front of the user up to 1 meter in length. The user can use this as a method of surprise by attacking with their sword to gain close quarters and then extending the various blades from various angles to attack their opponent.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
    ____________
    -Approved-


    (Yama no Hōkai) - Collapsing Mountain
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will channel chakra into their arms and blade and then acquiring the Jodan no Kamae stance raising the sword to above their head and taking a central body posture with the left foot forwards and the right foot backwards the user then brings the sword down with devastating power to break through many defenses through using the understanding of ones joints to maximize performance with the least wastage. However as this is taken under a kendo stance the wielding of the sword allows a user to still subsequently react in time to most incoming techniques other than those that would require heightened perceptive and reactive capabilities.
    ____________
    -Approved-
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Izumi Wana) Earth Release: Spring Trap
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The uses performs two quick handseals, which brings up a stone pillar in front of the opponent(s), charging them. Causing them to re-act by jumping backwards, and then two large spikes raise from the ground with such speed, they penetrate the opponents back(s) without warning.
    -If the opponent(s) do not move out of the way of the stone pillar, they'll be pushed into the spikes-
    -If the opponent(s) manages to jump either to the left, right, or up, they'll be able to avoid the spikes-
    -Do to the sound of the pillar rising from the ground, the rising spikes behind the opponent(s) remain undetectable-
    -Can only be used twice per Opponent-
    -Taught by Smirk-



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    (Suiton: Henteko Shio) Water Release: Strange Tides
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user creates a thick water vortex, either around them self for defense, around them self and the opponent(s) to limit the opponents movements, or around the opponent(s) only, to trap them. The huge vortex has many smaller vortex's inside of it, allowing the user to attack the opponent with them. Do to the density and rapid speeds of movement in the water vortex, if anyone were to directly try to go through it, they will take massive damage, possibly drown.
    -Cannot use any S-rank water jutsu for Two turns-
    -Needs a water source-
    -Taught by Smirk-



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    (Raiton: Raikou Shindou Mizu Gen'ei) Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Water Illusion
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User spits out water chakra , creating a desirable woman made of water, appearing to be reaching out for the opponent. The Opponent believes their in some kind of genjutsu, disrupting their focus. While the user strikes the opponent(s) with a Lightning bolt from behind.
    -Opponents with B-rank to Mastery level of genjutsu can tell that it is not a genjutsu-
    -Taught by Smirk-



    ±± All Declined ±± As stated countless times before: no formatting apart from bolding the title of the technique and bolding the changes on resubmissions.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Ototon: Te Ru Shinobi ) - Sound Release: Handless Ninja
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels his sound chakra into his Katana and swings it towards his opponent, should his Katana connect with his opponents weapon the vibration is passed along through to the opponent's weapon and then his hands leaving him unable to hold his Katana or use his hands due to the sonic vibrations released. Should the opponent dodge the katana rather than defend from it, the sound is released and damages the opponents ears, affecting it for 2 turns, not allowing the enemy to hear clearly and also affecting their balance, making them struggle to keep on their two feet without saying from time to time.
    Note: Hands cannot be used for 2 turn.
    Note: Hearing is affected for two turns, should they dodge rather than defend.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No other sound jutsu in same turn.
    ~Leaving for Scorps~

    Sound training.
    Resubmitting. (I think it was missed.) Changed name and fixed the odd word.

    (Ototon: Takai Dageki) - Sound Release: Death strike
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user channels his sound chakra into his Katana and swings it towards his opponent, should his Katana connect with his opponents weapon the vibration is passed along through to the opponent's weapon and to his hands leaving him unable to hold his Katana or use his hands due to the sonic vibrations released. Should the opponent dodge the katana rather than defend from it, the sound is released and damages the opponents ears, affecting it for 2 turns, not allowing the enemy to hear clearly and also affecting their balance, making them struggle to keep on their two feet without swaying from time to time.
    Note: Hands cannot be used for 2 turn.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No other sound jutsu in same turn.
    Note: Hearing is affected for two turns, should they dodge rather than defend.

    ±± I'm leaving this one for Emperor because for me it makes no sense. Focusing "sound chakra" into a katana would produce sound...and as such, it would manifest itself as sound... What you are trying to produce is basically within the concept of Vibration Release, the CE. But lets see what Emperor says since he understands more of sound than me ±±
    ~ Agreed. ~

    Dropping this:

    Hansou Katana:- (The Transporting blade)
    Rank:S
    Type: Weapon/ Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Range:Short
    Descrition: The ‘Transport blade’ is a blade which has a unique ability of being able to create a perfect clone of itself in the users other hand (depending on which hand he is holding it on) at any time the user requires her too. This enables the user to switch from a one sword fighting style to a dual sword fighting style and can also be used perform a surprise attack on his opponents.
    Note: Can only be wielded by Erzo and those he allows.
    Note: Creating a clone of the blade counts as one of the users move.
    Note: Creating a clone the of blade can only be used 4 times.
    For this:

    Rettenjō : Violent Heavens Above
    Rank:S
    Type: Weapon / Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Range: Short
    Description: An ancient sword forged in a land where beasts ran amuck, causing chaos and destruction. The sword was imbued with a large amount of chakra, as well as the bloodthirst and actually blood of the beasts it had been used to slay as the blacksmith struggled to protect himself mid-forging. The sword was passed down through the ages, falling from one sect or group to another being wielded even by samurais. Each owner of the sword having a brutal and terrifying power.

    Abilities
    The sword is said to be able to release illusionary projections of wild beasts with each swing, the assortment of beasts ranging from big cats, to hawks, to wolves and dogs alike and even the mighty dragons. The beasts were completely illusionary and served as nothing more than a distraction for the most part, the beasts however took on the properties of the respective animal, for instance a Bear projection would have a perfect sense of smell. What really made the sword devastating however, was that the user could focus chakra into the projections, making it so that at the exact moment, and only the moment in which the beast attempts to bite down on the oppnent, it materializes into solid matter vanishing seconds later. This made the illusions a double edged sword, unless you completely avoided the beast's mouth, you were susceptible to its fangs, and while concentrating on the beasts, you were susceptible to the enemy. The user is capable of determining what kind of chakra to add to the beasts, whether it be normal chakra or elemental chakra, regardless the “Solidified beast’s” remained S rank, and retained their elemental weaknesses/strengths.

    Restrictions
    -Illusions can only be materialized once per turn.

    -Materialization of beasts counts as one of the users turns.

    - The sword can only produce when the sword is swung, as such if the sword is stopped mid- swing the illusions dissipate.

    -After materializing beasts 3 times, the user must wait two turns to do so again. If the user only uses the illusions without adding his own chakra, it still counts as a move but it doesn't go towards the count. (So I can use the illusions freely since they do no harm)


    ±± Declined ±± So...how exactly do these illusions appear happen. Also, rank of these illusions? because if they are genjutsu, which i assume they are, you need to rank the technique the sword produces. Simplify it please.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suiton:Mizu Deguchi funshutsu (Water Geyser Eruption
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user places performs 5 hand seals than places their hands on the ground sending their chakra down into the water table underground. By manipulating the water the user forces the water to erupt to the surface in the form of giant spikes (like kimmimaro's bone forest). The user than can say release causing the spikes to exploding shooting water bullets everywhere.
    Note: can only be taught by Uchihaj
    Note: can only be used twice
    Note: the user cannot use suiton for 2 turns

    Tsurigi no Shoukin: Sword of Redemption
    Rank:
    Type: Weapon/Sword
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Description: Family heirloom of Zeinzu and Tsubasa's father. The sword made of dense obsidian and glows with a tint of red and black. The swords is capable of slicing through most materials making it comparable to the strength of diamond. The sword has the capability of absorbing up to S-rank katon jutsu and sending the jutsu back at the user.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Uchihaj


    Katon: rasen doragon: Spiral Dragon Jutsu
    Type: Defense/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: short-mid
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80
    description: the user performs 3 hand seals, takes a large breathe in and begins to rotate (kinda like kaiten). As the user begins to spin he releases the breathe in the forms of fire. The fire forms a spiral cylinder which surrounds the user protecting him from jutsus(of A rank and lower or S rank wind). The spiral peaks about 10ft above the ground with a dragon head at the top. The dragon can than be used to attack the enemy.
    Note: cannot use katon for two turns
    Note: dragon attack cannot be used till turn after original use
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchihaj
    Note: User is weak to attacks from below....


    ±± All Declined ±± Water one already exists and plenty of absorbable and infusable swords already in the RP. The fire one isn't possible. Hyugas can do that because they have a 360º field, enabling them to not lose sight of their opponent while rotating and they also have an increased agility that enabled them to rotate at such high speed.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Updating: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=3481

    (Custom Weapon) - Rebellion
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+ 30 for blocking each fire attack)
    Damage: (20 base attack for normal use) (+15 damage to every fire based jutsu)
    Description: the Rebellion sword is made out of a special metal that is able to use the user's fire chakra , it has a large white blade with a silver skull shaped handle ,it's worn on the user's back like Kakashi's sword when he was young , when the user channels his fire chakra into the blade, a fire Aura surrounds the white blade making the sword more lighter and enhancing the user with faster reactions and turning the blades color into bloody red, as long as the user is wielding the blade he can perform any fire technique with the use of only a single handseal, also by adding the +30 fire chakra of the user to the blade , the blade can block fire techniques up to A-rank negating the fire and absorbing it but still receives a certain amount of damage from the attack.
    ~ Cannot be used without mastering the fire element.
    ~ User takes -10 damage when absorbing a fire technique.
    ~ Can only block fire techniques 3 times per battle.
    ~ Can only be weilded by ~Crow~
    (Sōdō) - Rebellion
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+30 for blocking each fire attack)
    Damage: (20 base attack for normal use) (+15 damage to every fire based jutsu)
    Description: the Rebellion sword is made out of a special metal that is able to use the user's fire chakra , it has a large white blade with a silver skull shaped handle ,it's worn on the user's back like Kakashi's sword when he was young , when the user channels his fire chakra into the blade, a fire Aura surrounds the white blade making the sword more lighter and enhancing the user with faster reactions and turning the blades color into bloody red, as long as the user is wielding the blade he can perform any fire technique with the use of only a single handseal, also by adding the +30 fire chakra of the user to the blade , the blade can block fire techniques up to A-rank negating the fire and absorbing it but still receives a certain amount of damage from the attack.
    Note: Cannot be used without mastering the fire element.
    Note: User takes -10 damage when absorbing a fire technique.
    Note: Can only block fire techniques 3 times per battle.
    Note: Can be wielded by Dante.. or those who have received permission from him.


    ±± Pending ±± If you try to update this sword i'll need to remove the damage boosts because those aren't acceptable anymore. So, basically, updating it will mean losing its abilities.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-20-2012 at 10:26 PM.

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