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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Matenrō (Illusion Technique: Skyscraper)
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user, after perform five hanseals, casts an illusion upon the intended target. The illusion makes the target believe the ground beneath them has exploded, and the brute force has shot them up into the darkness of space. Then, the target will see four belts appear from nowhere and bind them in place, which binds them in reality as well. Then a demonic toad-like creature will appear from the darkness and torture the bound target.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used three times a battle
    ~Paralysis lasts until the end of the turn this jutsu is used


    Genjutsu: Yotta Kasumi (Illusion Technique: Drunken Haze)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, after engaging in hand-to-hand combat with the target, applies a Genjutsu through the sense of touch which causes the target to begin to see multiple copies of the user, like an after image or the E-rank Clone Jutsu. The copies of the user follow the user's movements perfectly, (like playing the same movie on different screens and starting them all seconds apart), confusing the target as to which is the real user, and which is the real one to block.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Only one "copy" can be create per use of the jutsu
    ~This jutsu can stack, allowing the user to create up to three "copies" of themselves
    ~Each copy lasts for two turns after it's made

    Fuuton: Animâ (Wind Style: Anima)
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra into the sky above the battlefield, and create a large, fast spinning air current in the clouds, which draws in clouds to give the appearance of a thunderstorm. Because of the fast-moving air currents, in the middle of the clouds is a gaping hole. The air currents then begin to move at F-5 tornado speed while staying high in the sky, dragging objects (and people) from the ground into the clouds. By utilizing the same principle as the Tree Climbing Excersize, one can remain planted on the ground.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Lasts until the end of the opponents next turn
    ~Can only be used three times a battle


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. House View Post
    re-submit:

    (Shi no rīchi) Death's Reach
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 2 turns, he may use the chakra of the sword for his own advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. When the user wishes after the 2 turns, he may harness this chakra and the chakra absorbed within that turn onto his own advantages, boosting his power. You can release that chakra into one of your jutsu making it one rank stronger (counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn). It cannot raise an S-ranked into a Forbidden rank. The user can have the chakra build up for 4 turns, putting all the chakra which the sword had left as an excess and pluss the user's chakra, which will surround Sumitsukigasa equal to the power of forbidden rank. Once this chakra has coated Sumitsukigasa, it will resemble of its great ancestor and the sword will double its reach into 12 feet. The speed of the slashes with the sword will also greatly increase, meaning the slashes of this sword can only be followed with 3 tomoe or higher while this technique is active.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Lasts 1 turn
    ~Chakra released from the sword is shaped into a blade that can cut through nearly anything.
    ~User may only use this technique in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above ninjutsu in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~User needs to master Taijutsu in order to hold this.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    ~ Quote the sword for any CJs ~

    (Doton: Wāru Chikyū)Earth Release: Earth Whirlpool
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a massive scaled earth jutsu, where one can use to even trap summons like Manda. As the ground starts turning inwards on itself, it will create a giant earth whirlpool which will turn inwards at fast speeds and keeps on spiraling. As it spirals, it will manipulate the wind around and creates a giant wind vortex ontop of the spiraling ground. The wind vortex is established because of the high speeds of the spiraling ground. The middle part of the whirlpool may lower to a max of 20m.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 2x because of its scale
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~No higher then A-ranked doton can be used in the next turn.
    ~Due to its massive scale, only 2 techniques are allowed in the same turn.

    ~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~

    (Han Kami han hito no ken) Fist of a Demigod
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will slam his hands on the ground, having an extremely condensed/compressed/steel like quality erupt from the ground that will resemble of a giant arm, resembling Gedo Mazo's right arm. That means it is the same size as Gedo Mazo's right arm. The arm has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to tear off flesh respectively and sharp nails that allows him to go through most of the techniques. This arm was passed down from the Sage of the 6th Path to newer generations in order to provide protection from the Gedo Mazo. The user may take defensive purposes as having this arm erupt right underneath him and close its hand, having the hand to protect him and make a counterattack of having this arm punch the opponent with the user inside the closed hand. It may take offensive measures as having the arm crush the opponent. If the hand closes, it is airtight inside. To make it clear, the user may freely control the hand's path and the hand/fingers on the arm. If the hand isn't destroyed yet, it may stay for 2 turns on the battlefield, then the hand goes back into the hole where it erupted from.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Only two jutsus in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above doton in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    ~ Declined, OPed ~

    Note to checker: If the "it may stay for 2 turns on the battlefield" makes it OPed, you're free to take it out. If Any minor changes need to be edited in order to approve these cjs, I got no problems with it.
    what I'm dropping:
    (Mai· Sōru jihi o motte iru!) Have Mercy Upon My Soul!
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 30 (See Description)
    Damage Points: +15 Ninjutsu
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 2 turns, he may use the chakra of the sword for his own advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. When the user wishes after the 2 turns, he may harness this chakra and the chakra absorbed within that turn onto his own advantages, boosting his power. Once this system has been broken, the sword becomes unbalanced in the same turn when this chakra has been harnessed, the sword becomes useless in the same turn. Because of the unbalance of the sword, user will receive -10 health damage in the same turn. As it tries to suck it back the taken chakra at once what has once left the sword, in the next turn, user suffers -30 chakra loss. As the sword has sucked back an enormous amount of chakra in that turn (meaning 30 chakra), activating itself once again, a furious wind will surround it, leaving the area in a really windy environment for when it sucked back the 30 chakra. This means that no raiton attacks of S-rank can be made from the user in that turn when there is a windy environment. As the sword becomes out of control when it sucks back the chakra, having an S-ranked fuuton chakra surround it, only Kage or higher may be able to handle it.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~The sword won't be useable in the same turn as this technique.
    ~Only Kage or higher may use this.
    ~Sumitsukigasa must be wielded.
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    my cw:
    Sumitsukigasa - Dante's Horn of Sorrow

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-10 each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: It has yet been said within many dusty old books that a great man named Dante Alighieri has gone to save his loved one from the great evil toad of Myobokuzan, Gamafer. Dante had gone down into the pit of death, into Gamafer's lair. After 7 days of a bloody fight, Dante failed to save his flower, and he showed no mercy to Gamafer. After the bloodbath, Dante carved a blade from Gamafer's mighty horn and he took these pieces to be forged by Hephaestus, the nearby blacksmith. He had forged the mighty double-bladed sword, and named Sumitsukigasa. The double-bladed sword is made of mostly unbreakable bone, harder then steel. Because of the blade part is made of bone, and most of it's parts, the weapon weighs almost half of it's size, and can be handled in order to reach high speeds. The -10 chakra in each turn is because Sumitsukigasa sucks the user's chakra in order to maintain it's ability, which is being always in the state of having itself imbued with wind chakra, quite similar to (Fūton: Kaze Kyōka no Tsūru) - Wind Release: Wind Enhanced Tools, and it won't stop until the double-bladed sword is out of short range from the user. If the user wishes, he may channel more of his chakra into the sword, which is an additional -10 chakra in each usage, in order to extend the pre-existing wind chakra inbued within the sword, onto 5-6ft. As the wind chakra has been extended on the sword in order to reach 5-6ft, the blade becomes an S-ranked wind blade, but for only that turn. Since the sword has an affinity for Wind, and as the sword's inbued abilities will travel onto the user's hand giving him a uniqueness of enabling him to seal a mere handseal for any wind jutsus. When the user performs any wind jutsus, the inbued chakra will add it's own inbued wind chakra from the sword (10 chakra which been sucked off from the user, every turn) into the technique completely, (transfering that sucked -10 chakra into the technique) having the sword lose its inbued wind chakra for that turn.
    Note:
    -Because of the sword's abilities, only a Sannin may hold the sword.
    -Because of it's wind affinities, only who mastered wind may use it.
    -If user wishes, the wind chakra imbued within the sword can be extended so that it will reach onto 5-6ft.
    -Only may Dr. House use this, and who he allows.
    -If someone tries to hold it, the sword will start sucking most of his chakra out of him, leaving him with a feeling of drained.

    re-submit:

    (Shi no rīchi) Death's Reach
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 2 turns, he may use the chakra of the sword for his own advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. When the user wishes after the 2 turns, he may harness this chakra and the chakra absorbed within that turn onto his own advantages, boosting his power. You can release that chakra into one of your jutsu making it one rank stronger (counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn). It cannot raise an S-ranked into a Forbidden rank. The user can have the chakra build up for 4 turns, putting all the chakra which the sword had left as an excess and pluss the user's chakra, which will surround Sumitsukigasa equal to the power of forbidden rank. Once this chakra has coated Sumitsukigasa, it will resemble of its great ancestor and the sword will double its reach into 12 feet. The speed of the slashes with the sword will also greatly increase, meaning the slashes of this sword can only be followed with 3 tomoe or higher while this technique is active.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Lasts 1 turn
    ~Chakra released from the sword is shaped into a blade that can cut through nearly anything.
    ~User may only use this technique in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above ninjutsu in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~User needs to master Taijutsu in order to hold this.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    re-submit:

    (Han Kami han hito no ken) Fist of a Demigod
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will bite his finger and drip some of his blood into the ground, using it as a sacrifice in the before turn. After the turn has ended he'll slam his hands on the ground, having a giant arm, resembling Gedo Mazo's right arm to be summoned from the ground.That means it is the same size as Gedo Mazo's right arm. The arm has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to tear off flesh respectively and sharp nails that allows him to go through most of the techniques. This technique was passed down from the Sage of the 6th Path to newer generations in order to provide protection from the Gedo Mazo. The user may take defensive purposes as having this arm erupt right underneath him and close its hand, having the hand to protect him and make a counterattack of having this arm punch the opponent with the user inside the closed hand. It may take offensive measures as having the arm crush the opponent. If the hand closes, it is airtight inside.
    Note:
    ~Unable to use Doton techniques for 2 turns due to the restrains on the body.
    ~The user can only use B-rank and below ninjutsu for 1 turn due to the restrains on the body.
    ~The arm can stay in the fight for the max of 3 turns. After the 3 turns, it will go back into the ground.

    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Dr. House may teach this.

    note for checker:
    ~put more restriction
    ~took out stuff to make it less op
    ~changed description

    (Doton&Katon: ) Flying Spiders
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will channel his fire chakra into 6 different points around the opponent and once he has channeled enough katon chakra, he'll use earth to compress the fire into a point where it may explode. As the fire been compressed, eggs will rise around the enemy. As the 6 eggs has risen, flying spiders from these eggs will erupts towards the enemy, crushing into the enemy and exploding upon impact. If the user wishes, he may make a handsign and explode every flying spiders, causing a massive maelstrom to occur in the area.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 3x
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~Can't use S-ranked or above doton&katon can be used in the next turn.
    ~Sannin or higher may use this technique

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Umou Shuriken) - Feathers Shuriken
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Summoning Gava targen the opponent/s and by moving his wings he shoot several of his feathers having poison on their nip which is so powerful that they can pass through the opponent leaving holes in his body. The poison will paralyze the target on contact and he'll be dead in 2 turns.

    • Can be used trice a Battle
    • Can be used by whole race of gava

    (Ketatamashii Kyoukan) - Piercing Scream
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Gava gathers chakra in his lungs and scream with such power that it produce a powerful shock weave which make cracks on the rocks around him, the scream is so noisy and piercing that opponent will feel an extreme head-ache,like his brain is ripping off.It will distract him and mentally torture him.

    • Can be used trice a Battle

    (kuchibashi hanma) - Beak Hammer
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Gava flies up in the sky then comes down with great speed and attack the opponent with his beak using his body like an arrow which causes massive destruction on the ground and is able to break through A rank defenses like stone shield etc

    • Can be used twice a battle

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kaminari No You Na Boufuu) - Thunderous Gale


    -Notice-
    My CW composes of only the two swords that he is using in the picture below.

    Type: S
    Rank: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:40
    Description:

    Two swords which were said to be forged long ago by the very gods, and thought to be a mere legend. It is said that the swords bring misfortune to all those who come across them. It is said that these swords have many dormant abilities.The swords' name are: Warship Breaker and Zanmaken.
    Warship Breaker has the appearance of a normal sword, while Zanmaken is composed of two blades connected through a hilt. The blades are approximately 8 feet long (4 feet for Zanmaken) and its hilt is roughly a foot long (including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches, the weight of sword is approximately 500 Kg . The swords were forged from a special alloy called Gale, which resides on the highest peak in Kumogakure which is said to be struck by lightning several times a day. The raw material from which the swords were forged is several times harder than the normal steel, as lightning has struck it several times, it is also known to rival diamonds in terms of hardness. The user can only infuse raiton chakra in to the swords, the swords' abilities are as followed:


    -Only raiton chakra can be infused into the swords.
    -The swords are not indestructible but they are far stronger than your average sword due to their size and density.
    -While Raiton chakra is channeled into the swords, the swords gains extra abilities giving the user:

    • +5 to all raiton justu
    • The sword can only be infused with raiton chakra for three turns, afterwards the sword requires a one turn cooldown before it can be infused again.
    • No wind justu above B rank can be used while holding the swords.
    • Can only be wielded by Dakrazyebi and up to [3] people who he sees fit to use.


    Example: 0:27 onwards



    Note: An Example for this jutsu can also be shown in the video above (excluding the huge sword on the last scene.)


    Genjutsu: Sen No Kao No Hīrō (Illusion Technique: Hero Of A Thousand Faces)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: D-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: 20
    Description:

    After making four hand seals, the user casts the genjutsu upon the opponent disrupting his chakra flow, soon after the user manipulates the opponent's sight giving him the illusions of 10 swords floating around the user in a defensive manner, then instills within the oponnent's brain the sight of 1,000 swords falling from the sky. If the opponent falls under the genjutsu and is unable to break out, then the opponent might take somewhat low real damage if he fails to dodge the swords.

    -Note-

    This jutsu can only be used by Dakrazyebi.
    This Genjutsu takes effect while the opponent is within a 10 feet range of the user.

    Note: If you are not satisfied with the 1,000 swords you may decrease the number.


    Summoning Animal: Lightning Tiger.
    Scroll Owner: Dakrazyebi
    Other Users who have signed contract: None Yet.
    Summoning Boss if existing:Ruemon
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Raiku, Raltz, Ryoko
    Description and Background:





    Although they were thought to be extinct long ago, four lightning tigers hid themselves within the land of Kumogakure to seek refuge from extinction. Each one of them seeking a home of their own, headed into different cardinal point borders within Kumogakure, Ruemon to the North, Raiku to the South, Raltz to the West, and Ryoko to the East; adaptation was a requirement in their new home, and so they all evolved and learn how to use the raiton chakra within their bodies, as well as infusing raiton chakra with their enormous fangs that are said to be 2 feet long, surviving in an environment in which they weren't familiar with, took so many hardships and so forth their bodies toughened making their skins unpierceable by normal swords.


    Edit: Feel free to edit anything that you deem necessary, Thank you.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Jinton: Surikesu | Dust Release: Erase
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the horse hand seal and creates a small cone of Dust Release on his index-finger tip, that is aimed at his opponent. The user then releases it, sending a slim conical beam at the opponent. The beam is not bigger than his finger, and once it hits the opponent, disintegrates the part of the user that is hit. This attack is sent out with an astonishing speed, like all Jinton attacks do.
    Note: Must be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used by a Mu/Onoki bio
    Note: Can be used twice
    Note: The user can not use Wind, Fire, Earth or Jinton techniques in the same turn.


    Fuuin Genkotsu: Koara no Nemuri | Sealing Fist: Slumber of the Koala
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: /
    Description: The user will focus his chakra into his palms and on his fingertips. The kanji for “Push” will appear on each palm. Once the user engages combat and hits opponent in a certain place (for example hand, foot or stomach), he “pushes” the chakra out of the said limb or organ, but also puts a barrier on that place, making it impossible for chakra to circulate in the affected area for 2 turns. This is different from Gentle Fist techniques as Gentle Fist techniques hit the tenketsus, and disable the chakra flow, while this techniques pushes out the chakra and makes it impossible for the chakra to push through the barrier placed on it. The user can also use this to “push” natural energy out of the opponents body, causing Sage Mode users to forcibly and prematurely leave sage mode, even if they are able to collect it through other means as they barrier makes it impossible for the sage chakra to circulate.
    Note: Must be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Can’t use taijutsu (a.k.a. Strong Fist, Gentle Fist, EIG, etc), fuuinjutsu or Fuuin Genkotsu in the same round or the next



    0:12 and ongoing is an example


    Fuuton: Ketsugō-tai Sōseiji No Setsuna | Wind Style: Juncture of the Siamese Twin
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user punch forward and release a blast of Wind. While the blast of wind travels towards the opponent, the user performs the Horse hand seal, and the wind splits up in two, and then comes back together, letting it avoid any incoming jutsu that would block it. This, however is a double edged blade as it requires impeccable timing so that the user does not get hit by the attack that was sent out to block it in the first place.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: The user can either split the wind in the turn used or in his next turn, if the wind has not hit the opponent yet or if he has enough time to split it
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Each individual blade of wind is A-rank, and the moment at which they once again combine forms the technique's S-rank power.
    Note: Can not use above S-rank in the same turn, nor can the user use wind in the same turn or the next.

    Note for the last jutsu: Roku approved a lightning variety of this one, hence why I am submitting a similar one for each element.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suiton:Mizu Deguchi funshutsu (Water Geyser Eruption
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user places performs 5 hand seals than places their hands on the ground sending their chakra down into the water table underground. By manipulating the water the user forces the water to erupt to the surface in the form of giant spikes (like kimmimaro's bone forest). The user than can say release causing the spikes to exploding shooting water bullets everywhere.
    Note: can only be taught by Uchihaj
    Note: can only be used twice
    Note: the user cannot use suiton for 2 turns

    Tsurigi no Shoukin: Sword of Redemption
    Rank:
    Type: Weapon/Sword
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Description: Family heirloom of Zeinzu and Tsubasa's father. The sword made of dense obsidian and glows with a tint of red and black. The swords is capable of slicing through most materials making it comparable to the strength of diamond. The sword has the capability of absorbing up to S-rank katon jutsu and sending the jutsu back at the user.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Uchihaj


    Katon: rasen doragon: Spiral Dragon Jutsu
    Type: Defense/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: short-mid
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80
    description: the user performs 3 hand seals, takes a large breathe in and begins to rotate (kinda like kaiten). As the user begins to spin he releases the breathe in the forms of fire. The fire forms a spiral cylinder which surrounds the user protecting him from jutsus(of A rank and lower or S rank wind). The spiral peaks about 10ft above the ground with a dragon head at the top. The dragon can than be used to attack the enemy.
    Note: cannot use katon for two turns
    Note: dragon attack cannot be used till turn after original use
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchihaj
    Note: User is weak to attacks from below....

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Raiton: Sekiteki tsuparri)- Lightning Release: Static Thrusters
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C - rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses lightning chakra to his feet and project static electricity from the bottom of his feet, so instead of just free-falling, they can descend slowly from the sky in a gliding fashion. While falling, Static thrusters are entirely dependent on momentum, thus can be steered but with no additional upward or forward momentum can be generated after the initial jump. Air resistance presumably causes his momentum to slow fairly quickly in addition to manual course corrections. Though, if using while on the ground, the user can be propelled upward and forward. Using precise chakra control, the user can "fly" using this technique, but can only be used by those who have mastery over lightning.
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Last for 5 turns max
    Note: -10 per turn
    ~Declined~ Sorry, you lost me when you said you could fly after previously stating that this was particularly a technique to allow you to merely glide down.

    (Raiton: Ion Sojuu )- Lightning Release: Ion Manipulation
    Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This technique enables the user to focus an ionic charge in their hand or in the air around them to create weopans, defenses, tools or summon lightning strikes from the sky. The weopans/defenses/tools are however, restricted medium sized.
    Note: Can only be used 4x a battle
    Note: The user can not use this technique more than once a turn or the turn afterwards.
    ~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit
    (Raiton: Sekiteki tsuparri)- Lightning Release: Static Thrusters
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C - rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses lightning chakra to his feet and *project static electricity from the bottom of his feet, so instead of just free-falling, they can descend slowly from the sky in a gliding fashion. While falling, Static thrusters are entirely dependent on momentum, thus can be steered but with no additional upward or forward momentum can be generated after the initial jump. Air resistance presumably causes his momentum to slow fairly quickly in addition to manual course corrections. Though, if using while on the ground, the user can be propelled upward and forward.
    Note: Can only be used thrice
    Note: -10 per turn

    (Suna mizu kawa)- Sand water river
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A - rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After sand has been drenched in water, the user sends suiton chakra into the saturated sand and causes all the water to rise from the sand. The user uses shape manipulation to have the water forms into an orb in an instant. The user can use the water as a water source for water techniques.
    Note: Can only be used thrice

    (Suiton: Meza mizu no Yari)- Water release: Spear of water
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S - rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user focuses suiton chakra all over their body and increases the viscosity and makes the water thick, however it can still flow easily. The user releases the thick, low viscosity water from their sweet glands, covering themselves in a thick layer of water.
    The water can be released in an instant in order to withstand up to fatal blows, still with damage, but not as much. The water's density doesnt change after being released.
    This can be used to counter the jyuken, taijutsu and can defend against most wind and fire techniques. The user uses a large amount of chakra so it can withstand these techniques. After its usage , the water disperses.
    Note: Can only be used thrice a battle
    Note: Cannot use any techniques while this is covering the users body
    Note: Can't use water in the same turn of usage

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    (Suiton: Mizu Assaku Katana) Water Release: Water Compression Blades
    Type:Supplamentary
    Rank: A - rank
    Range: Mid- Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user performs the Rat,Boar,dragon and ram handseals and release several bullets (limit 8). After the bullets are release the user then claps their hands together while focusing their chakra turning the bullets into spiralling Disk like blades. These blades travel at great speeds and are very sharp . They can cut through B rank and lower Earth. The blades are so sharp that they are able to carve lines through the ground below.

    -Can only be taught by light
    -Needs Mastery Over Water
    - Has to be S-class ninja or higher

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    (Doton: Assai Tsuchi) Earth Style: Crushing Earth
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user will do 2 handseals, then slam their hands onto the ground. 4 giant walls of earth will emerge from the ground around the opponent, surrounding them like a rectangular prism without a top. On another handseal, the walls will converge onto the opponent, as if they were sliding on the earth, crushing the opponent.
    Note: Usable 2x
    Note: No A-Rank or above earth next turn
    Note: When the walls converge, they travel at high speeds, as though the were skimming along the ground.
    Note: Due to strain, the user may only use 1 other jutsu in the same turn


    (Doton: Kibaku Tsuchi Kinchou) Earth Style: Exploding Earth Birds
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user will do 2 handseals, while sending their chakra into the surrounding earth. On the conclusion, small 6 inch tiny birds, will arise from the earth around the opponent, made entirely of earth, flying around the opponent in a tornado-ish fashion. On another handseal, the birds will explode, sending earth shrapnel at the opponent, piercing their body all over.
    Note: Usable 2x
    Note: No S-Rank or above Earth next turn
    Note: The user must hold the handseal in order to complete the total detonation of all the birds

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    (Nendo Sanpu) - Clay Dissemination
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    This technique brings Deidara's clay control a bit further. When Deidara uses any clay bomb creature, just before the creature is stopped by a pinpointed attack such as with lightning or a weapon Deidara will use this technique to break the creature apart into 2 or more pieces so that if some clay is hit the rest can still move at the target and explode. For example, Deidara uses the technique (Geijutsu Tori) - Artistic Bird in which a large clay bird can dive down on the target. When the bird is about to be hit but Chirdori sharp spear, Deidara will use this technique and the bird can be split into two bird so if one bird is hit the only can still function at a lower explosion, yet due to even smaller creatures Deidara's clay bombs still can kill or incapacitate a target. Instead of splitting it into two bird, Deidara could have broke it down to 50 clay spiders that can still rain down on a target. The break down happens rather quickly.

    Notes:
    - Only usable by Deidara
    - Only usable thrice per battle
    - Only usable by Coyote

    Quote Originally Posted by Coyote View Post
    Suiton: Watatsumi Hanamoyou Joukuu | Water Release: Sea of the Floral Skies
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The user will preform one handseal and release water chakra up to mid-range from the user. The chakra will take a thin layer of water on the ground. By using chakra manipulation the user is able to control viscosity of the water. When the target is on this thin layer, watery flowers appear around the target (360degrees) these flowers are manageable in terms of sending at the target thin slice layers of water and/or compressed water bullets. This attacks around large but very thin an very sharp to be able to cut like paper cuts. The water is like a layer of sticky syrup that even when disturbed it goes back to its original state on the ground. If the target runs on this layer, the flowers appear anywhere they go as long as they're on it. The main purpose of these water slices is to hit the targets hands to stop them from preforming handseals. Due to the reflective ability of the water when the target begins handseals the slices are triggered to hit the hands and stop them from preforming the move.

    Restrictions:
    - Only usable twice per battle
    - Lasts on field for 2 turns
    - Cannot be redone again until 1 turn has passed
    - Only usable by Coyote

    ~ Description is unclear, the line I bolded particularly so. ~

    Suiton: Watatsumi Hanamoyou Joukuu | Water Release: Sea of the Floral Skies
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The user will preform one handseal and release water chakra up to mid-range from the user. The chakra will take a thin layer of water on the ground. By using chakra manipulation the user is able to control viscosity of the water. When the target is on this thin layer, watery flowers appear around the target (360degrees) these flowers are manageable in terms of sending at the target thin slice layers of water and/or compressed water bullets. These attacks are medium sized but very thin and very sharp to be able to cut with ease. The water is like a layer of sticky syrup that even when disturbed it goes back to its original state on the ground. If the target runs on this layer, the flowers appear anywhere they go as long as they're on it. The main purpose of these water slices is to hit the targets hands to stop them from preforming handseals. Due to the reflective ability of the water when the target begins handseals the slices are triggered to hit the hands and stop them from preforming the move.

    Restrictions:
    - Only usable twice per battle
    - Lasts on field for 2 turns
    - Cannot be redone again until 1 turn has passed
    - Only usable by Coyote

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    Quote Originally Posted by dm1202 View Post
    re-resubmitting

    (kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu-big wind
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a gamabunta size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This summons has the ability to create great A-rank winds with the flap of his wings that’s able to sweep the target off the ground and into the air. While the target is vulnerable in the air, 6 adult human size feathers of the toucan’s get’s swept with the wind surrounding the target, then exploding as a result of leaving the body after three seconds as all his feathers do.
    -note: can only be summoned once
    -note: summoning last three turns
    -note: can only use big wind once per turn
    -note: no other summons can be in play
    -note: must sign toco toucan contract


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    (kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu-big wind
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a gamabunta size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This summons has the ability to create great A-rank winds with the flap of his wings that’s able to sweep the target off the ground and into the air. While the target is vulnerable in the air, 6 adult human size feathers of the toucan’s get’s swept with the wind surrounding the target, then exploding as a result of leaving the body after three seconds as all his feathers do.
    -note: can only be summoned once
    -note: summoning last three turns
    -note: can only use big wind once per turn
    -note: no other summons can be in play
    -note: must sign toco toucan contract

    link to approval

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    (nunchaku-go-ruden fukumen)tow linked fighting sticks-golden mask
    Type:defense/Attack
    Rank:A-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:the users take out his nunchaku and put his chakra towards the nunchaku and start to make a shield in a shape of giant bell.it helps the users to defend from small attacks and weapons and also give the advantage to attack to the opponent.
    note:
    -can use twice per battle
    -can only be used/taught by -love-iz-life
    you can also see the example below in the video :
    starting time: 1:22


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    Wind release : Wind vectors (Fuuton:Kaze bekutoru)
    Rank:B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    description: the user perform bird seal and than mold wind chakra throughout his body,after molding a decent amount of chakra the user release out thin and sharp wind hand shaped vectors that can extend up to 10m radius and has slashing and cutting ability.the user can use this hands to deflect some advanced weapon like shuriken and kunais and leaves a deep cut in the opponents body.
    Note
    -can be used twice in a battle-
    -user can create up to 4 wind vectors -
    -cannot use other wind technique while this technique is activated-

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ## Attention ##

    I have already explained the situation for this week regarding the cycles of submission on this thread here http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=151346&page=3 As you are fully aware, if there is no marker, it means no cycle was started. There is no cycle this week. I just kept the thread open to allow members to edit their unchecked submissions if needed as people complained that when we closed it they couldn't.

    Now, we won't punish anyone this time for posting outside the marker, but who posted from the 4th of june onwards will have their submissions Auto-Declined and will need to be submitted in a new cycle, when one happens.


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Icemyster View Post
    (Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:All
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90
    Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast, along with lowering the power of high energy particles by cooling the molecules that would be reacting(reducing the speed of the molecules that produce heat), reducing fire and lightning jutsu by one rank.
    *Lasts three turns
    *while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
    *the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
    *can only be used once
    *can only be used by Ice users

    ±± Declined ±± Severely OP


    (Fuuton: shindou) Wind Release: Vibration
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:
    The user, releases a rapid succession of wind chakra into the wind around him. The wind then is rapidly manipulated around the user, creating intense vibrations that distort the way sound is perceived by the opponent, causing imbalance, impairing the ability of the opponent to coordinate taijutsu and make hand seals.
    *jutsu's effects last two turns
    *only usable once per battle

    ±± Declined ±± Description makes it seem Oped. Explain this better please.


    (Hyouton: ki-shinshou) Ice Release : Energy Transfer
    Rank:A
    Type: Offensive
    Range:Short
    Chakra :30
    Damage :60
    Description : The ice user quickly charges ice chakra into his or her body, and releases it through contact with a person or object (things like kunai would absorb it and freeze/cool upon contact with something) or in the case of a human contact, heat would be rapidly pulled from the person, causing painful numbing and stiffness of the affected area.
    *Can only be used by Hyouton users
    *can only be used four times
    *When used with a kunai, it must make contact with another object to cause anything


    ±± Declined ±± OPed... Tbh i don't know if you fully understand the implications and possible uses of something like this.
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:All
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90
    Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast.
    *Lasts three turns
    *while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
    *the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
    *can only be used once
    *can only be used by Ice users

    Removed the lowering of fire and lightning jutsu.

    (Fuuton: shindou) Wind Release: Vibration
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:
    The user, releases a rapid succession of wind chakra into the wind around him. The wind then is rapidly manipulated around the user, creating intense vibrations that distort the way sound is perceived by the opponent, causing imbalance, impairing the ability of the opponent to coordinate taijutsu and make hand seals. (this justu works by affecting the labyrinth of the ear, which is a series of fluid filled channels that send signals of balance to the brain, by vibrating the fluid in them, it disorients a person's sense of balance, causing coordination issues with opponents)
    *jutsu's effects last two turns
    *only usable once per battle


    52 bachi-roppou(52 Pick-up)
    Rank-S
    Type-Weapon
    Range-Short/Long
    Chakra-40
    Damage-80
    Description-
    The weapon 52 pick up, is a set of 52 thinly pounded, sharp rectangular iron cards.
    The user carries them in a small pouch that allows easy access to them.
    These cards are used by means of normal throwing (like a kunai) or chakra manipulation of either wind, or magnetism chakra. Using wind chakra, the cards gain cutting strength and speed, while when used with magnetism they may be freely manipulated in mid-air.

    Feel free to make edits as you see fit ^_^

    ±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers. I do hope you know how to read. Its essential in a Forum RPG like this. If you do know how to read, i assume you also know how to scroll slightly up. As you do it, you'll see a post from me. Had you taken the effort to read it, you wouldn't post techniques after it.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by V1nC3N7 V1c10U5 View Post
    Boseki (Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon (Sword)
    Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
    Range: Close/Mid
    Chakra: 0
    Damage:
    Description: Boseki was forged by Kuro Tamash in hopes of having a personal compainion. Boseki is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy.

    ~Boseki can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
    ~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
    ~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

    ~ ...It's a weapon ? Because the description looks like its a puppet. ~
    ___________________________________________
    Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponet causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponet to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attck the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponet can see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confusion. This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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    Boseki Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the opponent uses chidori for example the Boseki can not absorb it). This attack can only be used with Boseki, or any other wind based weapon. But must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).

    ~ Get Boseki aproved first. ~
    Reposting
    ]Boseki Buredo (Tombstone the Blade)
    Type: Weapon (Sword)
    Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
    Range: Close/Mid
    Chakra: 0
    Damage:
    Description: Boseki Buredo is a sword thatwas forged by Kuro Tamashi in hopes of having a personal companion. Boseki Buredo is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki Buredo has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki Buredo was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy. This sword was made for use by only Kuro Tamashi, due to his size and the size of the sword he can use it with ease.

    ~Boseki Buredo can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
    ~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
    ~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki Buredo after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

    edit if need. ^^

    Consider these only if above post gets approved.

    ___________________________________________
    Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponent causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponent to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attack the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponent can see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confusion.

    ~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
    ~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
    ___________________________________________
    Boseki Buredo Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki Buredo can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki Buredo is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the opponent uses chidori for example the Boseki Buredo can not absorb it).

    ~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
    ~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. House View Post
    re-submit:

    (Shi no rīchi) Death's Reach
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 2 turns, he may use the chakra of the sword for his own advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. When the user wishes after the 2 turns, he may harness this chakra and the chakra absorbed within that turn onto his own advantages, boosting his power. You can release that chakra into one of your jutsu making it one rank stronger (counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn). It cannot raise an S-ranked into a Forbidden rank. The user can have the chakra build up for 4 turns, putting all the chakra which the sword had left as an excess and pluss the user's chakra, which will surround Sumitsukigasa equal to the power of forbidden rank. Once this chakra has coated Sumitsukigasa, it will resemble of its great ancestor and the sword will double its reach into 12 feet. The speed of the slashes with the sword will also greatly increase, meaning the slashes of this sword can only be followed with 3 tomoe or higher while this technique is active.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Lasts 1 turn
    ~Chakra released from the sword is shaped into a blade that can cut through nearly anything.
    ~User may only use this technique in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above ninjutsu in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~User needs to master Taijutsu in order to hold this.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    ~ Quote the sword for any CJs ~

    (Doton: Wāru Chikyū)Earth Release: Earth Whirlpool
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a massive scaled earth jutsu, where one can use to even trap summons like Manda. As the ground starts turning inwards on itself, it will create a giant earth whirlpool which will turn inwards at fast speeds and keeps on spiraling. As it spirals, it will manipulate the wind around and creates a giant wind vortex ontop of the spiraling ground. The wind vortex is established because of the high speeds of the spiraling ground. The middle part of the whirlpool may lower to a max of 20m.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 2x because of its scale
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    ~No higher then A-ranked doton can be used in the next turn.
    ~Due to its massive scale, only 2 techniques are allowed in the same turn.

    ~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~

    (Han Kami han hito no ken) Fist of a Demigod
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will slam his hands on the ground, having an extremely condensed/compressed/steel like quality erupt from the ground that will resemble of a giant arm, resembling Gedo Mazo's right arm. That means it is the same size/makeup as Gedo Mazo's right arm. The arm has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to tear off flesh respectively and sharp nails that allows him to go through most of the techniques. This arm was passed down from the Sage of the 6th Path to newer generations in order to provide protection from the Gedo Mazo. The user may take defensive purposes as having this arm erupt right underneath him and close its hand, having the hand to protect him and make a counterattack of having this arm punch the opponent with the user inside the closed hand. It may take offensive measures as having the arm crush the opponent. If the hand closes, it is airtight inside. To make it clear, the user may freely control the hand's path and the hand/fingers on the arm. If the hand isn't destroyed yet, it may stay for 2 turns on the battlefield, then the hand goes back into the hole where it erupted from.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Only two jutsus in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above doton in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    ~ Declined, OPed ~

    Note to checker: If the "it may stay for 2 turns on the battlefield" makes it OPed, you're free to take it out. If Any minor changes need to be edited in order to approve these cjs, I got no problems with it.
    what I'm dropping:
    (Mai· Sōru jihi o motte iru!) Have Mercy Upon My Soul!
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 30 (See Description)
    Damage Points: +15 Ninjutsu
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 2 turns, he may use the chakra of the sword for his own advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. When the user wishes after the 2 turns, he may harness this chakra and the chakra absorbed within that turn onto his own advantages, boosting his power. Once this system has been broken, the sword becomes unbalanced in the same turn when this chakra has been harnessed, the sword becomes useless in the same turn. Because of the unbalance of the sword, user will receive -10 health damage in the same turn. As it tries to suck it back the taken chakra at once what has once left the sword, in the next turn, user suffers -30 chakra loss. As the sword has sucked back an enormous amount of chakra in that turn (meaning 30 chakra), activating itself once again, a furious wind will surround it, leaving the area in a really windy environment for when it sucked back the 30 chakra. This means that no raiton attacks of S-rank can be made from the user in that turn when there is a windy environment. As the sword becomes out of control when it sucks back the chakra, having an S-ranked fuuton chakra surround it, only Kage or higher may be able to handle it.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~The sword won't be useable in the same turn as this technique.
    ~Only Kage or higher may use this.
    ~Sumitsukigasa must be wielded.
    ~Can be taught by Dr. House
    my cw:
    Sumitsukigasa - Dante's Horn of Sorrow

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-10 each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: It has yet been said within many dusty old books that a great man named Dante Alighieri has gone to save his loved one from the great evil toad of Myobokuzan, Gamafer. Dante had gone down into the pit of death, into Gamafer's lair. After 7 days of a bloody fight, Dante failed to save his flower, and he showed no mercy to Gamafer. After the bloodbath, Dante carved a blade from Gamafer's mighty horn and he took these pieces to be forged by Hephaestus, the nearby blacksmith. He had forged the mighty double-bladed sword, and named Sumitsukigasa. The double-bladed sword is made of mostly unbreakable bone, harder then steel. Because of the blade part is made of bone, and most of it's parts, the weapon weighs almost half of it's size, and can be handled in order to reach high speeds. The -10 chakra in each turn is because Sumitsukigasa sucks the user's chakra in order to maintain it's ability, which is being always in the state of having itself imbued with wind chakra, quite similar to (Fūton: Kaze Kyōka no Tsūru) - Wind Release: Wind Enhanced Tools, and it won't stop until the double-bladed sword is out of short range from the user. If the user wishes, he may channel more of his chakra into the sword, which is an additional -10 chakra in each usage, in order to extend the pre-existing wind chakra inbued within the sword, onto 5-6ft. As the wind chakra has been extended on the sword in order to reach 5-6ft, the blade becomes an S-ranked wind blade, but for only that turn. Since the sword has an affinity for Wind, and as the sword's inbued abilities will travel onto the user's hand giving him a uniqueness of enabling him to seal a mere handseal for any wind jutsus. When the user performs any wind jutsus, the inbued chakra will add it's own inbued wind chakra from the sword (10 chakra which been sucked off from the user, every turn) into the technique completely, (transfering that sucked -10 chakra into the technique) having the sword lose its inbued wind chakra for that turn.
    Note:
    -Because of the sword's abilities, only a Sannin may hold the sword.
    -Because of it's wind affinities, only who mastered wind may use it.
    -If user wishes, the wind chakra imbued within the sword can be extended so that it will reach onto 5-6ft.
    -Only may Dr. House use this, and who he allows.
    -If someone tries to hold it, the sword will start sucking most of his chakra out of him, leaving him with a feeling of drained.

    re-submit:

    (Shi no rīchi) Death's Reach
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 2 turns, he may use the chakra of the sword for his own advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. When the user wishes after the 2 turns, he may harness this chakra and the chakra absorbed within that turn onto his own advantages, boosting his power. You can release that chakra into one of your jutsu making it one rank stronger (counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn). It cannot raise an S-ranked into a Forbidden rank. The user can have the chakra build up for 4 turns, putting all the chakra which the sword had left as an excess and pluss the user's chakra, which will surround Sumitsukigasa equal to the power of forbidden rank. Once this chakra has coated Sumitsukigasa, it will resemble of its great ancestor and the sword will double its reach into 12 feet. The speed of the slashes with the sword will also greatly increase, meaning the slashes of this sword can only be followed with 3 tomoe or higher while this technique is active.
    Notes:
    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Lasts 1 turn
    ~Chakra released from the sword is shaped into a blade that can cut through nearly anything.
    ~User may only use this technique in the same turn.
    ~No A-rank or above ninjutsu in the next turn.
    ~Due to the strain of this jutsu and -50 damage, the user wont be able to use taijutsu in the next two turns.
    ~User needs to master Taijutsu in order to hold this.
    ~Dr. House may teach this.
    ~Only kage or above may use this.

    ~ Enough and more techniques do the same thing. ~

    re-submit:

    (Han Kami han hito no ken) Fist of a Demigod
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense/Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will bite his finger and drip some of his blood into the ground, using it as a sacrifice in the before turn. After the turn has ended he may slam his hands on the ground, having a giant arm, resembling Gedo Mazo's right arm to be summoned from the ground.That means it is the same size as Gedo Mazo's right arm. The arm has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to tear off flesh respectively and sharp nails that allows him to go through most of the techniques. This technique was passed down from the Sage of the 6th Path to newer generations in order to provide protection from the Gedo Mazo. The user may take defensive purposes as having this arm erupt right underneath him and close its hand, having the hand to protect him and make a counterattack of having this arm punch the opponent with the user inside the closed hand. It may take offensive measures as having the arm crush the opponent. If the hand closes, it is airtight inside.
    Note:
    ~Unable to use Doton techniques for 2 turns due to the restrains on the body.
    ~Causing -50 damage to user as of the restrains of the jutsu
    ~The user can only use B-rank and below ninjutsu for 1 turn due to the restrains on the body.
    ~While this technique is active, the user may only use 2 techniques in every turn.
    ~The arm can stay in the fight for the max of 3 turns. After the 3 turns, it will go back into the ground.

    ~Can be used 1x
    ~Dr. House may teach this.

    ~ You can't just randomly summon a giant arm. What is it made of ? -_-" ~

    note for checker:
    ~put more restriction
    ~took out stuff to make it less op
    ~changed description

    ( kensei no soshi) - Power of the Elements
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This technique is specialised for those who have great control over their basic chakras. This is simple technique usually used in close combat where the user will release their either their water, earth, wind or lightning chakra around a part of their body covering them in that element. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it won’t hurt the user, though it can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by the body part with surrounded by the element created be the user, it will create a great of burst of that element on impact from the user. Each of the 3 elements will have a different effect, and only one can be used at a time, unless the user has mastered yin/yang.

    Lighting: This will kind of be like chidori nagashi, but only focused around a selected body part. When the user hits someone/something with the body part surrounded by lightning, it will create a blast of lightning outwards. It if hits something solid it will damage the object if not destroying it. If it his a person, the shock from the flames will fry them as well as shocking them numbing them for one turn.

    Water: The user will create water around chosen body parts from their chakra. This can be very effective when against a fire technique. When the user hits something with the body part surrounded by water, the water will be released forwards as a blast pushing everything weaker backwards. The blast of water has a 1ft radius.

    Wind: The user will create a current of wind around their chosen body part. This can be very effective against lightning techniques. When the user hits something with the body part surrounded by the current of wind, a blast of cutting wind will be release from it, pushing/cutting everything infront of it within short range of the user.

    Earth: The user will release their earth chakra around a part of their body to create rocks around that body part. This is much like the cannon S rank earth jutsu, Hardening Technique, but only around part of the body, and not as dense. When the user hits something/someone, the rocks surrounding their body part with break off being flung forwards into short range, like a blast of rocks.

    Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
    Note: Once the blast is released, the jutsu must be used again to surround the body part
    Note: If water is used, the user can’t use fire in the same turn
    Note: If lightning is used, the user can’t use wind in the same turn
    Note: If wind is used, the user can’t use fire in the same turn
    Note: If earth is user, the user can’t use lightning in the same turn.
    Note: Only one element can be remained active at a time, but the user can end the jutsu in an instant.

    The pervy sage already has a fire cj like this and gave me permission to make this variation. This is the cj he has.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    (Katon: kensei no doragon ) - Fire Release: Power of the Dragon
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This technique is specialised for thought who have great control over their fire chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their fire chakra around a part of their body covering them in fire. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quit painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by these flames created be the user, it will great a burst of flames on impace from the user, to burn the target more and producing some additional concussive force.

    Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
    Note: Can't use water jutsu at the same time
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 06-11-2012 at 08:53 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Anubis~ View Post
    Wind release : Wind vectors (Fuuton:Kaze bekutoru)
    Rank:B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    description: the user perform bird seal and than mold wind chakra throughout his body,then the user release out thin and sharp wind hand shaped vectors that can extend up to 10m radius and has slashing and cutting ability.the user can use this hands to deflect some advanced weapon like shuriken and kunais and leaves a deep cut in the opponents body.
    Note
    -can be used twice in a battle-
    -user can create up to 4 wind vectors -
    -cannot use other wind technique while this technique is activated-

    ±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers
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    Wind release : Wind vectors (Fuuton:Kaze bekutoru)
    Rank:B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user perform bird seal and than mold wind chakra throughout his body,then the user release out thin and sharp wind vectors(hand shaped) that can extend up to 10m radius and has slashing and cutting ability.the user can use this hands to deflect some advanced weapon like shuriken and kunais and the slash leaves a deep cut in the opponents body.
    Note
    -can be used twice in a battle-
    -user can create up to 4 wind vectors -
    -cannot use other wind technique while this technique is activated-
    -can be use/taught by anubis only-
    ~Declined~ Chakra cost is way off. And "while this is activated?" How long does this technique last, exactly?
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 06-10-2012 at 08:05 PM.

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