Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
I apologize ahead of time to whoever checks this
Link to CFS Approval.
Making the Ashura Senku into an actual jutsu. A quick description as well as a gif can be found in the link above.
1. Ashura Senku|Asura Flashing Sky
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (+10 if struck while Ashura Senku is active; -10 to user when Ashura Senku is active)
Description: After activating the Satsui no Hadō, the user focuses a large amount of chakra throughout his/her body, using his rage and anger to 'warp' the chakra, so to speak, causing the characteristic red chakra flares around his/her body to bend around his body, creating a coat of chakra that manifests itself as a kind of after-image when the user moves, making it harder for the enemy to strike him head-on. The increase of chakra throughout his body also increases his speed sharply, effectively doubling it (note: this only applies if the user has not used any other jutsu/mode that enhances his strength, meaning it can't be used in conjunction to EIG, Sage Mode, etc. and only works DURING the Ashura Senku, thus making it an ideal jutsu for quick escape) during the time the jutsu is used. Once he has activated the Satsui no Hadō, the user widens his stance, and his enhanced chakra-cloak glows red. He then lifts one knee and quickly "glides" along the ground to another location with his eyes aglow. Where he glides depends on whether the user choices to move forward, backwards, or any other direction, so long as it is in a straight line from his starting position and no item (i.e. tree, giant rock, building, etc) is in his path. The glide can be used to get away from an opponent bearing down on him, to suddenly launch an attack (often from behind), or perhaps to simply psych out the opponent and keep them guessing. Due to the dark nature of the Satsui no Hadō, the red chakra around the user is imbibed with such an evil intent, that it actually hurts the user's skin and burns his skins slightly as he uses it, similar to how Naruto's skin is burned when using the 4-tailed transformation; however it works on both ends of the spectrum: as long as the Ashura Senku technique is active, the user's skin will be in intense pain but if an enemy were to strike him while it is active, they will feel the same pain, though on a greater scale when compared to the user. However, given all the perks of the jutsu, the user has much to be wary about. Only able to use the jutsu 3 times per fight, shall the user use it all three times, he runs the risk of the dark nature of the Satsui no Hadō taking over, causing him to become enraged and lose control of his sanity, making him unable to use jutsus higher than C-rank for two turns and no taijutsu for the rest of the fight due to intense physical pain. After using it, he speed is also dramatically decreased by half, causing him to severally be limited in terms of movement. Furthermore, the user is unable to use the jutsu in rapid succession. It takes a minimal of three turns in between before he is able to use the jutsu again.
*Can only be used three times at a most, with a three turn waiting period in between.
*After using once, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than A-rank that turn and no taijutsu of A-rank and higher for two turns.
*After using twice, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than B-rank that turn and no tai of B-rank and higher for 5 turns.
*After using all three times, the user cannot use any jutsus higher than C-rank for 3 turns and no taijutsu for the rest of the fight.
*The user can only move uni-directionally, meaning he can only glide in straight lines. He also can only glide from one range to the next, meaning he can move from short range to mid range, mid range to long range and vice-versa but not short range to long range or long range to short range.
*After the technique has ended, the user's speed is severely cut in half, causing him to move at speeds that make Gaara's running speed seem fast (Gaara is used as a reference, due to him being considered one of the slowest in-manga characters). This effect only lasts the turn the user uses the Ashura Senku. However, if the user uses this technique at the end of his turn, then his NEXT turn, he will have this lowered speed the entire turn.
*Can't be used with any other mode or speed-enhancing jutsus.
*Can only be used after the Satsui no Hadō has been activated.
*Must have learned Satsui no Hadō and be at least 'User' rank within the Satsui no Hadō ranking system (See CFS for details).
*Gilding isn't the same as flying or hovering. The user "kicks/jumps" into a direction so fast that he "glides" until he reaches the destination. As such, this technique can't be used in mid-air.
±± Approved ±± I actually think you made it have too many restrictions for what it really is and how it can be avoided/countered. I added a note and removed a restriction that didn't make sense
I added as many restrictions as limits I could think of at the moment. There's a chance that it'll get declined but I'm willing to work as hard as I can to get it approved, even if it means submitting a heavily editted version where I can only jump backwards 4 feet with no chakra coating. Also, sorry for the wall of text .