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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Ninpō: Akuma Hōka) - Ninja Art: Demonic Fire
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 5
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a basic ninjutsu technique used by Ryūzetsu, to give her fire techniques a more "unique" shape than the other users of fire techniques, similar to the shape of the "Fire Release: Demon Lanturn" technique, Ryūzetsu's fire techniques have somewhat of a transparent effect to it, allowing Ryūzetsu and others to see through the fire technique but a more of a distorted vision of what's behind the fire, and whenever she's using a fire technique that consists of small fireballs like for example the "Fire Release: Phoenix Fire Technique" all of the small fireballs attain a demonic head-shaped fireball, this technique doesn't increase or decrease the strength of any fire techniques whatsoever.
    Note: Will remain continuously activated once used.
    Note: Can only be used by Ryūzetsu.

    Ryūzetsu biography.
    ~Approved~ Pretty well done.

    (Katon: Rēfudō) - Fire Release: Floating Ghosts
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 [+10 per turn to maintain active]
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing 3 handseals Boar → Monkey → Tiger the user convers the chakra inside their body into fire as they release it outwards, causing 3 floating demonic heads of fire to form around them in a spiraling manner , each of the orbs having an equivalent size to the "Big Ball Rasengan" technique, these demonic floating heads have the main purpose of protecting the user, as they continuously spin around the user in a motion that resembles planets orbiting around the sun, with the user's command via chakra, these floating heads "separately or all together" collide with other incoming techniques in order to cancel each other out, each of these floating demonic heads is able to withstand a C-rank elemental technique, two can withstand a B-ranked elemental technique, and altogether an A-ranked elemental technique, along with being able to deflect/melt incoming projectiles sent towards the user.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Lasts 3 turns once used.

    ~ Even all three of them together cannot handle an A-ranked water technique. Don't try to be cute by stating 'elemental', 'elemental' everywhere in all your techniques to try to get slightly more OPed, or I'll decline the lot of them. Explain in detail. ~

    (Katon: Rēshushi) - Fire Release: Ghost Destruction
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After forming 5 handseals Bird → Boar → Monkey → Ram → Tiger the user concentrates a large amount of fire chakra throughout the ground, underneath the opponent's location, causing a Large sized demonic head made of flames to rise up out of the ground underneath the opponent's location in a vertical line, with it's mouth widening as it's opening in order to swallow the opponent and burn them, this demonic head is equivalent in size to the Earth Release: Great Stone Golem technique, the user is able to cause multiple demonic heads from the ground however the size divides among the demonic heads that are formed however the user is only able to divide them into 4 demonic heads max.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: No S-ranked fire techniques in the same turn.

    ~ Remove the division part. ~
    (Ninpō: Akuma Hōka) - Ninja Art: Demonic Fire
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 5 (-5 per Fire technique)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a basic ninjutsu technique used by a proficient Fire release user, to give her fire techniques a more "unique" shape than the other users of fire techniques, similar to the shape of the "Fire Release: Demon Lanturn" technique, The user's fire techniques have somewhat of a transparent effect to it, allowing the user and others to see through the fire technique but a more of a distorted vision of what's behind the fire, and whenever the user's using a fire technique that consists of small fireballs like for example the "Fire Release: Phoenix Fire Technique" all of the small fireballs attain a demonic head-shaped fireball, this technique doesn't increase or decrease the strength of any fire techniques whatsoever.
    Note: Will remain continuously activated once used.
    Note: Must have a Primary Fire Release affinity.
    Note: Fire techniques are still visible, even with normal eyesight.


    ±± Approved ±±

    (Katon: Rēfudō) - Fire Release: Floating Ghosts
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 [+10 per turn to maintain active]
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing 3 handseals Boar → Monkey → Tiger the user convers the chakra inside their body into fire as they release it outwards, causing 3 floating demonic heads of fire to form around them in a spiraling manner , each of the orbs having an equivalent size to the "Big Ball Rasengan" technique, these demonic floating heads have the main purpose of protecting the user, as they continuously spin around the user in a motion that resembles planets orbiting around the sun, with the user's command via chakra, these floating heads "separately or all together" collide with other incoming techniques in order to cancel each other out, each of these floating demonic heads is able to withstand a C-rank elemental technique, two can withstand a B-ranked elemental technique, and altogether an A-ranked elemental technique however this doesn't apply to the water release techniques or any weakness that the fire release may have, it's only able to withstand 1 D-ranked water technique with 1 demonic head, 2 Demonic heads can withstand a C-rank water technique, and all together could withstand a B-ranked water technique, this applies to other Fire release's elemental weaknesses as well. along with being able to deflect/melt incoming normal projectiles weapons (kunais, shurikens, etc) sent towards the user.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Lasts 3 turns once used.

    ±± Approved ±±


    (Katon: Rēshushi) - Fire Release: Ghost Destruction
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After forming 5 handseals Bird → Boar → Monkey → Ram → Tiger the user concentrates a large amount of fire chakra throughout the ground, underneath the opponent's location, causing a Large sized demonic head made of flames to rise up out of the ground underneath the opponent's location in a vertical line, with it's mouth widening as it's opening in order to swallow the opponent and burn them, this demonic head is equivalent in size to the Earth Release: Great Stone Golem technique.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: No S-ranked fire techniques in the same turn.

    ±± Approved ±±
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-06-2012 at 07:43 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Red Footed Booby- Hi Tori)- Red Footed Booby: Fire Bird
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra:20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    The red footed booby, with use of his fire affinity, channels fire chakra into his lungs and emits from his mouth a fire bird half his size, that launches towards the target exploding when in contact with the target.

    NOTE: He (the red footed booby) is the size of sasuke's hawk.
    ~ Can only be used by the Red Footed Booby
    ~ Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    Link To contract approved.
    Link To approval of Red Footed Booby (second submission)

    ±± Declined ±± Sorry but this is a waste. Your summon can already use B-Rank fire techniques. This said, plenty of fire techniques already allow similar effects and uses. You'd be wasting a CJ slot.


    (Joutei Koshi rudo)- God's Ultimate Shield
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description:
    An Acient Shield found in the mountains of Kumogakure, said to be a shield strong enough to be wieled by God, having a rombus like shape, with a steel border around and an crystal like face that is as strong as real steel, with a white symbol in the middle, this shield is capable of shooting 10 meteor like guided shots from its crystal face that rain down towards the target, either from the fire, lightning or water elements by having the user channel the elemental chakra into it the water version having chakra infused with it, dealing strikes with massive force, same for lightning and fire, and can also block any fire, water, and lightning technique and is B-rank and below.

    ~ Can only be used by Mugetsū, and those who he may allow.
    ~ The special technique counts towards 1 of the 3 techniques of the user per turn.
    ~ Must have started training in Water, Lightning, and Fire release to block such elemental techniques, as well as use the special technique of the shield.

    Looks:

    Looks of Special Technique with Water:



    ±± Declined ±± Bolded part makes no sense whatsoever.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 06-06-2012 at 07:50 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton/Fuuton: Taiyou Keiretsu) - Earth/Wind Style: Solar System
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short (long when fired)
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+10 each turn active)
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: User when flying in air, summons 8 equal earth spheres all around him coated in wind chakra. Wind chakra makes them light in weight and gives them speed. As the moment the spehers are summoned, they start spinning on their own axis and simultaneously start revolving around the user, much like rotation and revolution of planets around the sun. But they revolve in arbitrary direction. The spheres revolve with that great speed, that it seems to creates a big sphere around the user. Due to this technique being the user's own, he will be able to predict where gaps and open space will be. And because of this he will be able to look out of those spaces and gaps to the opponent and will have a blur look. However the opponent can't predict this spratic movement right away unless he has sharingan or a finely tuned set of eyes. This means that until the opponent gets a steady feel for the rotation and revolution of the large earthen spheres he cannot pinpoint the user inside. This takes one full turn to understand and gain the knowledge needed to predict the movement and pinpoint the user inside. This property is the same as in an atom. How the electrons orbit the nucleus randomly and are very hard as to predict where one electron will be at any given time. The main working of this technique is that, all spheres revolve around the user at 5m distance, no exception. And when user moves in air for some distance the spheres also move for that distance, making it look like the whole big sphere is moving. User can also fire 1 sphere (at a time) from the revolving ones at a enemy, which moves at very fast speed, suddenly and unexpectedly.

    Note: -Spheres revolve with that great speed that if user goes near the surface of water, then water starts getting away, and when user gets down the water, then also not a single droplet will enter the big sphere.
    -If someone even touches the revolving spheres, then he will receive very high damage due to slicing wind around the spheres and due to speed and weight of earth spheres themselves. Which might result in obliteration of one's limb or the part from which he touches.
    -Can't perform any A-Rank and above wind and earth technique in same turn.
    -Can't use any tech above S-Ranks in next turn.
    -Can't use any tech above B-Rank of wind and earth, next turn.
    -Each sphere is of 1m diameter.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~ Declined, numerous similar techniques exist. Also, as a science student, the bit about the atom made me cringe because it's wrong. ~

    Major thanks to Howard for helping me out with this technique.


    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Genjutsu: Za Gyakuten Kansei) - Illusion Arts: The Reversal Trap
    Type: Offense/Defense/supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: This kind of genjutsu acts as both offense and defense. This jutsu is used when user is trapped under a high ranked genjutsu and is unable to break free from it. User passes his strong amount of chakra thoroughly in his brain and reads the function(s) of the genjutsu used on him. And just after reading the function(s) carefully, user disrupts and overcomes the enemy's chakra in his brain and thus breaking free from the genjutsu. And simultaneously he passes his own chakra into his opponent's brain and shows him the same genjutsu. This all happens in just blink of an eye, so that to enemy it seems that he used the genjutsu on himself or his enemy knows the same genjutsu or this is some trick of his opponent etc.
    Note: - (-30) damage to user because of concentrating very high chakra in brain.
    -Concentration level decreases for next turn.
    -Can't perform any genjutsu for next 2 turns.
    -Can't perform any S-Rank or above jutsu in same turn.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~ No Forbidden rank genjutsu ~
    (Genjutsu: Za Gyakuten Kansei) - Illusion Arts: The Reversal Trap
    Type: Offense/Defense/supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This kind of genjutsu acts as both offense and defense. This jutsu is used when user is trapped under a high ranked genjutsu and is unable to break free from it. User passes his strong amount of chakra thoroughly in his brain and reads the function(s) of the genjutsu used on him. And just after reading the function(s) carefully, user disrupts and overcomes the enemy's chakra in his brain and thus breaking free from the genjutsu. And simultaneously he passes his own chakra into his opponent's brain and shows him the same genjutsu. This all happens in just blink of an eye, so that to enemy it seems that he used the genjutsu on himself or his enemy knows the same genjutsu or this is some trick of his opponent etc.
    Note: -Can't perform any genjutsu for next turn.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

    Removed some restrictions.

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    Dropping my below CW, iff this CW gets approved.
    Link to where it got Approved.
    Shinigami Reaper
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
    Description: The sword was made by ancient priests of hell and heaven at a sacred place by using hairs, bones, skin, blood and senses of a living shinigami himself which gave the sword life and transforming ability. The sword was named after the shinigami. And it is believed that the shinigami is living in the form of sword now.
    The size of the sword is very big. The hilt itself is of 2m height, and the blade is of 3m height making a total length of 5m. It is a double-edged sword. And have a little curvature in the edge part and pointed on front. The sword is quite thick but the whole blade is covered with the hairs of shinigami which are very sharp, as a normal katana. The blade is bloody red in colour which is supposed to be the blood of millions of people killed by it and of shinigami himself. It also has 2 black strips originating from the rain guard to some extent on blade, and it was supposed to be the curse of people died from it.

    Abilities:
    -This sword is indestructible
    -It has life of its own just like samehada and thus it can react on its own when required when its transformed into an animal.
    -When Chakra is passed to the sword, the sword transforms into an elemental animal familiar that represents the element used |Fire- Phoenix|, |Water-Shark|, |Earth- Dragon|, |Lightning- Snakes|, |Wind- Porcupine|
    -The sword only listens to Enzup.

    Restrictions:
    -Passing any chakra to the sword, counts as a move, which is equivalent to S-rank Offense/Defense/Supplementary.
    -Transformation lasts for a maximum of 4 turns and can only be done twice
    -If opponent's chakra neutralizes or overcomes the animal's chakra (when transformed), then the transformed animal will come to its normal form again. i.e. in sword form.
    -The sword transforms into an elemental version of the animal and not an animal on itself.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this sword, then he will receive an addition of +20 damage points.
    -Sword cannot sense chakra.
    -The size of the animal in which the sword transforms differs little to nothing from the normal size of the sword.
    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    (Kurodoa) - Klodoa
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
    Description: Klodoa is a living staff whose lower part is made up of flexible element. The upper part is skull with a blue sphere in its mouth. It can levitate on its own. Enzup made Klodoa his personal weapon after he found it in very bad condition when Brain/Zero crushed it in pieces. After taking it into his possession, Enzup made a few changes in it, which made it indestructible and gave it form chaging ability. He also put a lot of his own chakra in the sphere so that Klodoa can use it in battles, since klodoa was not having chakra of its own. It is quite frightening from its looks, but can be funny at times.
    When the staff changes its form it takes the form of a giant 5m axe-like weapon bearing two crescent moon-shaped blades fused together at the backs, with a large looped chain connected to the shaft at the end of the handle. This is known as "Ultimate form". The chain can be connected to user's waist, allowing him to perform long-ranged attacks. The special ability which makes the form of the weapon unique is that it can vibrate its crescent moon-shaped blades on its own, at very high speeds, such that the blades start looking blur. This is done when the weapon comes to know that the user is going to attack something using it, so using its sense, it start vibrating on its own and thus it can literally cut through any solid with ease.

    Abilities:
    -It is indestructible in both forms.
    -Klodoa has life of its own in both of its forms. But can speak only in its original form.
    -When in Ultimate form, it can cut through any solid.
    -User can choose any B-Ranked water technique and boost it with two ranks.

    Restrictions:
    -Only original form can levitate on its own, which is similar to "(Kusanagi No Tsurugi: Kuu no Tachi)" but in this case user don't have to do anything.
    -Can change its form anytime, but once form is changed it has to remain in that form for minimum of 3 turns.
    -After using the vibration ability to cut a solid, it needs some time to re-use it again, i.e. once per every 2 turns.
    -Boosting water ability can be used 3 times which does that not count towards 1/3 moves. But after using it for 3 times, if user wants to use it again then it will count towards 1/3 moves.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this weapon, then he will receive an addition of 10 damage points.
    -Every elemental ninjutsu used by user gets -5 damage points while the time the weapon is on battlefield.
    -User's concentration level decreases a bit and as a result user have to apply +5 chakra points in any technique used, regardless of rank. Also user have to perform an addition of 5 handseals in any technique which requires more than 8 handseals.
    -User's speed slightly decreases while holding the Ultimate form because of its quite heavy weight.
    -User can't use any Forbidden-Rank jutsu while holding the weapon.
    -It only listens to Enzup. And no one can lift the ultimate form b'coz of its heavy weight, but due to mastery and practice in wielding of this weapon, and support of weapon itself, only Enzup can lift it without any serious problem.




    Note: -My previous CW was also having life, and since I am dropping it, I am putting life in this CW.
    -The chakra in the sphere can be used for using jutsus, which I will be making in future, like in the spoiler below.

    -These are all restrictions I can think of, as of now

    ~Declined~ Overpowered
    (Kurodoa) - Klodoa
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
    Description: Klodoa is a living staff whose lower part is made up of flexible element. The upper part is skull with a blue sphere in its mouth. It can levitate on its own. Enzup made Klodoa his personal weapon after he found it in very bad condition when Brain/Zero crushed it in pieces. After taking it into his possession, Enzup made a few changes in it, which made it indestructible and gave it form chaging ability. He also put a lot of his own chakra in the sphere so that Klodoa can use it in battles, since klodoa was not having chakra of its own. It is quite frightening from its looks, but can be funny at times.
    When the staff changes its form it takes the form of a giant 5m axe-like weapon bearing two crescent moon-shaped blades fused together at the backs, with a large looped chain connected to the shaft at the end of the handle. This is known as "Ultimate form". The chain can be connected to user's waist, allowing him to perform long-ranged attacks. The special ability which makes the form of the weapon unique is that it can vibrate its crescent moon-shaped blades on its own, at very high speeds, such that the blades start looking blur. This is done when the weapon comes to know that the user is going to attack something using it, so using its sense, it start vibrating on its own and thus it can literally cut through any solid with ease.

    Abilities:
    -It is indestructible in both forms.
    -Klodoa has life of its own in both of its forms. But can speak only in its original form.
    -When in Ultimate form, it can cut through any solid.

    Restrictions:
    -Only original form can levitate on its own, which is similar to "(Kusanagi No Tsurugi: Kuu no Tachi)" but in this case user don't have to do anything.
    -Can change its form anytime, but once form is changed it has to remain in that form for minimum of 3 turns.
    -After using the vibration ability to cut a solid, it needs some time to re-use it again, i.e. once per every 2 turns.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this weapon, then he will receive an addition of 10 damage points.
    -Every elemental ninjutsu used by user gets -5 damage points while the time the weapon is on battlefield.
    -User's concentration level decreases a bit and as a result user have to apply +5 chakra points in any technique used, regardless of rank. Also user have to perform an addition of 5 handseals in any technique which requires more than 8 handseals.
    -User's speed slightly decreases while holding the Ultimate form because of its quite heavy weight.
    -User can't use any Forbidden-Rank jutsu while holding the weapon.
    -It only listens to Enzup. And no one can lift the ultimate form b'coz of its heavy weight, but due to mastery and practice in wielding of this weapon, and support of weapon itself, only Enzup can lift it without any serious problem.

    Completely removed the "Water Boosting ability by 2 ranks".



    Note: -My previous CW was also having life, and since I am dropping it, I am putting life in this CW.
    -The chakra in the sphere can be used for using jutsus, which I will be making in future, like in the spoiler below.


    ~ Declined, the vibrating thing exists in different techniques already. ~

    ±± Leaving all of these for Emperor ±±
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-08-2012 at 11:02 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -General Phaze- View Post
    ~Weapon Submission~ Changed the weapon powers. Hopefully its not TOO common

    (How the weapon looks)

    (Pykyouto) Pure Rebel
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: This Weapon Blade tips was formed from very Hard dark diamond. Channeled with wind chakra on one blade and i channel water into the other blade (The tips are the blades im talking about) The sword was pass down from a family of generals and now General Phaze is the modern master of it. The sword dont respond to nobody chakra except generals. If anybody else touch or handle it. it would seem just like a regular 2bladed sword. The sword is very unique for 2 reasons A Defensive and a Offensive.. Defensive: The sword can sense any chakra presence . It will give off chakra waves into me when another unknown chakra presence is close. Also . If i Stab the sword on the ground I can also sense whats under the ground for about 15feet in the ground. Offensive: I will mix my water chakra and the wind chakra. I will then spin the weapon around real fast. and a HUGE Vortex of water Will splurge out in the shape of a Large tornado. Towards the enemy. Similar to yamato and naruto union attack except the Way larger and the attack is coming from my blade so it will be directed towards the enemy.



    -Sensing an opponent counts towards the user 3turns and can only use 3times
    -The Water Vortex can Travel up to long range and is S rank (change it if you must)
    -The water vortex can only be used 3times and counts towards the user 3 turns
    -The user cant use No Basic Ninjutsu While sword is in use (In my hand)
    -Cant use S rank wind or S rank Water While sword is in use
    -Only can be held by a General... >_>
    (Please add or take out anything you see fit for any of these)

    ~ Declined. The water vortex is just you replicating an existing technique with the sword. No. ~
    RESUBMIT

    (How the weapon looks)

    (Pykyouto) Pure Rebel
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: This Weapon Blade tips was formed from very Hard dark diamond. Channeled with wind chakra on one blade and i channel water into the other blade (The tips are the blades im talking about) The sword was pass down from a family of generals and now General Phaze is the modern master of it. The sword dont respond to nobody chakra except generals. If anybody else touch or handle it. it would seem just like a regular 2bladed sword. The sword is very unique for 2 reasons A Defensive and a Offensive.. Defensive: The sword can sense any chakra presence in short range radius. It will give off chakra waves into me when another unknown chakra presence is close. Also . If i Stab the sword on the ground I can also sense whats under the ground for about 15feet in the ground. Offensive: I will Mix up the water and wind chakra inside the blade. By swinging it, multiple (5-7) Rapidly spinning water disk emerge from the blade towards the opponent. The water disk are coated with wind giving it more speed and more cutting strength. The disk are the size of a dinner plate (about 8inches high and wide) and can cut through A boulder size Rock with ease

    -The water disk move is 1 of the 3 users turn.
    -Sensing is 1 of the 3 users turn
    -The water Disk can only be used 3 times
    -The water disk can only go up to mid range and can shoot up to 5-7 at a time
    -Cant use no BASIC ninjutsu if this sword is in the owners hand
    -Cant use wind or water of S rank while sword is in owners hand
    -Can only be use by general phaze

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit Enough with the sensor weapons. ~
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    Proof of both summon and contract being approved

    Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi)Genesis the Porcupine
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will Bite his/her thumb. Wipe the blood on his/her porcupine tattoo. and do 3handseals and palm their hand on the ground. The porcupine Appears in front of The user at all times. It is the size of the Boss Toad Jariya always summon. This porcupine has only 2 Real vulnerable spots. Under his Body (No Quills are there) and On the top. The point at top is where the user rides or sit. It can only fit 2 people though. This porcupine can fire off quills when it feels it is in danger or just to simply attack. He Also Specializes in S rank Earth and He does not need to do handsigns for jutsus that require handseals due to it being his specialty. The Quills fire off with very Great Speed. 60Mph to be exact. And Can Break Through A rank Earth

    -Can only stay on the field for 4 turns
    -The Quills are Short-Mid range
    -Not phase by A rank and below Earth
    -Quills Can only be shot 2 times pr battle
    -If the porcupine use his quills twice He no longer will have them. making his whole body vulnerable.
    -Can only be Taught By -General Phaze- and must be a signer of the porcupine contract

    ~ Description is confusing. On the top ? Top of what ? His head ? His back ? His...well, his rear ? ~

    (Take out anything you feel please)

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    Name: (Shakuton : nendo tekusucha) Scorch Release: Clay Texture
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: A
    Rang: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses his scorch chakra into the ground (either by placing there palms on the ground or more experienced users can do it through there feet alone.) and the scorch chakra starts to evaporate all of the water within the surrounding earth. By doing this the earth starts to take on a doughy, clay like texture thus weakening earth techs drastically. i.e. making weapons, Or Making attacks out of the surrounding earth would prove useless do to there softness.

    -I wont be able to use Earth Neither around me.
    -Only Big Scale Earth Jutsus Can Emerge from the ground.
    -Cant use Scorch in the same turn
    -Can only be taught by -General Phaze

    ~ You do realize earth takes on a clay-like, soft consistency only when there is an excess of water ? ~

    ±± Leaving these for Emperor ±±
     
         
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    Raiton/Katon: Nenshou Kimochi(Lightning/Fire Style: Burning Sensation)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user channels and molds his Raiton and Katon chakra at the same time to his hands. The user then sends both chakra to the out side of his hand forming a thin layer around his palm consisting of Raiton and Katon chakra. Once this is done if the user touches the enemy the touched area is then burned and shocked. The burned and shocked area isnt life threatening but the sensation still is felt enough to distract the opponent. The Katon chakra is for burns and discomfort, and the Raiton is also for discomfort but also the stinging sensation and slight shock to the 1st layer of nerves of the area touched. If the area is not cooled down quick enough it will lead to 1st degree burns of that area. If the user grabs on to the enemy and the enemy dosnt get away quick enough it can cause 2nd-3rd degree burns.

    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used once during battle
    ~Counts as 2 moves
    ~The burning sensation last for 3 turns (if not treated sooner)
    ~Medical care can treat the wounded area also Water jutsus (D rank or higher or any source of water) can also treat it to cool down the area
    ~If the user's hand is forced back at him with the jutsu still active it can harm the user the same way as the enemy

    ±± Declined ±± You can't mold two elemental chakras at the same time unless you have yin/yang mastery


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hogosha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Hogosha)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Hogosha. The Guardian of the contract. Hogosha is half that of a human. He has a red-black face, throat and upper breast with a red crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark blue. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Hogosha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Ability's:
    ~Can speak
    ~Capable of using Fuuton
    ~Carries the Black-throated Robin Contract in a scroll on his back

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be used by the current contract owner of the Black-throated Robin Summon
    ~Can only be summoned 3 times during battle
    ~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
    ~Fuuton attacks count towards the summoners 3 move limit

    ±± Declined ±± This is not a D-rank summon and he can use fuuton up to what rank?


    Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Musha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Musha)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Musha. The Robin Warrior. Musha is 10 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a black crown and nape, and a red diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
    Musha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

    Ability's:
    ~Can speak
    ~Carries a large sword with him at all times and is very skilled at it
    ~Can use Fuuton

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be summoned 2 times during battle
    ~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
    ~Sword and Fuuton attacks as well as flying count towards the summoners 3 move limit

    Summoning approval


    Edit anyway you see fit :D


    ±± Declined ±± a B-rank summon can only use Up to B-Rank techniques.
     
         
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    Raiton/Suiton: Yakkaina Jōkyō | Lightning / Water Style: Sticky Situation
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user will send suiton chakra into the ground and channel it beneath a target. They will draw the moisture from underground and create water. Then by performing the ‘Dragon’ hand seal the water will burst from underground from all around the opponen. The water erupting in the form of eight dragon headed shaped water tendrils that are fairly dense and have a sticky quality that enables them to cling to the opponent, as well as a having a high piercing rate. As the water bursts from the ground the user imbues it with a large amount of lightning chakra. The lightning increases the trendrils speed, making it exceedingly hard for the naked eye to track them. Enabling only a 2T or above/Byakugan user to precisely track the trendrils movements. The lightning chakra also allows the trendrils to constantly produce a electrical charge, the charge radiating outwards with a raidus of 5m from each trendril, the charge from a single trendril equating to C rank, two combined equating to B rank, four to A rank, and all eight to S rank . Once the trendrils attach to their tagert, the user can preform the ‘Monkey’ causing the trendrils to implode, severely damaging anything that the trendrils were attachted to. The trendrils are able to freely and rapidly attack anything within a short range radius of where they originally erupted from. This jutsu requires extreme concentration and takes both a mental, spiritual and physical toll on the user.
    -Can only be used 1x
    -This jutsu takes up 2/3 Move spots.
    -The user is unable to engage in hand to hand combat for the next two turns.
    -After use, the user will only be able to preform two jutsu's per turn for the next turn.

    ±± Declined ±± Oped. Also, forbidden rank = damage (real and perceivable damage) to yourself.


    Quote Originally Posted by -Scaze- View Post
    (Suiton : Sawarabi no Shubyou) Water Release : Dance of the Seedlings
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will spew a large drilling water bullet from their mouth, the water bullet travelling towards the opponent at fair speeds similar to that of Drilling Wind Bullet. During its flight, the water bullet will seperate into 20 smaller pebble sized drilling water bullets, diverging far from the path that their predecessor followed, and flying in arcs at great speeds, approaching the enemy from several directions and angles above ground, and striking the enemy in quick succesion. As they strike the enemy, they expand to the size of a bowling ball, dealing severe damage to the opponent. The division of the bullets timing, is pre-determined by the users intentions upon spewing the bullet.
    ~No other S rank or above Water jutsu for the rest of the turn.
    ~Can only be used 2x.
    ~Must be Sannin Rank or above.

    ±± Declined ±± No "other S-Rank"? You did notice you submitted an A-Rank technique right? Or was it your mistake? Resubmit stating which rank you actually want. Rest seems fine

    (Suiton : Sawarabi no Shubyou) Water Release : Dance of the Seedlings
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will spew a large drilling water bullet from their mouth, the water bullet travelling towards the opponent at fair speeds similar to that of Drilling Wind Bullet. During its flight, the water bullet will seperate into 20 smaller pebble sized drilling water bullets, diverging far from the path that their predecessor followed, and flying in arcs at great speeds, approaching the enemy from several directions and angles above ground, and striking the enemy in quick succesion. As they strike the enemy, they expand to the size of a bowling ball, dealing severe damage to the opponent. The division of the bullets timing, is pre-determined by the users intentions upon spewing the bullet.
    -No Water above S-Rank for 2 turns
    -Can only be used 4x.


    ±± Approved ±± Edited slightly.


    Information, link of signing, and link of me taking over the contract, and link of the contracts approval can all be found by following said link and a few other links afterwards >_>
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    (Kuchiyose:Batoidea: Artemis)- Summoning: Batoidea: Artemis
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Artemis, is a Stingray who is just larger than a human. Artemis’s secondary ability is that rather than having a single barbed stinger, he has a indefinite amount. All grown through the stimulation of chakra, as a result the back of Artemis’s tail resembles a spiked flail. Artemis is able to grow stingers on any point of his body, at rapid speeds and shoot them if need be. On the turn that Artemis is summoned he will immediately begin to grow a large amount of stingers, each set of stingers that Artemis grows will be infused with one of the basic 5 elemental chakras. The chakra will stay dormant until required by Artemis or the user. Artemis's main abilitiy is the ability to transform into a stark greyish dark turquoise bow of the finest quality and a quiver. His stingers acting as the arrows that fill the quiver and still retaining their venomous capabilities ( the venom from a single stinger produces paralysation for two turns, on the third the opponent dies). “Quiver” Artemis is able to change the shape of the arrows in accordance to the users will. The user is able to fire the arrow shaped stingers through use of “Bow” Artemis at high speeds with extreme dexterity, while firing the user can add a small amount of basic chakra that reacts with the dormant elemental chakra. Causing the fired stinger to become coated in a aura of elemental chakra that leaves a trail (3m long) behind the arrow at all times that slices anything that it comes in contact with (Within reason). Artemis's abilties allows multiple elemental arrows to be fired simultaneously. If the user fires a lightning or fire coated arrow, he can perform a single hand seal, (Ox) causing the arrow and its coating to explode in a A rank equivalent electrical/fiery discharge sending venomous shrapnel flying all over the place. Once per turn the user is able to fire five arrows each with one of the five basic elements at the same time, activating the dormant element within with a huge surge of basic chakra. Creating a mixed elemental coating that races towards the enemy, taking on the form of a gigantic multi colored arrow equal to Forbidden rank. The arrow demolishes everything in its path while travelling at extreme speeds. This takes a toll on the user as the backlash effect of releasing the combo pulsates throughout their body. Leaving them paralysed for 3 seconds as well as dealing strain to their torso. It also takes a extreme toll on Artemis, who is capable of only releasing two of these per battle. This technique is known as “Maximum Arrow” and has no elemental weaknesses or strengths.

    Note: Artemis can only stay on the field for 5 turns.
    Note:Making the arrow explode counts as a jutsu.
    Note:Firing an element imbued arrow does not count as a jutsu.
    Note:Artemis can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Maximum Arrow Counts as Jutsu
    Note:
    Note:The chakra/elemental chakra imbued stinger arrows are capable of piercing through D rank jutsu that their neutral to, and C rank that their element is strong against.

    ±± Declined ±± The parts are bolded need to be clarified. Also, the idea is awesome. Indeed it is. But you are adding too many abilities to the arrows and the spikes and the chakra and and and and and and and and.... you get my drift. Simplify it.
     
         
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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Shian Mimizawarina)- Summoning Technique: Cyan the Raspy
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After drawing blood from any part of the body onto their palms, the user will clasp both hands together, summoning Cyan in sky above them, or at any place short range from the user. Cyan is the genjutsu specialist among Herons, and small enough to comfortably ride on the summoner’s shoulder. Cyan is capable of utilizing up to B-rank genjutsu known by the user, as long as the user performs the hand seals. She is also capable of releasing a sound based genjutsu by releasing a series of four harsh croaks from her beak. These croaks are targeted at the opponent’s most critical senses, those being sight and hearing. The first croak affects the opponent’s sight, filling their entire vision with an endless flock of Blue Herons. The second croak affects the opponent’s hearing, eliminating any sounds from the battlefield, replacing it with the sound of a massive amount of flapping wings. These croaks happen in two loops, two croaks each loop, hence the four total croaks. Each sense is affected twice, once per loop, or two croaks. Each croak lasts about two seconds, which leads to the opponent’s senses flickering on and off for a total of eight seconds. The croak’s effects last for one full turn, and can be used up to mid-range from wherever Cyan is at the time.
    *Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron summoning contract
    *Note: The croaks are usable twice per battle, and count as a single move of the user
    *Note: Cyan is able to be summoned for four turns, and once per battle

    Removed the smell-based aspect of the genjutsu, reduced overall genjutsu execution time

    ±± Declined ±± i has stated this before. Do you even know how chakra is molded? Its a basic knowledge.

    When you perform a technique two big steps happen:

    -Focus your chakra (willing it to do the technique but gathering it in the correct amount needed)
    -Mold your chakra (you give your chakra the shape and nature you need to achieve the end result. to do this you sometimes might not need hand seals or you might. Handseals work but helping you to mold your chakra)

    Now, knowing this, how can the fact that you are making hand seals mold your summons chakra?

    We allow Genjutsu summons yes, but they need a bit more restrictions. I have a Genjutsu summon but she can only use a custom genjutsu known and usable only by her, not any other. You need to make her have some sort of limitation to use Genjutsu.

    Copied directly from a submission above you.
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Shian Mimizawarina)- Summoning Technique: Cyan the Raspy
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After drawing blood from any part of the body onto their palms, the user will clasp both hands together, summoning Cyan in sky above them, or at any place short range from the user. Cyan is the genjutsu specialist among Herons, and small enough to comfortably ride on the summoner’s shoulder. She is also capable of releasing a sound based genjutsu by releasing a series of four harsh croaks from her beak. These croaks are targeted at the opponent’s most critical senses, those being sight and hearing. The first croak affects the opponent’s sight, filling their entire vision with an endless flock of Blue Herons. The second croak affects the opponent’s hearing, eliminating any sounds from the battlefield, replacing it with the sound of a massive amount of flapping wings. These croaks happen in two loops, two croaks each loop, hence the four total croaks. Each sense is affected twice, once per loop, or two croaks. Each croak lasts about two seconds, which leads to the opponent’s senses flickering on and off for a total of eight seconds. The croak’s effects last for one full turn, and can be used up to mid-range from wherever Cyan is at the time.
    *Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron summoning contract
    *Note: The croaks are usable twice per battle, and count as a single move of the user
    *Note: Cyan is able to be summoned for four turns, and once per battle

    Removed ability to use genjutsu the user knows
    ~Approved~

    (Doton: Kenban)- Earth Release: Rotator Plate
    Type: Supplmentary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform a series of two hand seals, while having constant contact with an earth source. After sending their chakra racing through the earth, the ground under the opponent in a circular shape will rapidly spin at high speeds, like a top. This high speed of rotation has enough power behind it to throw the opponent severely off balance, and fling them hard onto the ground up to several meters away. The diameter of the affected circle is approximately two meters. The spinning motion will last as long as the user concentrates on the spinning the earth. However, this technique can be cancelled in an instant.
    *Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    *Note: Usable four times per battle
    *Note: The user cannot use any other techniques while concentrating on the spinning earth.
    ~Approved~ Added a Note

    (Doton: Entaku no kishi)- Earth Release: Knights of the Round Table
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Med-Long
    Chakra cost: 45
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will perform a series of six hand seals, and then focus their chakra into the ground around the opponent. As this is done, six colossal stone knights arise from the ground, spaced evenly in all directions around the opponent. The knights raise themselves four meters away from the opponent. The stone knights are approximately ten feet tall, and are encased in a super hard rock plated armor capable of withstanding brutal attacks. Each knight also carries an incredibly long twelve foot lance, which is immediately thrusted towards the opponent as the Knight's arms clear the ground. If allowed to completely form from the ground, the Knights have the capability to move even closer towards the opponent. The combined effects of their footsteps while moving is equal to the effect produced by the World Shaking Technique, creating small tremors that can easily knock the opponent to the ground.
    *Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    *Note: Usable once per battle
    *Note: Severe exhaustion occurs after this technique, restricting the user from using his legs for two turns
    *Note: No earth techniques on the same turn; No earth techniques above B-rank the next two turns
    ~Leaving for Scorps~
    ±± Declined ±± Incorrect chakra info. Also, make the nights smaller please and limit them to 4. Oh, and why is it long range? Can you make them appear anywhere on field? Mid range max.
     
         
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    (Suiton: Buru no hane) Water Release: Blue Wing
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra:20 Chakra
    Damage: 30 Damage
    Description: This sword can be used to slash flames apart with Suiton chakra. It extrudes Suiton chakra around it, making it superior to Katon chakra, and if it hits/ hurts them, the Katon chakra will be weakened. If the user slams the blade into ground, the ground will soak, become wet. The original owner of this sword is Aruko Sarutobi, and only he can use it.

    ~Declined~ Far too generic. How is this different from any other water sword?
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by -Vision- View Post
    Resubmitting changes in bold


    Maboroshi Kagirinai | Eternal Vision
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 [when active]
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Made during ancient times in the high mountains by multiple black smiths. Forged in fire with silver and an unknown metal to make it indistructable. As well as infusing the necklace with their own chakra. It has said that the necklaces power are the ability to protect it's user. Through the use of pure chakra that it emmits and reacts to the users chakra. The necklace would be activated by channeling the users own chakra into the necklace, thus creating a reaction with the necklace and mixing both chakra's together. Once this happens the necklace will emmit a thin chakra layer around the users body. Protecting them from projectiles and debris that may be falling from the sky or towards the user. Also since the chakra is surrounding the body, the user gains slight boost to speed, agility, and striking power. Also the necklace was forged in fire and has a natural affinity to it. Thus being able to absorb A rank and below fire by sensing the heat of the fire when approaching the user. Since the necklace has an affinity to fire, smoke will emmit from the user through the chakra layers around the body, long as the necklace is active. However the smoke itself is not harmful to the user as it is created from their own chakra. It is also known that when the user of the necklace activates it. Their appearance will change as if the cloths has changed and the user will glow a certain color according to gender.

    Abilities:
    -Actives, once the user channels chakra into the necklace
    -Male's will glow black // Female's will glow purple
    -Able to absorb A rank and below Katon jutsu's
    -Adds a thin protection layer of chakra around the user's whole body
    -Emmits smoke from the user's body from the necklace's chakra as it has affinity to fire
    -Once the chakra is covered the users body, the user will gain a slight boost in speed, agility and striking power [Same as if one would apply chakra to their feet for a slight speed increase or arms as they punch for slight boost in striking power]



    Restrictions:
    -Lasts 4 turns once active
    -Able to activate two times per battle
    -Need to skip two turns before activating it once more
    -Necklace constantly feeds off the users chakra
    -Can only absorb fire three times per battle
    -Can not absorb fire consecutively on the same turn
    -Can only absorb the fire when extremly close to the source or the jutsu
    -Absorbing fire counts towards the users three moves allowed per turn
    -Only smoke users are able to manipulate smoke emmiting from the body
    -Smoke only emits from the body when this CW is active
    -Only to be used by -Vision-

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    ±± Declined ±± Too many abilities. Also, i won't approve making you immune to A-Rank fire... And sensing heat, and and and and and and. Keep it reasonable and remove the useless abilities like the fire bit, the boost to speed, etc etc.



    Summoning Technique: Souseiki Harinezumi | Summoning Technique: Diamond
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will cut his palm till blood drips. Once that, he then does 5 hand seals and wipe the blood on his Lesser bird of paradise tattoo. Diamond (My summon) Will Appear in mid air above me circling . He is Bright blue with yellow stripes on her head and down her body. Diamond Speaclizes in Genjutsu Up to A rank. And can fly at Very high speeds which equals to Sasuke's Hawk. Diamond Wing span is wider and longer then most causing the gust he give off by flapping his wings very strong. strong enough to knock down several trees with just the flap of his wings . This summon is the same size as Sauske Hawk. The next strongest summon to the boss summon Phaze. Diamond can also speak and communicate in english.

    -Only Taught By General and Used by -Vision-
    -Only can stay on turn for 4 Turns
    -User Cant Use Genjutsu while bird is in play
    -User will perform neccesary hand seals for the bird to be able to use genjutsu
    -All Diamond moves count as 1 move for the user.
    -Can only be summoned once

    Link to summoning contract: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=156447&page=3

    ±± Declined ±± If she is so big, how can you summon her in Short range from you in mid air? O_o Also, i has stated this before. Do you even know how chakra is molded? Its a basic knowledge.

    When you perform a technique two big steps happen:

    -Focus your chakra (willing it to do the technique but gathering it in the correct amount needed)
    -Mold your chakra (you give your chakra the shape and nature you need to achieve the end result. to do this you sometimes might not need hand seals or you might. Handseals work but helping you to mold your chakra)

    Now, knowing this, how can the fact that you are making hand seals mold your summons chakra?

    We allow Genjutsu summons yes, but they need a bit more restrictions. I have a Genjutsu summon but she can only use a custom genjutsu known and usable only by her, not any other. You need to make her have some sort of limitation to use Genjutsu.



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    Genjutsu: Katawa | Illusionary Technique: Distortion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will perform the Serpent handseal and cast the genjutsu towards the opponents brain. Once the genjutsu is in play, the opponent will see opposite of what the user is doing. For example, if the user is striking with the right hand, the opponent will see that the user is striking with his left hand. If the user is throwing a projectile towards the user, the opponent will see the projectile coming from an inverted angle. If a jutsu is used there is no effect unless it's at a specific angle. If the attacks are in a linear angle [Straight Line towards the opponent] there are no effects which adds to the comfusion all together.

    Note: May be used twice per battle
    Note: lasts 4 turns unless broken
    Note: Can not use genjutsu while this is in play
    Note: Must skip 2 turns to reuse it
    Note: Can only be taught by -Vision- and allowed to be used by Goku2000

    ±± Declined ±± The idea is cool but its too overpowered as it stands. The way its worded means you can use anything and your enemy will defend in the wrong direction, thus taking the attack completely. Now, taking into account that many attacks are one hit knockouts, this would stand as a one hit knockout which is mostly a DNR. Now, reword it, restrict (in terms of its abilities) and lower the rank. Also, this would be a momentary genjutsu, not one that lasts 4 turns.
    Resubmitting CW Changes in Bold. Took out heat sensing ability... Meant to take that part out but forgot about it. Sorry for the confusion.


    Maboroshi Kagirinai | Eternal Vision
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 [when active]
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Made during ancient times in the high mountains by multiple black smiths. Forged in fire with silver and an unknown metal to make it indistructable. As well as infusing the necklace with their own chakra. It has said that the necklaces power are the ability to protect it's user. Through the use of pure chakra that it emmits and reacts to the users chakra. The necklace would be activated by channeling the users own chakra into the necklace, thus creating a reaction with the necklace and mixing both chakra's together. Once this happens the necklace will emmit a thin chakra layer around the users body. Protecting them from projectiles and debris that may be falling from the sky or towards the user. Also the necklace was forged in fire and has a natural affinity to it. Thus being able to absorb B rank and below fire through the users will. Since the necklace has an affinity to fire, smoke will emmit from the user through the chakra layers around the body, long as the necklace is active. However the smoke itself is not harmful to the user as it is created from their own chakra. Once the user activates the necklace, the user will start to glow red.

    Abilities:
    -Activates, once the user channels chakra into the necklace
    -User will start to glow red once the CW is active
    -Able to absorb B rank and below Katon jutsu's
    -Adds a thin protection layer of chakra around the user's whole body
    -Emmits smoke from the user's body from the necklace's chakra as it has affinity to fire


    Restrictions:
    -Lasts 4 turns once active
    -Able to activate once per battle
    -Need to skip two turns before activating it once more
    -Necklace constantly feeds off the users chakra
    -Can only absorb fire three times per battle
    -Can not absorb fire consecutively on the same turn
    -Can only absorb the fire when extremly close to the source or the jutsu
    -Absorbing fire counts towards the users three moves allowed per turn
    -Only smoke users are able to manipulate smoke emmiting from the body
    -Smoke only emits from the body when this CW is active
    -Only to be used by -Vision-

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    ~Approved~ Changed the bolded.

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    Genjutsu: Tou Setsu | Illusionary Technique: Section Freeze
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will cast a genjutsu on the opponent by performing the hand seal Snake. Once done so, nothing immediatly will happen until the user performs the additional hand seals needed for the desired effected. Which is binding any part of the opponents body at will. The user will state which body part is going to be effected once the hand seal is made. Soon as the second hand seal is made, the opponent will begin to feel numbness around the area effect, stated by the user. Which in turn the area effected will fall asleep and the limb or that part of the body will not move at the opponents desires.

    Note: Lasts 1 turn to the area effected
    Note: No S rank or above genjutsu on the next turn
    Note: Able to use twice in battle
    Note: Must skip a turn when reusing this technique
    Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-
    ~Declined~ Do not Resubmit. Period.

    Genjutsu: Konmei Kemuri | Illusionary Technique: Smoke Confusion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long [Please read description // notes as to why it is long range]
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An area of effect genjutsu through the use of chakra infused smoke. The user will first be required to create smoke using their wrist launcher and while the smoke is in the area, the user will perform the Horse hand seal to put the opponent under genjutsu. When hand seal is made anyone other than the user that is surrounded by the smoke will end up in the genjutsu. Once the genjutsu is in place, the smoke will travel through the tenketsu of the opponents 361 chakra points and into the brain effecting their chakra flow. Once this happens the opponent will lose their ability to concentrate and mold chakra quickly by continuously distrupting the chakra flow by slowing it down immensly. For example if the opponent wants to use a jutsu, it would be natural for them to gather it really quickly by speeding up the flow of their chakra to gather it. Simply by disrupting it's chakra constantly, they will be hindered and take longer to perform their jutsu's. Once the smoke has entered the opponents body through their chakra points, the opponent will be hindered and will not be able to use any chakra based jutsu's as quickly as expected.

    D Rank Jutsu's - Will have a slight effect but won't notice the difference in gathering chakra as the chakra required is not that great.

    C Rank jutsu's - Will take 1/2 a second longer to perform to gather chakra

    B Rank jutsu's - Will take 1 second longer to perform to gather chakra

    A Rank jutsu's - Will take 1 1/2 second longer to perform to gather chakra

    S Rank jutsu's - Will take 2 seconds longer to perform to gather chakra

    F Rank jutsu's - Will take 2 1/2 seconds longer to perform to gather chakra

    Note: Only smoke users are able to use this genjutsu
    Note: Able to use once per battle
    Note: Must have mastery of smoke and genjutsu to be able to use this
    Note: Lasts 2 turns unless broken and the user have to be inside the smoke to be casted
    Note: No A rank or above genjutsu on the next turn
    Note: Smoke surrounding the opponent has to be created by the user
    Note: Range of the genjutsu is determined by the smoke that covers the area
    Note: Only able to be taught by -Vision-
    ~Declined~ I'm not sure I follow you on this technique. Why make it S-rank if all it does is change the time it takes to perform jutsu by a scant 1-2 seconds? Is there an ulterior motive?
     
         
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    (Doton: Yobidasu Yon Kamigami) Earth Style: Summon Four Gods

    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Based on the technique (Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm, the user gathers chakra into their hand, performs the handseals Boar → Ox → Snake, and slams their palm into the ground sending a stream of earth chakra towards the opponent. The chakra rises up as four-formed earth pillars in the style of japanese dragon heads, which rise up and come crashing upon the target. As the dragon heads reach the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying the target alive or crushing them. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area and is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

    ~Can only be taught by Koto

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    ~Declined~ This is supposed to be C-rank?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ShikamarUchiha10 View Post
    Suiton: Shiroppu Kinchou | Water Style: Syrup birds
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user claps his hands and uses his chakara to create several (4 maximum) starch syrup birds from the starch syrup field to fly at the opponent at great speeds, sticking to the opponent where ever to user desires. This could slow and stop the opponents movements or disable him from creating hand-signs if stuck to his hands.
    ~Can only use 3 times per battle
    ~Requires Starch Syrup Capture Field to be in play
    ~Can only be used/ taught by ShikamarUchiha10

    ~ Size of birds ? ~
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    Suiton: Shiroppu Kinchou | Water Style: Syrup birds
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user claps his hands and uses his water chakara to create several (4 maximum) starch syrup birds from the starch syrup field to fly at the opponent at great speeds, sticking to the opponent where ever to user desires. The birds are around the same size as an avarage crow. This could slow and stop the opponents movements or disable him from creating hand-signs if stuck to his hands.
    ~Can only use 3 times per battle
    ~Requires Starch Syrup Capture Field to be in play
    ~Can only be taught by ShikamarUchiha10
    ~Approved~ Good job.
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    Fuuton: ketatamashii Ea-Kakou | Wind Release: Piercing Air Drop
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user preforms the Rat → Rabbit → Dog hand sign, emits their chakara and allows it to soar through the air in a very quick process. They then manipulates the air with their chakara above the target by allowing to condense and form 50 wind needles that float 5 meters (16ft) above the target. The user then channels his chakara to his index and middle fingers points them downwards and with great chakara control the needles come silently descending at rapid speeds and impale the target.
    ~Can only be used x2 per battle.
    ~Cannot use S rank or above Wind jutsu's for the next 2 turns.
    ~Can only be taught by ShikamarUchiha10
    ~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists
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    Summoning Animal: Frilled Dragon
    Scroll Owner: ShikamarUchiha10
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Frilled Dragon
    Description and Background:
    The Frilled Lizard also known as the Frilled Dragon is so called because of the large ruff of skin which usually lies folded back against its head and neck. The neck frill is supported by long spines of cartilage, and when the lizard is frightened, it gapes its mouth showing a bright pink or yellow lining, and the frill flares out, displaying bright orange and red scales. The frill may also aid in thermoregulation.

    They often walk quadrupedally when on the ground. When frightened they begin to run on all-fours and then accelerate onto the hind-legs. In Iwagakure, the frill-necked lizard is also known as the "bicycle lizard" because of this behaviour. Males are significantly larger than females both as juveniles and when mature. The frill of the frilled dragon is used to frighten off potential predators as well as hissing and lunging. If this fails to ward off the threat, the lizard flees bi-pedally to a nearby tree where it climbs to the top and relies on camouflage to keep it hidden.
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    ~Leaving for Scorps~

    ±± Declined ±± Lizards are taken
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal:Opossum
    Scroll Owner:Z-one
    Other Users who have signed contract: none yet
    Summoning Boss if existing:none yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:none
    Description and Background: Opossums make up the largest order of marsupials with103 or more species. They are also commonly called possums. They tend to be semi-arboreal omnivores, although there are many exceptions. Most members of this taxon have long snouts, a narrow braincase, and a prominent sagittal crest. The Giant Opossum Were usually found underground near Kessokugakure and are about 8 feet in height and 5 feet in length.

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    ±± Approved ±±


    (Katon:fenikkusu kei)|(Fire Release: Phoenix Whip)
    Type:Offensive/Deffensive
    Rank:C rank
    Range: short to mid range
    Chakra: 15
    Damage:30
    Description:The user performs five hand seals Tiger, boar,ram,dragon,tiger then the user spews out a small whip of fire that Reaches 4 feet that he can manipulate to lash at his opponents.
    ~Water jutsu B-rank and up and deflect the jutsu
    ~jutsu only lasts two turns
    ~Can Deflect Earth jutsu up to C rank
    ~Can only be taught and used by Z-one




    (Chakra kougake no Babylon) Chakra Gauntlet of babylon
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:
    Range:Short
    Chakra:
    Damage:N/A
    Description: This is a piece of machinery created by elders of Kessokugakure, it allows it vessel to manipulate all base chakra natures (fire,water, ect.) and add +20 Damage to all jutsu used during the battle. and +30 to all taijutsu used.

    ~can only be used 4 times per battle

    ~After weapons use, the user loses +30 chakra and all jutsu then on lose +10 damage points

    ~can only be used by z-one

    ~ Both declined, do not resubmit. ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Crutch Kaguya View Post
    I based the idea of elemental flowers from two facts:
    1. Common flower techniques according to the rules as seen in the filler can be used by anyone. This has nothing to do with the Plant CE or the Wood element, the ability to grow flowers has already existed on NB as canon techniques.
    2. Early in the manga, it was said that trees were fed elemental chakra when they were grown giving them an elemental nature.
    I simply thought to combine these ideas to create a new technique. I didn't post this to be rude, sorry if you believed I meant it to be. As you can see, this has never been attempted before so I just want to show my reasoning so they have a chance.

    (Hanakotoba) Language of Flowers
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+20 for each turn this technique is active)
    Damage: 60
    Description: The Hanakotoba technique is an advanced style of flower arts. Unlike normal flowers grown through the basic flower arts, these flowers are unique in that in their growth they are created with an advanced active chakra network but can be grown rapidly. The reason for an advanced network is so that the flowers would be able to readily accept chakra from the creator, specifically chakra that has undergone elemental transformation. Flowers with simple chakra networks would not be able to handle such extent of chakra manipulation, but these flowers are advanced enough to easily accept and allow the elemental chakra to flow within their networks. This enables the flowers to in essence possess an element nature; the flowers are capable of possessing any element nature that the user is capable of producing. The type of elemental chakra will be clearly visible through the color of the flower: red is fire, yellow is lightning, blue is water, white or green is wind, and purple is earth. Elemental combinations are not possible through the use of this generic technique. The species of the flower does not matter as the user will be capable of reproducing any type of flower that he wishes. But for diversity the user can pick and choose from various flower species for each flower. The flower will have all the traits of the element of its affinity. The user can use a flower to block attacks from elements to which it has an natural advantage over but will be weak toward elements to which it has a natural disadvantage. The user can also infuse chakra into the flowers to increase their density to make them as hard as steel to block physical attacks or as soft as a pillow. The user can grow small flowers straight from his body. For the sake of pure diversity the user can either grow a single flower that is extremely large or a bush of flowers of equivalent value to the one large flower, all the flowers in the bush must be the same elemental nature. This is meant solely for aesthetic value and is not meant to alter the power of the flowers at all.
    - The flowers due to the fact that they possess elemental natures possess the ability to allow the user to channel his chakra into the flowers and from the flowers release a blast of energy that is A-rank with medium range which has the same elemental natural of the flower. Every time this ability is used it counts as one of the user's three techniques per turn. The strength of each flower A-rank. Size of the flower does not necessarily indicate strength, as all flowers are the same strength but merely that smaller flowers are more concentrated than larger flowers; or a small bush is more concentrated than a large bush. The maximum size of a flower grown through this technique is a large tree. As long as this techniques is active, the user is able to grow one flower at the cost of one of the three techniques per turn.
    ~This technique can only be used once per battle, but once it is activated it will last until deactivated.
    ~To limit the power of this technique, it cannot be used by a character biography that possess a kekkei genkai: this applies all techniques involving elemental flowers that branch off from this main technique.

    ~ Crutch, I like the idea, you've noticed a subset of techniques from the anime that have been woefully underutilized; however, what you're doing right here and right now is not creating techniques for that style, but literally absorbing that style into your own customs while simultaneously treating it as a KG/special ability - essentially forming your own unique KG. Because if this gets approved, what would happen is that anyone else who notices these techniques later might not be able to create them without infringing on your blanket techniques. Furthermore, you've expanded too much on the style. You cannot create flowers from your body; you cannot make vines and things. Still, it's a good idea you've brought up, we staff will certainly have to see about making restrictions for this style ~
    I have cut down on the uses of the style, and set clear boundaries to the extent of its usage at the bottom. I have also simplified the description and shortened it up a bit. I have done as instructed, I'm not sure what else to do except change the whole concept itself.

    (Hanakotoba) Language of Flowers
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+20 for each turn this technique is active)
    Damage: 60
    Description: The Hanakotoba technique is an advanced style of flower arts. The flowers are unique in that in they are created with an advanced chakra network so that the flowers would be able to readily accept chakra from the creator, specifically elemental chakra. Flowers with simple chakra networks cannot handle such extent of chakra manipulation, but these flowers are advanced enough to easily accept it enabling the flowers to possess an element nature; the flowers are capable of possessing any element nature that the user is capable of producing. The type of elemental chakra will be clearly visible through the color of the flower: red is fire, yellow is lightning, blue is water, white or green is wind, and purple is earth. Elemental combinations are not possible through the use of this generic technique. The user will be capable of reproducing any species of flower. The flower will have all the traits of its element. The user can use a flower to block attacks to which it has an advantage but will be weak toward ones to which it has a disadvantage. The user can also infuse chakra into the flowers to increase density to steel-like or cotton-like. For the sake of pure diversity the user can grow a single flower that is large or a bush of flowers of equivalent value, all the flowers in the bush must be the same elemental nature. This is meant solely for aesthetic value and is not meant to alter the power of the flowers.
    - The user can channel his chakra into the flower and from it release a blast of energy that is A-rank of the same elemental nature as the flower. This ability counts as one of the user's three techniques per turn. The strength of each flower A-rank. Size of the flower does not indicate strength, all flowers are the same strength but smaller flowers are more concentrated than larger flowers; or a small bush is more concentrated than a large bush. The maximum size of a flower grown through this technique is a large tree. While this techniques is active, the user is able to grow one flower at the cost of one of the three techniques per turn.
    ~This technique can only be used once per battle, but once it is activated it will last until deactivated.
    ~There must be a surface of earth capable of sustaining large plant life in the area for this technique to be used. Flowers can only be grown directly from the earth or in certain cases from underneath water sources allowing them to rise above the surface. Flowers cannot be grown from the user's body or non-fertile surfaces. Only flowers can be grown, other types of plants or vines cannot be grown by this technique or any technique that branches from it.
    ~To limit the power of this technique, it cannot be used by a character biography that possess a kekkei genkai: this applies all techniques involving elemental flowers that branch from this main technique.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. I said, we staff would work this out. PM Kaito or Scorps to give them your ideas if you wish. ~
     
         
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    (Kugutsu: Ese Kairai) Puppetry: Mock Puppet
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user summons a Wooden Puppet that is Identical to them self but, has a Faded color look. The Puppet has a partial amount of users chakra stored inside of it [1/4th], making it work like a Shadow clone. The Puppet can travel long rang from the User and also use any jutsu up to A-rank that the User knows. The Puppet does NOT have free form so can not regenerate after being destroyed. Any Jutsu performed by the puppet counts towards the Users Turns. A-rank and greater attacks are able to break the puppet [this includes rank attacks that add up to A-rank and greater].
    Notes: -Can only be summoned Once per battle
    -Must have Mastered Puppetry
    -After the Puppet is summoned the User cannot use any other puppet summons for as long as this jutsu is active
    -To summon this puppet it takes 2 of the 3 turns the user has
    -Can be reformed by a puppet re-assemble jutsu, Once (+40 chakra)
    -Only Taught By Smirk


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~
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    Quote Originally Posted by Smirk View Post
    (Suiton: Mizu Samaurai) Water Release: Water Samurai
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (+10 each time full body needs to be reformed)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The User forms Two 6FT. Water Samurai (each has One water sword equipped) that can be used to either attack or defend.No water source is needed to perform this Jutsu. Once activated the Jutsu remainds for the rest of the battle until it is either de-activated or destroyed. The water samurai can free form but each time the whole body reforms it takes a certain amount of the users chakra.
    Note: This Jutsu can Only be used once Per battle and after its used the user cannot use any S-rank water jutsu for 2 turns
    Note: This Jutsu can only be taught by Lazyboi

    ~ There needs to be a limit on the reforming ability. And by that I mean an ACTUAL one, not just "oh, -10 chakra" ~
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    (Ninjutsu: Onion Kisoku) Ninja Arts: Onion Breath
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The User releases unnoticeable Aroma from their mouth that conflicts with the opponents [Senses] smell/vision causing them to become teary eye'd, vision becomes blurry, eye burning and itching causing them to close their eyes involuntarily, Until they escape the Aroma and clean their eyes.
    Note: Once the opponent escapes the Aroma, the effects lasts for 2 Turns, Just blurry vision and teary eyes
    Note: Jutsu can be used 3 times per battle
    Note: This Jutsu can only be taught by Lazyboi

    ~ How exactly do you make this "aroma" ? Do you suddenly transform your head into an onion ? o_O ~
    (Suiton: Mizu Samaurai) Water Release: Water Samurai
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (+20 each Reform)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The User forms Two 6FT. Water Samurai (each has One water sword equipped) that can be used to either attack or defend.No water source is needed to perform this Jutsu. Once activated the Jutsu remainds for the rest of the battle until it is either de-activated or destroyed. Each water samurai can free form but can only reform ONCE, while also taking chakra to do so.
    Note: This Jutsu can Only be used once Per battle and after its used the user cannot use any S-rank water jutsu for 2 turns
    Note: Only Taught by Smirk

    ~ Declined OPed. Too many Samurai and also needs a number of turns limit ~

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    (Ninjutsu: Onion Kisoku) Ninja Arts: Onion Breath
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 10(20 for Mid Range)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The User releases unnoticeable Aroma from their mouth that conflicts with the opponents [Senses] smell/vision causing them to become teary eye'd, vision becomes blurry, eye burning and itching causing them to close their eyes involuntarily, Until they escape the Aroma and clean their eyes. The 'Aroma' is formed by the users chakra starting from their stomach and pushing up any waste, the users chakra and inner muscles then hold the waste before it reaches their throat. Only releasing a vile smell.
    Note: Once the opponent escapes the Aroma, the effects lasts for 1 Turn, Just blurry vision and teary eyes
    Note: Jutsu can be used 2 times per battle
    Note: Only Taught By Smirk

    ~ Oh for heaven's sake. Declined, do not resubmit. The next time you submit any utter bull**** like this, I'll ban you from this thread~
     
         
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    Boseki (Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon (Sword)
    Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
    Range: Close/Mid
    Chakra: 0
    Damage:
    Description: Boseki was forged by Kuro Tamash in hopes of having a personal compainion. Boseki is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy.

    ~Boseki can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
    ~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
    ~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

    ~ ...It's a weapon ? Because the description looks like its a puppet. ~
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    Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponet causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponet to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attck the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponet cn see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confussion. This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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    Boseki Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the oppent uses chidori for example the Boseki can not absorb it). This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).

    ~ Get Boseki aproved first. ~
     
         
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    Raiton| Gigawattohanmā - Lightning Release| Gigawatt Hammer
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrates a large amount of lighting inside their body and releases all the stored lightning in one instance, the resulting affect produces a powerful lightning blast strong enough to push back an opponent or rip right through them. This technique also depends on the user’s emotional state; the angrier they are the stronger and deadlier the technique becomes.

    Raiton| Indou - Lightning Release| Requiem
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Descritpion: The user creates a varying number of small electrical spheres within thier hands, When released, these spheres expand dramatically in size. Imbuing these spheres in this fashion serves to greatly enhance their destructive potential to the extent that they can easily destory concrete structures, subsequently obliterating the impaled object with a substantial resultant explosion and if needed increase the number of spheress to make more explosions.
    (can only create 3 spheres at a time)



    Raiton| Hachibi no Seki - Lightning Release| Gate of the 8-Tails
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100 (-15 to user)
    Description: Kirabi charges a vast amount of the 8-tails' chakra into his hand and using shape manipulation, compresses it into a large sphere of black chakra and electrical energy. When released, this technique seeks out any electrical energy source in the area and completely absorbs it also eradicates any physical matter it touches. Once it absorbs enough electrical energy, it breaks down and starts to attack indiscriminately, shooting tree-like branches at all people who are using chakra at the moment, including the user. The user or the opponent simply must stop using chakra, to prevent the technique from attacking them. This puts a great strain on Kirabi's chakra system preventing him from doing S-rank and up techniques for the next three turns.
    (last 3 turns)

    ~ Tell me, have you heard of the word 'restrictions' ? Two of your techniques have zero, whereas the last one, a FORBIDDEN technique, has no number of uses restrictions. ~
    Raiton| Gigawattohanmā - Lightning Release| Gigawatt Hammer
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrates a large amount of lighting inside their body and releases all the stored lightning in one instance, the resulting affect produces a powerful lightning blast strong enough to push back an opponent or rip right through them. This technique also depends on the user’s emotional state; the angrier they are the stronger and deadlier the technique becomes.
    (No Lightning next turn)
    (Usable Twice)

    ~ The angrier they are the stronger it becomes ? Settle down, Banner. Such vague descriptions are hard to use in battle. ~

    Raiton| Indou - Lightning Release| Requiem
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Descritpion: The user creates a varying number of small electrical spheres within thier hands, When released, these spheres expand dramatically in size, resembling Super Rasengan, Imbuing these spheres in this fashion serves to greatly enhance their destructive potential to the extent that they can easily destory concrete structures, subsequently obliterating the object with a substantial resultant explosion and if needed increase the number of spheress to make more explosions.
    (can only create 3 spheres at a time)
    (Usable 2 times a battle)
    (No Lightning for the next turn)

    ~ Reduce the destructive power per sphere ~

    Raiton| Hachibi no Seki - Lightning Release| Gate of the 8-Tails
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100 (-15 to user)
    Description: Kirabi charges a vast amount of the 8-tails' chakra into his hand and using shape manipulation, compresses it into a large sphere of black chakra and electrical energy. When released, this technique seeks out any electrical energy source in the area and completely absorbs it (S-rank and below Raiton) also eradicates any physical matter it touches. Once it absorbs enough electrical energy, it breaks down and starts to attack indiscriminately, shooting tree-like branches at all people who are using chakra at the moment, including the user. The user or the opponent simply must stop using chakra, to prevent the technique from attacking them. This puts a great strain on Kirabi's chakra system preventing him from doing S-rank and up techniques for the next three turns.
    (last 3 turns)
    (No S-rank for the next three turns)
    (No access to Full Transformation for rest of Battle)

    ~ Declined, OPed ~
     
         
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    (Gakutai -O Kujaku) Band of Peacocks
    Type: Custom Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: +10 to fire techniques
    Description: This band was carved from bone of an ancient Peacock who was a great fire user. It has a small bush of feathers tied around it, These feathers are the feathers of Flare, The Peacock of fire. They are highly infused with katon chakra that the user can use to give them a +10 Damage bonus to Fire jutsu. For the bonus to activate, the user must form the "Tiger" handseal before they perform the seals for the technique they are about to use. This will release a small amount of the chakra from the feathers to aid the user.

    Notes:
    - Can be summoned by those who have the Peacock Contract.
    - Can increase the damage of fire jutsu 5 times per battle.
    - Must have signed the Peacock Contract.

    ~ Bashosen much ? Declined ~


    ~Contract Approved Here~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-08-2012 at 11:20 AM.

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    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - Crow Arts : Two In one !!
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user grapes his sword with his right hand then he throw the sword so It travels towards the opponent on a high speed with a vertical pattern.Afterwards and at a sudden time the user performs the "Snake' hand seal turning the sword into two big crows each one has the half size of Gamabunta.As the user turns his sword into two big crows the two crows spin around each other creating a very huge drill made of the two crow's body aiming towards the opponent.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per turn.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique in the same turn nor the next one.
    ❖ Can't use any S ranked technique in the same turn.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract.

    ~ You 'grape' your sword oO ? ~


    [Genjutsu: Karasu Hane Uwappari] - Illusion Technique : Crow's Feather Duster

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user transfer his mind's chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on him causing him to see the user begins to disappear slowly into a feathers till he completely disappears then suddenly the user gets attacked by hundreds of crow's beaks from all the directions causing his body to bleed badly causing him to die.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract..
    ❖ Can't use any other genjutsu on the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use any crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can only be used by Kage ranked Ninjas or above due to their chakra.

    ~ The user gets attacked ? Also, how is this activated ? ~

    [Ninpō : Shinkan] - Ninja Arts : Silence

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing a lightning attack the user is able to control the lightning properties by using his already infused chakra with the lightning attack causing the lightning attack to be silent and allowing the lightning technique to attack the opponent with out making any sound.
    ❖ Can only be used 4 times.

    ~ Nice idea, but won't work. ~
     
         
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    (Ranton: Kienzan) Storm Release: Destructo Disk
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will focus chakra while using basic shape manipulation. This creates an extremely thin but dense disk of water, charged with electricity that rotates at fast speeds. It's thin structure and rapid spin speed makes it razor sharp as it is launched at the target.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    (Ranton: Kienretsuzan ) Storm Release: Destructo Disk Barrage
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will focus chakra while using basic shape manipulation. This creates several extremely thin but dense disks of water, charged with electricity that rotates at fast speeds. These disks thin structure and rapid spin speed makes these disks razor sharp as they are launched at the target(s).
    Notes:
    -Maximum 4 disks
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    ~ Both Declined, similar techniques exist ~

    (Unagi Mizu Dendou) Electric Eel Spray
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack-Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will release two small Eels from one of his sleeves. One Eel will release a powerful spray of water capable of blowing back close by targets while the other will release an electrical pulse that will electrify the water causing further harm to the target(s). After the technique the Eels will retreat back into the users sleeve.
    Note:
    -Must sign Eel Contract
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    ~ If they retreat back into the sleeve, does that mean they can keep attacking without it being a jutsu or do they poof away ? ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-08-2012 at 11:25 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Futunomitama no Turugi ) Antiquity
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:Antiquity is a red sword.This sword is small in size only half a meter in length.The sword itself has been passed down from generation to generation with each unlocking new abilities in the sword.The first ability to the sword is the ability to mold you chakra into the sword and extend the length and the power of the sword.There are multiple levels to the sword.
    -The first level is only chakra covering the sword but has the power to slice through a rank earth and water.
    -The second level has the strength to cut through a rank lighting only and the red shield covers half of the user on which the sword is held and can block b rank attacks within reason.
    -The third version is 3 meters long and can cut through fire.
    -The last version is the strongest one of them all and can cut through a rank water,earth and lightning.
    -Can only be used be Lysander
    -One switching between levels it counts as one of the three moves and switching between levels has a cool down of one turn

    This is the sword without any chakra in it or around it:


    The first one looks like this but without the face and the user is holding the sword and there is no chakra coming from anywhere but the sword:


    The second level to the sword is this but yet again without the face and is one meter in length like the first one.


    The third level looks like this:


    And the last level looks like this:


    ~ Declined. Why not just submit it at its peak power -.- ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-08-2012 at 11:26 AM.

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