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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - Crow Arts : Two In one !!
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user takes his sword and hold it with his right hand then he throw the sword so It travels towards the opponent on a high speed with a vertical pattern.Afterwards and at a sudden time the user performs the "Snake' hand seal turning the sword into two big crows each one has the half size of Gamabunta.As the user turns his sword into two big crows the two crows spin around each other creating a very huge drill made of the two crow's body aiming towards the opponent.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per turn.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique in the same turn nor the next one.
    ❖ Can't use any S ranked summoning technique in the same turn.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract.

    Edited the bolded parts.

    ~ How does a sword become a crow ? Declined, do not resubmit. ~


    [Genjutsu: Karasu Hane Uwappari] - Illusion Technique : Crow's Feather Duster

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user transfer his mind's chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on him causing him to see a plenty amount of crows around him,in a pattern that they surround him from every and each direction to him.Causing him to see nothing but black ,afterwards all of the crows uses their feathers to stab the opponent with a powerful strikes to his body inflicting a terrible damage to him body which also make him body paralyzed due to the pressure of the strikes and damage.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract.
    ❖ Cannot use any Genjutsu technique for 3 turns after this turn.
    ❖ The user remains paralyzed for 1 turn.
    ❖ Can't use any other genjutsu on the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use any crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can only be used by Kage ranked Ninjas or above due to their chakra.

    Edited few stuff and bolded it.
    Edited the bolded parts and I clearly stated that the person activaites the technique by transferring his chakra into the opponent's mind.

    ~ I presumed you knew something about genjutsu before submitting this. Let me give you the basics of Genjutsu, something I presume you should know before submitting S-rank ones. All genjutsu work by transferring your chakra into the opponent's mind/chakra system. The question is how. Handseals, sight, sound....~





    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the same size as Pein's bird one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

    ~ How far from the opponent are they summoned ? ~

    [Genjutsu: Karasu Hane Uwappari] - Illusion Technique : Crow's Feather Duster

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user transfer his mind's chakra to the opponent's mind cand by performing the snake hand seal the user casts a genjutsu on him causing him to see the user begins to disappear slowly into a feathers till he completely disappears then suddenly the opponent gets attacked by hundreds of crow's beaks from all the directions causing his body to bleed badly causing him to die.
    ❖ Must sign the giant crows contract..
    ❖ Can't use any other genjutsu on the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use any crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can only be used by Kage ranked Ninjas or above due to their chakra.

    ±± Declined ±± Similar technique already exists.


    (Karasu Geigei : Inperiaru Gekiha Karasus ) - The Imperial Crushing Crows
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user summon two giant crows each crow has the same size as Pein's bird one on the right side of the opponent and one on the left side of the opponent each one is 5 meters apart from the opponent and whenever the user orders the crows the crow that is in the fly at high speed towards the right side of the opponent and in the same time the crow that is in the left side rushes towards the opponent left side at high speed, crushing the opponent and stabbing his body with their feathers.
    ❖ Can only be used twice per battle.
    ❖ Must sign the crow contract.
    ❖ Can't use any Crow arts technique at the same turn.
    ❖ Can't use above A rank crow arts technique at the next turn.

    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Very similar technique already exists.



    (Karasu Geigei : Karasus Buntai Arufa) - Crow Arts : Crows Squad Alpha

    Type: Attack
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A ( - 5 to the opponent every turn it remains )
    Description: The user bits his thumb causing it to bleed due to the pressure of the bite ,afterwards the user slams his hand on the ground summoning a large amount of medium sized crows each crow has the same size as Itachi's crows.Upon summoning them the crows starts to fly to the sky and spread into the battle field on the same level as the cloud's level so that the opponent won't be able to notice them and at the same time a crow appears on the user's right shoulder , this crow is the connection between the user and the crows,by this crow the user is able to detect the opponent's location where ever he is.
    ❖ The Crow that is on the user's shoulder is able to tell the user the opponent's location due to that he is able to speak in English.
    ❖ Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ❖ Remains 5 turns.


    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.


    Also, you do know that these techniques count towards the 10 Summoning animal limits of your Crow contact, right? Because that contract already has some summons...Its not 10 per signer but 10 overall for the whole contract. Just be sure you still have space...
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 07-06-2012 at 11:04 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Magen: Bachi no Ketsuraku Kisoku) – Demonic Illusion: Curse of the Absent Breath
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This technique was created to quickly apprehend a target without the use of physical force. The user performs a quick sequence of two handseals (Hare -> Inverted Bird) and traps the target in an illusion where the target is suddenly unable to breathe, so to speak. To be precise, once initiated, the target is still able to breathe i.e. their chest and lungs muscles still work, and they are still able to inhale and exhale but when they inhale they suddenly find that their necessity/”thirst” for air (oxygen) is not quenched/satisfied at all. That is, the target experiences a condition/sensation where they are severely and quickly deficient of oxygen – they are suffocated and slowly lose their energy (being less agile, strong, and so on). The effect of the suffocation gets to a point where the target begins to experience a severe headache; which combined with their suffocation will make it difficult for the target to concentrate while affected by this technique. This genjutsu lasts until dispelled by the target or cancelled by the user.
    *Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    *Note: Due to the target being suffocated and their inability to focus their attention, the target is unable to obtain the required concentration to use Wind techniques above A-rank and techniques above S-rank while affected by this technique, and will have difficulty moving.
    *Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
    *Note: No techniques above S-rank in the same turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ±± Declined ±± Too powerfull and too "unescapable". Also, that "thrist" for air has a name. I was tempted to DNR this because you can't simply fool their minds when it comes to a reflexive action but i'll give you a chance to make this approvable.


    (Genjutsu: Kuchisaki no Zonbi) - Illusionary Arts: Mouth of the Undead
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs a single handseal (Monkey) and traps the target in an illusion where the target's mouth suddenly starts to fill up with a large amount of greasy dirt, at a very rapid pace. The accumulation of dirt will proceed to fill up the target's mouth and throat, gradually cutting off the target's supply of oxygen and essentially suffocating him. But that is not all, after a few moments, the target will then begin to feel that, within the dirt, are small creatures/organisms moving around (which are in fact a large amount of flesh-eating bugs or scarabs) that burst out from the dirt inside his mouth and begin to burrow into the target's flesh - devouring him alive. This infestation of flesh-eating bugs inside the target's mouth (and neck) cause him to experience excruciatingly debilitating pain causing the target to collapse onto the ground. This genjutsu lasts until dispelled by the target or cancelled by the user.
    *Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    *Note: While affected by this technique, the target has considerable difficulty moving.
    *Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
    *Note: No techniques above S-rank in the same turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Similar to existing technique... Genjutsu: Akuma no Izumi, one of my own genjutsu. Your's just uses earth but the idea is the same. I dunno what to say anymore, so next time i won't say anything at all. I'll simply act.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Light... View Post
    (Suiton: Mizu Assaku Katana) Water Release: Water Compression Blades
    Type:Supplamentary
    Rank: A - rank
    Range: Mid- Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user performs the Rat,Boar,dragon and ram handseals and release several bullets (limit 8). After the bullets are release the user then claps their hands together while focusing their chakra turning the bullets into spiralling Disk like blades. These blades travel at great speeds and are very sharp . They can cut through B rank and lower Earth. The blades are so sharp that they are able to carve lines through the ground below.

    -Can only be taught by light
    -Needs Mastery Over Water
    - Has to be S-class ninja or higher

    ±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers

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    (Suiton: Mizu Assaku Katana) Water Release: Water Compression Blades
    Type:Supplamentary
    Rank: A - rank
    Range: Mid- Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user performs the Rat,Boar,dragon and ram handseals and release several bullets (limit 8). After the bullets are release the user then claps their hands together while focusing their chakra turning the bullets into spiralling Disk like blades. These blades travel at great speeds and are very sharp . They can cut through B rank and lower Earth. The blades are so sharp that they are able to carve lines through the ground below.

    -Can only be taught by light
    -Needs Mastery Over Water
    - Has to be S-class ninja or higher


    ±± Declined ±± A-Rank water would be cancelled by B-Rank earth...it wouldn't overcome it. Also, A-Ranks require usage limitation
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Summoning Animal:Giant Opossum
    Scroll Owner:Z-one
    Other Users who have signed contract: none yet
    Summoning Boss if existing:none yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:none
    Description and Background: Opossums make up the largest order of marsupials with103 or more species. They are also commonly called possums. the largest just exceeding Eight feet and the smallest the size of a Large Dog. They tend to be semi-arboreal omnivores, although there are many exceptions. Most members of this taxon have long snouts, a narrow braincase, and a prominent sagittal crest. The Giant Opossum Were usually found underground near Kessokugakure and are about 8 feet in height and 5 feet in length.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ## Attention! ##

    The CJ thread has currently 5 unchecked pages of submissions so we need to close it to be checked. I will close it tonight (in about 10 hours or so), so any change you need to do on your submissions must be done until then. I promise you, we will try our best to make this as briefly as we possibly can. Thank you!

    PS-> Anyone who hasn't submitted anything after the last marker can still post after this notice. The cycle is still ongoing until i close the thread.
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ShikamarUchiha10 View Post
    Katon&Doton: Iwa-Nenshou Tama | Fire&Earth Style style: Cinder shot
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After a fire has been doused and cinders are remaining. The user can build up and channel his fire and earth chakara into the cinders. If the user does not manipulate these burning cinders within 2 turns the cinders will cool, crumble and will not be able to use them. The cinders size vary from pebbles to rocks the size of a fist. The fire chakara increase the heat and the earth chakara manipulate the cinders movements as they are composed of earth, then preforms the Tiger, Ram and Snake hand-seals and directs several of them (5 max) towards their target at high speed. The target takes some brute damage along with moderate burns when struck by the cinders.
    Note: Can only be used when a fire is put out by Fire Style: Douse
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
    Note: Must have begun training in both elements and be up to B rank in at least one.
    Note: Can only be taught by ShikamarUchiha10

    >Fire Style: Douse<

    ±± Declined ±± To channel 2 elemental chakras at the same time requires Yin/Yang training.
    Katon&Doton: Iwa-Nenshou Tama | Fire&Earth Style style: Cinder shot
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After a fire has been doused and cinders are remaining. The user builds up and channels his fire chakara into the cinders to increase the heat. If the user does not manipulate these burning cinders within 2 turns the cinders will cool, crumble and will not be able to use them. The cinders size vary from pebbles to rocks the size of a fist. Once the fire chakara increase the heat the user then stops channeling his fire chakara and uses his earth chakara manipulate the cinders movements as they are composed of earth, then preforms the Tiger, Ram and Snake hand-seals and directs several of them (5 max) towards their target at high speed. The target takes some brute damage along with moderate burns when struck by the cinders.
    Note: Can only be used when a fire is put out by Fire Style: Douse
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
    Note: Must have begun training in both elements and be up to B rank in at least one.
    Note: Can only be taught by ShikamarUchiha10

    >Fire Style: Douse<


    ±± Approved ±±
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    1). Kongou Kokuretsu Zan | Diamond Country Splitting Cut
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Forbidden
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40-50
    Damage Points: 80-90
    Description: The user gathers large amounts of Satsui no Hado manipulated chakra and raises his arm towards the sky charges all the chakra into said arm, which takes around a second or two. Then, he violently slams his fist on the ground which results in an explosion of pure energy, which first takes the form of a lightning bolt and then emanates outwards in a shock wave of energy. The resulting wave has such a large amount of Satsui no Hado chakra inside it that the wave itself becomes physically harmful, destroying the terrain as it spreads outward in a destructive manner. The point of contact, where the user's arm strikes, becomes completely shattered and leaves a crater of 6 meters deep (around 20 feet) and 10 meters wide, with the user left standing in the middle. If an opponent is under the user and is struck by this technique, the opponent takes severe physical damage, resulting in great internal damage, limiting their actions greatly. If the user choices to use more chakra with the jutsu, it takes him an even greater time to charge all the chakra into his arm (around 5 secs) but the results are much more lethal. The sheer force and power of the strike only is so great that it causes a massive earthquake to be felt around the field; this earthquake alone causes no damage to any opponent unless they under ground, of course. The wave is so great that opponents caught in it will feel great heat emanating from it, causing second degree burns along their body and will be blown backwards with enough force to break Gamabunta's bones. The point of impact will be stuck so hard that it causes the earth itself to literally split and break completely (meaning if it is used on an island for example, it has enough strength and force to destroy the island). If the opponent is struck head-on, the impact will cause they're body to be severely broken, and near the point of death. However, despite all the wonders granted by this jutsu, it also has severe drawbacks. Only capable of using it twice, the user is only able to use one other jutsu during the turn this is used. The user is also left with great pressure on the arm he performed the jutsu with, causing it to become severely injured and after using it, he can only use ninjutsu for the following three turns, no taijutsu nor kenjutsu with said arm. The user is also only able to use two jutsus the next turn and if the Forbidden version is used, then only one jutsu is left.

    Notes:
    *No taijutsu/kenjutsu for two turns with said arm.
    *Can only be used twice with an interval of at least 3 turns
    *Cannot be used with any other mode such as Sage Mode or EIG.




    S-rank version:


    Forbidden version:



    ±± Declined ±± Requires some minor simplification and I need you to pick a rank. This has nothing really of a Forbidden rank as it doesn't do damage to yourself. And if it does, it needs to be more restricted which will make it less useful. Also, what would happen if you hit someone with this? or is it to be used only towards the ground?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ±± New Cycle! ±±

    A new submission cycle will start today. Because the thread was closed for a bit longer than we wanted, I decided to make a longer cycle. So, this cycle starts today, the 7th of July and ends on the 15th of July. During this cycle you can submit 3 awesome techniques for us to check.

    A personal note (although I have said this before): Please try to think of the viability and use your idea will have. Submitting something that is useless in terms of the RP, is pointless, regardless of how cool it may be. Try to keep it logical and practical. Useless things will only occupy space on your cj thread in the future.
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kamisama かみさま God's Sacrifice
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Medium
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (+10 Wind Combinations)
    Description: Kamisama is a weapon which was crafted by Alexander himself, after reading and analyzing information throughout the years about Madara Uchiha's infamous weapon. Kamisama is a medium sized war-fan rivaling the height of an average shionbi when placed along side with one another. The light brown fins decorated with a strange symbol on each end of the war-fan are made of a very lightweight and durable material that does not conduct electricity, nor is it able to be engulfed in flames. The core of the war-fan is a nearly indestructible pole with a thin rubber layer to avoid conductivity that is bandaged up from the bottom end all the way to the middle of the poll. At the very bottom of the pole lays a very lightweight, thin, and durable chain link which appears to have metallic spheres evenly spaced every three inches which ensures enhanced gripping. The other end of the chain-link is connected to a medium sized nearly indestructible scythe which was rumored to be one of Madara's deadliest weapons in combination with the war-fan. Just like the pole, the scythe's hand is also laced in a thin layer of rubber with bandages covering the entire thing up to the blade itself. The chain-link is long enough to allow Alexander to throw his scythe up to medium range distance similar to Hidan's scythe. Both the war-fan and scythe are strapped in the center of his back in an "X" manner. The unique ability of the war fan is to coat elemental projectile-type techniques with wind chakra. When the user releases an elemental projectile type technique, he will swing the fan and coat the technique with wind chakra, causing the technique in question to be turned into a XX/wind combination. Meaning that if the user releases a fireball and swings the fan, it would turn into a fire/wind combination. Although it does not boost the rank nor size of the technique in question, it does boost them by ten damage points. In order to release the projectile techniques successfully and coat them in wind, Alexander found out a way to exchange hand signs for fan swings. Meaning that for every two hand seals required in a projectile type technique, the user is required to swing his fan once. (ex: If I release a fire technique that requires four hand seals, I would need to swing the fan twice as I then release the fire and coat it in wind, increasing its damage while it maintains the same rank.) The wind enhancement would not be effective against lightning techniques because the lightning technique in question would disperse. Kamisama is chakra reactive, which if channeled with expansion chakra it will expand at the users will. Expanding it refers to using any variation of the Akimichi clan's expansion techniques and so leading to count towards the user's jutsu per turn. When releasing a wind style technique from Kamisama, the technique in question would automatically receive the ten damage boost due to the fact that is not physically possible to create a wind/wind combination. The user is also able to release physical projectiles like kunais, shuriken, senbons etc and coat them in wind chakra for increased speed and damage. This is accomplished in the same manner that the elemental projectile techniques are enhanced into combinations.

    ▵ Utilizing the expansion ability requires an Akimichi biography
    ▵ Can only be wielded by Hard

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    This is my first CW/CJ submission so please bare with me. I have read a few submissions so far and I've noticed that some people have gotten +10 damage approved by simply having the item in question on their possession. I figured that if I implemented it this way, it would also have a chance at approval. Thank you for taking the time to read my submission, I highly appreciate it. ^_^

    ~Approved~ Well done.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Genjutsu: Mizu Ei ) - Illusion Technique: Water Wrap
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user releases his chakra and inserts it into his opponents brain whilst performing the snake hand seal, making it seem as if a long thick rope of water has suddenly materialize out of nowhere and wraps it self around the opponent, constricting the opponents movement, the rope would be so tight that the user wouldn't be able to move any parts of his body, thus preventing him from performing any hand seals, in reality the opponent would just be standing still struggling to move since he thinks a rope of water has tightly wrapped itself around his body. Due to it being a genjutsu, the rope of water would appear almost instantly.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times.
    Note: No other genjutsu in same turn.
    Note: Lasts for 2 turn if the opponent hasn't managed to figure out it's a genjutsu and release himself.

    ±± Declined ±± Long range? No. Also, why does this cause damage? And remove that part i added. Apart from that, its a good simply gen. Cool.
    Resubmitting:

    (Genjutsu: Mizu Ei ) - Illusion Technique: Water Wrap
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user releases his chakra and inserts it into his opponents brain whilst performing the snake hand seal, making it seem as if a long thick rope of water has suddenly materialize out of nowhere and wraps it self around the opponent, constricting the opponents movement, the rope would be so tight that the opponent wouldn't be able to move any parts of his body, thus preventing him from performing any hand seals, in reality the opponent would just be standing still struggling to move since he thinks a rope of water has tightly wrapped itself around his body.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times.
    Note: No other genjutsu in same turn.
    Note: Lasts for 2 turn if the opponent hasn't managed to figure out it's a genjutsu and release himself.

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    (Olm Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Scarlet) - Olm Summoning Technique: Scarlet
    Rank: S-Rank
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short (Long if digging through the ground)
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (If she knocks into user with encased spikes and such)
    Description: Scarlet is a slender olm, who -despite being an olm- has little to no slime covering her body. She is 2 meters long and has a special affinity for Earth, though despite specializing in Earth, she can only use up to B-rank Earth jutsus (including those which require hand seals, as she has little hands) whilst having other specific ability which makes her stand out. She has the ability quite similar to the Hiding like a mole jutsu, however instead of just merging through the ground she encases her body in a hard shell made of rock with small spikes 3 inches long which allows her to dig through the ground with ease, the rock encasing her body is equivalent to an A-ranked jutsu which allows her to easily smash through other Earth jutsus ranked A and below, this allows her to dig through the ground with things like Earth tremors have no effect on her whatsoever and with things like the swamp jutsu not phasing her as she can still dig through it due to her body being in cased by the rock which is equivalent to an A-ranked jutsu. The normal elemental weaknesses and strengths apply. In addition to that, like all other Olms, she is blind however, she has the sense of smell equal to that of an Inuzuka and hearing capabilities equal to someone who has the C-ranked sound jutsu activated. She is -however - better at sensing the quantity of prey/opponents by smell.
    Note: Can only be summoned once.
    Note: Lasts 4 turns each time she is summoned.
    Note: Every jutsu used by Scarlet counts as one of the users.
    Note: Scarlet can speak perfect English.
    Note: Like hiding like a mole jutsu, she can dig up to Long range.
    Note: Her ability to dig through the ground with rock encased around her body counts as one of the users jutsus and can only be used 3 times.

    (Olm Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Olmagan) - Olm Summoning Technique: Olmagan
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (If/when wind spear is used)
    Description: Olmagan is one of the smallest olms in existence, being only 2cm long. She has an ability of being able to coat the user with a layer of wind chakra equivalent to B-rank, upon the users request. If needed, Olmagan can also deactive the wind layer almost instantly. In addition to that, she can also release a thin almost invisible line of wind towards the opponent at any time she wishes, this thin line of wind is considered an A-ranked wind spear which can cut an opponent very easily. The wind is extremely thin due to the size of Olmagan and so if the opponents vision is already phased or hindered by a previous jutsu, it'll become extremely hard to see the incoming attack. Wind being almost transparent makes the whole situation even worse. Except those abilities she has no other use to the user apart from having the usual trait of Olms which are a keen sense of smell equal to a dog from the Inuzuka clan and hearing easily comparable to someone who has the C-rank sound jutsu activated. Olmagan can speak perfect English and uses that to communicate with her summoner.
    Note: Can be summoned twice per battle.
    Note: Lasts 3 turns each time she's summoned.
    Note: Wind Coating counts as a jutsu.
    Note: Thin line of wind also counts as a jutsu

    ~All Approved~ Changed one thing (Bolded)
     
         
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    Genjutsu: Sairento kōri | Illusionary Arts: Silent Ice
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Before using an ice technique, the user will do one additional hand seal, using his chakra to put his enemies into a genjutsu. The genjutsu makes use of the "hissing" sound produced by Ice techniques in contact with the air, to manipulate the enemies senses and slowly numbing them as they hear that sound. Barely noticeable at first, as the user keeps using ice techniques, the enemy will further be affected by the illusion. The genjutsu lasts 3 turns, during which the user needs to produce at least 3 Ice techniques (more will not alter the effect), one in each turn (the first one, being the one after the genjutsu). Upon hearing the hissing sound of the 1st Ice technique, the user will feel the slight pinch and low intensity needle-like pain associated with cold, mainly on his extremities. Upon hearing the 2nd one, the user will lose feeling on his fingers and toes, nose and ears, his mind becomes sluggish, the pain intense and generalized, shivering is present reducing the agility and precision of movement, the cold sensation equivalent to that of a -15ºC atmosphere. Upon hearing the last technique, the effects will be severe. User becomes unable to move his extremities and the pain is the same as if they were entering necrosis. The shivering is unbearable and the mental capacities barely there. Handseals and molding chakra are things hard to accomplish taking into consideration the numbness and sluggish mind. If he fails to release the illusion, his body will shut down and he will lose conscious as his body is fooled into thinking that he just fell into a hipotermic state.
    Note: Can only be performed 3 times
    Note: Its effects span for up to 3 turns if unreleased
    Note: Requires the user to have an Ice biography and use an ice technique right after the genjutsu
    Note: Using another genjutsu on the enemy while its active will dispel the genjutsu
    Note: Can only be taught by McRazor
    ~Declined~ Is this a suicide technique?
     
         
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    (Raiton: Kochou Ishuu) Lightning Release: Butterfly Swarm
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Long Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user concentrates chakra into both of his palms and creates up to 20 butterflies made out of lightning, the butterflies fly towards the opponent, and upon contact, they explode causing burns and stunning.

    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    - The power of each butterfly varies with the quantity of butterflies made (less butterflies,more power.)
    - Can only be taught by Ebi..

    ~ Similar techniques exist ~




    (Raijinsou Titano-Ktonon) Staff of the Lightning God, Titan-Slayer
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 (per activation) (+15 per turn)
    Damage: (+15 to lightning techniques)
    Description:
    It is said that this staff was forged by the gods themselves. It was discovered about 300 years ago, deep in the mountains of Kumogakure. High above the clouds, a rock said to be the strongest material in Kumogakure, was been struck by lightning several times a day. The rock began to wear down with each strike, one day, someone while roaming around the mountain, found what resembled a staff and many shards of rock laying around it. He picked it up and cried out in unbearable pain, he had been shocked by the electricity residing within the staff, he wrapped it with a heavy cloth, he took the staff to the Raikage. It is said that even the Raikage was unable to hold the staff properly, They named it, Staff of the Lightning God, Titan-Slayer, now it lays waiting for its rightful owner capable of holding it and using it to its maximum potential.
    The Staff is 2 meters long, and has a width of 20 cm, the head has a snake like form and it is wrapped an immensely strong cloth. It is not sharp enough to be able to cut skin, but it deals heavy blunt damage.

    -Notes-
    The Staff can only be infused with Lightning Chakra.
    The Staff is indestructible due to the material used to create it, as well as to being reinforced by a immensely strong cloth.

    -Additional Info & Restrictions-
    While Raiton chakra is channeled into the staff, the staff gains extra abilities giving the user:

    Infusing the staff with raiton chakra counts as a move.
    Gives +15 damage to every raiton jutsu of the user.
    If the staff has been fused with Raiton chakra then any damage it inflicts into the opponent may cause numbness, respectively restricting the opponent's movement.
    The Staff can be infused with Raiton chakra for 4 turns and requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again.
    No Earth justu above B rank can be used while holding this staff.
    Must be of at least A rank in Raiton to be able to use the Staff.
    Only Kage and above may use this Staff.
    Can only be wielded by Ebi.. and people he deems worthy.

    ~ Declined. Similar to hundreds of existing weapons. ~

    (Raiton: Fukyuu Negi Netsu) Lightning Release: Eternal Negi Fever
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    The user makes two seals and then concentrates Raiton chakra throughout his body forming a condense body armor, after that the user will extend his arms and legs exposing his front body, and release the Raiton chakra stored in a beam-like manner.

    One turn cooldown before it can be used again.
    Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Can only be taught by Ebi..

    ~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~

    -Please edit as necessary to make these approvable as possible-
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by KeotsuEclipse View Post
    I practically rewrote the sword, which is why I didn't bold anything last time. Sorry. Bolded the changes you're looking for.

    (Ten'notsurugi: Mythos, Jinsei no Sāberu) Astrum Sword: Mythos, Vita Saber
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Weapon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: +30 to Command Arts, +20 to Kenjutsu
    Description: "The Blade of Heaven...Mythos the Life Sabre. One of the Ten Shinning Weapons." When Keotsu returned to the known continent from his journey to regions unknown, he returned with his blade Mythos in a new form; some secret event took place which reconfigured the blade and created a powerful connection between Keotsu and the sword. The Mythril blade retained its ability to change its shape, but not its mass when subjected to Keotsu's chakras, as did the scabbard of the weapon, though the two were no longer explicitly linked. A few improvements were noted by Keotsu, though: the blade seemed to resonate better than before, boosting his powers in battle; second, the blade came to reject energies that were foreign to Keotsu - that's to say, for example, if an enemy tried to use Nagashi after grabbing the blade, the energy would stop completely due to the nature of the blade's composition. This particular power comes about from the blade's new found synergy with Keotsu, in an effort to prevent it from being used against him. Retaining all the properties of the metal it was forged from, Mythos is indestructible and will never dull, in any of its forms.
    *The user can manipulate the blade’s form during battle at any time, but it costs 35 chakra to do so, and also counts towards one of that turn’s three allotted moves.
    *Can only be wielded by Keotsu. When someone else tries to hold the blade, it will reject their chakra and increase its density exponentially, making it to heavy to be lifted. However, it reverts to its original density when Keotsu is holding it.

    ±± Declined ±± +20 to Kenjutsu is already a strech, but i'd allow it. But +30 to command arts? Also, add in a small note a smal explanation of the limitations of what it can transform into. I mean, what exactly is the limit and use of this transformation.
    (Ten'notsurugi: Mythos, Jinsei no Sāberu) Astrum Sword: Mythos, Vita Saber
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Weapon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: +20 to Kenjutsu and Command Arts
    Description: "The Blade of Heaven...Mythos the Life Sabre. One of the Ten Shinning Weapons." When Keotsu returned to the known continent from his journey to regions unknown, he returned with his blade Mythos in a new form; some secret event took place which reconfigured the blade and created a powerful connection between Keotsu and the sword. The Mythril blade retained its ability to change it's shape, but not it's mass when subjected to Keotsu's chakras, as did the scabbard of the weapon, though the two were no longer explicitly linked. A few improvements were noted by Keotsu, though: the blade seemed to resonate better than before, boosting his powers in battle; second, the blade came to reject energies that were foreign to Keotsu - that's to say, for example, if an enemy tried to use Nagashi after grabbing the blade, the energy would stop completely due to the nature of the blade's composition. This particular power comes about from the blade's new found synergy with Keotsu, in an effort to prevent it from being used against him. Retaining all the properties of the metal it was forged from, Mythos is indestructible and will never dull, in any of its forms.
    *The user can manipulate the blade’s form during battle at any time, but it costs 35 chakra to do so, and also counts towards one of that turn’s three allotted moves.
    *Can only be wielded by Keotsu. When someone else tries to hold the blade, it will reject their chakra and increase its density exponentially, making it to heavy to be lifted. However, it reverts to its original density when Keotsu is holding it.
    *While the sword can transform into different types of weapons, like a katana or spear, it is bound by its mass, meaning that the form it takes on has to be within the realms of creating from the same amount of matter.

    ~ So it can give you a +20 to two things, and sto foreign chakra, and all it costs you is 35 chakra and one move, if you use transformation ? I don't think so. Give it actual restrictions that mean something. ~

    Adjusted the damage, and bolded part of the description; the boundaries of its transforming where already there, but I made it explicit now.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    Resubmitting. I have made no changes in the techniques, except adding a single space, seperating 'any' and 'way' in the first technique.

    (Fūinjutsu: Nanzen Koki o Tenpu) Sealing Technique: Many Thousand Exhalations of the Heavenly Father
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user performs two handseals and does a simple gesture. At the sign of the gesture, two great sealing arrays will appear, one ten meters above the opponent, extending to mid range around the area it’s made, and one below the opponent, which extends short range around the area it’s made on. The arrays can, alternatively, emanate an eerie glow and hum immediately upon activation. As the arrays appear, beams, seemingly made of light, will extend from both arrays with great speed and connect, giving the structure a cage-like appearance, but not affecting the target or user in any way. The lower array will, as the beams connect, immediately lock anything above it in suspended animation, making a great kanji for ‘halt’ appear in the middle of itself. The top one will, as the beams connect, fire a great hurricane of weapons towards the area beneath it, covering a wide range very quickly. The hurricane itself will consist of thousands of weapons of all shapes, sizes and origins.
    -Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
    -The user cannot use B-ranked and above Fūinjutsu during the next turn.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
    ~Approved~ Removed the paralysis part. It's unnecessary. Otherwise, nice.

    (Fūinjutsu: Tanren no Moudan) Sealing Technique: The Forging of a Hasty Conclusion
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per creation)
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user claps his hands together, causing numerous seals to appear on his/her body, all of whom are linked to two main-seals on both of the users’ palms. The numerous seals all act as converters and conveyors for chakra. Tanren no Moudan is essentially the creation of temporary weapons and armor, all created from different types of elemental or raw chakra. Like the Water Walking Exercise, the user of this technique will emit ever-changing streams of chakra from different points on their bodies, using extremely basic shape-manipulation to alter the chakra into the needed form. The seals will then, at a mental command from the user, convert the raw chakra into any accessible type of elemental chakra. Using this simple trick, elemental weapons and armor can be accessed at a moment’s notice. Of course, the technique has its limitations. Every piece of elemental armor or weaponry is B-ranked in terms of strength, while raw chakra equipment is C-ranked in strength. Any product of this technique takes one of the three moves allowed per turn to create, but every piece of equipment is created extremely quickly because of the simple concept and the assistance of the seals. The seals allow the elemental equipment to exist while the user performs other techniques, since he/she merely needs to maintain the chakra-flow to uphold the equipments existence.
    -One cannot use any Ninjutsu related to whatever element is used to create equipment with this technique, with the exception of constructions made of raw chakra.
    -One can create multiple pieces of equipment using multiple elements, but the same restrictions apply to the new elements.
    -After creating a piece of equipment, one must wait two (2) consecutive turns before creating another piece using the same element.
    -With the exception of anything Fūinjutsu-related, this technique is classified as a general skill, since it is simply an advanced form of the Water Walking Exercise.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
    ~Leaving for Scorps or Emperor~ I'm really not sure on this one.
    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    (Amebuyou: Shin'youshuu) Rain Dancing: Collection of Mythology
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30 (+5 per creation)
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user smears blood over his hands and forms a single handseal. At the sign of the handseal, the user extends energy outwards and infuses all existing sources of rain with chakra. This technique does not affect an opponent’s technique. Shin'youshuu allows the user to use simple gestures to form creatures and shapes out of the rain itself. By using short and precise gestures to knead the chakra in the rain, the user is able to slightly increase the size of the individual raindrops and make them light up because of the chakra inside them. As such, this technique does not shape moving creatures, it merely sets up a frame that moves from raindrop to raindrop to create the illusion of movement. While this method is just as efficient as actually creating the creatures, it is infinitely many times simpler. Since no actual creature is created, the shapes of Shin'youshuu cannot be used to ram into the target. Instead, the chakra inside the raindrops simply turns unstable in nature, causing shockwaves of rain and chakra to hit the target, and everything in his near vicinity, when detonated.
    - All shapes must be created at least five (5) meters away from the target.
    -Can only be used trice (3) per battle.
    -No S-ranked Rain techniques may be used during the following turn.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
    ~Declined~ I'm not seeing what your point is with this technique. What's the point of changing the shapes to creatures and then saying the creatures aren't actually created and cannot hurt the opponent. If your goal is the detonation of the raindrops, then the majority of the description is superfluous. Rewrite it and be clear about the effect of the technique damage-wise.
    Resubmitting. I removed all the creature parts and made the purpose clear:

    (Amebuyou: Shin'youshuu) Rain Dancing: Collection of Mythology
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+5 per creation)
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user smears blood over his hands and forms a single handseal. At the sign of the handseal, the user extends energy outwards and infuses all existing sources of rain with chakra. This technique does not affect an opponent’s technique. By using short and precise gestures to knead the chakra in the rain, this technique allows the user to slightly increase the size of the individual raindrops and make them light up because of the chakra inside them. As such, this technique sets up a frame that moves from raindrop to raindrop to create the illusion of movement. While this method is just as efficient as actually creating the creatures, it is infinitely many times simpler. As the frame nears its target, the chakra inside the raindrops turns unstable in nature, exploding violently and causing shockwaves of rain and chakra to hit the target and everything in its near vicinity.
    - All shapes must be created at least five (5) meters away from the target.
    -Can only be used trice (3) per battle.
    -No S-ranked Rain techniques may be used during the following turn.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

    ~ Approved ~

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    (Ichitenkai) One Point Release
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: A Taijutsu technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point.
    -Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
    -No S-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
    -This does not count as an actual opening of the First Gate (Kaimon).
    -The user must be able to open the Kaimon and be a Taijutsu Specialist to use this technique.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
    ~Declined~ For being in detention.
    Resubmitting. I haven't changed anything, as it was declined because I was in detention.

    (Ichitenkai) One Point Release
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: A Taijutsu technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point.
    -Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
    -No S-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
    -This does not count as an actual opening of the First Gate (Kaimon).
    -The user must be able to open the Kaimon to use this technique.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

    ~ No, it has to count if you want it. ~

    New submission:

    (Tetsujō) Razor Wire
    Rank: S
    Type: Armor
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Tetsujō is a sentient, tight-fitting bodysuit that encases the user’s upper body like a second layer of skin. Similar to Samehada in terms of function, Tetsujō shares a semi-symbiotic bond with its wielder, constantly absorbing his/her chakra, be it normal or abnormal, in order to remain sentient and functional. The main characteristic of Tetsujō is its ability to change the chakra signature of everything it absorbs. Through miniscule vibrations and fluctuations, the suit changes the signature of all the chakra it absorbs and injects it back into the user’s chakra pathway system in almost constant bursts. Normally, foreign chakra would disturb and disrupt the chakra pathways, but through the symbiotic bond the armor and wielder shares, Tetsujō is able to function as a purifier of sorts, guiding the user’s body through an almost instant process of adaption, though still altering its wilder's chakra flow. With its incredible ability to evolve, Tetsujō is also able to perform this process on unusual types of chakra. This constant process of change and evolution also serves to gradually, but continuously, change the user’s chakra signature on a fundamental level. Generally, Tetsujō will render illusionists unable to use dual-layered illusions on its wielder and make it all but impossible for Sensors to recognize its wilder’s chakra signature. Furthermore, Tetsujō makes the user’s constantly changing chakra impossible to mimic. Through its continuous changing of the user’s chakra signature, Tetsujō also decreases the rank of all Genjutsu Techniques cast on its wielder by one rank. Finally, Tetsujō is able to harshly constrict itself around its wilder’s body for a short amount of time.
    If anyone but the wielder touches Tetsujō, the suit releases a harmful burst of chakra into the perpetrators chakra pathway system, ruining his/her balance and equilibrium for a short amount of time.
    - Tetsujō cannot decrease the rank of a Mangekyō Sharingan Genjutsu.

    ~ Some restrictions ? ~

    Yes, this'll replace my old Custom 'Weapon'.
     
         
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    submitting cw cj:

    (Fuuton: Sora no kūki burēdo) Wind Release: Air Blades of the Skies
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 4 turns, he may use the sword's affinity of wind for his ultimate advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. After the 4 turns, putting all the chakra which the sword had left as an excess and plus the user's chakra, the user will slam his sword into the ground, having enormous amounts of fuuton chakra run through the ground. As the massive amounts of fuuton chakra runs through the ground, enormous fuuton pillars will be shooting out from the ground, reaching high into the skies all around the battlefield, impaling the enemy from below. The tunnels that these fuuton pillars created can be used as supplementary like using a fire jutsu to strengthen/inflame the wind pillars or water jutsu to create multiple water vortex around the battlefield. The pillars will remain as long as the sword struck into the ground but lasts for the next 2 turns.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Chakra released from the sword is shaped into a blade that can cut through nearly anything.
    ~User may only use this technique in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above ninjutsu in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~User needs to master Taijutsu in order to hold this.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    re-submit:

    (Han Kami han hito no ken) Fist of a Demigod
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will bite his finger and drip some of his blood into the ground, using it as a sacrifice in the before turn. After the turn has ended, he may slam his hands on the ground, having the finest quality of earth from the ground be compressed/steel like quality to have a giant earth arm, resembling Gedo Mazo's right arm, to erupt from the deep ground. That means it is the same size as Gedo Mazo's right arm. The arm has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to tear off flesh respectively and sharp nails that allows him to go through most of the techniques. This technique was passed down from the Sage of the 6th Path to newer generations in order to provide protection from the Gedo Mazo. The user may take defensive purposes as having this arm erupt right underneath him and close its hand, having the hand to protect him and make a counterattack of having this arm punch the opponent with the user inside the closed hand. It may take offensive measures as having the arm crush the opponent. If the hand closes, it is airtight inside.
    Note:
    ~Unable to use Doton techniques for 2 turns due to the restrains on the body.
    ~Causing -50 damage to user as of the restrains of the jutsu
    ~The user can only use B-rank and below ninjutsu for 1 turn due to the restrains on the body.
    ~While this technique is active, the user may only use 2 techniques in every turn.
    ~The arm can stay in the fight for the max of 3 turns. After the 3 turns, it will go back into the ground.
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Dr. House may teach this.

    for checker: answered as what is it made of

    ±± All Pending ±± Resubmit. You can drop your CW and replace it with another one yes, but you need to link us to the post were the current one was approved. Also, although you can drop the weapon and submit a new one, you can't drop the technique. CJs can't be drop currently.
    Note for checker: Scorps told me to re-submit everything without any changes thus no changes were made to the re-submitted techniques.

    re-submit:

    (Han Kami han hito no ken) Fist of a Demigod
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will bite his finger and drip some of his blood into the ground, using it as a sacrifice in the before turn. After the turn has ended, he may slam his hands on the ground, having the finest quality of earth from the ground be compressed/steel like quality to have a giant earth arm, resembling Gedo Mazo's right arm, to erupt from the deep ground. That means it is the same size as Gedo Mazo's right arm. The arm has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to tear off flesh respectively and sharp nails that allows him to go through most of the techniques. This technique was passed down from the Sage of the 6th Path to newer generations in order to provide protection from the Gedo Mazo. The user may take defensive purposes as having this arm erupt right underneath him and close its hand, having the hand to protect him and make a counterattack of having this arm punch the opponent with the user inside the closed hand. It may take offensive measures as having the arm crush the opponent. If the hand closes, it is airtight inside.
    Note:
    ~Unable to use Doton techniques for 2 turns due to the restrains on the body.
    ~Causing -50 damage to user as of the restrains of the jutsu
    ~The user can only use B-rank and below ninjutsu for 1 turn due to the restrains on the body.
    ~While this technique is active, the user may only use 2 techniques in every turn.
    ~The arm can stay in the fight for the max of 3 turns. After the 3 turns, it will go back into the ground.
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Dr. House may teach this.

    ~ Sharp nails that allow it to go through most techniques ? What ? Explain. Also remove the pointless explanations about how it was passed down by bla bla bla.~

    re-submitting a technique for my custom weapon:

    (Fuuton: Sora no kūki burēdo) Wind Release: Air Blades of the Skies
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 4 turns, he may use the sword's affinity of wind for his ultimate advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. After the 4 turns, putting all the chakra which the sword had left as an excess and plus the user's chakra, the user will slam his sword into the ground, having enormous amounts of fuuton chakra run through the ground. As the massive amounts of fuuton chakra runs through the ground, enormous fuuton pillars will be shooting out from the ground, reaching high into the skies all around the battlefield, impaling the enemy from below. The tunnels that these fuuton pillars created can be used as supplementary like using a fire jutsu to strengthen/inflame the wind pillars or water jutsu to create multiple water vortex around the battlefield. The pillars will remain as long as the sword struck into the ground but lasts for the next 2 turns.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Chakra released from the sword is shaped into a blade that can cut through nearly anything.
    ~User may only use this technique in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above ninjutsu in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~User needs to master Taijutsu in order to hold this.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    ~ No, this is already an incredibly powerful technique, especially in combo with fire or wind. It's not lasting more than one turn. ~

    For reference, here's my Custom Weapon for the cj.

    Sumitsukigasa - Dante's Horn of Sorrow
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-10 each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: It has yet been said within many dusty old books that a great man named Dante Alighieri has gone to save his loved one from the great evil toad of Myobokuzan, Gamafer. Dante had gone down into the pit of death, into Gamafer's lair. After 7 days of a bloody fight, Dante failed to save his flower, and he showed no mercy to Gamafer. After the bloodbath, Dante carved a blade from Gamafer's mighty horn and he took these pieces to be forged by Hephaestus, the nearby blacksmith. He had forged the mighty double-bladed sword, and named Sumitsukigasa. The double-bladed sword is made of mostly unbreakable bone, harder then steel. Because of the blade part is made of bone, and most of it's parts, the weapon weighs almost half of it's size, and can be handled in order to reach high speeds. The -10 chakra in each turn is because Sumitsukigasa sucks the user's chakra in order to maintain it's ability, which is being always in the state of having itself imbued with wind chakra, quite similar to (Fūton: Kaze Kyōka no Tsūru) - Wind Release: Wind Enhanced Tools, and it won't stop until the double-bladed sword is out of short range from the user. If the user wishes, he may channel more of his chakra into the sword, which is an additional -10 chakra in each usage, in order to extend the pre-existing wind chakra inbued within the sword, onto 5-6ft. As the wind chakra has been extended on the sword in order to reach 5-6ft, the blade becomes an S-ranked wind blade, but for only that turn. Since the sword has an affinity for Wind, and as the sword's inbued abilities will travel onto the user's hand giving him a uniqueness of enabling him to seal a mere handseal for any wind jutsus. When the user performs any wind jutsus, the inbued chakra will add it's own inbued wind chakra from the sword (10 chakra which been sucked off from the user, every turn) into the technique completely, (transfering that sucked -10 chakra into the technique) having the sword lose its inbued wind chakra for that turn.
    Note:
    -Because of the sword's abilities, only a Sannin may hold the sword.
    -Because of it's wind affinities, only who mastered wind may use it.
    -If user wishes, the wind chakra imbued within the sword can be extended so that it will reach onto 5-6ft.
    -Only may Dr. House use this, and who he allows.
    -If someone tries to hold it, the sword will start sucking most of his chakra out of him, leaving him with a feeling of drained.


    updating an approved jutsu:

    Quote Originally Posted by House View Post
    (Hakke Eien no) - 8 Trigrams Eternal
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique will enable the user to release a series of large amounts of chakras from his chakra points on the tips of toes or exerting from his palms (incase he is standing on his hands) enabling the user to move at fast speeds when he kicks/pushes off the ground or kicks/pushes onto a direction within mid-air in order to evade an incoming jutsu, or to move into hand-to-hand combat.
    Note:
    -This jutsu won't deal any damage.
    -Can be taught by Dr. House
    Changing it into this:

    (Eien no) - Eternal
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique will enable the user to release a series of large amounts of chakras from his chakra points on the tips of toes or exerting from his palms (incase he is standing on his hands) enabling the user to move at fast speeds where only 1 tomoe or higher may able to follow. He may make kicks/pushes off the ground or kicks/pushes onto a direction within mid-air in order to evade an incoming jutsu, or to move into hand-to-hand combat.
    Note:
    -This jutsu won't deal any damage.
    -Can be taught by Dr. House

    ~ No. No. No. Boosting the speed ? If you are, cut down range. ~

    Note for the checker:
    ~ I changed the name of the jutsu
    ~put more description
    ~ this is by all means a ninjutsu
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Ushiro View Post

    Updating a previously approved technique from this:

    To this:

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short (Mid for trap)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A (+15 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques)
    Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which causes it to glow and manifest a spherical barrier around the user with him at the center. As the user moves the barrier will move with him. The barrier is one-sided, meaning the user can be protected from outside attacks while objects can leave the barrier freely. When the user aims his bow, a crosshair appears on the surface of the barrier and the arrows that pass through it are strengthened. A variation of this technique is performed by aiming the user's bow at a target and creating the barrier around them instead in a reversed state so he can be trapped inside while the user attacks him from outside. The barrier remains stationary when trapping a target.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -The barrier can be destroyed by 3 C-rank, 2 B-rank, or 1 A-rank attack

    I removed a few unnecessary restrictions like the jutsu per turn limit and the decrease in ninjutsu strength.


    ±± Declined ±± Any technique from a CFS can only be submitted by the owner of the CFS.
    Updating a cj from this:
    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 each turn)
    Damage: N/A (+10 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques, -10 to other ninjutsu)
    Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which manifests a web-like crosshair in front. It acts as a barrier against frontal attacks and strengthens arrows shot from the bow with once they pass through the one-sided barrier.
    -Usable once per battle
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Can protect the user from 3 C-rank, 2 B-rank, or 1 A-rank attack
    -Only 2 jutsu per turn may be used while this is active excluding the turn it was used
    To this:

    (Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short (Mid for trap)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A (+15 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques)
    Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which causes it to glow and manifest a spherical barrier around the user with him at the center. As the user moves the barrier will move with him. The barrier is one-sided, meaning the user can be protected from outside attacks while objects can leave the barrier freely. When the user aims his bow, a crosshair appears on the surface of the barrier and the arrows that pass through it are strengthened. A variation of this technique is performed by aiming the user's bow at a target and creating the barrier around them instead in a reversed state so he can be trapped inside while the user attacks him from outside. The barrier remains stationary when trapping a target.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -The barrier can be destroyed by 3 C-rank, 2 B-rank, or 1 A-rank attack

    ~ What Scorps said ~

    This technique was created by me before the CFS thread was made and at the time i was a co-creator of the fighting style. I removed a few unnecessary restrictions like the jutsu per turn limit and the decrease in ninjutsu strength.

    New submission:

    (Suiton: Taki no Atsuryoku)- Water Release: Waterfall Pressure
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Ram handseal and summons a large amount of water erupting from the ground at different six points into the air and is directed onto the target like waterfalls. The flow of water is dense enough to damage someone struck by it and possibly knock them unconscious. There are several possible uses for this technique such as becoming a water source for additional water techniques or having the streams come together and form a wall of water for temporary protection.
    -Usable 4 times per battle

    ~ Many similar techniques exist ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hauringukiri) – Howling Blade

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 15 - 40 (dependant on ability used)
    Damage points: 30 – 80 (dependant on ability used)
    Description: Hauringukiri is a blade made of the finest metals making it very strong. Above the handle lies a hollow spherical guard chamber with a bell ball inside. The chamber itself is structurally strong and prevents it from becoming a weakness to the sword. The wielder uses this hollow chamber as an amplifier with their chakra to create different levels of techniques using sound.

    C rank Level – at short range the user can release chakra into the hollow spherical chamber to emit a sound wave that can affect the opponent’s sence of balance.

    B rank Level – at mid range the he user can create small sound blasts emanating from their sword that strike the opponent hitting them back and causes them to bleed from their nose.

    A rank Level – at long range the user can create an amplified sound wave that affects the opponent through their hearing and causes them to be temporarily bound in place from paralysis. ( can only be used 3 times).

    S rank Level – the user can create from their sword a strong shockwave of sound that is shot at the opponent and can shatter even bare rock to A rank level. When the shockwave strikes the opponent it affects their sense of balance and eyesight and induce bleeding from their nose and ears. (Can only be used 2 times).

    Note: Can only be wielded by a user of Sound Element.


    ~ Requires numerous restrictions, each Sound thing must count as a move, and all of them mimic canon jutsu ~
    ________________________________________
    I have permission from Zenryoku to resubmit this old weapon of his.
    This will of course, replace my other CW, The Knud.
     
         
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    Tsubame Gaeshi - Turning Swallow Cut*
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:60
    Description:The user of this technique uses there mastery of Iaido, swiftly drawing there blade and doing a downward slash along the front off the enemy creating a opening,where as the user now does a swift upward slash traveling up the torso,the user then flicks there sword to their right side removing any blood then resleathes there blade *in its scabbard.This technique was created in mimicking a swallow's tail in flight.
    ~Can Only be used by Samurai Bios~
    ~Can only be used 3 times~

    ~ Does not need to be a technique ~

    Satan's Flame:Lost Soul*
    Type:Supplementary,Defensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:(+10 Fire)(+5 Taijutsu)
    Description:The user begins channeling a great amount of chakra fire chakra though body.With this jutsu active to user skin becomes very heated that if someone tries to touch them they while get burnt.They user will also gain horn like flames on there head resembling the soul of Satan.While this is active the user and only use fire and taijutsu techniques due to the amount of fire chakra traveling around the chakra paths.Masters of Satan's Flame can dense the fire properties and turn the fire blue increasing the power x2 and will burn the opponents skin badly.The area of the user within short range is to hot for normal shinobi to approach directly.
    ~Last for 3 turns~
    ~Due to the toning of the body the user is in effected by the heat around them.~
    ~Can only be taught by XxFallenUchihaxX~
    ~Can turn flames to blue increasing its strength x2 once per battle~
    ~Must have Fire Mastered~
    ~No A-Rank and above Fire can be used for the next 1 turn~

    Approved CFS:http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...&postcount=77*
    *Here is an example of it:


    Draculara,Snake Empress
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:Long
    Chakra:40*
    Damage:(Depends on Jutsu)
    Description:Draculara is the Empress of the snakes that lurk Konohagakure.She is the personal summon to Levy Mcgarden.Draculara is as big as Manda but not as strong.She can move as fast that only 2tome sharingan and above can track.She has 2 small kanji signs on her head representing fire and water.She can use Fire and Water Techniques up to the users rank.She can also perform up to C-Rank Genjutsu but after using genjutsu she will poof away.She can also swing her tail that can block up to C-Rank ninjutsu.She is summoned simply by the user biting there thumb and whipping thier blood on there summon tattoo then place there hand on the ground to rise under the user.

    ~Can only be taught by XxFallenUchihaxX~
    ~Lasts for 3 turns~
    ~Can only be summoned once per battle~
    ~After genjutsu is performed summon is poofed back away~
    ~Can only use water and fire jutsus up to users rank~
    ~Tail can only block up to C-Rank~
    ~Sign of snake contract required to learn~
    *
    Signing contract:http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=201650
    And the summon is down though a tatto

    ~ Japanese names ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto uzumaki bujii sage View Post
    Update of this weapon: White lightning blade http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...36&postcount=2

    (Raiton:Howaito Raikiri) White Lightning Blade
    Type: Sword
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (10 per swing in version one, 20 per turn in version two, 30 per turn active in version three, 15 per turn in version four + 30 per swing in version four )
    Damage: (version one 20, version two 30, version three 40, version four 50.)
    Description: The White Lightning Blade was forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. The user can add different levels of chakra into the sword causing different transformations of the sword to occur, with four transformations in total. The first transformation of the sword is version one, while in version one the sword appears to be dull, rusty, and at first glance useless. In version one the sword can send out waves of raiton chakra in a desired direction, These waves of raiton chakra can sense the electrical energy in a living thing giving the user the ability to sense living creatures. Each wave of raiton chakra can pass through solid objects with no harm to the objects so that if a creature is behind it the waves of raiton chakra are sent back into your sword letting you sense something is there. You send out these waves of raiton chakra by swinging the sword in that direction and the waves of raiton chakra can only be sent out horizontally. The waves that are sent out stay connected to the sword until another wave is sent out or until canceled.

    The second transformation of the white lightning is version two, while in version two the user adds Raiton chakra into the sword causing it to become grown to a massive size and also causes it to give off small bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword and giving the sword an involuntary ability to send c-ranked lightning into anything the sword pierces or slashes. In version two the blade gives a constant wave of raiton charka this wave can pass through solid objects with no harm to the objects, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This constant wave of raiton chakra is full of waves that form a 360 degree 30 foot diameter by 30 foot height by 20 feet into the ground which is connected to the sword.

    The third transformation of the white lightning blade is version three, while in version three the user adds much more raiton chakra then version one and version two, causing the sword to become extremely heated and gain a red glow the sword now gains an involuntary ability to melt and send
    B-ranked lightning into anything the sword pierces or slashes.

    The fourth and final transformation of the white lightning is version four, while in version four the user adds an unbelievable amount of raiton charka into the sword, this causes the sword to become black in color and give off a black glow. In this version the user can swing the sword sending out waves of lightning chakra equal to a A-Ranked lightning jutsu and in this version the user can also absorb lightning jutsu from the opponent, The user can then swing his sword and send the opponents lightning back at them with the added power of the lightning wave that version four can swing out.



    Note: Every wave sent out in version one and version four counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn.
    Note: The waves sent out in version one are ten feet in width and ten feet in height.
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in version two it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade.
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in any version after version one it can cut Steele.
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in its version two and three it can only stay like that for three turns, and then it reverts to its version one state, When it’s in version four it can only stay like that for two turns then it reverts to its version one state.
    Note: There is a two turn cool down after used, meaning used in any state above after version one and you take it out or it reverts back to its version one state you have to wait two turns before you can use it in any version after one form again.
    Note: The white lightning blade is only usable three times in any version after version one.


    ±± Declined ±± When resubmitting you are required to provide a correct quote of the post were the technique was initially approved.


    The version one and two is reworded and version 3 and 4 is new.

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Rei Summoning Technique: Rei
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user first bites his thumb then swipes it across his snake tattoo, After this is complete the user then slams a single hand in a solid object and rei will appear directly under the users palm. Rei is a white spiting cobra that's half the size of manda, like all spiting cobras she has the ability to spit sprays of venom out of her venom glands in her mouth which can travel up to long range with distinctive geometric patterns and with great accuracy. Rei also specializes in the lightning element and can use lightning jutsu up to A-rank.

    Link to snake signing: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=179213

    ±± Declined ±± A Lightning expert snake that can shoot venom at a distance without any kind of restrictions? What does this venom do? How long can this be in the field? Its moves need to count towards the move count.


    (Raiton: senjigusuri) Lightning release: infusion
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Rei infuses lightning chakra into her venom glands, She then she spits out the venom infused with lightning chakra which is now capable of severely shocking and severely damaging the opponent.

    Note: The capable of tearing metal.

    ±± Declined ±± No only was the summon declined as I will not allow this. DNR

    Resubmitting

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto uzumaki bujii sage View Post
    (Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade
    Type:Weapon (sword)
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2)
    Damage: 40
    Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form
    , in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally. the pulses that are sent out stay connected to the sword until another pulse is sent out or the jutsu is canceled, or if left on the field for more than two turns they disappear.(once the pulses are on the field the cannot change position the must stay in that direction until a new pulse is sent out, These pulses can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything

    when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form
    , in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see, like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent. This constant pulse of raiton chakra is full of waves that connect the 360 degree 20 foot diameter by 20 foot height pulse to the sword, so when a living creature is in side the area the user feels their electrical impulses in their body, thus giving the user an location of where the enemy is These pulse can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything


    Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
    Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
    Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
    Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
    Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.
    Note:The white lightning blade is only usable 3 times in V2.

    ~ Approved ~
    (Raiton:Howaito Raikiri) White Lightning Blade
    Type: Sword
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A (10 per swing in version one, 20 per turn in version two, 30 per turn active in version three, 15 per turn in version four + 30 per swing in version four )
    Damage: (version one 20, version two 30, version three 40, version four 50.)
    Description: The White Lightning Blade was forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. The user can add different levels of chakra into the sword causing different transformations of the sword to occur, with four transformations in total. The first transformation of the sword is version one, while in version one the sword appears to be dull, rusty, and at first glance useless. In version one the sword can send out waves of raiton chakra in a desired direction, These waves of raiton chakra can sense the electrical energy in a living thing giving the user the ability to sense living creatures. Each wave of raiton chakra can pass through solid objects with no harm to the objects so that if a creature is behind it the waves of raiton chakra are sent back into your sword letting you sense something is there. You send out these waves of raiton chakra by swinging the sword in that direction and the waves of raiton chakra can only be sent out horizontally. The waves that are sent out stay connected to the sword until another wave is sent out or until canceled.

    The second transformation of the white lightning is version two, while in version two the user adds Raiton chakra into the sword causing it to become grown to a massive size and also causes it to give off small bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword and giving the sword an involuntary ability to send c-ranked lightning into anything the sword pierces or slashes. In version two the blade gives a constant wave of raiton charka this wave can pass through solid objects with no harm to the objects, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This constant wave of raiton chakra is full of waves that form a 360 degree 30 foot diameter by 30 foot height by 20 feet into the ground which is connected to the sword.

    The third transformation of the white lightning blade is version three, while in version three the user adds much more raiton chakra then version one and version two, causing the sword to become extremely heated and gain a red glow the sword now gains an involuntary ability to melt and send
    B-ranked lightning into anything the sword pierces or slashes.

    The fourth and final transformation of the white lightning is version four, while in version four the user adds an unbelievable amount of raiton charka into the sword, this causes the sword to become black in color and give off a black glow. In this version the user can swing the sword sending out waves of lightning chakra equal to a A-Ranked lightning jutsu and in this version the user can also absorb lightning jutsu from the opponent, The user can then swing his sword and send the opponents lightning back at them with the added power of the lightning wave that version four can swing out.



    Note: Every wave sent out in version one and version four counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn.
    Note: The waves sent out in version one are ten feet in width and ten feet in height.
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in version two it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade.
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in any version after version one it can cut Steele.
    Note: When the white lightning blade is in its version two and three it can only stay like that for three turns, and then it reverts to its version one state, When it’s in version four it can only stay like that for two turns then it reverts to its version one state.
    Note: There is a two turn cool down after used, meaning used in any state above after version one and you take it out or it reverts back to its version one state you have to wait two turns before you can use it in any version after one form again.
    Note: The white lightning blade is only usable three times in any version after version one.


    ±± Declined ±± Keep the approved one. Don't try to update it without adding something that can be approved. This is the same as many cws before.

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Rei Summoning Technique: Rei
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user first bites his thumb then swipes it across his snake tattoo, After this is complete the user then slams a single hand in a solid object and rei will appear directly under the users palm. Rei is a white spiting cobra that's half the size of manda, like all spiting cobras she has the ability to spit sprays of neurotoxin and hemotoxin venom out of her venom glands in her mouth which can travel up to long range with distinctive geometric patterns and with great accuracy, This venom is harmless unless it comes into contact with open skin ( Eyes, nose, mouth, open wound, ect...) When the venom comes into contact with open skin the venom's neurotoxin and hemotoxin starts to take affect. Each spray of venom counts as a jutsu. Rei specializes in the lightning element and can use lightning jutsu up to A-rank. Rei can stay on the field for a maximum of five turns, and can only be summoned once per battle and can only spit venom three times per battle.


    Effects of venom:

    Neurotoxin: venom acts on the nervous system and brain. This venom works to disrupt the function of the brain and nervous system, which causes paralysis or lack of muscle control, but it can also disrupt the individual signals sent between neurons and muscles.

    Hemotoxin: venom acts on the heart and cardiovascular system. This venom typically acts to lower blood pressure and encourage blood clotting. The venom may also attack the heart muscle with the goal of causing death.

    Death in ten turns after the victim was infected with the venom, If left untreated.

    Link to snake signing: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=179213

    ±± Declined ±± This is not an A-Rank summon. Also, choose between the venom and the lightning. Its a humoungous snake that can spit a deadly venom... No need for any thing else. Also, the effects of the venom should be left in the description and i'll only allow either one effect of the other, not both. And you need to explain how they work in narutoverse context.

    Doton/katon: heki soko Earth release/Fire release: False bottom
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and then place either of their hands onto the ground. The user will then infuse his chakra into the ground, transforming the earth 30 ft deep into a gravel-like consistency. This action will happen up to mid-range around the user, beginning at one foot beneath the surface. Once this is complete, the user will channel large amounts of katon chakra into the ground, heating the gravel. This forms a molten gravel mix, which will build up pressure underground for two to three turns. After two turns, the user can perform the Ram hand seal and break open the thin one foot layer of ground, forcing whatever is on the ground to drop into the pit. After three turns, the user can perform the Tiger hand seal, exploding the molten concoction upwards through the ground. This travels into the air at a high speed, capable of burning anything it comes in contact with.

    ~ Left for Scorps ~

    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Too similar to existing technique, cannon one
     
         
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    (Interu: Shinshi no Bōshi) - Intel: The Gentleman's Hat
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Intel is a Gentleman's Hat or Top Hat worn by Hazama. It sits on his head very securely in such a way that it sits low across his forehead and eyes; making direct eye contact impossible. It can only be removed if Hazama touches the hat. Top Hat's worn by Gentlemen were rumored to give 'Intel' to their wearer, making them seem smarter than they really were depending on their station. Hazama came across this hat on his first set of travels of leaving Iwagakure. He found a few out of character things for the hat that has become to be quite special. The hat, it would seem, allowed the wearer to channel a vast amount of chakra into it and store it completely until when the wearer most needed it. Hazama would speed nights on end almost completely depleting his chakra into the hat before he slept, to see how much chakra the hat could store. After a week straight of almost spending his chakra from the night before, Hazama gave up on the hat and just continued to wear it. It was then that he noticed that the Hat seemed to be trying to insert chakra into him. Thinking no in his head, the hat obeyed. Hazama reckoned that he had enough chakra in this hat to make him capable of performing multiple techniques if he were ever to be completely drained of chakra on the battlefield. From that moment onward, Hazama never went into battle without the hat on his head. The lining of the hat was made of thin, sharp chakra metal. Hazama could easily charge wind or lightning chakra into the hat and use it as if it were a dangerous weapon. The chakra metal in the hat extended a barrier around the hat, increasing it cutting efficiency. Hazama is capable of throwing the bladed Top Hat as a projectile and it always comes back to him in a way that will not cause harm to himself. The cutting power of the hat is the equivalent to a circular Saw.
    Note: Intel gives Hazama enough chakra upon request after depleting his chakra to perform these techniques:
    *1 F Rank
    *2 S Ranks
    *3 A Ranks
    *6 B Ranks
    *12 C & D Ranks
    Note: If Hazama uses up all of the chakra in the hat, he will no longer be able to continue battle

    ~ Makes the wearer smarter ? What ? Also, restrictions. ~

    [Ototon: Banshī no Hikō ) Sound Release: Flight of the Banshee
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user, while in the air, channels sound chakra in his mouth and performs a high pitched supersonic scream that produces sound waves from his mouth. These sound waves, when angled correctly at the ground or any surface (has been seen used on water/liquid source as well) and will levitate the user, allowing for controlled flight.



    Doton: Bōsui Takeuma (Earth Release: Waterproof Stilts)
    Type: Defense
    Rank: B
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user builds up a surge of earth chakra into their body, that they will then force it all downwards and through both of their legs at the same time. A long pole made of dense earth protudes out of each of the user's legs that raise the user 10 feet into the air. The Stilts are also water proof, capable of piercing through water with ease without turning to Mud. The user need only to channel chakra into the bottom of the stilts in order to walk on water.



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    Lava Style: Lava Streams (Youton: Yōgan-ryū)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: this is a technique that was invented by kurotsuchi after seeing darui perform laser circus at the 5 kage summit .the user gathers a large amount of dense lava style chakra into a ball the floats in front of him (the lava can be gathered from any lava source) the user can then manipulate it so that any number of dense, sharp lava streams (the number can range from 1 to 15) can burst out of the orb (the less there are the stronger they are) these will then shoot out at fast pace toward a desired target these can then be used to burn, restrain, distract or cut the enemy
    Note: Move very fast
    Note: can change direction mid use
    Note: can only be used 4 times a battle
    Note: must have lava source
    Note: streams lose power depending on the number made losing a rank for every 5 made (1-5 is A, 5-10 is B and 10-15 is C)

    ±± Declined ±± Move very fast? No... Lava "beams" is already pushing the reality of the element to the extreme. Making them move very fast is simply illogical. Also, the streams lose their power...take that off. Also, Mid-range tops.


    Lava Style: Viscosity Change (Youton:Neba tabi henka)
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Any
    Chakra: +10
    Damage: +10 (if decreasing viscosity this is due to the increased heat and if increasing due to the added concussive power)
    Description: by adding extra fire or eath chakra when performing/preparing a lava style jutsu the viscosity of the lava produced can be changed. if viscosity is decreased by adding more fire chakra the lava will flow more quickly because it is less dense however the concussive power behind it will be lessened due to the loss of density. the opposite will happen if more earth chakra is kneaded in because the earth will be melted less and as a result thicker.

    Note: if viscosity is increased then due to the added amount of earth chakra the lava jutsu will gain a plus one rank advantage to jutsu's that rely on releasing the concussive power to be effective (like many defensive earth jutsu) at the trade off of moving more slowly and being cooler in temperature.
    Note: if you add more fire chakra the lava will be much hotter and move much more quickly but will be weak (lose one rank) against jutsu that rely on cancelling out concussive power
    Note: can only be used once per turn
    Note: more viscous techs are weaker against techs that rely on cooling (most water techs) to stop a lava tech (1 rank) were as less viscous are more resistant (1 rank) this is due to the difference in temperature

    ±± Declined ±± Idea is good but the way you worded it specially in the restrictions makes little to no sense. +10 why? also, can you use this in another technique that you just used? do you activate this? Also, you have a problem in your logic. Fluid lava = hotter lava, Denser Lava = cooler one.




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    Lava Style: Lava Streams (Youton: Yōgan-ryū)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: this is a technique that was invented by kurotsuchi after seeing darui perform laser circus at the 5 kage summit .the user gathers a large amount of dense lava style chakra into a ball the floats in front of him (the lava can be gathered from any lava source) the user can then manipulate it so that any number of dense, sharp lava streams (the number can range from 1 to 15) can burst out of the orb these will then shoot out toward a desired target these can then be used to burn, restrain, distract or cut the enemy
    Note: can only be used 4 times a battle
    Note: must have lava source

    ~ Remove th change direction part, its pushing it ~

    This time i think i removed everything you said (i bolded them in the quote)


    Lava Style: Viscosity Change (Youton:Neba tabi henka)
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Any
    Chakra: +10 to lava tech because you are adding extra chakra to it (either earth or fire)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: by adding extra fire or eath chakra when performing/preparing a lava style jutsu the viscosity of the lava produced can be changed. if viscosity is decreased by adding more fire chakra and making it more liquidy the lava will flow more quickly because it is less dense and will be hotter however the concussive power behind it will be lessened due to the loss of density. the opposite will happen if more earth chakra is kneaded in because the earth will be melted less and as a result thicker with the concussive power increasing but the heat and the speed of the lava tech going down

    Note: if viscosity is increased due to the added amount of earth chakra the lava jutsu will gain a plus one rank advantage to jutsu's that rely on releasing the concussive power to be effective (like many defensive earth jutsu) because of the fact that it is more dense and has more concussive power at the trade off of moving more slowly and being cooler in temperature.
    Note: if you add more fire chakra the lava will melt much more and be much hotter and move much more quickly but will be weak (lose one rank) against jutsu that rely on cancelling out concussive power
    Note: can only be used once per turn
    Note: due to the fact they are cooler more viscous techs are weaker against techs that rely on cooling (most water tech to stop a lava tech (1 rank) were as less viscous are more resistant (1 rank) this is due to the difference in temperature
    Note: Can only be used when preparing the tech or if part of or all of the lava is still in contact with its source (e.g. if part of Melting Apparation tech is still coming out of your mouth). due to the fact that the extra fire or earth chakra has to be poured into it.

    I Basically reworded most of this jutsu and added in the end bit and the top bits

    ~ No rank increases ~

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    Just Submitting


    Lava Release: Crushing Lava Trap (Yōgan no torappu o funsai)
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage: 60
    Description: the user stomps his foot on the ground and through the use of lava chakra the user melts the ground below and around the intended target for 3-4m in all directions and causes a large amount of lava to erupt out of the ground all around the target before flying 3-5m up as it pushs inward toward the intend target much like a 360 wave, this lava then overlaps its self above the enemy before it crashes down with great force on the enemy crushing and burning him to death

    Note: can only be used 4 times per battle
    Note: cools after a turn and turns into hard stone
    Note: dangerous as if it is used when the user is in its radius the user will be caught in it as well

    ~ Can't understand the description ~
     
         
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    [Raiton: Gekido Raikou Mari] - Lightning Release: Raging Lightning balls
    Type: Attack-Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses his lightning chakra into three different parts around the opponent , the first part is 3 meters above the opponent's head,the second one is 3 meters on the right side of the opponent on his stomach level and the third one is 3 meters on the opponent's left side same level as the the second one.And as the user focuses his lightning chakra 3 lightning balls appears out of nowhere on these places without any warning to the opponent shocking the opponent to death.
    - Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    - Must be taught by Zanshin

    ~ Appear out of nowhere ? No. ~

    [Suiton: Oshi Gufuu] - Water Release: Atmospheric Tornado

    Type: Attack-Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses his water chakra on the air that surrounds the opponent , causing a great tornado to appear out of nowhere around the opponent.The tornado have no space between it and the opponent's body,after the tornado appears several water spikes emerges from it from different places in it stabbing the opponent.
    - Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    - Must be taught by Zanshin
    - The user can or make the tornado and stop at this point and don't create the spikes or continue and make the spikes

    ~ No space ? No. ~


    [Sōgu: Sesshou Sutoringu] - Manipulated Tools: Banging Strings

    Type: Attack-Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses his chakra into the ground below the opponent and at a sudden time 2 strings appears from the ground below the opponent , one wraps around the opponent's left leg and one wraps around the opponent's right leg binding the opponent in his place , meanwhile two other strings emerges from the ground , one emerges from the ground on the opponent's left side and one emerges from the ground on the opponent's right side and each one of them starts to wrap around the opponent till it binds him completely in his place and in the same time the two strings inflicts damage to the opponent's body.
    - Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    - Must be taught by Zanshin

    ~ Strings cannot erupt from the ground unless you place them there beforehand. -.- ~
     
         
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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Rio) - Summoning Technique: Rio
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User snaps his fingers and summons a young flying termite who is not of very big size but enough to carry 3 people at a time. He is of whitish-bluish color, which resembles the cloud color. So when flying at high altitudes, its very hard to localize his position. He don't have any special ability but to fly, so practicing only in that, his speed is very fast when compared to any other flying bird. Also he mastered in his flying ability that far, that he "can" fly without making any wing flapping noise.

    Note: -Due to him being not much of help, he can stay on the battlefield as long as user wants.
    -Must've signed Termite contract.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.


    ±± Declined ±± Why is it mid ranged? The part i bolded can't be approved. Faster than any bird? Really? No sound? Hard detection? Its a B-Rank basic summon...
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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Triton) - Summoning Technique: Triton
    Type: All
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: User claps his hands and summons a giant turtle named "Triton" who is of same size (excluding the second shell) that of gamabunta and known as Water Sage among the turtle family. He is immune to A-Ranks and below and can use water techniques upto S-Ranks (without any handseals) by making the techs proportionate to his size. He is a unique turtle having 2 shells instead of one. The second shell is upside down on first one, such that it looks like an empty bowl is kept on the main shell. His second shell has pores all over in its inside part from which water is being secreted regularly which fills the empty bowl with water, creating a water source for him which can be used for using any water technique. The water is always overflowing from the shell, which then flows over triton's body, and thus he is always wet. Due to the water flowing over triton's body, he gains extreme durability over high rank water and fire elements but also becomes vulnerable to lightning element.

    Note: -His each jutsu counts as user's 1/3 move.
    -No one can use the water inside of triton's shell, but himself. Since its imbued with his own water chakra.
    -Due to him being unique and having 2 shells, he can't stand on 2 legs like all other turtles.
    -Can stay on battlefield for maximum of 4 turns.
    -Must've signed Terrapin contract.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Imune to A-Ranks... The size of Gamabunta? Nope

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    (Raiton: Mokushi) - Lightning Release: Apocalypse
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100 (-40 to user)
    Description: Enzup's signature move, which he created after fighting Onoki officialy and carefully watching his "Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive world technique". In this technique user creates a very small cube in his hand, made up of pure compressed lightning chakra. When the user start creating the cube, then the sky starts to turn dark and all of a sudden the clouds releases a continuous crackling sound, which shows that how powerful the technique is.
    This cube can be used in 2 ways.
    i.) The user will release the cube at his targets (similar to how Onoki releases) and by making one handseal, the cube expands enormously in size, enveloping everything in its size and thus destroying it.
    ii.) Instead of releasing the cube on his opponents, user keeps the cube in his own hands, and then the cube starts rotating on its own axis at very high speed, and then the cube expands enormously, such that the user is at its base centre, and while the cube spins it pushes everything away due to the the centripetal force which acts due to its spinning motion.

    Restrictions: -User must not use any lightning based attack in his previous turn.
    -User must not use any technique above S-rank in his previous turn.
    -Can't use any other tech above A-rank and in same turn.
    -After using the technique, user can't perform any S-Rank attack in his next turn.
    -Can't perform any lightning attack in next turn.
    -User receives 40 damage due to using excessive amount of chakra used.
    -This tech can only be used in 1 of the 2 ways.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can "only" be "used" by Enzup.


    Plz, give me a chance to resubmit, before DNRing it, "if possible". And thanks to Laufey for giving me this pic D

    ±± Declined ±± Ridiculously overpowered but also similar to existing techniques in other elements. Also, follow proper template for damage... With so many submissions by now, one would imagine you'd already know how to submit a cj.


    ~ Left for Scorps ~
    ±± Checked it ±±
     
         
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    ( Kageroume ) Dragofly Eye

    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kageroume is a sentient chakra pendant made of ancient dragonfly part. It is composed of a medallion of mandibles and teeth with a large eye imbued in it's midst, held together by a strong chain of wing and heartstrings. The Kageroume, like Samehada, gets its sentience by feeding of chakra, be it normal, Natural or Bijuu-originated, but unlike Samehada, it requires a mental connection with it's prey, for it learned that, unlike Samehada who eats tainted and used chakra, taking it from the source itself provides purest and richest sustenance.

    This is where the host comes. The owner of the Kageroume shares a chakra bond with it, allowing the pendant to infuse chakra in him/her, and, in return, utilize the pendant to cast genjutsu on the opponent. Like an arrow, the genjutsu will pierce through the opponent's defenses by eating sources of chakra that would otherwise make the person impervious to genjutsu (Like Nekura, Sage Users, etc), and then mimic it's signature in order to latch onto the brain. But, although resistant to chakra, the part of Kageroume that latches on the opponent is only as strong as genjutsu, and only resistant to the forces that aren't in play at the moment, or to which the body is not familiar or never had any direct contact with before (foreign chakra, from an exterior ally, can still overcome the Kageroume protection), and it still blocked by physical pain.

    RP-wise, this allows the user to preform Genjutsu without handseals. It permits the user to cast genjutsu on opponents otherwise immune to them, allows resistance to chakra-type of releases of 1 rank above than usual, being otherwise useless against from 3rd party chakra (apart from Sage, Bijuu, Nekura, etc) and physical pain (Even if the genjutsu used is resistant to physical pain).

    If touched by someone other than the user, it will viciously bite the perpetrator, causing great mental pain while sucking the chakra extremely slowly but surely, making the part around the bite turn black with dead tissue (irrelevant to a ninja-battle, as the necrosis would require a month to affect a significant part of the body, like an organ or half a limb).

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. Firstly, I already tried a way to make people immune to Gen succumb a while back, and it was declined to not reduce their abilities. Which is fair, since I can't make things that for example prevent a Kurama's demon fro working its mojo just to screw Kuramas over. Secondly, and I mean this, you are a SENSEI and a long time RPer. Perhaps you should act like one and not try to submit powerful weapons without any restrictions and try to get OP stuff approved ? ~

    ( Genjutsu: Seidou Shiraha no Hato ) Illusion Technique: The Sanctuary of the Feathery Dove

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After 3 handseals, the user is able to cast a genjutsu either on her/himself or on an opponent. The genjutsu pertains as the removal of harm and pain, giving a false sense of security, where there is none, by reattaching severed limbs or healing up wounds and burns or merely anesthetizing the opponent from pain. While it could be use to sustain wounds that do not put someone in immediate danger, being solely nuisances, the genjutsu could also cover up potentially fatal and paralyzing injuries, making it's target careless and self-harmful. The genjutsu latches strongly to the opponent's mind, allowing the user to combine it with a second genjutsu, making it strong against physical pain releases.
    *Lasts 3 turns max*
    *Can only be used 3 times*
    *If used with a painful second genjutsu, there will be no pain involved.*
    *Can be used against opponent's genjutsu as a means to counter it's effect, up to the rank of the technique*
    *Genjutsu specialists or doujutsu users can cast against 1 rank higher*

    ~ A good idea. However, I'd like you to expand the description more and reduce number of turns or number of uses. ~
     
         
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