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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    [Gama Tekunikku: Kakou Kyousei Zou] Toad Technique: Descent of the Great Toad Statue
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After performing the Boar→Dog→Tiger handseals, the user will clap his hands to summon a volume of Myobokuzan's Sacred Toad Oil directly above the opponent. This oil can only exist on Myobokuzan, so the instant it is summoned, it evaporates, leaving a thick cloud of vapour around the opponent which prevents him from seeing. Immediately after summoning the oil, the user will perform an additional handseal (Tiger), summoning a large Toad statue the size of the Great Toad Sage (大ガマ仙人, Ōgama Sennin) onto the opponent. The aim of this Toad statue is to crush whoever is beneath it.
    Note: Must have signed the Toad Contract to be able to use it.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh, thus can only be taught by him.

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    Oil that will infuse the enemy with natural energy and since he's not a sage user, he'll end up petrified and "toadified" (yeah...i made up that word :scorps? Yeah... it might be a cool interesting sneaky idea...but unapprovable non the less. Don't resubmit.

    [Doton: Manipyureito Tairus] Earth Release: Manipulative Tiles
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This is a rather simple Earth Technique. The user channels his chakra through his feet and into the ground. He then uses this chakra to manipulate already existing earth. With the earth, he manipulates 10 tiles of earth to rise and levitate around him. Each square tile has a perimeter of about 60 inches, and is 5 inches thick. The tiles can remain scattered around the user, or, at his command, can make them join at the edges to form a solid wall. The tile, in this case is used for defensive purposes. For an offensive intention, the user strikes each tile with his hands/feet towards the opponent eg. by punching a tile with his fist coated in Earth chakra would send it flying.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh, thus can only be taught by him.

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    I Like it. Needs chakra cost for each turn that passes with it active and needs a duration limit.

    [Fuuton: Kakuu Bakudan] Wind Release: Aerial Bombardment
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Ox then Tiger handseas while in mid air at least 10 meters above the opponent, he will then channel his Wind chakra to the sole of his feet, where he will then mold it. When the chakra is successfully molded, the user will kick downwards several times as he releases a Blast of compressed wind with each kick. The wind blasts descend onto the opponent with great speed and force, and are able to leave small craters in the ground, thus given the name Aerial Bombardment. Due to the wind being expelled from the user's feet, it also enables him to stay at the same height in the air while releasing them.
    Note: Usable only twice per battle.
    Note: Only a maximum of 15 compressed wind blasts can be released.
    Note: Created by Drizzeh, thus can only be taught by him.

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    Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:26 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    |Nipou|Ject Shot
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user gathers a large amount of chakra, channeling it into his leg. As this happens, the user creates a way point with his finger, channeling another good amount of unstable chakra to the end of that waypoint which is connected with the chakra in his leg. The waypoint starts out blue, easily visble to the naked eye, but turns red after staying on the target for a full second. As soon as this happens, the user kicks, causing the chakra to instantly meld with the unstable chakra rsulting in a chakra explosion on the impacted spot capable of destroying enemies and terrain on the scale of "Shadow Clone Explosion".
    Notes:
    -Take 3 seconds to execute
    -Easily noticable before execution giving time to prepare unless other factors are in play
    -Usable 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami

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    Uh? O_o its makes little sense. Rework the description as its currently a mess. It doesn't convey anything that resembles a move.

    |Ninpou| Laser Eyes
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user creates and compresses chakra on the tips of his eyeballs, charging it until the chakra color changes from blue to red. The user then releases the chakra as two compressed beams of chakra mimicking actual laser eyes. The lasers accelerate at insane speeds capable of piercing metal easily. This technique is fast and easy enough to execute at almost the same time as other non elemental ninjutsu.
    Notes:
    -Blinds user while charging for 3 seconds
    -3 second charge
    -Usable 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami

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    Piew piew!!! Lazer eyes... Get MS and submit as a custom MS technique.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:27 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto uzumaki bujii sage View Post
    (Shōton : kesshou Tera Fōmingu) Crystal Release: Crystal Terra forming
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases a full body surge of charka in the form of a 360 degree wave, The wave of chakra travels up to Long-range from the user, The wave of chakra manipulates the moisture on the field changing it into crystal, Including the ground (Up to 20 feet deep). Liquid substances are changed into solid crystal, Solid substances are encased in a thin layer of crystal.

    - Can only be used three times per battle.

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    Countless techniques like this from other elements. Yours is under restricted, oped (as its from crystal release) and doesn't have a single drawback.

    (Shōton: kesshou Tera Fōmingu) Crystal Release: Crystal Terra forming
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases a full body surge of charka in the form of a 360 degree wave, The wave of chakra travels up to Mid-range from the user, The wave of chakra manipulates the moisture on the field changing it into crystal, Including the ground up to 10 feet deep. Liquid substances are changed into solid crystal, Solid substances are encased in a thin layer of crystal.

    Note: This can only be used twice in a battle
    Note: After the use of this jutsu the user cannot use crystal release for the turn following
    Note: No jutsu S-rank and above can be used for the next turn.


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    Still oped. You are trying to submit a technique that is basically a wave of cristalization... Its still unreasonable.

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto uzumaki bujii sage View Post
    (Raiton:chikai kaisen)Lightning release: Short circuit
    Type: Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user closes their left eye and preforms the flowing hand seals Bird → Ox → Boar → Hare → Bird, as the user is doing the hand seals their gathering a massif amount of raiton chakra into their left eye. once the hand seals are complete the user opens his eye sending out a massif wave of chakra that's invisible to the naked eye flying towards their opponent, this causes a great amount of stress on the eye causes it to bleed and to go blind for 3 turns, the wave of chakra is 10 feet wide and 10 feet in height, and travels at a fast able to reach mid range in about 3 seconds. once the wave comes into contact with the opponent it stores tiny electrical bolts in their chakra net work that are dormant until the opponent try's to access their charka and when the opponent try's to access charka to use a jutsu or for some other reason the tiny bolts of stored lightning chakra release electricity throughout the opponents body causing their chakra network to become unstable for that turn resulting in the opponent not able to use any justu. the electricity also causes numbness in the opponents body.

    Note: You can only use this jutsu two times per battle
    Note: This can be the only jutsu you use on any any given turn, and if a jutsu was used before this you cannot use another one
    Note: Using this justu will cause your left eye to go blind for three turns
    Note: the charka wave can only be seen with a doujutsu that can see chakra or someone who has sensing.
    Note the opponents body will go numb and unable to move it for 2 seconds <----Note to mod: (feel free to remove this one)
    Note: if used three times your left eye will go blind forever.(just for that battle)

    ~ Both declined ~


    (Raiton:chikai kaisen)Lightning release: Short circuit

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user preforms the following hand seals Bird → Ox → Boar, as the user is doing the hand seals they're gathering a massive amount of raiton chakra into their hands. Once the hand seals are complete the user releases the stored chakra from his hands sending out a massive wave of chakra that's invisible to the naked eye flying towards their opponent, the wave of chakra is 10 meters wide and 10 meters in height, and travels fast able to reach mid range in about 3 seconds. Once the wave comes into contact with the opponent it stores tiny electrical bolts in their chakra network that are dormant until the opponent try's to access their charka. When the opponent try's to access charka to use a jutsu or for some other reason the tiny bolts of stored lightning chakra release electricity throughout the opponents body causing their chakra network to become unstable for that turn resulting in the opponent not able to use any justu. the electricity also causes numbness in the opponents body.

    Note: You can only use this jutsu two times per battle.
    Note: The charka wave can only be seen with a doujutsu or sensed by a sensory ninja.
    Note the opponents body will go numb and unable to move it for 3 seconds.

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    Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:30 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post
    (Doton: Merīgōraundo) Earth Release: Merry-Go-Round
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user makes a simple change to the battlefield, by sending chakra into the ground, rotating the crust of the earth a full 180 degrees, making the user and the opponent swap places. This happens at high speeds akin to Earth Release: Moving Earth Core, allowing them to avoid attacks; as such it makes the opponent lose their balance.

    - Can only use 4 times per battle
    - No S-rank earth techs in the same move
    - Only whats on the ground is effected
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    X-Declined-X Make it mid range, switching earth in long range battle feild completely puts your opponent against his own technique. Otherwie define how long the technique extends in metres. lasly, i think i saw this before. Post any previous submitions if there are.
    (Doton: Merīgōraundo) Earth Release: Merry-Go-Round
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user makes a simple change to the battlefield, by sending chakra into the ground, rotating the crust of the earth a full 180 degrees, making the user and the opponent swap places. This happens at high speeds akin to Earth Release: Moving Earth Core, allowing them to avoid attacks; as such it makes the opponent lose their balance.

    - Can only use 4 times per battle
    - No S-rank earth techs in the same move
    - Only whats on the ground is effected
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

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    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 10:36 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton: Raitoningu fīrudo|Lightning Release: Lightening Field
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing the Horse handseal while gather a mass of Lightening chakra, then begins spreading there arms out to there sides keeping there hands facing towards each other, as the user separates there arms a link of Lightening spheres form & when finished rise up over the users head & fly out spread across the users general area (Short-Mid), The spheres have 2 uses
    Attack:
    The user can control numerous spheres to send straight towards there opponent which latch onto them & shocks the opponent paralyzing them.
    Defense:
    The user can maneuver the spheres to block incoming jutsu which would react to lightening jutsu & against opponents Taijutsu attacks.
    - 10 Spheres are created & are the size of an average person's head
    - The spheres can be moved around without counting as a Jutsu used
    - If used for Attack/Defense purposes it counts as 1 Jutsu used
    - All 10 Spheres count as 1 A Rank jutsu
    - They remain in play no matter what condition the user is in ( apart from death )

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    Don't resubmit. Unreasonable and done in many variations.

    Katon: Kasai peretto|Fire Release: Fire Pellets
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user begins by kneading fire chakra within them then taking in a deep breathe, they then shoot out multiple fire pellets that move at great speed which due to there size & speed they move at are hard to keep track of. Just before the pellets reach there target the user performs the Tiger hand seal causing the pellets to drastically increase in size (measuring to 1/3 of a Great Fireball) & as they expand they begin to circle the target in random directions. When the user performs a Wind jutsu 1 of the 5 Fire spheres speeds towards the opponent & mixes with the Wind jutsu causing it to explode into a mass of flames around the opponent
    - Can be used 2 times within a battle
    - 5 pellets are fired from the user
    - Each Fire sphere used counts towards 1 jutsu
    - Spheres stay rotating around the opponent as long as the user has the target in site otherwise they float around controlled by the user

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    A wind jutsu? This is very shallowly explained. Specially the last part of the technique. And if you look at this in a broad, general way, there are already tons of similar techniques to this.

    Kinenhi|Monument
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This weapon is a basic katana, black grip, Silver Wings that twirl around the handle & a Silver dragon's head at the end of it.
    Monument's main speciality is to (at the user's command) take on the same property of whatever it comes in contact with including any strength's & weakness's the original has & when needed the user can have it take back its original form when needed, this abilty only works as long as the user is having there chakra mixing with the katana.
    When the user stabs the katana into the terrain 4 giant blades emerge in different locations decided by the user & form just as sharp as the katana itself while emerging, they take on the same property as the terrain but mixed with the user's chakra which strengthens the blades, if the user lets go of the katana's handle the blades loses the users chakra leaving it just as vulnerable as the terrain itself and the property Monument or the blades take on still have the same elemental disadvantage/Advantage while the user is holding the katana due to them continuously mixing chakra with the blade ( The 4 blades reach up to 7 meters long, 3 meters wide & is 1 meter thick )

    - As long as chakra is mixed in with the blades formed, they can block up to B Rank of the terrain's advantage element
    - The same rule works to that of any other element for disadvantages
    - Depending on the terrain the blades form will still be intact if the katana is removed from the ground
    - If used continuously for over 6 turns the user is only able to use A Rank & lower Jutsu until the katana is removed from the terrain
    - Can only be weilded by Method, any others who hold it can only treat it as a normal katana


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    the ability is interesting but it needs definition. Rank? what can it copy? pertains to what? I mean, you copy Lava from touching a lava technique thus your sword becomes liquid rock? how does it work? I need you to explain it for either each of the basic 5 or all elemental KG releases to avoid confusion and too much freedom. Can it copy other weapons? Can it copy abilities? And the technique of striking the ground and making swords pop up has been done countless times.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:36 PM. Reason: Changed 1 due to similarities

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Samehada: Doton tame deido) Samehada: Earth To Mud
    Type: Sup
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/a
    Description: Seeing as samehada can absorb/break through attacks. The user will simply swipe samehada pass any earth surface or Hit the earth Surface of an earth jutsu that has chakra in it, and drain the chakra out the earth. Causing the Earth to simply turn into harmless mud.
    -Note- Can be used Twice
    -Must have a Fuguki,Killer Bee, or Kisame Bio to use-
    -Only Usable by General Teno-

    Fuguki Bio:http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=251566
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    Dont resubmit. This is already an ability Samehada has and i won't allow you to submit a custom for something you can already do with the absorbsion technique in samehada.

    Wind style:Wings of the Wind god-風のスタイル:風の神の翼

    Rank:S if added fire forbidden jutsu
    Chakra:100
    100
    Range:long
    Type:Attack/Defensive
    Description:this jutsu litteraly gives the user a pair of invisible wind wings that are able to make him fly and every time the wings stroke down they send C ranked Wind waves upon the opponent that is on the ground if the user wishes they can inflame the wings so then they will be visible but since its a combination the fire will be really hot and will damage the user in his back but when sending the wind waves down upon the opponent they will be B ranked fire waves with every turn the wings send 2 fire waves and the wings cannot be put down without an A rank Water jutsu because its a wind and fire combined. the jutsu will last for 3 turns


    (Futon:Tsubasa sono tentei) Wind style:Wings of the Wind god
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:This jutsu litteraly gives the user a pair of invisible wind wings that are able to make him fly, and every time the wings stroke down they send Wind waves upon the opponent that is on the ground (Stroking the wings are optional). Enough to simply block/blow back projectiles. If the user wishes they can inflame the wings but since its a combination of fire and wind. The fire will be really hot and and decrease the time the user can stay active with the wings. The Wind infused with fire can also be used to blow fire/wind waves.

    :Note: Infusing The wings with fire count as one of the users turn
    :Note:The wave of fire/wind is B Rank
    :Note: Sending the wave of fire/wind count as 1 of the users turn
    :Note: Can Stay Active for 3turns (With fire infused.. 2 turns)
    :Note: Can only use twice

    (Permission from Andy to update this)
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...=5096&u2=83064
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...2=83064&page=2

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    Andy is not a sensei thus he can't teach you that custom. Without knowing that custom, you can't make changes to it or variations of it. Also, multitude of endless techniques with wings have been done before so Don't resubmit.
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    (Genjutsu:naze touhou) Illusionary Arts: Why Me?
    Rank:A
    Type:Sup
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/a
    Description:The user will perform one handseal and send his chakra into the opponent’s chakra stream where it will lay dormant inside the opponent until they perform a genjutsu. Once the opponent is preparing to perform a genjutsu, the user’s technique will get triggered. Instead of the genjutsu being cast on me,the opponent will inflict the genjutsu on himself.The strength of the genjutsu depends on the strength of the genjutsu the opponent will use. Other than the reverse effect the genjutsu works like all other genjutsus.

    :Note:Usable Twice
    :Note:No Genjutsu the next turn
    :Notenly taught by General Phaze

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    Doesn't make sense and is prone to miuse and can lead to abusive, oped situations. Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:39 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (fuuton: teigen hakkaku)wind release: motion detection
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: mid range
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user channels his chakra into the air around him and perform the seal the "ram" seal,
    as a result the user is able to detect movement and denote the nature of the moving body using air resistance
    -can only be activated once, and lasts the entire battle
    -user cannot use another wind jutsu in the same turn
    -can only be taught by elmage

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    Dont resubmit. Done before.

    (fuuton: jiten ken)wind release: rotating blades
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: mid range
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description:the user gathers his fuuton chakra in his lungs, then perform the seals "Tiger>>Ox>>Snake"
    releasing two cresent-shaped blades with the ends of both blades close together almost like a circle,
    that rotates as it moves towards the target deal deep cuts to the target

    -can only the used three times
    -no wind jutsu in the same turn
    -can only be taught by elmage

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    similar to a multitude of techniques.

    (katon: doki za kaen tentousama)Fire release: wrath of the blaze god
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user takes out a scroll and summon the blaze god
    (a large manlike figure with a shield and sword) made of fire sending it towards the target
    -can only be used once
    -user cannot use fire in the same and in the next turn
    -no A rank and above in the same turn
    -can only be taught by elmage

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    ±± Declined ±±
    similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:41 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Summoning Animal: Kingfisher
    Scroll Owner: Shinta
    Other Users who have signed contract: None so far
    Summoning Boss if existing: Will be added later
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Will be added later
    Description and Background: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kingfisher
    As with the Toads in the Narutoverse, The Kingfishers will greatly vary in size. Some will be their normal real-world size and others will be large enough to carry one person on their backs and off course some sizes in between.
    Some of the Kingfishers will have an affinity for an element and each have there own specialised attacks. They will also be able to communicate using human language and have developed an intricate social structure back in there homeland forest.

    As well as signing the contract, a Tattoo will be placed on the Bio as proof that they have signed the contract.


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    Note: if it has not already been done, I am dropping my Kamizuru bio and the bee summoning that comes with it. This summoning scroll will take its place.

    ~Approved.~
    (Kuchiyose: Mizu no Kawasemi Jade) Summoning: The Water Kingfisher Jade
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After making a blood sacrifice and performing the Snake → Bird hand seals, the summoner will place their hand on the ground or other flat surface, while applying ample pressure and chakra in order to summon Jade. Jade is a moderately large Water Kingfisher with a 1.5 meter wingspan who can not carry humans on her back. She has a short tail and long bill and is coloured oily green above, with white markings on the wings and tail, with a white collar around the neck. Being a Water Kingfisher, Jade has a natural affinity to the water element and is able to perform several water jutsus up to B-rank without hand seals (if any) as listed below. Only the following can be used by Jade as they can be/are released from the users mouth.
    Water jutsu usable by Jade:
    - Hidding in Mist Jutsu,
    - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field,
    - Water Release: Water Bullet,
    - Water Release: Water Gun,
    - Water Release: Water Horn,
    - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave.
    Notes:
    - Jade remains on the field for 6 turns,
    - Jade can only be summoned if the users has signed the Kingfisher contract and has the tattoo as proof of signing,
    - Jade can not carry anyone on her back,
    - Each jutsu Jade uses counts towards one of the three usable per turn,
    - Jade can be summoned three times per battle with two turns cool down in between each of her summons.

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    (Kuchiyose: Waraikawasemi no Leach) Summoning: The Kookaburra Leach
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After making a blood sacrifice and performing the Snake → Ram → Bird hand seals, the summoner will place their hand on the ground or other flat surface, while applying ample pressure and chakra in order to summon Leach. Leach is a Blue-winged Kookaburra who has cream-coloured upper and underparts barred with brownish markings. He has blue wings, brown shoulders and blue rump with a blue tail. Leach is considerably larger than most Kingfishers with a 3 meter wingspan and the capability to carry one human on his back. Leach has an affinity for the Wind element and can perform up to A-rank wind jutsu without hand seals. Leach can only use the following wind jutsus by flapping his wing(s) or by releasing them through his mouth.
    Wind jutsu usable by Leach:
    By flapping his wing(s);
    - Wind Release: Dust Wind Technique,
    - Wind Release: Rumbling wind wall,
    - Wind Release: Gale Palm,
    - Wind Release: Great Vacuum Cannon,
    - Wind Release: Gale Surge Technique
    By releasing through his mouth:
    - Wind Release: Great Vacuum Cannon
    - Wind Release: Twister Shot
    - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
    - Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere
    - Wind Release: Vacuum Wave
    - Wind Release: Powerful Wind Wave

    Leach can also use the Genjutsu Temple of Nirvana Technique
    Notes:
    - Leach remains on the field for up to 5 turns,
    - Leach can carry only one human on his back,
    - Leach can only be summoned if the users has signed the Kingfisher contract and has the tattoo as proof of signing,
    - Each jutsu Leach uses counts towards one of the three usable per turn,
    - Can only be summoned once per battle.

    ______________
    ±± Approved ±±


    (Yoton: Yougan no Nami) Lava Release: Wave of Lava
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their lava chakra into the ground in front of them while performing the Snake → Dragon → Bird → Dragon → Ram hand seals. Upon completing the last hand seal the user will release the chakra and cause a large mass of lava to erupt from the ground in front of the user, with a width equivalent to mid-range, where it will then be propelled forward by the users chakra. This wave of lava is short range in height and will smother anything that is within range.
    Notes:
    - Can only be taught by Shinta.
    - Must be on the ground in order to use.
    - Can only be used four times a battle.
    - No other lava techniques of A-rank or greater can be used in the same turn.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing technique
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:44 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Doton: Doro Kusabana (Earth Release: Mud Flower)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user gathers their doton chakra and release it into the ground to make the ground all muddy in front of them. The user then manipulates the chakra in the mud to form a big giant flower of their choice and hardens the mud to keep its form. The user with release the pedals on the flower to attack the opponent at a fast speed. Once the opponent gets hit by the pedals, the middle of the flower will attack the opponent by releasing a constant stream of mud at them.
    Note:
    -Must know Doton up to B rank
    -The flower can be any kind of existing flower
    -Can only be taught by Sindy

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    There is already a very similar technique to this.

    Fuuton: Ijou Kaze Enjin (Wind Release: Surrounding Wind Ring)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user with gather up their wind chakra in theirs hands and move their hands down towards their waist. The user will then spin around on their dominant foot and release the wind from their hands towards their opponent fast. The user will keep spinning faster and faster, releasing more wind towards their opponent as the wind starts to get sharper and more dangerous. If the opponent was to put his hand in the wind as it picks up, he/she would lose their hand due to how sharp the wind would be when released. Once the user stops spinning, the wind will die down.
    Note:
    -Can be used 3 times per battle
    -Must know wind up to A rank
    -Can’t use a wind technique their next turn
    -Can only be taught by Sindy

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Ok, if this is something you can keep as long as you are spinning, then it needs to have a chakra cost and a time limit. Also, bare in mind that without a dojuutsu, specially Byakugan, rotating like that makes you very vulnerable to attacks so this technique, i can already tell you sindy, will not be very useful for you.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-12-2012 at 08:46 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Light... View Post
    Hyouton shuriken | Ice Release: Ice Darts
    Type:Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description: For this technique, the user quickly focuses their hyouton chakra in there mouths molding the chakra into dart shaped ice. As this shape has been formed the user then can spit the darts out allowing them to move as fast as Fuuton bullets. Because of the sharp tip of the ice darts they can easily pierce the body/target that they hit.

    -Must be sannin or higher to use
    -Must have a Ice release bio
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by light

    ~Declined. Doesn't deserve to be A - ranked~

    Hyouton: Dyuaru ken | Ice Release: Dual Blades
    Type:Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: N/A ( + 60 Damage from fatal hit)
    Description: For this technique, the user claps his/her hands together whilst focusing his/her hyouton chakra in the palm of there hands. As they spread there hands apart you will notice that the chakra that they are pulling away from the clap has formed into two swords made of pure ice.m These swords are durable and can cut through A-rank and lower wind/water. When ever a person is hit with this, it leaves a light blue tint on the body. If the opponent is hit again on the same spot that area starts to become numb.

    -Must be kage rank to use
    -Mus have An ice bio
    -Can only be taught by light
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle

    ~Approved. Do not the these swords will not automatically do 60 damage when you strike someone to their little finger~
    Resubmitting:

    Hyouton shuriken | Ice Release: Ice Darts
    Type:Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description: For this technique, the user quickly focuses their hyouton chakra in there mouths molding the chakra into dart shaped ice. As this shape has been formed the user then can spit the darts out allowing them to move as fast as Fuuton bullets. Because of the sharp tip of the ice darts they can easily pierce the body/target that they hit.

    -Must be sannin or higher to use
    -Must have a Ice release bio
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by light
    ||Approved||

    New Submission:

    Hyōrinmaru | Ice Ring
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The weapon Hyōrinmaru was forged by a master blacksmith from the village Kirigakure. This weapon is the prized position of the Yuki can which allows only a specific Yuki to wield it. That Yuki is Toshiro . It has been said in legends that hyorinmaru went through the massive clan war and survived with little damage. The sword slowly freezing anything it comes in contact with. Hyōrinmaru looks like a normal katana with the exception of the guard, which is in the shape of a four-pointed bronze-colored star. Its hilt is light blue and sheath dark blue. The sheath completely dissolves when he draws his sword. The sword is somewhat longer than most Katana, at about 1.4 meters long, making it taller than Hitsugaya, preventing him from wearing it at the hip. Instead he carries it on his back by his green sash over his right shoulder. The sword has the Ability to channel Water,wind and Ice release chakras through the sword.

    `When Imbued with Water chakra, the sword can slash releasing a B rank wave of water depending on the way the user slashes. This Ability can only be used once per battle


    `When imbued with wind chakra the user can slash creating a B rank tornado of wind from any direction to hit the foe. The tornado is very fast and form in about 5 seconds. This ability can only be used once per battle


    `Hyōrinmaru's most special ability allows it to create ice out of Ice out of any near by water source. After the user imbues the sword with Ice yhe sword then gets a Light blue tint. After the sword gets the tint the user can then swipe/slash across horizontally or vertically releasing a large amount of ice shards. The shards are equaled to a A rank ice technique


    -The wave of ice counts for 2 of the users jutsu
    -Special abilities can only be used once per battle
    -Must master water/wind and start ice training
    -Must be Kage rank or higher to wield
    -Must have a Toshiro Hitsugaya biography
    -Can only be Used by Light...
    ||Pending|| Leaving for another Mod
    X-Declined-X Despite Having differences the weapon is very similar to another CW.
    Dropping:
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...et#post4859618
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    Hyouga Gachan | Ice Release: Glacier Crash
    Type:Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage:60 Damage
    Description: For this technique the uses focuses there hyouton chakra into the atmosphere and performs the rat hand seal. After the chakra has been sent into the air, the user then slams there hand on the floor, summoning several large sharp spikes (maximum 8) to fall 10m above the opponent.The spikes are 4 meters high each and 3 meters in diameter. This can aslo be used to trap the opponent. Because of the weight of them, the user has to have mastered nin because it requires intense chakra control

    -Must have mastered ice to use
    -Must have a Yuki bio
    -Must be sannin or higher to use
    -Usable 2x a match
    ||Approved||



    Note: Only difference is the Icicles fall from above.
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 10-18-2012 at 02:11 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Switch View Post
    New Cycle:

    (Sōkyoku Dai Jūichiban – Bachiatari no Kimagure) Sonata Number One – Whims of the Accursed
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: An advanced genjutsu, the user will begin by casually playing the shamisen – Meanwhile, anyone who hears the music will be unwittingly caught within the illusion. Bachiatari no Kimagure is a technique that induces intense Schizophrenia, supplanting powerful hallucinations and bizarre delusions that cause severely disorganized thinking and speech. The illusion begins with a foul smelly, sticky liquid that slowly rises from the ground, restricting movement and gripping the opponent around their legs. Following this, grotesque creatures - representing the irrevocably shattered souls of those who have fallen after falling to this technique - crawl out from the liquid, persecute, and mutilate the afflicted person, tearing at and biting away at their skin and muscle – These beasts have dingy and long fingernails as well as sharp, and rotten teeth; Along with this, loud, almost deafening maniacal laughter can also be heard in the surrounding environment to add to the Schizophrenic experience. As they dig into the flesh, the creatures also completely restrict movement on the part of the afflicted person. This illusion can indeed be used to affect multiple people, but not exceeding a maximum of three people at one time. Meanwhile in reality, the opponent will be hyperventilating - mentally unable to cope, and literally "scared stiff" for the moment.
    ✘This technique can only be used twice per battle
    ✘After using it the user must wait a full two turns before utilizing this technique again.
    ✘If left alone, the illusion will take hold of a persons mind for an entire turn, before receding and ‘de-activating.’
    ✘In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of A Rank and below Genjutsu.
    ✘The sheer volume of the hallucinations heavily disturbs the mind of the opponent, driving them to the point that while under the influence of this technique, one will be completely incapable of thinking properly, and will forfeit all ability to control voluntary movement.
    ✘Even in the turn following release, the opponent will not regain their free choice of movement, and as such won’t be able to perform techniques above A Rank in the following turn (And only in that turn).

    X-Declined-X Similar to Music arts.
    Resubmitting:

    (Kinshara Sōkyoku Dai Jūichiban:Bachiatari no Kimagure) Golden Sal Tree Sonata Number One:Whims of the Accursed
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: To activate this Genjutsu, it is required that the user be able to at least see his targets torso. The moment this Genjutsu is activated, several grotesque creatures, un-holy in appearance, will appear and latch onto and grab the afflicted person; The moment they grab the target, they completely restrict the afflicted person; The opponent is at that moment, completely stripped of his ability [both mentally and physically] to move at will [In both reality and the Genjutsu]. The grotesque creatures are representations of the irrevocably shattered souls of countless shinobi who never came home from war, each of their lives having met an unfortunate end. The creatures have dingy and long fingernails, along with sharp, almost seemingly rotting teeth. These creatures will proceed to mutilate their prey, tearing away at, digging into and biting into the skin – Carefully stripping muscle off of the bones and then doing intricate carving on the exposed bones with their nails, all while keeping the target alive. Though in reality this is not happening, the opponent is faced with such perceived agony that he will scream and shiver uncontrollably, mentally unable to cope with the intense levels of pain; The supplanting of these powerful hallucinations and delusions will also serve to induce disorganized thinking and slightly slurred speech, and as such, even after the illusion is broken, the opponent will have trouble actually concentrating long enough to attack or defend as they see fit – This creates a five second lag in all of their movements in the following turn only. The illusion itself lasts for one turn.
    *This technique can be used once per battle
    *The user cannot use Genjutsu in the following turn.
    *The damage dealt is solely in the afflicted persons mind.


    X-Declined-X Okay well:
    -Add the Genjutsu tag, and remove the Damage Points. This shall not cause physical damage its an illusion after all.
    -Its Oped: Look at the technique altogether. 1) You only have to look at your opponents torso and the genjutsu is in effect(Too easy to perform despite being S rank). 2) He losses his Mental and Physical will (Making Kai and alot of general genjutsu release methods in effective). 3) Similar to Itachi's technique (The genjutsu he used on naruto during kazukage rescue arc). 4) There is even an aftereffect that the target will suffer after releasing from the genjutsu. This is heavily over-powered, i mean you use it at the start of battle and what will prevent your from victory? O_o

    - I removed the use of Sound as a medium to activate the Genjutsu. I also re-worked a large portion of the description, which is why I bolded it all. I also added damage and added on to the name . . so a lot has changed, but it's still the same concept.

    New Submissions:

    (Katon:Kaen no Metsujin Shinki Benihone) Fire Release: Flame God Slayer's Red Bones Of The Evil Soul
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: A simple but effective jutsu, the user will channel his Katon chakra into the air surrounding his target, forming a massive whirlwind of raging flames around said target. One will then cause it to sub-sequentially converge on them from all sides, leaving not a single point of escape available. The flames burn hot enough to incinerate anyone caught inside and are also capable of immediately burning earth of equal rank and below directly into lava. The flames are also capable of preventing the freezing of moisture within its vicinity, rendering Hyouton ineffective. This technique, however, is still susceptible to water release.
    *This technique can be used thrice per battle
    *One must wait a full three turns before using this technique a second time around – The same rule applies for the third time around.
    X-Declined-X Flames wont form around your opponent. They will have to travel there.
    New Custom Summoning Contract:

    Summoning Animal: Flamboyant Cuttlefish
    Scroll Owner: Beetlejuice
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None yet.
    General Description: The cuttlefish or more specifically, Metasepia Pfefferi is a particularly robust species, with a broad oval like mantle. They have a unique physiology, with multiple, broad, blade like arms lined with rows of suckers. The fish also produces poison within its muscles, containing a unique neurotoxin that blocks sodium channels, causing motor paralysis and respiratory arrest within minutes of exposure, leading to cardiac arrest due to a lack of oxygen. Shortly after infection infection, the target will suffer high levels of pain. Each summon can use a different type of venom that shall be fully explained in the techniques themselves. The poison is present and delivered through their saliva. Their saliva itself is slightly acidic - it aids them in breaking down and digesting food, in the absence of large teeth. On contact with the skin, it will not only deliver its poison, but burn and eat away at the flesh, inducing high levels of pain [separate from the poison] and leaving hideous scars. The Cuttlefish can range in sizes from being as small as 8cm long, to being a large as a cow, similar to the way the Myobokuzan toads are larger than ordinary.


    If the above contract is approved, I will be dropping:
    The Tasmanian Devil contract in its place.

    X-Pending-X Not so sure, cuttlefish could be taken as squids. Leaving for another Mod.
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 10-18-2012 at 02:25 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Since the old CJ thread is closed, ill link you directly to the post at which the following TWO were approved.

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...er#post4833340

    (Suiton: Sansui sōchi)- Sprinkler System
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Med
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user, by channeling suiton chakra to their feet, will inject their chakra into the ground, as far as mid-range. Then, performing a single hand seal, the user will force their chakra from the ground, using nature transformation to change the chakra into water. This ejects a large amount of water from three places mid-range from the ground, similar to the function of a sprinkler. The water from the ground will then remain on the battlefield, allowing the user to use the water for any techniques up to A-rank.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Can only be used on a battlefield that has no water present
    *Note: Water lasts for 5 turns; usable twice per battle


    Updating:

    (Suiton: Sansui sōchi)- Water Release:Sprinkler System
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By channeling suiton chakra to their feet, the user will inject their chakra into the ground as far as mid-range. Then, by stomping/stepping on the ground, the user will force their chakra upwards, using nature transformation to change the chakra into water. This ejects a large amount of water from any three places mid-range from the ground, similar to the function of a sprinkler. The water from the ground will then remain on the battlefield, allowing the user to use the water for any techniques up to S-rank. This doesn't however changes their overall range.
    Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    Note: Can only be used on a battlefield that has no water present
    Note: Water lasts for 3 turns; Usable twice per battle

    X-Approved-X Added a part
    (Suiton: Ekitai Yubi Burēdo)- Liquid Finger Blades
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Med/Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user performs the following hand seals, Monkey → Ram → Boar, and then brings their hand to their mouth. They place their hand horizontally in front of their mouth, with the thumb facing up. Then they will spit out a fast moving jet of water through their four fingers (not including the thumb). This action separates the water jet into 5 different horizontal blades of water. As the blades leave the users hand, they expand; each blade is five feet in length.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Each blade is a weak B-rank; together they are an S rank
    *Note: Usable twice per battle


    This as well:

    (Suiton: Ekitai Yubi Burēdo)- Water Release: Liquid Finger Blades
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs the following hand seals, Monkey → Ram, and then brings their hand to their mouth. They place their hand horizontally in front of their mouth, with the thumb facing up. Then they will spit out a fast moving jet of water through their four fingers (not including the thumb). This action separates the water jet into 5 different horizontal blades of water. As the blades leave the users hand, they expand; each blade is seven feet in length.
    Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    Note: Usable twice per battle

    X-Approved-X

    The last technique was approved here..

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...al#post5125907

    (Suiton: Kaizoku no Uragiri no Ikari)- Water Release: Rage of the Sea King’s Betrayal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will perform a string of ten hand seals, and then channel their suiton chakra to their feet. By stomping on the ground, the user will perform nature transformation on their chakra, changing it into water. The stomp on the ground raises a 360 degree ring around the user from underground, which extends up into air just above the user’s height. The ring of water is very thin but does not compromise its strength, which allows the user to easily through it. This can be used to defend against attacks. Once the ring is formed around the user, they have the option of performing another hand seal, which unwraps the ring starting from the back, wrapping it around to the front, forming a straight water wall. The wall will then release hundreds of marble sized bullets of water as it is unwrapping, covering the entire battlefield in front of the user. These bullets can reach up to long range.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: If used to defend against any technique of S-rank except fire, the wall loses too much strength to unwrap and release the water bullets
    *Note: No water techniques above B-rank for the next turn
    *Note: Usable once per battle


    Updating this third one:

    (Suiton: Kaizoku no Uragiri no Ikari)- Water Release: Rage of the Sea King’s Betrayal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will perform the Ram → Dragon → Horse hand seals, and then channel their suiton chakra to their feet. By stomping on the ground, the user will perform nature transformation on their chakra, changing it into water. The stomp on the ground raises a 360 degree ring around the user from underground, which also extends up into air and above forming a dome-like shape. The ring of water is thin enough for the user to see through it with clarity, yet does not compromise the strength of the technique in any way. Once the ring is formed around the user, they have the option of performing another hand seal, which unwraps the water starting from the back, wrapping it around to the front, forming a straight water wall. The wall will then release hundreds of marble sized bullets of water as it is unwrapping, covering the entire battlefield in front of the user. These bullets can reach up to mid range.
    Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    Note: No water techniques above B-rank the same turn
    Note: Usable twice per battle

    X-Declined-X No, last technique is perfectly fine.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kami no te no todoke ka) God's Reach
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Extends into Mid-range
    Chakra: N/A (Cost of jutsu used)
    Damage: 80
    Description:God's reach, the yo-yo crafted by a man by the name of Shikizaki Kiki. In the age of swords, children were often being abducted and forced to fight in the army. Taken from birth, a young boy constantly played with yo-yos as a child, often neglecting his sword training to become more skilled in using a children's toy. In his ninth year, the boy yet the swordsmith Shikizaki, and they bonded quite well. In danger of being killed for neglecting his weapons training, the boy came to Shikizaki Kiki for guidance as to how to use a sword. The swordsmith, instead, gave him a yo-yo. The yo-yo had a glow about it, and had very sharp ends on the weight. So sharp, it could cut even swords in half. The wire that connected the handle to the weight, was made out of an unbreakable metal, and was equally as sharp as the blades on the weight, however it was still as versatile, if not more versatile, than a normal yo-yos. The boy thrusted the yo-yo forth, and to his surprise, it collected the wind as it moved forward. A sphere of wind gathered around the yo-yo as it extended, and threw the wind forward as it hit it's maximum distance. The sphere sliced directly through the heavy metal walls of the swordsmith's house, and cut down a tree in the distance. Shikizaki said, "Would you please do that once more, however, I will attack you this time." The boy did as Shikizaki asked, and threw his yo-yo forth. Shikizaki released a blast of fire the same rank as the sphere toward the yo-yo. As the wind hit the fire, they both dispersed perfectly. The yo-yo's immense speed repelled the oxygen within the path of the orb, creating a vacuum ball. With no oxygen to burn the flame, the wind was on an equal playing field with the fire. The boy left the shack, and went to the battlefield. From that day forth, he was known as "God's right hand."
    Note: The orb takes up one jutsu per turn, and is A ranked.
    Note: Both the weight and the cord are unbreakable
    Note: The Yo-Yo can be used as a medium for all wind jutsus up to S-Rank
    Note: Wind jutsus used with the yo-yo become on par with fire jutsus of the same rank, due to the "vacuum" like properties of the yo-yo.
    Note: Weight looks like

    X-Declined-X Okay i personally dislike to over complicate things but there are way too many ways this weapon could prove to be over powered. So i've made up Limitations you need to add. Otherwise it is a DNR without arguments
    Limitations:
    -Can Only flow wind chakra in the string and yo-yo. And the only technique you could perform through the weapon are those that involve slicing, blades of wind or wind tornadoes. Not the ones that push or create a pressure.
    -The strings length is 5m, and the string is very durable and will not break apart from presssure, being burned or despersed damage from lightning or wind techniques, but it can easily be torn with a technique precisely aimed tearing it.
    (Reason is: Indestrutible string is kinda similar to the idea of monomolecular strings being used as weapons. If you just add wind chakra to this it could literally slice through most objects with ease. There is definite length because, the yo-yo also increases the effect range of your techniques, 5m is the max that should be allowed. Increasing the length further would also increase the over all speed of the Yo-Yo and i dont need to explain why ._. )
    -While it removes winds weakness against fire, it also removes the winds strength against lightning. (Meaning: S rank Wind=S rank Fire=S rank Lightning, and lol well dont get the wrong idea its not actually a limit youre always free to perform wind techniques without your weapon)
    -Can only be used by the dominant hand. The users hands/fingers are damaged from stress of using the yo-yo. Constant use makes the hand numb for a turn. Over usage renders the hand un-usable for the rest of the battle.

    Besides that, remove the damage and add a chakra cost of 20/turn. And this is only usable by you alone.
    Make your newer description nice, clean and easily understandable.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Dropping this bio in the quote below(link if you like--->http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...74#post5404674) for the one below if approved.

    -Snake Tail (Hebi No O)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Hebi No O(Short version:Hebi) was after Dei Dei made is stretchable scarf. He made this sword whip out of the same material just more stronger. Hebi is a 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread that is a very strong material, making Hebi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Dei Dei swordsmanship. Hebi's guard and handle remain the same as a normal katana. While Hebi can be stretched to incredible lengths in its whip form, Dei Dei has a limit of three consecutive attacks before having to bring the segments of Hebi back together for recovery -which makes him fairly vulnerable during this time interval. To make up for this, Dei Dei has to have a plan ahead of time. It is also wrapped in bandages when not in use and the bandages is attached on the hilt which acts on the user will.

    -Mid range is the limit it can reach
    -It can be used three times back to back when it is stretched out. After the third use it has to retract to recover for one turn.
    -Only used by Dei Dei



    (This sword just acts the same as in Bleach but without it going to long range.)

    Dropping this http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=4663 weapon for the one above if it gets approved.

    I took out the bold part the mod had bolded. It really didn't mean anything but oh well it is out now.

    ±± Approved ±± Yeah it did actually. It meant you could grow your sword segments almost without limit. lol
    The Pure White Suit (Za Junsuina Shiro Sutsu)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This suit is an all white suit with a hat to match. The suit looks like a normal suit but really is a symbiotic suit. The whole suit even the hat is connected to the user's chakra system. The whole suit feeds off the user's chakra. The suit stays white as long as the user has chakra it can drain. The suit starts fading when the user is starting to run low on chakra. The suit allows the user to use it for his own uses but the suit could act on its own. The hat is sharp around the edges like a sharp kunai. The suit can block B rank and below attacks. Since the suit uses the chakra the suit repairs its self which also make it hard to get to the user actual body. The suit can project needs into the user's mind. The suit when the user is where the hat can block the user's mind from B rank and below genjutsu because this is to aid the user in an exchange for the user allowing the suit drain chakra.
    -Blocking B rank and below attacks count as one of the three moves per turn.
    -The suit itself cost 15 chakra points per turn



    X-Declined-X DNR. Sorry..

    Music Notes (Ongaku nōto)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This attack is based off of chakra manipulation and shape manipulation. The user whistles and channeling chakra through their mouth. While whistling the user is channeling chakra, the user shapes the chakra into musical notes. This makes physical chakra notes. The notes come out fast but not sound fast. They come out slightly faster like throwing a kunai by whatever the user rank is. The notes are 3 feet in height and two feet wide. The notes also blue and the shape depends on the note the user plays.
    -Only used fives per battle
    -Must wait one turn to use again
    -Only six notes per jutsu

    X-Declined-X Vague description, i didnt get it. And well i think its similar to a multitude of existing techniques. So fix that
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Bengal Tiger
    Scroll Owner: SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: not yet!
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    note: This isn't just tiger, its specific bengal tiger. Tiger contract has not yet been made but lion and cat!

    X-Pending-X Well it might be sub specie but from what i know it is merely a regional difference nothing genetic. Even so it would still be too similar to the tigers. Leaving for another mod


    (Kuchiyose Gava) - Summoning Gava

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After making few handseals the user summons a giant and heavy crow named GAVA, who shows no mercy on his opponent and use powerful wind attacks. he looks like a big Raven with white eyes, which is extremely powerful and battle type,he can use powerful attacks with his beak and his wings, it has sharp edge beak which is able to pass through the solid rock defenses also has very strong claws, strong enough to carry away other summonings [depend on the weight/size of other summoning] user can ride on his back to use combos.he has got very fast speed and also has very loud noise which can disturb/distract the opponent, it is able to fly high in the sky where opponent's jutsu's are unreachable.

    - Can be summon twice a battle.
    - Can only use Wind jutsu and up to F rank.
    - Able to pass through A rank wind attacks



    (Kuchiyose karasu Xee) - Summoning Crow Xee

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:After making needed handseals, user summons a crow named XEE.He is extremely violent and badass fighter.He has crystal white eyes and full black body.As compare to boss Gava, he's a little small in size but more faster than him.He has double sized wings as compare to his body that makes him move quickly and dodge many speedy and sudden attacks as well as gives him incredible speed and makes him undetectable by naked eye and even harder for a doujutsu user to detect.His specialty is casting genjutsus, thats why he's feared by all in crows world as illusion master and Illusion sage.he posses the same ability as Itachi, and can put his opponent/s under genjutsu just by moving his any part of the body without making the target even realize it.Due to his body size,pattern and speed, he is able to pass through up to A rank (wind, water and fire) techs with very minor or no injuries and can reach up into the sky where enemy's jutsu can't reach and then come back to the ground in no time.

    • CAn be summon once per battle.
    • User can't ride on him.
    • Itachi/User can control him through sharingan and use sharingan jutsu (genjutsu) through him.
    • User can't use the genjutsu tech in the same turn (exception of summoning's genjutsu).

    Abilities:

    • Can only cast genjutsu,can cast upto Forbidden rank.
    • Can cast genjutsu from long range.
    • Can cast genjutsu from his reflection (water, ice mirror etc).
    • Can cast by his hole body.

    X-Declined-X Both declined. Proof you have a crow contract?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Jigoku no kawaki) Fire Release: Thirst of Hell
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user preforms a single hand seal and then extend their dominant hand towards the enemy. Then the user releases his fire chakra into the atmosphere. Then by manipulating their chakra, the user makes all the water molecules in the atmosphere around the enemy to evaporate making the atmosphere too hot (only around the enemy). This would make all the water justus used by the opponent to be weakened by one rank (as heat would evaporate the water). If the opponent fails to counter this jutsu in that turn, then the user by manipulating his chakra further, in the next turn starts evaporating all the water in the opponent's body thus making him feel dizzy, slowing down his movements, and ultimately killing him (due to lack of water in his body) in the process.

    Note: If the jutsu is successful the first time, then the jutsu has to be posted again the second time.(for the next effect)
    Note: The jutsu lasts for 3 turns.
    Note: If used too close to the user, the user gets half the damage.
    Note: Should have mastered fire to use this technique.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Can only be used/taught by Flash07

    X-Declined-X Due to various reasons like existing techniques, existing elements and existing custom elements. DNR

    (Doton: Daichinoikari ) Earth Release: Rage of Earth
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: By concentrating his doton chakra into the earth, the user creates several spears of rocks from the ground and shoots it towards the opponent. The spears are about 1.5 to 2 meters in length. The thickness may vary according to the user's manipulation. These spears can be shot to reach upto 500 meters above the ground. The height upto which these spears can be shot are directly proportional to the time taken/distance covered by those spears inside the earth surface.For short distances, these spears shoot up very fast (instantaneously). Due to the force with which these spears are launched, they can easily penetrate through most of the defences.

    Note: The user has to keep atleast any one of his hands on the ground for the jutsu to be executed.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

    X-Declined-X B rank? Atleast make it S, usable once per battle and remove the instant part.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    [Genjutsu: Henshoku Assarishita]- Fading Light
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive | Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user utilizes his chakra to cast an illusion upon the opponent almost unnoticable. The opponent, when inside the genjutsu see's everything as before for about 3 seconds when he/she suddenly experiences a seizure in his entire body and feels excess palpation, that causes him to loose sight of things around him. In real, the opponent is already down on the ground and is unable to move.
    Note: Can only be used thrice

    X-Declined-X i get what you want with but the description is too vague.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Avenger- View Post
    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Sin kitahankyuu Kaze no ousama) Summoning Technique: Sin King of Northern Winds
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Sin a giant bustard and King of the Northern winds and one of the oldest bustard. He is 25 feet tall and is capable of using wind element up to A rank, and one S rank jutsu per battle. The user can fly on his back at fast speeds with great manouverbility providing the user with good aerial skills and making them a hard target to hit. Sin is also the fastest among all bustards. Sin is also capable of summoning a strong current of wind up to A rank power by flapping his wings and send the blast at the opponent(s). He is also capable of using his wings, beak and his long legs as extra means of attacks.

    Note: Wind Current can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 5 turns max.
    Note: Any other techniques used by Sin count towards the users move count.
    Note: Can carry only one person on his back as a result of his fast speed.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    why long range?

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Tiamat Umi no Megami) Summoning technique: Tiamat The Sea Goddess
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Tiamat is a white with sea greenish feathered bustard. The color of her feather is due to her affinity towards water element and hence called as Sea Goddess. She is capable of using water element up to the user's rank(The user requires to waive hand seals, if any for her). She is capable of shooting blasts of water bullets at the enemy (equivalent to A rank) from her mouth. She has also trained herself to use her beak and legs for attacking her opponents (and other summons).

    Note: Can be summoned once.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
    Note: Her abilities can only be used 3 times.
    Note: Tiamat's techniques count towards the users move count.
    Note: Can carry two persons on her back.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    same as above

    (Kuchoiyse no jutsu: Nisroch & Ninlil) Summoning Technique: Nisroch & Ninlil
    Type Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range:Short- mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A(60 for feather Strike)
    Description: The user summons the two twin Bustards Nisroch & Ninlil, who are known for their teamwork. Being twin brother and sister, they are of exactly the same size i.e. 12 feet in height and fly with great manouverbility. Nisroch specializes in fire and Ninlil in wind, and they both can use up to B rank jutsu. They have trained themselves to use their attacks in combination with each other. Also they both are able to shoot feathers infused with their respective chakra at high velocity from their fingered wing tips that can even pierce through rocks.

    Note: can be summoned twice and lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Can only shoot feathers 3 times per battle.
    Note: The summons cannot use feather strike and elemental techniques in same turn.
    Note: can carry one person each.

    Link to approval.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    why mid range?



    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Sin kitahankyuu Kaze no ousama) Summoning Technique: Sin King of Northern Winds
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Sin a giant bustard and King of the Northern winds and one of the oldest bustard. He is 25 feet tall and is capable of using wind element up to A rank, and one S rank jutsu per battle. The user can fly on his back at fast speeds with great manouverbility providing the user with good aerial skills and making them a hard target to hit. Sin is also the fastest among all bustards. Sin is also capable of summoning a strong current of wind up to A rank power by flapping his wings and send the blast at the opponent(s). He is also capable of using his wings, beak and his long legs as extra means of attacks.

    Note: Wind Current can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 5 turns max.
    Note: Any other techniques used by Sin count towards the users move count.
    Note: Can carry only one person on his back as a result of his fast speed.

    X-Approved-X

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Tiamat Umi no Megami) Summoning technique: Tiamat The Sea Goddess
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Tiamat is a white with sea greenish feathered bustard. The color of her feather is due to her affinity towards water element and hence called as Sea Goddess. She is capable of using water element up to the user's rank(The user requires to waive hand seals, if any for her). She is capable of shooting blasts of water bullets at the enemy (equivalent to A rank) from her mouth. She has also trained herself to use her beak and legs for attacking her opponents (and other summons).

    Note: Can be summoned once.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
    Note: Her abilities can only be used 3 times.
    Note: Tiamat's techniques count towards the users move count.
    Note: Can carry two persons on her back.

    X-Declined-X Well you cant perform hand seals for each other, that isn't allowed. Collaboration ninjutsu is fine but better explain that in the description.

    (Kuchoiyse no jutsu: Nisroch & Ninlil) Summoning Technique: Nisroch & Ninlil
    Type Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A(60 for feather Strike)
    Description: The user summons the two twin Bustards Nisroch & Ninlil, who are known for their teamwork. Being twin brother and sister, they are of exactly the same size i.e. 12 feet in height and fly with great manouverbility. Nisroch specializes in fire and Ninlil in wind, and they both can use up to B rank jutsu. They have trained themselves to use their attacks in combination with each other. Also they both are able to shoot feathers infused with their respective chakra at high velocity from their fingered wing tips that can even pierce through rocks.

    Note: can be summoned twice and lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Can only shoot feathers 3 times per battle.
    Note: The summons cannot use feather strike and elemental techniques in same turn.
    Note: can carry one person each.
    Note: Cannot use any other summon while they are active.
    Link of approval.

    X-Approved-X Added a restriction
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ninjutsu:Hakushi Purinsesu Kyuushuu) Paper Princess Revenge
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Range
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user does tiger handseal and confuses his chackra into hundreds pieces of paper and explosive tags, which turns into little spikes pointing into the enemy and lauches and him with the full power. In the attack, The explosive tags sticks to the opponent and explodes after 10 seconds.
    Restrictions: -Can be only though by custom Paper user bio, or a Konan bio.
    -Must have Paper body technique on.

    X-Approved-X Dont know what got in to me lately ._.

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    (Ninjutsu: Hakushi Karada Gihou) Paper Body Technique
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user confuses his own chackra and turns his body into paper. While in this mode, the user is still avaible to move and he can cast only 1 jutsu while in this mode.
    Restrictions: -Can only be though by Me or Someone else who learnt it.
    -Cannot have other armor on.
    -Lasts for 3 turns.

    X-Declined-X Canon technique

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    Summoning Animal: Koala bears
    Scroll Owner: Natsu(me)
    Other Users who have signed contract: none
    Summoning Boss if existing:
    Taichou Genki-dama Boss Genki-dama
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user summons a Big Koala bear with 9 swords on its back. While user has this animal in the battle, He can only use 1 jutsu(non-summoning), and he cant summon any other animals.
    Restrictions: -Lasts for three turns

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a
    Description and Background: The koala bears were originally found in a big rainforest. people used to egzaminate them since they were such a cute creatures. but when third ninja world war breaked out, shinobis made a contract to help them fight.

    Summoning tattoo will directly be posted in bio:

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    X-Pending-X Leaving for another mod
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 10 if cut, 15 if stabbed, 20 if tips of fingernails hit you.
    Description: Killua will pour chakra into his fingers, and mold them into claws sharper than kunai. He can use them to cut or stab his opponents. He can focus chakra into the tips of his fingernails to shoot them out at his opponents at a speed equivalent to that of a thrown kunai. He then pours in more chakra so that the nails grow back.

    Restrictions:

    Can only be used by killua
    Can only launch tips of finger nails once per turn.




    X-Declined-X Follow the proper template: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post5638984
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kasai rirīsu: Kasai bīmu) | [ Fire release: Ultimate Fire beam ]

    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user makes the hand seals Snake > Sheep > Boar > Dragon > Tiger before places on of his palms behind the other in a X shape, and faces it out towards where the opponent is. The user then stands firm and channels enormous amount of katon chakra in his front palm. After a while, the user releases a concentrated fire (similar to the picture in the spoiler), and by giving using shape manipulation, the user gives it the shape of a beam (See spoiler). The concentrated fire beam is flexible so the user can change it's intended trajectory, however he can't make the fire beam do a 180 degree turn -the max is 90 degrees. When it hits an object of some sort that puts pressure on the beam, the beam would explode.

    ┼ The user cannot move while using this jutsu

    ┼ The user cannot use any other jutsu's, including substitution jutsu.

    ┼ The user cannot be in the air while doing this jutsu.

    ┼ The user cannot turn the fire beam more than 90 degrees to a direction.

    ┼ Can't use B-Rank above for the next two turns.

    ┼ Movement is slowed down dramatically due to exerting a large proportional amount of his chakra in one go.

    ┼ Can only be used/taught by UchihaMadara01

    Before you decline this, please look at the spoiler first.




    X-Declined-X Um well idk.. ask a sensei to explain
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Zantaiyou) Chain slayer.
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid.
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Zantaiyou is a medium handle straight katana. there is a small chain atteched in the end of the katana. the katana was found in a cave of Amegakure. though the sword was very old, there was no scratch on it, proving that the sword was created with high quality metal.
    Abilities:

    - due to the high quality metal it's almost indestructible.
    - increases the range of (Suiton: Suihachi) – Water Release: Hand of waves jutsu upto mid range if performed with the sword instead of the users hand. since with every slash the water will gain extra speed while releasing. but the rank of the jutsu remain unchanged. (specialty of the sword).
    - normally the sword can cut through things which are less hard than steal. but using (Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword technique it can cut things up to as hard as steel.

    -since it's a light katana, heavy claymore type sword is it's weakness. though it can block against anything to a degree of course.
    - anything capable of breaking through metal is it's weakness.
    -Requires the user to know water and lightning natures.
    Note: can only be used by Shin Kaito.



    X-Approved-X Added a part, nothing important really
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    Summoning Animal: Griffon Vulture
    Scroll Owner: Shin Kaito
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: not yet.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: not yet.
    Description and Background: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Griffon_Vulture

    Griffon Vulture (Gyps fulvus) is a large species of bird of prey. like the summons in narutoverse the size of the Griffon Vulture varies. the larger one among the Griffon Vulture is large enough to carry a person on his back while flying with little effort (almost the same size of sasuke's hawk that he summoned during the battle with danzo). they are also capable of using jutsu of one element according to their natural affinity.



    while signing the contract a tattoo will be placed on the bio.




    X-Declined-X Get permission from the holder of the Vultures contract.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton: Doragon Za Sora (Lighting Style: Dragon of the sky)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user channels his/her chakra to his/her mouth. The user will then mold the chakra and turn it into Raiton chakra. The user will then expel the Raiton chakra from the mouth and as it leaves the users mouth the user will continue to mold the chakra into the form of a dragon. The large Lighting Dragon will continue its way to the enemy and before it reaches the enemy (or when the user see's its time) the user will then change the pattern, and size of the Raiton chakra dragon into much smaller ones that go into different directions striking the enemy from all sides.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Cant use another Raiton attack during the same move that this is used
    ~Can only be used 3 times during battle

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to countless existing techniques.

    Yo-yo
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra If special technique is activated
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description:
    Originally made as a weapon, the Yo-yo was created back in the medieval times and was all metal. It was 2 circular piece's (like the yo-yo's of today) with spikes on the sides connected to a wire that was attracted to a glove. When you used it, it would come back to your hand. It was used as a weapon because it was fast, deadly, and returned to you. This yo-yo however (same design) is quit different. When the user "throw" the yo-yo and it reaches full length (and if the user wants to launch the shurikens) shurikens fly out of the sides out of slits in the yo-yo. Using the yo-yo's extremely fast spin while at full length it launches the shurikens from the sides at regular speed. The Yo-yo itself is made out of Titanium and the wire is made out of a Titanium alloy making it incredibly strong and almost unbreakable. It can hold 5 shurikens on each side and by simply pressing a button on the right side of the yo-yo the inner compartment ejects out making it easier to replace the shurikens if needed by inserting a special clip in.
    Special technique: By making the dragon hand sign with the yo-yo in the user's hand and by channeling small amounts of Raiton chakra into the yo-yo itself the next time the user extends the yo-yo to full length and release the shurikens they will be stronger, sharper, and un-seeable by the naked eye. By channeling Raiton Chakra into the yo-yo it not only makes the shurikens sharper, and stronger but also faster than ever before. Because of the Raiton Chakra inside the yo-yo, the yo-yo's mechanism to spin the yo-yo fast is "super charged" making it spin ever faster causing the shurikens to go even faster as well. The speed of the shurikens with Raiton chakra is like how fast someone moves with Raiton armor on, and because they are small and going that fast its nearly un-dodgeable.
    ~This weapon above can only be used by Kwalker394
    ~Only 1 extra clip can be used during one battle
    ~Cant use a Raiton attack for 2 turns after this weapons special technique is activated
    ~Special technique can only be used once during battle

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    Titanium reference needs to be removed. Invisible shurikens? No.

    Suiton: Taikai Sadou (Water Style: Ocean Movement)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    The user channels and molds chakra into the user's hand's. The user will then (by a source of water) "grab" a large amount of water and throw it into the air or at the enemy. The impact of the water will not only feel like a brick wall but can also flood the battle field for a few moments by the sheer amount of water used.
    (Like what Jinbei *from One Piece* did during the war while trying to save Ace. He threw a ocean's current into the air .)
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used twice during battle
    ~Can be used against the user if the enemy use's a Raiton attack while the water is still in the user's hands

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-21-2012 at 03:31 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    [Suiton : Sōdaina mizu no Fenikkusu ] - Water Release : Grand Water Phoenix
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: A more advance version of Johninto's original water phoenix the user will focus all their suiton chakra into the sky. When they have enough chakra in the sky they start to crate a giant phoenix that is the half the size of Gamabunta. When the phoenix is form it will explode into a large barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Abumanre bugs and will come down onto the opponent with such great force that even if they were underground up to 3 meters underground the phoenixes would still break through and do minor damage like breaking a little into the skin but not do faultily damage. Since the phoenixes are made up of the user chakra they will remain unharmed.
    Note:Can only be used once in a battle
    Note: Cannot use any water jutsus for the next turn
    Note: It takes a jutsu move to form unless its already raining.
    Note: Has to be taught by Johninto Uchiha
    I made this jutsu in the old thread and just making a lightning version now Heres the link to the approval http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...ix#post5496176

    [Raiton : Gurandoraitoningufenikkusu ] - Lightning Release : Grand Lightning Phoenix
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Just like Korra's Grand Water Phoenix Jutsu but with lightning the user will focus all their raiton chakra into the sky. When they have enough chakra in the sky they start to create a giant phoenix that is the half the size of Gamabunta made of lightning. When the phoenix is form it will explode into a large barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Abumanre bugs and will come down onto the opponent with such great force that even if they were underground up to 5 meters underground the phoenixes would still break through and do minor damage like breaking a little into the skin but not do faultily damage. Since the phoenixes are made up of the user chakra they will remain unharmed.
    Note:Can only be used once in a battle
    Note: Cannot use any lightning jutsus for the next turn
    Note: It takes 2 jutsu moves to form unless its already thundering.
    Note: Has to be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Every mini phoenix isnt S rank.
    Changed the depth it can reach since its Raiton

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Remove the unless its already thundering reference. And this would damage you if you get caught.

    Reaper Scythe Arts: Reaper's Heart (Sishen Liandao Yishu: Shinigami no shinzō )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After the user throws their scythe at the opponent while still being attached to their chain they will use their chakra to create clones of the scythes(like Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu) that are all still attached to the user chain making it harder for the opponent to dodge due to the scythes covering a wider range.
    Note: Needs to be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Usable 4 times
    Note: Can only create up to 10 Scythe clones

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    Reduce to 5 scythes, remove damage (the technique in itself doesn't do damage, it increases the number of scythes...) and reduce range to mid. Can't be use 4 times. Make it 3 times. And, I checked this but I shouldn't have since there is no link to the approved CFS. Don't forget it next time.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-21-2012 at 03:36 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Bunny
    Scroll Owner: Ouacus
    Other Users who have signed contract: none for now o.O
    Summoning Boss if existing:Soel
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Soel) -Summoning Technique-Soel
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user take out his blood, then user slams his palm to the floor to summon Soel .Soel is a white bunny with a red gem in his forehead similar to his twin bunny brother. Although he looks weak and harmless, he is extremely storng for his size. He can do up to A-rank fire jutsu.

    Soel

    Note:
    -can only be taught by Ouacus
    -Stays on the field for 5 turns and can only be summoned twice per match
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Soel) -Summoning Technique-Soel
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user take out his blood, then user slams his palm to the floor to summon Soel .Soel is a white bunny with a red gem in his forehead similar to his twin bunny brother. Although he looks weak and harmless, he is extremely storng for his size. He can do up to S-rank fire jutsu.

    (Changed the boss of the contract's rank)

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    ±± Declined ±±
    On resubmissions you need to bold the changes you do. Also, link to the post where the contract was approved and the summoning was approved.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-21-2012 at 03:38 PM.

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