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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Suiton: Ekitai Tojikome) - Water Release: Liquid Imprisonment
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user claps his hands together and materializes about four thousand dense water cubes around the target. The cubes are 4 feet wide and are all linked together with cords of water. On command the user can make the cords retract and pull all of the cubes towards each other, crushing anyone caught between them. The cubes may be spread over a wide range to target multiple opponents This jutsu can also be used to create a defensive wall.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No other water jutsu on the same turn

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    not enough restrictions and needs you to specify and develop the description a bit more.

    (Himitsu Kassō Hōhō) - Secret Gliding Method
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15 (+5 each turn active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This jutsu gets its basis from the technique a shinobi uses to walk across the surface of water. To perform it the user must emit a constant stream of chakra from the bottom of his feet which will make him hover just above the surface of the ground. The user then proceeds to emit stronger chakra streams from any side of his feet to act as a propellant and allow the user to seemingly skate across the ground. This can be done without moving but the user can gain speed faster by moving his body in a similar fashion to an ice skater. While on a level surface, the user can reach sprinting speed in 8 seconds if only propelled by chakra. Of course, this technique works on water as well.
    -Lasts up to 5 turns

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    (Suiton: Ekitai Tojikome) - Water Release: Liquid Imprisonment
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user claps his hands together and materializes about four thousand semi-solid water cubes around the target that remain stationary when in the mid-air. The cubes are 4 feet wide and each one is linked to other cubes by strong cords made of water. By performing the Boar handseal, the user can make the cords retract and pull all of the cubes towards each other, crushing anyone caught between them. When they are all together, they form a large structure resembling part of a castle but become unable to stay in the air. The cubes may be spread over a maximum area 50 meters in diameter to target multiple opponents. This jutsu can also be used to create a defensive wall by creating the cubes in the form of the finished structure without pulling them together.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No other water jutsu on the same turn
    -No A-rank or higher water jutsu next turn

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    Too big. 50 meters is too much. This would span about mid range around the target you intend to catch. And the cubes need to be smaller to account to that. The structure you define as a castle... Its too big and too much. And 4 thousand cubes? Again, too much. Make this reasonable. The best option of this working would be to create 8 cubes, forming a large cubic prison around your target, where water cords stretch from cube to cube.

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    (Suiton: Ekitai Jikkō) - Water release: Liquid Execution
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user manipulates a water source and creates two crescent-shaped blades similar to guillotines that are directed towards a target at a fast pace that slash him from two directions. The blades are very sharp and can cut through stone, but not B-rank earth jutsu. The size of the blades depends on the amount of water used to create them. When used against a fire jutsu, the blades can divide the fire and douse it at the same time.
    -Usable 4 times per battle

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar techniques exist.

    Based on the second jutsu in the quote above:

    (Hishō) - Soaring
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 (+5 each turn active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: While Secret Gliding Method is active, the user emits several additional streams of chakra from not only his legs but his torso and arms as well. This will boost his speed and give him adept control of his movements through manipulation of the streams. The streams can help the user jump higher and further while allowing him to change direction in mid-air. Only those with the tracking speed of a doujutsu user can follow the user's speed. The effects of this jutsu can be increased if used more than once.
    -Usable 4 times per battle
    -Lasts up to 2 turns

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    Don't resubmit. Similar to existing techniques, namely 2 hyuuga customs.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-21-2012 at 03:45 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Shizuo.. View Post
    Fuuton: Chibikazebenso - (Wind Release: Tiny Wind Defense)
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs two handseals, thus coating their entire body in chakra. At that point, any time something tangible (minus whatever they’re walking on) gets within an foot of their body, a tiny burst of air will move out to block and try and displace the attack. This technique is used against object like techniques such as arrows, swords, or anything else. The burst of winds quickly rushes pushing out into the distance knocking all that gets close enough away from the user, to keep the user safe.
    -Note: Lasts for 4 turns
    -Note: May be only usable once.

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    Why does this do damage? What would be the effect of this on an enemy in range?
    Fuuton: Chibikazebenso - (Wind Release: Tiny Wind Defense)
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 (-10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs two handseals, thus coating their entire body in chakra. At that point, any time something tangible (minus whatever they’re walking on) gets within an foot of their body, a tiny burst of air will move out to block and try and displace the attack. This technique is used against object like techniques such as arrows, swords, or anything else. The burst of winds quickly rushes pushing out into the distance knocking all that gets close enough away from the user, to keep the user safe.
    -Note: Lasts for 3 turns
    -Note: May be only usable thrice.
    -Note: Only works on small to medium tangible objects.

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    Last edited by Scorps; 10-21-2012 at 03:47 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Densetsu no Kamei Gigei: Taisa) Legendary Command Art: Colonel
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: +X to Kenjutsu/Command Arts
    Description: A Command Art like no other, created specifically by Keotsu for himself. His blade Mythos is the perfect blade to use the Command Arts, since they embody the blade used to perform them, and so Keotsu created this technique to form the final synergistic link between his blade and the Command Arts, and thus the entirety of Kenjutsu. Keotsu will perform a Kenjutsu technique (for example, the Samurai Sabre Skill) and completely absorb its power into Mythos, for the remainder of the battle. Using our example of the SSS, Keotsu will have an additional +60 to all his techniques used through Mythos, and they will gain an equivalent in strength to the technique sacrificed. For example, the SSS can easily shatter stone, and such force will be added to every swing of Mythos. This technique is regarded as the ultimate ability of Mythos. It’s said that this technique is the embodiment of all of Keotsu’s beliefs and experiences, in that becoming a “Colonel”, he finally takes Command over destiny.
    *The “sacrificed” technique cannot be used for the rest of the battle.
    *The technique cannot be elemental.
    *In the turn this is used, the only other technique that can be used is the “sacrificed” technique.
    *Only useable by Keotsu, as it requires Mythos.
    *Only one technique is allowed to be used in the following turn.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Ridiculously OPed.

    (Derutareiejji) Delta Ray Edge
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 13 per strike
    Description: A high ranking Kenjutsu technique composed of six strikes delivered at incredible speeds. The user will focus chakra into their blade, creating a red glow, while simultaneously focusing chakra into their feet. The user will first slash the opponent with a simple horizontal slash, causing a thick red line to hang in the air; then, launching forward at an angle, they will strike past with another horizontal strike, ending directly behind the opponent some distance away. Then, pivoting 180 degrees, they will repeat the motion, with both slashes creating red lines as well. The result is the opponent taking three slashes, and a red triangle forming in the air around them. The Triangle will then “compress”, having all three chakra lines collapse in towards the enemy, dealing another three slashes instantly; this is the more dangerous part of the technique, as even if the three initial slashes are blocked, the triangle can still form, and thus is great for causing damage to enemies who block a lot.
    *Useable once.
    *3:20 of this video.

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    Explanation needs a revamp.

    (ZX Basutā: Ippan Buki Souken) ZX Buster: Universal Weapon Creation
    Rank: C-A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: Listed
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is the base foundation for the weapon creation abilities needed to use ZX Buster effectively. Using the ZX Buster gloves alloted to the students of these arts, and by overcharging the chakra metal in the gloves it causes the leaked chakra to be dragged along with it, as this is the fundamental concept ZX Buster. By using chakra manipulation, the user can mold the "leaked" chakra into the form of various weapons that are stated below (with the chakra costs for that weapon according to size).

    Lists of weapons and their cost: Wrist Dagger(Chakra cost 10), Tonfa (Chakra Cost 20), Bladed Tonfa (Chakra Cost 25), Sword (Chakra Cost 30).

    *Jutsu must be posted everytime weapon is chosen/changed and counts as one of the 3 alloted moves of the turn.
    *For each glove, single weapons such as the Tonfa (bladed or otherwise), Dagger, or sword can be creates in a pair or one weapon for each hand; meaning, a bladed tonfa can be created on both arms with a single activation.
    *Only useable by people who study the ZX Buster Style.
    *ZX Buster Masters don't need the ZX gloves to use this technique.

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    creating chakra weapons and constructs have been done before countlesss times. I approved yor CFS and thisneeds some tweaks to make it approvable and in accordance to it. what are the properties of these weapons? can they be destroyed or overpowered? how? how long do they last. If they last more than the turn they are created, they need chakra to be spent to sustain it.
    (Densetsu no Kamei Gigei: Taisa) Legendary Command Art: Colonel
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: +X to Kenjutsu/Command Arts
    Description: A Command Art like no other, created specifically by Keotsu for himself. His blade Mythos is the perfect blade to use the Command Arts, since they embody the blade used to perform them, and so Keotsu created this technique to form the final synergistic link between his blade and the Command Arts, and thus the entirety of Kenjutsu. Keotsu will perform a Kenjutsu technique (for example, the Samurai Sabre Skill) and completely absorb its power into Mythos, for the remainder of the battle. Using our example of the SSS, Keotsu will have an additional +60 to all his techniques used through Mythos, and they will gain an equivalent in strength to the technique sacrificed. For example, the SSS can easily shatter stone, and such force will be added to every swing of Mythos. This technique is regarded as the ultimate ability of Mythos. It’s said that this technique is the embodiment of all of Keotsu’s beliefs and experiences, in that becoming a “Colonel”, he finally takes Command over destiny.
    *The “sacrificed” technique cannot be used for the rest of the battle, nor can it have been used previously in the battle to be qualified as a sacrifice.
    *The technique cannot be elemental.
    *In the turn this is used, the only other technique that can be used is the “sacrificed” technique.
    *Only useable by Keotsu, as it requires Mythos.
    *Though obvious, this is only useable by Samurai.
    *Only one technique is allowed to be used per turn in the following 3 turns, and none of it can be Kenjutsu (though freeform is still allowed).
    *Cannot be used until Keotsu has had five turns.

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    Still ridiculously OPed and unreasonable. And you know that i can't approve this specially taking into consideration all the boosts and added damage your other command arts and CW boost upon you.

    (Kamei Gigei: Tenretsujin) Command Art: Heaven Rending Blade
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 0
    Description: A technique created to "rend the Heavens themselves", this technique allows the user to destroy physical objects - specifically, weapons that would otherwise be indestructible, though it also works on physical attacks, like Doton techniques. Since all objects are composed of matter, which are in turn held together through atomic bonds, this jutsu works by coating the user's weapon or hand with chakra, which they then dispel into an object. Instead of breaking the bonds, which his how things normally break, this jutsu simply turns the bonds "off", by coating the atoms themselves with chakra. Because this affects the fundamental particles, this bypasses abilities of weapons, thus allowing it to destroy indestructible items or even those that would otherwise absorb chakra. However, objects affected by this technique take a full two seconds to "disintegrate" as the atoms are dispersed, thus giving it no value as a defensive technique, as the movement of the atoms will not be canceled.
    *While this does affect sentient weapons and the like, this does NOT affect organic matter, meaning it has no effect on humans.
    *Useable twice per battle.
    *Cannot be used again until five turns after its first usage.
    *This jutsu can be activated, and only "works" when the user releases the effect, allowing it to be held across turns for strategic purposes.
    *Requires physical contact (via the object infused with this technique) to destroy the object in question.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit.

    I am the Creator and holder of the Columbidae Contract.


    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose: Elizabeth) Columbidae Summoning: Elizabeth
    Rank: A
    Type: Summon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Elizabeth is a Columbidae Summon that accompanies Keotsu almost everywhere, and acts as the record holder for the Columbidae Contract, scouting out potential signers. While Elizabeth has no special abilities physically (being comparable to Keotsu in physical feats), Elizabeth does have the ability to Summon other Columbidae. Elizabeth also carries a large amount of Keotsu's Heavy Artillery Explosive Tags, making Elizabeth's main fighting style through Taijutsu and bomb usage. Unlike other Columbidae who have two definite forms (their avian and human forms), Elizabeth has a hybrid Columbidae/Human form. Elizabeth also carries a wooden sign around, which while also acting as a basic weapon, is what is used to preform the summonings.
    *If Elizabeth does not accompany Keotsu (or another contract signer) into battle, Elizabeth cannot appear in that battle.
    *Elizabeth's summonings are bound by the Summoning Rules.
    *Other than the Summonings, Elizabeth's only method of combat is through freeform.
    Keotsu and Elizabeth


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    ±± Declined ±±
    First, you need to summon her into battle. Only Inuzukas and special bios/clans can enter battle field with a companion. Second, the heavy artillery explosive tags, please link them.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-21-2012 at 03:54 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Hakumen View Post
    ⊰ [Genjutsu/Doton: Gyutto Rikiddo] - Illusion Technique/Earth Release: Hard Liquid ⊱
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal while channeling his own chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on the user causing him to see the user creating needles of earth that is summoned around his upper body in the air,which all attacks you at the same time stabbing you very badly,however that needles aren't made of earth they are made of water but the genjutsu trikes the opponent causing him to see the water needles,needles made of earth.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Zanshin
    Note: Must have a mastery over Illusion Techniques alongest with Earth Release

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    *If the needles are Water, why is this labeled as an earth release? Also, this can't be higher than B-Rank. Won't approve any long range genjutsu. This is essentially 2 techniques so it needs to count as such. And remove useless restrictions such as the one i colored.

    ⊰ [Genjutsu/Doton: Gyutto Rikiddo] - Illusion Technique/Earth Release: Hard Liquid ⊱
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal while channeling his own chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on the user causing him to see the user creating needles of earth that is summoned around all of his body ,which all attacks him at the same time stabbing him very badly,however that needles aren't made of earth they are made of water but the genjutsu trikes the opponent causing him to see the water needles made of earth.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-san
    Note: Counts as two moves

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    Don't resubmit.

    Quote Originally Posted by Hakumen View Post

    [Manipyureito Yougu/Suiton: Uesokudo Omokasui] - Manipulating tools/Water Release: Overrated Mainstream
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: Similar to "Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop" The user creates openings into the sky however instead of creating a single opening the user creates three opening into the sky,one opening above the opponent with 5 meters and one 5 meters from his left and one 5 meters from his right,the user uses each opening to summon different stuff,the user uses the opening above the user to create lots of water spikes that rains down on the opponent alongest with two big metal spikes,one on the right side of the water spikes and one on the left side of the water spikes and thus the metal spikes and the water spikes smashes the opponent from the above,the user uses the second opening that is on the opponent's right to summon lots of strong,sick and big strings made of metal that wraps around opponent from the front side,and at the same time the user uses the opening that is on the opponent's left side to summon lots of strong,sick and big string which is also made of metal that wraps around the opponent from his back,wrapping all of the opponent's body with sick string binding the opponent in his place and also inflicting damage to him due to the pressure that the strings will cause while being around the opponent,causing the opponent to be open for water and metal spikes that is coming from above.
    - Requires a mastery over Water Release
    - Requires a mastery over Manipulating Tools
    - Counts as two moves
    - The user won't be able to perform any Manipulating tools technique nor Water techniques at the same time
    - Counts as two moves
    - The user won't be able to perform Manipulating tools techniques nor Water techniques higher than A-rank
    - Can only be taught by Kàiten

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    Incorrect damage info. Didn't even bother to read the description as it suffers from the same issue as the first submission and if you don't bother to actually follow correct damage/chakra template then I won't bother to check this.

    [Manipyureito Yougu/Suiton: Uesokudo Omokasui] - Manipulating tools/Water Release: Overrated Mainstream
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: Similar to "Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop" The user creates openings into the sky however instead of creating a single opening the user creates three opening into the sky,one opening above the opponent with 5 meters and one 5 meters from his left and one 5 meters from his right,the user uses each opening to summon different stuff,the user uses the opening above the user to create lots of water spikes that rains down on the opponent alongest with two big metal spikes,one on the right side of the water spikes and one on the left side of the water spikes and thus the metal spikes and the water spikes smashes the opponent from the above,the user uses the second opening that is on the opponent's right to summon lots of strong,sick and big strings made of metal that wraps around opponent from the front side,and at the same time the user uses the opening that is on the opponent's left side to summon lots of strong,sick and big string which is also made of metal that wraps around the opponent from his back,wrapping all of the opponent's body with sick string binding the opponent in his place and also inflicting damage to him due to the pressure that the strings will cause while being around the opponent,causing the opponent to be open for water and metal spikes that is coming from above.
    - Requires a mastery over Water Release
    - Requires a mastery over Manipulating Tools
    - Counts as two moves
    - The user won't be able to perform any Manipulating tools technique nor Water techniques at the same time
    - Counts as two moves
    - The user won't be able to perform Manipulating tools techniques nor Water techniques higher than A-rank
    - Can only be taught by Kaito-san

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    Range? again, if you don't even follow proper template, why would i take my time to even read it?

    New submission:

    [Ninpō: Dearou Shukumei] - Ninja Arts: Will Of Fate
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user gathers a big amount of his pure chakra,following by channeling the chakra into every single cell inside his body,once the chakra gets channeled within the cells,the user uses the chakra to force the cells to work harder and harder,causing the cells to work more than it usually do and faster than it usually do,causing it's work to be from it's regular average work amount ,about 40% or so or so inside a fight to be 200% ,which gives the user boost to speed,physical attacks and activity which causes the user to perform Forbidden techniques and below without any draw backs that is mentioned in it.
    Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-san
    Note: Can not be used more than once per fight
    Note: Lasts for 3 turns
    Note: The boost to speed is x2 the user's speed
    Note: The Taijutsu boost is x2 the user's physic attacks
    Note: After this technique is deactivated the user can no longer use higher than B-rank attacks for the rest of the fight

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. And if you try to submit EIG rip offs and blunt rip off of techniques again like this, you'll face punishment on this thread.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-21-2012 at 03:56 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Sky Vongola Ring
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra:
    Damage:
    Description: Long ago, before the village hidden in the sand war former, there was a forge deep within the desert, one of the greatest forges ever know. It was in this forge that 7 rings were formed, the legendary Vongola rings, each with it's own unique attribute. The main ring is the Sky ring. As it was forged, a mass amount of Katon chakra was used making it a fire specialist ring which is indestructable. The ring has several unique abilities and seals within it. With the ring there comes a special bond to the one who weilds it. Who ever wants to wear and use the ring they must release their own blood into it to bind it to them. Not only that but there is a special belt with several boxes on it (as seen below). Over the years the users have sealed their chakra away into the ring, and many users have had this ring making it a special combination of many users fire chakra. This ring has several abilities:

    Dying Will Flame Summoning
    The user will release some of their chakra into the ring creating a flame that comes out of the ring, the user will then push the flame/ring into the hole in the box as their chakra and blood is released from the ring performing a summoning jutsu. This will summon one of their beasts of their contract but all the restrictions will apply, the user will have to post the summoning they use this is just an alternate method of the summoning. The user will have 10 boxes on their belt to represent their closest summonings for the contract.

    Dying Will Flame Boost
    The Pervy Sage once developed a jutsu that allows the users to increase the size and power of a fire jutsu, the Fire Expansion jutsu which normally would require two handseals. With the ring the user can release their chakra into it unleashing some of the chakra sealed within the ring to activate the jutsu itself, though the user will have to post the Fire expansion jutsu and it will count as one of the 3 jutsu per turns, the only difference is it's used through the ring and not handseals.

    Dying Will Flame Burst
    The user can activate the chakra within the ring so that the ring releases a burst of chakra through their body that is expelled in a short range burst of fire 360 degrees. This fire is S ranked, can only be used twice, and must wait 2 turns between uses. The user can't use water jutsu in the same turn. This counts as one of the users 3 jutsu per turn.

    Hyper Dying Will Flame mode
    In the most desperate of times, the user will be able to tap into the ring's chakra pool that has been build up by it's users over centuries releasing all the katon chakra into their body at once, when this happens the user will enter their Hyper Dying Will Flame mode. This activates like the (Muneisei Za chuushin) - Will power of the heart technique giving the user a boost in chakra and determination to beat the enermy, allowing them to ignore their injuries while it's active driven by the determination. When this is active the user wont be able to use water jutsu at all, but all their fire jutsu will give them a +10 boost. In addition to this, the user wont need handseals for their fire jutsu while it's active due to the mass of chakra pumped into their body by the ring. To symbolise the mode a flame will appear on the user's forehead as their eyes burn like fire. Once in this mode, the user can release one large bust of chakra into a fire jutsu they have released to remove it's weakness to water. The user becomes more resistant to fire in this mode and all fire jutsu of S rank and below lose one rank against them.

    Note: This mode lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can't be used with Gates or Sage mode
    Note: Once this ends the user will be worn out and not be able to use fire jutsu for 2 turns and wont be able to use above B rank in the next two turns.
    Note: Can't use water jutsu while it's active
    Note: Removing the elemental weakness counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn and while the mode as active the user can only use 2 jutsu per turn.
    Note: Can only be used twice, must wait 3 turns to use it again, after the second use the user passes out, and it counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn when activated.

    I put them in a spoiler because they are big images and annoying, though i know you don't like additional coding

    The ring:


    Ring activation:


    Boxes on belt:


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    ±± Declined ±±
    you need to link to the CW that you already have when submitting a new one.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user extend his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.

    Note :
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    - Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
    - Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    X-Declined-X Why is it A rank?
    (Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
    Damage points: 80
    Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form a monster called Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW can block water, wind and earth up to S rank if he uses the tendrils to create a shadow shield, in front of him. However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the users shadow.

    Note:
    - Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
    - Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
    - Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
    - Can Only be use twice
    - Last only 5 turns then auto vanished
    - Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
    - While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
    - After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.

    Picture of Shadow Dark Warrior


    X-Declined-X Its a Shadow. One, you're making it tangible be more reasonable of how you do it? I'll give it a go considering shadow tendrils are used to stab opponents. Two, its oped. Three, blocks matter based elements despite being a shadow. Four, Lasts too many turns.
    New Submission.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Folklore ability is able to deflect any bright light which the opponent releases and causing the bright light to turn back blinded the opponents. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire .

    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
    Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror



    X-Declined-X Explain the colored segment. And pick either the elemental abilities or the tool.

    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<


    Resubmitting

    (Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40

    Description: The user extends his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.

    Note :
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    - Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
    - Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    Note : Lowering the rank to become B-Rank and automatically edit the chakra cost also damage point


    (Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
    Damage points: 80
    Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation and shadow sewing jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form shape of a dark creature made of shadow with transparent shapehe (Shikaku) called it Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW immune from any cannon shadow jutsu, meaning that any shadow jutsu won’t work to trap the user shadow while activating SDW . However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques with similar rank. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the user shadow.

    Note:
    - Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
    - Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
    - Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
    - Can Only be use twice
    - Last only 2 turns then auto vanished
    - Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
    - While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
    - After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.

    Picture of Shadow Dark Warrior

    [spoiler]Note : One, I change it to intangible shaped. two, reduce it’s ability, three, change the blocking ability with only immune with cannon shadow jutsu. Four, reduce it’s turn, from 5 to 2 turn.[/spoiler

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu

    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
    Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror



    Note : I’ve added more explanation in the description which the mirror able to perform the unique ability of the evil Wombat Elder which is absorbing 3 elemental ninjutsu ( Wind, Fire and Water) by trapping the Evil Wombat Elder inside the mirror, it’ll be the same principle with the Manga when Minato Trap Kyubi inside Naruto. 2nd one, I’ve been erased the Tool abilities and choose the elemental ability only
    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<


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    Under the blue rule and by using Spoilers for something other than images/videos.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Tegatana no Jutsu) Hand-Sword Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user contracts all the muscles of his lower arm, and then envelops his lower arm with 2 reverce chakra curents, that create an edge on the outer arm. This way, the hardened part becomes as hard as Iron, and the lower arm can be used like a sword. The more advanced the user, the thiner becomes the edge, adding to it's cutting capacity.
    -If master level or higher, one can activate this technique on both hands.

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    Needs development and if its kept active, it means you need to expend chakra per turn to fuel it. Should have a duration limit.

    (Tagatana: Kaminari Sēji No Furasshu Ken) Tegatana: Sage of Thunder Flash Blade
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbiden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 50 (all if used a third turn)
    Damage: 90
    Description: The tegatana sage of raiton will focus all his Raiton chakra to his tegatana, wile pointing towards the opponent with his tegatana using hand, and will create a 10 meter length, invisible chakra pattern with it, in the shape of a katana. In less than a second, he will be able to release a huge 10 meter blade made of Raiton in front of him, by using the chakra pattern he created earlier. The blade is as thick as the user's body. The user must have activated the tegatana no jutsu first. Only a dojutsu user will be able to see the blade forming (though a sensor can predict it, due to the high raiton chakra concentration), as, to the naked eye, it will appear and disappear in a flash. The blade can flash at any moment during the turn activated and the following turn. If the user has not defeated the opponent by the time the second turn after activation ends, he will die from chakra draining (the user can't deactivate this jutsu). Wile this jutsu is active, the user can only use raiton jutsu that use no hand seals up to B-rank. Each time the user is releasing the sword, he will receive minor burns on his hand.

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    Ridiculously oped. And not even a single restriction. Next time you submit a forbidden rank CJ without restrictions I'll DNR it off the bat.

    (Raijin: Zeus Gekido) Lighting God: Zeus Wrath
    Type: Offensive-Deffensive
    Rank: Forbiden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (+50 per turn active)
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user will perform 3 hand seals, and envelop himself into lighting chakra, which will start rotating around him, releasing a cyan colored aura. The aura extends 20cm from the user. Lighting bolts will start appearing on the user's body that will cause him first degree burns. This aura can stop up to 2 S-rank jutsu before fading away. The aura stays activated for 2 turns (unless canceled). For this 2 turns, the user cannot use any other jutsu (only free-form taijutsu). Contact with the aura will numb the opponent completely. At any time, wile this jutsu is active, the user can release the raiton of this jutsu into a 3 meter diameter thick, focused lighting bolt by extending both arms towards the opponent, which will destroy everything in it's path (doing so will deactivate the jutsu). After deactivating it, the user won't be able to use higher than B-rank jutsu for 2 turns (due to loosing too much chakra previously), and won't be able to use more than 3 hand seal combos for the rest of the battle, as he has suffered 1rs degree burns, and it will hurt too much. Can only use once per battle.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon: Sono IjinKiga - ( Fire Release: The devils hunger)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user begins by performing the Snake-Tiger handseals, Once performed the user channels their fire chakra into each hand.The user hands becomes covered in a large blazing fireball that quickly transforms into a head of demonic monster with snapping jaws. The user then slams both of the heads on each side of the opponent trapping them in a blazing orb of fire that keeps them trapped as long as the user holds the snake handseal.

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    The user can't perform B rank or higher fire jutsu's in the next turn
    Can only be taught by -Cerberus-



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    Katon: Sono Gai, - ( Fire Release: The devils Scyth)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing the Tiger handseal, Once performed the user channels their fire chakra into each hand. The user then creates a large demonic looking scythe using shape manipulation. The handle of the scythe is roughly the same size as the users height, while the actual blade is twice the size of the user.
    The scythe has enough cutting potential to cut though several trees in a row.

    Note

    Can only be used twice in a battle
    The user can't perform B rank or higher fire jutsu's in the next turn
    Can only be taught by -Cerberus-



    X-Approved-X Edited a bit

    Summoning Animal: Dragonfly
    Scroll Owner: -Cerberus
    Other Users who have signed contract: None so far
    Summoning Boss if existing: To be created
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: To be created
    Description and Background:
    A dragonfly is an insect belonging to the order Odonata,
    It is characterized by large multifaceted eyes, two pairs of strong transparent wings, and an elongated body.Dragonflies are important predators that eat mosquitoes, and other small insects like flies, bees, ants, wasps, and very rarely butterflies. They are usually found around marshes, lakes, ponds, streams, and wetlands because their larvae, known as "nymphs",

    X-Pending-X I'll need to confirm if this doesn't exist, ill get back at this

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    (Suiton: U~ēbufōmu) - Water Release: Wave Form
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user first does the Serpent hand seal, right when his palms touch the user is now capable to use the water from his body and moves into a direction that he decides using a push from his legs, once the user pushes himself he Dissolves into water while maintaining a human figure dealing damage to everything in his wave.
    Notes:
    *Since the user uses water from his own body, right after using this technique, he is left a bit dehydrated and may not use any C Rank or above water Techniques for the next two turns.
    *Can only be taught by -Vasto Lorde-

    X-Declined-X Much like Suigetsu's moveset in Naruto Storm 2

    ( Fuuton: Aruku Dopple ) - Wind Release: DoppleWalk
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user charges forward towards his enemy, once he is in short range away from the target he utilizes his wind chakra to create a Semi image of himself for a brief moment (2-3 seconds) , during that time the user can attack with a very good succession rate due to the enemy being distracted for about 3 seconds ONLY.
    Notes:
    *A user with any Eye KG can see through the technique.
    *Can Only be Taught by -Vasto Lorde-

    X-Declined-X Help me here, why wont you prefer using the E rank clone technique which is a better option as they appear more real?

    ( Katon: Teikoku hi gādo ) - Fire Release: Imperial fire Guard
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user first does several Hand seals the last one being the Bird Hand seal, then gets on one knee and Releases a humongous amount of Fire chakra infront of him which forms a shield infront of him made of fire. The shield's size is enough to protect the user's whole body, if hit by a Large water technique then steam will rise. If wanted the user can release the shield which results in an A-Rank fire ball charging towards the target (counts as a move).
    Notes:
    *Can only be used by fire Specialists.
    *Can only be Taught By -Vasto Lorde-

    X-Approved-X Let me add: Since you didn't stated otherwise the technique follows the Elemental weakness and Rank chart(That being S-rank Fire release=A rank Water release and so on)
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    The Golem's Gauntlets
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 to infuse
    Damage points: +5 to hand based Taijutsu
    Description: A pair of black and gold metal gauntlets that cover the user's hands and forearms up to his elbow, forged by the finest blacksmith the land of earth had ever seen. The gauntlets are made of chakra reactive metal that allows it's wearer to quickly and easily infuse and store earth chakra in it in large amounts. Because the metal is chakra reactive while earth chakra is stored inside of it, it takes on additional qualities of the earth chakra, adding another layer of armor on to itself. The storage ability also allows the user to save earth chakra to infuse into his own earth techniques when needed. This large amount of stored chakra when released increases the rank of power to oridinary earth techniques by one.
    -Can't infuse extra chakra into Forbidden rank Earth technques.
    -Can only increase one earth technique every 5 turns.
    -Storing chakra counts as one of the user's 3 moves that turn.
    -Can only be worn by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Gloves are indestructable.

    eclined-X Previous weapon submission?

    (Genjutsu: Naiteki Oni )Illusionary Technique: Inner Demon
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user makes the Tiger seal and induces his foe into an illusion where they feel a sharp pain in their chest that pulses 3 times and then a demon version of the enemies upper half (similar to the sound 5's stage two curse mark forms) emerges from their chest staring at them then grabs the enemy around the throat until they pass out.
    -Once per battle
    -Takes two turns to cause them to pass out if unbroken. Once the enemy passes out the illusion ends.
    -Slight damage from the mental stress caused by the realistic illusion simulating the pain in their chest and choking.
    -No genjutsu the same turn or next.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    X-Declined-X S rank? Well for reasons i never allow high ranking techniques particularly a genjutsu unless their workings are fair. This Genjutsu is so simple to perform it cant be s ranked. Either make it C ranked or DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Suuiton: Poppukōn Kyōki | Water Release: Popcorn Insanity
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the tiger handseal and then snaps his fingers causing water molecules around the opponent to slightly condense and then continuously pop like popcorn causing a chain reaction to the other water in the air to pop as well, like a domino effect. The popping effect stings likea burning sensation to the touch of skin and it's main purpose is to be a nuisance to the opponent giving the user opportunity to attack.

    Note: Can only be performed 3x per battle
    Note: No S rank water this turn or the next.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..


    Suition: Igaina Suteppu | Water Release: Surprising Step
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the handseals Ram → Horse and creates a small layer of water to materialize at the bottom of the opponents soles that has slippery properties to make them uncontrollably slip and fall on their back or side when theyre walking or running. If the opponent is standing still the user can manipulate the water to move backwards or forwards to create the same effects.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per match
    Note: Must wait two turns before using again.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..


    Suiton: Shizen Furueru| Water Release: Quivering Nature
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the handseals Snake → Horse → Ox and focuses water chakra around the opponent causing the water moisture in the air to vibrate vigorously causing the opponent(s) muscles to quiver uncontrollably as the sensation consistently runs up their spine and theyre skin feels as though theyre being tickled to death. This immobilizes the opponent so that they cannot perform handseals effectively without taking a substantial amount of time to just form one handseal.

    Note: Can Only Be used 2x per battle
    Note: No other A ranked or above water techniques this turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..

    X-All Declined-X
    -Remove the damage points in all of the submissions
    -For the First and the Last. Add that the technique can only be used in environments high with moisture. Like Rain or mist
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Earth Release: God's hand (Doton: Kami te)
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user after Ram -> Dragon hand seals, inserts their both hands on the ground up to mid-arm region to form simultaneously two large hands (about 10 feet high and 5 feet width each) made of earth on either sides of the opponent which crushes them by interlocking the fingers.
    Note:
    • Can only be used in alternate turns.
    • Can only be taught by -Jiraiya-


    X-Declined-X Existing technique

    Fire Release: Ash clone (Katon: Kaijin bunshin)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The User creates a clone of himself made of ash infused with his fire chakra. When the clone gets hit, it will return to its pure ash form which spreads in the air & can be ignited. The clone can only use fire jutsus up to C-rank and has all the normal movements the user has.
    Note:
    • Can only use fire based techniques up to C rank.
    • Can only create 2 clones at a time.
    • Cannot use Ninjutsu or Taijutsu based techniques.
    • Can only be taught by -Jiraiya-


    X-Declined-X Umm.. how does it prevent itself from being blown up when it uses fire style?

    Summoning Animal: Frigatebirds
    Scroll Owner: -Jiraiya-
    Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None yet
    Description and Background: The frigatebirds belong to family Fregatidae, of seabirds. There are five species in the single genus Fregata. They are also sometimes called Man of War birds or Pirate birds. They have long wings, tails and bills and the males have a red gular pouch that is inflated during the breeding season to attract a mate.

    Frigatebirds are piscivores which obtain most of their food on the wing. A small amount of their diet is obtained by robbing other seabirds, a behaviour that has given the family its name, and by snatching seabird chicks.

    Frigatebirds are large, with iridescent black feathers (the females have a white underbelly), with long wings (male wingspan can reach 2.3 metres) and deeply-forked tails. The males have inflatable red-coloured throat pouches called "gular pouches", which they inflate to attract females during the mating season. Having the largest wingspan to body weight ratio of any bird, they are essentially aerial, able to stay aloft for more than a week, landing only to roost or breed on trees or cliffs.

    Those who sign the summoning contact will get this cool tattoo:

    For more info: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frigatebird
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Futon: (Kōdona Kazekama no Yori) Advanced Wind Sickle Armor
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30 (+20 per turn activated)
    Damage: 60 (if opponent comes into contact)
    Much like the cannon Wind sickle armor except a more advanced version. The user instead of focusing wind chakra around their body, focuses it into a stationary object be it a jutsu, a summon a weapon or themselves. The user creates an "armor" of wind over whatever they choose and this gives that object protection against lightning attacks as well as advanced cutting power. The object they make the armor on cannot be moving but if it is a flying summon the flapping of its wings to stay afloat is acceptable as long as it is not going forward, backwards, up, or down from its position. Once the jutsu is complete the object or user can resume normal movement.

    :Note: The most the armor can stay active is 3 turns
    :Note: Cant use S rank wind or higher this turn or the next
    :Note: Only taught by Bad Luck Brian

    X-Declined-X Well it exists...

    Doton: (Fukai youshiki Mineraru) Earth Style: Deep form mineral
    Type: Sup
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/a (+15 To all earth Techs)
    Description: The User will start off by doing 3 handseals. By doing this he is channeling all his earth chakra into his hands. He/She will then place their hands on a rocky surface and channel their chakra into the ground mixing it with the hard surface and the minerals. Once the user sends it into the ground he absorbs his chakra back. The purpose of that was to give his earth chakra more earth like quality. Pretty much absorbing earth chakra. By doing this the user Gain +15 to all earth techniques.

    -Note- The +15 Only Last for 3 turns
    -Note- Cant Channel S rank Lightning The same turn as this
    -Can only be taught by Bad Luck Brian-

    X-Declined-X It doesn't work like that...you had a better chance by saying you use a hard form of earth like rock or bedrock with the cost of being more difficult to manipulate it. That was actually much better

    (Raiton:Tsuchi kyanseru) Lightning Style: Earth Cancellation
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user will do 3 handseals And spread his lightning chakra all through the ground. His lightning chakra in the ground will then form into lightning currents that stays dormant in the ground from Short-Mid range from the opponent. This Jutsu Stops All S Rank and below Earth jutsus from forming from the ground. Also paralyzing anybody who is underground. The lightning currents only spread from mid-long range from the user giving him short range of earth free space. The user can not use any earth jutsus that comes from the ground within mid-long range.Meaning If i do a earth jutsu within short range and have it travel towards the opponent (Through the air) then Its ok. If i use it short range and have it travel towards you (Through the ground) then the earth will break apart soon as it gets mid range.

    -Note- Jutsu only stays dormant for 2 turns
    -Note- Can use twice
    -Note- Cant use it for 3 turns after using it the first time
    -Note- Can only be taught by Bad Luck Brian

    X-Declined-X It doesn't work like that either...
     
         
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    Ketsueki Dorobou | Blood Robber
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A (5 per turn when cloak is active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Blood Ripper is a medium sized Kusarigama which was forged by Hanzo in his prime just after after his fight his the three Sannin. The Kusarigama its self is irregularly shaped to fit Hanzo's styled fighting preference, The blade itself is much longer and thicker than on a normal one so it has increased attack and cutting power, the weight on the end is also more tear drop shaped to make it more aerodynamic in the air for quicker strikes. The blade of the Kusarigama has ridges cut into it heading in a backwards fashion, when chakra is channelled through the base of the blade, thin spikes of chakra are made, reaching out from the original blade, covering the blade in an almost 360 degree cutting saw. This 'chakra cloak' is a deep purple which is due tot he fact the chakra absorbs Hanzos poison creating by his sac making the chakra shroud incredibly poisonous. Anything that touches the chakra shroud suffers the same effect as Ibuses poision and is almost immemorially paralysed and will die unless given an antidote.

    Every three turns the user can also, literally 'steal' the enemy blood. By cutting/touching/hitting them etc.. with the posioned blade, the user can drain the Enemy of his blood and chakra making him feel sickly. However Hanzo must wait another three turns to use this again.

    Note: Can only be used by Hanzo biographys
    Note: Can only steal chakra every three turns.

    X-Declined-X Your other CW?
     
         
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    (Kaze to daichi no sutairu: Mippei chissoku.) Wind and Earth style: enclosed suffocation
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90[Death to the User]
    Description:The user when in short range or mid range from his opponent, channels doton chakra across his body, he then focuses his chakra on his palms and slams it to the ground creating a huge dense wall of earth which encloses and traps himself and his opponent, the wall is strong and tightly sealed and closed thus the amount of oxygen is limited. The user then takes a breath in and suctions up the air which is already minimized in the enclosed space into his mouth up to the point where there is little or no oxygen left for either the user or the opponent to breath and have complete consciousness .

    Note: Can only be done once in a battle.

    Note: Can not use any s rank wind and earth pre the jutsu is used

    ~Declined. How can you suction the air from the closed space if you're mid range from the opponent? Also, did you really mean that you kill yourself by using the technique or was this just a typo? Poorly restricted for a forbidden ranked technique and the second technique doesn't make sense at all.~



    (Kesshō no hontai)A body of crystalline
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:The user performs the ram and tiger hand seals and then channel her crystalline chakra across her body from her head to her feet. She then creates a strong and dense form of crystalline which covers her body from head to toe and which is invulnerable and immune to a rank jutsu and below, howwever would be shattered and completely broken with direct contact with jutsu s rank and above, the user can also fire little crystalline spears [c rank] towards the opponent.

    Note:Can only be done once a battle
    Note: Last for only two turns
    Note: No S rank and above crystall jutsu for the next two turns.
    Note:Must be sanin to use .

    ~Declined. No technique can be immune to A - rank and below unless it's a self repairing technique which your technique isn't. Fix that part from your technique and state that techniques below A - rank can damage the body too.

    Tsume:Claw
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The claw unlike any other swords in existence, is unique and has it own special traits and abilities, It was said to have been forged by the best black smith in konohagakure and is embedded and forged with titanium, making the sword indestructible. The sword was given the name ‘Claw’ due to its razor sharp and cutting strengths and powers, if not wielded in the right hands the sword can be destructive to the user rather than the opponent. The sword can cut and deflect basic elemental attacks and ninjutsu up to A rank, negating the jutsu . The sword can only be wielded by the user and if tried to be wield by anyone except the user , the weight would increase by a ton ,stopping the user from lifting the sword up or wielding it. The wielder of the sword shares a special bond and connection with the sword, as the user shares similar chakra traits with the sword, so genjutsu which disrupt the chakra flow in the body are easily realized and dispelled by the user. The sword however is not all good and drains the user life force over the three turns thus leaving the user quite fatigued after the three turns.

    Note: Can only be done once a battle
    Note: Last for three turns
    Note: No S rank or forbidden for one turn after the sword is deactivated
    Note: Cutting and deflecting jutsu count as a move .

    ~Declined, do not resubmit.~
    Resubmitting

    (Kaze to daichi no sutairu: Mippei chissoku.) Wind and Earth style: enclosed suffocation
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90[Death to the User]
    Description:The user when in short range or mid range from his opponent, channels doton chakra across his body, he then focuses his chakra on his palms and slams it to the ground creating a huge dense wall of earth capable of withstanding powerful techniques, which encloses and traps himself and his opponent, the wall is strong and tightly sealed and closed thus the amount of oxygen is limited. The user then takes a breath in and suctions up the air which is already minimized in the enclosed space into his mouth up to the point where there is little or no oxygen left for either the user or the opponent to breath and have complete consciousness .

    Note:Must have mastered wind.
    Note:Requires thunderbolt permission to use.
    Note:Must be of sanin rank.
    Note:If the jutsu is sucessful done the opponent dies.
    Note: Can only be done once in a battle.
    Note: Can not use any s rank wind and earth pre the jutsu is used

    ~Declined, do not resubmit. I see that you've failed to add any real restrictions. The first four aren't even real restrictions and since you didn't heed my request it's do not resubmit~

    Kaze no sutairu: Tatsumaki ni kakomareta:Wind style: Surrounded by tornadoes
    Typeffensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:The user channels his fuiton chakra across his body ,and then focuses and concentrates into unto his two hands and then performs the tiger-rat hand-seals and slam his palms unto the ground ,bring forth four huge spiraling tornado cutting wind gusts which surrounds the target and cut them to shreds, tearing their flash and and breaking their bones due to the shear cutting powers of the tornado and the force of the wind.

    Note:Can only be done twice in a battle
    Note:Must wait a turn to use again.
    Note:No S rank wind in the same turn.

    ~Declined. Tornadoes that are created near opponent? Sorry to break the news but similar techniques exist~

    Hoguwātsu mahōmajutsugakkō no hikō hōki: Flying Broom Of Hogwartz
    Typeffensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:Unlike Normal Ninja weapons which are swords, spears and other weapons. This is a broom , though unlike other normal weapons it has unique abilities which can be harnessed and used by the wielder, it is often not categorized as a weapon but is merely seen as a way of fun and amusement, the broom has the ability to grant flight to the broom wielder ,the broom is also capable of creating huge gusts of wind which can blow away the opponent and make him lose balance by swinging the broom towards his direction. The wind gusts are equivalent of [B rank] Wind jutsu.

    Note:The broom can only be used for three turns.
    Note:Must be taught by thunderbolt to use.
    Note:No wind Jutsu Above A rank can be done while broom is active.

    ~Declined, do not resubmit. I'm never going to approve a Harry Potter Broom weapon that doesn't even explain how the flying works~
     
         
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    (Katon: Roketto Dansei) Fire Style: Rocket Man
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will concentrate his Fire chakra into both of his hands then he bends down and places both of his hands on the ground, channeling his Fire chakra into the palms of his hands. After having channeled enough Fire chakra into his hands he releases all of it in one go due to the amount of Fire chakra released the user will be propelled upwards into the air by two thick pillars of fire. This can be used to avoid any technique except for water style techniques because if a portion of the pillar is taken out by the water the jutsu is fully cancelled out leaving the user very vulnerable in the air.

    Notes:

    -Must know up to B-Rank Fire
    -Can only be used three times
    -Can be used to propel some to the left or right, forward or backwards
    -If a portion of the pillars is extinguished the whole pillar will be extinguished along with it
    -Can only be taught by Tsuna...

    X-Declined-X Existing technique and incorrect chakra cost

    (Raiton: Sanda Appu Uedenka) Lightning Style: Thunder Up Overcharge
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 65
    Description:
    This is a much stronger version of (Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up. The users concentrates a lot of Lightning chakra into both of their hands, compressing the Lightning chakra into two balls of lightning energy which they then ram into each side of the opponents head. When the two connect with the desired target they increase in size and density then explode completely engulfing the desired target in a hail of lightning.

    Notes:

    -Must have already Learnt (Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
    -Must have mastered Lightning
    -Can only be used three times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Tsuna...

    X-Declined-X Whats thunder up?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Coyote View Post
    Changes in bold below - what I removed is bold in the quote above..

    Sarutahiko's Rakuseki Shibu | Sarutahiko's Fallen Branch
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Medium
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    It is said that the arm from the God - Sarutahiko was slashed off during a duel with his older brother who secretly wished for him to fail as the protector of all living things that reside on earth. When the arm was decapitated, it's said that from the heavens it fell and landed in a temple in the deserts of the land of Wind. For many years his arm was to have been guarded by the monks who inhabited the temple until the bandit raids. From then it rested with the temple unknown to those in the outside world. Though the myth is popular among local towns there is a weapon that is said to be forged with the power of the arm. This metallic arm fits on a humans arm up to around the elbow. It's colored with a dull grey and a black wrist. Even though this ancient weapon may looks old, the abilities is great. The branch metal arm harnesses the power that is surely mother earth to a godlike extent. Strengthening the abilities if related to Earth. If a source of chakra is underground, whether it be a enemy shinobi or sneak attack the weapon tightens on the wearers arm to give them a warning that something is impending in the ground below them. This arm has a permanent force upon it that equals "Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique", this however only applies in the arm that the weapon is worn giving physical attacks a +10 in offensive power that uses the arm - taijutsu mostly. This branch arm is a taijutsu users dream giving the boost of power in one arm, if a target is hit with that arm it's as if they've been directly in the chest with battering ram, severely damaging their internal organs. Due to the arms god-like power it's indestructible and cannot be broken by means of other weapons or elements. Anything else is listed below..

    Note: Indestructible
    Note: The +10 boost in physical attacks only applies to those in which the arm is used - certain taijutsu attacks
    Note: Sensing of chakra within the Earth only - up to mid-range/usable once per conflict
    Note: Increases "Earth Release: World Shaking" by 2 rank and also as the earth shakes, jagged rocks protrude from the ground
    Note: If another shinobi attempts to wear the branch, it turns them into stone - thus killing them
    Note: Once per conflict during a taijutsu attack if the arm makes contact with the target , the branch will release a large amount of chakra and increases the weight of the traget to an extremely high amount. This makes then drop to the ground by the sheer weight for 1 turn
    Note: All abilities are counted as a technique per turn other than the +10 to physical attacks in the one arm
    Note: If you use the sensing of chakra underground, you can't use an Earth Technique B-Rank or above the next move you have
    Note: This weapon may only be worn by a biography used by Coyote unless stated otherwise

    Dropping this weapon
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post5126896

    X-Declined-X Best comments again for the polished description although i am against God-like references which sometimes imply that certain abilities are absolute and more powerful then anything else you should avoid such implications. The issue in this weapon still lasts, you did add restrictions but such an ability should have drawbacks. Add that the arm decreases your speed due to its weight. Also add that while indestructable it doesn't implies that it can destroy anything. Lastly, make the increasing weight part more detailed as Akimichi weight alot.
    Sarutahiko's Rakuseki Shibu | Sarutahiko's Fallen Branch
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Medium
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    It is said that the arm from the God - Sarutahiko was slashed off during a duel with his older brother who secretly wished for him to fail as the protector of all living things that reside on earth. When the arm was decapitated, it's said that from the heavens it fell and landed in a temple in the deserts of the land of Wind. For many years his arm was to have been guarded by the monks who inhabited the temple until the bandit raids. From then it rested with the temple unknown to those in the outside world. Though the myth is popular among local towns there is a weapon that is said to be forged with the power of the arm. This metallic arm fits on a humans arm up to around the elbow. It's colored with a dull grey and a black wrist. Even though this ancient weapon may looks old, the abilities is great. The branch metal arm harnesses the power that is surely mother earth to a great extent. Strengthening the abilities if related to Earth. If a source of chakra is underground, whether it be a enemy shinobi or sneak attack the weapon tightens on the wearers arm to give them a warning that something is impending in the ground below them. This arm has a permanent force upon it that equals "Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique", this however only applies in the arm that the weapon is worn giving physical attacks a +10 in offensive power that uses the arm - taijutsu mostly. This branch arm is a taijutsu users dream giving the boost of power in one arm, if a target is hit with that arm it's as if they've been directly in the chest with battering ram, severely damaging their internal organs. Due to the arms god-like power it's indestructible and cannot be broken by means of other weapons or elements. Anything else is listed below..

    Note: Indestructible (though it can't break everything)
    Note: Increases the weight of the user thus slowing him down by some
    Note: Must be summoned unless stated with the user before the battle
    Note: The +10 boost in physical attacks only applies to those in which the arm is used - certain taijutsu attacks
    Note: Sensing of chakra within the Earth only - up to mid-range/usable once per conflict
    Note: Increases "Earth Release: World Shaking" by 2 rank and also as the earth shakes, jagged rocks protrude from the ground
    Note: If another shinobi attempts to wear the branch, it turns them into stone - thus killing them
    Note: Once per conflict during a taijutsu attack if the arm makes contact with the target , the branch will release a large amount of chakra and increases the weight of the target to an extremely high amount - 3x the amount of the base weight of the target. This makes then drop to the ground by the sheer weight for 1 turn
    Note: All abilities are counted as a technique per turn other than the +10 to physical attacks in the one arm
    Note: If you use the sensing of chakra underground, you can't use an Earth Technique B-Rank or above the next move you have
    Note: This weapon may only be worn by a biography used by Coyote unless stated otherwise

    Dropping this weapon
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post5126896

    X-Approved-X Made the weight thing 3x
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±



    Summoning Animal: Fossa
    Scroll Owner: PresidentBush
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: To come later
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: To come later
    Description and Background: Fossa
    Restrictions The Fossa is basically a large, agile, muscular tree mongoose. It's the largest mammalian predator in Konoha. It hunts lemurs. It lives in the forests of Konoha. In general they have very good night vision and have keen senses. Their are also bigger versions of fossa that can be ridden.

    Can only be taught by PresidentBush
    No Windstyle from the user the turn they are summoned

    Fossa

    Summoning tattoo used by contractors.



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    Cool looking animal ^^
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by -Gitanshu- View Post
    Drooping above weapon for a new one ^_^
    (tokushu asanuno) Unique Cloth
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:Self
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This a very thin cloth which was made by a kumo weaver, The cloth was very unique because of the material it was made up of though the cloth did not provide the user with any boost in his attack but it reacted to opponent's elemental chakra by gaining some of the characteristic of that element and though these characteristic did not provide it's user with any sort of boost or power but using that as a signal the opponent was able to deduce the type of attack he was going to face and could start preparations for it, The change in characteristic were as followed
    Water-It becomes a little wet.| Fire-It becomes warm| Earth-It becomes a little heavy than normal| Wind-It become a little light weight| Lightning-User feel's a little shock| Normal Chakra- It starts to tighten up.| When Exposed to a combination attack it gains to quality at the same time.
    It also had one more unique characteristic involved to it,The user can thrice a battle pass his own chakra in the cloth and use it to reverse track a opponent and this ability is used to fina a opponent id he is hidden using certain technique
    Note: It can pick opponent's chakra from anywhere on the field
    Note: It doe's not provide boost to techniques
    Note: The increase and decrease in weight will not result in alteration in speed of user.
    Note: User will not be paralyzed from shock as it is very minute scale shock and is used just as a indicator.
    Note: It look's like any other normal cloth and is worn beneath other clothes so that the user is able to use those indicator's to full potential.

    X-Declined-X Past tense in the entire description implies the cloth doesn't exist anymore or do not possess the same abilities, i know that it doesn't matter but bear with me the reasons for arguments in battles are abundant. Also, how does the cloth react to chakra if chakra doesn't reaches it?

    Hyouton touketsu chitai - Ice Release frozen area
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user releases a Hyouton Chakra in the air which spread's throughout the field and thus make the temperature of that area to fall down considerably[Roughly- 5 Celsius], The sudden decrease in temperature will result in decline of physical activities as it is hard to move your limbs and other body organs in a low temperature area the decrease in temperature also result in faster formation of Ice techniques which are performed by the user, The user fells more shiver if he is wet [drenched by water]
    Note: The user will not feel it's affect as he being an Ice user is used to low temperature area.
    Note: Ice technique perform twice as faster [Doe's not apply to ground base technique]
    Note: Lasts 3 tern per usage
    Note: Usable 3 Times
    Note: No Ice in the same turn it is used
    Note: Can only be taught by gitanshu

    X-Pending-X leaving for another mod
    (tokushu asanuno) Unique Cloth
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:Self
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This a very thin cloth which was made by a kumo weaver, The cloth is very unique because of the material it is made up of as the material is able to pick chakra signals from the opponent's body while the chakra is being molded with in his body and uses that signal's to gain specific characteristic of the given element though the cloth does not provide the user with any boost in his attack but it reacts to opponent's elemental chakra by gaining some of the characteristic of that element and though these characteristic does not provide it's user with any sort of boost or power but using that as a signal the user is able to deduce the type of attack he is going to face and could start preparations for it, The change in characteristic are as followed
    Water-It becomes a little wet.| Fire-It becomes warm| Earth-It becomes a little heavy than normal| Wind-It become a little light weight| Lightning-User feel's a little shock| Normal Chakra- It starts to tighten up.| When Exposed to a combination attack it gains two quality at the same time. For ex. A little shock is triggered in a upper part of body while the lower part becomes a little hot.
    It also has one more unique characteristic involved to it,The user can thrice a battle pass his own chakra in the cloth and use it to reverse track a opponent and this ability is used to find a opponent if he is hidden using certain technique and this is possible because of the fact that the cloth can pick signals of opponent's chakra and the user uses it as a medium to know about opponent's location, It's just like reverse tracking a thing and in this case chakra.
    Note: It can not work on two opponent simultaneously as at a specific time the cloth can only pick chakra signals from a specific opponent meaning in 2vs2 fight it will only function on one enemy instead of both.
    Note: It can pick opponent's chakra from anywhere on the field
    Note: It doe's not provide boost to techniques
    Note: The increase and decrease in weight will not result in alteration in speed of user.
    Note: User will not be paralyzed from shock as it is very minute scale shock and is used just as a indicator.
    Note: It look's like any other normal cloth and is worn beneath other clothes so that the user is able to use those indicator's to full potential.

    X-Declined-X There are just too many complications with it, and most abilities are conditional. It would cause arguments you're better off developing a sensory jutsu then this
     
         
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    (Fuuton:Senpuku Rasen)-Wind Release:Spiraling Whirlwind
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user after performing three hand seals will make the air around the opponent spin rapidly,lifting him into the air and constantly cutting him.Once he is around 2m in the air the spiraling wind will clash all at once with the opponent,crushing him.
    ~No S rank wind techniques the same turn this is used.
    ~Can be used twice per battle.

    X-Declined-X Existing technique

    (Fuuton:Satsu Kaze)-Wind Release:Splitting Wind
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user will perform a sequence of four hand seal and exhale a large and very powerful sphere of wind.What makes this technique different from a normal sphere of wind is it's ability to split into two smaller wind sphere when it reaches an obstacle,like a countering technique.After it passes the obstacle it can merge again.It can also split and not merge after so it can hit two opponents at once in that case each of the spheres of wind has A rank wind strengh.The splitting/merging of the technique is not automatic but is controlled by the user who will perform an aditional hand seal when he wants to split/merge the technique.
    ~Note:Can be used only once per battle.
    ~Note:No above B rank wind technique the same and following turn from when this is used.
    ~Note:The technique can split/merge only once.

    X-Declined-X

    (Suiton:Sugoi Mizu Doragon Tama)-Great Water Dragon Bullet
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:A more powerful version of the Water Dragon Bullet Technique.The user will perform three hand seals and create a larger,faster and more powerful dragon of water to deal physical damage to the opponent.
    ~Can be used twice per battle.
    ~No A rank or above water techniques for the same and following turn from when this technique was used.
    ~Can't be used in short range.
    ~Requires a water source.
    X-Declined-X Erm, no actual difference other then the strenght. This makes it canon.... get the hint!
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kansō Yoroi) - Requip Armor
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A (40 to maintain altered form)
    Damage:N/A (can increase/decrease damage of types of jutsu based on form)
    Description: The Requip Armor is a special armor that has the ability to change form when it is infused with chakra through a kind of ninjutsu called Requip Jutsu. When the armor changes form, the appearance of it changes and it receives abilities based on the Requip Jutsu used. However, the abilities of a particular form are balanced out by weaknesses specified by the Requip Jutsu. As a result, each form of the armor should only be used circumstantially. If the wrong form is used in the wrong fight, the wearer will be put at a significant disadvantage.

    In its base form, the Requip Armor has rounded single-piece pauldrons with a breastplate and fused collar featuring a large cross centered on the chest. The cross has forked tips curving around both ways, like horns of a ram, on three of its four arms and a heart on the arm pointing towards the ground. Overlapping the chest piece, the waist armor features a V-shaped single plate that circles the hips. Additionally, the front and back torso plates do not meet, leaving the wearer's sides exposed. The armor also includes gauntlets that have curved plate elbow guards.

    ~Only have 1 Requip Jutsu (other than the Requip Armor) active at a time
    ~Only 1 Requip Jutsu (other than the Requip Armor) can be used in a single turn
    ~This jutsu can only be used by an approved Erza Scarlet bio
    ~This jutsu can only be used by Bedlington and people who have been taught it by him


    (Kansō: Kureha no Yoroi) Requip: Black Wing Armor
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: This jutsu causes the Requip Armor to change form into the form called Blackwing Armor. As its name implies, the armor, in this florm, is black in color, sporting some silver trimming. The silver-edged breastplate reveals a fair amount of Erza’s cleavage and belly, with plates flanking her hips and reaching down to her very large waistguard, composed of very long, silver-edged plates shaped like feathers and decorated by silver crosses. The waistguard leaves the front of Erza’s body exposed, with her groin being covered by a dark indument. Her large shoulderpads, each composed of two silver-edged plates one over the other, sport silver crosses on them too, and flank the high collar, whose shape is reminiscent of that of a dress. The slim gauntlets come equipped with prominent protection for her hands, and sport silver parts in a pattern reminiscent of straps; the plates guarding her legs are sliver-edged on her thighs and knees, but pitch black dark on her metal greaves. A distinctive feature of the armor is its pair of wings, which are reminiscent of those of a dragon or a bat, with black metal "arms" acting as the wings' leading structure, but with the parts used to fly being composed of a membrane-like material. Around Erza’s neck is a neck guard decorated by several gems, and, while wearing this armor, her long scarlet hair is tied up in a high ponytail, with two bangs framing her face. The armor comes equipped with a long sword. While in this form, the Requip Armor enhances Erza’s jumping ability slightly because the wings on the armor allow Erza to glide in the air. Additionally, the armor gives her kenjutsu gains a slight increase in power (+5). As side effects of the armor, the user is more vulnerable to kenjutsu and ninjutsu as much of the user’s body is exposed.

    ~Only 1 Requip Armor can be active at a time
    ~This jutsu can only be used 1 time per battle
    ~This jutsu can only be used by an approved Erza Scarlet bio
    ~This jutsu can only be used by Bedlington and people who have been taught it by him


    (Kansō: Kyojin no Yoroi) Requip: The Giant's Armor
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: This jutsu causes the Requip Armor to change form into the form called The Giant’s Armor. True to its name, the armor, in this form is golden amd has a somehow barbaric look to it, given the large amount of fur trimmings present on it. The breastplate sports a cross in correspondence to Erza’s belly, a medallion similar in shape to a four-leaf clover attached to a large stranded band around her neck, and a skirt, covering the upper part of Erza’s legs, made of plates and donning fur-lined edges. The curved, decorated pauldrons are very large, point upwards and possess fur trimmings on the lower edges too, just like the large gauntlets which are seen sprouting from under them to completely cover Erza’s arms. The greaves have fur sprouting from both the knee and the ankle areas; the knee guards sport jutting metal ornaments reminiscent of dragon’s wings, and the plates covering part of Erza’s thighs are held up by straps tied behind her legs. The armor is completed by a headgear with the appearance of a pair of large metal ears. While in this form, the Requip armor is being worn the user gains a slight increase in strength to taijutsu (+10) however the power of the user’s elemental ninjutsu (-10) is slightly weakened.

    ~Only 1 Requip Armor can be active at a time
    ~This jutsu can only be used 1 time per battle
    ~This jutsu can only be used by an approved Erza Scarlet bio
    ~This jutsu can only be used by Bedlington and people who have been taught it by him

    X-Declined-X I didn't DNR it yet so you'd have a chance to better recreate your idea ._. dont resubmit this until its fit to the criteria. It is never going to have the abilities of more then one CW
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Quails
    Scroll Owner: Kid Ace
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/a
    Description and Background: The Quails are a peaceful species that live at the top of the kumogakure mountains.They are different sizes and different ability's of each quail. All quails can fly and also communicate via telepathic with the user.

    ~Approved~

    Semi-Quail Call
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: short - long
    Chakra: N/a
    Damage:N/a
    Description: The Semi-Quail Call is a high pitch whistle noise made by the user that who ever hears it is temporarily confused and unable to concentrate long enough to use a jutsu.
    Note: Effects last only one turn.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: User must have signed Quail summoning contract

    ~Declined. I'd understand if it was used by a quail but not by a human as in this case it steps into the boundaries of sound element. Also, how on earth does it prevent whoever hears it from performing techniques?~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Wasureta shinigami|The Forgotten Reaper
    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40(20+ with additional techniques in use)
    Description: The user will pull a scroll out of his/her pouch. The user will wipe his/her blood across the scroll, the scroll will poof, and summon The Forgotten Reaper into his hands. The blade is sharp enough to cut straight through iron. Chakra can be channeled though this scythe freely to increase the scythe's cutting power. When holding the scythe the user becomes more proficient in ninjutsu and his/her taijutsu becomes stronger. The scythe is black and has a thin handle. When being held chakra is infused in the handle to give the user a good grip on the scythe.

    Note:The Forgotten Reaper is indestuctible
    Note:The user gets a +10 boost in taijutsu and a +5 boost in ninjutsu
    Note:Can only be used by Shade Dracova
    Note:The scythe will become 500 pounds if it is wielded by anyone but the owner or anyone given permission to hold by the wielder
    Note:The Forgotten Reaper weighs 50 pounds so the user must have somewhat training in taijutsu to prove his muscle strength.
    Note:The user cannot perform any genjutsu as a downside
    Note:Compatible with "The Reaper Art Of Dracova".

    It should look something like this:




    Dropping weapon here

    ~Declined. No cutting through Iron and unless you explain how you're getting taijutsu and ninjutsu damage boosts, you can kiss that ability goodbye~

    Kuchiyose no jutsu: Jishin furuete iru chikyū|Summoning Technique: Jishin The Quaking Earth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Jishin The Quaking Earth will appear. Jishin meaning earthquake is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a black bill, black face and a vibrant red body like most male cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 52mph. He is ruffly the size of two normal hummer automobiles side to side which is twice a big as a female. Naki can use any earth technique's up to A rank that doesn't require any handseals without touching the ground. Once per battle, Jishin can also sing a song that could cause a massive earthquake. If the song is sung continuously without the enemy stopping him the battle could fall apart making it almost impossible to fight on the ground.
    *Must have signed Red Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The earthquake technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning him counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*

    I do own the Cardinal Contract.

    ~Declined. No massive earthquakes or fainting opponents by singing songs. Also take out the bolded part~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Akasuna no Ken: Nokogirihajō no Shīrudo) - Red Sand Fist: Serrated Shield
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will open up their puppet arm revealing blades where the "Chakra Shield" technique would take place, and spin them frivalously, cutting into the target.
    Notes:
    - Requires a puppet body.

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Passion; 10-22-2012 at 07:00 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fuuton:fuontou jousoukiryuu) Wind release: Disturbed Currents
    Rank: D rank
    Type: Defensive
    Range: short distance
    Chakra cost: 10 points
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user manipulates the air around them in order repel thrown objects such as kunai or shuriken.
    Notes: ~can only stop objects head on, not from behind or from the side.
    ~can only be taught by kdm789
    ~when the user is performing this, he/she is exposed to all elemental based jutsus
    ~very useful when multiple objects are thrown at once and there is no other way to dodge.
    ~also note that the wind shield will last for 15 seconds, And user must wait one turn before using again

    ~I see no reason for a technique like this but approved nonetheless.
     
         
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